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"Riot"
01-24-2008, 10:36 PM
Beats are doooooppeeee.

YO LISTEN!
we the unseen,hardcore.
Crazy human beings,run lines fast as parkour.
can end this real fast,you sure you want more?
take it as yes,my lyrics will put ya in distress,you beggin to impress.
i dont think you ready for this,its time for you to a get new interest.
slick greasy lines,much more where that came from,sure you can you ingest?
your self esteem plumets,you aint talkin and the smell of your breath gets more pungent.
ill navigate for you like a compass,got you on lock,no use for you judgement.
time for you to leave this campus,this verse is only for my amusement.

Small Time Crook
01-24-2008, 10:46 PM
im proud to see all the beef has been cleared up.
gonna spit somethin in a second right churr...

HëRbN
01-24-2008, 11:14 PM
aight i may be a new face..
But im bouta bring you some new disgrace..
So yall betta just turn round n leave this place..
Maybe you could go to myspace..
i know they except the weak ones like you..
cause thats what the weak ones do..
Get on there and find a friend..
N Stay myspace buddies till the bitter end..
Which is coming soon, so be prepared..
Cheif big on the trees with the redhair..
Till you just dont care..
I Swear..
You clueless if you couldnt see you feet you wouldnt even know they were there..
But im bouta bring this to a close..
So take it all in like a smell to the nose..
your shit blows..
But thats just how it goes...
So keep tryin..
To not spit whats gay..
While im around its only the tightest..
cause i be the highest and the mightyest..
So i hope thats ok..
I spit lyric faster than the paint i spray..
Thats the way its gunna be and the way its gunna stay..

SenTheFirst
01-25-2008, 12:06 AM
feel me, quick one

listen, not one of you doods is touchin a gun,
if the heats drawn, you prolly say fuck it and run
the beats on, you bustin a ton
knuckle up kid, i beat down on *****s like the heat from the sun
if you see me, i got my bill aimed at my feet,
but take it easy, ill lay you and ya mayne on the street,
ya girl is geeky, the bitch give me brain every week,
AND she freaky, I KNOW YOU HEARIN MY NAME WHEN YOU SLEEP!


bedtime.

Mace
01-25-2008, 12:37 AM
lemme flex my lyrical brawn
is this the type a shit u *****z iz on
keep talkin smack
keep comin back
keep actin wack
quit pretendin any yall even half black
talk the talk but can u walk the walk
more like you the type a dudes who fiend the cock
talkin bout geeks im the #1 fan a drspock
that dont change nutin wen u starin down the tip a my 9mil glock
thats only my mothafuckin back up gun
you better fuckin back up and run
unless u wanna get shot then hacked up son
murder, thats fuckin nothin
i cud pass the blunt killa dude and the keep on puffin

Small Time Crook
01-25-2008, 12:51 AM
pointless to point fingers "you aint this you aint that"/
what happened to talent and *****s that rap?/
some *****s is bangers, some *****s is rich/
but if theres one thing i cant tolerate its bitch shit/
false frontin', thinkin they somethin/
when they step up to me, get shut down, you nothin/
so keep on keepin on, and keep on comin/
cuz ima slow you down so much ya mouth wont be runnin/
think i backspaced this even a little bit/
tell ya the truth i did once, but this rhyme stil legit/
off the top of my dome, just like the greasy hair/
and everyone shouting "Small Times the best thing out there"/
from here in the chi to the far reaches of space/
spittin so hot ima burn ya like mace/
to the face/
oops, did it again, hit the delete button/
but thats because i thought of a better somethin/
and its so hard when my brain overly functions/
so much that i have multiple concussions/
but it dont faze me, dont even have a seizure/
my only friend in life is my heater/
keep a cannon under the pillow cuz its A-Street livin/
and A-Streets all i got, its what i was givin/
gotta run it as best i can, but how can the hood thrive/
when *****s thats around now dont wanna be alive/
instead they out fighting, we need to revolutionize/
find better leadership then maybe we'll survive/
so ima say right quick, let erryone just spit/
from the preps, skaters, the bloods, the crips/
the Gs thats real, the Gs thats fake/
theres no need in this world for petty ass hate/
and to the petty ass *****s, sayin I false flag/
im as real as they come, look at my tatted hand/
sure its only one symbol and it sits all alone/
but when i pop a sign best be sure to run home/

some trill off the dome type ish for yawls.
now im off to bed, maybe.

h!de7
01-25-2008, 09:15 AM
call me the surgion,
cuss i can remove cataracts,
with a battle axe,
matter fact,i shatter backs,
u think these lyrics are a mouthfull?,
try ingesting a 6 inch scalpel,
its doubtful,
ull survive,
better than becomin an organ donar while u still alive,
ill disect ur windpipe, ur skins ripe,
for the pickin,
dont even need bring to click in
to carv u up like roast chicken


thats sick.

SenTheFirst
01-25-2008, 01:38 PM
thats exactly what i wanted, one of you doods to pop off,
here we go again, stop lyin bout sendin shots off,
you not hot sauce(from And1), talkin loose'll get you lock jaw,
YOU NOT RAW, ill take you AND ya spocks block off.
BITCH PLEASE, the only thing you grip is ya dick,
touchin nines? 'tha fuck, are yall hearin this shit?
and i promise, aint NObody feelin ya spit,
i spit cold like ice storms, i aint feelin my lips
if thats how you flexin, homie go back to the weights,
ya brawn's like paris hilton gettin fucked in them tapes,
you shouldnt have called me out, but its a little too late,
im sick of you appetizers, next put steak on my plate



shout out to my people from the boot

im from the dirty like the bottom of my pants cuff!

sketch3
01-25-2008, 07:49 PM
edit
im a double poster,
but im more worried about troble closer,
to my locality,
like crime in the comunity and police brutality,
kids geting robed is no abnormality,
crack heads robbin shit in the endz is my reality,
walkin the streets askin why gods mad at me,
cuss youd have to be a vengfull basterd,
to put kids in situations were there bound to get blasted,
losing fam is painfull, getin heartless, is the only way past it,

sketch3
01-25-2008, 07:57 PM
im from a place were,
shits gritty, inner city,
got me acting like a maced bear,
iv chased breas,
thru there waste lairs,
saw my man get laced there,
got a scar on his face were,
the hammer conected,
cowerdly blow was unexpected,
but my abilty to displace air,
was unsupected,
single blow, an its death kid,
grandmaster style, gully shit was perfected,
weild mad powers, so if u ever dissrespected,
hope u dont get fire balls directed,
at ur family homes,
wether u with ur mum or alone,
run up in ur house with sum shaolin ninjas,
blacked out packin katanas n syonide syringes,

smoked a huge blunt, and freestyled to this beat
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OHGDeM-CVCw

steyr
01-25-2008, 09:58 PM
step into the night where the cold air flows
where the kids might bite if you get to close
the wolfs on the prowl
tryin to get that sound
put the tape in the deck and play that shit shit back loud
we used to tip back
the six packs
and flip rap on sick tracks
but this is gotta stick like a fat man to slimfast
i walk the streets like a blood thirsty thief
and when it comes to survivin
i murder to eat
whats the difference
if ya guilty or ya innocent
we've all done some time for all the bullshit we'r gettin in
take a spin in ya brand new whip
wit them dam cool kicks
and get ur head blown a little bit
it takes a big man
to get mad and start slingin nickel bags to tipical cats who get twisted back
the mission has been complex
and this or that
set it off my way context official rap.
www.myspace.com/flipphilmore

steyr
01-25-2008, 10:04 PM
oh yeah, everyone who is a respectable hip hop/ freestyle fan
check out soulja boys freestyle on youtube.
he came up with some new consanents and vowels that most of us are not able to understand yet!
in other words, he publicaly humiliated himself with this freestyle.

SenTheFirst
01-25-2008, 10:58 PM
soulja boy aint hip hop.

steyr
01-25-2008, 11:51 PM
i kno dude, but he tried to do a freestyle, it was probly one of the worst ive ever herd
did you see it.

mas$
01-26-2008, 01:19 AM
ima go see it i hate him, the only dude who can pull off 3 mins, with 15 words
damn crank dat

steyr
01-26-2008, 01:34 AM
^^ hes ryhmes shit with bitch about 50 times

bouncingsoul
01-26-2008, 08:36 PM
Man I have not written in mad long

there's a brief chit chat between rain and windowpane
and i can't help but stay awake just to hear the sane
rationale that peeks through gibberish, between tick tocks
of water drops on acid plastic pit stops
feeling grey- but just as much cause it defines me so
and i have to ask but what a definition means to me and my soul
expanding randoms that disappear at an honest glance
a silver grey reality and color fantasy romance
technicolor is the medium and the middle is finally first
when thoughts are influence by the past, the last verse
a bathroom window opens itself up to a disguised spirit
and a philosophy blossoms whenever i step near it
curiosity killed the cat but the conscious are still kicking
when impulses react and the thought processes are clicking
picking a serenade over pushcart odyssey monologues
confounding the soundings over political critics entourage

kog_throwie
01-26-2008, 08:52 PM
i smoke crack for breakfast i leave my shit in a sack i get high to the max so relax all you graffiti doombas get the facts
ill fuck you up stupid stab u in the heart like cupid i wanna go into an amok
rip out ur face with a rock slap you with a cock
get ur trigger finger ready and grip lock your spray can
when i express my feelings through art it makes my day man
grab a fan get rid of the fumes thats in the room
clean up that mess, dont lie to ur parents, confess
on what you did tell em you spilt ur dope ass ink
this shit isn't Reakwon only made with brass links
cuz im to poor to afford that real gold
wait till ur life story unfolds cuz theres alot of shit to get done
go bombing run, have fun

Passleoinj
01-28-2008, 12:14 AM
ayyo , ive slain more beef than a cow slaughterhouse
what's gonna bring me down?
nothing motherfucker , yall know what im about
rap's my job and the mic's my boss
who's getting paid by spittin dope shit , thats us
im hittin more bitches than a prostitute rapist
my flow's regulatin , the reputation of a hip-hop fascist
steady bombin , droppin heavy shit on the streets
basin my life on my lyric sheets ,
im stunnin , make yall feelin my illin fill'ins
my raps are unstoppable , i make hoes cum just to see me flowin
dominating this world with the darker thoughts, forever
i aint sweet , im bitter
to make yall know , i aint nothing to fuck with in this situation
i box'd more heads in than iron mike tyson ,
collecting my money , fuckin your honeys purposely with no mercy
aint got shit left to say , except gimme your pelle-pelle

(nah i mean , really)

sketch3
01-28-2008, 09:09 AM
all u punks that,
spit ur bunk raps,
will get smoked an gutted like a blunt wrap,
worse than wen ur stoner friends be '' weres the skunk at''

bounce ur shits allways dope, u record?

edit added a lil sumin

i can topple giants,
with the apliance,
of biochemical science,
stand defiant,
against police sirens,
and hip hop tyrants,
who only lissten to mainstream,
i train teams,
to explain themes,
an concepts that'll make ur brain scream,
corupt governers who wanna drain cream,
out the comunity, and in to there pokets,
make me wanna grab glock quick,
then cock it,
and put it straight to the pricks eye soket.
but thats not in my charecter,
so ill just haunt them with specters,
off the dead from city sectors,
the controle,
got the ends on hold,
we starvin while they living with gold

Fazed
01-28-2008, 09:41 AM
I'm too white to rap
trees have sap
I'd tap that
I need a nap

Passleoinj
02-02-2008, 10:41 AM
lord forgive me for my sins,
i dropped mad rhymes , did crimes , smoked more than a dime
popped mad nines,
that's the lifestyle i chose , my pain's trapped behind these lines,
i'm livin' payin fines , stalkin on every street i find,
cops hate me cause i chill them to their spine,
theres a lot of fucked up shit going on in my mind
lying's the principal value in this world
treason's comon like the seasons, it just comes and go further
loyalty's just a word , that why all these cats say it but dont applicate it
nobody learned from their errors , so the world filled with bullshit
im bring this rap to a whole other level , the street level
fuck flipmode , def jam , interscope and rock-a-fellow
so-called mc's talking about guns ,
holdin weight but scared when the wind blows, uh
im screaming fuck this world , now its all about bitches ,paper and thongs,
rap's just not what it was before ,gotta bring it back where it belongs
i had to spit this shit outta my lungs , cause it was killing me
to see cats spittin eyes closed , thinking all the world's feelin it

sketch3
02-03-2008, 11:40 AM
ill wait till the beat drops,
then cut it up like weed crops,
cuss i want my lyrics to be potent,
the words iv spoken,
stronger than the shit u smokin,
got u dazed and confused,
like u blazed on a zoot,
cuss i was raised on truth,
see thru u dishonest rappers, shud never strayed in the booth,
cuss ill come at u with ninjitsu tactics,
stealth mode hiding in the shade on ur roof,
i aint afraid of ur troops, slayed u in groupes,
i even prayed on ur youths,
not a sex ofender, just killing ur whole clan is my agenda,
taking out bitches and pretenders,
broke mcs who front like big spennders,
i'll render,
u unable to protect ur vital areas thats tender,
return ur soul back to the sender,
to bad lady luck didnt befriend ya,
u aint got a single defender,
when my blade extends, gunna rip shit like a blender,
i intend, my sword skills to transcend,
a physical leval, im as near to the devil,
as the tip of a spear is to metal,
liberate ur left ear,a years worth of gear, an down a beer befor the dust settles,

Passleoinj
02-03-2008, 12:26 PM
gettin better sketch3?

