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KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-23-2005, 04:39 PM
its doin ok. keep it up

*Personaly im not a fan of the same letters that repeat right after eachother....

ie. buDDy.. spEEd. etc... its kinda hard to make them flow just right

Nv Soldier
04-23-2005, 04:55 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/nvsoldier/38924a21.jpg

OKay I got it....Now,How can I make it better or get better ?....is it good or bad ?

Hpnotiq
04-23-2005, 05:05 PM
Can i modify my pentel white or my pilot jumbo broad marker

escap
04-23-2005, 05:29 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/ESCAP.jpg

sorry for the dark pic..but batteries died

Nv Soldier
04-23-2005, 06:24 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/nvsoldier/Jorge.jpg
Deleted other picture so here it is again

meks
04-23-2005, 07:30 PM
dont tell me boat the halo or handstyle i messed up on those bt lettering good? :blink:

http://img106.echo.cx/img106/2842/meky4ts.jpg

CraYon
04-23-2005, 07:58 PM
That M is gigantic....Try makin it smaller...and for some reason, that E looks like a bird. Be unoriginal and try making a face in the E <_<

meks
04-23-2005, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by CraYon@Apr 23 2005, 06:58 PM
That M is gigantic....Try makin it smaller...and for some reason, that E looks like a bird. Be unoriginal and try making a face in the E <_<
i wasnt trying to make abird

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-23-2005, 08:31 PM
it can actually look good.. it has Some flow.... just make the bottom mart of the M a bit more neat&#39;r n tha E fit the M&#39;s style a lil more

Shrink
04-23-2005, 09:03 PM
Is there a problem with water based ink?

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-23-2005, 09:10 PM
theres no real problem but it depends....

water based means its ingrediant is mostly water.. so it can come off really easy.. i.e. Not perminant..

alcahol based / Xylene markers are considered perminant.. *cant come off with water when dry...

but then again..Nothing is un-buffable.

so the choice is yours because in the end its gonna get buffed..

wreckone.
04-23-2005, 10:00 PM
How much do prisma markers usually sell for in art stores?

MrCzar
04-23-2005, 10:16 PM
They&#39;re expensive. Like &#036;20 for a simple 10 set. Way jacked up for more.

Nv Soldier
04-23-2005, 10:20 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/nvsoldier/Jorge.jpg

From 1-10 what do I get ?What can I change to make it better or get better myself ?

wreckone.
04-23-2005, 10:31 PM
I think you can lose some of the cuts and jags and keep the outlines more straight, I think it would look a lot better. Plus, your arrow is 3d&#39;d, so I suggest you do the same with your letters.

->toNE*
04-23-2005, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by ezekiel@Apr 23 2005, 11:53 AM
well since i just started a new thread and got flamed as normal i will say the same thing in here also since every else are stupid fucktards and just wont give me some advice
which name should i use?
TYPE
PEN
FARP
ZEKE
ZEEK
EZ
MANE
DONE
USE
PAX
STY
why are they all 4 letters an lest...

k2s
04-23-2005, 10:55 PM
Originally posted by k2s@Apr 22 2005, 09:17 PM
http://img201.echo.cx/img201/1148/dscn01487yr.th.jpg (http://img201.echo.cx/my.php?image=dscn01487yr.jpg)


any tips comments or anything ok thanks guys
bump for suggestions or constructive critizm

Nv Soldier
04-23-2005, 10:58 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/nvsoldier/Jorge.jpg

1-10 what do I get ? How can I make it better and how can I get better myself ? Any tips ?

wreckone.
04-23-2005, 11:03 PM
Originally posted by wreckone.@Apr 23 2005, 09:31 PM
I think you can lose some of the cuts and jags and keep the outlines more straight, I think it would look a lot better. Plus, your arrow is 3d&#39;d, so I suggest you do the same with your letters.
Once again, to Ny Soldier.

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-24-2005, 12:28 AM
Ok well I was bored and wanted to play around with 3d so I did this

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/puncrap.jpg

and then Im trying to think of a pun piece and i cant seem to think of how to draw a U how to do my P, im stuck. ( ignore the little bubbles, i got bored lol)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/pscan.jpg

suggestions/comments, anyone?

ChAr
04-24-2005, 04:52 AM
hey um since evryone seems 2 b havin a bit of a show n tell.. i wana get some feedback on just sum shit iv done in pencil but i think id need 2 crop out heaps of the blank white space around wat i drew.. any idea how?

evo
04-24-2005, 05:19 AM
in paint, use the selection tool, and select what you want to show...
now, move that to the top left corner
now goto the bottom right corner of the canvas and click and hold on the little handle to make it smaller, move it so all the white space is gone, then save it.

ChAr
04-24-2005, 05:37 AM
oh god im sounding like a rookie now but how do i post images.. :unsure:

toxus
04-24-2005, 05:44 AM
Originally posted by ezekiel@Apr 23 2005, 04:53 PM
well since i just started a new thread and got flamed as normal i will say the same thing in here also since every else are stupid fucktards and just wont give me some advice
which name should i use?
TYPE
PEN
FARP
ZEKE
ZEEK
EZ
MANE
DONE
USE
PAX
STY
dont write mane its taken from round my area

K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles
04-24-2005, 11:25 AM
http://img212.echo.cx/img212/4224/shit3wo.jpg

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 11:31 AM
yeah but is your area anywhere close to southern texas?

toxus
04-24-2005, 01:22 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/new_pa6.jpg

done it on photoshop, its ment to say hecks but i could not fit the s in

wreckone.
04-24-2005, 01:23 PM
Why don&#39;t you write Ezek or something..

toxus
04-24-2005, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by wreckone.@Apr 24 2005, 05:23 PM
Why don&#39;t you write Ezek or something..
who me

ILL
04-24-2005, 01:33 PM
no he was talking to ezekiel

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 01:47 PM
i was just going to ask if i should write ezek?
should I?

wreckone.
04-24-2005, 01:50 PM
Do it. It looks like it has flow, but then again, what do i know about flow?

runci
04-24-2005, 01:53 PM
http://img172.echo.cx/img172/5543/picture498th.jpg

Nv Soldier
04-24-2005, 02:09 PM
a yo when ppl color their pieces what do they use ? Where can I get it at ?



....what are the materials are needed ?

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 02:45 PM
yeah i tagged ezek on a piece of cardboard and it looked sweet,
if my scanner worked i would show you but it like broke or something,
what do you think i should tag for my first tag? i was thinking of doing the mailbox down the street, or should i tag something farther cause my parents know i write graffiti, but only on paper, so they have seen some of the stuff i have done so should i do it in a spot that they dont goto very often like, the mailbox a couple streets over?
oh yeah and what time should i go?
and another thing, should i ride my bike or walk?
and it should be easy cause most the mail boxes down here are by flood canal things

meks
04-24-2005, 02:47 PM
Originally posted by runci@Apr 24 2005, 12:53 PM
http://img172.echo.cx/img172/5543/picture498th.jpg
runci i love your style keep it goin man

runci
04-24-2005, 02:47 PM
dont have a trail of tags leadin to ur house...
man dont jus tag mailboxes tag everyfin...

runci
04-24-2005, 02:49 PM
meks: hey fanks man... im still only 13 an so gettin up is harder as i cant get around as easily...

Crack Killz
04-24-2005, 02:51 PM
I hate when people use Photoshop for graffiti.

toxus
04-24-2005, 02:52 PM
runci do you write steven

runci
04-24-2005, 02:53 PM
no thats my name... its for my garage wall im doin...

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 03:01 PM
so your saying i shouldnt tag the mailbox a couple streets over that my parents rarely go on?

runci
04-24-2005, 03:11 PM
no dont leave a trail from ur house.... n tag everyfin not just mailboxes....

joust
04-24-2005, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by Nv Soldier@Apr 24 2005, 01:09 PM
a yo when ppl color their pieces what do they use ? Where can I get it at ?



