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swich
01-30-2005, 12:09 AM
go first...
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 01:53 AM
Swich, you ignorant little kid/
bout to get your face fucked/
Ill rap lines around your neck
cutting off your air ducts/
A breathless bitch you will be/
behind the shade of blood you'll see/
:- an army of mutated parasidic killer bees/
Ready to vic and stick with cliques the size of pricks and dicks
inside your sick infested little mind, I proceed to get my fix/.
Ill strike at night when your asleep
under covers
dreaming peacefully/
slit you ear to the throat, rip out your lung, thus you will cease to be/
think you kinging the city, with your pity shitty throws?
only thing that you king, is hairy hard and it grows.
Shit, my supersonic flows, so plutonic that they glow/
smoke you like the chron I blow/
when I rip your mothers clothes
off her bare-back
make her lick-sack
proceed to kick-back
and lay a hard-smack
on her dirty, curly pussy I know thirty early rookies that could surely take you out.
Lyrical skills I got, no doubt.
You posess no game, no brain. no clout.
Newjack! So fuck, get out.
Ill have you foamin out the mouth, before my first verse drops/
proceed to rape and kill your mother
manage to shank a few cops/
You aint Hip Hop, you lick sweaty-cocks
Ill rearrange ya.
Swich, you better switch to female,
obvious your a sexchange-ah.
swich
01-30-2005, 02:36 AM
def u little bitch listne up/
you say u got skills well who gives a fuck/
ill take u out on the first round/
spit verses so hot ull be left on the ground/
pound 4 pound and ounce for ounce/
my rhymes are superior so get up out/
ya think ya can kill me while im sleepin?/
please lil bitch my pits will keep ya from creepin/
i keep heat packed in my pocket for when ever we meat/
but, then again youll proly be too busy beatin ur meat/
u think u got talent? bitch please/
not even in ur dreamz do u posses skillz like these/
i got too many haterz thats how u know that im good/
unlike this wanna-be mutha fucka only wishin he could/
i am lyricly inclined/
got flows so tight theyll blow ur mind/
then ill be nutting all over that chick whos fine/
just like last night in yo mommas ass/
she got so much cum that shell be leaking long past/
next week, next month, i dont really matter/
def get ready cuz ur lips about to get fatter/
believe it, ill be the one who gets madder/
so back the fuck up b4 ur pissin str8 from ur bladder/
are u scared? yeah well u should be/
ill spill so much of ur blood ull think were filmin a hollywood movie/
RTP for life well alwayz be reckin/
now step off bitch cuz my lyrics got u perplexin/
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 03:00 AM
Wack little bitch...someone judge this shit.
before I have to smack swich's clit, so toy, he's got plastic dick.
I advise you get the fuck off the chat rooms
Both lackin taste, suckin up waste like twin vaacums
I got ten bullets, but there are nine in my pocket
The last one's already on it's way to your eye socket
This is a mad fungus fest, i be rippin' lungs from chests
What's next? If y'all don't know, you the first chumps i test
I come out on top like this was one of Ron Jeremy's movies
Cept i'm the ten inch wonder and you the fuckin' groupies
sall i got fo now
swich
01-30-2005, 04:04 PM
someone hurry up and judge who won between me and def already....
_____JEKLROKS_____
01-30-2005, 05:51 PM
DefTru won... Even though he seem like a lil' cocky bitch...
***Because his has better flow and the other cats shit seemed all choppy...
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 06:24 PM
all in good fun <_<
swich
01-30-2005, 06:26 PM
so far were tied....
I'm just kickin' back with a pack of black panthers
Waitin' for my girl to light me up like a Jack-o-lantern
I can smoke weed all day and she'd never complain
Fuck that, she's responsible for half of my brain
I respect her like Cleopatra givin' orders to slaves
But when it comes to bed, i take command like Captain Crusade
I met her in parking lot, loaded up like a gat
Didn't even say two words till i was flat on my back
Love at first sight seems right, there's nothin more to it
Just be sure to be honest and your relationship's shoe-in
So i'm spittin this for my lady, the one bird that i admire
Hopefully years from now she still be lighting my fire
jedi gimp
01-30-2005, 08:08 PM
yah swich took it
peace outside bitches
swich
01-30-2005, 08:29 PM
Originally posted by ASEN@Jan 30 2005, 07:50 PM
I'm just kickin' back with a pack of black panthers
Waitin' for my girl to light me up like a Jack-o-lantern
I can smoke weed all day and she'd never complain
Fuck that, she's responsible for half of my brain
I respect her like Cleopatra givin' orders to slaves
But when it comes to bed, i take command like Captain Crusade
I met her in parking lot, loaded up like a gat
Didn't even say two words till i was flat on my back
Love at first sight seems right, there's nothin more to it
Just be sure to be honest and your relationship's shoe-in
So i'm spittin this for my lady, the one bird that i admire
Hopefully years from now she still be lighting my fire
that ones soundin hot
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 08:44 PM
gimme a break...
swich
01-30-2005, 09:30 PM
so def up 4 round 2?
_____JEKLROKS_____
01-30-2005, 10:41 PM
I rip all y'all line for line,
you wish you can spit a rhyme out as tight as mine,
but in your mind you deny the fact you wack,
I smack you actors fast then blast with my gat,
break into your crib and ass fuck your mom with a bat,
I rip this shit sickly like fuckin cancer patients,
your back is breakin' after every rhyme I'm sayin',
'cause my fuckin style is sacred,
got y'all *****s wishin' you ain't stepin' to the kid whos soul space is vacant,
Fuck it who wanna battle?
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by swich@Jan 30 2005, 09:30 PM
so def up 4 round 2?
Fine, but get some judges who know how to rap and rap ON TIME, not sporadically spittin lines everywhere. Cus you know....wack attracts wack. And that just wont be fair...
_____JEKLROKS_____
01-30-2005, 10:48 PM
What you mean *****? ^^^^^^^
BATTLE- BATTLE- BATTLE ANYBODY.
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 10:54 PM
I mean, spit something that could be put over a beat, and fit nicely. Not just unstructred shit that rhymes every 2 lines...
DefTruBass
01-30-2005, 10:56 PM
Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 30 2005, 05:51 PM
DefTru won... Even though he seem like a lil' cocky bitch...
***Because his has better flow and the other cats shit seemed all choppy...
NO, im not cocky one bit. Its the truth that Swich's verse was wack...shit was all over the place. They call them flows for a reason.
_____JEKLROKS_____
01-30-2005, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by DefTruBass+Jan 30 2005, 10:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DefTruBass @ Jan 30 2005, 10:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 30 2005, 05:51 PM
DefTru won... Even though he seem like a lil' cocky bitch...
***Because his has better flow and the other cats shit seemed all choppy...
NO, im not cocky one bit. Its the truth that Swich's verse was wack...shit was all over the place. They call them flows for a reason. [/b][/quote]
Ohh I meant about you saying IE this dude^^^, refering to me I assume, but you deleted it... Anyway...
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 12:08 AM
ill judge or battle anyone
step up fools
p.s. its hard to say which verse was better on that last battle..... but it seems obvious that DefTruBass has more skill
GeSuS_KRiST
01-31-2005, 12:36 AM
Originally posted by DefTruBass@Jan 30 2005, 10:54 PM
I mean, spit something that could be put over a beat, and fit nicely. Not just unstructred shit that rhymes every 2 lines...
yo if anyone needs beat i have clips u can spit over
or wait... def your that kid who said who im a producer and im probably some wack fuck who use's fruity loops huh?
but forsure i got kare to.. on a battle beat
xylene hug
01-31-2005, 12:44 AM
one time, i rhymed rap with crap :lol:
DefTruBass
01-31-2005, 02:33 AM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST+Jan 31 2005, 12:36 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (GeSuS_KRiST @ Jan 31 2005, 12:36 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DefTruBass@Jan 30 2005, 10:54 PM
I mean, spit something that could be put over a beat, and fit nicely. Not just unstructred shit that rhymes every 2 lines...
yo if anyone needs beat i have clips u can spit over
or wait... def your that kid who said who im a producer and im probably some wack fuck who use's fruity loops huh?
but forsure i got kare to.. on a battle beat [/b][/quote]
bygones be bygones.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 04:41 PM
im ghostly and mostly a mutha fuckin speradic
pumpin *lines* up in my brain like im a fuckin coke adict
edit: battle me bitches!
or else :angry:
or else what?
exactly ;)
jedi gimp
01-31-2005, 04:57 PM
ill battle u u little bitch snitch
oh what now
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 05:34 PM
why battle on the internet when we can do it in the dressing room in like..... an hour and a half
swich
01-31-2005, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by DefTruBass+Jan 30 2005, 10:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DefTruBass @ Jan 30 2005, 10:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 30 2005, 05:51 PM
DefTru won... Even though he seem like a lil' cocky bitch...
***Because his has better flow and the other cats shit seemed all choppy...
NO, im not cocky one bit. Its the truth that Swich's verse was wack...shit was all over the place. They call them flows for a reason. [/b][/quote]
u say that but u cant really judge flow based on text, the way ill be saying it has nice flow to it and plus my shit cant be that wack since just as many ppl that thought u won thought i won as well....also i came up with that shit on the spot as soon as i saw ur flow.....u took like 3 hours to come up with urs....
This is my verdict: Swich took it. Kare hurry up and decide so we can start up some new shit.
DefTruBass
01-31-2005, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by swich+Jan 31 2005, 06:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swich @ Jan 31 2005, 06:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by DefTruBass@Jan 30 2005, 10:56 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 30 2005, 05:51 PM
DefTru won... Even though he seem like a lil' cocky bitch...
***Because his has better flow and the other cats shit seemed all choppy...
NO, im not cocky one bit. Its the truth that Swich's verse was wack...shit was all over the place. They call them flows for a reason.
u say that but u cant really judge flow based on text, the way ill be saying it has nice flow to it and plus my shit cant be that wack since just as many ppl that thought u won thought i won as well....also i came up with that shit on the spot as soon as i saw ur flow.....u took like 3 hours to come up with urs.... [/b][/quote]
thats retarded.
Posting a rap on an Internet graffiti forum was not top priority for me. There was a grace period between writing it, and posting it, You fool. But your right, you cant judge a verse on text alone but the fact is, your rhyme scheme is off and choppy no matter how you twist the lines around a beat. There are lines in there that just dont match. But Ill be more than glad to battle you in audio or live form anyday, depending on where you live, but meeting up with you...thats just a little out of hand.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 08:36 PM
Originally posted by ASEN@Jan 31 2005, 07:12 PM
This is my verdict: Swich took it. Kare hurry up and decide so we can start up some new shit.
i didnt relize i had the deciding vote
im gonna say def then, (but dont get fuckin cocky cause alot of your verse was seriously lacking)
due to reasons id rather not go into detail with because in most likelyness it will only sturr up more shit, since fools really cant take critisizm on this fuckin site
DefTruBass
01-31-2005, 08:53 PM
ok, but im not cocky.
swich
01-31-2005, 08:57 PM
itz still 2 and 2....
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 09:00 PM
then fuck it... u both lose end of story
NEXT!
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:02 PM
DONT TRY TO BATTLE KARE, he is mad nice and after i spit i rhyme he spit one and it burned over me, but it was the last time i ever posted in here...lol
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:03 PM
uhh fo sho yo knock ya ho and kick the doe and PM foe and ya know how it go yo flow like an arrow and boe yo
my hot freestyle
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:05 PM
oh snap oh snap...
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 09:05 PM
DONT TRY TO BATTLE KARE, he is mad nice and after i spit i rhyme he spit one and it burned over me, but it was the last time i ever posted in here...lol
shit man, dont tell fools that shit :(
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:08 PM
yo....chachachachachacha, you know we drop it on the one one the one one wa one one, yeah, an then we drop it on the two two, yeah...
DID IT HAPPEN WHEN I STARTED RAPPIN, OR DID IT HAPPIN HALF WAY THROUGH THE LYRIC, I DONT KNOW BUT IM LIKE GOOD TO GO, HAVE FUN HAVE FUN HAVE FUN, IMA BOUT TO DROP IT ON THE ONE...RAP SHOGUN, DONT ROLL WITH NO ONE, SON....
oh snap oh snap
swich
01-31-2005, 09:11 PM
ok itz tied then...........NEXT!!!!!!
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:11 PM
uhhhhhhhhhhh...
YOU WANNA RAP WITH ME IM A RAP HATER, YOU WANNA RAP AGAINST ME IMA RAP TERMINATOR, SOME CATS ARE GOOD BUT MAN IM MUCH GREATER, POWERD ON TOP JUS LIKE THE NUMERATOR, THE LADIES LOVE TO SEE THE OUTTA STATE FLAVOR, PAINT MYSELF BLACK AND SAY IM FROM JAMMAICA...
im blacker than night bitches!!!
