Freestyle Rapping

[swich]

got me movin slow like my flow was retarted
i dont give a fuk hell yeah im cold hearted
sittin and im leanin to the side jus a lil
overmedicated poppin pills like they skittles
got her givin brain liek my dick was a riddle
when it comes to dames i play them hoes like a fiddle
similar to a twizzler cuzmy minds twisted
rocks in my mouth so man im takin lispen
i dont pay no mind if u say im not down
ill still come around and slay in ur town
its the boi swich spittin fire liek bowser
i surfe the site like ur internet browser
gettin more white than ur average snow plower
sittin in my slab lookin like the pizza tower
im groovy like the 70's
so much doe reach numbas like eleventy
thats mo cash than yo assgon eva see...

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by Gear_07@Mar 28 2007, 02:03 AM
got me trippin and shit got dis cop checcin on mah balls

talkin bout u got da rite to remain silent put yo hands on da wall

iono wuh to do i think he saw me do a peice

so im like fucc it spray him wit mah paint and hit da streets

now i don fucced up cuhzz dey gon git me for assault and graffiti

went to mah nigguhs house to roll a fat blunt u feel me

now im high as hell not givin a fucc

a couple days past so i gess das mah lucc

ima all city king a writer slash thug

doin mah shit on da streets lovin da bay life cuhzz
yo makr ecko sure sucks at rapping huh? :lol:

[Sumoe]

funny thing is he probably sucks at writing and he's claiming to be all city and shit...hahaha. :lol: :lol: :lol:

[ODonthesetrees]

at least if you suck make it into a joke
you're cock is so small a baby wouldnt choke
dont get offended im just preachin the truth
like the men on BET, at 9am, chillin in the booths
man im jsut as bad as you at this shit
but i never listened to rap so at least i cant quit
i guess im above you only a negative three
your a negative you suck, go D..I..E
well hopefully that'll be my last post in here
sorry you had to read that maybe i shoulda spit abotu beer
then id be a gansta like Gear_07
or maybe not cause i'm just a bit older than 11
well fuck the rap schemes and fuck the hate
lemme blow my line now while you go masturbate

[NICCSACC]

you dont really rap as for writing no its "you dont..."
i got all your tags off tha wall like menudo
i got more heat i swear you couldnt shoot those
go to toy forum you need help from them culos
cuz you less than tha worst bout a hundred past zero
if i took yo as to court youd need more than shapiro
cuz you fake like a silicone pillow in a stripper
i got cats on tha fence like that dude john tripper
hang you out like some draws fulla piss from my miller
no beef i just dropped like a shit on tha first
120 pounds later got this kid sportin a purse

[syrup2]

Im trying to make half a mill
and hotbox a mercdes
too bad b.o and paintstains aint to cool with the ladys
but it dont really phase me
cuz it aint nothing like this
I gotta get this bread and paint these walls
and I got 5 cans of rusto along with my balls

-odonthesetrees nice rhymes yo

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by syrup2@Apr 6 2007, 10:05 PM
-odonthesetrees nice rhymes yo
word thanks man, i just come in here for shits and giggles...im more into classic rock and poetry than rap id say, but if i hear a fresh rhyme ill lsiten to some rap

[syrup2]

we all need are shits and giggles sometimes

[C-money fresh!]

yao.

im back im not black but im ready to kill
yes your damn right c-moneys lines thrill.
i got some fresh ass lines that im ready to post if any of yall wanna battle youl get burnt like dry toast.
i gots a tummy ache up i can deal wif dat.
il bust you in the lip make that shit feal reall fat.
as of tomarrow im off to new olreans.
getting drunk as a fuck while my sneakers stay clean.
yeah i smoke boges and i fuck with game dutches.
fuck with c-murda and il put you in crutches.

[ODonthesetrees]

you're raps sound like a white kid hummin
oh wait thats what they really are, you wern't frontin
you're an arrogant maniacle bitch
and you think you're the shit and you think you an hit
well i can hit with my lines
twice as much damage in half the time
how many of you peopel can say somethign smart
without talking botu drugs cause weve all done our part
i hate these mainstream lines about clubns
and drinking and smokign and girls and dubs
fuck all that nonsense
lets get back on track
there i was spitting for yall, sure was wack

[sketch3]

yo yo yo check it yo, u diss missta fresh,ill carv a hole in ur chest,
u about to get pawned like we was playin chess, M-F-P-C YA HERRRD

[TylerDurden]

Originally posted by sketch3@Apr 7 2007, 09:06 AM
yo yo yo check it yo, u diss missta fresh,ill carv a hole in ur chest,
u about to get pawned like we was playin chess, M-F-P-C YA HERRRD
daaaaaaaaaang

[Excalibur]

I'm the real, I never need a hype man
and my freshness still shocks ya like lightnin'
it's frightnin' how i'm sykin' out these lames
playin the same games, no play from the dames
Yeah it was me Basetwo markin over you tag
And it wasn't too hard cause your name ain't up far
shitting on your weak shit like a japanese porn star

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by Excalibur@Apr 7 2007, 01:58 PM
I'm the real, I never need a hype man
and my freshness still shocks ya like lightnin'
it's frightnin' how i'm sykin' out these lames
playin the same games, no play from the dames
Yeah it was me Basetwo markin over you tag
And it wasn't too hard cause your name ain't up far
shitting on your weak shit like a japanese porn star
you lost all the flow with the line ending in "tag"

you say you're the real and you don't need a conman
but you also said you don't get play from the girls and
i take it all as a lie cause its one then another
hold up on the contradictions while i fuck your mother
damn she rides it fast and she rides it hard
but her pussy feels like fucking a jar of lard
you know what i mean when its too damn sloppy
she needs a vaccum to clean that socket

[Jugga]

woke up in a dark hot coffin,
oh my god, I'm queer..
I'm in liberace's body,
he's been dead for years..
clawed my way out of the death pit,
a new life before me..
how the fuck's a decomposed body gonna cap a 40...?

I need juice:

old english is the weapon of choice..
maybe I could convince it's me to one of by boys..
sure,
I got a rotten disposition,
but fuck, I'm on a mission..
to put my self in a compromizing, alcohol indused position..
people staring in disgust at me all over the place,
I'm like "wussuh cuhh? do I got a booger on my face"
then I though..
"what's wrong, B.. you a zombie.. step in the next liquor store, snatch a brew, and remember to moan as you leave the place calmly.."
and so I did,
a walking, talking, saucy, post-moredem liberace..
singing to the sky about how nobody's gonna stop me...
and damn,
my mind is telling me to go mutt out some sluts..
but my body's telling me to go hunting for butts..
so I turned a blind eye cause a nut is a nut,
but I made sure to strap a rubber on so our dicks wouldn't touch...

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by syrup2@Apr 6 2007, 10:05 PM
Im trying to make half a mill
and hotbox a mercdes
too bad b.o and paintstains aint to cool with the ladys
marry me? :wub:


excalibur...shit was dope.

edit* jugga i missed yours but i just read it...that was wonderful :wub: . really dope flow and the rhymes were hilarious. i just want to know where you came up with the idea for that :huh:??? lol

[Excalibur]

Originally posted by ODonthesetrees+Apr 7 2007, 08:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ODonthesetrees @ Apr 7 2007, 08:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Excalibur@Apr 7 2007, 01:58 PM
I'm the real, I never need a hype man
and my freshness still shocks ya like lightnin'
it's frightnin' how i'm sykin' out these lames
playin the same games, no play from the dames
Yeah it was me Basetwo markin over you tag
And it wasn't too hard cause your name ain't up far
shitting on your weak shit like a japanese porn star
you lost all the flow with the line ending in "tag"

you say you're the real and you don't need a conman
but you also said you don't get play from the girls and
i take it all as a lie cause its one then another
hold up on the contradictions while i fuck your mother
damn she rides it fast and she rides it hard
but her pussy feels like fucking a jar of lard
you know what i mean when its too damn sloppy
she needs a vaccum to clean that socket [/b][/quote]
Duuuuh, that's why it's called a "freestyle" I just threw it up off the top of the dome. I don't plan out my freestyle like some lames out there, it's what comes to mind at the time. and if it loses flow, it loses flow.

[syrup2]

why must u say nigguh so much

your not talking to anyone whos of african americsa decent
you have a point but dont be so silly

[Kayone707]

dont be so silly..
you dont have to cuss, just look at big willy...
will smith.. brush your teeth.
ah-skeet skeet skeet

[syrup2]

Originally posted by Kayone707@Apr 9 2007, 01:00 AM
dont be so silly..
you dont have to cuss, just look at big willy...
will smith.. brush your teeth.
ah-skeet skeet skeet
fire kay straight lyircal fire
:D

[Kayone707]

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHH
*in lil jon voice
http://img.alibaba.com/photo/50860951/spinner_necklace.jpg

[Gear_07]

Originally posted by ODonthesetrees+Apr 6 2007, 09:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ODonthesetrees @ Apr 6 2007, 09:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Gear_07@Mar 28 2007, 02:03 AM
got me trippin and shit got dis cop checcin on mah balls

talkin bout u got da rite to remain silent put yo hands on da wall

iono wuh to do i think he saw me do a peice

so im like fucc it spray him wit mah paint and hit da streets

now i don fucced up cuhzz dey gon git me for assault and graffiti

went to mah nigguhs house to roll a fat blunt u feel me

now im high as hell not givin a fucc

a couple days past so i gess das mah lucc

ima all city king a writer slash thug

doin mah shit on da streets lovin da bay life cuhzz
yo makr ecko sure sucks at rapping huh? :lol: [/b][/quote]
hhaahaha ya real funny

[Jugga]

self concious narcissist,
one that exists within the grips of the only skin she's grown to love,
but hates the discomfort..
apply's synthetic beauty and taints self proclaimed perfection..
covers up the flawless lies with unmarred deception..
flaunts what she's got, thinking nobody knows that she's got it..
but her uncertainty quickly harbors it when somebody watches..
self concious narcissist in love with thoughts of suicide and self pride..
completely smothered with the beauty that's lacking inside..
with the uncharted ability to brighten lives with smiles..
her auto-despised being molests her inner child..
The child weeps,
for force-fed mental masturbation,
is just another cry for self-help lost in translation..

[TylerDurden]

yah mon, I spit fiya

[jalleyadikt]

fame,
where the fuck is your flow that shit was whack
ill anilate you with my words and blow you right off the race track
i dont need to use a gun or a gat to blow you to peices
i use my words and my mouth untill your life decreases

[sketch3]

u cant blow me to peices,cuss ur rymes stink like pheises,
do some research.write up a theises,
or are u too busy fucking some he-shes,
the way to be cirten is to look at the throat,if theres a lump then its a no,
unless yr gay and a homo,
this rymes lossing its flow,so im gunna stop.drop.and go

[Bruce1nr_is_GRINCHIN!]

Excalibur, I have the strangest feeling you're just throwing words that rhyme together...

[syrup2]

im braindead
yes indeed I am
drooling out my mouth and slobbering on folks
im looking retarded rolling on 100 spokes
some say its an issue that I shit my own pants
some think I got an issue because when im alone I dance
myself I think im dandy because mommy loves me too
and when I bump my head on you mommys gonna sue
..durrr

[scr3w]

Originally posted by sketch3@Apr 9 2007, 12:06 PM
u cant blow me to peices,cuss ur rymes stink like pheises,
do some research.write up a theises,
or are u too busy fucking some he-shes,
the way to be cirten is to look at the throat,if theres a lump then its a no,
unless yr gay and a homo,
this rymes lossing its flow,so im gunna stop.drop.and go
you're wack
you're not black
oh.

[sketch3]

i am wack,and im not black,i got no counter attack,
so im leaving and never coming back,

i dont get this whole thing about being black as special,wow both ur parents are black it dosnt mean that ur instently cool

[Excalibur]

Don't question my rhymes, cause your shit makes dogs whine
so don't check me cause I shine, or I whip ya with the nine.
This dude bruce think he right see, but you aint bruce almighty
fuck off my freestyles B, And we can end this shit quietly.