....what are the materials are needed ?
check out decos, permopaques, prismas, most art stores sell them. Pretty much any paint marker will be decent for sketching, you dont need amazing markers to draw amazing stuff. I usually dont care much what my black book colors look like, it just matters what paint you use.

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 04:21 PM
then what should be my first place to tag?
it has to be something easy for me so i can get a feel of being out and tagging at night

anonymous
04-24-2005, 04:23 PM
3.50 a piece..&#33;

wreckone.
04-24-2005, 05:01 PM
Ezekiel, just do whatever. Do the boxes a couple of streets down, but just practise a little bit more before you do.

mplskid
04-24-2005, 05:18 PM
im doing this for a kid in my history class his snowboard crew is called celsius i got this far and now ive got writers block hahaha could i get some advice?
http://img254.exs.cx/img254/594/celcius0cw.png

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 05:31 PM
i would suggest at least add some 3D, some color, and maybe a colored outline. maybe give it the glare effect, and maybe add some paint splatter or bubbles after the 3D

ezekiel
04-24-2005, 05:34 PM
Originally posted by wreckone.@Apr 24 2005, 04:01 PM
Ezekiel, just do whatever. Do the boxes a couple of streets down, but just practise a little bit more before you do.
the only bad thing is my parents know that i do graffiti cause i do it on paper and if they see something i have done on paper on a mailbox or a box or something i may get busted, that is if they can read it or notice it, maybe if they ask me if i did it will just say that i was trying to copy it and thats why i drew it on paper. :D

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-24-2005, 06:16 PM
Originally posted by QuEeNz&#045;StyLe@Apr 23 2005, 11:28 PM
Ok well I was bored and wanted to play around with 3d so I did this

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/puncrap.jpg

and then Im trying to think of a pun piece and i cant seem to think of how to draw a U how to do my P, im stuck. ( ignore the little bubbles, i got bored lol)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/pscan.jpg

suggestions/comments, anyone?
BUMPP

Eye
04-24-2005, 06:19 PM
http://www.dreamthis.cjb.net/paint/0424051426.jpg


comment?

GeSuS_KRiST
04-24-2005, 07:06 PM
not bad just nest time try making your letters all the same size... one u do your fill in step back about 20 feet and make sure everythings stright with your letters (notice who alot of them are actaully curved and not stright angels) when u do 3d its important to keep all the 3d about the same size on EVERY letter work on your in lines and shell skills

and last but not least dont EVER tagg on train tracks people will fuck u up for marking on the actuall tracks also man be respectful and throw away your trash (i see a can there im assuming you threw it down then it was empty) dont forget every time i paint theres your finger prints all over the can (yes even if u used gloves)

rots1
04-24-2005, 07:37 PM
http://img201.echo.cx/img201/6592/picture0206ir.jpg

well heres sumtin i drew it says dame.what do you think?give me some advice

GeSuS_KRiST
04-24-2005, 07:39 PM
you 3d&#39;s improper you have it going all which ways also u have under and over lapping, arrows, BAD letter extions, bad cuts in the letter.... im goign to tell u what i tell everyone make your letters liek cerial boxes you need to learn to crawl before u can walk

mplskid
04-24-2005, 07:40 PM
Originally posted by ezekiel@Apr 24 2005, 04:31 PM
i would suggest at least add some 3D, some color, and maybe a colored outline. maybe give it the glare effect, and maybe add some paint splatter or bubbles after the 3D
how do you do bubbles and paint splatter i always fuck it up and it ends up looking like shit any good advice is appreaciated

thanks

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-24-2005, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by Eye@Apr 24 2005, 05:19 PM
http://www.dreamthis.cjb.net/paint/0424051426.jpg


comment?
Dr.Revolt called me

hes gonna shove the big one in your virgin donut when he sees you

epod
04-24-2005, 08:13 PM
ezekial. ive come across that prob too. they cant prove it was you tho, just b like yah, so what i drew on paper. did i break a law? so nevermind, it wasnt me .

Spydee87
04-24-2005, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by k2s+Apr 23 2005, 09:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (k2s @ Apr 23 2005, 09:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-k2s@Apr 22 2005, 09:17 PM
http://img201.echo.cx/img201/1148/dscn01487yr.th.jpg (http://img201.echo.cx/my.php?image=dscn01487yr.jpg)


any tips comments or anything ok thanks guys
bump for suggestions or constructive critizm [/b][/quote]
Ooo wow no offen dude but my lil sis can draw better then u....
u wanna c
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/maleka.jpg
then let me show u my shang
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/SHANG.jpg
but i keep tryin man....

rots1
04-24-2005, 08:22 PM
http://img214.echo.cx/img214/6016/picture0236cy.jpg

is this simple?what advice u got for this?

Shyd...
04-24-2005, 08:32 PM
Do you know what a cereal box is? the letters? they are fuckin bubble letters. i keep telling people on here to use bubble letters and then they use letters that attempt to be wildstyle. Use bubble letters man.

SikeS902
04-24-2005, 09:17 PM
alright here is sumthin that i did, u can&#39;t read it really. i need to work on my letter structure but can u give me some help on wut i should do.


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y167/Sikes/sscribtech.bmp

meks
04-24-2005, 09:21 PM
keep looking at other shit to get ideas dont bite, keep practicing and i think you can be realy good at wildstyle in time

SikeS902
04-24-2005, 09:54 PM
ya i look at alot of stuff on here. i am on page 260 on the black books in the picture gallery. ill post sum more stuff so i can get more tips on stuff i should do.

penis in eye crew
04-24-2005, 10:21 PM
http://membres.lycos.fr/psykaoz1/tag_wastebigasssilver.jpg

rots1
04-24-2005, 10:41 PM
http://img54.echo.cx/img54/5404/picture0247qn.jpg

how bout this?

snore
04-24-2005, 10:56 PM
I like the "a",and the"d". I dont really like your "m".

kyer
04-25-2005, 12:57 AM
feedback??

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00502442f00000003.jpg

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00502442f00000004.jpg

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00502442f00000007.jpg

ChAr
04-25-2005, 03:35 AM
http://img259.echo.cx/img259/6708/char15pd.png

http://img193.echo.cx/img193/1449/char25ns.png

ChAr
04-25-2005, 03:37 AM
opinions? criticism? lol compliments? :D

CityWide
04-25-2005, 04:26 AM
^ Practise makes perfect..

soapy_FATcap
04-25-2005, 07:19 AM
kyer on the first two you should space your letters farther apart and i think the bottom one looks like hot shit ;) <_< , props :lol:

char the first one looks good, you kinda messed up on the 3-d
and the second one i dont like cuz that letter form doesnt look
right to me, but still it looks hot

MrCzar
04-25-2005, 09:33 AM
Love the last one Kyer&#33; Krink fuckin rocks house yo&#33;

toxus
04-25-2005, 02:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/photoshopside.jpg

Jugga
04-25-2005, 02:59 PM
I need some help with ink..


I bought a window chalk marker, and am going to fill it up with higgins or india ink..
Which do you suggest..

...and what should I add to it to make it hella drippy...


also, I&#39;ve heard if you add glitter to it, you can get a dope-ass effect..
and that some Hi-Liter ink will give it a nice "glow".. <shrugs>



Get at me..

toxus
04-25-2005, 03:03 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/editphotoshop.jpg

same thing iv just out lined it

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-25-2005, 03:07 PM
Originally posted by MrCzar@Apr 25 2005, 08:33 AM
Krink fuckin rocks house yo&#33;
you tots sure love your "kink"

:lol: :lol:

Jugga
04-25-2005, 03:08 PM
You should really conscider closing it up at the bottom...

and work on your letter structure..
You need some work on your 3D too..

