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CHIRP1
01-18-2005, 10:31 PM
i kinda liked that abort peice before anything was done to it...

Rusty Shackleford
01-18-2005, 11:12 PM
i'm pretty new. sometimes i have a lot of trouble being consistent, or comming up with new styles. my perception is a bit off and it's hard for me to make letters even height, any tips for that?

Phenom
01-19-2005, 12:03 AM
I did this sketch right now HELP PLEAZE!!and i actually like this one. :lol:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom.jpg

Phenom
01-19-2005, 12:12 AM
This is bull shit one more try:


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom2.jpg

GeSuS_KRiST
01-19-2005, 01:37 AM
blahblahblah im out this shit for awhile sence no one likes what i do, respects my opinion and im going to be a bitch like that

because i go out of my way by takign time out my day, and the knowlege i have gotten from all the years i been writing and the wisdom big named writers that have shown me tricks, tool, secrects, tips, and the basics and i used it to help people and it get thrown back in my face ill see if yall take shit for granted or not .....

ill be back in a few weeks so to elios man keep working on that you'll be fuckin on point one day...

so peace the fuck out,
Two

EliosAVS
01-19-2005, 04:26 AM
Thanks gesus.
Im going to work on that S until its perfect.

clip
01-19-2005, 08:58 AM
ddddaaaaaaaamn.. thats 135 pages read in 3 days... im new and im probably toy like a fat bitch but ill b postin soon from sum help :D

Havoc411
01-19-2005, 09:29 AM
damn, gesus really got fed up.

bumsuckfun
01-19-2005, 12:43 PM
it's because people were thinking before they spoke. gesus' idea of the 3d is fine, it's just that seeing how it was drawn on the computer, and how it 'disrupted' the orange halo around it, that it made it look bad. if the kid actually drew it out with the 3D that gesus was suggesting, did the orange halo around it, it would look fine.... afterall this is about giving suggestions not doing all the work for you.

evo
01-19-2005, 01:36 PM
trying some addons last night, then my net went down so i couldn't post, anyways, i don't like the arros on this at all, so yeah, screw saying a thing about them..

i didn't color enough on the E, which is why it looks white, this is better in real life.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v178/radioactivity/graffiti/evo-pencil.jpg

sika_2002
01-19-2005, 01:51 PM
looks quite nice, what did u colour it with

evo
01-19-2005, 01:59 PM
i had a few cheap colored pencils with me, so i used them.

At the moment I have no decent supplies, I actualy have no markers, no paint, nothing..which is why on sunday I'm going to get it all XD

evo
01-19-2005, 03:53 PM
and then people wanna just throw all that in my face and pretty much say fuck u i dont need your help well fuck them i dont need to help them i was doing it out of the kindness of my hart

Your right, fuck them, I appriciate what you was doing, 10 years ago the only way to learn was to go out and actualy go bombing, no people come here and expect to learn "how to do graffiti" they don't care about what it is or it's history, just that it looks cool. They forget the whole exprensionism part of it and end up learning someone elses style, since people end up telling them how to do it rather then giving tips like you have been, they will never develop and the first time they get any police action will give up.



how u gonna tell other kids how to make there shit look better if u cant make yours look good in the first place?


I asked you about that awhile back in the blackbook thread and you said as long as the tips are good then the regulars won't mind. So you have sort of contradicted yourself, unless your just talking about the dicks who think they know everything and then there shit is just as toy as the person they where helping.

Your right, there isn't many people that respect you or people who have been in the game for a long time, what you was doing was tight, helping toys where as everyone else was just hating them.

I guess now they just gonna have to learn the old fashioned way.

sink
01-19-2005, 06:09 PM
well, thanks for the help you guys have given me, its a shame its gotten to the point where you feel that way.

longislandtagster
01-19-2005, 06:14 PM
i found this on seen world forms...pretty toy to me http://www.gametrailers.com/player.php?id=4498&type=mov

segway
01-19-2005, 06:24 PM
thats been posted several times now, it doesnt belong in this thread, this thread is/was for toys getting help

longislandtagster
01-19-2005, 06:34 PM
o tru sry about that then..i thoguht it was toy so i put it in the toy thred

Phenom
01-19-2005, 06:35 PM
true..imma sound like im kissing ass but before i even signed on id always look for what Gesus would post...i dunno why but i liked the way he said shit..i REALLY respect U i could understand why u feel this way but i never desrespected u...so thanks ALOT for ALL the help u gave me..and whenever i wouldnt do what u said is because i didnt understand u.And again thanx ALOT.

ANTIC
01-19-2005, 07:12 PM
http://img97.exs.cx/img97/7623/10000013en.jpg

first canvas

EliosAVS
01-19-2005, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Jan 19 2005, 07:12 PM
http://img97.exs.cx/img97/7623/10000013en.jpg

first canvas
I like that alot except im not a fan of chinese writing stuff but it looks dope, i like the little guy

segway
01-19-2005, 09:05 PM
i can understand the helping getting tiresome, i do some peer tutoring so i understand that. thanks a lot, ill definately be taking you up on that pm offer.
(i am sink btw)

Havoc411
01-19-2005, 09:13 PM
i hate helping people how dont really want to be helped, so i can see where gesus and kay are coming from

k2s
01-19-2005, 10:34 PM
could anyone plz help me with this thankshttp://img98.exs.cx/img98/8421/untitled2ot.jpg im 10

EliosAVS
01-19-2005, 10:39 PM
Loose those bubbles and your 3d is weird.
The lines are weird too.
And youre letters arent the same size.

Everyones going to tell you that.
Start simple.

CHIRP1
01-19-2005, 11:07 PM
are you tryin to make your lines like that....?

look at some of the 3d charts also your 3d is like.. at every angle.

but who am i to judge that

CHIRP1
01-19-2005, 11:09 PM
i deleted this one....

CHIRP1
01-19-2005, 11:09 PM
how old are you...?

Shyd...
01-19-2005, 11:13 PM
Could you please tell us how old you are. I was just wondering cause usually people over tha age of like 12 can draw a straight line like they can draw regular bubble letters that aren't all weird and wavy. Sorry but you need to start simple. Very simple. as geus always says look at a cereal box and see how there letters look like.

EliosAVS
01-19-2005, 11:16 PM
This doesnt matter cause obviously color is the last thing you need to worry about but those reds are real similar and look pretty funny the way you used em...no offence or anything but i just noticed.

k2s
01-19-2005, 11:22 PM
i am 10 and i have been writing for a month and that sketch is 2 weeks old

CHIRP1
01-19-2005, 11:23 PM
Originally posted by Shyd...@Jan 19 2005, 11:13 PM
Could you please tell us how old you are. I was just wondering cause usually people over tha age of like 12 can draw a straight line like they can draw regular bubble letters that aren't all weird and wavy. Sorry but you need to start simple. Very simple. as geus always says look at a cereal box and see how there letters look like.
i just realized he said "im 10" ok young head.

Shyd...
01-19-2005, 11:29 PM
Ok so your 10 and you want to vadalise. I say you should stay away until aout high school. Cause if you get caught then your parents won't kill you. At 10 your parents are gonna get pissed. Could you show us a picture of your "tag" So we can get a jest of how you write? Hopefully you can draw straight lines.

k2s
01-19-2005, 11:34 PM
i never said i tag i just sketch and probaly wont tag till im 13 or 14

EliosAVS
01-19-2005, 11:46 PM
Originally posted by k2s@Jan 19 2005, 11:34 PM
i never said i tag i just sketch and probaly wont tag till im 13 or 14
I think by your tag he just means your handstyle...

k2s
01-20-2005, 12:15 AM
this is to elios as simple as thishttp://img17.exs.cx/img17/1501/dscn00924ve.jpg sorry idont know how to make it smaller

Shyd...
01-20-2005, 12:19 AM
Yes that was what I was implying. Ok do you just "sketch" well then make your letters more straight. No bubbles 3-d or "force field" Copy the letters off of a cereal box.

k2s
01-20-2005, 12:21 AM
thanks shyd that was really helpful ill do that it was a big help :D

EliosAVS
01-20-2005, 12:22 AM
Yea like Shyd... said lose all the extra stuff and just work on making your letters all the same size.

Your 3D in that pic is going in a bunch of directions.

