Tot Characters

[kosher]

i think those are bites

[-ShAmEE-]

dont call bites until u show a pic and PROVE it is,

[kosher]

http://www.pinnaclefoodscorp.com/img/brand-logos/main/vlasic.jpg

[fOrSaQeN]

i think those are bites

silly toy......how is that a bite...if anything i got the cat/casper from a google search but that halloween pic is from 06......... your stupid kosher...../end yourself

[kosher]

haha wow and you're calling me a toy. if you got the cat and casper from a google search that is PRECISELY how it's a bite. and the bird is fromt he vlasic logo. don't take credit for other people's work trying to play it off as your own

[hazetheone]

silly toy......how is that a bite...if anything i got the cat/casper from a google search but that halloween pic is from 06......... your stupid kosher...../end yourself

you are a fucking toy man
you did bite off of the legendary graff all city king google images
you just confessed toy
and you cant call him a toy when you are posting in a toy forum called toy characters
and they are both terrible even the pickle duck bite
fuck you

[fOrSaQeN]

burn. zomg ur so cool fresh prince.

[Maste]

^haha that guy just got owned

dont worry about it kid...everyone has thier "I swear i didnt bite that famous company logo" phase...itll pass and maybe if you stick at you could be good someday

[fOrSaQeN]

you are a fucking toy man
you did bite off of the legendary graff all city king google images
you just confessed toy
and you cant call him a toy when you are posting in a toy forum called toy characters
and they are both terrible even the pickle duck bite
fuck you

you imbecile how the fuck do i bite ur acting like im putting shit up on walls and taking credit for their chars u think i give a shit what u think you tool.....

"and you cant call him a toy when you are posting in a toy forum called toy characters"
and your the one surfing these threads.....:rolleyes: good job man.....u have self esteem issues....u need to get laid and stop worrying about other people on the internets.

[bountyhunter113]

jus shutup with the pointless bickering and post flix.........i'll have new stuff up tomorrow

[kosher]

yea fOrSaQeN chill out. not everyone is amazing when they start, some people actually try at it though and make progress while other just copy things that other people have done and try to play it off as their own. they're both common, one's just a whole lot lamer and less respectable than the other. can you guess which?

[hazetheone]

you imbecile how the fuck do i bite ur acting like im putting shit up on walls and taking credit for their chars u think i give a shit what u think you tool.....

"and you cant call him a toy when you are posting in a toy forum called toy characters"
and your the one surfing these threads.....:rolleyes: good job man.....u have self esteem issues....u need to get laid and stop worrying about other people on the internets.

if i am a tool
then fucking battle me fag
no bitten characters or halloween pictures from 06
or google image searching

[T O K E]

come on with all that bullshit guys, no ones gonna get any better when everyones arguing over some bullshit that doesn't even matter, thats whats wrong with graffiti, it turns art into something it shouldn't be, a competition

a few new guys, everything still a work in progress but i think im going in the right direction, constructive crits please

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/11-1.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/aaaa.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/aaa.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/aaab.jpg

[a maze]

t o k e, Darken up your lines, I can barely see 'em.

anyone up for a char. battle?

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/11hayhay.png

Collab; i did the purple one

[T O K E]

pretty cool, the crown could of been done a little better(the round-ness doesnt flow with your karak too well) but the karak itself its awesome :)

anything constructive to say about mine??

[Juicee]

pretty cool, the crown could of been done a little better(the round-ness doesnt flow with your karak too well) but the karak itself its awesome :)

anything constructive to say about mine??

my char. is like a juice bottle, so i added the little jewels to make it look like a crown but still look like da nipple on a juice bottle

yo i like tha eyes on ur 3rd one looks real tight, but it looks kinda unfinished 2 me like u should make a full body or somethin


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k90/dspimage/good331.jpg

Sprayin Vampires!

einsamkeit: http://yfinder.de/bub2.jpg BUBBLE BOBBLE.

tha hat is mad tight but i dunno bout tha face, it looks 2 roundish 2 me like a ball or somethin

stay up

-Juice aka SOBER

[beyondyereyes]

TOKE- I like the style you're pushing for. It's a cool concept you should keep. As for criticism I would go with more straight lines for the arms and legs. Definitely beef up their bodies though and use darker lines.

If you want some inspiration I suggest checking out this fool's work. Don't bite but just check out how he draws/paints hands and so forth. I'm sure you'll get ideas.http://www.flickr.com/photos/49296258@N00/

[T O K E]

thanks man i'll be sure to check out some of his stuff, im gonna work on the hands becuase i know i can do alot with them once i know how to draw them

when i darken my lines i lose all the effects i put into my character, like the eyes for example

http://i17.tinypic.com/7wj4enl.jpg

happy new years

[Czar One]

http://i159.photobucket.com/albums/t136/czar1one/voodoo.gif

[PG_Miscreant]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/9955/bulb1fo6.jpg
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/340/bulbstj3.jpg
unfortunately the fill paint wouldnt dry so it didnt work out too well
was going for a lightbulbish theme idk
anyone gunna say anything about it?

