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Oink.
11-28-2007, 05:42 PM
sittin on tracks like an addict snortin anthrax
relax,verble doin attacks on your brain causin backcracks


ahh i got nothin;

Hidden Teknique
11-28-2007, 05:44 PM
shit thats hectic
so i'm gonna inspect it
get rid of more than half of these kids
all they do is hate and diss
it's time for the real cats to step up
we big dogs others are just pups
1,2 ready guys clear
reviving with a beat, puttin cats in fear
this is more than rappin, i do no just spit it
so c'mon get educated y'all get with it....

someone continue

bit.CHEEZ
11-28-2007, 05:51 PM
wtf.. are u guys EVERYDAY on this forum?
i mean.. ok its cool to rap on the net A FEW TIMES.. but wtf.. go rap somewhere else too.. did nas used the internet to expand his skillz

sketch3
11-28-2007, 05:52 PM
sumone better con,tin,ue,
befor i stick a bomb in you,

bitchese ppl hu spit in here are just bord, no ones tryin to make it like nas

TylerDurden
11-28-2007, 06:31 PM
no ones tryin to make it like nas

speak for yerself






haha, kidding

berk@acheph
11-28-2007, 08:08 PM
im on the block with them yella backs,
blazing eatin hella snacks ,
cops like to resent that,
so im rocking mostly fat caps.
we in stores racking doesens of colors ,
put em up in da belt ,
push down that welt .
wile your putting risk to ya helth.
but still in stealth. mode ,
catch me on a dark road .
his is birk1 ,
get at me when it gets cold.

berk@acheph
11-28-2007, 08:09 PM
i aint feelin it

Small Time Crook
11-28-2007, 08:17 PM
shit thats hectic
so i'm gonna inspect it
get rid of more than half of these kids
all they do is hate and diss
it's time for the real cats to step up
we big dogs others are just pups
1,2 ready guys clear
reviving with a beat, puttin cats in fear
this is more than rappin, i do no just spit it
so c'mon get educated y'all get with it....

with it, with it, c'mon now why dont you get it
that we somewhere in between wicked and twisted
borderline sadastic we up in the loony bin so pay us a visit
dont just think shit live it and aint no need to fear it
even though you hear it goin off like bombs off in the distance
a calm is with us, but it can be broke in less then a minute
get it this shits simple just a couple words get thrown around to begin with
then we expand increasin demand takin other cats fans
from under they nose so quick when you find out you be like damn
whats with these guys, did you see'em passin by
lookin furious and murderous and shit, i wonder why
howd this get to happen, how'd they get so snappin
aint afraid to punch your girlfriend in the stomach and walk away laughin
theyll dump ya baby in the lake, now the kids fish food
but my time has run all out, time to pass it to some other dude...

someone else? i like things like this.

"Riot"
11-28-2007, 08:27 PM
I'm ready for war,war of words./
armed with cans,paint on my hands/
any brands,krylon,rusto,colorplace,I'm taking up space with aerosol/
goin big,goin tall,pig just creeped by,i think he saw/
but I dipped in the alley,taggin the walls,fast as a rally/
car,everyone knows my name,ima put the toys to shame/
cant compare to my fame,i got mad ups/
all over those plain white trucks,someone wanna be a hero,I say"I DONT GIVA FUCK"!
I'm as crazy as it gets,hit any spot,down for any challenge/
I'm icy cold,makin ya spine chringe,this is a freestyle/
so ima make it worth while cause Im that kid you know as the tagger cunt/
if ya get lucky,you might get glance,when im in my battle stance/
The city bitching,spreadin they rants,but I just pull up my pants and spray/
I can do this shit forever and ever,never gets old,paint until the sky turns gray/

ehh?

sketch3
11-28-2007, 09:04 PM
shit thats hectic
so i'm gonna inspect it
get rid of more than half of these kids
all they do is hate and diss
it's time for the real cats to step up
we big dogs others are just pups
1,2 ready guys clear
reviving with a beat, puttin cats in fear
this is more than rappin, i do no just spit it
so c'mon get educated y'all get with it....

with it, with it, c'mon now why dont you get it
that we somewhere in between wicked and twisted
borderline sadastic we up in the loony bin so pay us a visit
dont just think shit live it and aint no need to fear it
even though you hear it goin off like bombs off in the distance
a calm is with us, but it can be broke in less then a minute
get it this shits simple just a couple words get thrown around to begin with
then we expand increasin demand takin other cats fans
from under they nose so quick when you find out you be like damn
whats with these guys, did you see'em passin by
lookin furious and murderous and shit, i wonder why
howd this get to happen, how'd they get so snappin
aint afraid to punch your girlfriend in the stomach and walk away laughin
theyll dump ya baby in the lake, now the kids fish food
but my time has run all out, time to pass it to some other dude...

someone else? i like things like this.


SO NOW IM BEEFIN, WITH SOME OTHER DUDE,
GOT MY TEETH IN, TO SOME OTHER FEUD,
ILL ROAST HIS CLUT, PUTHIM IN AN OVEN 2,
I GOT YA ILL COVER YOU,
CUSS THERES PUSSY IN THIS THREAD, THAT GIVE HEAD ,LIKE MONORS MOTHER DO

"Riot"
11-28-2007, 09:13 PM
^^^^
Haha monors mom be suckin your dick.
But i stuck that bitch up like a prick,i am.
But you need to learn not to beef with us,I'll leave your head rocked.
Feels like you got hit with a right hand,unable to stand.
but really you just got hit with a lyrical attack,with the crack of a whip.
I told you not to spit but you slipped,now you tryin to getta grip.

sketch3
11-28-2007, 09:28 PM
So U Throwin Lyrics To Atack Shit,
U Wack Bitch, See If U Can Catch Bricks,
With Ur Hands Behind Ur Back Kid,
Must Be Smokin Crack Spliffs,
If U Go A Gat An Siilencer, Probly Cant Atach It

"Riot"
11-28-2007, 09:44 PM
Haha,you callin me a whack bitch to start beef/
I'ma let this shit get to a certain degree/
I'll fucking burn your ass,don't you agree?/
it'll be as easy as 123,while tossin my abcs/
You wannabe e-thug,you got problems,now do you need a hug?/
Hells yeah,I do drugs,and now I have finanicial issues/
I can't afford bills cause I'm out buying pills/
So don't start beef.

Maste
11-28-2007, 09:55 PM
the thing i like the most
is when chilen try to roast
eachoter online while at the same time
they doin the exact same thing
and with this bullshit you bring
you should stand up and sing
im a hypocrite and a silly bitch
you cant get with it cause you sucked the dick
of a great emcee cause its so tast-y in your mouth
what the fuck is i talkin about dont shout get out
fuckin homo fag yea thats right i said it
the best damn online insult embedded
in another fuckin rhyme cause it takes too much time
to get personal shit on a kid thats online

haha fun

garbage down tha way
11-28-2007, 09:59 PM
my words come off the top like suicidals off of buildings
and my mind is so open that everyone sees what im feeling
from 440 to T. W. O. one six,
i see through you darelicts like white shirts on wet chicks
what a dumb fucking mistake when you decide to step to me
tryin to put it behind us, but ima ressurect the beef
i produce my own beats, best believe im cookin up my own heat
unlike most rappers nowadays, i walk on my fuckin own feet.
and i take care of my own beef, with right hooks to ya dome piece
kickin it with punks, skaters and ogs, dont even front like you dont know me

kinda wack, i cant freestyle for shit.

Maste
11-28-2007, 10:08 PM
haha i like that even thought you think its wak...its a freestyle it aint gunne be great...anways:

a lyrical essense is the the presence of my rhymes
so you better take some time to rearange your lines
cause the shit your wrote down before
sounds so bad, you needa pratice more
ill mop up the floor with a blowup whore
that popped before i had a chance to score
*laughs cause that was witty haha*
yea you can make fun of me cause im wack
but im having some fun and ill attack back
shit that really sucked and i didnt make my point
but you shoulda ducked when i threw that joint
but now you got junk in your eye and your mad
so, i guess ill just say goodbye and its too bad

Hidden Teknique
11-28-2007, 10:09 PM
sketch and riot they be buggin out
so let me explain what technique's about
hidden and small time gonna write the book
mobb deep explained it that y'all are shook
jackin our lines like a "small time crook"
re-model this thread give it a whole new look
alluded anxiously y'all atrociously awaiting
for diabolical rap diplomats i am debating
walking down the street with cans in the hands
paint in the bag, bandanna covering my whole face
so my identity stays concealed when i paint the place
...............continue??

meetermaid
11-28-2007, 10:28 PM
work all night in the movie theater,
just to show the masses the coming feature.
R for restriced? shit i'm rated triple F,
filthy fucking fresher than a VHS.

sketch3
11-28-2007, 10:31 PM
Their Aint No Such Things As Half Way Crooks,
How U Gunna Diss Me, Talkin Bout Writin,
Homie U Need Need To Hit The Books,
I Got To Much Power Need To Cypen,
It Out, Or I Cause Weather Abnormalitys,
Ill Stab Up Ur Locality,
Try To Batle Me,
When Im Not On A Beef Thing, Like Cattle Be,
Hidden Used To Be Chill, But His Technuques Slippin,
Smalltime How Gunna Send This Fool To Clash? If U Dont Properly Equip Him,
I Know The Bitch Is Chickin, Only Jokin No Dissin BUT I THAUGHT I SAW U FAGGOTS KISSIN...

NO BEEF

Small Time Crook
11-28-2007, 10:47 PM
gonna grab the book write a page
make you regret the day you stepped in the way
if you want to go on ahead have at me
but my wordsll sting like bullets in ya chest cavity
with the vocal gravity and the mental capacity
unlock a Hidden Teknique and you get damaged see
you got totaled, wrecked, destroyed
contract expired now your record deal is null and void
while we still bringin all kinds of noise
Sketch up like 3 different things, evil beings
thatll just rip apart and shatter all of your dreams
so when you wake up sweatin, know that you sweatin we
still think you can sleep a wink when you got one of the monsters comin out from ya bathroom sink
ready to choke you out when you just wanna sleep, tired
and to make it all worse then monsters kick it with Riot
drainin creative juices out of you, now you uninspired
which may be a good situation, because your rhymes were in bad taste and like Jim Carry you the liar liar
cuz you aint done half the shit we did
not rockin a bandana, got a ski mask kid
cuz i used to paint up walls now im redecorating the halls with blood from other cats who was weakened
by the lyrical lashing they received
thought they could hang with the big dawgs, but they runaway like i was Jigsaw when i ask "wanna play a game with me"?

sketch3
11-28-2007, 10:49 PM
IM 3 EVIL ENTITYS,
THAT GOT SENT TO ME,
POSSESD BY DEMONS FROM THE LAST 5 CENTURYS,
SHUT UP BOUT JIGSAW PUZZELS,
SEE UR BLOOD, MAKIN BIG 4 PUDDLES,
U MADE UR GRAVE, DIG UR SHOVEL.
U MIGHT BE ROCKIN A SKI MASK,
BUT I COULD MAKE U FLEE FAST,
WHEN U SEE A BOMB BLAST,
THAT'LL LEVE UR ASS, IN A PLASTERR CAST,
GET SMOKED LIKE A RASTAS HASH,
THIS A STICK UP, PASS THE CASH,
U DONT SKI BUT U STILL MASKED, U FASS,
GET SKOOLED IN THE MASTER CLASS,



















SUMIN I SAID OUT LOUD AN DIDNT WANNA FORGET


Im Fresher Than A Summer Breeze,
This Shits Fun To Me,
Lyrics Come Wit Ease, Cuss I Bun Up Trees,

MonoR
11-29-2007, 01:35 AM
Their Aint No Such Things As Half Way Crooks,
How U Gunna Diss Me, Talkin Bout Writin,
Homie U Need Need To Hit The Books,
I Got To Much Power Need To Cypen,
It Out, Or I Cause Weather Abnormalitys,
Ill Stab Up Ur Locality,
Try To Batle Me,
When Im Not On A Beef Thing, Like Cattle Be,
Hidden Used To Be Chill, But His Technuques Slippin,
Smalltime How Gunna Send This Fool To Clash? If U Dont Properly Equip Him,
I Know The Bitch Is Chickin, Only Jokin No Dissin BUT I THAUGHT I SAW U FAGGOTS KISSIN...

NO BEEF


how can you destroy mobb deep like that, i dont get it
i should hit you in the face, cut you in little pieces and send you back in the middle of africa
you bite so hard, i should call you shark the fat ass, aight?
you frontin i give you this, but the skills you claim, i see none of them
you think you rock like eminem, bitches like you im killing em
your a fiend of my flow, just watching me spit make's you trip
like a crackhead that didnt get his dose, im dope like the blood of a cyclist, you know it
you just hate when i push you down and hit you in the face bitch

Craze
11-29-2007, 09:47 AM
the rhythm of the street is somethin very tragic.
the flows and blows always landed like a bandit.
evergreen scenes women wanna fathom havin,
but you the man and cant lend yo hand cause you ran
your whole fam into the ground searchin for sound.
callin all your homies lookin for ya next pound so you can serve the next round.
your homies want delivery like you were fed ex ground.
walkin clockin on the bus stopn n the pigs comin want'n ta talk n,
now you on ya way ta city courtroom cause that pig you got 2 sockin.
they released the beast into the denver city streets and now hes on a hunt pig stalkin.
any black n white thinkin he gonna get ta poppin, wait now you stoppin.
now your thinkin a lil clear with the doja in the brain,
gotta find a way ta maintain the thc feelin ta gain,
broke out runnin full strain slippin over evry grain,
gotta find ya boy wit the lime green lung drain,
feelin awkward like a stock herd.
the shock reverb now ya speech is sluured wakin from the noise you heard,
sounded like a cat purred, but ya visions scured
alcohol in you blood stream the last story was a dream did i make it out clean
or am i stuck in a cycle of these things
makin my ears ring like when mariah carey sings
through my temporal lobe the x stings
last nights frights and lights
were in the middle of the forest i got bug bites.
amazingly last nite there were no fights,
some dudes even showed up on motor bikes yellin yikes
cause the seen like 23 dikes
all eva mendez look alikes
sike!

Passleoinj
11-29-2007, 05:05 PM
baaalllllllliinnnn

La Coka Nostra
11-29-2007, 05:28 PM
It's hopeless...through all of this smoke, I've lost focus
I'm dreaming of being so rich, but so far...I'm homeless
That's show biz... Broke but nobody seems to notice
So I speak through poems and pray the right door opens
I can never take back actions or the words that I've spoken
All the people I've let down, the promises I've broken
I got the world on my shoulders, and I know I can't hold it
Buckling at my knees, at the seams I am folding


some fuckin...other shit.
bad moods inspire me to write often.

Hidden Teknique
11-29-2007, 06:53 PM
its hard sometimes but life goes on,
after night, there comes a dawn. . .
always a new day for the on coming
the signs of hope keeps your heart running
for all the shit we put up with in this world as people
we pray in the bad times, but don't turn to the steeple
in the best of the best we bask in success
but then we confess that we hold a lot of stress
somedays we're down in the gutter, worst of the worst
somedays we don't realize who should really come first...

"Riot"
11-29-2007, 08:26 PM
I faced the fact I'm not what my moms wanted/
she got in my face,tried to put me in my place,saying im on the wrong road,she taunted.
She says i try to act a different race,says im a disgrace,I was ecstatic/
I said bitch its my turn,listen up,now hear me out,I said it so quick,Like it was automatic/
I told her how i lived,from the sippycup i sipped,to the weed i be smokin,now im chokin/
I wanted to let her know the life I live,give me a chance to explain,loosen my chain/
livin the life of a thug,rackin everything i need,making other bleed,sometimes insane/
but,I'm clearly not a thug,look moms I pay your bills,help you through dramatic thrills/
I know i've done wrong,but this my song,so you just listen,just quit bitchin/
my grades are fucking pathetic,my health is bad,I believe I need medic/
but nothing stops me from runnin this shit like a track meet,I'm still on my own feet/
don't lean on others,tells others to get like me,but they don't see,the real me/
I'm silky smooth,keep it in line,while others be cryin,tell me I'm way to serious/
But actually I'm just real,but just prepare my meal,i'm just curious/
what happens if one day I leave and never come back,living off of shoplifting/
You'll see,I'll show you,I'm independent,now your ridiculious,your tripping/
told me to stop talkin like a thug,but you really just need a hug/
to settle your upset emotions,causing comotions,over nothing that you think is something
but clearly your wrong.

blahh.

"Riot"
11-29-2007, 09:05 PM
Look at this song,I got mad ryhmes rollin off the tip of my tounge.
ryhmes tight as a noose,they'll leave you hung/

haha ill finish this later.

