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skateparadise
05-09-2005, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by Blacaso@May 8 2005, 10:37 PM
help/advice
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/127/22/newpiece0001.jpg
does that say SEC?
tubedisasters
05-09-2005, 03:02 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/IMGP1619.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/IMGP1618.jpg
Originally posted by runci+May 9 2005, 02:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (runci @ May 9 2005, 02:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-runci@May 8 2005, 03:30 PM
http://img96.echo.cx/img96/5077/picture163hx.jpg
any commenst still goto do the fill...
bump.... any feedback [/b][/quote]
I don't know runci, every time I see your shit, it doesn't look that bad to me. Why do you keep posting in the toy thread?
runci
05-09-2005, 03:20 PM
cos i can get sum feedback...
cos in the blakbook thread or woteva i jus get burned by all these amazin writers n i dont get eny comments...
that makes sense. Ok I'll tell ya what I think. Your letter structure looks pretty good to me. Most people will tell people to go simple and shit. With you I think it's the other way around. You have a basic letter structure going, so why not spice it up a bit? Do some add-ons or extensions. Focus on more detail, and try some intricate fills. Maybe you'll come up with something you like that burns.
runci
05-09-2005, 03:34 PM
well i can do simples i can pull off a decent simple letter...
im gonna start addin add-ons but ive neva dun add ons before... :D
an icve not got many colors at the mo so i cant reallly do good fills...
Blacaso
05-09-2005, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by skateparadise+May 9 2005, 09:24 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (skateparadise @ May 9 2005, 09:24 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Blacaso@May 8 2005, 10:37 PM
help/advice
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/127/22/newpiece0001.jpg
does that say SEC? [/b][/quote]
yea
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-09-2005, 03:53 PM
Originally posted by runci+May 9 2005, 12:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (runci @ May 9 2005, 12:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-runci@May 8 2005, 03:30 PM
http://img96.echo.cx/img96/5077/picture163hx.jpg
any commenst still goto do the fill...
bump.... any feedback [/b][/quote]
its good i like it, now do the fill and forcefeild. but you dont have to bump it soo much
:(
*****
tubedisasters
that top sketch looks tight. i could picture that lil throwie up ;)
rots1
05-09-2005, 04:29 PM
yo do you think the tag name skew is good.i like it but lik does it sound hot?
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-09-2005, 04:36 PM
ok lemme tell you this...
if your worring if a name "sounds hot".. dont bother starting..
go for shit that flows to your style..
so pick out the letters that you can do best and get a word outa them.
rots1
05-09-2005, 04:45 PM
yea this is my flowin 4 me but i dont want people sayin it wrong thats y
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-09-2005, 04:48 PM
you dont want people sayin your name is wrong?...
shit if i could make Tampon flow ill id put it up...
fuck what other people think. theres always haters trash talkin. just do your thang.....
*but dont take "Big" peoples in your area's name..
runci
05-09-2005, 04:54 PM
i used to write scew..l scew flows quite nice...
yo runci not trying to say you're biting but that style of yours is starting to look a lot like "CEWL'S" style i saw a while back.
Jugga
05-09-2005, 06:45 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@May 7 2005, 03:46 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/micar.jpg
Still working on my handstyle...
It says Micar
Give feed..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/Mikcar.jpg
Which of the two is better?
snow2skate
05-09-2005, 07:02 PM
PEOPLE ARE GONNA THINK THAT THE "K" IS AN "R" man...and heres a nuthin helpfull hint...stop trying to make all your letters one liners..you can give it more style usually if it seperate letters..
GeSuS_KRiST
05-09-2005, 07:17 PM
jugga the bottom one is better but bring your letter moet close together there spaced out too far but still work on it the m is nice tho... and rots if your writeing rots i hot u know thats a huge crew that has members all over just to let u know
Crack Killz
05-09-2005, 07:30 PM
Gesus get me into V-unit im bored as FUCK!
Crack Killz
05-09-2005, 07:40 PM
Originally posted by Crack Killz@May 9 2005, 06:30 PM
Gesus get me into V-unit im bored as FUCK!
VVVVV-UniiiiT
Jugga
05-09-2005, 07:53 PM
Thanks for the tips fellas...
I'll get to work on it and post some shit up when I feel it's significantly better..
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-09-2005, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by Crack Killz+May 9 2005, 04:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Crack Killz @ May 9 2005, 04:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Crack Killz@May 9 2005, 06:30 PM
Gesus get me into V-unit im bored as FUCK!
VVVVV-UniiiiT [/b][/quote]
please... stop...
every time a non v-unit member jocks v-unit an angel loses its wings :(
Crack Killz
05-09-2005, 08:03 PM
k. :(
Hpnotiq
05-09-2005, 08:18 PM
123
skateparadise
05-10-2005, 11:21 AM
i cant see any of the images
SmileAtDeath
05-10-2005, 11:38 AM
Originally posted by KAY-lo_use_RUST-o@May 9 2005, 03:36 PM
ok lemme tell you this...
if your worring if a name "sounds hot".. dont bother starting..
go for shit that flows to your style..
so pick out the letters that you can do best and get a word outa them.
excelent advise thats exactly how I picked my word just picked the letters I really like and made sure the word flows just because I word sounds cool or whatever dosnt make it a good word its all about the letters and being able to make it flow.
GeSuS_KRiST
05-10-2005, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by Hpnotiq@May 9 2005, 07:18 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_35b99203.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/35b99203.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_5d82bba8.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/5d82bba8.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_ef052e2b.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/ef052e2b.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_724b1bcb.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/724b1bcb.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_4de5800a.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/4de5800a.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_bc5b99e5.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/bc5b99e5.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_7bebfeac.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/7bebfeac.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_b07c6b43.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/b07c6b43.jpg)
me and my homie went mobbing
any comments on the emit pice how kan i improve
oh and that was like a 10 second piece
way to show your face abd laylow :rolleyes:
anonymous
05-10-2005, 04:16 PM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST+May 10 2005, 11:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (GeSuS_KRiST @ May 10 2005, 11:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hpnotiq@May 9 2005, 07:18 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_35b99203.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/35b99203.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_5d82bba8.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/5d82bba8.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_ef052e2b.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/ef052e2b.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_724b1bcb.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/724b1bcb.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_4de5800a.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/4de5800a.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_bc5b99e5.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/bc5b99e5.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_7bebfeac.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/7bebfeac.jpg)
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/th_b07c6b43.jpg (http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y20/Hipnotiq46/Dont%20Delete%20These%20Pics/b07c6b43.jpg)
me and my homie went mobbing
any comments on the emit pice how kan i improve
oh and that was like a 10 second piece
way to show your face abd laylow :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
wow.
anonymous
05-10-2005, 04:18 PM
new style im messin with, the gold is my first thing witt it...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/P5100001.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/P5100002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v323/caccac/P5100003.jpg
dunno if i like it or not...