[T O K E]

anyone gunna say anything about it?

pretty terrible

[fOrSaQeN]

http://i2.tinypic.com/832y70m.jpg



LOL @ comment above

[Evasion Of Invasion]

^^^practice anatomy
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture069-1.jpg
self-portrait minus wings:P

[fOrSaQeN]

lol

[Maste]

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7242/popeyedw5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

haha its popeye ...i had a little i yam what i yam peice next to it but the scanner cut it out

oh and yea i didnt do this off the top of my head but i did do it freehand

[bountyhunter113]

pretty terrible
ur stuff's no better, so leave him alone


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/_Seru.png

maste- that's a nice popeye freehand, but it looks like he wants to get raped in the ass or sumtin

below post:
it does have an outline

[AOTPs]

bounty its not bad...jus feels a bit plan...put an outline on it or sumtin jus work with it

[T O K E]

ur stuff's no better, so leave him alone


http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/_Seru.png

maste- that's a nice popeye freehand, but it looks like he wants to get raped in the ass or sumtin

below post:
it does have an outline

your full of shit if you think my stuff isnt better than his, i only put that kid in his place becuase he has a ego problem and he started shit with me before

looks exactly what slob does, try and be atleast a little original, the face could be cool with a different body

http://i17.tinypic.com/7wj4enl.jpg

[sketch3]

yea its not graet but its waay better than ur stuff toke, no offence but urs is just really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really bad

EDIT WERNT ENUFF REALYYS

[Maste]

^sorry toke but id have to agree there...and popeye is the shit youall know it

[T O K E]

yea its not graet but its waay better than ur stuff toke, no offence but urs is just really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really bad

EDIT WERNT ENUFF REALYYS

you mean bounty hunter? his stuff is better than mine, all i said was it reminds me of slobs character and he should try and be more original with it

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/11hayhay.png

Collab; i did the purple one

any one else wanna crit on my shit?

[sketch3]

you mean bounty hunter? his stuff is better than mine, all i said was it reminds me of slobs character and he should try and be more original with it
OK MISS UNDERSTANDING,

BUT UR NOT BETTER THAN PG MISCRIENT EITHER

[a maze]

Bountyhunter113- man, I'm really diggin that char.

Juicee- also a nice character, I like your style.

Posted this in bb thread, thought I'd post it here too-

http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x175/mysterycore/mazeoner9.jpg

The character isn't my own, it's from a game called "half-life", but I did draw it.

[fOrSaQeN]

had the bugs sketch in the book for a while...so i decided to to a quick peice with it...


http://a282.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/66/l_552fbe13d1c6244c69256e75dfc63a41.jpg

[Evasion Of Invasion]

^^^practice anatomy
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture069-1.jpg
self-portrait minus wings:P

bump

[a maze]

evade- your letter structure on that one is all jacked up, and i'm not diggin that 'e'... no beef, just try making the letters all the same size, and stay consistent throughout... The character is alright though.

[5Funerals]

Yo Toke, quit being a dick because your shit isnt very good and his character looks nothing like Slobs. NOTHING.

Evade - its not bad, I think the character is kinda corny though, especially with the caption.

[munch1]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/CCF01022008_00000.jpg

new still working on it
CRITS?

[5Funerals]

Give crits to get crits. I like him I guess just work on his limbs and tail.

[bountyhunter113]

evade-keep practicin looks like ur in teh right direction
juicee- it's fresh
maze-looks good
munch-keep workin on it n try to keep the lines straight

keep teh flicks rollin

[5Funerals]

MORE PIZZA
http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m223/ShanestaGangsta/pizza.jpg

[fOrSaQeN]

http://i10.tinypic.com/73ote11.jpg better pic up tomorrow

[kosher]

make up your own characters otherwise there is no skill involved

[a maze]

No skill involved? What the fuck, dude. Your drawin skill makes all the difference, made up or not.

[sketch3]

make up your own characters otherwise there is no skill involved


if u directly copy then yes but if u draw the charecer in ur own style then no,
feats uses mortal kombat charcters and all those oldskool cats used shit from comics an cartoons

[fOrSaQeN]

make up your own characters otherwise there is no skill involved
LOOOL epic fail...what are you the internet police? gtfo
lol this cat trys to troll online...try again fag

No skill involved? What the fuck, dude. Your drawin skill makes all the difference, made up or not.

i'm just tryin to draw random chars to get my drawing ability a bit better...as long as it resembles the orginal cartoon...whats wrong with that? apparently this fagboy has a problem with that... oh well...he'll get over it..

[fOrSaQeN]

/edit look what i found....
dude has an awful lot of critiques for someone so fuckin toy


http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2300.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2363.jpg
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/IMG_2382.jpg

[Decoy 905]

^^ His handy is decent plus if I'm correct that stuff is pretty old. But you have a good point about putting your own style on the characters.

[jawsy]

isnt this the character thread??

[fOrSaQeN]

isnt this the character thread??

no :rolleyes:

[PG_Miscreant]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4459/ozhedgehogiu3.jpg
hedgehog

[AOTPs]

^^^ its sick

[sk8er6]

just did this this morning.
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic010508_7.jpg

[PG_Miscreant]

^^^ its sick

ya think? cuz im not too sure bout it, but if ur serious than thanks

[a maze]

here's a char I'm workin on, its my first-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/mazesticker1.jpg
crits?

[PG_Miscreant]

^i like it, light blue looks good

[Cin123]

http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh311/frankeecin/001-1.jpg
first character

[a maze]

^^^Can't really tell what it is? If its sideways, then its okay... Practice on paper, and turn your pics around next time... Keep it up!

[Mass Appeal]

KOSHER is a fucking wanker...we was supposed to be battling...like the rest they ignore my PM''s..just like F33BS and BOUNTY HUNTER.....pricks.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/i-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rtrwe.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1d.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-2.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-4.jpg

please do yall tell me if i have char style !

