Freestyle Rapping

[KoreTwo]

The kid is wack. Smack.

[FailOne]

Ya Dj's WEAK! Arthritis When He Spins I Got A Flow So Sick, I Cause Bronchitis When I Spit/ The Coat Hanger Abortionist Flip Scripts Like An Acrobatic Contortionist/A Horrible Gift For Liftin Demonic Spirits Outta The Depths Off 666/Elevating Past Molten Mountains And Charred Cliffs/Leave Necks Slit Like Jack The Rippers Chinked Eyes After Hittin The Spliff/A Mic Beast I Recon/ Combine Iller Scripts Then George Lucas With A Cancerous Yeast Infection, With The Profession Of Leaving The Weak Restin In Heaven/Correction/Affectin Soundwaves That Bring Pain Like Aids And A Ear Infection/Dismember Limbs, On Some Jeffery Dalhmer Shit/Morbid Like A Power Drill To The Back Of Ya Lid/I Hold Your Life In My Hands Better Place Ya Highest Bid/Puff Reefer The Reeper/Breath Ether/Pump Speakers Notice Features Missed By, Your Average Emcee/(Slash) Preacher


Some off the top ish, Not my best but whatever

[mag.oner]

;) Fail ones mad fag, Throwsup a bad tag

[sketch3]

no beef fail one..just a friendly challenge to battle.

fail one has failed more than twice,in his pathetic life,
stab u with a fork an spoon,fuck a knife,that shits quick, im not that nice/
fail one is a frial one,slap u,ur momma and ur godson,if u had one/
oh shit i for got ur sister,
got my sniper ready but i guese i missed her,
out of ammo oh well ill pistol whip her,
that fucking ex stripper,got sacked cuss shes too fat,
bent the pole when i saw her slip,grabed it,try to stablise her weight,
she couldnt get layed if she was date raped,
couldnt pay me to fuck her if u was bill gates,
if u wanna battle ull get slaughterd like a buthcers cattle,
im a physco,had shrinks from london to siattle,
i caused pain to fraiser crain,
and he was glad even said cheers for makeing me shed tears,
my lyrics on another leval,u no were near,
ill give u concreat feet an kick u off the end of a pier,
watch u sink like decaprio at the end of the titanic,
i got mad skills cuss my vocabs gigantic,


ok fail one no beef just a lttle freestyle and u were just the first name i could think to ryme.also sorry for the bad puncutation.cant be botherd to fix my commas for a freestyle
and sorry if u do have a fat ex stripper for a sister or even just a normal sister.i didnt mean any of it

[FailOne]

Reply To Sketch3, Quick shit

FailOne, every word is Like A Sawed Off Shotgun/Puncture Your Fuckin Lung, Not Cause I Hate Ya, Just For Fun/Fuck Throwin A Punchline.. Your Already Done/Son Those Bars Were A Waste Of Space/Im Face To Face With That Faggot From Will And Grace/Stickin A Dick In A Little Boy Like You Aint Got No Time To Waste/O.D'in Of Semen,Fiendin For A Challenge I'll Leave Ya Bleedin, Lost Without A Win.. Your Talking To The Kingpin Flipin Words Like You Wouldn’t Believe Like Dictionaries On A Trampoline Show No Love To Wannabe G's/Scripts Leave Ya Ravaged Taking Advantage Of Canadians Gay Marriages Carryin Out A Weddin Proposal/I Rip Up your trash like a garbage disposal/Ya On Some 8Mile Shit You Fake Ass Poppa Doc/I Rock The Spot/On Lock/Rise To The Top While You Steadily Drop Like Pac When He Was Shot/Invading your brain got your mind starting to rot a sucker for the cock way before ya fuckin balls dropped/What was that 2 years ago? Your Grammar Tells Me Your 15/Guess What Motherfucker? You Just Got Your Ass Kicked Clean,This Reality Kid..Though it is similar to a bad dream/You Can Kick and claw..No One Will Hear Ya Muffled Screams

[sketch3]

nice shit ,


but u say im popa doc,well let me tell u one off his lines,
'i like u,thats y i didnt wanna b the one u commit suicide to'/
ur shit sounds like a half baked oriental hi qu/
and if it is 8 mile then u better lose ur self in the moment,
cuss if i find u ur gunna wish u shot urself inthe head like cheeder bob/
and wats this shit about my balls not droped,
only way that wud happen is if ur mums noded off,sucking ma cock/
shes got a grip on ma ballbag tighter than the one u had on ur dad,
befor he left ur mum and ur ass for over weight mexican hu pumps gas/
his name was lopez,heard he gave ur dad some dope head/
but i digress,
u may have puncterd my lung,but i carved a fuckin hole in ur chest/
i hope u was telling the truth bout this not being ur best,
cuss if u lieing son,
ill stamp on ur nose,leave it bleeding like hos without tampons/
or a maxi pad,scantily clad,the male ones be fuckin ur dad,
cuss lopez gives u head insted/
fuck it time to switch style,
look at ur bars,nice try but ur tryin to hard/
leave u and ur crew scared,get shot like biggie and tupac/
yes i did just ryme about the death of tupac shakur/
kick down ur front door,leave u bankcrupt,break ur jaw/
ull get shanked up by a nerd in a tank top/

[TalibKweli]

oh snap....lemme get on some of this hur ish :lol:


when it comes to bars, i drop them non stop
the only noises i hear when i spit is your girls pussy pop
tank top, short jeans, g string showing
bitches like that are only good for a fuck n disposing
i stick a pregnant bitch and make the fetus suck my dick
dont need to say anything else bitch I KNOW IM SICK
if the baby swallows, then its a 3 on 1, you give birth to your lil girl and my baby son
just for fun, does anyone wanna provoke me?
i ll run up and bitch slap you while you're doing your grocery
LISTEN, im not one to front, but you know my lines are tighter then a virgins cunt
LISTEN, im not one to act tough, but we know you got that scar from suckin dick and your mouth wasnt wide enough
i pack power, my wrists i be strainin em
punch you in the dome and turn that shit to a stadium
my times up even though there was no time limit
try to catch up or if you can even stay with it


peace

[sketch3]

look t this homo,only spoke to the bozo cuss his sig had a pic of pogo.

lol

[FailOne]

Blind With Devine Lines Compiled Of Victims Spines/Divide And Conquer With Honor The Verbal Monster Of Absurd Words Unheard By The Average Herb/Your Less Then One Third Of This Apparent Style/ No Known Parallel Rival/Survival Is Minimal Skill Divisible To 1 Divided By Nill..To Nothing, Crushing Then Rushing Supposed Mic Kings Do The Right Thing And Quit Before My Rhymes Strike Like Lightning



...Now im just throwing down snippits from some shit i gotta record tuesday.


I'll thrown down a reply when i get home from work

[sketch3]

yea ur rhymes strike like lightnig,few and far between,u a loser on the hip hop scene,mine r like thunder,u know there coming and still under, prepeared times one hundread,on the mike i neva blunder,this shit off the top my head,u had sit and ponder,plunder ur writens for something worth spitten,ur flows sound like a fat man shittin a kitten...
just of the top ish,ill have a seriouse response wen get at me.also ur a recording artist,i feel stupid challenging u now,

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by sketch3@Feb 3 2007, 03:18 PM
look t this homo,only spoke to the bozo cuss his sig had a pic of pogo.

lol
:o all this time i thought i had an e friend!



i dont trust this internet anymore

:lol:

[sketch3]

no i just wanted u to respond so i cud see pogo...btw were is he in ur sig? theres allways space for a pug

[TalibKweli]

booyah

[sketch3]

pogos back baby. u can quoat me on that

[Urban Ninja]

yo tick tac toe, three in a row, barney got shot by a G I Joe, whoop barneys dead whoop whoop barneys dead

[scr3w]

yo yo **** ****.

half the kids in this thread can even afford hoes
thats why this thread deserves a close.

[role]

my rhymes are so bad i gotta rock em on the internet
i like the time to think while i type the shit

[ShIfTeD]

role just busted a nut...get up and shut up

youve been writin for a while

now its time to get filed

you crit people like your somthin hot

you smell like a cock

sir your gonna get knocked

me and buttons want to go to the mall

you need to get your ass up and give me a call

i feel like i just riped my draws

oh no time to itch balls

[TalibKweli]

the only time i ever fuck up is when your girls on top

[MASTE2]

Whose;
Tight chained wrists led pleadin' fifths,
"No apologies, sir,"
And thus he emptied his clips.

It's time to get real like some kind of news flash
Because he's whack, those lines were some sort of car crash.
Now stand up your rhymes in columns and rows
Lemme shoot em on down;
And separate poetry from prose.

[TalibKweli]

you should be euthanized

[Viate]

anyone wanna battle? lets do this shiet. go first

[Urban Ninja]

Originally posted by KARE 2 ELABERATE@Nov 10 2004, 08:16 PM
heres azn emcee crying after i cut his bike chain last year :(

http://img8.exs.cx/img8/5931/cryingchinesemanwithbrokenbicyclecart.jpg
ahahah

[ILuvHoodRats]

here i go first to the bottom of the page
verse 1 my thirst of blood increase my rage
yo , im spittin on my keyboard like i would like do it on the mic i sit
in front of this screen screaming licking and bitchin ill kill it
im quick like an addict i smack like cannabis im harder than ill bill
ill kill you first and suicide after , kill you again then send you the bill
bombingscience is tired , give it a break
im the pain relief for it , im the devil for you im gonna streak
die , im not done but youll let me finish

[syrup2]

Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats@Mar 4 2007, 05:32 PM
here i go first to the bottom of the page
verse 1 my thirst of blood increase my rage
yo , im spittin on my keyboard like i would like do it on the mic i sit
in front of this screen screaming licking and bitchin ill kill it
im quick like an addict i smack like cannabis im harder than ill bill
ill kill you first and suicide after , kill you again then send you the bill
bombingscience is tired , give it a break
im the pain relief for it , im the devil for you im gonna streak
die , im not done but youll let me finish
why are u rapping like a slipknot song
get that stick out your ass , cuz u acting like somthings wrong
talkin bout screaming lickin and sucide
whats with all this sad shit cuz
who died ?
this a graffiti website
not vampire freaks
pick up two cans
and dont come back for a week

[AteskOne]

syrup owned....

[syrup2]

thats right ****
west coast!!!
lol

[snap_pxc]

Aayo we passed the point, plus out intelligence is elligant
we up to par, now beef? Let's go settle this
I ain't gon let em slip, I got barretta clips
Treat u like a limb u stick out, get severed bitch
I'm known for tricks in the streets and rockin' dope beats
and hangin with my clique always smokin' the reef
and if u thought wrong go and percive to see
the real g's that's runnin the streets
bundles of e get's mixed with the weed
now let's get it over the border so we can just cut it with speed uh
looks like u thought wrong now just believe
that Gray's these streets rep a fuckin grimey MC

[ILuvHoodRats]

Originally posted by syrup2@Mar 4 2007, 11:57 PM
thats right ****
west coast!!!
lol
nice job dude , ur good haha , i havent rapped in a while .. next time :D

[syrup2]

haha fo sho im up for the battle
im glad people are actually rapping in here
instead of saying how much evreyone sucks

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by snap_pxc@Mar 5 2007, 10:18 AM
Aayo we passed the point, plus out intelligence is elligant
we up to par, now beef? Let's go settle this
I ain't gon let em slip, I got barretta clips
Treat u like a limb u stick out, get severed bitch
I'm known for tricks in the streets and rockin' dope beats
and hangin with my clique always smokin' the reef
and if u thought wrong go and percive to see
the real g's that's runnin the streets
bundles of e get's mixed with the weed
now let's get it over the border so we can just cut it with speed uh
looks like u thought wrong now just believe
that Gray's these streets rep a fuckin grimey MC
leave the gangsta raps for myspace. keep this shit hip-hop.

why are all kid's rhyming about rounds and guns.
i'll straight up kill a cat with just my profounded puns.
no need to be pretend or claim that i'm something i'm not.
just by writing my name i got twice the fame that you got.
when your ass is shot and slayen in the street.
no one with ever remember a word you said over a beat.
but when i die of some unholy unnatural cause.
I'll be remembered forever with my name written in stars.
no one remembers you if your life was worthless.
drop that gangsta shit and find yourself some meaning and purpose.