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by sketch3@Apr 10 2007, 02:02 PM
i am wack,and im not black,i got no counter attack,
so im leaving and never coming back,

i dont get this whole thing about being black as special,wow both ur parents are black it dosnt mean that ur instently cool
is this a rhyme? i cant tell

in my opinion black people are gods
liek oprah winfrey and will smiths moms
she raised him up super swell
made sure he wasnt retarted
well now hes all jiggy with miami and his freestyle

haha i cant even read wihout stopping so i dont even knwo if it flows...fuck it, lame brand narcotics

[ODonthesetrees]

yo heres some straight up modern day shit for ya to lick your lips too :lol:

roll that dutch and pass it around
hit the blunt whys the windows down
fishbowl teh cadillac with the 20s and deez
*****s think im hype, *****s wanna be me
im fly as ever fresh as febreeze
hot damn im a butterfly, smoke in the breeze
as my cherry burns down to the roachety roach
my throats getting sore so my freestyles broke

[ODonthesetrees]

well my hands got writers block but not my mouth
my brains ecstatic to rip a new one out
but i can not get done what i want to do
i cant even see it in my head, im through
gotta go painting, smoking, waiting
vacas aroudn thecorner
gunna rip up some throws and maybe break my nose
fighting hobos with disorders
shit this rhyme is wacker than batman on crack
supermans gunna come and kick him back
to wall street where his rich ass is from
batman aint a superhero, hes a mogul havin fun
fighting crime thinking hes a hero
really hes just a midlife zero
with no wife or firends only his butler around
bet that old bastard gives him reach arounds
well enough with batman and superheros
im a superhero im 10 past zero
on a scale from 1-10 im beyond eleven
fuck any bitch thats above a 7
pussy is pussy what can i say
copped dome of mrs. claus while santa was away
rapping like this just doesnt get old
until im broken hearted chest full of holes
well this time im truly gone cause this shits gone too long
over and out to my *****s on my front lawn
george bush you can suck my cock
I'm gunna fist your wife and jizz on your socks

[swich]

we gettin money but aint shit funny
a swift hit'll leave ya nose swollen liek ya name was douge funny
we dem bois sittin on tight white ferraries
flow is old skool like them damn ataries
window stay tinted like my damn shades
chillen in the shade blowin exotic haze
pop her damn cherry then blow on the mary
life gets scary when ur shootin up like harry
got the requim but aint livin a dream
pockets stay green, sippin lean with my team...

[syrup2]

Originally posted by swich@Apr 15 2007, 11:15 PM

a swift hit'll leave ya nose swollen liek ya name was douge funny

firrreee
shit is rawwwww

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by syrup2+Apr 15 2007, 11:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ Apr 15 2007, 11:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Apr 15 2007, 11:15 PM

a swift hit'll leave ya nose swollen liek ya name was douge funny

firrreee
shit is rawwwww [/b][/quote]
shits deez

[ODonthesetrees]

you're shit is wild with a side of old school vomit
king of toys, dude writes atomic
AT5 is the crew they rep
all toys 5 of them no respect
i cross out your your so called piece
white ass dude rocks LRG fleece
gets straight a's, rich as trump
minus the girls, heard hes got a tinyy stump
man this shit is wack as can be
lost my flow last century
epiphnay is what i need
to suceed and break through the barrier reef
of flow, dynamic sting
introduce new shit, but ill never rap about "bling"
fuck that new school shit
dudes repeat the same verse and think they can spit
well ill spit right back ****, on your face
as i blow a load in your wifes private place
peace yo, i done it again
spent all this time to avoid my friend
raps are wack, words have no whit
im a white teenager who needs to take a shit

[ODonthesetrees]

well if we die tonight then im fine with life
cause i had enough time to get shit down alright
ripped enough bowls and rolled enopugh spliffs
i jsut love sitting back getting blitzed
well no one posts in this thread anymore
i think i ruined it, when i became ap ost whore
well my rhymes might be bad, but at least i try
hopefuly im improving, i jsut wish i was fly
now im on my way to fight the shitty shit
that keeps me locked up in this no good city bit
i hope i die soon and forget the odds
my lifes gone long enough, soon ill be a retard

[AnteUp]

im in tha freestyle mood so im bout ta put it down
rollin down tha street droppin bombs on these clowns
gots ta find tha spot for me to catch all those dimes
u kno tha ones im talkin bout BIG BEHINDS
and tha big breast-eses, me im drivin reckless-es
daimonds on mah necklaces
u tryna be me so u find outwat mah breakfast is?
and u still tryna figure out why mah neck is blue
its cuz the ice on mah neck is exactly like mah crews
defenition of that is ice be makin us blue...
ok the freestyle is over so im gonna park tha drop
tha one on them 84's and u kno that shit is hot
candy paint drippin like a meltin ice cube
with that last line mah freestyle is through!

[syrup2]

Im a young black mack
with more cabbage then safeway
blow hella trees but yet to find it a gateway

its not a thug thing infact I got two lip rings
get hyphy in the club ..**** i sip things

18 hundred call it the dummy juice
fighting evreybody, lemme loose

only fuck with a broad if she got a big ol caboose
no ass bitch ima go selvent and if there aint no tittys

well then the bitch is irrelvant

[GEE-DOT-ONE]

we hate em, we gon take em, and we gon break his jaw
and ima shout these lines till my voice is lost
fuck your life, you gettin jacked for that fitted
throw ya back, your skull crack when i hit it
wont reconize your face till your teeth show up
simple 6 bars, what the fuck you gon throw up?

[AnteUp]

like shick quatro, cut em close is mah motto
thats wat starts hapinin when u try ta stop tha flow
hustle on mah mind so u kno i gotta go
i blow dro on twenty-foes like T.I
girls wanna be M.I...n....e
why cant u see that me...u aint gonna be
throwin d's as fast as i throw bows
u wanna mess wit me put a leash on ur hoe

[AnteUp]

bangin screw in mah system
thats the only way i listen
cookin up rymes like beans in tha kitchen
im not wat tha games bin missin...
im wat it has
dont get mad
fuck ziploc get glad
i dont rep gangs so i dont carry a flag
when i see a gay person i say congrads...
ur a fag...
I WANNA BATTLE SUMONE CUZ IM BORED SO START SUM SHIT :lol:

[.Above.]

I SPIT COMPLICATED LIKE ALGEBRA
REACH IN YA CHEST TEAR YA HEART STRAIGHT OUTTA YA
IM GIVIN U DISEASES THAT CUDNT EVEN BE HEALED BY JESUS
LEAVIN YA MAIN FRAME IN 6 PIECES
THREE MILES FROM TELEQENICES
MY LUNGS CREATE BREZEZ WEN I BREATH UR WHOLE BODY JUST FREEZES
CUZ IM THE ONLY MAN WIT SUCH LARGE PROPORTIONS
GIMME THE WRONG WORDS U B FLOATING IN THE OCEAN
GIMME A GUN N I B CAUSIN MAD PROVOKTIONS
THROW ME A FIT N U WILL SWALLOW THIS DICK
TILL MY CUM RUNS DOWN UR ASS N DRIPS
YA DIG YA BITCH....

[AnteUp]

o snap above tryna start sum ish
u cant spit fast like this bitch
like snip snap i make ya skull krack
listen to mah words, lyrical bombardment
blow up ur house or box or ur apartment
like osama, im droppin bombs on ya mama
its mothers day bitch where tha fuck u think she at?
she at mah house dick slapped
but enough about ur moms,
lets talk about ur job
doin blow jobs
aint that nice
now we all no u aint lukkin fo a wife...

[bonafied]

grounded cuz i write rhymes instead of doing the school work
cookin crack in the kicthen, call it homework


just thought of that today

[AnteUp]

"like schick quatro cut ya close is mah motto"
i love it mane!!!

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by bonafied@May 13 2007, 10:40 PM
grounded cuz i write rhymes instead of doing the school work
cookin crack in the kicthen, call it homework


just thought of that today
good to see you werent straining your brain during your time grounded...we wouldnt actually want you to get smart or anything. you do realize you rhymed "school work" with "homework"??? :huh: . apparently you needa find a new place for the meth lab because the fumes are making you retarded.

[syrup2]

Originally posted by AteskOne+May 13 2007, 10:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AteskOne @ May 13 2007, 10:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@May 13 2007, 10:40 PM
grounded cuz i write rhymes instead of doing the school work
cookin crack in the kicthen, call it homework


just thought of that today
good to see you werent straining your brain during your time grounded...we wouldnt actually want you to get smart or anything. you do realize you rhymed "school work" with "homework"??? :huh: . apparently you needa find a new place for the meth lab because the fumes are making you retarded. [/b][/quote]
atesk oner
that fast cappin, bitch slappin, get the party crackin captin

say somthing stupid homeboy might put you in check

hurt your feelings mang leave you a wreck

tells toys the business and shops for trees like its christmass

might just tell your girl "bitch get this "

used to roll in acura somthing clean tell it crashed

now me and my mass **** in a benzo get SMASSHED

MAAAASSSSA CHUCCAAATESS

[AnteUp]

syrup tha big booty slappa
besta watch out fo he kap ya
hes tha raw dog on BS
with an s on his chest
me n syrup u rhymmin wit tha best
put all yall ta rest
go lay down...its past twelve in texas
big bling on tha necklace
nock u out cold
wit a chokehold
talk shit like u slik
lik silk sheets im in ya girls room
done wit tha bomb droppin KABOOM :P

havin too much fun :D

[syrup2]

Originally posted by AnteUp@May 14 2007, 12:15 AM
syrup tha big booty slappa
besta watch out fo he kap ya
hes tha raw dog on BS
with an s on his chest
me n syrup u rhymmin wit tha best
put all yall ta rest
go lay down...its past twelve in texas
big bling on tha necklace
nock u out cold
wit a chokehold
talk shit like u slik
lik silk sheets im in ya girls room
done wit tha bomb droppin KABOOM :P

havin too much fun :D
why thank you ante I used to hate texas rap..that was untell I met your sexy ass

[syrup2]

Its not like Im a bad guy Im just down to make some green
I like thick thighs and whats inbetween
countin fiftys and playin with tittys
meeting up with the bs cats in diffrent citys
not from seventh letter but your girls on my saber
lookin like a starburst ya boys packin flavor

smoking newports and drinking mickeys
hanging on the corner sportin some brand new dickies
this is syrup fda king of your block
the half italion cat with 4 grand in the sock

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by syrup2+May 13 2007, 11:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ May 13 2007, 11:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by AteskOne@May 13 2007, 10:53 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bonafied@May 13 2007, 10:40 PM
grounded cuz i write rhymes instead of doing the school work
cookin crack in the kicthen, call it homework


just thought of that today
good to see you werent straining your brain during your time grounded...we wouldnt actually want you to get smart or anything. you do realize you rhymed "school work" with "homework"??? :huh: . apparently you needa find a new place for the meth lab because the fumes are making you retarded.
atesk oner
that fast cappin, bitch slappin, get the party crackin captin

say somthing stupid homeboy might put you in check

hurt your feelings mang leave you a wreck

tells toys the business and shops for trees like its christmass

might just tell your girl "bitch get this "

used to roll in acura somthing clean tell it crashed

now me and my mass **** in a benzo get SMASSHED

MAAAASSSSA CHUCCAAATESS [/b][/quote]
haha YYYEAH BOOYYY!!!!

508 SON!!!!

rip acura integra :(

[TylerDurden]

508 is where I catch a freight
or some shwag if I'm outta state
I've been driving this here Acura
since prbly around 1998!!!!



GET AT ME!!!!

[TalibKweli]

vamos a la playa mothafuckas :lol:

[Kayone707]

Pogo the pug, bites kids cuz hes a thug...
the thuggish puggish...thuggish ruggish puggish...
pug named pogo, bones female pugs, he aint no homo.

-off the new pug mixtape in stores soon

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by Kayone707@May 15 2007, 02:58 PM
Pogo the pug, bites kids cuz hes a thug...
the thuggish puggish...thuggish ruggish puggish...
pug named pogo, bones female pugs, he aint no homo.

-off the new pug mixtape in stores soon
dont forget to cop the remix (ft DJ Maggie and Hug a Pug Productions)

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by TylerDurden@May 15 2007, 02:32 PM
508 is where I catch a freight
or some shwag if I'm outta state
I've been driving this here Acura
since prbly around 1998!!!!



GET AT ME!!!!
:blink: you know way too much about my life lol...

i needa stop giving out my information to ever person that says they'll give me e-dome. ;) it was a fun night tho TylerDurden and you skills at giving online blowjobs are amazing.

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by syrup2+May 15 2007, 12:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ May 15 2007, 12:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@May 14 2007, 12:15 AM
syrup tha big booty slappa
besta watch out fo he kap ya
hes tha raw dog on BS
with an s on his chest
me n syrup u rhymmin wit tha best
put all yall ta rest
go lay down...its past twelve in texas
big bling on tha necklace
nock u out cold
wit a chokehold
talk shit like u slik
lik silk sheets im in ya girls room
done wit tha bomb droppin KABOOM :P

havin too much fun :D
why thank you ante I used to hate texas rap..that was untell I met your sexy ass [/b][/quote]
its always nice to be told ur a sexy ass by a 83 year old man :) :lol:

[TalibKweli]

Originally posted by AnteUp@May 15 2007, 11:12 PM
its always nice to be told ur a sexy ass by a 83 year old man :) :lol:
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/8447/oldmaneg6.jpg
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

[AnteUp]

i got a sucker in mah pocket, wanna reach in and grab it :lol:

[AnteUp]

ok...im soo bored...i wanna battle sumone gud so im callin out syrup :) jus for kicks (no momma tlkin)

[DatKidWitDaKandyCoatedNecklace]

i live at home , i live in queens i like to eat fried chicken and colet greens.