For the 3D try to keep all the lines the same size, and going in the same direction..


But work on the letter structure first..
thats whats most important..

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-25-2005, 03:14 PM
if for any reason that pix in your avatar is really you... i will never help you as long as this site goes on....

*no offence...

toxus
04-25-2005, 03:18 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@Apr 25 2005, 07:08 PM
You should really conscider closing it up at the bottom...

and work on your letter structure..
You need some work on your 3D too..

For the 3D try to keep all the lines the same size, and going in the same direction..


But work on the letter structure first..
thats whats most important..
ok thanks, but when you tell me to work on my letter structure what can i do to make it better

Jugga
04-25-2005, 03:23 PM
Make them more legible and proportionate..


Try to keep the width and height of the letters the same throughout..
For eample: The &#39;L&#39; is hella thick compared to the other letters...
and tha &#39;H&#39; just looks awkward..

and try separating them a bit

Jugga
04-25-2005, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@Apr 25 2005, 01:59 PM
I need some help with ink..


I bought a window chalk marker, and am going to fill it up with higgins or india ink..
Which do you suggest..

...and what should I add to it to make it hella drippy...


also, I&#39;ve heard if you add glitter to it, you can get a dope-ass effect..
and that some Hi-Liter ink will give it a nice "glow".. <shrugs>



Get at me..
Also, what should I add so that it won&#39;t be buffed out easy?

I&#39;ve heard break fluid..
but..

Just want to be sure..

toxus
04-25-2005, 03:45 PM
cod liver oil and i think its a bit better

wreckone.
04-25-2005, 03:47 PM
India ink sucks, I took a bottle of it that i took from school last year. It&#39;s not too good, My stuff washed off after a month in the rain. But then again, i never mixed it with anything and when i finally did, the ink must have been expired because was all clumpy, so it was good for nothing.

Jugga
04-25-2005, 03:57 PM
Alright... Thanks fellas...


Cod oil and Higgins it is..

cutslikedrugs
04-25-2005, 05:56 PM
I was hoping to get more feedback. The first pic is one of a sketch I displayed earlier and the second is the piece that I did from the drawing. The older members/artists are emphasizing letter structure, so the third is a quick, measured drawing I did with simpler letters. I made them all the same width, kept them spaced, and didn&#39;t add any bits, arrows, etc. to make them more clear, yet it still doesn&#39;t feel right. Suggestions? Also, I was hoping someone might be able to elaborate on what "good letter structure" really means and what I can work on to get this.

Thanks

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000015.jpg

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000017.jpg

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000018.jpg

kid
04-25-2005, 06:06 PM
you should just work on staying more simple, personaly i think the "a" looks like it has horns, and you need to work on the bottom half of your "a" and lose the right side of your "i" basicaly just keep it simple.

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-25-2005, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by cutslikedrugs@Apr 25 2005, 04:56 PM
Also, I was hoping someone might be able to elaborate on what "good letter structure" really means and what I can work on to get this.


letter structure help-out

Letter Structure means you can make out the letters when it is still "wild style" it has flow..Form..and actual letters so to say.. this has No letter structure

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000016.jpg
*Notice how nothing flows... none of the add ons realy belong.. it looks like he threw them on there randomly...theres circles then sharp corners...

good letter structure shold look like this *not exactly like this piece.. jus an example

http://img169.echo.cx/img169/7889/0410150227045zh.jpg

*its so called "crazy whoooooo" but u can still make out the whole piece.. notice the difference?..

even though it looks easy to do i wouldent try to add "add-ons" to any of your pieces for a long time.. untill you get basic simple letters down.

now who ever said Simple letters are boring as fuck.. your wrong.. your just trying to jump ahead too fast.. thats why your shit comes out wack..

simple letters can have Flow and style as well..

http://img16.echo.cx/img16/4936/simple9ke.jpg

*my simple letters^
see.. simple but with some flow and style...

*Also.. almost all writere appriciate nice simple clean cut painted pieces. nothing is wrong with em

letter structure is all about having clean cut letters..
so practice with simple letters.. try to make em flow. etc. and every time you sketch your going to try different stuff... *not everything is going to work*.. but have patiance... to get a style takes YEARS.. not months or weeks.. this is my Third year of doing fitti.. and i still havent really found my style.. im changing shit all the time...

so all what im trying to say is.. letter structure begins with simple letters.. get that down and its going to be so much easier down the road..

Dr.evil
04-25-2005, 07:35 PM
biting fable?

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-25-2005, 08:00 PM
i am fable...

only the older cats who have been here since the site started up again know this, so most of you are confused when they call me KAY...

i Write FABLE/Beanr... but when i joined this site i wrote KAY-One.

so everyone still calles me kay....

segway
04-25-2005, 08:47 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00484834f00000086.jpg
yo kay, mind giving me some advice?

Shyd...
04-25-2005, 09:26 PM
Kay i am not. I always call you kay :wub:

wreckone.
04-25-2005, 09:55 PM
Hey Mr.Czar, how&#39;s that tag going? I know it&#39;s pretty late to bring up, but have you made any changes to it lately?

0oskiteo0
04-25-2005, 10:10 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/babek2104/PINE2.jpg

I NEED HELP. Thats my first throw up, i know that weed leaf is toy as fuck. Give me some advice.

Spydee87
04-25-2005, 10:32 PM
Plz can neone help me here does this sh&#33;t look good.....some quick sh&#33;t i did <_<
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd2.jpg

tryin to perfec my sig ;)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd.jpg

ILL
04-25-2005, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by Spydee87@Apr 25 2005, 10:32 PM
Plz can neone help me here does this sh&#33;t look good.....some quick sh&#33;t i did <_<
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd2.jpg

tryin to perfec my sig ;)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd.jpg
something that can help with your tag is to practice the letters by them selves like do a page of Ss, Ds and all the letters in your tag and then do a page of them together, Gesus and Bombs Away told me to do that when i posted my tag and it helps a lot

fiction
04-25-2005, 11:52 PM
Originally posted by 0oskiteo0@Apr 25 2005, 09:10 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/babek2104/PINE2.jpg

I NEED HELP. Thats my first throw up, i know that weed leaf is toy as fuck. Give me some advice.
good boy you need to go way simpler and when doing a 3d make the 3d all black stick to basic white fills and black outlines ,make you letter the same size dont have to T HUGE an the letters spaced out to far and too snall hit the books for a while then go paint.

fiction
04-25-2005, 11:59 PM
Originally posted by Spydee87+Apr 24 2005, 07:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Spydee87 @ Apr 24 2005, 07:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by k2s@Apr 23 2005, 09:55 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-k2s@Apr 22 2005, 09:17 PM
http://img201.echo.cx/img201/1148/dscn01487yr.th.jpg (http://img201.echo.cx/my.php?image=dscn01487yr.jpg)


any tips comments or anything ok thanks guys
bump for suggestions or constructive critizm
Ooo wow no offen dude but my lil sis can draw better then u....
u wanna c
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/maleka.jpg
then let me show u my shang
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/SHANG.jpg
but i keep tryin man.... [/b][/quote]
no beef here but dont be ragging him when your shit aint all that great either and i know i know this is toy story nad its good you guys are in here but just worry about yourself if your in here for a reason and your not someone in here giving help then dont rag worry about yourself.

like i said im not beefing im not ragging on youre shit im just comparing.

keep up the good work you guys.