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 12:40 AM
man that shit is terrible

HAHAHAHAH LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

man you really need to work on your 3-d and everything else
the cereal box thing is wack


i have a secret for 3-d
k how i taught myself was take a cerael box
put it standing how it should be and look at it from a verticle angle

do u know what i mean
kinda like straight on but like to one of the sides
you can see the front and the side you are facing but u cant see the oppesite side of the box

thats how your 3-d should be

as if your looking at it from only one side
what i am trying to say is the only sides you can see on the box are the side that you use

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 12:42 AM
i can take a pic if you would like on how u should look at the box if you dont get what i said ^ there

Shyd...
01-20-2005, 01:00 AM
Future i got it thanks tho for offering. Here is the guide to 3-d for dummies. All thanks to havoc on this one. And you can thank me for posting it again.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/Untitled-1copy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/untitled-2copy.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/Untitled-3copy.jpg

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 01:09 AM
ohhh
mine is for a smarter person but i will post it anyways

GeSuS_KRiST
01-20-2005, 01:40 AM
Originally posted by evo@Jan 19 2005, 03:53 PM


how u gonna tell other kids how to make there shit look better if u cant make yours look good in the first place?


I asked you about that awhile back in the blackbook thread and you said as long as the tips are good then the regulars won't mind. So you have sort of contradicted yourself, unless your just talking about the dicks who think they know everything and then there shit is just as toy as the person they where helping.

Your right, there isn't many people that respect you or people who have been in the game for a long time, what you was doing was tight, helping toys where as everyone else was just hating them.

I guess now they just gonna have to learn the old fashioned way.
yea i mean like ok anyone who knows me and my art work will tell u im SO hard on myself like everyone i meet in real life i HATE my shit u will never see me say oh i did this shit its pretty phat huh? but that still dont mean i dont have style and everything else... but when i said that comment in here i mean kids who hate HORRIBLE stuff tryin to teach other kids how to make it better like that dont really know what there saying there just throwing random shit out there.... thats what pissed me off alot with the XworseX sketch i edited i mean... look i know graff styles, i know whats toy and whats not like fuckin zig zaps and shit in your letter is wack if u dont know how to use them so i made it look better and more liek the letters should look and would be respected in the streets..... 97% of the kids in here dont know whats hot for REAL graffiti and whats not.... its just simple as that like i said before i have tralved to diffrent counrty and all over the US east coast to westcoast north to south i have over 30 graff videos and i dont even know HOW many mags on graff alto with books... an i fixed it to where someone who looked at it that KNEW graffiti would be liek ok tehre starting out but its not that bad ive seen worse.... but im rambling on so im stop now

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 02:05 AM
^ lol

i am getting pics now

*Baozone*
01-20-2005, 02:12 AM
boy o boy your handstyles are dope I EAT CLAM! i was lookn at ur sig and was like dam...
keep doin ya thang..

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 02:15 AM
nvm
my imageshack isnt working

so i guess i wont be getting any pics sorry











( to self) fuck! :angry:

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 02:41 AM
hey guys,

i got caught rocking a yellow bandana in school and its got my crew on it (iron on letters) and they confiscated it.. can they do that ?

GeSuS_KRiST
01-20-2005, 02:43 AM
im against answering questions in here but ill answer this one cas i know it will get stupid fuckin answers.... YES they can because the probably saw it as "gang" related... how is a toy in a crew already?... toy crews i never got them

*futurestar*
01-20-2005, 02:47 AM
i am not a toy* trust me

i have been writing for like 5 years i was just to lazy to look for a topic that concerns these kind of q's

thnx anyways

anza
01-20-2005, 10:43 AM
damn, i neglect BS for a few days and gesus peaces, this bites. that guy helped me so much it aint funny, i mean if i look back on the crap i was spewing like a month ago, and look at my shit now, there is a big difference(sp?), and alot of that is thanks to gesus' tips. the kids that ruined it beefing on his advice are stupid. that comp sketch he made for the kid that wrote abort, was just to show the guy to thicken the 3d, it wasnt supposed to be a piece or anything, just a visual of gesus' tips for visual learners. i think that this thread is officially dead if we don't have any of the hot writers giving advice, which means more toys are going to be writing crap, and that means that the goal of graffiti, beautification, is bunk. thanks bastards.

ILL
01-20-2005, 11:28 AM
Originally posted by anza@Jan 20 2005, 11:43 AM
i think that this thread is officially dead if we don't have any of the hot writers giving advice,
Yeah that fuckin sucks, who was it that was beefin? and who ever it was is fuckin stupid cuz why would they put stuff on here if they don't want or use tha help and if they can't take it when people say somethin like "thats fuckin shity" then they shouldn't be postin here cuz they should expect people to say stuff like that cuz it's a thread for help so if you post your stuff here then you already know your not that good.

bez
01-20-2005, 01:11 PM
yo all of you kidz! you make me smile. You think you gonna be good in graff in 1-2 week! graff is not a nintendo game you have to go outside , practice and not getting cut by cop! If you dont have money to buy paint do sticker, paste up, oilpastel, stencil and marker everything is good. buy graffiti book or video and watch it and learn. im in graffiti game about 10 years now and i still love it !
graffiti is in my blood maybe not all of you!

And all of you who have no winter what the fuck you still on your computer
fuck you!

GeSuS_KRiST
01-20-2005, 01:46 PM
bez is the man.... but my and kay are still willing to help the select few who listened though PM... and for those who asked who did it it was a groupe effort i got 3 disses off that E-sketch i did but the one who made me leave was joust, i mean fuck that kid his shits wack i could burn him in a hartbeat and he want to call what i did shit man fuck that.... if he EVER said that to be in real life you best belive he would get taken away on stetcher... people think graffs a joke, well its not in the real world u talk shit about someones work or cross it... shit you get fucked up for instance.... this one kid crossed my boys super 3d peice that he did for his girl friend and he got the shit kicked out of him AND his wrist broke so the kid wouldnt beable to write for a good 6 months....

graff isnt a game try some of the shit talkin in real life see how far it gets you....... but im out to go rock some burners... i MIGHT come back in about a week or two and help only a select few but im still tryin to think if i want to do that

snub
01-20-2005, 02:31 PM
Alright well hopefully gesus still decides to help. I have just started graff, this is the first stuff I have ever done, I am having trouble making a good b. heres some little sketches that I did.

http://img48.exs.cx/img48/9946/19010500216rp.jpg

I know that shading is pretty shitty, and it would probally look a little better if the letter were bigger.
http://img48.exs.cx/img48/7060/20010512219qp.jpg

ILL
01-20-2005, 02:36 PM
your N on that bomb looks a lot like a H

bumsuckfun
01-20-2005, 02:42 PM
on the B, put a verticle line going up to the top and to the bottom... because right now it looks like a 3.

on your throw-up, move the bottom vertical line on your N more to the left and the on top more to the right so it looks more like an N than an H. also, try using a capital B as apposed to to a lower-case B... because it looks more like an L. use the outline color to color out circles indicating the 'holes' in the B, or use X's, or lines, anything...

adding a halo to throw-ups doesnt hurt. generally it's just an outline around the outline/3D. usually the same color as the fill... so a white throw would have a white fill, black outline/3D, and a thin white outline (the halo or forcefield) going around the outside of the black outline/3D.

gotta jet, thats all the advice i can give you for now..

Havoc411
01-20-2005, 04:37 PM
i got bored in spanish today and did this. not great but whatever. gimme some feedback or tips on what to change and whatnot
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/havo.jpg

segway
01-20-2005, 04:57 PM
the h overlaps the a a bit much, but the h and a look good, the v and o could use some shaping up. gesus gave some good advice with the few months of straights, untill you have them past lock

ILL
01-20-2005, 05:02 PM
yeah tha A dose overlap tha H to much

evo
01-20-2005, 05:09 PM
snub: work on your handstyle, try and let you hand flow more rather then being very precise and swirly..

the bomb isn't bad actualy, just need work on the N and the B..

Hav: maybe too many addons and the H overlaps too much.