[syrup2]

Originally posted by AnteUp@May 16 2007, 11:14 PM
ok...im soo bored...i wanna battle sumone gud so im callin out syrup :) jus for kicks (no momma tlkin)
haha aight ante no beef

catch it mang texas aint got shit on the bay
my nigs like tony hawk grinding evreyday

im not just a vandel but a artist in disguise
might put a sticker right between your eyes

call me a hater but you dont have no rhymes
you wish u had dollers but cuz is stuck with dimes

tryin to ante up but the stack looking low
aint got no paper ..shit aint got no flow

[swich]

burnin all hataz, stretched in my navigator/
numah one player in the game im a slayer/
betta say ya prayas u gon taste the flavor/
of that damn metal in ya mouth gon savor/
spew forth words and herbs has got um slurred/
worse meets worse im cursed and since my birth/
i had that thirst i fueled it till it burst/
my versus merked all hataz with a smirk/
my ash tray flashay ,weed yeah we need her/
im killin more herbs than a god damn weed eater/
if hataz dont flee my finger jus might squeeze/
fuk up ya whole life and stain ya white tee...

[jvillebboy]

lemme give it a shot:


wack dudes is fast food, better yet, maybe cat food
yuh style was hot last june, you dont want me in a bad mood
i blast through, shit dude, my graffs too is like tattoos
yall hold krylons, i hold a microphone like an ass dude
lemme ask you, you rap too? dude get eaten like cashews
stick to yuh kick flips, cans and shit sticks, you suck like vaccums
im a pass through, better yet, lemme finish my last line
dont act like you better, cause you better off in the past times


uhm, dunno. aint written anythin in a minute. hollER!! lol

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by syrup2+May 17 2007, 12:10 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ May 17 2007, 12:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@May 16 2007, 11:14 PM
ok...im soo bored...i wanna battle sumone gud so im callin out syrup :) jus for kicks (no momma tlkin)
haha aight ante no beef

catch it mang texas aint got shit on the bay
my nigs like tony hawk grinding evreyday

im not just a vandel but a artist in disguise
might put a sticker right between your eyes

call me a hater but you dont have no rhymes
you wish u had dollers but cuz is stuck with dimes

tryin to ante up but the stack looking low
aint got no paper ..shit aint got no flow [/b][/quote]
u sayin texas aint got nuthin on tha bay
so ima prove u wrong, listen wat i say
yall b ghost ridin that bitch
but in texas we swangin ditch to ditch
we got different color diamonds in our grill
all yall got in ur mouth is penis enlargment pills
we got stacks tha size of e-40s stomach
we geniuses in tha rap game, try ta stump us
we on tha grind 24/7
yall washin windows at tha 7 eleven
u got love for texas style syrup
have u straight up tipsy...bout ta throw up
im dun wit u mane go wack off to ur pin ups

edit: :D no beef :)

[syrup2]

Originally posted by AnteUp+May 17 2007, 11:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AnteUp @ May 17 2007, 11:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by syrup2@May 17 2007, 12:10 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@May 16 2007, 11:14 PM
ok...im soo bored...i wanna battle sumone gud so im callin out syrup :) jus for kicks (no momma tlkin)
haha aight ante no beef

catch it mang texas aint got shit on the bay
my nigs like tony hawk grinding evreyday

im not just a vandel but a artist in disguise
might put a sticker right between your eyes

call me a hater but you dont have no rhymes
you wish u had dollers but cuz is stuck with dimes

tryin to ante up but the stack looking low
aint got no paper ..shit aint got no flow
u sayin texas aint got nuthin on tha bay
so ima prove u wrong, listen wat i say
yall b ghost ridin that bitch
but in texas we swangin ditch to ditch
we got different color diamonds in our grill
all yall got in ur mouth is penis enlargment pills
we got stacks tha size of e-40s stomach
we geniuses in tha rap game, try ta stump us
we on tha grind 24/7
yall washin windows at tha 7 eleven
u got love for texas style syrup
have u straight up tipsy...bout ta throw up
im dun wit u mane go wack off to ur pin ups

edit: :D no beef :) [/b][/quote]
texas is for mike jones, paul wall and commerical rap

otherwise known as mass produced filth and crap

the whole nation trying to jump out of there car and skip

worldwide phenommon..ghostride the whip

whens the last time you herd somebody talkin about that swinging shit

the lone star state is for those broke country cats

who talk about iced tea and a " big ol cadda lacs"

well im from the city homie if you didnt know

all my partnas is rich all my partnas push snow

u was never on the grind just on your porch

sucka hush that mouth , I got heat like scotch storch

..but on another note

end you raps with somthing cool
"go wack of to pin ups"

**** what are you in , elmentry school ! ?

NO BEEF MANG















:D

[jvillebboy]

i cant believe dudes beefin over cities, shits mad funny
nigguhs quick to talk bout grindin but aint ever had money
lemme ask somethin, who really out hustlin bricks?
i never have, and truth: never will, im out bussin a spliff
nigguh get cut up the lip, but where im from it dont matter
cause most my boys up in the 'sky' like they cool wit 'saturn'
smokin Ls and gettin twisted, shit, fuck ice where the wrist is
im livin aight fo myself, gettin money wit work wit the rich kids

[syrup2]

Originally posted by jvillebboy@May 18 2007, 04:39 PM
i cant believe dudes beefin over cities, shits mad funny
nigguhs quick to talk bout grindin but aint ever had money
lemme ask somethin, who really out hustlin bricks?
i never have, and truth: never will, im out bussin a spliff
nigguh get cut up the lip, but where im from it dont matter
cause most my boys up in the 'sky' like they cool wit 'saturn'
smokin Ls and gettin twisted, shit, fuck ice where the wrist is
im livin aight fo myself, gettin money wit work wit the rich kids
aint nuthing funny but the fact u aint involved

u talkin bout u aint got bricks

its cuz u aint evolved

we make money now muthafucka its a fact

if u say somthing diffrent u should be slapped

where you from matters its a war on the street

im from oakland california ,*****s got to eat

your boys cool with saturn well my partnas is cool with benz

hustling evreyday right up to the end

you living aight well keep it to yourself

me and ante up on here talking about wealth



..ps beef

[AnteUp]

Originally posted by syrup2+May 18 2007, 12:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (syrup2 @ May 18 2007, 12:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by AnteUp@May 17 2007, 11:19 PM
Originally posted by syrup2@May 17 2007, 12:10 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-AnteUp@May 16 2007, 11:14 PM
ok...im soo bored...i wanna battle sumone gud so im callin out syrup :) jus for kicks (no momma tlkin)
haha aight ante no beef

catch it mang texas aint got shit on the bay
my nigs like tony hawk grinding evreyday

im not just a vandel but a artist in disguise
might put a sticker right between your eyes

call me a hater but you dont have no rhymes
you wish u had dollers but cuz is stuck with dimes

tryin to ante up but the stack looking low
aint got no paper ..shit aint got no flow
u sayin texas aint got nuthin on tha bay
so ima prove u wrong, listen wat i say
yall b ghost ridin that bitch
but in texas we swangin ditch to ditch
we got different color diamonds in our grill
all yall got in ur mouth is penis enlargment pills
we got stacks tha size of e-40s stomach
we geniuses in tha rap game, try ta stump us
we on tha grind 24/7
yall washin windows at tha 7 eleven
u got love for texas style syrup
have u straight up tipsy...bout ta throw up
im dun wit u mane go wack off to ur pin ups

edit: :D no beef :)
texas is for mike jones, paul wall and commerical rap

otherwise known as mass produced filth and crap

the whole nation trying to jump out of there car and skip

worldwide phenommon..ghostride the whip

whens the last time you herd somebody talkin about that swinging shit

the lone star state is for those broke country cats

who talk about iced tea and a " big ol cadda lacs"

well im from the city homie if you didnt know

all my partnas is rich all my partnas push snow

u was never on the grind just on your porch

sucka hush that mouth , I got heat like scotch storch

..but on another note

end you raps with somthing cool
"go wack of to pin ups"

**** what are you in , elmentry school ! ?

NO BEEF MANG















:D [/b][/quote]

if tha whole nation wants to get out and skip
i hope that the bitches trip and get hit
see in texas we aint about that hyphy shit
we like to lay low chunka duece and tha purple stuff we sip
thinkin that im elementary u got sumthin comin
since u tha one on ur san fran streets bummin
the only things in commin wit our citys is tha drugs,and tha words
naddamean, and swangin are sum of tha things that can be heard
the purple syrup that we sip makes our words slurred...

mucho love for syrup2 so im endin this rhyme wit
if i ever serve time...ull be tha first one on mah mind :D :lol:

(if u wanna go another round u can but im dunn so we wont get in to far and jeprodize our marriage)... :P

edit:jville dont want nun

[ODonthesetrees]

Originally posted by syrup2@May 18 2007, 12:03 AM
texas is for mike jones, paul wall and commerical rap

otherwise known as mass produced filth and crap

the whole nation trying to jump out of there car and skip

worldwide phenommon..ghostride the whip

whens the last time you herd somebody talkin about that swinging shit

the lone star state is for those broke country cats

who talk about iced tea and a " big ol cadda lacs"

well im from the city homie if you didnt know

all my partnas is rich all my partnas push snow

u was never on the grind just on your porch

sucka hush that mouth , I got heat like scotch storch

..but on another note

end you raps with somthing cool
"go wack of to pin ups"

**** what are you in , elmentry school ! ?

NO BEEF MANG















:D
not gunna lie thats a bomb rhyme right there

just popped me a pill, labeled 512
a percoset if you will, almost made me spew
shit tasted liek a salt stick in my pocket
covered with lint and way too toxic
but now my heads going a mile a dozen
bumpin George Clinton funkadelic fuzzin
sippin on drinks and smokin crack
dude is over 60, still writin ill tracks
colorblind since he was barely born
but man that nukkah loves his corn
man my rhymes are fresh as febreeze
that saying will never split from me
hahahaha i love this thread, my shit is so bad

[Degausserr x]

******s.

[syrup2]

ante
good battle
you know I love you (spooning)

o don thank you
you know whats sup
I like that lil flow u had there it had style to it mang

and degausserr x shut the fuck up and kiss my fat black ass

or if you care for gay buttsex freestyle rapping session join the party

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

Originally posted by syrup2@May 19 2007, 12:28 AM
o don thank you

his name isnt O Don...it's O.D.(overdose) on these trees.

dont feel bad syrup. for a while i thought it was pronounced that way too.

[syrup2]

thanks for telling me that
wow that puts his name in a whole diffrent perspective
infact.. I dont think I can look at anything the same way now that youve said that
im going to kill myself now, thanks for ruining my life

[AteskOne]

edit

[syrup2]

:( yes


haha new account huh

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

i dont know what you're talking about?

[syrup2]

wtf now im confused

I gotta stop accepting free drinks at gay bars

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

empty your inbox you sexy beast.

[bouncingsoul]

Yo I "fly like a butterfly, sting like a B-29"/
You drop your shit rhymes and I'll take what's mine/
You grab ya bitch and fuck 'er from behind/
While I'm chillin' at home just counting down the time/
The time you got 'till I beat ya so bad/
You won't recall anything that you ever had/
Not like there's much to recall, you just live fads/
Followin' everyone else's footsteps like they was ya dad/
It ain't your fault, you got no father figure to follow/
Your existence is a hole, it's oh so hollow/
I can fill it with shit but I choose not to, I lay low/
I know your number, I just choose not to call you/
If only you'd know, the things I'd do/
Had I seen your skinny ass around town, douche/
Uneducated, when I win you say "toosh"/
I'll knock ya brain in the path of that swoosh on ya shoes/

Yo you think materialism is the only way to live/
Grow up, learn a lesson, find your heart and give/
Give till you can't give no more/
Give till it empties your whole soul/
Then, and only then, you'll know life and what it is/
Yo it's more than a bloody fetus and 6 week old jizz/
I rhyme explicit because that's all we see/
And if you ever see me, you pick up the pace and flee/
Flee faster than a Concorde hauling ass, full speed/
Run away, find something more, and give up your greed/
Cause I'm here to make a change, we all need to bleed/
We must all experience pain to see the meaning/
Meaning of all the is, the truth of me and you/
Yo man, I'm just preaching to a dead doll now, you even there foo'?