Dr.evil
04-26-2005, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by KAY&#045;lo_use_RUST&#045;o@Apr 25 2005, 07:00 PM
i am fable...

only the older cats who have been here since the site started up again know this, so most of you are confused when they call me KAY...

i Write FABLE/Beanr... but when i joined this site i wrote KAY-One.

so everyone still calles me kay....
AIGHT KAY UP IN HEAR WORD MOTHA FUCKA&#33; i thought u where some toy and putting v unit and shit .....dont know where iv been&#33;

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-26-2005, 12:21 AM
its all good.. ^^

Nesty
04-26-2005, 01:29 AM
Plz can neone help me here does this sh&#33;t look good.....some quick sh&#33;t i did
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd2.jpg

tryin to perfec my sig

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/spyd.jpg

I used to do this a whole lot when I first started too. It seems really awesome to add a bunch of add-ons and ridiculous color schemes and all that, but when you have a lot (3d, bubbles, spikes, drips, sun ray type whatevers) it gets real crowded and less pleasing to the eye. The best idea is to stick with real simple fills and add-ons, so that viewers can still actually read the peice. Going simple is a much more effective way to get a point across. After hella practice you can have fun adding stuff in, but remember, as the saying goes, &#39;less is more&#39;

Ill put it real well, try heading out to the store and buying one of those 75 cent cheap notebooks and filling each page up with a different letter, then putting them all together. It doesnt sound like much but itll help a lot






http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/babek2104/PINE2.jpg
I NEED HELP. Thats my first throw up, i know that weed leaf is toy as fuck. Give me some advice.

Its awesome that your outside and actually getting up, but i agree that you should stick to paper until you get a good style to go with. Like i said, simple is more effective, and it would probably flow a lot better without the cookie cutter looking 3d on there lol. A kool idea is to get a different name when your first stating out and practice getting up with that until you chill, and then switch over to your real name when your comfortable

hey, we all gotta start somewhere right? :lol:

0oskiteo0
04-26-2005, 01:38 AM
Thanks for the tips sir, :) .

runci
04-26-2005, 01:24 PM
http://img171.echo.cx/img171/1327/picture498ij.jpg

any comments?????????

toxus
04-26-2005, 03:00 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/shaddow.jpg

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-26-2005, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by KAY&#045;lo_use_RUST&#045;o+Apr 25 2005, 05:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KAY-lo_use_RUST-o @ Apr 25 2005, 05:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cutslikedrugs@Apr 25 2005, 04:56 PM
* Also, I was hoping someone might be able to elaborate on what "good letter structure" really means and what I can work on to get this.


letter structure help-out

Letter Structure means you can make out the letters when it is still "wild style" it has flow..Form..and actual letters so to say.. this has No letter structure

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000016.jpg
*Notice how nothing flows... none of the add ons realy belong.. it looks like he threw them on there randomly...theres circles then sharp corners...

good letter structure shold look like this *not exactly like this piece.. jus an example

http://img169.echo.cx/img169/7889/0410150227045zh.jpg

*its so called "crazy whoooooo" but u can still make out the whole piece.. notice the difference?..

even though it looks easy to do i wouldent try to add "add-ons" to any of your pieces for a long time.. untill you get basic simple letters down.

now who ever said Simple letters are boring as fuck.. your wrong.. your just trying to jump ahead too fast.. thats why your shit comes out wack..

simple letters can have Flow and style as well..

http://img16.echo.cx/img16/4936/simple9ke.jpg

*my simple letters^
see.. simple but with some flow and style...

*Also.. almost all writere appriciate nice simple clean cut painted pieces. nothing is wrong with em

letter structure is all about having clean cut letters..
so practice with simple letters.. try to make em flow. etc. and every time you sketch your going to try different stuff... *not everything is going to work*.. but have patiance... to get a style takes YEARS.. not months or weeks.. this is my Third year of doing fitti.. and i still havent really found my style.. im changing shit all the time...

so all what im trying to say is.. letter structure begins with simple letters.. get that down and its going to be so much easier down the road.. [/b][/quote]
BUMP.. hope some of you get my words.. i dont make sence 80% of the time.. its a sad....sad case

runci
04-26-2005, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by runci@Apr 26 2005, 12:24 PM
http://img171.echo.cx/img171/1327/picture498ij.jpg

any comments?????????


http://img250.echo.cx/img250/1188/picture504ym.jpg

for a girl at school

and

http://img250.echo.cx/img250/7088/picture516ga.jpg

for meekus

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-26-2005, 03:37 PM
the letter structure is ok. but i hate the 3d.. try cuttin it of at one point.

REALvmd
04-26-2005, 05:16 PM
Originally posted by KAY&#045;lo_use_RUST&#045;o+Apr 26 2005, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KAY-lo_use_RUST-o @ Apr 26 2005, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by KAY&#045;lo_use_RUST&#045;o@Apr 25 2005, 05:44 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-cutslikedrugs@Apr 25 2005, 04:56 PM
* Also, I was hoping someone might be able to elaborate on what "good letter structure" really means and what I can work on to get this.


letter structure help-out

Letter Structure means you can make out the letters when it is still "wild style" it has flow..Form..and actual letters so to say.. this has No letter structure

http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514431f00000016.jpg
*Notice how nothing flows... none of the add ons realy belong.. it looks like he threw them on there randomly...theres circles then sharp corners...

good letter structure shold look like this *not exactly like this piece.. jus an example

http://img169.echo.cx/img169/7889/0410150227045zh.jpg

*its so called "crazy whoooooo" but u can still make out the whole piece.. notice the difference?..

even though it looks easy to do i wouldent try to add "add-ons" to any of your pieces for a long time.. untill you get basic simple letters down.

now who ever said Simple letters are boring as fuck.. your wrong.. your just trying to jump ahead too fast.. thats why your shit comes out wack..

simple letters can have Flow and style as well..

http://img16.echo.cx/img16/4936/simple9ke.jpg

*my simple letters^
see.. simple but with some flow and style...

*Also.. almost all writere appriciate nice simple clean cut painted pieces. nothing is wrong with em

letter structure is all about having clean cut letters..
so practice with simple letters.. try to make em flow. etc. and every time you sketch your going to try different stuff... *not everything is going to work*.. but have patiance... to get a style takes YEARS.. not months or weeks.. this is my Third year of doing fitti.. and i still havent really found my style.. im changing shit all the time...

so all what im trying to say is.. letter structure begins with simple letters.. get that down and its going to be so much easier down the road..
BUMP.. hope some of you get my words.. i dont make sence 80% of the time.. its a sad....sad case [/b][/quote]
True, I appreciate a nice simple just as much as I would a nice wildstyle.

a vandal called POEM
04-26-2005, 05:43 PM
Originally posted by Eye@Apr 24 2005, 05:19 PM
http://www.dreamthis.cjb.net/paint/0424051426.jpg


comment?
damn at least put REVOLT 2 or sumthin..... people wont belive Dr. Revolt did that peice anyways,,, but show respect ///

toy
04-26-2005, 06:10 PM
http://img234.echo.cx/img234/9409/shaky030017qt.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

just practicing some stuff

http://img121.echo.cx/img121/4908/shaky030023ou.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

was gonna be sucka but ran outta space so yea....

http://img142.echo.cx/img142/8020/shaky030043fu.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
still prob gonna color in the 3-d crap(edit: colored)

But yea thats some of my recent toy stuff. Tips and constructive criticism would be great. And especially on the coloring of 3-d as you can tell.

REALvmd
04-26-2005, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by a vandal called POEM+Apr 26 2005, 04:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (a vandal called POEM @ Apr 26 2005, 04:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Eye@Apr 24 2005, 05:19 PM
http://www.dreamthis.cjb.net/paint/0424051426.jpg


comment?
damn at least put REVOLT 2 or sumthin..... people wont belive Dr. Revolt did that peice anyways,,, but show respect /// [/b][/quote]
Who would be stupid enough to actually use the name revolt. Even most toys know who Revolt is.

adeck one
04-26-2005, 07:58 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC02015.jpg
it says adeck won but i dont think i will use the won any more how can i make it better

toy
04-26-2005, 08:55 PM
just my thoughts so take it for what it is adeck but add some more style to it, it looks plain. Maybe work on your handstlyes more on paper before going out and bombing everything, just my 2 cents though.