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:14 PM
yall know how ta swing a bat? bet kare will showya how ta rock a top hat, like a black bat, or a strey cat, with no care in the world but to do that, dont pay attention to the rhyme i just spat...*****
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:14 PM
ill battle yo kare cus i write dear and my ass and balls is hairy like a bear but i dont care ill post a pic and you can stair at it lick yo moms clit and nibble on her tit and shit my pants a little bit yo im grimey my cum rag is slimey so i through it away and im smokin hay cus im a hillbilly i get real silly cuz my nuts are tikolish i eat my food on a dish and with a fork n knife get a life yo sleddin in the snow fo sho yo got a PM from flow and ya know yo fo fo in ya face im back like mase DA loose the case cus i got mad bills for a lawyer cus im a baller yo 123 abc bitch you retard cus you twitch yo
lol im not serious at all
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:20 PM
i bet you thought i was in dept, wiht my ghetto ass rhymes, and that shit that i spet, but i was only playin, im just sayin, yo im stayin right here, i dont care if i over do the do, until kare says stop, i keep goin, ***** look out side its fuckin snowin, im blowin, no not a dick what you think i am a hick, im just a hot bachelor now take your damn pic, ima get sick, cuz i got my shirt off, and i need some tylenol or somethin for this bad cough...what!
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:22 PM
no no no no no sayin that word uhhhhhhhhh GOSH you idiot what were you thinkin stop now god
swich
01-31-2005, 09:23 PM
to many *****s wanna step up to the plate/
cuz beating swich is the definition of great/
listne to my rhymes when u feelin down/
theyll pick u up lift u st8 from the ground/
hear the sound of the police cummin/
thats the point when a ***** start runnin/
livin where i live has taught me one thing/
always stay true and follow ur dreamz/
its true we can make it if we stick together/
livn this thug life through the harshest weather/
i stay smart keep my blessins on low/
cuz some muthafuckas only wanna get blown/
theyve only been known/
to kill a ***** when when hes lonely and cold/
i keep a gat in my pocket when i walk down the street/
but goin down the alley is a scream for defeat/
trust urself and be true to ur heart/
cuz us thug life *****s have been here from the start...
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:25 PM
nice
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:27 PM
i put these things at the end of my line/
i dont no why cuz without them im fine/
this damn thread has no pix/
these line things look like dicks/
man this is gay where is kare/
*****s better watch out when he gets here/
swich
01-31-2005, 09:31 PM
^lol
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 09:33 PM
wurd to the tylonal 3's, im pilein all these frees in a stack of lyricism, i peer threw prisms an see light bent, lookin for the right vent to ventilate my anger, i sentuate with slang sir, pump these lines like Einstine on coke, my rhyme time is dope, syllables an signs blind you, cause they shine threw, the densest minds, but shit im pressed for time, gotta meet up for a GREEN sesh, an if your a bit confused.... im goin to smoke some mean SESS.....
p.s. sorry to keep you waiting infer......... was lookin back threw this thread
i wouldent recomend it.. was a huge waste of time
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:37 PM
wanna smoke some rocks with me?
KARE 2 ELABERATE
01-31-2005, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by KARE 2 ELABERATE@Jan 31 2005, 09:33 PM
wurd to the tylonal 3's, im pilein all these frees in a stack of lyricism, i peer threw prisms an see light bent, lookin for the right vent to ventilate my anger, i sentuate with slang sir, pump these lines like Einstine on coke, my rhyme time is dope, syllables an signs blind you, cause they shine threw, the densest minds, but shit im pressed for time, gotta meet up for a GREEN sesh, an if your a bit confused.... im goin to smoke some mean SESS.....
p.s. sorry to keep you waiting infer......... was lookin back threw this thread
i wouldent recomend it.. was a huge waste of time
fuck shit bein at the bottom of the page
and pain i dont smoke rocks, i split em with my lyricizm
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:39 PM
yeah kare, you are the awsome power in this thread...
swich
01-31-2005, 09:40 PM
i think infer is obsessed with u kare.....
pane in prov
01-31-2005, 09:44 PM
he wants to bun
Don't make eye conatct. Kare, a personal attack towards me would be appreciated.
infer one
01-31-2005, 09:55 PM
yeah well why dont you bounce fool...no kare i dont wanna bun i wanna fuck! no actually im playing, im just saying, we are not enguaging, in anything sexual, i just wanna get next to you.
swich
01-31-2005, 09:57 PM
^ok...... :huh:
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-01-2005, 12:00 AM
Battle- battle- battle anybody... Infers a dick rider leave him alone...
Originally posted by infer one@Jan 31 2005, 09:55 PM
yeah well why dont you bounce fool...no kare i dont wanna bun i wanna fuck! no actually im playing, im just saying, we are not enguaging, in anything sexual, i just wanna get next to you.
Why dont you bounce instead of staying here and licking Kare's balls... go make a thread about him or something. Kid.
jedi gimp
02-01-2005, 12:03 PM
gimp's gone soft
still the question remands, and things have been said and left undone
the world and true love has fallen before it had even begun
i had plans for u girl, and u asked me once if i would have time for u
trust me when i say i would have had u sticking to me like glue
i was gonna ask u out sunday afternoon
but now i'm by myself travaling on the dark side of the moon
and soon u will relise that u did wrong, while your dancing upon a table in a thong
to the lyrics of this song
so, so long, its over, i'll move over
so that u can have what u want, and leave this one on one thing we had incomplete
i would have been the nicest guy u would ever meet, to sweet, would never cheat
i'm in misbelief that something could end just like that, within one day
everything went away, and once again i got nothing to say
well i guess i missed my chance, for us to dance, all up in a trance
with the first glance of your smile u could have had me, but i acked like a pussy
i guess i wanted more time, waiting till all was sublime,
but now i am forced to write this rhyme
a heartless creature is a loveless creature, and a loveless creature is a beast
dont froget about the boy from the east
well peace, and i wish u good love
hoping that heaven will rain apone u from above
JeD! GiMP
Ftp
HAM
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by ASEN+Feb 1 2005, 07:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Feb 1 2005, 07:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-infer one@Jan 31 2005, 09:55 PM
yeah well why dont you bounce fool...no kare i dont wanna bun i wanna fuck! no actually im playing, im just saying, we are not enguaging, in anything sexual, i just wanna get next to you.
Why dont you bounce instead of staying here and licking Kare's balls... go make a thread about him or something. Kid. [/b][/quote]
hey hey, everyone needs there balls licked once in a while
and u all know i AM the awsome power of this thread....... so begin lickin :rolleyes:
infer one
02-01-2005, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by ASEN+Feb 1 2005, 07:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Feb 1 2005, 07:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-infer one@Jan 31 2005, 09:55 PM
yeah well why dont you bounce fool...no kare i dont wanna bun i wanna fuck! no actually im playing, im just saying, we are not enguaging, in anything sexual, i just wanna get next to you.
Why dont you bounce instead of staying here and licking Kare's balls... go make a thread about him or something. Kid. [/b][/quote]
i think your just jealouse cuz you dont know how to ride a dick...KID...wtf?, who says kid, are you 12?
Cherubic Meekus
02-01-2005, 04:40 PM
wanna smoke some rocks with me?
Is it exemplary that its with you...........
Got some Bluetonium oxide A.K.A Angle paste
Havnt smocked rocks in ages.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 05:12 PM
infer seems to have homoerotic tendencys..... like.... jelous about rideing dicks well???
thats fucked dude
edit:i appreciate the fact that u like my rhymes.... jus settle down on that
Originally posted by infer one+Feb 1 2005, 04:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (infer one @ Feb 1 2005, 04:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ASEN@Feb 1 2005, 07:35 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-infer one@Jan 31 2005, 09:55 PM
yeah well why dont you bounce fool...no kare i dont wanna bun i wanna fuck! no actually im playing, im just saying, we are not enguaging, in anything sexual, i just wanna get next to you.
Why dont you bounce instead of staying here and licking Kare's balls... go make a thread about him or something. Kid.
i think your just jealouse cuz you dont know how to ride a dick...KID...wtf?, who says kid, are you 12? [/b][/quote]
Yeah, i'm jealous cuz i don't know how to ride a dick. I'm twelve, too.
Are you
http://img154.exs.cx/img154/9225/mjindex1tt.th.jpg (http://img154.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img154&image=mjindex1tt.jpg)
?
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 05:43 PM
k asen, since u online ima hit u wit that battle rap
edit: my dad booted me off the comp for a bit..... im startin it now
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 06:55 PM
yo ase-N, how'd u like your face bent? ill lock you in the basement, an chain yah up, disect your brain an stuff,
its not "sane" bluff, its in-sane, an in this game ive been tamed, ive been trained, to shoot you within range on MY terrain,
which i know like the back of my hand, that im smackin you with, so you can accually rap?! is that a fact or a myth??
hey yo your lackin the gift, of verbal mastery, i accually blast emcees, like the herb thats passed to me
its obserd to see, all these wack cats that's lackin, back track your actions and rap back wit passion,
or ill snap back "Elastic!", so PHAT im pluggin arteries, but man im done with this shit, spittin art with keys.................
yah u know thats nothin personal.... but for the fools that dont know ASEN is ill yo
swich
02-01-2005, 07:34 PM
^ that was really dope i was feelin it the whole way through
pane in prov
02-01-2005, 08:15 PM
uhh yeah today i took a shit
ripped my asshole a little bit
ate a chickin patty
staired at some girls fatty
and i took the bus
my mom dont know i cuss
im usin fast reply
why
why
why
why
cant you see im fuckin around
typin this is more fun then the slides at the playground
wow im bored
but kare thats some good stuff
Deal Faker One
02-01-2005, 08:28 PM
not to sound like a dick, but this shit isnt freestyling, you could take all the time in the world to write these lyrics....
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 08:33 PM
point being what?
that the name of the topic is wrong?.... well if so take note that it says we are freestyle rape-ing ;)
swich
02-01-2005, 09:13 PM
lol....rape-ing....
kare! u me battle now!!!!!
hey kare dont stare your flows so weak it seems it was written by a care bear/
ud think i care since ur so damb hopless but i dont i host the most since/
2003 when i dropped my first freestyle and now i even drop keystyles/
and meanwhile ur sitten back lackin, trashbag stackin while im mackin/
on ur mother nu-uh not ur brother cuz im not like that, dont try to step up cuz im known to fight back/
u know u like that, so dont deny it ,yeah i supplied it im talkin bout how i filled this forum with the sickest flows. illest throws just ask kare he knows/
i only try to do what i can feelin japan not afghanastan but i plan to take u out, trust me this'll be my final bout, and i shout when i speak sit back kare and except defeat/
cuz thats the best u could hope for u think ur dope but im dope more/
do not try to understand where my talent comes from unlike ur spam... fillin up these forums day and night been havin more skillz since the day i rode my very first bike...
GeSuS_KRiST
02-01-2005, 09:39 PM
yea deal u have no point...... i mean people can do the same shit in real liek they can spit writens, recycle rhymes, and all kinda of other shit while freestyling
uh yo wheres my snare im kare
2 elaberate
bickah bickah
Originally posted by KARE 2 ELABERATE@Feb 1 2005, 06:55 PM
yo ase-N, how'd u like your face bent? ill lock you in the basement, an chain yah up, disect your brain an stuff,
its not "sane" bluff, its in-sane, an in this game ive been tamed, ive been trained, to shoot you within range on MY terrain,
which i know like the back of my hand, that im smackin you with, so you can accually rap?! is that a fact or a myth??
hey yo your lackin the gift, of verbal mastery, i accually blast emcees, like the herb thats passed to me
its obserd to see, all these wack cats that's lackin, back track your actions and rap back wit passion,
or ill snap back "Elastic!", so PHAT im pluggin arteries, but man im done with shit, spittin art with keys.................
yah u know thats nothin personal.... but for the fools that dont know ASEN is ill yo
thats ill right there... let me hit back once i get some sleep.
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-01-2005, 10:49 PM
Is it common in your towns to find bags with a smashed chickens in it? I find then along the streets...
infer one
02-01-2005, 11:01 PM
dopeness from kare, swich, and of coarse pane, but yall ready for this...
dun dun da dun dun dun dun, dun da dun dun dun dun dun, yo, omg im gonna stop now, fucking fast reply...lmh
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 11:07 PM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST@Feb 1 2005, 09:39 PM
yea deal u have no point...... i mean people can do the same shit in real liek they can spit writens, recycle rhymes, and all kinda of other shit while freestyling
uh yo wheres my snare im kare
2 elaberate
bickah bickah
you tryin to say all i do is bicker??
jk jk :lol: .............. unless that is what your tryin to say :angry:
infer one
02-01-2005, 11:11 PM
kare lets battle...
some people say i ride yourdick, i do but your not my first pick, i would pick a black guy, cuz their dicks are higher then the sky, and they are always looking for pie, it doesnt mater if its plain or rie, shit yo im gonna die, cuz i havnt gotten dick in a week, dont read this and think im a freak, because yall know im only playin, its just somethin im sayin, but anyways back to kare, im not gonna live in fear, you cant be that good, you got milk? i preffer hood...uh!
Deal Faker One
02-01-2005, 11:11 PM
geses-yeah, but then that is still not freestyling.......dick
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 11:18 PM
Originally posted by infer one@Feb 1 2005, 11:11 PM
kare lets battle...
some people say i ride yourdick, i do but your not my first pick, i would pick a black guy, cuz their dicks are higher then the sky, and they are always looking for pie, it doesnt mater if its plain or rie, shit yo im gonna die, cuz i havnt gotten dick in a week, dont read this and think im a freak, because yall know im only playin, its just somethin im sayin, but anyways back to kare, im not gonna live in fear, you cant be that good, you got milk? i preffer hood...uh!
uh yah... theres no way im gonna spit against that dirty shit.... damn man what the fuck is on your mind?? :blink:
infer one
02-01-2005, 11:21 PM
seriouse...
uh, cant fuck with me without gettin fucked back, lyrical rhymes is something i dont lack, so what my graff skills aint as good as kay, A to the mothefuckin R to the mother fuckin S to the E, and theres a one, here to stay. I dont give a fuck about kare fuck you, arseone and stephen king write the dis kare part 2. kare may be good but man im much greater i power on the top just like the numerator, this is just a key board not microphone, so ima stop typing to rest your dome....