[chelsea]

^ that was awesome mad props

[AteskOne]

hahaha and whadda you think you know about e...
my boy ratik eats enough pills to out weigh me.

dont gimme credit for this one it was ratiks line...

[esstyle]

haha didn't even realise there was a freestyle thread...


i rattle cages like rattlesnakes in battle stages
my pages turn famous faces into the faceless
once a rapper spit a line and thought he got me stuck
but that makes less sense then homeless men with coffee cups
my indestrucible flow is enough to propose a first class pass to gettin snuffed with a blow
so when a rapper menstruates i wont hesitate to educate his ass when he try ta flow
predicate to set a date and get over-medicated and put you in a more vegetated state than idaho
you wack faggets betta get flak jackets cuz gat tactics aint gonna hack it when im comin with black masks
and sprayin you with mad gases, scratchin a match on the back of a match packet
castin a shadow on every rapper askin to battle
blastin a gat'll only get killed you faster than cattle
so you can eat my entire fist
cuz i rock more sessions than a psychiatrist

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

Originally posted by esstyle@Mar 5 2007, 11:17 PM
haha didn't even realise there was a freestyle thread...


i rattle cages like rattlesnakes in battle stages
my pages turn famous faces into the faceless
once a rapper spit a line and thought he got me stuck
but that makes less sense then homeless men with coffee cups
my indestrucible flow is enough to propose a first class pass to gettin snuffed with a blow
so when a rapper menstruates i wont hesitate to educate his ass when he try ta flow
predicate to set a date and get over-medicated and put you in a more vegetated state than idaho
you wack faggets betta get flak jackets cuz gat tactics aint gonna hack it when im comin with black masks
and sprayin you with mad gases, scratchin a match on the back of a match packet
castin a shadow on every rapper askin to battle
blastin a gat'll only get killed you faster than cattle
so you can eat my entire fist
cuz i rock more sessions than a psychiatrist
you got a dope style - kudos for that shit

[AteskOne]

lay down a few bars for us spirit. let's hear what you got.

[snap_pxc]

Aayo I ain't gonna lie dawg u spittin' hot fire
but you judgement is fo sho in dire
need of some evaluation,
sayin I cant spit about guns
when I grew up in tha slums
gettin that chedda mang, makin mu'fuckaz run
who the fuck r u to critisize my dope ass rhymes
I'll burn ya like a toaster bitch, with out even tryin'
I'm flyin, you lyin, dien', tryin to cop a piece of my shit
so think again before u tell me how the fuck I should spit!

[AteskOne]

haha you think that was hot fire, i was only begining.
i hoped to educate you, and in turn end this pretending.
because i'm fucking tired of hearing teens all making the same claims.
educated by public knowledge and it's driving me insane.
but when it's all said and done and it's only you and me.
i'd rather it come to a battle with a kid who's hit puberty.
because i dont find a challenge in destroying preteens.
who need to start counting their blessings and reading between,
the lines and not spend so much time concentrating on script.
i dont give a fuck wether you bloods, kings, or the crips.
i make you question your upbringing when rip at a throat.
coughing up lungies yelling fuck singing, i'd rather scream what i wrote.
at the top of lungs i'll be heard in ever ghetto and hood.
yelling "YOU'LL ETHER BE EDUCATED, OR SHOT WHERE YOU STOOD."
now it's all over and you wonder who's "toast".
you thought this was breakfast in reality it's a roast.

[Albert Fish]

your flows not bad but dont let your head get big
you only got a little style, like the people in your sig

[yoda]

ohhhh!

[yoda]

emotions are bombs lying deep with the heart..
inconcealable like the scent of a fart..
through the art..
is the only remedy..
clever and smartness my cure for the insanity..

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

oh wtf.. is there a speed racer in the house!?!?! i thought you were a writer...

[snap_pxc]

Yeah, ur tryin to front on me like i'm some little kid
muthafucka i was down before they shot Pac & BIG
Your right, I ain't hit puberty yet sadly,
but your a fucking clown and I'm still older then ur daddy
this is Round 3 bitch those first 2 were the test
when it comes to ya flow, cat I'm impressed
but think before you frontin in the wild wild west
slugs is piercin ur breast, rippin ya chest
how long it take u to find out that I kick it the best
But yo I didnt know u before this battle,
And I ain't got beef
I just wanna take this time to clarify
that news to you chief
I'm rockin some fly-ass beats, I can tell u do too
but i'm for serious, get out tha way when I'm steppin thru!

[esstyle]

yo fuck all this chit chat im a do this the fun way
this kids idea of steppin up is models on a runway
dont make me show you what i can do with this knife
cuz this young mutha fucka neva seen a pube in his life
ill drop a few real quick just to cook up the beef more
cuz none yall can scare me when your weapons a keyboard
cuz if any you kids try an diss me or spit one track,
ill treat you like ya girl, pull out and give you a cum back



lol

[syrup2]

Originally posted by esstyle@Mar 6 2007, 06:43 PM
yo fuck all this chit chat im a do this the fun way
this kids idea of steppin up is models on a runway
dont make me show you what i can do with this knife
cuz this young mutha fucka neva seen a pube in his life
ill drop a few real quick just to cook up the beef more
cuz none yall can scare me when your weapons a keyboard
cuz if any you kids try an diss me or spit one track,
ill treat you like ya girl, pull out and give you a cum back



lol
models on a runway ?
could this get any more weaker
sounds like a rhyme from the 50 cent beaker
scinteficly proven
these cats cant rhyme
why would you hold the knife
when u could hold a can
the only reason u acting hard
is because no one was there to hold your hand
**** u got a issue but i aint gonna give u a tissue

theres more to this thread then dissing other peoples rap
but ima continue untel they stop with this prewriten crap

[fredom-writer]

GRAFFITI IS STILL HIP HOP!!!!!!!!!!!

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by snap_pxc@Mar 6 2007, 09:45 AM
Yeah, ur tryin to front on me like i'm some little kid
muthafucka i was down before they shot Pac & BIG
Your right, I ain't hit puberty yet sadly,
but your a fucking clown and I'm still older then ur daddy
this is Round 3 bitch those first 2 were the test
when it comes to ya flow, cat I'm impressed
but think before you frontin in the wild wild west
slugs is piercin ur breast, rippin ya chest
how long it take u to find out that I kick it the best
But yo I didnt know u before this battle,
And I ain't got beef
I just wanna take this time to clarify
that news to you chief
I'm rockin some fly-ass beats, I can tell u do too
but i'm for serious, get out tha way when I'm steppin thru!
i refuse to move or even budge from your path.
"it will take an uzi to move me", not a kick in the ass.
cause your wreckless words are nothing to me but tiresome bother.
cause with your elementary rhymes, there's no way you're as old as my father.
Pac and Big are probably as old school as you've heard.
why you on a graf site man, cause you've obviously never written a word.
talking about that gangsta shit doesnt get you fame or even noticed.
i'm known because i spit a cloud of pollution and have the most malicious of motives.
because i dont gotta be gangsta to make full grown men cower in shame.
because my loathful lyrics are a little to difficult to recieve and retain.
i think i lost you this round so let me explain.
the name's Malicious Motives, and i dont play fun and game.

[syrup2]

Originally posted by fredom-writer+Mar 6 2007, 09:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fredom-writer @ Mar 6 2007, 09:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by syrup2@Mar 6 2007, 08:40 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-esstyle@Mar 6 2007, 06:43 PM
yo fuck all this chit chat im a do this the fun way
this kids idea of steppin up is models on a runway
dont make me show you what i can do with this knife
cuz this young mutha fucka neva seen a pube in his life
ill drop a few real quick just to cook up the beef more
cuz none yall can scare me when your weapons a keyboard
cuz if any you kids try an diss me or spit one track,
ill treat you like ya girl, pull out and give you a cum back



lol
models on a runway ?
could this get any more weaker
sounds like a rhyme from the 50 cent beaker
scinteficly proven
these cats cant rhyme
why would you hold the knife
when u could hold a can
the only reason u acting hard
is because no one was there to hold your hand
**** u got a issue but i aint gonna give u a tissue

theres more to this thread then dissing other peoples rap
but ima continue untel they stop with this prewriten crap



The battle rap thread.

nice diss, but i think you stumbled.
that can and hand shit you coulda mumbled.
but this online hip hop is just so digital.
still typeing rap with crap, is so original :rolleyes:


as my tag's spread like the flu.
like crips did with blue.
im so bad ill be in your mind like glue.
who is that masked man... i dont have a clue?!

to bitches im mysterious.
but I aint to serious,
i play romantic and i look like a ray of light
then they mad cause i come home diffrent hours of the night.
they wit me just for the thrill of fright,
the thrill of my life.

so endin off with a bite from austin powers
is like you practicing for hours.
to be a rap "singer"
wile im hittin the sack with all the mamis givin em the gold finger. [/b][/quote]
cuzz please quit with those weak ass lines
you faker then ketchup that wasent made by heinz
your tags spread like a nuns legs
..not at all
trying to fuck with mj but homie u cant ball !!
blue with glue **** whats wrong with you ?

who is the masked man
apprenlty a bitch ass mark
who uses toy handstyles as a form of art

oh and you getting the finger alirght
but its up your ass
Im not gonna hate you might need the cash

[ShIfTeD]

okay, you both bust rhymes that sound like heavenly chimes
get with the mixation makes ya take 5
boi give me a five, take it down low
these so called taggers better step back before they catch tho hoe
doctor prescribed
one at a time
the doc says the symptoms are red face, wet p****, and a double tie tied
whats that you ask?
dont even know
why dont ya go ask ya momma, she was lettin me know
why you and your lil cuz were tryin to spit
the only thing ya doin is spittin on some raspy lyrical shit

not tryin to dis
but please step back from the beef and the hiss
you might catch the hoe, as i was sayin earlier
get inside ya head like a drill with the fever

[AteskOne]

syrup owned again. just give up by now freedom.

[syrup2]

u on some mf doom shit cuz

[chelsea]

damn syrup owned that shit...

[AteskOne]

me...ugh. i like doom's music but i dont really wanna be recognized with it. i dont know not really my style. i like to think i got my own style. i love using mad alliteration if you couldnt tell lol....mayb that's why because he also uses alliteration alot in his rhymes.

[syrup2]

i can dig mf doom
i use to be heavy into him
i still am hes style kinda speaks to me
although his lyrics sometimes are
too fucking random

[AteskOne]

definitely know what you mean. and he's too happy for my style. and stupid at times.