Havoc411
01-20-2005, 05:11 PM
yeah, im just starting to use addons. haha, when i was drawing it i was like "man, the H overlaps alot" but that wa when i was half way through inking it, haha

atxbomber666
01-20-2005, 05:14 PM
make your s more praportional,ya know?like on that first top curve make it come out more,and fix the h to make it look like an n.

evo
01-20-2005, 05:14 PM
bez, i know graff isn't just a game, i do go out, i go hitting stuff up, i'm getting paint this weekend, I know I gotta go out and do stuff, I know the risks, first time i went bombing i had police attention but talked my way out of it.

I know graff takes time, I've never thought i would be good in a week, my shit still is pretty crap, but i keep practicing. I'm looking into the future and I see myself still going out in 10 years and hitting up the streets.

Coo
01-20-2005, 07:45 PM
http://img138.exs.cx/img138/6035/s30100123mw.jpg

atxbomber666
01-20-2005, 08:15 PM
weord right?i like it,its a very unique style.

sorry to post a sketch in front of yours.
http://img100.exs.cx/img100/1049/image0010ko.jpg

k2s
01-20-2005, 08:15 PM
Originally posted by bez@Jan 20 2005, 01:11 PM
yo all of you kidz! you make me smile. You think you gonna be good in graff in 1-2 week!
were u talking to me cuz for me i think my sketches are shit and i dont remember ever saying im good

ILL
01-20-2005, 08:26 PM
not bad coo and atx

Havoc411
01-20-2005, 08:32 PM
trying out my new decos :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/decotest.jpg
not the greatest but i got to color it this time

bez
01-20-2005, 08:58 PM
bez, i know graff isn't just a game, i do go out, i go hitting stuff up, i'm getting paint this weekend, I know I gotta go out and do stuff, I know the risks, first time i went bombing i had police attention but talked my way out of it.

I know graff takes time, I've never thought i would be good in a week, my shit still is pretty crap, but i keep practicing. I'm looking into the
future and I see myself still going out in 10 years and hitting up the streets



nice........ practicing is the key man! if you get this, you get the rest...
peace

ViKn
01-20-2005, 09:22 PM
Originally posted by Havoc411@Jan 20 2005, 08:32 PM
trying out my new decos :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/decotest.jpg
not the greatest but i got to color it this time
Try losing the pointless extensions (namely the arrows in this case) the arrows in your peice dont flow very good and take away from the letters and their structure, better spacing though over your previous photo

ILL
01-20-2005, 09:23 PM
Originally posted by Havoc411@Jan 20 2005, 09:32 PM
trying out my new decos :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/decotest.jpg
not the greatest but i got to color it this time
not bad, anyone else notice how less help people are getting just in tha littel bit of time Gesus and kay have stoped helping?

ILL
01-20-2005, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by ViKn+Jan 20 2005, 10:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ViKn @ Jan 20 2005, 10:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Havoc411@Jan 20 2005, 08:32 PM
trying out my new decos* :D
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/decotest.jpg
not the greatest but i got to color it this time
Try losing the pointless extensions (namely the arrows in this case) the arrows in your peice dont flow very good and take away from the letters and their structure, better spacing though over your previous photo [/b][/quote]
yeah tha one on tha A looks kinda like it doesn&#39;t belong there or somethin.

Shyd...
01-20-2005, 09:31 PM
Yo atx don&#39;t steal my S man. Thats my throw S.

atxbomber666
01-20-2005, 09:32 PM
seriously fuck those arrows,dont worry tho always a first mistake.but if you take to arrows out it will be nice-er.

shyd,i didnt bite your s,show me your s.

->toNE*
01-20-2005, 09:46 PM
lose the arrows

CraYon
01-20-2005, 09:54 PM
Originally posted by Shyd...@Jan 20 2005, 09:31 PM
Yo atx don&#39;t steal my S man. Thats my throw S.
That s is pretty common...

http://img40.exs.cx/img40/1336/bluered5dq.jpg

Don&#39;t call it biting when its not original.

Havoc411
01-20-2005, 09:56 PM
i hate it when people bite my s.



event though i dont use an s at all

ANTIC
01-20-2005, 10:04 PM
http://img108.exs.cx/img108/746/10000173cw.jpg
http://img114.exs.cx/img114/9273/10000188kj.jpg
http://img107.exs.cx/img107/2949/10000190na.jpg

some new sketches....i bet some1 has sena too but w/e

simples, my cracks on the first one blow

CraYon
01-20-2005, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by ANTIC@Jan 20 2005, 10:04 PM
http://img108.exs.cx/img108/746/10000173cw.jpg
http://img114.exs.cx/img114/9273/10000188kj.jpg
http://img107.exs.cx/img107/2949/10000190na.jpg

some new sketches....i bet some1 has sena too but w/e

simples, my cracks on the first one blow
Ok, for the first one, the S in the tag doesn&#39;t seem to flow wiht the rest of it. And in the roller, the bottom are of the S doesn&#39;t seem porportional...And I don&#39;t like the color :D

For the second one, I&#39;m feelin that bomb, I wouldn&#39;t mind seeing that up. Though I think the 3D is off..But props for the bomb

And I dunno bout the third one. I&#39;m not feelin it.

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-20-2005, 10:32 PM
the 2ns sena S is almost the same as SIONE&#39;s

ANTIC
01-20-2005, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by PANIC&#33;FUP_MORE...@Jan 20 2005, 10:32 PM
the 2ns sena S is almost the same as SIONE&#39;s
do u have a pic of that guys shit so i can see it and make any changes?
that first one was meant to be gold

k2s
01-21-2005, 12:09 AM
like this elios and shyd i took ur advice and sorry for asking for so much help and can anyone tell me how to make the pics smaller im using image shack im pissed off at it :angry: http://img58.exs.cx/img58/9048/dscn00947dv.jpg

EliosAVS
01-21-2005, 12:28 AM
Get rid of the 3D and just draw the letters, try to make them the same size they seem to go from big to little.

Floppy
01-21-2005, 01:36 AM
stay away from those arrows. They&#39;d be real clean without em.

snub
01-21-2005, 01:49 AM
Ok i got the S N and the U looking alot better, but I am having trouble getting a B to fit in. Ive been trying different shit all day, cant see to get it. Any ideas/examples would help alot.


http://img48.exs.cx/img48/7060/20010512219qp.jpg

EliosAVS
01-21-2005, 01:51 AM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 21 2005, 01:49 AM
Ok i got the S N and the U looking alot better, but I am having trouble getting a B to fit in. Ive been trying different shit all day, cant see to get it. Any ideas/examples would help alot.


http://img48.exs.cx/img48/7060/20010512219qp.jpg
The B needs something an X or a hole it sorta looks like an L like that

mrekted777
01-21-2005, 08:29 AM
yo snub..make that b a capital B, and for the holes or the hole use a teardrop or something to give it an overlay effect. also, maybe work on that N..at first glance i thought your shit said SHUL.. lol

Havoc411
01-21-2005, 09:36 AM
here, i fixed it up a bit in firewors for you. i made the N and the B more profound
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/snul.jpg

bumsuckfun
01-21-2005, 11:24 AM
personally i still think the two lines in the N (the one coming from the top and the one coming from the bottom) are still two much in-line with each other... try moving the one on the bottom more to the left and the one on top more to the right. i also think a capital B would look better, and probably be easier/quicker to fill when you&#39;re out painting than the lowercase B (if your into the quick n&#39; dirty quickfulls)...

snub
01-21-2005, 01:39 PM
Yah that is the same old pic I took i was just reposting it so you remember what it looked like. I did the SN and U better I snatched a blackbook from my art room at school today so ima be trying to get this shit good today.

snub
01-21-2005, 03:23 PM
K heres a new one.

http://img105.exs.cx/img105/264/21010513179yp.jpg

tre'tre'
01-21-2005, 03:42 PM
that ones better

EliosAVS
01-21-2005, 03:49 PM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 21 2005, 03:23 PM
K heres a new one.

http://img105.exs.cx/img105/264/21010513179yp.jpg
That N doesnt look like an N very much.

Havoc411
01-21-2005, 04:05 PM
all you gotta do is make your N more defined and youll have some good stuff man
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/snub_fix.jpg

RookieX412
01-21-2005, 04:13 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v357/PoisonedXmartyr/21010513179yp.jpg

looked more like an "a" than an "n" hope either one of those would help

snub
01-21-2005, 10:20 PM
http://img9.exs.cx/img9/5963/21010520140pw.jpg

http://img9.exs.cx/img9/8415/21010520166kx.jpg

ILL
01-21-2005, 10:29 PM
not bad but tha 3d on tha second one is kinda fucked up

snub
01-21-2005, 10:33 PM
Yah i know it wasnt really 3d i was just doing some wierd outline thing dont really like it.

