Freestyle Rapping

[jents]

check this aussie rhymer.....
flippin lyrics in high spirits
the cat aint curious
combattin cops with batons till the law get furious
dubious, microphone ruthless
compared to me mcs begin to feel useless

[jents]

how old are you guys seriously? 12? try rippin a free without using all that "fo' sho' dawg" and stuff about guns and crap. you have skills now how about using them?

[Crack Killz]

yo yo yo yo


Gesus, what a rotten docuhe bag,
This salami suckin homo,
calls himself a fuckin fag,
maybe true,
get a clue,
bitch
you ain't foolin me,
suck a dick you dirty prick,
all of BomingScience will clearly see,
you like the cock,
and it's cum shot,
in your mouth,
don't try to hide it bitch!
Cuz I know what your
about,
you like to penetrate, every orphis in the male body,
and the fact that you think FOE is a hottie
thats sick bitch!!!! (no offence foe)
I Tell you what you touch my dick i'll fuck you up
go be a lil pussy and pretend it can't happen
i'm still rappin and a mappin and everyone's fuckin laughing at you HO!
yo, leave pron go bitch can't wait to see you finally gone,
you're pathatic lemme brake your fucking neck wit
leprecs
bash you and cave your fuckin head in
this shit is a cats muthafucken meow!
bow down to your knees bitch who's your daddy now?
I own you! yeah I fuckin do
think not wrong
thought I got news for you!


yoooooo...

[Crack Killz]

I had to diss Gesus.

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by anonymous@Apr 20 2005, 05:01 PM
Snippers will clip this fag i flip with rags, watch me gag a aim-at-this-lame leave him split n parted, watch out bullets flyin at you like balls when these games-r-started, J cold hearted, and i dont fuck with mugs, you aint no thug your coffins or caskets-land, Ill back your shit up with a nine like a taffic-jam, and ill play with your remains make it a stupider-carcus, u shoulda stopped before you began-your-brags, so we the same level huh your a like super market kid you just scan-your-tag, you jus scam your flags, fuck with the kid dog the Ink will have u duckin-for-a-center-bet, ill just connect you and link a cord to the trash with your name like the fuckin-internet, and look they dont have a hall for the bitters-fame, ill leave your face really like your writters-name, im tighter mayn, relize n split, ill fight this diss, like ill ignite your lips, paint your face u just a champ-for-clowns, without my rhymes youd b left in the wilderness by urself i dont camp-for-grounds //
From now on everyone should be putting each line on a new line cause that shits hard to read so I'll just take a guess and say your wack.

[scrabble]

lol yeah when the shits like that i read it like a book and just run threw it and miss the rhymes

[Rik JamEs]

yo yo yo
i rapity rap
i tapity tap
i gota go to the store so i can get a new hatity hat
then im gonna go to the sports store so i can buy a baseball batity bat bat
and im outitie out yo

[Whoa]

i crack you like a twig
like a faggot wearing a wig
i hit your girlfriend off and barely heard that bitch yelling
whoa spits ill lyrics like back in the day greek spelling
You think im funny but i aint the one to joke with
cause i ll burn you like a blunt, light up then smoke it
tell me to my face that im a loser
cause i ll hunt you down and get under your skin like a tumor
try to battle me you wont last kid
cause i ll beat you over the head with a battery till i see acid
drip all over your face
make your lips so fat n burnt people will think you were mase
You getting me mad kid so im out of here fast
cause i ll push you so hard like the shit out of your ass

[infer one]

yipity yo :lol:

[Dr. Coffee]

Infer was sellin rocks when masta P was sayin uhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Whoa]

whoa pass the blunt
these V UNIT *****s know what's up :lol:

[MitNGEK]

pass the blunt again

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Nobody wanna spit at me?

[Idealeyez]

some shit i wrote

narcotics limiting cerebral images
nuclear tests being played out like football scrimmages
cannabis plantations slowing down my sensory cortex
materialism sucking me in like dense celestial bodies with characteristics of a vortex
paparazzi reliable sources remaining anonymous
politicians acting on predictions like they were fukin nostradamus’s
hypocrites throw rocks at these
Mesopotamian scholars with absurd hypothesis
world conflicts and uncovered philosophies
a mockery of democracy can be seen in the trail of Socrates
where would the Republic be if Plato didn’t dismiss his teachings
presidential impeachments and unjust treatments
beautiful minds residing in Sicily ~ a place somewhere in the middle of little Italy
taking holy scriptures literally
overcome by an abundant feeling of radiance
not like innocent children playing in the sunflower fields but more like chemotherapy patients
my sarcasm is penetrating my smile and shining bright
hazards and catastrophes occur when terrorists with guerrilla tactics take flight
enraged citizens rocking Wallabees disgusted over company policies
big business and pharmaceutical industries
prospering in trillions in the name of human fatalities
testing chemical agents meanwhile increasing birth defects and infant mortalities
I kick intelligence
interpretations are infinite
this one came from the perspective of a sceptic
understanding is of no relevance

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Apr 22 2005, 12:16 AM
Nobody wanna spit at me?
im straight crazy ill and thats how its gonna be/
gimme a disk of apathy, demi godz, and immortal technique/
clever rhymes and metaphores decorate my beats/
i slap around jocks and stomp on there cleets/
cuz i pop more joints than knees, im reckin mics with ease/
i drop shots at hot spots and stay to watchem bleed/
cnn, media filled with money and greed/
only way im gonna make it is through honeys and weed/
actin funny indeed, drop weight like jenny craig cuz im makin my cheese/
the type to put the spice in the beef, and pop outcha teeth/
heads gassed up to make the pentium freeze/
seperate skin and bones like water and grease/
my composure is clean, i make jeklroks look like a bitch and walk on his knees/
before he types on his keys, ill literally aphixiate the very air that he breathes/


touch my multi....


btw, idealeyez u run this thread man lol, u shit on kare, jekl, me and everyone else that posted here

[SMTXgraffin]

~*BUMP*~

[SmileAtDeath]

these kids arent hip hop rhymes online? I think its time you got outside. Computer screens light beams doin funny shit to your mind Talk graffiti on the net I'm willin to bet you've never had a can in your hand fake as chumps rich white kids want so bad to be urban living fairytail dreams drive their moms sububran I like hip hop but I mostly like metal I dont normaly rhyme but I burnt you all this shit is settled.

[yuki]

this forum's to blame for why I'm on AIM, steppin to kidz online is wack stupid lame. step 2 this then go run home, and run until your cell's on roam, damn you got took cuz your mom's on loan.

Kickin' mad ups to my homie smileatdeath. Online kidz be runnin' shit.

[Rik JamEs]

my brother wrote this 50 cent diss freestyle :lol:

Are you mad cuz i'm dissin you 21 times? Whats that ?
If I used my tounge wit ya girl in my bed ((would ya like that)) ?
If i wrote you a death threat ((would you write back)) ?
And you say all you need is a lil bit,
***** you just ashamed cuz when she see ya dick she aint givin ya shit !
***** you aint real, real defines big PoP
so 1 suggestion for you is to just stop !
I seen kids in Chuk-E-Cheese realer than you
and don't act like you know it aint true.
The only reason you go to the candy shop
is cuz you want the managers lilli-pop !
***** if it wasn't for Em' and Dre,
you'd be burnt up in an ashtray !


:lol:

[scrabble]

refrain from violence in your rhymes
lol



vaporizing your verses like h-bombs over japan/
but talking about what your going to do me is played out man/
spitting makes up about 5.12% of my life/
while challenged MC's result to strife/
to solve there disputes/
because in battles they get froze up and act like mutes/
but what the dont know is that there is a flaw/
not everything is about being ruthless and raw/
what they dont know is that knowledge is power/
but there rhymes still remain spoiled and sour/
and like a disease my flow spread quickly, you gotta react swiftly/
and i have you thinking that im fresh and nifty/
brainwashed you leaving you drooling like a vegetable/
kinda like watching softcore on basic cable/
like tremors and destroyed nerves inside your brain/
ill have you flatlined like you OD'd on cocaine/
my words will build up in your head, taking over your mind/
and your heart and lungs begin to bind/
your throat begins to burn as if you sipped rum/
the last hour for you now has come/
all because you thought you could step up to me, but losing was inevitably/
and you fade away now, with your head down, regrettably.


kill me.

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by yuki@May 2 2005, 08:49 PM
this forum's to blame for why I'm on AIM, steppin to kidz online is wack stupid lame. step 2 this then go run home, and run until your cell's on roam, damn you got took cuz your mom's on loan.

Kickin' mad ups to my homie smileatdeath. Online kidz be runnin' shit.
ill battle u for real yuki lol, u live in my fucking apartment complex lmao

[pSYKAOz]

lol wats up with using a bunch of big rhyming words?

[Idealeyez]

idealeyez u run this thread man lol, u shit on kare, jekl, me and everyone else that posted here

i dont think so kid thats mostly old shit when i was rapping. i dont rap no more. i been there done that, y'know. i get a joy outta fucking porn stars and strippers

[infer one]

Yo, bust a motherfuckin' gat to this
Y'all believe lies like y'all was Catholics
I rap in Arabic, so my message is just immaculate
My rap a lab-a-rynth, drink a forty and blaze a sack to it
My aim is accurate, take your brain and blow out the back of it
I'm surly, miserable cat that slap shorties
Looks kinda resemble that of fat Pauly
I don't even clap, young boy, he claps for me
Chain hang down to my dick, I'm that gaudy
I don't even fuck wit you cats, you rap poorly
I don't even buck at you cats, you that corny
Wit a wack army, we barkin' at you
And Vinnie Paz holds a hammer like a carpenter do
you should understand that I ain't really fuckin' around
and if you don't, you gonna find your body stuffed in the ground
We buckin' em down, cuz that's how wrong my life is
Y'all don't understand how fuckin' strong my wife is
I'm from a time where every song was righteous
Before rap was just a swarm of white kids
And y'all a witness to the dawn of hypeness, or just another victim to the
pawns and sheisters
I'll feed your corpse to a swarm of vipers
And let em suck the blood till your form is lifeless

yall should know, jedi mind tricks burns over any other

[infer one]

You know the Don's armed wit sixteen
And I go hard for the big cream, the whips and the carriage
Ball like the Knicks and the Mavericks, switchin' the fabrics
Pull up wit some big shit, lieutenant shit, hittin' the hazards
Spot a bitch wit that Cris habit, I gotta have it
Fuck shorty and send her OT wit a brick in her baggage
Roll where the clubs at she liquored up lavish
She only lick dick status to get cabbage
Dick get lathered to the thick baptist
Who back on the map? Giancana wit a vengeance
It's drama to the finish, but the llama to your appendix (aiight)
And squeezing the slugs, gun powder season your blood
I'm a legend breathing, the reason you thug (*****)
This where the buck stops, fuck props
Buck shots at the top money, what the fuck you forgot?
Thought I was done and wasn't thuggin' the block?
Still real, bustin' the glock
Put it where you could see it (blao) what up now?

[infer one]

Originally posted by Idealeyez@Apr 28 2005, 12:47 PM
some shit i wrote

narcotics limiting cerebral images
nuclear tests being played out like football scrimmages
cannabis plantations slowing down my sensory cortex
materialism sucking me in like dense celestial bodies with characteristics of a vortex
paparazzi reliable sources remaining anonymous
politicians acting on predictions like they were fukin nostradamus’s
hypocrites throw rocks at these
Mesopotamian scholars with absurd hypothesis
world conflicts and uncovered philosophies
a mockery of democracy can be seen in the trail of Socrates
where would the Republic be if Plato didn’t dismiss his teachings
presidential impeachments and unjust treatments
beautiful minds residing in Sicily ~ a place somewhere in the middle of little Italy
taking holy scriptures literally
overcome by an abundant feeling of radiance
not like innocent children playing in the sunflower fields but more like chemotherapy patients
my sarcasm is penetrating my smile and shining bright
hazards and catastrophes occur when terrorists with guerrilla tactics take flight
enraged citizens rocking Wallabees disgusted over company policies
big business and pharmaceutical industries
prospering in trillions in the name of human fatalities
testing chemical agents meanwhile increasing birth defects and infant mortalities
I kick intelligence
interpretations are infinite
this one came from the perspective of a sceptic
understanding is of no relevance
shits foreal, thats a hot verse, post more often

[Idealeyez]

you didnt read my previous posts

[Idealeyez]

You mean to tell me you think im really dope...shit maybe i should see about doing an album

[Myner]

you only hate, cuz i paint
and wat u think, it aint....True
and those other bithes, i slice like a jew
cuttin skin like a fukn circumcision
and to all u foolz down wit foeizm
should get light up like a prism
yea i bit of da game
but its hard, every other line he uses is lame
and the rest of g unit, wat a fukn shame
This hole graffiti scene is die'n
thats the only thing that keeps me tryn
to get big, to be large
grow my hair out like Marge
and keep it real like my boy Bart
fuk skool, im street smart


a quick lil thing off the top of my tounge

[Idealeyez]

nice shit kid.....simple....but nice

[Myner]

yeah like i said just a lil sumthin, i wana drop a verse though

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

"Steppin' to me like going to the county being a nutron..."