"Riot"
02-03-2008, 02:08 PM
lord forgive me for my sins,
i dropped mad rhymes , did crimes , smoked more than a dime
popped mad nines,
that's the lifestyle i chose , my pain's trapped behind these lines,
i'm livin' payin fines , stalkin on every street i find,
cops hate me cause i chill them to their spine,
theres a lot of fucked up shit going on in my mind
lying's the principal value in this world
treason's comon like the seasons, it just comes and go further
loyalty's just a word , that why all these cats say it but dont applicate it
nobody learned from their errors , so the world filled with bullshit
im bring this rap to a whole other level , the street level
fuck flipmode , def jam , interscope and rock-a-fellow
so-called mc's talking about guns ,
holdin weight but scared when the wind blows, uh
im screaming fuck this world , now its all about bitches ,paper and thongs,
rap's just not what it was before ,gotta bring it back where it belongs
i had to spit this shit outta my lungs , cause it was killing me
to see cats spittin eyes closed , thinking all the world's feelin it


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was dope.
that gave me chills. hah

daTANK
02-04-2008, 10:40 AM
watcha know bout da ABCTO
assual banditz came to own
see da name errwherr ya go
takin over st louis mo
and if ya really wanna catch us we be comin off da trax
wit dem fully automatics and da paint up in our bag
watcha kno bout thugs bombin tha city
ya names wat it waz when ya go missin.

im down to kick it an flow/paint anyday. hit me up

swich
02-04-2008, 11:16 AM
Pulled up, my roof missin, my deuce glistne, no stool pigeon/
school women on cool lennon, startched down in my new denom/
lose fellins but gain balls, the game calls for change, loss/
same boss, the chain floss, red candy apple frame gloss/
no change lost in my paper chase, im sittin on stacks, call me paper weight/
i chief a blunt when i take a break, got so much water i could make a lake/
ill make a date and take ya place, swich ones sons all on her face/
thats the case, ill snatch ya mate, stay blazed up with a sac a day/
i dont package yay but i touch the bricks, ill fuck a bitch for the fuck of it/
buck at swich then im duckin quick, come bak pissed and ill dump a clip/
my stump'll rip all through ya chest, im pumpin teks, im in the TEX/
southwest San Antone i wreck, damn i wreck now show respect....

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
02-04-2008, 01:19 PM
demons get released to feast on your souls
looking deep into your mind with my eyes like holes
i see no end to this satanic shit
virgins cummin out blood every time i spit
shootin words like daggers every time i trip
in your hood i take the good and leave you with shit
gang colors dont matter, i dont care bout it
wake up in hell with youir neck split
every where you go man your blood drip



thats all i got for now...its kinda crap

"Riot"
02-04-2008, 04:04 PM
Forgive me for I have sinned,
I have been real while bitches pretend.
to be what others want them to be.
they think they a abcdef G.
this is for you so ima proceed.
make this ideal dream complete.
negative thoughts i delete.
whack mcs know they cant compete.
therefore would end up in a defeat.
ya sweatin like you just ran miles.
consider this my sucka free keystyle.
and they keep hatin, meanwhile.
Im tossin up my name for fame.
Wont get caught moms,so no need to worry.
she thinks its all about the glory.
to me its all about the rush.
dont give me your heart,cause it will easily crush.
in my hands,here is the best man.
you a wasteman,mad rhymes I chant.
while you bitches go out and rant.
about how ill i am.
you cant stand.
legs shaking,just cause you know who i am.
you think you can step to me?
ima give you the fuckin count to three.
questioning your lyrical ability.
your strugglin like the industrial revoultion.
so quickly think of a solution.
my flow keeps pushin.
you about to fall for you there aint no cushion.


off the top.
hella long since the last time i spit.

MonoR
02-04-2008, 04:28 PM
i used to be a bad man
lying to my self and so
then believed in my lie
so thats the reason why nowaday i puff the spliff to get high
im doing it to hide my feeling and to fuck up my mind
im telling you, i tough about dying couple times
but my brother said fuck it your all fine
i guess i had to believe in him
cause today im living to shine

edit: tell me if something doesnt work, cause my english grammar is bad
thanks

sketch3
02-04-2008, 04:34 PM
i used to be a bad man
lying to my self and so
then believed in my lie

edit: tell me if something doesnt work, cause my english grammar is bad
thanks

this whole section dont rhyme, and not much of the rest of it

MonoR
02-04-2008, 05:07 PM
this whole section dont rhyme, and not much of the rest of it

man, and

lie, why, high..

but yeah the man/and doesnt work, i knew it pretty well i just didnt knew wich word to use....

sketch3
02-04-2008, 05:13 PM
yea but the way u structer ur shit, its not enough to just put rhymin werds in
i used to be a bad man
lying to my self and so
then believed in my lie
so thats the reason why,
nowaday i puff the spliff to get high
im doing it to hide,
my feeling and to fuck up my mind
im telling you i tough about dying couple times,
but my brother said fuck it your all fine,
cause today im living to shine,

Passleoinj
02-04-2008, 09:48 PM
aight welll its late and im tired
munchieesss time to get mean

its sickening
mc's full of bullshittin , cant trust nobody
everytime i step in the booth , i feel the death above me
i got deadly lyrics , that's why i spit murder music
noticed you got a new mic , time to find a use to it
im all up in that ass , and you better get used to it
explosive like a bomb and you cant defuse it
feel me?
lyrical genocide , im moving street level so high
idea's wide , bring the beef i aint scared to die
when i knock at your door kiss yo mama good bye
BYE BYE , IM COMING
im killin, think twice before steppin in the booth
cause im one of those mc's with lyrics true
since everybody knows the truth
tell me who the FUCK you gon lie to?

FeTuS
02-05-2008, 09:40 AM
boobs

INDO1SNMK
02-05-2008, 10:17 AM
alright ill drop a flow

my steez i call it 2 simple
fillin up every dimple on your brain
draining the knowledge obtained in school
why do that when you could smoke weed and be cool
i learned more from jmt and immortal technique then any teacher speaking to me in school
my love my life is passion theres only one answer when asking
graffiti you trash head
talk shit on my crew end up brain dead spray up the walls in your blood shed the perfect fill in color blood red im the preacher and this is wat i said
wiether my body is bred and my blood is wine remember indo1
heavenly divine

it aint much but at least im still tryin lol

"Riot"
02-05-2008, 07:32 PM
You said I was a nothing.
and look at me now.
you tried to end it with pow.
lived through that and look at me now.
big as it gets,made moms proud.
You frontin,I showed you what its about.
go back,sit in the corner and pout.
your mind is full of jealousy.
Look here,no need to commit a felony.
just sit back,smoke a spliff,and listen to this melody.
123 set ya mind free,no setbacks.
12 for flinchin Hey!,no hitbacks!
Go free,let your inner expression roam.
Look at me now im in the zone.
listenin for hours to the calling tone.
no answer,no sweat.
dont have to worry about my next check.
passionate love insects.
and im not talking about multiple legged creatures.
this is my lyrical speech,so call me the preacher.

HoodRichSucka
02-05-2008, 07:45 PM
my lyrics are more then just fatal attractions.
labeled distractions, contemplated reactions.
Im anxious, but never vanquish sanctions.
like goerge bush's mutherfuckin altercations.
fuck the president, go on vacation.
hope the plane falls n' no one saves him...

g3zt
02-06-2008, 08:47 AM
^- Hope noone save's em- If he survives- I'ma blaze em.
Propulsin nines- Or tazem- My flava
Kickin it hott like light sabers-
Leavin atheist families in prayers- Persuarer-
Sounds of Rounds- On your local block,
Yall still chokin cocks- Hard like rock-
Come in flocks- Fuck guns- We fling rocks in socks.
Leave you dead without any traces..
Bring it to back in the day- When robbed kids- not for kicks- But for the laces.

geneparmesan
02-06-2008, 11:34 AM
I GUESS I WOULD START IT OFF
WHO U KNOW WHO IT BE THE CAT FAME WHO DID 1 MONTH BEHIND BARS
THE COPS COUGHT ME SLEEPING HANDING CRACK TO A CRACK HEAD
THE FED RUN UP ON ME AND POIN A GUN TO MY HEAD SAYING FREEZ U UNDER ARREST THEY GRAB THE K.9 AND LETI HIM CHECK MY CAR FIND MY TREE I HAD TAPE TO MY BALLZ..............


ok, so i sometimes only read the first few replies to a thread. but once i read this terribly display of words that this kid calls a "rap," i couldnt read anymore.....why is this thread still going?


not to mention, that was the WORST half-ass rap i've ever heard/read/seen/visualized/unfortunately had to lay eyes on/regret seeing.

sketch3
02-06-2008, 11:45 AM
yea the first pages sucked but then dope folks like whoa n asen came by and saved it, then i came by and pulled the plug

geneparmesan
02-06-2008, 02:17 PM
at least someone saved it...cause fame ruined, and i mean RUINED, ANY aspirations i had of reading anymore replies.

sketch3
02-06-2008, 02:20 PM
well then u shud get outta here, if u not gunna spit or read anyone elses

"Riot"
02-06-2008, 09:55 PM
I can't live my life this way.
Dont know how many times.
ive spit these same exact lines.
sayin todays the day.
for the permanent change.
in the fast lane.
this ribcage is filled with pain.
these drugs are the only thing keeping me sane.
look deep in my eyes and you tell me.
what you expect me to be?
hell i have no highschool degree.
but ill show you how to heat up a track.
show you a real stack.
yeah due im tryin to bring it back.
the good times in the word of looptroop.
goin out paintin with the group.
formed a crew.
how fast time flew.
how big my boys grew.
look at us now got teethmarks from the k9s.
look at me now stuck here doin state time.
Who knows when ill spit my last line.
Why is painting on a wall such a crime
when we got shootings and several murder degrees.
remember like yesterday.
runnin from the gridiron.
lookin ova my shoulder to his eyes red as fire.
just for puttin my name on the wall.
he popped lead in my back but nobody saw.
yellin for help,put the sole of his boot to mouth.
next thing i know that foot was kicked down south.
busted my lip,broke my nose.
unloaded on my chest with furious blows.
where is he now?
just ya friendly neighborhood policeofficer.
said nothing like that even occured.
but look at these scars.
no one can see,im stuck behind bars.


ahaslkf

geneparmesan
02-06-2008, 10:21 PM
i didnt say i wasnt gona read anyone elses, i said he ruined any thoughts i had towards reading more after that, because the few after him, didnt seem like they were too intrigued by this post. but when you said people came along and saved it, i read it. and ill leave the "rapping" to all the professionals.


edit; i guess not reading anyone elses, and him ruining my aspirations to read anymore, are kinda the same thing. my bad.

Passleoinj
02-06-2008, 10:34 PM
I can't live my life this way.
Dont know how many times.
ive spit these same exact lines.
sayin todays the day.
for the permanent change.
in the fast lane.
this ribcage is filled with pain.
these drugs are the only thing keeping me sane.
look deep in my eyes and you tell me.
what you expect me to be?
hell i have no highschool degree.
but ill show you how to heat up a track.
show you a real stack.
yeah due im tryin to bring it back.
the good times in the word of looptroop.
goin out paintin with the group.
formed a crew.
how fast time flew.
how big my boys grew.
look at us now got teethmarks from the k9s.
look at me now stuck here doin state time.
Who knows when ill spit my last line.
Why is painting on a wall such a crime
when we got shootings and several murder degrees.
remember like yesterday.
runnin from the gridiron.
lookin ova my shoulder to his eyes red as fire.
just for puttin my name on the wall.
he popped lead in my back but nobody saw.
yellin for help,put the sole of his boot to mouth.
next thing i know that foot was kicked down south.
busted my lip,broke my nose.
unloaded on my chest with furious blows.
where is he now?
just ya friendly neighborhood policeofficer.
said nothing like that even occured.
but look at these scars.
no one can see,im stuck behind bars.


ahaslkf

you got it manggg
straight fiyah

sketch3
02-07-2008, 09:09 AM
u dont wanna get merked with swords,
chop ur body up hide it behind wallpaper skirting bords.
my flows sickier than dirty whores,
could have herpes or,
ghonoria scince they was 34,
ur rhymes will never hurt me or,
divert the course,
of two assasins hunting u with no purpose more,
than the first to score,
by leaving u decapitated,
put the gat away kid,
ur rap is hated

swich
02-07-2008, 12:37 PM
its swich on round two bout ta grab yo attention/
when i step to the booth the whole room feel the tension/
im all about the doh but my name aint homer simpson/
black on black window tinted lambo doors liftin/
im gifted, no question..its easy to see/
my boys are the pushers so my trees is free/
me and Jay-Bee paper chasin with ease/
i cant even sew but im lacin my weed/
swich one or oscar leal is how the tone know me/
im wreckin with proffession, agresssive or so they told me/
whether im on the grind or just chillen with the homies/
keep a scope on my nine so the clips dont get lonely/
its swich oen the villain the man yall just cant stand/
sippin on sake but i aint from japan/
aint chinese but eyes sittin on a slant/
aint work for nestle but i got a hundred grand!!!!!!!!!! ........bitches...ahah

FailOne
02-08-2008, 01:02 PM
I Fuckin eat emcees devour four n need more//i bet you never heard such fuckin sinfull thinkin before//my whole personna enables gore; body parts litter my kitchen table n bedroom floor//I wage war with metaphors//your rhyme eddiquettes simply pour to say the least a beast on beats you cant defeat the flows elite//smoke dro's with the best technique//drop hot shit that heats the streets//real regardless starvin artists flex the hardest

off the top ish

Dont412Sleep
02-08-2008, 01:23 PM
ill get on the keyboard and spit flows
til i die and i cant spit no mo'
yall dont wanna see the boy from the 412
yeah i got your mom and your girl came too
bombing for glory not for hype
stick with the games this is not a fight
ill hit you so hard put your ass in flight
send you to california from the burgh ight?
hit you with the K one time and its over damn
your whole squads name will be known as ben dover fam
cause when i come through they just bend over man
and take it take it like i did a hand over them


^^ lmao just a little bit

HoodRichSucka
02-08-2008, 06:19 PM
I Fuckin eat emcees devour four n need more//i bet you never heard such fuckin sinfull thinkin before//my whole personna enables gore; body parts litter my kitchen table n bedroom floor//I wage war with metaphors//your rhyme eddiquettes simply pour to say the least a beast on beats you cant defeat the flows elite//smoke dro's with the best technique//drop hot shit that heats the streets//real regardless starvin artists flex the hardest

off the top ish

SICK...............!

this cat breathes vile, seas of hostile crimes and trials/ his mind is ill with thoughts to kill/ he steals which reveals is true ordeal/ never looking back, tookin back to the days as a young with dreams to run away/ never strays from the path to win/ his thoughts within stay strong but grim/ a soldier is him, one to kill and sin....
im no good but i try.