[fredom-writer]

ok ok nice mice

[TalibKweli]

you guys sound like retards having seizures
not one decent bar from anyone

[Kayone707]

chapstick, chapstick gotta find my chapstick
driving through traffic.
theres a ford mavrick
http://www.kidzworld.com/img/upload/article/a3073i0_brad_shondra185x149W.jpg

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Mar 7 2007, 06:01 PM
chapstick, chapstick gotta find my chapstick
driving through traffic.
theres a ford mavrick
http://www.kidzworld.com/img/upload/article/a3073i0_brad_shondra185x149W.jpg
million dollar rhyme right thur son
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/3820/pimpincatmd0.jpg
v unit soldjahs
we roll right
we roll tight
where's you girl?
with me aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight

[Kayone707]

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/7019/cdxl3.jpg

[GeSuS_KRiST]

HAHAHAHAHHAHA

[TalibKweli]

we turn platinum plaques into scrap metal
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6973/punjabiar8.jpg

[AteskOne]

well now that we got that over with...on with the freestyles? ;)

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

this kids gone dumb, checked in the clinic, i'll even give u back the refund
"i don't like oriental bitches except for lucy lui"
let me flip that, whose the one who said i'm madd cute?
shit, and i can even bust kung-fu too
fuck your messages and test this
you begged me for a throw up and ran outta' luck
all around wack, i don't make fan signs, did i make u sad?
u don't write graffiti, you really just suck@that
the last time you "graphed" somethin' was in mathclass
i'm just bein' dope, a lethal injection, now u comin off tryin' to be my reflection?!
so what if i'm a chick? more manly and mature, all this time you've securely been on my dick, you've nurtured :]
you're only mad@me cause' IM writing_spirit BITCH!!!
yeah, in your motha fuckin' face, coulda' given me your digits but u gave me your myspace!!!
i'm laughen cause this shit is goin' oscars, such a trashy waste
lookin@my photos i'm past erotic, the last chickenhead you fucked was pre-ejaculate
my style, my asian pursuasion is antipcipatin' makin' u cum buckets
and bump what u think about me, you'll be easy to beat, just how i'm sprayin' u with verbal graffiti
i'm the only chick in this war like mulan, so don't fuck with it
go ahead n doubt me, but you already know how the movie ended
i'll just give u headaches all day, have u recieven' some narcotics cause' i'm showin' u pain
i'll brooke out like the real world mtv, "DON'T YOU EVER TALK TO ME LIKE THAT EVER AGAIN"<- see....

fuck it, whatever... you know i'm fuckin' right.. and i don't care if u think im a bitch.. please go back and re-read the pm's u sent me.. and i quote, "yes, i did msg u first" but that's because u questioned me if i was a boy or a girl... ignore me? like u can.. i bet you're so heated, hahahaha.. fawkkkk!! if u want somethin' outta' me, bring it.. oh man, just like how u said it... how dumb can u be... i'm smart for a girl huh?? REACT: don't get mad, get glad, only from gladware... hahaha, shit.. ok ok.. ill stop.. oh, one more thing... peace!

[ShIfTeD]

oh snap back up then get smacked
wack a** s**** comin in, in a sack
fact: your crew is black
fact: my crew is white
racial segregation fightin over whats right
black power comin atcha with the 9
white power comin atcha with the flower power sign
put down the words and let it all go
dont sweat what ya heard, act like ya know
takin back words with the pen i keep style...
runnin round town with ill handstyle
bleedin my thought right onto the surface
its surfaced...all of these rhymes i keep mine
close to the side, where do i reside?
f*** where you came from, but how ya came up
give it up, give it up, give it up yup
chicago city flowin like you didnt even know
what i had to go through, you would despise my flow
kick thread gods?
so says the man in black sayin wow his shoes is crack
i step up to the plate and give the man a whack
nah they aint crack
nah they aint wack
somthin that will keep ya side and stay ya self fresh
i get it with the dunk 1 sb's and a 5
like i said earlier on i come from chicago
you, you come from yonder
who cares ya ponder?
i agree then step it up with the one and only father
with god as my witness your crew is straight dull

get ill

[swich]

true to the game, women sayin im insane
swich one commin through still droppin candy paint
like rain on ya lane
all the same gettin brain
blood stains on my grain
run trains on ya dame
see in the type of **** keep my mind on my figgas
and my nine get the trigga pulled bak over strippas
lay her down and dick her
pistol whip her then i flip her
swich one the hopeless one nah i aint no bitch ****
ima get sum dollaz makin hoes go holla
make ya ass drop down then my screens will folla
mayne im a balla u can tell by my rocks in my drop nonstop takin shots at the cops
double barretas got u cheesin liek chedda
nobody is betta than the followin lettas
S-W-I-C-H one
now show respect 4 the hopeless one...

[DNA1]

a mastermind behind this lyrical burner,
try ta touch this get knocked on ya ass and smacked like tina turner
the flow neva get touched, a ghost of this rap shit,
verbal hurricane comin thru,destryoin you mad quick
asassinate you with vocals, a hitman of the rhymes,
put two bars in ya frame and leave ya ass flat lined
when i come thru yo hood bombin shit like iraq,
i leave people breathless like an atshma attack
ima murder the mic, i'll kill it like jack the ripper,
leave ya ass frozen like you wearin shorts in the winter
i dont give a fuck about you phony ass fake rappers,
better step down and let this shit be done by the masters
politicians say we vandals and we need to be stopped,
i say go, who gives a shit about lawyers and cops
without graffiti id be hustlin coke or get shot
this shits savin my life, dont fuckin tell me to stop

[ILuvHoodRats]

im a white kid behind a computer
im gonna tell you, do not play with the revolver
naw u did , i told you , but u did it
fuck that long paragraph shit , i keep it simple
see you aint no chick , you aint no writing spirit
im so hard to buff i do write on your weak shit
im humpin on yo rhymes its hard on your mental
make me cum a bucket ?
the only cum you get is from mister pricket.
but fuck it , keep my name out of your dental
anyway , your gonna keep your style to a minimal
quit this shit , this aint a barbie forum
you better go get your ass back to the asylum

[sketch3]

I will only go back to the asylum, if the lunatics have taken controle,
i will only stop rymin, wen my lyrics have taken ur soul, there cold,
cuss i dont spit fire,or use similer tierd, clicheas,like the phrases
'ur mamma'and 'ur gay' i got more intelegent things to say,
i wish u wud have told me this wasnt the barbie fourm,
cuss i thought if i disslocated, ur arm,i could pop it back in place,
and i definetly wouldnt have held that lighter to ur face,
cuss ur so shit i didnt know u was part of the human race,
u looked like an action figure i used to own,
tied himm to a firework,and watched his legs get blown,

[ILuvHoodRats]

If you would only know whats listenin'
you wouldve noticed that im talkin to the asian
aint no firework shit , im crackin it all
your rhymes are lightweight i throw them like basketball
even with my legs blown im still kickin you far
i fucking told you dont mess with the revolver
come at me if you want a war , ill bring the good bars
this isnt a diss-race
before talkin shit on the human race
make sure your not a disgrace
cause im all up in your face.
peace

[snap_pxc]

most of u need to stop and think about what rappin is
half the shit on this page doesnt even fuckin rhyme come on

[ILuvHoodRats]

i do double rhymes
are
do
are
do

are
do
do
are

U SEE?

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats@Mar 10 2007, 04:56 PM
If you would only know whats listenin'
you wouldve noticed that im talkin to the asian
aint no firework shit , im crackin it all
your rhymes are lightweight i throw them like basketball
even with my legs blown im still kickin you far
i fucking told you dont mess with the revolver
come at me if you want a war , ill bring the good bars
this isnt a diss-race
before talkin shit on the human race
make sure your not a disgrace
cause im all up in your face.
peace

i can see u dropped me a few frees, but why are you acting like i said something towards you? i have beef with>>>"react!" so don't try to start anything with me. but you already have, so i don't really care. you're just on the wrong person. and yeah, i know i'm not getting any respect cause i'm a chick on here. so what? but don't try and come inbetween cause you don't know what happend.. the part about me bein' asian, this kid made a racist comment to me, and im not here tryin to fuckin diss on any race.. get your story fuckin' straight - did i mess with the revolver?! fuck.. you're so dangerous.. come@ you if i want a war? you stated that yourself, there's no war.. btw... don't matter..

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

ahhh.. my rhymes must have touched your heart for you to come back like that ;]

thanks, i appreciate it... peace right back@ ya -

[Sumoe]

I'm asian... <_< :lol:

[emel]

Yakuza, mass murderer
Friends who got the dirt on her
Foes who never heard of her wildstyle
My mouth gone to train up
I spit Krylon in 5 colors
When I speak I spray my name up

Jean Grey right?

[emel]

Originally posted by emel@Mar 10 2007, 09:13 PM
Yakuza, mass murderer
Friends who got the dirt on her
Foes who never heard of her wildstyle
My mouth gone to train up
I spit Krylon in 5 colors
When I speak I spray my name up

Jean Grae right?
Yakuza, mass murderer
Friends who got the dirt on her
Foes who never heard of her wildstyle
My mouth gone to train up
I spit Krylon in 5 colors
When I speak I spray my name up

Jean Grae right?

SHIT DOUBLE post sorta...

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

yup.. jean grae it shore izzzz...

sumoe, what type of asian are u?

[Sumoe]

Filipino. B)

[ILuvHoodRats]

Originally posted by WritinG_SPIRIT@Mar 10 2007, 09:11 PM
ahhh.. my rhymes must have touched your heart for you to come back like that ;]

thanks, i appreciate it... peace right back@ ya -
OMG if you would only read the post that was dedicated to you
you would seem a little more intelligent to me
but your not
i dont even wanna answer and kick your ass you dont worth it
damn girl , learn how to read
and get your feet back to earth , thats fucking annoying
your not god
and u just suck at rappin
get a life purple bitch
that wasnt a freestyle
i think you got more attention than you needed today
good night













eat me.

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

there u go, got u heated... plus, you're only on here to talk smack. that's alright - and i was being sarcastic about the whole i touched your heart shit.. dam, calm the fuNk down... do u need prozac?! take a fuckin' joke! haha shit, you came off so hard... just how you thought you dissed me.. dam, you're hella hurt! i don't give if u call me names, you're hurtin' inside foreal

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

oh snap!! and you re-edited your post.. you are one funny kid...

[ILuvHoodRats]

look
im just fucking annoyed cause you fucking think your a fucking goddess
i just cant take it anymore
yeah i edited my post
cause even with a fucking 10 line reply you dont understand that you gotta SHUT THE FUCK UP sometimes
thatss not because your a girl that you can rule the world
so fuck you and have a nice day

[bustedbearings]

I type fast, my rhymes last, make you have another way to get the time passed.
Forget Asian, I'm Caucasion, these freestylers can't touch my 2 cents,
After a dope line, you haven't been the same since,
You can't comprehend my spit on your monitor,
So I'll flow you windex to erase what I've left a blur.
I ain't got no beef with no one, I'm a newbie on this forum
I'm just freezing in Alaska and trying to cure my boredom.
But fuck if you diss me cuz my rhymes are cold as my backyard,
Busted Bearings Biotch, left you lyrically feathered and tarred.
Retards...

How's that?