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-26-2005, 08:57 PM
i think it actually look good.. just work on the first part the AD part.. it looks to bunched up when compaited to the ending part

segway
04-26-2005, 09:05 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514610f00000002.jpg
anyone mind giving me some constructive criticism on this?

wreckone.
04-26-2005, 09:14 PM
Adeck, I regret ever giving back your marker. Even though i stuck it under my nuts, you still wanted to take it and smell it.

joust
04-26-2005, 09:41 PM
Originally posted by segway@Apr 26 2005, 08:05 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514610f00000002.jpg
anyone mind giving me some constructive criticism on this?
its kinda to small to see, but from what i see you got some decent letters man, i would try adding 3d, and not drawing on paper trains haha.

toy
04-26-2005, 10:27 PM
any tips/criticism is welcome on previous post.

jeZuSCriZt
04-27-2005, 01:23 PM
Hey
http://files.dmusic.com/music/j/e/jezuscrizt/CriZt1.jpg
this is the kind of shit i can do ...
(this one pretty simple (letter))
anyways
i would like to kno all the way to make a piece
i don kno shit bout how u guys make crazy thing like thaht haha
anyways plz HELP ahaha

3hree Namez
04-27-2005, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by toy@Apr 26 2005, 05:10 PM
http://img234.echo.cx/img234/9409/shaky030017qt.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

just practicing some stuff

http://img121.echo.cx/img121/4908/shaky030023ou.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

was gonna be sucka but ran outta space so yea....

http://img142.echo.cx/img142/8020/shaky030043fu.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
still prob gonna color in the 3-d crap(edit: colored)

But yea thats some of my recent toy stuff. Tips and constructive criticism would be great. And especially on the coloring of 3-d as you can tell.
I really hope you&#39;re not gonna start writing "suck".

Crack Killz
04-27-2005, 05:16 PM
haha. His name is going to fit his style than.

Spydee87
04-27-2005, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by runci+Apr 26 2005, 02:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (runci @ Apr 26 2005, 02:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-runci@Apr 26 2005, 12:24 PM
http://img171.echo.cx/img171/1327/picture498ij.jpg

any comments?????????


http://img250.echo.cx/img250/1188/picture504ym.jpg

for a girl at school

and

http://img250.echo.cx/img250/7088/picture516ga.jpg

for meekus [/b][/quote]
i like ur Sh&#33;t....Nice letters man how long u been in the game..

toy
04-27-2005, 06:38 PM
3hree and crack, u two can go blow each other. Alls im doing is asking for help in a toy story thread for ppl that are toys if you 2 are so great at graf y are you even reading this thread. You 2 r lamers who I hope feel better about yourselfes now cause you guys are so damn cool.

O and by the way crack, posts arent like dicks, you cant do them all the time :lol:

rots1
04-27-2005, 06:41 PM
http://img130.echo.cx/img130/5595/picture0256xh.jpg

any advice?

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:43 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/1al.jpg


feedback..??????????

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-27-2005, 06:45 PM
your 3d is wayyyy off point
i aint really diggin your fill either.. :(
id do a solid fill

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:46 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/103.jpg

feedback..?

posted again never got anything. lookin for usm suggestions.

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:47 PM
yeah i know bout the 3D thanks tho.

kid
04-27-2005, 06:48 PM
the letters dont flow they&#39;re not the same style. your "t" is too fat and your a looks crunched together. you definately need to work on your 3d.
your letter structure&#39;s kind of good though.

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/Untitled-3.jpg


old shit. horrible quality pic

kid
04-27-2005, 06:50 PM
i was talking about toy not alnine, just so you know.

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:51 PM
there is no T????..lol..?



nvm okay

name1
04-27-2005, 06:53 PM
dont listen to him he smokes deemsters and hubbas.

good adice it to write alot with lots of paint underlots of bridges and shit.
utill you like your shit, then go blast it where everyone has to look at it.
it shuoldnt matter what anyone else thinks , they arent buying it or anything right? its free for them so fuck them.

anonymous
04-27-2005, 06:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/Untitled-2.jpg

pencil sketch

kid
04-27-2005, 06:56 PM
i mean rots1

Crack Killz
04-27-2005, 06:57 PM
Originally posted by toy@Apr 27 2005, 05:38 PM


O and by the way crack, posts arent like dicks, you cant do them all the time :lol:
I haven&#39;t been on the forums for the passed 5 days, you flying faggity fucker. Now go die.

SikeS902
04-27-2005, 07:01 PM
ok help me out. i suck w/ computers. how do i post a pic? when ever i try i get an error message sayin i am using a wrong format or sumthin.

how would i post this pic? wut would i have to type?

here is the url:
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y167/Sikes/p3ststyle.bmp

name1
04-27-2005, 07:04 PM
click on the little box up top that says IMG. then put in that URL and poof

a really bad black book sketch.
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00480804f00000148.jpg
that easy

anonymous
04-27-2005, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by anonymous@Apr 27 2005, 05:46 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/103.jpg

feedback..?

posted again never got anything. lookin for usm suggestions.
nebody....

DismGraffiti
04-27-2005, 07:09 PM
alnine the letter structure is good but A is horrible also try to make a thicker outline because when you glance at it it looks like a blob and the fill is not bad and make the 3D darker than the fill color coz you dont know where it ends or stars

name1
04-27-2005, 07:12 PM
are those names? those words in you signature? are they your names or your boys names or something? if u have had that many and you work looks like that id call it quits. no offence, i like your fillin of that blob tho. foreal.

SikeS902
04-27-2005, 07:19 PM
i did the img box thing and it gives me an error message.....

Crack Killz
04-27-2005, 07:22 PM
It was probably a dynamic image. The boards don&#39;t take them for some reason.

but this is how you do it:



&#91;IMG&#93;Url Here&#91;/IMG&#93;

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 07:48 PM
how do u post pic when they are in ur hard disk?

Crack Killz
04-27-2005, 07:57 PM
You have to upload them to a server.

Such as:

http://www.Imageshack.us/

than look at the post I made above this one....

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 07:59 PM
thanx

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 07:59 PM
my first real piece??? is it good or what i should work on

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 08:02 PM
http://img177.echo.cx/my.php?image=murmoi2ba.jpg[/IMG]
sorry so that&#39;s the &#39;&#39;piece&#39;&#39;

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 08:25 PM
http://img230.echo.cx/img230/8190/assimasque3le.jpg
and I did this one with Stirke an awsome writer from montreal...

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-27-2005, 08:41 PM
have a pix of the bottom one?. its soo fuckin clean

a vandal called POEM
04-27-2005, 08:46 PM
nice the TopCat peice is pretty good to, ill like to see the bottom one to letters look fresh....

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 09:15 PM
Damn thanx :lol: I was expecting a stick to the papers answers&#33;&#33;&#33; that&#39;s the other one..I made it solo
http://img243.echo.cx/img243/5121/murmoi8qe.jpg

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 09:15 PM
Although, sorry for the size :S

anonymous
04-27-2005, 09:32 PM
its TLK crew and CNW crew in my sig. not tall me.