[ASEN]

anybody have that 14 years of rap video? dope shit.

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by SMTXgraffin+May 2 2005, 05:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SMTXgraffin @ May 2 2005, 05:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Apr 22 2005, 12:16 AM
Nobody wanna spit at me?
im straight crazy ill and thats how its gonna be/
gimme a disk of apathy, demi godz, and immortal technique/
clever rhymes and metaphores decorate my beats/
i slap around jocks and stomp on there cleets/
cuz i pop more joints than knees, im reckin mics with ease/
i drop shots at hot spots and stay to watchem bleed/
cnn, media filled with money and greed/
only way im gonna make it is through honeys and weed/
actin funny indeed, drop weight like jenny craig cuz im makin my cheese/
the type to put the spice in the beef, and pop outcha teeth/
heads gassed up to make the pentium freeze/
seperate skin and bones like water and grease/
my composure is clean, i make jeklroks look like a bitch and walk on his knees/
before he types on his keys, ill literally aphixiate the very air that he breathes/


touch my multi....


btw, idealeyez u run this thread man lol, u shit on kare, jekl, me and everyone else that posted here [/b][/quote]
whatsup jekl ?

cuz i'll pop lock and strangle, sick metaphors comin at you at all angles/
hit you with the forty cal, and watcha bones dangle/
i treat mc's like bagles, cuz i eat em up/
regurgatatem and cleanem up/
rip mics, grip tight and beatem up/
when i spit on comp mics the binary gets deleted and freezes up/
raise dope skills in my basement and bringem up/
front, get hit like a blunt than beaten up/
rhyme sayas got wishes, but they fuckin dream enough/
bitch about rims and how they sneaks aint clean enough/
fuck mainstream rap tracks man, they sing enough/
car2n bitch bout how his weed aint green enough/
one thousand watt man, my shit gets heated up/
i grow strains like bogglegum that car2n be dreamin of/
i snap the bowl on my german RooR cuz the stem be leanin up/
idealeyez take care of these wack cats, cuz i think they've seen enough...../ :blink:

*gimme some feedback...

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@May 5 2005, 01:06 AM
"Steppin' to me like going to the county being a nutron..."
fuck a nutron, steppin to you, is like steppin to a new one, cuz wack cats with crap raps get pooped on

[ASEN]

One thousand posts, even though i wasnt countin' those
after one year and half of turnin beef into a pound of roast
spray in every sense of tha word cuz others are loungin choads
chastizin toys, the freely used term this sites connectin coasts
dissectin, puttin a new site section together, y'all objectin most
raisin' eyelids past the shit flow, praise the messiah gesus
No chance like embryos for sale on the streets, so ASEN buys a foetus
SALVO never endin' fitness, an unbiased pilgrim with a shitlist
few cats here from the beggining, since this syllable was still encrypted
moderators, silent operators turnin' the new kids to pro-lifers
Newz runnin' a tight ship, beef and bread turned into dope cyphers
i'm three stooges, searchin' steamrooms for cats to jam with
shoutin' out to those who deserve it, bringin' changes to bandwidth

[papaya-banana]

I spit dope shit whenI rap
I eat....shit...shower..shave.take a nap
Waitin on the mailman
And thats..that
Waitin outside from 9 to 2
Lookin for a little jeep white an blue
Spent a little extra express plan
But shit..its still been 5 days man!!


Waitin on this package from BS...Been five days including the weekend,
anxious as shit like its about to be christmas... :unsure:

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by SMTXgraffin+May 5 2005, 06:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SMTXgraffin @ May 5 2005, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@May 2 2005, 05:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Apr 22 2005, 12:16 AM
Nobody wanna spit at me?
im straight crazy ill and thats how its gonna be/
gimme a disk of apathy, demi godz, and immortal technique/
clever rhymes and metaphores decorate my beats/
i slap around jocks and stomp on there cleets/
cuz i pop more joints than knees, im reckin mics with ease/
i drop shots at hot spots and stay to watchem bleed/
cnn, media filled with money and greed/
only way im gonna make it is through honeys and weed/
actin funny indeed, drop weight like jenny craig cuz im makin my cheese/
the type to put the spice in the beef, and pop outcha teeth/
heads gassed up to make the pentium freeze/
seperate skin and bones like water and grease/
my composure is clean, i make jeklroks look like a bitch and walk on his knees/
before he types on his keys, ill literally aphixiate the very air that he breathes/


touch my multi....


btw, idealeyez u run this thread man lol, u shit on kare, jekl, me and everyone else that posted here
whatsup jekl ?

cuz i'll pop lock and strangle, sick metaphors comin at you at all angles/
hit you with the forty cal, and watcha bones dangle/
i treat mc's like bagles, cuz i eat em up/
regurgatatem and cleanem up/
rip mics, grip tight and beatem up/
when i spit on comp mics the binary gets deleted and freezes up/
raise dope skills in my basement and bringem up/
front, get hit like a blunt than beaten up/
rhyme sayas got wishes, but they fuckin dream enough/
bitch about rims and how they sneaks aint clean enough/
fuck mainstream rap tracks man, they sing enough/
car2n bitch bout how his weed aint green enough/
one thousand watt man, my shit gets heated up/
i grow strains like bogglegum that car2n be dreamin of/
i snap the bowl on my german RooR cuz the stem be leanin up/
idealeyez take care of these wack cats, cuz i think they've seen enough...../ :blink:

*gimme some feedback... [/b][/quote]
You seem like me like 2 years ago you got some multis but you need to direct it twords a person and as for metaphors, you had none sorry. I actually am not that great but if you want to be helped go to www.universalemcee.com its not like that golden mic bullshit...


Anyway its late.

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____+May 12 2005, 03:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (_____JEKLROKS_____ @ May 12 2005, 03:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@May 5 2005, 06:57 PM
Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@May 2 2005, 05:54 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Apr 22 2005, 12:16 AM
Nobody wanna spit at me?
im straight crazy ill and thats how its gonna be/
gimme a disk of apathy, demi godz, and immortal technique/
clever rhymes and metaphores decorate my beats/
i slap around jocks and stomp on there cleets/
cuz i pop more joints than knees, im reckin mics with ease/
i drop shots at hot spots and stay to watchem bleed/
cnn, media filled with money and greed/
only way im gonna make it is through honeys and weed/
actin funny indeed, drop weight like jenny craig cuz im makin my cheese/
the type to put the spice in the beef, and pop outcha teeth/
heads gassed up to make the pentium freeze/
seperate skin and bones like water and grease/
my composure is clean, i make jeklroks look like a bitch and walk on his knees/
before he types on his keys, ill literally aphixiate the very air that he breathes/


touch my multi....


btw, idealeyez u run this thread man lol, u shit on kare, jekl, me and everyone else that posted here
whatsup jekl ?

cuz i'll pop lock and strangle, sick metaphors comin at you at all angles/
hit you with the forty cal, and watcha bones dangle/
i treat mc's like bagles, cuz i eat em up/
regurgatatem and cleanem up/
rip mics, grip tight and beatem up/
when i spit on comp mics the binary gets deleted and freezes up/
raise dope skills in my basement and bringem up/
front, get hit like a blunt than beaten up/
rhyme sayas got wishes, but they fuckin dream enough/
bitch about rims and how they sneaks aint clean enough/
fuck mainstream rap tracks man, they sing enough/
car2n bitch bout how his weed aint green enough/
one thousand watt man, my shit gets heated up/
i grow strains like bogglegum that car2n be dreamin of/
i snap the bowl on my german RooR cuz the stem be leanin up/
idealeyez take care of these wack cats, cuz i think they've seen enough...../ :blink:

*gimme some feedback...
You seem like me like 2 years ago you got some multis but you need to direct it twords a person and as for metaphors, you had none sorry. I actually am not that great but if you want to be helped go to www.universalemcee.com its not like that golden mic bullshit...


Anyway its late. [/b][/quote]
thanx man, ill check that out. i do need to work on my metaphors a little more, but i guess that will come with time...... thanx for the link, stay up

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

I'd like to set it straight Ideal don't run shit,
coulden't get near my rhymes if this ***** happened to be my dentist,
using words you diden't- know the definition of a minute-ago,
rhyming dictionary emcees only CDs made are fictional,
I'll twist-your-skull and hit-you-full strength when I'm rocking,
murder you, go the the funeral, your family jock-me,
I'll pack a Glock-or-two when I drop-your-crew like acorns,
the only time you spit sick shit was in a gay- porn,
you remain-scorned, I'm way-more fluidlike when I'm flowing,
Before you spit I snach the mic without you even knowing,
on some quick shit, if you missed it you should catch the second showing,
you should do some spoken word so you got a excuse- for being- wack,
but even they tell people somthing, you?- all I'm seeings- crap,
like you try too hard, or maybe don't try hard- enough,
stay high everyday, like New-Years-eve I'm sparking- up, (gunfire in background lol)
rhymes I say are dope you-queers-leave when I-be-up.

I usually hate to put it like this but its somwhat complicated

[infer_two]

how can you freestyle on a computer? ahaha

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Thats why its freestyle raping. Thats why I always come with hot shit on this bitch. In real life I'm only dope like 99% of the time.

[Whoa]

keystylin is soooooooooooo cool


fuck kiddies get a life

burn you all 1 on 1 freestyle
you know? LIVE? sypher.... know what im talkin about
NO cause all you do is keystyle!

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

No Whoa, you won't.

[Whoa]

ah ah think again

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Why think when I already know? And its cypher by the way... At least post some of your rhymes so its not like you just talking shit.


Matter of fact I think I seen your shit and HAHAHA, yeah you win. :rolleyes: Wack hoe.

[ASEN]

Originally posted by Whoa@May 27 2005, 10:06 AM
keystylin is soooooooooooo cool


fuck kiddies get a life

burn you all 1 on 1 freestyle
you know? LIVE? sypher.... know what im talkin about
NO cause all you do is keystyle!
You used to like keystyling, we shared some laughs. Why the change of heart?

[Whoa]

i still like to keystyle, but when people front bout how they are droppin ''ill rhymes'' when all they do is just drop shit, it pisses me off
but yeah i rather spit live then over the net
its just normal

_____JEKLROKS_____
send me something of you spitting LIVE, not some on line shit

or if you wanna spit quality on the net, at least do a better fuckin job

[Idealeyez]

check it....