sketch3
02-09-2008, 12:01 PM
dont keep speakin, u better pause,
cuss i spit heat seeking, metaphors,
leave u knee deep in, dead out war,
dont want ur streets reeking, of shreded whores,
i defeat weaklings, that hold a beretta for,
protection. still leave ur peeps leakin, when i get a sword,

MonoR
02-09-2008, 01:38 PM
you love swords eh?

sketch3
02-09-2008, 02:00 PM
yea

cuss were im from eveyones swingin blades like feudel japan,
only real killers knew there shit befor google began,
wikipedia thugs aint even worth hasslein,
cuss im chopin heads like the shoguns assasin,
if u aint packin kattans then ur just destracting,
(edit ill ad to it)
throwin flyin guilotenes,
to kill a feind,
cum at u like a one armed boxer,
alarming docters,
when they see ur face,

old kung fu heads will know wats up

"Riot"
02-09-2008, 04:50 PM
I wake up,walk to the bathroom.
where foul odors bloom.
brush the beef off my teeth with this shit called crest.
word,fuck dj kalhed,i'm the best.
eyes draggin,only 2 hours of rest.
get all this shit up offa my chest.
you dont understand how i live.
girl fucked up cant seem to forgive.
all just because one little fib.
but enough of that.
lookin fresh with the kc hat.
look under this belt,wont find no gat.
mofucka,aint up for no chit chat.
take you out with no click clack.
fuck you and your whole crew.
hit the bitch leader in the face and that mofucka flew.
his jaws fucked he cant even chew.
but the real questin is who the fuck are you?
ill take you out,stuntin my breakdance.
then hit you the head with one of the spraycans.
anytime anywhere,whenever i get the chance.
look at you mofucka pull up ya pants.
you aint no thug.
go back to ya momma and give her a hug.
you dont deserve her if you lookin like that.
these are the real times.
fat rhymes.
dont believe in no god.
so i dont get all caught,
up in the moment.
im up for any opponent.
up for any battle,ill own it.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
02-10-2008, 01:29 PM
yo sketch, you wanna battle aGain?
my rhymes fresh, you gonna get slain.
lyricaly break you neck, causing great pain.
mess with your thoughts till you insane.
you have flo but compaired to mine your shits plain,
so gimmie your best shot, try and make it look like my shits lame

Hidden Teknique
02-10-2008, 06:28 PM
I think things done changed for the worst
feels like i have a burden on my chest, shits a curse
keeps going from worse to worst
my fuckin head spinnin feelin like it's ready to burst
people aren't who i thought they were
why in the fuck can't i swallow this shit and endure
late nights out walkin the street
see the blues, i'm off on my feet
constantly feel like i have to stay runnin
even though i look and there's nothin
and just so i don't sound like a fuckin queer
a little thuggication for your fuckin ear
don't come through my place or on my block
glock'll leave your brains out on my sidewalk
go ahead you fuckin faggots can talk
it's a three part action pump back and lock
squeeze, leave you there down on your knees

"Riot"
02-10-2008, 10:16 PM
haha that was ill.

Kaze
02-10-2008, 10:24 PM
i dont freestyle but ill write once in awhile
still got your ears going wild, and pupils dialed
like your rollin on extasy, verbally giving you chills
then your feelin me, making lyrical history like taki 183
did for graffiti, but they call me shorty every moment
with her was like kodak, picture perfect and she know that..
but things went bad when my flow was flat
still end up with a fat bag of chronic super potent
sniffin that shit like a rodent..

i dont know just made it up supaaa stoned

SAID
02-10-2008, 10:33 PM
people dont really see the meaning behind graff right?
used to release some stress, to go out and write
even if the buff come quick im still up to fight
i keep gettin deeper in this shit, fuck seein the light
its like every time i bomb, the rush is so addicting
my letters arent that dope, but the flows convincing
fuck these haters who think they run shit
one or two tags, you aint commited
i try to to make my lines as dope as my tag
which to be honest, arent that bad
i dont spit nothing but the truth,
me myself and i, try to educate the youth
too stubborn, dont listen
drink away the problems, keep sippin
like a smack in the face,
thinkin what coulda been...
too late now,
back on the streets, back to graff,
makin people say wow
just to get the stress out.

SAID
02-10-2008, 10:33 PM
gooodnight

"Riot"
02-10-2008, 11:00 PM
fuck this shit.
friends leave like they on probation.
social life deceased from suffication.
sun block for sun ray protection.
stuck in this house with my empty spraycan collection.

mad bored ill add on later.

bouncingsoul
02-10-2008, 11:22 PM
Barely been writing lately

swirls in the windowsill, flowers on the floor
itchy palms shaking with that knick-knack galore
gaping mouth and shaking doubt, just a load off my back
we spin gears and render sloppy just to find the time-track
fantasy croakin chokin over Tao Teh Ching madness
we tried to put out the fire but we just had blues and soul magic
music so attractive, the meditation method's broken
metronome's ticking to split your mind wide open
eraser-back stencils on cheeky peeling paint windows
branding mystique on copywrite forced into
paper's disappointing, the pixels always command higher
so we lit encyclopedias and settled around the camp fire
teddy bear politics swinging, grinning on the lack of past
it was like that chimpanzee camera holding onto the last
erasers and pencils, mental blue ink's ready to spread
asked god for a dime and a lifestyle
got a dead pennies instead.

Passleoinj
02-11-2008, 12:51 AM
feel u riot

stuck in this world/
raised surrounded by a bunch of shit b /
niggs know where it hurts/
my thoughts are confused in this whirlwind/
dunno how to think straight , where my girl been/
i lost people i loved ever since then/
all i got for them is dick and peppermint/gum
ill choke everybody til their last breath
im sick of this shit/ it fucks me up like crystal meth/
i aint blessed cause it seems like ive been cursed/
call 911 somebody , i need a fuckin nurse/
nobody can hear me suffering , cause im on painkillers/
cocaine dreams with crack romance , mind of a sinner/
dont ever call me sensitive , damn right you feel me/
it aint complicated , someone just hurt my feelings/
watching time go, wrapped with smoke shapes and curves/
as you can see , i noticed that im the worst/ not the best
im struggling in this world wondering what ill do next/
leading a fight against myself/
and all im gonna need is a gun and one bullet.


ill edit later , im not down

BLTZ
02-11-2008, 01:45 AM
I just thought of something.

How can this thread be called freestyle rapping when you have to type it in...
I can garentee atleast 90% of youralls garbage(yea I said the shit here is garbage) isnt even freestyle.
By no means am I saying Im any better than youall at rappingbut I am saying most of this stuff sucks and I know 4 locals around here real well that could tear this thread up. and there stuff would actually be a freestyle.

sketch3
02-11-2008, 05:50 AM
well seeing as this is a graff forum,
and not the '' super dope mcs who actually record shit'' website u can expect it to be shit, fuck i just come in here out of bordem. dont take this seriously at all
also i dont care about thiss shit enuff to sit and rewrite my shit,
i say somthing outload an then post it in here so i dont forget it

SAID
02-11-2008, 08:00 AM
writers before rappers.

FailOne
02-11-2008, 02:22 PM
word is born
i put graff first
emcee for fun
but hiphops mad ill, so contribute all you can, in all elements

my flow is audible//never endin like astronomical//intelligent yet commical make thee impossible; plausible.. still illogical how i rhyme so phenomenal

SenTheFirst
02-11-2008, 02:35 PM
I just thought of something.

How can this thread be called freestyle rapping when you have to type it in...
I can garentee atleast 90% of youralls garbage(yea I said the shit here is garbage) isnt even freestyle.
By no means am I saying Im any better than youall at rappingbut I am saying most of this stuff sucks and I know 4 locals around here real well that could tear this thread up. and there stuff would actually be a freestyle.

freestyle would mean made up on the spot right?
so if you type it, it means its not made up on the spot?

"Riot"
02-11-2008, 03:24 PM
friends leave like they on probation.
social life deceased from suffication.
sun block for sun ray protection.
stuck in this house with my empty spraycan collection.
Didnt choose to live this way,just happened to be the selection.
But its all mental.
No need for a beat,i'll make up my own instrumental.
I mean,look at me me man.
I have neverending layers of ink on my hands.
When people lay eyes on me i can hear their sighs.
theres another one wasted.
I have a dream so im gonna go chase it.
Look in these eyes.
you tell me what you see.
never ending funnelvision like 3d.
in my peices,enough with the teases.
I think you understand my thesis.
You think you can beat this?
go ahead and peep this.
I'm a nobody,but the most famous around.
Im the fuckin illest in town.
No need to gangbang,just look for my name.
Its that OFB1 cat,hes ill in this game.
What you gonna say mang?
I got this, dont use lyrics.
use your aerosol.
and show us all.
what you really got.
show us your style is hot.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
02-11-2008, 06:06 PM
im a super dope mc.....if by that you mean a loser who spends too much time online

"Riot"
02-11-2008, 11:17 PM
you talkin to me?

i really hope not

MonoR
02-12-2008, 10:21 AM
you talkin to me?

i really hope not

yeah man i think that cat is talking to you man
but forget it hes a fag that cant drop a hot poem on the microphone
so peace
and destroooyyyyy that cat nukka

sketch3
02-12-2008, 10:24 AM
its cool that everyone stoped beefin but u 3 dont need ride each others dicks so hard,
might get sadel sores

MonoR
02-12-2008, 10:56 AM
yo fucken fag, why dont you shut it one day?

Small Time Crook
02-12-2008, 12:04 PM
encountered countless queries and contradictions/
now its an endless series of Small Time's diction/
spittin shit that's rubbin you the wrong way like friction/
instead of criticizing why dont you give me a listen/
lend me your ears, and maybe i can teach you somethin/
cant even second guess what kinda secrets is comin/
im impossible to solve, like lightning hitting you twice/
but im comin' in hard, you might not make it with ya life/
just gimmie a pen, pad, green things and jesus juice/
then the pen does all the work, all the words get turned loose/
like rabid animals, politicians is cannibals/
feeding off of the blood of the proletariat class like Hannibal--/
Lecter, im a pervert a lecher, but you shouldnt diss my lectures/
cuz they inspire the world to do so much better/
enlightment being sought, the battles being fought/
the questions being asked and the lessons being taught/
like ninja mastery, do the shit dastardly/
dont give a fuck, live my life haphazardly/

WHA-WHAAAA!

SenTheFirst
02-12-2008, 01:54 PM
its cool that everyone stoped beefin but u 3 dont need ride each others dicks so hard,
might get sadel sores

hahaha


destrooooyy him bruhhhh!!@@#!

"Riot"
02-12-2008, 03:05 PM
im a super dope mc.....if by that you mean a loser who spends too much time online


Yeah,super dope mc.
thats me,best agree.
go back to workin on that hand.
you talkin to the main man.
takin you out with lyrical blows.
from your whack tags to ya horrible throws.
hold up,can you spell t.o.y?
super dope mc,thats I.
You talkin to the wrong guy.
quick off the top ryhmes,thats my disguise.
you thinkin"OH IMA DESTROY THIS FUCK TILL HE DIES!"
You can't find me in the shadows,sportin all black.
I'll take you out nice and easy like a asthma attack.
With your played out name,e.v.i.l
thats not played out,nahhh nobody can tell.
this OFB1 punkass,learn howto spell.
I spend about 5 minutes online.
while for a spit for you is about an hour,takin your time.
to make your lines hit me uber hard.
You just askin for more.
when my lines hit you say ay that kid has MADHAXZORZ.
get back little timmy,get back to them chores.

Passleoinj
02-13-2008, 12:21 AM
fuck sketch3 , *****s cant c me:cool:

sketch3
02-13-2008, 07:34 AM
yea we cant see cuss its the internet,
seriously i cant be bothered with beef any more all im saying is a minute ago u guys were saying each other were th wackest shit ever, now u tounge out each others crack hourly

MonoR
02-13-2008, 09:24 AM
the problem whit you is your finger, and your mind
so break evry finger of your hands and after that
hang your fucken self

so im done talking to you, i hope you wont answer
cause its gonna be sum bullshit again
peace

sketch3
02-13-2008, 09:27 AM
http://img.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2007/09_01/cricketNNP1109_600x365.jpg

mas$
02-13-2008, 11:05 AM
lLOL

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
02-13-2008, 05:59 PM
i got night vision goggles so black clothes aint shit,
so what my name is played out, i get mad props for it
come down to 905 and see what you get, when you talk shit you get your fuckin face split. and i guess riots an ill name, not played out at all, there aint a city without one bitch so suck my balls

TOEJAM
02-13-2008, 06:12 PM
both of your flows are gay man
sorry but i think you should go into hiding like alqueda in afganistan
cause thats the only time someone would look for you
i could go on raving about how your a bitch but that would only bore you
partly because you know it already
or maybe cause you aint ready
or because you go easy i go heavy
when i say heavy i mean heavy like ya moms flow
something you aint got but im sure these other people know
its evident every bar you spit is evidence
that your like them marijuana commercials, under the influence
something maybe you dont get
with that i dont know why im wasting my time your obviously not a threat
so ima let you save face
but when you serious come back at me with a hot 16 and a game face

TOEJAM
02-13-2008, 06:14 PM
not directed to anyone in particular lol

sketch3
02-13-2008, 06:26 PM
fuck off with this bull shit about game face,
ill invert ur crainium, just cuss its ur brains fate,
never be dope or heavy even if u gained weight,
an whoevers spitin bout night vision,
aint gully, were im from theres mad crime despite prisons,
sum grimey cunts jumpin out shade,
so if u doubt the blade,
ur about to pay,

Hidden Teknique
02-13-2008, 08:10 PM
hidden tek sicka than your average
my flow is nice, yours is like NYC traffic
your shit is stagnant, half of you don't understand
ya gotta know the basics of supply and demand
you see I don't even need to kill a man
ya boys got enough scrilla to get a killa fam
it's like a in and out kill,
stab you and watch yo blood spill
and nah I don't live in a rough city
but we'll vamp you and then take your fifty
hahahaha y'all stuck on the e-thuggin hype
step ya game up education style.....then type

sketch3
02-13-2008, 08:31 PM
talkin to me about education,
minds on a higher plain like wen blunts in rotation,
so if u got affiliations, with coprarations,
might feel a stingin sensation,
get urself shancked like u pissed of a gang hatians,
slangin crack with no paitents,
even the most advanced medication,
cant prevent ur termination,
ur body caused the manifestation,
of police investigations,
dont question my intellgence cuss i kick truth to every genration,
people of all nations,
waitin in anticapation,
for me to spit gospal shit like the book of revalations,

not gunna lie most of this wernt of the top of the dome

TOEJAM
02-13-2008, 08:39 PM
sketch? bitch please im the real thing
my styles crispy like a chicken wing
and those little 4 bars was just a fling
anyways im the real deal appealing to masses
got that boston steez whippin my E
speeding through traffic
plus i got the bomb punch lines
i bag bitches like i bag dimes
get hit do the dance like ragtime
you tryna rap is damn crime
face it bitch you cant rhyme
so i suggest you take a break like half time....