TricksForKids
05-10-2005, 04:47 PM
http://img200.echo.cx/img200/9493/sohkaeorangeyellow6gr.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
Feedback?
Says "Sohkae" as in S'ok..
I have two names for the toy battle, the only way your considered is if you send me a message, dont just say "im in" somwhere in the forum or ill never see it....
Peace
too many gaps in those skinny ass letters
dont step up to complex shit until you can make simpler letters look good
and the 3d is a bit fucked up in places
segway
05-10-2005, 07:43 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00514610f00000006.jpg
any help apreciated.
http://img93.echo.cx/img93/6479/picture0022yi.th.jpg (http://img93.echo.cx/my.php?image=picture0022yi.jpg)
comments?
seg, nice, clean and simple, i like.
Jugga
05-10-2005, 08:01 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/piece.jpg
That's my first attempt EVER at doing anything other than a handstyle...
Feedback would be very appreciated..
jugga, good try. im not relle feeling it though. and atleast reply to other ppls shit when you post. like wtf.. ive posted my sketch ^ like 3 times now.. and not 1 comment.
Jugga
05-10-2005, 08:23 PM
The thing is that I don't feel I'm experienced enough yet to give feedback on some shit...
but...
I like it...
In my opinion it could do without some of the add-ons..
and it could be cleaner...
but dope shit nonetheless..
and in your handstyle, your 'S' really looks like a 'g'..
thx man. o, and dont worry if youre not experienced... im not a king but i can still judge shit.. every1 has an opinion.
MasterLit33
05-10-2005, 09:04 PM
Can you use German Outlines 2 on Montana, and Krylon?
http://img154.echo.cx/img154/2500/more0019gk.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
I know shine on t is tweaked but other then that feedback?
http://img156.echo.cx/img156/2939/more0026fn.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)
Feedback
Jugga
05-11-2005, 12:56 AM
I'm feeling those...
You messed up on the 3D on the K on the first one...
but other than that... Fresh..
I would keep it either all caps or all lower case..
The second one is sick...
I'm not feeling the 'R' too much..
but as a whole it's hella clean...
please give feed on what I posted above...
It'd be appreciated..
TricksForKids
05-11-2005, 08:43 AM
ummmm hmm well segway man youve got that bark on lock, same style everytime just diff colours, which is nice, but you should try something harder now, i mean if i saw that everywhere in paint itd be dope, but im just saying you should try something more complicated now that you can do that so well.....jugga i guess hmm nice try for your first ever, it looks kinda just like a word tho ya know, theres nothing really special to it and that M if thats wut it is HAS to be cahnged, real nice attempt for your first ever try tho thats cool, epod im feelin that , alot compared to most of yours ive seen, only advice is maybe try to space it out a bitttt more, kinda looks like a block, and through in some colour! lol...toy im liking those two alot, simple but clean, only thing is the shine on that t lol but i dont have to tell you that, clean ass drips too!
And im not trying to be all high and mighty cuz we're all in the same boat ya know.
Peace
REALvmd
05-11-2005, 09:36 AM
segway, work on trying to get your letters to flow more.
REALvmd
05-11-2005, 09:42 AM
Jugga, it was an alright attempt, and you seem to be starting simple, but my advice is to you is go simple like the buttons on your keyboard simple. Or look at segways sketches, that kind of simple. Try and make them the same height and have the letters look the same, not completely different letterforms in 1 sketch. Start with basic fills. Though I'de work on the letters somewhat before really coloring it. Slowly your letterform will develope, then you can add style on it throughout your time writeing. Another thing, once you somewhat have down some solid looking letters try and get them to flow together. Post what you've accomplished once your done....
Blacaso
05-11-2005, 04:09 PM
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/130/15/b.jpg
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/130/15/d.jpg
help/advice
Jugga
05-11-2005, 04:31 PM
Thanks a lot for the replies..
Blasco:
There's a lot going on in that first one...
Try to not use so much add ons and all that....
Takes away from the letters...
If you're gonna use all those add ons, I suggest getting a more dominant letter structure...
That doesn't get overwhelmed by the arrows...
but I'm liking it...
The second one it better..
A lot more legible..
Jugga
05-11-2005, 05:28 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/Micarsimple.jpg
That'sas simple as it can get...
I did a quick and crappy fill with a crayon and a highliter.. B)
Give feedaback...
and tips on how I can improve the 3D and the piece in general..
TricksForKids
05-11-2005, 07:08 PM
first off thats NOT as simple as it can get, bark is much more simple and was much better, it looks lik you dont even care when you fraw is the thing man, and ur 3-D is messed up on the C, where the fuck did it go? lol nonetheless it was much better than your last one, just put some effort into it dammit, and when it comes to colouring either do a good clean job, or dont colour at all, much better still tho, keep up the work
Peace
Jugga
05-11-2005, 07:19 PM
Thanks a lot...
I'll work on it...
and I'll be careful...
anyone else care to critique?
Aliensexfiend09
05-11-2005, 08:03 PM
well its good to know that not all of u are asses......any way i just find it very hard to devolep some style.
Originally posted by Jugga@May 11 2005, 05:28 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/Micarsimple.jpg
That'sas simple as it can get...
I did a quick and crappy fill with a crayon and a highliter.. B)
Give feedaback...
and tips on how I can improve the 3D and the piece in general..
somethin to try to do when you do 3D is to get all the lines goin in one direction cuz on your R on the bottom of the round part it should be more slanted left but you got it going straight down. when you were drawing it you probebly thought it would look wierd if you made it like how the other lines are. but my 3D always looked like that but when i started to do it where all the lines no matter where they were, were going in the same way it looked better
0oskiteo0
05-11-2005, 08:50 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/babek2104/DSCF2619.jpg
can i get some feed / help ?
:)
phr3ak
05-11-2005, 08:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture001.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture003.jpg
any help?
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-11-2005, 08:57 PM
everyone on this page but jugga is doin too much all at once...
start simple.. yall gettin too crazy
Blacaso
05-11-2005, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by phr3ak@May 11 2005, 07:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture002.jpg
that tight wat does it say
Aliensexfiend09
05-11-2005, 09:12 PM
any tips on style please....i need to develop a style before i can practice.