[syrup2]

bouncing soul that was dope with a capital D

[RFI. SPit]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@May 19 2007, 10:11 PM


Yo you think materialism is the only way to live/
Grow up, learn a lesson, find your heart and give/
Give till you can't give no more/
Give till it empties your whole soul/
Then, and only then, you'll know life and what it is/
Yo it's more than a bloody fetus and 6 week old jizz/
I rhyme explicit because that's all we see/
And if you ever see me, you pick up the pace and flee/
Flee faster than a Concorde hauling ass, full speed/
Run away, find something more, and give up your greed/
Cause I'm here to make a change, we all need to bleed/
We must all experience pain to see the meaning/
Meaning of all the is, the truth of me and you/
Yo man, I'm just preaching to a dead doll now, you even there foo'?
Bravo man, I liked this alot



I'm tired of materialism and obsession over fame
Your vanity and ego are the trophies you claim
Get your head out of the clouds and look to the ground
It's going to take a thousand pound weight to pull you back down
Rip off your labels, and your abercrombie fads
Not everything in the world is about being rich, young lad
Ignorance is not a prize and should not be treated as one
With tunnel vision like yours you deserve the gun
But I'm not going to sit around and babble about what I hate
But look at yourself and take off that stupid bape.

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

dddooope RFI.

[RFI. SPit]

:lol: thanks.

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by RFI. SPit+May 19 2007, 10:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RFI. SPit @ May 19 2007, 10:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@May 19 2007, 10:11 PM


Yo you think materialism is the only way to live/
Grow up, learn a lesson, find your heart and give/
Give till you can't give no more/
Give till it empties your whole soul/
Then, and only then, you'll know life and what it is/
Yo it's more than a bloody fetus and 6 week old jizz/
I rhyme explicit because that's all we see/
And if you ever see me, you pick up the pace and flee/
Flee faster than a Concorde hauling ass, full speed/
Run away, find something more, and give up your greed/
Cause I'm here to make a change, we all need to bleed/
We must all experience pain to see the meaning/
Meaning of all the is, the truth of me and you/
Yo man, I'm just preaching to a dead doll now, you even there foo'?
Bravo man, I liked this alot



I'm tired of materialism and obsession over fame
Your vanity and ego are the trophies you claim
Get your head out of the clouds and look to the ground
It's going to take a thousand pound weight to pull you back down
Rip off your labels, and your abercrombie fads
Not everything in the world is about being rich, young lad
Ignorance is not a prize and should not be treated as one
With tunnel vision like yours you deserve the gun
But I'm not going to sit around and babble about what I hate
But look at yourself and take off that stupid bape. [/b][/quote]
You win

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

a little something to describe my emotions right now.

what was lost is lost, so why should i bother to look.
because i've traveled this far upstream, just to drown in a brook.
is it really that hard for you to see what i've tried to complete.
why should i even bother trying when you've already accepted defeat.
your deciet, is too much for me to bare or even to swallow.
and this game can only work if the leader is followed.
why should i continue to try if you just continue to leave.
Why should i sit and hold my breath while you forget that i needed to breath.
so instead i exhale an overwhelming breathe that releaves.
all of your selfish expectations that i've tried to exceed.
i realize now how foolish it was to think this ever could last.
so i ask you now, should i look to the future or dwell on our past?

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by cancer patients and crack pipes@May 19 2007, 11:41 PM
a little something to describe my emotions right now.

what was lost is lost, so why should i bother to look.
because i've traveled this far upstream, just to drown in a brook.
is it really that hard for you to see what i've tried to complete.
why should i even bother trying when you've already accepted defeat.
your deciet, is too much for me to bare or even to swallow.
and this game can only work if the leader is followed.
why should i continue to try if you just continue to leave.
Why should i sit and hold my breath while you forget that i needed to breath.
so instead i exhale an overwhelming breathe that releaves.
all of your selfish expectations that i've tried to exceed.
i realize now how foolish it was to think this ever could last.
so i ask you now, should i look to the future or dwell on our past?
I like that, only problem is you spelled "bear" wrong hah

And some of the lines are a stretch, flow-wise but it's good.

What's this about? Relationship? Your mentor/big brother/something similar commit suicide?

[cancer patients and crack pipes]

sorry bout the typo...but ya it's hard to get the proper flow of a song over the internet because you cant read it the same way as the person who wrote it. and garenteed the flow you imagined when you read it is different from the flow that i intended. that's why i dont like rhyming on the internet...

and it has to do with a relationship.

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by cancer patients and crack pipes@May 19 2007, 11:58 PM
sorry bout the typo...but ya it's hard to get the proper flow of a song over the internet because you cant read it the same way as the person who wrote it. and garenteed the flow you imagined when you read it is different from the flow that i intended. that's why i dont like rhyming on the internet...

and it has to do with a relationship.
Ahh word

[RFI. SPit]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul+May 19 2007, 11:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bouncingsoul @ May 19 2007, 11:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by RFI. SPit@May 19 2007, 10:33 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-bouncingsoul@May 19 2007, 10:11 PM


Yo you think materialism is the only way to live/
Grow up, learn a lesson, find your heart and give/
Give till you can't give no more/
Give till it empties your whole soul/
Then, and only then, you'll know life and what it is/
Yo it's more than a bloody fetus and 6 week old jizz/
I rhyme explicit because that's all we see/
And if you ever see me, you pick up the pace and flee/
Flee faster than a Concorde hauling ass, full speed/
Run away, find something more, and give up your greed/
Cause I'm here to make a change, we all need to bleed/
We must all experience pain to see the meaning/
Meaning of all the is, the truth of me and you/
Yo man, I'm just preaching to a dead doll now, you even there foo'?
Bravo man, I liked this alot



I'm tired of materialism and obsession over fame
Your vanity and ego are the trophies you claim
Get your head out of the clouds and look to the ground
It's going to take a thousand pound weight to pull you back down
Rip off your labels, and your abercrombie fads
Not everything in the world is about being rich, young lad
Ignorance is not a prize and should not be treated as one
With tunnel vision like yours you deserve the gun
But I'm not going to sit around and babble about what I hate
But look at yourself and take off that stupid bape.
You win [/b][/quote]
Hah, call it a tie :lol:

[swich]

throwed than a bitch sliden down on smooth butter/
ima stay gutter dont play with mean muggers/
candy frame shutter putin shame to them sukas/
stupid motha fukas get the rage, kill ya brotha/
livin vivid picture my vision/
windows is tinted like a boy scout convintion/
cady paint drippin cookin chickens in ma kitchen/
movin big keys across different divisions/

[jvillebboy]

yo, who here actually record shit? lol. im curious. mad dudes can write, but not mad dudes can flow. you know? anyways. ima drop a lil shit again


i aint ever had beef wit no one on this site
so chill, half yall round here know how ta write
and im bein real, its chill you drop a hot verse
and get a quick battle, see who get knocked first
while some dudes got work, out hustlin shit
hustlin bricks, and some aint even accustomed to it
im touchin the tip, i aint even tryna spark a fuse
if its hip hop then i think its about the truth...

[swich]

check out my music page


http://www.myspace.com/sdubentertainmentswich

[2KoS]

It's like the community dregs vs the FEDS,
Rebellious till I DIE, fist HIGH for the non-uniform HEADS.

[swich]

ignite my flow like a flame/
swang candy frame in ya lane drippin paint/
for the fame flip the change/
these dames is all lame/
my gun goes bang put bitches to shame/
so speak my name swich one the winner/
numbah one contender life sinner/
i bring the heat in the winter and keep a chilled mouth/
talkin shit well chill out or blodd will spill out....

[..:------>SIC<------:..]

I'll rip you up worse than a virgins Vagina,
and have you watching your back so much youd swear someone was lurkin behind ya,
I'll bag you kidnap and cut up your nerves and ya spine up,
beat you to death, cut off your flesh and burn you with fiyah (fire)

we all die sooner or later, but yours is just a day a way,
stab you with thousands of rusty metal razor blades,
cut your eyelids off so you cant stop seeing the pain ya gain,
from watching me putting a kinfe on your stomach and start to engrave my name,

[bluntsthatarefat]

that virgins vagina line was dope
:P

[bobo9827]

cruisin the streets in my six four'

[japan]

word word word word word word ^^^^^^^^^^

[Dream Creation]

stuck in the back of a dodgem viper
never know wen im gunna have to strike ya
dint u realise im a class a sniper
like a credit card bitch i'll swipe ya

flow double s is the name of my team
we be flow double s reppin a rude buy lean
from 15 to 16 my bars have gone from super to being extreme
bitch ass toy wiggas seem over keen!
we be showin there mum the true man cream

[Dream Creation]

stuck in the back of a dodgem viper
never know wen im gunna have to strike ya
dint u realise im a class a sniper
like a credit card bitch i'll swipe ya

flow double s is the name of my team
we be flow double s reppin a rude buy lean
from 15 to 16 my bars have gone from super to being extreme
bitch ass toy wiggas seem over keen!
we be showin there mum the true man cream

[syrup2]

Originally posted by Dream Creation@May 29 2007, 02:04 PM
stuck in the back of a dodgem viper
never know wen im gunna have to strike ya
dint u realise im a class a sniper
like a credit card bitch i'll swipe ya

flow double s is the name of my team
we be flow double s reppin a rude buy lean
from 15 to 16 my bars have gone from super to being extreme
bitch ass toy wiggas seem over keen!
we be showin there mum the true man cream
lurkin in the back of a cutless caprice
with a big booty beezie by the name of shanese

youll always know when im gonna set off the eagle
cuz ill be high off coke like that shit was legal

never fuck with a sniper cuz I like to see his face
when that hollow point shell puts his ass in place

dont flow at all cuz im usally tanked off my ass
you can find me in the street ,passed out with a bitch taking my cash

from 15 to 16 my habits have changed
I went from a mommas boy to fucking deranged

but evryone these days wants to be a harcore thug
when really all they need is a great big hug

["OPTIK"]

Just for fun, I'll have em spot me a ton
Tried to jack me for my shit, you better pray like a nun
You spotted my gun
You better fuck it and run, you better duck son
you didnt your done your dead and I won
search your bloddy pockets and I only find a one.

[TylerDurden]

the freestyler
never the dick rider
give me a jimmy hat
and i might hide her
body like I'm eminem
i dont know about you
manly, not feminen

holla

[AnteUp]

since were all rappin bout cars :)

candy cadillac, im tippin on fours
windows 5% tint open tha doors
chronic blowin out have me crawlin on tha floor
pick me up a nice hoe, by tha name of amanda
got tha body of a goddess man she a slamma
make tha car bounce wit out switches
me an tha crew we back, u miss us?

[Dez-One]

Grandaddy purp or bubble, kush, crush, ya
Ex-plode in a bitch mouth like a gusher

Yeah, its lil wayne....not me. Ill come up with somethin later

[AnteUp]

"mah screen fall and hang down like ya gramammas titties" freestyle from chamillionaire

[Dez-One]

I'm bad
Na really I'm good
Sound like a T-Rex live under my hood
Got a loaded Tec live under my seat
Put you in the ground
Now you live under my feet
All white diamonds on the front of my teeth
And you better put O in front of my G
The bullshit they be talking don't come to my knee
I'm like a linebacker don't run it by me
My two best friends will accompany me
And right now they are in my dungaree sleep
One name Mack one name Nenna
They hit you make you do the Macarenna
Where you tools
you gonna need like a motherfucker
And I'm so New Orleans it's like a motherfucker
It's young money and we eating get you own suppa
Make me go off to the trunk and get the bone crusher

[Chulo]

i spray all on u like a can wit a broken top
i'll hit u from ya bottom to ya fuckin top
my brakes could be stuck, still couldnt stop
I dont care if u write flip, ya piece still gon flop
my rhymes are fresh like deli meats
an errbody loves em, like girl track meets

[GeSuS_KRiST]

you spray on us?
whats that mean?
your rhymes are weak an horrid
u should of been aborted
while your at it kill yourself u aint important

kids these days.... newbies = gays

[c-l0k]

GeSuS KRIST that was fucking tite!!!

now chulo heres 1 for you

Spray Me Or Any One Else With Paint And Im Sure You Will Be Beaten And Left With A Concussion Your Rhymes Are Off Like Sick Fish You Need Special Parental Guidance As A Guide Line Go Fucking Die N A Hall Way Or Some Shit With A Needle N Your Arm Ladyz Come At Me Like A 6 Pack Of Beers That I Drink Though Out The Day Bitches Come At You Like A 1 Time Telegram Instead Of Ripping Walls Go Jump Off A Bridge In Al Kida! With A Bomb Strapped To Your Chest

No Hate Homie Just Aint Free Styled In Agez We All Good lol All Goody

*Bit Drunk BTW*

[Dez-One]

Shit was tight gesus

[nero122]

im fred your mum gave me head
after your sister rode me in youre bed
my dicks big i impaled ure mum now shes dead


thank you thank you i know im sick no nead to tell me

[Chulo]

givin all haters lead inaculations
goin all country, got tags across the nation
toys need to stay on mommies tits and quit tha fakin

[AnteUp]

gesus krist bringin tha hate back
u betta stay back
for he make ya skull crack
leave u in a abandoned shack
homie im back, bringin tha heat
its a flow witout a beat
sit deep in ya seat
while workin tha wood wheel
keep ya eyes peeled
cuz ur shits about ta be stealed
or stolen
flow hot like molten...