[ILuvHoodRats]

i like it good flow .. i like the monitor thing too :D

[WritinG_SPIRIT]

Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats@Mar 10 2007, 11:58 PM
look
im just fucking annoyed cause you fucking think your a fucking goddess
i just cant take it anymore
yeah i edited my post
cause even with a fucking 10 line reply you dont understand that you gotta SHUT THE FUCK UP sometimes
thatss not because your a girl that you can rule the world
so fuck you and have a nice day
it's okay that my jokes make you mad
if u think i'm a goddess, it must be true
"i can't take it anymore"<<<whose goin back to the asylum?
and i will have a nice day, make sure you take your pills

[bustedbearings]

Originally posted by ILuvHoodRats@Mar 11 2007, 12:03 AM
i like it good flow .. i like the monitor thing too :D
Thanks, I haven't written anything in a while.

[AteskOne]

you had me at...

Originally posted by WritinG_SPIRIT@Mar 9 2007, 08:16 PM
my style, my asian pursuasion is antipcipatin' makin' u cum buckets

:lol:.

[swich]

i got the flame thatll have ya left in the rain
no lie when i supply still grippin on grain
untame swichin lanes get brain from the dames
insane whos to blame well maybe the pain
sliden on chrome from the top of the dome
sendin enemies home prone to get stoned
close with the toast bost for the coast
host with the most still tippin on fo's
hos got ta know im the king of the south
listne to the mouth that spit dry like a drought
hoes split there legs like moses the ocean
foam at the mouth from my utter devotion....

[Jroc1993]

that was some hot shit rite there! post up some more swich yur crazy

[AteskOne]

are you joking. you're both are idiots. that sucked ass. just throwing as many words as he could that rhymed into one line. that gives it a stop and go feel which is retarded. besides the fact he's using fucking common words with like one million words that rhyme with them...such as: pain- rain, spain, cane, plain, brain, stain, lane.
you could come up with millions of rhymes off the word which just means you have no skill, originality, of creativity.

jroc1993's (which i'm guessing 93 is the year you were born in which makes you what..13, 14) opinion is exactly why modern mainstream rap sucks cock.




we need to start educating our youth <_< .

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 18 2007, 04:59 PM
are you joking. you're both are idiots.
we need to start educating our youth <_< .
i dont know you alot
but you my friend know what's the real deal


swich, swich, swich

you still tryin to keystyle? :lol:

sad

[Jroc1993]

Atesk dont assume i dont know good rap just cuz im 13, but now that i read it again, it aint all that great but it sounds like most of the stuff comin from the south

[syrup2]

and thats why the south is for fat black guys and white suprmicist

[Jroc1993]

well i aint black or a white supremacist, but some of the stuff comin outta the south aint that bad

[Sumoe]

eh I'm not to keen on Southern Rap, Scarface was aight though...

Atesk puttin dudes in they place since (insert his birth year here)

:P

[syrup2]

correction
some of the old stuff out of the south wasent that bad
jedi mind tricks or the getto boys is the slap
but Ill bump some britiny spears before some lil boozeir or boosie bullshit whatever the fuck his name is
im fucking sick of the south anyway
no offesne to if your from there
but thats all rap is fucking people from houstan or memphis or some shit making a chopped and screwed song or some irrelvent shit that sounds the same on evrey track
track 1
drippin my drank
track 2
grippin my dank
track 4
money in the bank
track 5
drippin my grip in the bank

feel me ?

[Sumoe]

si senor...

actually most of the shit comin; out these days is garbage, for instance Jay's new(kinda old) album...

Jay used to be dope, now he kinda sucks

semi-old school is where it's at for me, late 80's-mid 90's, after that most main stream shit sucks...underground shit is still poppin' but everything else feels kinda fake and phony.

[Jroc1993]

ya man i know wat u mean, lotssa ppl seem to be fakin who they are so recently raps kinda lost its appeal, it needs to go back to when ppl talked about their life not someone elses life

[C-money fresh!]

yoyo check it check it.YO. YO YO. UH Uh YO
syrup 2
has an nyfat cap
the dot is deep black
smack dat
foo wit poo ..you..
hes stays shinin bright wif his nice ass grill
he gots diamonds in his mouf
like icecubes..chiiiilll
He be fucking fuckin bitchs
and fuckin up the fuckin snitches.
my **** gots hella riches and leaves faggots in .the. ..mutha fuckin ditches.
c money murda ya heard its obserd
huh?
word bruh.
how i be baggin all the bitches and the hos
while rollin through the bricks spinnin on my twenty fo's
im poppin wif dem hollows
poppin at these fuckin punk marshmallos.
they soft as shit
i buck quick
LOOK ..a thick chick
haha that bitch has a fatty
im stick my stuff up in her butt and bust a nut up in 'er gut.



FREESTYLE TO THE SONG IN MY MYSPACE
ill do more later

[AteskOne]

whadda u talking about syrup2

"ZISS IS WHY M HOT. M HOT CUZ M FLY. U AINT CUZ U NOT. ZISS IS WHY ZISS IS WHY ZISS IS WHY M HOT!"

cant you just tell this kid graduated at the top of his english class. its such an intense vocaublary kids are growing up hearing from their idols.

you know what really just yanks my chain...when a fucking song comes on the radio and the dude sounds like he's a mentally challenged kid, talking through his helmet, while eating a mouthful of peanut butter. i dont get why rappers cant annunciate. how do we expect our youth to learn from people who cant talk???

[syrup2]

I was never the biggest jay fan i mean hes dope but i just didnt get into him that much
his new oldish album was decent for rap standerds but bad for him
it just wasent that impressive
semi old school is defenlty wheres its at early 90s had the slumps
and undeground is still doing it

but anyways this the freestyle thread not hip hop chat so

Its the day after saint patricks sunday afternoon
sequestred in a bubble blasting mf doom
im twisted in a pile off vommit and green flare
its the second after and old heinkin smell fills the air
I may not be irish but I can say I did a jig
mixed with the robot cuz ima silly nig
i pounded down 6 and that may not be much
but usually I dont drink booze and such
hangovers a bitch and im not enjoying this at all
but its fun seeing if i can make it to the bathroom and not fall

[syrup2]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 18 2007, 09:22 PM
yoyo check it check it.YO. YO YO. UH Uh YO
syrup 2
has an nyfat cap
the dot is deep black
smack dat
foo wit poo ..you..
hes stays shinin bright wif his nice ass grill
he gots diamonds in his mouf
like icecubes..chiiiilll
He be fucking fuckin bitchs
and fuckin up the fuckin snitches.
my **** gots hella riches and leaves faggots in .the. ..mutha fuckin ditches.
c money murda ya heard its obserd huh
word bruh.
how i be baggin all the bitches and the hos
while rollin through the bricks spinnin on my twenty fo's
im poppin wif dem hollows
poppin at these fuckin punk marshmallos.
they soft as shit
i buck quick
LOOK ..a thick chick
haha that bitch has a fatty
im stick my stuff up in her butt and bust a nut up in 'er gut.



FREESTYLE TO THE SONG IN MY MYSPACE
ill do more later
straight poetry dawg

[C-money fresh!]

you know how we do

[explosivo_420]

WHen I spray the K I leave your family morning like the break of day..

S.A.S.
Streets All Salute!

[AteskOne]

word yo that shit was straight fire... real talk b realk talk.

fuck it yo ziss iz za way i lieve.

[syrup2]

huh ?

[golden pen]

I spit hits gave birth to baby Elvis
Make a bitch wanna move her pelvis
her booty her ass
so remember keep your foot on the gas
an go fast through the pass
because we master this disaster
slaughter you into a ghost like casper
My equipment dont fit so i put into and adapter
so i can blast my shit
whaile i fuck that clit
I still yaurn to learn to turn my piece into art
I put my heart into each and ever line
an over time the work gets defined
so rhyme thats all just rhyme

[AteskOne]

:huh: i dont even know. sorry my dirty, gritty, ghetto side took over. that's the vocabulary i was raised with man. shit....dont hate me cause you aint me son.

[Jroc1993]

he said that thats the way he lives i think

[AteskOne]

you see what i mean with educating our youth. this cat's 13 years old and can read straight up gangsta ghetto....but cant tell a good rap line from a dr.zues line.

[syrup2]

its okay atesk we all have split personalitys
sometimes I go downtown dressed as a woman and say my names nancy

:) thizzz iz whaaay im hot

[Jroc1993]

Atesk shut up already, i said one thing wrong and u wont shut the fuck up about it

[syrup2]

its okay atesk we all have split personalitys
sometimes I go downtown dressed as a woman and say my names nancy

:) thizzz iz whaaay im hot

[Jroc1993]

thats creepy u transphestite, with yur hairy man legs and big hands, stay the fuck away from me

[syrup2]

im closer to you then you think sailor
:wub:

[Jroc1993]

I FEEL VIOLATED!

[syrup2]

hahah

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Jroc1993@Mar 18 2007, 09:42 PM
Atesk shut up already, i said one thing wrong and u wont shut the fuck up about it
what are you gunna start something over this...or do u wanna wait til u hit puberty. go ahead and spit a few bars if you think you can hang...afterall we are in the freestyle thread.


syrup....did u happen to get picked up by a 40 year old fat man wearing a womens g-string and higheels...he went by the name of hank. if so i'm sorry i didnt pay you for your services


im closer to you then you think sailor
:wub:

i just died a little inside. i dont think i will ever find humor in anything again because nothing will compair to that.

i rate syrup...signature worth for that line.

[syrup2]

hank you were wonderfull
all 2 minutes
thanks atesk lol
im just tryig to make people laugh and shit
its my way of apolgizing for my jewlrey thread

[Jroc1993]

nah man i aint startin shit cuz i cant rap but ive never seen u "spit a bar" either

[syrup2]

mm mm e beef

[AteskOne]

check like 4 or 5 pages back me n this cat when 3 rounds.

[Jroc1993]

ok ill check that out

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by syrup2@Mar 18 2007, 09:58 PM
hank you were wonderfull
all 2 minutes
thanks atesk lol
im just tryig to make people laugh and shit
its my way of apolgizing for my jewlrey thread
y u apologizing for the thread. mad people are responding to it. shit soon i might start showing off my canamara marble and shit lmao.

[Jroc1993]

ya i checked out some of yur stuff, its pretty good

[AteskOne]

thanks

[syrup2]

well now that u pointed it out i guess it was a good idea lol
naw its like 6 pages of people saying close and how they hate grills
and how ugly my mouth and teeth are
yes people I know my teeth are horrid
there yellow from blunts
and broken from chickin bones
im black give me a break

[AteskOne]

haha syrup u dirty n-word.... :o shhhhh i didnt say that.

[syrup2]

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/3/perkinsyp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

that porch monkey was beating my hood

[golden pen]

wat are those pills in ur sig?

[syrup2]

X

thizzness cutty

[syrup2]

X

thizzness cutty

[ILuvHoodRats]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 18 2007, 09:22 PM
yoyo check it check it.YO. YO YO. UH Uh YO
syrup 2
has an nyfat cap
the dot is deep black
smack dat
foo wit poo ..you..
hes stays shinin bright wif his nice ass grill
he gots diamonds in his mouf
like icecubes..chiiiilll
He be fucking fuckin bitchs
and fuckin up the fuckin snitches.
my **** gots hella riches and leaves faggots in .the. ..mutha fuckin ditches.
c money murda ya heard its obserd
huh?
word bruh.
how i be baggin all the bitches and the hos
while rollin through the bricks spinnin on my twenty fo's
im poppin wif dem hollows
poppin at these fuckin punk marshmallos.
they soft as shit
i buck quick
LOOK ..a thick chick
haha that bitch has a fatty
im stick my stuff up in her butt and bust a nut up in 'er gut.