TOEJAM
02-13-2008, 08:41 PM
sketch, my dude you really need to work on your rhymes, like i know i need to brush up but man your shit really dosent make sense especially the last one in response to hidden tek...by the way good shit tek

sketch3
02-13-2008, 08:46 PM
half time?

lucky i didnt leave u with a half spine,
remove each one of ur ribs an bend them,
till they shatter, then stick um in ur achillies tendton,
bitch quit pretendin,
or ill rearange ur whole structer, greays anatomy,
if u battle me,
end up dead like all the great rappers be,

sketch3
02-13-2008, 08:50 PM
sketch, my dude you really need to work on your rhymes, like i know i need to brush up but man your shit really dosent make sense especially the last one in response to hidden tek...by the way good shit tek

um i only cum in here for fun, if my shits wack i dont really care,
also u gotta take into acount that folks around the world got different flow
acent so its harder to make out,...

inregards to my last shit to hidden, its about bringin war to coperet rap, like 50 cent.

Hidden Teknique
02-13-2008, 09:13 PM
I'm a come off top of the dome
put you 6ft deep underneath a stone
man I really do hope you are saved
because Tek's puttin you in an early grave
it'll read HERE LIES SKETCH 3 R.I.P.
now let the freestylin thread be free
ha i'm just playin with ya sketch
don't mean to leave ya lookin like a wreck
ya boys' back, signin out hidden tek

The last 2 bars took me a minute.

sketch3
02-13-2008, 09:20 PM
if this battle took u a minute,
then i guesein u shook that u in it,
id be if i was in ur position,
cuss im an mc with a violent disspostion,
u lacking ambition,
while im on a kamakazi jhiad mission,
leave ur nose crooked like all these poloticions,

Hidden Teknique
02-13-2008, 09:30 PM
Look dogg, you can't even spell
politician, guessin?
the UK lookin weak if thats what you reppin'
a lyrical ability that'll leave you needin a weapon
this wouldn't take a minute, not even a battle
I speak clearly all you ever do is babble
I'm lacking ambition?
You're not even a competition..

sketch3
02-13-2008, 09:34 PM
HAHAHA
nice, and with that imma take a bow,
its 3 in the mornin and i gots college tomoro,

nice stuff tek, u gotta call me out more often i wanna get back in lyrical fitness
keep me on my toes fam,
prob respond tomoro

Hidden Teknique
02-13-2008, 09:38 PM
Yeah It's Been a minute now.

AMansNotACamel
02-14-2008, 07:26 AM
when by boy died i cried and cried,
tried to deny it, convinced i was fine, but,
that shits stayed on my mind,
and everywhere i go is a reminder of times, when,
me you and our boy would go out riding,
sit in the skate park toilets blazing,
sneak out on weekends and skull that cask wine,
sleep on the streets believing we'd be fine,
looking back on it now i see we were fools,
i guess i figured this sooner than you two,
sticking it out and going through school,
fighting everyday with heads that thought they were cool,
sitting alone on breaks,
nobody gave a fuck or thought i had what it takes,
to become more accomplished,
than a cat that rocked tools,
I guess with the distraction, of trying to prove,
myself to others,
i lost most contact with you,
and the boys who already knew,
that i was real, and that i could do,
whatever i wanted, you believed in me,
i look back at my score on the TEE, and think,
fuck that shit, what does it mean,
when i deprived myself of being,
chilled back chuffing bongs and drinking,
treasuring the time that we had without thinking,
that it could all go away,
man i wish you were here so i could spend,
one more day without out any stress,
talking about what you mean to me,
and how cut i'd be without you, timmie.

needs to be said.

DonFokalano
02-14-2008, 11:03 AM
peep the joints tru toronto rap ish
feedback
one

MYSPACE.COM/JDRO13

DonFokalano
02-14-2008, 11:06 AM
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=309667397

peeep

"Riot"
02-16-2008, 10:43 PM
Everytime I hear your name I lyrically get the tendency to mentally say I love you in parenthesis.
Ohhh like kanye I speak with so much emphasis.
i say things you could never forgive.
I can't say my love for you is limited.


asdf late vday spit.
feel me.

"Riot"
02-16-2008, 11:15 PM
You know who I am? what you need son?
this is ofb one,say it with me.
ooohhhh eeeefff beeeee.
Im high,steppin on you fools,all herbal.
You talk your shit, all verbal.
it aint no thang,got no one to blame.
but yourself.
for bein a ordinary book on the shelf.
you cats all the same,bitchmade with wealth.
im not no bitchmade rapper graffer.

408Bomber
02-16-2008, 11:21 PM
Iite,Yo ery body dis ya boi Matt Dre
dis rap right here comin str8 from the Bay
You already know im da king of buck
I'll battle yo ass on da dance flow i dont give a fuck
Cuz when you come against me yo guna run outta luck
Ima Bust out my sick ass flow'z
then get yall girlz cz dey all ho'z
Ima quit dis shit for i really get started
yall fuckin suck it smell like yall farted

lol haha this is fun

HoodRichSucka
02-17-2008, 12:30 AM
fuck thug bitches, yall aint sick.
ur cam'ron, im more like trick trick.
the illest emcee, spittin hot rymes.
call me dmc, but im commit'in crimes.
slangin in the streets, a real trapstar.
bangin to the beats, like dre and snoop are.
jeezy was a snowman, but im like slim.
pop pills and drink 40's, life is grim.
dont front like u a crip, ur a suburn kid.
im the realest there is, a sellin' herb kid.
pushin weight and droppin tons, call me plies.
better yet im rick ross, minus the waist size.
acually i was lyin, im just a white dude.
typin on my computer, i need some bed-time food....

haha

"Riot"
02-17-2008, 10:26 PM
I break bitches faces like crooked gridiron.
ill keep spittin until you get tired.
then ill blast you verbally to make sure your retired.
Dude you dont want to front we got 6 in the fam.
ill ask you,really,do you know how i am?
ill rip you up like an internet advertisement scam.
fuck then pop up advertisements.

wow dude. i gotta fuckin get my shit together haha

Epoc
02-17-2008, 11:05 PM
Im a poet, but dont know it.

Beat that shit!

UnConscious
02-18-2008, 03:08 AM
I write rhymes :D

A dime a dozen, or should I say a dozen dimes.
A dollar to pick my brain, 20 cents to hear my rhymes.
Four quarters in a year, four nickels ‘ill solve your crimes.
A hundred cents to make sense, 20 more to ease your mind.
I find my written lines to be doper than most.
Dope is an infection and my style is the host.
I boast but yet I’m modest, flow hottest from coast to coast.
If you’re feeling how I’m feeling lift your drinks and make a toast.
Approach me with a smile, my style is so unique.
Hostile – never retreat, profiled as the elite.
I pile those who compete and I never see defeat.
It’s not that I can’t lose, I’m just def to what you speak.
You don’t preach knowledge and your flow’s forever weak.
How can you criticize my speech when your verse is incomplete?
16 is not a verse, you see I’ll never reach my peak.
I’m original with flows so you’ll never hear me repeat.
I seek a higher understanding and intellectual might.
Ignite a million minds with this perpetual light.
I retract my jaw and vomit the dawns of hope.
I impact your soul while I advocate the dope.
Cut me - I’ll bleed brilliance; no nurse can dress my wounds.
Life is but a garden, cancerous, my mind prunes.
The fumes radiate and pierce souls like harpoons.
My brain forever bubbles and juggles these shard tunes.
Consume these fakes fools as soon as they assume
That just because I’m white, I write in costume.
False. I’ll tell you right now, I’ll never front ME
I’ll be the bearer of truth; I’ll preach what I see.
And what I see right now is a never-ending cycle of truth
We can’t permit lies; we need to enlighten our youth
Children are the future and now is the time for change
If we don’t do something, next generation becomes deranged

Numbz
02-18-2008, 03:21 AM
Watch Me Split-These-Fags I Anit Talking My Self Up, It's My Rap Shit-That-Brags
Have Your Body In Bags, Maybe You Should Quit Rapping And Just Stick-With-Tags.

"Riot"
02-18-2008, 12:06 PM
I write rhymes :D

A dime a dozen, or should I say a dozen dimes.
A dollar to pick my brain, 20 cents to hear my rhymes.
Four quarters in a year, four nickels ‘ill solve your crimes.
A hundred cents to make sense, 20 more to ease your mind.
I find my written lines to be doper than most.
Dope is an infection and my style is the host.
I boast but yet I’m modest, flow hottest from coast to coast.
If you’re feeling how I’m feeling lift your drinks and make a toast.
Approach me with a smile, my style is so unique.
Hostile – never retreat, profiled as the elite.
I pile those who compete and I never see defeat.
It’s not that I can’t lose, I’m just def to what you speak.
You don’t preach knowledge and your flow’s forever weak.
How can you criticize my speech when your verse is incomplete?
16 is not a verse, you see I’ll never reach my peak.
I’m original with flows so you’ll never hear me repeat.
I seek a higher understanding and intellectual might.
Ignite a million minds with this perpetual light.
I retract my jaw and vomit the dawns of hope.
I impact your soul while I advocate the dope.
Cut me - I’ll bleed brilliance; no nurse can dress my wounds.
Life is but a garden, cancerous, my mind prunes.
The fumes radiate and pierce souls like harpoons.
My brain forever bubbles and juggles these shard tunes.
Consume these fakes fools as soon as they assume
That just because I’m white, I write in costume.
False. I’ll tell you right now, I’ll never front ME
I’ll be the bearer of truth; I’ll preach what I see.
And what I see right now is a never-ending cycle of truth
We can’t permit lies; we need to enlighten our youth
Children are the future and now is the time for change
If we don’t do something, next generation becomes deranged

ill.ill.ill.ill.ill.

"Riot"
02-18-2008, 05:57 PM
I mean this in the best words,but this verse comes in thirds.
ay listen,evertime i hear your name.
I lyrically get the tendency to mentally say I love you in parenthesis.
In mathmatical terms that means,theres no taking turns,my equation comes first.

ehhh.
you know.

stayhigh 905
02-18-2008, 08:05 PM
yo some off that shit is HARd yo

HoodRichSucka
02-18-2008, 08:09 PM
this dudes like nas, hes mentally ill.
without the -matic part, a license to kill.
you must be smokin somthin, a psychodic patient.
A hatian waitin and bakin, thats a melodic statment....

now thats a melodic statement..haha

TOEJAM
02-18-2008, 10:13 PM
I write rhymes :D

A dime a dozen, or should I say a dozen dimes.
A dollar to pick my brain, 20 cents to hear my rhymes.
Four quarters in a year, four nickels ‘ill solve your crimes.
A hundred cents to make sense, 20 more to ease your mind.
I find my written lines to be doper than most.
Dope is an infection and my style is the host.
I boast but yet I’m modest, flow hottest from coast to coast.
If you’re feeling how I’m feeling lift your drinks and make a toast.
Approach me with a smile, my style is so unique.
Hostile – never retreat, profiled as the elite.
I pile those who compete and I never see defeat.
It’s not that I can’t lose, I’m just def to what you speak.
You don’t preach knowledge and your flow’s forever weak.
How can you criticize my speech when your verse is incomplete?
16 is not a verse, you see I’ll never reach my peak.
I’m original with flows so you’ll never hear me repeat.
I seek a higher understanding and intellectual might.
Ignite a million minds with this perpetual light.
I retract my jaw and vomit the dawns of hope.
I impact your soul while I advocate the dope.
Cut me - I’ll bleed brilliance; no nurse can dress my wounds.
Life is but a garden, cancerous, my mind prunes.
The fumes radiate and pierce souls like harpoons.
My brain forever bubbles and juggles these shard tunes.
Consume these fakes fools as soon as they assume
That just because I’m white, I write in costume.
False. I’ll tell you right now, I’ll never front ME
I’ll be the bearer of truth; I’ll preach what I see.
And what I see right now is a never-ending cycle of truth
We can’t permit lies; we need to enlighten our youth
Children are the future and now is the time for change
If we don’t do something, next generation becomes deranged
very very impressive. lets get an encore

Kaze
02-19-2008, 12:18 AM
we use to be real homies no longer hang
AZ quoted and things still never changed
we use to do anything for the dolla
jack kids start rockin gold chains
smoke weed everyday like tupac said it
weve been through all this shit still living for nothing,
the love still remains i got your back never complain
i was there when you were getting jacked
got my celly out and thats that,
you yelled get back while we started getting the stack
blood stained white tee suburb kids thought we were real G,
you took me in fed me food when i went stray
never supported the drugs that got to me,
only a real homie that i could trust would do that for me,
we made it through high school and its mighty viscous
on this road to riches,
but id rather have a friend to roll with me then the stacks of money
and no true homie

Kaze
02-19-2008, 12:18 AM
i fear the past you fear the present
i can predict the future and im not in it
my death is imminent six feet deep forever asleep

shits permenent, friends and family will learn from it,
as i enternally burn hoping its never your turn,

This is my suicide fill your eyes with tears
ill be in your heart for the everlasting years,

but i never meant it, so many things could of prevent it
you never got it in the mail but i sent it

i only had one life and i took it away from all of yours
snotty nosed kid corrupted since the age of 4

no father figure in my life but so much love in sight
i couldnt understand me i just left that to my family
someone was always there to guide me through it all

because reality is wrong and dreams are for real
just think of that when you close the casket and watch it seal

someone told me "suicide is killing the only person who can change it"
but im done with life i dont want to live rearranging shit.

sitting here in fear, depression in fifth gear
a whole new person when i look in the mirror
you ruined me whoever you were.

i cant believe suicide is on my fucking mind
this wouldnt be the first time, its my own crime im going
in but for time but whatever fuck it all
i just leave you all with this suicide letter.

treasure every moment from past to present
and learn all about lifes lesson..