DialatedSpecies3: Artificial senile in biles constructing tiles synthesized from my synical Penicle/
DialatedSpecies3: My macromolecules are pulled by mules that fuel inside your regional temple Subliminal/
DialatedSpecies3: Phospholipids inside your carbon structures get ruptured from the paturbed impaturbable/
DialatedSpecies3: My chemical properties get props and complexes from their alterego perplexities, and complexities/
DialatedSpecies3: From my arteries and Extremeities my enemies get crushed into their Perspicacity/
taxesuck: 5th dimensions of time warping from the top of the Himaliyans to ancient rituals with the Mayans//
DialatedSpecies3: Percapita I'm a scooba diva with felonious cacophonious euphonious homeostasis/
taxesuck: to pharmaceutical forces producing manufactured medicine resulting in blind poets illuminating bright thoughts like Thomas Edison//
taxesuck: verbal architects constructing non-penetrable coliseums guarded by statues of prophets against empires in hip-hop museums//
taxesuck: IQ~of^a~prophet with brilliant thoughts splendid ~ creating false illusions like rainbows bending ~ cerebral thoughts with lower intelligence have trouble comprehending//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm sending messages collapsing your spinal disc, my esoteric flow will have you speakin' wit a Lipsc/
DialatedSpecies3: multiplication of my multipilcity in my vicinity so you can suck my DIDICKS/
DialatedSpecies3: Trogodytic patterns that surround your map urns that burn through Saturn with a Passion/
DialatedSpecies3: have you forgot about the telekinetic assassin, that seperates your soul from yor body then starts Blastin'/
taxesuck: moral demons extracting semen from homosapien hosts ~ gathering network of behavioural patterns like meteorological observation posts on ocean coasts//
DialatedSpecies3: no Question marks on your hearts circle your circulatory, and drop on you faster then Ten stories with my Story/
DialatedSpecies3: Fideism give you mal' to your props in prisms, that has seriel killers, and rapies claimin' I'm too Gorry/
DialatedSpecies3: Stomach is gasrous my compendioum is capendious without a single Thesis/
DialatedSpecies3: Fecundate @#%$ in your brain, and stomb in your teeth into your hypothalamus/
DialatedSpecies3: anyone still wantin' beef can crawl in my intestines in an form that gives Dichroism to anyone in my SPectra/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll detach your brain from your spinal cord so fast, through your Chest Protecta/
taxesuck: twisting your brain stem like Swedish ponytails ~ abundant amounts of petroleum oil resulting in beachfronts filled with bony-whales//
taxesuck: the Nazca Plains are just stains and archaeological remains of extraterrestrial planes that have been preserved in desert climates where it never rains//
taxesuck: fanatics fascinated by crop circles ~ devastated like mothers that are infertile ~ in need of a miracle ~ genetically modified turning you heterocercal//
taxesuck: IQ's corrupt like a part time detective robbing your residence ~ showing up an hour later at the scene of the crime and tampering with the evidence//
DialatedSpecies: My epidermal is raised to an altitude tha decreases the verisimilitude of you surviving my aptitude/
taxesuck: rare species dilated and false evolutions created when hostile states under siege are dictated ~ it's all related ~ read in between the lines and let your stereotypical perspective be vacated//
DialatedSpecies3: Infer my blurred visions of intertwistin' oscillation of my vocal tones of Vibration/
DialatedSpecies3: I'll repopulate an dpollinate a nation wit implanted undertones from my own NASA Station/
DialatedSpecies3: Iconoclast, so I suggest you don't clash unless you want your legacy to die in a gash for cash, in on a skelatol strusture Cast/
DialatedSpecies3: skeletor wit a voltron action figure in significent intelligent receptors make your ideas dissolve in a Flask/
DialatedSpecies3: Tectoic plates is what I shake when my lake spawns the dawn of don with pure sulfur, and Phosphorate/
DialatedSpecies3: On a scale from one to a 100, callin' yourself over 500 you'll still get Ate/
taxesuck: attempted assassinations in the Vatican have resulted in cloned Popes and false mannequins//same with presidents and half the congress ~ snap every bone in your body starting with the longest//
taxesuck: advanced technological inventions feature transmissions triptronic ~ hotboxed automobiles fuming with chronic ~ beat boxing so well you'd think my voice box was electronic//
DialatedSpecies3: oN hydroic my hydrophilic philippic tears @#%$ like intestinal gases,bouncin' phonics off your Subsonics/
taxesuck: landscapes tainted with fertilizers that claim their organic but profit greedy souls mesmerize-us//
DialatedSpecies3: And even If I went around callin' myself NAGASAKI you'd still be scared to Bomb It/
DialatedSpecies3: I lust for the thrust of my metamorphic dust, taht's my deoxyribo is fertilizin within all of Us/
taxesuck: yo Fat Boy don't make me put you in the figure 4 and test your elasticity ~ I stand tall even though it seems I'm like Niagara Falls they way I create electricity//
taxesuck: encrypted cyphers top secret like the Freemasons pledge ~ or the true purpose of Stone Hedge growing on cypress sedge trying to destroy-it with a pitchers wedge//
DialatedSpecies3: I'm makin' no Cents like a flatchested prostitute, now what neophyte wanna convert to MYCISM and have wisdom to Shoot/
DialatedSpecies3: Spit a NEOLOGISM to lodge in your mirror image,and call yourself my foot because you'll always get my boot/
DialatedSpecies3: I'm not even touching the wordplay, I'm just shining off your skin givin' you more cancer then Ultraviolet Rays/
DialatedSpecies3: My stomachs in enormous amounts of pain, your barracks are gettin' haunted by spirits in lyrics that castrates wit Spray/
DialatedSpecies3: I am adhesion,I'm piecin' a leasin' of pieces missin' from your Telathon Rapathon/
DialatedSpecies3: and nobody is lookin' out for you, like an obese swimsuit Marathon/
taxesuck: Atlantis is under a projecting ridge on a submerged mountain under cold water somewhere in the Pacific//
taxesuck: IQ leaves details specific ~ your ego looking horrific ~ your claims are unscientific ~ my gestures can be honorific ~ my philosophy is prolific//
taxesuck: @#%$ the modern English language when y'all can't understand this// I might as well translate all the above onto a Phaistos disk or Egyptian hieroglyphic//and therefore the rhetorical lesson that im simply tryin to teach you// is that teachings of Sir Edward Lawerence and Steven Jay Gould are factual//...this is English 101

just a repost cuz some of the member didnt read my shit

[Idealeyez]

repost

some shit i wrote

narcotics limiting cerebral images
nuclear tests being played out like football scrimmages
cannabis plantations slowing down my sensory cortex
materialism sucking me in like dense celestial bodies with characteristics of a vortex
paparazzi reliable sources remaining anonymous
politicians acting on predictions like they were fukin nostradamus?s
hypocrites throw rocks at these
Mesopotamian scholars with absurd hypothesis
world conflicts and uncovered philosophies
a mockery of democracy can be seen in the trail of Socrates
where would the Republic be if Plato didn?t dismiss his teachings
presidential impeachments and unjust treatments
beautiful minds residing in Sicily ~ a place somewhere in the middle of little Italy
taking holy scriptures literally
overcome by an abundant feeling of radiance
not like innocent children playing in the sunflower fields but more like chemotherapy patients
my sarcasm is penetrating my smile and shining bright
hazards and catastrophes occur when terrorists with guerrilla tactics take flight
enraged citizens rocking Wallabees disgusted over company policies
big business and pharmaceutical industries
prospering in trillions in the name of human fatalities
testing chemical agents meanwhile increasing birth defects and infant mortalities
I kick intelligence
interpretations are infinite
this one came from the perspective of a sceptic
understanding is of no relevance

[Idealeyez]

Check It.....

Unilateral pinions hold primordial immortals from minions entering

intergalactic portals light purple ionic auroras revolve around orbiting oracles who foretold historical metaphors of hyena skinned coracles entering rivers with floral based harbors haunted by oxymoron?s of pernicious morals.

Omnipotent tyrants gnomonically preach propaganda south of Canadas
spectacular cannibis inspires acumen hence avoiding morbid apoplexies otherwise deemed scandalous with the candles lit spirits manifest into vandalous analysts
metrical measurements of a rainbows candelas

Verbal mechanic synthesizing quantum chromo dynamics beneath the Atlantic
40 degrees latitude north of the Titanic surrounded by the echoes of impetuous panic
Can?t stand it how my alter ego is buried in granite and the pressure forces him
to undergo anthropomorphism- Warmachine*




*Warmachine is an alias i use kinda like

Method Man uses Johnny Blaze

[Whoa]

worth the read

some nice ish you got there Idealeyez
props


Here's a lil somethin i wrote when i found out that my ex cheated on me


Just because ya gave me head dont mean we head to bed
Just because you beat my meat doesnt mean im headin down south to eat
Just because i said i loved you doesnt mean i dont care
I said it just because i had some extra feelings to spare
Just because i want time alone doesnt mean i hate you, when will you realise
These words are coming from my heart im not like the other guys
So what we did some stupid things when we were kids with time to spare
As long as i have my heart my feelings will always be there
Think this is some kinda love song, bitch you wrong
Cause if it were up to me slut you'd already be long gone
Everytime i see you i just want to scream and holler
Take out a contract on your life for half a dollar
Mix n mash, beat n slaughter, fuck you up worst then MJ's daughter
Just because i see a doctor dont mean that im crazy
Its just that the voices in my head dont say enough shit to phase me
I knew bout your past experiences with other guys
Heard you caught some disase and i wasnt suprised
I know you've been beaten smacked around and choked
But hoes like you get more rubber then a bicycle spoke
I Mean c'mon, when you gonna realise who you are
The symbol on my neck means im a fuckin star
The devil on your neck means that your evil and chaotic?
That's a rub off tattoo bitch that aint symbolic
Im gonna end this shit with a smile and grin
Cause no matter what bitch losers always lose, and winners always win!

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

You gonna talk about me spitting garbage and you post that. Wack emcee, no! As for live shit I have no mic or I'd already be peicing together my album.

Basicly NO multis, weak metaphors, UNEVEN AMOUNT of bars, off flow, shit what else I gotta say.

Ideal you got some skill but you don't make sense haha. You just use random words don't you?

Whoa its no use, you'll belive what you want,
if you think you're dope, to you you are, no reason to front,
I'm a seasoned Vet. like clumsy pet doctors in kitchens,
if you ain't beliving yet then you'll get rocked so listen,
you can't help but smile when you hear the fatal raps I spit,
you like being defiled as if you was a Sado Massochist,
ask your bitch, I handel shit like my job titles management,
mad with this hazordus manscript, I damage shit,
damn I'm sick, pass you kids like a teacher whos a lazy bitch,
spitting wack you kids coming tactic-less,
pascifists with plastic dicks are fake men like dildos,
my ill flows let you still know that I kill yo,
and fuck a Whoa cause Black Rob already used that gimmic hoe.

[Whoa]

:lol:

''i have no mic, if i had id already be an emcee''

you rat bastard, a mic costs like 300$

got get one to drop some other shit!

and you just dropped an other wack fuckin ''rhyme''

and i dont write whoa cause of that weak ****** Black Rob

Idealeyez burns you, but you're to blind to see the facts

[Idealeyez]

Ideal you got some skill but you don't make sense haha. You just use random words don't you?

why does everything have to be a competition with you? if you ask me it seem like YOU have something to prove.

[Whoa]

word

and if ever _____JEKLROKS_____ would battle Idealeyez

my money would be on Idealeyes for sure!

He rhymes, he makes sense, doesnt have to use useless metaphors, and the stuff he writes actually makes sense!

_____JEKLROKS_____ why dont you try out for American Idol or something, i really like watching The Best Of The Worst
Pretty sure Kelly Clarkson n Clay Atkin can rhyme better then you

[Whoa]

_____JEKLROKS_____
So i cant help but smile when you actually spit?
cause the only thing that comes out of your mouth is pure shit
Idealeyez has talent, where you coming from son?
you can keystyle till your fingers fall apart and you'll still wont be number one
Kids like you cant get any props in this game, your name will never be related to fame, its a shame you actually think you have what it takes to get to the top
More like a puss filled pimple just before it goes *POP*
the only thing that flows is the tears off your cheeks after you get booed off stage at the freestylin show
you'll never make it, never get close, cause wannabe's like you get burnt like toast
time to end this shit cause i aint got all day
you best to quit this charade cause whoa is here to stay

[Idealeyez]

_____JEKLROKS_____ why dont you try out for American Idol or something, i really like watching The Best Of The Worst
Pretty sure Kelly Clarkson n Clay Atkin can rhyme better then you

ROFL....you forgot William Hung


So i cant help but smile when you actually spit?
cause the only thing that comes out of your mouth is pure shit
Idealeyez has talent, where you coming from son?
you can keystyle till your fingers fall apart and you'll still wont be number one
Kids like you cant get any props in this game, your name will never be related to fame, its a shame you actually think you have what it takes to get to the top
More like a puss filled pimple just before it goes *POP*
the only thing that flows is the tears off your cheeks after you get booed off stage at the freestylin show
you'll never make it, never get close, cause wannabe's like you get burnt like toast
time to end this shit cause i aint got all day
you best to quit this charade cause whoa is here to stay


much respect for the shout out...dope shit BTW

but like i said...i could care less about him and his comments


i mean answer this question who better

Canibus or Nelly?