FREESTYLE TO THE SONG IN MY MYSPACE
ill do more later
hahaha love it!

[swich]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 18 2007, 04:59 PM
are you joking. you're both are idiots. that sucked ass. just throwing as many words as he could that rhymed into one line. that gives it a stop and go feel which is retarded. besides the fact he's using fucking common words with like one million words that rhyme with them...such as: pain- rain, spain, cane, plain, brain, stain, lane.
you could come up with millions of rhymes off the word which just means you have no skill, originality, of creativity.

jroc1993's (which i'm guessing 93 is the year you were born in which makes you what..13, 14) opinion is exactly why modern mainstream rap sucks cock.




we need to start educating our youth <_< .
ok first of all...ur the one whos an idiot.
and if u would have actually read into that keystyle u would see that every line made sense so no..it wasnt random...
and its a freestyle, so its not meant to be as solid as a written rap..
i came up with that in about a minute..
but ur proly just too stupid to decifer the context of each line...
we can go right now and i guarantee ill take u out easily..
at least im actually helping to progress hip hop..i make cd's and produce them...
so dont come around acting like u know wut ur saying when u dont..

[swich]

Originally posted by TalibKweli+Mar 18 2007, 06:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Mar 18 2007, 06:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AteskOne@Mar 18 2007, 04:59 PM
are you joking. you're both are idiots.
we need to start educating our youth <_< .
i dont know you alot
but you my friend know what's the real deal


swich, swich, swich

you still tryin to keystyle? :lol:

sad [/b][/quote]
lol..ur just sideing with him liek a lil bitch cuz ur mad u could never compete with me...
ill take u out to without even trying..eezy.


oh and atsek i just checked out the rounds u went..and its str8 up garbage..

[swich]

atesk and kwali luv hatein on swich
cuz bitch ya neva gonna spit game liek this
my flows hypnotic like the liquore ya sippin
ever clear liek vodka punch lines neva missin
im dismissin verbal blunders striken like thunda
no wonder pussie MC's like yall wanna pull me under
i came round spittin fire left u in the third degree
easy labor slayin haters so i work for free
ya bruised at the knees from slurrpin me
intricate pictures depicted as i set the scene with precision
my dust blurrin ya vision break u down liek division
so try and listne a decision thatll soon have ya wishin
u woulda took the key liek ignition that swich is persistant
so bow like religion im droppin ya spirits
i know my flows good and i know that ya fear it
hittin back with attacks thinkin they hurt me
but atsek and talib, shit they just arent worthy......

[nase7]

Yo YO

Its asen oner in his hand is a tin,
he runs up to a wall wiv one wak ass grin,
he grabs a pink dot out his bag and slaps it on top,
presses down his finger and out comes a drop,
he realises the cap is blocked wat a fukin slag,
Insted he runs up to some granny and snatches her bag,
he luks inside the bag but all ther is is some skag,
he takes the all the skag and bops down the road,
he bumps into some bloke it turns out to be fap two,
he slaps him in the face then robs both his shoes,
he takes the shoes to some shop and swaps them for an eigth,
thats just another ASEN ONER DAY :lol: .

Im just bored <_< .

[golden pen]

wat i thought but i never heard of some of those kinds

[C-money fresh!]

im back yall
foshizzle-dizzle rippin that bong the liquidid fizzles fo-rizzlels
c-money killa
guage your eyes
with my drill bruh,
ima killa ya
el sniffes that krilla ,for rilla

syrup2.... switch.... and Lil money fresh... dress to impress
we gots bitches on our dicks but there aint no strees.
cloths is pressed i got tirrd last night so i had to take REST
leave it to the best, ya dont know who you fucking wit
we get brain on the couch and yo moms the one suckin dick
the hardest out only ones that be buckin quick, moving bricks cuz yous a bitch,
i move that yay while you play quick six my flows is SICK, and ya god damn right it got me rich
i might be rusty but once i get started im nasty almost like somebody farted.
i spin you like one of those shits in the playground
we dont play 'round
dont make a sound
start runnin bitch we in town

i sipp betta liqua
no homo my dicks thicka .
im bang out the verse leave ya dead in the herse, sorry asen yous fool ..i think that was my mutha purse. c-muneys the grimeset the worse of the worse.
i gotta a vendetta fo you tryin to stop my chedda im a spinni you like a d.j then flip you like its capuwetta(yall aint know its like karate)
rep pc my names 'c and yall aint got nothin on me
bet you never though youd hear a cat so smooth well guess what foo im the one you gunna lose too...





keeping my style grimey like your teef c-murda muney up in this bitch

[sketch3]

c money imma callin u out friendly batlle moffucka

[C-money fresh!]

here we go, here we go uh uh UH Yo yo
fo-sho a smack you crack you up and leave you layin on the flo'(floor)
im 'bout to ripp you slip you and fuckin pistol whipp you
i was 'bout to say some racist shit but my firends a jew
eww
you smell like dewdew
i look at the screen and think geez im mean
why does iwritebasic write greane
as i spit some though ass lyrical annomily shit
my rhymes is crimes cuz ima be slay a ****
but yous is little that why im bigga
your a wigger




so wudup

[G.SMooth]

Im a str8 gangster dont mess with me
if you come to my hood ill shoot you in the knee
when the po pos come i see everybody flea
but i saty ther and bust them in their grill then go do a fill on the paper mill

[sketch3]

yo mr fressh, u talikin smak on jews but we know the one feindin wen he c money is you, u a broke muther fucka, you out of luck,get ran off the road like u was ginger an im a truck,u moma put u in rehab for pain killas,shit some one must beat ur ass on a regular basis, i aint a wigger u racesist,ur rymes r tastless, and i got proof to base these, aqusations,
rymin jew and dew dew,thats just stupid an i thought u knew.

yea i no i called u out but im not in a key stle mood 2night, fell free to continue our fight,but imma be like a ninja... outta sight

[syrup2]

c moneys on fire all up in da hizzy

[C-money fresh!]

how you gunna take my rhymes
like im iight you aint tight you wanna fight!
il beat yo ass to the flo'
cuz i got s.2 here and he vouches...yous a ho

you might have read my shit but you obviously didnt absorb it
watch out ima pop you in, chew you up, and spit you out like orbit.
i wasnt hatin on the jewish folk they my friends to the ends
but we all know the only thing you got goin is that strong love for mens.
mabey you can spell but you deff cant read cuz by dewdew i ment doodoo on you you foo.

whats that itch my trigger finger gots crabs im pop you in the gut make you bleed like they were stbs now you gots me mad , spittin aint a fad you aint rad your bad.





GET AT ME DAWG haha no beef just to make sure

[sketch3]

lol i cant spell for fuck,let alone readin,
u whine worse than a baby teethin,
im god an u a heathen, dont wanna catch a beatin,leve u bleedin,
ur rymes got no meanin,and u might not be hatin on the jews,
but im a neculiar holocuahust,
dont talk about orbit if u aint a cosmonaught, u straight space-cakeing,
tweakin of meth, while it burns a hole in ur chest

[C-money fresh!]

you talk about spellin but you cant spell "off" right
if you wanna go .wasup il stomp you ass in a street fight
you booty ,wack and everything else shitty
get off my dick faggot go suck on your moms titty

[sketch3]

dont ever mention street fighter, cuss ull catch a stray huricane kick befor u can desipher,my flow, and u talk about absorbinn,
u aint no sponge bob square pants.ur dennser than a phone book, i said i cant spell,cant u tell,if not go to hell,and stay there aswell.

[C-money fresh!]

haha
sketch3
you aint no g
open your mouth bitch i gotta take a pee.
1

i think i beat you

[syrup2]

stop hating on c money
cuzz thats my ****
youve been playing with guns
but now you pulled the trigger
cuz ima smoke you with these dope ass lyrical
too spit like ya boi its gonna take a mirecal
my blood c money is sponger then bob
we some underwater thugs who teach you how to rob
we aint denser then phone books but are weed sure is
and if you got a problem I show you the biz
im from that nutty loco 510 home of the oakland sideshow
were we go dumb and smoke purple grapes
come back when you get your rhymes straight try some krs one tapes

[K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles]

abumbaclot-abumbaclot-abumbabumbabumbabumbaclot
a-rumpumtum-a-rum-pum-ting
a-rump-a-tump-a-tum we're all busting
i rip and i rhyme
i rhyme and i rip
this is the way that k0tt0n spits
because i spit hot fire
i spit hot fire
i spit............hot.............fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiire
YOUR TOO CLOSE MAN!

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles@Mar 20 2007, 03:33 AM
abumbaclot-abumbaclot-abumbabumbabumbabumbaclot
a-rumpumtum-a-rum-pum-ting
a-rump-a-tump-a-tum we're all busting
i rip and i rhyme
i rhyme and i rip
this is the way that k0tt0n spits
because i spit hot fire
i spit hot fire
i spit............hot.............fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiire
YOUR TOO CLOSE MAN!
:lol:



im closing down the studio
unless you walk up to queens and get me breast milk from a cambodian immigrant
i only drink the finest breast milk

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 19 2007, 07:46 AM
lol..ur just sideing with him liek a lil bitch cuz ur mad u could never compete with me...
ill take u out to without even trying..eezy.

like i said before and i ll say it again

whenever you're in town, look me up
i ll be MORE THEN GLAD to battle you WITH A MIC
not on some keystyle type shit

fuck a time limit, id make you crawl back to wherever you came from
like the saying goes
fuck with the best
get humiliated like the rest!


PS- Learn how to write, you're giving me a fuckin headache

[AteskOne]

hell ya....

lol i'm that little white dude standing behind talib just yelling profanities.

for real tho..i battle for fun and i see no reason to serve your punk ass just because you're upset that you suck.

[sketch3]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 19 2007, 09:00 PM
haha
sketch3
you aint no g
open your mouth bitch i gotta take a pee.
1

i think i beat you
me to i dont actually try to rap outside of this thread and its all for joaks,im a beat boxer at heart

[noam12]

uhh i dunno im bored

i like cats, beat them with bats every day in may, gotta go play with myself, get mah cream off ma shelf casue i cant get a girl, bring her on the tilt-a-whirl and ima hurl all over her chest, its the best feeling for her, for sure we go eat some cake, ima bake some more for my whore, ima leave her casue i gotta sore up on outta here, push her ofa pier, ima sear sum meat in my dish, cant afford fish that ish is ghetto, i like necco candys, i know a girl named mandy, she was all sandy and was ill at handys.....word

[C-money fresh!]

^^^^you suck
let me brake it down
big moneys town you spit like a clown. il flip you up then il spinn yo wack ass around.


nobeef

[K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles]

and take a picture with a midget holding these balloons, holding these balloons, holding these balloons..........
well, you did it. you found my man.

that's 100% cambodian man.

me and whoa is like this, SON!

[TalibKweli]

me and kotton, we tighter then the olsen twins
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/2472/myanmartigersxbk1013159gs6.jpg
yall cats suck

[noam12]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 20 2007, 10:41 PM
^^^^you suck
let me brake it down
big moneys town you spit like a clown. il flip you up then il spinn yo wack ass around.


nobeef
haha that was nice... ;)

[C-money fresh!]

