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Rogue
10-22-2007, 10:03 PM
I just wanted to give props to Hidden Teknique and Hoodrich fom a few pages back. You *****'s got rhymes.
Peace
JetBlack
10-22-2007, 11:21 PM
Hood rich sucka?
I bet more often theyre callin you a dumb muddaf**ka
What do you know about philosophies?
Im provin theories, and skippin hypothesis
While your tryin to cop my steez
But I keep my styles hidden
Like cities in China, my flows are forbidden
Just like OJs glove, your rhymes just aint fittin
So stop while your ahead and get to a quittin
Havent written anything in quite sometime.
pound
10-22-2007, 11:45 PM
im gonna take a step in and rap about my brotha,
i work with this fool,
his names hood-rich-sucka.
i really hope none of yall gonna take this serious,
i could careless about these raps,
but your all delerious.
some of the things he says arent really true,
but im sure i can expect the same from everyone of you.
you aint really killin, you aint really rappin,
your just sittin back in your chair watchin porn and wackin.
if you were to really get heated off of this petty shit,
you should take a step back,
better yet- just quit,
the only rhymes i looked at on here were hoodrich's,
so dont even think i was bitin from you son's of bitches.
i prolly wont even reply with a rhyme back to you,
ill let hoodrich take care of it,
cuz hes got my back too.
ill just take my story, and turn it into a few letters,
you prolongin your shit, and it aint for the better.
HoodRichSucka
10-23-2007, 06:10 AM
pounds my boy, by that i mean brother.
no blood relation, not the same mother.
i produce lyrics that put u in a trance and seduce.
like zues i throw lightning. put ur neck in the noose.
i wont kill u, shit im on a computer.
i got skill tho, ill be ur tutor.
i gotta go to school, im late already
but fuck my teachers, they're gay freddie.
HoodRichSucka
10-23-2007, 02:07 PM
my verbal assualt causes a furious tantrum.
i cant stand ya, ur wack like miss sandra.
too thin to be hot, u can win in my spot.
my thesis is to fecitious, no joke like diseases.
call me lucifer cuz im evil, opposite of great jesus.
im illicit when i spit, im hard to come by.
dont miss it, or let ur gaurd get down sized.
this may be my best, im at the top of my game.
im better then the rest, no need to have fame.
that will come later with more experience.
have these rappers fake, they so delirious.
talkin shit how they got it rough and shit.
they not like me, they aint tough and shit.
ill stop for now, before you all die,
im like the drop top, wind all in ur eye!
MonoR
10-23-2007, 03:45 PM
i was talkin to tyler durden
but if it hurts you
then take it personal
im personally hurtin you
yeh thats what im talkin about, no doubt your a sucker
and yeh your sucking your shemale sisters dick
im hurtin you like i stab a bitch on the street
no shit no mess
just wreckin your pookie ass face
Passleoinj
10-23-2007, 04:12 PM
word up monor
hoodrichsucka
you aint ghetto youll never be a *****
you cant fuck with us man go in california
in compton , south central or where ever you wanna
same gee's like in here fuck you up for your cheddar
but you aint got money so theyll fuck you up for cheese and butta
i mean fuck man im spittin realness in this motherfucka
hoodrichsucka
you aint got shit on us we too hot like summer
so youre gonna come over here bite rhymes from cry now die later?
man you aint even a writer so you wanna be a rapper
man fuck ya i kill you and put you down under
bouncingsoul
10-23-2007, 04:57 PM
She was driving deeds and rhyming the breeze, miming trees
It was a floating peace, she was flying free finally
Clear as I can see, she was trying to be
Nothing but to be what being is being and sleeping was sleeping
Peacefully, her moonlit face, goddesses couldn't perfect her
Holy coloring books couldn't control and correct her
Gliding, never siding, riding always objective, selective
And corrective, everything always in it's place when she walked
Never destructive, spread peace, that's what love was, she'd talk
And the world would go silent for her, birds would curse, mid-chirp
Mid-work, mid-day, any time of the week she'd speak and hurt
But always painless, always chainless, never vindictive
Loved life and life loved her because she lived it
Never missed it, a second was lost but didn't matter anyway
I'd pay a dollar for her thoughts, she'd give me a penny to take them away
Always careless and always brainless, lived from the heart
But that doesn't mean intelligence aint a good start, she was street smart
And beats talked to her like no other, music the mutual brother
Between us, no language barriers, volume knob the translator
Nature was natural to her, intrinsic minutes gasping to keep up the pace
Time passes in masses, breaks the hourglass, past classes, and her face
Keeps steady composition, phenomenal fiction of fake photography fixin
And mixin with break beats and her eyes glisten
Sets the stage ablaze, and there's no crowd but me, silently cheering
Mute victory, celebrate it, never hated it, awesome blossom nearing
She turns and love burns, eye contact fakes direct and fizzles
She's one of a kind, a heavy raindrop caught in a light drizzle
On a one-way path to that true lover's wide-eyed, bright skied
Hope, and she doesn't know where she's taking me, just along for the ride..
Started last night
Maybe I'll add more to this one later actually. I kinda like it. It's different for me
HoodRichSucka
10-23-2007, 05:06 PM
Pass, i dont remember talkin to you,
i was talkin to monor, but fuck u too.
Cant even type the word, usin astriks,
callin ur self ghetto, ull get ur ass kicked.
Ur rhymes are wack, cheese for butta?
who says that shit? bitches who studda.
you accuse me of biting the cry die line.
ill abuse u for writing, u should die guy.
ur rap is wack, doesnt even flow.
u need to practice, u need to grow.
not enough experience, in this rap game.
but right now im serious, putting ur ass to shame.
please quit now, cuz if u dont
ill rhyme again, and my shit is dope.
i see that monor's got is butt buddy to help him out.
ur a fool for helping him, thats without a doubt.
when was the last time u went to the hood?
o thats right never, and u never should.
im done for now, and u got killed.
i shot u up lyrically, ur blood got spilled.
TylerDurden
10-23-2007, 05:47 PM
whenever i keystyle,
or whatever you call it,
you get your shit robbed,
best check your fucking wallet,
youre simply outmatched,
so how bout just give up?
youre messin with a mind thats simply corrupt,
once your raps are not so retarded,
and we don't end up, where we started,
the day where you have multisyllable words,
and your rhymes aren't so absurd,
we can do a tight battle,
until then its best you SKEEDADDLE!
Passleoinj
10-23-2007, 05:47 PM
man i went away for 20 minute time to fuck your girl in the bed
and i come back see that shit im like bitch i aint dead?
you rap is lame always the same
make it rhyme at the end put comas here and there and thats the end?
mothafucka i aint the one to blame
i gotta tell you somethin man , dont get too full of yourself
its a freestyle battle i dont give a fuck if you took it personnal
but go kill yourself cause i dont wanna do it
so ill just satisfy myself banging your head on my gold record shelf
and thats gonna be enough for today faguett
you think you won thats only the beginning isnt it 3 rounds you gotta do before winning
you gotta learn to count cause im gonna cut of your fingers
stop biting my shit take my dick out your mouth
now stop battlin
gimme the money and im out
MonoR
10-23-2007, 07:07 PM
man your talking about an e-hood or what?
what the fuck is this lame shit, do you have some fucken consicence or what?
how can you lyrically spill some fucken blood
ill show you whit my fist how you spill some fucken blood
ill make you bleed and love it, scream and ill love it
take it personal bitch
your a hoodrich sucka
and your the worst rappa
im young in this game
but old enought to spit that your lame
fuck it mother fucken snitch
i love to test your patience
like my man said
go kill your self cause your impotent
Passleoinj
10-23-2007, 07:16 PM
man i cant get rid of that hoodrichsucka
i can say his name fits him pretty well eh
every line i spit every word i say pure violence
my post traumatic flow send you to therapy quick
spit quick , kick whack mc's outta my way
old fashioned kung fu stance
your rap is boring mine is elaborated
see how i spit different styles different rhymes
everytime
my words penetrate you like a fork in your eyes
you go blind searching for beef motionless
backflip when you attack me , skip your verse and leave you defenceless
im merciless , dens one aint scared of death
Case-One
10-23-2007, 07:53 PM
everyone talking bought the killin, ya stupid toy,
thats the only shit that i ain't feelin
you think it's about bustin caps an slappin bitches
that shits not cool ya fuckin toolbag whatchu spittin
you rhyme all sloppy, retard on the mic you making me happy
clappin ya hands like H-Chris do, man fuck that kid he a retard like you
create sum original shit make this game positive
writtin fo life always sprayin knowlege kid
Hidden Teknique
10-23-2007, 09:01 PM
yo c'mon check out the flow
i'm spittin simple shit, so you'll know
might as well call me the dirty maverick
your flow is stagnant like NYC traffic
i spend big money, so cans i don't rack it
i see weak lines, hell i attack it
i'm a fiend for music, i'm an addict
only a matter of time, before i go global
you still in your house boy, not even local
i spread my message by vocal
you just a broke fuckin joke
you'd get high, but weed you can't toke
you couldn't afford it, so there for you don't smoke
no matter though, you still twisted like a bag of rope
a bullet in a barrel, you don't have any hope
you standing on the corner, but your not slingin dope
in the red light district in a car on a slope
fuckin homo ass bitches, need to receive stitches
lace ya up, narcs, snitches, rats ain't shit
can keystyle, but fumble when i spit
but shit don't get me down, ain't gonna quit
i'm untouchable, i'm a global threat
when i come around i make you sweat
i'll let you worry for a while, so don't fret
i'll strip your money so quick, i'd put you in debt
me demolishin you, i'll take that bet
Passleoinj
10-23-2007, 09:14 PM
aight aight aight
theres a lot of talking going on
so imma start doing my shit on my own
lets go
bustin caps an slappin bitches man where dyou get that from
all you ever did in your life suck dick and swallow the cum
case-one , you gotta be kiddin me
this guy come over here to try to diss me
thats pathetic man , your style sucks
spit 3 bars run out of the place hope to not get shot
thats yuor lifestyle , you cant assume what you did or not
i hate you man , more than i hate all those bigshots
in here man you nothing never ever will be something
IM HATIN
you wnat something original here it is
paraplegic mothafucka do you eat with your feet cause youre hands aint dirty MIND YOUR OWN BIZZ
homo rapper , i bet you dont even write
and if you do , i bet your shit is WHACK
dont claim to be something your not , cause motherfucker,
ill be back
im lovin these streets like fiends love crack
and you love that
now im out , holla back or shut yo mouth thats that
HoodRichSucka
10-23-2007, 09:38 PM
(im done with beef, just freestylin for fun now)
my steaz is a sea of wicked diseases.
i seize emcees with ease and breezes.
spit at cats like a skeez on she knees.
trying to breathe like fab just count to three.
dont stray far away from the rap game.
u might get lost and put to shame.
repitition is a must when u rap a lot.
the solution is to switch it up on the spot.
yeahhhhhhhhh
Passleoinj
10-23-2007, 09:40 PM
I was born with the mic in my hands
wearing pampers , i started smoking grams
you cant battle me imma champ
imma show you whats gold , my flow comes in bars
i got so much money i could buy you , shit is what you worth
you like wearing baggy pants right
fuck with me , and all youll be wearing is shorts
try to run away its impossible my flow got you entangled
your turn to struggle ,
you battle on internet , cause you cant win a fight
im hurting your feelings , cause what im saying is right
im picking on case-one cause you in my sight
so next time if you wanna answer try not to bite and ,
i dont wear a bullet proof vest so if you wanna shoot me,
do it right
SARAMAXWELL
10-23-2007, 10:46 PM
i was not born with a mic in my hands
i was born with abnormally large salivary glands
i drooled puddles, lakes they say
wanna battle me, i'll drown ya any day
better hold ya breath, save ya last words
battle rap blah blah blah rhyme birds
ahhh shit man
CRN-one
10-24-2007, 08:30 AM
Its about time you slow down and change direction
no mistake taken from my comical inflection
I use words so hot they'll burn through your retina
no amount of fuckin visine could ever protect ya
a legendary culmination of style and force
burnin down bridges when left no other recourse
first one to throw fists to keep shit right
knockin out *****s like my name was Dolomite
rollin hundreds deep just to reinforce the sight
of hard jabs to the face like Round 3 of Fight Night
a lyrical jack move, words so hard they fuck up your looks
a beatdown so apocalyptic, its one for the record books
while you all sell your dope and slang your coke
I'm runnin your pockets and leavin your ass broke
I've already wasted too much time on these bullshit rhymes
time for me to merk, and leave you all behind
AWR Satin
10-24-2007, 08:34 AM
y can't you *****z get along
CRN-one
10-24-2007, 08:34 AM
no reason. We just love drama and beef.
AWR Satin
10-24-2007, 08:36 AM
Its about time you slow down and change direction
no mistake taken from my comical inflection
I use words so hot they'll burn through your retina
no amount of fuckin visine could ever protect ya
a legendary culmination of style and force
burnin down bridges when left no other recourse
first one to throw fists to keep shit right
knockin out *****s like my name was Dolomite
rollin hundreds deep just to reinforce the sight
of hard jabs to the face like Round 3 of Fight Night
a lyrical jack move, words so hard they fuck up your looks
a beatdown so apocalyptic, its one for the record books
while you all sell your dope and slang your coke
I'm runnin your pockets and leavin your ass broke
I've already wasted too much time on these bullshit rhymes
time for me to merk, and leave you all behind
leaving?
CRN-one
10-24-2007, 08:36 AM
Already left. Stop bothering me.
AWR Satin
10-24-2007, 08:41 AM
i cant rap
sketch3
10-24-2007, 12:52 PM
man two cats, in this thread are wack,
dont talk back, try to deny facts,
monor will get smacked, for the way he acts,
passleoinj expect to get caped, if you turn your back,
must be on crack to think you can withstand my attack,
get caught of track, choosing wich hand for u to get smacked,
with, you bitches, on some pussy shit,
just quit, never be as good as wen crn-one spits,
your style is transparent,
its apparent, you dont weild a hidden teknique,
or on sum sicko shit from wolf creek,
never left a dead hooker in an irigation ditch,
like my homie hoodrich,
its fuckin hip hop hypocrisy,
to think you can step to me, or any member of mfpc,
Hidden Teknique
10-24-2007, 02:42 PM
my words, well they have a great impact
my rhymes are tight, while your raps are whack
i spit fire in the lab in a matter of fact
wherever you came from, take ya ass back
walkin in a dark alley,
all you hear is the click clack
as the trigger is pulled back,
bullet released from the mack,
you now laid out on your back,
in the cold, lonely, dark street
killed over some change, there meal to eat
thats why they pack the heat,
you lyin down, watchin there feet
as they run quick and fast
now they hidin, waitin for the cops to pass
so they be patient, and try to outlast
6 bullets in you, got you in a cast
hood life got you shook
people will try to take your life
3 stick ups in a row, from just one crook
only way to stick around, carry a knife
or be holdin back toast
so much heat on you
you feelin like a roast
get out somewhere else to stay
give up rappin, maybe some other day
TylerDurden
10-24-2007, 02:58 PM
ya'll are whack as fuck.
HoodRichSucka
10-24-2007, 07:36 PM
^^hahahahah yea ok buddy. and ur shits amazing.....?
bouncingsoul
10-25-2007, 12:45 AM
...And someone asks, did he lose his fucking head? What's up with that?
And I say yeah, I can't find it and I don't want it back
I was walking alongside the 4-train, can't afford a ticket
They'll offer me the red or the blue pill, I'll take em both if I can't pick it
And now every little kid and every little mom is taking that blonde bitch
Up to the prom, it's a shame when they all look the same and the fame won't last that long
I'll burn the ticky-tacky and blow all the big boxes down
I'll huff and I'll puff and I'll laugh with a frown
Pragmatist par excellence, knowledge spread, it's a pestilence
Disease of life, of love and of brothers and sisters from whence
Time passes in curves, imagination, they can't think straight
Because gravity is out of wack, it'll never come back, inconsistent state
And patience is getting bored here, get some entertainment or
Education or exponential eradication, because if something's broke
And we can't fix it, just ditch it, I just want to kick it
So far away it throws the moon off balance on a collision course with biscuits
Outer-space frigid milky ways and silky sways, shining stars in dismay
And disarray because god hasn't cleaned out his closet in a day
Spring cleaning comes easy to the poor, because they got everything to treasure
And nothing to ignore
It's a different pleasure to those that can measure
Iridescent fall crescents, heated until golden-brown, sounds of
Crowns thrown to the ground in childish rebellion, picked up and found
To be bloody with the life of his fathers and martyrs are farther and farther
Apart, until the taffy breaks, leaving him with a free hand to carve a
New truth, Old shit gets boring fast and won't last, but when it's cast
In plaster, won't shatter, reinforced with belief of god-begotten pastors
I'm not a lyrical master, I just asked her if life was going to fast
So I can slow it down... Can I slow it down?