Small Time Crook
11-30-2007, 12:03 AM
baby girl you my world, and i dont wanna let you go
like a bong hit got me feelin this shit, head to toe
its all butterflies and smiles when im talkin witchya
like a special moment in time, i dont wanna forgetchya
took a mental picture of you, and i see it in my dreams
like our lives is being projected up on the big screen
even though my life is crazy you still wanna be my lady
and like cheesy love songs i can only say i love you baby
i gave up drinkin every night, because that you aint like
and i started chewing gum because you said smokin aint alright
and all night i dont even sleep because you always on my mind
like damn is this really happening are these feelings really mine?
close curtains mane, this is the end of the show
and again, baby you my world, and i dont wanna let you go...

haha.. Small Time Love.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
11-30-2007, 10:40 PM
im back like the fuckin chyropractikly whack
i am a bomb shelta and a radio shack
a taco bell for when you fuckin cravin a snack
rehab for all you hobos cravin the crack
i dont care if you white or you black
you start beefin my ass and i start to attack
lyricly kick you in your sac and hope you fight back
then finnish you with a dope ass smack
cant seem to live without the sound of the klick klack
im bullet proof like my jacket is flak
so fast that i hit the trains as they roll down the track
got all them toys wantin to lick at my ass crack
and all them haters too scared to talk smack
im just back

Small Time Crook
12-01-2007, 12:44 AM
now whos gonna make me act a fool
bitch dont you know i carry tools
aint scared to pull it out on all of yous
bwoy you should know thugs dont play
mind ya p's and q's watch what you say
like crack my bullets make ya brain decay
rot away in the casket wont see another day
cuz your words come outta bulls ass
had to act like you knew something, get brash
now you get mashed, face smashed
and because of you im on the other side of the glass
talkin to my mama and my baby
they cryin even though one day maybe
ima get up outta this cell and bring hell
because you had to fuckin play me
got caught up so you snitchin
steady bitchin that the shit werent worth it to begin with
what the fuck how you gonna say you was down homie?
when now you lookin like a straight clown homie
better get up off me fore i really lose my patience
got the cops nervously waitin
for me to take my chow tray in
because this aint just talk ima back up what im sayin
even if the .44 gotta blow a lid off or two
as long as i get up next to you
give you a little talkin to
and i got a gun, in it six little friends
they all go faster then you, and wanna make ya life end
BLA BLA BLA! and off they go
one by one into your dome
skull explodes from too much pressure
now i got bits and pieces of brains on my dress shirt

run up and you finna get gunned up mane.
Small Timin' it!

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-01-2007, 01:21 AM
yo sketch3 lets have a rematch
theres only one catch
you have to try to sound skillfull when you spit back
and when you lose dont have yourself a panic attack
i spit ryhmes off the toppa my head, you're lyricaly dead
you dripping red from the big ass hole in your empty head
i got street cred, you get knees fed-
to your face. your a disgrace and a burnout like bill and ted.
im educated, you need special ed
i know a bout ted, he's you boy friend
he pegs you in the rear end
you see a fine ladie and your penis bends
you know im fresh and i think i frighten you
i crazy so you dont know what im gonna do
but i can most definatly promise dude,
your probly gonna need the paramedics to come find you
when what i choose to do to you is through

sketch3
12-01-2007, 07:31 AM
u wanna start shit, but im ending this,
swinging swords at ligaments and apendeges,
no way to defend this snitch,
talk all big, but u pretendin bitch,
if im offending pricks,
when i tell em to fuckoff, im only recomending it,

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-01-2007, 03:50 PM
too short, you got nothing to say
to my words thay spray
cause you cant deny when i say your sex is gay
ive been looking forward to THAT all day?
man im dissapointed, i exspected more
and now im wondering what i did this for
out last battle was like a fun ride,
now you sad, like some widow whos hubby died
im not gonna lie, i actually thought more of you,
but them weak words are worse than some that moner do
and that is true

"Riot"
12-01-2007, 05:04 PM
pwnt.
:)

ZEU
12-01-2007, 07:03 PM
Yo freek, you think your a rapper
your just a punk kid, shit, or get off the crapper
you think you some big bad graff writin boi
ive seen your work around, bitch yous a toy
you get on this website and act oh so tough
your art skills are shitty and your rappin is rough
ill lyricly kick you in the face with my boot
leave you cryin on the ground while im punkin your loot
now lets see what you have to say back
lets just hoppin your not too busy ichen your sack

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-01-2007, 07:19 PM
so you say hello my name is zeu
well i say your rhymes are like a preschooler yellind poopoo
you tags look like they been finger painted on the wall
so you behave or ill give your mommy a call
now you just settle down, its nap time
while i demolish you for spitting that wack rhyme
you calling your self a rapper is like a hate crime
and you show your noobishness all the way to the last line
this battle is now mine

Hidden Teknique
12-01-2007, 07:43 PM
it's time to reminisce in those days of good music
with biggie, pac, starr, and l puttin out hood music
then came along all those cats with talent that just didn't use it
educated rappers in the game, then whack cats made us lose it
hip-hop just isn't a genre of music, it's a mass generation's lifestyle
a culture, from graffiti, djing, b-boying to freestylin in the meanwhile
from the corners of the street, it was abused by the mainstream
those cats just lookin to get a dollar, fatten up a pocket with green
the suits raped a whole culture givin deals to cats that made a radio hit
even though they had talent and could spit, the lyrics meant nothin but shit
all the good rappers gone, and yet all there murder mysteries still unsolved
although there are 50 cops on stand to fill a man with bullets on call
i mean how could it come to all this killin, as people watch all the blood spillin
if a high government official or celebrity was shot in LA, there killer would've been caught
but biggie's killer, nah no one was ever linked to a murder or remotely stopped
the best of the best are now just a soon fading memories
their music is the only thing that still holds their identities


...

ZEU
12-01-2007, 07:56 PM
boo who who, you made me cry
you think that was a comeback, why even try
ill lay some straight up death rap on you now
take it from bart simpson, "dont have a cow"
ill drag you out back by your ear like my kindergarden teacher
youll be crying for your mommy, too bad son, you cant reach'er
after that ill tie you up tight, force you to watch me rape yo momma all night
then in the mornin when the son rises from the east
ill cut you into fillets and have my self a little feast
dont worry, your sadated, you cant feel much
but your sittin there watchin me munch
oh look, your whole legs gone, sorry about that bitch, here, put this stick on
ha ha, punk, look at you, your a pirate
oh wait im not done, grab this sword and ill fire it
make it red hot and burn your eye out threw your eyelid
anything left to say freek, you think you schooled me
just keep this rhyme in mind next time you try B

bit.CHEEZ
12-01-2007, 08:00 PM
black popeye fume les epinards!!!!

Hidden Teknique
12-01-2007, 11:38 PM
it's time to reminisce in those days of good music
with biggie, pac, starr, and l puttin out hood music
then came along all those cats with talent that just didn't use it
educated rappers in the game, then whack cats made us lose it
hip-hop just isn't a genre of music, it's a mass generation's lifestyle
a culture, from graffiti, djing, b-boying to freestylin in the meanwhile
from the corners of the street, it was abused by the mainstream
those cats just lookin to get a dollar, fatten up a pocket with green
the suits raped a whole culture givin deals to cats that made a radio hit
even though they had talent and could spit, the lyrics meant nothin but shit
all the good rappers gone, and yet all there murder mysteries still unsolved
although there are 50 cops on stand to fill a man with bullets on call
i mean how could it come to all this killin, as people watch all the blood spillin
if a high government official or celebrity was shot in LA, there killer would've been caught
but biggie's killer, nah no one was ever linked to a murder or remotely stopped
the best of the best are now just a soon fading memories
their music is the only thing that still holds their identities


...

end of page, so i thought i'd bump it

Passleoinj
12-02-2007, 01:15 PM
ayyo its gettin cold in my place
too bad for yall bitches i got some more rhymes to blast in your face
punk ass disgrace to human race
should spit in your face for all the time you made me waste
take a dump on your chest , put you back in your place
slap that taste out your mouth , push you out of this game
i should pimp you like a hoe , make you go low and blow
leave my dick alone , but i dont do this shit solo
my hand is your friend ,you a fiend of my flow
crackfiend of my dope , so clean my second name is soap
my shit is exciting , i noticed you came in your pants
why you tripping man , i only shook your hand
you should give up rapping , and go to college
cause you aint got no style and , you should jump of the edge
ride or die bitch , you aint down with dck you gonna be real or die trying
see im like a mountain and i see you trying to climb , crying
im mount everest , my style'S blessed
and its no brokeback mountain
so shut your fucking mouth next time
or get ready to die frontin

Passleoinj
12-02-2007, 01:18 PM
standin up , wandering around the corner
watching time go away so fast i cant catch up its over
stopped trying , gave up on life shit's too tough
im struck , that life slapped me in the face and my jaw fell off
left me breathless ,
the loneliness that surrounds me is like a punch on the chest
it hurts me , and rare are things that hurts me so i flex
separate my mind from my body travelling in a astral sky
the thought that invade my mind sometimes makes me want to suicide
sometimes i wanna cry
from now on i wanna die

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 01:32 PM
boo who who, you made me cry
you think that was a comeback, why even try
ill lay some straight up death rap on you now
take it from bart simpson, "dont have a cow"
ill drag you out back by your ear like my kindergarden teacher
youll be crying for your mommy, too bad son, you cant reach'er
after that ill tie you up tight, force you to watch me rape yo momma all night
then in the mornin when the son rises from the east
ill cut you into fillets and have my self a little feast
dont worry, your sadated, you cant feel much
but your sittin there watchin me munch
oh look, your whole legs gone, sorry about that bitch, here, put this stick on
ha ha, punk, look at you, your a pirate
oh wait im not done, grab this sword and ill fire it
make it red hot and burn your eye out threw your eyelid
anything left to say freek, you think you schooled me
just keep this rhyme in mind next time you try B


Listen up kid,
you the punk ass bitch,you think your all fine and dandy/
but your look at your fuckin handy!
You ain't got no comebacks to me,cut me in fillets?
what you talkin bout willis? now shut the fuck up.
you think you can't get schooled,ima spit then watch you drool.
now you fantasize,about steppin to me,but until then i'll critisize.
i'ma wait until your free,put this window in minimize.
To see the words of wisdom youll put in my eyes.
I've already won,taken the first place prize,listen to my voice rise.
you've got me goin,yellin at the top of my lungs.
Best not say anything or im gonna start pullin out tounges.
now as your reading this, can you say e-beef?
Hope your eyes are bleedin,theres plenty of comebacks beneath my skin.
off the top of the dome,let thoughts roam,then realize you need to run home.
get the fuck out of this thread before my words slay you and leave you for dead.

La Coka Nostra
12-02-2007, 03:07 PM
did you really just try to rhyme "fillets" with "willis"?

it's pronounced "fill-ays" you ignorant fuck.

sketch3
12-02-2007, 03:14 PM
its not pronouced like that round here.ppl need to acept that not everyone on the net has the same acent,
half the shit in here would flow tons better if u hered it being said by the ppl

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 03:14 PM
fuck

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 03:16 PM
haha dude. listen.
i have a fucking english accent.

I didn't grow up in KC.

shut your mouth kid.

who deleted his post? haha.

sketch3
12-02-2007, 03:26 PM
who are you talikn to?

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 03:30 PM
Some cunt posted and said you were an idiot and asked if you were from kc?

but someone deleted his post.

La Coka Nostra
12-02-2007, 04:13 PM
kids nowadays, mayn.

How'd you like my flow that followed your last one?


it was good, a nice change from all the people trying to battle in here.

MonoR
12-02-2007, 06:27 PM
sketch3 is a fag getting raped like a preteen
eyes covered by a bag
what kind of bitch are you bringing a sword in a gun fight>
you want your head cut off by a knife?
you claim you tough , but the only thing i can say is that you suck
you cant put a damn word on my butt,
you aint hot everytime you spit its fuckin crap,
how can you call it rap,
monor steppin on stage , involves getting mad stacks
my shits dope, i hope you got something better than that
step back fag , or get welcomed with a baseball bat

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 06:30 PM
How can you call that rap,monor?
Honestly.

Sumoe
12-02-2007, 06:33 PM
LOL, he is getting better, though.

Seriously.

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 06:37 PM
His vocabulary and grammar,sure.

but he still doesn't have flow yet.

Hidden Teknique
12-02-2007, 06:38 PM
yeah, his and pass's rhymes actually RHYME now...

who would've thought that could happen

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 06:44 PM
Somewhat.

sketch3
12-02-2007, 06:48 PM
only weak bitches bust guns,
cuss they aint shit without em like rich kids n trust funds,
u think u puttin ppls noses outta joint? well i reajust tons,
straight guys afraid of dick, u lust one, ur just dumb, u must run,
cuss talkin bout how u burnin mcs, while u combust none,
u talkin bout stackin papers,
but u a feind smoked it all away. now ur cash is vapor,
i aint talkin bout hash in acres,
u suck dick for crack, ur ass is paid for,


why did u 2 fags return,
after ongoing 3rd degree burns,
please learn,
that ur just not good, stop steppin,
dont care what ''hood'', ur reppin,


just stop monor u suck disgustingly

imm sure monor uses a rhyming dictionery cuss he suddenly went from not making sense,
to shit that rhymed but wasnt good

Hidden Teknique
12-02-2007, 07:20 PM
i'm alone walking or runnin in the street
runnin with 40 lbs of paint is hurtin my feet
it's starting to take it's toll, i'm exhausted
when i did my throw hopefully no one saw it
anxiety is somethin i just don't want on my shoulders
me and my boy we got arsenals like we veteran soldiers
we train and plan, pefectin the skill, and different routes
we get there prepared, the car goes by then we execute
never any issues or conflicts because we carry our shit out
those blue lights see our shit, knowin exactly what we're about
they know where we plan to attack yet they still can't stop us
we just walk or run smoothly with cans in the hands bringin the ruckus
got a two color scheme that popped off the wall in my dream
i need paint like i'm a drug fiend, or a dealer slingin to get green
but this is the life i walk, for my actions there are consequences
throwin up from runnin so much, or gashes in my hand for hoppin fences

ZEU
12-02-2007, 07:27 PM
Listen up kid,
you the punk ass bitch,you think your all fine and dandy/
but your look at your fuckin handy!
You ain't got no comebacks to me,cut me in fillets?
what you talkin bout willis? now shut the fuck up.
you think you can't get schooled,ima spit then watch you drool.
now you fantasize,about steppin to me,but until then i'll critisize.
i'ma wait until your free,put this window in minimize.
To see the words of wisdom youll put in my eyes.
I've already won,taken the first place prize,listen to my voice rise.
you've got me goin,yellin at the top of my lungs.
Best not say anything or im gonna start pullin out tounges.
now as your reading this, can you say e-beef?
Hope your eyes are bleedin,theres plenty of comebacks beneath my skin.
off the top of the dome,let thoughts roam,then realize you need to run home.
get the fuck out of this thread before my words slay you and leave you for dead.

oh my god riot, you think that Im dissed?
you cant even rhyme bitch, if this was a sport, your shot would have missed.
you cant even rhyme, that shit was a joke
imma sit over here and enjoy a fine toke
and laugh at that shit you think was all rad
fuck bitch, did you get that shit from your dad
and whats this about yelling at the top of your lungs
this is the fucking internet bitch, its typin not toungs
you cant yell shit with out a caps lock
and after you read this youll cry
and jump off a dock
just hope'n youll fall and land on a rock
and what about e-beef, your just an internet tool
stop tryin to battle me bitch, you just sound like a fool.

"Riot"
12-02-2007, 07:39 PM
You about to get blasted kid,so take a step back.
your name z to the u with a e up in the middle,now solve this fuckin riddle.
those are some whack ass ryhmes,going back to elementary.
Face it,you need to stick with the basics,or end up in a cemetary.
Laugh at my shit?,first learn to make a ryhme hit.
I'll laugh at your whack ass handstyle,what a fuckin pile,not even worth while.
You need to prepare yo and then lose all of those fucking arrows.
I'm plowin through,the only reason you don't want me to battle you.
Zombie elimination crew,what do you do get up with that z.e.u?


gotta go.
ill finish later.

Hidden Teknique
12-02-2007, 07:45 PM
your beef and controversy is over played and whack, so please just drop it...both of you type up something interesting.

Passleoinj
12-02-2007, 08:02 PM
i dont get all the shit youre trying to spit
maybe cause that nonsense and you should fix it
face it bitch , we are better than you
we stand strong and come back when you never expect us to
bitches like you are fuckin tools
telling us all this shit you complex with
cause you scared of admitting that we are rocking it
guess whos on the mic , yeah thats pass
youre bitch is fuckin flat, just like plexiglass
she still wants me , yelling "oh god its pass"
man , i wish you could street talk
so you could understand all the shit im trying to shout
yo you claim you gangster , but i aint the one writing with chalk
you got shook , professional biter
a fuckin shark
but you dont have your teeth sharp enough to pierce my defence
you taking the bus , you aint riding no benz
your bitch got hopped so much time , we compare it to a fence
since im the real writer between you and me
you my enemy and im the one allowed to speak
keepin it real , dck put holes in you and make you leak
no breath left , so go away cause this game aint for the weak
how can i call that rap
the only way to understand , is doing it
so shut your fucking mouth next time , holla back with some shit

sketch3
12-02-2007, 08:23 PM
if im a shark,
then u strayed into deep waters,
ill leave ur peeps tortured,
can smell a drop of blood in a million cubic feet,
u aint gangsta, not even a two bit theif,
fuck a great white, im a megladon,
devoure ur click, and the leval ur on,
u a fein.if u plexiglass then then u got crack in you,
snapin backs into, ur wack him to,--------->monor
say im ritin in chalk, but its gunna be around ur corpse if u talk,
u dont have to tell me i ride the buss,
cuss theirs know benz, in the endz.
but the buss is dodgey, dont go on the top deck with out friends,
atleast not in ur own area,

Small Time Crook
12-03-2007, 12:33 AM
like jaws without a trace you just showed up
and much like jaws your head is fuckin blown up
shits way out of proportion, some distortion
makin it sound like you da Virgin Mary's abortion
thinkin you somethin with a little snapback
and now it seems like i gotta hit back with a verbal bitch slap
and Small Time Crook just dont appreciate your wack facts
where im from a great white gonna get canned like tuna
tossed in the trashcan, never caught by la huta
deny my status mane, somethin you shouldnt had done
cuz now your chances of survival are slim to none
were you not listening when i told erryone whatsup?
run up get gunned up, pay attention dumb fuck
thats how i done came up, but never once had i gave up
now you bring my name up, and if that just aint enough
oh you smellin blood, but this shit distinctive
its comin from you, i led the megalodon to extinction
go ahead play with ya chalk mane, you aint drawin bodies
like a little girl you playin hop scotch, where you keep ya dollies?
aint i even touch the gang shit yet, cuz to make you believe
would mean you'd have to actually be me
and when i attack, strike back, like a blind man you dont see it comin
better get on the right track, or like ray charles you gonna hit the road jack,
cuz compared to me to me you really aint nothin'.

come get you some *****.;)

ZEU
12-03-2007, 03:41 AM
You about to get blasted kid,so take a step back.
your name z to the u with a e up in the middle,now solve this fuckin riddle.
those are some whack ass ryhmes,going back to elementary.
Face it,you need to stick with the basics,or end up in a cemetary.
Laugh at my shit?,first learn to make a ryhme hit.
I'll laugh at your whack ass handstyle,what a fuckin pile,not even worth while.
You need to prepare yo and then lose all of those fucking arrows.
I'm plowin through,the only reason you don't want me to battle you.
Zombie elimination crew,what do you do get up with that z.e.u?


gotta go.
ill finish later.