[Whoa]

since Nelly has been in the hip hop scene johnson n johnson;s band aid sales have gone wayyyyyyy up


damn i hate nelly


i couldnt give less then a rats left testicle bout his comments either, i find it quite entertaining B)

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by Idealeyez@Jun 1 2005, 12:13 PM
_____JEKLROKS_____ why dont you try out for American Idol or something, i really like watching The Best Of The Worst
Pretty sure Kelly Clarkson n Clay Atkin can rhyme better then you

ROFL....you forgot William Hung


So i cant help but smile when you actually spit?
cause the only thing that comes out of your mouth is pure shit
Idealeyez has talent, where you coming from son?
you can keystyle till your fingers fall apart and you'll still wont be number one
Kids like you cant get any props in this game, your name will never be related to fame, its a shame you actually think you have what it takes to get to the top
More like a puss filled pimple just before it goes *POP*
the only thing that flows is the tears off your cheeks after you get booed off stage at the freestylin show
you'll never make it, never get close, cause wannabe's like you get burnt like toast
time to end this shit cause i aint got all day
you best to quit this charade cause whoa is here to stay


much respect for the shout out...dope shit BTW

but like i said...i could care less about him and his comments


i mean answer this question who better

Canibus or Nelly?
My names William, so please belive I'm Hung.

Either you are both really stupid or both riding each others dicks soo much you're spinning in circles.


"you can't help but smile when you hear the fatal raps I spit,
you like being defiled as if you was a Sado Massochist,
ask your bitch, I handel shit like my job titles management,
mad with this hazordus manscript, I damage shit," Yeah I can't rhyme. HAHAHA!!!Are you in denile?

"Kids like you cant get any props in this game, your name will never be related to fame, its a shame you actually think you have what it takes to get to the top" <3 played ass rhymes. THATS IT.
"More like a puss filled pimple just before it goes *POP*
the only thing that flows is the tears off your cheeks after you get booed off stage at the freestylin show (it will always be only a show to you)
you'll never make it, never get close, cause wannabe's like you get burnt like toast" You're shit ain't even a metaphor as much as it is a smilie.(He rhymes, he makes sense, doesnt have to use useless metaphors, and the stuff he writes actually makes sense!) Umm if you acutally thought about it you'd know that the shit I write is shit to think about.


http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=22F4LMW...A006VTT6JYEPL4V (http://s45.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=22F4LMWL2XHA006VTT6JYEPL4V) <some wack ass shit I spit better than the shit you could have taken all day on but its late soo...
I said some shit like "Hotter than some lava, I ain't trying anymore, trying to find a whore, so I'mma holla at your momma."<Hahahaha.

Cannibus Or Nelly? Qwel. I gotta shit... But first, this was funny to me
"and fuck a Whoa cause Black Rob already used that gimmic hoe."
"and i dont write whoa cause of that weak ****** Black Rob"
"i couldnt give less then a rats left testicle bout his comments either, i find it quite entertaining" <Mr.Try-to-act-smart. Hahaha. I think you do.

[Whoa]

:lol:

poser

[ASEN]

Ridiculous.

Whoa, Jeklroks can write some good shit, it's been proven and is irrefutable.
Jeklroks, Whoa is real chill, and has written some decent shit in this thread.
Stop bitching, both of you. There's no point.

[Whoa]

Im listen to ASEN

We used to own this thread
then we went our seperate ways :(


sorry for bein a bitch _____JEKLROKS_____
keep spittin'

[ASEN]

Separate ways, lol

Whoa i tried hitting you up on msn a few times, it never worked

Now it's your turn: six_string_puller@hotmail.com

HIT ME UP, BABY!

[SMTXgraffin]

anyone wanna battle ?

[ASEN]

sure. Got a theme?

[Whoa]

im down, when the theme has been chosen i ll do a lil somethin

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by Whoa@May 30 2005, 02:24 PM
i still like to keystyle, but when people front bout how they are droppin ''ill rhymes'' when all they do is just drop shit, it pisses me off
but yeah i rather spit live then over the net
its just normal

_____JEKLROKS_____
send me something of you spitting LIVE, not some on line shit

or if you wanna spit quality on the net, at least do a better fuckin job
come on my block, and catch more shit than yuh grandma on diaretics/

then i'll snap yuh kneck off by yuh stainless steel necklace/

and the only hand you get, is the one hittin yuh in the face face, go take a break and go shave in the dark with mace/

and these wack versus isnt where it begins, but go hang out with black girls, and other people that got split ENDS/

and if u still wanna battle you'll get showed up, when my tongue hits the mic, the studio fuckin blows up, when yuh keystyle hits the board it makes the smileys fuckin throw up/

[selc himself]

i walk on the street with my pig on my side
we see 8 armed bulls so we say "alright"
...("whut the fuck ya doin up in this pitbullarea")
ALRIGHT!!!!
...
... (gunshots)
... (no don't cut my balls off!)
...(AAAARGH)
6 dead and one running without a head
now i walk away with Piggy Fat
i run from the cops, to my house
overthere i shoot my pig, and eat a mouse



i suck

[SMTXgraffin]

Originally posted by selc himself@Jun 2 2005, 12:09 PM
i walk on the street with my pig on my side
we see 8 armed bulls so we say "alright"
...("whut the fuck ya doin up in this pitbullarea")
ALRIGHT!!!!
...
... (gunshots)
... (no don't cut my balls off!)
...(AAAARGH)
6 dead and one running without a head
now i walk away with Piggy Fat
i run from the cops, to my house
overthere i shoot my pig, and eat a mouse



i suck
yes....
























































you do

[selc himself]

i will suck less if you think the track of nwa/dopeman with it B)

[ASEN]

SMTX, you fucked up like dykes with PMS/ I kill your first half, leave your second half on like T and X/ I leave your neck hangin off small shreds of skin like im evil/ I spit at ya so you fallin back like sin on a steeple/ im like Gin and Knievel, keep myself levitated with half a gram/ On the other hand, you might need another bustah to catch ya can/ I'm Grove street bitch, walkin around your hood with dope tee's/ While your hoes peep, low based homies swearin at me through closed teeth

Next.

[Whoa]

Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@Jun 2 2005, 12:05 PM
come on my block, and catch more shit than yuh grandma on diaretics/

then i'll snap yuh kneck off by yuh stainless steel necklace/

and the only hand you get, is the one hittin yuh in the face face, go take a break and go shave in the dark with mace/

and these wack versus isnt where it begins, but go hang out with black girls, and other people that got split ENDS/

and if u still wanna battle you'll get showed up, when my tongue hits the mic, the studio fuckin blows up, when yuh keystyle hits the board it makes the smileys fuckin throw up/
SMTX spits verses and whoa sits back n starts laughin
Hope you got better skill when you're on the trot graffin
The only mic you'll ever see is on the cover of the source
cause your lyrics are nasty like period blood lesbian intercourse
silence errupted when im on the mic
when its your turn all the people leave the site
you stepped to me kinda quick, you should of thought twice
cause a fucker like you will get sliced n diced then fed to mice
i keystyle cause i got time to kill
kinda like when you got adopted cause your mom took the pill
didnt she tell you, you aint from her womb
oh im sorry, i feel really bad i do, i do
but alot of mini thugs on this site think like you
step to me you'll only get served
punched in the face and then thrown to the curve
when will people realise i aint one to joke with
cause i ll roll you like a blunt cause you just got smoked quick
this whole ''wanna battle me'' shit is a fuckin joke
cause when i hit the mic you corny motherfuckers choke!

[Whoa]

:lol:

double serveddddddddddddddddd

[Car2nist]

whoa, your not good..>


...at all

[Whoa]

and you have something to show?

no

now get back to drawing your ugly ass cartoons
grow the fuck up you waste of sperm
your mom shouldnt of rolled over in that sperm puddle
look what it did
fag

[ASEN]

''..rolled over in the sperm puddle''

i dont like the mind spasms associated with that one. EEEUhhgh!

[Car2nist]

look at your shit, 'fed to mice'

come on your elementary you kid.

[Whoa]

:lol:

no but like you were saying ASEN
people have nothing constructive to say, car2nist just gave the perfect example!

[Whoa]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 2 2005, 12:40 PM
look at your shit, 'fed to mice'

come on your elementary you kid.
you wouldnt know how to rhyme if id throw a 20pound book in your lap and explain it to you in 35 diffrent languages

just speak when you have something constructive to say
now crawl back to your herb thread

[Car2nist]

the only think i crawl back on is the 20s that i ride on
so go back to ridin' in the back of your mommy's ride son
i dont try and be fake, and act hard on the internet
but your the opposite, little kid, actin like a hip-hop vet
im tired of you kids, just stop rhymin, you give it a bad name
im from the projects kid, you from the burbs, it aint the same

[Whoa]

:lol:


Insert Comment Here

[Car2nist]

"silence errupted when im on the mic
when its your turn all the people leave the site
you stepped to me kinda quick, you should of thought twice
cause a fucker like you will get sliced n diced then fed to mice"

im sorry suburban, your shits WHACK

you've never stepped onto the mic ONCE in your life, so shut the fuck up :)

why the fuck am i in a keystyle place arguing with a little 14 year old chump?

[Whoa]

i've never stepped to a mic?
and im 14?

:lol:
goes to show how kids like you are ignorant
im old enough to know when im arguing with a little boy who is thriving for attention so he comes on the www to seek it!
If ever you come to MTL, i ll show you what i rip when im on stage!

[Car2nist]

your shit, what better would you be on the mic? if your keystyle is that bad, i wonder how bad your freestyle is lol

and yea, your 14 or 15, you said it on this site.

im 19, come on, how old are you?

[ASEN]

I think whoa is 21. 22?

Im sixteen, but i bet i've been through more shit than most of you.

[Whoa]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 2 2005, 01:10 PM
and yea, your 14 or 15, you said it on this site.


I'm 22 you moron

find where i said that i was 14 and i ll give you a treat

[Car2nist]

for someone whos 22, you sure as hell cant draw

and you sure as hell have the most elementary rhymes.

[selc himself]

in this treath, i see two womens fight
whoa and car2nist, for their rights
they're are talking shit and being a dick
but both never putted, ever a train flick
they remind me at two bitches yellin on my block
i came with Piggy Fat and they were in shock
everybody know me as the local HERB-man
but atleast i paint with 4€ montana cans
people like you always start beef
thats why you better press F6 and leave
now its time to get my daily hoe- receive
com'on Piggy Fat its 9o' clock time for Suburb-Patrol
we come with plastic knives and a voodoo doll
its time to kill car2nist and whoa
we slap them with a boa

am i good?

[Whoa]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 2 2005, 01:49 PM
for someone whos 22, you sure as hell cant draw

and you sure as hell have the most elementary rhymes.
you're 19?

no job?
always at home in front of the PC chokin the chicken while your bitch mom feeds you
wow, you must be so proud

[joker00]

^hahahaha

[ASEN]

So the egos clash, once again. Why can't we all be friends? :unsure:

[ASEN]

Originally posted by selc himself@Jun 2 2005, 02:40 PM
in this treath, i see two womens fight
whoa and car2nist, for their rights
they're are talking shit and being a dick
but both never putted, ever a train flick
they remind me at two bitches yellin on my block
i came with Piggy Fat and they were in shock
everybody know me as the local HERB-man
but atleast i paint with 4€ montana cans
people like you always start beef
thats why you better press F6 and leave
now its time to get my daily hoe- receive
com'on Piggy Fat its 9o' clock time for Suburb-Patrol
we come with plastic knives and a voodoo doll
its time to kill car2nist and whoa
we slap them with a boa

am i good?
No. But you know, as long as you accept it and keep progressing, you're better than most people here.

[KaOs-OneR]

asen, spit one.. or should i say.. rapidly type one?.. :lol:

[ASEN]

I did write something on page 55... check it out.

Yo bs family, i just got news from skelebone/ sent me a two-stamped letter saying only fools use telephones/ so i told him, you aint seen this cat Kaos-oner/ Naked children and a curved ass in his sig, ain't that a bummer?/nope, homie didn't care, told me he would scold me if i dared/ to tell everyone skelebone's gay, but i'd still be gaze-holding in a stare-off/ so he squared off, paired off with this italien with no brassière on/ fuck this, i'm out like Leslie Neilsen and the movie buisness/ i got enough enemies and nemesis, don't make me start a groupie shit-list

Very random, but you wanted something quick.