Whip Lash
01-21-2005, 11:30 PM
http://img33.exs.cx/img33/2412/picture0017ib.jpg

What you think? I am having a tough time getting a good style going.
Any tips?

segway
01-21-2005, 11:48 PM
whiplash, just grab a pen and some scrap paper and keep working untill you find something good.

ILL
01-21-2005, 11:54 PM
like i told other people just fuck around with tha shapes of your letters and addons like different under lines and all that stuff until you find somethin you like and you can try different names if you want until you find one that looks good and you like.
and practice

Phenom
01-22-2005, 12:09 AM
Check these 2 sketches out and watta u think...?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/insanephenom.jpg
I like this one ALOT but it really fukin sketchy ill get a better pic 2morrow..

THIS ONES JUST FOR FUN HAHAHAHA PIMP ASS LITTLE COP CAR.. :lol:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/IMG_1098.jpg

morfed
01-22-2005, 04:01 AM
http://mailcenter2.comcast.net/wmc/v/wm/41...e=Image002.jpeg (http://mailcenter2.comcast.net/wmc/v/wm/41F2164300059EB200003E7C22070029539C0A020106049D0E 0C06/Image002.jpeg?cmd=MimePart&no=68&uid=28693&sid=c0&format=raw&mimepart=2&content_type=image/jpeg&name=Image002.jpeg)

morfed
01-22-2005, 04:06 AM
how do u post pics??

Tails0nE
01-22-2005, 04:09 AM
Originally posted by morfed@Jan 22 2005, 04:06 AM
how do u post pics??



k u take the link that u posted... copy it...
then when your ready to post u click the IMG button above
your typing space... a box will come up, paste the link in there and
then click ok.... then it&#39;ll appear then when u post it it will come up...&#092;

Tails0nE
01-22-2005, 04:16 AM
http://img38.exs.cx/img38/2924/zz224an.jpg

yeah man im feelin all the letters except the "N"....

i remade it a lil... give u a look on how u should improve it...

other than that it looks dope....

snub
01-22-2005, 02:38 PM
Thanks, I was doing more last night I got a different N and U going. Ill post it up once I finish one.

snub
01-22-2005, 02:45 PM
I was just doing the N and the U thats why the S looks all wierd. And im not felling that b. Probally should just stick to capital B.
http://img75.exs.cx/img75/3509/22010512404xl.jpg

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-22-2005, 03:13 PM
keep the lowercase B

u&#39;s are horrible over all, you should change the u to a different letter like a or o..snob haha that would be cool..but only do that if your into bombing-not pieceing, because o&#39;s suck for pieces..but whatever, im sure you can get the u to work out

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 03:38 PM
i fucking hate o&#39;s. but i cant do anything about the o in my name so whatever

snub
01-22-2005, 04:07 PM
Yah i dont know ill screw around some more. Havoc you could change your O for an i. Havic or like Havik.

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 04:13 PM
i usually just write HAV though. so its all good. the only time i use my full name is in my tag

bumsuckfun
01-22-2005, 04:16 PM
Originally posted by Whip Lash@Jan 21 2005, 11:30 PM
http://img33.exs.cx/img33/2412/picture0017ib.jpg

What you think? I am having a tough time getting a good style going.
Any tips?
personally i don&#39;t think your tag is all that bad. i&#39;m a big fan of readable yet stylish tags as apposed to extremely overstyled crytpic tags... but its just personal preference. really i have about 3 different ways i tag my name but i prefer to stick to the 2 simpler styles than the overly complex one... but i guess thats just cause i like to write for everyone not just for other writers (the public sees complex tags as just mindless scribbles)...

try a lowercase I, i think that&#39;d look hot though.

bumsuckfun
01-22-2005, 04:26 PM
http://img76.exs.cx/img76/1459/21010520140pw4sd.jpg

just me quickly messing around with it. i really like the N thats tailsone made on the previous page.

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-22-2005, 04:41 PM
havoc-i like o&#39;s...mine when i write NOSE is just a blotch with an x in it heh...there like a canvas in itself..u can do anything with it like make it a face, or a star, or anything

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 04:46 PM
but i have a hard time with them in like stuff other thant throwies and bombs. like i get to them and i have no idea what to do

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-22-2005, 05:41 PM
every name is takin, who cares..as long as theyre not in your city or VERY up..either way, u can just add a number

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 05:51 PM
theres a Havok on the west coast if im not mistaken. hes more of a street art dude though

meks
01-22-2005, 06:34 PM
i pretty much just started wildstyle heres what i got


http://img92.exs.cx/img92/604/matt0020ge.jpg


http://img92.exs.cx/img92/5158/matt0017ib.jpg

meks
01-22-2005, 06:35 PM
oops to big and crappy pics

meks
01-22-2005, 07:02 PM
sorry about that these should be better sized, but still bad pics

http://img92.exs.cx/img92/7828/resized9rh.jpg

http://img92.exs.cx/img92/7246/resized27jz.jpg

segway
01-22-2005, 07:09 PM
your 3d isnt very consistent on the last one

meks
01-22-2005, 07:42 PM
ya i dont realy like the last one ..i did that on way before the first one

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 08:02 PM
im really liking that for some reason

meks
01-22-2005, 08:07 PM
top one right?
i love the 3d on it. B)

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 08:10 PM
keep em coming man

ILL
01-22-2005, 08:14 PM
that shading on tha 3d is good on tha first one

Tails0nE
01-22-2005, 09:19 PM
http://img194.exs.cx/img194/5699/zz232bd.jpg

do the line thingy with the n... have the lines going away from eachother
like in this... and with the U its dope just dont put the line at the bottom..
u can still do the little bump thing but no line following it
cause then it looks like an H... and i say u go with an uppercase B....


keep workin on it and it&#39;ll look fresh....


and im feelin those sketches meks...
freshness....

Havoc411
01-22-2005, 09:38 PM
eww, why did you do that to the b

meks
01-22-2005, 09:39 PM
thanks man

Tails0nE
01-22-2005, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by Havoc411@Jan 22 2005, 09:38 PM
eww, why did you do that to the b






it would&#39;ve came out better but my mouse is on some bullshit,....


gotta clean it or sumthin...

snub
01-22-2005, 10:08 PM
meh....

http://img193.exs.cx/img193/889/22010520024ck.jpg

Tails0nE
01-22-2005, 10:09 PM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 22 2005, 10:08 PM
meh....

http://img193.exs.cx/img193/889/22010520024ck.jpg





freshness.........

bumsuckfun
01-22-2005, 10:47 PM
i actually drew this out by hand, but my scanner isn&#39;t working so i had to draw it on the computer... it&#39;s kinda raunchy and all the lines aren&#39;t as smooth and bubbly as they should be, but it gives you an idea...

http://img169.exs.cx/img169/3341/untitled0sy.jpg

snub
01-22-2005, 10:52 PM
thnaks for that. ;)

Alchohlics_Anonymous
01-22-2005, 11:31 PM
im accualy kinda liken that. :)

Phenom
01-22-2005, 11:46 PM
u guys didnt really say anything can i get a little help pleaze??THANX


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom.jpg


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/badassphenom2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/insanephenom.jpg

Phenom
01-22-2005, 11:59 PM
Heres a better pic of it..i think imma start tryin&#39; wildstyle....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/ThebigM.jpg

CraYon
01-23-2005, 12:02 AM
http://img193.exs.cx/img193/8238/wag11475312277700ai.jpg

Ok, this is what I&#39;ve come up with for a throwie...and a tag. I swear the tag looks way better in real life cuz it flows. But its the same letter basics. I know its uneven, its just a quickie...and those things in the K are arrows to make it look like a smilie :lol:

So any suggestions on the throwie? I wanted to get something down packed before I actually go out n put it up. Any kind of critism is welcomed.