NO IDEA
TylerDurden
10-25-2007, 02:20 AM
tylerdurden go get off of this site, it was much better without you, anyone in this thread would demolish you, you're really one to talk shit kid
demolish me?
by using the same tired ass BASIC rhymes?
(cat, hat, bat, rat, tat, )
that's what most of you do, if not all of you. If you don't believe me, read your own shit.
C-SONE
10-25-2007, 02:25 AM
ya'll are whack as fuck.
I concurr, Most of these cunts flows are just bullshit(Mine aren't any good either)
PaintThaStreets P.T.S
10-25-2007, 03:17 AM
yea you all talk shit but when i spit its straight fire my skill level higher let me remind you this is freestyle no thoughts prior and i aint no lier not sitting here planning for a hour my flow is burning you like an acid shower.
HoodRichSucka
10-25-2007, 05:55 AM
ill forever be, incredible, unforgetable, get rid a me?
ull be loosin me, then ull be snoozin Zs.
ill be cruisin fast, forget the past, it will never last.
forgever its gone, forever u long for me again.
to see me again, to breathe again. fornicate in bed.
too late for head, u get the virus instead.
ill bring u back from the dead. countin stack of my bread.
ill put u on the IV with morphine inside thee.
im beside thee, disquise me, i revive thee.
watch u die again, ull stop the cry in bed.
the iris of ur eye turns red. ill destroy thee,
deploy the drug to boil u, spoil u. mess u up and toy with u.
ive had enough of this, the cruelness is bliss. miss it,
but list this and remember it. for when december hits ull be
sober again, we can do this all over again.
Hidden Teknique
10-25-2007, 02:52 PM
you say other people, spit whack shit
if i heard you spit, sounds like you chokin on dick
you need to put yourself in check
go sit down, someone else is on deck
where's main at? a kid i give real respect
i never once stated i am dope
unless playin around, like an ak in the hands of a pope
and paintthestreets even a 3 bar spit from you is lame
your shit doesn't affect people, it's too tame
and you shouldn't be callin out everyone's name
sayin everyone spits some basic rap
when your raps are so lost you need a map
and i'm not callin you out for beef
because i'm not an e-thug and
say i throw down in the street
i do this for fun, not to act rough
don't say i got heat, or got handcuffed
but you know you've used basic rhymes before
so what's changed now, homie whats the score?
can't be stopped, too much initiative
i'm not that selfish, want some dope lines i'll give
i've been branded unstoppable
a lyrical giant, i'm diabolical
i'd be your worst problem
i'm unsolvable
MonoR
10-25-2007, 02:58 PM
if your not the solution
then your the problem
sketch3
10-25-2007, 04:50 PM
demolish me?
by using the same tired ass BASIC rhymes?
(cat, hat, bat, rat, tat, )
that's what most of you do, if not all of you. If you don't believe me, read your own shit.
well seeing as this is a graff site
you cant expect there tto be any pro lyracists about,
i think sum people in here are dope but most are like me,
only spit when there
A when there on this site
B when there drunk or blunted
C or when there bord shitless
HoodRichSucka
10-25-2007, 04:53 PM
this right here is a true freestyle,
a mean style that breathes vile.
im true to this, ur new to this.
u cant see me, ur blinded, confinded.
blind sided by my rare stylish steaz.
ima emcee with skeezies beside me.
dont test me, trust me, ur less then me.
just hush urself, dont brush urself.
freeeeestylein
HoodRichSucka
10-25-2007, 05:29 PM
this right here is a true freestyle,
a mean style that breathes vile.
im true to this, ur new to this.
u cant see me, ur blinded, confinded.
blind sided by my rare stylish steaz.
ima emcee with skeezies beside me.
dont test me, trust me, ur less then me.
just hush urself, dont brush urself.
ur game is dirty, my name is perty,
im sturdy with my style, so versatile, meanwhile,
ur mad again, sad again, while im the the vadican.
praying for you, table for two.
i just killed u, spilled u on the floor. u want more?
HoodRichSucka
10-25-2007, 07:40 PM
HoodRich/Hidden Cypher
Hood: im the blessed son of jesus.
he sees up. doesnt need up. he helps us, developes us. thus he is the prophecy
Hidden: jesus christ, my lord and savior/
didn't have a chance, but he was my prayer/
and he answered it, thats why these lines just spit/
roll off of my tounge, paintin a lot, still no problem with my lungs/
i'll get on a knee, and bow my head/
hopin i see him in the clouds/
once i'm dead
Hood:dead and gone. stay strong without me, but dont count me out. im here no doubt in spirit, near it, near you i am, sam i am. the only man to be here but said to be dead.
Hidden:i passed away, but not in a pool of red/
a lot of tears were shed/
as my family gathered around my bed/
but i'm still here, i never left/
you know i want you to be happy/
so i'll move to the left/
let my boy spit some hot shit
Hood:the shit was hot, but not too hot where i got burnt. i just learned that i was heard. he could hear me, he tear'd me, was sad. im glad im gone tho, i can write this song tho. not too slow so u get lost, just toss ur hands up. put em up. stand up!
Hidden: man up, or now i'm yellin man down/
all i'm hearin is a ringin sound/
a bullet loose from the barrel/
a needle hole in his arm, man wasn't sterile/
i've been pressured with a lotta shit lately/
Hood:they hate me. sedate me, but i dont care. dont stare, just dare you do do it. the mayor was a'screwin the bitch in the back. the stitch in ur sack. thats wat i did, when u talked to me. stalked me. im fast like faulk. dont fuck with me.
Hidden:you know what the truth is/
i'm ruthless/
i'm cold and hard, fuck us/
bitch i can spit so hard, i bring da rawkus/
i'm outta the city, but between the sticks/
don't fuck with herbs or hicks/
i'll snap ya neck like wu-tang for fightin with me/
i'll lay you out on the street
Hood:my beats are the illest, the forealest. the meal is tender, the feal of it is so slender. dont fuck with me or hidden, ull get stuck like the glue was fresh, not sitten. u dont belong here, be strong dont fear. i may be bad but im poetic, synthetic, but never sympathetic. ur pathetic kid.
Such different styles. fun cypher tho man
Quote im incredable, unforgetable drop a beat
and ill start to spit alphabetical, my flows so creative
like roswell conspiracy theroy even a def man
could hear me,
accurate assasin shit lean with it rock with it
blast the banger while im choking you out
with your coat hanger,
lyricall tendicies extract my verbal flow
burn your skin and thats when you no
i won battles done,
shitty little freestyle
Seek38
10-26-2007, 01:40 PM
Fully loaded magazines and ready to kill, im frontin bigger rifles then kimveer girl, but kid this aint dawson im straight flossin, stay far back so i can snipe ya, and u can call me swiffer cuz imma just whipe ya, if u got extra cash u might wanna spend it on a tool G..cos youll need one if u wanna keep all yo jewelry, juss hop in the roof like im spiderman, pull out a gatt and put a clip up in your diaphram
MonoR
10-26-2007, 11:15 PM
i was not born with a mic in my hands
i was born with abnormally large salivary glands
i drooled puddles, lakes they say
wanna battle me, i'll drown ya any day
better hold ya breath, save ya last words
battle rap blah blah blah rhyme birds
ahhh shit man
where did you took the 1st line from?
yeah thats right
your a bitch whit no forme
my rap formula is way more dangerous
than a tortula
fucken kill you like i can kill mike tyson on his own
your nothing in this town
me n pass representing the mtl city and you where you from?
shit bag bitches suckiing dick on heroin
thtas what i think you are
fuck it and your wack flow cause you
your mabe born in a mic in yo hand
but it was a plastic shit
bouncingsoul
10-26-2007, 11:19 PM
Sitting in class, fluorescent fakes feed the innocence
As early bird, arid clock faces dream beaming condensed
Knowledge I spread through the area, past the corners
of the Earth, while they examine murders and send coroners
And doctors to check winds with no breeze, like heart disease
But just breathe deep, if it helps, heave but don't grieve please
While pulses hiccup the beeps, no sleep through the night
While seven strangely dangerous strangers kept to feeding the fight
I'm normally abnormal, and that's just a formal count of it
American satire runs on flat tires, and pushes steam through counterfeits
The sound is lit, and illuminates the Illuminati
Speaking silver serves through nerves, hits switches through the body
Break the spell, break nature's cell they're trying to sell
Through the words like a semi-permeable nuclear bomb shell
Chorus of life or death, but none of my miserly business
With fragile crystal chants falling on hearing aids on Christmas
I'll raise you two petals with a smile only half-incredulous
I'll give you the shirt off my back, just let me burn it for your benefit
Let me learn from your impetuous, headless, conscious mistakes
And I'll be that prodigal topping on the proverbial birthday cake
I've got 10 dollar words, but I'll exchange them for a nickel
While pickled splits trick the spinning spindles
Of fibers and kicking kindled fires that never die down on request
While my string focus hangs webbing in ominous finesse
They inspect the shilled specks while bills wreck the paycheck
They don’t break beats anymore, they'll be beating to break bets
With calligraphy scripts of dollar signs and collared vines
Pure cotton, made in synthetic China with marked smaller lines
Of borders and bournes unknown and unshown
Overthrown stone leaders and cheaters victory prone
But I’ll keep talking to the beautified wax faces
Heart on a treadmill, running track races
But I’ll calm her down, bring the sound back and rewire the speakers
I’ll see her, I’ll teach trials of teachers
Trudging on trick-or-treat creep reapers
Traveling, unraveling the sleepy cheat beepers…
Passleoinj
10-26-2007, 11:21 PM
saramaxwell:
fuckin biter , get your own style
i dont wanna be mean so please dont cry
im sick of you , heard you once and got enough
id like to talk to you about all kinds of stuff
but im gonna keep this simple: your the tag , im the buff
you aint staining , youre gone with the wind and i stand tough
youre nothing ,pathetic no esthetic , shit man
youre not a writer , notice your the way you speak amn
you gotta be a police or a guy from the ku klux klan or somethin
get in your white robe , soon to be stained with your own blood thats a good vision
cause you mothefucka will be remembering the crew cause we blastin
dck one
HoodRichSucka
10-27-2007, 04:08 PM
the bastard is dead his past will forever last in the masses of people. smash down ya steeple. the people in the church are lethal. kill u and leave you. spill u and feed you. like the body of christ, not very nice. u think they mind? i would think twice. two times to be safe, two lines ill engrave in ur mind. blind you like stevie, mind you but leave me. ill sieze you, tease u, then freeze you in time. leave you in mind incase i need u inside. breathe one more line. about ur fake ass rymes are old like good wine. sold like good times from hookers on streets. took her home to eat.
haha some freestylin'
sketch3
10-27-2007, 08:02 PM
if you wanna eat out hookers well thats ok,
but its no to flex and i dont flex that way,
not my fault you smoked a grand of meth away,
saw yo emasiated body just yesterday,
shoulda been cremated, if i conserntrated
im too lean to finish no beef homie
HoodRichSucka
10-28-2007, 12:14 AM
^^^haha i dont smoke weed or fuck hoookers, just fun rap.
i know theres no beef. my shit was crap.
didnt want to rhyme, just say something.
but its a freestyle thread. so i eat dumplings.
bouncingsoul your shit is maaad solid.
entry
10-28-2007, 01:28 AM
i wake up on a daily basis
shape up for the daily faces
end up at the daily places,
my world is mad craziness
living life as what seems to be painless
i cant tend to restrain this,
small kid act tough grew up in the roughs
headed to the suburbs,
where i grew up ended up selling herb
mad money and couldn't intend to learn
school was a struggle,
my logic is at a street smart level
trying to keep me out of trouble,
living in a destructive household no love
no trust only fear,
cant drive yet but took the car out
made it to 5th gear dad said i shouldn't
be driving at this time of year,
next day in the hospital actions regrettable
my life's been mistakable ever since the medical
dont know how to end it ... just a freestyle.. enjoy
HoodRichSucka
10-28-2007, 10:48 AM
like wutang i got a mad style, a swordstyle.
so go wild for me, mad rhymes i breathe.
like mad cow disease ull gone with ease.
dead to me, passed the sea, below the depths.
hell is far under man, take some breathes.
realize im the best, but entrys got game.
thru these eyes ull see, were not the same.
the goal is to learn and never portray.
ur soal is stern, and forever will stay, the same.
lil sumthin sumthin
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 12:11 PM
HoodRich/Hidden Cypher
Hood: im the blessed son of jesus.
he sees up. doesnt need up. he helps us, developes us. thus he is the prophecy
Hidden: jesus christ, my lord and savior/
didn't have a chance, but he was my prayer/
and he answered it, thats why these lines just spit/
roll off of my tounge, paintin a lot, still no problem with my lungs/
i'll get on a knee, and bow my head/
hopin i see him in the clouds/
once i'm dead
Hood:dead and gone. stay strong without me, but dont count me out. im here no doubt in spirit, near it, near you i am, sam i am. the only man to be here but said to be dead.
Hidden:i passed away, but not in a pool of red/
a lot of tears were shed/
as my family gathered around my bed/
but i'm still here, i never left/
you know i want you to be happy/
so i'll move to the left/
let my boy spit some hot shit
Hood:the shit was hot, but not too hot where i got burnt. i just learned that i was heard. he could hear me, he tear'd me, was sad. im glad im gone tho, i can write this song tho. not too slow so u get lost, just toss ur hands up. put em up. stand up!
Hidden: man up, or now i'm yellin man down/
all i'm hearin is a ringin sound/
a bullet loose from the barrel/
a needle hole in his arm, man wasn't sterile/
i've been pressured with a lotta shit lately/
Hood:they hate me. sedate me, but i dont care. dont stare, just dare you do do it. the mayor was a'screwin the bitch in the back. the stitch in ur sack. thats wat i did, when u talked to me. stalked me. im fast like faulk. dont fuck with me.
Hidden:you know what the truth is/
i'm ruthless/
i'm cold and hard, fuck us/
bitch i can spit so hard, i bring da rawkus/
i'm outta the city, but between the sticks/
don't fuck with herbs or hicks/
i'll snap ya neck like wu-tang for fightin with me/
i'll lay you out on the street
Hood:my beats are the illest, the forealest. the meal is tender, the feal of it is so slender. dont fuck with me or hidden, ull get stuck like the glue was fresh, not sitten. u dont belong here, be strong dont fear. i may be bad but im poetic, synthetic, but never sympathetic. ur pathetic kid.
Such different styles. fun cypher tho man
DOPE DOPE DOPE!
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 12:17 PM
Quote im incredable, unforgetable drop a beat
and ill start to spit alphabetical, my flows so creative
like roswell conspiracy theroy even a def man
could hear me,
accurate assasin shit lean with it rock with it
blast the banger while im choking you out
with your coat hanger,
lyricall tendicies extract my verbal flow
burn your skin and thats when you no
i won battles done,
shitty little freestyle
Quote your incrediable?
haha,listen to me cause im the one that proved yo girl was edible.
I'm from kc and write ofb,so theres no reason to have beef with mee.
Once my styles full grown I'll be glad to take that throne,cause this shits comin off the top of the dome. sittin on chromes? fuck i hardly have the bills to pay for my pills. my happy pills,they helpin me keepin it real.
No beef.
just fuckin around.
MonoR
10-28-2007, 03:53 PM
god damn you can feel it
its like a big dick in yo lips, bitch
your a hoe trying to flow, i can see that
your rappin to get a bread on your table, we all can seee that
you cant fuck whit me im unbreakable, my flows made of combos
its a martial art, how i rap and how i can fucken kill you whit words
you think i give a fuck about this rap battle, just trying to grown yo
your not a gee, your not even a prankster
im not a gangster im not even a fucken rappa
still i can put you back in your place fucken niga
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 04:16 PM
I'ma keep it real and act like you didn't say that.