:wub: :wub:

[GLOKnine]

guess ill go ahead and wreck
dont give me no disrespect
if you talking shit
dont let it turn into plex
you can go ahead and check
my lyrics are cold, untamed and wild
ill make a hoe bite that curb
just like they bite my style
all i want is some respect
whenever im comin through
all i wanna do
is sip a duece
and bang some DJ Screw
and a hella lot of Ro
roll up and an optimo
and get a hella lot of doe
throw up a couple bombs
whenever im on the go
or take my time and throw
a burner with some style
imma end it right here
cuz i could be goin for a mile

[Kaze]

yeeeeuhhh i dont fall i slip all you other
nigguhs trip my flows slick like
the first sip of that killer shit
its that social glory abusive intake
verbal shots hit hard like that flatout tackle
i say its the aerosal imagery and them nicotine dreams
that make my life so obseen
fast pace frequencies hitting streets big beats
bucket seats banging in the trunk hard hitterrrr
lifes a bitch never getting your way rebel kids running
streets wishin they never went stray but its our fault
society run

[Kaze]

ahhh didnt finish sister kicked me off computer
whateverr just a little something :D

[AteskOne]

what is with everyone pulling the "let's cram one million rhyming words into one line!!!!!" thing...

yo i slip and dip when i trip and clip my lip on a ship.

[K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles]

Originally posted by TalibKweli@Mar 21 2007, 03:06 PM
me and kotton, we tighter then the olsen twins
http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/2472/myanmartigersxbk1013159gs6.jpg
yall cats suck
this arouses me.

[C-money fresh!]

kotton and ya know me.money
bustin on the mic like this shit it aint funny
oh no i gotta go with my sick flow
sorry hunney.

I stay throwin up that grate mfpc
my grills so bright itl blind you so yo Bitchass cant see me. one

[K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles]

oh snap son, tin foil grills all day.
yeah it don't rhyme, so the fuck what?
i'm the hype man, yellin on the mic struttin around on stage
repeating the words mad tough like Sen Dogg
ONE!

[syrup2]

my name is big tay and im a east oakland savage
im not a vegtarian but all my *****s got cabbage
c money in the thread putting down bars
me and atesk whip around in european cars
the mouth stay shinin and the cloaths real bummy
im quick to fire if u look at me funny
this rap is game is a bout as real as n64 graphics
thats why i stay slappin that bay shit about 64 mavrics

[C-money fresh!]

I grip it, I sip it
I pick it up then I flip it
Twist these lines
run these bars.
C-moneys in the house and his lyrics go hard.
Syrup 2 he stays brakin it down
cuz hes c-murdas 1 and only n.igga from the "O" town.
yall already know he got toss backs in his sig
I double take dip back and smack the the fuckin pigs
Pills well...yall already know hes my dude.
He seems like a nice guy, your right hes smooth
dont get us wrong his lyrics is rude ,crude and prude and its just plain obvious jelis wants him nude.
Who else is worthy of a shout
I might be white but i got mo' clout :ph34r: :ph34r:

gotta brake it down cuz c-moneys in town

[sibil juggalo]

i have a perfect cock for your perfect ass no direction like a compass
but i must confess ill make jose less and put my dick on his head like stress
imma make an ass a mangled mess god bless im a fucking mess
imagine i must compare my life to my dick ill pretend this talk makes me sick
then play it like a gimmick and make that cute little spick kneel down and give it a lick clean your face with spic
and span clean off the brown your color ran with a attention span
your complexion reminds me of sand ill hide my face like the boogie man
im still a fan to impress ill take this spoken word and cram and be honest like i never am put my head to sleep mr sand man must manage
to stay awake and shake and bake and drive this wooden stake in what you make
then claim mistake for what you take the day your cock in my b day cake

[AteskOne]

does anyone not rhyme like

"yo i rock my cock in a sock while you block and knock the doc."

you guys do realize every other word doesnt need to rhyme. i personally like it when a rhyme has that poetry feel and not every line rhymes with the previous. kids needa get more creative with lyrics.

[C-money fresh!]

you already know i swith it up all the time i just decide to brake it down with that kotton line.

[sibil juggalo]

hah i get it just bored..
it looks better to rhyme when you write it out but you can make it sound good when spoken without ever rhyming much

[AteskOne]

indeed which is why internet rhyming is stupid and pointless. besides the fact no one can read it the same way that you spit it.

[sibil juggalo]

i hear that...bombingscience is stupid and pointless...but boredom brings me back..you rap?write something atesk i want to read it

[AteskOne]

ya i rhyme...not really feeling it right now tho. kinda depressed. i'll hook you up later tho. i got a few rhymes a few pages back. me and this other cat went 3 rounds. check them out if you'd like. their definitely not my best seeing as they were quick internet freestyles. peace.

[syrup2]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 23 2007, 05:40 PM
I grip it, I sip it
I pick it up then I flip it
Twist these lines
run these bars.
C-moneys in the house and his lyrics go hard.
Syrup 2 he stays brakin it down
cuz hes c-murdas 1 and only n.igga from the "O" town.
yall already know he got toss backs in his sig
I double take dip back and smack the the fuckin pigs
Pills well...yall already know hes my dude.
He seems like a nice guy, your right hes smooth
dont get us wrong his lyrics is rude ,crude and prude and its just plain obvious jelis wants him nude.
Who else is worthy of a shout
I might be white but i got mo' clout :ph34r: :ph34r:

gotta brake it down cuz c-moneys in town
hahah this **** right here haha

[TylerDurden]

yo, freestyle battle, freestyle battle

check it
check it

yo buss it!

Rhymes like these are the reason BS went down,
you thought it was hackers?
nah, it was this sick ass sound
your rap has more filler than my latest illest piece
I haven't seen rhymes this weak since I heard my little niece!!!
get off my jock
yeah, YOU atesk
you the biggest toy
AND the biggest pest

oooooooohhhhhhh

I'm out

HOLLA at me, one! :angry:

:ph34r:

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by C-money fresh!@Mar 23 2007, 05:40 PM
dont get us wrong his lyrics is rude ,crude and prude and its just plain obvious jelis wants him nude.
haha fucking genius...

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Mar 24 2007, 12:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Mar 24 2007, 12:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C-money fresh!@Mar 23 2007, 05:40 PM
dont get us wrong his lyrics is rude ,crude and prude and its just plain obvious jelis wants him nude.
haha fucking genius... [/b][/quote]
I knew you'd chicken out of a battle. <_<

[AteskOne]

when was i called out on a battle?

[TylerDurden]

Yeah, I guess I didn't call you out to battle directly, but I dissed you a couple posts up. :(

[AteskOne]

o i didnt see it. i'll check it out.

you women you!!!

[syrup2]

where are 13 year old suburb kids to start battles when you need them

[swich]

haters quit the talkin when swich wasnt walkin
boppers keep jockin of the dome im choppin
bone hoes in compton big bucks im coppin
big whips is droppin like nuts wen she slobbin
let me hit the scene ima freestyle king
chow down like ming on these fakes for the green
dont think i mean that i dont sip the lean
drop down my screens, drug fiends come to me
yall dont know style if bit u in the anus
been here for a while and soon ill be famouse
dont think i blame this on my killer flow
i blame on the haters like atsek and whoa!...

[AteskOne]

^^ there's your 13 year old suburb kid here to start a battle syrup.

request and you shall recieve <_< .

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 24 2007, 06:40 PM
haters quit the talkin when swich wasnt walkin
boppers keep jockin of the dome im choppin
bone hoes in compton big bucks im coppin
big whips is droppin like nuts wen she slobbin
let me hit the scene ima freestyle king
chow down like ming on these fakes for the green
dont think i mean that i dont sip the lean
drop down my screens, drug fiends come to me
yall dont know style if bit u in the anus
been here for a while and soon ill be famouse
dont think i blame this on my killer flow
i blame on the haters like atsek and whoa!...
swich is hella raw at this freestyle shit ?
naw swich is kinda bad at this rhyming shit
the boppers were jocking but the words wernt flowing
you could do us a favor and stop but youll just keep going
youve never been to compton , **** thats where I used to live
big bucks u copping ? what other lies u give
the freestyle king ,no more like a bitch
who couldnt think of a dope wirte so whats his name ?
SWICH !
next time u say somthing about atesk expectd to get burned
but its aight this time cuz from mistakes you learn

[swich]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 25 2007, 12:54 AM
^^ there's your 13 year old suburb kid here to start a battle syrup.

request and you shall recieve <_< .
i like how i lived in a trailer all my life...not quite the sub-urbs
and im 19...

so anyways....now that uve been proven wrong once again..

lets battle bitch...unless u dont wanna embarrass urself..i understand.

[swich]

Originally posted by syrup2+Mar 25 2007, 01:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ Mar 25 2007, 01:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Mar 24 2007, 06:40 PM
haters quit the talkin when swich wasnt walkin
boppers keep jockin of the dome im choppin
bone hoes in compton big bucks im coppin
big whips is droppin like nuts wen she slobbin
let me hit the scene ima freestyle king
chow down like ming on these fakes for the green
dont think i mean that i dont sip the lean
drop down my screens, drug fiends come to me
yall dont know style if bit u in the anus
been here for a while and soon ill be famouse
dont think i blame this on my killer flow
i blame on the haters like atsek and whoa!...
swich is hella raw at this freestyle shit ?
naw swich is kinda bad at this rhyming shit
the boppers were jocking but the words wernt flowing
you could do us a favor and stop but youll just keep going
youve never been to compton , **** thats where I used to live
big bucks u copping ? what other lies u give
the freestyle king ,no more like a bitch
who couldnt think of a dope wirte so whats his name ?
SWICH !
next time u say somthing about atesk expectd to get burned
but its aight this time cuz from mistakes you learn [/b][/quote]
this kid think he sumthin rhymin the same word twice
shit with shit..now that shit aint right
start the battle off poorly and in the morning
youll be mourning but swich gave the warning
dont expect me to play the nice guy
even though i watch Nick when i get sky high
and ill say what i want about these snotty white kids
who couldnt drop a flow or think of ad libs
and as far as atesk, well why is he tryin?
i leave um swinging from a rope like a monkey on the vine
its hard to find lines in ya head wen ya give it
im saying u suck dick sexually and wen u spitten
id say ya styles bitten but theres none to be found
just a jumble of words that are really outta bounds
atesk afraid to post since swich began to boast
commin from the coast where *****s pakin toast
i dont got much time for hoes like syrup
like the anal peni so he keep his rear up...

[syrup2]

finnaly a battle :)

swich your 19 and still watching nick
you have bigger problems then me rhymeing shit
theres no mouring to be done at the start of my day
only a blunt and hopefully a jay
stop hatin on atesk he hasent even got on yet
you already got at him once stop the disrespect
but who you callin a ho
a pimp like me ?
ive been pulling more bitchs then your eyes could see
you come from a coast but its certanly not the west
otherwise youd be hiding from syrup with a bullitproof vest

[oni.kin]

dont push me cos im close to the edge, im trying not to loose my head ah ha ah ha
yes, i did indeed just pop off at the dome and make this up, u've never EVER heared this line before, honest

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by syrup2@Mar 25 2007, 02:26 AM
stop hatin on atesk he hasent even got on yet
you already got at him once stop the disrespect
that's right


Don't diss people who can't defend themselves,
especially not atesk,
he's as harmless as twelve elves,
the real soft types,
the ones who make cookies,
I'm a freestyle vet and ya'll are just ROOKIES!