Topcat35
04-27-2005, 09:36 PM
can u say it in differents word my english sucks ass

selc himself
04-28-2005, 11:44 AM
I don&#39;t really like your solo,topcat
But its normal ,even all my first pieces are supersuck ,still now they suck a little
But i&#39;m getting better with every piece i made
You should work cleaner and make nice letter structure,start with an easy letter structure.
If you stay practice you will get better

selc himself
04-28-2005, 11:45 AM
oh and the colors don&#39;t really match to eachother mayby you should choose better colorcombinations

FinePrint
04-28-2005, 05:23 PM
http://www.freewebs.com/skaterocks/fineprintcrop.jpg

just want to know what i can do to make it better,im really new,thats all...

rots1
04-28-2005, 07:06 PM
http://img97.echo.cx/img97/9941/picture0277ad.jpg

what u think?

ANTIC
04-28-2005, 07:37 PM
http://img200.echo.cx/my.php?image=sen7ot.png First attempt at blending/shading w/e

http://img242.echo.cx/my.php?image=s7ww.png second attempt...please excuse my shitty ass forcefield/lame drips

http://img16.echo.cx/my.php?image=se0sa.png third attempt....gay quotes/arrow in handstyle but it looked too plain

meks
04-28-2005, 07:41 PM
3rd one i like

bigbomba'
04-28-2005, 07:51 PM
i like the top picwho ever did it good job&#33;

Topcat35
04-28-2005, 07:52 PM
Did that this afternoon is the letter structure is simple enough? Constructive comments are welcome...
http://img89.echo.cx/img89/5117/viaduc3wo.jpg

joust
04-28-2005, 07:58 PM
not really feelin that charac, or the quotes but whatevs. Yeah thats a good place to start, mos def.

ANTIC
04-28-2005, 08:05 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Apr 28 2005, 06:37 PM
http://img200.echo.cx/my.php?image=sen7ot.png First attempt at blending/shading w/e

http://img242.echo.cx/my.php?image=s7ww.png second attempt...please excuse my shitty ass forcefield/lame drips

http://img16.echo.cx/my.php?image=se0sa.png third attempt....gay quotes/arrow in handstyle but it looked too plain
bump for crit

**MATEO**
04-28-2005, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC+Apr 28 2005, 07:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ANTIC @ Apr 28 2005, 07:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ANTIC@Apr 28 2005, 06:37 PM
http://img200.echo.cx/my.php?image=sen7ot.png First attempt at blending/shading w/e

http://img242.echo.cx/my.php?image=s7ww.png second attempt...please excuse my shitty ass forcefield/lame drips

http://img16.echo.cx/my.php?image=se0sa.png third attempt....gay quotes/arrow in handstyle but it looked too plain
bump for crit [/b][/quote]
i like the colors man

Kronone
04-28-2005, 09:48 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Apr 28 2005, 05:37 PM
http://img200.echo.cx/my.php?image=sen7ot.png First attempt at blending/shading w/e

http://img242.echo.cx/my.php?image=s7ww.png second attempt...please excuse my shitty ass forcefield/lame drips

http://img16.echo.cx/my.php?image=se0sa.png third attempt....gay quotes/arrow in handstyle but it looked too plain
man i loike the third ones shading, you did a good job at it....it reminda me of a throw up i did like a month ago... just kuz of the colors and the shading, haha

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y164/opertwo/HPIM0004.jpg

name1
04-28-2005, 09:54 PM
yo kron you talk mad shit. please send me a picture of YOUR work. i want to see it . just shut me up. seriously just a link or something, you can PM it to me

NeO.Skunkkr1
04-28-2005, 10:20 PM
i like the third one best, you can tell your getting better at the fading between each one, and the letters look alot nicer too, ur handstyle is ok aswell but yea loose the arrow and quotes, anyways i need some criticizing aswell;

http://img255.echo.cx/img255/6483/april00094zy.jpg
http://img123.echo.cx/img123/671/april00087sc.jpg
http://img123.echo.cx/img123/9028/april00046mr.jpg
http://img123.echo.cx/img123/1493/april00112mi.jpg

ANTIC
04-28-2005, 10:26 PM
lose that jagged line under ur handstyle....learn how to not make so many drips when you paint....on your throw, you dont need to make all of the letters squigly, make them simpler....also for hole on the letters dont make thos triangle....make a simple circle, a line, or an x...but x&#39;s are kinda played out

NeO.Skunkkr1
04-28-2005, 10:44 PM
heh, the brown stuff is actually a mop so i couldnt help but go crazy with the drips :) mmm yummy, but ill never loose the black widow :) thanks for input tho&#33;

ANTIC
04-28-2005, 10:48 PM
woooo....in the second to last pic....is that swamz from bs?

NeO.Skunkkr1
04-28-2005, 10:51 PM
yea thats swamz usc

Nesty
04-28-2005, 11:13 PM
hey topic, thats a great start. the one thing that stood out to me was the quotes, try putting em down at the bottom of the peice, and in the same sorta blocky style as the rest of it, itll flow a lot smother. & also try moving the mouth on the panda so that it doesnt look like its a part of the body of the panda. .... or maybe im just a little obsesive compulsive, lol :D

ILL
04-28-2005, 11:24 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Apr 28 2005, 10:48 PM
woooo....in the second to last pic....is that swamz from bs?
thats soo fuckin stupid that some punk ass bitches would go over him with "fuck all pigs"
fuck whoever did that they should get the shit beat the fuck outta them

dak90
04-28-2005, 11:25 PM
wen u put in pics try to resize them if it is to big u can&#39;t judge the pic cus it is too big.

joust
04-28-2005, 11:42 PM
thank you capitan obveous haha

toxus
04-29-2005, 03:09 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/spanishbook.jpg

done this in school

toxus
04-29-2005, 03:11 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/tstag.jpg

heres my tag what can i do to improve on it

nukone
04-29-2005, 03:25 PM
toxus
look at more graffiti and bite it so you get an idea of style and the techniques for sketchin

also for simples i like to slightly theme my sketches like the same stle letters ans the end of the letters having wings for example...

anonymous
04-29-2005, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by anonymous+Apr 27 2005, 06:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (anonymous @ Apr 27 2005, 06:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-anonymous@Apr 27 2005, 05:46 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/103.jpg

feedback..?

posted again never got anything. lookin for usm suggestions.
nebody.... [/b][/quote]
bump for more criti.......

nukone
04-29-2005, 04:33 PM
FDix the a and have a more defined outlin

like the E tis tasty

preach
04-29-2005, 05:56 PM
Originally posted by NeO.Skunkkr1@Apr 28 2005, 09:20 PM
i like the third one best, you can tell your getting better at the fading between each one, and the letters look alot nicer too, ur handstyle is ok aswell but yea loose the arrow and quotes, anyways i need some criticizing aswell;

http://img255.echo.cx/img255/6483/april00094zy.jpg

i dont understand whats going on in this throw. the outline covers the top half then it like diminishes. if your going to have an outline, make it go all around. on top of that, your letters need some work. also practise your handstyles in a book and make them less jagged before you go writing on walls. youll get the hang of it.

KaOs-OneR
04-29-2005, 06:03 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/crpdks1.bmp
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/kaosonerpiece2.jpg)

on the 1 with the can, i fucked up on the actual KAOS..
the other one, i od&#39;d the arrows.. but other then that, feedback? comments? tips?



:ph34r:

KaOs-OneR
04-29-2005, 06:05 PM
after feedback on those ^^ ill post throwupss..

