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Hidden Teknique
11-13-2007, 10:06 PM
i rock a hat, hoody and a bandana rag
two cans in the hands and my paintin bag
paintin is amazin', makes me have to be alert
runnin on rooftops, jumpin down and gettin hurt
just to escape those hellish blue lights
duckin in cover, tryin to escape po-po's sights
runnin with the fam, tryin not to get caught
runnin 2 miles non-stop, gettin kind of hot
shit's racin through my mind, but i can't catch a thought
runnin between walls and woods
hidin in ditches to runnin through different hoods
really don't wanna ditch the goods, the rags we tuck em
the paint in a hidden spot, sure we'll chuck em
people yellin at the top of there lungs
we'll paint till we the best, or second to none
cans exploded, no gloves so paint on my hands
my graff is for me only, not for people who are fans
riskin my future for this one word i am spellin
you know there are snithces, so there is no tellin
HoodRichSucka
11-13-2007, 10:19 PM
hoodrich honestly i think my verse killed yours....it sounds better i think
what is this? a competition? haha
HoodRichSucka
11-13-2007, 10:24 PM
i jerk and squirt at bitches, make em hurt.
like dirt mcgirt, ill stab u, be alert.
but dont rush this shit, this rap game.
i dont joke one bit, on the road to fame.
and its said that you'll always bite my style.
your wrong im right, im so hostile.
your a pedafile to children, and young men.
a pile of shit, like flava whose looks fuckin dead.
a corps if you will, but im not racist.
i wear sneakers, and sure to tie the laces...
hahaha
INDEPENDENT
11-14-2007, 12:28 AM
your all just making a ruckuss, your gunna get fucked up
leaving your ass luckless, dont be a suck up
youll get locked up, not behind bars, but in my car
where we going is it far?, wait you cant see cuz you aint with me
where you wonder? in the back of the clunker, but it brings the funk so dont think its bunk, oh yea your in the trunk, praying like a munk, cuz you know your gunna get dumped, like a mother fuckin chump, sorry im drunk, maybe not, but thats my rap chunk.
pce all.
La Coka Nostra
11-14-2007, 10:30 AM
no structure at all.
sketch3
11-14-2007, 10:47 AM
aighttttttt
watching you spit should be a crime
cause it kills me everytime you say something and you think it rhymes
for real u wrote that about monor and changed it to my name
sketch3 , you dont even know how to spell your name
so if you wanna kill youself after this , im ready to take the blame
and yea i do wanna kill myself cuss shit was WACK, man y are u 2 lil bitches still typin about me. work on ur own shit u fucking fassy
MonoR
11-14-2007, 11:53 AM
shut up and try to spit something
sketch3
11-14-2007, 01:23 PM
kinda contradictory
i agree...not like hes doing much except getting on his knees for pass...
but im tired of bashing you, cause this clashing you bring
has left me snoring, this 'beef' is getting boring,
my rhymes are wack and i know that,
dont need you cold cats to bitch like old bats,
get over yourselves its not like your shits on the shelves,
and neither is mine which is fine, atleast i dont pretend to carry a nine,
stop acting hard i dont care about your squad,
youre nothing, you cats are bluffing, useless piece of turkey stuffing, lol
your comments are fucken futile and both of you are stuck in denial....
make love...spread A.I.D.S.
TylerDurden
11-14-2007, 03:12 PM
shouts out to coka nostra
monor and pass go together lke a boner and an ass....
i never knew there was such a thing as homo crews...that should be against our rights as writers...
sorry gents just had to get that off my chest...i feel alot better now...wait i need a shit...lol
ps i lied i love bashing you.....
monors a little bitch wearing a mini skirt,
pass is even worse he walks around with a purse,
i hope it didnt hurt i never meant to blurt out wht your a......bout
they a pair of transvestites that wear tights and girl clothing.....lol lol lol
running to the mall quick cause their stores closing,
they wanted to get a new bra and some pantys,
to cover their tittys and fannys,
lets chip in and buy them some tampons,
mail it to them and put a stamp on......hahahahaha
La Coka Nostra
11-14-2007, 03:25 PM
shouts out to coka nostra
what's good?
i battled la coka and won.....lol just kidding
"Riot"
11-14-2007, 03:51 PM
Monor.
no beef.
but you and passelonij just need to stop.
for real,retarded beef,your losing the battles aswell but you just wont stop.
So save yourself embarrassment and stop.
Hidden Teknique
11-14-2007, 03:57 PM
if everyone would just fuckin stop throwin beef back at them, they'd get bored and go away...didn't i mention that in one of my raps...stop talkin about them and they'll find another thread to torment.
"Riot"
11-14-2007, 03:58 PM
oh well.
i gave up along time ago.
now thats alota stopssssssss.........
sketch3
11-14-2007, 07:06 PM
Yo Yo Yo, They Say C.r.ea,m. Is My Motivation,
But Its Blaitent, That Im Just Waitin,
For Mr Cakes Retaliation,ya Here Me Clowney,
Its False That Cas Rules Everything Around Me,
Cuss I Got Used To Being Broke,
But Shits No Joke, Wen Ders Nuttin To Smoke,
Don Get Me Wrong, I Do Wish I Was Loaded Wit Doh,
Insted I Gots To Show Kids On Road....ahh I Give Up, Just Typin As I Think
HoodRichSucka
11-14-2007, 08:27 PM
typin as u think? blink but dont close.
keep ur eyes open for friends and foes.
enemys and trappers are common to us.
by that i mean rappers, keystyles and such.
my meanstyle is wicked, makes cats think.
think more then usual, give up and drink.
drink urself into poverty, poor as bitch.
i killed you easily, i tore ur as to bits.
sketch3
11-14-2007, 08:50 PM
Usualy I Dont Drink To Excese,
But Ur Swag Lyrics Got Me Depressed,
So Now Im Drunk N Disordily, Resistin Aresset,
Dont Make Me Leave A Prick In Distress,
U A Female, Got Tits N A Dress,
I Hope We Aint Suposed To Be Gettin Impressed,
Im In London Reppin North West,
Uk Jack The Ripper Shit, Stab A Bitch In The Breast,
Cum To The Endz An Get Ur Stuff Dispossessed,
Smoke Our Weed Be Like ''this Dro's Bless''
Never Know When Lady Luck Might Give Ya Da Kiss'o'death,
Passleoinj
11-14-2007, 09:06 PM
wow man , i wish i could see you in real life so i could punch you in the face
HoodRichSucka
11-14-2007, 09:11 PM
you may have killed, but u didnt kill me.
my rap is invinsible, permanently.
i will forever be, deftly discreet.
rhymes make you think, just vibe to the beat.
you may get lucky, and get somewhere.
but not close to me, im already there.
im at the top of the game, in my own mind.
your under hell put to shame, frozen in time.
my keystyles are vile, u may have heard.
but my freestyles are better, one day u'll learn
sketch3
11-14-2007, 09:14 PM
Your Probily 13 In Real Life
OH AN HOOD.
I NEVER SAID I WAS A KILLER,
JUST THAT LIFES HARD WERE IM FROM,
LIKE WHEN I HERE GUNSHOTS,
AND FEINDS BUN ROCKS,
OUT HERE U COULD GET BURNT WEREIN THE THICKEST SUN BLOCK,
CUSS EVERY ONE GOT, SOME PLOT,
TO FUCK U OVER,
SAME OLD WAR JUST NEW SOLDIERS,
SUM SHOT CRACK ROCKS, OTHERS MOVE BOLDERS,
YOU A YOUNGER, THIS SHITS BETWEEN OLDERS,
AnteUp
11-14-2007, 09:24 PM
pass your a faggot
sketch3
11-14-2007, 09:31 PM
Dont Bother Ante There Lil Youts, Jus Ignore Them
AnteUp
11-14-2007, 09:40 PM
haha damn right...
im sick, spittin hospitals,
im cold, like a hard nipple,
cant spit bars...dunno why,
little quotes, thas wat i live by
Hidden Teknique
11-14-2007, 09:56 PM
my mind is significant like a dictionary
using words you don't know it's scary
i don't need a theasaurus, it's in my brain
i shoot off the dome, hit ya in ya frame
when this shit goes from bad to worse
i take my words, compile and disperse
forming a sentence in a way with a license to kill
my tongue is like the sword, the bitch used in kill bill
i think quick, show it by shootin off the dome
you are delayed and brain dead just like a drone
you see the technique may be hidden
but it steps out a little, when i start spittin
lyrical venom, drownin brothers in chaos
usin my mind, paper, pen or even a crayon
intrigued by how the brain works
how my rhymes can make your stomach hurt
from punches to punchlines
and readin inbetween the lines
this is the way you can express minds
sketch3
11-14-2007, 10:05 PM
He Lives By Lil Quoats,
While Im Just Hittin Folks,
Thats Sniffin Coke,
My Flows Epic Like The Sea, Its Sinkin Boats,
Like Atomic Subs,
Shootin Missisles,
Never Thaught Sum One Could Spit Shit This Vile,
Bitch I'll, Take A Piss While,
Im In Ur Mothers Bed, Drop A Squat On Her Lovers Head,
La Coka Nostra
11-14-2007, 10:27 PM
He Lives By Lil Quoats,
While Im Just Hittin Folks,
Thats Sniffin Coke,
My Flows Epic Like The Sea, Its Sinkin Boats,
Like Atomic Subs,
Shootin Missisles,
Never Thaught Sum One Could Spit Shit This Vile,
Bitch I'll, Take A Piss While,
Im In Ur Mothers Bed, Drop A Squat On Her Lovers Head,
I'll leave her lover's head smothered under me, dead
Your moms is probly upset that her man's a bundle in red
Leaking fluids from his chest, arms, stomach and head
I should've probly left, but I grabbed her number instead
I'm the comeback man when bitches are on the rebound
When their man goes missing, and is nowhere to be found
But see now, I travel the US, leaving widows in each town
So kids, don't be surprised when your daddy gets a beat down
XD
i'm bored.
AnteUp
11-14-2007, 10:28 PM
haha thas nasty...
choke you wit ur tongue,
say you sick im prone,
to the disease, that got u cryin on ya knees,
bitch please, you kno im gettin it,
this is mah period, my time of the month,
or time of the lifetime, i must rhyme...
bit.CHEEZ
11-14-2007, 10:29 PM
STREET LIFE'S ON THE LINE
I SPIT A LINE AND THEY CALL IT A DISS
I SPRAY A LINE AND THEY CALL IT A PIECE
I SNIFF A LINE AND W'ALL LIKE FUCK THE POLICE
-CHEEZ.montreal
atleast la cokas keeping it fresh in here hahaha...... and hidden teknique
shut the fuck up hoodrich...stop rapping like you eminem or cent....
GeSuS_KRiST
11-15-2007, 05:26 AM
one upon a time not long ago
after sandler sang bout sloppy joes
was a lil kid by the name of gesus
who mods a fourm beliving to be this
great all knowning, big conceded fuck
who used to get high by the veins he struck
he'd get real bored and type a bit
hardly could rhyme and he typed like shit
he'd spit in the thread from time to time
kids read what he wrote line by line
most werent amused tho cas they werent bout crime
stupid lil kids, brain washed and false
thinkin they grew up fast just cas they talk like adults
lil did they know there style was shit
but gesus didnt care cas he never read it
now with that said ima hit my bed
cas this shits gettin old like moldy bread
so peace out to ch'all and have good night yo
this is a sleepytime rhyme with a bedhead flow....
take it back to the basic's
all yall suck u just need to face it...
MonoR
11-15-2007, 11:01 AM
its funny how you guys are stupid haha
CRN-one
11-15-2007, 11:13 AM
I'll side with gesus on this one, kids these days just act real hard and spit
while I roll on this magnanimous, ghetto fabulous, archaic, controlled cybernetic tip
string together bigger word combinations that Murs on jeopardy
while I flow inconceivably and uncontrollably with the verbal insanity
rhymes twisted and spun apathetically with a ghetto vernacular that would leave B.I.G. rolling in his grave
laying a lyrical smackdown of apocalyptic proportions using words as chains to make weak mc's my slaves
words contoured and cultured, devised and shaped in the mold for the sake of being used as weaponry on this vocal battlefield
welcome to the freestyle thread, the signs will proclaim, break out your thesaurus and use that shit as a shield
I cold-cock all the haters in the mouth with my anecdotal provocation and proceed to make them doubt
that their style has any merit at all; when the judges finally listen and they make their decision they'll boot them out
red flags up in the air, exposed for the liars and frauds you all are - we no longer care
don't try to tell me you're from the hood, your mother told me you would, she said "my boy is a wigger" - sorry, life ain't fair
I didn't mean to put you on blast, but don't threaten to shoot my ass, when the closest thing you got to a gun is made by Nerf
pull your pants up - that shit looks stupid, don't try to flex on me kid - it wouldn't be prudent, for all I care you can keep your damn "turf"
you want a war? come on, step up, you're gonna get it - I'll set you ablaze with hot beats and rhyme incineration
and if you really were as gully as you proclaimed in your verses your ass would be on a bench awaiting incarceration.