[kosher]

naw i'm down to battle i've just been busy it has been the holidays and new years and everything and i do have a life and don't spend all my time online unlike some people i guess..


/edit look what i found....
dude has an awful lot of critiques for someone so fuckin toy

haha bro did you just go back in time through my posts till you found something you don't like? i've done tons of better shit than that since that you obviously thought was too good to insult so check yourself

[kosher]

a maze it's really good. nice and clean. sick.
mass appeal the lettering is decent, the characters are good.

i've been working with some new character styles. some weird shit i came up with today during class. crits please.
http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x293/kosheruno/img001.jpg

[Mass Appeal]

im still waiting for your peice...^

and what the fuck is that ?!

[Stim]

http://aycu20.webshots.com/image/35659/2001357959873806477_fs.jpg
WOOP WOOP XMas SCrillA!
dubble bubble bite! lololol

[kosher]

what the fuck is that ?!

okay honestly unless you're a complete fucking retard and you can't tell your ass from a hole in the ground you can see that that's a face

[jawsy]

just did this this morning.
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic010508_7.jpg

personally.. i like it:D

[sketch3]

dubble bubble bite! lololol

thaat was a dope game

[Mass Appeal]

okay honestly unless you're a complete fucking retard and you can't tell your ass from a hole in the ground you can see that that's a face

look...stop coming the cunt and send me your fucking battle peice you stupid hoe. or are you scared and taking it out on gay shite talk. ?......lolzer.

and yah that Bubble game was classic !

[kosher]

you claim i'm gay, but you're the one saying lolzer. it's very difficult to take you seriously

[Mass Appeal]

its difficult to take you seriously when you produce abysmal graffiti and your pathetic antics of trash talking and no backing up because your so pathetic you wont battle me.....

[IlikePie]

^^
I imagined you'd talk like that in real life, but with an accent :)

[a maze]

^^
I imagined you'd talk like that in real life, but with an accent :)

Ha ha, I second that.^

[tha.dank.bomber]

i third that

[Stim]

Hey guys, I'm using a really inferior camera because my good one is busted but I just wanted to post a little charac i did

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/8897/charyp2.jpg
Critiques and positive feedback appreciated <3

[mada focka]

v for vendetta characs i did 5 or 6 months ago
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/Image033.jpg

http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/bensample058.jpg

[JackJill]

Don't go and put them up.

[jawsy]

stim- im lovin that especially the colours

[T O K E]

stim- its creepy looking and i love characters that have that feel to them, yyou could of executed it better(add a collar bone, cooler horns, etc), the head reminds me of hy arnold a little bit but nice none the less


amk will burn you kosher, i dont even know why he posts in this thread anymore lol

[Roolete]

stim isnt that the the guy from pans labyrinth?
my try...
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u264/man0frice/IMG_0637.jpg

[Stim]

I've actually never seen that movie, but there is a possibility subconciously that I did something like that. Maybe it's a coincidence? Aside from that thanks everyone

[Mass Appeal]

what the fucks this accent shit about ?

[TESTER]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/DSCN0524.jpghttp://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r86/testerQED/DSCN0517.jpg

roolete i like that

[jawsy]

test- you have maad skills those characs are doope except i dont like the mole on the pink one or the one on the other photo

[zeno]

roolette thats allright quite clean man i like the eyes on that one
and tester, dope shit!! yawsy's right, youve got mad charac skills bro
Ok now some stuff of mine, i lately dug up some sketch books
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9299/invisiblesuitak5.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7884/punkermu4.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/2559/monsterantennacv8.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1225/monsterrmd7.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4815/65726414oh2.jpg

oh and kosher: amk owns you.

[revid!]

just sum shiiitttt
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/148/cimg0032fo1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[STAR01]

Zeno; I really like the last 3, you should make stickers or something of them
REvid:that karak looks pretty awesome only it kinda looks like he's missing his left ear(on the right)

some shit of me....crits?
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7136/1002340iz1.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9755/1002341ty5.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1438/1002364ns1.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/13/1002365qc3.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/356/1002342ls2.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6669/1002349gv6.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4166/1002352co2.jpg

[zeno]

thnx i might do that yeah... some crits for u: i dont really dig the 4th one, what the hell is that?=p and on the others: keep practising.=D

[bountyhunter113]

roolette thats allright quite clean man i like the eyes on that one
and tester, dope shit!! yawsy's right, youve got mad charac skills bro
Ok now some stuff of mine, i lately dug up some sketch books
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/9299/invisiblesuitak5.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7884/punkermu4.jpg
oh and kosher: amk owns you.

decent stuff

[EST2007]

Hey guys, I'm using a really inferior camera because my good one is busted but I just wanted to post a little charac i did

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/8897/charyp2.jpg
Critiques and positive feedback appreciated <3

dude, that's fuckin nasty..love it

[EST2007]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/4459/ozhedgehogiu3.jpg
hedgehog

are those tan squiggles bleeding through the white, or did you do those? if you did 'em i don't like them..i would omit those next time. also, give the poor guy some feet (or paws)?

[EST2007]

KOSHER is a fucking wanker...we was supposed to be battling...like the rest they ignore my PM''s..just like F33BS and BOUNTY HUNTER.....pricks.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/i-1.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/rtrwe.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/1d.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/f-2.jpg

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/11-4.jpg

please do yall tell me if i have char style !

geez dude, fucking sick. lets see those on some walls!