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-01-2005, 11:22 PM
Originally posted by infer one@Feb 1 2005, 11:11 PM
kare lets battle...
some people say i ride yourdick, i do but your not my first pick, i would pick a black guy, cuz their dicks are higher then the sky, and they are always looking for pie, it doesnt mater if its plain or rie, shit yo im gonna die, cuz i havnt gotten dick in a week, dont read this and think im a freak, because yall know im only playin, its just somethin im sayin, but anyways back to kare, im not gonna live in fear, you cant be that good, you got milk? i preffer hood...uh!
... (Speaks for itself)
GeSuS_KRiST
02-01-2005, 11:26 PM
hi look at me my names infer one..
i enjoy masturbating to male child porn just for fun
OH u got served
infer one
02-01-2005, 11:28 PM
my name is gesus krist with a k,
psy is gay,
thats a little off topic now back to g,
he used to look like a terrorist did any one evr see?...
and hes is a bitch!!!!...you got served, oh its on now
*edit...child porn is great your missing out
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-01-2005, 11:29 PM
Did you ever notice that the black Power Ranger was black and the yellow Power Ranger was... yellow?
GeSuS_KRiST
02-01-2005, 11:30 PM
ok meet me at the oc center
our best five gest u and your friend "thur"
ok im stopinf postin in this thread i dont wanna fuck it up for the real emcees SOME ONE BUY MY BEATS
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-01-2005, 11:32 PM
^wurd
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-01-2005, 11:36 PM
Quit giving them out for free then...
GeSuS_KRiST
02-02-2005, 12:27 AM
LOL the fuck who can fit a hole track on the clips i post? let alone a verse.. most of the ones i post are pretty much unrapable
Originally posted by infer one@Feb 1 2005, 11:11 PM
kare lets battle...
some people say i ride yourdick, i do but your not my first pick, i would pick a black guy, cuz their dicks are higher then the sky, and they are always looking for pie, it doesnt mater if its plain or rie, shit yo im gonna die, cuz i havnt gotten dick in a week, dont read this and think im a freak, because yall know im only playin, its just somethin im sayin, but anyways back to kare, im not gonna live in fear, you cant be that good, you got milk? i preffer hood...uh!
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
:unsure:
jokone
02-02-2005, 07:52 AM
yo every week end i want to go and spend
all this fuckin cash on gettin slashed
on beers
till my eyes are full of tears,
yo i need ID
cuz im only seventeen
and those muther fuckers wont serve me,
yo i eat blo, it fucks up my heinus flo, so i watch the remarkobo wren & stimpy sho
yo watch this lingwistics, this shit is cannibalistic, sadistic muther fuckers can eat my shit
yo frogmire i punchu in the face and fall in the quagmire,
yea this is how it goes cuz when i see my foes--
i frown muther fuckers sure to go down.
fuck you faggits, yes i hate gay people, they aint fuckin equal
Roger moore is ok it aint his fuckin fault that hes gay, yo james bond is the man he can get any bitch that you can't , yo im the muther fuckin G you fat little fucker aint got shite on me.
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-03-2005, 01:42 AM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST@Feb 2 2005, 12:27 AM
LOL the fuck who can fit a hole track on the clips i post? let alone a verse.. most of the ones i post are pretty much unrapable
IF I wanted to I could always burn the track to a cd and sample it.
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-03-2005, 01:44 AM
Not that I'm doing that and slowing them down to drop my demo or anything... :ph34r:
GeSuS_KRiST
02-03-2005, 01:57 AM
whatever man im just sayin shit aint long enough for a good verse
jedi gimp
02-03-2005, 11:34 AM
calling out that punk kare 2, where that little bitch be at, Blayt blAYt
jedi gimp
02-03-2005, 02:40 PM
this is not the battle rap, just some other shit i wrote
dont talk to me cause i have entered a trance,
spiked my mind to develope and enhance,
my brain, ascertain the flame
to entertain, and proclaim my same old domain
this fame is rushing through your head
trying to over come the spread,
searching through these treads, to see what was said
and by whom,
fuck u, u, faggot get back in your mothers womb
go ahead write your shitty lacking, uneducated attacking,
ball whacking, wack rappin, ill send your ass packing
into the abyss
these bitches cant diss
and there so called punch lines seem not to exist
either that or i seem to miss
everyline and everyrhyme
that is spit everytime, damn i'm fine
and if i was to die, the force would bring me back with artificial respiration,
clear manifestation, no need for navigation
cause i'm on a straight route to my destination
peace im out
Ham
FTp
Random target practice... sorry Kare
Jedi gimp, you nothin but a (red-eyed pimp)<-- kare wrote that shit first
i said i'd split, but first you gotta check my spit
Target locked in on your scrotum, the verbal vasectomy
But thats besides the point, cats castrated so they can't get to me
Sayin' bitches can't diss, they pissed short cuz i chopped dicks
Azn Emcee ain't existin, rectum locked on a pair of chopsticks
Kare 2 Elaborate scares children on higher levels
He penetrates minds and spooks psyche with hired devils
But i see past your shit like i kept starin at it
Coke fanatics and charged static, you a heroin addict
Spit shit in bursts, dilated speech like your mouth hurts
Next thing you know, you be preaching ASEN when your house burnt
Cuz i'm ill like children dyin, for lack of medication
A health care system that helps millions, but can't save a nation
What the fuck is wrong when companies control the medias?
Your narrow vision of the world is conditioned and tedious
Believe what the president says, all the shit they feeding us
Watch TV and fuck bitches, drink beer and believe in US
I'd load a Semi Automatic, give it to Bush and watch the sweat drip
Make him retaliate against his own army, killing soldiers he slept with
So fuck all of you, take your respect and shoot up with it
And AZN, im still waitin for that gang of chinese bitches
It might be funny for me, and you might break a world record
Biggest number of dumb faggots on a doorstep, all with short peckers
yeah.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-03-2005, 10:17 PM
haha, dope shit the both of yah's
but asen, u jacked my red eyed pimp line!
haha, also jedi gimp, the battles on
SPIT YO SHIT CHALLENGER
you serious?? sorry man, i didn't cop that shit. i gotta admit it sounded familiar.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-03-2005, 10:39 PM
"Me an jedi gimp we tha red eyed pimps, blazin all the hydro tho it really fucks wit my flow,
i fly low, spill with the ability to wreck yah, agility mobility to swiftly blow this sector,
apart quick, a fight wit me's like swingin in the darkness, do u really wanna start shit? im hartless but regardless,
im an untamed beast flowin to unplayed beatz.... its all inside my head now and your girls the one who said "WOW!"
"Kare 2, its like the rhythem is your magic, your elegent rhyme sceem is really QUITE orgasmic"(womens voice)
yah i can hack it impact it, perform a verbal backflip-dont you back lip ur stacked shit, i weld my rhymes like im a blacksmith
and thats it, now its time for jedi gimp to rip shit, my mans got the flows an he keeps the rhymes simplistic "
no worrys
infer one
02-03-2005, 10:41 PM
oh shit
Nice, i enjoyed that one earlier.
Gotta admit, the first thing that pops in your head when you think Jedi Gimp is Red Eyed Pimp
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-03-2005, 10:45 PM
yah it is
infer one
02-03-2005, 10:48 PM
there should be an organized battle...KARE vs. ASEN...i can organize it
fuckgraffFLIX
02-03-2005, 10:48 PM
where's my snare ?
infer one
02-03-2005, 10:52 PM
if people wanna get in this free style battle they gotta say "down" or "im in" then i will count your name and tere will be battles at a certain time and shit goes like that
KARE 2 ELABERATE
02-03-2005, 10:55 PM
yah fuck organization..... it goes down when 2 people go "YO!, ima fuck you up with words!"
infer one
02-03-2005, 10:57 PM
well it was gonna go down after the first prson said ok...but fuck you kare i will shit on your floor
seckzoner
02-04-2005, 04:07 AM
i'll give you a verbal beating, something you never heard before, some thing you just dont wanna hear, like finding out your moms a whore.
blahblah, fuck this, im lazy. i'll kill in a REAL freestyle battle. fuck this pre-written garbage.
GeSuS_KRiST
02-04-2005, 04:57 AM
Originally posted by fuckgraffFLIX@Feb 3 2005, 10:48 PM
where's my snare ?
damn.... nice way to bite my line.. you lucky there no fish hook in there girl
fuckgraffFLIX
02-04-2005, 01:17 PM
"YO!, ima fuck you up with words!"
where's my snare ? It's in My hair
just did my nails , now iam getting some dread'z made with slime of snails
suck my balls while iam signing in the dancehalls
screw your mama in your impala
got a new civic but there only one HIC
iam not a girl, not a chick, but a 350 pound man who eat's a lot of spam
forgot the little key on the box, with a screw driver ill knock off your sox
ill bite your line coz its so fine, wine and dine with my girl prime time
get a hook on the lip and then mouthwash a moth in the mouth a mamouth and slip
and rip some exploited patches on my bag ill tag an old hag on her rag
my sister just walked in the room with a big spliff in full bloom
just spat on my hat and sat on a rat
rap is so sad iam gonna suicide my dad
peace to rap
its so fucking sucks :)
swich
02-04-2005, 10:41 PM
we were raised as children brought up in a world of sin/
open up my door and my homeboys commin in/
livin in a life where were identified as outlaws/
just some crooked ass *****s on the streets with them big balls/
when will we finally get to see that maybe we are worth more than they say/
sure its true i tagg on walls but its the only way im gettin paid/
not by the money but by respect from others/
cuz growin up we never got respect from our mothers/
i look now at all my brothers, they all in the pin now hiden underneath the covers/
too many people are stareotipical it seems.../
when will i finally wake up from this dreary dream/
i lean over and try to comfort my woman....but it seems now that all her hopes and dreamz are ruined.../
too much pain im feelin in my lonely life....look up to the heavens lord help me see the light.../
maybe one day ill finally be free...but untill then ill be livin life as a G.....
crakcrak
02-04-2005, 11:07 PM
yo yo im crakcrak
im really opak
i eat chips on my ship
d.repper
02-05-2005, 12:29 AM
fuk.. i feel like watching movie
hashy
02-05-2005, 01:38 AM
there once was a man named enis..
StoopKid
02-07-2005, 04:59 PM
ninja kick you hard/you are a fat lard/shootyourself you are dumb/anal is fun/ cum cum cum cum cumm/ whatever diccka clit/ face hit hit hit/ baseball mit/ freestyle rappin/ batman cappin/ up his ass/ bitch runs fast/wikkachikka/fish face blast/rasta OG 05 nikkabrudda
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-08-2005, 01:45 AM
Coming out with the twin glocks this not, a joke motherfucker so get shot,
I don't be playing with this battle shit, got more dope rhymes than your brain can even manage bitch,
back the fuck up quick, and never get within 5 feet, I be the the ***** leavin yo ass in IVs,
So gohead try me, I do my shit nightly, at home with your wifey and I creep up nicely,
bust the 9mm fast but only to scare you ass cause its night, I got a knife to do the deed after I grab the cash,
damage your sluts ass, cut her throat and down her back,
this will teach the bitch for ever screaming bloody murder,
I think the neighbor heard her so I cap you and break,
ran out fucking herb so I'm back to paint.
Jeffhole
02-08-2005, 01:53 AM
Originally posted by Jeffhole@Nov 7 2004, 01:08 AM
I shouldn't post this, it's a disgrace to my own kind.
I had to kill some little kids, on riddelin. You know why.
You're so fly, and the words you say faulsly bring hope.
Not to get your hope's high, to crash down because your wing's broke.
Why you dumb twats compare yourselves to kid's who have flow
is a mystery, like why you take cumshot's in your asshole.
You'd actually sell out at a busstop and blast blow.
That's blasphemy, be glad I rap for free and no cashflow.
Althought, I oughtta charge your ass, no card just cash, or a can of coke.
For fucksake's, you suck face while bumping Barry manilow,
and playing with butterflies, otherwise you love cock.
I typed it out, I didn't stutter, guy. I said what I had to, and whatnot.
I wrote this shit about 2 months ago.