Is that font supposed to taunt me?
I'm a hoe tryin to flow? *****, My ryhmes will hit ya so hard it might make ya dick grow.
be a man,take a stand,here we go,hear me flow. You all thinkin you hard,I'm sneaky like that,I'll wait till ya put down ya guard,hit ya hard,right ya face,put ya back in ya place,maybe it'll make ya think about actin ya own race.
HoodRichSucka
10-28-2007, 05:50 PM
u can feel the burn like a third degree.
toss and turn cuz u hadnt heard of this emcee.
thats me the hoodrich, no snitch, u cant sight me.
rap for a century before they indict me.
u can bite me but cant even hurt me.
jerk me, jump me, dont matter to me.
ill end up on top, u lent the info to a cop.
they tryed to catch up. ended up falling.
my boys met up. shots fired cops calling.
back up was needed, bleeded was seen.
creepin corners were gangsta at the scene.
MonoR
10-28-2007, 06:25 PM
I'ma keep it real and act like you didn't say that.
Is that font supposed to taunt me?
I'm a hoe tryin to flow? *****, My ryhmes will hit ya so hard it might make ya dick grow.
be a man,take a stand,here we go,hear me flow. You all thinkin you hard,I'm sneaky like that,I'll wait till ya put down ya guard,hit ya hard,right ya face,put ya back in ya place,maybe it'll make ya think about actin ya own race.
i never pull my guard down
im a put you on the scene give you a g string dance like a hoe then ill fucken beat you down
your talking about rhymes i see none of them
your a fucken wack emcee and im not of those
you cleary know it i destroy yyou
cook you up fucken eat you up
you egg face ill crush you down
i got ya head on a lock, you better duck down hoe
im not gonna choke ill fucken shoot ya whit words and flows
ODonthesetrees
10-28-2007, 07:58 PM
ok, well here i go gnetleman, step back and watch me flow
to the next generation, i do see,
a brand new mc formed from me,
not myself not my wife, but a child indeed
who was birthed on the date of april 16th
and this son i name him god of all,
not metaphorically but indeed i shall
name him god, my son, "god rogan"
the trillest mother fucker he'll wlak on the ocean
and that right there well be his gift
a gift from god, a gift thats swift
ill smoke him up from the age of 3
all the way to infiniti
because im immortal, yes it true
drank from the fountain of youth and so shall you
if you suck my dick and you suck it nice,
ill keep you around till your one thousand, twice
well that is all i need to say right now,
ive let you hear of my story, my vow
a life indeed is a life thats granted
not for the short hearted, but for the enchanted
-verses from the ecstatic
Hidden Teknique
10-28-2007, 08:49 PM
i freeze emcees amazing abilities
they go from hot, then they temp drops
my rhymes will move circles around you
suffocate and drown you, but you knew
my lines are epic, i am your hometown hero
i'll always stay cookin man, never drop below zero
my words strike fear into powerful men
an ink explosion every time i move my pen
lyrics bleed out onto white blank slates
words come off the dome, and determine your fates
i'm your worst nightmare, i don't have a care
you look at me, i'll shoot back a stare
never gonna sit down till i'm ready
only when i got chains that are too heavy
i will never be found a slave to this trade
love for hip hop man, not to get paid
my words eat at you so intense
so hott, you can't even comprehend
i'll confess that i don't want success
why man, it'll give me to much shit on my chest
too much stress, i don't need it
you give me shit, i'll just eat it
i'm not one to just conceive it
you best believe it, music i need it
it's the shit that burns through my veins
my sins are lost, just like dirt in the rain
it's like vicoden to your pain
all i gotta say is fuck fame
ODonthesetrees
10-28-2007, 08:55 PM
i want to see some of you "good rappers" like teknique rap abotu something besides rap...it seems all their is in this is people absically rappign abotu how good they are at rap, thats hwy i did the thign i did, jsut to mix it up a bit
Hidden Teknique
10-28-2007, 09:11 PM
as adrenaline starts to pump
the crowd gets loud and starts to jump
everyone screamin out kick his ass
only a misunderstandin, howd this happen so fast
i wasn't prepared to have to knuckle up
i was now in for a ride, i had to buckle up
shit was starting to get crazy
only this kid i never met, the rest was hazy
but this kid was crystal clear,
lookin at me, tryin to strike fear
i'm froze like the headlights on a deer
but now i was starting to clinch my fist
tightening up, i was ready to bust this bitch
from his nose, his kidney to his lip
i was never a fighter, but this kid was my fluid
and i was the ignitor, up in the lighter
next thing i know shits in slow-mo
i'm hearin sirens from the po-po
my fists bruisin from his face
cops yellin, now i'm findin myself up in a chase
then i'm hidin under a bench, in a dark place
in just one night, all my fears i faced
sketch3
10-28-2007, 09:14 PM
i aint got the Patience,
not the start breakin,the foundations of this civilisation,
its blatent,wat u cravein, but u to late son,
leave your neck broken, waitin at the bus station,
without a moments hesitation,
got ur heart skipin palpitations, while im gripin a scalpel,
screamin acusations, if theres any complications,
show you a demonstration, of the implacations,
when you put me in a risky situation,
do some gory shit, like the deaths from final destination,
have your chest cave in, wondering were your brains gone,
come to your base of operations, leavin flesh wounds gaping,
over 7 diferent generations...
.. i aint got no obligation, to stop your sister getting raped on,
top of an iron gate son,
ODonthesetrees
10-28-2007, 09:16 PM
thats whats up..everyone should learn from that, step otu of your comfort zones, rap about somethign new
syrup2
10-28-2007, 09:19 PM
ayo peep this bs nigaz
sittin in the back of the classroom on one
teacher keep askin what ima do in the long run
bitch shut up rollin my blunt
shes like ay tay u a cool kat ..no front
word word
thats how I do things
tay banger jr. fool move things
yayo a1 yola also pepsi cola
whaa for real ***** thats a deal
it is if it aint your cap ill peal
hallikuja hollla back
so based an so based
sketch3
10-28-2007, 09:42 PM
you dont wanna bring beef on road,
cuss im a street fighter,
im hardcore i eat lighters, just to make my teeth brighter,
but seriously, you might catch a hurricane kick jawside,
better appologise, befor i tiger uppercut ur futer bride,
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 10:27 PM
i never pull my guard down
im a put you on the scene give you a g string dance like a hoe then ill fucken beat you down
your talking about rhymes i see none of them
your a fucken wack emcee and im not of those
you cleary know it i destroy yyou
cook you up fucken eat you up
you egg face ill crush you down
i got ya head on a lock, you better duck down hoe
im not gonna choke ill fucken shoot ya whit words and flows
call me a hoe.
theres only one way and it goes like this.
Mc?!
haha let me tell ya.
You thinkin you all hard like you gonna a bust a move.
You actually think I'm scared of you and a kru?
Theres nothin you gonna do,but you say you aint a gangbanga
But you actin like you killin for a color.
I'm just a brotha tryin to get up in the hood,I'm never understood,up to no good.
I'm holdin it down,making a sound,takin ya town,even takin the crown.
call me a hoe.
theres only one way and it goes like this.
entry
10-28-2007, 10:47 PM
Riot you cant rhyme give up
you should of never tried it
im taking your rhymes to the pan
starting to fry it i just burnt you
everything you say is recycled
start from scratch like a little kid
trying to ride a bicycle,
i can rap soft core like some porn
or rip you apart hardcore like
a new Orleans storm,
this shits til infinite endless
but right now its only you getting it,
i beat you just left for preparation
chop you up sell you to the local dairy
put you in the beef section..
hmm all i could think of no beef riot hahah
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 11:09 PM
haha its all good dude.
I'm just fuckin around I'll try to come up with something,i just started this shit like last month.
but i gotta piss.
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 11:18 PM
yeah yeah.
I know I can't rhyme worth shit.
maybe one day when I can actually spit,my words will hit.
I could spit a whole page of rage to ya ass,then I'll ask ya how ya felt?
My rhymes can hit hard depending on how its spelt.
Meh,I'm misunderstood,No one understands me.
Maybe sometime I'll make ya believe.
But,until then,I'll pop a couple aleves.
Continue my status and the anyonomous thief,while the little biters be jockin my steez.
Fuck im out haha.
soo fucking tired.and high.
i'll try again tommorow:)
entry
10-28-2007, 11:21 PM
im freeessssssssssh like ugghh
"Riot"
10-28-2007, 11:34 PM
that freestyle was pretty ill on the last page you did.
Oink.
10-28-2007, 11:42 PM
spittin wack shit, yall need slimfast
cause im phat with a ph medical degree
i fall like 9 seasons hit the ground so hard no ones breathin'
corpses left to start breedin; left to repopulate the planet filled with hate
battlin yous like a blind date
blaooo'
entry
10-29-2007, 12:25 AM
anyone down for a battle
you start off i perfer a certain kinda theme to it
TylerDurden
10-29-2007, 08:24 AM
i want to see some of you "good rappers" like teknique
aaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahhahahahah
CRN-one
10-29-2007, 10:33 AM
it's been a minute since I graced you haters with my presence
when I'm done there'll be time for your slow convalescence
immaculate conception, I was born larger than life
I'm the kinda ***** that would straight out fuck your wife
in front of you at parties while you sit there and cry
you can point your heat at me but I'm never gonna die
haters like tyler can run they mouth and doubt
but like dj kahlid said, them *****s can walk it out
because they ain't hood, and they don't know what we talkin bout
I'll get up in his shit, and rot his bones like he had gout
we'll smoke that blunt, run up and smash that chump,
tie him up, throw his ass in the trunk
drive out to the river and take him out on the boat
a righteous man sinks, only fucking witches float
you wanna put my name in your mouth? go right ahead
and when you're fucking done you'll get deez nuts instead
I don't break the rules, I make the fucking rules
*****s in this bitch run they mouth like loose stool
Montazuma would be proud when he saw them all go
I'd be mad depressed if I had that diahrreah flow
I'll be alright with getting caught ending your life
I'll wile out in court and threaten the jury with a knife
and the worst they'll do to me is hit me with probate
I'll tell the fucking judge that he can go sit and rotate
I'll sit in my jail cell and fill my soul with hate
then I'll come back and clean the haters out like my name was Colgate
Gee TylerDurden, you think this is fight club?
you sit around and act all tough with that mean mug?
last time I checked, and I'll gladly reinspect
your ass died at the end of that movie, which I can respect
cause they got tired of hearing your fucking mouth run
same as all of us here, time to gracefully bow out son
MonoR
10-29-2007, 03:21 PM
call me a hoe.
theres only one way and it goes like this.
Mc?!
haha let me tell ya.
You thinkin you all hard like you gonna a bust a move.
You actually think I'm scared of you and a kru?
Theres nothin you gonna do,but you say you aint a gangbanga
But you actin like you killin for a color.
I'm just a brotha tryin to get up in the hood,I'm never understood,up to no good.
I'm holdin it down,making a sound,takin ya town,even takin the crown.
call me a hoe.
theres only one way and it goes like this.
there no crown going on, no fame going on
like hidden says fuck fame, and im down whit this
my flows is a problem to you eat it and i swear you'll dig it
im not reppin anything or rocking aniything
im just wrecking and down whit my family
fuck the industry keep it underground or youll hit the ground
your going to be 1 of those 50 cent whit no flows and rhymes
im doing this since 3 weeks and an half
and still i cut you in a half
you half portion dont step up or youll eat it like a huge bitch
sketch3
10-29-2007, 03:28 PM
that shit was the worst,
never herd a wacker verse,
its like sumone put a curse, on ur words,
when u get merked, its gunna hurt, but first,
i gotta get blazed,cuss i been lean for days,
when my eyes are glazed, an my minds in a haze,
i dont ever want it to go away,
MonoR
10-29-2007, 03:50 PM
that shit was the worst,
never herd a wacker verse,
its like sumone put a curse, on ur words,
when u get merked, its gunna hurt, but first,
i gotta get blazed,cuss i been lean for days,
when my eyes are glazed, an my minds in a haze,
i dont ever want it to go away,
was this supose to be good?
man you sound like dmx getting low in the hood
fuck you suck
you got more experience than be but on the mic you sound like a fucken ducky duck
im wasting my time cause your flow is made of waste
grab the rest im giving you
its gonna be your thank giving for the fucken rest of the month
go buy some respect you fucken fake
your flow, i eat it like pancakes
your giving me cholesterol
im going to puke for you honor
cause i took it and you aint got nothing left.
sketch3
10-29-2007, 04:01 PM
im not gunna reply till you start rhymin
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 04:39 PM
there no crown going on, no fame going on
like hidden says fuck fame, and im down whit this
my flows is a problem to you eat it and i swear you'll dig it
im not reppin anything or rocking aniything
im just wrecking and down whit my family
fuck the industry keep it underground or youll hit the ground
your going to be 1 of those 50 cent whit no flows and rhymes
im doing this since 3 weeks and an half
and still i cut you in a half
you half portion dont step up or youll eat it like a huge bitch
wow.
for real.
that shit sucked,not even worth my time but yeah here we go again.
HAHA!
Listen up kid cause this is how i roll.
the 816 be lockin up that patrol.
I got ya ass on lock,fuck with me,ill leave ya rocked.
With a whack ass grin,i'll be glad to take out my ink pen.
Write my name on ya big ass forehead,then leave ya for dead.
Now with all this said,i've been rhymin JUST as long as you.
Now shut the fuck up cause you already through.
Thats the end of this beef,I'm beyond belief as ill as it gets.
I hope I leave ya heart sore,down in the pits.
Now little timmy goto bed and dream about beatin my spits.
Worrrdd
MonoR
10-29-2007, 05:31 PM
wow.
for real.
that shit sucked,not even worth my time but yeah here we go again.
HAHA!
Listen up kid cause this is how i roll.
the 816 be lockin up that patrol.
I got ya ass on lock,fuck with me,ill leave ya rocked.
With a whack ass grin,i'll be glad to take out my ink pen.
Write my name on ya big ass forehead,then leave ya for dead.
Now with all this said,i've been rhymin JUST as long as you.
Now shut the fuck up cause you already through.
Thats the end of this beef,I'm beyond belief as ill as it gets.
I hope I leave ya heart sore,down in the pits.
Now little timmy goto bed and dream about beatin my spits.
Worrrdd
the worst ive ever heard.
and dont bite necro. its bad for the health
ill spill your blood all over my house, keep your head as a trophe
took your eyes outta your head, make a cofee out of it
you make me shit and dont worry all the shit goes for you
kid fuck you
thats all i got to say
next time you step up make sure you have some more cause ill be there to stay
HoodRichSucka
10-29-2007, 05:32 PM
u all should know monor sucks.
fucks and tucks his dick in like a bitch.
a snitch is was he is. bitchmade leach.
ill teach u something that u cant reach.
im illicit, explicit, my rhymes are unseen.
im mean and lean, cut open ur spleen.
take it out forever.thats wat u need.
to die forever, and never be seen.
your a cockroach, a bug, a fuckin disease.
i do this shit with ease, its a breeze.
dont fuckin talk shit when ur shit is wack.
u cant walk the walk bitch, wat kinda shit is that!?
Passleoinj
10-29-2007, 05:44 PM
man shut the fuck up
you cant fight like a man so you ask your friend to help up
your a pussy even in your mom's belly you were suckin dicks
stop frontin like u something , you cant even handle a bitch
u wanna battle fine , lemme introduce u to my kicks
ill burry you , stab you in the forehead with the mic
english is not my language and i still fuck you up with it
im sick of this shit so listen
dont fuck with monor cause you fuck with me
bros before hoes ***** , we the realest motherfucker on this planet
stop frontin , i know you wanna be like me
i hate you bitch , you on my black list so you wanna be friend with me?
wait a minute i aint done yet so imma continue
im undroppable on the ring , master kung fu
style is wild , you know the thang its real too
im the freshest in this world , what about you
***** dont answer back cause my AK will be there to meet you
thats right bitch your rhymes are unseen
remain invisible in this world cause u aint a mc
say monor is a disease , im the cure
2 heads are stronger than one , shoulda learned that
cant handle the rap yeah i noticed that
the way u shakin on ya keyboard and
all that g shit you talkin bout , think imma believe that?
youse a crazy bitch and you know it damn well
dck is my crew , whacchu know bout that?