[Car2nist]

Originally posted by Whoa+Jun 2 2005, 04:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Whoa @ Jun 2 2005, 04:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Car2nist@Jun 2 2005, 01:49 PM
for someone whos 22, you sure as hell cant draw

and you sure as hell have the most elementary rhymes.
you're 19?

no job?
always at home in front of the PC chokin the chicken while your bitch mom feeds you
wow, you must be so proud [/b][/quote]
sorry bro, im not you, no need to be describing your life
sittin on the pc all day? chokin your chicken, thinkin bout my wife?
nah, i dont have a wife, i aint gunna play, but your mom even cooks for you?
damn, i'm proud, i cook for my self son, you have no fuckin' clue
your whack, you cant draw, nor rap, so i'll end this shit
everythin fuckin kid will agree with me that you're the worst in this pit
cause if i wasnt, then you wouldnt be the only little kid tryin' to explain your life
expressing them as lies pushin' them on me like you livin my life?
i tell the truth, im from the projects, and i got style
your just another suburban white boy stuck on eminems nuts in 8 mile

[Vitamin]

BANG BANG BANG!!
BRAP BRAP!


heres a freestyle i posted on hundredproof. but no one even goes on that shit!


yo, drop rhymes hardcore in the lyricist lounge
loud like a bitch, call me a lyrical hound
and i spit mad rhymes cuz im lyrically skilled
wont hesitate to fight cuz i'll literally kill
Hope is doomed, for all you low ballers
we're shot callers, drive drop tops and wear hot collars
i pull that angry rap like my ass is demonic
have your ass smokin like im tokin on chronic
i wont hesitate to squeeze
Make you levitate with ease
have you graspin your body like you gotta disease
i spit shit so hot, its like my breath is on fire
i'll have your ass screachin, like canadian tire
im off this shit, sober like a priest
while hurtin mad kids, like rape was a disease.

[selc himself]

Originally posted by ASEN+Jun 2 2005, 04:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Jun 2 2005, 04:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-selc himself@Jun 2 2005, 02:40 PM
in this treath, i see two womens fight
whoa and car2nist, for their rights
they're are talking shit and being a dick
but both never putted, ever a train flick
they remind me at two bitches yellin on my block
i came with Piggy Fat and they were in shock
everybody know me as the local HERB-man
but atleast i paint with 4€ montana cans
people like you always start beef
thats why you better press F6 and leave
now its time to get my daily hoe- receive
com'on Piggy Fat its 9o' clock time for Suburb-Patrol
we come with plastic knives and a voodoo doll
its time to kill car2nist and whoa
we slap them with a boa

am i good?
No. But you know, as long as you accept it and keep progressing, you're better than most people here. [/b][/quote]
i don't know a shit about rapping it was just for fun u know ;)

[Car2nist]

where'd you go? i don't see you nowhere, and yet you keep postin
in other pieces of the forum scared of this beatin i keep hostin
whoa, did you leave because off 6 lines i lyrically murked you?
or are you just scared cause off the internet i could physically hurt you?
but hey, it's just the internet, and you lie about your age
you claim to be a mic-checka but you're to pussy to take the stage
im here to call you out once and for all, so don't bring your bullshit here no more
cause your game is weak and with this spit i leave cats beggin for more

[Whoa]

like ASEN said car2n, i dont come on the net lookin for beef or to make enemies
i dont plan on starting anytime soon
you're a cool cat
let's leave it at that
peace treaty

[Car2nist]

sounds good to me.

[Whoa]

good
now, back to car thread

:lol:

[infer one]

i got a penis in my pants and a penis in my but,
you think im on the grime but im just a homo slut,
(ohhhh)
i got gross rhymes thatll make say ew,
pre school type shit like i was fuckin 2,
(ohhh shittt)
i got fans of my plans to pick up kids in vans,
rape em and leave em as left over for my clans,
(he is so illlllll)
i even got e-friends who think im real cool,
but when i tell you im gay dont feel like a fool,
cuase i know you already knew,
so whatcya gona do?
bith
(OHHHHHHHHH INFER SPITZZZZ FIRE YOOOOO)

stay tuned for more infer rap steeeeezzzzz

[infer one]

so here is the scoop, me and havoc met up at some hiphop show and we did this freestyle collab up on stage, these were the words of wisdom, just pretend there is a hot beat in the background and people yellin out ohh shit!


infer one- i fuck prostitutes raw like theres no tomarow, i got the herpes so bad i cant even swallow, my mode is something you might wanna fallow, sharpen my dick and make your chest cavity hollow

havoc- ill blast you int he face with semen
while infer is in your ass hole reamin
extreme-in' [infer-(haha)]
fuck you over and leave you bleedin'
i got your girl in my van and on her face i will be creamin'
now im leavin'
put your bodies in teh stream n'
beat the fuck outta your head so you stop screamin'

[infer-(*****s dont know whats up)]
[havoc-(they dont, they really dont)]

infer- Yo, let me get graphic, just like havoc im jarassic, fuckin with my ***** then prepare to get your ass kicked, we fuckin fuck in bed, we bun buddies, like i said, he calls me leroy and i fuckin call him ted, we break in to mourgs and fuck the bodies that are dead, then the familys mourn in their life of dread, we sit back on the beach, see priests tryin to preach, throw sand in their eyes, cuase its our life they try to reach, and we dont be havin that religion thing, cuase we got much better things to do like fuck eachother till we sing, "ohhh yesss" grab my breast, while i lay you on the floor, fuck you inside out like a dead crack whore, then we are done, like i said, when you hear us you better run, havoc and his ***** infer one....

[havoc-(like it aint nothin')]
[infer-(fuck bombingscience *****)]

*beat fades away

[Car2nist]

infer, your a sham, and you and havoc are lame
so get the fuck out this thread, and to the rest of the gays, the same
i dont wanna hear about your little gay escapades
about you fuckin him in the ass, or how you play naked sherades
cause yall are nobodies, and you heard it from the white african
spittin' the hardest game that only a black man can
but hey, i break the norms, and ill set yall straight
cause entering this is like you boys in prison, straight jail bait.

i dont even rap, and thats the worst part
but my years in the projects gave me this art

[infer one]

:lol:

[Car2nist]

see, im a professional, i can say 'fuck the intellect'
cause im only here to lyrically break-ya-neck
you bitches are past do, it's time for me to collect
but instead ill let you postwhores watch the re-runs of star-trek
you bitches are nothin, and you are on this graffiti site
no contributions, hell the least you could do is bite
but you dont, you're just internet nerds, yet got no recognition
i can start shit at anytime with no keys in the ignition
so imma let ya'll go with a little bit of the dirty south
and say 'fuck yall' because i got a dirty mouth

[infer one]

so i suck mad dicks like every night before bed,
i take them deep, yeah thats what i said,
if you think im gay then you got my number,
lets have a little party, call it slumber,
i like 6th grade girls cuase im a weirdo,
i wait in my car and say "hey come here yo!"
another 6th grade girl is my attitude,
but if i get cuaght then im gettin screwed,
but i dont care cuase i heard in the pen,
you can take it in the asshole.

see that didnt even have to rhyme my last line, cuase im so gangster/gay so now im gettin mine

[ASEN]

inferno, you on a cum binge, prone to spitting dumb things
your junk stinks, like seeing car2n dump on some hung tits

next.

[scrabble]

dont hate on infer ASS-EN

[N0$1L'EARL"]

I PAINT ON WALLS U CAN LIK MY BALLS
I DONT CARE IF ITS YOUR NEW PAINTED FENCE WAT I NOK IN YOUR HEAD IS SOME SENCE.SO FUK OFF FUK COPS ILL MAKE YUR BODY DROP.

[ASEN]

Originally posted by scrabble@Jun 4 2005, 12:41 AM
dont hate on infer ASS-EN
(sigh)

Freestyle thread? As in random diss thread? As in dont take what's said here personally?

Learn, kids.

[vegimite on toast]

Originally posted by N0$1L'EARL"@Jun 4 2005, 05:14 PM
I PAINT ON WALLS U CAN LIK MY BALLS
I DONT CARE IF ITS YOUR NEW PAINTED FENCE WAT I NOK IN YOUR HEAD IS SOME SENCE.SO FUK OFF FUK COPS ILL MAKE YUR BODY DROP.
You have to laugh at this guy, he thinks it's a good rhyme. :lol:

[Car2nist]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 3 2005, 08:53 PM
see, im a professional, i can say 'fuck the intellect'
cause im only here to lyrically break-ya-neck
you bitches are past do, it's time for me to collect
but instead ill let you postwhores watch the re-runs of star-trek
you bitches are nothin, and you are on this graffiti site
no contributions, hell the least you could do is bite
but you dont, you're just internet nerds, yet got no recognition
i can start shit at anytime with no keys in the ignition
so imma let ya'll go with a little bit of the dirty south
and say 'fuck yall' because i got a dirty mouth
haha i barely remember writing it, but if i do say so my self, pretty snazzy

and that earl guys shit is OFF THE HOOK :|

[KaOs-OneR]

Originally posted by ASEN@Jun 2 2005, 05:04 PM
I did write something on page 55... check it out.

Yo bs family, i just got news from skelebone/ sent me a two-stamped letter saying only fools use telephones/ so i told him, you aint seen this cat Kaos-oner/ Naked children and a curved ass in his sig, ain't that a bummer?/nope, homie didn't care, told me he would scold me if i dared/ to tell everyone skelebone's gay, but i'd still be gaze-holding in a stare-off/ so he squared off, paired off with this italien with no brassière on/ fuck this, i'm out like Leslie Neilsen and the movie buisness/ i got enough enemies and nemesis, don't make me start a groupie shit-list

Very random, but you wanted something quick.
:lol: :lol: :lol: niice

[scrabble]

Originally posted by ASEN+Jun 4 2005, 07:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Jun 4 2005, 07:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-scrabble@Jun 4 2005, 12:41 AM
dont hate on infer ASS-EN
(sigh)

Freestyle thread? As in random diss thread? As in dont take what's said here personally?

Learn, kids. [/b][/quote]
hahaha im kiddin hate on infer all you want :blink:

[KaOs-OneR]

okay well this is my first time doin this..
im kinda powerful make a bitch get naked like a dirty stuardess..
take my anger out on you break your face from my fluent-stress..
Gettin better in this graff game constantly with success..
im nasty and ill beat you down then eatcha-fleshh...
and car2nist, you shouldnt talk youre just a failing-mess..
nothin personal, just dont like your long-term plan..
It sounds like, eat, sketch and stalk girls like that bitch from swimfan..
like tech said, bitches know im a freak like the elephant man..
and as for you asen, i like you.. youre my right-hand-man.. :lol:
and fame, for you.. you kinda suck ass at this rap game..
and now im debating-.. why they call you fame you obvisouly have none of that..
if you got someone who just started jumpin on top of you and shankin' ya back..


first one ever.. decent? oh, and nothing personal to anyone..

[ASEN]

Originally posted by KaOs-OneR@Jun 4 2005, 11:14 AM

im kinda powerful make a bitch get naked like a dirty stuardess..
take my anger out on you break your face from my fluent-stress..
Gettin better in this graff game constantly with success..
im nasty and ill beat you down then eatcha-fleshh...
and car2nist, you shouldnt talk youre just a failing-mess..
nothin personal, just dont like your long-term plan..
It sounds like, eat, sketch and stalk girls like that bitch from swimfan..
like tech said, bitches know im a freak like the elephant man..
and as for you asen, i like you.. youre my right-hand-man.. :lol:
and fame, for you.. you kinda suck ass at this rap game..
and now im debating-.. why they call you fame you obvisouly have none of that..
if you got someone who just started jumpin on top of you and shankin' ya back..



Thanks for the props. Allow me to give you some advice:

Don't cop Immortal Technique lyrics.

Freedom of speech

Walk in the club smoothly, with an L in my hand
Bitches know that im a freak, like the elephant man
intelligent plans, fuck a record deal i want development plans for my benevolent clan

We've all been there, i've been there, Immortal is a great MC but biting his lyrics is played out.
Stick to basic ideas, forming metaphors only when you know what to say.