Kaze
02-19-2008, 12:19 AM
both old'ish but still pretty dope..

UnConscious
02-19-2008, 12:30 AM
No really, I write rhymes :D

Who am I? Fear me, while my words float free
Poetry is my passion; my flow is ever lastin’
It’s my fashion to be mashin' on you broke emcees
Not that ya wallets aint big, but ya minds empty
It’s simply nothing much but your ice and your hoes
And your cars and your clothes and your fat bankrolls
But that’s not true flows, that’s not hip-hop
You shouldn’t write lines about killing cops or slanging rocks
Like KRS said, spit rhymes to uplift your people
Get rid of explicit lyrics, lies, and the illegals
Equal the knowledge of a real man
My ideal plan is to revive the fallen and to heal fans
Hip-hop is dead; thoughts of rebirth ignite in my head
Whack emcees only concerned with making the bread
It was said, get up and fight for what you believe in
No more grievin’, intellectuals are achievin’
And pleasin’ the ears of our people in pursuit
Digging deep are my roots, my voice you cannot mute
Salute to those who trust in my cause, without a pause
I clinch my fist, reach towards the sky, and await applause

"Riot"
02-19-2008, 03:28 PM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
i love your shit man.

that gave me chills fuckin readin that.
DOPE!

ASLOS
02-19-2008, 03:52 PM
sprayin mad trains, got em freshly wet like seattles rain
getting up in this game and its getten me fame
yours truely and you nev seen a girl like this
get you feenin like a lohan on coke and im just pure bliss

BALDheadSLICK
02-19-2008, 03:54 PM
ya'll rookies stuck up pussy's like a tampon!

"Riot"
02-19-2008, 04:02 PM
...cute.

sketch3
02-19-2008, 06:41 PM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
i love your shit man.

that gave me chills fuckin readin that.
DOPE!

must be cold were ur from, u get chills everyother post
but unconsious is fly

UnConscious
02-19-2008, 10:04 PM
In case you didn't believe me... I write rhymes :D

So it begins, I take my headphones off, step off the R.T.D,
Stroll done Huron St. until I reach the home of N.I.C
That's me, Nicolas, some success, more or less
Not the biggest or the baddest, but the guy that will express
His feelings for whatever lurks in his cloudy mind
Just take the time, soon you'll find ideas cure the blind
He's refined, purified by his journey through life
Some collaborated together, and yet some display strife
It's all right; cuz experiences shape you as a person
And what I am right now, is a man who carries weightless burdens
I'm deservin', everything that happens to me
I'm just an emcee, trying to push my first CD
It's not easy, no job and too many lost friends
Only hope is pens transcend, so soon I'll meet my ends
And feel the cleanse, of God, is he real?
Does the bible really heal? Is that the life that many ideal?
Time to reveal, what's been hiding in my brain
I explain while restrained, while my veins are slowly drained
Now my reign has ceased, call in the priest, I'm deceased
Mouth opens to release the beast that came to feast.

WiZ])U/\!\b
02-20-2008, 12:25 PM
to the end of the earths rebirths,
i struggle through lifes curse while my mind thirsts,
if any man would answer the question your mind bursts,
with the tip of his finger with the earth he flirts,
but the words are now reversed in the herse that lurks,
its slowin to a few jerks brought on by spontanious squirts of gas,
comin ta contact with a flame now lemme explain,
im fairly new as a name but in a king in the game,
first known as craze only a rep ta blame,
now lets spell it out f-u-c-k a blemish to ya name,
posh whore is why im wizdumb yet im the only one,
you couldnt wana step to a king son and all of a sudden,
my brothers come a crashin now we smashin,
headed out to get some grass n blow away the past n then the beat
stops

WiZ])U/\!\b
02-20-2008, 12:35 PM
whoops i left ya hangin, now you know im slangin,
no i dont need to be gang bangin but im nat braggin,
its just an ex-pla-nation my mind is racin,
outside the white house im casin cuz its bout time,
im doin away with the reason for crime,
give youu a hint the m.i is a double you whan signed,
breakin wars on the streets will catch you a police beatin,all the prison mistreatin,
prez startz a war and look how hes eatin, on a fuckin pillow top sleepin,
now im steadily creepin upon the sands of the land,
where washington's slaves would once stand wit a 9 in my hand,
headphoned bumpin my favorite band e.p.m.d clan,
then i realize im bein swarmed its the secret service man,
as i get ta sprayin steadily five oh slayin, im prayin
oh shit now im layin gray n -----------------------

BALDheadSLICK
02-20-2008, 12:39 PM
knowingly,
deafeat the puspose
ur like a penny yah worthless
as if a bitches womb, ima straight birth this!
the worst is,.....
my membraine want me ta keep going
the eratick enjoyment, ta watch yall fail flowing
no current yah not rowing!
the camerahs could stop rollin
copywrite my rymes, so i kno that there not stollen......(c)

"Riot"
02-20-2008, 05:07 PM
dope verses in here are quite rare.
so look at me with a blank stare.
listen to this.
To this theres no need for an instrumental.
to me this is quite traditional.
gotta go big,remember kids,its all mental.
forget all the haters,its just that simple.
Hip hop is here to stay,most mcs considering rental.
yeah,listen to me know,with me whisper this riddle.
look at that cat,big ego,but deep down that cat is little.
enter his mind,about as small a skittle.
he beefs with you,confront,he swears it was accidental.
blames his whack ryhmes on the instrumental.
he cant rap,its a basic fundamental.
yeah stop before you fuck up that expensive dental.
realize theres no more being gentle.
just cause i look small dont mean i can go big in your head.
no need to be judgemental.
go back to 4th grade field trips,you need to be in the vision of parentals.
with your childish nonsence.
when we play dodgeball,your the pussy that sits on the bench.
dont understand? well excuse my french.

the.sate
02-20-2008, 06:37 PM
I gotta be makin' that cash, to bigga my stash
i put on my halloween mask,
Time to go trick or treat, fold up them swisher sweets
Makin' them lemons lay down in the grass
My weapon I'm grippin' ain't no time for slippin'
I'm all about makin' that cheese,
Robber who robbin' them bitches for riches and dumpin'
ain't no stoppin till I get some kis,
Full ah that weed, so I can proceed wid my plans
and take care my family through problems,
Hit up my n-i-g-g-a that wanted Li-zo and Terrel
Some playas who down to go robbin',
Think that I'm flodgin' don't slip and get killed by them bullets
that fly from the .45 clip, that cocaine is in my brain
Got me straight doin' thangs, to them hoe n-i-g-g-a-s when I catch 'em slip
No mercy for suckas and bustas when I'm on my hustle
I take care ah my business off top,
Regardless whoever that n-i-g-g-a might be
when I take all his cheese, I bet he get shot, be clippin' that glock,
It full wid black talon for static I might have to aim on ah low,
I kick it wid killers, dog dealers, grave n-i-g-g-a-s
who squeeze on the triggas, we dumped on 'em low

edited cuz of the wack a-s-s filter ***'ing my lyrics

Hidden Teknique
02-20-2008, 09:15 PM
You wanna be cool doin' a crime kiid
yet when you get caught you snitch to get outta the bid
you give up 3 names to get outta 3 years
yet when the court case is done, there wait your peers
they stand strong like muthafuckin warriors
waitin to jump you in ski masks so they notorious
they'll stand in a dark alley waitin to strike
you know they ride with a nine on the side
and a blade up they sleeve...
ready to stab you in the throat and watch you bleed

sketch3
02-20-2008, 09:39 PM
im a basterd.
stomping this kids chest in,
removed his whole mid section,
fuck his moma with her big breasts an,
his lil sister,
she was screamin wen i statred to fist her,

the.sate
02-20-2008, 09:44 PM
i'll beat ya in tha head and let that ass decay
u been layin in the streets so long ur brain has turned gray
yall n-i-g-g-a-s can deal wit a fool full of dat OE liquor sheit
im runnin round town wit a badass set n shootin'n two extra clips
vest on his chest the 44 magnum's got me stressed
my mind was tellin me no but the 40oz was tellin me yes
he had on a vest but i still managed to leave that ass for dead
cuz there aint one m'fucka in the whole wide world wit a bulletproof fo'head
im sewin up slubs,eatin em up, drinkin yo blood, like liquor its all because im givin a fuck, i got no luv for u n-i-g-g-a-s
fo me to be flowin it out for the nex mothafucka restin in peace, i luv my homies n g's but its src wen the trigga release
and the reason for these murders, is enuf for me to put these hot ones on ya
you can run on up, you can be a victem if you wanna
i swig my 40 but im not pourin out a drop, u neva knew my crew, dem n-i-g-g-a-s thats on the block

[edit]dam filter...

UnConscious
02-20-2008, 10:04 PM
i'll beat ya in tha head and let that ass decay
u been layin in the streets so long ur brain has turned gray
yall n-i-g-g-a-s can deal wit a fool full of dat OE liquor sheit
im runnin round town wit a badass set n shootin'n two extra clips
vest on his chest the 44 magnum's got me stressed
my mind was tellin me no but the 40oz was tellin me yes
he had on a vest but i still managed to leave that ass for dead
cuz there aint one m'fucka in the whole wide world wit a bulletproof fo'head
im sewin up slubs,eatin em up, drinkin yo blood, like liquor its all because im givin a fuck, i got no luv for u n-i-g-g-a-s
fo me to be flowin it out for the nex mothafucka restin in peace, i luv my homies n g's but its src wen the trigga release
and the reason for these murders, is enuf for me to put these hot ones on ya
you can run on up, you can be a victem if you wanna
i swig my 40 but im not pourin out a drop, u neva knew my crew, dem n-i-g-g-a-s thats on the block

[edit]dam filter...

Next time you decide to bite rhymes from X-Raided, make sure it's not a popular song featuring Brotha Lynch for instance, Liqour *****s Triggas

sketch3
02-20-2008, 10:06 PM
in the words of ol dirty
SHAME ON A NIGGGHU

Small Time Crook
02-21-2008, 12:44 AM
sittin in church, preacher preachin his lies
little does he know that i got a suprise
hidin under my coat, got a knife, gonna make him choke
then ima go to the nuns, fuck them some
then i pull out the gauge, show them my rage, im havin fun
maybe i am, dont know about you
maybe i shoulda just stayed in school
coulda learned something but instead i took a mission
P.S. fuck the gang life and everybody in it
back on track, out of the holy house
goin' up north to visit my homie now
serve me up a G, i get it with glee
but little does this ***** know he's about to D I E
that's how it goes, happened so fast
first a red flash then again with the shotgun blast
sittin there like Urkel, did i do that
sorry buddy didnt mean to make your brain go SPLAT
but that's how it happens, fuck my life and yours gets it twice
STC runnin around takin' lives
not a serial killer in fact its all be premediated
maybe not Small Time is gonna get appreciated
after the lies, and after the torment
i need to make me some more golden moments

freestyle that ima work a little more on and make.. "full".

"Riot"
02-21-2008, 07:15 PM
Listen,i dont want to leave.
you just need time to cool off.
you head needs to be recieved from this mental war.
to flush anger,I put holes my door.
Please dont do this to me,you beggin for more.
You didnt think id hear the message from behind the door?
well i did,look at me now,askin what for?
ive lost hope,ive reached the end of the rope.
im fucked,in the hairs of your scope.
I asked to stay,you reply with nope.
might as well call this the end.
ive lost my fam,friends and girlfriend.
my thoughts on life completely transformed.
you have my heart torn.
hell i dont even have time to mourn.
look in my eyes ragged and worn.
the scores ten to o dad,you fuckin won.
i cant believe you still call me your son.
or do you?
look at me now,my heads at the tip of the gun,you dont even care.
im here all alone,you wont even answer the phone.
when i call all i get is the calling tone.
you hur my moms and you hurt me to dad.
i dont even know what to say,im not even mad.
in a mental state and you cant relate.
all i have to say is thank you.
i hope my mom finds someone to replace you.
this is my last resort,so dont worry about child support.
just ignore me like usual.
dont you dare step foot in my funeral.
this voice is unheard.
past the point of no return.
remember when we used to hunt,dad?
remember all the fun we had?
remember that 22 you bought me,dad?
well i have something to tell you.
where do i begin?
first off its under my fucking chin!
im fighting a battle in my mind.
to just pull the trigger to end it that much quicker.
i have no dad to help me through it.
i just want you to know.
i love you,nah scratch that.
YOU FUCKIN BLEW IT.
you had my life in your hands and you fuckin threw it.
remember this isnt a fucking song.
its a suicidal note.
i hate you,your a fucking joke!
i hope you read this and choke.
fuckin croak!
so look in my lifeless eyes.
no more disguise.
nothing to hide.
just shit back.
and enjoy the ride.

..

bountyhunter113
02-21-2008, 07:54 PM
traffic, traffic, i'm drivin in traffic.........