MonoR
10-29-2007, 05:53 PM
u all should know monor sucks.
fucks and tucks his dick in like a bitch.
a snitch is was he is. bitchmade leach.
ill teach u something that u cant reach.
im illicit, explicit, my rhymes are unseen.
im mean and lean, cut open ur spleen.
take it out forever.thats wat u need.
to die forever, and never be seen.
your a cockroach, a bug, a fuckin disease.
i do this shit with ease, its a breeze.
dont fuckin talk shit when ur shit is wack.
u cant walk the walk bitch, wat kinda shit is that!?
didnt you understood already
im not in a good mood so dont get up or ill fucken kill you
whenever your ready ill wait for you and your krew
your a bait bitch thinking that your good
your reppin a gay hood
your rhymes are basic my flows is made of cuted head
my shit is to brutal for you, to ahead for you
you knew it, when i fucken deep throated your mom
she was crying on the edge and i was laughing cause shes was screaming
droped her down there whit 2g's or heroin in the blood
man i fucken hate you and you clearly know it
you think your hard and tough
look at you in a mirror your an horror
ya know it already i fucken finish you in a round
so dont talk shit or fuck around cause its gonna be a fucken gun in yo mouth
no noise no question no fucken messin
i wont pay attention for witnesses
cause its gonna be a public crime, attetion, i got your head on a lock
HoodRichSucka
10-29-2007, 05:53 PM
Passleoninj - "dont fuck with monor cause you fuck with me"
first off, ur gay^^...
secondly, u dont rhyme...
thirdly, shut the FUCK up...i think everyone would agree
Passleoinj
10-29-2007, 05:59 PM
how many slaps in the face you want , they come in packs of 2
MonoR
10-29-2007, 06:00 PM
we got some more for lil bitches like you
they come in clip of 30
Passleoinj
10-29-2007, 06:02 PM
smith n wesson shit man
cant fuck with us
go drive yo lil hondas we got cadillacs.
HoodRichSucka
10-29-2007, 06:02 PM
"they come in placks of 2"
"they come in a clip of 30"
geez, why dont u two get off eachothers dick and stop saying the same shit over and over. u are gayyyyyyyyyyyyyy
MonoR
10-29-2007, 06:15 PM
1st we are not gay
we ball at least 6 girls a day.
2nd you cant even fight
3nd man you better kill your self
epikstyles
10-29-2007, 06:26 PM
once upon a time not long ago <<(slick rick)
i saw this sexy bitch and wanted to give her a go
just from hangin around, she said she wanted mo
i playd it cool cuz ya know i ammm
then i went to her house to give her a jamm
the next day found the bitch had a mann
who got dumped like a sucka cuz she loves me daym
sticked with the bitch cause she pretty fly
to busy to just hang cause you i know i get hi
she tried to flirt around to make me needy
but i didnt give a fuck she cant get greedy
i left her in a flash, ex's wanted to smash
but i got a new girl and the old one is raging
but theres plenty more that are aroung and paging
but thats how it goes with easy hoes
breaking hearts just to get in the pants
i tell them, you had your chance
HoodRichSucka
10-29-2007, 06:26 PM
cat got ur tongue? or does monor??????
3nd.... r u from a different country??(not USA)
just wondering
entry
10-29-2007, 07:04 PM
nobodys done nothing for me
"living the life" thats just a story
ive grown up and done it all for me
had the finest girl she left me lonley
sold herb and got me money
poured my first drink got me real rowdy
popped pills still dont know where that got me,
he said im the one that made you man
but im the one that turned him in,
shittty freestyle g2g post some good shit later
entry
10-29-2007, 07:45 PM
we use to be real homies no longer hang
AZ quoted and things still never changed
we use to do anything for the dolla
jack kids start rockin gold chains
smoke weed everyday like tupac said it
weve been through all this shit still living for nothing,
the love still remains i got your back never complain
i was there when you were getting jacked
got my celly out and thats that,
you yelled get back while we started getting the stack
blood stained white tee suburb kids thought we were real G,
you took me in fed me food when i went stray
never supported the drugs that got to me,
only a real homie that i could trust would do that for me,
we made it through high school and its mighty viscous
on this road to riches,
but id rather have a friend to roll with me then the stacks of money
and no true homie
reallll shitty i was just listening to a AZ song and thought
about me and my buddy that dont talk to much anymore
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:01 PM
the worst ive ever heard.
and dont bite necro. its bad for the health
ill spill your blood all over my house, keep your head as a trophe
took your eyes outta your head, make a cofee out of it
you make me shit and dont worry all the shit goes for you
kid fuck you
thats all i got to say
next time you step up make sure you have some more cause ill be there to stay
I bit necro?
When and where kid?
that shit was off the top of my head.
I just got back from stainin and paintin,hopin to hear ya back from ya whack ass.
Bitch,you soft,your jaw is like glass.
You should put some more time into makin ya words ryhme.
That shit was sounded nasty it shouldve been a crime.
But about you here to stay, I told you mofucka.
I'm takin ova today,I mean what you got to say?
Death threats,crooked bets?
You sound like you got terets when you try to ryhme.
I'm 15 up in this bitch,nearly full grown, no daddy around watch me grow to manhood,I'm always up to no good.
Never understood.
But maybe you'll take your time to understand
my words are like contraband,Smuggle that shit into new ears,Hopin they hear,I'm bringin the tears.look at you now readin,I bet yo eyes be bleedin,I'm not succeeding like my moms be wantin,now she frontin. Now she don't want me,she kicked my ass to the curb,out in the burbs,my voice is unheard.
Now watch me laugh while you readin my paragraphs.
entry
10-29-2007, 08:04 PM
batttttttttttle
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:07 PM
what?
you want to battle or were you ranting about me and monor?
entry
10-29-2007, 08:12 PM
me and you hombre :D
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:13 PM
Fuck that shit.
I just started. I'll get raped.
oh well.
let me finish this beef with monor and well have a shits and giggles battle :D
entry
10-29-2007, 08:15 PM
RIGHT NOWWWWWW!!! ill start :)
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:15 PM
fcukk ok :)
entry
10-29-2007, 08:21 PM
this shouldnt be revealed im the devil heres some exposure
our second nature is being greedy fill your ears up with mustard
but i prefer banging out ketchup your screaming while i laugh
at all the red stuff rain down and drip your skin, puffin on a blunt
roll to the casino respect the mission i sold my soul had to sign
the dotted line for this position,
im versatile my rhymes are worth while black leather glove shit
finger prints up in it, homicide is optional i mention execution
cut up your wife while shes pregnant murder you unborn baby cheap abortion
im sick actually lyrically crazy insane ive seen em rise seen em fall
seen em come seen em fall ive seeeeeeeeeen it all,
i got new ideas to the rhymes i rearrange real talk your welcome
for the info,
but i left you in limbo you cant top this out of state connect
this is a 20 to life rift stack doe while i left you laying
on the floor..
ahhhhhhhhh not to good at all but whatever
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:36 PM
15 seconds until self destruct.
My heart is about to erupt.
After this shits ova I'm going to leave your database corrupt.
You said you wanted to battle me? thats where you fucked up.
You say you be killin my wife,I have no life,no kids to be feedin.
Fuck im not even sucseedin(sp?). You expecting to much from me.
I'm just a your average embarrassment,I'll fuck your shit up without your mothers consent. I represent the 816,now heres the fix.
It be grimey out here,bums sellin bics,way overpriced,it just isn't right.
Brothas need to stick togetha,once you in this shit,you in it foreva.
entry
10-29-2007, 08:54 PM
entry for the win!!
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 08:57 PM
I told you!
Oh well.
atleast i tried. right?
entry
10-29-2007, 09:01 PM
ehhhhhhhhh to be honest i just started
well not to recent this shits just all freestyled
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 09:02 PM
haha I've been in this shit for about 2 and a half weeks now.
I'm a meganub:)
"Riot"
10-29-2007, 09:51 PM
haha im not startin beef.
Im just in here to fuck around.
I just got done paintin a while ago and i have nothing to do.
entry
10-29-2007, 10:22 PM
hidden keep your opinion to your fucking self there bud
you come in here saying shit about spitting why dont you
and ur sitting infront of a computer screen to goof so
think befor you speak
Maste
10-29-2007, 10:54 PM
i like the guys that talk the lies
like we cant see the world through your eyes
arightt man listen your sittin in your kitchen
on your brandnew computer, scooter, stop bitchen
your home again, do you have any friends?
stop tellin these people off again and again.
your doin the same thing man dont you see
you can type on your computer but can you rock and M-I-C
its unlikly not un like me who never will be an m c
beatin you mericilessly
i dont even know if thats a word
maybe its just something i heard
but, for real shut the hell up
no one wants to hear your thugangster stuff.
all for you hidden... just incanse there was confusion no im not talkin to you entry
bouncingsoul
10-29-2007, 11:31 PM
She was driving deeds and rhyming the breeze, miming trees
It was a floating peace, she was flying free finally
Clear as I can see, she was trying to be
Nothing but to be what being is being and sleeping was sleeping
Peacefully, her moonlit face, goddesses couldn't perfect her
Holy coloring books couldn't control and correct her
Gliding, never siding, riding always objective, selective
And corrective, everything always in it's place when she walked
Never destructive, spread peace, that's what love was, she'd talk
And the world would go silent for her, birds would curse, mid-chirp
Mid-work, mid-day, any time of the week she'd speak and hurt
But always painless, always chainless, never vindictive
Loved life and life loved her because she lived it
Never missed it, a second was lost but didn't matter anyway
I'd pay a dollar for her thoughts, she'd give me a penny to take them away
Always careless and always brainless, lived from the heart
But that doesn't mean intelligence aint a good start, she was street smart
And beats talked to her like no other, music the mutual brother
Between us, no language barriers, volume knob the translator
Nature was natural to her, intrinsic minutes gasping to keep up the pace
Time passes in masses, breaks the hourglass, past classes, and her face
Keeps steady composition, phenomenal fiction of fake photography fixin
And mixin with break beats and her eyes glisten
Sets the stage ablaze, and there's no crowd but me, silently cheering
Mute victory, celebrate it, never hated it, awesome blossom nearing
She turns and love burns, eye contact fakes direct and fizzles
She's one of a kind, a heavy raindrop caught in a light drizzle
On a one-way path to that true lover's wide-eyed, bright skied
Hope, and she doesn't know where she's taking me, just along for the ride..
Started last night
Maybe I'll add more to this one later actually. I kinda like it. It's different for me
So I added more today...
Now let's take it back and learn a little bit of history
The bliss, the kiss, it's all nice but what it meant to me
Is a metaphysical mystery, it's a mist of mastery
Of past lasts standing in stark contrast to platters of flattery
I was wondering where she was, why wait with no stakes
And nothing on the line, time didn't matter, I knew I could always make
It up and take the piss out of anyone who said I couldn't
Who said I wouldn't learn the should's and shouldn'ts of
What I was living, righteous flights and robes flatter the flapping
Wing of human gods and crowds, the clapping
And shrouds of trapping gasting raps, which brings me back to my point
Now I'd like to have a night's right to be bright, but it's a joint
Venture, it's mental, because she lives in my head
But she's real and unreal, she's here and everywhere, instead
I like to think that she's in me, I'm hers and she's mine
But never associative, it's cross-calumny, crimes
In pack of dimes but nine cents is all it took to book it
I snook a look and she bent light, crooks crack back crooked
And I sung songs to sorry summers spent walking wonders
And talking under dead breaths, lead steps, destinations asunder
It was my mind on one side, heart on the other, and I wish I knew
That I was just a few steps away from being blown to something new
But she never told me, she only watched and laughed, digital, pivotal
Visible surreptitious smiles, she radiated, but that was typical
And yeah, I can't help but notice it, it ropes my attention
Chokes notes, messages of a dwindling destined tension
Past aghast, tasks masked under dusty, rusty glassed backs
Of peers and fears, tears cheered, weird queers and yeah I passed
With flying colors, although they were just gliding, I was just minding
My time and finding the rhymes in me to fill me with chiming
senses of spined repentances to make sense of these
seemingly senseless sentences, sent to straighen out spiring sprees
Or spring gamboling, frivolously dwindling down the hours
Until I could see her again, but I didn't know she'd just flower
behind blind backs, she'd astound me with light tracks
A capella, breezy instrumental stencils an easy voice that backs
choruses of forces and sources unknown to anyone voiceless
And noiseless, anyone that toys ploys for the choiceless
I think she loves me, and I did ever since I knew
That this girl doesn't exist yet, and her name is you..
MonoR
10-30-2007, 06:56 AM
hood rich sucka
you fucken niga
open your eyes its the last time i say it
ill cut your fucken neck for a penny
thats how it is in montreal city
we do play, we do ball
all you do in your hood, is playing whit your ball
dont ever come back at me
cause its gonna be a 6 in yo tree
call your back up
then call the police ill; be there waiting whit my homie
fuck you.
and riot
i think im done whit you
what your saying makes no sense, and your flow suck
stop fucking around cause your fucking whit the wrong person
look its a 3v1 you the lil bite bitch sketch 3 the lil duck and hoodrichsucka the one who got pistol whiped
you know how it works i raped you since you were born
in this game, you cant buy respect by doing porn
i think you dont understand, cause all you do, is showing your ass
ill kill you put your rest in a box, wait till you become ashes then i just shit in it
and give the rest to your krew
know that you know the trut shut up and keep fuckin your dudes.
CRN-one
10-30-2007, 08:31 AM
Not even gonna wait for my boy HoodRich to respond
gonna squash this bitch like I'm fuckin King Kong
huge fucking words run straight through your cerebral cortex
complicated rhymes swirling through your mind like a vortex
nine out of ten times your rhymes don't even rhyme
here's a bit of advice - rethink the end of each line
here's a little example - cat rhymes with bat
dog rhymes with hog, fat rhymes with sat
and if this were in person I'd fuckin beat you with my gat
see? it's easy, so long as you have half a mind
woah, my bad, with you that might be hard to find
Monor runs his mouth in ways that seem ill-logical
while me and my fucking dudes are up in here being prodigical
no hate, no beef, no need to get all twisted
but to be perfectly honest, if it were insisted
I'd probably step on your throat until you turned a nice shade of blue
there's no reason to mince words, I'm fucking done with you.
sketch3
10-30-2007, 12:14 PM
most fools in here spit shit thats not belivebe,
while i do shit thats unconvievble,
like stickin needles, in kids thats remedail,
dont wanna know what state ill be leavin you,
might show u just wat a meat cleaver do,
i can tell you leakin too,
can see ur blood bleedin thru,
your jacket, cant do jackshit,
cept take a crack hit, you wack bitch
think we all know who im talking too
'' open your eyes its the last time i say it
ill cut your fucken neck for a penny''-LAME
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 03:18 PM
hood rich sucka
you fucken niga
open your eyes its the last time i say it
ill cut your fucken neck for a penny
thats how it is in montreal city
we do play, we do ball
all you do in your hood, is playing whit your ball
dont ever come back at me
cause its gonna be a 6 in yo tree
call your back up
then call the police ill; be there waiting whit my homie
fuck you.
Wow you can't ANYMORE whack with that?
well see.
I grew in the 740,makin that dough,dreamin of ridin some chromes.
That shit all turned around I'm rockin a rough life,sportin this knife.
I'll slice ya throat,make ya bleed all ova that brand new coat.
You call me a hoe,but still never told me how I bit necro?
Here we go,watch my style grow.
then watch your flow go right out the window.
Get respect by doin porn? Only porn I be doin is makin ya moms gag on my dick,its pretty fuckin sick to see the shit i do.
But you talk stuff about me and crew,what you gonna do?
Type me letta? full of gramma mistakes.
Were not here to cause beef.
Only here to take ya place,end ya fuckin race.
no need for a more bitches like you, I told you along time ago you were through,I mean listen to me kid,there aint no stoppin me,you see?
I'm far from a g but one hell of a mc,Be what you wanna be.
maybe one day you'll see you livin the life of a bitch.
You gonna grow up a snitch.
Now step up ya game before I throw ya in the flames.
My ryhmes be about threes times aslong as yours.
Your in for a spankin,leavin ya ass sore.
You can't step up to me,I open new doors to expose the core.
Hopin the next generation will explore my words.
Hopin I get heard,But in the mean time.
stick to bein a bitch,But I'm out.
