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np man, i hate this thread now, i dropped my first few lines here and everyone smashes my confidence haha
how'd u learn to do that? jus practice?
Passleoinj
12-24-2007, 03:57 PM
since its christmas eve , i wont commit any felonies
im gonna answer to that shit tomorrow morning
merry christmas bitches
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 03:58 PM
haha i was high when i said that. my bad.
hahah dude go back like 10 pages and my lines were weaker than yours. Just use bigger words and expand your vocabulary.
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 03:58 PM
since its christmas eve , i wont commit any felonies
im gonna answer to that shit tomorrow morning
merry christmas bitches
WHOOP WHOOP!
Ill be waiting.
Passleoinj
12-24-2007, 05:59 PM
i knew a bitch called RIOT, she tried playing me once,
wait til i fall asleep, take my money and bounce
but now i caught her red hand and it's gon be hell on earth
drag her ass behind my car, grind that smile on the dirt
make her face the concrete, now she can talk about the turf,
i made the bitch a widow , threw the husband out the window,
4-5 shots in the dome , damn , that was the wrong people
so lock all your shit , cause im coming at your door
gentlemen strap your bitch, i'm coming at your whore
the bitch was cryin, teeth ripped, ribs broken,
i thought the bitch learned her lesson after the smith & wesson,
i left her on the creaky floor, left the bitch agonizing,
all the shit i made her go through i was analyzing,
almost paralysed she, cried on my black nikes,
i left the bitch stranded there, romancin with the floor,
she had dreams of ending her life soon cause she didn't want no more,
and now years went by, i met her yesterday
she say she no more whore, she's an inspirin MC
i had to hold my breath for like three days,
cause i couldnt stop laughin my ass off , bitch sue me
pursue me , yeah call the cops , ill pay the fuckin jury
i'll win the case and i'll still run away with all your jewelery
understand now , you little prick shook to death of the streets
it'll take more than a lever to get you off my dick
fuck riot and merry christmassssss
it came earlier , i had inspiration
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 07:57 PM
hahah inspiration.
I got that shit on lock 24/7,do you need a demonstration.
agility like seven eleven,i don't want your bullshit complications.
my engines revvin,get ready for my vocalization.
hellooo, are you listening?,I don't spit no whack dramaizations.
your shits way to easy,like speech class communications.
now ya feelin queezy,stage two,humiliation.
no escapin,you need to resort to a new obligation.
workin on my ation ryhmes.
thanks for the practice bruh.
entry
12-24-2007, 08:09 PM
riot your alot better than you use to be keep it up
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 08:13 PM
thanks man.
ive been working on freestyles alot.
got alot written.
Passleoinj
12-24-2007, 08:22 PM
blehh
good battle tho
entry
12-24-2007, 08:24 PM
now the projects talking that sombody gotta die shit
Its logic unless its somebody thats in my click
get out the car you hear click clack you turn all i see is your back
hesitate this bringing me to a ether mindstate beware leaving
your blood running cold in fear
old shiet
entry
12-24-2007, 08:24 PM
we use to be real homies no longer hang
AZ quoted and things still never changed
we use to do anything for the dolla
jack kids start rockin gold chains
smoke weed everyday like tupac said it
weve been through all this shit still living for nothing,
the love still remains i got your back never complain
i was there when you were getting jacked
got my celly out and thats that,
you yelled get back while we started getting the stack
blood stained white tee suburb kids thought we were real G,
you took me in fed me food when i went stray
never supported the drugs that got to me,
only a real homie that i could trust would do that for me,
we made it through high school and its mighty viscous
on this road to riches,
but id rather have a friend to roll with me then the stacks of money
and no true homie
older shiet
entry
12-24-2007, 08:25 PM
i wake up on a daily basis
shape up for the daily faces
end up at the daily places,
my world is mad craziness
living life as what seems to be painless
i cant tend to restrain this,
small kid act tough grew up in the roughs
headed to the suburbs,
where i grew up ended up selling herb
mad money and couldn't intend to learn
school was a struggle,
my logic is at a street smart level
trying to keep me out of trouble,
living in a destructive household no love
no trust only fear,
hmmm im done merry christmas
entry bringing it baccccck
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 09:48 PM
blehh
good battle tho
what you mean blehhh?
are you done?
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 09:51 PM
oh and if monors there.
ask is his stupid ass is done yet hahah
Passleoinj
12-24-2007, 10:02 PM
ask him yourself , but thats only if you dont choke
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 10:09 PM
Our mental states are clashin,dont give lip.
i'll have to shorten your rations,if you keep sayin shit.
yeah yeahh yeahh, enough of this chit chat.
get to buisness,it has occured,that the feelings of hers.
Could possibly move skyscrapers,somewhat absurd.
lines blow up so big,leavin craters,I'm a rhymesayer,like and illness without a cure.
Dustin them haters,like monor and pass,while my rhymes stay pure.
dont trust me,I'm a traitor,like benidect,the only man I would call sir.
Here to leave my mark,like stainer,consider it a benefit,cling like a burr.
keystyle for talking
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 10:09 PM
ask him yourself , but thats only if you dont choke
HAHAHAHAHHAH!!
Whatever youuu sayy.
then..hey monor is your stupid ass done yet?
entry
12-24-2007, 11:27 PM
i got your back riot
beef beef beef!!
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 11:30 PM
haha whoop whoop!
We need to have a legit battle. like teams or some shit.
that would be dope.
entry
12-24-2007, 11:33 PM
id be down someone set it up!!!!!!
"Riot"
12-24-2007, 11:36 PM
Who would fill up teams and shit?
Do we just ask a mod to set up a battle?
entry
12-24-2007, 11:44 PM
all you spit that unoriginal lazy flow
everyday typical shit, get my drift
cant play an old dog with new tricks
just stand back relax and take it in
ill add some season i usually rap with a reason
but this be liqour talking im like santa instead
of dropping presents i drop bombs like im cruisin
in a sleigh rollin with saddam
just waiting on my shit to hit the fan man
id be dammed if i do dammed if i dont
rip you apart hope you hearin this keep it religous
art thou at the block now watch out 21 mo stitches fo snitches
and ill rob you of your fame and riches, im satanic santa
ill fuck your savage crack baby bitches too
baaaah im determined your learing your lesson
say what im at the end of this motherfucking session!!
dont ask me man im so drunk talk about this
battle shit tomorrrow merry christmas btichess
im out!! ^^ hella wack rhymes up there
MonoR
12-25-2007, 01:19 AM
im gonna reply.
Yusef
12-25-2007, 08:40 AM
merry christmas to all my dudes in this thread
"Riot"
12-25-2007, 07:29 PM
im gonna reply.
sometime soon would be nice.
or you could just give up and make it easy on yourself.
face it,your going to lose.
look at pass,hes done.
your turn.
"Riot"
12-25-2007, 09:00 PM
I'm about to penetrate your mind,with syllables.
Out here we dont play,just generate hate,livin in hellholes.
i'll slay you with this,you wont be able to tolerate,to make money i'll sell your soul.
you've both already got me pissed,after i win this,i'll celebrate,lets make that my goal.
you didnt want to fuck with me,you wished,afterwards haunt your mind like a ghoul.
you both pussies,can't even generate a verse worth the time and skill of this.
got me thinkin your gay,like men carrying handbags and purses.
this verse blew up like a airbag in a 10 car pile up on the busy interstate.
ya rhymes dirty like a washrag,like a terrorist,i'll intimidate my opponents.
i'll rhyme to you off the top of my head,careless,while you and pass make gay poses.
ya dig?
MonoR
12-25-2007, 09:26 PM
i care about you riot you know it right?
"Riot"
12-25-2007, 09:32 PM
hahah quit being a bitch and spit back to me.
entry
12-26-2007, 12:35 AM
i put the ring on your finger
look in your eyes let the tears linger
baby everything will be alright
pretty like vanilla tasty like cinnamon
and sex is never a minimum chea
this aint a movie this is real life
they can say what they like but we dreamin
fuck em they cant wake us up when we convensate
we like salt and peppa and your like no other
i want you to be my babys motha forever
so this is the interlude to a neverending love letter baby
lil sneak peak at some lady lovinggggg woowooo
yeahh i can be cheeezy too bitches wheres the love
SeapNSR
12-26-2007, 09:45 AM
i leave you speechless like motor neurone disease
you think youre a burner but im the quick eze
and most of you bitches still cant stomach my steez
like off cheese
i make you weak at the kness
off balance like i severed your semi circular canals
i dont have much clientelle
cuz nobodys real enough to fit in my lyrical shell
i squirt ink and propel
away from this city of hell
where too many metros dwel
i cant stand the smell of too much gel
and pink shirts are repulsive
it aint the alcohol causing convulsions
cuz i can keep that shit down like stones in the ocean
while your throwing up just from my flows motion
guess you wernt prepared for this lyrical explosion
eating your feeble mind like corrossion
my hook lines will sink ya
like melting ice caps
i cut faces out of kodak happy snaps
of your crew spitting crappy raps
if this cat says your wack then youre exactly that
so get packed and roll out like optimus prime
i kick cops in the spine
for trying to keep me in line
cuz i dont have the fucking time
to follow your bullshit way of life
what a fucking waste
id rather end up dead in a gutter than live in your place
you stupid fucking sheep
i jump through time like quantum leap
give history a tweak to make sure this shit dont repeat
the day i meet defeat is the day democrats win seats
aiyo its m.seap
just another potheaded deadbeat
sleeping all day in semen covered bedsheets
dreaming of where the ocean and the sky meets
away from ignorant peeps
and kids with heads of meat
claiming they run streets
when theyre at home watching television repeats
of the saddle club while nibbling their mums treats
those tasty sweets smell great
but get me the fucken veet
cuz you rhymes fucking reak
like i used to after wasting weekends stirring pie meat
or a summer down the drain moving concrete
but now i sit in my easy seat
and put my feet up
while i roll the weed up
and hit your street up
and ill keep doing this shit
until i meet the grim reaper
Passleoinj
12-26-2007, 11:01 AM
sometime soon would be nice.
or you could just give up and make it easy on yourself.
face it,your going to lose.
look at pass,hes done.
your turn.
wow , youve really reached a high point in my TOP 10 most stupid people
maybe i just thought youre answer to my freestyle was fucking bullshit , thought you were a waste of time and just said fuck that
internet is not my life champ , i have other things to do
now eat my shit , imma spit something to you cause youre just too full of yourself
selfproclaimed king , you aint shit
"Riot"
12-26-2007, 12:50 PM
alright SWEET!
I'll wait for it.
so i can win again.
w00t w00t
garbage down tha way
12-26-2007, 02:12 PM
alright, please explain how the fuck seize is a faggot?
you bitch made rapper, ive got the steeze you wish you had kid
and that goes for you and anyone you got behind you
reguardless of how fast you run, the tech 9 will find you
lyrically, ill cut you down like calories in a diet
along with the other 500 toys who write RIOT
its so easy, yall already crackin like pipes
ill get you with the left hook, aint expectin that right
your bars got no structure, and i aint talkin bout your pieces
thinkin your rhymes are cold, they bout as cold as 4 fleeces
dont get me wrong though, i aint sayin you spit heat
im just tryin to tell that your shit is less than weak
eh eh eh oh oh
ehhhhhhhh der chum
said my bum
in the old drum
cause the world is full of scum
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Oink.
12-26-2007, 03:46 PM
deputys body left under tables
bullets and knives filled his cranial
bribs with pennys and dimes, its fatal
mothers and wives robbin the cradle
so lets spit the knowledge on hood fables
lil bo peeps lettin old men under the sheets
we puttin ink to the streets
soo lazy ahaaha
Small Time Crook
12-26-2007, 10:48 PM
im a prophet, ive seen all that has been and all that will be/
Still G, *****s out here is tryna kill me/
they dont want my visions, just my descriptions/
so they can snatch my at work, begin the pistol whippin/
drag me off to wherever they stay, what they call home/
word play and twisted mind games, why wont they leave me alone/
howd did this shit happen/
first i was rappin then i was the main focus of a kidnappin/
and now these *****s is sayin they gonna bust a cap in/
me/ oh please, god, if you there, say this cant be/
but you dont listen, only turn deaf ears/
you leave me alone, to combat all of my fears/
and they all go away, when the needle empties/
tempt me, go ahead, ima give you two pennies/
and a dime every line in this rhyme is so raw youll wanna stop at two but go on to nine/
been a minute, hasn't it?
shit pickles!
"Riot"
12-27-2007, 01:37 PM
alright, please explain how the fuck seize is a faggot?
you bitch made rapper, ive got the steeze you wish you had kid
and that goes for you and anyone you got behind you
reguardless of how fast you run, the tech 9 will find you
lyrically, ill cut you down like calories in a diet
along with the other 500 toys who write RIOT
its so easy, yall already crackin like pipes
ill get you with the left hook, aint expectin that right
your bars got no structure, and i aint talkin bout your pieces
thinkin your rhymes are cold, they bout as cold as 4 fleeces
dont get me wrong though, i aint sayin you spit heat
im just tryin to tell that your shit is less than weak
your frontin,you go be friends with someone who digs gay porn.
huntin down dick suckin pics,then posts em on a forum.
Yeah,for your information,I write OFB,from kc,what you know about that?
yeah you fake like animation,and quit sayin sayin lyrically,you dont deserve it.
my bars are together tight,like insulation,ill ruin you,cynically,then perserve it.
your ego to big,goin big like inflation,you leave after this,typically,get what you deserve.
this is my battle,your a whack mc violation,Ill win then make it seem heroically,then say yeah you just got served.
they then say im way to hot for you,then put me on probation,When i get out i'll go insane,demonically.
motherfucker just stop,you know you though,this is my occupation,fuck with me again?,my lines will cut you vertically.
garbage down tha way
12-27-2007, 04:31 PM
oh my bad, ofb, you ONLY a FAKE BITCH
i never been on that homo shit, you only take dick.
and your mind is playin tricks if you actually think your flows tight
take my advice, stop spittin your wack immortal tech bites.
whyd you even respond? making yourself look fucking stupid,
kc, wheres that at? ill bomb on you and you fucking crew kid
you'll never last in this, and dont chomp, my shit aint edible
your nothin compared to me, not even a fraction of my decimal.