Who wants to step up now and act like they can battle?
shit, run to atesk, go ahead and tattle. . .

[swich]

syrup swang from the nuts of atsek oh for real
i can write a verse easy and its worth bout a mil
yall dont really wanna know why im grippin on the steel
if i take out the K banana clips gonna peel
funny how these bitches think they in the same game
i rape u verbally like a bitch in a gang bang
plexin with switch make the heat on my hip
itch just a lil, ima break out the fifth
i shine with the intensity of about ten moons
i got the damn light and i watch cartoons
think u pimpin them bitches well i leave um in ditches
cuz wen they fuckin with swich they soon get to wishin
that my guns was dissmissin to end the damn struggle
hard to be humble when ya got pebbles like Mr. gumble
but nah they aint fruity and i keep um stashed in her booty
or close to her boobie, syrup ant gettin any cuz he scared of the cooties...

[swich]

hey if yall want check out a track me and big chris did..
sutherns on the hook
chris on the first verse
and im on the secon verse..just so yall know...tell me wut yall think..

http://www.myspace.com/sdubentertainmentswich

[syrup2]

syrups a boss mack whos dipped in the sauces
swich is a is bitch who tryed to run with the bosses
I aint swingin from nuts im spittin some bars, you talk about guns that can shoot a 100 yards
but youve never held some real john doe heat
ive beena grippin a glock so my family can eat
and yes all these "bitchs" are in the same gang
who care about getting this bread and writing fame
you could never leave my bitchs in a ditch cuz they all pack 9's
to make sure that im getting my gwap from they behinds
you talk this thug shit about this full clip
but yet you rockin the anime icon like its still hip
the pokemon trend ended 5 years ago its a trip

[C-money fresh!]

Originally posted by oni.kin@Mar 25 2007, 10:10 AM
dont push me cos im close to the edge, im trying not to loose my head ah ha ah ha
yes, i did indeed just pop off at the dome and make this up, u've never EVER heared this line before, honest
dude where was the rhyming

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 25 2007, 07:23 PM
hey if yall want check out a track me and big chris did..
sutherns on the hook
chris on the first verse
and im on the secon verse..just so yall know...tell me wut yall think..

http://www.myspace.com/sdubentertainmentswich
that was lightweight dope

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by oni.kin@Mar 25 2007, 10:10 AM
dont push me cos im close to the edge, im trying not to loose my head ah ha ah ha
yes, i did indeed just pop off at the dome and make this up, u've never EVER heared this line before, honest
wow that shit is mad old...it was in style wars, if I remember correctly.

[1nOnly Baze]

yeh.. grandmaster flash. :wub:

[swich]

haah..nice one..

my icon depicts what youll never see
a bitch and her tits, u get dick like "penelopy" (porn star)
my room cloudly like the weather be, cuz im str8 tokein betta trees
when i hit the scene enimies yup they better flee
i had enough drama from the studio gangsters
lay her down and shank her, leave um sore like cankers
ya bitches pak 9"s ..nah just my dick from behind
not even tryine took u out with one line
and u tryin to shine but swich is the betta man
snortin coke lines so they call me the snowy weather man
and it aint pokemon thats on my icon
get ya mind right b4 i spray liek krylons....

[Snot]

I like chicken, i like liver.
Meow mix, meow mix, please deliver.
-gatz blazin- :ph34r: :ph34r:

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 25 2007, 07:44 PM
haah..nice one..

my icon depicts what youll never see
a bitch and her tits, u get dick like "penelopy" (porn star)
my room cloudly like the weather be, cuz im str8 tokein betta trees
when i hit the scene enimies yup they better flee
i had enough drama from the studio gangsters
lay her down and shank her, leave um sore like cankers
ya bitches pak 9"s ..nah just my dick from behind
not even tryine took u out with one line
and u tryin to shine but swich is the betta man
snortin coke lines so they call me the snowy weather man
and it aint pokemon thats on my icon
get ya mind right b4 i spray liek krylons....
the bitchs pack 9's comeback was dope

i see more pussy then a gynocalgist cuzz
from the hairy wet even the buzzed
you toke on some bammer weed
the brownest of brown
always trying to drop 5 when syrups in town
when you hit the scene real *****s start to laugh
cuz there stands a dirty trailer trash white boy soon to feel the wrath
of a sick mc whos cleaner then a sponge bath
im trying to shine and thats just what im doing
you should quit now before e beef stew starts brewing ?

[C-money fresh!]

every one say "I" if you want c-money to rip it

[swich]

first off i might be trailer trash but im not white
im pure hispanic blood, sittin clean on tight white
the 2-1-0 gonna put some holes in swich ones foes
pop trunk open close im the one that god chose
the best of the game and the trillest of the trill
might wanna chill if i aint keepin the steel
submerge liek a drill , eezy with the rhyme
squeel like a swine when i drop each line
u proly the white boi i hang with all blacks
stay strpped on the attack smoke a black in my lack
and as a matter of fact why u even battlin swich
not even the river nile got flow like this....

[syrup2]

I :lol:

[swich]

nah....

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 25 2007, 08:20 PM
first off i might be trailer trash but im not white
im pure hispanic blood, sittin clean on tight white
the 2-1-0 gonna put some holes in swich ones foes
pop trunk open close im the one that god chose
the best of the game and the trillest of the trill
might wanna chill if i aint keepin the steel
submerge liek a drill , eezy with the rhyme
squeel like a swine when i drop each line
u proly the white boi i hang with all blacks
stay strpped on the attack smoke a black in my lack
and as a matter of fact why u even battlin swich
not even the river nile got flow like this....
trashy and mexican
I guess your great
well theres 5 bullits in the revolver that can choose your fate
the 210 is nothing compared to an ar 15
fuck some trill shit I get hyphy as fuck
poppin off rounds so *****s should duck
im battlin swich becauce this shit is fun
and chances are your combacks gonna be about a gun

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by swich@Mar 25 2007, 08:20 PM
first off i might be trailer trash but im not white
im pure hispanic blood, sittin clean on tight white
hahaha you're so gay...werent you just hating on syrup for rhyming with the same word. and you call yourself a "rapper". and as to all your attempts to try and get me to embarress you....i dont fuck with trailer trash just because it's pissed that it has no skills and has to rhyme 'white' with 'tight white'. hahahaha <_<

[swich]

Originally posted by AteskOne+Mar 25 2007, 08:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ Mar 25 2007, 08:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Mar 25 2007, 08:20 PM
first off i might be trailer trash but im not white
im pure hispanic blood, sittin clean on tight white
hahaha you're so gay...werent you just hating on syrup for rhyming with the same word. and you call yourself a "rapper". and as to all your attempts to try and get me to embarress you....i dont fuck with trailer trash just because it's pissed that it has no skills and has to rhyme 'white' with 'tight white'. hahahaha <_< [/b][/quote]
ok...let me prove u wrong AGAIN...
see its ok to rhyme the way i did liek that because i added tight b4 white..

if there would have been a word b4 white that didnt rhyme it wouldnt have been acceptable..

ahah i swear...u know nuthing about song construction..

[C-money fresh!]

c-money fresh
i kill shit and the above ^^ is how i dress
yall cant denie im fly, cuz theres no way to lie
try and test me youl die
for the whole passed week i stayed
drunk
as
hell.
yall fools can drink listerene and your breath
will
still
smell
aw what the hell c-murdas back with a verbal atack
think quick but run faster cuz you will get smacked.
im running low on the rhymes cuz i stay sprayin origanal shit
im verbaly foul like sketch3's armpitt
i spit it here and and i spray it there
my lyrics like thc they stick in your hair.
faggots and toys beter beware
i smoke the finest of the fine
and the greenest of the green
im a really nice dude but a verbal assassin im mean.
im back
i aint black
but thats to bad
im not rich but im wealthy ...look at these bags.

to be continued

[AteskOne]

just because you added the word 'tight' in front of 'white' doesnt mean it sounds good. you're honestly saying i dont kno anything about song structure after that line i just quoted. wow i'm glad the rest of the world doesnt think the way you do otherwise we'd have a bunch of special ed students trying to do advanced trigonometry claiming that they know what they are talking about. stick to your doctor zues rhymes and stop bitching everytime someone tells you that you suck.

[swich]

SYRUP!

yeah so what i grew up poor
brought up ruff make u hit the floor
these rich white kids cant see the pain i did
the way i lived the shame i hid
i got a pocket full of rocks and ammo
strapped liek rambo with a gat and the camo
cant no..body stop the damn flow
atesk still tryna prove me wrong...
this bitch is desperate like his mom for the shlong....

[swich]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 25 2007, 08:39 PM
just because you added the word 'tight' in front of 'white' doesnt mean it sounds good. you're honestly saying i dont kno anything about song structure after that line i just quoted. wow i'm glad the rest of the world doesnt think the way you do otherwise we'd have a bunch of special ed students trying to do advanced trigonometry claiming that they know what they are talking about. stick to your doctor zues rhymes and stop bitching everytime someone tells you that you suck.
damn...wut r u tryna prove..
the more u try and prove me wrong it just makes u look liek a
desperate weird ass tryna prove himself over the internet..

well i know i dont suck
i let the mass ppl be the judge of me..not fags on a forum.
and the mass r liking wut they hear so stfu.

[C-money fresh!]

i win

[AteskOne]

i dont know anything about song structure? you cut your last stanza short by ending, what should of been the last line of the stanza, with 'wrong'...thus you had to add an extra line in so you could make it rhyme. but i'm the one who knows nothing <_< ...

and the mass r liking wut they hear so stfu

the mass being your trailer trash mother and 10 year old sister.

[C-money fresh!]

either way il still outspitt any motherfucker on here so wudup

[syrup2]

SWICH !

youve never met atesks mom
for all you know she could be dead
these rich white kids may never the know the thoughts that are in your head
but one thing they do know is that your rhymes are lame
my prose and colliquel will put you to shame

but real talk tho were humans all the same
smoke the same weed and get wet in the rain
experince the same pain and see the same things
so instead of battling let this shit be done
OOH SHIT ITS WAYNE BRADY SON ! AND HES GOT A GUN !
..sry im goofy today
im done battling good shit tho

[C-money fresh!]

and the winner ISSSSSSSSS. C-MONEY FREEEESHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

[syrup2]

c money may well be the greatest rapper on earth

[C-money fresh!]

yall already know...fo sho hha :lol:

[ShIfTeD]

yo make it with the man
go to the shop get the 5 dollar plan
he puts the crack in the hand
runs to the van
shoots the crack up like a pipe bomb
*****s get tite bound
in the game
run the same game that the boys said was lame
run my shoe game like boys in a soccer game
kick it to the post get the host of the most
servin up sleirical words that must burst
worse
you dudes with your drugs cant outlast the thirst
worse
i cant even make it to the back of the block not gettin poped
worse
i even made it to the shop then got jacked for some cash
boys in the back makin cash for the hash
i hear it every day
i see it everyday
noone wants to hear about it screamin my name
CRACK! no my name is shifted
wifted you young motherfuckers get lifted
off of the platform you were sellin crack on, learn what hip hops really about
and learn the physics of the lyrics



uuuuuhhhh CREAM!