Damn right I'm in the cemetary bitch, im the undead
so you cant kill me and in the end youll be blood red
and as far as my name, its unit, not crew
its just me, am i makin sence to you?
and if i didnt wanna battle would i be typin to ya foo?

at least my name is original
if we put all the riots in one state it'd be full
maybe my hand styles not great
but cuz you cant get chicks you sit at the comp screen and masterbate
so why do you sit there and hate?
if you cant rhyme either why try and rate?
look whose the one with the riddles now
you think you can beat me at this shit, how?
ill keep laughin at you cuz i think this is fun
holy shit, look, im two batman villians in one
how you gunna stop me without a battarang? RUN!

crik
12-03-2007, 04:09 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rapping

sketch3
12-03-2007, 01:06 PM
like jaws without a trace you just showed up
and much like jaws your head is fuckin blown up
shits way out of proportion, some distortion
makin it sound like you da Virgin Mary's abortion
thinkin you somethin with a little snapback
and now it seems like i gotta hit back with a verbal bitch slap
and Small Time Crook just dont appreciate your wack facts
where im from a great white gonna get canned like tuna
tossed in the trashcan, never caught by la huta
deny my status mane, somethin you shouldnt had done
cuz now your chances of survival are slim to none
were you not listening when i told erryone whatsup?
run up get gunned up, pay attention dumb fuck
thats how i done came up, but never once had i gave up
now you bring my name up, and if that just aint enough
oh you smellin blood, but this shit distinctive
its comin from you, i led the megalodon to extinction
go ahead play with ya chalk mane, you aint drawin bodies
like a little girl you playin hop scotch, where you keep ya dollies?
aint i even touch the gang shit yet, cuz to make you believe
would mean you'd have to actually be me
and when i attack, strike back, like a blind man you dont see it comin
better get on the right track, or like ray charles you gonna hit the road jack,
cuz compared to me to me you really aint nothin'.

come get you some *****.;)

ur words lack meanin,
u crack feindin, get smacked.screamin,
u aint gangsta, dont have gat gleamin,
u can bring ur wack team in,
they just eat dick an snack semen.
might turn on u, get left with ur back leakin,
ur name says it all,
aint worth the times,
to spit vrese an rhymes
at this backstabbin bitch, u serpintine,
my words hazardous to skin like turpentine,
i can convert your lines, from hurt to fine,
but its not that Certain time,



finish later

"Riot"
12-03-2007, 03:10 PM
Damn right I'm in the cemetary bitch, im the undead
so you cant kill me and in the end youll be blood red
and as far as my name, its unit, not crew
its just me, am i makin sence to you?
and if i didnt wanna battle would i be typin to ya foo?

at least my name is original
if we put all the riots in one state it'd be full
maybe my hand styles not great
but cuz you cant get chicks you sit at the comp screen and masterbate
so why do you sit there and hate?
if you cant rhyme either why try and rate?
look whose the one with the riddles now
you think you can beat me at this shit, how?
ill keep laughin at you cuz i think this is fun
holy shit, look, im two batman villians in one
how you gunna stop me without a battarang? RUN!

OB with a F up in the middle.
My name is quite original,after this your heart rate will be critical.
OFB up in KC,told yall how many times,three,this is a lyrical/
War,I mean,be what you gotta be,But ima stick to bein radical/
What ya battle for,you don't gotta stutter,cause I'm smooth as butter/
I sit here and hate,because debatin toys like you,with whack ass crews/
You think you thuggin,but ya need to change your fucking huggie/
Whos pissed in your cheerios,nearly made me lose my flow/
But look at this paragraph grow,Whos gonna win? I think you know/
Although,that my verses puttin bitches in hearses,low on the cursin/
Look at my anger disperse,It can't get much worse,ready to burst/
I'ma come out in first,think you gonna win? thats like a kick in the shin/
But I'ma exit this battle with a dumbass grin,shinin like tin/
Dueces.

ZEU
12-03-2007, 07:46 PM
alrighty, this is just getting lame,
imma stop battlin riot, hes outta his game
im tired of putting his wack shit to shame
is there anyone else out there who i can mame?

"Riot"
12-03-2007, 07:53 PM
pussy,mad i won.
spit.

Hidden Teknique
12-03-2007, 08:26 PM
ammunition annihilates atrocious attacks
bodies bleed basically in blood baths
committing catastrophe, cleverly causing crimes
drug dealers devastating and debating on dimes
economically eliminating elements and enemies
freedom fighters frantically flippin felonies
gangstas grasping gats, global government genocide
horrific hells haunting hopeless humans from homicide
intellectual inferiors interfering injecting ignorance
jacks gettin jumped jousts jeopardizing joe's lives
kings killin knowledgeable knowin men with knives
lyrically and lethally lashin, leavin a long legacy
masters manipulate minds of a maniacal majesty
notorious nightwalkers negotiate narcotics neglected nature
obstructed opinions offered by officers official originator
prison's penalties petrify weight pushin participators
questioning qualified queens of kings, bring quality
rhyme renassiance revolutionizing rhythmic rapology
sharp shooters sniping soldiers with slugs being stupendous
thugs terrorizing, thriving on terrible terretories quite tremendous
unique united universal men utilizing skills unfairly
vibrantly and viciously venom spitting vocabulary
wisdom by men, wages war
xtremities tore
your
zone

ZEU
12-03-2007, 08:29 PM
riot, you didn't win shit, your raps make no fucking sense and i got tired of battling with you cuz it was way too fucking easy.....come back when you know what your doing.

and if you really need to think you won, sure...go for it....but really....

does anyone else agree that riots raps make no sense?

sketch3
12-03-2007, 08:30 PM
nice, but the concepts been done

I'm advocating alphabetic assaults on a mans amazement
absorbing any amount of attacks from any assailant
assassinating adversaries amputating their arms
and astronomic amounts of amateurs up in my abattoir

I blast your brain with bazooka type ballistics breaking bones
Beat you like Bruce lee with big bats or badboy black boy busting bushido
I battle battalions with a baseball bat beat their bumberarse
with the breathtaking bulletproof bubble burst in a block busting broadcast
braveheart buffalo soldier with another bible basher burning like a blazing bonfire
I'll bludgeon and bodybag you

I make curiosity kill the cat then creep just like a cougar
Cripple your coalition with critical cool maneuvers
Crack your cranium with a crowbar
Captivating you with my coma,
Causing a cataclysmic impact like a cobra

Dusk till dawn I deliver a deadly dose of dark dialect
Destroy like delahoy with dynamic dialogue that dissects
Discipline disciple with dramatic dynamic displays
Desert storm and disrespect distress your DNA
Download your disc drive decipher decode and demolish your data
Dazzle you with death defying deliveries
Too dark for Darth Vader


Evidently excellency engulfs my entire entity
Mcs evacuate when I make my entry
It's elementary I'm eradicating my enemies with ease
Exaggerating emotions with an overdose of Es



I'm the futuristic fist of fury fabulous freestyle fashion
Faster than a Ferrari F1 my faculties you couldn't fathom
My fiery ferocious force like forest fires flash floods and freakstorms
Fantastic like the four I fortune tell and verbally freefall



I grind you down to a gradual granual when I be grafting
My graphical gamma grammar be leaving you ******s gasping
With more grip than a Goodyear when I shift gear with the gift here
Goodness gracious the greatest galactic rappers have stood here


I hypnotize a hypnotist giving a hologram hallucinations
Plus my heat seeking high explosive hip-hop causes hyper-ventilation



Intervening like intravenous injections inside your intestines
Interesting like an inquest and leave you impressed and
I and I is instantaning your simpusle is impaling yo
insert it in my ears and my ism start inhaling yo.


From ju-jitsu to judo I put your jugular in jeopardy
Jab like Joes junior to the jaw I make you jerk and jump like jet-li



I'm killing the Ku Klux Klan round some ka kani khakis
Kung-fu kicking your kidneys and then I'm caning your car keys.
Keep a kalashnikov in a karan inside my kitbag
Kidnapping and craning the KGB and make you kick back



Most laser guided literature it literally makes you lose limbs
Left in the land of the lasra larynx lapped down in my labyrinth
I leave a legendary legacy as a legitimate lyrical lyricist
I defy levitation laws my lateral thinking leaves you lyric less



My miraculous murder methods are madness I'm causing malice
With a mind of a million mathematicians I murder masses
Masquerading mayhem in your manor like Mafiosos
Maxing from Montreal to Manhattan like Motorola's



I'm nasty like Nas naughty by nature but never say never
Navigate at night I'm the narcotic nuclear nemesis making you nosedive



I obliterate my opponents with an ordeal of oral onslaughts
Your overwrought with an oratorical orgy when I'm on course
I'm in and out of the ordinary ordinance from my orifice
I'm out of order with orders to boot you out of your offices



I'm a paranormal paradox portraying pyrotechnic prophecy
Panoramic philosophies like pharaohs and pyramid properties
I paralyze a parasite with pen and paper perception
The power of a Porsche at performing phenomenal perfection


Don't query our quest or question my quadrophonics
I'm quicker than Audi Quatros with quality supersonics
Highly qualified quotes will leave ya hung drawn and quartered
And queens lyrically captured be catching the quarantine



I'm a rampant radical renegade who'll rapidly rupture your ribcage
Rip up your rastclart like a rabid rottweiler on the rampage
I reckon my rawriding riddims will give the risible rheumatism
Representing reality rhymes we need some righteous realism



Suffering suckatash I stash a smash and snatch a stash
I'm spitting science or sharpen decieving shaving your stash
Schizophrenic schematics we're static and cypher stuns
And super sporadic savages scavenge around my sermon



My triple tongue tied technique attain the turbulence of a typhoon
With torpedo trajectory I titanically testify me tune
With a thunderous thesis I think with a thousand tortuous thoughts
With the tortion of a tornado I travel like a tomahawk
I make time warp when I talk like a telekinetic taskforce
Travelling in a time machine towards the twilight zone when I'm on tour



I'm an undefeated, unseeded lyrical ultra-sonical wheat kid
With the universal dispersal rehearsals don't mean I need it
I natural unilateral Phi-Life remain the uncatchable
With magical mindchart minds and limbs that are un-detachable



My vocal volcanic verses cause invisible vacuum vortex
My visceral vocabulary
Venomous viper vigilante vapourising your vibe
Verbally I'll murder thee and vocally vandalise



I walk from Wales to Washington D.C on the warpath of an MC
We're surfing the world wide web and nobody is willing to --- we
We're causing the worst water works to the worlds wackest of wordsworth
The wickedist wizard in time with the vines time in Wandsworth



I went to the X games with my ex-girl in an extra-large T-shirt
Cos I'm an extremist and no-one can play the xylophone with my penis



Rising like yeast this verbal beast is big just like a yeti
Yoga floating my boat and leave it tangled just like spaghetti
Yanking your ladies yashmak stabbing your back like Yitsak
Shaggy just like a yak when attacking you with my shitsack



From Zambia to Zanzibar this zany Zulu from Zen will
Cross the Zodiac when lyrics are zooming like a lens

EDIT NOT MY SONG

Hidden Teknique
12-03-2007, 08:56 PM
I know it's been done, hell Papoose made it a phenomenon...but alliteration is fun to do.

MonoR
12-03-2007, 10:50 PM
riot, you didn't win shit, your raps make no fucking sense and i got tired of battling with you cuz it was way too fucking easy.....come back when you know what your doing.

and if you really need to think you won, sure...go for it....but really....

does anyone else agree that riots raps make no sense?

speaking the truth.

Small Time Crook
12-04-2007, 12:12 AM
Sketch who's the artist of that alphabet song?
i been looking for that shit since my freshman year and shit. :(

Oink.
12-04-2007, 01:45 AM
the emcee that spits dieseses
untouched and has a godless thesis
stepup to this/ a matter of patern
similar to satern yah aint even got one- rinng
snitches get stiches but bitchs left under the dirt doin dishes -or-
tied to cement drownin' with the fishes
my rhymes so vicious
missionless missionairy relyin on the dictionary
tattle tales long battle story to glory

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-04-2007, 02:31 AM
guess i got time to rhyme before i go to sleep
no need to waste my time countin sheep
because i know it will creep
upon me, not making a peep
before i can speak,
ill be in lost in a dreamy seeming land
the sound track in this world is always my favorite band
fine ladies all over, no need to use my hand
things out here can make me sad but in there nobody can
make me frown
i cant wait, i wanna be there right now
leave the all the drama and bullshit behind me when i turn my lights out
forget my rent, my health, my grades and my ex girlfriend
just for while tho 'cause when i wake i kno the dream will end
and ill be thrust into a life that seems to go nowhere
my happieness and wonder vanish into the thin air
the only feeling left is one of sad dispare
until i get there,
back to my dreamy seeming place
where nothing bad can ever take place
where noone can ever make the smile fall off my face
and i can race, flying round on stars and bright moon beams
to where i can gorge myself on cake and all the ice cream
and escape reality until my clock begins to scream
living to want, wanting to sleep, sleeping to dream


thats not a freestlye..i wrote this and i dunno what i should call it..any ideas?

CRN-one
12-04-2007, 08:28 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rapping

http://www.encyclopediadramatica.com/Rap

ZEU
12-04-2007, 09:54 AM
This is my death rap shit, that just wont quit
d is for the dagger imma stab you wit
e is for the errection that necrophilias will git
when they watchin me run at ya and start a stabbin fit
a is for attack, cuz when i do, yo bitch ass smile will crack when i give you a smack
t is for the torment you will feel before im done
h is for the hell ill send you to when i shoot you with my gun!

G-Fat
12-04-2007, 09:56 AM
i smell a little kid, whose new to necro, ill bill and the whole +pyscho - logical family.

La Coka Nostra
12-04-2007, 11:13 AM
ya know...i was thinking the same thing.
necro is trash. a couple years ago i was a huge fan.
then i realized what a garbage rapper he really is.
he just needs to stick with beats and not get on the mic.

sketch3
12-04-2007, 11:45 AM
ur words lack meanin,
u crack feindin, get smacked.screamin,
u aint gangsta, dont have gat gleamin,
u can bring ur wack team in,
they just eat dick an snack semen.
might turn on u, get left with ur back leakin,
ur name says it all,
aint worth the times,
to spit vrese an rhymes
at this backstabbin bitch, u serpintine,
my words hazardous to skin like turpentine,
i can convert your lines, from hurt to fine,
but its not that Certain time,



finish later


la coka wat do u think of my multis?
anyone good for that matter

MonoR
12-04-2007, 12:07 PM
ya know...i was thinking the same thing.
necro is trash. a couple years ago i was a huge fan.
then i realized what a garbage rapper he really is.
he just needs to stick with beats and not get on the mic.


i dont wanna fuck your bubble, but at least he made a fucken career.

sketch3
12-04-2007, 12:10 PM
so did 50 cent but he still chokes on semen,
the amount of lil kids with nothing better to spend dadys money on is no messure of talent

MonoR
12-04-2007, 12:42 PM
you act like you can front on a chief, but when i bust my weapons
you pull back a knife like a thief, im a terrorist, ready too suicide bomb
frontin whit me is dumb, evry time you spit it’s a step deeper in your tomb
fatty cant bust a rhyme on me, so you gotta talk about my familly
i blast you cause your my enemie, so go on and put a word on me pussy
im your master, so bow down bitch, you aint nothing to me
I see, you wanna hit me? Then take your best shot lady, cause its gonna be the last one
Evrytime you call me for a round, you end up dead on the ground, cause im still the first one
sometimes im fucking your mother while you and your father watch, but still you cant do shit
Cause im so fresh, so clean, so me, bring it on weak rappers, cant wait to rape you’re ass again
You claim some unseen skills, I should take a shit on your flow
Bitch slap the hoe, kill the snitch, eat my shit

sketch3
12-04-2007, 01:06 PM
u know y no one can shit onur flow?
cus it dosnt exsist

Oink.
12-04-2007, 02:37 PM
the emcee that spits dieseses
untouched and has a godless thesis
stepup to this/ a matter of patern
similar to satern yah aint even got one- rinng
snitches get stiches but bitchs left under the dirt doin dishes -or-
tied to cement drownin' with the fishes
my rhymes so vicious
missionless missionairy relyin on the dictionary
tattle tales long battle story to glory

el bump.

"Riot"
12-04-2007, 03:08 PM
riot, you didn't win shit, your raps make no fucking sense and i got tired of battling with you cuz it was way too fucking easy.....come back when you know what your doing.

and if you really need to think you won, sure...go for it....but really....

does anyone else agree that riots raps make no sense?