[Car2nist]

immortal technique is a whack bitch, tryin to spit a bunch of intellect
bite his rhymes in the rap game you're just bound to get-wrecked
hes a no-body and always will be, never gunna get the dough
he can spit about his false life, so, i spit the truth as i blow dro
kaos, you can bite his rhymes all you want, because you'll end up like him
a nobody tryin to get famous but will never be half the worth as slim

^eh, whack, but oh well

[ASEN]

well, when you start off some shit by dissing Immortal Technique, shit gets awkward.

[Car2nist]

fuck immortal, hes every suburban white boys idol, his shits whack, i dont like it one bit, im not a fan of slow rappin white boys...

[KaOs-OneR]

umm buddy, immortal technique got one of the nicest flows in the game.. and hes been offered million-dollar deals plenty of times.. but hes one of the few rappers who realize that going into the mainstream rap game just makes your flow turn like the rest of em.. fake and cheesy.. like 50, fuck 50.. he has 10 good songs tops.. i havent heard one bad tech song.. so i think you should shut your mouth buddy.. because technique has a fuckin amazing flow.. can you name anybody better?

[Car2nist]

i have so many immortal technique songs on my comp, and i dont like ANY of them, they're whack, slow, sure, he got flow, but his shit doesnt appeal to me one bit.

sorry, the only people that LIKE him, are SUBURBAN RAISED WHITE BOYS

i've yet to meet a black person who thinks his shit is the slightest bit good.

Jay-Z is the king of the rap game, great flows, great diversity, can switch up on any beat, i dont think immortal could step to Jay on Jays worst day, sorry.

[infer one]

how bout that big l and jay z free style shit is mad long, big l burned over jay z

[Car2nist]

ask yourself this "who the fuck cares about big l?"

apparently nobody, you can go freestyle shit all you want, see cannibus? where's he? NOWHERE, no one gives a shit about these freestyle battle rappers like eyedea and shit

look how many tracks jay got, look how many cds he released, look how they all go platinum, come on, the mans a legend, the man got it made.

[scrabble]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 11:45 AM
i have so many immortal technique songs on my comp, and i dont like ANY of them, they're whack, slow, sure, he got flow, but his shit doesnt appeal to me one bit.

sorry, the only people that LIKE him, are SUBURBAN RAISED WHITE BOYS

i've yet to meet a black person who thinks his shit is the slightest bit good.

Jay-Z is the king of the rap game, great flows, great diversity, can switch up on any beat, i dont think immortal could step to Jay on Jays worst day, sorry.
duh!! but so what if a black man doesnt like him


all the kiddies like jay-z cus hes big pimpin!!!

[ASEN]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 11:45 AM
sorry, the only people that LIKE him, are SUBURBAN RAISED WHITE BOYS



Shut the fuck up. What is it with you and suburban white boys?
Your like the biggest bitch on this site, dissing Whoa cuz you didn't like his shit. You're no better, you inner-city rebel. Think you're all in this rap game and graffitti game, drawing cartoons and spitting wacker shit than any of us here. You're full of yourself, and to think, two months ago you wanted to kill yourself.

You need councelling, a vacation and a girlfriend.

Once again, shut the fuck up.

[Car2nist]

asen, i burn over 90% of this bitches here in the freestyle thread and i dont even rap, bitchboy.

its the truth about the suburban white boys, all you fucks here are suburban raised white boys, minus a given few, you kids look up to the worst of the worst and still try and act hard. You internet nerds got no style, no class, no nothin, go back to huggin your daddy's nuts, cause your bullshit doesnt effect me.

[Car2nist]

Asen, your skippin the facts, you KNOW your a suburban upper class white boy, so why you bitchin?

go back to listening to your slow ass rap songs and fake inspirations.

[LavakingX]

I'm black I like immortal (Not really I've never heard of him :lol:)

I thought Jay-Z was more Hip-Hop than Rap? I've never heard all of his stuff so don't mind me.

Anyway to whoever was cussin suburb raised whiteboys don't hate on em

You don't have to be poor or black to like Rap or Hip-Hop.

I live in england in what you would call A suburb I'm black fairly Rich and love hip-hop then you have ppl from New York who are white but love hip-hop cos they were raised around Black people (Beastie Boys).

There's no room for racism in rap/hip-hop it has enough troubles

[scrabble]

im upper class as it gets my mom drives a lexus and my dad drives a expedition, since when do you have to be homeless to listen to hip-hop and/or write?

[Car2nist]

you dont have to be homeless, im sayin, when you were raised in the projects around black people all your life, you have a better understanding for hip-hop and whats hot in the rap game, alot of the suburban raised kids just get into it when they're 13, 14, and think they know all the shit cause they listen to immortal technique yet have no idea who the real innovators are. Plus their mommy's and daddy's object to them listening to it lol

ive been lower-class for.. 90% of my life, now we're living pretty good only because my gramps took us into his house, and hes leaving us with a sweet inheritence which i thank God for everyday since he turned it in our favor since we've been taking care of him and keeping him company...

[LavakingX]

Originally posted by scrabble@Jun 4 2005, 12:08 PM
im upper class as it gets my mom drives a lexus and my dad drives a expedition, since when do you have to be homeless to listen to hip-hop and/or write?
Word.

See what I mean

Yeah Hip-Hop and rap was born and lives in the slums of new york
but how bout these rappers that drive lowriders wear pimp clothes and have mansions?
They write the stuff and aren't poor.

And look at eminem dude was white went against all odds and is now a famous rap star!
yeah he's a dick but still

[Car2nist]

all these hip hop stars pretty much grew up like i did, in the projects with no father figure to help them through life... they got into drugs, selling crack and what-not, and hey, I think how they're living is every person from the projects dream... though all we really want is just a nice house to settle down in... ask any rapper, they'll tell you they didnt expect to live in these mansions, but when you got the money, why not?

[scrabble]

oh yeah, ok i see where your getting at. i find it funny when people think if its underground its way hotter than mainstream shit.

edit**** took me for ever to post this, it was replying to what car2nist said on the page before,

[Car2nist]

you dont have to be homeless, im sayin, when you were raised in the projects around black people all your life, you have a better understanding for hip-hop and whats hot in the rap game, alot of the suburban raised kids just get into it when they're 13, 14, and think they know all the shit cause they listen to immortal technique yet have no idea who the real innovators are. Plus their mommy's and daddy's object to them listening to it lol

ive been lower-class for.. 90% of my life, now we're living pretty good only because my gramps took us into his house, and hes leaving us with a sweet inheritence which i thank God for everyday since he turned it in our favor since we've been taking care of him and keeping him company...


ill put it on this page too, its raw facts kids, dont ignore the truth

and im sure if one of my black friends came to one of your doors and your parents answered, they'd swear they're getting robbed.

[infer one]

eminem blows ass
big l burnt *****s
im white and spanish and not a fan of immortal technique
my freestyle burns car2n
idk wtf people are trying to say, any one can have opinion

[infer one]

did i say eminem sucks dick?

[Car2nist]

ever hear of a rapper coming outta the suburbs? thought not. well Kottonmouth Kings (but they dont count)

eminem USED to be good, then he ran outta shit to rap about and just got stupid, his next album (whenever, if-ever) will be the whackest made (guaranteed) you could tell he ran outta shit in encore and the cd before.

[LavakingX]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 12:16 PM
all these hip hop stars pretty much grew up like i did, in the projects with no father figure to help them through life... they got into drugs, selling crack and what-not, and hey, I think how they're living is every person from the projects dream... though all we really want is just a nice house to settle down in... ask any rapper, they'll tell you they didnt expect to live in these mansions, but when you got the money, why not?
Ok yeah word I agree with that

Question

What are the Projects? How did it get that name?

I'm guessing it's just another word for the slums...

Most of My family still live in pretty bad british places (Hackney,Bethnal green etc. etc.)
but I guess as my mum and her sisters/brothers grew up realised they wanted to make something of the chance they'd been givin.So i live in some nig house in chigwell :lol: life is good

ok back to the rapping!

[Car2nist]

the projects are just big ugly buildings in the poor section of town, the section 8 housin developments... i've lived there for awhile when i was a kid, and you know what? I liked it alot more than living in these burbs i live in now... theres never anything to do

[LavakingX]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 12:34 PM
the projects are just big ugly buildings in the poor section of town, the section 8 housin developments... i've lived there for awhile when i was a kid, and you know what? I liked it alot more than living in these burbs i live in now... theres never anything to do
I'm guessing something to do is selling crack? Shooting someone? :lol:
I wish i lived there even though i proably wouldn't survive I admire the kids that live there who learn to survive the unsurvivable.
Yet i find it sad that 11 year old's get shot there.

[Car2nist]

haha no i never sold crack or anything, but the people there were interesting... I remember this mexican magician who lived there, he was married to a 400lb woman who was missing a toe and never got off her couch... that was my babysitter lol

he was an amazing magician, i still remember him doing magic tricks for all us kids at the park (which consisted of a swingset and a little slide)

[scrabble]

the bigger the projects the grimier they are

[Car2nist]

^^haha aint that the truth

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

FUCK THE BICKERING KIDS,
YOU JUST KILLING THIS SHIT,
A THREAD ABOUT RHYMING,
IN TWO PAGES SEEN NONE OF IT,
FUCK YOU ALL WITH IGNORANT OPPINIONS, STATED AS FACTS,
MOST Y'ALL CATS CAN'T THINK HIP HOP WITH OUT THINKING GATS,
IF YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING, WHY TRY TO TEACH?
MY KNOWLEDGE TO YOU KIDS LIKE THE COOKIE JAR, UNABLE TO REACH,
IF YOU REALLY KNEW HIP HOP, YOU'D REALLY KNOW,
THAT HIP HOP IS ABOUT RESPECTING EVERYONES FLOW,
ENLIGHTENING THE MIND WHILE PERFECTING YOUR OWN,
LEARNING FROM EVERYTHING, NOT JUST WHATS CHOSE,
NOT DISCRIMINATION FROM THOUGHS WHOS VIEWS MAY DIFFER,
BUT TO LEARN FROM OTHERS MISTAKES TO HELP YOU THROUGH QUICKER,
FUCK IT I JUST ATE ABOUT A GRAM OF SOME DRO IN A BUTTERMILK BISCUIT.

[LavakingX]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Jun 4 2005, 01:27 PM
FUCK THE BICKERING KIDS,
YOU JUST KILLING THIS SHIT,
A THREAD ABOUT RHYMING,
IN TWO PAGES SEEN NONE OF IT,
FUCK YOU ALL WITH IGNORANT OPPINIONS, STATED AS FACTS,
MOST Y'ALL CATS CAN'T THINK HIP HOP WITH OUT THINKING GATS,
IF YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING, WHY TRY TO TEACH?
MY KNOWLEDGE TO YOU KIDS LIKE THE COOKIE JAR, UNABLE TO REACH,
IF YOU REALLY KNEW HIP HOP, YOU'D REALLY KNOW,
THAT HIP HOP IS ABOUT RESPECTING EVERYONES FLOW,
ENLIGHTENING THE MIND WHILE PERFECTING YOUR OWN,
LEARNING FROM EVERYTHING, NOT JUST WHATS CHOSE,
NOT DISCRIMINATION FROM THOUGHS WHOS VIEWS MAY DIFFER,
BUT TO LEARN FROM OTHERS MISTAKES TO HELP YOU THROUGH QUICKER,
FUCK IT I JUST ATE ABOUT A GRAM OF SOME DRO IN A BUTTERMILK BISCUIT.
That..was..really..good

Even though it was against me

and we weren't talkin bout hip-hop we were talkin bout rap

I never associate hip-hop with gat's i only associate that wit gangsta rap

as soon as i think of something i'll put a rap up here

[ASEN]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 11:56 AM
asen, i burn over 90% of this bitches here in the freestyle thread and i dont even rap, bitchboy.

its the truth about the suburban white boys, all you fucks here are suburban raised white boys, minus a given few, you kids look up to the worst of the worst and still try and act hard. You internet nerds got no style, no class, no nothin, go back to huggin your daddy's nuts, cause your bullshit doesnt effect me.
hey, i thought i said shut the fuck up.
You generalize a whole lot. First of all, you ASSUMED Whoa was 14-15, when in fact he was 22. You ASSUME im from a suburban rich town, which i'm not. I've traveled and lived in more places than your ass could ever imagine. You ASSUME were all from suburban rich cities, which proves how quick to conclusions and closed-minded you are. Nobody here gives a fuck about your depressive, opiniated ass.