[Xilationer]

stfu est your crit sucks anyways

[EST2007]

stfu est your crit sucks anyways

what the fuck do you care? Were ANY of my posts directed to you? ... yeah I didn't think so.

...coming from a kid who's only flick post was stolen from 12 oz... post ficks of your shit then tell me to "stfu"... dead it.

[Dresden]

Meh, Its not the best but I think its funny. Crits please.

"Skinner the Skinhead"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/hellkat/IMG_0450.jpg

[EST2007]

Meh, Its not the best but I think its funny. Crits please.

"Skinner the Skinhead"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v258/hellkat/IMG_0450.jpg

what's with all the "Oi!"? i know it's a cartoon karak but guy def needs arms. read more comic books and look at how characters are put together. when i draw characters, i try exaggerating different aspects of the body. try it some time, you might like the style. not trying to diss ur guy, but it could def be a lot better

[Seek139]

what's with all the "Oi!"? i know it's a cartoon karak but guy def needs arms. read more comic books and look at how characters are put together. when i draw characters, i try exaggerating different aspects of the body. try it some time, you might like the style. not trying to diss ur guy, but it could def be a lot better

Oi! is a popular sub-culture of punk known as street punk it was around when skinheads weren't racist you know the whole look. The movie This is England has a pretty good story revolving that change in England.

full movie played in flash player here :
http://www.movieforumz.com/showthread.php?t=77058&highlight=This+is+England

[5Funerals]

give him beefy arms and a scooter

also, xilationer, GET THE FUCK OUT!

[zeno]

decent stuff
thnx bounty any crits?

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/dazedclansman.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/erasercrazed.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/idococaine.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/rednecknoseman.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/glassfish.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/baghead.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/duncecapboy.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/raindeerboycry.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/addictionbiotch.png

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/steel-ThePredator1v2.png

[NICCSACC]

Zeno; I really like the last 3, you should make stickers or something of them
REvid:that karak looks pretty awesome only it kinda looks like he's missing his left ear(on the right)

some shit of me....crits?
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7136/1002340iz1.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9755/1002341ty5.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1438/1002364ns1.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/13/1002365qc3.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/356/1002342ls2.jpg
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6669/1002349gv6.jpg
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4166/1002352co2.jpg
these are pretty awesome! keep that shit up!!

[NICCSACC]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/dazedclansman.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/erasercrazed.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/idococaine.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/rednecknoseman.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/glassfish.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/baghead.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/duncecapboy.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/raindeerboycry.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/addictionbiotch.png

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/steel-ThePredator1v2.pngdope as fucc post more dude

[Seek139]

dope as fucc post more dude

I will tonight I'm working on like 2 more digital pieces and then some blackbook scans.

[EST2007]

Oi! is a popular sub-culture of punk known as street punk it was around when skinheads weren't racist you know the whole look. The movie This is England has a pretty good story revolving that change in England.

full movie played in flash player here :
http://www.movieforumz.com/showthread.php?t=77058&highlight=This+is+England

hmm...learning something new everyday

[rel]

Not to brag, but I'm proud of this one :]

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh163/relwrites/Darth.jpg

('Vader' isn't my name, I meant for it to look like Darth was writin'. Just in case there were any dumbasses in here. :P)

[a maze]

^I really like that, keep it up.

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/eraser2.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/spacecadet2.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/angryrobberpill.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/signboycomputer.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/davidleeroth.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/derrobber.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/spacecadet1.png

[rel]

Seek: wild stallions? like from bill & ted? =P

[Seek139]

haha yep!!!

[rel]

Oh wow.. I looked at that picture again and realized "Bill & Ted" is written on the side.

Duuuuh. :rolleyes:

[Seek139]

I thought since I was getting a shower I wouldn't make you look stupid. Anyway Van Halen frontman is in their too which for some reason ended up looking like robert plant.

[sk8er6]

personally.. i like it:D

thanks man. the only crit too...
i completely fucked this one. like horribly.
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic011108_5.jpg
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic011208_5.jpg

[NICCSACC]

that Diamond Dave is tha SHIT! rilly dope

[rel]

sk8er6: I think it looks fine. it's dope, actually. but i think you should go back and add smoke coming from the cig. :D


Not to brag, but I'm proud of this one :]
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh163/relwrites/Darth.jpg


Bumpin for crits.

Also, thanks a maze!

[EST2007]

thanks man. the only crit too...
i completely fucked this one. like horribly.
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic011108_5.jpg
http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r305/sk8er6/pic011208_5.jpg

give him some depth and more facial features. for example, blend in some black around the back of the head, under the nose, where the neck meets the head ect.. (don't overdo it tho). it'll add depth and shadow.

[Seek139]

give him some depth and more facial features. for example, blend in some black around the back of the head, under the nose, where the neck meets the head ect.. (don't overdo it tho). it'll add depth and shadow.

Try overdoing it though on some sketch's that may be your "look".