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 12:08 AM
im feelin the m in the piece but not really the thing
alltogether...

it looks out of place and makes it look goofy...

keep the m and make a P, H, E, N, O like how u did
the M and put it all together and u got freshness...

but the letters u got there are also dope for a throw up or sumthin....

in the other sketch fix the E just a weeeeeeeeeeeee bit, and the N and M...
and work on the 3D just a weeeeeeee bit also.... and give it the 3D grid look....
if u know what that means...

k2s
01-23-2005, 12:11 AM
ok guys i made a new sketch and i kno the n and the 3d on it screwed and the 3d on the k is messed up too but try to igonore that okhttp://img197.exs.cx/img197/149/dscn00995ed.jpg

k2s
01-23-2005, 12:12 AM
ok guys i made a new sketch and i kno the n and the 3d on it screwed and the 3d on the k is messed up too but try to igonore that okhttp://img197.exs.cx/img197/149/dscn00995ed.jpg

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 12:13 AM
Originally posted by CraYon@Jan 23 2005, 12:02 AM
http://img193.exs.cx/img193/8238/wag11475312277700ai.jpg

Ok, this is what I&#39;ve come up with for a throwie...and a tag. I swear the tag looks way better in real life cuz it flows. But its the same letter basics. I know its uneven, its just a quickie...and those things in the K are arrows to make it look like a smilie :lol:

So any suggestions on the throwie? I wanted to get something down packed before I actually go out n put it up. Any kind of critism is welcomed.




fix the H....
the rest im really feelin especially the K....

it all flows except for the H... it kinda throws it off a bit...
and

and just work on the tag a bit.....

over all it looks fresh...

oh but yo where did u get to do that?
i try Bomb The World but everytime i go there
it fucks up....
post the link if ya can...

Havoc411
01-23-2005, 12:16 AM
Originally posted by CraYon@Jan 23 2005, 12:02 AM
http://img193.exs.cx/img193/8238/wag11475312277700ai.jpg

Ok, this is what I&#39;ve come up with for a throwie...and a tag. I swear the tag looks way better in real life cuz it flows. But its the same letter basics. I know its uneven, its just a quickie...and those things in the K are arrows to make it look like a smilie :lol:

So any suggestions on the throwie? I wanted to get something down packed before I actually go out n put it up. Any kind of critism is welcomed.
you wanna be down with TURD CRU? its a little thing we got goin on valdal squad
http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti/wag_120424_123_2479.jpg
ps, its a joke crew, thats why everything is soo shitty. hahahaha, get it? shitty? its a pun

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 12:20 AM
Originally posted by k2s@Jan 23 2005, 12:12 AM
ok guys i made a new sketch and i kno the n and the 3d on it screwed and the 3d on the k is messed up too but try to igonore that okhttp://img197.exs.cx/img197/149/dscn00995ed.jpg






3D Guide (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=3358&st=75)

k man this is on bombing science... actually about 2 or 3 threads down from this
one... lol.... but anyway this will help you out alot with your 3d....


and havoc dats some funny shit.... i get it....



TURD CRU REPRESENT&#33;
:P



3D Guide courtesy of Havoc, and DNA or psYKOAz... either or.... i dunno....

Phenom
01-23-2005, 12:23 AM
Originally posted by Tails0nE@Jan 23 2005, 12:08 AM
im feelin the m in the piece but not really the thing
alltogether...

it looks out of place and makes it look goofy...

keep the m and make a P, H, E, N, O like how u did
the M and put it all together and u got freshness...

but the letters u got there are also dope for a throw up or sumthin....

in the other sketch fix the E just a weeeeeeeeeeeee bit, and the N and M...
and work on the 3D just a weeeeeeee bit also.... and give it the 3D grid look....
if u know what that means...
Im sorry man im not sure what that means...hahaha...anyways what did u think of my first pic???annyways thanx ALOT for the suugs....

CraYon
01-23-2005, 12:25 AM
Originally posted by Havoc411+Jan 23 2005, 12:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Havoc411 @ Jan 23 2005, 12:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-CraYon@Jan 23 2005, 12:02 AM
http://img193.exs.cx/img193/8238/wag11475312277700ai.jpg

Ok, this is what I&#39;ve come up with for a throwie...and a tag. I swear the tag looks way better in real life cuz it flows. But its the same letter basics. I know its uneven, its just a quickie...and those things in the K are arrows to make it look like a smilie :lol:

So any suggestions on the throwie? I wanted to get something down packed before I actually go out n put it up. Any kind of critism is welcomed.
you wanna be down with TURD CRU? its a little thing we got goin on valdal squad
http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti/wag_120424_123_2479.jpg
ps, its a joke crew, thats why everything is soo shitty. hahahaha, get it? shitty? its a pun [/b][/quote]
Oh, man TURD cru? I&#39;m slightly offended, yet excited&#33; TURD CRU wut wut...

k2s
01-23-2005, 12:26 AM
Originally posted by Tails0nE@Jan 23 2005, 12:20 AM






3D Guide (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=3358&st=75)










thanks i searched for 3d guides and nothing showed up

snub
01-23-2005, 12:26 AM
http://www.vandalsquad.com/

tre'tre'
01-23-2005, 12:34 AM
where the fuck are all you guys getting these little trains and panting on them?

tre'tre'
01-23-2005, 12:37 AM
ooo i got it wow online tagging? thats pretty fucking useless

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 12:41 AM
Mr Wiggles (http://www.mrwiggles.biz/how_to_do_block_3d.htm)

i mean do this with the 3d part of your sketch that u posted
twice...

and just fix the E, N, and M a bit and you&#39;ll be straight...
and the one where u got tha dope lookin M, it doesnt flow with
the other letters... keep the M and make the rest of the letters look some what
like that and put it all together it&#39;ll flow nice...

and no problem k2s....

and havoc or crayon what site do u go to to paint those trains like that?

Havoc411
01-23-2005, 12:50 AM
yo, everyone has to be down with turd cru
well flood the site with freights that say TURD

tre'tre'
01-23-2005, 12:50 AM
havoc your trying too hard

snub
01-23-2005, 12:53 AM
Tail, heres the link. You gotta download the program, its dope.

http://www.vandalsquad.com/download/graffiti_studio.zip



http://img166.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img166&image=snub2eq.png

Havoc411
01-23-2005, 12:53 AM
shut up, no i aint. you just want me to fail and be miserable

tre'tre'
01-23-2005, 12:55 AM
oh your a mind reader?

tasor_tbc
01-23-2005, 12:57 AM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 23 2005, 12:53 AM
Tail, heres the link. You gotta download the program, its dope.

http://www.vandalsquad.com/download/graffiti_studio.zip



http://img166.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img166&image=snub2eq.png
i donno zewall is pretty dope aswell

snub
01-23-2005, 12:59 AM
link?

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 01:01 AM
Originally posted by Havoc411@Jan 23 2005, 12:50 AM
yo, everyone has to be down with turd cru
well flood the site with freights that say TURD




aight no doubt good lookin out snub....




WH00t WH00T&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
TURD CRU REPRESENT&#33;&#33;&#33;

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-23-2005, 01:02 AM
tre&#39;tre&#39; is an asshole..hes putting people down for no reason..i think he should leave..

EliosAVS
01-23-2005, 01:06 AM
<_< Those online train painting things are so hard to draw with but that might just be cause im left handed and i have a right handed mouse.

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 02:57 AM
Originally posted by EliosAVS@Jan 23 2005, 01:06 AM
<_< Those online train painting things are so hard to draw with but that might just be cause im left handed and i have a right handed mouse.






ha....

that sucks....



this things cool though....

pretty cool...

snub
01-23-2005, 03:06 AM
Im not feeling the B, and ideas?

http://img182.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img182&image=snub27aq.jpg

Phenom
01-23-2005, 03:08 AM
kkkkk u guys might think im stupid for saying this but us all the LRPD shit fo real?????????&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;any ways i dunno if wanna call this wild style but check it out i did this just right now....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/wildstylephenom.jpg

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 03:34 AM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 23 2005, 03:06 AM
Im not feeling the B, and ideas?

http://img182.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img182&image=snub27aq.jpg






they both look good....


now i think your ready to take it to the streets.....


and Phenom it looks pretty good... and do u always put your M
at the top of the whole thing? lol anyway get rid of some lines
unless u want it to have a transparent look but its pretty good...

and i dont know if that LRPD shit is real but whateva and i really
dont care i got a cool program...

http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti.asp?graffiti_id=327234

i just posted the link....
some quick throw i did on the danish metro....
meh......