It's still relevant.
rent519
02-08-2005, 08:01 AM
rookies dunno how to flo wit the pros
n pussies dont got the hold on the chrome
u spit back the wack shit
then u get cracked wit the bat bitch
cuz when shit goes down u dont know how to hack it
admit it quick when i spit ur unable to predict
cuz in the five one nine
i leave the crib without post written rhymes
no pre written shit ill be gettin rich n quick
u be a chicken shit sittin wit a bitch lickin dick
whoever said u was straight really wasnt
cuz u masturbate at home wit ur cousins
jedi gimp
02-13-2005, 06:19 PM
next time try rhyming
i had nothing to do so i checked out this thread
if hip hop was your food, y'all would be dead
die from starvation spitting useless rhymes without any motivation
i couldnt give less then a fuck bout what you think
cause ninety five percent of you key stylers fuckin stink
but i do dig the few that actually rep
bring that shit to whoa
but just watch your fuckin step
spit endless rhymes without taking a breather
lyrically damaged you and left your mom with a fever
rent519
02-14-2005, 01:18 PM
jedi were you talkin to me???cuz if u were i think i did rhyme okay
jedi gimp
02-14-2005, 01:26 PM
yah i was talking to u, half your rhymes dont fit right and like i said they dont rhyme, yah some of them do, but rhyming chrome wih pros, wasnt with cousins
but what ever do your know thing
scarface
02-14-2005, 01:45 PM
everybodys in a rush 2 try 2 get the throne,
i jus get on the track an try 2 set the tone,
i aint tryin 2 use nobody as a steppin stone,
but dont compare me i better off just left alone,
and i aint even tryin 2 go there wiv record sales,
im jus tryna keep it humble an respect myself,
say wat up keep steppin an rep myself,
keep my nose clean stay away from weapons,jail,
im livin reckless but if u check my belt u may see somethin else i use to protect myself,
the vest'll stop a rueger an deflect the shells,
but i dont even carry guns no-more i dont got to,
got undercover cops that'll leaglly pop u..................................
rent519
02-14-2005, 01:47 PM
who cares its not audio
rent519
02-14-2005, 01:48 PM
who cares its not audio
rent519
02-14-2005, 01:54 PM
sorry about the double post
Logik
02-14-2005, 04:29 PM
*beatboxes*
welcome to the addiction du jour
(i got somethin that will make the veins stand up)
put the blood in the cup
for the blood that was shed
i let it run to my head
And as my vision turns blurry
ill say in some kinda flurry
HEYMANYOUKNOWWHEREICANGETSOMEMORE OF THIS
cause this right here is the shit
Originally posted by scarface@Feb 14 2005, 01:45 PM
everybodys in a rush 2 try 2 get the throne,
i jus get on the track an try 2 set the tone,
i aint tryin 2 use nobody as a steppin stone,
but dont compare me i better off just left alone,
and i aint even tryin 2 go there wiv record sales,
im jus tryna keep it humble an respect myself,
say wat up keep steppin an rep myself,
keep my nose clean stay away from weapons,jail,
im livin reckless but if u check my belt u may see somethin else i use to protect myself,
the vest'll stop a rueger an deflect the shells,
but i dont even carry guns no-more i dont got to,
got undercover cops that'll leaglly pop u..................................
somebody likes eminem :rolleyes:
WISKone
02-14-2005, 09:15 PM
im the realest one alive
*****s who dont like be the first to die
scratch your name off my list
WISKone
02-14-2005, 09:17 PM
im the first to drop bombs like those crazy islams//
osama bin laden n that ***** saddam//
only difference between us is our nationalties//
cuz i terrorize tracks n cause fatalities//
now i understand why all these *****z mad at me//
cuz when climbin to the top haters come automatically//
im jus waitin for the one wit enough audacity //
to pick up a gun n start some heat wit me//
comin up moma always said//
"put urself in their shoes son n try to understand"//
so i put on the kicks of my everyday critics //
n saw the sins of hatred that they all commited//
u want a piece of me? jus come n get it//
n catch five n the side of ur nuggets fitted//
go head n stomp all u want in ya air force ones//
but when i pull out these guns u better use em to run, son
WISKone
02-14-2005, 09:29 PM
lets get a battle cracken
Originally posted by Whoa+Feb 14 2005, 08:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Whoa @ Feb 14 2005, 08:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-scarface@Feb 14 2005, 01:45 PM
everybodys in a rush 2 try 2 get the throne,
i jus get on the track an try 2 set the tone,
i aint tryin 2 use nobody as a steppin stone,
but dont compare me i better off just left alone,
and i aint even tryin 2 go there wiv record sales,
im jus tryna keep it humble an respect myself,
say wat up keep steppin an rep myself,
keep my nose clean stay away from weapons,jail,
im livin reckless but if u check my belt u may see somethin else i use to protect myself,
the vest'll stop a rueger an deflect the shells,
but i dont even carry guns no-more i dont got to,
got undercover cops that'll leaglly pop u..................................
somebody likes eminem :rolleyes: [/b][/quote]
Loves him a little? Or a lot?
Originally posted by ASEN+Feb 14 2005, 10:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Feb 14 2005, 10:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Whoa@Feb 14 2005, 08:13 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-scarface@Feb 14 2005, 01:45 PM
everybodys in a rush 2 try 2 get the throne,
i jus get on the track an try 2 set the tone,
i aint tryin 2 use nobody as a steppin stone,
but dont compare me i better off just left alone,
and i aint even tryin 2 go there wiv record sales,
im jus tryna keep it humble an respect myself,
say wat up keep steppin an rep myself,
keep my nose clean stay away from weapons,jail,
im livin reckless but if u check my belt u may see somethin else i use to protect myself,
the vest'll stop a rueger an deflect the shells,
but i dont even carry guns no-more i dont got to,
got undercover cops that'll leaglly pop u..................................
somebody likes eminem :rolleyes:
Loves him a little? Or a lot? [/b][/quote]
alot :lol:
rent519
02-14-2005, 11:53 PM
yo wisk .....i'd be down
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-15-2005, 12:18 AM
I think I smoke too much weed I be thinking of some raw lines during the day at school and shit but unless I write them down I lose them.
_____JEKLROKS_____
02-15-2005, 12:19 AM
Someone needs to battle me.
scarface
02-15-2005, 08:07 AM
hahahaha u guys eva listened 2 bang em smurf
scarface
02-15-2005, 08:10 AM
dont diss eminem he tha bomb :wub: haha onli jkin
Originally posted by scarface@Feb 15 2005, 08:10 AM
dont diss eminem he tha bomb :wub: haha onli jkin
Eminem is a dope emcee true
50cent on the other hand
wack as fuck
my nickle minus 3pennies
WISKone
02-15-2005, 06:03 PM
yo i smoke every day and thar just boost my spitten skills
Originally posted by WISKone@Feb 15 2005, 06:03 PM
yo i smoke every day and thar just boost my spitten skills
you have no skills
you are a KEYstyler
if you live in mtl we shall meet up and i ll show you what true freestylin is ;)
till then, dont front on your internet ''skills''
you can easily rhyme on the net
when its time to spit in a sypher, you cant stop and stare at your keyboard and wonder what rhymes with THE or GANG
rent519
02-17-2005, 02:44 AM
^ its not a bad sustitute
Originally posted by rent519@Feb 17 2005, 02:44 AM
^ its not a bad sustitute
the fuck are your talking bout?
a good substitute
freestyling is all about 1 on 1 or sypher's
not dissin someone over the net
anyone can copy/paste somebody else's rhymes and call it their own
ANYONE can fuckin keystyle, not everyone can FREEstyle
True. But the people (you know who you are) who drop lines in this thread know its about keystyling and not true freestyling skills. It takes more than word structure to be illmatic.
Now that this has been talked about 90 times, lets sit back and wait for KARE2 to diss that new guy.
rent519
02-18-2005, 02:05 AM
fuck it....
yo kare2 i dare you
to type sumthin insteada write sumthin
but you cant you weak n fake a bitch ass mistake
fuck your post written rhymes you ride more dick than dimes
you get one more time to shine so type a couple lines
n all i gotta say is...no remorse for you when i torture you throughout the course of my fourth orchestra i got mystical mic traditions i dont fist fight wit bitches i watch as you get ten tight stitches n get men to write witcha
Originally posted by rent519@Feb 18 2005, 02:05 AM
fuck it....
yo kare2 i dare you
to type sumthin insteada write sumthin
but you cant you weak n fake a bitch ass mistake
fuck your post written rhymes you ride more dick than dimes
you get one more time to shine so type a couple lines
n all i gotta say is...no remorse for you when i torture you throughout the course of my fourth orchestra i got mystical mic traditions i dont fist fight wit bitches i watch as you get ten tight stitches n get men to write witcha
:lol:
perfect example of a keystyler
at least try to make Kare wanna battle and not laugh at you
you are what the spanish call el terrible :lol:
Originally posted by rent519@Feb 18 2005, 02:05 AM
fuck your post written rhymes you ride more dick than dimes
That sounded like a stab at Dimebag Darrel. I hope it isn't.
And whoa, cleveland says spaniards, not spanish.
estratega_one
02-18-2005, 10:43 AM
Originally posted by Whoa+Feb 15 2005, 07:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Whoa @ Feb 15 2005, 07:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-WISKone@Feb 15 2005, 06:03 PM
yo i smoke every day and thar just boost my spitten skills
you have no skills
you are a KEYstyler
if you live in mtl we shall meet up and i ll show you what true freestylin is ;)
till then, dont front on your internet ''skills''
you can easily rhyme on the net
when its time to spit in a sypher, you cant stop and stare at your keyboard and wonder what rhymes with THE or GANG [/b][/quote]
lol keystyler hahahaha you are right raping on the net is like to make graffiti on graffiti generator
rent519
02-18-2005, 03:13 PM
i never even knew who the hell dimebag darrel was so yea it wasnt....
dimes as in perfect tens...hot chicks...ya kno
rent519
02-18-2005, 03:16 PM
i dont cARe what you think whoa...u dunno me n i sure as hell dunno you ..but i know one thing.. can flow....maybe cant make shit make sense on the computer but ya...i know what im doin in sum one on ones
Originally posted by ASEN+Feb 18 2005, 10:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Feb 18 2005, 10:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-rent519@Feb 18 2005, 02:05 AM
fuck your post written rhymes you ride more dick than dimes
That sounded like a stab at Dimebag Darrel. I hope it isn't.
And whoa, cleveland says spaniards, not spanish. [/b][/quote]
dammit i knew i fucked it up
:lol:
and rent519 whtevr
2night if i have time to waste i will battle you
rent519
02-18-2005, 06:14 PM
i dont want to ..because u misinterpret this net shit for lack of skills yet dont know me....so how the hell are you gon' do sumtin
swich
02-19-2005, 12:51 AM
Originally posted by Whoa@Feb 18 2005, 07:06 AM
you are what the spanish call el terrible :lol:
u got that from family guy...........
rent519
02-19-2005, 04:55 AM
^family guy is cool
i once had a dog
his name was jack
i straped him to my toy railway track
shaved all the hair of his back.
injected him with smack
and beat him to death coz that dog was just wack.
WISKone
02-21-2005, 12:34 AM
I BITE OFF ANY ONE AND I CAN FREESTYLE THIS IS THE FIRST TIME PUT THE SHIT ON IT ON THE NET STOP TALKIN SHIT OVER THE NET WHOA ANY WAY YOU CAN BELIEVE WHAT YOU WANT
ksan-isreal
02-21-2005, 10:10 AM
new member first post mutha fuckas now
gettin ready for my crew to rock your home town
flow so tight you know rivers wish they was me
come at me with a threat and ill get you with a slug g
why i call you g? you aint down with shit
and im so white i aughta call you a fuckin nitwit
straight outta delaware i got my homies rollin on fat dubs
we step and wreck and tear up you little fake thugs
we be rockin collared shirts under neath of a sweater
keep our kicks crazy fresh you know we make girlies wetter
if you can ever look around and find a crew better
im not even gonna follow up cause it cant happen, never.
hey im a newbie from delaware, i love to freestyle so i figure id throw one down. i timed myself right there, that took 1 minute and 3.4 seconds to write.
indigo
02-21-2005, 10:36 AM
freestyle rapeing rules
i love like just u know sneaking up behind a bitch and start freestyling while i got my dick up her butt
and shes all freestyle rapeing ruless
haha
Freestyle raping is dating for the next generation
No one gets left out like teaching asians sex education
Step one is find the right girl, tight curls with ripe pearls
Country-style daughter, over 18 or else they might hurl
Introductory lines are classic, but not needed in this case
Just make sure the ball hits you, then walk over to first base
You've spotted a victim, considered your options and picked em'
Now its time to aboard unexplored land like a pilgrim
Approach from behind, cuz if they see your face it's prison time
Don't drop the soap, you get poked by the guy that was killin' Dime
So you're thrustin', tryin' to keep both your nuts from bustin'
Then the girl says ''I got herpes, scumbag'', and you're like ''fuck this''
Keep that pace haste, don't stop runnin' till you in a safe place
Then call 9-1-1, you raped a girl with STD and got your face maced
Happy endings are shit, i end a spit with a Fuck you fags and Die
ASEN ain't here, i'm his replacement movin' the mouse to Add Reply
T-Reks
02-21-2005, 06:22 PM
Step up to battle n ill slaughter you like cattle.
infer one
02-21-2005, 10:40 PM
listen closely, to how infer one's focus be
Who wrote me, a diamond-gold ball rosary
Had supposedly, tarnished his name and status
Draw the fastest, force him go to the mattress
Imagine this, in my technique's
This swervin authentic version M.D. Mount. to Vernon
Touchin anybody like that lime in Bacardi
To whippin all the watercrafts down in Yardie
Half-steppin, hardly make it son, perfectly clear
My yacht master pay your rent for the year
The buck stops here, ain't a damn thing funny
jealous about how i gettin this easy money
thanks dear;)
_____JEKLROKS_____
03-26-2005, 04:41 AM
Originally posted by infer one@Feb 21 2005, 10:40 PM
listen closely, to how infer one's focus be
Who wrote me, a diamond-gold ball rosary
Had supposedly, tarnished his name and status
Draw the fastest, force him go to the mattress
Imagine this, in my technique's
This swervin authentic version M.D. Mount. to Vernon
Touchin anybody like that lime in Bacardi
To whippin all the watercrafts down in Yardie
Half-steppin, hardly make it son, perfectly clear
My yacht master pay your rent for the year
The buck stops here, ain't a damn thing funny
jealous about how i gettin this easy money
thanks dear;)
You wack. I battle anyone other than you. And Bump. Bump. Bump.
jape-the-nape
03-26-2005, 07:06 AM
boom boom chigy chigy boom boom chuu :lol:
FUCK yeah. Where was this thread? who the FUCK wants to battle?