[DRIPS!]

http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/92/hpim4286ww6.jpg
quick character i came up with

[kase121]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/Photo162.jpg

[newbornsek]

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00796.jpg

[bountyhunter113]

sk8r6-lol wut r stick pens?.........neways, props for gettin up

[EST2007]

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC00796.jpg

that's sick

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/erasergatt.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/AndyWarhol.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/LIZAA.png

[Sick!]

http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/1200000001fe957e/1/214/rIRtHLNx0D8YvFRmJWgKrSyMBzAcMeaa.jpg (http://www.slide.com/s/AvjtMmBx7z-gyQhosb1qJ3WvHXrof4Da?referrer=hlnk)
a minute and a half piece of shit ^

[DRIPS!]

est that character is pretty sick i like the goblin more i must say
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3838/hpim4294oc3.jpg

[Seek139]

Drips - Take more time coloring and cutting your stickers what materials are you using right now and is it possible for you to move up to printing them from a computer?

[EST2007]

est that character is pretty sick i like the goblin more i must say
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3838/hpim4294oc3.jpg

yeah i agree. i kinda rushed on the warrior cuz it was wicked cold and my hands were freezing up...but fuck the excuses... next character i do is gonna be killer.

Anyone else on this thread paint their characters, or do most of you use stickers?

Anyone from MA? i wanna take over this wall with a comic book scene...get at me

btw drips ur guy reminds me of garfield for some reason. dunno why, maybe the same style of cartoon features. not a bad thing tho, i like him

[DRIPS!]

haha garfield that was a dope show but uhh yeah i paint my characters sometimes when there isnt 2 feet of snow outside. and man if you do that comic piece wall definately flick it

[EST2007]

what state are you from? i'm from mass and we got a shit load of snow last week and we're expecting more snow this weekend. it might be a while b4 i work out that wall cuz it's so fuckin cold out

[sk8er6]

to the previous page

kase121, ill. i love doug.
newbornsek, sick. sick. sick.
EST2007 and Seek139, thanks for the crits...
bountyhunter113, check the ink thread

and to est107, the heads are dope, i dont like the body that much. shit looks good though.

[DRIPS!]

uhh yeah im from a province hint hint cough cough canada

[Seek139]

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/scissorhanderaserman.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/erasermarker.png
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n32/zinone/spacecadet3.png

[-Leski]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/6128/domokunmc7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Reminded me of this.

[Seek139]

This is only the second time I got the Domo-Kun comment which is what that is it called there are many difference's if you got down to the structure, but my character is a work in progress and its an eraser not some jap. advertisement. Kinda Like the evil gerbil looks like invader zim at times.

[beyondyereyes]

I resized it and it went all ugly. Bear with me.http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/resizedshittt.jpg

[a maze]

beyondyereyes- REALLY like that dinosaur/monster on the right, not really feeling anything else. Keep it up, man.

[-Leski]

Not sayin your biting or anything seek, just saying i thought of domo when I saw it.

[Mass Appeal]

seek...you have an answer to every crit lol its crazy....all he said is it reminds him of it...no need to tell him your life story of some char youv so called developed which you probably wont continue to develop and imo that shit isnt developed at all. :)

[Seek139]

seek...you have an answer to every crit lol its crazy....all he said is it reminds him of it...no need to tell him your life story of some char youv so called developed which you probably wont continue to develop and imo that shit isnt developed at all. :)


Sorry If I feel like defending something non violently that I'm working on and yes I am and will be developing that character. Thx for your opinion keep checking in you'll see something out of simplicity soon.

[NICCSACC]

i like seeks guys. keep that shit up.

[beyondyereyes]

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/teef.jpg
Needs to be refined and colored.

[sketch3]

I resized it and it went all ugly. Bear with me.http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/resizedshittt.jpg

diggity dope

[emel]

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8194/characcnh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
beyondyereyes- taht little monster shit on the left is pretty dope and reminds me of that old xbox game i forget what its called tho.... ODDWORLD somethin....
mass appeal- your a douche.
ive never really done characters before but i was bored after exams and decided to give it a try

not really somethin i would try to paint

[a maze]

my 2 cents-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrslap1.jpg

[overdue]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj104.jpg

a maze like it lots
sketch lovin the monster in the middle

[a maze]

^you should totally fill it and outline it next time, might look ill.

New sketch, same char... In the process of darkening him up, ha ha-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrcharsketch.jpg
critses?

[jawsy]

its dope but
i reckon you should ink the rest

[a maze]

its dope but
i reckon you should ink the rest

Thats why I said "In the process of darkening him up." ;)

[jawsy]

o
lol

i dident read your post

[a maze]

thats fine, ha ha.

Finished product-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/makrcharsketchdone.jpg
crits?

[mIoK?!]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo545.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo159.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/THIS2.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/STOLEN.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/lolll.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/ORANGE.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/1774998007_d11d3c9697.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo_197.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Picture025.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Picture004.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/1158784159_ec49af3922.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Picture001.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo655.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/Photo546.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/yerrr.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/SHTUFF026.jpg
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/LLLLLLLLL.jpg

[AOTPs]

amaze- that shit is ill im digging...just 4 ur benefit test it with or eye,mouuths,and expresions see wut u come up wit
mIok-its ok,jus seems too plan like doesnt really stick out in someone mind put a body on it,or sumthing to make it stand out ,otherwise its straight

[mIoK?!]

thanks man

i was thinking about that to

[PG_Miscreant]

i like the heaven one, good job, looks clean
keep up the good work

[tocsscott]

miok that character is great the palces that you have got up in make hims tand out because its a dull surrounding.
Its a great character

[Ity]

heres some i've been working on latley
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/picturea.jpg
theres a joke behind the farmer
http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n35/specialsteve101/pictureb.jpg

[mIoK?!]

thanks tocsscott

stay up man!