"Riot"
12-27-2007, 04:34 PM
i didnt bite immortal tech?
wanna tell me where? I dont even listen to them??
Passleoinj
12-27-2007, 05:56 PM
i dont dig all the shit that you are trying to shout
its about time that you shut your fucking mouth
half of the shit you say doesnt even rhyme
and you dare diss me , and talk about crime
this is a new generation , dck trife life propaganda
imma make you my fucking slave , official little *****
yo should commit suicide just like your 2 fathers
that shot themself in the head , after finding out their son was a daughter
ayyo its passleoinj
youre so illitrate , you coudlnt spell my name
there aint no space left for ya in this game
since monor and me been taking all the fame
you lame , weak mc'S always the same
spitting about some shit you didnt live
about some shit you never banged
bitch , youre judging my lifestyle
its my turn to show you how my style'S wild
blinding all the toys vision with this dumb vocabulary
i didnt get your freestyle , was it a diss or your personnal diary?
the only thing in your life that flows , is your diarrhea
shoulda listen to me , cause that was some real speak
you wear lipstick ***** , you aint have no pecs
even your family thinks you anorexic
so its time for me to use my tecs
cock the motherfuckin glock , deliberatly shoot at your chest
and i flexxxxxxxxxxxx
bitch *****.
its time to take a vacation with davy jones,
rope a cinder block to my leg and just rest my bones,
in the silence i hear groans, sticks and stones...
everyone i try to touch wants to bitch and moan.
if you got an issue with it pick up the phone,
suicide hotline will tell ya, jump, get pwned,
get shown, the way out, the time out, nah dont pout.
death is a gift, accept it with or without.
bouncingsoul
12-28-2007, 11:24 AM
flabbergasting the rain check hype men
pop the skittle and take a rainbow trip to heighten
the slight end, that ambiguity ruins with faith
keep it moving, and dismiss, losing the mistake
just kiss the stakes and bliss out the conjugate
still rested and tested, stay silent if not to ponder it
perpetuate a day dream turned muddy, bloody nightmare
wake up a shadow puppet and realize it's just the lights there
messy, cursive outer space keeps the headlocks in place
atmospheric pressure builds up upon disgrace
disrupts the commonplace counterpoints commission
kindles a condition that creates crazy superstition
you can lie to yourself all that you desire
just be aware that you're dousing the soul fire
controls higher levels, don't let ignorance dishevel
free thought, we know that's a job for the devil
Not much more I can say about that... haha
entry
12-28-2007, 11:51 PM
anyone down to battle
garbage down tha way
12-29-2007, 12:01 AM
riot- my bad. i saw demonically and thought you stole a line, but i just reread it.
this is shitty.
i never stretch the truth cuz i see from the right angle
me and my brigade of notorious worriors fight angels
and wherever the fuck you came from, thats where ill send you back to
graduated but you stayed dumb, finished cuz you had to.
ill run your ass like a marathon...
ill take the cake and ice it too with all your jewels so now you wearin none.
almost corrupt as the school of the americas...
with a flow fatter than the jenny craig phenomenon
you dumb fucks remind me of the magistrate
cuz yer sentences are meaningless as if it matters what you have to say
and nowadays, nobody wants a part if theres no cash to pay
they shake it off when cats mysteriously pass away so...
look at me now, im on top of the world with this one.
never been pussy, but if its there ima get some.
crackin these bottles gotta get it in my system
usually spit it deep but this ones closer to the tip son.
"Riot"
12-29-2007, 01:58 AM
hahah i forgot we were battlin. hahah you just went from beefin to apologizing.
garbage down tha way
12-29-2007, 05:40 PM
yeah i was done. internet beef is whack. i was just salty that you called seize a faggot. hes dope.
sketch3
12-29-2007, 08:39 PM
some one pass the spliff to me,
so i can have an epipifiny,
this weeds got me thinkin differently,
about chuckin chicks with ease,
like this poor girl tifany,
who thaught i was her soul mate,
but found out id rather roll 8ths,
then go and fuck nicole, wait,
i was in a bold state,
wen i told kate, i sold weight
of the top of the dome pluss its 2 30 in the mornin
"Riot"
12-29-2007, 09:10 PM
ehh fuck that shit dude.
pisses me off when people have internet beef then fuckin just go over the top ya know?
you can't tell me that wasn't the slightest bit gay.
garbage down tha way
12-30-2007, 12:50 PM
word.
some shit im about to lay down, gotta finish it up first.
i turn fans into fiends, the way they cant turn me down
addictive past nicotine, conveyin cancerous sounds
plugged into machines, to keep your system balancing
thugs bringin sixteens, but never can resist the fallacy
a step towards me is like a leaps equivilent
im a spectre mcee, rarely witnessed but im prevelant
so heres a fresh breath of unprecedented direction
messages are lost in space due to the pigeons interception
and now the weathers under freezing. my heart is under beating
my sight is under seeing, but my state is undefeated.
one im in your blood, the process of kemo wont even keep you treated
mine as well be military, i leave craniums depleted
readin the reasons to keep me breathin in between a
shitty future ahead of me and a past that still refuses leavin
"Riot"
12-30-2007, 03:37 PM
I'm about to spit to you right here now,consider it a diss.
I'm not near your friend,more like ya arch nemesis.
Listen to the message my voice will send,says get the fuck out of my premisis.
started,i'll finish this later. expect a long one.
entry
12-30-2007, 07:23 PM
now the projects talking that sombody gotta die shit
Its logic unless its somebody thats in my click
get out the car you hear click clack you turn all i see is your back
hesitate this bringing me to a ether mindstate beware leaving
your blood running cold in fear,
emotions hit 5th gear should it really be me standing here
or take your place and wait for heavens gates
this shits redundant most of these kids for the fun of it
aleviate the pressure blunt smoke coming from the lungs
of god on earth,
ill add more later .. i cant think right now
Passleoinj
12-30-2007, 08:28 PM
heaven invasion , french people sent from up there
clearing the vision , the way you see shit is unfair
we come in pairs , we comparable to a fuckin legion
my words make you trip worse than salvia
i spit on ya , not to ya whatever this is directly fo ya
im bringing drama , the way i destroy ya aint all about karma
i bet you have knives , i have fuckin bazookas
i was getting paper while you was playing with your tonkas
another toy getting raped , another story getting telled
you also had dreams of beating me as well
arch nemesis , premisis , all that shit rhymes with penises
what the fuck is this
dont even finish that freestyle , its not worth it
since ive been destroying you , with only 3 lines of it.
go get some liquid paper but dont sniff it all this time
there a second use to this thing and its for correcting your lines
they need it , cause even if you write it right they still wrong
you wish you made sense so one day you could right a emo song
you calling your shit a freestyle«
when it takes you ages to make it have style
man thats kinda normal you think you have advantage
but still im spitting my shit , out of my mind
no correcting still , im owning your lines.
i beat that bitch up oj simpson style¸
fuck you riot
MonoR
12-30-2007, 08:58 PM
self proclaiming winning
id prolly have some respect for you if you could stop whining
you’re annoying like a blonde bitch screaming for nothing
your working your way in the game but its never going to happen
ill drag your lame ass in the dirt before you get raped by your old man
eat my word cause that’s some real meal for the moment
so check it
weak rappers like you are fighting in the street for a piece of pie
the way i spit your feeling it , you just cant believe what im saying is not a lie
it was written in the sky , my brother and I managed to let you die
after this freestyle so goodbye
Passleoinj
12-31-2007, 12:56 AM
your dead like james brown ,im walking away
laying there with your head blown
just by the way i walk , you can tell the place im from
im a soldier for my freedom , will fight for my thing son
you say youre a son of rap , i killed the cipher
rap shoulda did it before me , his son was hyper
im a viper crawling , im coming for you like mike tyson
to be continued
sketch3
12-31-2007, 10:37 AM
, i killed the cipher
yea we know
ill edit with sumthin in a bit
Passleoinj
12-31-2007, 12:09 PM
why aint you battling little clown
hahhaa i kill the cipher all the time
cause you know
i dont give a fuck
ill still beat your ass , anytime.
riot's a faggot, i blow them thangs,
i bust heat, you bust free,
styles that you written last week,
fuck bad beats, i choke you with your pink sheets,
they use your fat girlfriend for them macdonald, lunch meals,
what's beef, ask yourself, do you really want it?,
you should get on a diet and go get to runnin somewhere quiet,
riot, you don't know no rhyme scheme cousin,
you still think them punch lines come cheaper by the dozen,
fuck paper chase, i must say, sayonara hey, don't come back again,
you suck dick worst than william hung in it's fame,
now you don't know no flow, doe neighter,
i beat a faggot to his knees like you, in a minute,
you feel it? now please don't hide your feelings,
go cry harder, DIE harder, fuck this, you're defeated,
MIDDDDDDLE FINGER UP YOUR ASS
JETPACK!!
01-02-2008, 12:40 PM
eh eh eh oh oh
ehhhhhhhh der chum
said my bum
in the old drum
cause the world is full of scum
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lmao
mac lethal - my mom is a thug
My mom is a thug with the bomb-diggy bud
And her palm on her gun just for blastin that ass
Actin insane for the platinum chain
And her new album's on Aftermath
Kicks my teeth in if I act goofy
Birthday cakes in the shape of a Uzi
Wakes me up like, "Let's get paid"
Beams with blades on her Escalade
Every morning yelling, "Mac
get your ass out of bed and sell some crack"
Mom is a thugged out parent of course
Out on the block with a harem of whores
Better not creep if you're fake and soft
Cause she'll pull out the strap and break you off
Like prrrhhhaaa, cut you loose
But I can't leave the crib without my bubblegoose
Cause
[CHORUS x2]
My mom is a thug, she'll fuck you up
She'll fuck you up (what what!)
You better run and get yourself up
Shot and you're hurtin and off to the surgeon
A little gunpowder in her laundry detergent
She still makes me mind my manners
Cookin dinner listenin to the police scanner
You know my throat gets slit
If I forget one thing off the grocery list
And she'll choke my friends if they call too late
And pistol-whip my girlfriend with a .38
Calls my cell like, "Son, I'ma hurt you
If you're home one single minute past curfew"
My thugged out mama keep the cheeba sticky
Every single morning she'd crease my Dickeys
Scrambled hollow tips for my breakfast
Packs my lunch and shines my necklace
Pours a little liquor, then says (goodbye)
But one bad grade, I get stabbed in the eye
It's the last day of school, gotta make an appearance, It's a must
But I slept in a little too late and missed the bus
And my mom's got a clip to bust if I ask for a ride
I'd rather graduate than be a homicide
So I dipped across the street and started walkin
But I heard Tech N9ne playin and her horn honkin
There she was in a Corolla with bloodshot eyes
I was scared and almost fainted from her Glock size
I turned around to make a run for it
But she crashed and kicked me in the throat like she was Chuck Norris
And instead of sittin here and punchin me hard
She said, "Get your lunchbox and get the fuck in the car"
She hit the gas and grabbed a roach out the ashtray
"Mac, why the fuck would you try to skip on your last day?"
I wasn't, I was walkin, I swear
When the bus came by I was washin my hair
Just then I heard police officer sirens
I said, "Hey mom I think the cops are behind us"
She was swervin like she was a little drunk
And it sounded like there was a dead body in the trunk
She told me to open up the glove compartment
And pulled out her black handgun to spark shit
I counted the bullets, there was like four
Rolled down the window and hung over the side door
I looked back but there was only one cop
And he couldn't see me hangin out the window with my gun cocked
I licked one shot and struck him in the head
Looked back and said, "Mom, that motherfucker's dead"
"Oh good boy Mac, I'm proud of you
If you missed that shot I woulda grounded you
But because of that shot my freedom is saved
Here's five dollars, after school hit the arcade"
yeah.. just thought id share that
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 02:05 PM
why aint you battling little clown
hahhaa i kill the cipher all the time
cause you know
i dont give a fuck
ill still beat your ass , anytime.
riot's a faggot, i blow them thangs,
i bust heat, you bust free,
styles that you written last week,
fuck bad beats, i choke you with your pink sheets,
they use your fat girlfriend for them macdonald, lunch meals,
what's beef, ask yourself, do you really want it?,
you should get on a diet and go get to runnin somewhere quiet,
riot, you don't know no rhyme scheme cousin,
you still think them punch lines come cheaper by the dozen,
fuck paper chase, i must say, sayonara hey, don't come back again,
you suck dick worst than william hung in it's fame,
now you don't know no flow, doe neighter,
i beat a faggot to his knees like you, in a minute,
you feel it? now please don't hide your feelings,
go cry harder, DIE harder, fuck this, you're defeated,
MIDDDDDDLE FINGER UP YOUR ASS
hahah dude.
we finished along time ago.
shut your head.
MonoR
01-02-2008, 03:37 PM
riot's choking
HU HU HU
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 04:37 PM
...are you serious?
internet beef. I beat you both. along time ago.
2v1. I won. fuck you.
you aint sick with it so shut your head.
JETPACK!!