Are you fucking stupid,still steepin to me.
meet me in the streets,minus the heat.
square up,realize your words are simple,
keep hatin,put my fist up in ya temple.
your sentences are fuckin nasty,
But you can call it toy blashphemy.
Are you list-en-ing?
Oh shit my bad,your head is ringing.
up to against your boy,clinging.
holdin on for dear life.
thinkin you hard for rockin a knife.

2v1 shit.
Monor,quit spelling your fucking name.
You aren't fit for this rapping thang.
I mean for real,who you think you is?
You think you gonna get showbiz?
With them dumbass ryhmes.
If I can recall I've spit against you about 5 times.
Heard this same old shit,same old lines.
Looks like I've won again,you on ya back,who wouldve thunk?
But still talkin shit,Talk shit to the sole of my dunks.
They worth clearly ova 100 bucks.
But then again,beatin your ass was fuckin priceless.
Left your layin,motionless.

MonoR
12-04-2007, 03:25 PM
u know y no one can shit onur flow?
cus it dosnt exsist

dude your weak shut up and answer

MonoR
12-04-2007, 03:30 PM
sketch3 is a fag getting raped like a preteen
eyes covered by a bag
what kind of bitch are you bringing a sword in a gun fight>
you want your head cut off by a knife?
you claim you tough , but the only thing i can say is that you suck
you cant put a damn word on my butt,
you aint hot everytime you spit its fuckin crap,
how can you call it rap,
monor steppin on stage , involves getting mad stacks
my shits dope, i hope you got something better than that
step back fag , or get welcomed with a baseball bat

bump fuck sketch3

sketch3
12-04-2007, 03:42 PM
only weak bitches bust guns,
cuss they aint shit without em like rich kids n trust funds,
u think u puttin ppls noses outta joint? well i reajust tons,
straight guys afraid of dick, u lust one, ur just dumb, u must run,
cuss talkin bout how u burnin mcs, while u combust none,
u talkin bout stackin papers,
but u a feind smoked it all away. now ur cash is vapor,
i aint talkin bout hash in acres,
u suck dick for crack, ur ass is paid for,


why did u 2 fags return,
after ongoing 3rd degree burns,
please learn,
that ur just not good, stop steppin,
dont care what ''hood'', ur reppin,


just stop monor u suck disgustingly

imm sure monor uses a rhyming dictionery cuss he suddenly went from not making sense,
to shit that rhymed but wasnt good

i did awnser u fag,u suck ask anyone on here apart from your boyfriend. ur just remdial

Oink.
12-04-2007, 04:18 PM
wow monor your fucking wack, stop tryna beef kids who clearly burn you.

La Coka Nostra
12-04-2007, 07:12 PM
la coka wat do u think of my multis?
anyone good for that matter


getting better.
the multis are a good start.
work on not putting so much filler in your rhymes.
make every line have meaning and be relevant to the topic.
don't just put random shit in between to take up space.
know what i mean?


p.s. Monor, you're gay....
that's all i have to say about that.

sketch3
12-04-2007, 07:18 PM
tnx for the crits

bit.CHEEZ
12-04-2007, 07:35 PM
yo.. ive got an idea..

what about i give u like 4 tuff words and we'll see who makes the best paragraph out of them

morphin
coughin
muffin
caffeine

MonoR
12-04-2007, 08:12 PM
sketch 3 and la coka nostra
get your dick out of each other mouth
please

SeapNSR
12-04-2007, 08:15 PM
reminiscing got me wishing
i did something but pissing my life away
new id regret shit one day
it just came a whole lot sooner like premature
ejaculation
working bullshit jobs got me hating
and my depression wont stop inflating
nothing better than mating
but bitches always get me twisted
worse than sticky summer knickers
im getting sensitive like whiskers
as my stomach blisters
i cant keep my food down
stomach churning around
stuck in a world where i cant chill
cuz drugs and tags the only things that leave me fulfilled
its just lucky im not black
cuz then the pigs would be looking to kill
instead they leave me looking ill
like a bottle of bacardi and a pill
but still i keep the ball rolling
but nobodys holding
so i just fold in
my bedsheets all day cant stand the sun rays
knowing tomorrows another date with the magistrate
got me feeling irate
graffiti is great
open up your fucking mind and hate the straight
and narrow
work your life away and for what a broken arrow?
sucks to be you cuz im as free as a sparrow
well i try to be but you bring me back to earth
youre the whole reason i wish i died at birth
so...
for a small wajor
do you think i could persuade ya
to introduce teenage youthenasia
youd be a saviour
and a hero, isnt that what youre after
you pathetic bastard
well im just looking for laughter
in this world of disaster
my main concern
you take away my dreams
and give nothing in return
when will you learn
youve left me waiting to burn
if im that detremental to society
why dont you kill me
and anyone like me
youd have more room for yourself
isnt that what youre after
you greedy bastard
well im just looking for laughter
in this world of disaster
fading faster
than too many sheep and no greener pasture
or a family of greeks and only one bowl of pasta
feeling like a sitting duck
stuck in a clusterfuck
running out of luck
cant be fucked giving a fuck
just pull the trigger and give my feathers a pluck
AHAHAHA
fuck that
i aint ya doormat
ill make ya daughter smoke crack
until shes sucking my dick for a hit
what?
sucking my dick for a hit
or if you just mind ya god damn business
we can get along ya dig this
yeh i toke on some shit
and wrote on ya shit
but i aint out there stabbing women with fits
before cock mangling their bits
or getting behind a minors vagina
how about you fill your nosey ass mind up
worrying about real crime huh?
cuz i garantee
what graffiti means to me
is more than you love your family
and if you take that away
you take away my soul
and leave me hoping for no tomorrow
you follow?
or is this what your after
you heartless bastard
another teenager lying in a casket
just cuz my tag is where ya tax went
where else you think itll get spent
i'll tell ya
on government ads full of lies to make you vote for them
and im the bad guy?
are you fucking retarded in the brain stem
i just vomited up flegm
thinking about your stupid ass
fuck you im out im hitting the gas
at last

MonoR
12-04-2007, 08:15 PM
la coka wat do u think of my multis?
anyone good for that matter

i think it suck's dude, shit dont even makes sens what da fuck!

"Riot"
12-04-2007, 09:17 PM
You don't even make sense you french peice of shit!
Go eat some freedom fries,dumbfuck.

bit.CHEEZ
12-04-2007, 10:10 PM
WOH WOH WOH dont generalize french people
he aint reping shit okay so dont generalize people


When I hear u rap its like im in a comedy show:
People say shut your trap, you aint got no flow
So dey stick your crap up your ass and watch you blow !

HAHAA critz plz

Oink.
12-04-2007, 11:27 PM
get lit off hard hits of chornic
styles contageuous damn near bubonic
supersonic styles of war dope enough to be bought at the store
freedom fighters lost in the dark with pistols and lighters
searchin for truth yours gets no brighter
continue to spit outrageous stageless gimics
outve bounds past the limits
cells almost outve minutes
PEACE.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-05-2007, 12:24 AM
guess i got time to rhyme before i go to sleep
no need to waste my time countin sheep
because i know it will creep
upon me, not making a peep
before i can speak,
ill be in lost in a dreamy seeming land
the sound track in this world is always my favorite band
fine ladies all over, no need to use my hand
things out here can make me sad but in there nobody can
make me frown
i cant wait, i wanna be there right now
leave the all the drama and bullshit behind me when i turn my lights out
forget my rent, my health, my grades and my ex girlfriend
just for while tho 'cause when i wake i kno the dream will end
and ill be thrust into a life that seems to go nowhere
my happieness and wonder vanish into the thin air
the only feeling left is one of sad dispare
until i get there,
back to my dreamy seeming place
where nothing bad can ever take place
where noone can ever make the smile fall off my face
and i can race, flying round on stars and bright moon beams
to where i can gorge myself on cake and all the ice cream
and escape reality until my clock begins to scream
living to want, wanting to sleep, sleeping to dream


thats not a freestlye..i wrote this and i dunno what i should call it..any ideas?
bump for critz

sketch3
12-05-2007, 06:38 AM
i think it suck's dude, shit dont even makes sens what da fuck!
read the quote i said anyone GOOD, not someone who suffers from downs syndrome

edit if u cant understand wat i type then i suggest u sack ur english teacher

didnt wana post with outh sumthin

if u aint with me,
an ur aims shity,
prey we aint from the same city,
ur a popstar, ur tame brtney,
nevr killed a man, iv slain 50,
cuss this games shifty,
might get smoked, like ur lame spliff be,
lick off shots ill shout back,''shame missed me''
look beefin me is just,plain risky,

MonoR
12-05-2007, 08:31 AM
you act like you can front on a chief, but when i bust my weapons
you pull back a knife like a thief, im a terrorist, ready too suicide bomb
frontin whit me is dumb, evry time you spit it’s a step deeper in your tomb
fatty cant bust a rhyme on me, so you gotta talk about my familly
i blast you cause your my enemie, so go on and put a word on me pussy
im your master, so bow down bitch, you aint nothing to me
I see, you wanna hit me? Then take your best shot lady, cause its gonna be the last one
Evrytime you call me for a round, you end up dead on the ground, cause im still the first one
sometimes im fucking your mother while you and your father watch, but still you cant do shit
Cause im so fresh, so clean, so me, bring it on weak rappers, cant wait to rape you’re ass again
You claim some unseen skills, I should take a shit on your flow
Bitch slap the hoe, kill the snitch, eat my shit


im waiting sketch3

cheesegril
12-05-2007, 08:54 AM
Motha fuckahs gettin dusted i'm spittin blood thats rustic, yo kid you better not foss i bust with out a lust. i beat him to the punch now that nukkas straight pegin lunch. cant even stand a rose flower all my taste buds went sour. hahaha stok jscrew bitches... hoes.... i'll cut you.

sketch3
12-05-2007, 09:09 AM
you can keep waiting, cuss i feel bad battleing sumone so bad,

its not a fair victory, like a grown man boxing a 5 year old.
lets make a deal iwont point out how much u suck if u keep my name out ur posts

MonoR
12-05-2007, 12:50 PM
watch your back before you get smacked,
cause there's a bunch of maniac's ready to attack
attach you to a pole, wreck your face whit a bat,
my words make's you feel so bad
that your lyrics come wack, how can you call your self a vocalist,
when you only talk trash
you don’t even exist in my life, so why you keep talking to me like a fag
I should slice your head whit a knife and put it in bag
im so strong, I could front ten bitches like you ,hands in my back
prove me wrong you’re dick rider and fagget, get off the next man dick
gay like you are your probly sucking dicks for some studio time

fuck sketch 3

still waiting for 2 freestyle answer

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 01:24 PM
Motha fuckahs gettin dusted i'm spittin blood thats rustic, yo kid you better not foss i bust with out a lust. i beat him to the punch now that nukkas straight pegin lunch. cant even stand a rose flower all my taste buds went sour. hahaha stok jscrew bitches... hoes.... i'll cut you.

sup cheez girl, like cheezcake?

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 01:26 PM
u guys didnt get the meaning of freestyle.. u think its style-free

MonoR
12-05-2007, 01:30 PM
it feel so sad? wtf...?
kes tu me sors le fromage

mais pour ckier du 12 12 12 12 explique stp.

Oink.
12-05-2007, 02:09 PM
im gunna be known like cancer
like leavin amputees runnin for the answer'

Maste
12-05-2007, 03:24 PM
yo monor i think you got your letters mixed around
its spelt m-o-r-o-n now hows that sound
fuckin idiot kid cant kick flows at all
lemme guess you aint 5 feet tall
im gettin kinda sick of these punk as preteenies
lick a fucking dick but you just got a weenie
ha kid grow up a bit start sortin shit
freestlye kid that dont mean bite
alright i understand that ddint really rhyme
but damn kid im running outta time
late for work again gunne get fuckin fired
i dont even know the reason i was hired
so thats it thats all im out peace
stop tryin to act like you live on the streets

Dondii
12-05-2007, 04:19 PM
Intellect shows respect for yourself with rhymes shown in text,
Maste embarrased himself, he's gone to waste like bit.chees/bitches that get's x'd.
Monor and sketch 3? your supposed to know mc?
Your rhyme miss punches like classic fight movies but no Bruce Lee.
Better get some spice and spit it out to add some flavour,
take my advice, quit rappin' and that rapshit behaviour.
you cant master the words on paper like deaf blind poets,
If you really wanna drop some shit, drop that rhyme down the toilets.
You aint got the rhymeskills, you miss flow like wind but no mills,
Your an druggie without pills, desperate but cant get it real.

the execution:

Splatter your brain to show the world what it contain,
no idea's, just an dead rapper that was destined to get slain.

MonoR
12-05-2007, 04:51 PM
you don’t even exist in my life, so why you keep talking to me like a fag

Dondii
12-05-2007, 04:57 PM
its an fuckin freestyle thread you moron, if you where an suicidal emo-faggot you shouldnt have dropped anything. Now, go cry to your mother and tell her what the badguy just told you, fuckface..

I'll execute any mc that think their better than me..

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 05:37 PM
wtf tu mniaise monor... tu sais pa ske c une fuckin structure
tk jtexplike mais OSTI ke c pitoyable


tu dois garder un meme nombre de syllable par phrase pour donner un flow a ton text

i eat peanut
u are a cunt

MonoR
12-05-2007, 06:11 PM
je c ckoi une structure
jvoulais un example, mais merci pareil le dur

La Coka Nostra
12-05-2007, 06:18 PM
i eat peanut?
what the fuck is going on in here?

Clowney-Cakes
12-05-2007, 06:19 PM
yo, a new look on life
dont hold anger, furry or strif
life is short, live it up
youll look back and wich you haddent given shit up
love live and paint is how my days go by
be cool, be chill, and be fly
chillen with the fam is how it goes
dont leand out trust to nappy headed hoes
thell fuck you over and its too late
next thing ya know you gotta look out for one more foe



lame^

Oink.
12-05-2007, 06:19 PM
Monor your shits recited and recycled like greenpeace
toy can paint a burnin piece, Lyrics inner release
To broke album on lease/ dispersed your hurse 6feet under
known world wide as that boy wonder'/ off the tops
like girls on springbreak' /////////your a faggot.

Write your writtens and come freestyle and get burnt, Talk so much shit but aint got no flow fuck monor.

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 07:11 PM
je c ckoi une structure
jvoulais un example, mais merci pareil le dur

si tu lsavais pk ta aucune structure dans tes shit

Passleoinj
12-05-2007, 07:16 PM
motherfuckers like you should be rappin
should take notes before you bitches open they mouth , no more spittin ,
monor and me , the 2 official brothers in this league
none of yall can beat up my team
we incredibles , just like in the cartoon scenes
youse all shemale looking rappers doing their things for cream
you want cream mutherfucka i could cum in your face like a laser beam
bring it on kids , you anorexic chickens cant beat on the ace
with the walter PPK , irradicate you weak mc's in this day from this planet earth
your mom shouldnt have given birth , cause where you belung is in the dirt
fuckin jerk , this shit is so easy i have bitches be lining up to please me
bitch tease me , kill me cause i'Ll never stop speaking
annihilate your self esteem , cause im in the party , and there aint no leaving

fuck you all , i dont do generalization.

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 07:20 PM
basically.. this is an example of a non structured, therefore non existant flow text

plus he write like 20 words sentences long with no double rhyme..