[syrup2]

evreybody listen up ima about to get dope
it aint nothing but some shit I wrote
tay get on the mic and eat *****z like salmon
bitch I eat carrots fuck a potato famine
theres diamonds in my mouth and strong smell of weed
gold clogging my throath its hard to fucking breath
real talk I do the dummy game
ghostride the whip my skills is off the chain

outta pocket ..fuck a bape I wont rock it
disagree fool.. I might cock it
*****z need sweaters cuz its colder then a lone titty
but I got enough heat to blow the vest off fifty
im not thug but I do enjoy sex weed and guns
and evertything taboo calls for a strong sense of fun
this is the end of the rhyme if you dont like it pm me your name and number and social secuirty number and a few naked pics and such so we can settle this out like real online predtors

[AnteUp]

the last two lines are very sweet syrup :) u wanna go out sumtime lol

[GeSuS_KRiST]

givin all haters lead inaculations
goin all country, got tags across the nation
toys need to stay on mommies tits and quit tha fakin
lead inaculations isnt a word

you talk about holding heat
your only sixteen....
all nation?
please its only a quick dream
your trash tags get buffed while u try the talk tuff scene
when out there real writers are doin real things
toys? who you talkin to? not jesus of the tripple six crew
emcee eraser.... im rubber, your the glue...
"quit the faking?"
i think its your own advice u need to be taking
talking about lead lacerations
bitch please....
your toy ass needs to stay in school and get a degree

your rhyme style is wack and mentality is tragic
why they do that?
its call B-E-T's MAGIC....


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/dopeboychase.jpg
keep chasing the dream

[AnteUp]

ouch! thats a burn beyond burns

[GeSuS_KRiST]

cas baby i keeps it trill

[bouncingsoul]

We fight right, it aint tight
Goin around callin out
Every fucking civilian you see and start fights
Middle of the street,
Your victory-addicted ass is right in the path of the lights
Redneck driver, Ford pickup, comin to pick ya shit up
Apparently you refuse to do the work
You illiterate prick, you can't comprehend these words
Forget using them, what's the point?
Talkin to an uneducated fuck, throwin down ill joints
I'll be throwin down rhymes like bombs
And your only response is "Uhh, your mom"
Dude shit's been played back in the fifties
If you got nothing to say, call ya bitch please, tell her to get down on her knees, tell her to suck my dick, jeez
Now I'm gettin tired, I see this as pointless now
I'll stop and give ya a minute to wonder how

Boooooooooooooooooooooooored

[GeSuS_KRiST]

victory addicited ass, upperclass
sub-burb grown by ill parents ina 3 story home
yeah thats right
dont hate me cas u dont live my life
i might be an illertiate fuck
but wont you dont see me Getin'R'Done with your pick up truck
talkin to an uneduacted but under estimated
faded white boy would happened to make it
your words Forget using them, what's the point?
there not not mine
rhyming fight with fight, it aint right an wont be for time after time
now keep your jelious ear to the street for word of defeat
cas people be coppin' beats from gesus few hundred a beat

[AnteUp]

turnin whips on tha strip
purple is wat i sip
give hundred dolla tips
when i get mah hair clipped
so stop tha hatin
when i pull ya broad wit tha daytons
u jus mad cuz u cant
a hata no i aint
get it straight
this 8in. shank will put an end to
watever offends you
i mean offends me, ya see
hang u up in a tree
heavyweight emcee
straight O GEEEEE
its nice to see that otha yungins rappin
watch out, u talk ish ima get this gun ta klappin
so dont be gum flappin...

[GeSuS_KRiST]

watch out, u talk ish ima get this gun ta klappin
so dont be gum flappin...
an justa lean back an lean back ana

[AnteUp]

hmmm?

[GeSuS_KRiST]

i dont know i thought it would sound good at the end of it... im so bored im keystyling.... fuck, i aint freestyled seriously in years

[AnteUp]

it did sound gud but i thought u were hatin on the fact that u put "lean" alot in mah rhymes :) silly me

[GeSuS_KRiST]

shit i get in touch with cough syrup and codone
like E.T trying to phone home
keeps my stumbling and mumblin an accident prone

[AnteUp]

leanin while im deep in tha drivers seatin
mah speakin is like a 70's pimp
nice and smooth no limps
get a glimpse of a master mind
in mah own time,
neva blind, i can see that they afta mah money
couple g's i dont have take it from me
like syrup jus give u hard dick an bubble gum
cuz mah bank statement comes out to a sum
of two zeros dot 23 cents ...
no steak and potatoes :(

[GeSuS_KRiST]

cant have ya puddin if ya dont eat cha meat'

liek wha whu wa whu whut
steak and patatoes
wha whu wa whu whut
tunna casserol
wha whu wa whu whut
green apples
wha whu wa whu whut
with some snapple

[kappo410]

ok chekc htis hsitout:
the name is kap
my beats and my tips are awlays fat
fuck with me u get the bat/u can't fuck with that
u see ive been there and done that and my raps is still phat
so go home and cry to yo momma and stop sellin your worhtless raps and crap!

[AnteUp]

cant have ya puddin if ya dont eat cha meat'

liek wha whu wa whu whut
steak and patatoes
wha whu wa whu whut
tunna casserol
wha whu wa whu whut
green apples
wha whu wa whu whut
with some snapple
:( buh buh but i gotts ta have mah steak and tatters :)

[GeSuS_KRiST]

ok chekc htis hsitout:
the name is kap
my beats and my tips are awlays fat
fuck with me u get the bat/u can't fuck with that
u see ive been there and done that and my raps is still phat
so go home and cry to yo momma and stop sellin your worhtless raps and crap!

kap, more liek crap, ya lyrically wack
stop tryin sellin your worthless raps
leave it to the real artist to havest the phat-ness
cant trap and extract dis its not an act im no ac-tress
so give me the bat bliss cas your not sweet
you lackin the plaque-ness

foo

[knewsince.]

this is somethin i freestyled at my brother studio that should be uploaded soon. i just listened to it for like a half hour and wrote down what i said. it was to the walk it out beat

i walk it out like jordans
or maybe i skate it out like vans nah my couzin
freddie got the board so im just a walker
i got that range but im not the texas ranger
i got power like the rangers
hol up theres danger
index on the trigga i always got in trouble fa my fanger
goin where it aint suposta
ya girl got no problems tho she on that tech shit
she wish my dick had a charger so that it would never quit
i run shit like a baby wit the runs bitch
yea smilar to a lactose on milk
im native to the game like graffiti to new york
like a pen to ink like the point to a fork
i walk it out like a marathon
your girl call me when she needs to get turned on
im the electrician i turn the bitch on
bang my nail and it make the girl stick
its like the chick addicted to the acts of my dick
she stay in shape cuz she bounce on my pogo stick
she practice so much she could go for a reckid
sprint it out like a track star
get head like a porn star
get paid like a movie star
known like a sports star
i spit like a camel
and when light up the mic it smokes like them camels
i try to tell them that i dont cheetoes
but if they actin funny then i just fritoys
but if they lookin good then i lays dem hoes
down and never feed the girl so unless its meat tho
not talkin butcher but more like a genital
lock my flows up cuz god damn they is mental
i took t his track kinda as experimental
ill never stop rappin so look out for t he sequal
known around the nap but soon the whole world to
not waist deep or austin powers
but i still had ya girl shaggin my big meat for hours
her touch is so tender like a flower
let her sniff the white shit no not the flour
not the snow or the salt or the sugar
talkin the white girl like the bitch of freddie krugar
aint got no long nails but got sumn thin else
u get it and get out like a ninja master at stealth
i get in it and stay it in like a bullet to a lon of tef
talk shit get def
walk it out off this track
cuz its almost over dont worry ill b back
not like arnold cuz im not like that
but shoot at me and i will lay u flat
cuz i dont play dat
yes i walk it out
i dont talk it out
if they talkin shit
i will smack it out
wat am i talkin bout
im not gone walk it out
im just gone cut it out
bitch

[sketch3]

cant have ya puddin if ya dont eat cha meat'

liek wha whu wa whu whut
steak and patatoes
wha whu wa whu whut
tunna casserol
wha whu wa whu whut
green apples
wha whu wa whu whut
with some snapple


i dont wan my potatas, fuck it im a hata,severiouly underrated,
leve any challengers and there teeth seperated,
i got a comeback, even if its belated,
ur mind is tainted with the fumes of the stuff u painted,....

ahh i shudnt try to freestyle, also that wasnt directed at anyone, just read potateo and made up a ryme for it

[GeSuS_KRiST]

illin sketch
and knew sence, not bad for a freestlye, what are ur writens like

you know i am a producer duh dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

[AnteUp]

ok chekc htis hsitout:
the name is kap
my beats and my tips are awlays fat
fuck with me u get the bat/u can't fuck with that
u see ive been there and done that and my raps is still phat
so go home and cry to yo momma and stop sellin your worhtless raps and crap!

ayo kap, keep ya name of tha track
cuz u aint neva gonna make stacks
wit this illirical crap
u dont got a strap? u got a bat...
wat u gon do wit that?
tickle a stomach, jus wat when ur ass gets klapped
this is me speakin tha truth
gesus hatin too is proof
that u need to stay out tha game
no fame, ur gonna get
if u dont kno how to spit...

[sketch3]

when i spit on the mic, i spit right, not to the left ,
watch ur words, or ull catch a blow to ur cleft,
leve u toothless like cyrstal meth,
im an addict, munchin on my ricecrispys:smack, crackhead and pot,
u small time,sellin 5 peices, ill sell u a rock the size of a city block,
give me my money or ill death grip u like mister spock,
follow 10 crack commandments like big pop,

ahh im tooo high to be bothered to think about slangin crack

[arsoni2]

munchin on my ricecrispys:smack
tehe, that made me giggle.

[sketch3]

yea i hope ppl in the us and canida have rice crisspys, cuss if dont there a cerial and its jingel is snap crackel and pop... yea like i said im high sooo... i want sum rice crisspys

[GeSuS_KRiST]

me too, im gonna eat some rice crispy treats cerial

[entry]

Tick tock, all i hear in this quit place
is tear drops, hit the ground splash
speckles all but sound the thought of
you is no more a reality, powers out
black all around no one here stay aware
incoming attacks, nothing but facts
truth is key in situations. Windows in the
distance the glares, light shows our real
fears. Only if life were like a room
sweet and sound from what you consume
beat down thrown against the wall
cant stand up for yourself searching for
the nearest motel. He wants to leave
families not doing so well, mystery of
what happens when shes alone,
his anger used and overthrown.
No where to go but a sudden dream make
life what he would want it to seem.
Light shows all fear so turn out the lights
and dream what would be a life not
obscene...

[bouncingsoul]

victory addicited ass, upperclass
sub-burb grown by ill parents ina 3 story home
yeah thats right
dont hate me cas u dont live my life
i might be an illertiate fuck
but wont you dont see me Getin'R'Done with your pick up truck
talkin to an uneduacted but under estimated
faded white boy would happened to make it
your words Forget using them, what's the point?
there not not mine
rhyming fight with fight, it aint right an wont be for time after time
now keep your jelious ear to the street for word of defeat
cas people be coppin' beats from gesus few hundred a beat

Woah I didn't think you'd reply to mine. Shit, how about this one

head back home, tail in between ya legs
cry to mommy and daddy about the bulletproof feds
be a fatass, sit in front of the tube
watch dirty kids pornos with a kleenex and lube
oh, what else ya gonna watch, drake and josh?
sitting on ya expensive as couch, ya think ya fucking posh?
hollister and aber crombie, china made cloth
you look more dressed up than david lee roth
time is ticking, there it goes, tock
keep an eye on the clock, brace yourself for the shock
yo when i beat you, youre the one saying "oh gosh"
afraid of offenses, you got no defenses
so if people backlash, theyll knock ya to ya senses
one hit is all it takes, one hit and itll make
you a man, no longer a disgrace
if that's even possible, i doubt it with THAT face

:edit: Fuck, dude above me used "tick tock" in his... Oh wel

[Edward"Sezer"Hands]

random retarded ish...
I rock my hat to the side, does it represent something.
no bitch.
Maybe it's because i resent something.
Your reality.
I choose to rebel and cause hell.
and you *****s choose to get pee'd on like R. kell.
I aint a follower, i sit back and watch *****s lead.
My life aint over run with your petty needs like greed.
The only thing i need in my life is a blackbook and some weed.
eventuall the writing on the wall will be freed
like a lion in the zoo just waitng to break through
tired of the giggles and laughs
the people who just walk by and past
going crazy trapped in an 8 by 5 living hell
just like the lion this shit will prevail
can't stop determined wills
like a mother on welfare tryin to pay her bills
or a fiend looking for some pills
it just wont stop fuck snitch and fuck a cop
fuck you too bitch becuase my block is hot...