La Coka Nostra
11-15-2007, 11:43 AM
Fuck incarceration, let insanity spark creation
Start invasions, and let my fucking crew conquer nations
The light erases whatever the dark embraces
I roam the streets rockin black like the hearts of pagans
It's bonkers ain't it? The way we metaphorically change
And grow out of old beliefs that we swore we'd maintain
And nothing's the same, everything's different, for shame
In a world inspired by televisions and video games
so on and so forth...
TylerDurden
11-15-2007, 01:28 PM
Fuck incarceration, let insanity spark creation
Start invasions, and let my fucking crew conquer nations
The light erases whatever the dark embraces
I roam the streets rockin black like the hearts of pagans
It's bonkers ain't it? The way we metaphorically change
And grow out of old beliefs that we swore we'd maintain
And nothing's the same, everything's different, for shame
In a world inspired by televisions and video games
so on and so forth...
so forth and so on, til the break of dawn,
i aint heard rhymes like this since that raekwon tape song,
those who are headstrong are dead wrong,
case in point, those who live long for MTVs sing song
programmed material that infiltrates your interior,
sit on your posterior and watch that inferior,
crap called music, yet some abide by it,
I gotta admit, I saw that "Shot at Love" pilot
:(
G-Fat
11-15-2007, 01:40 PM
your raps are weak
spitin over a computer
like a microsoft geek
son, you don't tote guns
or make number ones
suit and tie, great job
in the hood you better run
haha my morning rap
sketch3
11-15-2007, 01:46 PM
you didnt teach anyone any words,
G-Fat
11-15-2007, 01:49 PM
heres one for you sketch :(
hector \HEK-tur\, noun:
1. A bully.
transitive verb:
1. To intimidate or harass in a blustering way; to bully.
intransitive verb:
1. To play the bully; to bluster.
your raps are weak
spitin over a computer
like a microsoft geek
son, you don't tote guns
or make number ones
suit and tie, great job
in the hood you better run
haha my morning rap
in the hood you better run cause g-fats acting like he got a gun,
i dont tote guns, i smoke blunts,
yapping how weak the rhymes are, im more worried bout how illegal my crimes are and how expensive the fines are, i havent been caught cause see ive been taught to make a plan without ending up in the back of a van,
damaging walls with a can of matt black and dont forget the fat cap,
put up some wack shit then ima have to cap it...
shut the fuck up sketch!!!! youve been dealt with....hahaha
G-Fat
11-15-2007, 02:00 PM
Sez says stuff, nkowing shits wack
my rhymes like a verbal halocaust
theyre on the attack
we come out 950 deep,
my words will put you at the botoom of the sea
fuck blunts and guns sonnnn
tits,clits and bonghits
are the
SHIT
hahaha inebriation
way to bite Immortal Technique.
G-Fat
11-15-2007, 02:06 PM
way to bite my cock,
homo
haha shit talking rules
tits,clits and bonghits,
dont forget the idiots that spit dumbshit,
g-fat you do that ,what you spat, was plain crap,
made up worse than a pigeon, you should shut up and just listen
cause this personal dissing is making me feel like the loves missing,
you do graff? if so i love that and if not than fuck you and everything that you do...
over 2000 posts and he still hasnt learnt not to bite....dam g-fat!
G-Fat
11-15-2007, 02:13 PM
haha man, thats some good rhymes.
too bad your a fashion disaster!
haha juss playing man, too fried
i'm going to take a shower and eat soemthing.
edit, if you read alot of my posts they're just pointless dick and fart jokes.
haha mkay have a good day...
sketch3
11-15-2007, 02:34 PM
you still havnt learnt to edit ur posts
sketch3 keeps telling me to edit, fuck it id rather take my name and just spread it,
over every thread that i see suited, youve just been booted out of the camp,
youre the kinda kid i would vamp, expose your forhead and give you a toy stamp....
hahaha no beef just love...
HoodRichSucka
11-15-2007, 03:09 PM
you a gangster, but an online one.
a real life wankster, no dimes are won.
by this i mean, you cant get chicks.
but the ones you do get, they got dicks.
so realize your style is young in skill.
and recognize my vile lungs, i spit to kill.
'member those days when we used to spar.
fight with words, see who got far.
now your generic and use baby words.
saying this and that, like a crazy nerd.
wishing you had flow, and could rap like me.
but you dont want that, im from the D.
hoodrich is from detroit and now hes out to exploit
the fame that eminem gave the name
i should bite from 50 cents cause it makes sense
to tell you how out dated and over rated you are,
i dont remember the days we used to spar
youre old spitting out dust particles and full of useless information like news articles,
shut your mouth, dont care what you about fuck this shit im out....lololololol
TylerDurden
11-15-2007, 03:41 PM
im waitin for coka to finish off my rhyme
F3B3S
11-15-2007, 05:55 PM
im sik of hearin, that'ch use the best,so much money and the sexyest bitches,
its all bullshit, the only time uv got close to a chick, was suckin on ur moms tits,ur a pussy,thats softer then the carebears..baller cuz u got a loonie, abounch of gooftroops,that are frutier then frootloops, turn u into my slaves like ompalooplopas, call me da willy wanka, this my factory, i push that candy,no unbreilla will save u,best gets a life jacket, cuz ur lifes mine soon as i jack it!!!
bit.CHEEZ
11-15-2007, 06:02 PM
why does it have to just be fuckin battles.. I;m not saying u cant battle... but fuck the least u can do when battling is accept ur defeat, learn and MOVE THE FUCK ON.
rap about other shit like family, society, graffiti, street life and such
wouldbe much more interesting
now monor.. accept the fact that u sucked, gfat the fact that u bited, and MOVE ON.
im cheez and u are.. a joke
MonoR
11-15-2007, 07:45 PM
your a cheese and a fucken TOY!
La Coka Nostra
11-15-2007, 08:00 PM
so forth and so on, til the break of dawn,
i aint heard rhymes like this since that raekwon tape song,
those who are headstrong are dead wrong,
case in point, those who live long for MTVs sing song
programmed material that infiltrates your interior,
sit on your posterior and watch that inferior,
crap called music, yet some abide by it,
I gotta admit, I saw that "Shot at Love" pilot
:(
Yo, you only get one shot at love
But in order to get to your heart, I shot ya lungs
I talk in tongues, so you kids cant decipher my flow
All you baby rappers, wearing diapers under your clothes
It could be 100 below, and my flow would still blaze
Since all we seem to do is just chill and kill haze
blaaahhhh...sorry dude...can't really write right now...that's all i got in me at the moment.
i think everyone should just have a big cypher instead of battling everyone.
just play off the last verse posted before you.
F3B3S
11-15-2007, 08:17 PM
i never kill the haze, i let it burn and blaze,
we so hot,like we rollin in flames,u got fame,
a nobody,head down shame,u musta forgot bitch,im rick james,
i anit nice,my games mean,they all say im fresher then,
mr clean swimming in listerine,study ur skills befor u start argueing
fuck beef, ill end it like a vegitarine!!
HoodRichSucka
11-15-2007, 08:17 PM
your a cheese and a fucken TOY!
hes a toy? how'd that handstyle battle go by the way?
enough said
bit.CHEEZ
11-15-2007, 09:17 PM
your a cheese and a fucken TOY!
Hey guys, i present you monor..
25 years old, hawaian organ donor. <--- haha juss made that out
So you you think you can come out here and diss me just like dat
Now I'll put my ass on your mouth and u'll have to kiss me just like dat
Dont say graff is ur game cuz all u do is tags
no throw', no piece, no fame, u're juss a fag
Cheez pissed you off and now ur an unsatisfied boy!
Get your steez off the street cuz man... You're a certified toy!
Hidden Teknique
11-15-2007, 09:19 PM
so i think i'll run with Nostra's idea
i'll start the shit...
here i am startin a big forum rap cipher
poppin shit off like 8 mile's Mekhi Phifer
it's time for real cats to spit in the thread
revitalizing it, bringin hip-hop back from the dead
a lyricist who holds words that rhyme
fake gangsta's on this site couldn't even kill time
i got a colt 45, magnum, and a lil nine
true lyricists still really do exist
but the bs, rap forum they must've missed
only a few who spit some ill shit
lines that motivate me, until my bones quit
or they crumble, i'm passin it off, this ain't a fumble
bit.CHEEZ
11-15-2007, 09:53 PM
yeh word
and monor... keep the word nigaz for urself cuz we all kno u aint black.
HoodRichSucka
11-15-2007, 09:59 PM
my rap game is so serious. your curious.
fuck with ur mind make u delirious.
steer with us, off the road, car crash.
smash ur body, head through the dash.
the passengers dead, ur faint but alive,
the taint smell of blood hits ur hive.
remember something? u think nothing.
can describe the insident but hardly,
bacardi fills the cups, full of drank.
take sips too fast, then find a skank.
dont rush this shit, no charge of rape? NO.
then in the pen you go, dont drope the Soap!
Hidden Teknique
11-15-2007, 10:07 PM
way to already ruin the cipher, apparently only a few kids were gonna carry it anyway
Passleoinj
11-15-2007, 10:16 PM
WHAT ABOUT U SHOW US SOME CARAK SKILLS MONOR !! HAHA U FUCKIN FOOL. U CANT RAP, CANT DANCE, CANT SPIT. WHAT ABOUT U GET BACK TO UR HARRY POTTER
ALL U DO IS TAG, AND UR LETTER AINT EVEN GO STYLE. I EVEN WONDER IF U EVEN THOUGHT OF MAKING A THROW OR.. IF U EVEN KNOW WHAT THROW UP MEANS. TOOL
au moins on voit de c shit
le comique.
Passleoinj
11-15-2007, 10:17 PM
for real u wrote that about monor and changed it to my name
and yea i do wanna kill myself cuss shit was WACK, man y are u 2 lil bitches still typin about me. work on ur own shit u fucking fassy
im still waiting for an answer
anytime little bitch :)
HoodRichSucka
11-15-2007, 10:23 PM
way to already ruin the cipher, apparently only a few kids were gonna carry it anyway
my bad man, i wasnt paying attention to wats going on. im just spittin shit..
Hidden Teknique
11-15-2007, 10:37 PM
nah, bit cheez had to break it up already...so it really didn't matter if you had followed up, shit wouldn't have flowed
bit.CHEEZ
11-15-2007, 10:54 PM
passpassleoinj ya du monde sur la corde a linge
wesh.. ouais mais ca aurait ete preferable quon ne le voit pas :)
HoodRichSucka
11-15-2007, 11:15 PM
god damn french people. isnt there a french graffiti forum that u can go talk shit on... this is the freestlye section anyways..god..
bouncingsoul
11-15-2007, 11:47 PM
I’ll leave home with a dilated mind and a heavy heart
tear it apart, satellite sound waves silent the start
so I’ll topple over, momentum higher than the power of love
I’ll clutch my beating chest, and offer a life to the above
but no one picks up, it’s an empty dial tone, the phones
are all disconnected, and it’s not a power outage, the drone
is so heavy in my ear, and I know now it’s because there’s nobody there
and nobody even cares, nobody even stares down the dares, to be fair
I’m just a loser yearning for nothing and everything in the world
I cared for everyone and I cared for me, and it unfurled
to me, Pandora’s box that broke and when hope stole free
I’d hold sleep, clutch it so deep, I felt so secure and I felt so free
I felt no needs and cold deeds with no green peace, soul breeze
rolled in me from mind modes to my knees, fold the sheets
pocket it, but make sure the ink doesn’t slip, make sure your words
are pure, don’t murder the border between us, the water is blurred
and rationality paves the way for disturbed, unheard curbed
idiots to speak nonsense, the bomb threats are conversed
with contradicting, mixing theology an anomaly of free speech
we’ll sit to fiend, the careened motion of brains knee-deep
in a gel that flows with a movement elliptical, the physical
pinnacle of nature, a miniature mathematic, analytical
thinking mind, always active, on it’s toes, got hops
I’ll jump over your rationale, with irrational thought, then drop
down to a bittersweet, cold truth, that flukes and jukes
conveniently lenient opponents, then draws a blue
divide, a great mystified rhetoric that knocks you into realization
never impatient, but I’ll push you into deviation, pacin’
to keep up a time of broken clocks, that tell 4 o’clock lies
but while I spit, and while I cry, just another rhyme dies…
entry
11-16-2007, 12:03 AM
my rhymes like verbal hennessy flow
so smooth i can keep the lyrical remedy
verses in high speed leave you all dusty
ammunation while im spitting speechless
random shit
dam entrys the sickest....