DismGraffiti
05-11-2005, 09:21 PM
when you start you have no style
do box letters
and as time goes on you will get flow and other shit
phr3ak
05-11-2005, 09:22 PM
thats phrk, because if i put my whole name, it wont fit
Originally posted by Aliensexfiend09@May 11 2005, 09:12 PM
any tips on style please....i need to develop a style before i can practice.
you can't just get a dope ass style over night , it takes a long time to get a style and to get a style you have to sketch and every one always sez to start out simple and once you get a simple style down then you can slowly start to get more complex
Blacaso
05-11-2005, 09:44 PM
kool
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-11-2005, 09:57 PM
Originally posted by Aliensexfiend09@May 11 2005, 06:12 PM
any tips on style please....i need to develop a style before i can practice.
this has to be the stupidest thing ive heard all day....
you PRACTICE to find a style........
now dont be a fool and stop asking questions on how to get a style... no one helped me on a style... its better for you to learn...
Toy story is to Guide you.. not to do the fuckin work for you
Aliensexfiend09
05-11-2005, 10:41 PM
k,thanx......except for u Rusto,bitch.
Jugga
05-11-2005, 11:40 PM
Hahaha...
I found that to be pretty fucking funny for some reason....
lmao...
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-12-2005, 12:29 AM
Originally posted by Aliensexfiend09@May 11 2005, 07:41 PM
k,thanx......except for u Rusto,bitch.
you'll quit in 2 years...
;)
DrifterificSil80
05-12-2005, 06:34 AM
http://img94.echo.cx/img94/6148/tag50percent1ce.th.jpg (http://img94.echo.cx/my.php?image=tag50percent1ce.jpg)
How's this look for a tag? I know that there isn't much to it and someone is going to tell me to get rid of the arrows (and the dot). And since this is only my second post, i've been into graffiti for a while but never had the time to do it. I met another guy here that does it and goes by Sez. After I met him I started to make time for it. Now I try to sketch a lot to get a style down and go out and just 'practice' I guess. I've only been doing it for about 2 months.
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 08:24 AM
i fucking bet u i wont,if u knew me u would know that i never quit tell im the best....and that never happens so i never quit.
REALvmd
05-12-2005, 09:14 AM
Originally posted by Jugga@May 11 2005, 04:28 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/Juggah/Micarsimple.jpg
That'sas simple as it can get...
I did a quick and crappy fill with a crayon and a highliter.. B)
Give feedaback...
and tips on how I can improve the 3D and the piece in general..
Thats better than your first. You still have to make them look slightly more simple. Don't work on adding anything untill your letter structure is nice. Just keep working on them and It'll pay off in the long run. Gotta keep the 3d looking good, You know to do a proper 3d right?, if not make a vanishing point dot and connect the edges of your letters and the cut the 3d off going in that direction, Like how your 3d is cut off on your letters.
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-12-2005, 02:06 PM
Originally posted by Aliensexfiend09@May 12 2005, 05:24 AM
i fucking bet u i wont,if u knew me u would know that i never quit tell im the best....and that never happens so i never quit.
that was cute
runci
05-12-2005, 02:53 PM
sum1 told me to try add ons but ive neva dun addons before so heres me attemptin to do some..
http://img206.echo.cx/img206/2958/picture233vd.jpg
koTkiT
05-12-2005, 03:30 PM
Practice on paper before you hit the streets, atleast a few months, dont ask other people how to make your style better or what to add, then there will be no originality to graffiti, its not all about the letters or the shape or size, its mainly about placement, its about fitting your mark into what ever your doing it on and letting the object compliment your style, dont hit personal property only government, marking personal prop will either get you a bad name or beat up, so stick with shit like telephone poles or manholes, those also can run the longest, dont think that just because you are a good graffiti artist you are a good person, and dont think you arnt as good a person as some one just cause they are better then you with the art, dont let the better ones get you down, let them inspire and draw out your creation...but dont bite, graffiti is a complexly simple thing, there are many un written rules and respects behind it, you must take into consideration what everone else says but yet still have your own twist that is not something you heard from someone, but something that your inside shouts out at you, dont do graffiti unless you have a true interest, clean your caps, shake your cans, refill your markers, and eat your greens Pz.
runci
05-12-2005, 03:43 PM
was that directed at me
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 04:06 PM
dont think it was,
dont know if my word is good enough but i like it runci!
segway
05-12-2005, 05:30 PM
yo, alien sex fiend, dont diss kay, chances are hes the best hope you have. He really did give you solid advice, you cant get style without practice, it just doesnt work that way
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 05:34 PM
This was my first time at paint, and it was on a small ass board, didnt want to make any walls looking shitty so i used a board..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/4.jpg
(i needed to think of a small word for that so itd fit, so i did city)
Some sketches, feedback appreciated!!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/2.jpg
(oh yeah, any suggestions for my "M" i hate doing the middle point on the bottom. I tried squaring it on the second one down and it looks like shit)
Thanks.
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 05:44 PM
yes i know that but he didnt have to say it like a little bitch................"thats the stupidist thing ive heard all day" fukkin asshole.
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-12-2005, 05:49 PM
your still trippin about it?
damn i dident wanna crush you..
haha :(
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 05:59 PM
Alien, im glad you know how to swear. It shows your age.
Can someone please get me some feedback. I know i suck, but come on people.
cyras1
05-12-2005, 06:09 PM
you need caps for cans and you need a bigger board. but just keep practiceing.
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 06:13 PM
Speaking of that, I just ordered some caps off BS and My art teacher gave me left over poster board 4'x8' So ill be using that.
Also, is it alright if i use regular spray paint as a primer do i need the spray paint that says primer on it, because i dont have any buckets to buff the old paint on my one board.
Thanks..Feedback still appreciated.
yea, def get a bigger board and just work on quick throws first, but before that just work on your sketches some, the last one isnt bad, just work on your E and N some. and just keep going. nice and simple.
and the paint, work on like quick outline throws first before going all 4 color crazy. then do like 2 color throws. fill then outline. simple.
but youve got a good idea so far. just save the paint til later bro. and kee working at it.
segway
05-12-2005, 06:38 PM
masterlit: bucket paint is way cheap, go to the dented/mistint (oops paint) area- its 5 bucks for a gallon. youd be wasting money and spray by buffing with cans
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 07:17 PM
nah i was just replying to ur last post and that other persone....its alright
hahaha
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by segway@May 12 2005, 05:38 PM
masterlit: bucket paint is way cheap, go to the dented/mistint (oops paint) area- its 5 bucks for a gallon. youd be wasting money and spray by buffing with cans
Does it matter what kind of bucket paint? for a poster board?
Thanks
And HVK, ill keep working on sketches, than when the paint comes in im working on making that snake.
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 07:41 PM
i know this sux but could yall give me any tipson how to improve it?
.........k i cant find out how to post it...fuck.
segway
05-12-2005, 08:27 PM
you should just invest in a 4x8 sheet of plywood
alien sex fiend, host the image, then hit the img button in reply and put the url there
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 08:32 PM
host the image?....its of my scanner.