Gotta go make ya mums puss smell like sour krout.
sketch3
10-30-2007, 03:40 PM
sheet just relised monor dssed mee,
monor
you a snake,
like a sidewinder be,
could be behind a tree,
aimin on blindin me,
i aint declinin beef,
but bitch should rewind his teeth,
cus he's inclined to speack,
from inside his cheecks,
an im not talkin about his mouth,
go down south,
see were all his shouts, come out,
ODonthesetrees
10-30-2007, 04:21 PM
hood rich sucka
you fucken niga
open your eyes its the last time i say it
ill cut your fucken neck for a penny
thats how it is in montreal city
we do play, we do ball
all you do in your hood, is playing whit your ball
dont ever come back at me
cause its gonna be a 6 in yo tree
call your back up
then call the police ill; be there waiting whit my homie
fuck you.
and riot
i think im done whit you
what your saying makes no sense, and your flow suck
stop fucking around cause your fucking whit the wrong person
look its a 3v1 you the lil bite bitch sketch 3 the lil duck and hoodrichsucka the one who got pistol whiped
you know how it works i raped you since you were born
in this game, you cant buy respect by doing porn
i think you dont understand, cause all you do, is showing your ass
ill kill you put your rest in a box, wait till you become ashes then i just shit in it
and give the rest to your krew
know that you know the trut shut up and keep fuckin your dudes.
dude this is soo fuckin horrible, im just laughing
HoodRichSucka
10-30-2007, 04:34 PM
the insicion of my intuition is the apolocypse.
the decision is not wise and infact im rocketship.
pack a lip, and watch it explode.
implode inward. no sex from the doctor.
ill cut u up take our u labido.
feed u amino acid u lack attraction. infact son.
im back son, im imfamous, delisouse and raw.
u saw what i can do and drew a picture for you.
u still couldnt see what i saw instead.
u stole my lines and rymes and bread.
i am the master disaster reborn and grew faster.
ur nothin to me but a fake emcee with uglY bichtes.
ill put u in stiches and engulf the richest from everyone.
u cant touch me im the best, better then everyone..
Hidden Teknique
10-30-2007, 04:46 PM
entry fuck you...you find another post where i don't spit
so know what you are talking about before you talk shit
and i think what i said was don't just sit in front of a comp screen
playin the e-thug game
quick keystyle
in a hip hop race,
i am never in second place
i never will fall behind,
when i spit it, you press rewind
i am second to none
i'll lynch ya ass, and leave ya hung
i'm not playin beef no more
i'm done man, i lost count on the score
i don't have to act like a thug online
to fill me up with pride inside
thats just not me, i am who i am
but you talkin shit you don't know, damn
you gonna have to study, and bring a better plan
i'm just statin an observation
verbal assaults crush you with penetration
they crumble each one of your stations
you acted too quickly, you weren't patient
my shit spreads quicker than a flu at a hospital
i'm unstoppable, you are undroppable
my flow is uncoppable
whack ending...but hey it's a keystyle
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 04:51 PM
dude this is soo fuckin horrible, im just laughing
hahah tell me about it meh.
this kids a bitch.
ya diggg?
MonoR
10-30-2007, 07:39 PM
im just laughing at all of you takin this bullshit seriously.
kinda a freaking funny
my minds money orientated
verses overly creative,
thank god he made this,
as the nightfalls i hear
the curtains call close em,
moonlight shining demons crying
mad confusion as i gasp the
heavenly air soon to be lurking dust
im out of ideas ill get back latttttttttter
MonoR
10-30-2007, 07:50 PM
Wow you can't ANYMORE whack with that?
well see.
I grew in the 740,makin that dough,dreamin of ridin some chromes.
That shit all turned around I'm rockin a rough life,sportin this knife.
I'll slice ya throat,make ya bleed all ova that brand new coat.
You call me a hoe,but still never told me how I bit necro?
Here we go,watch my style grow.
then watch your flow go right out the window.
Get respect by doin porn? Only porn I be doin is makin ya moms gag on my dick,its pretty fuckin sick to see the shit i do.
But you talk stuff about me and crew,what you gonna do?
Type me letta? full of gramma mistakes.
Were not here to cause beef.
Only here to take ya place,end ya fuckin race.
no need for a more bitches like you, I told you along time ago you were through,I mean listen to me kid,there aint no stoppin me,you see?
I'm far from a g but one hell of a mc,Be what you wanna be.
maybe one day you'll see you livin the life of a bitch.
You gonna grow up a snitch.
Now step up ya game before I throw ya in the flames.
My ryhmes be about threes times aslong as yours.
Your in for a spankin,leavin ya ass sore.
You can't step up to me,I open new doors to expose the core.
Hopin the next generation will explore my words.
Hopin I get heard,But in the mean time.
stick to bein a bitch,But I'm out.
Gotta go make ya mums puss smell like sour krout.
wow, this is the exact same thing you spited 2 rounds ago
ill step up on your right now
ill play your your fucken knocked head, and see what happens
id love to see your face explode and have a peice of your brain on my head
that would make me feel alive , a psycho laugh
your talking about gun, you dont even have one
if you do have 1 point it at me, ill just wait till you shoot
you dont even have the balls to point it at me
cause your a mama's boy, and all the reals in here know it
by the way niga
before talking about my ''gramma''
the right way to write it is
g r a m m a r
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 08:07 PM
lemme get back at your bitch ass when im done talkin to the girl.
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 08:31 PM
dear hoodrichsucka,
imma start this shit real clear , suck my dick
so youre from Detroit mister Im-so-good-on-this-internet-shit
ill end this real quick , so open your ears i hate to repeat
youre gambling with your life , and you cant cheat
i cheat death man , i even cheated my girl with your's
you wanna die soon so you come to me , of course
youre a real hood , rich , sucka back to the source
lemme decapitate you a bit
hood , nah i dont think so u live in the suburb and you like it
rich , maybe got a car but you aint got style thats about it?
sucka , thats the only thing that defines you so eat my shit
sucka from detroit , your the shame of the 3-1-3
even jews hate you i make a cause to eliminate you from the streets
wanna sign my petition ,its against you on this beat
youre nothing on this competition , its just kickin-assassination
bitch get on your knees and accept your master in this situation
cause i wont repeat it ever again , you'll never stop me doing my mission
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 08:35 PM
wow, this is the exact same thing you spited 2 rounds ago
ill step up on your right now
ill play your your fucken knocked head, and see what happens
id love to see your face explode and have a peice of your brain on my head
that would make me feel alive , a psycho laugh
your talking about gun, you dont even have one
if you do have 1 point it at me, ill just wait till you shoot
you dont even have the balls to point it at me
cause your a mama's boy, and all the reals in here know it
by the way niga
before talking about my ''gramma''
the right way to write it is
g r a m m a r
I just got done paintin trucks,but never did I forget that you wack as fuck.
tommorow nights the night were i sell my grass to make that healthy buck.
Don't you tell me I spit the same shit,
You can't even make a ryhme hit.
You don't understand "gramma" is slang.
Keep talkin this shit,It'll go out with a bang.
bitch don't call yourself a real,mofucka you don't understand that I'M the real deal!
Like I told ya'll earlier I'm the real deal,so come take a stroll with me and I'll put a nine between ya eyes to show ya who really rolls.
You tried to step up now pay toll,I'm out of control.
I recommend you just stop,You thinkin you cream of the crop.
But you'll neva get close to makin it to the top.
I'm dedicated to shit,but first I gotta get you educated.
You ain't shit like I already stated.
I'm jackin yo familys pay,you don't understand when i say I could spit to your ass for days.
I'll fuckin leave ya ass out in the open,in the suns rays,leave ya to decay,You need to understand I don't play.
Yet again and again,your whack ryhmes make my day.
Get back at me with something that actually ryhmes.
get at me.
MonoR
10-30-2007, 08:43 PM
your not real
and your not a deal.
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 08:44 PM
You cant ryhme and you act like a bitch!
what!? ya digggg?
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 08:47 PM
aight man you riot taking on my homie monor
so imma spit fire , take off your bitch ass crown
get back to earth , princess , my rhymes'll make you drown
you aint got shit on me , but i know a lot about you clown
youre shit in a bucket , and your spreading all over the place
i heard enough shit from you , i could have filled a toilet without leaving a trace
im clean as fuck , and your dirty like michael jackson with the nose on his face
you wanna die bitch , youve come to your funeral
ill take off your eye with a spoon and skullfuck you so crual
i mean look at your shit thats not freestyle , its not even actual
yo man , i feel bad for the trucks you just rape that was just brutal
oh and by the way stop biting your shit its getting old
what am i the first one to call it?
got a problem with me , ill fuckin blast yo face and probably laugh about it
MonoR
10-30-2007, 08:48 PM
Put stitches in your forehead
Look kid I want you more dead
necro-gory days
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 09:00 PM
Yeah,I got beef with monor.
He can't handle himself so he callin his boys,his crews full of toys.
this is pissin me off,make my fists tighten,By the way who am I bitin?
you backin up ya dude.
Yo boy monor can't ryhme for shit,Oh I'm sorry that came out rude.
You be strokin your chode readin this shit,Just give me time to reload.
I'll take you out. One shot,you all thinkin you hot,but you a toybot.
what you really got kid,without a doubt. I want you to spit ya heart out.
If you so hot, show me what you got!
I'm as real as i gets,you really need to look at ya boys spits.
ya boy needs his ass beat in the back of a alley,Then the toys be lookin down on him callin him bitch sally.
Cmon monor.
what you got?
Show me you as hard you say,go ahead mothafucka make my day.
I'll be out paintin trains while you sittin here for hours tryin to make it rain with your whack shit.
I'll make a bet,my life or yours,you read my rhymes and it'll make ya realize.
your steppin to the wrong cat, call ya krew, i'll take ya out with a bat.
fuckin break your face,ill demolish you mofucka. Make ya ass polish my shoes.
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 09:01 PM
Put stitches in your forehead
Look kid I want you more dead
necro-gory days
Is this what you claim that i bit?
I want you to find where I said anything near that.
Go ahead.
Search it up.
your both wack
no homo ;D
MonoR
10-30-2007, 09:04 PM
You cant ryhme and you act like a bitch!
what!? ya digggg?
shut up your busted
MonoR
10-30-2007, 09:06 PM
wow.
Write my name on ya big ass forehead,then leave ya for dead.
Worrrdd
OWNED
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 09:08 PM
comparable to a dragon prepare for annihilation
i spit fire rhymes hot like desire for a pornstar in action
i know you like my style come close to me get ready for decapitation
kung fu style i repeat it its the best when it comes to action
i got move that will confuse your brain , flips that'll give you excitation
im essential to your life , im the blood pumping in yo vain
cut yo head off im the best for this kinda mutilation
i gotta give it to you , you got good punchlines
its not enough to take me down tho , never out of lines
yo i never wanted to be a criminal , but i did commit crimes
i need to pay my rent man , so im going outta my mind
i spit my heart out on live , make the world do their best find
im sick of freestylin on this web site
come battle me on live , you heard me thats right
so many people dealing their beef on the net thats on my sight
i aint a fake one and you know it damn well
so i give you the mic back if you wanna fight.
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 09:13 PM
oh wow your so good kaze stfu and freestyle
i hate guys like you
i just wanna fuckin shoot me as soon as i heard the shit coming outta your mouth
ehhh watch your moth buddy
i have a shitload of freestyles on here
on my account entry
ima go take a shower get inspiration and get back to ya :)
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 09:16 PM
okay?
thesilentvandal
10-30-2007, 09:37 PM
hahahaha kaze sounds gay
Hidden Teknique
10-30-2007, 09:39 PM
wow seriously passleoinj and monor
you are perfect examples of a homo item
got a homo radar, so trust me when i say i sight em
they all just pussy ass bitches like entry, not even gonna fight em
you aren't even worth this keystyle,
but i'm bored in the meanwhile
so i'll spit off the dome with my lyrical style
i'm your worst enemy, a problem child
you should be banned from posting in this thread
you three are the reasons it's winding up dead
and don't talk shit, unless you know what you speak
i'm better than you at my worst, and you're at your peak
i'm hiding the true technique, it's too unique
for you to witness
a murder, by me when i spit this
don't talk shit unless you can back it up
it's everyone on bs against three, stack it up
bitch ass faggots get outta here, apparently nobody likes you, and all your lines and weak asss rhymes are whack, go ahead, see if anyone said your shit was dope
thesilentvandal
10-30-2007, 09:41 PM
Bitch? you talking about style when you act like cope2.
Bitching writers all day when you dont even know whats a crew.
You can maybe rime, but when it comes to graff your an ass.
i could own your shit with my eyes closed and arms crossed.
Maybe you can say your good, but you aint prooving shit?
when it comes to proving you suck you win your bet.
Passleoinj
10-30-2007, 09:42 PM
i didnt even have to spit against him he's already mad
you talking bout lyrical style well i aint seeing nothing
silent shut the fuck up im just fucking around
thesilentvandal
10-30-2007, 10:12 PM
silent shut the fuck up im just fucking around
wanna graff batlle? thats what i taught
C-SONE
10-30-2007, 10:14 PM
I'm a fully sick gangster with my gun in my jeans
Its a pretty tight fit cus my balls are so big
I'll shoot you and then steal your house
I'm like a ninja quiet as a mouse
I will sharpen up my gat and then pull your brains out
i roll on 46'es cus 20's arent enough
ive got more gold than all the banks in the world
and cus of this i get lots of hot shallow girls.
Word, Dopetastic flows
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 10:56 PM
OWNED
because I used head and dead to ryhme?
wow bitch.
to simple words.
your just hatin you can't rhyme for shit.
"Riot"
10-30-2007, 10:58 PM
comparable to a dragon prepare for annihilation
i spit fire rhymes hot like desire for a pornstar in action
i know you like my style come close to me get ready for decapitation
kung fu style i repeat it its the best when it comes to action
i got move that will confuse your brain , flips that'll give you excitation
im essential to your life , im the blood pumping in yo vain
cut yo head off im the best for this kinda mutilation
i gotta give it to you , you got good punchlines
its not enough to take me down tho , never out of lines
yo i never wanted to be a criminal , but i did commit crimes
i need to pay my rent man , so im going outta my mind
i spit my heart out on live , make the world do their best find
im sick of freestylin on this web site
come battle me on live , you heard me thats right
so many people dealing their beef on the net thats on my sight
i aint a fake one and you know it damn well
so i give you the mic back if you wanna fight.
I'ma let you know.
that had no flow whatsoever.
get back at me with something better and worth my time.
hahah your both bitches.
sketch3
10-31-2007, 11:59 AM
monor, you dont rhyme, at all
look at this guy he rhyms
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=03ybqP7G6Po
you dont, even a lil bit
CRN-one
10-31-2007, 01:00 PM
I love how monor didn't say shit back to me, but he got right up on everyone else.
some people just need to quit the game before they get in the game
Vagrant
10-31-2007, 02:30 PM
Xzibit & Tom Green
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ebi-_o_3dgs
Sumoe
10-31-2007, 06:11 PM
This thread is an overflow of flowless cats/
I pack gats and blow multiple holes in backs/
After that, I'll chain your body to the railroad tracks/
I don't speak threats, just facts/
You're just weak, queer, and lack/
Anything that makes all the dope emcees nice/
I'm twice as hype as any rapper that you like/
haha...
Whack, I know.
w.e.
No beef just bored.
HoodRichSucka
10-31-2007, 08:29 PM
sumoe i feel u, ur rhyms are steady.
but im ready to attack, shootin' like betty.
thats crocket for those of u who dont know.
blow head of cats man, watch me go.
watch me glow and flow, my rap game is genius.
not gza, but intelligent. wise like seniors.
please sir, dont try to fuck us.
were like wutang man bring the ruckus.
cant touch us, too fast for yall.
such madness, we'll blast the stall.
blood will fall, straight to the ground.
im sounds renound, heard all around.
Hidden Teknique
10-31-2007, 09:16 PM
Bitch? you talking about style when you act like cope2.
Bitching writers all day when you dont even know whats a crew.
You can maybe rime, but when it comes to graff your an ass.
i could own your shit with my eyes closed and arms crossed.