Passleoinj
12-05-2007, 07:50 PM
kiddos , you shouldnt have came up in here , you guys are fuckin precs
i got each one of you bitches wanting to touch my pecs
im the best , dont cry if i hit too hard on that chest
flex it , or die with it cause in dck we playas never get tested
cant get rid of me im crazy glue , the effect of a crazy flu
lazy crew , fuck you you got kicked out of blood's so you go rep the blue
leave you with no clue , im so smooth when im coming at you
lookin at you , motherfuckers dont try to run when im running at you
you make me puke , that shit so nasty you dont spit you vomit
my sperm is prettier than that shit , so give me the mic imma hit it
kick it bitch imma kill hit , i hit so hard on that thing they say i rape it
see my words in the air , go take a flick , or take notes with your bic
i stomp on your click , make you all love to suck my dick
you vacuum cleaners , but you aint picking any shit
youre spreading it all over the place , just like i do with that blood on your shirt
in your bitch imma insert , a new child from montreal she'S gonna give birth.

ten veut des double rhymes ,
ma ten crisser dans L,cul fuckin toy de marde
va dont chier ailleurs ostie on a jamais vu d'tes truc a montreal
so arrete de parler comme si tetais bon ptit merdeux d'chiasse
on le sait K,ta rien a dire , ktes laid pis kta rien a nous donner poufiasse
so fuck man , ferme ta fuckin gueule next time jsuis tellement fuckin tanner davoir a tengueuler
yo stu pense ke ste jviens de te dire c un freestyle bin fuck you stait juste la vérité
yo tu me stress a chaque fuckin fois touvre ta crisse de trappe
parce que tout ske tu raconte c dla marde
tes ou dans lstreet le comique ,
tes plus present dans un show dhumoriste que dans ske tu parle
tes une joke vivante si au moins tes shit pouvait appuyer tes paroles
jte prendrais ptetre au serieux mais pour le moment tu dois sniffer dla colle
tes une folle genre une politicienne c koi taime ca te faire regulate?
jen ai tellement rien a foutre de ske tu jappe, au quebec on dit sen crisser
so decalisse dicite ostie d'anglais , parce que ici c'est DCK

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 08:40 PM
ok after like 6 minutes heres what i got

motherfuckers like you should be rappin
Don’t call me motherfucker, not my fault if she was stripping

should take notes before you bitches open they mouth , no more spittin ,
too much notes on ur hand, next time u spit make sure ure not sitting,

monor and me , the 2 official brothers in this league
You' guys so official, last time i checked ur dads were pig,

none of yall can beat up my team
No duh, you guys are stuckd behind ur screen

we incredibles , just like in the cartoon scenes
in fact when i see u spit u sound like mr bean

youre all shemale looking rappers doing their things for cream
last time i chekd ur ipod for c.r.e.a.m. all I found was gay porno film

you want cream mutherfucka i could cum in your face like a laser beam
you need to lubricate your ass, last time Monor checkd, there was a steam

bring it on kids , you anorexic chickens cant beat on the ace
no actions take place. All u do all weekends is watching scarface

with the walter PPK , irradicate you weak mc's in this day from this planet earth
knife in my hand, ull scream like ur mom when she saw ur face at ur birth

your mom shouldnt have given birth , cause where you belung is in the dirt
I cant believe u're alive, ur dad mustve been dead drunk to take ur mom for a flirt

fuckin jerk , this shit is so easy i have bitches be lining up to please me
Your words are weak, stop acting like a pussy, youre fronting with a grizlis

bitch tease me , kill me cause i'Ll never stop speaking
Get that ball back in ur mouth, or ill have to start kicking

annihilate your self esteem , cause im in the party , and there aint no leaving
Get yourself a new team, cause all I see are two tardies making bombingscience their living

bit.CHEEZ
12-05-2007, 08:43 PM
structuring his lines more than he does.. wow.

meetermaid
12-05-2007, 09:19 PM
alright listen up cheese whiz none of us' got time for this
i'm so hardcore i freestyle to antony and the johnsons' version of knockin on heavens door
and what's more, i'm about to settle the score
there's not many in here that're alright, let alone worthy of the spotlight
like "oh i'm so hard, my rhyme\s right i'ma be in the limelight"
bullshit, you know how hard it is to make it while spittin?
a short while in the industry'll have you beggin to quit
sucking dicks for laundry scratch
stealin clothes from the laundromat
but what do i know, i'm blazed as fuck and talking out my ass
listening to portishead gotta make this bowl last
cause that's the last of it, no more till the next paycheck
sleepless nights having me fucked up like a trainwreck
breathin deep on the other end of the stethoscope,
scared of the doctor they're not fond of the false hope
survival of the fittest, the weaker can just moan and mope
around the house, afraid cause you just found the one louse
where\d the other 300 go? too late can't wait i'll figure it out after the show

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuck

garbage down tha way
12-05-2007, 09:47 PM
these kids are bitin so much shit that cats'd think that they teethin
im rhymin for reason while yall paintin spots that nobodys seein
but you best be believin me, for this im thankin yall evenly
personally calling the buff squad to come clean the scene for me.
duck into the shelters, im droppin bombs like im atomic
and if you cant flip styles, they'll hire you at dennys flippin omelettes
most cleveland cats are cowards so they packin shit but OVER aint.
ill pistol whip you with your own piece then pawn that shit for paint

Maste
12-05-2007, 10:13 PM
check my resume ive been rhyming for three days
got a flow that could match g down the way
now listen to what ive got to say
you all preach the same lesson and its allready heard
if you didnt know by now your all fuckin ubsurd
some of you kick a good flow and i respect you
casue you tell it. but what other kids do
you could never sell it for a cent or a penny
your a dime a dozen and no thats not many
im not pumping myself up um putting you all down
but read these words and say i dont have a nice sound

haha im so wack...least im not the wackest

Oink.
12-05-2007, 11:49 PM
i spit non existant, persistant cant resist it
stay lifted 6 storys high-rise above the rest
honorable mention your shits bronze at best
preschool styles locked in detention
get out the game still waitin for pention
patition your army, battle axes and swords cant harm me
FUCK MONOR AND THAT OTHER GUY.


ahahaha all <3's.

Oink.
12-06-2007, 02:23 AM
\\ illiteriate ilogics modern science project
its bound reject/perfect interesting
insecks logeded in many of necks
so whoooos next'/
Letters of unsent editers frail handed
check preditors dysect select dept collect/
money hungry monstas'taunt and hauntcha
simply more known the cancer
a hidden truth hides the answer/found it sir//
discuss battle tatitics while raising the taxes
Get the money tree with axis axes

-Last-
12-06-2007, 04:07 AM
yea you're all killas...you kill with words

Passleoinj
12-06-2007, 02:29 PM
repond a mon shit en francais ostie d«anglais
tes rien kun fromage genre un top of the gay chain
so farme la

nero122
12-06-2007, 02:34 PM
nice one ****..

sketch3
12-06-2007, 03:12 PM
Intellect shows respect for yourself with rhymes shown in text,
Maste embarrased himself, he's gone to waste like bit.chees/bitches that get's x'd.
Monor and sketch 3? your supposed to know mc?
Your rhyme miss punches like classic fight movies but no Bruce Lee.
Better get some spice and spit it out to add some flavour,
take my advice, quit rappin' and that rapshit behaviour.
you cant master the words on paper like deaf blind poets,
If you really wanna drop some shit, drop that rhyme down the toilets.
You aint got the rhymeskills, you miss flow like wind but no mills,
Your an druggie without pills, desperate but cant get it real.

the execution:

Splatter your brain to show the world what it contain,
no idea's, just an dead rapper that was destined to get slain.
please dont tar me with the same brush as moron...

MonoR
12-06-2007, 03:53 PM
please dont tar me with the same brush as moron...


snitch3 im still wating for an answer faggy

sketch3
12-06-2007, 03:58 PM
ok how can u call me a snitch? seriously u live in cannada or w/e an i live in london.
iv never seen u takepart in illegal activitys,let alone know who u really are. theres no way i coulda snitched,
if u really want ill spit back, but u just get buthurt and awnser with sum incoheirent bullshit.

how about i just give up, there u ''beat'' me. no shut the fuck up about me

real talk

MonoR
12-06-2007, 04:03 PM
then why you call me a moron fucken fag
my names monor so respect and ill respect
this is internet.

sketch3
12-06-2007, 04:11 PM
cuss u are a moron. just be retarded in scilence, shits the freestyle thread.
disses are flying around left right an center,if ur to insecure to handdle that then just curl up and die.


ill edit this post with a freestyle later, so its not cluttered with bullshit

Oink.
12-06-2007, 05:10 PM
so no ones gunna battle me bah. ahahaha

Dondii
12-06-2007, 05:35 PM
Battle ****? aiight..

I'll battle this cat, pig or whatever, truest mc? cant even form a letter,
he's more dead than the torrent-site except his forgot n lost till forever!
Your skills confront hostility, your verbal herbal mix aint no remedy,
your smoked in vanity, your dope as instrumental beats without melody.
Your exceeding your time, shoot yourself, the only way you could free your mind,
you'll put your life to the line, so wack he cant even define the meaning of an rhyme.
Keep to your sketchbook, you aint no crook, so get off the hook,
The lines he create sounds like comic strip babble he randomly took.
This aint egypt, but this fucker must have gotten to se-Nile,
the mc is floatin in the river, better let him die thru the next 8-mile.

Your wack bitch, better face it with an bat, want me to translate it?
Fuck an description, better scroll up the page to check it out, you'll instantly hate it..

enough evidence on his line to understand he dont rhyme..

Oink.
12-06-2007, 06:05 PM
i kick frees like im liberating the people'
Yo; ass is still wack nd' unsightful
Couldnt my stop the flows with a tampon
faggot enjoys his sex with a strapon
Spit yo game son' like we playin hockey and yo just lost your fronts//
Talkin all this shit but has to style
take a seat write for awhile'

emerging deep emcees of evidance the streets aint clean
robbin anythin that shimmer or gleam, Grimey shit
written history another emcees corpse will turn up a mystery

Oink.
12-06-2007, 06:13 PM
that was kinda wack ahahaha.

"Riot"
12-06-2007, 09:39 PM
Dondii got you.

I'll keep spittin to you,until I make you resign/
Your though,Spit until my faces turns blue,out of breath,feel like I'm dyin/
Don't you think I'ma stop,do you need a tissue?,I think I got you cryin/
Kid,you soft,dont even argue,but now you lyin,up in my face/
you eyes are startin to water,looks like you got sprayed with mace/
think you can swing at me,Threw a combo like a 123,now ya in ya place/
On your ass,Thats how it has to be,walk away,but first tighten my shoelace/

hahah whack.
oh well.

SenTheFirst
12-06-2007, 09:56 PM
anybody wanna battle me?

set it.

bouncingsoul
12-06-2007, 10:38 PM
Have not written in a WHILE. Damn. Actually I have been writing, just not transcribing to type

It's not civil disobedience, it's courteous incompetence
a condescending consequence, conscious common sense
that spends time, bends rhyme and time to find
a dime, nickel the broken heart street to shine
your light at the end of the tunnel, with ripped sneakers
that dig deeper to gravel, 3rd rails speak freer
never nearer, buzzing the epitome, fake authors
rockers that talk softer, father the heart fodder
a start, a shine, glisten the grime and missin the prime
mind state, confined a curious, dubious time
find the sum of unreal numbers, the 1 2 3's go under
count down a self-timed implosion, flows that blow wonder

auroras quartered, sunk into a corner contorted
consorted, blooming heliocentric, metric aborted
the record recorded, connect the distorted,
puzzle pieces, beacons of weakened lorded
kings that sing democracy in fake falsettos
subjects revolt, ignite a fight, make the mettle
take the kettle and spray paint it black
this is rusto, american accents, free speech, wake it back
to life, to reality, a normality, fallacies, greed
creed, god speed, any wicked conditioned, heed the
broken word, speak back, turn, contract
confound the tracks with nonviolent attacks

approach a brick wall, called small and gargantuan
never lied to windows because faint reflection manikins
plastic eyes that see blurry Macy's windows
garter the reflection, connect the dust blow mellow
hello's to them, spend ephemeral flames, render
the sender useless, senses that just sit trend-setters
the condemned men, ends mend, meet a conclusion that students
abuse, mused on head-swellowed answers, the prudent nuisance
that loosens skulls, unhinged, a binge from thought, voice
that speaks unheard noise, merge the stirred, unbalanced poise
ideas I witness, collapse under air pressure
pump hot gas to ego trips, embezzle the better

Small Time Crook
12-06-2007, 11:12 PM
pushing people past the point of proper perspective/.
cuz im so wreckless, aint no time to be corrected/.
but now with a new objective, my aim is redirected/.
wanna project shit without having to represent a set kid/.
and my shits so dope, youre gonna wanna inject it/.
for me there's little hope, cuz i like to get hectic/.
style aint no kinda joke, so you gotta respect it/.
why you frettin' and sweatin' is it cuz when the mics are checkin/.
you losin to a guy whos eyes are chinkier then a tibetan/.
yes ST Crook is here again to have a look at his competition/.
and there's only a handful of dudes to go along with Monor's bitchin/.
keep wishin for something of a better condition/.
cant be dope by design gotta be dope by definition/.

Maste
12-06-2007, 11:24 PM
bouncing soul thats some def poet shit there i like the flow a lot man
its good to see some good stuff in here every so often

haha ;)

[NESTER]
12-06-2007, 11:25 PM
yo yo yo spittin 24/7 crook rich mo fucka,
smoke em till i die or get high

Oink.
12-07-2007, 02:07 AM
i spit illiteriate ilogics modern science project
its bound reject/perfect intersecting
insecks logeded in many of necks
so whoooos next'/
Letters of unsent editers frail handed
check preditors dysect select dept collect/
money hungry monstas'taunt and hauntcha
simply more known the cancer(canca')
a hidden truth hides the answer/befounded sir//
discuss battle tatitics while raising the taxes
Get the money tree with axis axes//
catapolts disrupt the civial revolt
Missles everyone bolt

dunno what else to put, the fuck is that even dece or should i quit while im ahead ahaha.

SenTheFirst
12-07-2007, 10:40 AM
bouncing thats good shit


its so hip hop

SEZ
12-07-2007, 02:01 PM
pushing people past the point of proper perspective/.
cuz im so wreckless, aint no time to be corrected/.
but now with a new objective, my aim is redirected/.
wanna project shit without having to represent a set kid/.
and my shits so dope, youre gonna wanna inject it/.
for me there's little hope, cuz i like to get hectic/.
style aint no kinda joke, so you gotta respect it/.
why you frettin' and sweatin' is it cuz when the mics are checkin/.
you losin to a guy whos eyes are chinkier then a tibetan/.
yes ST Crook is here again to have a look at his competition/.
and there's only a handful of dudes to go along with Monor's bitchin/.
keep wishin for something of a better condition/.
cant be dope by design gotta be dope by definition/.

fucking dope!

Small Time Crook
12-07-2007, 03:49 PM
whoo-ha!

i need to vent because my moneys spent/.
landlord comin' around lookin for rent/.
and it seems like we in a trench of debt/.
but still i dont even break a sweat/.
til the boss at work calls and says come in at 5/.
aint doin nothin til then so i gotta come up with a lie/.
when i tell him he said "fine, but dont ask for favors"/.
the fuck have you ever done for me? wheres my raise sir/?
little smartass says that shit over the phone/.
and if he wanna talk shit tomorrow he'll get hit the dome/.
store manager'll prolly send me home, call the cops/.
just switch my position and wont be no murder plots/.
or tell him to quit bein such a little bitch/.
cuz i been on hand night and day workin other peoples shifts/.
hows that for favors i done ya, yet i still get one day off/.
50 hours a week, workin more then the boss/.
but he still makes a dollar or two more then me/.
and he cant speak english at all, thats a fuckin pity/.
never does anything he's supposed to, comes in, cooks and leaves early/.
in this fucking rage got my world swirling/.
gotta calm the fuck down hopefully the weed guys in town/.
call him up, get the bud, roll the blunt, people like me now/.

straight D mane, that little bitchass motherfucker is pissing me off so damn much lately.

and now something totally different

sellin americans they line of coffee/.
cuz its what makes me my currency/.
the paper i use to purchase nice things/.
new shoes, new clothes, chains and pinky rings/.
not tatted up, keep myself low key/.
look like the rest of you, no one knows me/.
well, some people do cuz they come and visit often/.
either get the shit that makes you numb or the shit that gets you coughin/.
chokin, dont blow rails, so i keep smokin/.
why dont i do it, prolly cuz i dont want my nose broken/.
so i dont get high on my own supply/.
but i do get high when the highschoolers come by/.
they smoke me up with the gram they just bought/.
and i aint gotta spend a cent or give it second thought/.

bouncingsoul
12-08-2007, 09:00 PM
speak to the luminescence, a presence that lessens
the impact, words in tact, in my mind, essence
of lessons, of old and young, the before me, the stories
are boring but make mornings' sun shine through glories
exaltation picks me up, head held high
if I had a chance, my hands could fly
use words as leverage, heighten the senses
keep letters, syllables, check, alphabet condenses
this for you who gave me the ability
these are the ones who die free, the ones that fill me
with pride, I'll cry for them, sacrifice a late
all-the-more forgotten, rotten joke, that seeks to abate
checks, keeps my head in line, direct the drive
and push it over, that's overtime, the arrives are alive
and seeking to be freed, their mine and only mine, please
refrain from using caution, stop em and leave
speak to anyone who listens, understanding comes easy
to those who give the time, the rhymes on need
a sense of love, of truth, an ability to some
disability to others, just answer the sum
that's where we came from, spawned from structured lines
excitement that lights up the sky in shimmering kinds
ones who found a place in this race called life, this mistake
we try and focus on these dark nights, but we need to make
or break, because we'll all crack under pressure
some just admit it better, hold the letters
embolden the ones holdin at heart some sense
of what we're looking for, scores condensed
veterans that tell two-time stories, the all-nostalgic
the gallant, cheers of victory, sitting 'round a ballet
a check mark denotes the future, such a simple
little gesture, can you believe we lived through this sinful
life? I can...

Passleoinj
12-08-2007, 11:12 PM
rappers in here , ideas fulfilled with delusion
their so-called skillz are just a fuckin illusion
this is internet , how fucking far you have to go to save your reputation
everytime im on the mic , i get the attention of every radio station
in the sector , im the inspector , doing this shit since 92
taking this shit seriously , i think i do this too
so im surfin on the net , waiting for a new victim ,
and it might be involving you
im not doing this shit to look cool , thats a little suicidal
but whatever im out of here , i just wanted you to feel me thats all


this shit is flying in the air , weed smoke entering my nastral
nice call , drilling hols in my brain , hit me til i fall
my rap'S tall , in here its the big boss
sick gloss , big cost , my shit'S expensive
everytime i open my mouth you go defensive
stay positive , the way you act backstabs you
cause i know youre sensitive
your bitch asked if the benz was yours you said nah its his
pointing your finger at me , but not the middle one
fucking with me equals fucking with the wrong one
the strong one , doing shit like its supposed to be done
but im still having fun and i know about snatchin your funds
im a pick pocket , and all you know is dick sucking and sick riding
everytime you battlin , youre dick itches the way youre grabbin the lil sack you havin
im having a lil snack , freestylin a bit , go back to training
im still practicing , answer back or die silent

Dondii
12-09-2007, 07:59 PM
Props Riote & **** for posting up ^^

Some freestyle shit:

My rhymes are original concepts, my freestyles live like concerts,
my flows ill while yours could be manufactured bye oysters.
im messing with netcees, but in reality im proving my skills,
aint testing degrees, but you suck like parents applying with pills.
The kids get rusted with hits, bong drips dead soals like slick pimps,
your gold glossy teeth, huge car is covering your tiny dick, quit the rims.
Im stealing the show like the grinch, fuck christmas, i got the whole package,
fuck the present, im the future enough, so forget the average.
While your strictly savage, hidden in the jungle with rhymes of garbage,
im tossed with carnage, my rhymes destroy toys like airports n heavy baggage.