[5Funerals]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj104.jpg



I love this guy! Do some filled ones and make some stickers of him

[RemoZ]

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2555/dsc00203dh1.jpg

[5Funerals]

kinda boring

[einsamkeit]

Nice karak remoz...

But inline skating is bunk...

[maso1]

Charecter i drew, crits please.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0006.jpg

[beyondyereyes]

It's dope. Color it. Put some fuzz on it's belly or maybe a belly button?

[T O K E]

amaze- you took that guy to another level, nice

This is the first time ive been on in awhile because i just focused on drawing and my cable/internet has been off for a week or two, sorry i have so many but tell me what you think(i numbered them so it would be easier to crit)

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/ds.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/sd.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/dds.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/ssd.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/22.jpg

[beyondyereyes]

They're definitely improving. Get a marker to outline and color the first though. It's got potential. Work with it especially its nose. The others are interesting but I think experimenting more would help.

[T O K E]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/ds.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/sd.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/dds.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/ssd.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/22.jpg

Sorry i had the last post

i agree with you beyond, the firsts ones nose is pretty week, thanks for the crit though i never really looked at that nose before

[bountyhunter113]

toke- don't even try usin color..........they all horrible, read some art books(these r free, u can download newhere on internet) or sumtin b4 u even try to sketch again, coz i been watchin all ur posts n tey basically same crap over n over, barely ne progression.......

bored durin finals:
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l93/bountyhunter114/zombies.png

[T O K E]

give me some names, id love to read some books, ive only been drawing seriously and alot for the past 2-3 weeks so i think i have potential but i just really want to improve so any books, anything you could help me out on would be great

[einsamkeit]

dude ... loving the tubby zombie monster... looks awesome.

[bountyhunter113]

give me some names, id love to read some books, ive only been drawing seriously and alot for the past 2-3 weeks so i think i have potential but i just really want to improve so any books, anything you could help me out on would be great
sent u thro pm

[mIoK?!]

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z255/featz8/IMG00808.jpg

[THEfreerideKID]

I did not commit any of the crimes in these pictures, Nor do I condone illegal activities.

[T O K E]

thats weak, draw and construct your karaks

read up
http://www.squidoo.com/How-To-Draw-Cartoon-Characters

[Evasion Of Invasion]

miok ears look weird tweek em
freeride do wut toke said
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00626.jpg
crits

[Reason To-Shine]

are those supposed to be papercuts or something? because thats what I see... well maybe not papercuts but... cuts... ::Cough::

[Evasion Of Invasion]

yup self inflicted all the way rofl

[Rhyseitup]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s001.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s.jpg
random shizzz

[JEDI-MASTER]

i like dem characters alot keep dat shit up man, specially tha 1 wit the hat. only thing "wrong" is the necks....seem to long

[jawsy]

toke that site is wack.. i mean its good if your doing that style but its very restrictive

[Xyk]

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r304/KoreTwo/scan0009.jpg

Charac on the leftt.

Rhyse - Thats a unique style. I like it much :D Would like to see a full body thoh.
Miok - Unique take on a monkey(?). I like the way it is, maybe refine his features a little, and change the ears up a little.
Evasion - Kinda emo lol. Nice wings, but the rest of the charac seems pretty plain.

[ForGiven]

dunno if im in position to crit but i like the little horned devil lokkin thingy dude. simple but i like it

[THEfreerideKID]

yo toke if you are still on this thread please dont criticize me until you get better bro. There are many different styles out there. Some people are going for quick bombs like me . I can do an outline of my character in under 3 seconds or a simple fill in not much longer. Maybe you are going for artistic sketches. I can do that too that just isnt what im doing with this particular character. Keep at it though and maybe learn a little more about graffiti in general before u start criticizing others. Not trying to be a dick just letting you in on my opinion. For those of you who haven't seen my pics here you go.
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9904/n1374900782302277694273jy2.jpg
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/354/n1374900782302277705192mt2.jpg

[sketch3]

under 3 seconds... thats preatyy impressive. u can up wack shit really fast. props
toke dose suck tho

[T O K E]

i was trying to help you out, your shit is kinda weak, im not trying to be mean i want you to get better.

sketch your a faggot, ive never seen any of your pieces and all you do is sit on this forum and troll all day, wonder bread ass moutherfucker

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/_MG_7731.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Toke - not reall feelin it, bro. it looks like you're trying to make a simple character too complex. you kind of have to go one way or the other, man

http://i29.tinypic.com/iqlflg.jpg

[sketch3]

sketch your a faggot, ive never seen any of your pieces and all you do is sit on this forum and troll all day, wonder bread ass moutherfucker



cuss im a posser.
but for real my scanners been fucked for a while but scince ur bitchin the last carek i scaned, old n wack
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5766/gangstaboogiemt2.jpg

[ForGiven]

toke , that how to draw cartoon thing seems more...structured whereas graff characters dont have to be so...structured. I myself like them more simple like freerides lil character.
wish i could put up some of mine.