01-02-2008, 05:42 PM
i have a bike yo
its a 10 speed yo
i use it to pick up my snow ho
then we go sniff mad white blow
but im a habitual liar
rhymes shittier like a firestone tire
i lied, i dont even have a bike, it was set on fire
by crazy monoglians that pulled tricks like mcguivure
yo dont forget i got a nine yo
an i shot them mongolians like stop signs yo
im rapping like a sterotypical gangster yo
wheres my crack, gat, oversized t-shirt thats black and straight beaked hat yo
i lied again, im whiter than snow, i got no flow
an im definatly no gangster cuz i snitch for dough
Buhda420
01-02-2008, 06:15 PM
constantly smokin trains like a billy of herb.
always packing, putting up all over the curb
aerosol extremeist, i am lurking with the meanist
brawlin with the leanist
i lid all day and skate all night
jumpin trains, cunts get a grusome fright
crossin the tracks with a pack full of laks
is how i roll always heart attack
my potions will make you think
they penetrate deeper than any ink
super hero to super villin
batfink to hugo a gogo i am crushing the world solo
never stopin my addiction this shit aint fiction..?
MR FUMER
Passleoinj
01-02-2008, 06:30 PM
...are you serious?
internet beef. I beat you both. along time ago.
2v1. I won. fuck you.
you aint sick with it so shut your head.
just choke it
answer and well find out whos so sick
stop thinking you the king cause you aint LOL
youre just a shitty mc with too much self esteem
period.
oh and by the way
my shit is so better than yours , check out the freestyle i did to you when it was official
it starts by i knew a bitch named riot
now i dont know one cause she dead.
ps: you dont have any flow
ps2: youre shit doesnt even rhyme , half the time
ps3: repeat ps1 and ps2 many times.
MonoR
01-02-2008, 07:08 PM
self proclaiming winning
id prolly have some respect for you if you could stop whining
you’re annoying like a blonde bitch screaming for nothing
your working your way in the game but its never going to happen
ill drag your lame ass in the dirt before you get raped by your old man
eat my word cause that’s some real meal for the moment
so check it
weak rappers like you are fighting in the street for a piece of pie
the way i spit your feeling it , you just cant believe what im saying is not a lie
it was written in the sky , my brother and I managed to let you die
after this freestyle so goodbye
bump, cause its so true for the moment
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 09:11 PM
tcall me a chicken,but fuckin listen.
I gave both you toys currency from my own bank account/
so you cats wouldn't be at the pawn shop,beggin for a discount/
Hah,yeah I won,like i already annouced/
Monor,shut up you toy,I spit and both of you bounced/
Its 2 and 1 versus,set up a legit battle,I'll put you both in hearses/
well see whos chokin,youll punk out like that kid token,from south park/
watchin you,as your left eye flutters then your voice stutters like butters/
this oxygen comin out my mouth will have ya both in the hopistal,twitchin/
fucked up,ya medical bills cost more than my collage tution.
Comin at you light and easy,consider it a toy's conviction.
you can't get into my mental state at this rate,like trespassing restrictions/
Am I supposed to be haunted by these curses?/
you mad!,ya both lucky,I gave ya some tampons,LOOK!,they're in your purses!/
Your both sleazy and greasy,like the old chicken from churches/
Its kinda sad that everytime you spit,your verses worsen/
if you want me to spit fat,for this,I'll enable.
your legs are fuckin shakin,jaw chatterin,you don't look stable/
best consider yourself lucky,because if i took time with these lines,ya feel me/
It would end up in a total fuckin knockout,think of it as a lyrical felony/
I think this is a game,roll the dice,but when i say total fucking knockout underline fuckin,twice/
set up a legit battle
i'll beat both you.
JETPACK!!
01-02-2008, 09:16 PM
who the fuck argues over a rap battle, both of you are probably using a thesaurus and still cant make it sound good.
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 09:20 PM
nope.
off the top of my head.
and i'm not even trying. I wanted to quit along time ago but I wan't a legit battle.
With voice recordings.
I'm down. I can make my shit flow.
lets do this.
JETPACK!!
01-02-2008, 09:30 PM
i get to pick the beat
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 09:46 PM
make it dope.
Passleoinj
01-02-2008, 09:47 PM
tcall me a chicken,but fuckin listen.
I gave both you toys currency from my own bank account/
so you cats wouldn't be at the pawn shop,beggin for a discount/
Hah,yeah I won,like i already annouced/
Monor,shut up you toy,I spit and both of you bounced/
Its 2 and 1 versus,set up a legit battle,I'll put you both in hearses/
well see whos chokin,youll punk out like that kid token,from south park/
watchin you,as your left eye flutters then your voice stutters like butters/
this oxygen comin out my mouth will have ya both in the hopistal,twitchin/
fucked up,ya medical bills cost more than my collage tution.
Comin at you light and easy,consider it a toy's conviction.
you can't get into my mental state at this rate,like trespassing restrictions/
Am I supposed to be haunted by these curses?/
you mad!,ya both lucky,I gave ya some tampons,LOOK!,they're in your purses!/
Your both sleazy and greasy,like the old chicken from churches/
Its kinda sad that everytime you spit,your verses worsen/
if you want me to spit fat,for this,I'll enable.
your legs are fuckin shakin,jaw chatterin,you don't look stable/
best consider yourself lucky,because if i took time with these lines,ya feel me/
It would end up in a total fuckin knockout,think of it as a lyrical felony/
I think this is a game,roll the dice,but when i say total fucking knockout underline fuckin,twice/
set up a legit battle
i'll beat both you.
HAHHAHAHA almost good...not
"Riot"
01-02-2008, 09:48 PM
hahah i didn't even put time in that bullshit.
set up a battle and i'll burn your ass.
like i have in the past several battles.
JETPACK!!
01-02-2008, 10:43 PM
ghostwriter - rjd2
or
the wolf - snowgoons
always be caring deeply everlasting forever girl however intelligence jams keeping love
mounted never over power questions resist stupid temptations undergoing violence
worried xerophobous youthful zone
this was really random tried to use the alphabet .. makes no sence
Aegis
01-03-2008, 09:22 PM
Like oh man
I haven’t been outside in days
House to car
Car to class
Back behind my desk while I stare outside the glass
Rewind the tape deck
Play it all in reverse
A diesel fueled death machine
My own personal hearse
Mourning direct contact of the light
Head down to the ground cause I can’t look the sun in the face
As I retrace my memory for breeze and bird sounds
I feel like I’ve let myself down
In an age of un-abiding technological improvement
We ignore our endless self neglect
Please
We need to get back
Touch our brain patterns and our intellect
Free ourselves from this mental net
"Riot"
01-03-2008, 10:55 PM
I want to rip the beat from I'm Mikey-cool kids.
i'll spit here in a second. someone give me a dope topic.
You both comin at me like you think im scared,I thought you were more intelligent/
Don't come at me like that I'll leave you impaired,You a pussy isn't that relevant?/
You all talk,you only look at me and stare,this flow is actually quite elegant,look deep down/
I'll attack a virus,like spyware,find your glaring weaknesses,emotionally breakin you down/
runny nose,like a case of the sinus,no room for error or time to spare,what is my thesis of these lyrical paragraphs?/
I'm ill as an overdose,doubt me?,come try us,in the streets causing terror,minds bright like the flash to the photograph/
theses lines mad overwrote,run it like a mayor?,more like a president,even with your mother's consent,some come ask for an autograph/
your body vital signs begin to corrode,come step if you dare,I'll show you how to represent,turn you on,like pornography/
mental opinions begin to explode,times tickin,no time to repair,I live in the present,no worries about the past,Keepin it real,obviously/
ehhh you like?
sketch3
01-03-2008, 11:35 PM
i'll spit here in a second. someone give me a dope topic.
.
rap about being a transexual dinosaure.
thats a preaty dope topic
"Riot"
01-03-2008, 11:37 PM
hahah k ;]
MonoR
01-04-2008, 12:50 AM
wow you have a good grammar, pretty it.
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:10 AM
I'm sorry if I happen to break your heart,mentally tear you apart/
this love for you,happens to shoot far off the charts,Its been like that since the start/
Sorry,for the trouble i put you through,its 5 months to this day,its friday/
you better believe it,every ryhme is true,even though im not religious,I pray that we last forever/
Every time we fight,I say I can fix this,you make my mind go oblivious/
Sometimes I push it to the limit,but you forgive it,But this is my expansion/
Your a peice of work,but I'm always up for a challenge,you'll always by my companion/
Your there when I'm hurt,drug binge then addictions,we have everything possible in comparison/
Encourage me to goto church,but i refuse,its like you care about my conditions,hopin I don't end up in prison/
I'm like a bomb,you know howto defuse,so many things I could put as additions,you always realize my position,before you speak/
I've realized sometimes I misused our relationship,I happen to miss family traditions,leads to sexual reductions/
Me and you could conquer this township,with our raging convictions,to last this long,I realize I'm reluctant/
I'm really high and tired.
I hope that ididn turn out as bad as i think it did. about the ladyfriend.
and monor,is that...compliment? directed to me?
whattt?
fuck you you aint a leader you a follower.
ill lead you straight into the mouth of a tornado and let it swallow ya.
call on you, let you roll up, cruise and follow ya.
got the gat pointed low, my homies in the cut,
you turn around i straight bust one to the gut,
your doors shut, your cords cut,
you deader than king tut i bust a nut on whats left of ya,
im defter yah? i cant step to ya! thats what bein said to the,
master of reality, got a black mans mind with a white power mentality,
anything you say will lead straight to a fatality, but if yall really want.
step up. battle me.
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:39 AM
me? battle you?
or is that just your spit
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:49 AM
I'll erase your state of mind with my flows.
You comin with weak ryhmes and low blows.
You hatin on my style and steppin on my toes.
I'll light ya head up with legitimate ryhmes until ya mouth glows.
consider this your lesson and dont think I'm messin.
Your askin for pressure,so I'ma start pressin.
Your nothin to me so don't think I'm stressin.
over your weak spits minus the hard hits.
sure you got flow but take time to make your ryhmes blowup.
but instead errones hatin and theres ryhmes make me wanna throw up.
they call me a pussy ill be the big man and tell bitches to grow up.
they all wantin to fight when i accept bitches dont even show up.
I'll fuck up cats so bad, that jaws need to sewed up.
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:50 AM
I'll erase your state of mind with my flows.
You comin with weak ryhmes and low blows.
You hatin on my style and steppin on my toes.
I'll light ya head up with legitimate ryhmes until ya mouth glows.
consider this your lesson and dont think I'm messin.
Your askin for pressure,so I'ma start pressin.
Your nothin to me so don't think I'm stressin.
over your weak spits minus the hard hits.
sure you got flow but take time to make your ryhmes blowup.
but instead errones hatin and theres ryhmes make me wanna throw up.
they call me a pussy ill be the big man and tell bitches to grow up.
they all wantin to fight when i accept bitches dont even show up.
I'll fuck up cats so bad, that jaws need to sewed up.
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:50 AM
I'll erase your state of mind with my flows.
You comin with weak ryhmes and low blows.
You hatin on my style and steppin on my toes.
I'll light ya head up with legitimate ryhmes until ya mouth glows.
consider this your lesson and dont think I'm messin.
Your askin for pressure,so I'ma start pressin.
Your nothin to me so don't think I'm stressin.
over your weak spits minus the hard hits.
sure you got flow but take time to make your ryhmes blowup.
but instead errones hatin and theres ryhmes make me wanna throw up.
they call me a pussy ill be the big man and tell bitches to grow up.
they all wantin to fight when i accept bitches dont even show up.
I'll fuck up cats so bad, that jaws need to sewed up.
riots going to get fat with all this beef
let the kid spit stop givin him grief
im here to stress your words leave him with relief
lyricism so deep mad punchlines i believe you
better watch out your face is the doormat
thinking im stupid like borat flow so sick
smith and wessun in my palm like an erection
stroke the midsection and learn your lesson
blah verbal confession of 5th gear depression
emotions spill through these bars and i adore
the game like its the reason im living bringing
youth to a different side of pain nothing to gain
but mad scrilla and fame arts all the same expression
enough to refrain from hurtful remedys lifes insane..
im to baked.. to make sense blaaaaah
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:51 AM
I'll erase your state of mind with my flows.
You comin with weak ryhmes and low blows.
You hatin on my style and steppin on my toes.
I'll light ya head up with legitimate ryhmes until ya mouth glows.
consider this your lesson and dont think I'm messin.
Your askin for pressure,so I'ma start pressin.
Your nothin to me so don't think I'm stressin.
over your weak spits minus the hard hits.
sure you got flow but take time to make your ryhmes blowup.
but instead errones hatin and theres ryhmes make me wanna throw up.
they call me a pussy ill be the big man and tell bitches to grow up.
they all wantin to fight when i accept bitches dont even show up.
I'll fuck up cats so bad, that jaws need to sewed up.
riots going to get fat with all this beef
let the kid spit stop givin him grief
im here to stress your words leave him with relief
lyricism so deep mad punchlines i believe you
better watch out your face is the doormat
thinking im stupid like borat flow so sick
smith and wessun in my palm like an erection
stroke the midsection and learn your lesson
blah verbal confession of 5th gear depression
emotions spill through these bars and i adore
the game like its the reason im living bringing
youth to a different side of pain nothing to gain
but mad scrilla and fame arts all the same expression
enough to refrain from hurtful remedys lifes insane..
blaaaaaaaah way to baked
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 01:58 AM
shit. im not beefin with anyone.
sorry about the multiple posts my comp fuckedd uppp
oh shiiet double post sorry ..
no all these people baggin on you
haha just thought id give em a lil sum sum ;)
"Riot"
01-04-2008, 02:02 AM
haha i dont care.
im not startin beef with whoever i spit to last time. i forgot who it was but yeah.
no beef. not even with pass and monor.
dynamicartists
01-04-2008, 05:39 PM
when i empty the clip,
you bitches aint shit,
imma kill and empty yo body in the fking tip,
my 9 is old school with no rubber grip,
and i dont wear no rubber on my dick near yo gf's clit.
i make the hood go wild,
imma white kid already bustin wild stylez,
Bitch turn up the dial, amplify my sound,
i leave your neckpiece tied and bound,
imma ghetto bred wigga,
i dont hesitate to pull the triggaz,
with this attitude i always make figurez.
lol im so shit/
Passleoinj
01-04-2008, 09:57 PM
FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
RIOT
aint no half steppin , im crushin your toes
make you disappear thats what i call erasin ,folks,
He claims he beats me , but i keep on coming
keep on rappin Pass will never be stoppin
want me to show up ? im all up in your face
fakes like you im puttin them back in their places
just in case you didnt know youve never settled shit
i can settle some rendez vous , a date with my gun
this day you'll fuckin regret to be born
never asked for shit and you say i choke it
i'll kill you so many fuckin times , ill even kill your son
cock sucka, while i walk around your ass and cock shotguns
fight against me with your homies that dont even respect you
imma make you admit that i just smacked you
shit's so dirty i dont even see through, the message you wanted to give
never went to destination, you hatin cause you can't match my skills,
you should subscribe to that poor shit and get them meals
don't try to send your shit nowhere cause you ain't gettin no deals,
i aint even have to negociate with anybody , i just get them mills
i drop bombs , everytime i rap its armageddon
like 50 on Camron , this is Pass , and we gettin it on
my name's Pass , youre the past , we the present and the future
pass the glock and forget about your life , lemme shoot ya
IM SO BUFFED I MAKE 50 CENT LOOKS WHACK.