Originally posted by swich+Feb 19 2005, 12:51 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (swich @ Feb 19 2005, 12:51 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Whoa@Feb 18 2005, 07:06 AM
you are what the spanish call el terrible :lol:
u got that from family guy........... [/b][/quote]
yah, im all about family guy
SoldAsFreedom
03-26-2005, 01:39 PM
I spit hot fire
prone
03-26-2005, 04:43 PM
yo im prone
i be in my own zone
catch me jacking some chrome
fuck the o-zone
i spray till the paints gone
my balls are to strong
thats why i be in the court room hit'n a bong
and make'n a bitch go walking in the street with a thong.
tonicone
03-26-2005, 07:36 PM
***** talking like he the shit...sounding wak as fuck
he like them bitches i date...wit fake tits and tummy tucks..
writing out his rhymes like that white boy from malibu...
trying to fuckking hard to a rhyme to dis u
only to get his game up he a faggot just like u
i ain't down with typing my freestyles
makes me feel like a liah
who ever made this...creative..its creative..but i doubt alot of ppl are down to type out their freestyles...and how would u know its genuine....o well..stay up_tonic one
MitNGEK
03-27-2005, 12:03 PM
thats pretty crazy
Idealeyez
03-27-2005, 08:32 PM
this is some reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllly old shit i wrote(i dont rap anymore) has a sorta canibus feel here goes
check it....
DialatedSpecies3: Artificial senile in biles constructing tiles synthesized from my synical Penicle/
DialatedSpecies3: My macromolecules are pulled by mules that fuel inside your regional temple Subliminal/
DialatedSpecies3: Phospholipids inside your carbon structures get ruptured from the paturbed impaturbable/
DialatedSpecies3: My chemical properties get props and complexes from their alterego perplexities, and complexities/
DialatedSpecies3: From my arteries and Extremeities my enemies get crushed into their Perspicacity/
taxesuck: 5th dimensions of time warping from the top of the Himaliyans to ancient rituals with the Mayans//
DialatedSpecies3: Percapita I'm a scooba diva with felonious cacophonious euphonious homeostasis/
taxesuck: to pharmaceutical forces producing manufactured medicine resulting in blind poets illuminating bright thoughts like Thomas Edison//
taxesuck: verbal architects constructing non-penetrable coliseums guarded by statues of prophets against empires in hip-hop museums//
taxesuck: IQ~of^a~prophet with brilliant thoughts splendid ~ creating false illusions like rainbows bending ~ cerebral thoughts with lower intelligence have trouble comprehending//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm sending messages collapsing your spinal disc, my esoteric flow will have you speakin' wit a Lipsc/
DialatedSpecies3: multiplication of my multipilcity in my vicinity so you can suck my DIDICKS/
DialatedSpecies3: Trogodytic patterns that surround your map urns that burn through Saturn with a Passion/
DialatedSpecies3: have you forgot about the telekinetic assassin, that seperates your soul from yor body then starts Blastin'/
taxesuck: moral demons extracting semen from homosapien hosts ~ gathering network of behavioural patterns like meteorological observation posts on ocean coasts//
DialatedSpecies3: no Question marks on your hearts circle your circulatory, and drop on you faster then Ten stories with my Story/
DialatedSpecies3: Fideism give you mal' to your props in prisms, that has seriel killers, and rapies claimin' I'm too Gorry/
DialatedSpecies3: Stomach is gasrous my compendioum is capendious without a single Thesis/
DialatedSpecies3: Fecundate @#%$ in your brain, and stomb in your teeth into your hypothalamus/
DialatedSpecies3: anyone still wantin' beef can crawl in my intestines in an form that gives Dichroism to anyone in my SPectra/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll detach your brain from your spinal cord so fast, through your Chest Protecta/
taxesuck: twisting your brain stem like Swedish ponytails ~ abundant amounts of petroleum oil resulting in beachfronts filled with bony-whales//
taxesuck: the Nazca Plains are just stains and archaeological remains of extraterrestrial planes that have been preserved in desert climates where it never rains//
taxesuck: fanatics fascinated by crop circles ~ devastated like mothers that are infertile ~ in need of a miracle ~ genetically modified turning you heterocercal//
taxesuck: IQ's corrupt like a part time detective robbing your residence ~ showing up an hour later at the scene of the crime and tampering with the evidence//
DialatedSpecies: My epidermal is raised to an altitude tha decreases the verisimilitude of you surviving my aptitude/
taxesuck: rare species dilated and false evolutions created when hostile states under siege are dictated ~ it's all related ~ read in between the lines and let your stereotypical perspective be vacated//
DialatedSpecies3: Infer my blurred visions of intertwistin' oscillation of my vocal tones of Vibration/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll repopulate an dpollinate a nation wit implanted undertones from my own NASA Station/
DialatedSpecies3: Iconoclast, so I suggest you don't clash unless you want your legacy to die in a gash for cash, in on a skelatol strusture Cast/
DialatedSpecies3: skeletor wit a voltron action figure in significent intelligent receptors make your ideas dissolve in a Flask/
DialatedSpecies3: Tectoic plates is what I shake when my lake spawns the dawn of don with pure sulfur, and Phosphorate/
DialatedSpecies3: On a scale from one to a 100, callin' yourself over 500 you'll still get Ate/
taxesuck: attempted assassinations in the Vatican have resulted in cloned Popes and false mannequins//same with presidents and half the congress ~ snap every bone in your body starting with the longest//
taxesuck: advanced technological inventions feature transmissions triptronic ~ hotboxed automobiles fuming with chronic ~ beat boxing so well you'd think my voice box was electronic//
DialatedSpecies3: oN hydroic my hydrophilic philippic tears @#%$ like intestinal gases,bouncin' phonics off your Subsonics/
taxesuck: landscapes tainted with fertilizers that claim their organic but profit greedy souls mesmerize-us//
DialatedSpecies3: And even If I went around callin' myself NAGASAKI you'd still be scared to Bomb It/
DialatedSpecies3: I lust for the thrust of my metamorphic dust, taht's my deoxyribo is fertilizin within all of Us/
taxesuck: yo Fat Boy don't make me put you in the figure 4 and test your elasticity ~ I stand tall even though it seems I'm like Niagara Falls they way I create electricity//
taxesuck: encrypted cyphers top secret like the Freemasons pledge ~ or the true purpose of Stone Hedge growing on cypress sedge trying to destroy-it with a pitchers wedge//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm makin' no Cents like a flatchested prostitute, now what neophyte wanna convert to MYCISM and have wisdom to Shoot/
DialatedSpecies3: Spit a NEOLOGISM to lodge in your mirror image,and call yourself my foot because you'll always get my boot/
DialatedSpecies3: I'm not even touching the wordplay, I'm just shining off your skin givin' you more cancer then Ultraviolet Rays/
DialatedSpecies3: My stomachs in enormous amounts of pain, your barracks are gettin' haunted by spirits in lyrics that castrates wit Spray/
DialatedSpecies3: I am adhesion,I'm piecin' a leasin' of pieces missin' from your Telathon Rapathon/
DialatedSpecies3: and nobody is lookin' out for you, like an obese swimsuit Marathon/
taxesuck: Atlantis is under a projecting ridge on a submerged mountain under cold water somewhere in the Pacific//
taxesuck: IQ leaves details specific ~ your ego looking horrific ~ your claims are unscientific ~ my gestures can be honorific ~ my philosophy is prolific//
taxesuck: @#%$ the modern English language when y'all can't understand this// I might as well translate all the above onto a Phaistos disk or Egyptian hieroglyphic//and therefore the rhetorical lesson that im simply tryin to teach you// is that teachings of Sir Edward Lawerence and Steven Jay Gould are factual//...this is English 101
NOW PUT THAT IN YOU PIPE AND SMOKE IT
SoldAsFreedom
03-27-2005, 08:37 PM
Freestyle Raping bitches Rape bitch Rape..
Mr. Roberto
03-27-2005, 08:37 PM
Fine, only because I'm bored:
Cat is fat
Cat dry humps my old baseball bat
Cat grows fat from humping my bat
Cat no lose wait cause now he's flat
under my car tire...
Logik
03-27-2005, 08:54 PM
take a ride on my lincoln highway bitch
theres no speed limit so merge quick
im the drug thats gonna fulfill your itch
tie the belt around the arm
touch the fire to the spoon/
and just wait for the feeling to consume
OH MY GOD
to pharmaceutical forces producing manufactured medicine resulting in blind poets illuminating bright thoughts like Thomas Edison//
thats hot.
Idealeyez
03-27-2005, 09:32 PM
Why Thank YOU
Why were there different screen names before verses?
jesus
03-27-2005, 10:40 PM
i am white
and i just might
show up at your house tonight
ill rape your daughter,
and maybe an otter
but still the point is
im not cut out for tha music biz
ill shake my dick
all the *****s will run away quick
cause they though they saw a snake
followed by an earthquake
cause i farted yeah thats right bitch
some gas hit my anus and now it starts to itch
so ill put some cream on it, to make it feel better
the cream is the color of this sweater
oh my god now everything i see is a haze,
i think i ate too much mayonnaise
yeah alright thats it
im out of rhymes
and it seems im also out of times
yeah it is time for me
to rest my head and sleep "oh gee!"
i will see all you *****z next time,
until then go suck a lime... or something
Crack Killz
03-27-2005, 10:41 PM
You remind me of DEM lol and you have the same name as him....if jesus is your real name.
MitNGEK
03-27-2005, 11:19 PM
i wish i could rap
or frees tyle
MASH ONE
03-27-2005, 11:51 PM
i'll blast your ass
really fast
also gonna rob your stash
and smoke that green grass
wont stop till you become ash
i run faster than dash
they call me big mash
like mash patotoes
i fucked my cali hoe
i have a bad toe
you dont know
how i roll
you just got told
i'm made out of gold
you dont know how to fold
your so fuckin old
you even growin mold
damn it so cold
this shit is ill
i roll with 20 foos that are ready to kill
weres my meal
dont make this a big deal
just telling you how i feel
i'm so fuckin drunk
fuck all that crunk
that shit is junk
and you a big punk
i know how to dunk
reall funk funk
bitchesssssssssssssssssss
mexican till i die fuckersssssssssssssss
_____JEKLROKS_____
03-28-2005, 01:54 AM
Originally posted by Idealeyez@Mar 27 2005, 08:32 PM
this is some reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllly old shit i wrote(i dont rap anymore) has a sorta canibus feel here goes
check it....