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-29-2005, 06:06 PM
funny story..
Me and Evak started writing about the same time.. we both used the name kaoz.. except i wrote it KOZ....
*that makes us brothers from another mother...
we aslo came up with a theory.. everyone at one point wrote kaos :lol:

KaOs-OneR
04-29-2005, 06:27 PM
:blink:

lol well, what u think bout the pics? and even so, ill change it eventaully


:D

dak90
04-29-2005, 07:06 PM
i saw at the post office that useing the post stickers for vandelisim or anything other than postoffice use will leed in a &#036;50,000 fee.

qualitative
04-29-2005, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by preach+Apr 29 2005, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (preach @ Apr 29 2005, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NeO.Skunkkr1@Apr 28 2005, 09:20 PM


( image goes here )

i dont understand whats going on in this throw. the outline covers the top half then it like diminishes. if your going to have an outline, make it go all around. on top of that, your letters need some work. also practise your handstyles in a book and make them less jagged before you go writing on walls. youll get the hang of it. [/b][/quote]
I don&#39;t know about the letters, shit though, whats wrong with his little outline not going all the way around? I&#39;ve never seen anyone do that before. I used to look back at a lot of my old sketches, although the letters may not be king shit I think a lot of peoples earliest stuff has bits of very original shit that gets lost when you&#39;re pressured to conform to this ideal of whats hot and whats not... that&#39;ll be my advice to anyone, keep all your old toy shit and as you get better go back to it and see what you can take from it...

dak90
04-29-2005, 09:53 PM
wut are u talking about?

CanControl
04-29-2005, 09:55 PM
just wonderin how do you put pictures inside of your signature?

dak90
04-29-2005, 10:07 PM
go to my controls at the top right hand corner of this page then u will see edit signature then u click on it then copy one of ur pictures from ur coputer file the pic wont show u will see letters and stuff ehen click update my signatuer

qualitative
04-29-2005, 10:09 PM
CanControl, use the image tags to put an image in your signature, you can edit your signature under &#39;My Controls&#39; if you don&#39;t know, theres buttons for the image stuff... you&#39;ll have to upload it somewhere, you can get free image hosting from photobucket.com


dak, what I was talking about was this
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/toastrocks/bsci_outline.jpg

I didn&#39;t quote it &#39;cause I thought it was too big and people would be able to look back and see what I was talking about, but I took the liberty of resizing it... I was saying its original that line he has around the outside of his letters doesn&#39;t come around the bottom, and that I think people do some original stuff when they&#39;re starting out in this, and then lose it &#39;cause they feel like their shit needs to look like everyone elses, so my suggestion was that people keep their old stuff and go back and look at it and try to take ideas from it as they get better...

dak90
04-29-2005, 10:12 PM
O ok
q i see wut ur saying

wreckone.
04-29-2005, 10:25 PM
Dak, do you really need that extra space in your sig?

KaOs-OneR
04-30-2005, 12:31 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/crpdks1.bmp
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg

on the 1 with the can, i fucked up on the actual KAOS..
the other one, i od&#39;d the arrows.. but other then that, feedback? comments? tips?



not sure how to bump.. lol so jus c+p&#39;ed.. how i bump? nd more feedback pleaseeeee...



:ph34r:

KaOs-OneR
04-30-2005, 12:34 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/kaosonerpiece2.jpg)


2nd link was fucked up

runci
04-30-2005, 02:53 AM
http://img247.echo.cx/img247/6125/picture521ht.jpg

any comments

runci
04-30-2005, 04:33 AM
another sketch any comments

http://img253.echo.cx/img253/5977/picture538vj.jpg

SmileAtDeath
04-30-2005, 04:46 AM
hey runci those are pretty good keep doin what your doing keep it up.

runci
04-30-2005, 05:03 AM
i kno u should start simple and not add stuff but i think my letters ar at the point where i could be adding stuff...

toxus
04-30-2005, 05:47 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/nikhelp.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/nukhelp.jpg

toxus
04-30-2005, 05:49 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/tstag2.jpg

and heres a tag what can i do to improve

Coma.One_
04-30-2005, 06:37 AM
stop postin ur stuff. pleeeeeeease.

like someone else sed, bite other peoples stuff a little, then work on a style of your own.

oh yea, and stop postin ur stuff.

runci
04-30-2005, 07:00 AM
shut the fuk up..
atleast hes makin an effort to improve


keep wiv the blok letters toxus

Coma.One_
04-30-2005, 07:04 AM
yes but all he posts is the same.

all im tryna say is sketch sketch sketch, try different things, then start posting your stuff, only when theres a clear improvement and hes got so much better.

runci
04-30-2005, 07:28 AM
http://img99.echo.cx/img99/6496/picture548bj.jpg

says creative

Coma.One_
04-30-2005, 07:34 AM
runci thats dope. ur no toy man, colour that shit in, then GO OUT AND PAINT&#33;

seriously, u need to paint that shit its hot

epod
04-30-2005, 07:49 AM
runci, i like that last 1. yah, i think u could add on to your letters. keep up the good work. maybe even fool around with a drop shadow, i sont know, might look good.

toxus
04-30-2005, 02:58 PM
thanks runci
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/ts4.jpg

epod
04-30-2005, 03:14 PM
i dono tox, i like your handstly though, maybe try blockletters

rots1
04-30-2005, 05:05 PM
what caps do you guys use wen going bombing??

wreckone.
04-30-2005, 05:16 PM
^It depends, what excactly do you call bombing?

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-30-2005, 06:53 PM
i was just playin around and did the J and liked the style and continued with O , what do u guys think of this style? I think i&#39;ve seen it before but i actually did it by myself which was pretty cool. I&#39;ll still have to try it out with what i write but eh you get the idea. ( I messed up in a few spots, im aware of that. )
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/j0style.jpg

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-30-2005, 06:55 PM
TOXUS, man you need a lot of work, I dont know how you have 300+ posts and your that bad, runci I understand your telling him block letters but it doesnt seem to help him, I know some people dont like to but use a ruler sometimes. and i dont know what to say lol.

KaOs-OneR
04-30-2005, 07:03 PM
toxus, #1 try getting a new marker.. that 1 seems pretty shitty.. #2 make it much simpler.. your H, that little squiggly doesnt do good for you.. #3 try making the lines straighter..

nd queenz style, i already said wut i thought bout urs



:ph34r:

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
04-30-2005, 07:15 PM
KAOS these are for u..

some old pix from when i wrote K-OZ / KAYOZ
* they are all about 2 years old now so they blow...

http://img115.echo.cx/img115/2249/kozboi0fk.jpg

http://img115.echo.cx/img115/9752/kozheli2id.jpg

http://img115.echo.cx/img115/9900/kozbomb6vu.jpg

KaOs-OneR
04-30-2005, 07:31 PM
blow? those are pretty fuckin hot&#33; props man.. wut u write now?

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-30-2005, 07:40 PM
is that harriets ass in ur sig johhhhn?

atxbomber666
04-30-2005, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by toxus@Apr 30 2005, 01:58 PM
thanks runci
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/ts4.jpg
see your h?well lose that shit first of all the swirl thing isnt working.its a start tho man just keep all your letters congruent.see on the top of your H how it gets like pointy,but your other letters are bubbley,maybe them all bubbly,and keep it simple at first.keep at it man.

GeSuS_KRiST
04-30-2005, 08:41 PM
http://img115.echo.cx/img115/9900/kozbomb6vu.jpg
http://img244.echo.cx/img244/8327/lake548466rz.jpg
http://img244.echo.cx/img244/3168/raquel30bf.jpg
http://img244.echo.cx/img244/3918/vanessa23df1asf1lr.jpg

*sniff*
they grow up so fast.... see kids this is what happens when u constantly work on your shit and take advice from others... its called progression

bigbomba'
04-30-2005, 08:46 PM
that was insperational Gesus

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-30-2005, 08:47 PM
okay so I added a E and then inked it and god damn I hate ink, I messed up more then a few times. Always seem to fuck up my things when I ink them ( especially with this shitty pen I used ) . Eh but I guess practice makes perfect, what do u think ( Style I been playing around with )

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/j0style.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/fuckthis.jpg

GeSuS_KRiST
04-30-2005, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by bigbomba&#39;@Apr 30 2005, 07:46 PM
that was insperational Gesus
one day ill do mine

KaOs-OneR
04-30-2005, 09:09 PM
lol nah joey, pic off google... thats a good idea tho

wreckone.
04-30-2005, 09:23 PM
Why do you people use your real names on here?