Like popular universe chicks, you just miss the talent, (miss universe.. miss the talent, get it?)
I know how to handle the beat, you just keep it violent..

Hidden Teknique
12-09-2007, 09:55 PM
You act hard and tough but you aren't notorious
our lines shine like light from the sky we glorious
if you step up and push us we walk like warriors
only a handful of men on this thread come victorious
you use big words but damn can you really define?
you could spit complex, I could spit a simplistic rhyme
but yours would fade while mine goes down in time
another 16 bars going down in Hip-Hop history
all you ever were was a one verse mystery
people talkin who does this kid think he is?
I'm agreeing like damn now I'm a have to handle this biz


Really Really Tired

MonoR
12-10-2007, 09:34 AM
You act hard and tough but you aren't notorious
our lines shine like light from the sky we glorious
if you step up and push us we walk like warriors
only a handful of men on this thread come victorious
you use big words but damn can you really define?
you could spit complex, I could spit a simplistic rhyme
but yours would fade while mine goes down in time
another 16 bars going down in Hip-Hop history
all you ever were was a one verse mystery
people talkin who does this kid think he is?
I'm agreeing like damn now I'm a have to handle this biz


Really Really Tired

the 3rd line fucked up evrything

Oink.
12-12-2007, 02:47 PM
my concepts are like a concert without sound, be certain
im on the right terrain to disembowl the listeners brain
Rock hard mindframe, retract advance and attack left hook from the back
Understudys goin under with the undertoe, wouldntcha know?


Drownin in a cup of water, EVEN i fucked your mothers daughter
sendin your crew to the lyrical slaughter/ keyboard micmastery you cryin "the hiphop heads are laughin at me"

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-12-2007, 04:27 PM
i freestyle. i got flow on speed-dial
i learned my ryhme skills from sesame street as a child
and you know barneys got nothing on me, his shit is mild
so if your rap skills were on trial
could you defend or would you have to pretend,
forceing the judges will to bend
towards locking you up until the very end


sorry...lazy and bored
next one will be bettah

MonoR
12-12-2007, 04:50 PM
me and my familly are taking this shit seriously
im from the city montreal, what you got for me
im speaking reality, you aint got shit on me
life's a bitch you gotta understand it
im in front of you, ready to blast the shit
bring it faget, you got a mouth made for my dick
let the cum on your lips, better love it or spit it
im done whit you, ill let my brother finish it

ayyo ayoo its passleoinj on the mic know what im talking about
you snitch bitches are fuckin getting on my nerves it itches
fuckin leeches sucking the dick of everybody after they speak to us, uh ,
we killas eating everyone on our way ready to be us
toy busters talking like they come from vegas frontin like they got to proove to us big ups rappers
trying to be us come on , you cant be what you'll never be son
you aint good cause you got a ny cap and white tee on
im free born , we came in your crib and you had that wii on
claiming to be a gangster when you scared to go out there and bomb
wear the crown like im the king of this shit , im ready for my kingdom to come
yo im on, please pass me the weed and im gone

dck we rules, while your at school
playing whit teachers tits, you nothing but a bitch
im cool but dont push me fool, cause if you do
youll end up in a box whit no shoes
leave you whit no clue, what the fuck did i just do
dont front man cause im just fucking whit you

Hidden Teknique
12-12-2007, 07:10 PM
working hard still doesn't earn a solid dollar bill
a 9-5 fuck it, i'd much rather rob and steal
food in my stomach damn i need a meal
but for that meal man i'd never think to kill
but don't get me wrong i'm no where near the ghetto
working hard still not having a buck makes me less mellow
i wear fuckin stress like it's a goddamn vest on my chest
still not having what you want even though giving your best
shit's fuckin messed, peace out bitches

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-12-2007, 07:11 PM
moner spits shit like his mouth is his ass
he acts like a pre-schooler,he has no class
im gonna blast him back to the past
hes up the river with a paddle and no raft
and i dun care how good he thinks he is
but his style sounds older than iz the wiz
and he has no place in the fucking rap biz
hes jus one of those wannabe kids
making all the real rappers flip their lids

..TwoShameFull..
12-13-2007, 12:14 AM
bruv listen.. this a diary of a broken man
was pretty dope wen he spoke sum slang
rolled deep in the game till he poked a man
things crumbled fast like a castles from sand
wait hold it man let me take ya back
tell you how it began you gotta kno jack
if you gunna understan

since jack was a kid it was eifa sink or swim
always drowned wether it be thru thick or thin
he was sick of it so he'd take a stick wiv him
show those cunts n pricks the beast within
now unleashed the beast cuddn be caged
not a day passed were jack wuddn be raged
it wernt how he was raised it was how he was born
pigs on his back non stop cause now he had form
always in n out of court never any remorse
jus sorry he got caught, then began onslaught
see jack ad got sum respect from locals
gave him a place in the gang n for the first time he was hopeful
jack slang sum crack proud now cause he was gettin claps
n pats on the back cause he packed a mak
part of clan, he rose through the ranks
with every pound in the bank, but jack wern no plank
this kids had his plans he reached for the sky
when the time was nigh he'd put down his nine
jack was gettin big for his boots, so now begins his decline

Oink.
12-13-2007, 02:18 AM
Fuck all you lunch box emcees.

Devasting like a 10ton nutron bomb
leavin moms screamin face in they palms
inciteration anythin in tha blast radiation
no signal not even a radio station
Serious common situation//
Parrel universe rollin millions on tha coast
sent to the fire, pigs to tha roast
Cause no one like police Yo' freedom on lease//

ghettoblaster beats so heavy meltin plaster
Bitchins droppin', kids a bastard
Abusured medical docture cured
ale-ments from fragments of crushed skull fregrance
my flows harmful


aahahaha so bored.

Passleoinj
12-13-2007, 09:00 AM
working hard still doesn't earn a solid dollar bill
a 9-5 fuck it, i'd much rather rob and steal
food in my stomach damn i need a meal
but for that meal man i'd never think to kill
but don't get me wrong i'm no where near the ghetto
working hard still not having a buck makes me less mellow
i wear fuckin stress like it's a goddamn vest on my chest
still not having what you want even though giving your best
shit's fuckin messed, peace out bitches

i like that shit

Passleoinj
12-13-2007, 09:20 AM
DCKKKKKKK

my rhymes are vicious , more than delicious
you got more chance winning a horse race than beating the aces
build your foundations before making actions you might regret
cause im the best in this section
with the stacks ill get , the paper will pile up on the top of the computer
ill get more money than a honey that works for me in a party with a whole army
im a money getter,
my lifestyle is good , moved out the hood for good and i got a girl for my wood
my rapping skillz improved since ive been taking your beef for food
im on the good mood
so ill keep on rapping cause i got a future thats more than interesting in this thing
thats the shit that i love and imma keep doing
i got a passion for all the rhymes that im kickin


weak shit i had in my head , im just studying all kinds of stuff now

the earth is round , and you try to go in the corner
i go outta bounds , use all my funds to stay as real as possible
youre a fake mc trying to be true but you lie to yourself
how you gon make us believe in something you aint capable of
scared of death when its a part of life, you know the fable
dreaming of counting stacks on the table
doing your best so your kids could think you a hero
youse a zero , no cash no food on the table
youre unable to do something right , so you do something wrong
trynna impress your son , but all the shit you had is gone
cause youre career ended , as soon as you battled pass-one.

"Riot"
12-13-2007, 04:09 PM
Postin up without an emotional setback/
Dealin without a doubt,check out this stack/
Now sit back listen,words of wisdom,killin bitches as they come/
Its hard to hit me,its like pickin seeds and stemswith no thumbs/
Will neva be set free,got mad stacks,nigguhz beggin for cookiecrumbs/
I'm loud,furious,do you agree? give you a tummyache,don't ask for no tums/
Livin on the streets,by my own beats,sellin purp for 15 a pop/
you know me? you should,cause I'm runnin this shit,like cream of the crop/
non stop,fuck up ya get popped,follow my rules,strictly/
You'll live,do what i tell you,decent and quickly/


hahah rappin while takin a poo.
dont get much better ahhahahah

Yusef
12-13-2007, 09:16 PM
http://www.self-help.ca/forums/123flashchat.swf

MonoR
12-14-2007, 05:42 PM
once again dckrew on the mic
check it out

im hunting these chicks whit big tits
between you and me, that's what you need in a realtionship gee
put the whipped cream on the honey, kissing her pussy whit my lips
thats how it is
chillin whit my homie puffin the chronik
not those lilttle sticky, but those big conic's
stylin whit you is easy, weak rappers like you
im eating them, whit a rusty spoon
leaving you whit no clue, my style is crazy
like an encaged monkey, that just popped extasy
you know me, i aint the one you should try to beat
i managed to leave you dead in the streets
cause when i come at your door, it aint for trick or treat
but a punch at your chest and that's all your gonna get
its gonna be a fucken fuck fest, cause in here im the best at sex

once again dckrew
forever

sketch3
12-14-2007, 06:02 PM
u weild a rusty spoon,
wana rush ur doom,
i got the skill to crush the moon,
u say u got the same mind-state,
as a tame prime-ate,
but ur not rockin gorrila tactics,
wich lead to a high crime-rate,
stop fakin, cuss my feelins towords u define-hate,
you couldnt meet chicks on a blind-date,

"Riot"
12-14-2007, 06:08 PM
Just got done smokin my christmas nug,
Girls comin ova,wants more than hug,ya diggg?
After we done,i'll be searchin for cig,get word you callin me out.
Dont need no gun,aint no prick,but will whoop ya without a doubt.
zonein out,only a one way route,no other options.
think about it,experiment,mix up a concauchion.


I'm so high right now.
i love it.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-14-2007, 10:46 PM
dropping ryhme tasty like ice cream,
making tha girls scream
like your girl when me and my boy tag team
girlly goo leaking out her bust seams in wet streams
like wet dreams, i give you flamers morning wood
most of this internet rappin is not good
the concept of rhyme and flow misunderstood
and im not saying ive got any skills,
not saying that none of this shit kills
but bitch boy rap toys should run for the hills
cuase if theres kids ryhme that i just dont like
i'll attack that shit, my words a lyrical spike
turn my keyboard to a magical mic
compared to me youll be a lil kid on a trike

Passleoinj
12-15-2007, 09:33 AM
its 10:30 in the morning and i just woke up
that taste of shit in my mouth , but i didnt throwup
what the fuck just happened i dont remember at all
i was so high last night i thought i was playing baseball
i had nightmares of wierd dudes raping my friends
but when i woke up i was like damn , that just happened
that shit is so funny , i should be a humorist
cause with a big joke like you , i could do mad profits
this money in my pocket , this smoke in my mouth
shit i aint got no money , yeah that what i forgot
i got problems cause i feel like i have a hangover but i didnt drink
maybe cause my mind is too fucked up to think

aight that was a lil bit of me
then a lil bit of you

you say his shit define hate
well yours fucking define fake
you should at least think before talking
cause youre making non sense just like a baby in a sink
you innocent , its not about you , its all about us
you got a problem come to montreal and tell us
you think you intelligent , when you aint got shit to say
thats the reason you should probably shut the fuck up one day
im sick of you , thats what im trying to say
uk bitches like you talking about mindstate
aint got shit on us , and thats all you find , mate?
see im versatile i can speak your language
but i know after this freestyle , you wont be able to turn the page
this shit will hurt your feelings for a decade
im maybe far away from you but your feeling me
deep inside of your throat i see the rage rising
couldnt meet a chick on a blind date ?
is that how you get your "bitches" ?
after a fuck then you wonder why your dick itches?
man fuck off you and your venerials
i dont want you near 514 , the real generals.
>
SOLDIER SIT DOWN AND SUCK MY DICK

sketch3
12-15-2007, 12:38 PM
blud u cud neva speak my language,
cuss uv never felt the anguish,
of losing one of the fam, bithch,
ya dun wats gwanin, u cant under stand it,
bitch get of this forum, ur wastin the bandwith,
u never owned a gun, so its impossible to brandish,
a wepon, so juz shutup befor ur face gets steped on,

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-15-2007, 03:22 PM
so lonely and so fucking depressed
life is a cop and its got me under arrest
if i try to fight, it unloads in to my chest
eighteen years like bullets doing what they do best
nothing ever goes my way, my life is messed
im like a baby bird to weak to leave the nest
and if i did id prolly fall and break my neck
my life revolves around a fuckin welfare check
and my bloody social lifes a fuckin wreck
in the grand scheme of things im just a speck
but im not gunna stop trying to cope
because in graff i find a little fucking hope.
art slowly untieing the ropes
that hold my smiles back to clear a path for all the mopes

jape-the-nape
12-16-2007, 11:06 AM
ive quit weed a few weeks back until i start school,i realised i need to sharpen up abit

well anyway,im hangin for a bong ,its 4am and i wrote this
i dont take rap ,i freestyle when im drunk at the most so dont giggle okay?


DEEP END

CHAOS IS MY INTENTION
CONVENTIONS OF MAD MEN IN AFTER SCHOOL DETENTIONS
NEVER TOOK GOOD SUGGESTIONS
STUBOURN TO THE POINT OF DRUG INGESTION
NEVER INJECTING,ITS NOT MY BRAIN THAT ITS AFFECTING
THOUGHTS REPENTING OF THIS DREG COLLECTING
ADVICE REJECTING, PAINT PROJECTING,
SPOT INSPECTING AND COP DETECTING

..IT HAPPENS ON A DAILY BASIS
NEVER DID I THINK I'D FACE THIS...
FEELING OF DISS,ITS AN ENDLESS ABYSS
TRIED TO QUIT WEED BUT NOW IM TURNING TO PISS..
SO NOW I REMENISCE..OR ATLEAST I TRY TO...
ITS THE BEWGS, THAT LEAD TO THIS MEMORY DUDE...
SO NOW... IM SLUMPED IN MY CHAIR AGAIN
CHECK THE TIME,ITS 4 IN THE A.M AND ITS GOT ME CONTEMPLATIN'..
SHOULD I GO SOFT OR CONTINUE TO SLAY THEM
WHILE IM OUT,EGOS I DEFLATE THEM
WHILE YOUR AT HOME,ON GOOGLE MASTERBATIN
FUCKIT,CAUSE STORES I NEVER PAID 'EM

WHY TURN BACK NOW,MIGHT ASWELL DABBLE IN CHEMS
CRYSTALS FORMED IN DENS
MADE TO EXTERMINATE MEN
NOW YOUR IN THE CORNER NODDIN',LOOKIN LIKE A FUCKIN HENN
THE THOUGHT LURKS IN YOUR MIND'IL NEVER DO IT AGAIN'
BUT YO... IM JUST SUBSIDING
ITS THE BOOK OF UN WRITTEN RULES-WHERE THE FUCK HAVE YOU BEEN HIDING?

SOME PEOPLE...

THEY NEED TO RE CHECK REALITY
9 TO 5'S WILL LEAD TO NOTHING BUT FATALITY
NOT ENOUGH PEOPLE HAVE THIS TRACK MENTALITY
THERES NO SUCH THING AS MORTALITY
THESE THOUGHTS ARE JUST MY DAY TO DAY NORMALITY
YOU GOT ME THINKING WHY THE FUCK DOESNT THIS CUNT HAVE A SENSE OF MODALITY?

AND ON LIGHTER NOTE...

WHAT THE FUCK HAS THE BALL OF DIRT COME TO?
WHY DO WE WAIT IN QUES?WHY DO WE VISIT ZOOS?
WHY DO WE SHARE VIEWS? AND WHY ARE THEY SO SCREWED?..
WHY DO WE WATCH NEWS?WHY DO WE FORM CREWS?
WHY DO WE SUBDUE?WHY DO WE PERSUE?
WHAT IS OVER DUE? AND WHAT IS BRAND NEW?
WHAT IS TRUELY FAKE AND WHAT IS TRUELY TRUE???

DREAMS?...

I DREAM OF VISIONS OF MAGGOTS AND SLUGS
CORPSES DEVOURED BY BUGS
PRISONS FULL OF THUGS
VESSELS BURST FROM DRUGS
HOLES IN WALLS,CAUSED BY THROWN MUGS
LACK OF FRIENDS
STOLEN GRAFF PENS
NEVER MAKE AMMENDS
NEVER FOLLOW TRENDS
THATS WHERE MY THOUGHT TRANSCENDS

...AND I THINK



WHYS THE GOVERNMENT STRESSED ABOUT THE WALLS THAT NEED CLEANING

WHEN YA GOT...

KIDS STARVING FOR NO REASON
WHILE WE RELAX,UNDER ROOFS ITS JUST TEASIN'
..WHILE HOBOS ARE FREEZING
FREE MEALS IM STEEZIN'
NOT TRYING TO BE MEAN'N BUT THIS WORLDS JUST DEMEANING
BUT THERES NO USE TO TRY INTERVENING
THIS WORLD WASNT BUILD TO LAST,SO FUCKIT...IM JUMPIN IN THE DEEP END...




I'm going to bed.

"Riot"
12-16-2007, 12:26 PM
I'm about to spit fire,I'll make *****z retire.
I'll heat up your head,kinda like a hairdryer.
do this shit on a daily basis,Want me to list my daily agenda?
You think this is all about fame?,can't deny it,he we goooo.
play more mind games than a fuckin nintendooo.
Level after level,you STILL ain't on my level.
I'm so hot you would think I was the fuckin devil.
I fight back once you spit wack ryhmes,like a fuckin rebel.
You best get ya feet set,just so ya don't start ta tremble.
I spit quick,like dipset,keep my cool,even if a guns at my temple.