Passleoinj
02-21-2008, 11:19 PM
can't knock the hustle

JEDI-MASTER
02-23-2008, 12:30 AM
new verse wat i got so far homebois supposed to come up wit tha other half for da collab
Lost in this hypnotic stage, I call a life
Through ganja fumes and cold brews
I recall da cold questioning stare, the fury in the eyes
Burning to bright
Leaveing me questioning
Who was wrong?
Who was right?
Lost in translation
Jus a thought
Packing da bag,
I tell em wassup
Pass da blunt,
ima cop hit on dat grass
The rattling cans, da heavy pull
Pulls da rocawears down my ass, I let em sag
Rather than let em hang round my waist and b called an upbeat fag
chorus
Murder me, , save me ,thank me
This life I call my own will break me
Murder me,save me, thank me
This life I call my own has changed me
Murder me,save me,thank me
This life I call my own will break me

Departing, a dozen cans in tow,
showtime ***** lets go
Walkin wit da crew, every ***** steps in sync
Looking for dat perfect color, jus the right hue
Spraying away, lost in da haze of paint
Sudden rush of noise,
Lost in a daze,fuckin confused
5-0 flash they lights, dats our que
Rushin through crowded street, da pressures on, I feel da heat
Feeling much like a blessed saint, dippin below a church
I think homebois ready to give up the game, gettinn ready to faint
Hands dripping wet, fuckin pigs didn’t leave enuff time for da paint to set

chorus
Murder me, , save me ,thank me
This life I call my own will break me
Murder me,save me, thank me
This life I call my own has changed me
Murder me,save me,thank me
This life I call my own will break me

Dodging patrols we make it back to the fort
Luck was on our side,
none of da homies will face a day in court
happy for da moment, none of us *****s truly glad
weeds our last resort
roll it, spark it, pass da jawn
lifes not easy running the streets
knowing ur an expendable pawn
to ease the mind we write
why?
artisitic expression
yet we rolled over by politic oppression

Kaze
02-24-2008, 03:21 PM
im feeling like a greedy genius,
this girl got me guessin'
i got a question,
your uncertainty has my emotions mixed,
lets blaze the weed until everythings fixed
seperate the real from the counterfit because
i hate being around around a fake bitch,
my girl has to keep it legit, because
every moment with you is like kodak
picture perfect girl you better know that..

ughh quick shit.. just got some shit on my mind :)

Passleoinj
02-24-2008, 11:45 PM
since monor and me stopped e-beefing with yall thugs
its so empty in here :(
so im picking on KAZE

bitch made ass fagget

talking bout your girl on a track
ruthless yet courageous , cant call you homo on that
i get head by the chicks you get all emotional with
sorry to hear that ,let the weed blaze until everythings fixed
im making your life a myth
just like big foot in them hills
to be such a pussy , writing about a bitch you must be on them pillz
picture the perfect moment , me fuckin your girl on the sofa
no remorse or mercy , puttin that pussy in a coma
passleoinj is back motherfucka»

pass the blunt

Passleoinj
02-24-2008, 11:51 PM
it aint over yet

remember last year, it was your birthday
you met your girlfriend at her place
at first , she looked at you a strange way
as you was walking in the hallway
cause ,
ifucked her up on the wall
fucked her down on the floor«
got that bitch screaming
PASS I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE
she was telling me nasty shit
like : she liked my big dick
she told me she wouldnt be satisfied by you
after i stretched that shit , so fuck you
youre bithc is mine i got her on her knees
i got her all crying saying she loves me
im sick of kaze half ass mc
your dick is too small , and you want to get married
lemme tell you something
once they go to Pass
they never come back
poor kaze your case is over
i hope after this story , you gon cry me a river
actin ass rapper

you aint shit and you know it

Epoc
02-24-2008, 11:57 PM
I prefer my spandex to be free, who gives a fuck about the fleas. Same goes for cheese, wats wrong with second hand eats, i consider them to be previously used treats. An extra hint of mold may speak of tales told and scientifically its a lil bit too old, but my naval is brazen and my stomach bold. I'll down that morsel as easily as touching my torso.

Kaze
02-25-2008, 12:14 AM
pass i bet your wishing you never started picking on me
because im about to make lyrical history like taki 183 did for graffiti
i rip your heart out pick it up and watch it stop beatin
push you to the ground and all i hear is squeakin
your homegirl call for medical treatment but your layin there
dead from my verbal beatin
and i bet you use google i classify that as cheatin to top that
every line that comes out of my mouth is like nose candy, pure crack..

no beef im so blunted .. cant think straight
but your rhymes are bunk :)

Passleoinj
02-25-2008, 06:43 AM
sry if i hurt your feelings
id like to really shoot you nice lines
but this thread is called FREESTYLE rappin
so i actually freestyle you know
still , fuck you :)

Passleoinj
02-25-2008, 06:55 AM
you always escape reality when you rhyme
you can't find a crime mentality so you talk about mine
youre a lying piece of shit , cause you dont even graff
talking about how you historic ,man i just laugh
you say my homegirl calling for medical treatment
goddamn , i didnt know you was schizoprenic
say something wrong to my face , and you'll leave in a paramedic
you call your raps verbal beatin
for real man , youre just beatin the verbal
how can rapper go that low?
you maybe smoked the herbal to forget you were a bitch
whos dying for my money , to buy you new cosmetics

now eat my shit
this is on top of the dome

h!de7
02-25-2008, 09:35 AM
who am i wizzle fa shizzle
flow sicker then third floors in hospitals

HoodRichSucka
02-26-2008, 06:18 PM
everyday i go to school pissed at the world
hate almost everybody, got this list of girls.
most of them tricks i cant tolerate
soon they're throwin' bricks, next they hollar "rape!"
operate like this? youll have to wait,
and dollar weight, i dont compensate.
we walk in the library to read six hundred books
i said "fuck you teacher", u misunderstood.
i cracked open a book on rape and drugs.
smack, coke, weed, shrooms, bapes and thugs
and what hatred does. but too late to fuss
class dismissed and fuck this school stuff
passed the test but dropped out, thats cool stuff.

yea i dunno

"Riot"
02-26-2008, 06:32 PM
spittin dope fly shit got bitches sayin oh my lanta.
spreadin my name on these streets equivilent to propaganda.
stealthy slick moves,puttin ladies in the mood,quick like a panther.
let your mouth run,street cred by the that weapon your holstering.
ill spit flames down your throat,leave intestines smoldering.
burnt off your eyelashes and got you shittin ashes.
got verbal confrontations for protection,i dont have time for questions
but im here to teach you bitches a lesson.

Hidden Teknique
02-26-2008, 06:39 PM
Fuckin' with ya boy's girl that's a no no
Ya boy being with the chick ya liked is a low blow
all this world is filled with is bitches, hoes, and tricks
money materialistic shit from clothes, cribs, and whips
doin' a buck twenty and change, drunk and deranged
mad at the world will leave me nothin but pain
everything is crashin down quickly up upon my life
my whip's tank on E, no bitch, and i'm paranoid so i walk with a knife
fuck the law always givin me a suspicious look
they see a hooded kid with a hat and think crook
but fuck that i can handle myself i ain't shook

"Riot"
02-26-2008, 06:40 PM
dude...where the fuck have you been?

Hidden Teknique
02-26-2008, 07:27 PM
Me? Mad Busy and Got Burnt Out On Keystyles.

sketch3
02-26-2008, 07:36 PM
ploting sick shit, like war time profesers,
spiting ten megatons of pressure,
to compress ur, chest or,
put ur lungs under sever stress. more,
than you can stand,
force them to contract and expand,

HoodRichSucka
02-26-2008, 07:58 PM
REDO ha
i bust open a book on rape and drugs.
smoke crack, smack, coke, weed, bapes and thugs.
what hatred does, is wait for us.
but too late to fuss my dollar weight is plus.
ill drink a forty in a minute, like who cares.
drive to a party in the hood ,make the blue stare.
cut their heads off, then drink the blood down.
like i said 'tough', with krink i flood the town.
go crazy with pieces and throw's alike.
kill baby's with pieces, ha, blow's from dikes.
dont fuckin' care, ponder what you think.
build a fuckin' lair, and conjure up some ink...

BALDheadSLICK
02-27-2008, 01:30 PM
^ i like that..........with krink i flood the town.

PG_Miscreant
02-27-2008, 06:00 PM
white people freestyling is like an african jew joining the aryan nations! its not right please stop u dont understand how stupid u sound

sketch3
02-27-2008, 06:07 PM
white people freestyling is like an african jew joining the aryan nations! its not right please stop u dont understand how stupid u sound
black people writing, shit sitting at a desk is stupid plese stop.
if ur not black then wat ever wog race u are can fuck itsself...

ignorence pisses me of, why have people allways gotta bring race into it

BALDheadSLICK
02-27-2008, 06:09 PM
lol thats funny cuzz nowa days white dudes are way more lyrical..spittin knowledge and truth...ur probably just a daprived emo kid who only hears comercial cornball rap

BALDheadSLICK
02-27-2008, 06:10 PM
lean wit it ROCK wit it!

steegz
02-27-2008, 06:13 PM
I've spent an hour trying to find some conscious content in this thread but so far it's the same shit over and over again.

Whomp
/thread.

Hidden Teknique
02-27-2008, 07:19 PM
Fuckin' with ya boy's girl that's a no no
Ya boy being with the chick ya liked is a low blow
all this world is filled with is bitches, hoes, and tricks
money materialistic shit from clothes, cribs, and whips
doin' a buck twenty and change, drunk and deranged
mad at the world will leave me nothin but pain
everything is crashin down quickly up upon my life
my whip's tank on E, no bitch, and i'm paranoid so i walk with a knife
fuck the law always givin me a suspicious look
they see a hooded kid with a hat and think crook
but fuck that i can handle myself i ain't shook

Look Harder Pal...

"Riot"
02-27-2008, 09:10 PM
what?

HoodRichSucka
02-27-2008, 09:45 PM
walk into your house w/ a gun and rolled blunt/
cut your slut wife then kill that dumb blonde/
swollow a fuckin 'nade, then wait for you/
hollow out ur fuckin place and ur neighbors too/
Police commin up thinkin i care at all/
stall them with a stare that will despair them all/
get child care for ur kids to call/
get wild'n here then hit the bong/


i dunno.

Passleoinj
02-28-2008, 04:50 PM
u just suck period
making me laugh cause u cant be serious
trynna act hard
practicing your mean faces in your mirror
delirious , youre seriously outta your mind
the only reason you turn around in yo freestyle
is cause you like it from behind
i see you coming with your dumb insults
how bout i cant stop making lyrical sexual assaults
thats just the way i am
aint nothing gonna change me
your names hoodrichsucka , well that doesnt surprise me
my rhymes be,
doper than any motherfucka out there,
terror squad aint got nothing on our's squad terror,
im like a prisonner when i get in the booth
i spit the truth behind bars ,i dont need to prove , myself
my guns go boom-boom
your crew goes aah-ahh
swiss cheesed up stupid motherfucka
pass is back gimme a blunt and a mic so i can rock this motherfucka
BLAOW

"Riot"
02-28-2008, 08:44 PM
This is it,get it right.
at the age of 15 i realized life can change over night.
car crash,helicopter point of view,what a sight.
glass shattered.
car parts scattered.
bodies left bruised and battered.
2 out 1 left.
bodies being pulled out as if it was a theft.
theres a funky smelll in the air,unpleasant armoa.
The last one is now left in a coma.
yet to arise awake.


ehhh.
ill spit somethin new.hold up

Passleoinj
02-28-2008, 10:31 PM
for all the haters
FUCK YALL

ill rape yall and get it on tape
get your ass ducktapped on the highway
anal traffic , decided from the very begining
extermination of the weaks , its you that im willin to kill, and,
you claim to run the streets but when we come around you run way faster,
blast a , bitch to the dome , with the chrome while yo ass' runnin home,
pockets empty homie, head empty homie, can`t you see while you get up,
your girl get down, mad ass crime, your ass not found, still nobody cryin
i got my angry bastards lookin for yo ass , the blood splashes
the pastor preaching about yo past fuck yo religion
who gives a fuck about that ,
carburate at 40's
breath weed as an oxygen
oxyclean cant get me off a spot
when i'm hustlin

BLAOW

Small Time Crook
02-29-2008, 12:27 AM
if you wanna say fuck yawl/ ill stab ya in the balls with a chainsaw/ whichever head you thinkin with it dont matter they both small/ haha, so tell me now am i cool/ cuz i talk about bringing guns into schools?/ straight up fool/ so hardcore ill piss in ya pool/ then ill do some other evil shit/ like raid ya fridge, hide the remote, rape ya bitch/ did that little last note suprise you/ i bet not, lotta guys think like i do/ and then i just want yawl to give a little praise/ --
cuz... in..

west philadeplphia born and raised on the playground is where i spent most of my days, chillin out maxin relaxin all cool while shootin some bball outside of the school..



how do you fuck with that fiyah!?!?

ForGiven
02-29-2008, 10:26 AM
i loved that, with the crazy transition to the fresh prince, siiiiccckkkk. are these truly freestyles though? idk....

MonoR
02-29-2008, 02:25 PM
if you wanna say fuck yawl/ ill stab ya in the balls with a chainsaw/ whichever head you thinkin with it dont matter they both small/ haha, so tell me now am i cool/ cuz i talk about bringing guns into schools?/ straight up fool/ so hardcore ill piss in ya pool/ then ill do some other evil shit/ like raid ya fridge, hide the remote, rape ya bitch/ did that little last note suprise you/ i bet not, lotta guys think like i do/ and then i just want yawl to give a little praise/ --
cuz... in..

west philadeplphia born and raised on the playground is where i spent most of my days, chillin out maxin relaxin all cool while shootin some bball outside of the school..



how do you fuck with that fiyah!?!?

im gonna stab you whit a chainsaw in the balls chief
your so gangster braaaaaaaah

thats fucken hilarious, what are you trying to prove dawg
anyway keep going you have that furious hot dog flow
its awsome keep going man you have talent no doubt
im serious man dont fuck whit this

hahha, cunt

btw: ill stab you in the balls whit a chainsaw no doubt man
i can stab you whit a chainsaw

Passleoinj
02-29-2008, 03:12 PM
yall people took it bad when i talked about 50 cent,
one thing you forgot , ull never stop me even with 60 men,
you cant c me then , while u hatin im in the club sippin henn
me , pass , getting more money than bill gates
your living jealous thats why u still hates
some people has it , some people don't
the stacks fillin my pockets are the reason you shouldnt front
money brings power , power brings respect
you was never shit , thats why u carried around tecs
paychecks i get hem on the daily
my records sales frutuacting quickly
youre lines never rhyme ,your words coming repetitively
I spit what im living , lifestyle of crime
youre so worthless in this situation , i got people willing to kill you for a dime , uh
shut you mouth up cause you dont stand a chance against mine
yall UK bitches is retarded , greenwich mean time


all i need is money.

