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tortured artist
12-20-2005, 04:29 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c201/mendtwo2/0354c436.jpg
^^Rise

http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c201/mendtwo2/5252d474.jpg
^^Mend

_Sic_
12-20-2005, 04:32 PM
Mendo sucked less

chas
12-20-2005, 04:35 PM
both are really good in my oppinion

Mse
12-20-2005, 04:48 PM
i hope your not serious?
rise's letter structure is poo
mend isnt that bad its just too plain and the shit underneath is gay otherwise its not bad
MENDtwo

! PrOPeRr ! .aOk.cRu.
12-20-2005, 04:50 PM
Originally posted by chas@Dec 20 2005, 04:35 PM
both are really good in my oppinion
haha...what a loser.

CaM-ONER
12-20-2005, 04:54 PM
both of those shits are wack

alive
12-20-2005, 05:05 PM
he forgot to title it a toy battle.
i realize my lack of skill.
i would appriciate some constructive critism though,
not just "rise's letter structure is poo" and "those shits are wack"

ghostbusta5
12-20-2005, 05:06 PM
mend, i like that e

_Sic_
12-20-2005, 05:11 PM
Originally posted by alive@Dec 20 2005, 06:05 PM
he forgot to title it a toy battle.
i realize my lack of skill.
i would appriciate some constructive critism though,
not just "rise's letter structure is poo" and "those shits are wack"
okay uhh try not to make it too complicated start out simply, and make you letters straight, on those openings try to match it with the letter form, try to make the outline closer and match the letters form , yeah

Runk
12-20-2005, 05:13 PM
man if u guyz posted in 12oz, ppo will hate. 12oz are really mean

www.12ozprohet.com

tortured artist
12-20-2005, 05:25 PM
read uptop....."Kiddie battle *****z"
yea yo constructive critisizm will help out a bunch give it up

tortured artist
12-20-2005, 05:26 PM
Originally posted by ghostbusta5@Dec 20 2005, 06:06 PM
mend, i like that e
thank ya

ballpoint pen chemistry
12-20-2005, 05:28 PM
null.. ewww

dinedgc
12-20-2005, 05:29 PM
rise...

go simple, that's what everyone has to do when starting out, you will progress a lot faster if you keep it simple and elaborate from that

straight letters, not necessarily block lettlers, but just no additions, look at mend's, it's simple and he's beating you

chas
12-20-2005, 05:33 PM
i was just kidding fuck guys i like rise its cool looking

chas
12-20-2005, 05:35 PM
12 ozs for douchebags i like bs tho but they dont have alot of toys on 12 oz so yathreads are better

disposable_hero
12-20-2005, 05:35 PM
this is how it is.

for every 1000 bad __________vs.__________ battles
theres maybe 5 good ones
























































































this is not one of those

alive
12-20-2005, 05:40 PM
fuck you hero
this is how some learn

if u dont have nething nice to say then dont say nething to say at all






































































hey everybody look! i can waste tons of white space too!!!!!!!

mesc_oner
12-20-2005, 06:13 PM
both are horrible

mesc_oner
12-20-2005, 06:15 PM
and who the fuck says " if you dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all"
sounds like something a grandma or a teacher would say.

okouais
12-20-2005, 06:46 PM
when the line under ur name takes almost the same volume then the name...theres a problem.

screw_loose
12-20-2005, 06:49 PM
null didn't like either.

neaksta
12-20-2005, 06:52 PM
null null null and stop using *****s it doent make u cool

10-103m
12-20-2005, 06:57 PM
mend had better letter structure, Basic, but better then rise. Mend.

Havoc411
12-20-2005, 07:10 PM
eww


10-10, you from CT?

JadedSketches
12-20-2005, 07:19 PM
Please practise before battling,nobody wants to see your "skills"

QuestionMark?
12-20-2005, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by neaksta@Dec 20 2005, 07:52 PM
null null null and stop using *****s it doent make u cool
Word, stop droppin N-bombs. This is wack, even for a toy battle, keep ya shit out of these forums until you improve.

"NEAR"
12-20-2005, 07:43 PM
im not a fan of either

JUGGALOWRITER
12-20-2005, 07:45 PM
mend and rise both fucking suck but mend is the better of the two

segway
12-20-2005, 07:53 PM
i sure could go for a hamburger.

SpLiTbomber
12-20-2005, 08:07 PM
null

alive
12-20-2005, 09:12 PM
wow

not to be an ass
and ive obviously been proven wrong here
but i really did think i was better.
hell i still do.
but obviously
im mistaken

back to basics.

fuck

any tips?

CaM-ONER
12-21-2005, 09:44 AM
who the fuck says "fagboy"?

tortured artist
12-21-2005, 12:27 PM
does it really matter if i drop "*****" or not shheeesh this is how ppl get better/improve so start throwin tips an not be douche bags fuckers

SpLiTbomber
12-21-2005, 02:52 PM
null this shit

TREP
12-22-2005, 12:41 AM
Originally posted by _Sic_@Dec 20 2005, 05:32 PM
Mendo sucked less
agreed

kayo1
12-22-2005, 01:30 AM
Originally posted by alive@Dec 20 2005, 03:05 PM
he forgot to title it a toy battle.
i realize my lack of skill.
i would appriciate some constructive critism though,
not just "rise's letter structure is poo" and "those shits are wack"

if you want constructive critisism... go ask your mom.
we are not here to give pointers and help people who cant graff. <_<





someone keep tabs....
i said it for some other wack battle and i&#39;ll say it again.
dont fuckin post wack battles. these threads waste our time.

you suck.

Naid
12-22-2005, 02:21 PM
i vote for rise cuz mends is kinda simple and the extra stuff underneath is homo, but hey who listens to good old me




god damn vaginas

obsene
02-01-2006, 01:33 PM
i voted for rise

Jet
02-01-2006, 01:52 PM
They are both minimal effort drawings... I&#39;d suggest focus on shading and trying to get diffirent tones instead of trying to throw in a half-assed backround. just my two cents

*~ANZIO~*
02-01-2006, 02:11 PM
awesome job, both of you are fantastic.

koper
02-02-2006, 10:05 AM
now i need to clean up this puke all over my screen