"Riot"
01-05-2008, 12:02 AM
Yeah dawg,j00 lyke s0o e-ThUgGiN d3m n1gz!
shut up.
your fuckin whack,whens the last time someone told you your shit was dope?
Never,so shut the fuck up.
pass your wack as fuck why you still posting bubz
sketch3
01-05-2008, 01:52 PM
IM SO BUFFED I MAKE 50 CENT LOOKS WHACK.
50 cent is wack,
wat a horrible xample to use if u wanted to make urself look good.
"Riot"
01-05-2008, 09:17 PM
OmGz lYk3 P4ZZ Nd m0n0R R cH0K1n!
L0l!!
hahah.
they be ethuggin. ya feel me?
:D
JETPACK!!
01-05-2008, 09:29 PM
50 cent is wack,
wat a horrible xample to use if u wanted to make urself look good.
i was thinking the EXACT same thing when i read, then i scrolled down and noticed someone beat me to it.
greenhouse effect - e-thugs
oh you hard now
get out my face
real thugs dont gangbang inside the space
real gangbangas throw up gang signs
you a fake thug, you throwin up websites
you make me wanna push the delete button when i see you on the internet straight e-thuggin
using emoticons to give people mean mugs, sensitive e-thugs you all need e-hugs
you so confrontational when you typin but would a gangsta really write it
or would he be too busy runnin from the law to spend that kinna time on chatrooms and messageboards.
Small Time Crook
01-05-2008, 09:45 PM
you'd be suprised how much free time they have..
anyhow..
cashed the check, still broke/
aint no joke, my stomach just spoke/
water got cut off, heats actin' funny/
then to top it all off im fuckin' hungry/
goin to work day in day out/
yet i still dont reap from the pay out/
the shits to mini you think its Vern Troyer/
got arrested last week and cant afford a lawyer/
had bigger hopes, had bigger plans/
now im dreadlocked up and "fighting the man"/
yet its just me following the stereotype/
im having trouble differentiating wrong from right/
tossing and turning having trouble sleeping at night/
wanna hit the pipe, but aint got no light/
im just going down, why put up a fight/
Small Time Crook, Big Time Dreama/
y todavia, yo necesito comida/
MonoR
01-06-2008, 04:57 PM
let me make it clear
riot sucks
sketch 3 suck more than riot
kaze suck more.. and hes just the lil ****** behind them thinking hes important
pretty it,
bye bye kids
Vagrant
01-06-2008, 05:06 PM
you still haven't realized that it's impossible to say someone sucks when you can't even type proper english?
your lack of fluent english skills makes all your insults moot. they don't count. period.
"sketch 3 suck more" and wtf is "pretty it,"
and what type of loser censors his own post?
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 05:23 PM
what you know,I'm out elimatin minds,crashin,wreckin.
You could call me a all season veteran,I reckon.
I'm gettin better,time monor gets a toy rappin section.
Cats wantin more from me,they aint askin,they beggin.
Cats say I try to act black cause of my pants,I sag em.
But what they dont know is I blow it up big,Like a magnum.
And I ain't talkin about any firearms,Pleasin the ladies I charm.
You didn't realize it but I slapped back at you like Karm..
UH! You say im chokin HU HU HU,you a bitch,and you through through through.
Off the top real fast.
MonoR
01-06-2008, 05:49 PM
you still haven't realized that it's impossible to say someone sucks when you can't even type proper english?
your lack of fluent english skills makes all your insults moot. they don't count. period.
"sketch 3 suck more" and wtf is "pretty it,"
and what type of loser censors his own post?
i know and you know what?
i dont give a fucken fuck
oh sorry, i dont give a fuck
that's it.
ill take any of you in french so rappliquer vous les biches
Vagrant
01-06-2008, 05:54 PM
yeah we don't speak french.
seriously. you're a MORON
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 05:54 PM
alright so go make a french freestyle thread and stop thinking your hot shit.
dueces kid.
sketch3
01-06-2008, 06:29 PM
ill take any of you in french so rappliquer vous les biches
ohh la la,
everyone thinks monors a fag? oui
no one heres french u prepubescent lil prick,
ur french dude clash me ull get blowen apart,
only one badass frech guy was nepolien Bonaparte,
actually leon the assasin makes two,
but that dont mean u an pass arnt bitches in a fake crew,
am i suposed to be intimidated by pepe la pew?
http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/text/victories.html
lamo
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 06:52 PM
anyone wanna battle?
JETPACK!!
01-06-2008, 06:55 PM
mais oui, est le poutine et le joi louis cest bein? mais oui! hahah
you cant spell stentch without french
cuz frogs smell like a changeroom bench
sweaty ass and dirty underwear, enough to put you in a coma
thats the magic scent of frances aroma
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 07:00 PM
PUMPT!
monor makes me laugh out loud :D
i could blow a high percent of the people in this thread away..
theres like maybe 5 decent people that post
so monor and pass give up.. ..
not really a rap but in rhyme form.. really old when i was fucked in the headish
i fear the past you fear the present
i can predict the future and im not in it
my death is imminent six feet deep forever asleep
shits permenent, friends and family will learn from it,
as i enternally burn hoping its never your turn,
This is my suicide fill your eyes with tears
ill be in your heart for the everlasting years,
but i never meant it, so many things could of prevent it
you never got it in the mail but i sent it
i only had one life and i took it away from all of yours
snotty nosed kid corrupted since the age of 4
no father figure in my life but so much love in sight
i couldnt understand me i just left that to my family
someone was always there to guide me through it all
because reality is wrong and dreams are for real
just think of that when you close the casket and watch it seal
someone told me "suicide is killing the only person who can change it"
but im done with life i dont want to live rearranging shit.
sitting here in fear, depression in fifth gear
a whole new person when i look in the mirror
you ruined me whoever you were.
i cant believe suicide is on my fucking mind
this wouldnt be the first time, its my own crime im going
in but for time but whatever fuck it all
i just leave you all with this suicide letter.
the message is for who ever is struggling
get it together life is like a flock of a million birds
and your just a single feather
treasure every moment from past to present
and learn from every lesson..
the.sate
01-06-2008, 09:11 PM
yo kaze, the object of freestyles is to make other people wanna write shit like that, not for you to write it. kinda got the vibe your depressed or sum shit like that. not beefin, jus sayin. if anyone wants to spit sumthin get at me...
JETPACK!!
01-06-2008, 09:22 PM
the object of freestyles is to make other people wanna write shit like that
thats the dumbest shit ive ever heard, the point of a freestyle is to burn that motherfuckers ass whose battlin you. off the top of your head
sketch3
01-06-2008, 09:30 PM
i could blow a high percent of the people in this thread away..
the
well this thread used to be WAAAAY better,
back in the day wen woha and the old cats used to spit,
there are only about 5 dope ppl that drop by but ur
not one of them, no beef cuss im not one of them either,
monor and pass killed this thread but it was on itss last legs
the.sate
01-06-2008, 09:33 PM
thats the dumbest shit ive ever heard, the point of a freestyle is to burn that motherfuckers ass whose battlin you. off the top of your head
kid dont talk shit... the guy was writing about suicide being on his mind n shit... dont u think you'd wanna spit shit to make people think of suicide? get the fuck back
sketch3
01-06-2008, 09:53 PM
i spay lyrics like they were presurized paint,
i gott confess u guys aint,
inpressing me,
insecently,
liein bout how u smoke ses an weed,
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 09:55 PM
meh no beef.
but take the time to spell your shit right.
sketch3
01-06-2008, 09:56 PM
i got sum form of dyslexia so i spell how it sounds in my head,
http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/text/france.html
the one about the french revolution made me laugh
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 10:13 PM
i got sum form of dyslexia so i spell how it sounds in my head,
you can't proofread?
stop all the chit chat and spit..
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 10:17 PM
give me a topic?
JETPACK!!
01-06-2008, 10:23 PM
kid dont talk shit... the guy was writing about suicide being on his mind n shit... dont u think you'd wanna spit shit to make people think of suicide? get the fuck back
yo, your fucking whack clown, whadda listen to? young buck? lil wayne? jeezy? get the fuck outta here. spitting shit that makes people think is better than whatever the fuck comes outta your mouth.. shit. and stop acting hard, you dont know me, or anything about anyone. no ones gonna accept that "ima fuckin G, an i can spit" bullshit. if you can spit than good for you.. but you cant, stop trying
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 10:27 PM
alright i'll spit about life in ehhhh 10 minutes.
i wake up on a daily basis
shape up for the daily faces
end up at the daily places,
my world is mad craziness
living life as what seems to be painless
i cant tend to restrain this,
small kid act tough grew up in the roughs
headed to the suburbs,
where i grew up ended up selling herb
mad money and couldn't intend to learn
school was a struggle,
my logic is at a street smart level
trying to keep me out of trouble,
sneak peak.. hah no i cant think of anything else quickie
sketch3
01-06-2008, 10:40 PM
u tryin to stay outta trouble, but sank deep in the struggle,
above the surface they can see air bubles,
cuss innercitys like the ocean,
get eatten alive if u show a glimps of emotion,
guppys get devoured on the hour,
fuck a daily basis,
local policeforce over-run with unsolved murder cases,
might get kidnaped by israli rapists,
get beheaded while they tape it,
or piss of sum gully niggga get an unplaned face lift,
JETPACK!!
01-06-2008, 10:41 PM
doooope sketch, kaze shits hot too.
sketch3
01-06-2008, 10:50 PM
i wake up on a daily basis
shape up for the daily faces
end up at the daily places,
my world is mad craziness
living life as what seems to be painless
i cant tend to restrain this,
small kid act tough grew up in the roughs
headed to the suburbs,
where i grew up ended up selling herb
mad money and couldn't intend to learn
school was a struggle,
my logic is at a street smart level
trying to keep me out of trouble,
sneak peak.. hah no i cant think of anything else quickie
u aint sellin herb at night,
dam suberbenights,
only pickin verbal fights,
ahh i ran outta steem, friendly battle??
but be fair its 4:50 in the moornin here
this struggles on a whole different level
they call me the nose candy rebel
i cop a eightball on the double
cant wait to get home and snuggle
i cant even rhyme right now gimme a bit
sketch start err off and ill post ina bit
sketch3
01-06-2008, 11:06 PM
i choke teams, of coke feinds,
with broke dreams, about dope schemes,
that provoke teens, to smoke beans,
from coke trees,
edit i rhymed coke with coke my bad.
ill get at u in a bit aswell
the.sate
01-06-2008, 11:10 PM
yo, your fucking whack clown, whadda listen to? young buck? lil wayne? jeezy? get the fuck outta here. spitting shit that makes people think is better than whatever the fuck comes outta your mouth.. shit. and stop acting hard, you dont know me, or anything about anyone. no ones gonna accept that "ima fuckin G, an i can spit" bullshit. if you can spit than good for you.. but you cant, stop trying
who is this kid, do you see any of my posts saying that im a g, and listen to lil wayne LOL. im not claiming to know shit bout anyone, but it seems like you think you know who I am. you want to front, come to my hood and get pistol whipped kid, suburban e-thug u'll get stomped and shanked...
sketch3
01-06-2008, 11:13 PM
who is this kid, do you see any of my posts saying that im a g, and listen to lil wayne LOL. im not claiming to know shit bout anyone, but it seems like you think you know who I am. fuck round and get pistol whipped kid, come to meadowvale, and u wont be leaving...
the whole threatanin ppl over the net is played,
if ur that much of a gangster get his ip adress and find were he lives then go pistol whip him, cuss text on a screen dont scare no one
the.state fuck your shit everyone can relate
im no g but i can act like a pistol poppin homie
meadowvale here i come with the thin blade to your windpipe
rollin on a few extra inches scheamin on your towns ugly bitches
21 mo stitches for snitches better hope the trigger finger twitches
cuz pistol whippin is painless lyrics so crazy restrain me straightjacket
is the only verdict so i serve it you act like a preteen virgin
waiting to bleed but i sustain my shit and take fame from you
stimulate your brain imitate your shit keepin the l's lit
get your labeler and post me on the block as a genius dick smack
you with my oversized penis beleive this..
chronic wrote that ^^ supa wack but my fingers are restless
sketch3
01-06-2008, 11:25 PM
for real u dun wan us to cum to ur locality,
cuss ill break out the mortal kombat fatalitys,
i got low levals of morality,
but thats no reason to stay mad at me,
cuss im spitting 50 caliber metaphors,
to threatan ur mortality,
so u better pause,
the.sate
01-06-2008, 11:37 PM
kaze the bitch, mout you to a crucifix, ur crews on dicks, like this faggit ass jetpack get the fuck back, i'll leave u on the news at 6. front on me i'll make you see, tie your family to a tree, grab my clips, empty 3,u'll watch em bleed on MTV for free. your lifes a joke like ur coked out mother, i caught brains from er' for only a gummer, stop tryin to stand up for others, especially your pegleg'd brother(jetpack) dont get mad cuz im raggin on your loved ones, i'll roast you with puns, so hot like the sun, but bitch dont try to run, this shit i got in this clip aint jus for fun, the shit you talk's what you made me become, not my fault u were retarded and provoked, my spits'll leave u soaked till you choke it aint no hoax, come down, meet my foax, bring your crew too, we could use some coats, so get ur pad and take notes, my freestyles doper then any shit you ever wrote...
im so sarcasticly offended.. :D
sketch3
01-06-2008, 11:43 PM
stop rappin bout gats
cuss ill get drunk for fun,
leave u with a punctured lung,
if thats not enuff ill punch ur mum,
and kaze u talkin bout snortin yay,
i bet ur short and gay,
"Riot"
01-06-2008, 11:46 PM
My life,it just ain't right,but I think I can make it,with these aerosol cans/
Lowlifes frontin always tryin to pick a fight,cops yellin let me see your hands!/
But I can't show,My cover is blown,Colorful flakes of kyrlon paint/
Permanently on my hands,the smell is just so pungent/
I'm not talkin about rose,even got it on my pants,my body suddenly plumets/
listening to the 5os chants,beggin for one last chance,fines comin in hundreds/
I even have problems with romance,She refuses to undress/
She says I'm far to addicted,I'm gone. I steer clear from the violence/
Try my best to not get convicted,but I just couldn't keep it in to silence/
drugs,money,and love it consisted,I couldn't steer this like 9/11 pilot/
She realized I wouldn't make it,so he assisted,realized to make a knot,you just have to tie it.