MonoR
11-16-2007, 05:02 PM
passpassleoinj ya du monde sur la corde a linge
wesh.. ouais mais ca aurait ete preferable quon ne le voit pas :)
ferme dont ta yeule.
calis
and hoodbitchsucker
i think you should shut the fuck up honestly
HoodRichSucka
11-16-2007, 06:53 PM
^haha good one. seeing as im the one who always talk shit to others...(sarcasm u ignorant bastard)..
Hidden Teknique
11-16-2007, 10:34 PM
ALL ya'll shut the fuck up, BOUNCINGSOUL is one of the only cats that are spittin something good in here.
TylerDurden
11-16-2007, 10:45 PM
ALL ya'll shut the fuck up, TylerDurden is one of the only cats that are spittin something good in here.
.
Hidden Teknique
11-16-2007, 10:59 PM
Durden, spit somethin then bro, when you spit it's dope, but you don't post all that much man...you, bouncin soul, and nostra...are runnin this thread right now
Passleoinj
11-16-2007, 11:30 PM
stfu you dipshit
get off everybody's dick
thats some deep shit bouncing soul...
La Coka Nostra
11-17-2007, 10:23 AM
Durden, spit somethin then bro, when you spit it's dope, but you don't post all that much man...you, bouncin soul, and nostra...are runnin this thread right now
holla backkkkkkkkk.
MonoR
11-17-2007, 12:27 PM
you talk less whit a dick in your mouth eh?
La Coka Nostra
11-17-2007, 12:36 PM
get banned already.
Passleoinj
11-17-2007, 05:49 PM
motherfucker i should slit your throat with a razor
attempt a fucking murder , violence taking control of my body
in this world i'm compared to satan , Im a killer
Extasy state of mind , your assassination is orgasmic
you wish you took acid to ignore things as they are
Walking disease , im like a zombie with a cock
i should fuck your head up , stomp on it with my click
undead army , reunion of superior power
Da Cadaveric Kids is real , never seen before this hour
you are attacking someone who knows you before they meet you
at the rendez vous point , got your soul kidnapped my thugs are more than sour
i sent your family flowers , your death is so close its sooner or later.
high as fuck , trynna to fuck
hahaha you bitches are so fucking stupid
G-Fat
11-17-2007, 05:55 PM
mary had a little lamb
when i have peanut butter
i keep it gansta
and cover that bitch with
JAM
only in the hood, with bitches so ghetto
they act as anti-morning wood
can't get it up, pop a viagra to fuck it up
pussy juices flowing, after i'm done
me and the boys go bowlingggg
hahaha
YA HURRRRDDD
Passleoinj
11-17-2007, 05:58 PM
to all you suckas talkshitting on me on a beat
you motherfuckas so low , probably eating with your feet
fucking stupid all you do is talk , but whats happened to the streets?
should suck a dick for a living should stop spitting and go bo back to your loose sheets
i mean fuck , i bet you guys scared to act normal , cause we'll see you aint tough
you bitches so weak , not strong enough to beat the buff
come on im cleaning all this shit all this mess all these bitches on lock
its so easy , its like a hoe that you dont have to pay to fuck
im fuckin reloading a bit , because of all these bullets i shot
take all the shit you said back , cause in here , im the fuckin big boss
dude pass your shits still wack as fuck...you a toy a buster you got nothing!!!
go into hibernation and write rhymes for like another 10 years and then come back...no wait rather not come back!!!! hahahahaha
Passleoinj
11-18-2007, 09:21 AM
in the streets i still kill you
go back to south africa fuckin dumbass
i didnt even know they had streets there
sketch3
11-18-2007, 09:54 AM
ur soo fucking retarded. south africa has mad slums,
more than france or were ever ur from
atleast sketch knows what hes talking about....pass your little french ass couldnt survive
one day here...
oh btw id think since you obviously know we have internet in south africa that we'd certainly have streets...you think you so fucking hard then come bomb our streets you bitch...youll get eaten alive mother fucker!!!! hahahahahahaha........
Passleoinj
11-18-2007, 11:41 AM
I love how you think youre something important to me.
sibil juggalo
11-18-2007, 01:27 PM
i love how youd think my dick was important to me
so that it cant tempt me and i wont have the opportunity
ill throw it away so i can have my dick sucked by the city
Passleoinj
11-18-2007, 01:58 PM
since day one , first born i came here with my mic on
blast on , fists compared to methaphores
i do my daily chores , clean up rappers of their dirty clothes
my flow hits you in the face like metal poles
south africa eh , you probably white and full of holes
i'm like a junkie , and i didnt get my dose
my hood aint sunny , place raided by the popos
but i don't care about that shit ,my goal is to get mo hoes
on the street corner trying to sell mo dope
so go go , and never come back here my click is so loco
rapper youre homo , and i think its clear
i warned you tho never front in solo against me here
some shit now fuck you bitch
south africa aint shit
you aint shit
sketch3 aint shit
UK aint shit
fuck me , nah , fuck you little bitch
im out im going to smoke a cig
MonoR
11-18-2007, 04:40 PM
i love the way your all talking shit, cant you just shut the fuck up and chill?
monor reppin dck montreal city stand up bitches
La Coka Nostra
11-18-2007, 04:51 PM
nobody says anything until you open your fuckin mouth.
so shut it.
I'm shameless, cause ain't no way I'm trying to be famous
I don't need a million people knowing what my name is
Matter fact...The only time you'll see me spittin something brainless
Is when my brain is on the pavement, after aiming with the stainless
couple bars i thought of a second ago.
didn't want to forget em, so i wrote em in here.
Hidden Teknique
11-18-2007, 05:27 PM
in life you get one chance not to let it slip
you fuck up big time, you lost your grip
now from personal experience i really don't know
but let me see if i can express it with my flow
through life we have trials and tribulations
you can either strike now or be patient
in different places there are many trials of life
your day job is to survive, whether it includes a knife
or a packed gun, every time you hear those sirens run
find a hiding place quick, to stash all your cash
go to the lab, cut it up and deal that hash
just out to make all the money you can
until you behind bars, shit hit the fan, damn
you once had enough scrilla to get a killa
to get rid of that pushin weight drug deala
but now what you got? nothins cookin in the pot
you shit outta luck, to your name you ain't gotta buck
what the fuck, now you stuck in a cell
you still got screwed and not one brother can tell
or you can chill and just be patient
put your plans into a solid rotation
just stand back lookin like you dressed to kill
impressed still, waitin for that moment were you'll cash your mil
now you a playa's boss, sittin in a benz ready to floss
you got that cash money,
chicks hoppin on your dick quicker than a bunny
from a ski mask to a million dollar mast
you either wait...or get your money fast
BizerkIZ
11-18-2007, 06:10 PM
now im stapped, with a gat.
slap that oyesman round the hat.
"Riot"
11-18-2007, 08:12 PM
Your all dumb,gangsters,white,black,hispanic,no better than my cookie crumbs/
I'm illa than you..its true,one at a time,kill ya with my syllables/
I enjoy dustin cats like you,but continue to think your the untouchables/
I'll show you,right now,I'm touchable,but clearly out of your reach,listen up,cause im about to preach/
You look slightly intimidated,good cause after this I'll leave you cremated/
You can't touch me kid so give it up,Just like I stated/
Nobody has your back,so take a crack,sure my eyes are dialated/
But anytime you catch me in a weak point,I'll still take you out,unrated/
I'll leave you in the dust and consider you a statistic/
Take you out how ever I feel,verbally,battle?,sometimes when I fell artistic.
gotta do homework.
bored. i'll be back later
La Coka Nostra
11-18-2007, 10:16 PM
droppin knowledge.
Yo, more than half you cats are wack and can't rap
You're all outdated like small pox and anthrax
Stand back...I'm bout to teach you cats how to rhyme
Cause this shit's been buggin me bad in the back of my mind
Mothafuckas don't know shit about a rhyme scheme
Drop random ass words and try and say your line's clean?
You half assed "rappers" better pray to the stars
It's like you allergic to chocolate, you stay away from the "bars"
All you mainstream kids that are claiming you hard
I'd love to leave you bleeding, with abrasions and scars
eh...i'm done.
peace.
g is for the gang, the money i make.
f is for the gang of fools i break,
u is for the undisputed champ.
n is cuz ya never gonna get the mic back.
k is for the *****s that i knock on they back.
damn it feels good to see long beach on the map.
nate dogg mothatfucka.
entry
11-18-2007, 10:36 PM
now the projects talking that sombody gotta die shit
Its logic unless its somebody thats in my click
get out the car you hear click clack you turn all i see is your back
hesitate this bringing me to a ether mindstate beware leaving
your blood running cold in fear
La Coka Nostra
11-18-2007, 11:22 PM
me and you DOG, we're obviously pedigree
hahaha, tight.
didn't catch that at first, but i re read and i was like...ha!
MainEvent
11-19-2007, 12:18 AM
will both yall faggots please get off each others dicks?
coming off a little hiatus to bring back some prespective real quick
since you're mutually dickriding, imma cut off some appendages
cause mains BS's lyrical embodiment of Nas and one or two Jimi Hendrixes
gonna pick on Coka Nostra for a sec cause dude seems like more of a vet
but shits not gonna stop me from breakin the vertebrae in ya neck
getting my lyrical terrorist on, plotting mad shit like al-Zarqawi
dawg you're shits more strung out and incoherent than Uncle Howie
taking the name of a group made up of a bunch of coked up white kids
replace your china white with anthrax to show you how outdated it is
infect TylerDurden with small pox, while both yall families all watch
dual wielding knives to leave you bleeding from a big and a small ox
now see how i just flipped your entire verse back on you?
talking about schoolin kids how to MC, man i did that shit back in June
just about that time of year so im here to fulfill some wishes
so if you're both pedigree, im the vet here to kill both you bitches
bunch of HIV, VD, Herpes infected penny whores
neuter both of you so you can't cum with anything remotely sick anymore
La Coka Nostra
11-19-2007, 10:56 AM
...a challenger approaches?
ill get at that shit later, but i'll leave you with this.
Yo, quit frontin like you famous yet
Your shit's the first match, fuck a "Main Event"
I'll hit you with some shit that'll make you do back flips
Your rap shit is trash, but not worse than your graff is
fucka...
:D
MainEvent
11-19-2007, 12:05 PM
lol word word
man i was looking for some originiality, but what a fuckin surprise
someone pulled the "you're not the main event, you're the opening act" line
not like its the the 1200th time, but ya know dawg its fine
i guess its hard to come up with creative rhymes when you got TylerDruden's sweet virgin anus on ya mind
secreting sphincter sickle cell solutions as soon as you as vicious penetrate
then probably have to wait a couple more days until his ass muscles regenerate
shits all good cause we both like the blazing nugs and smoking dank grass
but we're on page 207, i'll fuckin come down to the 603 to whoop your ass
now lets just do a little math problem to so how im right and youre wrong
get out a pen, some paper, and a calculator so you can fellow along
lets take the 603 and subtract the 207, cause i dont even like my state
leaves you with 396, the number of dicks and ballsacks hes teabagged to date
then minus 31, the interval of days when this kid bleeds out his vaginal gate
this dude got all anxious and upset trying to tell TylerDurden he was mad late
but coincidently, 31s the same number of vertebrae imma break in your spine
leave the other two functional just to keep you alive
supplementary talk aside, 365 is the number i derive
factor in the number of your adoring fans, and we still got 365
so you might ask, whats the relevance of 365 and what the fuck is it gonna do
365 is the number of days per year i'm a better MC and Graf Writer than you
La Coka Nostra
11-19-2007, 12:10 PM
lol it's good to have some real competition in here finally.
if i get bored enough ill write a verse or something.
got a busy day though.
MainEvent
11-19-2007, 01:08 PM
yeah kinda shaking off the rust, haven't done shit for a while. i have this whole week off from school so when i have nothing to do i'll bang some shit out
La Coka Nostra
11-19-2007, 02:15 PM
i thought that some of the punchlines were good, and the rhymes were good.
i thought the number thing like subtracting all the random numbers and shit was pointless though, but still...compared to everything else in here...he's definitely one of the best.
MainEvent
11-19-2007, 03:34 PM
yeah i thought shit was dope when i thought of it but kinda regressed as i was typing it out this morning and didnt come out as nice as i imagined it. shits all good, feelin the shit you've laid down. that dude bouncingsoul is pretty nice too, i still think we should get an A/V room
La Coka Nostra
11-19-2007, 03:37 PM
definitely.
you record?
pm me.