Shyd...
05-12-2005, 08:37 PM
Yeah you have to host it on a website so we can see it.
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 08:39 PM
Thats pretty gay.ill try
Shyd...
05-12-2005, 08:43 PM
How is it gay. Act your age. Unless you are like 10. How could i be able to see somehting on your computer? you have to put it on a website so we can see it. It takes like 10 seconds.
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 08:52 PM
its hard to get it on a website if u dont have 1................................................. ...
so this sux really bad for a tag but any tips on how to make it better http://p8.xanga.com/88/b1/88b146233f5dbc85c5e847d38ea4900c12721217.jpg
MasterLit33
05-12-2005, 10:29 PM
Different style, turned out wierd when i screwed with the fill, and i know i need the middle line of the E to be bigger but what else...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/Venom.jpg
Thanks
And dont make fun of my handstyle,ha.
Originally posted by Shyd...@May 12 2005, 07:43 PM
How is it gay. Act your age. Unless you are like 10. How could i be able to see somehting on your computer? you have to put it on a website so we can see it. It takes like 10 seconds.
i think he was acting his age...
Spydee87
05-12-2005, 10:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Spydee87/alvin1.jpgTell what u guys Think if u cant read it, it says alvinthis was 4 my Gf lil bro...
Klone
05-12-2005, 10:43 PM
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/124/13/the191007.jpg
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 10:46 PM
no i wasnt acting my age..........i dont see what yalls problems are?
Aliensexfiend09
05-12-2005, 10:47 PM
oh yeah and any tips on the picture that i posted rather than a scold on my age or what i say!
Skore_One
05-13-2005, 02:10 AM
It's all just so, so.....Toy! ahahaha toys do somethin about it toys bahahahahahaha your a toy...and you...and you! ahahaha...ahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahaamu mu mu ahahahahah muahaha mu mu mu mu ahahahah bah bah baha bahahahahahahahahaha hemroid cream chocolate ass cream yeah i will call it preperation H muahahahaa ba ab hbahbahahahahahhaaaaaaaaaahahaha ur so toy ahahaha ahhhhhahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaghhaa aaaaaaaaa snort snort snort
Allergic
05-13-2005, 03:58 AM
Are these tags simple enough, and is there anything good about them?
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/Allergic6/5f04579a.bmp
holy fuck... last night i was walking home from skool, and i see a throwie behind my house! like holy shit, no1 in my neighborhood gets up. i was so astonished. i was almost jealous lol. but im going out sometime this week to paint that piece i posted a few pages back. anyone want to battle?
MasterLit33
05-13-2005, 12:16 PM
Originally posted by MasterLit33@May 12 2005, 04:34 PM
This was my first time at paint, and it was on a small ass board, didnt want to make any walls looking shitty so i used a board..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/4.jpg
(i needed to think of a small word for that so itd fit, so i did city)
Some sketches, feedback appreciated!!!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/2.jpg
(oh yeah, any suggestions for my "M" i hate doing the middle point on the bottom. I tried squaring it on the second one down and it looks like shit)
Different style, turned out wierd when i screwed with the fill, and i know i need the middle line of the E to be bigger but what else...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/Venom.jpg
Thanks
And dont make fun of my handstyle,ha.
BUMP
And here is a new one, lines are choppy because of when i resized it.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/Venom2.jpg
Feedback still appreicated!!!!!
runci
05-13-2005, 02:53 PM
heres a new sketch...still unfinished gotta addd 3d an color it...
any comments oh n i like my symmetry :D
http://img13.echo.cx/img13/9618/picture298tn.jpg
toxus
05-13-2005, 03:20 PM
http://usera.imagecave.com/toxusgraffiti/graffiti/14-05-05-copy.jpg
can i move on from simple stuff know cos when i try somthing diffent i feel as iv broken the rules
toxus
05-13-2005, 03:22 PM
runci that will look very nice when colored. and i love the symetriacal to
runci
05-13-2005, 03:25 PM
toxus tehre are no rules in graff!!!
its jus there are some guidelines that can be helpful... i feel uve got bloks ok... maybe try n make em a bit thinner..
toxus
05-13-2005, 03:31 PM
ok, do you think i should add some colour
MasterLit33
05-13-2005, 03:32 PM
How about this, Feedback?!? and Runci i like yours alot! Show when its done.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/VenomGo.jpg
The V is wierd for some reason, too small.
Oh and i dont have any white out to show wear some of the lines are for highlights so the line under the O is part of the M, that turned out wierd.
Originally posted by runci@May 13 2005, 03:25 PM
toxus there are no rules in graff!!!
its jus there are some guidelines that can be helpful... i feel uve got bloks ok... maybe try n make em a bit thinner..
word, everyone remember that
toxus
05-13-2005, 04:22 PM
were do i start if i wanted adons
runci
05-13-2005, 04:26 PM
finished http://img225.echo.cx/img225/4473/picture316je.jpg
Originally posted by toxus@May 13 2005, 04:22 PM
were do i start if i wanted adons
if you mean when, i really don't know cuz i'm still a toy but i would say after you get straight letters down
segway
05-13-2005, 04:53 PM
toxus, you need to get solid straights down before addons like ill said. from there (im not an expert on this so take this with a grain of salt) you look for ways to extend parts of the letter while keeping the flow intact
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-13-2005, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by toxus@May 13 2005, 01:22 PM
were do i start if i wanted adons
Add ons are used to increase the flow of the letters...
so if u wanna add addons. first u gotta get the basics down good then it'll come naturaly
MasterLit33
05-13-2005, 05:06 PM
Originally posted by MasterLit33@May 13 2005, 02:32 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/VenomGo.jpg
The V is wierd for some reason, too small.
Oh and i dont have any white out to show wear some of the lines are for highlights so the line under the O is part of the M, that turned out wierd.
Bump on this, need feedback...thanks.
Aliensexfiend09
05-13-2005, 05:27 PM
feedback please on how to make it better.http://p8.xanga.com/88/b1/88b146233f5dbc85c5e847d38ea4900c12721217.jpg
selc himself
05-13-2005, 05:30 PM
masterlit its a good sketch,nice letters,only the bottom of the M is weird but i like the color scheme
MasterLit33
05-13-2005, 05:33 PM
Thanks, which part of the bottom? both sides or what? cause the left side got screwed up when i did the 3D and the O blended into it.
Ill fix it next time though.
Anymore?