JETPACK!!
01-07-2008, 06:57 AM
who is this kid, do you see any of my posts saying that im a g, and listen to lil wayne LOL. im not claiming to know shit bout anyone, but it seems like you think you know who I am. you want to front, come to my hood and get pistol whipped kid, suburban e-thug u'll get stomped and shanked...
you edit'd it for the extra e-threat. bring on the e-terror. hahahhaa. im not even gonna try to say shit. i was born in mississauga there bud, and trust me, no ones pistol whippin and jukin no one. read a book or something, do something recreational.
JETPACK!!
01-07-2008, 06:59 AM
and why the fuck are you editing your freestyles, your critizing kaze about his freestylin skills, when your shit is whacker than 5:30 in the morning. get the fuck outta here hahah
the.sate
01-07-2008, 01:40 PM
i edited it once for spelling, burn me in one freestyle kid then fucking talk, otherwise get the fuck out...
MonoR
01-07-2008, 02:47 PM
ta vie tu la connais pas avant dlavoir vecu
decaliss de ma route avant ke jte tue pauvre trou du cul
ta voulu me tester en anglais, ta rien compris moi jtun francais
g du respect mais si tu me front jte jure tu meurt pas dans la paix
decaliss avant ke jte scalpe pis ktu finisse dans un rack a ordure
tu parles ke ta vie se resume a cke técrit sur les mur
cke tu fais c fucken laid man,
ptete comme cke tu spit aussi
jme demande pourquoi tu pense que t un chef ici
anyway
au moin tu pourras te dire que sur internet ta accompli qqchose
sketch3
01-07-2008, 02:52 PM
ta vie tu la connais pas avant dlavoir vecu
decaliss de ma route avant ke jte tue pauvre trou du cul
ta voulu me tester en anglais, ta rien compris moi jtun francais
g du respect mais si tu me front jte jure tu meurt pas dans la paix
decaliss avant ke jte scalpe pis ktu finisse dans un rack a ordure
tu parles ke ta vie se resume a cke técrit sur les mur
cke tu fais c fucken laid man,
ptete comme cke tu spit aussi
jme demande pourquoi tu pense que t un chef ici
anyway
au moin tu pourras te dire que sur internet ta accompli qqchose
preaty much pointless no one understood it, i bet it was wack
Passleoinj
01-07-2008, 07:44 PM
your dad shoulda worn a rubber before she fucked her
that bitch you has as a mother , we scared of her
she gave birth in a toilet , we even took a picture
we picked ya , the one we'll capture and torture
you looked shook , kinda misunderstood
i saw the desperate look in your eyes , as you were laying in human poop
you were drowning in it ,
you was a sucka , mouth made to suck my dick
the day you were born , i fucked you so many times
i thought you were in plastic
suck it motherfucker , it was so dense you just choked on it
i watched you agonising , the cum stuck in your throat was exciting
unzipped my pants , and let the liquid flow ,
CAUSE I DONT LIKE YOU ANYMORE
i was hatin on you as soon as you took your first breath , yo ,
so all the scatophile stuff you heard here , was only your first test
leave them dirty hands off me , im not down for underage sex
youre claiming loud and proud Malcolm X in a white crowd
83 shots to your chest , now tell me whos the best , blaoww
aight that was a little story
now lets do some real fucking shit
loud and clear , suck my dick sketch3
try to test me , but diss me in french gee
i make history ,leave you speachless
cut your breath plain ,and simply
leave slugs fill your brain ,
WE DONT FUCK AROUND
its impossible to battle you
you have that crazy flu
influenza in the rap game , dck propaganda
bring a whole army against us , and we'll still kill ya
i tell them what you truly are and they turn against you
the gayest cru , mfpc , that shit is based on lazy fools
get off internet bitches , graffiti is dying because of you
dont shed a tear , i leave your eyes dry
i leave you brain dead on the street corner
just like "when thugz cry"
but this time its more like
"when that UK bitch dies"
bitch GIMME MY MONEY
NEKEL1
01-08-2008, 06:11 AM
okay then so u wanna send for the uk
but ima send for this prik here in a new way
i dont mind i will send for u ne time
u aint hard in the streets ur just hard in ur mind
im always in the strrets like paint on the walls
im a sick rapper but u aint not at all
yo its nook the crook i dont go by the book
coz u can never judge a n***a by the way that he looks
sketch3
01-08-2008, 09:13 AM
your dad shoulda worn a rubber before she fucked her
that bitch you has as a mother , we scared of her
she gave birth in a toilet , we even took a picture
we picked ya , the one we'll capture and torture
you looked shook , kinda misunderstood
i saw the desperate look in your eyes , as you were laying in human poop
you were drowning in it ,
you was a sucka , mouth made to suck my dick
the day you were born , i fucked you so many times
i thought you were in plastic
suck it motherfucker , it was so dense you just choked on it
i watched you agonising , the cum stuck in your throat was exciting
unzipped my pants , and let the liquid flow ,
CAUSE I DONT LIKE YOU ANYMORE
i was hatin on you as soon as you took your first breath , yo ,
so all the scatophile stuff you heard here , was only your first test
leave them dirty hands off me , im not down for underage sex
youre claiming loud and proud Malcolm X in a white crowd
83 shots to your chest , now tell me whos the best , blaoww
aight that was a little story
now lets do some real fucking shit
loud and clear , suck my dick sketch3
try to test me , but diss me in french gee
i make history ,leave you speachless
cut your breath plain ,and simply
leave slugs fill your brain ,
WE DONT FUCK AROUND
its impossible to battle you
you have that crazy flu
influenza in the rap game , dck propaganda
bring a whole army against us , and we'll still kill ya
i tell them what you truly are and they turn against you
the gayest cru , mfpc , that shit is based on lazy fools
get off internet bitches , graffiti is dying because of you
dont shed a tear , i leave your eyes dry
i leave you brain dead on the street corner
just like "when thugz cry"
but this time its more like
"when that UK bitch dies"
bitch GIMME MY MONEY
i feel like im repeating myself
none of that rhymed
and y do want a male to suck ur dick, u talk about it alot
im not even gunna spit back at u cuss ur blatently handicaped
sketch3
01-08-2008, 09:21 AM
your dad shoulda worn a rubber before she fucked her
that bitch you has as a mother , we scared of her
she gave birth in a toilet , we even took a picture
we picked ya , the one we'll capture and torture
you looked shook , kinda misunderstood
i saw the desperate look in your eyes , as you were laying in human poop
you were drowning in it ,
you was a sucka , mouth made to suck my dick
the day you were born , i fucked you so many times
i thought you were in plastic
suck it motherfucker , it was so dense you just choked on it
i watched you agonising , the cum stuck in your throat was exciting
unzipped my pants , and let the liquid flow ,
CAUSE I DONT LIKE YOU ANYMORE
i was hatin on you as soon as you took your first breath , yo ,
so all the scatophile stuff you heard here , was only your first test
leave them dirty hands off me , im not down for underage sex
youre claiming loud and proud Malcolm X in a white crowd
83 shots to your chest , now tell me whos the best , blaoww
aight that was a little story
now lets do some real fucking shit
loud and clear , suck my dick sketch3
try to test me , but diss me in french gee
i make history ,leave you speachless
cut your breath plain ,and simply
leave slugs fill your brain ,
WE DONT FUCK AROUND
its impossible to battle you
you have that crazy flu
influenza in the rap game , dck propaganda
bring a whole army against us , and we'll still kill ya
i tell them what you truly are and they turn against you
the gayest cru , mfpc , that shit is based on lazy fools
get off internet bitches , graffiti is dying because of you
dont shed a tear , i leave your eyes dry
i leave you brain dead on the street corner
just like "when thugz cry"
but this time its more like
"when that UK bitch dies"
bitch GIMME MY MONEY
i feel like im repeating myself
none of that rhymed
and y do want a male to suck ur dick,
im not even gunna spit back at u cuss ur blatently handicaped
Passleoinj
01-08-2008, 02:54 PM
you did repeat , 2 times.
btw : i didnt know you was a male
sketch3
01-08-2008, 02:56 PM
well i am so ur numerouse ''rhymes'' about me giving u oral sex make u a fagot,
and that shit is W A C K
JETPACK!!
01-08-2008, 04:12 PM
your dad shoulda worn a rubber before she fucked her
that bitch you has as a mother , we scared of her
she gave birth in a toilet , we even took a picture
we picked ya , the one we'll capture and torture
you looked shook , kinda misunderstood
i saw the desperate look in your eyes , as you were laying in human poop
you were drowning in it ,
you was a sucka , mouth made to suck my dick
the day you were born , i fucked you so many times
i thought you were in plastic
suck it motherfucker , it was so dense you just choked on it
i watched you agonising , the cum stuck in your throat was exciting
unzipped my pants , and let the liquid flow ,
CAUSE I DONT LIKE YOU ANYMORE
i was hatin on you as soon as you took your first breath , yo ,
so all the scatophile stuff you heard here , was only your first test
leave them dirty hands off me , im not down for underage sex
youre claiming loud and proud Malcolm X in a white crowd
83 shots to your chest , now tell me whos the best , blaoww
aight that was a little story
now lets do some real fucking shit
loud and clear , suck my dick sketch3
try to test me , but diss me in french gee
i make history ,leave you speachless
cut your breath plain ,and simply
leave slugs fill your brain ,
WE DONT FUCK AROUND
its impossible to battle you
you have that crazy flu
influenza in the rap game , dck propaganda
bring a whole army against us , and we'll still kill ya
i tell them what you truly are and they turn against you
the gayest cru , mfpc , that shit is based on lazy fools
get off internet bitches , graffiti is dying because of you
dont shed a tear , i leave your eyes dry
i leave you brain dead on the street corner
just like "when thugz cry"
but this time its more like
"when that UK bitch dies"
bitch GIMME MY MONEY
you've got an astounding case of verbal diarreaha. if i was your mom id wash your mouth out with shit, so you know what your rhymes taste like.
"Riot"
01-08-2008, 05:10 PM
you've got an astounding case of verbal diarreaha. if i was your mom id wash your mouth out with shit, so you know what your rhymes taste like.
HAHAHAHA thats fuckin class.
made my day.
Passleoinj
01-08-2008, 08:45 PM
wow im so hurt inside
why dont you guys spit back , a fuckin 3vs 1
ill sure beat your asses easily
"Riot"
01-08-2008, 08:46 PM
fuck that.
you vs me.
LEGIT BATTLE! like set up and shit 1 verse. me and you.
JETPACK!!
01-08-2008, 08:51 PM
how many fucking times do i have to say i write, not rhyme. are you illiterate? i just enjoy making fun of you. im not rhyming cuz i know i'd suck and my rhymes would be whack... just like yours. but the difference is that you dont realize your shits whack and you dont realize you look like a douchebag who thinks he can rhyme because some dude in your school says your dope.
ill tell you straight up, your soooo dope its making me dope sick. (thats sarcastic if you didnt notice)
..TwoShameFull..