Face it cartoon, you fucking suck at everything. The only thing that slightly resembles graffiti i saw of yours was some half-assed sketched photoshopped onto some gay box. You can't rap, you can't paint, you can't even find solid ground for those fucked up assesments you seem to love displaying at any and all times. Go work out and leave graffiti to those who know.



Cartoon forums (http://forum.bcdb.com/)

Here, i even dug up a cartoon forum for you to go post your cartoons in. Maybe they'll give a shit about you wanting to pull the trigger on yourself, cuz we sure as hell don't.

[Car2nist]

asen i hate to say, but i havent seen one piece of work from you aside from in this thread, and you suck at rapping

you dont fuckin know me, so i'd shut the fuck up you little shit

OH, and WHOA is fuckin 15 dumbass.

its sad when your on the same level as whoa at keystylin and you're prolly on the same level as his shitty artistic abilities.

[ASEN]

I don't need to prove my work to anyone on here. What i do stays on the streets, not on message boards.

Im a little shit? Cmon, come cry on my shoulder a bit, Daniel. We can be friends, i swear.

Don't forget to check out those cartoon forums, Duffy.

Oh, i can edit my posts too. Don't make me break out some old quotes of your post-partum depression stunt like Brooke Shields, you got no skills at anything, period. Whats sad is that you proved it yourself.

[Car2nist]

you aint got shit on the streets, shut the fuck up, your a nobody, just admit it, actin like someone on the internet, talkin big, yet NOTHIN to back your faggot ass up

might as well leave these forums since you dont contribute shit to it.

and i dont have depression anymore now that I put my faith in God, so you can say all you want about it haha, you're still a nobody

[ASEN]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 04:28 PM
you aint got shit on the streets, shut the fuck up, your a nobody, just admit it, actin like someone on the internet, talkin big, yet NOTHIN to back your faggot ass up

might as well leave these forums since you dont contribute shit to it.

and i dont have depression anymore now that I put my faith in God, so you can say all you want about it haha, you're still a nobody
I'm a nobody?

The difference between me and you here is that i know where i stand, i know who i am, i know my shits on the streets. You can say otherwise, won't change shit. You on the other hand, my friend, are a cartoonist. I mean, really, check out that forum, bro.

And you know what? Only pathetic assholes put their faith in god, it means they're weak minded pieces of shit who can't find reasons to live on their own.

Amen, Danny-boy.

[Car2nist]

Actually, I was weak minded for the 18 years of my life when I didn't have God in my life, when I found God, it gave me the strength to get up and do something with my life instead of sitting around all day bitching about how I'm going nowhere. If you know where you stand, you should know your a nobody and just face the facts, you have no work, you have nothin, you have your feeble excuse for a keystyle all over this thread, thats it, thats all, thats all there is.

[ASEN]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 04:36 PM
If you know where you stand, you should know your a nobody and just face the facts, you have no work, you have nothin, you have your feeble excuse for a keystyle all over this thread, thats it, thats all, thats all there is.
There you go, assuming again. It must really suck being out of ideas, with no solid ground anywhere for you to say anything about me.

You know why i don't post flix on these forums? Because i'm active in my community, keeping shit up, other writers, those that count, know where i stand and what i believe in.

Why the hell would you talk shit about my keystyles? Just exactly how stupid are you? You think i give a shit about some random lines off the top of my head?

I DONT FEEL THE NEED TO PROVE MYSELF TO ANYONE ON THIS E-COMMUNITY, UNLIKE YOURSELF. I DO NOT NEED THE GRATIFICATION AND RESPECT OF ''PEERS'' I HAVE NEVER SEEN.

Put that through your fucking thick skull, drop this shit, and accept that you insult people with no basis other than the ones you imagine to be true.

[Car2nist]

i assume shit on this webpage because 90% of the kids on here are actually suburban raised white boys, you should know thats the truth.

[ASEN]

Hows that? You automatically label any new kid that comes on here ''suburban white boy''? Toys need information, new kids want to know how to go at it, and theyre suburban whites?

Listen. I'll admit i have no work posted on here, and if that makes you doubt my work, too bad. I on the other hand, have seen some of your work, i tried giving you advice and to drop some thoughts.

I dont think you're an asshole, i don't hate you. What i hate is people who assume shit, people who automatically label everthing that comes before their eyes, and people with no respect. I try being respectful on these forums, share a few laughs and open my mind to whats going on in other parts of the world.

Isn't that the whole point of these forums?

Let's drop it.

[Car2nist]

you seem like a cool guy and whatnot, and yea, i know assumed shit annoys you, it annoys me too. What also annoys me is how 90% of this forum has no idea what the fuck their talking about, and that pisses me off more than anything, i label kids as suburban white boys because they know damn well thats what they are, little HxC kids coming in along with your fair share of wiggers, i hate seein it, i hate seein their bullshit work, so i have an automatic labeler for this forum...

anyways, im out, got shit to do, ill be back later.

[ASEN]

I see where you're coming from. I just want you to answer this question for me, and don't take it as an insult to your reputation or skills: Where do you think you stand in the graffiti culture? Are you active in it? In other words, do you write?

[sika_2002]

can we get back to the rapping

[ASEN]

Sure. By the way, no rapping goes down in a context where nobody sees each others faces.

..i got nothing for now, ill probably post something later.

[->toNE*]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 05:02 PM
you seem like a cool guy and whatnot, and yea, i know assumed shit annoys you, it annoys me too. What also annoys me is how 90% of this forum has no idea what the fuck their talking about, and that pisses me off more than anything, i label kids as suburban white boys because they know damn well thats what they are, little HxC kids coming in along with your fair share of wiggers, i hate seein it, i hate seein their bullshit work, so i have an automatic labeler for this forum...

anyways, im out, got shit to do, ill be back later.
yo what are u suburan white boy?.u do got a point about 90% is white suburban kids tho..

[->toNE*]

Originally posted by Car2nist@Jun 4 2005, 12:26 PM
ever hear of a rapper coming outta the suburbs? thought not. well Kottonmouth Kings (but they dont count)

eminem USED to be good, then he ran outta shit to rap about and just got stupid, his next album (whenever, if-ever) will be the whackest made (guaranteed) you could tell he ran outta shit in encore and the cd before.
(classified).shit yo 50% of a rap group is bussiness people witch grew up stable 50%is *****s just gettin out the pen or gettn ready to do a bid.get ur facts right.
oh an all that bunk england rap sucks dick

[->toNE*]

Originally posted by das1@Nov 6 2004, 02:43 PM
this is how i roll, me and my boys destroyin all toys, i thought you knew this
ive been known to be ruthless, leave motherfuckers on the curb bloody and toothless
so why we even have to go through this, buck shots bang, its a midwest thing, fuckin piece i leave you and your hole crew speechless, cut ya open use blood for outline. :angry:
nice lil free ya had flowing

[->toNE*]

aiyo am board so am just gonna kick a free..nternet style BE ITCH

yo i got the M16 to there face's..they talking races,take it back befor 5-0 fines slug's in ya faces.you B.S cats talking like am fake roll up,yo parents find ya at the wake.wake up am 17 ,got the wipe on dubs,sprayin the city like john gotti did.ya i did a bid-it was real -got my face smashed on the steel,up in TIYAC belive that.i cant spell but i rap well.step-see u get dised,boo'd off the stage..North york i rep all the way-commitin crimes shotin nine's naw it was a 38.robbin wiggers wen i need ta ate.pupets who kill is what am watching,got a tony AKA a big railwaiting-to be inhailed,WOW am high.excuse me as i kiss the sky.like i said step,yall be found dead.call me a toy only if ya better,but if ya ant.dont talk to me-u wouldnt walk to me.my moms workin full time.me sellin dimes half grrr's not of weed nuthn from mother earth.its the yaayo niga cokane son.i run my street so i call myself number 1....until they step...someone gets wet,not from a bitch no the trigger eitch.until next time ama stay rich
PACE---mista evokes-416

[ASEN]

Originally posted by ASEN@Feb 21 2005, 01:07 PM
haha

Freestyle raping is dating for the next generation
No one gets left out like teaching asians sex education
Step one is find the right girl, tight curls with ripe pearls
Country-style daughter, over 18 or else they might hurl
Introductory lines are classic, but not needed in this case
Just make sure the ball hits you, then walk over to first base
You've spotted a victim, considered your options and picked em'
Now its time to aboard unexplored land like a pilgrim
Approach from behind, cuz if they see your face it's prison time
Don't drop the soap, you get poked by the guy that was killin' Dime
So you're thrustin', tryin' to keep both your nuts from bustin'
Then the girl says ''I got herpes, scumbag'', and you're like ''fuck this''
Keep that pace haste, don't stop runnin' till you in a safe place
Then call 9-1-1, you raped a girl with an STD and got your face maced
Happy endings are shit, i end a spit with a Fuck you fags and Die
ASEN ain't here, i'm his replacement movin' the mouse to Add Reply
Just reading through the old shit in this thread, and i dug this up... just for laughs.

[sika_2002]

tone, i like the begininin an end, but the middle kinda loses it

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by LavakingX+Jun 4 2005, 03:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LavakingX @ Jun 4 2005, 03:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_____JEKLROKS_____@Jun 4 2005, 01:27 PM
FUCK THE BICKERING KIDS,
YOU JUST KILLING THIS SHIT,
A THREAD ABOUT RHYMING,
IN TWO PAGES SEEN NONE OF IT,
FUCK YOU ALL WITH IGNORANT OPPINIONS, STATED AS FACTS,
MOST Y'ALL CATS CAN'T THINK HIP HOP WITH OUT THINKING GATS,
IF YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING, WHY TRY TO TEACH?
MY KNOWLEDGE TO YOU KIDS LIKE THE COOKIE JAR, UNABLE TO REACH,
IF YOU REALLY KNEW HIP HOP, YOU'D REALLY KNOW,
THAT HIP HOP IS ABOUT RESPECTING EVERYONES FLOW,
ENLIGHTENING THE MIND WHILE PERFECTING YOUR OWN,
LEARNING FROM EVERYTHING, NOT JUST WHATS CHOSE,
NOT DISCRIMINATION FROM THOUGHS WHOS VIEWS MAY DIFFER,
BUT TO LEARN FROM OTHERS MISTAKES TO HELP YOU THROUGH QUICKER,
FUCK IT I JUST ATE ABOUT A GRAM OF SOME DRO IN A BUTTERMILK BISCUIT.
That..was..really..good

Even though it was against me

and we weren't talkin bout hip-hop we were talkin bout rap

I never associate hip-hop with gat's i only associate that wit gangsta rap

as soon as i think of something i'll put a rap up here [/b][/quote]
But rap is Hip Hop, Hip Hops is not rap,
Hip Hops a way of life many forget about that,
rap is somthing you do, expressions from the soul,
flexing skills on the mics my definition of flow,
no matter what the topic, wether you feel or you don't,
if they were spitting in front of you, you won't say shit yo,
so whats the deal with fronting? *****s steady acting dope,
but when I'm up on the mic you won't see a glimmer of hope,
I'm spitting that shit to base your life on, so fuck trying to quote,
thats why when you hear my verses, your stomach sinks like um...
truth delt in every bar, like Corona or MGD,
the reason alcoholic emcees are yet to defeat me,
I gotta throw up.

[ASEN]

Want me to hold your hair?

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Nah its all good, yesterday I could have used you. I threw up on my arm bro.

[ASEN]

No way dude, Jason totally filmed it...

anyone up for some organised rhyme?

[KaOs-OneR]

lmao

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Just drop that topic. CYPHER!

