Weekly Sketch Battle - Delor

[NouveauP]

Nozirev
http://i40.tinypic.com/i73gjp.jpg

WGONE
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/189/113pd.jpg/

Bas
http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr243/Basswinkels/111217-Delor.jpg

[W_G_O_N_E]

nice entries bas and nozirev i can't see mine but no biggie i wasn't sure if sent it to nouveau right anywayshttp://img841.imageshack.us/img841/1852/115av.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/841/115av.jpg/)

[NouveauP]

Yeah I was trying to get it to work, but for some reason it just won't. I dunno

[zemune]

Nozirev gmv, i like them broken letters.

[Nozirev]

wgone gmv...feelin the simple

[Chimpz]

http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd364/VR6-Golf/2ddf37cb.jpg

[manchoo]

51041

[Zookyook]

wg based on what id stop to look at if i saw it on a wall..... bas had a crazy concept though well executed dude

[manchoo]

51048
it was a x mas gift for her

[Bas]

wg based on what id stop to look at if i saw it on a wall..... bas had a crazy concept though well executed dude
Thanks man.

[Luster3875]

51048
it was a x mas gift for her
Nice work man.Did she love it?

[Luster3875]

Bas,"meanwhile at the bar.." lol! nice dude .I'll take a Delor martini,dirty.. HEY OH! You GMV dude, because of concept,color scheme and humor.Thought W_G_O_N_E was too simple,fresh but simple.Nozirev,you had this dude!If you'd only added a bright gel for the outline or something..IMO of course.Nozirev,you definitely took the letter structure cake,they got you on the effort though(icing).

[knowme]

Honest opinions...

Nozirev - Poor letters, and it's a little worrying when all your lines are perfectly straight yet your arrows are out of proportion...
Bas - I hate those letters, but probably because i used to do a style very similar to that (you're your own worst critic and all that). Nice concept and colour work, should have left the left side of the bar out as your command of perspective leaves much to be desired. What white pen are you using out of interest?
WGONE - Fuckin fresh!!!

[Nozirev]

nice to hear some constructive criticism for once...knowme, you think the letters are too complex looking and have only a basic structure, or do you just have a problem with the letters in general...

[Bas]

I agree with Nozirev, constructive feedback is truly appreciated.

Knowme: I agree with you on the bar. I already put quite some time in the rest and wanted to finish quickly, and therefore rushed the bar and (especially) the stools. Some depth would've been easy to add, it just didn't enter my mind anymore.
Furthermore, you say you don't like my letters: could you PM me some drawings or pieces that you believe I could learn from to improve my current letters? Could be yours or someone else's work. (Just as a small clarification: I'm currently experiencing with different letters, backgrounds, and colors all at the same time. I hardly have any time to draw at all, so if I actually do have some time for it, I try to focus on getting the overall work done before the end of the day. Therefore, what I post here are usually attemps to improve on all levels given the time I have.)
Finally, the white pen is a Sakura Gelly Roll (http://www.craftsudo.co.uk/acatalog/sakura_gelly_white.jpg). Bought it for the equivalent of about $5,- in a book store. Surprisingly pleasant to work with.

Luster: Thanks for the compliments.