And, Alien, is that a JAK? or JKK? hopefully those arent your intials either way because its no smart to use your name or anything linked. Make up another name entirely.
runci
05-13-2005, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by runci@May 13 2005, 03:26 PM
finished http://img225.echo.cx/img225/4473/picture316je.jpg
bump for feedback
dak90
05-13-2005, 07:15 PM
yo runci dat is dope.How long have u been doing this?
runci, i like. youre getting better! youre gonna be dope soon.
runci your shit looked off the hook before you colored it. I think you went a little crazy while coloring. You got ur lettering and flow down pretty good but you need to work on coloring. Try basic stuff like a one color fill with an outline and forcefield, and or effects(ex. 3d shine yada yada), trust me it will look alot more clean and fresh.Just like everyone says start simple with letters, start simple with colors and work your way up.Your crap is dope man just work on the coloring.
Venom that sketch and color scheme is hot man looks fresh. Work on whats already been noted and although gel pens arent great try using them for an outline.
Aliensexfiend09
05-13-2005, 07:57 PM
nah man,its tak......i wouldnt put my initials,,,,,,,,,any tips on how to make it better?plz
MasterLit33
05-13-2005, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by toy@May 13 2005, 06:45 PM
Venom that sketch and color scheme is hot man looks fresh. Work on whats already been noted and although gel pens arent great try using them for an outline.
Gel pen, as in Uni-ball? and would that be for the outline of lettering(like where its already black) or force field
Thanks
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 12:44 AM
I already had this partly complete before i heard the gel pen idea...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v293/greatestrevenge/Venom3.jpg
FEEDBACK please!!! (I know the 3D on the O got fucked up)
QuEeNz-StyLe
05-14-2005, 12:51 AM
venom, kill the thing on the left of the V, and um, go simpler? thats way to complex for ur level, and the 3d is off, are u using a vanish point?
phr3ak
05-14-2005, 03:40 AM
Originally posted by phr3ak@May 11 2005, 07:54 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture001.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/pHr3ak/Picture003.jpg
any help?
...bump...y isnt anybody trying to help me.... :(
venom, work on your handstyle.
Originally posted by phr3ak @ May 14 2005@ 02:40 AM
...bump...y isnt anybody trying to help me....*
because you are better than me. i really dig those
toxus
05-14-2005, 06:11 AM
so when i have moved up from block letters i should try add ons
runci
05-14-2005, 06:13 AM
now try n do straight letters..
here is me doin some staight letters... very simple..
http://img135.echo.cx/img135/8230/picture82cl.jpg
FatMasterSlim
05-14-2005, 09:43 AM
Phreak- Im feeling your sketches and the direction your going with em, my adivce would be to pull off some finished ones, at least ink em and put on tha outline and than erase and clean everything up see how it loosk simplified when everything is clean and finished and than post that up. You have a decent style developing the first one is moving towards an Anti Matter type ish its dope I would just loose some arrows, and your letters the same size...keep at it
one
FAT
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 11:37 AM
Originally posted by sabe@May 14 2005, 03:59 AM
venom, work on your handstyle.
Handstyle as in my tag? or my piece above it.
segway
05-14-2005, 11:51 AM
lit: you dont have good enough letter structure to be messing around with pieces like that, check out raels and see how he can burn with such simple letters. simple letters come first, you cant just rush into wilder shit
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 12:57 PM
Yeah i figured, I was bored on a day off. Figure id go a little more into it and fuck it up. oh well, and where can i find his stuff?
Tails0nE
05-14-2005, 01:13 PM
yo wussup ya'll....
i just got this piece i did.... did it a hile ago cause i havent
really had time to do some sketchin.... problems in the house
hold n bullshit at school....
but whateva... but yo let me know what ya'll think....
i improved my letter structure alot but its still fucked up at certain areas....
EDIT: fuck im a dumbass....
http://img51.echo.cx/img51/2360/blackbook18se.jpg
hey guys im doing a peice in my bbook right noe and was wondering what would be a good color for a halo if my fill is red and my 3d is blue
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 02:02 PM
try one than show it. all personal preference. id put yellow? but why dont you try one than show it.
segway
05-14-2005, 02:09 PM
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/01062005072918Y****527.jpg
those are both really simple, but burn anything in this thread
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 02:14 PM
Thanks Segway!
http://img133.echo.cx/img133/1121/copyofskull20rg.jpg
its say "be careful yeahs can result in death"
this is my favorite sketch to date. Once I wil be able to paint this i don't think anyone will be able to can me a toy.
http://img133.echo.cx/img133/5741/copyoffuckyeah7gj.jpg
by the way its says COLA
joker00
05-14-2005, 02:26 PM
^ the a in cola hurts my eyes ok sketch post flix when its on a wall
preach
05-14-2005, 02:36 PM
no offence but i think everyone would prefer if you got better before you start putting that up on walls. i dont see any letters so you need to work on your letter structure alot.
runci
05-14-2005, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by runci@May 14 2005, 05:13 AM
now try n do straight letters..
here is me doin some staight letters... very simple..
http://img135.echo.cx/img135/8230/picture82cl.jpg
anyone wanna give me some feedback on this simple sketch... ive just started paintin so i cant paint my sketches so this is why i done somethin simple
Originally posted by MasterLit33
QUOTE (sabe @ May 14 2005, 03:59 AM)
venom, work on your handstyle.
Handstyle as in my tag? or my piece above it.
yes, your tag.
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 03:55 PM
Sent you a PM^^^
segway
05-14-2005, 04:11 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00518123f00000001.jpg
my first illegal bomb, i ran out of black before i got to the forcefield, any advice?
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 04:13 PM
Why were you going to use black as a forcefield?
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-14-2005, 04:20 PM
Originally posted by runci+May 14 2005, 11:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (runci @ May 14 2005, 11:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-runci@May 14 2005, 05:13 AM
now try n do straight letters..
here is me doin some staight letters... very simple..
http://img135.echo.cx/img135/8230/picture82cl.jpg
anyone wanna give me some feedback on this simple sketch... ive just started paintin so i cant paint my sketches so this is why i done somethin simple [/b][/quote]
the K is out of place.. its behind the N... make em all equal spaced
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-14-2005, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by MasterLit33@May 14 2005, 01:13 PM
Why were you going to use black as a forcefield?
because people do that....
the fill in for the forcefeild.....
you should look around more.....
segway
05-14-2005, 04:22 PM
because i thought it would look good, and i dont really have anything else to use for a force
Blacaso
05-14-2005, 04:30 PM
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/133/15/a.jpg
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/133/15/b.jpg
dont think i post these so help
segway
05-14-2005, 04:54 PM
blacaso, you need to go simple before you can go wild. its like how you cant draw good charicatures(sp?) without drawing realistic people first. graffiti is pretty much charicaturizing letters and then putting them up on walls
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 05:14 PM
Originally posted by KAY-lo_use_RUST-o+May 14 2005, 03:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (KAY-lo_use_RUST-o @ May 14 2005, 03:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MasterLit33@May 14 2005, 01:13 PM
Why were you going to use black as a forcefield?
because people do that....
the fill in for the forcefeild.....
you should look around more..... [/b][/quote]
I thought he was going to outline it with black, must a read it wrong.
my bad
Yeah, i haven't painted much, been drawing a lot, so can someone explain how you would actually do a piece, like background colour first then 3-d, then outline, then forcefeild or what?