Maybe you can say your good, but you aint prooving shit?
when it comes to proving you suck you win your bet.
i didnt even have to spit against him he's already mad
you talking bout lyrical style well i aint seeing nothing
Daws, find some shit to back up your words big man...e-thugs are a joke talkin shit they have really no clue about
and pass, i'm guessing it must take lyrical style to recognize lyrical style, guess you just missin it...so go find some, then spit somethin that is worth a post in this thread
you wanna watch out for me , i'm atrocious
you keepin your head down, you don't approach this
a tongue, registered with a license to kill
my nefarious flows are so real they make you feel
me against you, it's bound to be bloodshed
i'll still be here, while you're found lyin dead
my flow mutilates all of your lines
monor here, doesn't even know how to rhyme
step your game up brah, come correct
we don't need whackness to infect the ones left
when it comes to graff i'm seasoned and canny
you such a bitch, all you do is draw and rock a handy
i am hip hops wundrkind, aka a prodigy
was given a deal, first time they spotted me
my flow is an enormity to the best of the best
better than that superman hoe song, wit an S on the chest
my lines are maniacal, they are thoughtful and subjective
intelligent and smart just like an ace detective
most of your shit is unbearable,
while mine is only cherishable
at night i wreak havoc in the streets
while your shit is caustic everytime you speak
talkin about you got me runnin outta stamina
a lyrical murder like this, gotta get it on camera
all your lines are washed up and snuffed out
i'm makin it big, from puttin out albums to bein in clout
Vagrant
10-31-2007, 09:26 PM
freestyle rap attack, everyone step back
here comes vagrant to take a crack
its hard to say who on heres got skill
when its so easy to google rhymes that are ill
fulfill the destiny of the illest emcee yall just test me
I ain't no hack but I ain't go no english degree
these rhymes be tight, like your sisters pussy
yeah I went there, I'm an insult banshee
now i'm gunna go, yall had enough of my flow
I'm not a rap pro, I gotta get ready for work
gotta go slave for my dough, like a muthafuckin hoe
Skete'
10-31-2007, 11:39 PM
Teknique that wasnt bad bra. some things where a lil off like at the end though.
CRN-one
11-01-2007, 08:15 AM
This place is a motherfuckin lyrical democracy
The coalition of the illest making up the policy
HoodRich holdin it down, from A to Z
Sketch3 stayin correct, straight out the dictionary
Sumoe blazin the hate, though new to the game
Vagrant coming in strong, though his rhymes are tame
CRN-One up on top, chairman of the board
can't fuck with these *****s, that shits for sure
We drop rhymes like hot caps
Smack faces with chrome gats
Ya'll *****s can talk trash
but we'll just fuckin fire back
Pull it out of the waistband, grip hold and fire
cock it, lock it, bust out a cap, then fucking retire
Keep yo chains, homey, keep it shiny and new
Cause when I come through your hood I'ma take it from you
And I wouldn't want my brand new chain covered in grime
All you haters know I keep it fresh until the end of time
New hoodie, black on black, don't deny it you like it
Doc Martins on my feet, takes a careful style so don't try it
The coalition is runnin this bitch
Don't even try to start shit
And if your name wasn't mentioned
watch yo ass, cause you're about to get hit
Not my best, I know, but it's early, I partied way too late last night, and I'm still kinda faded haha... opiates are amazing things, lemme tell you.
sketch3
11-01-2007, 12:48 PM
my flow can cause seizers,
my shits cold, below zero degrees,
one word could freeze ya,
got a million, millitants,
packin 9 millimeaters,
that wanna kill an eat ya,
rockin hoodies an wife beatas,
so take a seat brah,
befor i introduce u to my senorita,
trust me you dont wanna meet her,
cuss she'll knoc your teeth out,
HoodRichSucka
11-01-2007, 02:55 PM
rap attack? u lack the facts.
infact im back and stackin bread.
undead and meant to spread. word of mouth.
watch out for this heard of birds and droughts.
beggin for water, louder, stronger. u need me.
but cant see me,plea for me, please son.
get on ur knees son, beg for mercy.
im sturdy, lately been busy but purdy.
attractive but acid flash back is lactive.
its hective, neglcted child, lonsome soul.
a hole in the bowl, the soup emptys.
a remedy, cemetary, death is alive.
i strive for best, rely on friends and the rest.
every breathe is mine, drop the nine. no need to die.
dont lie, be urself, like meth, release yo delf.
Vagrant
11-01-2007, 03:20 PM
props to CRN-one.
I was just playing around but fuck man you're insane
MonoR
11-01-2007, 04:53 PM
my name's m double o, n in the middle of the double o to the R
yeah thats right my names monor
bitch ill take your honor
look at you in a mirror/your an horror
you have a shit face what you want me to do!
your a big bull of real shit, thats what your real for
you just cant test/ or test/ and youll be fucken toothless
you cant step over me/ try it out/ and its game over homie
im tired of your wack ass flow
ill drop it in my blunt and smoke it like white widow
all you can do is steppin/ but you cant handle the flow im trowing at you
you cant barialy exist
im your oxygen/ when i push you down, you just cry to the religistic
all i see in your hoe wack ass flow is a bitch whit no self respect
kid i got more respect for hoes that dont flow at all
your a low real shit/ that have really no flow
you think biting some necro rhymes makes you look good???
fuck you bitch comprendo?
ill cut you head for a black penny/ and thats how i roll in montreal city
your a fiends of my flows/
just watching me spit makes you suck your own dick
bicthes whit no flows/ cant step or wreckaleck
sketch3
11-01-2007, 05:09 PM
no one wants to be at the leval ur on,
cuss monor is an anagram of moron,
and when we battled i sure won,
you dont smoke, an got pure lungs,
***** ur lyrics could bore nuns,
an they think havin a broken jaws fun,
an bitch, you should of checked,
its not spelt wreckaleck,
befor you dissrespect,
i spit ''real hip hop'' like digity das efx,
why you still on some faggot flex,
bet you got dragon breath,
you aint packin techs, or crackin necks,
sgLoki
11-01-2007, 05:32 PM
I GUESS I WOULD START IT OFF
WHO U KNOW WHO IT BE THE CAT FAME WHO DID 1 MONTH BEHIND BARS
THE COPS COUGHT ME SLEEPING HANDING CRACK TO A CRACK HEAD
THE FED RUN UP ON ME AND POIN A GUN TO MY HEAD SAYING FREEZ U UNDER ARREST THEY GRAB THE K.9 AND LETI HIM CHECK MY CAR FIND MY TREE I HAD TAPE TO MY BALLZ..............
Shit....i've seen your throwies...
Stick to painting you're better at it....does that shit even rhyme more than twice?
sketch3
11-01-2007, 05:36 PM
way to reply the first post from 124 pages back
MonoR
11-01-2007, 05:57 PM
why would you beef whit some1 you dont even know?
i forgot, your on internet.
HoodRichSucka
11-01-2007, 06:29 PM
^dont mind him. he cants speak english well let alone rap..
MonoR
11-01-2007, 06:40 PM
and you, you just suck!
sketch3
11-01-2007, 06:52 PM
why would you beef whit some1 you dont even know?
i forgot, your on internet.
why get all but hurt in the freestyle thread?
ohh i forgot you cant come up with a coherent replie
MonoR
11-01-2007, 07:05 PM
why get all but hurt in the freestyle thread?
ohh i forgot you cant come up with a coherent replie
your freestyle sucked, so why do i have to reply to something that sucked???
sketch3
11-01-2007, 07:16 PM
ok,
i only do this for shits an gigles,
i dont take myself seriously at all,
BUT how the fuck can you say i suck when 98% o the time you dont rhyme or make sense?
seriousl. i mean i dont think im very good but i know i can atleast begin to pathom some kind of rhyming pattern or flow,
while you on the other hand sound like a downs syndrome rape victem making a statement in court, please just stop posting in here cuss the only person who thinks your not autistic is blatently as backwerds as you
MonoR
11-01-2007, 07:24 PM
sorry to tell you, but you wasted your time.
im young in this game
but old enuf to spit that your lame
sketch3
11-01-2007, 07:34 PM
like i said, downs syndrome
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4075/downs3shotvy2.jpg
pessleonij is the one pusshing you
MonoR
11-01-2007, 07:45 PM
type porn on google
youll be on evry picture
sketch3
11-01-2007, 07:49 PM
why do i have to reply to something that sucked???
amen
i would continue to bickker with you but your dissses even suck when you dont have to rhyme,
(search porn in google? wtf-lame)
anyway im not gunna beef with you unless its rhymn(on my part anyway)
MonoR
11-01-2007, 07:52 PM
wtf your lame
"Riot"
11-01-2007, 08:17 PM
my name's m double o, n in the middle of the double o to the R
yeah thats right my names monor
bitch ill take your honor
look at you in a mirror/your an horror
you have a shit face what you want me to do!
your a big bull of real shit, thats what your real for
you just cant test/ or test/ and youll be fucken toothless
you cant step over me/ try it out/ and its game over homie
im tired of your wack ass flow
ill drop it in my blunt and smoke it like white widow
all you can do is steppin/ but you cant handle the flow im trowing at you
you cant barialy exist
im your oxygen/ when i push you down, you just cry to the religistic
all i see in your hoe wack ass flow is a bitch whit no self respect
kid i got more respect for hoes that dont flow at all
your a low real shit/ that have really no flow
you think biting some necro rhymes makes you look good???
fuck you bitch comprendo?
ill cut you head for a black penny/ and thats how i roll in montreal city
your a fiends of my flows/
just watching me spit makes you suck your own dick
bicthes whit no flows/ cant step or wreckaleck
You can call us all hoes,but you far from pro.
you can go ahead and say i bet necro/
just cause i used head and dead in the sentence/
What city you representin?/ montreal city?/
I rep kansas city and you wouldn't last a minute/
You can't rap worth shit but you can go ahead and spit it/
You might as well just go ahead and admit it/
Can't step to sketch3 and me,might as well just agree/
My ryhmes are mad ill,my rhymes are just pure genious/
You best just read over this shit,over and over again/
Or better get steppin,cause every day i be reppin/
Go ahead and make some more threats/
But when you actually see your "flow",your heart will be full of regrets/
Go ahead and say you'll cut me for that penny/
I'll fucking mob your whole family and my name will stay anonymous/
trust me kid,thats not a threat,thats a fuckin promise/
Say you gonna pop me,but your gonna fuckin miss/
Do you realize yet? You cant touch this/
looks like you got saved by the bell/
class dismissed/
Hidden Teknique
11-01-2007, 09:00 PM
yo guys leave monor alone
he's probably only 9, give the bitch a bone
with weak ass rhymes, and fuckin lame disses
cats like you in my town, you'll end up in ditches
you and pass, two homo ass kiddy bitches
probably ****in muthafuckin snitches
most people on here like my man sketch
so much more steeze than you, you cant even fetch
you couldn't even chomp somones lines,
they'd somehow turn into whack rhymes
c'mon man, your flow is horribly stagnant
i have more then electrical flow from a magnet
monor with honor, hahah what a faggot
i wasn't gonna play into internet beef
but you so bad, my nephew would knock out your teeth
about you i can barely even speak
you really aren't worth the posts
you more of pass's homo friend at most
sumoe, revoke this kids ability to come on this thread
c'mon bro, thats why you a mod head
block him out from these domains
for tryin to rhyme all of our names
comin up with whack remarks
you could give this kid a ghostwriter
and clinton sparks
and he would still sound lame
give up rappin monor, this just ain't your game
HoodRichSucka
11-01-2007, 09:03 PM
wtf your lame
lets give him a round of applause for the creative comeback.....
Hidden Teknique
11-01-2007, 09:04 PM
*clap*clap*clap*cheering in the background
rekon
11-01-2007, 09:05 PM
ay bay bay ay bay bay white folk gangstaz in tha club
rekon
11-01-2007, 09:05 PM
p.s why does everyone have so much swearing in there rap?
rekon
11-01-2007, 09:07 PM
s****** ****** but you know the k k k is bigger =.= NO OFFENCE TO ANY ONE
MonoR
11-01-2007, 09:11 PM
you bite some necro and now you bite some mc hammer, what the fuck man!
get your own style then come back at me
hoes whit no flows
Passleoinj
11-01-2007, 09:12 PM
monor and me are fucking awesome
know why?
cause we just ahve to spit a couple of bars to make yall go crazy like bitches on lsd:)
Hidden Teknique
11-01-2007, 09:18 PM
what are you 12? We only get geek'd up over your shit is because y'all just take up space in the keystyle forum. Once you get some style, flow, and better comebacks....then get at me, or maybe we can even have a "rap" battle, and hold a voter poll on it to see who is better on this shit.
"Riot"
11-01-2007, 09:19 PM
you bite some necro and now you bite some mc hammer, what the fuck man!
get your own style then come back at me
hoes whit no flows
dude shut the fuck up!
i didnt bite no one. just got similar ryhmes that you think is biting but whatever kid.
MonoR
11-01-2007, 09:29 PM
hidden i dont remember talking to you at all?
so why do you talk?
and riot you biter
go bite a pussy
"Riot"
11-01-2007, 09:38 PM
you mad cause you can't ryhme worth shit.
go bite a pussy?
I'd be glad to.
I don't bite.
HoodRichSucka
11-01-2007, 09:59 PM
hahahaha check out this bizaree.
rappa style used by me, count to three.
then we'll see who will seem to be
the best in the bizness, im the meanest.
like big the rap genius, the leanest.
to see us, u need to be us and feed us.
but we feed you, lyrics of food and lust.
dont trust anyone who u think will bust.
i must conclude for the night is young.
puncture ur lung with ease and breeze.
ur structure will decrease and u will desease.
haha just a rap to get away from this lameeeee beef.
La Coka Nostra
11-01-2007, 10:02 PM
im not much of a freestyler.
but i can write.
and record.
listen to my tracks if you're bored.
http://www.myspace.com/infamous603
add me if you got a myspace, and you like it.
HoodRichSucka
11-01-2007, 10:06 PM
this aint a freestyle, its a keystyle that breathes vile, meanwhile my mean style is so versatile and wild. this is just a trial of my lyrical files, ur mild with lack of style. i got piles of rhymes that go for miles. ull reconcile and smile, my rhymes like the nile, long and hostile.
hahahhaha i dunno
huskinator
11-01-2007, 10:13 PM
my names charles, and gay head saved my marriage
i love to fuck babies, straight out the carriage
i spend my evenings in lesbian chats,
who are you ******s with dem new era hatz?
i took over this thread with my ill rhyme-ah
takes notes, my mothers aunt jemima!
ooooh shit
"Riot"
11-01-2007, 10:19 PM
My life be easy but at the same time my life be hard/
I think if you lived a day of my life youd leave scarred/
I got no family,only finiancial issues, but i steer clear from the tissues/
Although I try,I can never afford anything i want to buy/
I can't succseed and that just makes my moms cry/
My daddy aint around no more,thats how my family tore/
Sometimes I just want to ask, hey dad,where did you go/
How have you been?,did you forget that i was a kid?/
But don't worry I forgive you,I'll try to help my moms make it though these issues/
I'll do my best to find the cure,while makin sure my ryhmes stay pure/
Don't worry dad I'll always miss you,don't worry until the day I die I won't let no one diss you/
My best friends are gone,commited suicide/
but don't worry I'll alwasy ride,findin a way through/
Although I don't have much of a crew,I'll always be with you/
Not physically,but mentally,sleep all day and paint all night until them skies turn gray/
thats the only way I can't get my feeling back/
I have to rack everything i need,But I do good deeds/
Sorry dad,but I really have to go,I try my best just to let you know/
I just do what I do, but what you really need to know is that/
I'll always love you.