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 03:40 AM
nevermind im a dumbass that LRPD shit is a joke....

snub
01-23-2005, 04:37 AM
Guess i should get some paint and start praticing that shit. Ive only been wiriting for 2 days. :)

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 05:17 AM
o thats kool, wat do u write?

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 11:12 AM
PHENOM - Your shit is pretty good and I don&#39;t think there is much I can help you with on it. Just sketch it a bit more until your more comfortable with it and shit will naturally flow a bit better and you&#39;ll have more confidence in your letters... once that comes your fine. Not so sure about the wildstyle though... keep sketching those.

segway
01-23-2005, 12:53 PM
phenom, you NEED really solid straight lettering and simple lettering before you are even remotely ready to try wildstyle, its not optional. if some people listened to gesus&#39;s advice before he left, he would be more likely to come back, he said start simple and stay simple for a long time- months, and then slowly, very slowly, start incorporating more elements into your style. its just about the only way you can develop your own style. your simples show promise, dont stop working with them, i wasted the summer working on "wild" shit i thought looked good, i look back at it and think of how much better i would be if i used that time wisely.
snub, if youre going to start working in paint, my advice is to get a 4x8 piece of plywood sheathing (i think thats what the kind with the slightly messed up surface is called) get some dollar black paint get some dollar white paint and get a respirator, its good to have can control before you take your shit to the streets, youll get a lot more people recognizing you.
in the time ive been practicing (maybe 8 paintings) ive gone from this
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00484834f00000043.jpg
to this
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00484834f00000042.jpg
ive still got a lot of work to do, but ive gotten way better with can control.
some advice is to go through this and look at what gesus and clam(kay) have said, and use the advice you got, maybe then they might come back to help.

snub
01-23-2005, 03:25 PM
Yah I got a shed full of crap plywood, but its winter so Ill just keep skecthing till it starts to melt. Im pissed that gesus decided to leave right when i joined. :(

segway
01-23-2005, 03:52 PM
to quote Gesus

you not good enough with to start putting add ons u should wait atleast 8 months of pulling a simple style perfect for a add ons... and u only add one like detail to the letters then do that for about 4 months will u get it perfect again then add another and slowly your letters will fourm into your own style its a long process but its worth it youll have the 3d pefect that way along with everything else
i just didnt jump into my style with in the first year fuck it took me atleast few to have it morf to where it is now and im still not happy with it these things take time peice styles are like babys they have to crawl before they walk and they devlope after so long.... and the bitches think there cute =)
some of the best advice you could get wasnt followed by plenty and then people talked shit on at least one of Gesus&#39;s photoshopped out suggestions. phenom- i guess that advice you allways respected doesnt apply now that Gesus is gone.
Clam, did you get the pm i sent you the other day?

snub
01-23-2005, 04:49 PM
It starts on page 82.

segway
01-23-2005, 04:51 PM
Originally posted by joust+Jan 18 2005, 09:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (joust &#064; Jan 18 2005, 09:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by XworseX+Jan 18 2005, 07:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (XworseX &#064; Jan 18 2005, 07:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST@Jan 17 2005, 03:17 PM

Originally posted by XworseX@Jan 17 2005, 07:32 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v12/patcombat/HPIM5182.jpg


this is my first attempt at doing a peice.
look you have a nice base style so i tryed to run with it i know alot of euro work so i think i can help you but here i fixed up your bort and added 3d... sorry i blurred out your drug free thing i mean its cool your stright edge an all its healthy for you but im nto into self advertising and if u do that shit in the streets thats a GOOD reason for heads to hate on your shit..... just a lil tip fpr when u take your work to the streets


Also i dont wanna hear anyone gettin off topic about his choices in here it already caused 3 pages of beef in the sticker thread so lets just keep it about sketches in here


heres what i did to your peice

http://img106.exs.cx/img106/3151/WooHoo.jpg
haha thanks we did already have to much beef about NOT doing something. [/b]
it would look better with like a centered point 3d. Not that shit gesus added on haha. [/b]
other people like pawn and chirp1 had said they liked it before anything was done, but at least they were somewhat polite about it
<!--QuoteBegin-pawn@
i like the abort piece a lot better before you changed it gesus, im not hating i just think that he wasnt going for a "3d" it was just thinkening of the lines, i dont know if he meant to do it though but still i like that style. and i liked it better cause it had more of a shape as a whole before[/quote]
<!--QuoteBegin-CHIRP1
i kinda liked that abort peice before anything was done to it...[/quote]
not to mention tone was constantly shit talking to gesus saying gesus aint up, etc

atxbomber666
01-23-2005, 04:55 PM
abandoned spot i found.i thot the wall was tan so i brought white and black,but the wall was white.and plus i fucked up on the 3d and the E.and i got some ups for sino(limit)
http://img185.exs.cx/img185/4359/dscn01895lz.jpg

BAZE
01-23-2005, 04:56 PM
http://img174.exs.cx/img174/1448/img02110ue.jpg
help please. is it good to go put up

segway
01-23-2005, 05:02 PM
resize please, and from what i can see, it needs a bit of work before putting up
ares looks like your hand needs some work, but then again im pretty biased to philly hands

BAZE
01-23-2005, 05:10 PM
http://img184.exs.cx/img184/1087/img02116oc.jpg

snub
01-23-2005, 05:37 PM
I just thought that one part didnt match.


http://img174.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img174&image=baze6ff.png

BAZE
01-23-2005, 05:43 PM
yo thnx

Havoc411
01-23-2005, 05:52 PM
just my nickel minus 3 pennies
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/Havoc411/bazefix.jpg

EliosAVS
01-23-2005, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by BAZE@Jan 23 2005, 05:10 PM
http://img184.exs.cx/img184/1087/img02116oc.jpg
I like the E that A is a bit weird

BAZE
01-23-2005, 06:07 PM
yo thnx alot hav. n yeah about the a it came out a lil weird.lol

EliosAVS
01-23-2005, 06:20 PM
Maybe if you made it look more like just this lower case a

snub
01-23-2005, 06:45 PM
I kinda messed around again.


http://img181.exs.cx/img181/3998/base7np.png

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 06:46 PM
fix it like how havoc did and your straight....

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 06:58 PM
http://img161.exs.cx/img161/8049/zz268zc.jpg

heres my 2 cents....
i made a better one when first did it but my computer fucked up
and didnt save it....

hitshit89
01-23-2005, 06:58 PM
yo tails were u live??^^ :ph34r:

Havoc411
01-23-2005, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by Tails0nE@Jan 23 2005, 06:58 PM
http://img161.exs.cx/img161/8049/zz268zc.jpg

heres my 2 cents....
i made a better one when first did it but my computer fucked up
and didnt save it....
if youre gonna fix someones stuff you should try and follow the style they had going already

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by hitshit89@Jan 23 2005, 06:58 PM
yo tails were u live??^^ :ph34r:




i live in Illinois.... about 20 to 45 minutes away from chicago.....



y wussup?


where u live?

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 07:01 PM
Originally posted by Havoc411+Jan 23 2005, 07:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Havoc411 @ Jan 23 2005, 07:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Tails0nE@Jan 23 2005, 06:58 PM
http://img161.exs.cx/img161/8049/zz268zc.jpg

heres my 2 cents....
i made a better one when first did it but my computer fucked up
and didnt save it....
if youre gonna fix someones stuff you should try and follow the style they had going already [/b][/quote]





i did i just put a different b though....

snub
01-23-2005, 07:16 PM
His E was alot better imo.

snub
01-23-2005, 08:19 PM
...goood.