Epoc
02-29-2008, 04:22 PM
Extra curricular violence?
Yo, we need to get past this, unite and defeat the tyrant.
It's all a distraction to keep the masses passive,
with cash, cars, sex and other wonderful things,
We are on the the brink of disaster while you trash talk your relatives and and save for the computer which goes 1.2 mega hertz faster.
As the facade falls away it becomes plain as day, the real issues revolve around an Orwellian state. That is to say, fascism is longer a revolting way to be held at bay, but accepted and pushed upon the north American conclave.
Power, in that hands of the people, but as the majority stays stupid and blind, redemption will be hard to find, since it is not located under a church steeple.
Poison the the planet, ignore the constitution, murder the weak, and exploit even the 12 year old girls in thinking the only worth while passion is fashion.
And yet we do nothing.
What will it take to piss people off, get them off their seat, and push the governing corporations off their feet?

Small Time Crook
02-29-2008, 07:26 PM
Monor, dont talk shit, really. not only do you fucking suck at it but i never really said shit to you, i mentioned you once in a rhyme and you werent even worth that one bar, i just needed filler that time. but go ahead, spit something at me if you really wanna feel stupid.
also, if you feel like maybe my rhyme was directed at Pass it wasnt, so dont try and ride his nuts and protect him, because he's the one defending your ass most of the time.

that's my two cents, doggy, put up or shut up.


and to ForGiven, thanks for the compliment, appreciate it :)
everything i type in here is off the dome.

sketch3
02-29-2008, 07:54 PM
stop frontin,like ur gangsters cuss
i know folks thatll really jack ur crew,
see u weeks later sell ur shit back to u,
need funds, smoke crack and glue,
rob spics, nigggas, crakers too,
shank a paki, smack a jew,
race is unimportant,
but fucking with their funds will get ur life shortened,
they braught friends,
to bust slugs u caught ten,
now tell me wat u thaught then,
mind on ur last breath or ''should neva of fought them''

HoodRichSucka
03-01-2008, 08:40 AM
i love how monor doesnt even rhyme.
at times he trys but fails then dies.
he was never alive, buys time and never thrives.
quit while ur ahead, ur shits sick like bad hives.
im not even good, but at least my shit flows.
dont come from the hood, dont front like a hoe.
you need to stop now, before u kill us all.
just log off and drop out, ur wack paw...

Passleoinj
03-01-2008, 01:36 PM
noodle face

noodle face

you fucked with me , tell me what happened?
you aint moving anymore
motherfucka you dead aint cha?
pack up flour we about to make that bread
its one of the best thing next to getting head
fuck you up while your crew'S lookin
everytime i come up yall just book it
you aint hard you aint ghetto , story telling bullshit
yall scared to go out to drink while im smokin in public
fuckin bitch ,i told ya before
i bet i know your home better than you do
im getting used to fuck your whore
kickin your dog and leaving by the backdoor
if i ever meet you
we'll find out how you see life by the barrel of my four four

"Riot"
03-01-2008, 03:08 PM
I'm stuck with this name,from begining to end.
stuck in this game,begining to end.
verbally correct until the end?,well that depends.
but until that day comes im stayin content.
like marc eckos,I'm "under pressure"
so dont start off on the wrong foot with inappropriate gestures.
in other words dont look at me with a stupid ass stare.
you a pain in my balls like a ingrown pubic hair.

:)

Small Time Crook
03-01-2008, 07:49 PM
Dedicated To My Father:

Dear Michael, let's keep this on a first name basis/
cuz im turning into you and this shit im fucking hatin/
we both started banging around the same age/
and when shit got too real, we both act strange/
you kicked me the fuck out when i was motherfucking 10/
you expect me to actualy respect you again/
i used to hold you in such a high motherfucking regard/
now im eatin them words, lookin like a retard/
i look in the mirror and see your goddamn face/
if when we do die, we go to another place/
i hope your dealin with fate, runnin in constant circles/
and i dont say this shit to intentionally hurt you/
because you NEVER cared about me or my sis/
you ran off with some bitch and had three other kids/
what's the matter, half crackers wasn't good enough/
or is it because in school i was a nerd and just not cool enough/
but now look at me pops, im the exact same as you/
and you not here to help me out with what the fuck im going through/
i still recognize your smell, touch, voice and motherfucking face/
yet til the day i die ima be filled with so much hate/
you walked out on us once, we only saw you on weekends/
and then you left me forever leaving my brain and heart weakened/
why didnt you try to bond with me, like you did my fuckin cousins/
guess you could feel somethin, you just wasnt given your KIDS the lovin/
so you know Michael, i hope you regret what you've created/
because until i see you again you're officially fucking hated/

im spiteful today.

UnConscious
03-02-2008, 01:17 AM
Before you read this, just know I wrote it fast and didn't edit it for flow or for spelling. It's just what's been on my mind recently, just the current situations

Current Situations

I never got it, the way we sit back, relax, and sip brews
Never pay attention to news, but more to one's crew
It's true, people are dying and in need of our help
In need of our touch, maybe just a need to be felt
God dealt us these cards, it's how you play your hand
It's how you help one another, we're brothers, a true plan
We can get rid of tensions swarming up in The Gaza Strip
We can unite as one, viva la raza! together grip
The neck of ignorance, teach our children right from wrong
Teach them there's more to life locked in the innocense of song
Belong to a just cause, our children's minds we need to feed
We must to teach them to plant seeds and get rid of one's greed
And breath the fine air, get rid of all the pollution
Get rid of the prostitution, give money for institutions
Every child on the streets deserves a chance to go to college
Every child deserves the truth so we can't deny knowledge
Abbolish ignorant ways and the racist state of mind
We can't recline and sip wine while we pretend to be blind
There's genocide brewing, right in front of our face
Yet we deny the conflict due to superior race?
Due to superior schools and superior gods?
Due to superior tools and superior squads?
Our military may be strong but what is it without the people?
What is it without out the very one's you say are not equal?
What is it without the valor within the hearts of the men?
What is it without the ink that bleeds from the prodigy's pen?
We sin everyday and go on like it's nothing
Thinking god will fogive us because his heart's forever loving?
You're shrugging, you don't know what to do, follow me I'll guide
I'll do everything in my power to bring peace worldwide
Provide for broken families cuz I know what it's like
I've been down that bumpy road but now I'm feeling delight
Invite every soul that can hear the echos of my voice
To follow my young words, to make the right choice
To fight the corruption and evil fueling the fire
To put out the inferno and begin to inspire

Passleoinj
03-02-2008, 11:27 PM
who wants to battle
anytime
u go first

ForGiven
03-03-2008, 06:34 PM
ohhhh, he callin folk out.

Passleoinj
03-04-2008, 04:43 AM
this is how you make a song about a bitch

you was telling all these nice things about future and stuff
how we gon' get an appartement and we gon' share luv
im sick of your bullshit you dont even make sense
you say you respect my choice , but you dont respect my friends
youse a bitch , and a cheap one , you shoulda payed me
for all the attention i gave you in the past months , now i got lazy
you tell me writing is bad and that i should go to school
id rather smoke blunts and get high then hanging out with you
you say i don't control myself
but who's the whore making 36 hours of extasy
it aint me?!
youse such a disrespectful bitch , start crying when i turn my back on you
dont ever expect me to call you back after this shit , cause im done with you
you wanna know something bitch , i cheated on you
when i was done fuckin that awesome chick , i wasnt even thinking about you
wanna know something else
your the past already , remember the time you said you'll always love me
i said me too , but that was just for getting pussy ,
yo you really gotta know , your blowjob's the worsts
feels like getting sucked by fred durst , with a purse
i stepped on my rep to give you shit ill never get
i realised you wanted cream so i gave up on you , check
back then when i slapped the living shit out of you and you asked for more
i shoulda killed you instead , and leave by the back door

JEDI-MASTER
03-04-2008, 04:59 AM
new verse im workin on
Subliminal thoughts run deep
I wonder why
Do I build lie upon lie
I just want to sleep
Plz momma jus one last time
sing me my lullaby
The ghetto bird hovering, gunshots ring
I lay my head to rest, only to hope to survive the night
I pray to hear the angels voices sing
Im sick of living in this terror, this eternal fright
Growing from a boy into a man
I say fuck the world, fuck the responsbilty Fuck the bills to be payed,
theres money for the taking . bloodshed is a hood *****s only trade
every man for himself, this aint Italy none of us can be made
we just kick back and smile, rollin a blunt every other mile
bumping the radio full blast, yea son don’t touch that dial


*unconcious i liked that alot man
*crook that was hot to

HoodRichSucka
03-04-2008, 05:56 AM
i walk into school trippin on sillly MG's/
im talking 60 of these for an infinity/
at this rate i should be about dead in a month/
in my grave buried to my head in the mud/
but forget that i come back and smack your lungs worse then an asthma attack
packed with an acid punch/
fill my wine with pills and still have time to kill, your wife and kids then sign
your bills/
started trippin again like i said before i started sippin' the Hen, gone, fell to the floor...

JEDI-MASTER
03-04-2008, 06:11 AM
hood reminds me of old mobb deep
nother verse im workin on
Sheltered all my life I didn’t see my first corpse till I was fifteen
That day I learned to fight
Walking up the street , a ***** seen a lone white
So the ***** pulled out his knife
My pops taught me never back down ,never be afraid
The look on the *****s face was nuttin short of surprise
Wen I steeped to the plate and came out swingin
Gave em the classic 1 2
Left right high and low
I was rockin his world, never realized whitey could throw on such a show
He tried to lunge, yoked him up up, flipped the script and I gave that knife a plunge
Hands stained in blood, I didn’t wait round I wasn’t gona end up 6 feet under the ground
So I turned on my heels as I heard the sirens wail , any other time ud be thankful for the sound
Not today, I said fuck this and ran away
On the streets bullets are politicians and the love to speak
Gangs are the government, always have always will control the streets,
wreakin havoc on the decrepid and weak

ForGiven
03-04-2008, 10:27 AM
i like that last line

sketch3
03-04-2008, 10:54 AM
this is how you make a song about a bitch

you was telling all these nice things about future and stuff
how we gon' get an appartement and we gon' share luv
im sick of your bullshit you dont even make sense
you say you respect my choice , but you dont respect my friends
youse a bitch , and a cheap one , you shoulda payed me
for all the attention i gave you in the past months , now i got lazy
you tell me writing is bad and that i should go to school
id rather smoke blunts and get high then hanging out with you
you say i don't control myself
but who's the whore making 36 hours of extasy
it aint me?!
youse such a disrespectful bitch , start crying when i turn my back on you
dont ever expect me to call you back after this shit , cause im done with you
you wanna know something bitch , i cheated on you
when i was done fuckin that awesome chick , i wasnt even thinking about you
wanna know something else
your the past already , remember the time you said you'll always love me
i said me too , but that was just for getting pussy ,
yo you really gotta know , your blowjob's the worsts
feels like getting sucked by fred durst , with a purse
i stepped on my rep to give you shit ill never get
i realised you wanted cream so i gave up on you , check
back then when i slapped the living shit out of you and you asked for more
i shoulda killed you instead , and leave by the back door

stop claimin ur on sum pimp shit,
cuss u couldnt be a playa,
if u entered the special olympics,
let alone with females. even if u payed her,
to suck ur limp dick,she still wouldnt think it,

ForGiven
03-04-2008, 11:48 AM
om my, passleoinj, you gonna take that. earlier you was talkin bout a battle...well here you go!

Passleoinj
03-04-2008, 12:15 PM
well im not gonna battle someone who only spits 5 lines... psychee

sketch3 here we go again..

Smile,
i'm nice cause I aint sending you to the mortician
with no hesitation , id blast your ass with the ak-47
but, you playing grabby ass around with ForGiven and such
and you gon tell me that i ain't a pimp or playa?
i got mc's hopin , head spinnin like a turn table
smokin that sticky green , me and my team burn labels
the beat is hard ,bitches go head and try to pack some
stop talking cause ill cock it , my motherfuckin magnum

ForGiven
03-04-2008, 12:19 PM
ohh shit aiight, sketch you gotta come wit some more. or is passle just bitchin out.

sketch3
03-04-2008, 12:21 PM
im the reason its raining grenades,
on ur parade, ur shit is played,
like mcs claimin they sicker than aids,
im spittin anti bodies to invade,
ur blood stream only got a few more days,
before ur heartbeat fades, stick to the shade,
cuss u afraid, of surcical blades,
remove ur ribcage, befor u decay,
but the cures bittersweet like lemonade,
u might be saved, but its a live of dismay

Passleoinj
03-04-2008, 12:55 PM
yo , you dont wanna give me respect
i'll extract it from ya then,
anti-bodies for invasion?
man was you influenced by k-fed??
continue battlin i dont care , i refuse to lose
cause im all over your hood like child abuse
you aint gonna laugh when ill fuck yo ass up
im gon knock at yo door and make you lick a shot
i'm a pimp and playa , you call that a don , see
u hatin cause u still a virgin , never seen stitch of a pussy
Your will in this situation was great , but mine was better
as you can see , your reign couldnt last forever

thats right

sketch3
03-04-2008, 01:26 PM
ill disolve ur being on subatomic scale,
power leval that comics fail,
to comunicate. restrict u breathing,
like asthma, when i attack ur neck region,
with plasma, powered war heads,
aimed at ur forhead, after ur dead,
its phase two, ill blaze crews, that tryed to save you,
then raise, the crazed, from the grave,
but there inslaved through, my evil rays , ready to betray u,

MonoR
03-04-2008, 01:30 PM
please sketch3 attack my neck region whit some plasma
and whit some rhyme, that dont even rhyme nice try, hahahahhaa

sketch3
03-04-2008, 01:33 PM
breathing and region rhyme
asthma and plasma rhyme

dont even try that bullshit with me mr
'' yo its m o n o r,
with a gun,
fuck sketch 3,
i cant rhyme but i pack a nine,
oh wait im fabricating the thruth''
that shits a bit to good to imitate ur ish

MonoR
03-04-2008, 03:01 PM
you still have a battle can you handle it?

sketch3
03-04-2008, 03:12 PM
ur like that loudmouth skiiny guy hiding behind his big friend,
only ur friend is pass whos just a bit gay

Passleoinj
03-04-2008, 03:27 PM
yo , i can clearly tell youse a rich white kid
see your vocabulary
you aint got a slang , cause all you do is talk shit
this aint the future homie , we aint got plasma gun
you can't espace now , i see the lack of inspiration
im street talking , i dont need futurists remarks
the words escaping my mouth , just like when a gun sparks
you'se a fake ass rapper and you knew it for long
why dont you just shut the fuck up and go back where u belong

VADER
03-04-2008, 05:03 PM
Im still shootin mutha fuckkkuz / middle finga ready to pop
Im z'd out... / rollin up tobacco in a TOP
cuz a rillo ain't shit / ***** aim ***** hit
when I put tha fingertip / in tha barrel let it click
if yo bodybag drop / Imma roll you in a ditch
to tha CREEK in tha VILLE G-K leave em head... less
gravesite fulla reapers there waitin' fa tha next bitch

sketch3
03-04-2008, 05:19 PM
yo , i can clearly tell youse a rich white kid
see your vocabulary
you aint got a slang , cause all you do is talk shit
this aint the future homie , we aint got plasma gun
you can't espace now , i see the lack of inspiration
im street talking , i dont need futurists remarks
the words escaping my mouth , just like when a gun sparks
you'se a fake ass rapper and you knew it for long
why dont you just shut the fuck up and go back where u belong

just cuss im not kickin my localitys vanacular,
dont mean im not planin on attackin ya,
lyrics rip thru ur mental, fuse it in back in two,
rearange everything u knew like a fat blunt,
reality looks similer but with that skunk,
dont hit it to much, cuss ur a wack punk,
bad for ur health like kung fu fighters who combat monks.