01-08-2008, 08:55 PM
new track soon to be recorded
nun dun undastan kids nowadays bah ya see,
input da outrage - most raised wit blaze a leaf
in sum fuckd up place - catch the flipside -
n they caged in dey own homes parents feared see
- scared a the peeps theyll meet on the streets
packin heat n deceit, no doubt followd by the greif
of da police - some born into beef beyond beleif
n wen they grown to teens theyll learn to love the streets
n prey on those that weak so they then forcd to pack heat
its mean, n wen u see the bigger picture
does it still seem obcene to dream these teensll hit ya
for jack shit sept being in the wrong place -
at the wrong time, dunt you find rise in crime
aint disturbin to those born into hard times
our times, sumin gone deeply wrong from the inside
most hide, n politicians got to much pride to realise
this self inflicted genacide we all aclimatized
to this mass suicide, shits on the news so many times
we not suprised to see it with our own eyes,
dont lie, not one person hasnt just passed by
or passed judgement, most happy to see the hoods die
a innocent child killd n its front page of the sun
for a munf, n everyones callin to stop the guns
sum cun from a estate stabbed to deaf n its page fourty one
and to me thats dumb. makes me wonder whose really the cunt
really the scum - double standerds run deeper than veins
tha laws tha reign made to make sure we endure the pain
keep the poor poor - n the slaves in chains
why is it suprisin kids be playin the game
when they forced to stay in tha rain, knowin that most aint
its cold, cause u callem criminals i call dem da unlucky soles
that forced to pack a bucky so they ain scared in dey own home
scared of a country of home grown terraist kids vandals wid
shit else to do sept chuck bricks and get pissed
its sick a whole generation a yout wid no where to turn to
so ya see its not so suprisin that they might just turn on you
in the same situation starin out at the cold view
that is life for dem how wud you feel wen people condem you
judge you, many men an pigs hunt chu, cud u cum fru
all that and still be same bloke? a sain bloke?
let alone a saint bro, the enviroment taints those
that dwell on dem insane estate roads
tony blairs gone now but brown still tellin dem same old jokes
sayin britians changin for the better, bruv whateva
the only thing thats changing is the weather
mass floods makin more fams retreat the streets
n me, im gettin kinda fed up, so please,
tell me how the fuck we gunna fix this
besides imprisonin half the yoot before nex crismis
"Riot"
01-08-2008, 08:59 PM
how many fucking times do i have to say i write, not rhyme. are you illiterate? i just enjoy making fun of you. im not rhyming cuz i know i'd suck and my rhymes would be whack... just like yours. but the difference is that you dont realize your shits whack and you dont realize you look like a douchebag who thinks he can rhyme because some dude in your school says your dope.
ill tell you straight up, your soooo dope its making me dope sick. (thats sarcastic if you didnt notice)
word.
just let him talk about him and monor are so sick.
let them buttbuddies be.
He wont have a legit battle with me cause he knows he would get raped,violently.
JETPACK!!
01-08-2008, 09:01 PM
untill his sphinkter bled a ridiculous amount of blood that would make him look like a bitch bleedin out her vag
"Riot"
01-08-2008, 09:17 PM
hahah,class!
AnteUp
01-08-2008, 10:26 PM
lets start a riot, no, i wont be quiet
i feed of the excitment, i die in tha silence...
-another little line...haha
MonoR
01-08-2008, 10:28 PM
you guys are
FIF!
"Riot"
01-08-2008, 11:14 PM
lets start a riot, no, i wont be quiet
i feed of the excitment, i die in tha silence...
-another little line...haha
if that was to me....cute.
MonoR
01-09-2008, 02:49 AM
your name was in it fucken dumb ass...
anyway, you guys are so bad in hip hop history i bet you dont even know who did that verse:
Yo I slay who I wanna when creating a horror
See my state of nirvana is to make you a goner
Stick a pick in your stomach because I'm sick of you frontin
But still I'm quicker to bludgeon and catchin victims with nuthin
I'll whip out the sharp shank and stick and jig up with ease
I watch your ligaments bleed with very vigorous speed
My left hook is known to put a bitch in the scene
And transform his face into mystery meat
After I clap at the wig your skull will snap like a twig
There ain't no little body counts I make my massacres big
Carefully put in my clips so that the bullets could rip
You gettin butchered to bits to me is as good as it gets
Bet you leave on a stretcher when the 16 wet ya
Wit ya cap twist it back like a major league catcher
Your head will bleed ketchup and your garments are soaked
Watch me finish the job with somethin sharp in your throat
p.s: fuck riot, fuck sketchchoker3, fuck all of you
sans exexption.
NEKEL1
01-09-2008, 03:39 AM
how many fucking times do i have to say i write, not rhyme. are you illiterate? i just enjoy making fun of you. im not rhyming cuz i know i'd suck and my rhymes would be whack... just like yours. but the difference is that you dont realize your shits whack and you dont realize you look like a douchebag who thinks he can rhyme because some dude in your school says your dope.
ill tell you straight up, your soooo dope its making me dope sick. (thats sarcastic if you didnt notice)
if thats the case get the fuk out this forum.
waste man.
JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 10:24 AM
shiiit, just to keep my ass in this thread
im gonna have to make up something off the top of my head
i dont know why half these writers are trying to rhyme
when they should be painting in there spare time
they think they actually sound dope and great
but like water they conduct mass hate
what they should be do is painting a wall, maybe a bridge, maybe a mall
instead they on the freestylin thread making me lol
i never claimed that i could spit a hot bar
i chill and smoke cigarettes devouring tasty black tar
ive got no patience when it comes to creative singing with minors
thats why im always sketching coming up with catchy one-liners
im done, and i did a rhyme for you kids. happy?
tha.ruggedest
01-09-2008, 11:12 AM
shiiit, just to keep my ass in this thread
im gonna have to make up something off the top of my head
i dont know why half these writers are trying to rhyme
when they should be painting in there spare time
they think they actually sound dope and great
but like water they conduct mass hate
what they should be do is painting a wall, maybe a bridge, maybe a mall
instead they on the freestylin thread making me lol
i never claimed that i could spit a hot bar
i chill and smoke cigarettes devouring tasty black tar
ive got no patience when it comes to creative singing with minors
thats why im always sketching coming up with catchy one-liners
im done, and i did a rhyme for you kids. happy?
wow you sure are a fucking faggot for taking the time out to type an internet poem. this whole thread is a fucking joke, "freestyle rapping", you kids press backspace so many times to get your rhymes the way you want them bitches. guaranteed all of you are either fucking wiggers or emo kids trying to get a gangster internet persona. either way you should just die. fuck off.
fags.
Oink.
01-09-2008, 12:41 PM
anyways so heres a freestyle to lighten the mood.
landmines love toreup those who are mine
revolution of minds, times of sand
slipping through the fine lines of my hands
swimming for eternity still never touching land
sinking in a boat without a lifecoat
boast to brag, brags to most
untouchable by hells roast, dreams of emceeing
up and down the coast
Stuck on a rollercoaster walls fading faster
emotions changed downloadable like napster
taunting hienas laughter, the humor
only gods saught after/
some boredom shit goin down.
JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 01:14 PM
kinna dosent rhyme but its like some sage francis shit i guess
JETPACK!!
01-09-2008, 01:15 PM
wow you sure are a fucking faggot for taking the time out to type an internet poem. this whole thread is a fucking joke, "freestyle rapping", you kids press backspace so many times to get your rhymes the way you want them bitches. guaranteed all of you are either fucking wiggers or emo kids trying to get a gangster internet persona. either way you should just die. fuck off.
fags.
e-e-e-e-e-thugggginnnn
Oink.
01-09-2008, 01:38 PM
kinna dosent rhyme but its like some sage francis shit i guess
yeh dude, dunno why im feelin spoken word and alot of sage lately past couple months.
grifter
01-09-2008, 02:02 PM
im a small guy that cut your Umbilical cord
with the knife i got packed and stored
12 inchs long and thick
not the knivfe my hard mother fucking dick
and its kra stands for crazy
type a guy to put shank to your lady
come in your house and shank your baby
will i shank up your mom
well thats a maybe
don stands for don
fuck them pricks i rep b21
than i tell them pricks to suck there mom
im the daddy but you can call me the papa
type of guy to hide from the chopper
feds can run but i can hide
im so good they fought i died.
NEKEL1
01-10-2008, 05:47 AM
ite then jetpack u aint no set back
if i was u i would sop spittin and step back
coz the truth is u aint on my level
so what if u smoke fags u aint no rebel
ur a wasteman no if buts or maybes
i fukd ur mum and the rubber split ur my baby
coz lyricly i got u in a hedlok
by the way i fukd ur mum in a figure four leg lok
iv got bars apon bars
4 u strappin bars is hard its not hard
can u merk me theres no chance so dont ask
i got bars like the sky has stars
im goin on greezy agen
ur not gettin no freebees agen
hear my bars on bombing squad and u wanna do ur mix cd angen
im spittin bars on the p c agen
ur spittin all swag and sleezy agen
when i finished lashin ur um il watch cartoons on the tv agen
Seek38
01-10-2008, 08:06 PM
im confident cuz my bars is the dominant, and i got chicks in other continents givin me compliments, u aint as famous as me, i got chicks screamin my name that dont even speak the same language as me
bite my ass u *****s done got me mad, im known for the chrome & the hockey mask, i take burners off the waist cock & blast, had the mag burnin ya face like oxy pads, u betta watch for me wherever u go, i could be right behind u and u wouldnt even know, if u got cheese to blow spend it on a tool g, cuz u gonna need one if u plan on keep all ur jewelery
Yusef
01-11-2008, 11:04 PM
alright mains back in the shit, new name same style
still ending dudes careers, watching the bodies in the mass grave pile
cause im verbally synthesizing the livest virus, rapid flow like the Tigris
rippin Rembrandt renditions out the view of my prodigal iris
and im already at the point in my career where i need that purple pill
spittin too much fire, shits burning the lining of my esophagus... its that ill
kills with flows far from menotenous, master of Maine's majestic metropolis
Ptoooown, we running shit from handstyles to freestyles, you're not stoppin this
but really, how many repeats have we seen exactly like this fake fuck Seek38
straight ass like the position i heard he take, im dope like uncut sleek dirty weight
and yo Nekel, after reading your shit dawg, i had an epiphany
cause im nominating "i got bars like the sky has stars" for the worst line in BS history
seriously dude, what the fuck were you honestly thinking ock
the fuck kinda line is "by the way i fukd ur mum in a figure four leg lok"?
damn someone get this kid a spell check, dictionary, or something
but not fronting, Nekel wasnt the only dude to spit about mom dukes humping
and again i feel compelled to break shit down bar by bar real quick
"12 inchs long and thick, not the knivfe my hard mother fucking dick"?!?!
you're not dazzling anyone with fake dick size lines cause this site is all guys
"put shank to your lady, come in your house and shank your baby" you gotta be high
and yo im not even gonna address the rest of the cats who "spray guns"
but ****, you got 1000 posts and you're still as wack as you were from day one
Infoe
01-11-2008, 11:49 PM
ite then jetpack u aint no set back
if i was u i would sop spittin and step back
coz the truth is u aint on my level
so what if u smoke fags u aint no rebel
ur a wasteman no if buts or maybes
i fukd ur mum and the rubber split ur my baby
coz lyricly i got u in a hedlok
by the way i fukd ur mum in a figure four leg lok
iv got bars apon bars
4 u strappin bars is hard its not hard
can u merk me theres no chance so dont ask
i got bars like the sky has stars
im goin on greezy agen
ur not gettin no freebees agen
hear my bars on bombing squad and u wanna do ur mix cd angen
im spittin bars on the p c agen
ur spittin all swag and sleezy agen
when i finished lashin ur um il watch cartoons on the tv agen
How many times do you need to say 'again'
Like you're trying to make it into some shitty trend?
You can't even spell it, your wording is whack
I hear you telling Jetpack to step back
And you say you fucked his mum, what the fuck, you smoke crack?
That shits just fucked, so give up you e-thug
You're gunna get nowhere, and I'm about to pull the plug
Your shits just repetitive, and you have no motive
For all the shit you spit, and it's only missive
So this is what you get from the land down under
You'll hear us coming like the rolling thunder
AnteUp
01-12-2008, 05:43 PM
if that was to me....cute.
um no not directed to you cuz it wasnt a dis.. i jus saw your name and i typed a line out
Passleoinj
01-14-2008, 12:18 AM
yoo yoooooooo
montreality
yo check it ,
i fucked so many bitches im spittin raw sex
your next , jet , pass wont let you spit back
fuckin jetpack , fly away your shit's whack
youre telling us to go paint malls while you paint balls
fuckin homo , claiming to be buffed you aint tall
youre what? 22kilos with bricks in your sandals
you wear flip-flops , with flowered shorts and short blond hair
diss me about some shit , im not a bitch i dont care
little penis , i kidnapped youre mom your dad and your niece
i sent hem in a container to rwanda , darfour and greenpeace
save the animals , so i wont have to use my piece , chieef
sketch3 , dont talk about dicks when youre a pussy
for now
motherfucka now you know again»
WE DONT FUCK AROUND
top of the dome
SeapNSR
01-14-2008, 01:02 AM
out with the new back with the old
who could predict that us time unfolds
evolution would start to reverse
faggot rappers get worse every time they reherse
with each verse you spit
rap gets closer to being in a hearse
youre pitiful
jealous cuz you cant handle the original
victimless criminal, cynical lyrical pinnacle
you say hip hops dying and the situations critical
but im the answer im hip hops miracle
about to flip shit back to kool g rap
and all those real cats
who aint selling out for higher stacks
cuz money attracts these hip hop peasants
thats why im not part of your material world like quintessence
ya fake like akon
with more faces than an icosidodecahedron
making you look like a bigger dick than lexington
i steal ya mask and reveal your ass
for the low class not even half way
to vastly rnb bullshit that you are
"Riot"
01-14-2008, 05:15 PM
yooo head flips and spins,
I rock the mic one hundred ten percent.
you can break down,but I'll continue to stay content.
verbally,i'll make sounds,leave battlescars, permanent.
you know these ryhmes? they damn hardcore.
Runnin lines qucker than parkour.