[GeSuS_KRiST]

Woah I didn't think you'd reply to mine. Shit, how about this one

head back home, tail in between ya legs
cry to mommy and daddy about the bulletproof feds
be a fatass, sit in front of the tube
watch dirty kids pornos with a kleenex and lube
oh, what else ya gonna watch, drake and josh?
sitting on ya expensive as couch, ya think ya fucking posh?
hollister and aber crombie, china made cloth
you look more dressed up than david lee roth
time is ticking, there it goes, tock
keep an eye on the clock, brace yourself for the shock
yo when i beat you, youre the one saying "oh gosh"
afraid of offenses, you got no defenses
so if people backlash, theyll knock ya to ya senses
one hit is all it takes, one hit and itll make
you a man, no longer a disgrace
if that's even possible, i doubt it with THAT face

:edit: Fuck, dude above me used "tick tock" in his... Oh wel
mommy and daddy the feds are comin the feds are comin....
fuck teleivison except for adult swim
give up kid ya yall never win, im a veteran
holister an AC, HA thats a laugh... that junks for scenester jock fagz
i rock ufo's, XL gaffiti shirts, entnies, wif wrirstbands
im the mane, man
no not really oh gosh mis milly
yea i quit im go work on some beats.....

[bouncingsoul]

mommy and daddy the feds are comin the feds are comin....
fuck teleivison except for adult swim
give up kid ya yall never win, im a veteran
holister an AC, HA thats a laugh... that junks for scenester jock fagz
i rock ufo's, XL gaffiti shirts, entnies, wif wrirstbands
im the mane, man
no not really oh gosh mis milly
yea i quit im go work on some beats.....

Hah fuck, too lazy to come up with anything else...

Also, I added you on myspace a while ago. Doooooooooope stuff

[GeSuS_KRiST]

thank ya sir, i appreciate it and yeah i rather make beats then rhyme, it would be nice to learn 2 spit though

[JetBlack]

Im gonna get outta the pool because I cant swim
Ever since Banksy scared me outta the water with a shark fin
Im BACK, I didnt go anywhere but I gotta make an entrance
And after I step inside Im lockin the door, leavin you defenseless
Im plannin my lyrical advances in my underwater laboratory, dont try to ignore me
Or Ill come at you with Debbie, Dr. Quinn and MOTHAFUCKIN Stormy
OH, you didnt know I was raw? Well its a new era and Im plannin a jihad
Assasinating your prophets and still havin time for a swim with my homie MEAT WAD

Yeah....so dont mess...or something. I dunno, its been a while. I forgot how to properly diss.

[GeSuS_KRiST]

v unit!

[RFI. SPit]

v-v-v-v-uuunit

[entry]

so heres the deal my lifes a spinnin wheel
i could never pull off the drug deal some little kid always
had to spill, stop snitchin its just my way of living
i close my eyes all i see is angels with dirty faces my dreams
take me to strange places.


ahhh im no good at this

[AnteUp]

gesus has a myspace?!

[GeSuS_KRiST]

gesus has 3 music myspaces....
www.myspace.com/thesisthelasttime (http://www.myspace.com/thesisthelasttime)
(main one)
www.myspace.com/ourghoststories (http://www.myspace.com/ourghoststories)
(with mr. Longstory)
www.myspace.com/prettyfacerapemachine (http://www.myspace.com/prettyfacerapemachine)
(band side project)

[AnteUp]

ok i added tha first two if a white boy thats 14 added u thas me k?

[GeSuS_KRiST]

10-4, i dont check anyone but the first one though

[AnteUp]

ok i deleted the second request an requested ur first one....

someone give me a topic on wat ta freestyle bout... im bored

[GeSuS_KRiST]

hammer buger shoes, apples juice, table tops, and cock socks... go!

[AnteUp]

hammer buger shoes, apples juice, table tops, and cock socks... go!

rockin tha hamburger shoes when im walkin down tha street
apple juice in mah hand wit mah homie makin beats
walk up in tha store owners thinkin ima rob 'em
that aint wat im thinkin ima show stop 'em
jump up on tha table listen to tha words
rhymin bout green, and pink cock socks listen to tha verbs
im up on tha table so mah words can be heard
but for sum reason everybody flippin me tha bird...
why is that think its tha hamburger shoes?
i dont think so cuz these new wit mustard on tha side fool!

thanks to the randomness of gesus..lol

gesus' turn!! rap bout... mcdonalds 42oz dr.pepper, hairclips, big tits, and a blue cup... lol

[Snuff]

Tell me if im any good...... www.myspace.com/cashlt (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/www.myspace.com/cashlt) 1st track is me.. 2nd track is my boy. then me...

[AnteUp]

keep tha thread alive dammit!!

[sketch3]

yo ante, i tryed to phone you, but it was engaged,
yo ante , i tryed to tell you, iv finished our exchange,
yo ante, i tryed to post it up, but my mind is deranged,

yea im not jokeing

[AnteUp]

yo sketch, rep ur set
yo sketch, ima get
ur sketch , done afta
i finish this facta
in mah life, im a rappa
in mah dreams im a strappa
strappin con-doms
fo all yalls moms
not sketches but tha haters
tha ones that throw tamaters
cuz they think im a faker...
oh my god that was the worst one yet :DDD

[sketch3]

dont get vexed, i put a hex on the word sketch,
so u couldnt rhyme with it, fuck up ur hole set,
but i didnt do it cuss i hate u, just wanded u to put the ante up
and if u dont ull end up with ur lip bust, no fuss

[AnteUp]

trust, that these nuts
be on a hatas face
9mm on tha waist
to protect mah space
kill you, no trace
come up ta mah place
an say by to ya face...

not directed at anyone.. jus thought of it :)

[AnteUp]

tha block hot like tha gloc
pullin up in a candy drop
swang from tha left to tha right
me im sippin that purple sprite
get ya mind right
or get ya mind correct?
im always gonna rep
tha great state of tex...as
rollin sumthin blue in tha joint
stuntin on tha block meet tha point
of mah switch that is
on ya wife i got mah jizz
go head, hate on tha kid...

[entry]

your now fuckin with e n t r y next thing you know
youll be lookin for the e x i t befor i swing ill give you
time to think, shit son ill let you go just roll up the herb
start to passin, you betta change your attitude
wait up it man my lifes just the interlude to death all these kids
trying to put me to rest but these kids dont know what beef is
i wont sleep til i see the gun gleamin in mid day down the alley shit
starts to spray i duck for cover my lifes raw like that
burger you be flippin your not going no where aint no life style
of the rich and famous just rocking 5 thousand dollar equipment
on the ears the neck and wrist wait up heres the twist ...

thats all i got haha whatever

[entry]

yo anteup you better run home and strap up
cuz i heard you be wearing the wire tap tap
that means i gatta call for the clap and
on second hand heres a tic tac
cuz your breath is just plain old wack
you spit ice im fire the stage is heatin up my feet
man your in for a treat paramedics in the back
waitin for your ass cuz im out ridin first classssss


no beef im baked just came to mind..

[AnteUp]

no beef jus freestylin :)

o shit im bout ta strap up
get ya bois slapped up
get ya moms knocked up
an u wondrin wats up?
i dont think so
im clean mah shirt never wrinkoled
hoppin out starched and clean
bring on ya team i heard they last draft pick
runin up on me carryin a stick?
i dont think so i'll whip out mah dick
put it on ya forehead not sur why...
maybe cuz ur crew is jus a bunch of gay guys...

[entry]

ouch anteup you better watch what comes out your mouth
cuz your shits lame while i spit straight flames all im doing is
bringing game while you sitting at home google searchin for verses
and im roaming streets snatchin your mommas purses

thats all i got :confused:

[sketch3]

u think u spitin flames, but thats just dragon breath,
im sad u dont know thiss but u only got hallatosis.
wen u open ur mouth ppl turn up there noses,
dont get made at me cuss u cudnt make it in showbizz,

[entry]

sketch get back to the paper cuz we all know you bite
from what you hear on ya mp3 player, im pretty sure i dont
have hallatosis, but i remember your momma tellin me you got aids
just like all your lines are played buddy you need a upgrade heres
some condoms i blow em up and pop em in ya face next thing u know
your runnin home hiding in your place, my words are like a slap in the face
even CSI cant find my trace im sneaky bending around words like Houdini
now you see me next thing ya know im gone turn around im behind you
with the cheese grater ready to grind you ...


iuno im not that good at freestyles :D

[sketch3]

yea i got aids, im one sick motherfucker,
call me a biter ill ingect ur blodd with heppititess,
stab u in the eyelid with a hiv infected needle,
look i know the last pussy u got was a tawainies shedoll,

ahh im soory i suck, im too hight to be bothered

[entry]

yo son you sound like a doctor using words
bigger than your dick sprung man im the pharmacist
i got the medicine cuz my lines are ill, so your guna inject
my blood nah man ive been wearing the glove im clean
you just dont belong in this scene in the end your the one
leaving beggin on your knees saying god forgive me life for
you is like winning the lottery you dont got a chance i whip out
the lance pierced you rolled you up and smoked you your done
a roach not worth livin stomp stomped out ....


anyone wanna battle im not really good but i try :p

[sketch3]

entry u havnt kicked any decent shit scince the last century,
my rhyms got meanin, ur are empty,
talking all this bullshit, bout im a docter, dont tempt me,
surgecliy remove ur testicals and create a new entity,
gunna regret your time spent with me,
ur a fag, left bent over on the floor with ur hands and knees,
im definitly one opponent that ur beteath,
slice u up and still keep my sword in its sheath
not in the medical profession but ill remove ur fron teeth
bitch plese

[entry]

hahah good shit im done now ima go
blaze a bunch ill get back to ya later

[sketch3]

ahhim go blaze and go to sleep, cathch u later for round two,

pece

[AnteUp]

ouch anteup you better watch what comes out your mouth
cuz your shits lame while i spit straight flames all im doing is
bringing game while you sitting at home google searchin for verses
and im roaming streets snatchin your mommas purses

thats all i got :confused:

yeeeaauuhhh me n sketch holdin it down fa CCC!

i dont gotta snatch purses
jack me? u gonna meet tha nurses
in tha hospital u got mad rep
cuz u visitin it alot, as if u had strep
maybe its cuz everyone u see wants ta jump ya
6 feet unda now ya family screamin murda!
thas wat happens when u fuck wit tha crew
u need ta do wat we do not wat u do
an this all goes ta prew...ve (prove)
that u gonna lew...suh (lose)
dunno wat ta do, when we roll up on you...
im dun witcha, i'll stick ta makin 6 figgas
so i can buy ya moms a house next ta mine *****!

[entry]

living life everyday conflict fuck this shit i raise my fist rebel kids running
streets wishin they never went stray but its our fault
society run incoming fist fights getting worse mace
hits your baby face corrupted kids with killer toys whats next
bang bang who knows things happen people change fourteen
and my buddies slanging whats that quick cash or addiction
stealing money parents clueless no worries he will get through
this. now this ones for the underage girls who dont want to live their life..No body is ever satisfied
We got these girls for sale infront of the local motel, Lifes a
everyday struggle thats just one way to hustle. Big bucks for
the video streams on the internet. No one knows whats behind the
scenes of this photoshoot. Its just straight up abuse theres no truth
in this..


random shit doesnt really go but fuck it

[entry]

oh and that has nothing to do with you anteup
i just saw your post now

[AteskOne]

hip-hop is tossing and turning in it's grave right about now.

[entry]

whats that suppose to mean ...

[AnteUp]

hes sayin that you or i suck posibly both of us...

[entry]

im pretty sure its me hahah im just doing this
for the fun of it .. :p

[Dez-One]

Attention all cars, there's a killa on the loose
Runnin around with a mac, playin duck-duck goose
Dipset minded, you've been blinded
Lookin for a style like mine, you can't find it
All that walkin, fuckin up your Tims
Potholes in the steets, fuckin up my rims
Now you payin just to live now, its only extortion
Go ahead and get inside man, its only your coffin
Its a shame, you look better dead
I aint goin home tonight, your wife give better head
Aint no question if I wont hit ya
Got money burried in the floor, bricks in the light fixture

Not that good at freestyle... Oh well

[1nOnly Baze]

Dipset minded, you've been blinded
Lookin for a style like mine, you can't find it

"criminal minded, youve been blinded
lookin for a style like mine you cant find it." - krs one. :confused:

[entry]

the good things in life are hard to find,
when your living in that ghetto state of mind.