Jaaaa.
bored.

KASE2
12-16-2007, 12:29 PM
yo check, they call me KSTWO now shut tha fuck up b4 i fuckin whoop ur ass nd if u got beef then come see me nd ill shove a fuckin knife down your throat :)

sketch3
12-16-2007, 12:57 PM
even if i had a fraction of the skill i did,
it would still, be a mill,
to much to kill u kid,
must be fucking stupid,
ill edit an finish later

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
12-16-2007, 04:53 PM
im sittin here makein mops an shit,
even tho i said i was gonna quit
there aint no stoppin this graff, it
makes you like a junkie feindin for a hit
im thinking of it even as i spit
this rhyme, this time im not gonna get
caught, put on the spot by these cops
by tagging in on the walls of these shops,
in broad daylight. i just might, have to take flight
or stop, turn to the one who caught an make fights
but understand im a skinny kid, one-twenty pounds
so if i try and fight imma get thrown to the ground
and held there till im hearing those fuckin "woopwoop" sounds
and seein them lights that go round and round
and get thrown in the back all tied and bound
there goes my life, flushed down the drain
no job, no collage. its the end of the game
locked up with ppl who've suffered the same
fate, let out and now im second rate
never gonna see them fancy school gates
left with only my art
im back to the start
one mistake like a rusty ass knife in the heart

ODonthesetrees
12-17-2007, 02:20 PM
Well hello there kids, i know you missed meI'm gunna spit so you all can witness theeorgasmictotal acoustic soundcomin out my mouth shit gets aroundhello once again my friendsill be with you till the endbut the end is come right now, id like to shoutoh yesyes i really wouldfucking websites blocking me off where i stoodgot my IP banned by the manwho wanted me gone from this land...well fuck that bombingscience and fuck you too&quot;O.D. on these trees&quot; has been long gone, adue
high on cherry cough syrup and loestrin, i wrote that ding a ling for all my fans, my fans who loved me, sincerly yours stan

Yusef
12-17-2007, 02:40 PM
im from the murder capitol

nero122
12-17-2007, 02:47 PM
sittin in the tub scruba dub dub
i got what you need if you wnna do a dub
freestylin like a legend of the game
my lyrics are lame
but they cant be tamed
i suck worse than gw bush when it comes to lyin
i aint even trying........
so back to the dub im washing my pits
scrubbin my tits while i pop my zits
im a shemale ,female,hemale,
my dicks bigger than a spermwhale

TOEJAM
12-17-2007, 06:33 PM
i aint here to spit about the cliche guns and fear
more likely il spit some knowledge in your mutha fuckin ear
the kind you dont forget so dont sweat it
and when this shyt really does help you out dont forget who said it
anyway lemme cut to the chase if a dude go over your shit spray krylon in his face
unless of course your a toy and their better then jus go home and cry and everything will be better
and once you lift your head up
go out and paint again my friend cuz if u let your past box you in the progression wont begin
when you get critiqued dont spit it out let it in cuz then again theyr sayin it to help you as a friend
and dont spend all your time sulkin on how you suck you only live for you why should you give a fuck
when you hit rock bottom only way to go is up get your name up get nasty and before you kno it your the stuff
so peace out boys and girls its toe jam in about 5-10 years all will no who i am

sketch3
12-17-2007, 06:38 PM
bitch this aint sega genisis,
without earl u aint got a friend in this,
business, so stop pretendin bitch,
u aint gunna find all the ship peices,
pluss u spit fecis

no beef just like thie game

yea bitch http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/0/0f/Toe_Jam_%26_Earl.jpg/200px-Toe_Jam_%26_Earl.jpg (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Toe_Jam_%26_Earl.jpg)

"Riot"
12-17-2007, 06:42 PM
anyone up for a battle?
no one hella good thats going to kill my ass.
someone thats my level.

sketch3
12-17-2007, 06:44 PM
anyone up for a battle?
no one hella good thats going to kill my ass.
someone thats my level.

guese i cant battle u. only jokin

"Riot"
12-17-2007, 08:36 PM
guese i cant battle u. only jokin

alright so i take that as a yes.
give me your best,but theres really something I need to get off my chest.
Ima put this bitch to rest,im the reason ya girls always undressed..
in ya bedroom,she asked me to be her groom and I said.
fuck no,your were that one night stand,she smuggled me in like contraban.
you cant reach me,need to get stronger,***** eat ya cornflakes.
I just started this rap game shit,but you already makin mistakes.
I started,fuck I can't even remember,sometime in september?

Thats verse one
this is verse two,you already know that you through.
I'ma keep spittin until my faces turns blue.
give up ya lost,you know its true.
But I'm up for round two,I'ma take ya head and bash and bash it.
with words,syllables and rhymes,I demolish my opponents.
ay dude,dont choke,I make bitches freeze like a kodak moment.
your a fuckin hoax,spittin whack rhymes with grammar mistakes.
all unorganized,all fucked up,everythings all misplaced.

yadayadayadyayda

HoodRichSucka
12-17-2007, 09:15 PM
its been awhile, but ill still bite you.
come back wit style, then indict you.
ill sight u some lyrics to feed on and eat.
hurt ur teeth, then burp up and breathe.
dont remember me? hard to forget.
like slumber partys wit sluts and head.
break bread for dogs and brothers alike.
ur nothin to me cuz, ur stupid, ur a dike.
remember this verse, itll never die.
life forever like odb and 2pac, bye bye

sketch3
12-18-2007, 06:57 AM
alright so i take that as a yes.
give me your best,but theres really something I need to get off my chest.
Ima put this bitch to rest,im the reason ya girls always undressed..
in ya bedroom,she asked me to be her groom and I said.
fuck no,your were that one night stand,she smuggled me in like contraban.
you cant reach me,need to get stronger,***** eat ya cornflakes.
I just started this rap game shit,but you already makin mistakes.
I started,fuck I can't even remember,sometime in september?

Thats verse one
this is verse two,you already know that you through.
I'ma keep spittin until my faces turns blue.
give up ya lost,you know its true.
But I'm up for round two,I'ma take ya head and bash and bash it.
with words,syllables and rhymes,I demolish my opponents.
ay dude,dont choke,I make bitches freeze like a kodak moment.
your a fuckin hoax,spittin whack rhymes with grammar mistakes.
all unorganized,all fucked up,everythings all misplaced.

yadayadayadyayda

bitch ur factually, wack to me, for dissin my skill gramaticly,
stop hypin, cuss im calm stackin trees,
like a pot farmer, from botswana,
u dont wanna spot drama,
i spit so hot lammas,
get jealouse,like a broke ***** at string fellows,



edit.

ill break ur back in two,
leave u black n blue,
u must be sniffin crack n glue,
if u think u can stop me frm jackin you,
ya dont bust gats, even if u was packin 2,
id still be smackin u,
cuss im atackin crews,
claimin there backing u,
u cant say wats happeneds true,
cuss u lacklin clues,
wen ur head was in a sack an bruised,

g3zt
12-18-2007, 09:35 AM
Half of yall *****s is deprived of skill and lack lyrical knowledge,
Through my brain came all intellects from college,
Here lemme spit some true shit and show yall a real emecee,
I'm the force that helps people breathe.. ... ... ...

Aeiou..

I attack agressively Obliterating excessively,
Invigorating all approaching ashocking alike as electricity,
I invented intelligency, All others are affected in arrogancy,
Ignoring all achievements I assembled is only a example of arrogancy,

:p Too lazy to continue back to regular-

The only emecee I see in your eyes is the reflection of me,
I depict so vividly I make it so blind people can see,
My Point-Breakin Joints- While you fucking creep,
If yall are hard then fuckin challenge me...

-Arson

thats me
12-18-2007, 10:51 AM
sitting in my room alone
trying to que myself into my own zone
runnig away from home
cause im scared im afraid
i would rather be in my grave
then be a muthafucking slave
to a bitch
i had enogh of this shit
cant believe i put up with this

thats me
12-18-2007, 10:51 AM
sitting in my room alone
trying to que myself into my own zone
runnig away from home
cause im scared im afraid
i would rather be in my grave
then be a muthafucking slave
to a bitch
i had enogh of this shit
cant believe i put up with this

sketch3
12-18-2007, 01:31 PM
grow a fuckin spine,
u can hide now but its pointless duckin time,
if had enough y aint u buckin nines,
an chuckin mines,
under the feet of ur opressors,
u cant fold under pressuer,
cuss then bein a bitch is wat ur best for,
stop moanin it'll only make ur chest sore,
y u gunna waste ur breath for?,
if u feelin depressed or,
angered kill the bitch with a spanner,
should have an alibye as a standerd,
ur wereabouts, the nights intentions,
just make sure ur crime was never mentioned,
stick to the original statement, u gotta pay atention,
or ull fall victem to anal penatration,
at the hands of the state pens paitrons

"Riot"
12-18-2007, 06:21 PM
bitch ur factually, wack to me, for dissin my skill gramaticly,
stop hypin, cuss im calm stackin trees,
like a pot farmer, from botswana,
u dont wanna spot drama,
i spit so hot lammas,
get jealouse,like a broke ***** at string fellows,



edit.

ill break ur back in two,
leave u black n blue,
u must be sniffin crack n glue,
if u think u can stop me frm jackin you,
ya dont bust gats, even if u was packin 2,
id still be smackin u,
cuss im atackin crews,
claimin there backing u,
u cant say wats happeneds true,
cuss u lacklin clues,
wen ur head was in a sack an bruised,


go ahead and talk shit with your whack spits,short and terrible.
I'm spittin my flames,on fire,better run cause last time I check,you were flamable.
You riskin your reputation,steppin to me,more like a gamble.
But for me it takes a little dedication,here let me give you a sample.
You a little snitch,run to the police station,beforehand I left your trampled.
spit words for lubrication,now give me that fuckin mic.
With ya whack rhymes,shove it up ya ass and call it the deathspike.
but on the other debate,listen while my ryhmes accelerate.
Livin royal,while bitches like you cant even mastercate.
Cause you left with a ya jaw on the floor,while preteens masterbate.
to these mad ill ryhmes.

Hidden Teknique
12-19-2007, 08:20 AM
damn this whole thread is played out
so lately i've kept away and stayed out
but i'm back with an arsenal of attacks
so before you come at me look at the facts
go ahead take shots at me you all are just average
show me where the studio at man i'm a savage
the majority of you know i'm your lyricist superior
half of you kids i wouldn't even call you my inferior
you're even a step below that, you know the truth faggot
if i feel like it i'll spit like an automatic off of the dome
i see y'all jackin my lines, flippin em around, shits known
but it's alright, you bite your graff and my rhymes
just remember bitch it's originality that goes down in time

sketch3
12-19-2007, 09:29 AM
dear mister hidden,
i hope u aint steppin to me over that battle riddem,
cuss im played not out, an i got a few tekniqes of my own,
i call one the death cylone,fuse windy destruction to my bones,
one blast can destroy five homes,
not no small ones like i own,
talkin bout mansions like sly stones,
an if u dont know who that is then search on wikapedia,
cuss he was a rock legand, got sick of media,
attention,

garbage down tha way
12-19-2007, 03:25 PM
how many of you have actually paid dues and done time?
in the street where you cant fucking google, "dope punchlines"
internet battles, for kids to copy, paste, save, and steal shit.
meet me up in cleveland, then we'll sees whos spittin real shit
never chokin when you got the time to type out from the start kid,
in reality, yalld be gaspin for words to fill your bars with
i know this is the truth, thats why after this line im out
you can stick to your virtual rap game, til your fuckin crew find out.

hahaha

TOEJAM
12-19-2007, 03:40 PM
jus like tha average sketch you talkin alot bullshyt
i was tryna help *****s out so dont trip OR
maybe your the toy who jus got offended
so if you need some help ask dont pretend kid
im jus tryna fend for my self shyt
lets not act black talkin bout my boy earl liek that and ul get ya ass clapped
so stay in ya lane because on the real fuckin wit me cud get ya brains splattered on the tracks of a train im callin ya name
so dont try n run n hide incase u didnt kno this is lyrical homicide
wit ya crew by ya side dont worry they can get it 2 tell them to hop on the thread i play hitler u play jew

"Riot"
12-19-2007, 04:23 PM
dear mister hidden,
i hope u aint steppin to me over that battle riddem,
cuss im played not out, an i got a few tekniqes of my own,
i call one the death cylone,fuse windy destruction to my bones,
one blast can destroy five homes,
not no small ones like i own,
talkin bout mansions like sly stones,
an if u dont know who that is then search on wikapedia,
cuss he was a rock legand, got sick of media,
attention,

you done battlin with me?

Nem
12-19-2007, 06:29 PM
i was smokin the kush, bidin my time.
by now bein sobers an altered state of mind.
when the day winds down, i seem to find,
im loadin a bowl, rollin a J with a dime.

im not sayin im a balla, its like a daily activity
god damn mary jane its like she cant even get rid of me,
the epitome of my mere existence lies within or without me,
reply hazy ask again, the views lookin mighty cloudy.

by now i dont even give a shit if its chronic and dank,
i'd be tellin you a lie if i said i rock bank,
at the end of the week my paychecks blown,
just so i can sit chill and smoke to the dome.

MAST
12-19-2007, 08:17 PM
spit this out randomly the other day:

in the dark black embrace
spat the spazmatic crackhead's laughing face
said once you've been eye to eye level with the devil
the only thing you can do in this situation is revel

once you find the path to reality
the fantasy you knew don't seem too far fetched
but the breath in your stretch in the morning air
blows the demons that you never knew
--
so don't go looking, unless you're willing to find
unimaginable kinds of different feelings or times
and when you can't get back, don't say i never told ya
cause the shadows herein will forever try to hold ya

"Riot"
12-21-2007, 11:12 AM
go ahead and talk shit with your whack spits,short and terrible.
I'm spittin my flames,on fire,better run cause last time I check,you were flamable.
You riskin your reputation,steppin to me,more like a gamble.
But for me it takes a little dedication,here let me give you a sample.
You a little snitch,run to the police station,beforehand I left your trampled.
spit words for lubrication,now give me that fuckin mic.
With ya whack rhymes,shove it up ya ass and call it the deathspike.
but on the other debate,listen while my ryhmes accelerate.
Livin royal,while bitches like you cant even mastercate.
Cause you left with a ya jaw on the floor,while preteens masterbate.
to these mad ill ryhmes.


bump for me and sketch3s battle
hit me back dudeee.

Passleoinj
12-21-2007, 05:00 PM
Time's Up Motherfucker Im Up To Some Gangsta Shit
I Just Ate Spaghetti
With Darker Thoughts Than Rodney King
Beat You Up For Anything
I Dont Give A Fuck , Never Ever Will Mang
Youre Like A Cancer In My Brain
Fuck No Your Just A Tumor Thats Driving Me Insane
Ill Take You Off Rape The Shit Out Of Your Mind
I Would Love To Stab You But That Would Be Too Kind
Motherfucker I Just Lost My Mind
Writing In Capitals Excites Me
I Get All Your Attention And Piss You Off Gee
That My Goal , I Was Born To Be Mean
So Funky
My Flow Is Elastic But Dont Throw It Down The Stairs
It Aint No Slingky
I Dont Like To Freestyle Against Yall Thats Just Unfair
Just Die Man , Youre Just Another Person I Dont Care
About , Motherfuckaaa Know What Im About
Gimme The Mic , Lemme Spit And Im Out

sketch3
12-21-2007, 05:26 PM
riot
bump that shit all u like,
cuss ull pussy out wen u get the call to fight,
ur a foggot, bet ur suckin on balls tonight,
cuss no mc could beat me, even if yall unite,
so just put the pen aside,
befor i comit mass genocide,
like the war crimes of rwanda,
cuss the leval im on ur under,
u cant spit for a minute i can last for hundreds,
suggest u sit there an snif more coke n,
shut the fuck up or ull end up with ur jaw broken,

edit
iv only ever exsisted, to get lifted,
a fat spliff is, wat i wan on my wish list,

just thaught of it an didnt wanna frget

Small Time Crook
12-21-2007, 07:44 PM
time to get gangstuh gangstuh wha-what!