Originally posted by runci+May 14 2005, 02:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (runci @ May 14 2005, 02:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-runci@May 14 2005, 05:13 AM
now try n do straight letters..
here is me doin some staight letters... very simple..
http://img135.echo.cx/img135/8230/picture82cl.jpg
anyone wanna give me some feedback on this simple sketch... ive just started paintin so i cant paint my sketches so this is why i done somethin simple [/b][/quote]
it looks kinda wierd cuz the N is the only one that over laps
EDIT: never mind i didn't see kays post :lol:
segway
05-14-2005, 07:40 PM
skop, if you mean on a wall, you do a sketch with the fill color, fill it, outline&add 3d then force. after that you clean up what needs to be cleaned
http://img236.echo.cx/img236/734/dscn01491pk.th.jpg (http://img236.echo.cx/my.php?image=dscn01491pk.jpg)
what do you guys think its my first try at wild style
segway
05-14-2005, 11:46 PM
you dont attempt wildstyles, if you were ready to bust wildstyles you would be able to. you have to progress your work up to more complicated things
MasterLit33
05-14-2005, 11:56 PM
All i see is a lot of arrows.
uh does that say RAS? I cant tell. ha
Originally posted by MasterLit33@May 14 2005, 11:56 PM
All i see is a lot of arrows.
uh does that say RAS? I cant tell. ha
his names rarl so thats probebly what it sez
Originally posted by rarl@May 14 2005, 09:41 PM
http://img236.echo.cx/img236/734/dscn01491pk.th.jpg (http://img236.echo.cx/my.php?image=dscn01491pk.jpg)
any suggestions?
Shyd...
05-15-2005, 01:00 AM
Why do all new people think graffiti is all arrows coming out of everything?
Originally posted by Shyd...@May 15 2005, 01:00 AM
Why do all new people think graffiti is all arrows coming out of everything?
lol cuz thats all they see when they look at graff :lol:
are you talking to me cuz im not new
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-15-2005, 02:55 AM
Originally posted by rarl@May 14 2005, 11:43 PM
are you talking to me cuz im not new
bull shit.....
dont kid your self....
toxus
05-15-2005, 05:07 AM
http://usera.imagecave.com/toxusgraffiti/graffiti/P1160431-copy.jpg
Dr.evil
05-15-2005, 05:17 AM
i dont think when i was 5 i drew that bad.. but i wont be negitave lets start on the pointers..
1)try and draw straight
2) when 3Ding 3d everything, the bottom part of the e isnt done or a part of the k( looks like a k to me)
0oskiteo0
05-15-2005, 05:21 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y136/babek2104/000_1943.jpg
PLEASE GIVE SOME FEED.. ITS THE FIRST ONE I THINK IVE DONE THATS OK..
runci
05-15-2005, 05:52 AM
t looksw like a c...
s looks likee a fuked up v...
go simple liek most of the ppl in here should
0oskiteo0
05-15-2005, 05:54 AM
word runci.. i gotta work on it.
runci
05-15-2005, 06:09 AM
keep at it... its not bad jus needs a loada work...
peace
wow, i havnt posted my own shit in a while,
helpful pointers?
http://img78.echo.cx/img78/469/euro0he.jpg
^^piece
http://img78.echo.cx/img78/1190/imadoctor1vg.jpg
^^karak
segway
05-15-2005, 11:25 AM
dna, you need to go simple, youve been on bs for longer than ive been progressing from block letters, and you have hardly made any progress. start all over with block letters
the letters are incredibly simple, see, and plus, i havnt been comletly focused on graffiti, more street art
http://img235.echo.cx/img235/7757/eurospelledout2rg.jpg
plus you cant say my stuff is as bad as this
http://usera.imagecave.com/toxusgraffiti/graffiti/P1160431-copy.jpg
MasterLit33
05-15-2005, 01:07 PM
I didnt know that guy was a doctor till i read that thing, maybe work on your letters before you do a character.
And i saw the Euro thing before you highlighted it but the thing coming off the top the R is a lil wierd.
segway
05-15-2005, 02:55 PM
DNA, while it is simple, it lacks good looking letters. you need to have fundamental letter structures down before you can tweak them and add style.
edit: and ditch them addons, they are none too good looking
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-15-2005, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by DNA@May 15 2005, 08:53 AM
the letters are incredibly simple, see, and plus, i havnt been comletly focused on graffiti, more street art
http://img235.echo.cx/img235/7757/eurospelledout2rg.jpg
when you finish something in your own eyes you think its good...
but really id start a lil more simpler... u already have some of the basics down so it shouldent take that long.... but do simple letters with flow and no addons..
Jugga
05-15-2005, 03:28 PM
I like it...
That shit's sick...
I need help...
I got some higgins ink, and put it in a window chalk marker...
But the ink beads on smooth surfaces...
Can I add something to it so that it doesn't have this effect?..
and the ink isn't too permanent... how can I fix that?
and what can I add to it to make it more opaque?
I know there's an ink thread.... but...
<looks around>
:ph34r: Ninja Vanish! :ph34r:
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-15-2005, 03:36 PM
^ is the ink water based?....
most good ink like pilot ink dont run off windows like that....
but then again.. i wouldent put INK in a mop.. id use Paint..
usualy ink is for markers and paint is for mops... usualy...
Aliensexfiend09
05-15-2005, 05:41 PM
k,i guess im not getting any help and i dont really want any on that tag if thats what u want to call it....doesnt look like 1 though:(......and how would any one go about doing these block letters...........i know how but like would u add something to it like put them together and shit or like make them bubble letters and spread apart?
Jugga
05-15-2005, 05:53 PM
@ Alien..
I'm toy as fuck... can't help you...
@ Rusto...
It says it's waterproof ink on the container...
so I don't think so...
Another thing...