[Dez-One]

^ haha good one

[entry]

was that sarcasm haha

[Dez-One]

No not really. Just made me laugh... I can just imagine Jessie Jackson using that in one of his speeches.

[entry]

bahahahha now that made me laugh

[GeSuS_KRiST]

rockin tha hamburger shoes when im walkin down tha street
apple juice in mah hand wit mah homie makin beats
walk up in tha store owners thinkin ima rob 'em
that aint wat im thinkin ima show stop 'em
jump up on tha table listen to tha words
rhymin bout green, and pink cock socks listen to tha verbs
im up on tha table so mah words can be heard
but for sum reason everybody flippin me tha bird...
why is that think its tha hamburger shoes?
i dont think so cuz these new wit mustard on tha side fool!

thanks to the randomness of gesus..lol

gesus' turn!! rap bout... mcdonalds 42oz dr.pepper, hairclips, big tits, and a blue cup... lol

yo i turn it up, wif a big blue cup
mcdonalds stuff, im too tuff call me jack the ripper
offin stripers with dr pippers, or peppers
42 ounces got me fallin off like a lepper
i rock big hair clips supportin my dreads
this white boys big tit breast feed wif better off dead
im poppin oxycotin like humans breath oxygen
cant spell so im off again....

[ODonthesetrees]

these rhymes i spit, lickity splat
the bluntn in my lips is so damn fat
my biotches ass on my woah
and im bout to explodee
my shit is bout as fire
as a real world episode

[Snuff]

boo boo skidooo!!

[AteskOne]

yo i turn it up, wif a big blue cup
mcdonalds stuff, im too tuff call me jack the ripper
offin stripers with dr pippers, or peppers
42 ounces got me fallin off like a lepper
i rock big hair clips supportin my dreads
this white boys big tit breast feed wif better off dead
im poppin oxycotin like humans breath oxygen
cant spell so im off again....
bomb.

[BoomPowSurprise!]

shut up kids
your mom gave me dome
i fucked her so hard
i got her screaming
as my ring tone

i fucked that bitch
and blew on her eyes
she was on her knees
boom pow surprise!

[AteskOne]

haha i'm liking the username....chappelle's show.

still the best show out there and i dont care what anyone says.

[ODonthesetrees]

she was screaming at this size of that nib on your hip
you know that little stub you call a dick?
well once you left she burst into tears
cryed so hard she almost died right here
so we sather back down and railed some white
i fucked her twice and it felt alright
her pussy tasted good like mike and ikes
and then i said goodnight to that bitch, was she your wife?

[BoomPowSurprise!]

haha BOOM POW SURPRISE
OHHHHHH (no one else says it)

hahahaha so funny

[AteskOne]

lmao i kno right i laughed so hard at that part. he starts cheering for himself and one person's like....ohhh...all mad quiet and shit in the background lol. god damn i miss that show.

[BoomPowSurprise!]

haha def the best show
def one of my favorite parts right there cause they guys is so pumped and just gets shut down

[entry]

anyone wana battle or something im bored

[FailOne]

I'm like the 5 elements of hiphop combined in to one/treat it like a marathon/rip it then im gone/continually droppin bombs/in the scene we got history/hibitualy spit vividly subliminaly rip emcee’s/mastered sick syllables;sorry I'm egotistical, criminals spit whats visible;Subliminal;your minimal to none,none divisible to one//speak miracles then im done/Get lyrical just for fun//failone the most quoteable//spit quotes coast to coast im noteable//antisocial herb;My Words connect dialect infects;Gain respect with complex texts;that leave y'all nervous wrecks//except that we'll survive;street cyphers bust all live//real rhymes that we provide;bring the vibe; expect that we complied//perplex ya mind//Generous with my sentences/the venomous menace//slice necks? well thats stupendous


quickies...

[AteskOne]

yo arent there 4 elements of hip-hop?

[Sumoe]

hmm, let's see...

Emceeing
Turntablism
Graffiti
Breaking
Beatboxing?

idk if beatboxing is considered an element though.

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

look man you aint nuffin but a scheme,
ill slash your throat, your heart and even your fucking spleen,
Your screaming out loud but who the fuck for,
your mum? your girl? who gives a fuck about a whore,
I come to your yard to rinse the shithole up,
i cant find a way in ahhh what the fuck,
Hold up breh...., theres a trapdoor,
Ill sneak in through there gripping a hacksaw,
All i got in there was a bare old phone,
So i fucked it all off went home and blazed a cone.

~SLEDGEHAMMER~

[sketch3]

sledgehammer, u dont wanna bring no drama,
to beat u i dont even need to use proper grammer,
cuss u got no rhymes, a stuter, a stammer,
u still couldnt spit if u were a lamma,
just like the hulk, you wouldnt like me wen im angry,
only thing is im noy bruce banner, im packin lyrics, he packing gamma,
leve u with sever trauma,
wen i show u a video of me fucking ur mum and ur granma,

[SLEDGEHAMMER]

Damn you sketch and your catchy lyrics. ;)

[MESN[905]]

hmm, let's see...

Emceeing
Turntablism
Graffiti
Breaking
Beatboxing?

idk if beatboxing is considered an element though.

Theres graffiti, emceeing, djing, and bboying.

[stay(KooL)92]

i cant rap but i can beat box so hear it goes
bo bacu bo bo buchu b obo bo o ascaiab iaca

[AnteUp]

i cant rap but i can beat box so hear it goes
bo bacu bo bo buchu b obo bo o ascaiab iaca

kahboom! stay kool the beat box king
makin u neva step in tha ring
for fear of ear injuring
u neva seen, a ***** so hardcore,
since the gothic porn wit straps on tha hores
one punch, u out hit tha floor, on ya way ta tha store
u get ur ass jack by a man thats poor,
or was that me?
hopefully,


u carry more than 75 cents
cuz i need me a fountain drink...

[percoset fun]

ni99as is snitches and sketch3 fucks bitches.

[sketch3]

word, if you got doubts expect a dick in ur mouth

[AnteUp]

if u got doubts expect a dick in yo mouf?
jus like ur girl i kno u go down souf
she go down on erbody cept for you
wat u wanna do? u hate cuz u got a dick smaller than 2?
inches that is, jus like an asian kid, no hate jus state
in tha truf, i pop a boner, dick through tha roof...

AHAHA!! i love u sketch mah ni99a!!!

[AteskOne]

word, if you got doubts expect a dick in ur mouth
haha good shit. first thing on here that has legitly made me laugh out loud.

[sketch3]

wow i made astek lol, im soo happy

[ChRoMa 11820]

this da bol chroma
im better then most of the writers on here
and they are older
only up for one year
but my style is more mature
i got hookups you all adore
yeah im up but not too much i wont lie
but the day i stop writin is the day i die
got arested once, wrong place wrong time
broad daylight i wasnt tryna bomb
just had paint on me , 5 cans
gloves and stickers , takin pics wit my cell in my hand
cop rolled up thought he would just drive by
stopped rolled down the window but not to say hi
he got a call sayin i was doin graff
i told him nah and he took my bag
he said ur holdin a smokin gun
i said i know but i much rather be smokin a blunt

haha
just playin around, my boy raps so i tried it before i guess im okay
true story besides last line
fit tho
lol
peace

[ODonthesetrees]

my italian wrap tastes liek heaven goin down
as i sip on my starbucks and stare at the ground
waiting jsut waiting till tonight will come
so i can go and get drunk and have some funn
summertimes hear it will nto be wasted
but hopefully be ten i will be wasted
face down in teh sand at the beach
with a lbutn in one hand and a bitch in my backseat
if shit goes down ill keep you psoted
let you all know exactly how i get roasted
let you all get mad casue youre sitting at home
jacking off while im getting dome
and now ill stop right there at that
rap of my daily life, too bad you're fat

[revolt92]

My names is jack, or is it jill
I'll push all you motherfuckers down the hill
Leave you like a scene out of kill bill


OH SNAP SON!

[bobo9827]

better freestyle ever!

[AnteUp]

haha, drank me a cane shugar dr.pepper... so i made a freestyle :)

dr.pepper can,
makin rhymes like im sam-i-am
listen to tha rhymes, put ya mind, in a tran..
ce!, stackin cash in advance, get in ya defensive stance
we stackin doe wit every show
freestylin on loose leaf
up in tha boof wit a peice
no caprice, we ridin in tha candy coated lac,
no need fo a track, no need fo prac...
tice!, yall gettin pissed, cuz ya broad on mah dick,
damn she aint gonna shit...
haha! she call me papa, or papi
cant u see?
she dont want u she want me!

last line for a dumb bitch tryna take mah girl

[revolt92]

Oh my god i'm so fucking board
Nothing rhymes with board so i guess i'll just say maud

[AnteUp]

oh god im fuckin bored
gonna walk to tha stored
or store?
u dumb whore...
learn how ta spell...

OHHHHH SHIIITTTTTSSSS!!!... (the dumb whore is directed at me) lol

[revolt92]

You say store, i say shop
Say it again and i'll pop-
a cap in yo' ass cause i'm british
Hip-Hop and rap is my secret fetish
You say sidewalk, i say pavement
British lyrics are judst so immense


w00t w00t

[AnteUp]

british...equals crooked teeth tho
you can eat spaghetti wit ya teef closed
with those wack ass rhymes, u nva get a sho
cuz ya lyrics lack sumthin that they need...flow

:) love mah rapist revolt

[revolt92]

You think your great but your rhymes are whack
You aint ready for revolts freestyle attack
Your from texas, right? the home of the fats
You so great but you better get yo' facts-
Right, cos i'll slice you up, dice you up
Leave you squealing like a baby pup

haha thats all i got, i aint know rapper, i'm a rappist LOL

[AnteUp]

You think your great but your rhymes are whack
You aint ready for revolts freestyle attack

that was pretty badass...lol im gonna reply later :P

[RaGe2]

ayo fame, u cant rap for shit
fuck outta here, u aint gettin no credit
give up rappin, u'll never get a club hit
u wanna freestyle? homie now u face ya exile
so just go home, and watch ya lil 8 mile
be ashamed bitch, got them screamin my name while u got enflamed snitch
this aint ya game, fame
u just another lame
u aint done 1 month behind bars
i'll slice u up, u goin need to find a girl who like scars
suffocatin you, fame feelin like he on mars
you dont deserve recognition, beatin you is my easiest mission
and have ya bitch screamin louder than you startin ya shitty ignition

[AnteUp]

ta rage...

haha, new yorkas talk alot a shit
shut tha fuck up bitch an finish up that dick
now wipe that cum of ya mouf
u got customers waitin time ta go down souf...

[AnteUp]

You think your great but your rhymes are whack
You aint ready for revolts freestyle attack
Your from texas, right? the home of the fats
You so great but you better get yo' facts-
Right, cos i'll slice you up, dice you up
Leave you squealing like a baby pup

haha thats all i got, i aint know rapper, i'm a rappist LOL

shut tha fuck up squelin like a pup?
rhymes like that get ya stuffed ina trunk
but itll be fine cuz in texas we got neon lights
in tha trunk, always popped so i guess u shouldnt be fright-
ened, u start ta runnin we got a big body lac that we ride at night in
chrome pipes in, swangin from left ta righten, lefty loosey, gat ta tighten
up ya ass when u runnin past, run ya ass ova,like fresh grass in a mowa...

lol :D

[Sumoe]

Stop trying; you weak, my plan, you won't spoil it/the only hot shit that you dropped was in a toilet/ I'll injure you, mentally and render you retarded/ don't look now, you're gettin' lyrically slaughtered/well, not really but stilly, my rhymes illy/ and I know, that you know, that I got mad skillys/ So before you say "n*****" and get all cocky/ remember, you white and the only "N" bomb you ever dropped was Nagasaki...

some bullshizzle.

hehe...

:P

edit: readin' over some of this shit...Ante,

"in tha truf, i pop a boner, dick through tha roof..." made me laugh...

:D

[RaGe2]

ta rage...

haha, new yorkas talk alot a shit
shut tha fuck up bitch an finish up that dick
now wipe that cum of ya mouf
u got customers waitin time ta go down souf...

you already dead, dont make me pop this lead
right in ya head,
ya probably wont realize it, cuz ya dumbass aint got a brain
while ya doin throwies i'm spittin rhymes at you like a speedin train
finish up that dick? yo u gay no matter how much money you got u gettin no trick
homie you ugly
i'm Death and i'm takin you to the cemetery
try gettin rhymes, maybe we should take you to elementary
yo ass cant stop rage, so dont choke once you on that stage
cuz imma spit straight fire like a medieval mage

[AteskOne]

Stop trying; you weak, my plan, you won't spoil it/the only hot shit that you dropped was in a toilet/ I'll injure you, mentally and render you retarded/ don't look now, you're gettin' lyrically slaughtered/well, not really but stilly, my rhymes illy/ and I know, that you know, that I got mad skillys/ So before you say "n*****" and get all cocky/ remember, you white and the only "N" bomb you ever dropped was Nagasaki...


yo...that shit was striaght fire sume. that last line was fucking dope.