DialatedSpecies3: Artificial senile in biles constructing tiles synthesized from my synical Penicle/
DialatedSpecies3: My macromolecules are pulled by mules that fuel inside your regional temple Subliminal/
DialatedSpecies3: Phospholipids inside your carbon structures get ruptured from the paturbed impaturbable/
DialatedSpecies3: My chemical properties get props and complexes from their alterego perplexities, and complexities/
DialatedSpecies3: From my arteries and Extremeities my enemies get crushed into their Perspicacity/
taxesuck: 5th dimensions of time warping from the top of the Himaliyans to ancient rituals with the Mayans//
DialatedSpecies3: Percapita I'm a scooba diva with felonious cacophonious euphonious homeostasis/
taxesuck: to pharmaceutical forces producing manufactured medicine resulting in blind poets illuminating bright thoughts like Thomas Edison//
taxesuck: verbal architects constructing non-penetrable coliseums guarded by statues of prophets against empires in hip-hop museums//
taxesuck: IQ~of^a~prophet with brilliant thoughts splendid ~ creating false illusions like rainbows bending ~ cerebral thoughts with lower intelligence have trouble comprehending//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm sending messages collapsing your spinal disc, my esoteric flow will have you speakin' wit a Lipsc/
DialatedSpecies3: multiplication of my multipilcity in my vicinity so you can suck my DIDICKS/
DialatedSpecies3: Trogodytic patterns that surround your map urns that burn through Saturn with a Passion/
DialatedSpecies3: have you forgot about the telekinetic assassin, that seperates your soul from yor body then starts Blastin'/
taxesuck: moral demons extracting semen from homosapien hosts ~ gathering network of behavioural patterns like meteorological observation posts on ocean coasts//
DialatedSpecies3: no Question marks on your hearts circle your circulatory, and drop on you faster then Ten stories with my Story/
DialatedSpecies3: Fideism give you mal' to your props in prisms, that has seriel killers, and rapies claimin' I'm too Gorry/
DialatedSpecies3: Stomach is gasrous my compendioum is capendious without a single Thesis/
DialatedSpecies3: Fecundate @#%$ in your brain, and stomb in your teeth into your hypothalamus/
DialatedSpecies3: anyone still wantin' beef can crawl in my intestines in an form that gives Dichroism to anyone in my SPectra/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll detach your brain from your spinal cord so fast, through your Chest Protecta/
taxesuck: twisting your brain stem like Swedish ponytails ~ abundant amounts of petroleum oil resulting in beachfronts filled with bony-whales//
taxesuck: the Nazca Plains are just stains and archaeological remains of extraterrestrial planes that have been preserved in desert climates where it never rains//
taxesuck: fanatics fascinated by crop circles ~ devastated like mothers that are infertile ~ in need of a miracle ~ genetically modified turning you heterocercal//
taxesuck: IQ's corrupt like a part time detective robbing your residence ~ showing up an hour later at the scene of the crime and tampering with the evidence//
DialatedSpecies: My epidermal is raised to an altitude tha decreases the verisimilitude of you surviving my aptitude/
taxesuck: rare species dilated and false evolutions created when hostile states under siege are dictated ~ it's all related ~ read in between the lines and let your stereotypical perspective be vacated//
DialatedSpecies3: Infer my blurred visions of intertwistin' oscillation of my vocal tones of Vibration/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll repopulate an dpollinate a nation wit implanted undertones from my own NASA Station/
DialatedSpecies3: Iconoclast, so I suggest you don't clash unless you want your legacy to die in a gash for cash, in on a skelatol strusture Cast/
DialatedSpecies3: skeletor wit a voltron action figure in significent intelligent receptors make your ideas dissolve in a Flask/
DialatedSpecies3: Tectoic plates is what I shake when my lake spawns the dawn of don with pure sulfur, and Phosphorate/
DialatedSpecies3: On a scale from one to a 100, callin' yourself over 500 you'll still get Ate/
taxesuck: attempted assassinations in the Vatican have resulted in cloned Popes and false mannequins//same with presidents and half the congress ~ snap every bone in your body starting with the longest//
taxesuck: advanced technological inventions feature transmissions triptronic ~ hotboxed automobiles fuming with chronic ~ beat boxing so well you'd think my voice box was electronic//
DialatedSpecies3: oN hydroic my hydrophilic philippic tears @#%$ like intestinal gases,bouncin' phonics off your Subsonics/
taxesuck: landscapes tainted with fertilizers that claim their organic but profit greedy souls mesmerize-us//
DialatedSpecies3: And even If I went around callin' myself NAGASAKI you'd still be scared to Bomb It/
DialatedSpecies3: I lust for the thrust of my metamorphic dust, taht's my deoxyribo is fertilizin within all of Us/
taxesuck: yo Fat Boy don't make me put you in the figure 4 and test your elasticity ~ I stand tall even though it seems I'm like Niagara Falls they way I create electricity//
taxesuck: encrypted cyphers top secret like the Freemasons pledge ~ or the true purpose of Stone Hedge growing on cypress sedge trying to destroy-it with a pitchers wedge//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm makin' no Cents like a flatchested prostitute, now what neophyte wanna convert to MYCISM and have wisdom to Shoot/
DialatedSpecies3: Spit a NEOLOGISM to lodge in your mirror image,and call yourself my foot because you'll always get my boot/
DialatedSpecies3: I'm not even touching the wordplay, I'm just shining off your skin givin' you more cancer then Ultraviolet Rays/
DialatedSpecies3: My stomachs in enormous amounts of pain, your barracks are gettin' haunted by spirits in lyrics that castrates wit Spray/
DialatedSpecies3: I am adhesion,I'm piecin' a leasin' of pieces missin' from your Telathon Rapathon/
DialatedSpecies3: and nobody is lookin' out for you, like an obese swimsuit Marathon/
taxesuck: Atlantis is under a projecting ridge on a submerged mountain under cold water somewhere in the Pacific//
taxesuck: IQ leaves details specific ~ your ego looking horrific ~ your claims are unscientific ~ my gestures can be honorific ~ my philosophy is prolific//
taxesuck: @#%$ the modern English language when y'all can't understand this// I might as well translate all the above onto a Phaistos disk or Egyptian hieroglyphic//and therefore the rhetorical lesson that im simply tryin to teach you// is that teachings of Sir Edward Lawerence and Steven Jay Gould are factual//...this is English 101
NOW PUT THAT IN YOU PIPE AND SMOKE IT
Man homie you wack.
Its the, impetuous pessimist, testin' bitches everyday,
best to be steppin', my Smith & Wesson came to blaze,
sort out the weak, all the big words, you see through,
probabbly thought you looked smart *****, but I peeped you,
saying random words that rhymes dosen't make your bullshit lethal,
hyped up by your people, who coulden't stand see you,
sad, all y'all motherfuckers lame fags,
nerd rap must be hard when you don't know,
a single word that was used in a bar in your flow,
its harder to show some *****s the truth than fucking monkeys,
just quit the fuckin' frontin' like you really know somthin',
cause when your dome gets busted, that shit won't do you nothin',
take your punk ass back to your biology class,
so you can copy sombody and get lucky and pass,
if your rhymes were weed, it'd probabbly look nice and pretty,
but be bunk with no good high, and taste all shitty,
diden't know what he was doin', excess is bad too,
bunk ass *****s is expecting to blast who?
jape-the-nape
03-28-2005, 09:50 AM
as i sit my ass on the pc,while staring at the tv
i gaze at my paint wondering what my next victims gona be
if its a wall,a bustop,a wheelie bin,or that asian dude from school called flynn
coz if he starts on me again il tag his rice box FLUI MANg CHING CHING!
:lol: ?!?!?! what the fuck am i talkin about???im lost
Idealeyez
03-28-2005, 11:09 AM
shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit, im wack, whatever man.
oh and to answer your question asen
it was old aim(i dont have aim anymore) names. i just use it for the fuck of it but its an old ass rap i wrote around 2001.
_____JEKLROKS_____
03-29-2005, 04:06 AM
You wack as hell hoe. If your still showing off with shitty raps from 4 years ago its obvious you've made no real progress, and suck dick.
SOMEONE SPIT AT ME.
_____JEKLROKS_____
03-31-2005, 05:37 PM
Bump Bump Bump.
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-03-2005, 05:51 PM
yo this thread has gone to the shitter
im writin a lil somethin somethin
ma nan is 63, her name be Shealer
she's always on tha fone to her mova fukin dealer.
she's always wearin Fila
n she still gettin jiggy in tha back of her boyfriends 3-wheeler!
Shyd...
04-03-2005, 11:12 PM
In your mind your going crazy
or maybe its just becasue your fuckin lazy
get a job and get off your computer
Get on the streets and take the commuter
go downtown and apply for a job
your looking like a fuckin slob
go get a haircut and buy a suit
i am going to go and loot
apply for a job and make some money
Hopefully you will do this and not be a dummy
you can buy some markers and spray paint
Do a sweet piece and people will faint
see you all i am out!
Yeah I suck.
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-05-2005, 02:56 AM
Clapping at you weak *****s like you up on stage,
make you die slow like yo ass contracted aids,
I can rap for days, go like the Energizer bunny,
spit like a giser funny how all of y'all *****s running,
scald you, like your drunk mom making spegetti,
my words cut you up, my tounge is like a machate,
*****s ain't ready, make you into human confetti
stop the shit talking, y'all hoes don't know me for nothin',
pop this kid sqwaking bout my flows saying I'm frontin',
fuck this rhyming shit everyone on this is wack or lazy anyway, just like me...
Peace to all the producers, emcees, dj's, and beatboxers < I hate that damn word though...
***** IM THE TRUTH AT THIS SHIT CALL ME THE POPE BOW DOWN BITCH STAY WITH THE HEAT 4 *****S TO GET POP TO THEY GO TO SLEEP FUCK A BEAT I GO TO COURT LIKE Brian Nichols AND KILL THE JUDGE SLAPE A REPORTER AND HIT HIM WITH A SLUG CAUSE IM A KILLA THUG............
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rik JamEs
04-06-2005, 03:45 PM
yo i have a big penis
my name isnt renis
the sky looks kinda lenis
im gonna bone your mom
cuz she is the bomb
i wana go by a lomb..........a
yo yo yo uuuuuuuuu shit son
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-06-2005, 09:29 PM
Ohh shit son, killed that shit!
This thread now officially sucks... more.
me me me me me stand the fuck up and listen to me hardest artist out since 2pac and b...i....g i got the magic spit i got the magic stick thats why i be fuckin your bitches homie yea i no u like that one
Dr. Coffee
04-08-2005, 11:37 AM
Aso Vs LJ
some old shit i found on my comp
Aso
I run a monopoly, ryhmings just my philosophy, i'm quick the punch, thats why these kids can't stop me, psyilogicly your simply illerterate, come on now spit back at this, my advice? you need some better battle tactics
LJ
u think u can throw yo shit at me. but its not very hard to see. how ill whip u. flip u. shit ill even kiss u. good bye. ill confuse yo ass so bad all u will be able to say is Y? u comin in here bustin yo shit like u’s all that but fo real its dustin in hur gon clean up yo act u cant rap, hustle, not even a lil bit, ya aint got game like the me the tru pimp
Aso
man, MC's like you are a dime a dozen, can't step to cats like me without stumblin' your crumblin, under the weight of my ryme game, I'm gonna smash you hard like a lyrical freight train, so refrain, from trying to call me out, without a doubt, I make the ladies scream and shout, its like "Asoe! Asoe!" your shit fly, but you nkow I'll smile and nod because I'm that kinda guy
LJ
u better switch up yo flow. cuz it aint gon go. im the king of this game. ya im the runnin this rap shit. i cant stop its insane. i jus keep comin wit all these hits. so shut the fuck uup n leave it alone. im in the zone. us a bitch. female dog.. heres a bone. thats all u get cuz i got this mic. im flyin so high above u im outta sight. this shits vintage, cant compare to my pimpage, no one nowhereeveryone beware cuz ljs here. dont resent me cuz im young good lookin.im so sorry u cant be everywhere we me n al go to. thurs always a cloud of smoke, as we pass thru...smell that shit. premo. dont u know. its how we roll. lj's spliffs. bluntz all in fun. cant stop now we jus begun.. pack that shit. twist it up. spark that blunt..criccity crack ill smack u in the face u disgrace, u lucky i dont make u kiss my shoe, ill kick u in the face, wit my rhymes, cuz yours aint tight. they loose
so u better go get that noose
cuz u bout to lose. ill put u in a lyrical choke hold youll black out, pass out, crap out. into yo pant. ya shit yo pants. now lets see u dance. maybe spit a lil more. as u pick yo shit up off the floor
Aso
so you think your on another level, higher than me? well I'll rise to your level, and I'll make you see, I'm contending, bitch your only pretending, forgetting, that your superiors here now, beats are set, I'll slap you with a lyrical ten count, get it? you nobody comparin to my shit, I know my lines are and yours are just wack, thats why I'm makin these heads turn till I hear somethin snap
Alnine
04-08-2005, 03:30 PM
battle track vrs. a friend.
Kid try to come -CONTROLLED- but yuh rhymes arent -SOLD- ill just let these "POLES-TUCK-HER", -BULLETS- fly through this -FUCKA-, J leave you lookin fresh like a piece of paper out of a "HOLE-PUNCHER" // and i can cop a -KAZI-, semi -AUTI-, or just a brick -FONZI- let yuh "FLESH-AN-SPINE-TUCK", J will leave cuts on yuh -NECK-, betta -YET-, betta -YUP-, like a "FRESH-LINE-UP" // and -ALREADY- know -FREDDY- that is was over when you saw -TAPERED- "PAPER-N-PENCIL", n yuh tracks are played only -TEN-SOLD-, leave led -CIRCLES- on you like a "HANDFUL-OF-STENCILS" // and the -BRAKES- will -BREAK- yuh -FACE-, -DISCUSS- to "BUMP-US", a -TSUNAMI- from a -TOMMY- will lead yuh body n all diffrent ways like a "COMPASS" // and just cuz u hatin they wont -BAN-MAN- you cant "STAND-JMC", talkin bout heat you cant -STAN- not even a -BURNER-CAN- "TAN-ME", shot me a "CLAN-SEE", squint yuh eyes like you a "J-PANZEE" // -WATCH- Jmc cop yuh -WATCH-, only -RETARDS- get -ROCKS- to "GRANNYS", n why im -WATCHIN- time fly -STATION- the "GRAMMYS", take time to fly back and try 2 get -HARD-AGAIN- in "MIAMI" //
sound like will smith
fuckin key stylers
SMTXgraffin
04-08-2005, 03:37 PM
ay _____JEKLROKS_____, im calling you out partner ;)
Alnine
04-08-2005, 03:43 PM
whoa.. dont hate
SMTXgraffin
04-08-2005, 04:17 PM
shadder leg bones through my head phones/
bs got more pricks than red rose/
jeklroks gets off to bed posts/
i spit multi's and let go/
at school takin a test ima fail though/
cuz i be rippin this cat thorough go back to the boroughs with yuh bed post....
i dunno, i'll keystyle better shit later ....