I got one cousin Cobra, my daddy Latin King/
one uncle Latin Eagle, my auntie an IG/
so put ya right foot infront of ya left foot, we finna take a walk/
in Prospect Projects, Maniacs leave you in chalk/
then down the road is Piper Lane where they SGD crazy/
walkin out with ya life intact is a big fuckin maybe/
then deeper in Mt. Prospect you gotta watch it for Sureno's/
them *****s is deep like the Latin Kings in Rolling Ghettos/
but out in Boxwood SD's and GD's have common territory/
and the Familia Stones in Des Plaines, they another story/
then out in Colonial, its shared by different cats/
some 13s, some Vice Lords, and even more Maniacs/
and this is just a small list, i aint even scratch the surface/
wanna run up on a random head, better have a purpose/

eh...bored..?

fOrSaQeN
12-21-2007, 07:50 PM
ROFLMAO@#(*@(*&@# epic thread.... buncha up and coming eminemz

ODonthesetrees
12-21-2007, 08:23 PM
well today in schhool, i got into a scufflepushed into a wall, my collarbone buckedi pushed the bith back but i stopped at thatdidnt want to get suspended for this faggso i go down to the nurse caue my shoulder is hurtingend up getting xrays and sttin here lurchingwell now my vactions done and i wont have funcasue this bitch named chris broke my colarbone, over a kickball

"Riot"
12-21-2007, 09:06 PM
riot
bump that shit all u like,
cuss ull pussy out wen u get the call to fight,
ur a foggot, bet ur suckin on balls tonight,
cuss no mc could beat me, even if yall unite,
so just put the pen aside,
befor i comit mass genocide,
like the war crimes of rwanda,
cuss the leval im on ur under,
u cant spit for a minute i can last for hundreds,
suggest u sit there an snif more coke n,
shut the fuck up or ull end up with ur jaw broken,

edit
iv only ever exsisted, to get lifted,
a fat spliff is, wat i wan on my wish list,

just thaught of it an didnt wanna frget


So whats up?
you regret it?,then you decide to edit it?/
you cant survive a hit,but got ahead and say you got street credit/
yeah pussy,i said it,shut your fuckin mouth,you even know what genocide means?/
I'm atheist,to bad for you,but theres more reasons why im the craziest/
But dude you don't even know,so go ahead and call me so and so/
but you gotta realize your ryhmes are slow,and you got no flow/
how long did it take you to get this battle on the go?/


no edits on my shit.
get back at me

syrup2
12-21-2007, 09:31 PM
im trying to get mushed and roll up a blunt
girl said she didnt smoke I said dont front
she cant deney that I got the kill and that kickin it with ya boy is so damn ill
we sat for a minite and got pretty based
she was giggling and shit like my weed was laced
but I dont get wet I just go dumb
she took her off shirt when I broke out the rum
now shits getting crackin her ass im smackin
her man comes in and its me hes attackin
but I dont want beef I aint on atkens
but ya boy always packin decue nine nines
its about to be all bad if I pull down the blinds
but it aint about killing its about chillin
you would to if u was off the afgoo goo im feeliinn

Maste
12-21-2007, 09:40 PM
i kinda wish i didnt suck at life
cant tell the difference between wrong and right.
tried to get back with my ex tonight
she got mad again another fight
she thinks im so nice but she doesnt even care
i make her feel bad for not bein there
she makes me so crazy im pullin out hair
i thought that everything was good and fine
i thought i had a chance to make her mine
but, she just wants to be friends
damn now im hearing that line again?
same shit different girl even though they are my world
this female race is drivin me crazy im too lazy
to pursue you for much longer so what should i do?
now im empty again no more girlfriends
how the fuck am i gunna move along in the end.
thats it thats the end im done complaining
chicks equal stress is all im sayin'.

sketch3
12-21-2007, 09:46 PM
dubol post

sketch3
12-21-2007, 09:47 PM
So whats up?
you regret it?,then you decide to edit it?/
you cant survive a hit,but got ahead and say you got street credit/
yeah pussy,i said it,shut your fuckin mouth,you even know what genocide means?/
I'm atheist,to bad for you,but theres more reasons why im the craziest/
But dude you don't even know,so go ahead and call me so and so/
but you gotta realize your ryhmes are slow,and you got no flow/
how long did it take you to get this battle on the go?/


no edits on my shit.
get back at me

the only thing i regret is not makin ur mother misscarege,
i shoulda been prepeared,
to kick the bitch harder down the stairs,
wen the pregnancy was declared,
but instead u grew up mentaly impared,
the only thing u got to say against me is i edit my shit,
i only added two lines about smokin so y bitch?
they wernt even in ur direction,
talkin bout my credit, wen u dont who i decked son,

MonoR
12-22-2007, 09:00 AM
you think you spit fire?
me and my krew think you should retire
yous a liar for all the shit youv been talking,
the game is now over
dont bother trying
i know you look like shrek
im from montreal i can point a tech at your chest , so check it
dont step, cause in here im the meanest
your never gonna get good,
even if you could, you wouldnt
i know when you look at me you say
damn this guy is so goood
i wish i could suck his dick
but you cant kid, this is internet
im so fucken sick, they call me mr net
your rap game is like hockey.
you always shoot and miss the net
come on mang, shut the fuck up
we all know you aint got shit to say
so what are you trying to proove, i know your gay
youre talking about genocide
but all the mcs in here think you should suicide
so dont show up in front of me
or youll die like the rest of my enemies
trust me,im done with you bitches


your lyrics are so bad, i could pee on it and laugh

sketch3
12-22-2007, 09:05 AM
u like to talk about me sucking ur dick alot,
harboring some homosexual fantasies are we?
my lyrics are bad but atleast i can think of somthing better to rhyme with good than good

TricksForKids
12-22-2007, 09:26 AM
All a yall look like you need a little wake up...

Its beena while..

Ill bring these peasants the business, put their death on my wishlist, cuz on the mic i bring more "presence" than christmas, so if youre testin my sick spits, none of ya punches will land, cuz ya lines make me "throw up" without even touchin a can! im nothin but man, but often my text flames, when im poppin the best dames...hell you couldnt "see tricks" if you were watchin the x games....

meh...its early

sketch3
12-22-2007, 09:30 AM
do u actually write/record/spit
cuss thats fly

"Riot"
12-22-2007, 11:43 AM
the only thing i regret is not makin ur mother misscarege,
i shoulda been prepeared,
to kick the bitch harder down the stairs,
wen the pregnancy was declared,
but instead u grew up mentaly impared,
the only thing u got to say against me is i edit my shit,
i only added two lines about smokin so y bitch?
they wernt even in ur direction,
talkin bout my credit, wen u dont who i decked son,

shut your mouth,is monor now your companion?
I'm sure hes streched your ass out as big as the grand canyon.
you smellin ya shit now,yeah im runnin rampid.
you have no fuckin credit,neither do i.
So i just got one question,why? you tryin to be the next eminem?
you and him don't go together like a fuckin synonym.
now you can try again,you've never even decked a fool.
you a fuckin pussy,more like a tool,now monor.
yeah i spit fire,remember the old times? Omgz u lyke stole miii rhymes!?
your still nothing compared to me after about 100 trys.
So go ahead and try to step to this.
but like a dog,ill smack ya and rub ya face in my piss.
so don't come back to me sayin hey homie! no diss?
now as i wait for ya dude passeloni,what a phony.
I bet that bitches breath reeks like boloney.
i'm sure the only reason you two friends is cause ya both lonely.
yeah im makin ya face quirk,but once I leave ya both yell CIRCLE JERK!

mas$
12-22-2007, 12:27 PM
this is some fly ass shit
but y'll be beefin like y'all belong in a pit
get real this jus the net,
nothing worth a sweat,
he dont even know your face
let alone enuff to bring disgrace
so before i drop the rest of this rhyme
lemme tell you for the last time
all y'all do is whine!!

haha first attempt at freestylin
wat you ppl think?

bouncingsoul
12-22-2007, 12:56 PM
speak to the luminescence, a presence that lessens
the impact, words in tact, in my mind, essence
of lessons, of old and young, the before me, the stories
are boring but make mornings' sun shine through glories
exaltation picks me up, head held high
if I had a chance, my hands could fly
use words as leverage, heighten the senses
keep letters, syllables, check, alphabet condenses
this for you who gave me the ability
these are the ones who die free, the ones that fill me
with pride, I'll cry for them, sacrifice a late
all-the-more forgotten, rotten joke, that seeks to abate
checks, keeps my head in line, direct the drive
and push it over, that's overtime, the arrives are alive
and seeking to be freed, their mine and only mine, please
refrain from using caution, stop em and leave
speak to anyone who listens, understanding comes easy
to those who give the time, the rhymes on need
a sense of love, of truth, an ability to some
disability to others, just answer the sum
that's where we came from, spawned from structured lines
excitement that lights up the sky in shimmering kinds
ones who found a place in this race called life, this mistake
we try and focus on these dark nights, but we need to make
or break, because we'll all crack under pressure
some just admit it better, hold the letters
embolden the ones holdin at heart some sense
of what we're looking for, scores condensed
veterans that tell two-time stories, the all-nostalgic
the gallant, cheers of victory, sitting 'round a ballet
a check mark denotes the future, such a simple
little gesture, can you believe we lived through this sinful
life? I can...

That was like a week old but I don't think anyone saw it?

mas$
12-22-2007, 01:00 PM
o.o
damn you!!
haha
i like the flow but wat do i kno:p
how the hell did u seriously freestyle that?

Maste
12-23-2007, 12:24 AM
haha i hear ya mass that was hella long... anways

given time to rhyme ill rewind in my mind
play the same tracks til i find
inspiration in the nation i live
the laws that i follow the shit that i give
who wouldnt want to live
in the united states?
who cares of everyone here is fake
maybe me i cant tell i cant think freely
im decieved by the media almost daily
so what do i do when ive had anough
i spend my time doin other stuff
i kinda lost it there dont know where im goin
words are flow outta my fingers before im knowing
what im saying man im just playin around
tryin not so hard to make a funky sound
now let me start it up with the ebeef
this silly ass kids who wanna be from the street
not me. i know where i live and i dont wanna give
noone a chance to forget it, regret it or not
i will never got shot. in a driveby shootin
i could spend my time ...fuck
i have no clue where that thought went
time to stop im just spent
fuckin late at night and im talkin to the ex
have no fuckin clue what to expect
everytime the convos over my minds wrecked

meetermaid
12-23-2007, 01:53 AM
thought it didnt post so i rewrote what i remembered and added to it....

meetermaid
12-23-2007, 02:13 AM
so like i'm just chillin and listening to rilo kiley
happy cause the guy i like just sent me an e-smiley
now i gotta change it up to a little elbow
turn it up full blast you gotta let them kids know
see i change my mind a lot
only thing i've stuck with is graff and pot
how fucking sads that?
now 'scuse me while i come up with a bon mot
bloody canadians just gave it up to the french invasion
je m'appelle meetah, fucking with more seeds than a bird feedah
i used to speak mad french, had me confused with a haitian
now i got it all mixed up with spanish, mandarin and hebrew
ni hao, soy un judia, baruch atah adonai eluheinu
like "meeter hamotzi lechem"
damn right i bring the bread!
but don't get me wrong i'm no chickenhead
rather have a friend than a fuckbuddy instead
see cause, i believe fams more important than anything
money, 'things' , drugs, anything.
what means the world to me?
not diamond rings nor shiny things
it's that shit that pulls at your heartstrings
but enough of that, i know yall dont wanna hear it
i'm bored now so i'ma stop the spit.

Passleoinj
12-23-2007, 09:54 AM
struggling musician on the run motherfuckers know
i send hem to the mortician no hesitation tho
everyword i send is a revolution in your head yo
aint no che' this time its all about denso
the numero uno rapper on this forum
i already told ya , bitches like you i'm killing hem
you talkshit so much you cry fecal matters
trying to be a good g , bitch you aint marshall mathers
send you back where you come from is all that mathers
aint gonna let a fucking yellow spit on my ancestors
claiming to be a gangster but yo , youre from vancouver
im brainwashing you motherfuckers from all your dirty thoughts
i bet if you were in the ring with me , you couldnt take 3 shots
biggie had dreams of fuckin RNB bitch
your dreams are more like :"Please in my ass, Brad Pitt"
you thought i didnt know but i know all that shit
pay attention very closely when ill spit
I won't leave
I won't go
Best believe
Youre a homo

(some shit i was working on)

mas$
12-23-2007, 10:16 AM
yo bro,
thats got some definite flow,
but u still go on, make urself sound like a hoe
me, all i need is some joe, ya kno,
forget the food chain, you kno im on top, even if i do sound like a cop
but u, ur not ready for this chop,
now get some real hip hop,
before i feel for my gat
and spill ur blood all over this hat

(no real beef btw)

"Riot"
12-23-2007, 10:26 AM
shut the fuck up with all this gat bullshit.
punk motherfuckers.

Passleoinj
12-23-2007, 10:32 AM
shut up with your bullshit
punk motherfucker.

mas$
12-23-2007, 10:34 AM
hahah lol
well gun and mat dont rhyme do they?
im not really a punk as motherfucker irl

mas$
12-23-2007, 10:36 AM
punk ass motherfuckers like john tucker,
they all are full of talk, but when it comes to beef all they can bring is pork

"Riot"
12-23-2007, 10:49 AM
shut the fuck up
your shits sooo played out.
little internet thug.

"Riot"
12-23-2007, 10:50 AM
shut up with your bullshit
punk motherfucker.

hahah get back with your boyfriend monor.
Go on now cutie.

mas$
12-23-2007, 10:51 AM
chill out dude
im jus bored this is like my third time even tryin freestylin
LOL
and i dont pretend or try to be an internet or even a real life thug

"Riot"
12-23-2007, 10:55 AM
then you stop ryhmin about flashin ya gats.
n poppin dem f00lz.

mas$
12-23-2007, 10:56 AM
whos the internet thug now?

mas$
12-23-2007, 11:21 AM
back on topic, all i can smell is my new copic,
cus im an artist,
and all i do is paint
its mad enuff to make u wanna faint,
we hit them streets, but no, wer aint thugs,
we dont carry gats or pop them slugs,
rep the crips or sell acid trips,
instead we spread our name, in a pathetic search of some fame
it may seem like a game, to all you folks,
but for us its life, a never endin struggle,
no jokes
so lemme end this rhyme, and get some cans and caps
before i go and drop some tags and slaps
i want you to know, that these arent failed painters,
wer the only artists who paint for the sake of the community
sorta like saint(er)s

haha
*edit* it looses rythim toward the end
i guess practice makes perfect

Passleoinj
12-23-2007, 11:31 AM
scared to spit so you diss ?
waiting for you to bring it to me little bitch
internet thug hahaha
bring your ass over here

MonoR
12-23-2007, 03:36 PM
im the guy in the corner chillin and singing
now you go on and diss my brother for nothing
what the hell is this
now your in the vicious circle of death
ready to die and you better accept
its respect over bullshit in our familly
you wish i was gay but its never gonna happen
and for the weak shit you spit your never going to get forbiden
so watch your mouth before spiting
and watch what happens when i bring Pass in

i leave all you bitches on the concrete , no breathin
blood spillin , holes in your body leaking
impale you with the words that i speak
truth sentences for you innocents
mc's in here are just a waste of talent
for the 3rd time , bitches like you im killing hem
no mercy , prolification of the french invasion
now all you haters whining , whats gonna happen?
im waiting for an answer but still its hopeless
theres a lil probability to see you like the monster of lochness
what youre selling is expensive , your product is bullshit , i call that fraud
im making my ideas words like i wanna send you to the morgue
wheres your style , wheres your flow
you aint got none of that so where'd you go?
yo , riot is another bitch in a bunch , another kid scared of my punch
youre beef is my meal , and im about to brunch
motherfucker ,im captain crunch
you diss us with the shit you complex with
so you put the blame on the others
like youre not the gay guy , staring at men in the showers
face the reality , its gonna pop up one day
just like the aliens , in independance day
Just can't espace.

hahaha youre so fucking gay
pass le oinj and monor out.
10-4

"Riot"
12-23-2007, 04:50 PM
whos the internet thug now?

sarcasms a bitch,right?
sooo first. you rap about flashin gats.

now you rap about not flashin gats?

hmm interesting.
I'll post up to that toy monor later.

entry
12-23-2007, 07:11 PM
better watch out your face is the doormat
thinking im stupid like borat flow so sick
smith and wessun in my palm like an erection
stroke the midsection and learn a lesson

sayyy whatttt

Maste
12-23-2007, 08:41 PM
haha that was pretty funny

know what i just love man the internet beef
these kids on here faker than your ma's xmas reef
monor and pasalajeo how the fuck you spell his name?
i bet those two guys are one in the same
who the fuck else would team up in this game
whey they fuck do you guys bring it when this isnt real
hiphop is life and you needa feel
the rythem before you start spitten
man ma$$ is just fuckin around
tryin make a silly sound
why the hell you have to go around
sayin hes something that he clearly isnt
and the you say shit not worth spitten
so grab a coat and a mitten
and go outside man get out of the house
your childish like donald and micky mouse
merry xmas mutha fuckers. peace out

btw i am in no way a gangster nor will ever will be
...i like hiphop but i am not an mc
so even if you try to get back at me
i wont care and ill ignore ya ha ha!

entry
12-23-2007, 08:44 PM
better watch out your face is the doormat
thinking im stupid like borat flow so sick
smith and wessun in my palm like an erection
stroke the midsection and learn a lesson

i just ripped the thread apart with this one..
just beat it!!!!

MonoR
12-24-2007, 12:37 PM
happy chrismas y'all
and there's a gift for riot

fuck you!

G-Fat
12-24-2007, 12:54 PM
i got rhymes that make nerds wheeze
no gold chains, graphic teez is my steeze
you may think my rhymes suck
but you have cunt cheese.


haha

happy festivus.

"Riot"
12-24-2007, 03:33 PM
happy chrismas y'all
and there's a gift for riot

fuck you!


word wooorddd.
But watch this,watch this come up,if it hasn't aleady occured.
your flow is shit,better yet,absured.
If someone asked me to crit,i could make a fuckin list.
whatup pass,you two callin me gay,when you spittin in pairs.
Well how cute,you need to go back to braidin each others pubic hairs.
haha french invasion?your mind is full of propoganda and inflation,ya airhead.
I'm caucasion,killin the mic,merry christmas. you two are full of stories.
for me,no persuasion,aint even gotta tell,this is my missionary territory.
this is all for entertainment,no records to sell,thats only temporary.
i'ma leave you in amazement,make them pupils go massive.
I'm sure we could make an arrangement,to toss you in oncoming traffic.
leavin ya boys scared,thinkin oh my god thats tragic.
if you even care,you can compare,like david blaine,im magic.
i can blow it up in your face,loud and quick,like a halfstick.

psshhh.

mas$
12-24-2007, 03:38 PM
wowww that was hot

"Riot"
12-24-2007, 03:52 PM
thanks bruh.