I know that you can add some silver powder to silver paint to make it opaque and shiny...
what will it to to black ink?
will it thicken it and give it an added luster? :)
or will it make it ugly... :(
a little quickie i just did, i didnt do the little extra addons, but it looks too simple to me.
http://img150.echo.cx/img150/34/eurp5mt.jpg
segway
05-15-2005, 06:47 PM
its better, but still needs work. start off with letters like this EURO
then slowly add style to it
DOUK or DIE
05-15-2005, 07:13 PM
i used ink in my kiwi mop and it works fine and runs like hell
exibit a:
http://img253.echo.cx/img253/849/doukkiwidrips1mf.jpg B)
Aliensexfiend09
05-15-2005, 07:54 PM
yeah i know man.............im a toy as fuck too.
venom, i dont like any of your letters, i dont know what it os about them, but im not feeling em, all around your stuff looks decent, but when u break down the letters they suck. keep up the work.
segway, that bark is nice. its nice t osee you can actually paint your sketches... its funny to see ppl try to paint wildstyle sketches and get lost in the outline fill lol.
segway
05-15-2005, 08:56 PM
thanks epod, but its really not as clean as it looks. it was my first illegal bomb and i was a bit nervous so i fucked up some stuff. also the fill is a scratch fill, you just cant see it that well
Aliensexfiend09
05-15-2005, 09:24 PM
alrihgt heres a more recint one....some feedback this time would be nice.lolhttp://p1.xanga.com/15/bf/15bfe7803787ce2bc3a01ab9570bfb6112721217.jpg
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-15-2005, 09:38 PM
the hell do u want feed back on?... its a shitty 3 letter "tag"...
Aliensexfiend09
05-15-2005, 09:51 PM
Yes i know that but i would like some suggestions on how to make it better........thats waht this topic is about.
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-15-2005, 09:53 PM
well.... its kinda hard on helping that....
*tags in general
MasterLit33
05-15-2005, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by epod@May 15 2005, 07:53 PM
venom, i dont like any of your letters, i dont know what it os about them, but im not feeling em, all around your stuff looks decent, but when u break down the letters they suck. keep up the work.
Alright, on my next sketch ill try something different.
scythe
05-15-2005, 10:58 PM
How bout this any suggestions. other than the stupid bubbles my friend drew.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/scytheagain.bmp
scythe
05-15-2005, 10:59 PM
fuck it didn't work!
here check it
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scyt...scytheagain.bmp (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/scytheagain.bmp)
joust
05-15-2005, 11:09 PM
alright alright scythe, you got some decent framework for letter structure. I would work on the thick to thin thing, it doesent really work for me. Try to make your letters more simple for now, and your 3d more pronounced.
wreckone.
05-15-2005, 11:17 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v468/wreakone/wreckiepen.jpg
Pen sketch.
I haven't really posted any pictures except for four.
I know i over did the bits, but with pen, th eonly thing you can do is even everything out.
scythe
05-15-2005, 11:44 PM
alright thanx I'll try it out
KaOs-OneR
05-16-2005, 12:31 AM
Originally posted by KAY-lo_use_RUST-o@May 15 2005, 08:38 PM
the hell do u want feed back on?... its a shitty 3 letter "tag"...
lmfao..
im tired.
im gunna post a quick sketch tomorrow.. my bro said i got better.. he hadnt seen my shit in a week.. you guys havent in like, a month..
:lol: hope you like it.. post tomorrow, peace..
:ph34r: <--- Watch out! HES COMING!
http://www.februebruary.com/img2/wall1.jpg
http://www.februebruary.com/img2/wall3.jpg
my first piece/production/character
scthe, or w.e , make your letters all the same width, and id say go a bit simpler, and straighten em out some too, looks decent considering ive never heard of you
3 letter tag boy.... it sucks... look at a bunch of tags, then look at yours... start writing simple, plain letters, then mess with em.. yours looks like more of a signature.
wreck, nice. simple, clean, love the structure. keep it up
sari... it looks good, but WTF!? were u trying to make it drip that much? not really feeling the structure... decent none the less.
wreck, now that i think about it... i like how the R and K go below the rest and fade away sort of, try to make it symmetrical.. thatsd my ony criticisms lol good job.
scythe
05-16-2005, 10:57 AM
alright thanx, that's cause I just started writing 3 weeks ago
Car2nist
05-16-2005, 11:42 AM
coming here made me vomit, really.
christ DNA and COO and ATXBOMBER lol, have progressed NONE, they fell down a god damn hill with their shit, how do you not progress with people trying to fucking help you, god damn, kay, i say just hang up on these kids and tell them to start bitin, cause they're going nowhere.
Blacaso
05-16-2005, 12:09 PM
http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/135/11/d.jpg
simpler
runci
05-16-2005, 12:30 PM
go simpler
Scott
05-16-2005, 01:36 PM
I like most of runci's stuff.
runci
05-16-2005, 01:44 PM
thanks :D
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-16-2005, 02:27 PM
Originally posted by Car2nist@May 16 2005, 08:42 AM
god damn, kay, i say just hang up on these kids and tell them to start bitin, cause they're going nowhere.
hahaha!! damn :lol:
but theres been like.. 3 people in almost 1 year <_< that ive helped and progresed really nice...
i dont really help anymore cuz i jus dont have the time / no one really listens to my advice...
what ever its all good
runci
05-16-2005, 02:37 PM
i would listen!!! :D
Aliensexfiend09
05-16-2005, 05:29 PM
oh...ok.
wreckone.
05-16-2005, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by epod@May 16 2005, 06:28 AM
wreck, now that i think about it... i like how the R and K go below the rest and fade away sort of, try to make it symmetrical.. thatsd my ony criticisms lol good job.
You do know that I did that on purpose right?
who are those three kay? i would take your advice but you wont give me any... or talk to me <_<
DOUK or DIE
05-16-2005, 07:36 PM
i dunno about that sketch
NeO.Skunkkr1
05-16-2005, 07:42 PM
http://img256.echo.cx/img256/2429/picks7117vg.jpg
feedback please?, i got a better one ill post later too
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-16-2005, 07:44 PM
only if it was that to get to signs where im from....
DOUK or DIE
05-16-2005, 08:15 PM
maybe i have down sydrome
but what you just said makes no sense to me
but like i said, maybe i have downsydrome
->toNE*
05-16-2005, 08:20 PM
i think he ment,if only it was that easy to get to signs
ps..i have downsydrome too ahahaha
rots1
05-16-2005, 10:08 PM
http://img84.echo.cx/img84/8364/picture0293fn.jpg
wut u think is it simple enough?it says esk
QuEeNz-StyLe
05-16-2005, 10:46 PM
kill that arrow on the K, then its decent, practice makes perfect i guess, keep at it, the E is prettty decent, the S is ok, and im not a fan of most K's so i cant judge it.
KaOs-OneR
05-16-2005, 11:10 PM
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y226/john41091/kaceone.jpg
..? Feedback?
ò_Ó ^_^.:.H3@5.:.