[bountyhunter113]

toke , that how to draw cartoon thing seems more...structured whereas graff characters dont have to be so...structured. I myself like them more simple like freerides lil character.
wish i could put up some of mine.
ur a stupid piece of shit..........yea that link toke gave ya'll will help u guys, coz obviously a complex tutorial ain't gonna help u out

[T O K E]

i was trying to help you out, your shit is kinda weak, im not trying to be mean i want you to get better.

sketch your a faggot, ive never seen any of your pieces and all you do is sit on this forum and troll all day, wonder bread ass moutherfucker

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g271/J3WB4CC4/_MG_7731.jpg

no crits...:confused:

:)

[luster]

i dont have any new flicks so i thought id post this one from summer but id still like some constructive crits..
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/C111707_0917_00.jpg

[fOrSaQeN]

a quickie

http://i30.tinypic.com/2jfir94.jpg

[T O K E]

The Face And Hair Is Kinda Cool But The Body Is Awful, Sry For The Caps, look for that link i posted a few oages back it'll really help you draw a good body, you might wanna try a more neutral pose when you first start out
http://www.squidoo.com/How-To-Draw-Cartoon-Characters

anyone wanna crit my shit? constrcutive

[sketch3]

take your own advice,
the proportins are horrible and the hands are ungodly.
in a bad way

[-GEKS-]

dont really like anything on this page to be honest
painted characs up there are cool, cuz there painted
toke work on the hands

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/pirateangles.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/coloredpirate.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/bnwpirate.jpg

new charac im workin on..
crits please

woops sorry for size i'll figure out how to make these smaller
peace

[hazetheone]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s001.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s.jpg
random shizzz

if belio drew scene kid characters
not a bite
just reminds me of his stuff
like the swirls and the big lips

[Stim]

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7277/wizardfz5.jpg

[InfamouSN]

Pretty whack.. I know. but I was working on it a really long time ago, I haven't worked on this character in some months now....DONT MIND THE THROWIE IN THE BACCK. IT FUUCKING SUCKS. It was all fucked up because of the shroom


so yeah. just getting that out of the way

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j14/metallicflames31/f_DSCF1531m_4a3da3c.jpg

[-GEKS-]

i think the throwie is better than the charac, which i really dont like
both need work

[sevenohsavage]

geks- im feelin that charac that shit is dope. u should like give differnet kinds of clothes that would be sick

[Mass Appeal]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s001.jpg
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/sitimoako/s.jpg
random shizzz

wow.
was that bite of Belio " Finger Lickin' Good "..

God damn.

[hazetheone]

Pretty whack.. I know. but I was working on it a really long time ago, I haven't worked on this character in some months now....DONT MIND THE THROWIE IN THE BACCK. IT FUUCKING SUCKS. It was all fucked up because of the shroom


so yeah. just getting that out of the way

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j14/metallicflames31/f_DSCF1531m_4a3da3c.jpg

HAHAHAHAHA the fucking mushroom looks like a dick
HAHA

[-GEKS-]

lol no lie i was thinkin the same thing

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture73.jpg

for shits

[overdue]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj019.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj033.jpg
geks- shits dope

[sketch3]

wow.
was that bite of Belio " Finger Lickin' Good "..

God damn.
shut up,
the only similer thing to belios were the swirls.
and u cant bite fucking swirls, structer is completely different

[bountyhunter113]

yea it's not a belio bite lol, ask belio ur self.......

[Mass Appeal]

so you cant bite someones style of drawing lol ?....i remeber when EMOKID did and Elephant with long legs coming out of a plant pot getting accused of biting DALI...that was DALI's tyle of drawing..and thats Belios style of drawing..personally..i dont give a shit.

[sketch3]

yea but that stuff emokid was doing was kinda generic(dope dont get me wrong)
i mean if u took away the 'belio' swirls theses charecters would still be allright,

[AOTPs]

^^ yeah but its a style if the kid wants 2 do em its his choose beside that the only thing he got off belio was the swirls otherwise shit looks nuttin like his work

[sketch3]

my point exactly,

i actually think theey would look better without the swirls,
keep the linework on the hair and the cloths tho

[InfamouSN]

HAHAHAHAHA the fucking mushroom looks like a dick
HAHA

lmao, yeah. It needs work. I made this quick character the other day, turned out dope.

[Ohno!]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2330/2221768537_9968d4d8f7.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2022/2222559118_53cbc7e46c.jpg?v=0

meh
tryin illustrator.

[overdue]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj019.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj033.jpg
http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj034.jpg
ohno- like it, it looks good

[Maste]

ohno: those fingers are wonky XD
due: it looks like a kinda good 3 seconds before the cops come char but it needs some work ;)
sketch idea:
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6568/sntguyun7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
suppoed to be faceless guy in suit with baggy pants and loose shoes and spray paint...kinda messed up everything waist done but i think the suit/head look good
and i have no clue if this is overplayed cause ive never seenit but it seems like too cool of an idea for me to have it first haha

edit...the pic

[STAR01]

OHNO those look pretty cool ahha the first one kinda reminds me of that msn guy

some idea for a new stencil crits anyone??
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3085/picture0001yl9.jpg

[Cy-anide]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/CyberAssassin/Partyness052.jpg

cam out shitty cuz i didnt have a detail cap =(

[Stim]

my point exactly,

i actually think theey would look better without the swirls,
keep the linework on the hair and the cloths tho
Without the swirls they would probably look like some ghetto/ anime fezat stuff.

[bountyhunter113]

drop the subject, post flix

[Mass Appeal]

Yeah Bounty..post flix.

http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/grege.jpg

[bountyhunter113]

lol, i did post flix in the sticker threads......;p

nice ish u got there bro

[a maze]

amk, man I don't like that at all... Looks like you went insane and just moved the pencil wherever. Stick to your simpler ish, looks mad better.