Hidden Teknique
11-01-2007, 10:28 PM
there's a true freestyle..holdin it down solid
Original top billa,
your blood spilla,
maniacal killa,
aids? i'm illa,
your shit, i'm a steala
one of the most epic ones
stealin santa claus funds
without holdin guns
indigenous to this niche
got the game on lock
this thread is my bitch
burn a buck 30, not in a whip
big money, but i still dont tip
sass my hoe, i don't take no lip
you such a pussy, all ya do is sip
i'm quick when it comes to these keystyles
quicker off the dome, when it comes to the freestyles
my shit is catastrophic like a wild child
your shit so tame, it's less than mild
my shit can't be illegally downloaded
i'll spit rhymes and lines bolded
thats right i did it
now c'mon let someone else spit it
whack shit let is sit on the backburner
your raps are strict, but mine are sterner
c'mon brah, i'm the teacher you the learner
bouncingsoul
11-01-2007, 11:55 PM
I’ll walk with a clear head, weightless and stateless
And nameless and chainless and painless, it just takes this
A fake drop to make a lake top a mountaintop that astounds the ground and stops
To drop heeding hurly whirls and early birds that stay awake with botox
With blank canvas candidates passing mandates, the rancid animate
The wicked, with wars waged wrought on and sick to contaminate
Sour stomachs, crab apples and bad battles saddle the paddles
On a one-way tour across the nation, to race rowdy rickety rabbles
Presidential prostitutes provide proceeds, surround the line of fire
They can never get me down, I’ll keep going higher and higher
And up through the liars, the repeating decimal drivers
The exponentially potentially dangerous that are always wired
On a straight call from home, to god, to roam the dire
Straits of Gibraltars with worried, flurried altars
Providing the paint to chain him in a cross of colors
To toss the dullest, dyslexic head tricks that the dead spit
To set lists and checklists of heliocentric metric systems
And bend the wisdom to spend the prisms on pretty colors
And gritty groaners spinning city sonar polars to indulgers
of in-store price cuts, the dice disrupts poker tables, leaves them instable
And unable to tell fabled fables and spin impaled faders to craters
on equators to equate blurs with motion sickness
and ocean quickness fits with fitness, sticks imprisoned this
to fission and incisions of dirty doctor visions, lined with fake college admissions
and insolence envisions exhibitions to push pink ribbons
down women's throats, with fights for rights and lights
the right brain channels, with ingrained manners, barbaric fights
with esoteric battle etiquette that I'll follow with a blind eye
but I'll spy time goes by and rhymes dry, settled to prime drive
"Riot"
11-02-2007, 12:11 AM
doppppeeeeee^^^^^^^^
CRN-one
11-02-2007, 12:47 AM
props to CRN-one.
I was just playing around but fuck man you're insane
Thank you.
Monor thinks he spits hot fire but he rambles on
I'm gonna start calling this fucker Dylon
Cause he rip and he rhyme, he rhyme and he rip
then he goes off on some down syndrome tip
then this motherfucker starts to act like we're trippin
and all he can back it with is his rhymes about cow tippin
and some weak shit that claims that someone bit off necro
I go by what I can read and from what I read you're weak, bro
do us all a favor and get down on with this, son:
go back to school, open a book, learn something young one
break down your structure, get some grammar, buy a thesaurus
make them lines rhyme, buy yourself time, cause man you fuckin bore us.
I'm too faded to do this shit right now. I'll get at it in the morning when I sleep off tonights debauchery.
sketch3
11-02-2007, 01:43 PM
monor just cus ur slow,
dont mean i wont force no,
explosive tiped arrow-heads,into ur torso,
my shits cryptic like morse code,
out do this prick with a sore flow,
bitch ill break your jaw bone,
ekimboi1
11-02-2007, 01:48 PM
heres a lil gay one i put together awhile ago:
when i rap its the truth so you take me seriously,
imma murder you, not homocide, it will be lyrically,
lyrically im inclined
to spit these raps like a 9 spits hollows, so i leave you hollow on the inside!
MonoR
11-02-2007, 03:57 PM
monor just cus ur slow,
dont mean i wont force no,
explosive tiped arrow-heads,into ur torso,
my shits cryptic like morse code,
out do this prick with a sore flow,
bitch ill break your jaw bone,
you gotta be kiddin me.
your on crack on somthin
this shit is more bad than badness
styless you are
get a dick, cause man, you sounds like a female
on the mic your a ducky, whit a pussy flow
when i spit you just get low
my flows is criminalistic your is femalistic
fuck you stopp talking cause it stinks
"Riot"
11-02-2007, 04:14 PM
spit against me bitchh.
La Coka Nostra
11-02-2007, 05:42 PM
you gotta be kiddin me.
your on crack on somthin
this shit is more bad than badness
styless you are
get a dick, cause man, you sounds like a female
on the mic your a ducky, whit a pussy flow
when i spit you just get low
my flows is criminalistic your is femalistic
fuck you stopp talking cause it stinks
don't quit your day job.
MonoR
11-02-2007, 05:52 PM
oh so your like the others
no skills but a big mouth?
haha
Passleoinj
11-02-2007, 06:07 PM
wanna fight *****s nobody got yo backs
you wanna front but you aint crossin hem tracks
so flip back retreat mothafucka you aint ready for that
nobody told ya you were something in this game now jump back
sketch 3 i gotta tell you something get off my nutsack
who said we the gay icons when u kiss with your boys between 2 freestyle
i mean fuck , whats that thing in your ass
you tried to get a style , thinking your any good but you aint got shit on the
CLASSSSSSSSY KIDS
dck got your click on lock we motherfuckas spit realness and stab you , hold up
got a message from oprah winfrey
she says its nice from you to be gay
now suck my dick cause you made my day
La Coka Nostra
11-02-2007, 06:14 PM
oh so your like the others
no skills but a big mouth?
haha
You ain't one to be talking bout "no skills"
Your fat ass can just drag on my coat tails
Spit 5 bars and you get winded like boat sails
Plus your rhymes are watered down like microwaved oatmeal
It's deal or no deal homie make your choice
You wanna battle motherfucker, then just raise your voice
But let me warn you, it might be a bad decision
If you come at me with your wack shit that has no rhythm
Try and spit that on beat, it's a given that I'm winnin
So back down and "save your ass", like sitting down in prison...
LOL.
no skills?
http://www.myspace.com/infamous603 (http://www.myspace.com/infamous603)
Sumoe
11-02-2007, 06:22 PM
They call my fist a blunt, take a hit, and you get lifted/
Not high, but your body off the ground, with broke ribs, kid/
I'm gifted, you're and actor, your shit is scripted/
You broke this thread, I fixed it, you spit slow I spit quickness/
You're scared shitless when I rip it, you dissed me and I flipped it/
You're worthless like a gasless whip, come at me again, with your rehearsed and practiced shit/
You won't win, that's not a guess, but a guarentee/
When I'm done with you, your bitch gonna be callin' me/
MonoR
11-02-2007, 06:29 PM
the cocked castrated
you got skills no doubt, i never talked to you but your dissin me, did i missed something?
if yes correct me.
Passleoinj
11-02-2007, 06:31 PM
you aint got shit on me , stupid rappers trynna empty clips on me
i reserve surprise for ya, just like a box of mini wheats
caught you red hand , stepping on my territory
at my show *****s ready to kill for a seat
at yours *****s get up and simply leave , im sorry?
slow and quickness , thats opposites get back to your fortune cookies
do you even write man ? all i see from you is sketches and stupidities
im sick of you man , i dont even give a fuck about who you are
im the warlord , experienced with the sword never scared of war
wanna try me bitch bring it on aint a chinese guy whos gonna gimme a scar
Vagrant
11-02-2007, 06:53 PM
you gotta be kiddin me.
your on crack on somthin
this shit is more bad than badness
styless you are
get a dick, cause man, you sounds like a female
on the mic your a ducky, whit a pussy flow
when i spit you just get low
my flows is criminalistic your is femalistic
fuck you stopp talking cause it stinks
Your shits wack you cant attack you're just a jew that thinks hes black.
Best just step back, jack, because in rhymes you seriously lack.
You can't spit worth shit, just fucking quit, try clicking spell check before you hit submit.
You're lame and better admit, because lame ass flow is what you transmit.
You've got no rhyme, your shits all out of time, while everyone else is prime, shit our spits are sublime!
Best turn and walk away, you're just a toy that wants to play, but we won't let you live today, because we're wolves and you're prey.
Bitch, LISTEN to what I say,
because we'll blow you away,
like Timothy McVeigh,
WE DON'T FUCKIN SPIT, WE SPRAY
(Seriously, just quit, because the shit you're been typing is HORRIBLE. No Rhyme, no rhythm, it doesn't even make sense. You have spelling errors, grammar errors, and then when someone calls you out on it in an actual rhyme you say they suck and have no flow? You suck so bad I don't know whether to laugh or cry.)
sketch3
11-02-2007, 07:03 PM
'' this shit is more bad than badness''
shit is soo dumb,
makes me wanna slap a bitch till the left side of his face go's numb,
when i had my fun, i smack the other one
draw for the sword like a master shogun,
when i mureder backwerds kids its called ''RED RUM''
i got lyrics heavier than big pun,
you start to fold under pressuer, fool got crushed lungs,
and all this bullshit about u packing gats is done,
you not even rockin water guns,
i ought to take funds, from these fake bums,
end up with broke thumbs,
when you enter my provoked slums,
most guys in my endz cant take a joke,
cuss either they be dealing with or snorting coke,
bitches wish they never spoke,
when they get choked, by some bloke,
for askin if he had a spare smoke,
La Coka Nostra
11-02-2007, 07:07 PM
when i mureder backwerds kids its called ''RED RUM''
that was ALMOST an ill punchline.
work it out some more
"Riot"
11-02-2007, 08:19 PM
oh so your like the others
no skills but a big mouth?
haha
Spit back to me kiiiddd.
bouncingsoul
11-02-2007, 08:36 PM
I’m exhausted of thought, came in fraught with impossible props
Left caught with nothing, clutching onto those memories I fought for
and brought scores to pour my bored, terminal end of my sore
Heart, the store-bought brain is torn apart and no one knows bored
Sought upon, modern arms that caught the farms in war-state alarms
And replaced tractors with tanks, the seeds grew to mines and charmed
Young little ladies and mistresses, you never know the time
Eternal 12 o’clock hands choking the throats of 20 year old Forty-niners
with crimson crayoned plays on dazed songs and main money mongrels
portable values slyly slid in sloppy lined pockets, the models
look perfect in contrast, but I’m not one to draw fast, wicked, instigated
commercial conclusions to hurt the bruises and call out, berated
paraded and hated, traded faded days for made ways, to skate raided rays
take two comes out, hates you and blames you for his past mistakes
the cast is placed and healing never set on, but I’ll irritate the remakes
the free quakes that rumble softly under bustling cities
hustling gritty pitied young gentlemen and rich gated communities
full of dollar-studded punks and plastic drastic faces that beckon for glory days
but the story remains the same and the young whore plays
drunk delicate nights to line ground floor reflections to come
she’s happy, for the moment, but causes tension to some
and mentions she’s strung up with the world and down with herself
objective beauty hates self-hatred, but she knows she can’t make it to hell
why even try for heaven, fuck it, just say none of it exists
just say “the fun of life is missed misted by your misery myths”
and yeah, at least she’s thinking in the now, but how does it make sense
to drink sixpence and mis-spend suspense of time to a wasted thirst, the fence
between mind, body and… nah, time breaks shoddy souls
and rocks the mold to hold your folded parched parchment with bold
typefaces and dried fates that drive regulates to integrate even paces
to get me where I want to go, rest where I need to show mercy, the traces
of “hit the brakes” mistakes of plagues on vague speeches
you know? The kind that never rest heedless…
T_R_O_N
11-02-2007, 09:09 PM
A lot of people talking about really dumb dumb shit, i really wonder how many have really touched a clip, more so a gun really. my words have people saying he's an ass hole like that comedian denis lerry. But im not on some sing sing shit because i like to rhyme rhyme shit and spit spit shit. dont really know why im saying shit twice, i guess i feel lyrically my shit is nice. maybe saying shit twice will get some bums to get it right and maybe one day like career day you can grow up to be like me...nice. that's all for rants now i think i just found a breezy ready to go down.
whahappen?
11-02-2007, 09:12 PM
I’m exhausted of thought, came in fraught with impossible props
Left caught with nothing, clutching onto those memories I fought for
and brought scores to pour my bored, terminal end of my sore
Heart, the store-bought brain is torn apart and no one knows bored
Sought upon, modern arms that caught the farms in war-state alarms
And replaced tractors with tanks, the seeds grew to mines and charmed
Young little ladies and mistresses, you never know the time
Eternal 12 o’clock hands choking the throats of 20 year old Forty-niners
with crimson crayoned plays on dazed songs and main money mongrels
portable values slyly slid in sloppy lined pockets, the models
look perfect in contrast, but I’m not one to draw fast, wicked, instigated
commercial conclusions to hurt the bruises and call out, berated
paraded and hated, traded faded days for made ways, to skate raided rays
take two comes out, hates you and blames you for his past mistakes
the cast is placed and healing never set on, but I’ll irritate the remakes
the free quakes that rumble softly under bustling cities
hustling gritty pitied young gentlemen and rich gated communities
full of dollar-studded punks and plastic drastic faces that beckon for glory days
but the story remains the same and the young whore plays
drunk delicate nights to line ground floor reflections to come
she’s happy, for the moment, but causes tension to some
and mentions she’s strung up with the world and down with herself
objective beauty hates self-hatred, but she knows she can’t make it to hell
why even try for heaven, fuck it, just say none of it exists
just say “the fun of life is missed misted by your misery myths”
and yeah, at least she’s thinking in the now, but how does it make sense
to drink sixpence and mis-spend suspense of time to a wasted thirst, the fence
between mind, body and… nah, time breaks shoddy souls
and rocks the mold to hold your folded parched parchment with bold
typefaces and dried fates that drive regulates to integrate even paces
to get me where I want to go, rest where I need to show mercy, the traces
of “hit the brakes” mistakes of plagues on vague speeches
you know? The kind that never rest heedless…
only dude who should be posting in here
HoodRichSucka
11-02-2007, 10:14 PM
(Seriously, just quit, because the shit you're been typing is HORRIBLE. No Rhyme, no rhythm, it doesn't even make sense. You have spelling errors, grammar errors, and then when someone calls you out on it in an actual rhyme you say they suck and have no flow? You suck so bad I don't know whether to laugh or cry.)
this man right here just got killed good.
but still he will atempt to spill blood.
he wont rhyme, lacks the mindframe to spit game.
behind his attitute is a pussy whose bitchass is lame.
i may not be pac, biggie or shyne,
but better then this cat monor, his ass is mine.
in time he will die, slowly go blind.
ill remind him again, to sign over his behind.
my style is hostile, and quite versatile.
ur shits vile and reaks, ur fuckin juvenile.
talkin shit cursin motherfucks out.
grap ur purse mutherfuck, take a dif. route.
ur goin no where in life, just infecting ours.
subjecting disecting and inspecting coward!
MonoR
11-02-2007, 11:34 PM
wow, theres so many united snakes around
my english gramma suck guess why?