G-Fat
11-19-2007, 03:39 PM
easy peasey lemon squeazy
yeee jager bombs i shower in that shit
Hidden Teknique
11-19-2007, 03:58 PM
so now we got durden, soul, nostra and main?
you guys come strong or bring a weak artillery
the technique's gonna step out kind of aggressively
so don't mind if i come off a little too strong
smackin you bitches around just like a ping-pong
so i'm here to out spread lyrical genocide
come with me and confide in your lyrical guide
put my shit upfront, and move yours to the side
to your law i won't abide, i got you sweatin
you feelin flustered, because you were threatened
go ahead boys beef, start a new war
i'll step all over you like you were my floor
monor and pass talkin bout each others nine millimeter
but not a tech, but for the french it's proper procedure
only a few cats on this thread that have a monopoly
other cats only hold lyrical robbery, biting others bars
they might become stars, but i'd be a constellation
have you bowing down to the new king of a nation
when i spit i'm lyrically malicious and vicious
droppin some lines for your ears, granting your wishes
there's no way you can miss this, straight disastrous
burn you all back down straight to the ashes
your brain and my rhymes stick like molasses
see the world differently when you came to my classes
my shit's clearer than a blind man wearing glasses
i'm whoopin y'all asses
take your seats, get out some paper and a pen
when it inks on the paper a renaissance starts to begin
decide now foe or friend?
"Riot"
11-19-2007, 04:08 PM
Sick of this shit,boring as hell,never anything new/
always talkin about how you going to burn me like beef stew/
but now its my turn,lean and mean/
im done with all these mental detentions,never any new inventions in this style/
i'll kill myself before this shit changes,but meaning with the best intentions/
look back and read that to see how it really goes down,break apart my sentences/
im sick of you cats feedin off moms and pops,rollin in your benzs/
i hope i see you outside,put a couple slugs in your chest,so try your best to avoid/
if you happen to get within my eyesight,i see the fright in ya eyes,leave ya destroyed/
Leave you alone,flat on your back after you hear crack crack,before my voice deployed/
am i getting any better than when i first came here?
youngprophecy
11-19-2007, 04:15 PM
u aint want no pistol play while i keep dat nine by my side mac 11 in da truck teck 9 to ya dome with ya brains leakin out on ya tounge got u speckin your mind fucking with me is a captil crime u get capitl punsihment and in your case im the judge jury and exicutioner
La Coka Nostra
11-19-2007, 07:34 PM
Xd Lmfao ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Ahahahha..
Omg..i Don't Know Why I Come On Here Anymore.
Ahahahahahahah
Woaaaahhhh...
Im On Shrooms.
Scuse Me.
MonoR
11-19-2007, 08:06 PM
we all wanted to know it
thank you come again
Skeggi
11-19-2007, 08:15 PM
yall kick it live like Big Bank, Master G and Wonder Mike...
entry
11-19-2007, 09:27 PM
i need some inspiration for my lyrics to come
jahova witness creeping at my door while im trying to cum
lucky boy still rhyming not on the street like a panhandling bum
games over you loose i win this is off the top of my head like a murderous sin
wondering where ive been im not showing off im just chillen
let my mind create this wack spreed sheet of pure heat
its no secret everyone know that i be smoking on weed always in need
my shits so cold like the iceberg blockin the titanic im a rap fanatic
lost my touch guys ill post some good stuff later
................... peace
Billburg
11-20-2007, 04:48 AM
i got a white tee dat hangs to my kness
dont put up a fight just hand ova tha cheese
so cooperate, while i operate
you look pretty distraught, overwrought,
it'le be ova if ya give me waht you bought
afta dat ill get out tha slim jim
hit up cars for change to get some new tims, flat brims
stay fresh without a job so i leardned to rob
girls say ima heart throb
wearing so much balck youd think i was tha mob
creep around when im puttin in work,
go berserk when i get dat smirk, stay clear when i lurk, exicetments just a perk
car afta car till i hit tha whole block
dont matter bout tha lock, cuz i wont stop till i cop a guap
my fist to yo face is like a pop
hit tha ground cuz i dont play around
my hits profound, round hurr im renowed
you aint a thug,you trippin like a hallucinogenic drug
my knuckles and yo face, thatll fit snug
smug, dats how i look when ta jobs done
pic up a mac and let it spit till it quits then eject tha clip
plus ill murder you lyricly,think of my ryhmes as an oven and you bout to roast
n my flows will burn you like toast, but i dont mean to boast
dude pass i actually feel sorry for you...its like youre out to prove sumthing to everyone...
monor aswell...how old are you kids like 12????
shame man shame...
Craze
11-20-2007, 12:48 PM
everyone speaks of an executioner/
but im face 2 face with a bunson burner/
im so real you could call me sojurner/
cause all i reep is truth for the learner/
i dont want my rhyme to go any further/
cause eventualy my lines come out the mouth of a biter/
quick pass me a lighter cause i need ta set the trees on fire/
each one of yall wishin ya had the same desire/
im the definition of a grafitti writer/
now i got all these people thinkin, "yo is he for hire"/
ya im a king but dont call me sier/
call me the king craze one wit a gun/
comin from the denver city slums/
anyone want the one on one/
laughin at yo ass talkin bout bein my son/
yo fuck a record deal man i do this shit all day just for fun/
and when the cops come we all run straight for the sun/
those pigs probly seen me serve that lil ***** a lil sum sum/
but now its my turn ta pass to the next/
if you claimin ta be the best/
well the go on ahead put me to the test.
MonoR
11-20-2007, 12:48 PM
yeh yeh shut the fuck up
Craze
11-20-2007, 01:48 PM
yeh yeh shut the fuck up
yo you say shut the fuck up/
i say back the fuck up or end up in a dump truck/
you dumb fuck cant speak cause you lips are stuck/
you got one foot in the muk/
and your runin outa luck cause you see im the one drivin the dam truck/
get up off yo ass and get mashed/
see you level of luaghs ive surpassed/
why aint u replyin ur computer crash/
i got a secret stash of cash/
just to humiliate you in in the past/
your lifes gone in a flash/
all cause of one line and a wanabe bash/
now im forced to slash/
and a king always handles your wack toy ass!
CRN-one
11-20-2007, 02:36 PM
I guess it's time for me to come out and put all the haters on blast
Like a broadway reviewer I'll sit here and tear apart the cast
but what I won't do is try to get my ghetto card
by talking shit about nines and gats and rock and tryin to act hard
I swear I come correct and I keep my shit legit
and I'd rather insult you with large words that you won't even get
I could call you all out but that seems like a waste of time
the last thing I'd want to do is throw away one single rhyme
on someone that's as worthless as some of the kids in this thread
I'd rather blow a line of rat poison and let you all find me dead
so you can sit around tomorrow and be like "ah man, he's gone"
"we wish we had listened when he tried to help us along"
"we really should have stopped acting raw and paid some attention"
"cause every time he spit a verse it was like a fucking lesson"
back to basics, kids, lets start with something entry level:
volume one, section A - rhyming is essential, it's entirely instrumental
to the whole entire process of the art of freestyle
you can't just lift a mic and run your mouth and say you're wild
oh, I'm sorry, I forgot that it's now cool to say "wyle out"
I guess thats why when you all talk I seriously have my doubts
that any of you have even been to the hood
let alone lived there, killed there, or clocked there - that's understood
You all gonna run your mouths like a bunch of pussy bitches
this last sentence does not apply to my friends, you guys keep me in stitches
Coka Nostra got my back on this lyrical assault mission
Main Event is new to me but he's moving into second position
HoodRich - I'll always have your back, let them talk trash
we'll string together rhymes of variable intensity until we put them on smash
Bouncing Soul, I know we never worked together but it's chill
every time you drop a rhyme you straight up fucking kill
But honestly, I don't feel the need to have to flex my steez
that's my style for all of you who don't remember hearing that on BET
I swear to the fucking spaghetti monster god up in the sky
if I hear one more kid talk about his gat I'll fucking cry
and when I finish sobbing I'll hunt you down and tell your mother
that you're sitting on the internet, tryin to be one bad something-or-other
see, I got respect for my elders, so I won't curse at your moms
but I will take some photos of you wearing your skirt, sweater and pom poms
cause we all know you like to dress up like a woman and touch yourself in the mirror
they did an expose on that shit on News Hour with Jim Lehrer
It turns out if your kid acts like a thug chances are he's gay
not trying to call anyone out, man, but keep your homosexuality at bay
I realize I normally incorporate a vocabulary that is spectacular
but today I'm feeling gully, so I'll use the ghetto vernacular
I'll crush you kids, I won't take shit
from someone who wears his fucking pants below his hips
and you can throw that "white tee thats down below your knees"
right in the fucking trash, that shit makes you look obese
like a 300 pound marshmellow with a sideways Knicks cap
who likes to open his mouth and watch his fucking lips flap
and probably fell in love with the sound of his own voice
I can assure you, in the rhyme game you're not the people's choice
I mean, at least you're not sitting here biting Ice T
oh wait, that's old school, let me reference someone you see
on a regular basis when you watch your MTV
I mean, cribs would never lie about how hot the streets can be
anyway, back to what I was saying, you act like you're "fiddy cent"
and every time you hear his shit you pitch a fucking tent
you homo fan boy wannabe abercrombie and fitch ghetto masterpieces
make me want to vomit and then scoop up all the pieces
and force them down your throat so that you can choke on my damn lunch
and then I'll ressucitate you, so I can rape you and introduce you to the "donkey punch"
we'll video tape the event so that the whole world can see
how a pussy little wanna be gangster got donkey punched by me.
"Riot"
11-20-2007, 02:38 PM
shittt.
dope verse.
Vagrant
11-20-2007, 02:43 PM
ddddaaaaaaammnn
CRN-one
11-20-2007, 02:47 PM
thanks. I try not to fuck around.
"Riot"
11-20-2007, 02:48 PM
CRN-ONE just raped this thread.
Violently.
CRN-one
11-20-2007, 02:50 PM
and you just made my sig. haha
"Riot"
11-20-2007, 02:51 PM
Haha SCORE!
TylerDurden
11-20-2007, 02:58 PM
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang
to think crn was going to try battle me...lol thats some A-grade rhymes...
MainEvent
11-20-2007, 08:16 PM
good shit man, nice concept piece putting kids in place on typing up shit they have no business typing haha. appreciate the shoutout, stay up
Hidden Teknique
11-20-2007, 09:21 PM
CRN-one spit a long ass verse, and brought on the reign
lecturing these kids on freestyling without speaking their name
big-ups to him, he came hard and let his words play into motion
answering this threads biggest problems while getting across his notion
he spit complex, but yet simple enough for kids to comprehend him
he told a story and taught a lecture, without closing off with a proper endin'
giving shout outs to my boys main and hood, and we all know that nostra is good
but i'm not dick riding, more of just giving a lyricist props
he just cleaned this thread with his lines, wipin em up without mops
and i'll admit i've spit about gats in my raps, but never that i shot shit
sayin just as much as i know about guns, thats that i never had it
i'm not ghetto, nor am i even close to livin in on a sketchy block
just like CRN said, these kids got two hands but no nine, unlike a clock
so they cannot say they killin kids in the street with they mad glock
i didn't know what to say when i started typin this shit on the spot
but this keystyle has shown to be one of my better one's for rappin
so jack some other kid's bars, all you doin is kidnappin
but then again, it's there, so it's about to happen
Oink.
11-21-2007, 06:37 AM
malt liquor wishes like a spool of drowning fishes
better to sit back and do the dishes, sinking in the sink
tottler unable to think, kick form of rhyme to put perspective on the current elective, subdued and selective a profit private detective
pen hits the paper
sets the world to vapor
set out to harm, battle arms making money no car alarms.
ah pullin shit outve my ass.
CRN-one
11-21-2007, 10:41 AM
I hate to come up last,
but I come strong and I come fast
my medula oblongata is throbbing from the pressure,
rhymes in my mind so dense that you can not measure
put on the Leak Bros and let it all hang out
call out the Shermanator and watch the haters pout
seein shit with my third eye while my other two blind,
going out of my damn fool mind,
air bubbles slip through veins,
causing a massive embolism in my brain,
left having a seziure on the ground
I'll leave a pretty corpse to be found
I shake and shudder,
right ventricle goes spat-spat-sputter,
lay it all out so there is no doubt
cut my chest open, CPR with a car battery and a razor blade, street surgery is what its about
ressurect me to the rhymes and in time maybe I'll be fine, maybe I'll just die, but in all honesty I won't be missed
my vocalizations make me a legend and a monster all at once, crowds be clapping but by the end they're all pissed
I'm not famous, just legendary, I don't front or pretend to be the virgin mary
I'm not perfect, far from it, dope addict by day, at night the anti-superhero - CRN-Scary
I'm the asshole that shot your grandma for five bucks to buy a bag
feel remorse? of course, but only for the fact that she was a broke old hag
if she had a couple bucks more then I might have actually gotten high
now I'm just angry and out stabbing hookers, I only nut when they cry
abused as a child, they force fed me bad feelings and made me into a psychotic
drinkin bleach, cuttin my teeth, like a David Lynch movie all twisted on narcotics
not my best but it's early and I'm not really that high yet haha
give me time.
and keep posting people, lets keep this thread alive - and please, no more fake wankster bullshit, ok?
AnteUp
11-21-2007, 12:03 PM
thas the longest fuckin verse i ever seen...
CRN-one
11-21-2007, 12:45 PM
did you see my verse on the last page? it's twice as long haha
"Riot"
11-21-2007, 12:53 PM
3415
La Coka Nostra
11-21-2007, 01:04 PM
use bars bro...