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 08:39 PM
is this any good??
http://img187.exs.cx/img187/6659/image0100ys.jpg

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 08:47 PM
This is my first throwie tell me wat u think
http://img161.exs.cx/img161/8681/picture612hu.jpgv

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 08:53 PM
ignore the rough lines on the B...

also i kinda drew the letters going big to small... i&#39;d redraw them all the same size BUT i&#39;m lazy and kinda surprised i even took one attempt at drawing this.

http://img198.exs.cx/img198/1070/baze7gx.jpg

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 08:54 PM
Yo heres my first throwie, tell me wat u guys think.
http://img161.exs.cx/img161/8681/picture612hu.jpg

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 08:57 PM
it&#39;s pretty cool but drop the red highlights... if you need to add that 3rd color to your throwup do a red halo or something... or a red fill with white highlights... anything but a white fill with red highlights.

and to be completely honest, the person who posted and asked &#39;is this any good?&#39; (marz is it?) was pretty raunchy... it wouldn&#39;t be so bad but the letters don&#39;t flow. they bobble from big letters to small letters, from fat to skinny. try to keep all the letters the same height and make their widths relevant. also try doing it bigger (small throws, especially on a surface that isn&#39;t smooth like that are going to look raunch), and make sure to throw in a 3D. also the black highlights are terrible. same as i said for &#39;disco&#39;... white fill doesn&#39;t need highlights... especially if its a color that&#39;s going to clash like that.

EliosAVS
01-23-2005, 08:57 PM
Originally posted by bumsuckfun@Jan 23 2005, 08:53 PM
ignore the rough lines on the B...

also i kinda drew the letters going big to small... i&#39;d redraw them all the same size BUT i&#39;m lazy and kinda surprised i even took one attempt at drawing this.

http://img198.exs.cx/img198/1070/baze7gx.jpg
I like that B more but that A just keep working on it its going in the right direction.

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 09:00 PM
sorry i accidentally posted that shit twice

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 09:01 PM
Originally posted by bumsuckfun@Jan 23 2005, 08:53 PM
ignore the rough lines on the B...

also i kinda drew the letters going big to small... i&#39;d redraw them all the same size BUT i&#39;m lazy and kinda surprised i even took one attempt at drawing this.

http://img198.exs.cx/img198/1070/baze7gx.jpg
I like that B more but that A just keep working on it its going in the right direction.



^ hehe, i&#39;m not baze. i posted that to help him...

i don&#39;t really have much experience with A&#39;s in throwups so it&#39;s not perfect or anything, but whatever. it&#39;s just my advice to him what i think could make it look better. if he keeps working at it he&#39;ll have something smooth in no time.

EliosAVS
01-23-2005, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by o0 *diSc* 0o@Jan 23 2005, 09:00 PM
sorry i accidentally posted that shit twice
Just for future reference theres an edit button when that happens.

tasor_tbc
01-23-2005, 09:06 PM
Originally posted by bumsuckfun@Jan 23 2005, 08:57 PM
it&#39;s pretty cool but drop the red highlights... if you need to add that 3rd color to your throwup do a red halo or something... or a red fill with white highlights... anything but a white fill with red highlights.

and to be completely honest, the person who posted and asked &#39;is this any good?&#39; (marz is it?) was pretty raunchy... it wouldn&#39;t be so bad but the letters don&#39;t flow. they bobble from big letters to small letters, from fat to skinny. try to keep all the letters the same height and make their widths relevant. also try doing it bigger (small throws, especially on a surface that isn&#39;t smooth like that are going to look raunch), and make sure to throw in a 3D. also the black highlights are terrible. same as i said for &#39;disco&#39;... white fill doesn&#39;t need highlights... especially if its a color that&#39;s going to clash like that.
yea that throwy is not to bad but yeah as he said drop those red highlights.
and u dont have to have all ur letters the same size. like my throw-up is so wack,(i wud post it but i donno how to post pics :( ) , every second letter is bigger then the one b4 it an it looks reallly sick. jus make sure all the letters flow an have the same style to them thats all. once u got that down just play around with everything else man

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 09:09 PM
yeah i suppose if you flowed your letters properly you could pull off having every 2nd letter a different size than the first... but his letters are just marginly different in size (not like intentional changes) and doesn&#39;t really flow with it...

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 09:11 PM
hey here is a more finished flix of my throwup
http://img191.exs.cx/img191/4423/picture627oi.jpg

snub
01-23-2005, 09:14 PM
You 2 go painting together? Anways the black on it looks bad.

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 09:16 PM
it&#39;s still got the same problems... the letter heights/widths aren&#39;t relevant and it just plain doesn&#39;t flow. also the black highlighs are ugly as shit and not even in the right spot in a lot of places (top left hand corner of the M, and mirrored in the top right hand corner of the M is one example... its messed up in a lot of other spots too).

also the 3D is wack. for throwups just stick to the simple shadow-style 3D...

the orange &#39;drips&#39; also don&#39;t belong on throwups. throwups are supposed to be fairly simple so you can get them up quick. you can start adding highlights (and other fill tricks), fancier 3Ds, and things like drips when you&#39;re doing bombs (sorry if that&#39;s confusing, around here we call 2-4 color simple peices as &#39;bombs&#39;) and peices but please not on throwups.

try adding a halo/forcefield around it too, those seem to do wonders for a lot of throwups.

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 09:18 PM
yeah me and DiSc go spray together... but thanks for the info on the throwup

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 09:27 PM
yeah i realize the black dont look to good but i think the 3-d looks sick and shit lets see ur flixs

tasor_tbc
01-23-2005, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by OoMaRzoO@Jan 23 2005, 09:27 PM
yeah i realize the black dont look to good but i think the 3-d looks sick and shit lets see ur flixs
i wud deffinetaly show u but i donno how to post flix

snub
01-23-2005, 09:36 PM
tasor go to www.imageshack.us and than click browse and find you pic, than it&#39;ll give you an address for you picture, post that address in here.


Heres a little sketch.

http://img174.exs.cx/img174/7026/23010519292eo.jpg

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by snub@Jan 23 2005, 09:36 PM
tasor go to www.imageshack.us and than click browse and find you pic, than it&#39;ll give you an address for you picture, post that address in here.


Heres a little sketch.

http://img174.exs.cx/img174/7026/23010519292eo.jpg



what he said....

and also copy and paste the link at the way bottom of your pic...
then here click the IMG button and paste the link in the little box that pops
up then click ok...


and snub that&#39;ll look dope as a big roller....

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 09:47 PM
haha... tasor, marz wasnt talkin to u he was ment it to bumsuckfun.

snub
01-23-2005, 09:53 PM
Forgot to ask, bum can you give examples of halos and forcefields?

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 09:57 PM
Bumsuckfun...post some flix

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 10:05 PM
yeah bumsuckfun post ur flix

anza
01-23-2005, 10:07 PM
what do you all think of the longer hand i&#39;m working on? feed back would be greatly apreciated.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v629/anza/Picture035.jpg

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 10:09 PM
R.I.P papa chuck we will all miss u very much


sorry bout this guy but a close person i consider family just past away

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:09 PM
i think its lookin good ;)

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:10 PM
marz&#39;s 3D may be &#39;sick&#39;, but keep those style 3D for peices. you should be able to paint a throwup in under 5 minutes. a lot of writers can get it done in 2 or so minutes complete with a fill, outline, shadow-style 3D and a halo. i&#39;m not one of those writers (takes me about 4 or 5 minutes i guess), but i&#39;m not much of a bomber either...

http://visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-sake034.jpg
here SAKE from montreal demonstrates what a halo/forcefield is for you. this throw up has a green fill. a white outline/shadow, and a black halo/forcefield. basically it&#39;s just an outline around the outline and shadow. a lot of times the halo/forcefield is the same color as the fill (ie. white fill, black shadow/3d, white halo).

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 10:16 PM
but none the less that was my first throw up and for being my first on i think its ok but i feel what ur sayin

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 10:18 PM
DiSc we need to hit G-town this weekend

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:20 PM
fable u see my first throwie?

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:20 PM
yah man i wasn&#39;t dissing, i was just telling you what i think would look better, and in the case of the 3D doing a normal shadow style 3D is the only way you&#39;re going to pull it off on the streets.

it&#39;s alrite for your first throw up, but i think you should definately keep working on it before you plaster your town with it...

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:23 PM
ight kool, i wont use the red for highlights next time

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:25 PM
BUm u got any of ur bomb flix?

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:31 PM
well yah i have flicks of my stuff but i&#39;m hesistant towards posting it in the toy story thread unless i really felt it was nescessary to show somebody something... it&#39;d kind&#39;ve been disrepectful towards my self, and it would be off-topic to what this thread is about. (speaking of off topic, keep your personal conversation to phone, email, pm, whatever, just don&#39;t clutter this thread with it). i like to try to keep my stuff low-profile and do it for the art rather than the i-showed-you-so effect.

if you&#39;re asking me to post flicks because you think i need to prove something to you than straight up, no, i&#39;m not going to, and personally i find it&#39;d kind&#39;ve disrespectful that you&#39;d want me to. if that&#39;s the case, i might have to follow gesus and kay and stop helping kids here.