[STAR01]

OHNO those look pretty cool ahha the first one kinda reminds me of that msn guy

some idea for a new stencil crits anyone??
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/3085/picture0001yl9.jpg
sorry to bump but i didn't get any crits on this

[overdue]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa17/erjayallday/aj042.jpg

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture76.jpg

Still workin, got a LOT to do

Saiks-Nice and simple, I like it a lot, always got dank shit

AMK- I like it, it's much better with color

Star- Seems like a cool idea, maybe smaller teeth?

Due- I really like the feel of yours, maybe cool if you did some with crazy/quick fills?

[remos]

star that looks pretty good but it needs work
it really looks like its missing something
mabye you could try something in the eyes or something
anyway it looks good so far

[T O K E]

Tech You Need To Work On Your Perspective And Proportion, I Dont Now What Kind Of Fish That Is Supposed To Be But Google Some Pictures Of It And You'll Be Able To Draw A More Realistic Looking Fish

[Evasion Of Invasion]

everybody here needs to keep workin out their characters anatomy except AMK
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00644.jpg

[Snew]

Overdue i think yer caracter is almost too simple work on something that takes a bit more time and talent to put up and do a few less i think its more respectable that way

[Evasion Of Invasion]

everybody here needs to keep workin out their characters anatomy except AMK
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC00644.jpg

bump bottom of the page

[Snew]

im not good at drawing people but animals and creatures and stuff is my forte!

but everybody should let me know what ya think.

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo1.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo6.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo2.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo3.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo5.jpg

Crits please.

[atlok7]

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/6742/photo139dr5.jpg

[Snew]

Nice shit atlok.. ive been watchin and searchin these threads for weeks before i signed up and your shit is dope..

[Cy-anide]

thanks bro , im always loving those dam fish hahah keep it up i love the 1st 2 stick wit em.

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture76.jpg (http://%5BIMG%5Dhttp://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture76.jpg%5B/IMG%5D)

Still workin, got a LOT to do

Saiks-Nice and simple, I like it a lot, always got dank shit

AMK- I like it, it's much better with color

Star- Seems like a cool idea, maybe smaller teeth?

Due- I really like the feel of yours, maybe cool if you did some with crazy/quick fills?

[T O K E]

thanks bro , im always loving those dam fish hahah keep it up i love the 1st 2 stick wit em.

no he shouldnt stick with them, if he wants to do fish he needs to completely re-do them like i said he should. if you ever put those on the street youd get laughed at

snew- i the sock puppet

[Cause816]

Snew I'm diggin' your shiv. Lovin; the "hello" stick, Gotta Rep anything that puts society to a standstill. Ohh and EVADE your handstyle is SICK!

[ForGiven]

no he shouldnt stick with them, if he wants to do fish he needs to completely re-do them like i said he should. if you ever put those on the street youd get laughed at

snew- i the sock puppet

fuck that, the fish are nice. stick wit em.

[Mass Appeal]

HOLY SHIT ! Atlok has 7 fingers !

[T O K E]

http://i32.tinypic.com/vp9bg2.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/axefzr.jpg
^ i like these because their simple but they have some substance
http://i26.tinypic.com/4r8876.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/23tfssz.jpg
^and i wanted to do something like a octopus or a squid or something becuase they're fun to draw, its a jelly fish(these are the first ones)

i've been drawing for like a month and im pretty happy where im at so far, but i still need to put in alot more work, alot more...

some constructive crits would be nice :]

[Snew]

Toke, the keif one is the most succesful out of all of them. It looks alot like yer tryin to create almost abstract characs which is awesome but with the jellyfish as well as the head thing.. id say take it one step further...

[bountyhunter113]

fuck that, the fish are nice. stick wit em.
ur a fuckin idiot.........take toke's advice and don't draw em stupid fish

[Snew]

... agreed...

[bountyhunter113]

i remember wen i jus started out, some1 on this forum gave really good advice that helped me progress..............they said, "Look at the way clothes bend, it will help you furthur understand how to draw characters and people better."

this advice really helped me out, i looked at clothes and the functionallity of their parts and that helped me progress.........hopes it helps you guys out too

[iBomb4KOG]

change the fish


this is my fish.....

http://i25.tinypic.com/200330o.jpg


n some others

http://i25.tinypic.com/2ljrwwj.jpg

http://i31.tinypic.com/2uekztl.jpg

http://i26.tinypic.com/2m7fbs9.jpg

[T O K E]

thanks for all the help and support guys, i appreciate it

snew- what i was trying to do with the simpler ones was do as much as i could with as few lines as possible, i think once i eventually turn that corner that ill have some alright stuff

ill have new karaks in a couple of days

[a maze]

another new version of my old character-

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj241/mazeonerr/char1.jpg

[sketch3]

new manga style skull = dope

[Dying to live]

Thats hot..
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/Rawr.png
:D

[Xilationer]

TOKE, the best are your jellyfish. I think what you need to do is work on some simple forms of jellyfish, with less tentacles and such. Stick with the jellyfish though.

[beyondyereyes]

Style in progress... I like it so far... very different. But any crits send 'em this way.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/god.jpg

Maze... shit is hot.

[skiv]

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u304/gihazevt/IMG_0006.jpg?t=1202320039

[Techkanuck]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b159/civichatch2005/Picture85.jpg

THe next step, I have a few more detailed, but i'm still trying to find a mix of a quick toss up style and detailed out.

Beyond-Maybe if it had more substance in spots

Skiv- Keep workin the robot and you'll have a nice one