2 lines = 1 bar
last word of every bar rhymes.
"Riot"
11-21-2007, 01:05 PM
I don't understand?
never heard of bars?
CRN-one
11-21-2007, 01:06 PM
it's elementary, son.
bars comprise verses.
it's an easier way to organize your shit, too.
Vagrant
11-21-2007, 01:42 PM
bars are musical. it's more frequently referred to as a measure. 4 beats to ever measure in standard 4/4 time.
you guys are talking about stanzas
but I suppose its all the same, either way Riot you gotta learn the game
connect them thoughts with critical acclaim, end the lines with rhymes to earn some fame.
GeSuS_KRiST
11-21-2007, 02:12 PM
Whos this?
Riots on the track,gonna try to bring this thread back/
This is spittin reality,not click clacks involved,I'm going to leave this puzzle solved/
Started out at the age of 14,started out rough,like a ruptured spleen/
Everything went down,started to drown in my own emotions/
I was sick of all the mental detentions and was going to just get it over with/
Kill myself,not for fame,but meaning it with the best intentions/
Afterwards,there would've been no consequences,nothing at all/
but look at me now,over six foot tall.
be back later.
oh em gee like EL oh EL....
another verse cursed from a lyrical hell
theres no god in sight, you got no bright light
your shits grabage.. fuck you and have a wonderfully night
Oink.
11-21-2007, 04:38 PM
spittin over funky beats, to broke to afford the eats. its that welfare bangin on table beats
immediate intermediate media brought right to yah. im gunna blow like coke spittin redicouls its almost a joke.
"Riot"
11-21-2007, 09:56 PM
shit my bad haha.
I was high and I don't even know why I wrote that but yeah.
I'll get something new up.
fuckk.
SeapNSR
11-21-2007, 11:07 PM
i leave mcs mouths locked up like battery hens
get off my dick this is where the flattery ends
cuz that shit will get you nowhere
like james colbert
on flight two one two
plus you cheesy like fondue
i burn your whole crew
like straight bacardi one five one down your throat like cum
senses hazing but i stay blazing
until i wake up adjacent
to a police station
with a citation
for bombing the whole nation
but i'll beat the charge
and have the judges wife beat me til i charge
all over her face BLAAAAWWWWWWWHHH
the bitch ugly but ill pretend she's jenna haze
BLLLLLAWWWWHHH
no fucking around i cut to the chase
justice system is a fucking disgrace
a teenage life ended
and the defendent
gets out 3 weeks later as recomended
by some fuckbag who should get beheaded
brothers get longer for writing on a wall shit just forget it
fuck the police
fuck the justice of the peace
and fuck you fake mcs with no soul
SeapNSR
11-21-2007, 11:12 PM
my dog just came in and i thought that itd probably be more enjoyable to be a dog than a person cuz i cbf being alive today so i wrote some stuff
why must i be human?
all i do is make an animal of myself
not concerned about wealth, health,
go to the liquor store and buy a whole shelf
no self respect
mindset intercepted
i was disconnected
rejected
but wont be ejected
or disrespected
by wack infected
pop music molesters
ive elected
to have you re-invented
and invested
in an aids infested
prostitute thats interested
in making sure youre well rested
so the next bitch you get with
could be the last
to get your dick erected
and even if you have your sex protected
shell have your testicles dissected
but meanwhile..
back at the ranch
i got another chance
and came back as lion
hunting food is how im survivin
so why must i be human?..
always thinking negatively
but repetitivley
claiming no one is better than me
so youd better be banning me
from your pub cuz not all is fine and dandy
when i get on the shandy
its like kids on candy
with markers paint and maybe
a little weed on the side
cuz sometimes id prefer to be fried
than deal with the reality
that im not a monkey
fuck evolution why must i be human?
MainEvent
11-22-2007, 12:13 AM
structure your ish.
MainEvent
11-22-2007, 12:16 AM
oh em gee like EL oh EL....
another verse cursed from a lyrical hell
theres no god in sight, you got no bright light
your shits grabage.. fuck you and have a wonderfully night
el em ay oh "fuck you and have a wonderful night"
GeSuS_KRiST
11-22-2007, 03:23 AM
i keeps it on a personal friendly note when im spiting dope rhymes =)
HoodRichSucka
11-22-2007, 02:19 PM
the most respected, non - disease infested.
the inspected inspectah. the rz the resarectah
i was reserected by him, complexion with complex texture.
the tention rose and mentions of lectures was presented.
the affection of his intentions was deep, the election.
i voted with the impression he was the best of his section.
bout rza. ha
AnteUp
11-22-2007, 03:08 PM
i wanna, tick tickle you,
wit tha tip o' mah dick'le do,
no tellin wat ima do,
when i come to get ridda you,
you silly boo, you a silly bitch,
who thought you'd take a nap in a ditch..
maybe it was me, see baybee, lately,i bin feelin greatly,
misproportioned, head in mah undies,you must see,
my head in my assssss
hehe shits and giggles,
leaft over anger, for a bitch that used ta be mah angel
MonoR
11-22-2007, 04:16 PM
yo you say shut the fuck up/
i say back the fuck up or end up in a dump truck/
you dumb fuck cant speak cause you lips are stuck/
you got one foot in the muk/
and your runin outa luck cause you see im the one drivin the dam truck/
get up off yo ass and get mashed/
see you level of luaghs ive surpassed/
why aint u replyin ur computer crash/
i got a secret stash of cash/
just to humiliate you in in the past/
your lifes gone in a flash/
all cause of one line and a wanabe bash/
now im forced to slash/
and a king always handles your wack toy ass!
i wish it had sens.
MonoR
11-22-2007, 04:46 PM
your an human trash
blast you and put you in a bag
my flow untouchable even micheal jackson cant touch it
you need a lesson a spit in the face, stop actin strong
or youll get jacked son, all of you guy cant put a word on me
you call me a pussy while six dicks are frontin whit me
i never choked and i never will
every line there was a mothafuckin choke!
you think you a playa? you dont push, you a joke.
try to scrap with me ill getcha neck in a yoke,
getcha back broke, getcha weed toked,
nah this aint cheech and chong but you be up in smoke.
now get back in cellar so i can drop yo momma some coke.
sketch3
11-22-2007, 05:15 PM
crn wrote a long ass verse,
skoolin kids who talk about''no questions asked first''
please all the fakers quit, cuss u passed merked,
bunch of faggots rockin grass skirts,
get bent over, an ur ass hurt,
bet its painfull wen ur boy blasts squirts,
of semen, in ur high,left u screamin till u die,
u either dreamin, or u high,
if u doubt im a demon, who stays fly,
way up in the sky, come at u like death from above,
u need my lyrics, like breath or ur mothers love,
MonoR
11-22-2007, 05:58 PM
stop acting tough and accept the fact that your wack
bit.CHEEZ
11-22-2007, 06:12 PM
do u even know what structure means?
Passleoinj
11-22-2007, 07:43 PM
babidiboubla
MainEvent
11-23-2007, 12:14 AM
me verse one, hiddentechnique verse two
yes yes yall, ya know mains back, the textcee epitome
officially, one of the nicest to ever kick soliloquies
systemically ending careers of kids who only secrete deceit
dawg my rhymes resonate elite, exceeding benchmarks they fail to meet
these kids is garbage, subject to wannabe rapper segregation
i'm cumin with that deeper shit like intense anal penetration
on another level like CRN schooling cats claiming they toking techs
you're leaving your cat out in the rain while ive got your bitch's pussy wet
oh lord, fanatical foursomes once they panty and blouse flies
got me feeling im fucking the whole cast of the desperate housewives
like putting eva longoria into states of sexual euphoria
give teri hatcher a midnight ride and leave that ginger bitch outside
even though shes irish too, reppin my heritage from start to finish
these girls shallow my baby batter and say it tastes like a pint of guinness
yup, unfortunately my hype verses always degress into sexual material
gotta admit though, cant help but use hoes breast milk for my cereal
just a bonus the kid can spit, mad prolific and so imperial
to get these chicas off the chestnuts, gonna take more than a Christmas miracle
fuckin verbally vibrant, best believe on tracks mains the giant
the textual tyrant, exploding with projectile fluids like fire hydrants
and ya know its straight, the dudes the illest on the eastern sea board
fuckin adored from Singapore to tropical shores in El Salvador
lyrical snipe to the temple, primarily promoting potent potential
Mains doing the breaststroke on beats and the butterfly on instrumentals
im that fresh, top 3 of this thread with profesh texts for days
get mad melodic off gorgous ganja and exotic strains of haze
the MainTechnique ending the fallacy of guns, bling, and cars
only Guantanamo Bay has more high priority subjects and maximum security bars
ya dig? Raekwon the Chef couldn't cook a meal more impecible
the Main course is so spicy and raw, shits borderline indigestible
gonna need some hip hop Peptobismal to help this settle and dissolve
shaolin fist to the chest, damn, problem resolved
ayo alliterations the arsenal, punchlines are the herbal thats blessin me
metaphors are the ocean, similes keepin it hot are the westerlies
but fam, i'd be spittin if MCing wasn't fashionable like bikinis in Iran
Main and Tec putting shit on house arrest like political protesters in pakistan
goddamn, the duo is too dope while you still ass like sodomy
time to pass it to my boy Technique, spittin verses chronologically
ironically, i spit atomically in a complex verse
my style is unique and completely outta this earth
my flow is strong, disciplined, and militant
trained with a license to kill, so i'm killin it
when i type, my shit is malicious and tremendous
i tried to explain it once, but y'all can't comprehend it
with a lyrical fitness that is so intense and immense
i'm here to conquer this thread, ready commence
typin quick with main, off the top of the dome
lyrical homicide will put you in bed at a funeral home
your whole life will become a lost thought of a memory
you were never shit more of an unknown identity
when i grace this thread you know i got the remedy
technique and main, distribute lyrical chemistry
we will be the founders of all these bs cipher pages
knockin out un-lyrical bitches and toys for the ages
we ain't countin bodies or taking a single name
the maintechnique is about to unleash a lyrical reign
introducing the new brand of a lyrical menace or fiend
when two brothers spit it comes to you as a unbelievable dream
a hidden event that is sophisticated, a vicious team
with cans in the hands, fitted brims, and that green
you know our stroke is mean, we are unstoppable
when we team up, anyone defeatin us is improbable
go ahead do the math get out all your calculators
you just hate to hate, so you are all considered haters
brand and label me and main untouchable
our rhymes are like hoes, they're fuckable
something you can bump to, can't get enough
main and technique are legit, so i'm a call your bluff
we hold the deck, it's gonna be a royal flush
stop movin flappin your fuckin lips boy hush
i'm sorry we had to be a lyrical disaster so devastatin
we gonna put this thread in shock, you've all been waitin
we can keystyle shit right on the spot
we got flow, yours is clogged and stopped
MonoR
11-23-2007, 12:44 PM
its so long, i dont even wanna read it...
Vagrant
11-23-2007, 12:56 PM
thats because they're so much better than you, your head would most likely explode.
Small Time Crook
11-23-2007, 01:22 PM
now little boy wants to roll with the big *****s
the kinda cats who always bustin caps and clutch triggas
go figure, little boy growin up gettin bigga
money overflow from the drugs hes sold
lookin clean head to toe, dip and strut
people lookin like what the fuck
aint that the schmuck who had no luck
couldnt find his place, his niche
people couldnt remember his face, called him a bitch
now he's slangin that dope and writin rhymes
like its goin out of style, raised his hope now he primed
dont give up fuck about a simple 9-5
because the only money he knows is dirty
and we all know young ***** prolly gonna die early
cuz hes up on the block, posted up constantly
even when he throws shit up all he thinks is "please dont bust shots at me"
whats the point of makin money when all you do is fearin
aint you been hearin what i said in a proper direction i want you steerin
words searin so hot, and it aint for not
meltin panties off exposin that twat
gotta wanna get it like a muthafucka cuz these hoodrats is triflin
be all up on ya dick gettin you all excited
then when they find out you broke they simple say bye kid
hope no one else makes the same mistakes that I did
there we go, got it in the proper place now. hehe..
MonoR
11-23-2007, 02:23 PM
thats because they're so much better than you, your head would most likely explode.
i bet you think your cool, but i got a trick in my pocket for you
look at my hand, here come the middle finger, fuck you!
dam monor youre so good...youre my hero...
Vagrant
11-23-2007, 02:38 PM
i bet you think your cool, but i got a trick in my pocket for you
look at my hand, here come the middle finger, fuck you!
Well, unfortunately I don't think I'm cool, so now you can add being wrong to your list:
1) Suck at freestyling
2) French
3) Wrong
MonoR
11-23-2007, 04:07 PM
dam monor youre so good...youre my hero...
wipe ya mouf
Oink.