QuEeNz-StyLe
04-30-2005, 09:30 PM
who cares? i dont care if any1 knows my first name, i dont see why not. heh just bought 2 ball points, shoulda bought them before i inked it :angry:

CanControl
04-30-2005, 10:18 PM
Originally posted by dak90@Apr 29 2005, 09:07 PM
go to my controls at the top right hand corner of this page then u will see edit signature then u click on it then copy one of ur pictures from ur coputer file the pic wont show u will see letters and stuff ehen click update my signatuer
i went to my pictures, then i clicked copy, then when i went to the box and i cliked the paste didnt like pop out it was faded so i couldnt press it

PS also how do you put quotes in your sig

ezekiel
04-30-2005, 11:30 PM
one quick question:
im going tagging at 3am tonight and i was wondering if i should take my bike or just walk? my destination is like 3 blocks away

element503
04-30-2005, 11:34 PM
Originally posted by KaOs&#045;OneR@Apr 29 2005, 08:34 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/kaosonerpiece2.jpg)


2nd link was fucked up
looks like the guys thumb was dislocated.

element503
04-30-2005, 11:35 PM
Originally posted by ezekiel@Apr 30 2005, 07:30 PM
one quick question:
im going tagging at 3am tonight and i was wondering if i should take my bike or just walk? my destination is like 3 blocks away
thats walking distance.

escap
04-30-2005, 11:37 PM
Originally posted by ezekiel@Apr 30 2005, 10:30 PM
one quick question:
im going tagging at 3am tonight and i was wondering if i should take my bike or just walk? my destination is like 3 blocks away
nah no use taking it. if u have to run itl just be a struggle....+ its only 3 blocks

ezekiel
04-30-2005, 11:49 PM
well the spot im hitting is a one of the grey metal mailboxes and it is in a little U shaped are so like there is the road
.............. _______
............./..............&#092;
.........../....XXXXX... &#092;
=====.....................===========
=========================

and the mailbox is where the XXX&#39;s are(ignore the ....), and so it is on like the little island type of thing so it has a curb around it, and since im kinda skinny i will lay down on the street behind it if i see a car, or i might do the one that is just down the street that is right next to a flood canal thing
TIPS?

ezekiel
04-30-2005, 11:54 PM
and if i get caught i will just say im going to a friends
but i will defiantly try not to get caught cause 3am is pass my curfew and my parents would get pissed

joust
05-01-2005, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by KaOs&#045;OneR@Apr 29 2005, 11:31 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/crpdks1.bmp
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg

on the 1 with the can, i fucked up on the actual KAOS..
the other one, i od&#39;d the arrows.. but other then that, feedback? comments? tips?



not sure how to bump.. lol so jus c+p&#39;ed.. how i bump? nd more feedback pleaseeeee...



:ph34r:
i would loose all thoes arrows man, dont work on that kind of shit till later. Nice simple letters though. Your second flick is broken.

WHO'S NEKS?
05-01-2005, 02:15 AM
http://img195.echo.cx/img195/140/dsc000631xs.th.jpg (http://img195.echo.cx/my.php?image=dsc000631xs.jpg)

like or no like?

wreckone.
05-01-2005, 02:16 AM
Originally posted by adeck one@Apr 26 2005, 06:58 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC02015.jpg
it says adeck won but i dont think i will use the won any more how can i make it better
Adeck is so original..
You take my "W" and try to make it an "A", you&#39;ve clearly tried to take Adore&#39;s D, and it&#39;s noticable because he&#39;s one of the only two writers you&#39;ve ever seen, and for some reason, you always want to have a name similar to mine or Adore&#39;s. I also see you&#39;ve tried to copy my "K" but failed horribly, and also used "ECK" like me. "Adeck and Wreck", I don&#39;t think i&#39;d ever want to write with you. I got caught writing, but nobody really knew until you told your mom.. NOBODY. You could have said i stopped becaue i felt like it, don&#39;t ever fucking rat me out again.

ps. Don&#39;t go out and ruin an area with your little scibbles just because Lethal said you were okay. On the real, he only says that because he&#39;s a nice guy and didn&#39;t want to tell you you suck.

rhymes
05-01-2005, 02:26 AM
just a lil quickie...i no it aint too good but just felt like puttin it up...
http://img258.echo.cx/img258/6103/rime8fb.th.jpg (http://img258.echo.cx/my.php?image=rime8fb.jpg)

QuEeNz-StyLe
05-01-2005, 02:28 AM
Originally posted by QuEeNz&#045;StyLe@Apr 30 2005, 07:47 PM
okay so I added a E and then inked it and god damn I hate ink, I messed up more then a few times. Always seem to fuck up my things when I ink them ( especially with this shitty pen I used ) . Eh but I guess practice makes perfect, what do u think ( Style I been playing around with )

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/j0style.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/fuckthis.jpg
hate to do it but, BUMP.

preach
05-01-2005, 02:29 AM
wow adeck looks like youre screwed. not only did you clearly bite, but you bit 2 people who you see everyday. i guess i was wrong by saying wreckie may forgive you sometime soon.

rhymes
05-01-2005, 02:30 AM
Originally posted by rhymes@May 1 2005, 01:26 AM
just a lil quickie...i no it aint too good but just felt like puttin it up...
http://img258.echo.cx/img258/6103/rime8fb.th.jpg (http://img258.echo.cx/my.php?image=rime8fb.jpg)
was at bottom of tha page n wasnt sure if peeps would see...feed back on it too...cheers...

WHO'S NEKS?
05-01-2005, 02:33 AM
http://img195.echo.cx/img195/140/dsc000631xs.th.jpg (http://img195.echo.cx/my.php?image=dsc000631xs.jpg)


can i get some feedback too

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-01-2005, 02:55 AM
heres some feedback....

dont post that pix in every topic you post in....

ive seen it 3 times already

WHO'S NEKS?
05-01-2005, 02:56 AM
sorry

KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-01-2005, 03:01 AM
its all good..

and for some reason im feelin your handstyle

KaOs-OneR
05-01-2005, 03:36 AM
Originally posted by element503+Apr 30 2005, 10:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (element503 @ Apr 30 2005, 10:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KaOs&#045;OneR@Apr 29 2005, 08:34 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hN...sonerpiece2.jpg (http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y168/j0hNnYy/kaosonerpiece2.jpg)


2nd link was fucked up
looks like the guys thumb was dislocated.




[/b][/quote]
lmfao

KaOs-OneR
05-01-2005, 03:42 AM
Originally posted by preach@May 1 2005, 01:29 AM
wow adeck looks like youre screwed. not only did you clearly bite, but you bit 2 people who you see everyday. i guess i was wrong by saying wreckie may forgive you sometime soon.
word up to that..

sika_2002
05-01-2005, 07:23 AM
neks, colour it in and then post it

epod
05-01-2005, 12:41 PM
whos neks, i think it looks pretty decent, itd probably look 50 times better if it were colored in.
rhymes, i like it, its nice and simple&#33;

vinz
05-01-2005, 01:36 PM
hmm . .what i would advise to "toys" (assumin the fact that im a am not one)
is to start working on the simpliest letters until they know perfectly their structure.
tryin to reproduce this simple font : ABCD... will help anyone to make good graffiti. besides that, dont start your outline at one point tryin to rejoin it randomly... you toyz (=) had better discompose your letters in several parts for them to fit perfectly together. dats what i think..
letterings obey some rules that you gotta learn ... or assimilate.
in a nutshell, START SIMPLE... then evolve. pce