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:35 PM
im just askin so i can see ur shit

snub
01-23-2005, 10:35 PM
Or dont leave and just help the peeps that arnt disrespectful. :huh:

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:41 PM
Originally posted by o0 *diSc* 0o@Jan 23 2005, 10:35 PM
im just askin so i can see ur shit
okay well thats fine, but like i said i usually like to just keep to myself on my shit...

that being said i&#39;m sure one of these days i&#39;ll end up posting flicks anyway. oh well... until that day...

o0 *diSc* 0o
01-23-2005, 10:44 PM
yup until then lol

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:50 PM
hahah well consider this an early christmas present. on my computer i found an old picture of a sketch from quite some time ago when i was first starting to play around with wildstyles...

oh, and anyone who wants to be "helpful", don&#39;t bother. this is from a long ass time ago when i was toying around, since then i&#39;ve figured the shit out by myself... but since he wanted to see something, here&#39;s something hahahahhaa....

http://img162.exs.cx/img162/4501/sketch1da.jpg

oh, and they&#39;re no fill, no 3D, no nothing because even back then i was like &#39;wow, this sucks too much shit to finish&#39; so i stopped working on it. hahaha hope you enjoyed the flick i posted for you

OoMaRzoO
01-23-2005, 10:56 PM
wow bumsuckfun ur a real cocky bastard and u prolly takin shit from someone else ur a fake until prove other wise

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 10:59 PM
if i write "HELLO MARZ MUCH LOVE FROM BUMSUCKFUN" on that sketch, take a picture of it, and post it here, will you give me &#036;50?

also how am i being cocky? is it me helping people? is that cocky? or was it me posting an old sketch and ripping on myself for being a toy at the time? because we all know how cocky it is when you rip on yourself like that...

Whip Lash
01-23-2005, 11:35 PM
http://img185.exs.cx/img185/6046/picture0053ls.jpg

Just been messing around alot today with different stuff.

What you guys think?

I like tags that are easy to read. Just because, there arn&#39;t any other writters in my city
only 16,000 people live here, there are people that do stuff at the skatepark
But not actually anyone that has a name and that you can walk around town and notice their work.

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 11:37 PM
i like the ZION tags that you posted before better... if you could like the ones you posted before but with a lower-case I instead of upper-case than i think they&#39;d be ready to go...

Whip Lash
01-23-2005, 11:45 PM
http://img166.exs.cx/img166/6346/picture0069gj.jpg

Like that?

Tails0nE
01-23-2005, 11:50 PM
Originally posted by OoMaRzoO@Jan 23 2005, 10:56 PM
wow bumsuckfun ur a real cocky bastard and u prolly takin shit from someone else ur a fake until prove other wise





hey shut up fucker cause he was the one helpin u out with your shit...



and zion that tags pretty ok... work on it a bit....


you&#39;ll get the hang of it...
i started out exacley like that.....

bumsuckfun
01-23-2005, 11:56 PM
Originally posted by Whip Lash@Jan 23 2005, 11:45 PM
http://img166.exs.cx/img166/6346/picture0069gj.jpg

Like that?
yah kind&#39;ve like that but with the same flow you had on the ones you posted earlier. it kinda had like a curve to your letters if you know what i mean... the ones before that is...

i&#39;d lose the X and just dot it with a vertical line.

and yeah, i guess there is ZION1 already... but i&#39;ll leave any decisions to you about name changes or adding a number or whatever it is you decide to do...

Whip Lash
01-23-2005, 11:56 PM
Originally posted by Tails0nE+Jan 23 2005, 11:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Tails0nE @ Jan 23 2005, 11:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-OoMaRzoO@Jan 23 2005, 10:56 PM
wow bumsuckfun ur a real cocky bastard and u prolly takin shit from someone else ur a fake until prove other wise





hey shut up fucker cause he was the one helpin u out with your shit...



and zion that tags pretty ok... work on it a bit....


you&#39;ll get the hang of it...
i started out exacley like that..... [/b][/quote]
Refering to the page with 3 tags or just the single one?

OoMaRzoO
01-24-2005, 12:04 AM
whip lash chill out im juss on edge i had some one close die tonight and for him to say my first piece of art was shit i got ticked off

Tails0nE
01-24-2005, 12:04 AM
Originally posted by Whip Lash+Jan 23 2005, 11:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Whip Lash @ Jan 23 2005, 11:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Tails0nE@Jan 23 2005, 11:50 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-OoMaRzoO@Jan 23 2005, 10:56 PM
wow bumsuckfun ur a real cocky bastard and u prolly takin shit from someone else ur a fake until prove other wise





hey shut up fucker cause he was the one helpin u out with your shit...



and zion that tags pretty ok... work on it a bit....


you&#39;ll get the hang of it...
i started out exacley like that.....
Refering to the page with 3 tags or just the single one? [/b][/quote]






the single one......

GeSuS_KRiST
01-24-2005, 12:06 AM
Originally posted by meks@Jan 22 2005, 07:02 PM
sorry about that these should be better sized, but still bad pics

http://img92.exs.cx/img92/7828/resized9rh.jpg

http://img92.exs.cx/img92/7246/resized27jz.jpg
... putting arrows and other extions DONT make your peice wildstyle

GeSuS_KRiST
01-24-2005, 12:10 AM
Originally posted by Phenom@Jan 22 2005, 11:59 PM
Heres a better pic of it..i think imma start tryin&#39; wildstyle....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v311/killamike/ThebigM.jpg
... u need to get good at regular clean letters to do wild style... u also neec to learn percet stright extions, need to know how to make EVERYthing VERY symetrical... my opinion have a few friends who do wildstyle... is not work on your normal style before u jump into anything it took them atleast 5 years before jumpin into it i suggest u do the same

Whip Lash
01-24-2005, 12:10 AM
Originally posted by OoMaRzoO@Jan 24 2005, 12:04 AM
whip lash chill out im juss on edge i had some one close die tonight and for him to say my first piece of art was shit i got ticked off
I wasn&#39;t pissed at you or anything. I was quoting tailsone.

bumsuckfun
01-24-2005, 12:10 AM
Originally posted by OoMaRzoO+Jan 24 2005, 12:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (OoMaRzoO &#064; Jan 24 2005, 12:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> whip lash chill out im juss on edge i had some one close die tonight and for him to say my first piece of art was shit i got ticked off [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-bumsuckfun
yah man i wasn&#39;t dissing, i was just telling you what i think would look better, and in the case of the 3D doing a normal shadow style 3D is the only way you&#39;re going to pull it off on the streets.*

it&#39;s alrite for your first throw up, but i think you should definately keep working on it before you plaster your town with it..[/quote]

is that where i called your throwup shit? i was telling you straight up how things work on the streets and you can&#39;t pull off throwups with fancy 3Ds and drips in the background and all that. it ruins the point of a throwup. its supposed to be quick and easy to get your name up, nothing else.

but if you want to call me out on being a cocky bastard than i WILL be a cocky bastard to you. now, tomorrow when i get my digital camera back i&#39;m gonna write a message to you on my shitty-ass sketch so that i can clear that up and prove you wrong...

and if your looking for beef i&#39;ll more than happily have a sketch battle with you. hell, we could both even sketch &#39;MARZ&#39; so that i can kill you at your own shit...

i hate to sound like a dick, but in the graff game you&#39;ll learn that if you&#39;re hating beef comes quick... and i&#39;m sorry about the passing of your loved one.

peace,
-BSF

k2s
01-24-2005, 12:11 AM
http://img187.exs.cx/img187/4271/dscn01034qn.jpghttp://img187.exs.cx/img187/8002/dscn01010bv.jpgsome feeback plz http://img172.exs.cx/img172/5862/dscn01008ec.jpg

OoMaRzoO
01-24-2005, 12:12 AM
a but what did u think of it. it was my first throw up

PANIC!FUP_MORE...
01-24-2005, 12:13 AM
work on your 3-d..nice colors though..(directed torwards the nik)

i cant wait til i get my camera back from si2...i wanna post my current throwies :D