Rockin your mental state so hard left ya sore.
this is comin so fast you thinkin "damn this ***** should be on tour"
hahah fuckin around.
anyone wanna freestyle together. Like a little collab or something?
sketch3
01-15-2008, 11:24 AM
making fertiliser bombs till i get payed bitch,
leave ur click eradicated,
ull be sad i made it,
wen the shockwaves hit u like a spear from savege natives,
ur just into faggot gay shit,
think ur dope to bad u hated,
not at anyone
added to it,
ull be cryin like a baby teethin,
cuss god dont save u shady heathens,
i aint preachin but ivv come to slay the demons,
so u shud stick to the straight n even,
or u wont be leavin, ur household breathin,
MonoR
01-15-2008, 10:33 PM
sketch 3 shit is so ugly, i wont spit dont worry, im just gonna pee on it
dont even answer me, cause i dont care
sketch3
01-16-2008, 05:35 AM
sketch 3 shit is so ugly, i wont spit dont worry, im just gonna pee on it
dont even answer me, cause i dont care
was this honestly suposed to rhhyme? or were u just being imature and trying to hate?
cuss were im from 'dont worry' and 'pee on it' just dont seem to rhyme
MonoR
01-16-2008, 02:41 PM
wow, you moved from gay to lesbian
congrats bitch
sketch3
01-16-2008, 03:02 PM
wow, you moved from gay to lesbian
congrats bitch
yea taking shots at my sexuality really gets me heated,
while ur at it why dont u diss my mum,
oh wait im not 12 nevermind
MonoR
01-16-2008, 03:42 PM
im happy to know that your 11
sketch3
01-16-2008, 03:47 PM
was that seriously suposed to be insulting?
cuss u know were to hit someone were it hurts,
Passleoinj
01-16-2008, 05:04 PM
what the fuck did you just say
MonoR
01-16-2008, 08:24 PM
was that seriously suposed to be insulting?
cuss u know were to hit someone were it hurts,
you suck big black dicks
you suck at rap
you suck at graff
you suck at life
you suck at sex
you suck my dick whit a passion fucken homo
and im done
byebye
"Riot"
01-17-2008, 06:15 PM
roflcopter.
Hint hint.
im not laughing with you,im laughing at you.
JETPACK!!
01-17-2008, 06:35 PM
fuck monor, fuck passle and sketch can be a douchebag.. but he's still a lot cooler than both of you queers crossbreeding and putting your result in a test tube.
MonoR
01-17-2008, 06:52 PM
jetpack, go suck your daddy package and go fly whit in in the deep arizona jungle fucken queer
riot you can go suicide your self cause you are an alien
sketch3
01-17-2008, 06:55 PM
gay jokes dont upset anyone,
cuss calling sumone who isnt gay gay is just silly,
and galling sumone who is gay isnt fucking news, if u wanna diss sumone,
most of us learned this befor our balls droped, if u wanna diss sumone
find out there insecuratys and tear tham apart,
also u two are really bad,
at rhyming an dissin
"Riot"
01-17-2008, 06:58 PM
jetpack, go suck your daddy package and go fly whit in in the deep arizona jungle fucken queer
riot you can go suicide your self cause you are an alien
Monor,You a G!/sarcasm.
MonoR
01-17-2008, 09:42 PM
your catching feeling while i dont care
and the only thing you ever rocked in your text is anal sex
Maste
01-17-2008, 09:52 PM
hahahaha the beef between moron sketch and passajeloni macaroni is still going on in here thats great :)
give it a rest children
hip hop is a feeling
and noone likes naughty words
so fuck what you heard
on your MTV station or show
cause your mama jokes are a no
(lol that sucked XD)
haha kida startin beef on the internet
ill be throwing out my fishing net
cause i got bigger fish to fry
than internet chumps and little guys
but dont start to get wise
and drop beef on me
i only come here occasionally
so guess what . i wont see
it
hhaha
bananas taste like oranges these days and noone is going back in the future so stop talking like someone told you something and keep fronting put up your mask and laugh cuase its funny muthafucka
Passleoinj
01-18-2008, 10:40 AM
uhhhhh uhhhh
YEAHHH
for all you fake mc's killing this thread
you *****s are the rapper cliché,
choregraphing all youre moves ,
practicing your mean faces in front of yo' mirror
fatal error , against passleoinj and monor,
I'm known , from montreal to budapest,
I hit the snare harder than ali's slug at you chest,
I'm the best,
you bitches can't stop arguing ,
get off this game and go apply for oprah winfrey,
before i kick yall heads in, I'm a king,
Maste-r-bator , mind your own business
youre such a hater, you could be in the Guiness
feel me?
youre the kinda guy that admits your shit was whack
what kinda mc is that?
get off this thread , get off my dick before i leave you dead,
12 gauge shot to the head , alll your thoughts now spread ,
we all see that your ideas were dumb ,
fulfilled with federal bullshit that your father tought you when you was young.
BITCCHHHH
uhhhhh uhhhh
YEAHHH
for all you fake mc's killing this thread
IM GAY!
BITCCHHHH
.
Passleoinj
01-18-2008, 10:54 AM
wow , thats really good my little friend
now piss off and go watch sesame street , touching your little weenie penis
oOOOW THAT HURT SO MUCH!
MY PRIDE
is taht wat u do for fun?
Passleoinj
01-18-2008, 11:02 AM
always
FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
01-18-2008, 12:10 PM
im back, giving you cataracs and cardiac arrest
spasms and heart attack pains up in you chest,
im the best, in the west like wyatt erp
ill lay ur ass deep deep down into the dirt
make you hurt, bullet holes and blood stains allover your shirt
slice your wrist and watch the crimson spert,
like when i fuck you sister and i fuckin squirt
im a jerk, putting bitches down is what i do
im rude, slowly making you hate me when i talk to you
i dont know where i am going to, never really had a clue
to what in life i wanna do, all i know is i like making you
mad, pissing ppl of makes me glad, and i just gave moners mom the best fuck shes ever ever had.
im out pce
Passleoinj
01-18-2008, 12:26 PM
thats what im talking about god damn
spit and get out
props
MonoR
01-18-2008, 12:26 PM
mass, what are you?
a huge bull of some brown juicy shit?
yeah thats what i tough
bye bye
p.s im laughing at you really hard
u cant spell retard..its thoughT
Passleoinj
01-18-2008, 03:03 PM
u cant rap
JETPACK!!
01-19-2008, 02:00 PM
you couldn't hurt the feelings of a parapalegic midget who just shat themselves. your test tube daddy must have lost a nut and a half in some freak accident cuz your missing the chromosomes that gives a guy his balls you candy ass faggot hahaha
sketch3
01-19-2008, 02:07 PM
uhhhhh uhhhh
YEAHHH
for all you fake mc's killing this thread
you *****s are the rapper cliché,
choregraphing all youre moves ,
practicing your mean faces in front of yo' mirror
fatal error , against passleoinj and monor,
I'm known , from montreal to budapest,
I hit the snare harder than ali's slug at you chest,
I'm the best,
you bitches can't stop arguing ,
get off this game and go apply for oprah winfrey,
before i kick yall heads in, I'm a king,
Maste-r-bator , mind your own business
youre such a hater, you could be in the Guiness
feel me?
youre the kinda guy that admits your shit was whack
what kinda mc is that?
get off this thread , get off my dick before i leave you dead,
12 gauge shot to the head , alll your thoughts now spread ,
we all see that your ideas were dumb ,
fulfilled with federal bullshit that your father tought you when you was young.
BITCCHHHH
who coulda guesed.
ur remidial ass even knew about buddapest,
i never knew u woulda test,
my paitience this much,
u two fags are gayer than an anal fist fuck,
ur the kinda guy who wont admit his shit is wack,
is ur deffinition of an mc sumone with no braincells, or just someone with an ego bigger than the list of ppl who hink they are fags along with monor
Passleoinj
01-19-2008, 05:30 PM
that sucked.
I don't conform to the norms,
but the blood in my veins is hiphop in a liquid form,
i leave your ass torn ,
the moral of the story ; dont fuck with me
or get your ass shot like biggie
now i dont mean no disrespect to big poppa
but i fucked your mom so hard it felt like a 12 gauge shottaa
now we dressed in all black ,
we know who gon die already ,
so dont bother spittin back,
cause i'll leave your ass cut like Busta with his dreadies
bring it bitch
comocomo
01-19-2008, 07:32 PM
my penis is big like notorious
big brass balls glorious and enormous
writing rhymes like, i'm rhyming right?
and people go "Oh damn you just floored us
how did you get so super duper cool?
is it some sort of medicine, a remedy, some kind of mechanical tool?"
i say no, i was just born this way
skinny and pale with a voice low like tay zonday
6 feet tall with arms like noodles you eat like an entre
beautiful hairdo, like i was fabio only not that long or blond because i'm not gay
motherfuckers step to me but i breathe and singe their hair off
not cuz of my rhymes but because of the sour cream and onion chips i eat
and the dog shit i ate after
why did i eat it?
cuz it was warm chewy and soft
reminded me of an oreo cakester.
turkey baster.
i donnow thats enough.
AyteYourCookies
01-20-2008, 06:25 PM
before a gat, i take out a bat, then i start to crack, matterfact im like a black cat, you couldnt catch me in the streets without a ton of paint, thats like john the baptist not being a saint. king of graff, too much style, im saber. ja one aint braver ill do a piece like a favour. cuz im a king when i use the paint, my graff is fresh, i never get complaints.
Oink.
01-20-2008, 06:31 PM
before a gat, i take out a bat, then i start to crack, matterfact im like a black cat, you couldnt catch me in the streets without a ton of paint, thats like john the baptist not being a saint. king of graff, too much style, im saber. ja one aint braver ill do a piece like a favour. cuz im a king when i use the paint, my graff is fresh, i never get complaints.
wow shut the fuck up you toy.
AyteYourCookies
01-20-2008, 07:03 PM
Wow, you honestly think I was cereal?
comocomo
01-20-2008, 07:58 PM
sarcasm doesn't exist on the internet. you gotta type in all caps without punctuation and even then people might take you seriously.
p.s. that napoleon dynamite thing in your sig is so fucking funny
SeapNSR
01-21-2008, 12:14 AM
out with the new back with the old
who could predict that us time unfolds
evolution would start to reverse
faggot rappers get worse every time they reherse
with each verse you spit
rap gets closer to being in a hearse
youre pitiful
jealous cuz you cant handle the original
victimless criminal, cynical lyrical pinnacle
you say hip hops dying and the situations critical
but im the answer im hip hops miracle
about to flip shit back to kool g rap
and all those real cats
who aint selling out for higher stacks
cuz money attracts these hip hop peasants
thats why im not part of your material world like quintessence
ya fake like akon
with more faces than an icosidodecahedron
making you look like a bigger dick than lexington
i steal ya mask and reveal your ass
for the low class not even half way
to vastly rnb bullshit that you are
mother fucker
your mouth spills shit like a slit in a colostomy
i perform lyrical lobotomys
cutting your nerves so you cant produce like a vasectomy
you couldnt fucking step to me
with your flacid raps they need viagra caps
thats why im flippin it back
to the ace thats 3rd bass
i'll get on your case
if you disgrace wu tang beats
with your mindless falsified dribble
i spit in riddles
leaving you out of time like paradiddles
i combat ya little get rich quick scheme
selling out the game like jessica simpsons zit cream
on late night tv
i know you wanna be me
with my tongue further up your wifes pussy
than your dick could get
i earn respect with skill
not how many faggots i kill
busting mad raps got nothing to do with carrying gats
and thats the fucking downfall of it all
raps not gunna stall as long as im the fucking clutch
staying on the ball
i leave you speechless like motor neurone disease
you think youre a burner but im the quick eze
and most of you bitches still cant stomach my steez
like off cheese
i make you weak at the kness
off balance like i severed your semi circular canals
and somehow your ego continues to swell
but your still a virgin like steve carrell
i cant believe your bullshit sells
youre a fucking classless anal apparatus
spitting aimless rhymes at aweless crowds
bopping cuz their heads are full of clouds
with shrouds over their fucken eyes
you will meet your demise
if you dont learn to think for your fucken self
buying anything on the fucking shelf
from fake rnb whiney bitch feminist shit
to half dead sounding acoustic guitar picking
soft dicks
without once thinking their could be something different
with a real fucking message
that needs more than a dumb fuck 13 year old drunk retard slut
to comprehend it
theres no way to defend it
it aint just rap the whole fucking music world has ended
Darkman420
01-21-2008, 08:18 AM
This was written by me and a dude named Chris C from Keene, NH. while we were in New Hampshire State Prison.
My graffiti's tight,
Tring to tag over mine is like bringing a knife to a gun fight,
I spray with prescise strikes,
And take it th the lime light.
I pop the cap from the can,
And the spray commin' out is like a lazer from my hand,
That no man can withstand.
Stop with your generic brand,
Krylon is the only can for my possesed fans.
Painting everything in your city,
From skyscrapers down to your girls left tittie,
Showin' no pitty,
Gettin' down to the nitty gritty.
In my city we be gettin' shitty till any bitch looks pretty.
In fact don't counter attack,
Just lay back and lap my nut sack,
It could be 2000 whatever and I will still bring it back.
What are you on crack?
Or doped up on smack?
Thinking that you are gonna jack, us,
Your in for a head rush,
Or maybe a close brush,
With death,
I represent the East not the West,
No doubt in my mind I'm the muthafukin' best.
When I square off you bring a bullet proof vest,
Cause someone's gettin' blessed,
And put right to rest.
Don't get upset by my finesse,
I'm gettin' stress off my chest,
I'm on a lyrical conquest,
To sever brain stems,
And take away your gems,
And spend em' on stupid shit like Snickers and M&M's,
And three pairs of depends for you and your friends.
I should have seen the warning signs,
When I heard you were dissin' peoples rhymes,
But keep you fuckin' mouth away from mine,
Or I'll be doing more time,
For another crime,
Killing muthafuckaz with my rhyme.
I've got one hundred and thirty seven confermed kills from drug deals,
This is how it is on the reals,
On the heals of this game called life.
Today I'm with your daughter,
Tomorrow your wife.
So say goodbye to your sweet dreams,
The neighbors call the cops 'cause the screams.
It seems I've been bad,
You've been had,
But sweet revenge makes me so fuckin' glad.
You se I'm just mad,
At the whole damn Earth,
I've been like that since birth,
Can't figure out what my soul is worth,
Maybe a penny,
Maybe a dime,
Maybe thats why they sentenced me to so much time.
But sometimes I dispise these guys,
How many cries, sighs, or lies, Before we're hypnotized,
To eat nothing but Mc Donalds fries,
With no milkshakes,
On a hot sunny day with no shade breaks.
I'm making a clame stake,
For my names sake,
'Cause your fake flake.