05-17-2005, 02:51 AM
Originally posted by rots1@May 16 2005, 09:08 PM
http://img84.echo.cx/img84/8364/picture0293fn.jpg
wut u think is it simple enough?it says esk
there a other esk in my city and his realy better then u change name
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-17-2005, 04:12 AM
Originally posted by ò_Ó ^_^.:.H3@5.:.+May 16 2005, 11:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ò_Ó ^_^.:.H3@5.:. @ May 16 2005, 11:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-rots1@May 16 2005, 09:08 PM
http://img84.echo.cx/img84/8364/picture0293fn.jpg
wut u think is it simple enough?it says esk
there a other esk in my city and his realy better then u change name [/b][/quote]
thats YOUR city not his....
estaked
05-17-2005, 06:01 AM
any tips would be very helpful thx
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/2687akus2.jpg
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/5214bask4.jpg
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/2845Bask1.jpg
scythe
05-17-2005, 10:59 AM
how bout this simple enough?
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scyt...aff/simpler.bmp (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/simpler.bmp)
skateparadise
05-17-2005, 12:09 PM
Originally posted by scythe@May 17 2005, 09:59 AM
how bout this simple enough?
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scyt...aff/simpler.bmp (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y230/scythegraff/simpler.bmp)
work on your letter structure.
skateparadise
05-17-2005, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by estaked@May 17 2005, 05:01 AM
any tips would be very helpful thx
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/2687akus2.jpg
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/5214bask4.jpg
http://www.newschoolers.com/PHP/Pictures/Uploaded/2845Bask1.jpg
pratice... alot... get a better style.
toxus
05-17-2005, 02:09 PM
ok now iv got block letters down whatshould i start doing
runci
05-17-2005, 02:19 PM
straight lettesr
rots1
05-17-2005, 02:38 PM
yo are you for reeal man you want me get rid my name bcuz theres some1 betta wit dat name in your town your funny
Originally posted by NeO.Skunkkr1@May 16 2005, 06:42 PM
http://img256.echo.cx/img256/2429/picks7117vg.jpg
feedback please?, i got a better one ill post later too
if i was who ever has to clean that up i would be mad for two reasons. 1 - that you did it to the sign and 2 - that you did something so shitty on the sign
huskinator
05-17-2005, 04:30 PM
http://img66.echo.cx/img66/5134/sticker6rz.jpg
What do you guys think? Opinions? Its a sticker by the way.
Husky
NeO.Skunkkr1
05-17-2005, 04:41 PM
Originally posted by gilt+May 17 2005, 03:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (gilt @ May 17 2005, 03:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NeO.Skunkkr1@May 16 2005, 06:42 PM
http://img256.echo.cx/img256/2429/picks7117vg.jpg
feedback please?, i got a better one ill post later too
if i was who ever has to clean that up i would be mad for two reasons. 1 - that you did it to the sign and 2 - that you did something so shitty on the sign [/b][/quote]
well this IS toy story... so i dont know what your trying to get at, and i bet you dont have the nuts to do that anyways so either gimme some actual feedback or stfu
and to husk it looks dope man, but im not feelin ur letterstyle
Scratch
05-17-2005, 04:48 PM
!that is one nice ass sticker ya got there!
lol ya i think im toy im not sure but w/e ill post here anybody got advice for this
Pic 1 (http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=31487&password=&sort=1&cat=500&page=1)
Pic 2 (http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=31696&password=&sort=1&cat=500&page=1)
Pic 3 (workin on this style more, tried to make it simple) (http://www.bboy.org/gallery/showphoto.php?photo=33040&password=&sort=1&cat=500&page=1)
thnx guys, peace
huskinator
05-17-2005, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by huskinator@May 17 2005, 03:30 PM
http://img66.echo.cx/img66/5134/sticker6rz.jpg
What do you guys think? Opinions? Its a sticker by the way.
Husky
Bumpin this so I can get some feedback.
Husky
thats a lot of time on a sticker man..
dope shit, but for a sticker i wouldn't bother..
anyways, why are you posting in toy story?
huskinator
05-17-2005, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by evo@May 17 2005, 03:58 PM
thats a lot of time on a sticker man..
dope shit, but for a sticker i wouldn't bother..
anyways, why are you posting in toy story?
I actually made it for the cover of my sketch book, so I wanted it to look good. reason I am posting in here is because whenever I post in the Picture gallery I get 2 respnonses being either im a toy or its biten....
More feedback!
Husky
KaOs-OneR
05-17-2005, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by KaOs-OneR@May 16 2005, 10:10 PM
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y226/john41091/kaceone.jpg
..? Feedback?
BUMPP..
FeedBackk pleasee
joker00
05-17-2005, 05:26 PM
um i have a question not really a toy but its on a marker like i found a marker thats a "wood marker" they sell it at michaels and i wanna know is it any good or is it shit
Originally posted by joker00@May 17 2005, 04:26 PM
um i have a question not really a toy but its on a marker like i found a marker thats a "wood marker" they sell it at michaels and i wanna know is it any good or is it shit
did you try TESTING IT?!!
just try it! if you have it, try it, if not, rack it and try it out.
who the fuck is gonna know some noname shit brand marker? fuckin lazy jeez
KAY-lo_use_RUST-o
05-17-2005, 06:19 PM
husk.. your coloring is ok.. but im not really diggin some of the letters
>SM!7K<
05-17-2005, 06:45 PM
need tips
http://us.share.geocities.com/jovy414/scan0003.jpg
..............
MasterLit33
05-17-2005, 07:17 PM
Cant see it.
huskinator
05-17-2005, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by KAY-lo_use_RUST-o@May 17 2005, 05:19 PM
husk.. your coloring is ok.. but im not really diggin some of the letters
What needs changing?
Husky
husky, only like 2 of your letters follow the same style. it looks good though, id try working on one solid style though. whered u get a sticker that big? would you sell me some?
das one
05-17-2005, 09:48 PM
do you guys think that changing your name is dishonourable???
i have been writing das now for about a year and my work is becoming un inspired.... so i thought " hey maybe a name change is what the doctor ordered?"
im thiniing of changing to relik? should i????
KaOs-OneR
05-17-2005, 09:51 PM
for some reason i hate ti when people make their tag a real word.. i wouldnt reccomend relik, das.. but a name change is fine
REALvmd
05-17-2005, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by Car2nist@May 16 2005, 10:42 AM
coming here made me vomit, really.
christ DNA and COO and ATXBOMBER lol, have progressed NONE, they fell down a god damn hill with their shit, how do you not progress with people trying to fucking help you, god damn, kay, i say just hang up on these kids and tell them to start bitin, cause they're going nowhere.
No kidding, DNA has been here for 8 months and his shit his shit hasnt progressed at all, possibly got worse. Yet he has 1869 posts (as of now). Maybe if he spent less time talking and more time sketching he'd have gotten somewhere.
das one
05-17-2005, 09:51 PM
cool thx for the input
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