11-23-2007, 04:12 PM
sez is acting like hes gettin free mustach rides
turn back time and let the tides subside
silly bitch try to confide
no room for error you cant hide
i am sooooo fucking bored.
MonoR
11-23-2007, 05:00 PM
you wanna battle
gotta bring me something better than a english man , an african and a cattle
fuck yall , frontin against me is just suicidal
la coka nostra , sketch3 sez and hidden technique
you bitches so dumb , shouldnt be allowed to speak
getting asskicked by me in front of your peeps
its a shame that you aint good enough for me
cause im the one who's the realest here
so take that keyboard before i slap your face with it and knock you out
shut the fuck up and stop running your mouth
i dont dig all the shit youre trying to shout
half the people here are bored nerds with no future
i aint like that ,im here to stay whatever you say whatever you do theres no cure
monor is in the place thats for sure
face it or not ill be back stronger, taking the little bit of life left from you
what about a right and a left for you
my jab is too brutal , that shit couldve killed you
but i wouldnt touch you bare fist , i would need fucking gloves
cause that shit you trying to say is too dirty for me
im so clean my people call me dove
why you frontin gee , youre too fuckin silly
in first grade you were probably the guy getting wedgies and wet willies
you motherfuckas dont know how to ride a beat
so i guess jealousy will take over your soul , as i see
cause this thing is governing your whole shit already
see , im used in your daily vocabulary , im everywhere in the streets
its gonna take me more than e-thugs to get me out of here.
MainEvent
11-23-2007, 10:09 PM
me verse one, hiddentechnique verse two
yes yes yall, ya know mains back, the textcee epitome
officially, one of the nicest to ever kick soliloquies
systemically ending careers of kids who only secrete deceit
dawg my rhymes resonate elite, exceeding benchmarks they fail to meet
these kids is garbage, subject to wannabe rapper segregation
i'm cumin with that deeper shit like intense anal penetration
on another level like CRN schooling cats claiming they toking techs
you're leaving your cat out in the rain while ive got your bitch's pussy wet
oh lord, fanatical foursomes once they panty and blouse flies
got me feeling im fucking the whole cast of the desperate housewives
like putting eva longoria into states of sexual euphoria
give teri hatcher a midnight ride and leave that ginger bitch outside
even though shes irish too, reppin my heritage from start to finish
these girls shallow my baby batter and say it tastes like a pint of guinness
yup, unfortunately my hype verses always degress into sexual material
gotta admit though, cant help but use hoes breast milk for my cereal
just a bonus the kid can spit, mad prolific and so imperial
to get these chicas off the chestnuts, gonna take more than a Christmas miracle
fuckin verbally vibrant, best believe on tracks mains the giant
the textual tyrant, exploding with projectile fluids like fire hydrants
and ya know its straight, the dudes the illest on the eastern sea board
fuckin adored from Singapore to tropical shores in El Salvador
lyrical snipe to the temple, primarily promoting potent potential
Mains doing the breaststroke on beats and the butterfly on instrumentals
im that fresh, top 3 of this thread with profesh texts for days
get mad melodic off gorgous ganja and exotic strains of haze
the MainTechnique ending the fallacy of guns, bling, and cars
only Guantanamo Bay has more high priority subjects and maximum security bars
ya dig? Raekwon the Chef couldn't cook a meal more impecible
the Main course is so spicy and raw, shits borderline indigestible
gonna need some hip hop Peptobismal to help this settle and dissolve
shaolin fist to the chest, damn, problem resolved
ayo alliterations the arsenal, punchlines are the herbal thats blessin me
metaphors are the ocean, similes keepin it hot are the westerlies
but fam, i'd be spittin if MCing wasn't fashionable like bikinis in Iran
Main and Tec putting shit on house arrest like political protesters in pakistan
goddamn, the duo is too dope while you still ass like sodomy
time to pass it to my boy Technique, spittin verses chronologically
ironically, i spit atomically in a complex verse
my style is unique and completely outta this earth
my flow is strong, disciplined, and militant
trained with a license to kill, so i'm killin it
when i type, my shit is malicious and tremendous
i tried to explain it once, but y'all can't comprehend it
with a lyrical fitness that is so intense and immense
i'm here to conquer this thread, ready commence
typin quick with main, off the top of the dome
lyrical homicide will put you in bed at a funeral home
your whole life will become a lost thought of a memory
you were never shit more of an unknown identity
when i grace this thread you know i got the remedy
technique and main, distribute lyrical chemistry
we will be the founders of all these bs cipher pages
knockin out un-lyrical bitches and toys for the ages
we ain't countin bodies or taking a single name
the maintechnique is about to unleash a lyrical reign
introducing the new brand of a lyrical menace or fiend
when two brothers spit it comes to you as a unbelievable dream
a hidden event that is sophisticated, a vicious team
with cans in the hands, fitted brims, and that green
you know our stroke is mean, we are unstoppable
when we team up, anyone defeatin us is improbable
go ahead do the math get out all your calculators
you just hate to hate, so you are all considered haters
brand and label me and main untouchable
our rhymes are like hoes, they're fuckable
something you can bump to, can't get enough
main and technique are legit, so i'm a call your bluff
we hold the deck, it's gonna be a royal flush
stop movin flappin your fuckin lips boy hush
i'm sorry we had to be a lyrical disaster so devastatin
we gonna put this thread in shock, you've all been waitin
we can keystyle shit right on the spot
we got flow, yours is clogged and stopped
bumpin to next page
sketch3
11-24-2007, 02:03 PM
man theres sum nice bars up in here,
but theres alot of wack shit,
bitches actin problematic,
my shits doper than ur first crack hit,
make u wanna attack it,
with verbel gats, thats rapid,
but u dont pack it ,
talking bout papers but u don stack it,
say shit tha make me wanna use vigelante taticts,
not directed at main
La Coka Nostra
11-24-2007, 03:38 PM
la coka nostra , sketch3 sez and hidden technique
you bitches so dumb , shouldnt be allowed to speak
get my name out of your mouth.
i'm not in this.
MainEvent
11-24-2007, 07:07 PM
Beef Beef
Hidden Teknique
11-24-2007, 07:36 PM
not directed at main
That aimed at my verse in there then?
Clowney-Cakes
11-24-2007, 08:12 PM
teknique, come on man listen to me
were ALL sick of hearing the same shit week afrer week
you got some steez, we understand that
now youll listen to me, while i give you a tip on how to rap
i may suck, but i talk about real shit
can you say that? can you say your stuff is stright piff
you repeat your self in every keystyle with diffrent words
hell, most the time you even use the same old verbs
its getting old fam, your like a skippen cd
im tellen ya man, plez i beg of you listen to me
we cant handel one more rhyme
go ahead come back at me, take your time
i could careless what you say
just remember your not as dope as you are gayy
Hidden Teknique
11-24-2007, 08:16 PM
wow, thats like the third time you've said that.
I really don't give a fuck.
Because I could still rape half of the kids on this site.
Minus...Mainevent, Nostra, Durden's ok when he actually spits it, Bouncingsoul, and CRN-One.
Case Closed.
Clowney-Cakes
11-24-2007, 08:18 PM
but would you rape the kids in the site?
eww
are you gay?
Hidden Teknique
11-24-2007, 08:20 PM
hmmm, e-rape....don't really know how that would work out.
Clowney-Cakes
11-24-2007, 08:27 PM
wow, im soooooo gayyyyyy gay gay blah blahh
Because I would still LOVE to rape half of the lil BOYS on this site.
imgay-people i would rape-...Mainevent, Nostra, Durden's ok when he actually spits it, Bouncingsoul, and CRN-One.
Case Closed.
^^SKETCH
Hidden Teknique
11-24-2007, 08:29 PM
HAHAHAHHA, editing other people's post is so original....
did you come up with that on your own...i've never seen that done before.
Hidden Teknique
11-24-2007, 08:32 PM
wipe ya mouf
Monor is also illeterate, and can not apparently spell words correctly....slang is for french hoes.
"Riot"
11-24-2007, 09:51 PM
Its saturday night,I'm left here spittin ryhmes to myself.
Let me tell ya, I'm not that normal book off the shelfs.
But I'm left here reading the same shit,monor your beyond belief.
You and your gang need to bounce,that would be a slight relief.
If you have beef to settle,I don't have to flash no metal.
I'll slay you with words,syllables,and verbs,comin at you in herds.
Gesus say my verses are from lyrical hell,but who the hell is he to tell me,
Right from wrong,I'm the only one on this track,no playback or repeat.
I'm the one spillin words,now you need to take a step back.
This aint no internet beef but this is critisizm to the slightest.
I may be a toy,but this comin from the brightest.
That you can't stop me,I'm the fast lane,going insane.
Fuckin sittin here,speakin to myself,I think I'm going crazy.
Thoughts arent clear,my eyesight has gone hazy.
I should be out paintin but its like 30 degrees.
Can't stand that shit,to cold it's gonna make me sneeze.
I'm going to make this verse go long,gotta stay strong.
I gotta stay up,don't want to be forgotten,so take a hit of the bong.
Take a ride in the clouds,I'm right where I belong.
wayyy to higghh!
yezzzirRR!
Slushi
11-24-2007, 09:53 PM
Yo...man
I'm terrible
Sumoe
11-24-2007, 10:08 PM
My words bring so much pain I'm so dope, a psychic motherfucker/
That'll hang you with no rope/
Leave you with no hope, cut you and your ho's throat/
With no blade, leave you stranded in the waves with no boat/
Your rhymes make "Soulja Boi" look like a lyrical monster/
I stand up straight, confident, with imperial posture/
You said some shit, but I lost you, didn't make any sense/
I'll put on hit on you and your fam for a fraction of twenty cents/
Just stay back, and stop trying, you're annoying and too persistent
P.S. your "Technique" is not "Hidden" it is nonexistent.
LOL, no beef, Hidden Technique. I was just bored.
MainEvent
11-24-2007, 11:18 PM
wordzilla, sumoe the flippino beast, whats good fam
Hidden Teknique
11-25-2007, 12:06 AM
taking no names,
fuckin gorgeous dames,
doing a buck and change,
goin hard switchin lanes,
front seat road brain,
a little teeth bringin the pain,
nuttin in the car leavin a stain
white shit on her nose like cocaine
got her wet just like rain
gettin laid or head my only aim
playin this is a fun game
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 12:21 AM
my rhymes are illicit, at times hard to hear/
lines so consistant, drop bombs far and near/
lyrical madness a result, of my vicious antics/
spiritual shrink u'll consult, from my malecious tactics/
i mean what i say, not being facetious/
dead serious like the prophet, the only Jesus/
death was brought up once, but they had to survive/
meth was the option, but with, they would not thrive/
last thing before i end, i have something to tell/
i can rap dispite what you say, so u can go to hell..
MonoR
11-25-2007, 12:26 AM
Monor is also illeterate, and can not apparently spell words correctly....slang is for french hoes.
dude, its not my problem if you have a noodle face!
if you cant read the criminal slang, get the fuck out and get my dick out of your mouth man
i never fronted
"Riot"
11-25-2007, 12:28 AM
noodle face?
did you really just fucking call him a noodle face?
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 12:31 AM
hes right, 'noodle face' is criminal slang...hardcore shit u know
"Riot"
11-25-2007, 12:39 AM
Am I missing something?
Or am I just mentally retarded?
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 12:39 AM
i was being sarcastic man....................
"Riot"
11-25-2007, 12:40 AM
as was I :)
Glad to see I made it into your sig. thats 2.
:D
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 12:41 AM
hahahaha, its funny shit. i mean, noodle face...?comeonnnnnnn
"Riot"
11-25-2007, 12:44 AM
haha no shit!