You know like the frosted kind,
Wishing you could press rewind,
And change your mind,
About fuckin' with me this time.
sketch3
01-21-2008, 10:24 AM
that sucked.
I don't conform to the norms,
but the blood in my veins is hiphop in a liquid form,
i leave your ass torn ,
the moral of the story ; dont fuck with me
or get your ass shot like biggie
now i dont mean no disrespect to big poppa
but i fucked your mom so hard it felt like a 12 gauge shottaa
now we dressed in all black ,
we know who gon die already ,
so dont bother spittin back,
cause i'll leave your ass cut like Busta with his dreadies
bring it bitch
the whole of ur camp is hated,
im swingin swords shampoo style, head and shoulders amputated,
ull get shanked for statements,
u wank its blatent,
cuss u got dumped by that skank u datin,
im in rank with satan,
only way u like biggie smalls is ur
ego bigie and ur talents small,
while i balance all,
my ego and ability,
that sucked.
I don't conform to the norms,
but the blood in my veins is hiphop in a liquid form,
i leave your ass torn ,
the moral of the story ; dont fuck with me
or get your ass shot like biggie
now i dont mean no disrespect to big poppa
but i fucked your mom so hard it felt like a 12 gauge shottaa
now we dressed in all black ,
we know who gon die already ,
so dont bother spittin back,
cause i'll leave your ass cut like Busta with his dreadies
bring it bitch
so you're gay?
ya know u made my motherfucking day,
its nothing that you do, jus all the shit you say
u and i know u aint hardcore,
so why you bein e-thuggin, im not sure
i aint your enemy, i just know you suck,
when you try to rap, inbetween all your gay fucks
bite me...bitch,
better yet fuck with ma family
i aint no thug forreal
i dont have any slugs waitin for your faggot ass
i know this dosent require any class,
so ima shut this shit
before you go and get urself hit
haha
Oink.
01-21-2008, 11:10 AM
stumblin' along rockin the wrong damn song
like the calm after a storm im breakin threw yo dorm
straight to the dome, hiddin like a gardin knomb
i burry emcees in tombs, i furtiled yo moms womb
Leavin' emcees underwater
bury your mother sons and daughters
verble emcee sendin toys to the slaughter
aahahaha so wack.
sketch3
01-21-2008, 11:23 AM
stumblin' along rockin the wrong damn song
like the calm after a storm im breakin threw yo dorm
straight to the dome, hiddin like a gardin knomb
i burry emcees in tombs, i furtiled yo moms womb
Leavin' emcees underwater
bury your mother sons and daughters
verble emcee sendin toys to the slaughter
aahahaha so wack.
i survied the slaughter,
get revenge by kidnappin mothers daughters,
submit them to water touter,
burn and scorch her,
weak i know
FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
01-21-2008, 04:41 PM
the words i spout make you shout with glee
not one of yall can win in a bout with me
you are about to see, never ever fuck with the ill mc
im evil you see
ripping tails of cute kittys and
filling your pillow cases with live bees
and i got some skeeze on my dick that bleeds
making your girl get down on them knees
so she can satisfy my sexual needs
"Riot"
01-21-2008, 09:21 PM
yoo yooo.
this shits hard ya feel me?
I think I can do this,set my inner depression free.
Let everyone know,whats holding back the real me.
I want to prove I'm more than a slacker.
I want to penetrate minds like a computer hacker.
I want my vocalizations to follow you around like a gps tracker.
but really i dont think you see the real me.
Im not that man who dreams with a mind filled with thoughts.
I'm not that man that wants to run but only trots.
i'm bored.
im thinkin about making my first legit song.
anyone want to recommend a good beat?
Passleoinj
01-21-2008, 09:56 PM
check out premier's tracks
"Riot"
01-21-2008, 10:01 PM
haha im done beefin with you.
it was fun while it lasted.
but on the real. work on those lines there getting better.
they got myspace?
im making lyrical history like taki 183 did for graffiti, cuz my flows so tight like a virgin bitch on prom night.. yesssirrr
... just thought this line out and i was thinkin it was pretttty nice
SeapNSR
01-22-2008, 08:24 AM
aiyo
i jump out of the defendants stand
runnin off with your stash in my hands
while your bitch rings me to make passionate plans
pull ya fucken head out the sand
ya wacker than will i am
they used your bullshit song in a jamster scam
i put messages in my rhymes
yours are full of more bullshit than the sunday times
journos trying to rise to glory
with their one sided fucken stories
much like your slap happy record contract raps
making kids in nappies want to carry gats
you dont even speak facts
youre a fucking hip hop johnnie cochran
a concuction of lies like the wolfowitz doctrine
on people nerves like neurotoxins
i used to keep shit boxed in
but now im revealing how im feeling
layer by layer like sunburn peeling
but still concealing myself like a mantid
until you leave then i make your bitch scream like an arachnid
oh she has a cute dick sucking face
before i disgrace it
with my creamy white lace dick spit
nah im talking shit
your bitch is a fucking bushpig
sketch3
01-22-2008, 09:34 AM
check out premier's tracks
for once i agree with you,
dj premier has deff got dope beats,
or pete rock
or j dilla
and u probily know the rza rector
Feel the Burn
01-22-2008, 12:40 PM
I'm a montage murder cycle
You worship me like the bible...
Snipe ya head off from afar with a 1920's rifle
Make you little like Fifle...
That's the remedy
For all you fagget ass fat fucks that wanna get ahead of me...
You blow...
My words reign like missles while I finger fuck your ho...
Lemme introduce this show, of flashy color flair
You really need to tell that bitch she needs to use some nair...
Dumb blonde bitch with alot of pussy hair...
Stand to close to me, I'm cold - you can catch frostbite...
Just sit down n base up let your nose fill with white
Ya fucking dyke...
Fucking fagget...your rhymes are first grade like Reader Rabbit
You's a can't hack it crack addict...
I'll make you choke like asmathics
Or cut you down with out a chopper...
Got more blades than helicopters
You remind me of that fetus fuckin doctor...
Or maybe just a bad actor - A fudge packin version of Rodger Podactor
A remedial retard you back of the bus...
This paper stickin to my hand that's all just lust...
So fuck rap lets all sit back n smoke crack
Talk a whole lotta shit and let it all be wack...
We'll spit words that mean nothin...
Eat X then roll somethin...
Sit in the back of the line just to watch these kids fruntin...
MonoR
01-22-2008, 12:45 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=YOEsF_ZWRzM
take a look
JEDI-MASTER
01-22-2008, 01:53 PM
Lace the track wit rhythm and flow
Holla back *****, we on a roll
Take a break ***** I got dis
Show theez heads wassup
Let em listen to real ill shit
Ill keep spitn,keepin it hood, keepin it trill
Yall bitches ouuta know im not in dis for da fame
Tho I holla at chall wit mad game
Mackin on all these small town hoes
Fuck em fast, fuck em slow, don’t matter all I hear is go go go
Like da speedracer always racin pushin through always coming out on top bein first
Like dat a surprise, kick da hoe to the flo leave her on her knees where she belongs (pernouce as below)
Bust a nut on dat perfect face, disappear into the night, leave wit out a trace
Wallkin deez streets, I see pussy ass *****s, dressin like male model bitches and two timing snitches
Both thinkin they hard,game dey say, thugs they claim
Yippin and yappin but no action, ill show em a true og
Pullin my strap (gunshots) that’s all folks dats a rap
my verse i came up wit to spit wit my boi loki on his next track
sketch3
01-22-2008, 01:57 PM
arnt u white?
JEDI-MASTER
01-22-2008, 01:59 PM
damn ur still on that white ego trip thing? yes i am white i ask so wat man i am who i am
sketch3
01-22-2008, 02:01 PM
that wasnt me last time,
im just asking cuss ur typin ****** an awfull lot for whte folks
JEDI-MASTER
01-22-2008, 02:04 PM
3 times is alot ? well yo im comfortable way im talkinso its w/e but yea dats going on a rtrack wit my boi loki yes hes white to but can spit so damn good and his boi cannibal whois black so comon cut me a lil slack cuz me n cnannibal r straight
sketch3
01-22-2008, 02:08 PM
'' i got a black friend.... so i cant be racsist''
ahah i dont really care,
JEDI-MASTER
01-22-2008, 02:09 PM
well w/e u gonna spit
"Riot"
01-22-2008, 07:53 PM
yoo yooo.
this shits hard ya feel me?
I think I can do this,set my inner depression free.
Let everyone know,whats holding back the real me.
I want to prove I'm more than a slacker.
I want to penetrate minds like a computer hacker.
I want my vocalizations to follow you around like a gps tracker.
but really i dont think you see the real me.
Im not that man who dreams with a mind filled with thoughts.
I'm not that man who the coach told to run but only trots.
I would rather be who I am,not what you want,what I'm not.
No longer will i hold my emotions,express inner feeling with this ink i let bleed.
done with inappropriate commotions,i really need going to succeed.
you,your aren't going to stop me,your whats holding me back.
This is it i'ma start coming at you like a fucking anxiety attack.
listening to my boy drop ryhmes,hes got some hot lines.
takes his time,doesnt rush,makes the bars run flush.
tight as virgin marys pussy,minus the commas.
You dont think you can trust me,ill steal your food when we in the commons.
When i die i want to be remembered forever,not as some punk on the streets,so put this track on repeat.
lkjlkjl;lkjlkjlkjlkj;kl bored.
JEDI-MASTER
01-23-2008, 11:06 AM
heres wat got added to my verse dats going on da track were makin it longer so i had to fin away to throw it back 2 my boi loki so here it is
Lace the track wit rhythm and flow
Holla back *****, we on a roll
Take a break ***** I got dis
Show theez heads wassup
Let em listen to sum real ill shit
Ill keep spitn,keepin it hood, keepin it trill
Yall bitches ouuta know im not in dis for da fame
Tho I holla at chall wit mad game
Mackin on all these small town hoes
Fuck em fast, fuck em slow, don’t matter all I hear is go go go
Like da speedracer always racin pushin through always coming out on top bein first
Like dat a surprise, kick da hoe to the flo leave her on her knees where she belongs (pernouce as below)
Bust a nut on dat perfect face, disappear into the night, leave wit out a trace
Wallkin deez streets, I see pussy ass *****s, dressin like male model bitches and two timing snitches
Both thinkin they hard,game dey say, thugs they claim
Yippin and yappin but no action, ill show em a true og
Pullin my strap (gunshots) that’s all folks dats a rap
I aint through wit u , flip da slaughter
Round dos numba 2
Comin out swingin ,my message clear , bitch Fuck u
Filled wit hatred and animosity jus for u
Shreddin to pieces
Like they say; ashes to ashes, dust to dust
New beginnings da,circle of life
Not a a part of u
All dats left on these war torn streets is dread
Put da youngins to bed
No need to blind them of their youth
The blood splattered ground, is littered wit da corpses all around
Bodies riddled wit bullets, I don’t play
]Dis is what happens to punks playin gangsta all day
The sirens wail
dis ***** a fugtive, he on the run
afraid to head to prison,he dips, ditchin the gun
on da run for 20 miles, a day a week, an eternity
don’t matter da 5-0 creepin slowly but surely
homeboy u best take it back
MonoR
01-23-2008, 12:48 PM
dude riot man
''I want to penetrate minds like a computer hacker.''
tell me what the fuck that line means
and what is the link whit the gps tracker
i dont get it
work on that
peace
sketch3
01-23-2008, 01:45 PM
well a computer hacker, decodes shit an genraly fucks shi up with viruses an stuff, they also find out stuff, so yea he wants to do that to ur mind
"Riot"
01-23-2008, 05:38 PM
dude riot man
''I want to penetrate minds like a computer hacker.''
tell me what the fuck that line means
and what is the link whit the gps tracker
i dont get it
work on that
peace
i want to get into your mind like a computer hacker.
a hacker fucks up other peoples computers with viruses. ya know?
a gps tracker is a thing that you put in your cars. follows your cars path down roads and will tell you where to go.
MonoR
01-23-2008, 10:23 PM
whats the link between them
Small Time Crook
01-23-2008, 11:09 PM
i dont think there's any link between them per se, monor
he just wants to penetrate minds like a computer hacker
and wants his vocals to follow you like a gps tracker.
they're called similes. :)
Passleoinj
01-24-2008, 10:33 AM
haha im done beefin with you.
it was fun while it lasted.
but on the real. work on those lines there getting better.
they got myspace?
are you talking to me?
and for beats , check out :
a million and one questions instru
recognize instru
full clip instru
and much more like that
all beats from dj premier
Maste
01-24-2008, 10:44 AM
passlejoni likes macaroni
and internet beef...hes like a xmas reef
i am so hot
sketch3
01-24-2008, 11:10 AM
call me the surgion,
cuss i can remove cataracts,
with a battle axe,
matter fact,i shatter backs,
u think these lyrics are a mouthfull?,
try ingesting a 6 inch scalpel,
its doubtful,
ull survive,
better than becomin an organ donar while u still alive,
ill disect ur windpipe, ur skins ripe,
for the pickin,
dont even need bring to click in
to carv u up like roast chicken
"Riot"
01-24-2008, 02:52 PM
are you talking to me?
and for beats , check out :
a million and one questions instru
recognize instru
full clip instru
and much more like that
all beats from dj premier
haha yeah.
and ill check those now.
Passleoinj
01-24-2008, 09:54 PM
how'd youu like them beats riotorzorzzz
Ill throw more blows then boxing doctor octavius- armyy of the pharaos
crack pot , put you back in your spot
you never slanged on that shit , never smoked a rock,
im throwin all this shit back in your thoughts
like im playing baseball while you be the catcher
andim the pithcer , it dont matter
who is what , and what is who
only thing clear , is that im fuckin with you
fuck lyrics , i work on my flow
Yusef
01-24-2008, 10:14 PM
http://www.illesty.net/board/
peepzilla.
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