[AnteUp]

you already dead, dont make me pop this lead
right in ya head,
ya probably wont realize it, cuz ya dumbass aint got a brain
while ya doin throwies i'm spittin rhymes at you like a speedin train
finish up that dick? yo u gay no matter how much money you got u gettin no trick
homie you ugly
i'm Death and i'm takin you to the cemetery
try gettin rhymes, maybe we should take you to elementary
yo ass cant stop rage, so dont choke once you on that stage
cuz imma spit straight fire like a medieval mage
im stackin cash everywhere, halfway cross tha map
if u a speedin train u jus bin derailed, cuz u fell into mah trap
fully loaded wit a strap, why is that? ta keep bitches off tha map
like tic tac, im endin ya breath, no more left, doctas tryna shock u outta death...

[Sumoe]

yo...that shit was striaght fire sume. that last line was fucking dope.

haha, word up like a coffee cup...

Look, you mad fake I know you wanna "Party like a Rockstar"/
You're suckin' commercial rap's Dick, maybe that's why you got a cockjaw/
I ain't on that stab or shoot shit to put you in a tomb/
I'm build a time machine, go back in time, and kill you in your mother's womb/
You got that motherfucker, you got any last questions?/
my rhymes be iller than the fuckin' A.I.D.S. infection/
Not only are they ill, but they'll kill you fast/
Maybe that's why you got A.I.D.S, because you like dick in your ass?/
That shit is unatural homie, I don't know, it prolly don't even feel right/
I'm a get a 400 lb. dude named "Serge" to "Lil Bow-Wow" you tonight/
I don't get how that's bad though, you prolly gonna like it/
Won't even fight it, when he tries to get tight in it/
Anyways like I said Serge gonna bag it and tag it/
why the fuck am I battlin' a little ass faggot?
Wastin' my time/
when I could be expanding my mind,/
fuckin' a dime/
or even snortin' a line/
I'm just playin' though, I ain't into cocaine/
what I am into is runnin' this lil' dude out the game.

some more bullshizzle...

not really directed at anyone in particular... :P

[boz]

chea gangstaas

[Sumoe]

I'd spit better than you without any fuckin' saliva/
Look at me, you starin' into the "Eye of the Tiger"/
Because I'm on that Rocky shit/
rock you quick/

sever you head, and cut off your dick, so slick/
That's me.../
dude that's rhyming so quickly/
verses so ill, even your bitch wanna lick me/
or suck me.../
ain't no, emcee above me/
what bugs me/
is that, even your bitches love me/
so stop just stop, you'll get no where testin' this man/
I'm the father of your bitches kid, I knew you'd understand.

I'm in a rappin' mood today...

:P

[AVID1]

haha, word up like a coffee cup...

Look, you mad fake I know you wanna "Party like a Rockstar"/
You're suckin' commercial rap's Dick, maybe that's why you got a cockjaw/
I ain't on that stab or shoot shit to put you in a tomb/
I'm build a time machine, go back in time, and kill you in your mother's womb/
You got that motherfucker, you got any last questions?/
my rhymes be iller than the fuckin' A.I.D.S. infection/
Not only are they ill, but they'll kill you fast/
Maybe that's why you got A.I.D.S, because you like dick in your ass?/
That shit is unatural homie, I don't know, it prolly don't even feel right/
I'm a get a 400 lb. dude named "Serge" to "Lil Bow-Wow" you tonight/
I don't get how that's bad though, you prolly gonna like it/
Won't even fight it, when he tries to get tight in it/
Anyways like I said Serge gonna bag it and tag it/
why the fuck am I battlin' a little ass faggot?
Wastin' my time/
when I could be expanding my mind,/
fuckin' a dime/
or even snortin' a line/
I'm just playin' though, I ain't into cocaine/
what I am into is runnin' this lil' dude out the game.

some more bullshizzle...

not really directed at anyone in particular... :P
you just pwnt anyone in particular.
I like that time machine line.

edit: umm lemme think of something even though I produce beats and I don't actually rap.. this is my first time so go easy :P
yo I run, tag, jump, mark,/
steal from your fucking home and also from wal-mart/
scratching your windows/
unleashing hell on a wall/
fuck it even in your bathroom stall/
I smash the suburbs with rage/
More colours then your pitiful mind can take/
dont fuck around/
I'm no fucking clown/
I'll kill you and let you be eaten by roaches in the ground.

haha

[Kore123]

to avid

avid your raps are weak
ive heard better shit from a pipe leak
i drop avid like i drop acid
so imma drop your ass and drown you in lake placid
im doin this shit to lyricly slaughter you
you just a middle school kid that aint got shit to do
this shits a waste of time
so just shut your mouth and walk off like a mime

---i dont rap first try too i fuckin suck lol

[AVID1]

haha..

mr. Kore:
I'ma rip your fucking guts like a wild boar
Shoot your fucking face up in the middle of a store
smash your face with a hot toaster while you fuck your whore
dont snore on my lyrics listen to more
this is fucking war
I'm just a fucking freak when it comes to killing
I'm ready and willing
to disable
Capable of inescapable death upon death
I've met my standards I supplied you with fresh rhymes
I'm gonna end this now and roll me a dime
--
Shit I dont think I did that bad at all!!!

[mada focka]

naw avid you did alright
im surprised by how many people can rap but also write
some of yall should try to go serious on the mic
most of you are pretty good, you really are
one of yall could be the next great rapstar
so try to avoid the cop car
and record some shit
because some of you all could probly sell it
but i should probly keep working i must admit
before i post because yall will probly talk shit!


lol first try, i didnt want to start beef until i knew wether i sucked or not. you can probably already tell that i do by that :(

[AteskOne]

haha, word up like a coffee cup...

Look, you mad fake I know you wanna "Party like a Rockstar"/
You're suckin' commercial rap's Dick, maybe that's why you got a cockjaw/
I ain't on that stab or shoot shit to put you in a tomb/
I'm build a time machine, go back in time, and kill you in your mother's womb/
You got that motherfucker, you got any last questions?/
my rhymes be iller than the fuckin' A.I.D.S. infection/
Not only are they ill, but they'll kill you fast/
Maybe that's why you got A.I.D.S, because you like dick in your ass?/
That shit is unatural homie, I don't know, it prolly don't even feel right/
I'm a get a 400 lb. dude named "Serge" to "Lil Bow-Wow" you tonight/
I don't get how that's bad though, you prolly gonna like it/
Won't even fight it, when he tries to get tight in it/
Anyways like I said Serge gonna bag it and tag it/
why the fuck am I battlin' a little ass faggot?
Wastin' my time/
when I could be expanding my mind,/
fuckin' a dime/
or even snortin' a line/
I'm just playin' though, I ain't into cocaine/
what I am into is runnin' this lil' dude out the game.

some more bullshizzle...

not really directed at anyone in particular... :P
the rhymes just keep gettin better and better sume. i'm really feeling this. but, as much as i agree with you on how badly mainstream sucks, you cant hate on "party like a rock star". there is no better a song to blow lines or drink to than party like a rock star.

[AnteUp]

dumb bitches, first time tryna rhyme?
this aint mah first line, i rhyme full time
i shine, matta fact i get mah shine on
got ya bitch modelin that purple thon-
GUH!, no person to unleash mah wrath upon
not a song, this a freestyle kneegrow
get u hexed, u end up stubin ya toe
aw bro, im sorry id tell ya broad ta fix ya up
if she wasnt at mah house lettin me fill up on her cups...

[Kore123]

haha..

mr. Kore:
I'ma rip your fucking guts like a wild boar
Shoot your fucking face up in the middle of a store
smash your face with a hot toaster while you fuck your whore
dont snore on my lyrics listen to more
this is fucking war
I'm just a fucking freak when it comes to killing
I'm ready and willing
to disable
Capable of inescapable death upon death
I've met my standards I supplied you with fresh rhymes
I'm gonna end this now and roll me a dime
--
Shit I dont think I did that bad at all!!!


avid i thought i already told you
i guess you didnt get it so ill giva ya a clue
ill make a hole in ya head that everybody can see-through
ill fuck you up so bad you think im playin wit voodoo
tha hospital gunna call your mom and shes gunna need tissues
and you talkin bout your a killin freak
while i think your a gradeschool geek
when i get to ya you wont be able to speak--
not even a squeak
soon tha only memory of you will be that lil tiny shrine
fuck it imma go blow a line

---ehhhhh i think that one might of been a little better but it still sucks like i said i suck at rappin lol

[AVID1]

What tha fuck are all yall complaining about/
All I hear is hot steam coming from ya spout/
and shit coming out ya mouth/
so I'm dedicating this verse to ya education/
some sort of formation/
so that you dont go slipping off of ya foundation/
so listen, son/
You prolly dont even own a gun/
If I saw you in real life, chances are you'll run/
let me remind you this is only for some fun/
not for terrorist acts, none/
or pimping hos and bitches/
And honestly I'm not even that rich/
but I done do stuff that will blow ya mind/
you're lucky right now that I'm trying to be kind/
you're unrefined and intertwined with acts of blind-/
voilence/
so you're better of with silence.

Edit~ this is just random freestyling.. now to diss up kore:

Kore:
I heard you want some more?
I thought I told you not to fuck around/
But you seem to be blowing lines/
Shit I'm bombing up those train lines/
Not wasting my time trying to get high/
instead I rather perform rather spectacular acts of art/
don't even lemme start/
cause I'll murder you kid/
you dont even know me, you're just unscrewing my lid/
kinda stupid for a child like ya self to mess with me/
It was your destiny to end up blasted by my heavy artillery/
I'm a fucking killing G/
Yes I'm a murder freak I think you need glasses boy/
Maybe you been dropped on your head by ya momma/
so stop mumbling and do something with life, and quit the fucking drama

[Kore123]

what tha fuck are you talkin about
all i hear is you pout
what you talkin bout education you a highschool dropout
if you seen me walkin down the block youd find another route
you just a lil bitch sellout
why dont you run to ya lil hideout
if i see you your fuckin lightsout
so shut your mouth and take a timeout

ahhh shit that one wasnt for me now i gotta make a new one damnit

[AVID1]

haha I think you beat me there^ lemme give it a shot:

yo I got a 12 mm glock and knife/
That's all I need to end your life/
Stop your pointless trife/
A highschool dropout? that was albert einstein/
I suppose great minds think alike, but I'm alive/
I aint no sellout you stupid mutherfucker/
My brothers and I are broker then retarded entrepeneurs/
you trying to get on my level with simple rhymes ending in misery/
but I'm the king of the hill, see?/
I don't even got a hide-out in fact I wish I did/
You don't know shit bout nothing so shut the fuck up kid.

[Kore123]

What tha fuck are all yall complaining about/
All I hear is hot steam coming from ya spout/
and shit coming out ya mouth/
so I'm dedicating this verse to ya education/
some sort of formation/
so that you dont go slipping off of ya foundation/
so listen, son/
You prolly dont even own a gun/
If I saw you in real life, chances are you'll run/
let me remind you this is only for some fun/
not for terrorist acts, none/
or pimping hos and bitches/
And honestly I'm not even that rich/
but I done do stuff that will blow ya mind/
you're lucky right now that I'm trying to be kind/
you're unrefined and intertwined with acts of blind-/
voilence/
so you're better of with silence.

Edit~ this is just random freestyling.. now to diss up kore:

Kore:
I heard you want some more?
I thought I told you not to fuck around/
But you seem to be blowing lines/
Shit I'm bombing up those train lines/
Not wasting my time trying to get high/
instead I rather perform rather spectacular acts of art/
don't even lemme start/
cause I'll murder you kid/
you dont even know me, you're just unscrewing my lid/
kinda stupid for a child like ya self to mess with me/
It was your destiny to end up blasted by my heavy artillery/
I'm a fucking killing G/
Yes I'm a murder freak I think you need glasses boy/
Maybe you been dropped on your head by ya momma/
so stop mumbling and do something with life, and quit the fucking drama

yeah i want more wat you think imma lil bitch
ill kick ya ass until you twitch
who you callin a kid
but you the one gettin fucked in the eyelid
and why you talkin shit bout my momma
you keep sayin that shit ill cut you up wit a hacksaw
my rhyms are raw
if you dont think so youll end up wit lockjaw

that last one was pretty good
im watchin king of the hill to lol