I realllyyyy hope he doesn't find that offensive to others.
if so,
bless his soul ;)
bouncingsoul
11-25-2007, 01:58 AM
I guess it's time for me to come out and put all the haters on blast
Like a broadway reviewer I'll sit here and tear apart the cast
but what I won't do is try to get my ghetto card
by talking shit about nines and gats and rock and tryin to act hard
I swear I come correct and I keep my shit legit
and I'd rather insult you with large words that you won't even get
I could call you all out but that seems like a waste of time
the last thing I'd want to do is throw away one single rhyme
on someone that's as worthless as some of the kids in this thread
I'd rather blow a line of rat poison and let you all find me dead
so you can sit around tomorrow and be like "ah man, he's gone"
"we wish we had listened when he tried to help us along"
"we really should have stopped acting raw and paid some attention"
"cause every time he spit a verse it was like a fucking lesson"
back to basics, kids, lets start with something entry level:
volume one, section A - rhyming is essential, it's entirely instrumental
to the whole entire process of the art of freestyle
you can't just lift a mic and run your mouth and say you're wild
oh, I'm sorry, I forgot that it's now cool to say "wyle out"
I guess thats why when you all talk I seriously have my doubts
that any of you have even been to the hood
let alone lived there, killed there, or clocked there - that's understood
You all gonna run your mouths like a bunch of pussy bitches
this last sentence does not apply to my friends, you guys keep me in stitches
Coka Nostra got my back on this lyrical assault mission
Main Event is new to me but he's moving into second position
HoodRich - I'll always have your back, let them talk trash
we'll string together rhymes of variable intensity until we put them on smash
Bouncing Soul, I know we never worked together but it's chill
every time you drop a rhyme you straight up fucking kill
But honestly, I don't feel the need to have to flex my steez
that's my style for all of you who don't remember hearing that on BET
I swear to the fucking spaghetti monster god up in the sky
if I hear one more kid talk about his gat I'll fucking cry
and when I finish sobbing I'll hunt you down and tell your mother
that you're sitting on the internet, tryin to be one bad something-or-other
see, I got respect for my elders, so I won't curse at your moms
but I will take some photos of you wearing your skirt, sweater and pom poms
cause we all know you like to dress up like a woman and touch yourself in the mirror
they did an expose on that shit on News Hour with Jim Lehrer
It turns out if your kid acts like a thug chances are he's gay
not trying to call anyone out, man, but keep your homosexuality at bay
I realize I normally incorporate a vocabulary that is spectacular
but today I'm feeling gully, so I'll use the ghetto vernacular
I'll crush you kids, I won't take shit
from someone who wears his fucking pants below his hips
and you can throw that "white tee thats down below your knees"
right in the fucking trash, that shit makes you look obese
like a 300 pound marshmellow with a sideways Knicks cap
who likes to open his mouth and watch his fucking lips flap
and probably fell in love with the sound of his own voice
I can assure you, in the rhyme game you're not the people's choice
I mean, at least you're not sitting here biting Ice T
oh wait, that's old school, let me reference someone you see
on a regular basis when you watch your MTV
I mean, cribs would never lie about how hot the streets can be
anyway, back to what I was saying, you act like you're "fiddy cent"
and every time you hear his shit you pitch a fucking tent
you homo fan boy wannabe abercrombie and fitch ghetto masterpieces
make me want to vomit and then scoop up all the pieces
and force them down your throat so that you can choke on my damn lunch
and then I'll ressucitate you, so I can rape you and introduce you to the "donkey punch"
we'll video tape the event so that the whole world can see
how a pussy little wanna be gangster got donkey punched by me.
Actually started laughing at some of this stuff haha. Was tight
Went to Vegas and wrote some stuff under cellphone light at midnight on the way back... So then I'll continue it
it’s the circle of life turned elliptical, and I’m caught in between the curves conflicting
with headlights that flicker deeper in and out of my conscience
I can feel my mind a drifting
a soul ignited, I can envision precision of risen hearts
minds that find time to uplift, a mission, driven to do their part
find the start, never part and leave empty-handed
keep it going till knowledge is no longer branded
and stranded in between 2 worlds that hurl and twirl it careless
dares lest his fears, the arid, be commanded fearless
the twin soluble molecule, fallin on hurt that calls indefinitely
stalls amenably, imaginary itinerary, but I never planned to feel so chemically free
condemn the sleek, heed the unmistakable, breathe but don’t choke
laugh but don’t crack back a hollow smile, life fixed, never broke
never spoke, never showed my whole thoughts, the automatic reply
the spots are brought into light, taught caught and sent off to fly
Sumoe
11-25-2007, 02:08 AM
Noodle face, kittenkaboodle, poodle race/
Doodle on paper, biting snickerdoodles, Space/
Ing out, mad bored, kids these days are fad whores/
Fag stores, like Abercrombie and Fitch, just saying/
Maybe they're not for gays, but for people who like paying/
Numerous dollars, foolish collars, popped up/
Purchasing mad clothes, even, though they're already stocked up/
Do not mind me, just a kid with OCD/
Who can't sleep, I should be catching Z's/
But I'm watching Fresh Prince, with Carlton/
He's smaller than, all the other guys/
Small fries, fall sky, bye, bye/
I'm going to bed now/
I'm done with my pointless contribution to this thread now/
bouncingsoul
11-25-2007, 03:05 AM
you turned and I followed, swallowed my pride, drive tides of the mind
the kind that shine only mine, the sign that rhymes, holy crimes
story lines, chimes, rings a clock ticking, picking up pieces that always stay shifting
conditioning, missing a point, anoint a special, all-knowing, uplifting
split-second shining on long drawn songs that spawn
ideas furnished, burned with earnest currents of mind, I pawned
innocence, an inner sense of tense harmony of whence
drunks were punked, losers were used, we copped common sense
we dropped halos to the ground in protest, a grotesque imagination
steady deviation, start with one letter, spilled thoughts on paper the consummation
a nation dazed under a haze of global warming emissions
get high of chlorofluorocarbons, condition the superstitions
into digestible, detestable, easy-to-swallow, hollow “truths”
and I’ll say that in quotes, confused just cuz you can’t prove it
MonoR
11-25-2007, 02:46 PM
lol, riot and hoodbitchsucka
cant put a word me, im so fresh so clean, so me
fuck all the shit your saying, its like an homosexual party
making fun out of me, its juste making me laugh bitches
your so bad, probly born in a box, your mom was a hoe, and im your dad bro
sketch3
11-25-2007, 02:53 PM
just stop please its embaressing. ur stuff dosnt rhyme.
its not even wack. wack is when it makes sense but its just not good, ur stuff is beyond wack
"Riot"
11-25-2007, 02:59 PM
HAHAH!
it doesn't even qualify for being wack?
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 03:14 PM
noodle face? spray your ass with mace/
lace up my dunks and head to the slums/
drums heard round the world, for its me/
the wickest emcee, viciously walking with steez/
dont need to beef, for im the illest of all/
call the cops motherfucker, before you get shot and fall/
brawl with me, big mistake.. you'll see/
draw ur weapon fast, or ull be missing teeth/
breach in the corridors scream the police/
i teach the war lords how to kill and preach/
remember my name, for im here to stay/
like korn but more, hardcore like porn..
sketch3
11-25-2007, 03:21 PM
bitch u just a noodleface.
think u rule the place,
sum kinda retard used to work on force,
but he blew the case
lol im bord
Clowney-Cakes
11-25-2007, 03:27 PM
ill spit one before taken a nap
you awake me, the hmmer will hit the bullet..CLAP
dont start shit with a sleeping bare
ill be rubben your women vag, there better be no hair down there
dont stare at us man, thats rude
what i say in my rhymes is awalys crude
just accept it man, you know yous awalys benn be a fool
when im done spiten, youll be a veggy, all you can do is drewl
this is one for the books and another for the crooks
dont be given that sass, or them ditry looks
i just owned you man, you know what thay say about them fakeass shooks!
Set17
11-25-2007, 03:31 PM
yo yo yo lets blow this popsicle stand.. i like chocolate but candy is betterr... yo yo
..TwoShameFull..
11-25-2007, 03:33 PM
i hear my home calling, wanna get back to brawlin
the country born in, can hear my home callin
maybe if i go to sleep ill be back in the mornin
reminisce as i sit scrawling, i hear my home callin
wanna be back to the brawlin back in the mornin
i hear my home callin
screams a fire arms screech a car alarms
ill forever reach when i kno i cant
viscous like the streets of lebanon
minds fatigued, its a mental marathon
its been so long, cant sleep without the sirens
miss tha sensless violence hate the silence -
temptin my eyelids, homes is where my life is
heads alyways down - hands where my nife is
it shudn be like this, livin life without the game
without the play, yeah man it sounds great
but then ya never win, ya stuck in the same
repetitive cycle actin like a sedative, man i cant stay - sain
fact im goin stir crazy, sumone fuckin save me
cause lately i been gettin real fuckin bored waitin
tryin real hard not to floor dese haters
cant wait till im at the border with my fingers up
sayin see you the fuck laters.. cunts
i hear my home calling, wanna get back to brawlin
the country born in, can hear my home callin
maybe if i go to sleep ill be back in the mornin
reminisce as i sit scrawling, hear my home callin
wanna be back to the brawlin back in the mornin
i hear my home callin wanna be back to the brawlin
back in the mornin, hear my home callin
back in the day, i remember wen me n skelta wud blaze
you amateurs smoke nightly - bruv we took days
or kochin out with eddy - kainin a doob
chattin shit n spittin SICK to a hell of a tune
joe josh n matt, always ready for the blunt,
ain ever take shit no from no muggy cunt,
n that was dat, back in the days, bruv fuckin hell
theres just too many stories that i could tell,
grass is always greener on the other side,
im findin that hard to beleive standin on this side
i miss the people, n fuckin hell i miss the weed too
i miss the laughs an the nights that id have with my crew
i miss the petty crimes that paid dimes
i miss the times me n ed would take treks n rhyme
i miss the good times, bruv im tellin u, it aint right
survivin like this.. man i miss my life..
im so sick of bein home sick its hopeless
thats why i wrote this flow its to reminisce
n i know its been wot like a whole year now
dunno if my fam even remember im here now
the kid widout a gravestone, da forgotton sole
its been to long away from home, i dont
understand the reasoning behind this man
someones pushed the stop button on my life n its wank
i hear my home calling, wanna get back to brawlin
the country born in, can hear my home callin
maybe if i go to sleep ill be back in the mornin
reminisce as i sit scrawling, hear my home callin
wanna be back to the brawlin back in the mornin
i hear my home callin wanna be back to the brawlin
back in the mornin, hear my home callin
jus wanna let ya kno ya kno, im still here boys
mate smoke a blunt fa me, cause ill be back soon yeh
im countin da days, macks back summer 08
its gunna be mental boys trust me, yeah
Clowney-Cakes
11-25-2007, 03:35 PM
ill spit one before taken a nap
you awake me, the hmmer will hit the bullet..CLAP
dont start shit with a sleeping bare
ill be rubben your women vag, there better be no hair down there
dont stare at us man, thats rude
what i say in my rhymes is awalys crude
just accept it man, you know yous awalys benn be a fool
when im done spiten, youll be a veggy, all you can do is drewl
this is one for the books and another for the crooks
dont be given that sass, or them ditry looks
i just owned you man, you know what thay say about them fakeass shooks!
bumpp well.............i am dope
MonoR
11-25-2007, 03:39 PM
sketch 3 is funny, sumoe is funny, yall kids are so funnyyyyyyy hahaha
like do you really think i give a fuck about all the wack shit your saying?
i mean, this is fucken internet bitches, i dont give a damn about what the fuck your saying!!
if you get hit by a car, ill prolly never going to know it, your whole familly could get rape, but im not even going to care a second about all the shit your saying
cause the only thing you know about me is, im fron montreal and im laughin hard at allll of you
so peace, and dont forget if you die, im prolly not even going to know it!
sketch3
11-25-2007, 03:40 PM
edit
double post,
MONOR- ur such a fag
sketch3
11-25-2007, 03:41 PM
ill spit one before taken a nap
you awake me, the hmmer will hit the bullet..CLAP
dont start shit with a sleeping bare
ill be rubben your women vag, there better be no hair down there
dont stare at us man, thats rude
what i say in my rhymes is awalys crude
just accept it man, you know yous awalys benn be a fool
when im done spiten, youll be a veggy, all you can do is drewl
this is one for the books and another for the crooks
dont be given that sass, or them ditry looks
i just owned you man, you know what thay say about them fakeass shooks!
if you a sleepin bear,
then im that fool at weed spot,
with the gold locks,
run up in ur house while i hold glocks,
screamin''bitch weres the porridge''
damn this busines gory,
wait, wernt ther 3 bears in this story?,
that means thers 2 more dead,
dont make me put a bullet thru ur forhead,
ull get capped up like a crip if he wore red,
bitch ill call for gretal, who packs a beretta,
for that witch who boiled her brother with a ketal,
not seriouse i was only joking around
Clowney-Cakes
11-25-2007, 04:01 PM
uno, dos, three go ahead gangsta and smoke that tree
your the most generic cat that iv ever seen
ill spit back, and youll hit the ground
youll run im feer, when you hear im in town
watch out man, im commen after you
the croud will split as i walk through
an i know its not your falt your the thrid
i bet sketch1 and 2 were way better then you
but its ok, im a very forgiving cat
just make sure when you come to my crib, you wipe your feet on the mat
cuz i dont now of you dirt in my place
bitch, you look at me, dont you cover your face
well i guess it cool, cuz i just finshed you
spit again, ill just cme back at you...
haha im very bad, but is fun....no beef friend
ill spit one before taken a nap
you awake me, the hmmer will hit the bullet..CLAP
dont start shit with a sleeping bare
ill be rubben your women vag, there better be no hair down there
dont stare at us man, thats rude
what i say in my rhymes is awalys crude
just accept it man, you know yous awalys benn be a fool
when im done spiten, youll be a veggy, all you can do is drewl
this is one for the books and another for the crooks
dont be given that sass, or them ditry looks
i just owned you man, you know what thay say about them fakeass shooks!
first off learn how to spell always now go and stand in your doorway,
fuck you clowney cake im bringing an earthquake,
talk bout shooks my shit'll shake and rock your foundation
your heart starts pacing and your mind starts racing,
the skill that your facing has got you disgracing........your crew lol
Clowney-Cakes
11-25-2007, 04:24 PM
aww man, why you have to be so mean...i was just trying to look tought on line...