Passleoinj
03-04-2008, 06:19 PM
youve watched too many movies
your imagination is playing tricks on ya
having dreams of being like tony montana
you aint shit , you nada
im a stunna , see motherfucka just give up
you aint reppin where u from
is it because u scared , punk?!
you aint no hood ***** , you aint no rapper
id like to tear you apart like i do with weed on the regular
talkin about blunts but i never seen u hit it
do you live what you write ? cause i see lies in your lyrics

HoodRichSucka
03-04-2008, 07:59 PM
sketch3 is WAY better then pass and monor.... and me.

Spike the wine with X with a kind of Hex that'll leave your mind
behind without time to rest.

Sun rays gaze the earth as guns blaze the turf of fatal spleans of young
teenagers.

just some shit...

sketch3
03-04-2008, 08:17 PM
not really, you got sum good shit, i go of course and bullshit to much,, ahh we all suck compared to other folks

pass u wanna diss my vocab in a freestyle thread?
makes me wanna release vile heads, to make police files spread,
on going investingation, if only they possesed the patients,
to addres the nation,
mayb theyed find the body wraped up in a shower curtain,
sitting the for hours spurting,
blood out ur person

HoodRichSucka
03-04-2008, 09:26 PM
forget that i come back and smack ur lungs worse then an asthma attack packed with an antic punch. an acid tap strapped to my back for fun as i collapse and pass out on a stack of guns. haha. the acual fact is that i lack the guts to pack my backpack with gats and such. strapped a sack lunch and nestle crunch that my mom packed me to eat for lunch...

a work in progress haha.

MonoR
03-04-2008, 10:38 PM
well i bomb... i dont spit
i know lots of thing about the rap scene and i can tell you aint shit

sketch3
03-04-2008, 10:40 PM
i never said i was shit

ForGiven
03-05-2008, 07:04 AM
true, true, true

MonoR
03-05-2008, 12:43 PM
i never said i was shit

well im saying you are so fucken suck my dick and stop being a fucken bitch

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 02:05 PM
wow wow wow hoodrichsucka
you don't want that

sketch3
03-05-2008, 02:51 PM
well im saying you are so fucken suck my dick and stop being a fucken bitch

how old are you? because u sound 12 tops

HoodRichSucka
03-05-2008, 04:19 PM
wow wow wow hoodrichsucka
you don't want that

what?? i dont want what? im confused......

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 04:44 PM
do the world a favor , just shut the fuck up and mind your own business kid

sketch3
03-05-2008, 04:46 PM
u and ur sister take the internet waaay to seriouse

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 04:47 PM
what did i just say?

sketch3
03-05-2008, 04:55 PM
it sound like this
'' blah blah blah bitch moan blah wackness let me fuck u monor''

HoodRichSucka
03-05-2008, 05:03 PM
I pop codeine, dont do coke, dont smoke week or do speed.
Seen in the nosebleed seats with my swisher sweets.
All i need is some ecstasy until i cant breathe.
Ur teeth begin to rot after u beathe all that pot,
but it doenst faze the people thats why they dont stop.

off the dome..u can tell..haha its wack.

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 06:13 PM
for how long you gon' test me
im long lasting like durex , you guys cant get rid of me
i cant lie about that , sketch3 , fakest mc
police search yo' ass and you beg for mercy
see , after im done with all this rap bullshit
you gon love me and never get off my dick
you bitches is scared to drink on the street
while im smokin' in public
im a chimnea , i smoke everything
my mom's once told me to clean my room
i wrapped her on my bed sheet and lit it
im the rapper smoker , sick of yall talkin bullshit
youre mad at me cause i fucked all yall hoes
on the floor, up and down like hydraulics
you dont even have a title , and try to make it to the top of the page
yall be gone in 60 seconds just like nicolas cage

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 06:17 PM
its christmas time for real maing.

MonoR
03-05-2008, 06:31 PM
bla bla bla you suck evry1 dick for a penny fucken bitchass mother fucking sketch3

sketch3
03-05-2008, 07:20 PM
for real how old are you?
cuss i know 10 year olds more mature than you, comeon its the freestyle thread if u wanna diss me put in a lil effort, if not just dont bother typing

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 09:34 PM
for how long you gon' test me
im long lasting like durex , you guys cant get rid of me
i cant lie about that , sketch3 , fakest mc
police search yo' ass and you beg for mercy
see , after im done with all this rap bullshit
you gon love me and never get off my dick
you bitches is scared to drink on the street
while im smokin' in public
im a chimnea , i smoke everything
my mom's once told me to clean my room
i wrapped her on my bed sheet and lit it
im the rapper smoker , sick of yall talkin bullshit
youre mad at me cause i fucked all yall hoes
on the floor, up and down like hydraulics
you dont even have a title , and try to make it to the top of the page
yall be gone in 60 seconds just like nicolas cage

LOL, you took that last, "Nicholas Cage" line from Tonedeff's verse on 616 Rewind.

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 10:41 PM
man try another way to be an asshole

i didnt know that

edit : and where the fuck are your lines
you always talking shit but you never do shit
just like in graffiti
stay in your fuckin books thats the only place you'll get respect
nobody ever gonna respect a chinese bitch who knows every fuckin song by itself
fuck tonedeff
fuck you :)

search my ipod you won't find a tonedeff song

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 11:20 PM
Haha, a "chinese bitch"...

You're funny.

I'm not from China, nor am I a bitch.


And, whether I suck at graffiti or not, has nothing to do with the fact that you suck at rapping. I suck, too. The difference is, I know I do, while you have yet to figure it out. Stop being an internet thug, and trying to prove to everyone on bombingscience how hard you are. No one cares about how much you smoke or how many guns you have. Also, I very seldom "talk shit," but when people can't take criticism everything sounds like shit talk. You could have just informed me that you did not take the line from the song, and maybe I would have believed you, but no, you had to protect your bombingscience rep and diss me, huh?

Haha.

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 11:22 PM
yeah that's a good one

or you can suck my dick

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 11:25 PM
Nice one!

Have a cookie.

http://pixiestixkidspix.files.wordpress.com/2007/08/cookie-bite-web.jpg

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 11:27 PM
i prefer that kind

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4208/fortunecookiefz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

motherfucka

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 11:29 PM
Hahahaha...

Funny shit.

See, that was pretty clever. Now, maybe if you could be clever in your rhymes you wouldn't be half as bad.

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 11:36 PM
I'm not english you fuckin einstein
my vocabulary doesn't follow my thoughts
I can't express myself as well as in my home language
now still , stop riding my motherfuckin' dick and go back to china
I use this site as practice nothin' more , it ain't me taking this shit so seriously
it's you , whenever I attack y'all , y'all just go nuts and start mad dissing me
and hating.
Still , I don't give a fuck and I'll be back tomorrow.

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 11:39 PM
Where are you getting the idea that I am Chinese, or have ever been to China? Whoever is telling you this is misinformed. And I haven't typed a "freestyle" in this thread for a while. You do realize that freestyle battle rapping is about disses, therefore you ARE going to get dissed, right? Deal with it. It's only the internet.

Passleoinj
03-05-2008, 11:42 PM
that's the reason i'm here

i'm eating this shit all day , bring the beef

Sumoe
03-05-2008, 11:46 PM
Well, I am done in here. You people take things said over the internet way too seriously. Calm down, Passleoinj, I'll let you practice "freestyling" in here without any further interruption.

Have fun.

sketch3
03-06-2008, 07:54 AM
You people take things said over the internet way too seriously. Calm down, Passleoinj,

Have fun.
a-motherfucking-men

MonoR
03-06-2008, 02:21 PM
you people can kiss the most beautiful part of my ass

MonoR
03-06-2008, 02:24 PM
for real how old are you?
cuss i know 10 year olds more mature than you, comeon its the freestyle thread if u wanna diss me put in a lil effort, if not just dont bother typing

damn im 12 now im 10 now what
im just waiting dawg

btw

SUCK MY PENIIIISSSSSSSSSSS

tarlouse.

JETPACK!!
03-06-2008, 02:24 PM
your face?

edit: dammit you double posting cock wrangler, now my shit looks irrelevant

sketch3
03-06-2008, 07:37 PM
many guys,
tellin plenty lies,
statements then revised,
after homies floating in gutters,
call me pennywise,
sneak up on when disguesed,
hit u like rhowandan genoceide,
the U.N. screamin send suplies

Passleoinj
03-06-2008, 09:10 PM
HAHAHAHA rhowanda LOLL thats the best ive heard
not only youre an asshole , but youre also illeterate

Sumoe
03-06-2008, 09:15 PM
*Illiterate

:rolleyes:

JETPACK!!
03-06-2008, 09:19 PM
yo sumoe hear me out. make me a mod for like 12 seconds so i can ban passeljoi and laugh about it. you can promptly strip my title afterwards

Sumoe
03-06-2008, 09:20 PM
Ha ha. I don't have the ability to do that, sadly.
:(

But if I did...

JETPACK!!
03-06-2008, 09:26 PM
weak!! whatever, it was worth a try. i can always make fun of him the old fashioned way

lol passels uncle touched him while he was an under developed pre-pubescent brat. and to this day he cries himself to sleep about it

Passleoinj
03-06-2008, 09:27 PM
as a graffiti writer , I have the state of mind of a graffiti writer
which means , if you ban me from here , i'll always be back whatever the fuck you do
and theres nothing you can do about it :)

fuck yall

Sumoe
03-06-2008, 09:32 PM
I have no reason to ban you. It would be funny. But, there's really no reason to.

JETPACK!!
03-06-2008, 09:33 PM
keep banning you until you get fed up making new accounts and force you to go to 12oz?

edit: sumoe at least has a soul, if i was mod id be like, yo naked pictures of your mom otherwise your otta here

MonoR
03-06-2008, 09:39 PM
yo sumoe your gay
yo wudup jet pack stay up little fag
hey sketch 3 wudup mr fake mc
and the list goes on

sketch3
03-07-2008, 06:35 AM
many guys,
tellin plenty lies,
statements then revised,
when sumone friendly dies
homies floating in gutters,
call me pennywise,
sneak up on when disguesed,
hit u like rwandan genoceide,
the U.N. screamin send suplies,
fuck snitches i aint defendin spies,
thats retarded like millonares only spending fives,
on hot strippers.big breasts tender thighs,
shits gospal like jesus, kill me but again i rise,
i could plauge you with tenty flies,
or a swarm of locusts in splendid hives,
the one like matrix. fuck spoons im bending knives,
dodgeing bullets ending lives,
bump i added to it,

pass monor u guys keep on thugin
and ur deffinetly making everyone look stupid

by the way its the internet ur just as fake as u claim i am

SBOMBS
03-07-2008, 07:22 AM
It Hurts Like Anal Sex
Throbbing In An Out
No Lubrification
It Makes U Skratch Ur Irritation
Throbbing More Deeply Then Ever
I Made U Squeel Like Like That Man Hungry
Who Loved Ma Big White Cok
Suck It Harder And Harder
Oh Yes U Lil Bitch
The Doctor Said
One Bowl Of Sbombssuppasweetcream Per Day
Or Else Ur Chubby Ass
Wont Walk In May

ForGiven
03-07-2008, 07:59 AM
wow gone for a day and soo much happened, lol, yall leave passle alone, he just needs a hug(or a cock) lol.

Where the fuck did bombs come from, lol

Passleoinj
03-07-2008, 11:14 AM
sbombs came from the anal world
we used to be close
switch and share , you know.

Passleoinj
03-07-2008, 11:30 AM
i'm in trouble stuck in the struggle
i gotta make endz, fullfill the duffle
with dead presidents,
the crack in the hands of the kids ,
who told hem it wasnt good ? nobody did
I got hoes saying I aint real cause ,
i rap about thuggin and smokin buzz?
This is true , this is the life i live aint nothing else
i exit the booth , puttin platinum on the shelf
i grew up hard , surrounded by robberies
half of you havent had as much troubles as i did,
trapped in the system with my weed and my friends
staying up , hoping one day ill leave this place in a Benz

HoodRichSucka
03-07-2008, 04:59 PM
Sumoe vs. Monor in a graffiti battle..
i already beat monor in a handstyle battle so he cant tlk shit about me anymore. let do the same with sumoe cuz we all know who'd win...haha