IM NOT ENGLISH WOW!
lets spit some french shit and youll be a mess in 1 round
bouncingsoul
11-02-2007, 11:40 PM
it’s a curious mix of Tylenol dreams and Nyquil nightmares that keep me awake
but I don’t take any medicine but the water of life, nonchalant, active state
a captive breaks free, tactics take three blind mice to see what they’re doing
and flee what they’re improving, to halt the drive that keeps it moving
never escape, never dissipates the trade, with careful contradictions
he words his speak fragilely with cryptic, meticulous diction
when fiction is real, and we’ll believe anything but the truth
I’ll start it off with a lie, to get your attention, then improve it
and move it, keep it going, rolling while holding your distant stares
the glares, accusing and choosing, and moving with invisible pairs
of pupils and irises privately impairing me with light rays
fixed daze, a gaze that prays without speech, silent for 30 days
of a month, but what do you do when names don’t matter
and humankind scatters to fix the calendar ink splatter
the pitter patter of black fix on the floor, the clack of liquid poured
on silver dollar cement, but they spent it all on more
money, the greedy needy, the seedy tedious souls
that play out-of-character roles in out-of-reality holes
in out-of-existence folds of a space that never gets any bigger
yeah, it’s constantly expanding, sure, but we’ll never pull the trigger
and never hold the sicker integers of international epiphanies
that never get any attention because the shy voices cry symphonies
of silence, that never goes unheard, it’s the beauty to the beholder
the fruits of their labor, the petals’ statements couldn’t be bolder
but petals only exist with the stem, and stem thanks the root
so let’s study the core and leave extraneous ranges to boot
Passleoinj
11-02-2007, 11:47 PM
aight mister
youve never been chill
maybe cause your parents didnt love ya when u was young
im a fuckin butcher , choppin yo ass in pieces
livin herpes , amazes me how bad you could be against 2 beasts
see lil dude , u aint got shit against me my words teases,
im a loose leaf killer , keyboard raper weak mc's regulater
i got dick for a lot of bitches , even one for ya baby mother
youre like a mic , everybody spit on ya when u were younger
im a fighter never surrendered , no matter what can it be
i got more skills than ALI , more money than monopoly
on the ring you cant stand a round with the master
one word to your jaw hit harder than a left hook from frazier
im the meanest , you cant get nothing out of a player
even kanye said it , can only make me stronger
why do you have to be so gay and act like a fuckin ******.
oh so you wanna be a gangsta
u aint even got towells to wipe the shit on yo face
La Coka Nostra
11-03-2007, 12:16 AM
it’s a curious mix of Tylenol dreams and Nyquil nightmares that keep me awake
but I don’t take any medicine but the water of life, nonchalant, active state
a captive breaks free, tactics take three blind mice to see what they’re doing
and flee what they’re improving, to halt the drive that keeps it moving
never escape, never dissipates the trade, with careful contradictions
he words his speak fragilely with cryptic, meticulous diction
when fiction is real, and we’ll believe anything but the truth
I’ll start it off with a lie, to get your attention, then improve it
and move it, keep it going, rolling while holding your distant stares
the glares, accusing and choosing, and moving with invisible pairs
of pupils and irises privately impairing me with light rays
fixed daze, a gaze that prays without speech, silent for 30 days
of a month, but what do you do when names don’t matter
and humankind scatters to fix the calendar ink splatter
the pitter patter of black fix on the floor, the clack of liquid poured
on silver dollar cement, but they spent it all on more
money, the greedy needy, the seedy tedious souls
that play out-of-character roles in out-of-reality holes
in out-of-existence folds of a space that never gets any bigger
yeah, it’s constantly expanding, sure, but we’ll never pull the trigger
and never hold the sicker integers of international epiphanies
that never get any attention because the shy voices cry symphonies
of silence, that never goes unheard, it’s the beauty to the beholder
the fruits of their labor, the petals’ statements couldn’t be bolder
but petals only exist with the stem, and stem thanks the root
so let’s study the core and leave extraneous ranges to boot
sounds like some abstract aesop rock kinda shit.
i have respect for people who know the english language.
do you record? or just write.
My rhymes come together in heaps to murder beats
It's verbal surgery, I'm killin em, it goes together perfectly
You hearda me... The one MC you should not sleep on
I'm powerful like the mythical creature Catholics base beliefs on
If I made it appoint to diss a cat in each song
I'd spend half my time waiting for them to respond
...bored
Hidden Teknique
11-03-2007, 01:22 AM
sumoe, whack posts you should confiscate
work all day and night at a ridiculous rate
lyrical homicide of monor and pass is fate
intellectual lines and bouncin i nominate
one of the better ones who dominate
maliciously keys i attempt to demonstrate
go ahead bitches and hate
talk all your shit, go ahead conversate
in this thread whack boys accumulate
subtract five kids with skill i'll calculate
graffiti..my life i dedicate
whack lyricists we should eliminate
99% of this thread i estimate
trying to educate, i'll participate
my flow and whitty lines the perfect mate
now your name you state
"Riot"
11-03-2007, 10:41 AM
aight mister
youve never been chill
maybe cause your parents didnt love ya when u was young
im a fuckin butcher , choppin yo ass in pieces
livin herpes , amazes me how bad you could be against 2 beasts
see lil dude , u aint got shit against me my words teases,
im a loose leaf killer , keyboard raper weak mc's regulater
i got dick for a lot of bitches , even one for ya baby mother
youre like a mic , everybody spit on ya when u were younger
im a fighter never surrendered , no matter what can it be
i got more skills than ALI , more money than monopoly
on the ring you cant stand a round with the master
one word to your jaw hit harder than a left hook from frazier
im the meanest , you cant get nothing out of a player
even kanye said it , can only make me stronger
why do you have to be so gay and act like a fuckin ******.
oh so you wanna be a gangsta
u aint even got towells to wipe the shit on yo face
You got jokes,I'll give you that.
You can't ryhme though but I'll give it a crack.
Hey now don't front, no need to get racist/
Keep that up your going to some inapproriate places,meet some new faces/
You say your undefeated listen here kid/
Your about to get a spankin for tellin such a fib,its 10 in the fuckin mornin/
I'm leave you out mourning to your own defeat/
its soon to be 1-0 then soon to be 2-0,watch that score grow/
I have anonymous flow,but you callin me a wannabe gansta?/
I don't want to waste my time killin for a color/
I'd rather be out helpin a brother,not poppin one/
And monor still claims I bit necro,and mc hamma?
That didnt happen,but I got mad stamina/
I could do this for days without replays/
You and monor should just get steppin cause I'm here to stay/
But if you keep comin in, thinkin you hard then you gonna pay/
MonoR
11-03-2007, 11:47 AM
riot stfu your so dumb
"Riot"
11-03-2007, 12:48 PM
then spit to meeee.
you got nothin to say cause ill burn your ass.
sketch3
11-03-2007, 12:58 PM
i propose that everyone just ignore these cats, cuss there not gunna stop and i highly doubt they'll get better,
pluss its not fair battling the handicaped
You can write your name but can u put it up with style,
you FUCKEN TOYS are in denial,
you BITE like crocodiles,
try to steal my style but u cant get it right,
rape ur fucken mama like a vandal in the night!!!!
haha eat shit!!!
"Riot"
11-03-2007, 01:28 PM
riot stfu your so dumb
what wrong kid.
don't want to spit against me.
I told you that one day you would see you can't step to me.
I told you kid. You in for a spankin,I left ya heart sore.
I raised that fuckin score 3-0. Damn straight its not right to fuck with the handicapped. But this bitch already made me snap,but its all good cause he can't even rap. talking about he leave the house strapped,I'ma leave you capped in middle of street,leave ya to deal with the heat.
fuckin around.
Leavin for wyandot.
peace.
sketch3
11-03-2007, 01:36 PM
sez, you just a hater,
aint no crocodile
but still devour, you whole like an aligator,
consume ur lifeforce to fule my powers,
make oponents cower, on the 13th hour,
bitch im a piller of strength, you just rikity tower,
you about to tumble, so bitch be humble,
befor i make the click comethru,
HoodRichSucka
11-04-2007, 01:13 AM
i got developmental instrumental condensated elaborated rymes.
sez, you just a hater,
aint no crocodile
but still devour, you whole like an aligator,
consume ur lifeforce to fule my powers,
make oponents cower, on the 13th hour,
bitch im a piller of strength, you just rikity tower,
you about to tumble, so bitch be humble,
befor i make the click comethru,
sketch3 you dont wanna scratch with me,
ill put you alone in hospital with your mp3s,
bring your click on,
cause im ready to drop bombs on your bitches,
shower you with fists like a couple of snitches,
you got powers?
you should be out picking flowers,
you cant devour me, the only devouring you do
is biting off my crew.......
you little bitch you couldnt survive a day in my shoes,
ill wipe out your whole crew like hitler with them jews!!
hahahahaha that was fun!!
come back later . REdRum. u not ready to bettel.or get in a fist fight. cause u will never win . leave your ass cut up in bloody.
like a girls pussie. u fuckin with f.a.m.e. your ass i dead cause my click roll so deep that we dont need to even carry gunz.we just swing.and fuck your life up ......bitch *****
YOU SHOULD CHANGE YOUR NAME FROM FAME TO FAKE!!
COME TRY SURVIVE IN SIUTH AFRICA BIAAAAAAAATCH!!!!!!!!!
MonoR
11-04-2007, 09:42 AM
ill wipe out your whole crew like hitler with them jews!!
HAHAHAHAH! Word
Passleoinj
11-04-2007, 10:14 AM
wow sez killed you LOl
sketch3
11-04-2007, 10:32 AM
bitch talkin bout genocide,
just put the pen aside,
you been missguieded,
clashin me, im feared world wide,
fools get left curbside,
spit science like nitros oxide,
an i provide the herb to get you red eyed,
talkin bout mp3s, must be on lsd,
an i dont mean acid like Hydrogen sulphide,
***** i could beat you with my hands tied,
if i evere tried, but the question i ask is why?
cuss you too busy lookin at naked pics of guys
good shit homie,
monor and pass, youv both been killed by atleast every member on here so why dont you take your impaired selvs and abort life
TylerDurden
11-04-2007, 10:38 AM
bitch talkin bout genocide,
just put the pen aside,
you been missguieded,
clashin me, im feared world wide,
fools gets get left curbside,
spit science like nitros oxide,
an i provide the herb to get you red eyed,
talkin bout mp3s, must be on lsd,
an i dont mean acid like Hydrogen sulphide,
***** i could beat you with my hands tied,
if i evere tried, but the question i ask is why?
cuss you too busy lookin at naked pics of guys
good shit homie,
monor and pass, youv both been killed by atleast every member on here so why dont you take your impaired selvs and abort life
Impaired selves and abort life,
I got 2 blind kids and a bored wife
Passleoinj
11-04-2007, 10:52 AM
im haunting your thoughts passleoinj is back in force
whack mcs like you i eat them for breakfast
stomp on them with my air forces and get rid of them fast
you aint got shit on me ,thinking you better than us
see your exactly like a bitch , talk when i turn my back
and your mad so you make a fuss
man get that bitch outta my face cause i dont wanna discuss
monor and me got hot girls last night
i was down for a battle , i was down to fight
you ran away like a bitch so i reserve some rights
i fucked your mom as an appetizer , killed her with my jimmy
tough like energizer
im the meanest , youve never been pounded like that ever
cause you probably live in the country , never faced a killer
MonoR
11-04-2007, 10:53 AM
bitch we don’t front until you witness your loss and tell that you got fucked
im tired of you thinking your good and shit, god told you, you suck
my blaze is monor don’t fuck or youll lose your honor
we break your flow man you know it, you just hate it
I do take crack on your soundtrack, it was your fate yo
it smelled so bad, I had to fuck it, you know?
don’t fuck, you niger, or ill rape your ass off
im not a snitch , im a killer get ready for the blast off
im a cop killer, I kill fakes and authorities like shit with my click
when you get fucked by 1 of my freestyle, you just go on and cry to god and my eulogistic
you got fucked on your own, or maybe correct me, raped on your own
lyrically and physically I damned you,and i brought you down
Im going to teach you what id do to a dead bitch like you in 3 lines you fuckin clown
ill grab you by the hair and drag you in the dirt , then do 3 step foward to the edge
look at you in the eyes ,point you a gun in the middle of your forehead and ask you your knowledge
punch you in the face ,spit on you whit disgrace and throw you off the edge so youll remember my blaze
you remain dead
I fucked you up easy as this word is, and I killed you as easy as this word is
next time you front, well get back at me whit some more dope in your veins to show you what a real crack freestyle is.
sketch3
11-04-2007, 11:25 AM
bitch how can i run this is the internet,
no need to break a sweat,
cuss no one likes ur rhymes yet,
dont take shit so seriously,
bitch how we gunna fight ur no were near ta me,
its clear to see,
bitch might step to the edge times 3,
i hit u in da face with my knee,
***** i got the speed of bruce lee,
shit from enter the dragon,
shud be forced to a police wagon,
cuss ur speak drags on,
you gots weak raps son,
say u dont front, but spit bout guns,
every fool in here knows you dont pack one,
why you think you two got shuned?
not cuss we a crew wanna beef on some,
mcs, but bitch u suck plenty,
i could out rhyme you if the odds were one to twenty,
its like god sent me,
to prevent these,
lil ho's to torment me,
Passleoinj
11-04-2007, 12:37 PM
wanna be mean , i can be mean too
i even conviced your mommy to tell me everything about you
your bros saw you talk to police thats not good
you a snitch bitch , a fuckin back itch , pure shit
your mom has doubts about your sexual orientation
thats why when u mad , you go do meditation
while im on the corner doing my shit with passion
im waiting for ya to get on my crosshair , ready for the assassination
im the bullet youre the head , stop moving for a sec and spread your ideas in a fraction , YOU DEAD
im controlling ym game , my crew'S behind me
you think you big time having a pulp family , but im sorry
aint no orange whos gonna protect you against them bullet sorry again
i know understand the cat that died in mfpc
and i talk about it with ease , cause u bitches aint shit and i stomp on your family
hands down
wanna be mean , i can be mean too
i even conviced your mommy to tell me everything about you
your bros saw you talk to police thats not good
you a snitch bitch , a fuckin back itch , pure shit
your mom has doubts about your sexual orientation
thats why when u mad , you go do meditation
while im on the corner doing my shit with passion
im waiting for ya to get on my crosshair , ready for the assassination
im the bullet youre the head , stop moving for a sec and spread your ideas in a fraction , YOU DEAD
im controlling ym game , my crew'S behind me
you think you big time having a pulp family , but im sorry
aint no orange whos gonna protect you against them bullet sorry again
i know understand the cat that died in mfpc
and i talk about it with ease , cause u bitches aint shit and i stomp on your family
hands down
stomp on my family hands down?,
muther fucker im the king wearing the crown,
you just another queen but can you keep your lines clean,
ima have to resort to pulling out your spleen,
and spit on it and shit on it, awesome
ill put you in a coffin,
and leave you with not much to rap about... fucken toy,
all you do is annoy, ima have to deploy
my crew to destroy you weak cats,
YOU FAKE CATS!!!!
we armed with fat caps,
cans of chrome and matt black
you better just step back,
and accept the fact
that you lack the skills to fight this fire
put you outta your misery and force you to retire...
WHAT NOW HOMEY
YOU DONT FUCKEN KNOW ME!!!!!!!! BIAAAAATCH!!!
MonoR
11-04-2007, 02:24 PM
sketch im sorry your shit was bad, no hate.
La Coka Nostra
11-04-2007, 03:17 PM
lol i love how kids spit some wack shit and then talk like they're the shit, like..
WHAT NOW SON? WHAT NOW? DID YOU LIKE MY WACK VERSE?
MonoR
11-04-2007, 05:31 PM
lol i love how kids spit some wack shit and then talk like they're the shit, like..
WHAT NOW SON? WHAT NOW? DID YOU LIKE MY WACK VERSE?
we REALLY dont know who your talking about...:rolleyes:
Clowney-Cakes
11-04-2007, 05:53 PM
yo fellas im still here
havent done thins in a while, hope it not queer
monor you a dumbass, la cokas talken to you
im on all sorts of pills and ill still drop a hotter rap then you
cuz you know, ill awalys stay true
and as for you, yous a joke
when it comes time to battle youll awalys choke
now ill pass it to you, you better not fall as you awalys do!
no beef im really white!
AnteUp
11-04-2007, 06:02 PM
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"Riot"
11-04-2007, 06:32 PM
passelonij and monor sayin they gonna take my honor?
Talkin stuff,talk about fuckin my motha.
But all in all,today was a good day.
My lungs are full of haze,look in my eyes,there blazed.
4 days in a row dealin with this shit, still never heard a ryhme hit.
Your shits a hoax,sounds worse than white folks.
This is my obligation,I stay clear from the station,aint no snitch.
Don't talk like that,you think you can call me ya bitch.
I leave ya feeling rejected,ejected off the forums.
Be right back gotta smoke another sack.
MonoR
11-04-2007, 06:52 PM
riot u piece of cake , i bet your bitch ass mom gave birth to ya in a box
fuckin fake , front again and ill teach you how i box
in your youth , probably sucked so much cocks coulda filled a field with them
now your talking to the police , they say youre even friend with them
hey wake up your white , your whack and you'll never be like EM
front one more time , wanna end up in a bag like m&m's
i got glocks to do the job , the killa's right in fornt of you
i got contacts in the mob , and im a hater of jews
motherfucker , remember my name
double o n in the middle R at the beginning thats a M
so i guesss im done in here , so ill go back to where i came
now i pass the mic to passleoinj
i bet you motherfucker will suck my cock
HoodRichSucka
11-04-2007, 07:33 PM
its a relief when beef diseases
easy to see when its gone with eases.
the breeze blows leaves in different ways.
stays the same for days, may not change.
re-arange the day, appolcolyps his here.
a mear glimpse of death from there to near.
a gear turns which churns the earth around.
near bound a child learns about birth and sound.
renound people are feeble, steep and untrusted.
busted are the fools who weep and steal lusted items.
sight em' light' em and ignite the gouls of holloween.
shank the spleen and kill the weak mean teens.
yea...
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