Vagrant
11-25-2007, 04:31 PM
why hasn't monor been banned yet?
he doesn't even post any graff or anything.
MonoR
11-25-2007, 04:37 PM
cause bombing science is actually a montreal forum, and people who live in montreal, see my shit and i dont give a shit about yall lost american bitches
and sketch 3- your such an african emo... go cut your vein kid
La Coka Nostra
11-25-2007, 04:37 PM
all he's doing is just trying to piss everyone off.
so just ignore his wack ass.
he is sitting there saying "blah blah blah, its the internet"
and then he comes back 10 mins later and talks more shit.
it's like a big circle of retardation.
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 05:48 PM
all he's doing is just trying to piss everyone off.
so just ignore his wack ass.
he is sitting there saying "blah blah blah, its the internet"
and then he comes back 10 mins later and talks more shit.
it's like a big circle of retardation.
exactly^
Hidden Teknique
11-25-2007, 06:17 PM
hmm....did i not say like 10 pages back stop talking to him and he'll stop talking trash.
sketch3
11-25-2007, 06:24 PM
talking about who????
im sure if such a fool did exscist we would all be mature and ignore them...
TylerDurden
11-25-2007, 06:40 PM
man, ya'll can't see me in this thread.
HoodRichSucka
11-25-2007, 09:25 PM
^that wasnt random...
bit.CHEEZ
11-25-2007, 09:56 PM
cause bombing science is actually a montreal forum, and people who live in montreal, see my shit and i dont give a shit about yall lost american bitches
and sketch 3- your such an african emo... go cut your vein kid
HEY I LIVE IN MTL AND GUYS, I CAN ENSURE YOU THAT YOU GUYS FROM AMERICA ARE.... FUCKIN ....
LUCKY TO NOT LIVE IN MTL AND SEE HIS SHITS
LOL HAHAHAHA
Small Time Crook
11-25-2007, 11:23 PM
listening to Worst Enemy by Tech N9ne..
ahem
my homie, my friend, you left me deceived
now every day i grieve
because it was you i thought i could believe
see, you were always with me, i took your advice
you acted nice but little did i know you was trife
had me doin stupid shit i aint wanted to do
like when we was at the club, that bitch aint want me she wanted you
and because of that i left my baby cryin
tired of you, every time you spit talk its lyin
tell me ***** what the fuck should i do
step aside and motherfuckin blindly follow you?
ever since i started takin your word aint been nothin but trouble
now i got a baby with that bitch from the club, shits been doubled
my girl wants to leave me cuz i cant get you under control
tell me bro, why you wanna be with them hoes?
c'mon and tell me homie, was it all fuckin worth it?
to have me turn on her and have her tell me im worthless?
this just aint workin, if we wasnt so close you'd get deserted
took care of you all the time, like when you was burnin
sufferin, tried to convince me you aint want nothin
but i still took to your aid mane, you kin now that gotta mean somethin
but yous a double crossin snake, D
why do we gotta share the same fate, D
had to betray trust and now its you she hates, D
but we in it together, so that means as well i suffer
yet you still knuck up actin tougher and tougher
tell me why you gotta have me feelin like this
wanna puke at night im feelin sick
gotta put me through all kinds of shit
and as you readin you know who you are, my dick.
MonoR
11-25-2007, 11:43 PM
HEY I LIVE IN MTL AND GUYS, I CAN ENSURE YOU THAT YOU GUYS FROM AMERICA ARE.... FUCKIN ....
LUCKY TO NOT LIVE IN MTL AND SEE HIS SHITS
LOL HAHAHAHA
lol ta kel gae 5 ans
tu voie mes shit mais taime juste trop ca ke tu cum shot en passant a comment je flow le shit
laffaire c ke, i love to hate and i love to get hated
mais toi tu choke
mon style tassure
koer1
11-26-2007, 12:08 AM
these bombers r mad weak with the rhymes ,ya whack
metaphores and bars sux ma ball sacks :DD
entry
11-26-2007, 02:27 AM
when will this pain stop
it continues like the rain drops
theres no beat but my lyrics are still hot
typical flow like new yorks earsnot
i just thought this out and i liked it
ill add more later goooooood night
Small Time Crook
11-26-2007, 02:46 AM
late at night, drunk as hell and im forced to ponder
en mi vida loca, when will i be the goner?
if jesus died in my place, then why do i fear death?
if ive lost it all, why do i try to pick up whats left?
laying on the ground, broken pieces of a mirror
like the reflection my future dont get clearer
to any other ***** who fronts like they plugged
you obviously aint never even seen a real thug
i seen cats with signs tatted on they faces
if you in it then you know for life its no basis
if you get killed here, murders almost traceless
but yea the po know it was prolly gang related
but so many sets around here who did its debated
signs getting flashed like titties at mardi gras
not to mention cats is wilin
dont hesitate to get violent
so dont flinch when they run up and buck at yawl
this aint no kinda song, it's a story, nonfiction
true to life, you get the chance to see how we livin
and if you snitchin like Judas you wont be forgivin
we the devil on earth and from us aint no deliverin
some wanna escape, never see another gun
others stay in it, buck shots just for fun
aint no future in this, either wind up crippled, in jail, or life gets terminated
and if you do get out of it, your aura is emanated
give off a glow that shows you did shit and people know
that you an unstable motherfucker, how you aint end up in a hole
just one lucky shawty who got his act together
but he mourns still, big brother did the same shit, he's gone forever.
eh...?
sketch3
11-26-2007, 07:09 AM
and sketch 3- your such an african emo... go cut your vein kid
lol thats almost the oposite way to describe me, not only do u need werk on lyrics but ur insults are retarded too
La Coka Nostra
11-26-2007, 02:25 PM
small time crook...
why would you copy and paste the lyrics of a tech n9ne song in here?
Small Time Crook
11-26-2007, 02:46 PM
theyre not his lyrics, bruh
i listened to the track, and used the theme.
WAH-PAM!
lol ta kel gae 5 ans
tu voie mes shit mais taime juste trop ca ke tu cum shot en passant a comment je flow le shit
laffaire c ke, i love to hate and i love to get hated
mais toi tu choke
mon style tassure
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
La Coka Nostra
11-26-2007, 03:42 PM
theyre not his lyrics, bruh
i listened to the track, and used the theme.
WAH-PAM!
word...at first i didn't think they were his lyrics, but the whole "MY DICK" thing at the end threw me for a loop. One of the only Tech N9ne songs I don't know like every word to lol.
Small Time Crook
11-26-2007, 03:48 PM
haha, i feel ya bruddah, i wanted to wrap it up with the my dick thing.
Small Time Crook, Big Time Copyright Infringement.
MonoR
11-27-2007, 04:55 PM
dick suckas , i scream fuck the industry
standin on top of this world with my whole family
dck motherfuckers , just started and we got plenty of enemies
who gives a shit , some people here are scared to tell they feelin me
words ill , shit's insane my raps are a disease
see , i fucked yall heads that easy
you guys are frontin but cant take on the beef that comes with it
yall hatin cause you cant handle the raps of a god
you should retire , go out and smoke some bud
cause none of yall can beat a thug
i can see in your eyes , the rage and the frustration
you cant see me , thats why you bitches dead in a moment
i didnt know the dead could think
you claim you a ruff ryder , but i aint the one wearing pink g strings
check
second verse i aint done yet
imma make this shit clear , i aint getting dissed by a viet
fuck you little hoe , think you can fuck with me , you bet
im maybe white , but so fresh they want me on BET
once i finished reading your shit i was like damn that guy's on PCP
you and your click should go away , or join the PCD
oh and by the way i saw your bitch fighting for one of my cd
my flow's consistent like potato soup
talking bout you , get what structure means cause that rap was poop
i got your nickname , official dick rider
cause every time i spits an OK verse you be like :
OH GOD LET ME SUCK THAT DICK ITS FIRE
i should call you JAWS just by the way you bite
next time you front make sure its not someone whose shit is hype
now die your so fuckin ugly , i dont want you on my sight
cause im not frontin , im just ready to fight
"Riot"
11-27-2007, 05:07 PM
I got you shakin,I'm clearly not mistaken/
your styles rough as sandpaper,got your skin flaken/
my styles smooth as silk,goin so big I'm makin your head tilt/
Don't discriminate,these words will make you evaporate with nothing left/
I can't believe your steppin to me,you need your fucking head examined/
You acted all hard,thought about leavin me scarred,but I just grinned/
You said I need jesus,looks like i just sinned/
Cause I just rocked ya ass,left ya out on the floor/
Turned around and slammed that fuckin door,shaken your core/
I'm sorry I didn't mean to leave your right eye sore/
You thought it would be a 123,but clearly more complicated/
Thought you were hard,you way overrated/
gotta eat right quick.
ill be right back.
MainEvent
11-27-2007, 06:11 PM
aww snap, tyler durden, are you the same dude whose upped all those flicks on SASTER?
bit.CHEEZ
11-27-2007, 10:27 PM
put osme attitude in ur text
bit.CHEEZ
11-27-2007, 10:33 PM
tu flow pas le shit
tu chie le flow
MonoR
11-27-2007, 11:27 PM
lol ptit comique
tu viendras mdire ca en pleine face le mince
MonoR
11-27-2007, 11:32 PM
tu chie le shit
toi tu mange des chips a marde ostie
toi t le vrai sinonyme de talkshit
t'es tu une marde, tout cke tu fait c en parler
tu parles tu parles,
mais toujours de nimporte koi
Small Time Crook
11-28-2007, 12:40 AM
ima leave you all shocked like what the fuck was that?
you know you gotta be prepared for street combat
spittin shit thats bad for you health just like hazmats
when the enemy punches you gotta fire back
like chess play mane use skill and tact
the enemy distorts the truth like hypochondriacs
gotta leave'em cryin like babies wonderin where their mommy at
words just eat away at ya brain like a zombie man
and all you do is fire back with weak shit like a .22
but my rhymes so fat the bullet wont even go through
just bounce off and sting a little
and the rain you make aint shit like a drizzle
i make it storm and whirlwinds get to tearin shit up
step in the way and like a bitch boy in prison you gettin fucked
why you hate my rhymes dawg i do half on acid
i cant even keep a straight face my ass is always laughin
then i pass out and wake up 10 minutes later like what happened?
had a bit of a burn today.
G-Fat
11-28-2007, 01:20 AM
here i lay broken hearted,
came to shit...
but only farted.
Small Time Crook
11-28-2007, 01:57 AM
officer you gotta believe, that shit wasn't mine, this aint my fault
i heard there was a gun but i thought it was all talk
some fictitious fuckin' fairytale, but i guess i got it twisted
and now im lookin at a felony charge all because of this kid?
he's up in the next cell, guess he got his ass kicked, looks like hell
were lookin at time in the jail, i dont wanna give up names cop says oh well
i swear i dont know whos gun it is, i dont have a clue
then they started laughing we know who the gun belongs to
so it turned out they wanted me to admit
but i just wasnt giving them shit
and when i attempted to plead the fifth
they beat my ass saying i tried to resist
cuffs gettin tighter im shackled to the wall wrist bleeding
my hand was cut earlier, loss of blood got me in and out of sleepin
wondering if id ever get back home
i knocked, four hours later cop says your free to go
three of us left but one of us remained in the cage
and they poisoned his brain saying we gave up his name
spent the night still fueled by his rage
and the next day he went back home to say
(so what's up bro when we gonna get drunk again, name the day)
pause, had to take a sigh of relief there.. okay?
eh..
Hidden Teknique
11-28-2007, 06:11 PM
back for another one in a minute now
i'm going to perform surgery and vow
to save this thread with some assistance
if coka, main, soul, crn can stay consistent
this is going to be a hard operation
so i'm going to ask for some new conversation
workin fast on a flat lined thread
seem to be losin it, soon dead
you all grippin your chests from withdrawl
print out my verse and hang it on ya wall
just so you can get a fill and won't fiend
lets see if someone good steps up with a scheme
i'm bringin the thread outta coma and it's dream
i got the line to move, still signs of life
so someone continue this with your insight....
sketch3
11-28-2007, 06:21 PM
bringin shit bak with the jaws of life,
monor u bad in bed an bore ur wife,
im gunna fight a horde of guys,
packin swords an knifes,
reviving threads, if u dead,
an dissrespected, gunn get u resurected ,
just to get ur flesh kicked,
of ur bones, im the best kid,
take ur breath with,
shit thats hectik,
Oink.
11-28-2007, 06:42 PM
sittin on tracks like an addict snortin anthrax
relax,verble doin attacks on your brain causin backcracks
ahh i got nothin;
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