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 25 2007, 08:47 PM
i dont know anything about song structure? you cut your last stanza short by ending, what should of been the last line of the stanza, with 'wrong'...thus you had to add an extra line in so you could make it rhyme. but i'm the one who knows nothing <_< ...

and the mass r liking wut they hear so stfu

the mass being your trailer trash mother and 10 year old sister.
just TRY n' criticize my last post. <_<

[AteskOne]

haha i could never...it was absolutely amazing :lol: .

[TylerDurden]

FUCK YEAH!!! :D

[K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles]

brad pitt in fight club, aren't you geser or somebody?

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles@Mar 25 2007, 10:01 PM
brad pitt in fight club, aren't you geser or somebody?
:blink:

Um, no.

but I'll kick a sick rhyme about Fight Club!!!

First rule is, you can't talk about it
2nd rule is, you can't talk about it!!!!

[swich]

Originally posted by AteskOne@Mar 25 2007, 08:47 PM
i dont know anything about song structure? you cut your last stanza short by ending, what should of been the last line of the stanza, with 'wrong'...thus you had to add an extra line in so you could make it rhyme. but i'm the one who knows nothing <_< ...

and the mass r liking wut they hear so stfu

the mass being your trailer trash mother and 10 year old sister.
i have no sister and my mother lives in a house...

so i proved u wrong yet AGAIN...
damn this is too eezy..

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by TylerDurden+Mar 25 2007, 11:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TylerDurden @ Mar 25 2007, 11:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-K0tt0nKandyandP0psicles@Mar 25 2007, 10:01 PM
brad pitt in fight club, aren't you geser or somebody?
:blink:

Um, no.

but I'll kick a sick rhyme about Fight Club!!!

First rule is, you can't talk about it
2nd rule is, you can't talk about it!!!![/b][/quote]
I discussed the rules once for these e-rap fools,
who deny the truth,
and speak liek "lol kewlz"
got this one cat who lives in a fuckin' trailer park,
raps about watching nick,
flow never really strays too far,
the same weak rap,
thinks itsa lyrical bonanza,


where's Atesk,
check out THIS motherfuckin' stanza!!!
You wanna rap about verbs, nouns,
maybe even commas?
I'm coming after you,
and your english teachers' mommas. . .


:ph34r:

[sketch3]

yo swich that tune on myspace was BAAAAAAAAAAAAD and i dont mean good bad i mean vanila ice bad

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by swich+Mar 26 2007, 02:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swich @ Mar 26 2007, 02:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AteskOne@Mar 25 2007, 08:47 PM
i dont know anything about song structure? you cut your last stanza short by ending, what should of been the last line of the stanza, with 'wrong'...thus you had to add an extra line in so you could make it rhyme. but i'm the one who knows nothing <_< ...

and the mass r liking wut they hear so stfu

the mass being your trailer trash mother and 10 year old sister.
i have no sister and my mother lives in a house...

so i proved u wrong yet AGAIN...
damn this is too eezy.. [/b][/quote]
hahaha you really are fucking retarded/ at first i was just joking around but i've come to belive that you really are. out of that whole paragraph that's all you could prove me wrong with. why wont you just admit that you stop talking and thinking your good so i can stop wasting my time replying to your stupid ass remarks that just prove more and more how fucking stupid you are.

[TylerDurden]

Is Atesk afraid of battles?
thats just a mere question,
that toy should play with rattles,
but that's just my suggestion. . .

[NICCSACC]

haha yall trying to NETCEE RAP is comedy. ROTF!!!!!!!

more more!!! bwahahahahaaaaaa

[14nick]

wow. the pplz posting rymes arentr very good.....

im shure its been brought up in this fourm. but this is kind of useless?
if you want to free style with pplz over the internet dont do it on a graff website.

go to www.letsbeef.com

judging from what ive heard pplz spit your all gunna get crushed.
i used 2 go on that site untill i found out you had 2 pay to do video battles.

so go on it if your dying to freestyle.


dont do it on bombing science

[C-money fresh!]

fuck you .....

.......

shut your face
befor i spray you with mase
L.o.l zorz

[14nick]

lmao. ur just jealous <_<

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 27 2007, 03:16 PM
haha yall trying to NETCEE RAP is comedy. ROTF!!!!!!!

more more!!! bwahahahahaaaaaa
my point exactly

[syrup2]

Originally posted by 14nick@Mar 27 2007, 03:20 PM
wow. the pplz posting rymes arentr very good.....

im shure its been brought up in this fourm. but this is kind of useless?
if you want to free style with pplz over the internet dont do it on a graff website.

go to www.letsbeef.com

judging from what ive heard pplz spit your all gunna get crushed.
i used 2 go on that site untill i found out you had 2 pay to do video battles.

so go on it if your dying to freestyle.


dont do it on bombing science
your hella right nick
you do like getting raped by men you enjoy all of that hard meaty cock slamming your tiny 14 year old butthole

what the fuck is wrong with you if you dont like this thread then dont post
im sure your sooo cool because its says toy in your sig and your just to OOOISome to have some fun and post a dumb rhyme
were gonna keep on freestyling and then were gonnna run a train on your mom
and me atesk and c money are gonna be like
SHIIZAAAAM

..dont bother to bring it its already been brought..'en

[yoda]

yo smokin some blunts
got me thinkn more than once
i hit quit it then get down with some cunts
stay relapsed got back on my track ready to attack
you thought you had me you shouldve never turned your back
the illest realest spittin freestyle fireballs around
cuz im the only motherfucker here thats fit for the crown
upside inside out down
im every where im watching you frown
from the ground up i poured that beer in a cup
you live life hella easy when you aint given a fuck..


mybad im to blown for this shittt B)

[yoda]

bring it WHAT we right here haha.

[Gear_07]

got me trippin and shit got dis cop checcin on mah balls

talkin bout u got da rite to remain silent put yo hands on da wall

iono wuh to do i think he saw me do a peice

so im like fucc it spray him wit mah paint and hit da streets

now i don fucced up cuhzz dey gon git me for assault and graffiti

went to mah nigguhs house to roll a fat blunt u feel me

now im high as hell not givin a fucc

a couple days past so i gess das mah lucc

ima all city king a writer slash thug

doin mah shit on da streets lovin da bay life cuhzz

[swich]

Originally posted by sketch3@Mar 26 2007, 12:22 PM
yo swich that tune on myspace was BAAAAAAAAAAAAD and i dont mean good bad i mean vanila ice bad
it all depends on what u like...im sure a lot of ppl dont like my style
but everyone from where im from does so yeah..
im sure id think ur shit was vanilla ice bad as well...
i mean just look at ppl like kanye west...everyone said he couldnt rhyme
and that he sucked..but look at um now...

haters go ahead and hate but that aint gonna stop me from doing wut i love..

i mean thats wut this should be about right...for the love of hip-hop
i dont see why all of yall gotta come and hear and talk shit about me because i wanna make music...what do u get out of it?
at least im doing something right?
all i did was freestyle on here and i got ppl tryna put me down.
i never fucked with anyone first..it was always someone fukin with me.

[TylerDurden]

I'll do what I want!!!! :angry:












:D

[NICCSACC]

yo yo yo im a middle class homeboy
on da messageboard wit da rest of my homeboys
we gets busy like a gnome boy
we gets pissy like a homeboy
so oh boy we gets busy like a phone boy
kinda wild wit da low noise
but that be da po's choice
i eat to get fat
but i spell it like "P" hat
cool hot n sexy we be dat
we be dat
bullshit
i eat dog and breed cat and pull clips braaa.
wurd to your mother

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich+Mar 28 2007, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swich @ Mar 28 2007, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sketch3@Mar 26 2007, 12:22 PM
yo swich that tune on myspace was BAAAAAAAAAAAAD and i dont mean good bad i mean vanila ice bad
it all depends on what u like...im sure a lot of ppl dont like my style
but everyone from where im from does so yeah..
im sure id think ur shit was vanilla ice bad as well...
i mean just look at ppl like kanye west...everyone said he couldnt rhyme
and that he sucked..but look at um now...

haters go ahead and hate but that aint gonna stop me from doing wut i love..

i mean thats wut this should be about right...for the love of hip-hop
i dont see why all of yall gotta come and hear and talk shit about me because i wanna make music...what do u get out of it?
at least im doing something right?
all i did was freestyle on here and i got ppl tryna put me down.
i never fucked with anyone first..it was always someone fukin with me. [/b][/quote]
aw swich dont cry we were just messing with u
and even though some people dont like your track at least you made one
most people just say yeaah ill record somthing and never do it
u actually did so props for that

[C-money fresh!]

Originally posted by 14nick@Mar 27 2007, 03:51 PM
lmao. ur just jealous <_<
jelous ....of what!

bring it kid

[sketch3]

Originally posted by swich+Mar 28 2007, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swich @ Mar 28 2007, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sketch3@Mar 26 2007, 12:22 PM
yo swich that tune on myspace was BAAAAAAAAAAAAD and i dont mean good bad i mean vanila ice bad
it all depends on what u like...im sure a lot of ppl dont like my style
but everyone from where im from does so yeah..
im sure id think ur shit was vanilla ice bad as well...
i mean just look at ppl like kanye west...everyone said he couldnt rhyme
and that he sucked..but look at um now...

haters go ahead and hate but that aint gonna stop me from doing wut i love..

i mean thats wut this should be about right...for the love of hip-hop
i dont see why all of yall gotta come and hear and talk shit about me because i wanna make music...what do u get out of it?
at least im doing something right?
all i did was freestyle on here and i got ppl tryna put me down.
i never fucked with anyone first..it was always someone fukin with me. [/b][/quote]
yo swich, im not hatein on u, i actually liked ur bars on here but that tune was just not so good also kanye west sucks mucho testical, go listten to big l or eric sermon or something no beef

[Sumoe]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Mar 28 2007, 09:53 AM
yo yo yo im a middle class homeboy
on da messageboard wit da rest of my homeboys
we gets busy like a gnome boy
we gets pissy like a homeboy
so oh boy we gets busy like a phone boy
kinda wild wit da low noise
but that be da po's choice
i eat to get fat
but i spell it like "P" hat
cool hot n sexy we be dat
we be dat
bullshit
i eat dog and breed cat and pull clips braaa.
wurd to your mother
word. ;)

[swich]

Originally posted by sketch3+Apr 1 2007, 07:55 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sketch3 @ Apr 1 2007, 07:55 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by swich@Mar 28 2007, 04:43 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sketch3@Mar 26 2007, 12:22 PM
yo swich that tune on myspace was BAAAAAAAAAAAAD and i dont mean good bad i mean vanila ice bad
it all depends on what u like...im sure a lot of ppl dont like my style
but everyone from where im from does so yeah..
im sure id think ur shit was vanilla ice bad as well...
i mean just look at ppl like kanye west...everyone said he couldnt rhyme
and that he sucked..but look at um now...

haters go ahead and hate but that aint gonna stop me from doing wut i love..

i mean thats wut this should be about right...for the love of hip-hop
i dont see why all of yall gotta come and hear and talk shit about me because i wanna make music...what do u get out of it?
at least im doing something right?
all i did was freestyle on here and i got ppl tryna put me down.
i never fucked with anyone first..it was always someone fukin with me.
yo swich, im not hatein on u, i actually liked ur bars on here but that tune was just not so good also kanye west sucks mucho testical, go listten to big l or eric sermon or something no beef [/b][/quote]
i listned to eric sermon..and i wasnt feelin it...
i really dont listne to any main stream rappers either..i usually listne to
underground rappers from the south, where im from..
no h8...it all depends on taste i guess...