Originally posted by Alnine@Apr 8 2005, 02:43 PM
whoa.. dont hate
that made me think bout that guy from Malibu's Most Wanted :lol:
Alchohlics_Anonymous
04-08-2005, 04:28 PM
Originally posted by fame@Apr 8 2005, 10:00 AM
me me me me me stand the fuck up and listen to me hardest artist out since 2pac and b...i....g i got the magic spit i got the magic stick thats why i be fuckin your bitches homie yea i no u like that one
didnt you make this fuckin piece of shit thread?!
and now your ruining it....niiiiice..... <_<
Havoc411
04-08-2005, 04:33 PM
yo i got a gat
ill stick in yor fucking back
talk shit you get slapped
come back and get capped
now i know why im not a rapper. idk im bored and felt like making up a shitty rhyme
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-11-2005, 05:26 AM
Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@Apr 8 2005, 03:17 PM
shadder leg bones through my head phones/
bs got more pricks than red rose/
jeklroks gets off to bed posts/
i spit multi's and let go/
at school takin a test ima fail though/
cuz i be rippin this cat thorough go back to the boroughs with yuh bed post....
i dunno, i'll keystyle better shit later ....
Your rhymes suck ***** don't even mention my name,
I'mmuch more sicker leaving dents in your frame,
your multi's repulse me, hopeing for hope these,
lame emcees try to step up knowing their pulse freeze,
you coming at a seasoned champ so be strapped,
try to run, first thing I'm shooting is your knee cap,
take your mom, give her hubs, mention love, have her sucking on my nuts she high and gets to keep her $20 bucks,
you weak cats need to think more and talk less,
when I see you on the street with children I get thoughtless,
let it go, belss your chest, hit your neice too,
drop your set and cruise when I'm done leaving you see through.
...
Idealeyez
04-11-2005, 01:33 PM
Check It.....
Unilateral pinions hold primordial immortals from minions entering
intergalactic portals light purple ionic auroras revolve around orbiting oracles who foretold historical metaphors of hyena skinned coracles entering rivers with floral based harbors haunted by oxymoron’s of pernicious morals.
Omnipotent tyrants gnomonically preach propaganda south of Canadas
spectacular cannibis inspires acumen hence avoiding morbid apoplexies otherwise deemed scandalous with the candles lit spirits manifest into vandalous analysts
metrical measurements of a rainbows candelas
Verbal mechanic synthesizing quantum chromo dynamics beneath the Atlantic
40 degrees latitude north of the Titanic surrounded by the echoes of impetuous panic
Can’t stand it how my alter ego is buried in granite and the pressure forces him
to undergo anthropomorphism- Warmachine*
*Warmachine is an alias i use kinda like
Method Man uses Johnny Blaze
SMTXgraffin
04-11-2005, 02:09 PM
Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____+Apr 11 2005, 04:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (_____JEKLROKS_____ @ Apr 11 2005, 04:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SMTXgraffin@Apr 8 2005, 03:17 PM
shadder leg bones through my head phones/
bs got more pricks than red rose/
jeklroks gets off to bed posts/
i spit multi's and let go/
at school takin a test ima fail though/
cuz i be rippin this cat thorough go back to the boroughs with yuh bed post....
i dunno, i'll keystyle better shit later ....
Your rhymes suck ***** don't even mention my name,
I'mmuch more sicker leaving dents in your frame,
your multi's repulse me, hopeing for hope these,
lame emcees try to step up knowing their pulse freeze,
you coming at a seasoned champ so be strapped,
try to run, first thing I'm shooting is your knee cap,
take your mom, give her hubs, mention love, have her sucking on my nuts she high and gets to keep her $20 bucks,
you weak cats need to think more and talk less,
when I see you on the street with children I get thoughtless,
let it go, belss your chest, hit your neice too,
drop your set and cruise when I'm done leaving you see through.
... [/b][/quote]
at school again, but ima kick somethin.
man ya'll cats cant comprehend this, before the battle tell your friend to learn murder forensics/
like DNA samples, jeklroks gets dismantled and trampled, a-town will put this cat back on the mantle, your face is where i'll put out my camel, your gettin ripped by a fifteen year old vandal, and let it be known i lay down murda scandals/ a-town spits hot, so i melt wackness like candles, ill be back faggot that was just a sample.....
and man.... i murder rhymes one word at a time, you couldnt rip me with you and yuh bois flows combined/ and you talk bout heat like i aint gon shoot, keep on peicin yuh rhymes out of alphabet soup......
and yo i verbally rip mics, u copped that frame line from TI, before you type you recite, u prolly do it all the time snortin lines from TI, cuz u aint half as nice when im rockin the mic. :rolleyes:
Idealeyez that shit was dope man, ;) props
Idealeyez
04-11-2005, 02:46 PM
thanks famm...i had post another one but i dont know what happen to it jerloks said it was wack...tell me what you think....
check it....
DialatedSpecies3: Artificial senile in biles constructing tiles synthesized from my synical Penicle/
DialatedSpecies3: My macromolecules are pulled by mules that fuel inside your regional temple Subliminal/
DialatedSpecies3: Phospholipids inside your carbon structures get ruptured from the paturbed impaturbable/
DialatedSpecies3: My chemical properties get props and complexes from their alterego perplexities, and complexities/
DialatedSpecies3: From my arteries and Extremeities my enemies get crushed into their Perspicacity/
taxesuck: 5th dimensions of time warping from the top of the Himaliyans to ancient rituals with the Mayans//
DialatedSpecies3: Percapita I'm a scooba diva with felonious cacophonious euphonious homeostasis/
taxesuck: to pharmaceutical forces producing manufactured medicine resulting in blind poets illuminating bright thoughts like Thomas Edison//
taxesuck: verbal architects constructing non-penetrable coliseums guarded by statues of prophets against empires in hip-hop museums//
taxesuck: IQ~of^a~prophet with brilliant thoughts splendid ~ creating false illusions like rainbows bending ~ cerebral thoughts with lower intelligence have trouble comprehending//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm sending messages collapsing your spinal disc, my esoteric flow will have you speakin' wit a Lipsc/
DialatedSpecies3: multiplication of my multipilcity in my vicinity so you can suck my DIDICKS/
DialatedSpecies3: Trogodytic patterns that surround your map urns that burn through Saturn with a Passion/
DialatedSpecies3: have you forgot about the telekinetic assassin, that seperates your soul from yor body then starts Blastin'/
taxesuck: moral demons extracting semen from homosapien hosts ~ gathering network of behavioural patterns like meteorological observation posts on ocean coasts//
DialatedSpecies3: no Question marks on your hearts circle your circulatory, and drop on you faster then Ten stories with my Story/
DialatedSpecies3: Fideism give you mal' to your props in prisms, that has seriel killers, and rapies claimin' I'm too Gorry/
DialatedSpecies3: Stomach is gasrous my compendioum is capendious without a single Thesis/
DialatedSpecies3: Fecundate @#%$ in your brain, and stomb in your teeth into your hypothalamus/
DialatedSpecies3: anyone still wantin' beef can crawl in my intestines in an form that gives Dichroism to anyone in my SPectra/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll detach your brain from your spinal cord so fast, through your Chest Protecta/
taxesuck: twisting your brain stem like Swedish ponytails ~ abundant amounts of petroleum oil resulting in beachfronts filled with bony-whales//
taxesuck: the Nazca Plains are just stains and archaeological remains of extraterrestrial planes that have been preserved in desert climates where it never rains//
taxesuck: fanatics fascinated by crop circles ~ devastated like mothers that are infertile ~ in need of a miracle ~ genetically modified turning you heterocercal//
taxesuck: IQ's corrupt like a part time detective robbing your residence ~ showing up an hour later at the scene of the crime and tampering with the evidence//
DialatedSpecies: My epidermal is raised to an altitude tha decreases the verisimilitude of you surviving my aptitude/
taxesuck: rare species dilated and false evolutions created when hostile states under siege are dictated ~ it's all related ~ read in between the lines and let your stereotypical perspective be vacated//
DialatedSpecies3: Infer my blurred visions of intertwistin' oscillation of my vocal tones of Vibration/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll repopulate an dpollinate a nation wit implanted undertones from my own NASA Station/
DialatedSpecies3: Iconoclast, so I suggest you don't clash unless you want your legacy to die in a gash for cash, in on a skelatol strusture Cast/
DialatedSpecies3: skeletor wit a voltron action figure in significent intelligent receptors make your ideas dissolve in a Flask/
DialatedSpecies3: Tectoic plates is what I shake when my lake spawns the dawn of don with pure sulfur, and Phosphorate/
DialatedSpecies3: On a scale from one to a 100, callin' yourself over 500 you'll still get Ate/
taxesuck: attempted assassinations in the Vatican have resulted in cloned Popes and false mannequins//same with presidents and half the congress ~ snap every bone in your body starting with the longest//
taxesuck: advanced technological inventions feature transmissions triptronic ~ hotboxed automobiles fuming with chronic ~ beat boxing so well you'd think my voice box was electronic//
DialatedSpecies3: oN hydroic my hydrophilic philippic tears @#%$ like intestinal gases,bouncin' phonics off your Subsonics/
taxesuck: landscapes tainted with fertilizers that claim their organic but profit greedy souls mesmerize-us//
DialatedSpecies3: And even If I went around callin' myself NAGASAKI you'd still be scared to Bomb It/
DialatedSpecies3: I lust for the thrust of my metamorphic dust, taht's my deoxyribo is fertilizin within all of Us/
taxesuck: yo Fat Boy don't make me put you in the figure 4 and test your elasticity ~ I stand tall even though it seems I'm like Niagara Falls they way I create electricity//
taxesuck: encrypted cyphers top secret like the Freemasons pledge ~ or the true purpose of Stone Hedge growing on cypress sedge trying to destroy-it with a pitchers wedge//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm makin' no Cents like a flatchested prostitute, now what neophyte wanna convert to MYCISM and have wisdom to Shoot/
DialatedSpecies3: Spit a NEOLOGISM to lodge in your mirror image,and call yourself my foot because you'll always get my boot/
DialatedSpecies3: I'm not even touching the wordplay, I'm just shining off your skin givin' you more cancer then Ultraviolet Rays/
DialatedSpecies3: My stomachs in enormous amounts of pain, your barracks are gettin' haunted by spirits in lyrics that castrates wit Spray/
DialatedSpecies3: I am adhesion,I'm piecin' a leasin' of pieces missin' from your Telathon Rapathon/
DialatedSpecies3: and nobody is lookin' out for you, like an obese swimsuit Marathon/
taxesuck: Atlantis is under a projecting ridge on a submerged mountain under cold water somewhere in the Pacific//
taxesuck: IQ leaves details specific ~ your ego looking horrific ~ your claims are unscientific ~ my gestures can be honorific ~ my philosophy is prolific//
taxesuck: @#%$ the modern English language when y'all can't understand this// I might as well translate all the above onto a Phaistos disk or Egyptian hieroglyphic//and therefore the rhetorical lesson that im simply tryin to teach you// is that teachings of Sir Edward Lawerence and Steven Jay Gould are factual//...this is English 101
SMTXgraffin
04-11-2005, 03:11 PM
i like it, i don tthink he understands it, he needs to get a atmosphere cd or canibus or somethin lol cuz thats not wack
Idealeyez
04-11-2005, 03:16 PM
i like it, i don tthink he understands it, he needs to get a atmosphere cd or canibus or somethin lol cuz thats not wack
thanks ,nephew...youre pretty sick wit it yoself
SMTXgraffin
04-11-2005, 03:30 PM
keystyle some more Ideal, shitz sick
Idealeyez
04-11-2005, 03:31 PM
youre serious? i didnt think i was that dope.....or or you trying to bite my shit?
Idealeyez
04-11-2005, 03:35 PM
i got some shit on this old site called shagnetics.com
i actually i wore that a while back freestyling with myself kinda like canibus did on Bis vs Rip....
check my shit out though...im under a different name....Philosophical Prophet
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-12-2005, 12:46 AM
I was gonna say I was just calling you out, but yeah you're wack, Canadians are all wack for anything other than graffiti, Europeans are musicly inclined. Type of ***** to quote Fabolous, hahaha...
Martins on bitches...
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-12-2005, 02:10 AM
Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 3 2005, 12:11 AM
I cripple you like shots to the spine when I rhyme,
weak ass lines you spit coulen't even compare to mine,
fuck cheering for ya all you hearing is boos,
up against me obviously its fact that you lose,
already lost should really think about the words that you choose,
and don't be mentioning my name cause I'll rip your weak ass,
bringing you fame through the shame that you gain,
simple and plain, you getting wrecked like them 9/11 planes,
I came to bring the pain like Meth, going straight to your set,
conceling a cocked back Tec making your shirt to mesh,
should have wore a vest your best ain't bullet proof,
this gun I pull and shoot will end you in a blink,
so fuck what you thought or think,
I emcee, you sing on a gay R&B Cds,
I'm scaring your mental, leave your ass with a complex,
no contest your context has no content but your mumbles,
bout to go to bed but I know I left you crumbled...
http://img110.exs.cx/img110/1740/domesticthug1.jpg <
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^
Hahaha y'all hoes.
As long as we posting old rhymes this is my favorite from here.
Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____+Apr 12 2005, 01:10 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (_____JEKLROKS_____ @ Apr 12 2005, 01:10 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Jan 3 2005, 12:11 AM
I cripple you like shots to the spine when I rhyme,
weak ass lines you spit coulen't even compare to mine,
fuck cheering for ya all you hearing is boos,
up against me obviously its fact that you lose,
already lost should really think about the words that you choose,
and don't be mentioning my name cause I'll rip your weak ass,
bringing you fame through the shame that you gain,
simple and plain, you getting wrecked like them 9/11 planes,
I came to bring the pain like Meth, going straight to your set,
conceling a cocked back Tec making your shirt to mesh,
should have wore a vest your best ain't bullet proof,
this gun I pull and shoot will end you in a blink,
so fuck what you thought or think,
I emcee, you sing on a gay R&B Cds,
I'm scaring your mental, leave your ass with a complex,
no contest your context has no content but your mumbles,
bout to go to bed but I know I left you crumbled...
http://img110.exs.cx/img110/1740/domesticthug1.jpg <
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^
Hahaha y'all hoes.
As long as we posting old rhymes this is my favorite from here. [/b][/quote]
haha.. i made that shit a while back... nice text, by the way..
wanna go head to head?
SMTXgraffin
04-12-2005, 02:35 PM
Originally posted by Idealeyez@Apr 11 2005, 02:31 PM
youre serious? i didnt think i was that dope.....or or you trying to bite my shit?
:blink: you've got to be kidding me......
Idealeyez
04-12-2005, 03:52 PM
just a thought
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-12-2005, 06:25 PM
Originally posted by KARE 2 ELABERATE@Apr 3 2005, 04:51 PM
yo this thread has gone to the shitter
im writin a lil somethin somethin
apperently i forgot to post a rhyme.... so here its at
yo this mutha fuckin Jeklroks thinks he raps hard...... jus more reason for him to get smacked hard,
i'll make sure he dont lack scar's cause my deffinition of exersizm causes pressure in him when i flex my rhythem,
your necks are spinnin, revolvin like the walls when, the mushrooms u just popped, is in ya gut disolving,
an now man ill quit stalling, and flex this complex shit yo, what? u think that this was it, HA! thats jus the INTRO
yo,
i was born to write rap, got one test- an one text-ical,
im technical, respectable, wack rhymes from you? expectable,
acceptable?, yah.... for a DISSABLED emcee,
like "The Game", half retarted up on on cable TV
your unstable with beatz,
my flow exceeds the leagle limit,
and ya' flava is weak, so i proceed speed right in it
..... an cut off ya sentences, man dont be so sensitive
ill tell you what your sentance is, relentlessness against defences kid
an while im shatterin skulls im also gatherin small,
entities not ment for me sent to me threw this vent of heat
bah ;) .... ill write more later
Kronone
04-12-2005, 06:41 PM
watch it/ this shit dont belong to kids who belong in the mosh pit// i'll take your rhyme book, lite it on fire ans squash it// this is raw shit// no shit you see on TV, or your radio// kuz you just got played and made a hoe// rhymin on the internet? that aint gone help your graffiti// while your at it, go get signed and make a CD// you greedy//...selfish little bitches//
hahaha i suk <_<
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-13-2005, 12:41 AM
bumpin an grindin
edit: not bad kronone
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-13-2005, 04:16 AM
I remain smooth unfazed by lame dudes,
I think I rhyme hard tell me who a fake? you.
Canadian emcees? Kid I gotta laugh that of anyone questioning me its your lame ass,
your destiny be to see a tec nine blast, be blinded by the flash and hear 2 bullets go flying past,
the next six hit and your ass dying fast,
this'll teach you bitch motherfuckers about trying Das,
Kare to Elaborate gets scared when I'm at the plate,
'cause I oblitterate *****s I be spitting great,
and I be splitting 8 blunts at a time,
and fuck whoever said I bit T.I in my rhyme...
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-13-2005, 04:51 PM
^wack
westcoastbomber
04-13-2005, 09:17 PM
one a freind of mines made
Aight
im not the worst rapper
actually im the best rapper
and all my phat rymes are made in the crapper
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-13-2005, 09:24 PM
You're still from Canada.
westcoastbomber
04-13-2005, 10:59 PM
me?
SMTXgraffin
04-18-2005, 04:08 PM
Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Apr 13 2005, 03:16 AM
I remain smooth unfazed by lame dudes,
I think I rhyme hard tell me who a fake? you.
Canadian emcees? Kid I gotta laugh that of anyone questioning me its your lame ass,
your destiny be to see a tec nine blast, be blinded by the flash and hear 2 bullets go flying past,
the next six hit and your ass dying fast,
this'll teach you bitch motherfuckers about trying Das,
Kare to Elaborate gets scared when I'm at the plate,
'cause I oblitterate *****s I be spitting great,
and I be splitting 8 blunts at a time,
and fuck whoever said I bit T.I in my rhyme...
you did bite TI in yuh rhyme, its all good, but dont quote shit off the radio next time/
ima keep it real with you, i drop bombs, you need to change yuh name to bed pan, cuz u always get pissed on/
but hey, no ones perfect,im followed by smoke and sparks cuz my mics short circuit/
we dont need any more clowns on bs, go to the circus, no one likes you here...havent you heard this ?/
im at school, so i dont have time to give a serman or a service/
then after that i got some yay to purchase/
sit back take notes and learn bitch.......
:unsure:
SMTXgraffin
04-19-2005, 02:34 AM
^bump^
Sixteen
04-19-2005, 10:55 PM
Jeklroks i tear your face off and toss it to an albatross....
your a bitch who acts hard but is in fact soft.....
i pop a slug in ya face with a glock......
pocket your wallet then book off.....
if you see me walking, ill have the sawed off.....
i smoke pot crop while you grope cock....
you've lost, like PAPA DOC,
give it up, your awful......
you think you could drop? ill drop you off the top
and steal your corpse from the hospital........
your off alot, when i damage you
slamming your face off granite too
i take life for granted when i kill you
woot
(fucking bitch)
FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP FTP
scrabble
04-19-2005, 11:05 PM
yeah poppin pain killers to stay alive/
cus the creature inside me is eatin my insides/
news flash 20 soldiers killed by car bomb/
more innocense killed then the war of vietnam/
nuclear weapons shudnt be a issue/
but its the governments way to brainwash you/
as the ozone is being destroyed/
burning alive is something that we will not be able to avoid/
but i kill myself slowly ignorein this shit/
i try not to think about it not even a little bit/
i just build up my anger inside/
walking the earth silently as if i died/
smokin the last of my haze/
and just chillin to the end of days..............
Sixteen
04-19-2005, 11:06 PM
this kid got fucked up, i mean look at him, hes twitching and shit
Sixteen
04-19-2005, 11:07 PM
ya taht was a dope reply
scrabble
04-19-2005, 11:14 PM
if your talkin to me that wasnt a reply
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-19-2005, 11:46 PM
yo,
im so fresh an full of life, that im the Mentos spokes man
no joke man, i got a mouth full of em
hoes? im pullin em
so reload! dont be slow, or these hoes will eat loads,
of lead that sprayed, now's red from veins, that bled allll day and night
i said dont stay an fight because... me an my vengefull crew we love!
to rage and ravage like the average savage, destroy then rule these sectors
dont expect BIG KARE's respect, expect rejection lectures.
WOW! im high..... no effort
scrabble
04-19-2005, 11:48 PM
Originally posted by KARE 2 ELABERATE@Apr 19 2005, 10:46 PM
Mentos spokes man
B)
Alchohlics_Anonymous
04-20-2005, 12:02 AM
to scrabble...
lemme Dress up my verse, since I know B like to toss salads...
This queer just like Kerry, already KO'd but search`n for lost ballots...
So let's make this loss valid... tell this bitch all he spits played...
That right, them rhymes Coyote Ugly son, ever bar's Bitch made...
When you ganna see rap isn't in ya blood kid, shit's genetic...
Just look how ur verse managed to turn this whole site narcoleptic...
Now hurry up, call in ya team of voters... yea we all aware bro...
U known for swing`n on more *****s balls then vladimir guerrero...
but fuck it, cuz I'm KO`n this sissy even if the votings partial...
Weak ass punches, I flipped his chops, this kids not martial...
Or even Mrs. Mathers for that matter, just a hurt bitch...
and Scrabble...
Save the confessions for church, this was a different type of service...
haha anyone wanna spit against me?
KARE 2 ELABERATE
04-20-2005, 12:06 AM
i feel like droppin keys, jus to hear the jingle, dont give a fuck if a single person likes my shit,
i write my hip hop with delerious obsession, im serious! its stressin, but i must confess at best? its sess...
my skills faded, i could be the highest rated emcee on the planet, but i take my skill for granted...
view it as an unworthy dream, truely un-preseiveable, even more so, un-achieveable,
but still i will, progress slowly, repress only the jaded dreams, decissions need revision cause there....... frayed at the seams......
scrabble
04-20-2005, 12:18 AM
oh shit AA !!!!!
ill flip ya shit and twist it around/
a new kind of career is what he thinks hes found/
but same old shit is what im hearin/
keep your thoughts to yourself they aint worth sharin/
fuck a gun ill slice your stomach open like apple pie/
piss in your wounds and leave you to die/
...........idk im brain dead right now
Alchohlics_Anonymous
04-20-2005, 12:26 AM
^its cool.
Aite look,
I'm no proctologist but even I can see this kids ass crack...
Fifty percent of his verse sucked, that other halfs wack...
Moving past that, it's hard not to notice his whole styles shit...
Battling online cuz he got more freetime then AOL trial disks...
Those punches are mild kids, lemme show you how I dump some...
Snatch his heart out and beat on money till he lumpsum...
WHOA! this chumps done, it's amazing how well I herb gays...
it's 2005 and this rookie still need quotes to identify wordplays...
I eat Emcee's, I got my weight-up, while you suffer from anorexia...
Ya shit gets laughed at on the board like students with dyslexia...
scrabble
04-20-2005, 12:41 AM
i insist you take a vacation from paperchasin/
cus the only thing your doin is time wastin/
talkin about AOL and shit when your rhymes is as wack as dial up/
take a lesson from KARE he knows whats up/
damn right i got freetime cus im a lazy american/
and your shits no better than/
JEKLROCKS bittin verse/
i just dont know whos is worse/
who gives a fuck you both equally garbage/
and you try and talk like you got some knowledge/
batch!
Alchohlics_Anonymous
04-20-2005, 12:50 AM
^dope rhymes. its good. lets continue this 2morrow. im burnt! haha.
scrabble
04-20-2005, 12:53 AM
yeah us EASTERN TIMERS is 1 AM we is tired so we are gonna pause this shit.
_____JEKLROKS_____
04-20-2005, 02:55 AM
Y'all *****s riding more dick than your mom,
spitting garbage like you really know the shit I'm on,
a real ***** from the Chi never spit the same,
and can assure you that I never fucking bitten no lame,
I spit with styles that you wish you could rip with,
talking about a Glock but never even held a biscuit,
a bitch kid cracker coming straight from the burbs,
beat you down with my words before I get to doing verbs,
stop wasting time, you should just diss yourself,
skip the middle man, therefore complications with your health,
DasOne spraying kids like sprinklers
push dust like sweepers,
quick to bust my heater, cause your rhymes sound sweeter,than the songs of Allycia
-Keys, please get off of dee's nuts before I light your whole fucking street up,
and leave your whole pussy crew from light posts stringed up,
ain't a joke but belive that I'm laughing,
the class I rap with tactics surpasses you wack kids,
the fact is I'm blasting you bastards,
won't waste time trying to fight you actors,
fronting like you know me, never seen my status,
I peeped you faggots, leave you with a see through jacket,
all you motherfuckers need to see who can hack it.
Fuck you kid you the biter.
Quote me and then quote him:
http://www.ohhla.com/ <Lyrics.
Hahaha I just deleted the shit I just typed, about half of that worth.
anonymous
04-20-2005, 06:01 PM
Snippers will clip this fag i flip with rags, watch me gag a aim-at-this-lame leave him split n parted, watch out bullets flyin at you like balls when these games-r-started, J cold hearted, and i dont fuck with mugs, you aint no thug your coffins or caskets-land, Ill back your shit up with a nine like a taffic-jam, and ill play with your remains make it a stupider-carcus, u shoulda stopped before you began-your-brags, so we the same level huh your a like super market kid you just scan-your-tag, you jus scam your flags, fuck with the kid dog the Ink will have u duckin-for-a-center-bet, ill just connect you and link a cord to the trash with your name like the fuckin-internet, and look they dont have a hall for the bitters-fame, ill leave your face really like your writters-name, im tighter mayn, relize n split, ill fight this diss, like ill ignite your lips, paint your face u just a champ-for-clowns, without my rhymes youd b left in the wilderness by urself i dont camp-for-grounds //
u boys always be dissin
thats just cuz u all p.m.s.'in
ya my rap is wack, thats just cuz i aint black
jeklroks you got sum rymes
the rest are jsut stupid mymes
most of the words that i say
burry them selves liek a whale on the bay
this is my first rap that is phat
ha thats if u would even call it that
i feel liek freckin DR.Suess
but my rymes are bein killed by a moose
so all you boys start dissin too
give me sumin to lissin to
wow im so freckin bored and gay....
jbrosilow
04-20-2005, 06:56 PM
you all suck
jents
04-20-2005, 09:50 PM
sorry, deleted post.....
jents
04-20-2005, 09:51 PM
check this aussie rhymer.....
flippin lyrics in high spirits
the cat aint curious
combattin cops with batons till the law get furious
dubious, microphone ruthless
compared to me mcs begin to feel useless
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