[Whoa]

you aint even my caliber, im more complex then algebra,hot like africa with better loose leafs then canada,your an amateur thinkin you can rhyme with mad stamina,while im in the back of you ready to snap like a camera,mad comical thinkin you can do what i do,when im done with you your loved ones wont even recognize you,you think its all about you,may i remind you im the one with rhymes people rewind to,take a glance you aint got chance,you suckas got static who let the toys up out the attic


peace

[selc himself]

car2n shut the hell up we don't give a shit if you are from the projects

[selc himself]

and whats wrong with white suburban kids we don't say 10% here are black ghetto childs

[Whoa]

dont start useless beef folks

[ASEN]

No, start useless beef, but post it in the Mad Cow thread. Like i should've.

[Whoa]

word

[mad]

mad mat attacks back at ya wack raps i hack at that shit you spit
i split ur skull into peices with a dull cleaver that creases police heads
ayo imma naturalist, cuz sticks and stones crack backs the best
i pack the rest of shellies into bellies with my shotty cuz im fuckin naughty sprayin body organs onto church organs, im commitin more sins cuz im killin off orphans and poor kids my rhymes got more gore than war man

whoa and madmat kill off the wack when we rap
i stomp u in the gut till you omit shit,chop u up and put u into 6 pits, i spit sick raps fuck bustin caps im thrusttin scrap mettle into spleens to settle my beef. i kidnap high preists when im done theyll be lookin like a fried leech i eat the flesh of chilrden i met death and killed him, im skilled wit drill bits, i drill limbs and ligaments torment pigs and prison men, i fine tune spines with devine devices like ice picks im stickin hands in vice grips ill leave ya fuckin lifeless



i made a song a while ago that was the first verse
dont take me serious because everything i do in life is a joke

[Whoa]

oh god, that's my moto

[infer one]

peace nigs

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[KaOs-OneR]

Originally posted by mad@Jun 6 2005, 05:26 PM
mad mat attacks back at ya wack raps i hack at that shit you spit
i split ur skull into peices with a dull cleaver that creases police heads
ayo imma naturalist, cuz sticks and stones crack backs the best
i pack the rest of shellies into bellies with my shotty cuz im fuckin naughty sprayin body organs onto church organs, im commitin more sins cuz im killin off orphans and poor kids my rhymes got more gore than war man

whoa and madmat kill off the wack when we rap
i stomp u in the gut till you omit shit,chop u up and put u into 6 pits, i spit sick raps fuck bustin caps im thrusttin scrap mettle into spleens to settle my beef. i kidnap high preists when im done theyll be lookin like a fried leech i eat the flesh of chilrden i met death and killed him, im skilled wit drill bits, i drill limbs and ligaments torment pigs and prison men, i fine tune spines with devine devices like ice picks im stickin hands in vice grips ill leave ya fuckin lifeless



i made a song a while ago that was the first verse
dont take me serious because everything i do in life is a joke
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccceeeee

[KaOs-OneR]

when it comes to rhymin, my flow is just too-nice..
and when it comes to fightin, i roll at you like two-dice..
I'll peck at your bones like crows or like a few-mice..
Ill knock you out faster then it takes to chew-rice..
And when i hear ya'll *****s rhyme i feel like givin ad-vice...
Yea im tearin you up my second time rhymin, thats pretty pre-cise..
yep, you read it right, ive only done this shit twice..
And i can blow up crazier then an atomic de-vice..

...............thats one for now....... anybody wanna go against that? i think i can call that my best one yet..

[Car2nist]

kaos my lines hit you with precision, leave you bitchin for an hour claimin it must be a womans intuition, but im not a woman so wise up a take a listen to what i gotta say cause im on a lyrical mission, used to be livin in the poorest conditions but now im livin good just like i was wishin, but now im back where i was depression drivin, constantly bitchin about these conditions, but really its the time and the place that im livin, with only the weed that im hitten, but i leave cats like you missin' and outta commission, cause i rhyme like the best, north meets the south, thats my mission.

[darsone]

no good....

[Whoa]

Originally posted by darsone@Jun 7 2005, 06:31 AM
no good....
spit something and we'll be the judge ;)

[ASEN]

whoa man... we should bring in some freestyle québécois in this bitch

[Whoa]

i dont freestyle in french :(

i should start
i ll try to come up with a lil somethin somethin

[->toNE*]

Originally posted by darsone@Jun 7 2005, 06:31 AM
no good....
u fool u say shit,an u ant got shit backin it up.its a freestyle thread so u best not be writtin shit to post up.

[mad]

HEY EVERYONE




TONE IS WIGGITY WIGGITY WACK

[iLLmariachi]

ey fame watup kid. wanna round at me? u call it out man. i see ur style is weak. make a new post or start it up in here. ur freestyle "raping"...boy wut tha fuck is that? get at me holmes.

[N0$1L'EARL"]

QUE!!??....

[scrabble]

bump

sidenote**stop bumping shitty battles

[Whoa]

scrabble STOP WITH THE FUCKIN BUMPS

damn

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by Whoa@Jun 6 2005, 05:03 PM
dont start useless beef folks
Don't say folks if you ain't folks *****.







Hows that for worthless beef.
Bump.

[SkObE1]

ill blow a hole in a muthafuckin chest o my god it was a bloody mess what can i say
this bitch shoulda wore a vest nevataless ill put u in a casket and lay u down 2 rest
when it comes 2 killin bitch im tha very best

[esaem]

when i spit its like a poision with no anidote, i smootha than a cantalope, i rhyme faster than a genetically enhanced antalope, my style is pretty dope compared to yours its like you tellin a joke that no one will laugh at, i can rip you even if the distortions too flat, you had a chance, manipulate this mic without even usin' hands, im usin all my plans body fluids in the grams makin ruins of your lands cause i'm fluent with the slang and i pimp witta cane dancin in the rain ***** ILL BRING THEEE PAIN

[Sonny Black]

I dont spit but i like 2 talk.hold my hand man were gonna take a walk....through my mind holdup were here now its time 2.... hickery dickery dock the snitch ran up the clock the clock struck ten you'll never see him again his life had 2 end hickery dickery dock.....alright

Yo all theese poor minded people dont get no solutions (4real)
The world keeps turnin gettin more confusin
Link ur heart 2 ur brain keep it free flowin and
Try 2 learn from the facts from life and hold em tite in ur hand
U gottah die 2 learn n learn try 2 earn knowledge power respect 2 be a real wiseguy
Im affraid 2 run im still earning to walk an learn 2 listen realitys startin 2 knock
I still wonder why theese people still wantin 2 talk and stay idolizin theese fools an gangsters and frauds they continue 2 mock
Life is a privalage organize it and keep it in chek
Cuz if u fuk that up best 2 protect ur neck
Im seen shit thats messed up an done dirt im not imperessed of
But take advice from a survivor i didnt front i just fessed up
All the wack beef gettin jumped or hit with razors tearin ur chest up
Will grow in u and leave ur body stressed up
The streets are saying things i never feel alone man
My wish is 2 get up n have name 2 be known damn
Alleys Corners Tunnels I wanna see Serius up n full blown
Ive been writin for years and aways stay ringin in the city o fuk theres my phone
Just got word from the boydem talkin bout my markins
They know i'll be out when the streets start 2 darken
Get pichedwould break my heart
Not a easy task cuz that shits as hard as stone

Stay up stay well keep ur hands outtah links not pinned down beggin for a phone in the clink
Some shits not worth it theese days youths are forgettin 2 think so
Every strong mind watch out 4 ur fam
Focus on what makes u smile and please understand
Life is tuff n its outcome is always hard 2 tell
Do as much good as u can now so u can atleast get a cup a ice water in hell
Serius

Im just fucked up in the morning had some air in my lungs....ka-pow!
Yo stay up stay tuff n get out get some fresh air....i swear some of u kids never leave this forum theres alot more interesting shit 2 do
ez
Oya i hope u guys can feel where im comin from
And fuk the haters
I'll chew ya'll up like bubblegum
Now 4 my smoke n double rum
Im just chillin with ya but im not ur dun thoe son
dont get all mad an go n grab ur gun young won
Im from the place where troubles from
Aint seen him in years hes scared and on the run
I hope u had a good time im out be humble
1

[Dimer]

I liked it Black

[StoopKid]

i like gerllz with pizza
i like moms wit boobz
i hate noobkuntfuckerz
cause they piss me off every fucking day
i am a door
crackillz is a post whore
yo momz butt is sore
i am hardkorez
i fuckem all
azn, blak, whiteez, hispanic, euros, indians, middle eastians, robots, momz
i'm from Killwaukee, Wiscompton!
wigga wompton.

[KostRs RokN KanS]

*sings* head shoulders knees and toes knes and toes :)

[StoopKid]

i got my head and my shoulderz and mah kneez and my toes
i got hoes and they... blows... dick... but... they... uhh
they like me or something

:ph34r:

[KostRs RokN KanS]

gota left leg ova my shoulda gotta right leg ova my shoulda (mumbles got both legs ova my shouldas...

[sober23]

You best not be that emcee that takes offence I crush u plus ur whole crew up in the same sentence with the intent to make the wack submit I’ll put u in the past tense cuz u malevolent mediocre play u with a poker face that aint bluffing n when its over check u in rap relapse with the twelve steps that makes u sober its over put away your wack solider gimmick I fold your limit like every flow I throw at yea you see your life flashing by when I pass the mic gradually put your head in the up rite position take a seat in lissen you couldn’t gasp for thought you thought that was air you were breath’n again you should have been bob’n n weave’n instead of shuck’n duck’n the out come why you bust’n on the frequency but aint say’n nothing


('_SoBeR_')
-408-

[StoopKid]

chillin witchyor mom
fuck jerry and tom
or tom and jerry
yo momz hairy
to shave her hair
i need a fairy
so i can wish
for a shaved bish
northwestside!


:ph34r: :ph34r: PH34R

[KaOs-OneR]

yo listen up.. when you read my lyrics..
you realize that it aint me spittin.. its my fuckin spirit..
I spit shit hotter then inflict fire..
felt by the instinct of a spider..
and constantly taking you higher..
then a fucking choir..
im what your mind desires..
what your girlfriend admires..
spittin it through the wire..
and dont say you hard or nothin..
cause that makes you a liar..

[Atic]

You's a bitch kid, don't put on a dope front, u wack as fuck
& my fists are no joke, although they'll have ur skull crackin up
I cant be fucked with, truly Atic is Stealth
So we can handle this like men...Or you could be yourself
You wack son, trust that I'm the best, this fuckers done
Cuz my life's a bitch, u just spend yours dressin up as one
Your mom's the biggest slut, I can't wait to meet her, it's true
& I'd diss ur dad, but I don't know him...then again, neither do u


you hoes aint on my level.

[ASEN]

i take annual sabbaticals at temples to contstruct styles
explorin mental breaches all alone in the dark like a fucked child
anyone who beat the first two guards weaponless can enter
fuck up at the gates and get buried miles away from the sector
upon entering you might notice random post-its containing punchlines
hung up on the temple walls to remind myself this aint a fun time
systematically i understand methods preached to civilians ages ago
buried deep in tomes, verses one to five just turn the pages and know
it aint all work, female savages around here keep my balls jerked
blowin me with sharp teeth, keep em wide-eyed like an appalled clerk
i take small bites out of diseased bread covered with cheese spread
inflict self-torutre, pointin my joints with hot coins til my knees bled
make my brain create chemical reactions transalated to fractions
that of which are translated to words, to burn these forum rats with
stay opposed like same-polar magnets, stop rotations like tired planets
after my one-year absence i return in the form of a higher fragment

[_____JEKLROKS_____]

Originally posted by ASEN@Jun 19 2005, 11:35 AM
i take annual sabbaticals at temples to contstruct styles
explorin mental breaches all alone in the dark like a fucked child
anyone who beat the first two guards weaponless can enter
fuck up at the gates and get buried miles away from the sector
upon entering you might notice random post-its containing punchlines
hung up on the temple walls to remind myself this aint a fun time
systematically i understand methods preached to civilians ages ago
buried deep in tomes, verses one to five just turn the pages and know
it aint all work, female savages around here keep my balls jerked
blowin me with sharp teeth, keep em wide-eyed like an appalled clerk
i take small bites out of diseased bread covered with cheese spread
inflict self-torutre, pointin my joints with hot coins til my knees bled
make my brain create chemical reactions transalated to fractions
that of which are translated to words, to burn these forum rats with
stay opposed like same-polar magnets, stop rotations like tired planets
after my one-year absence i return in the form of a higher fragment
Aww shit!!! Man no beef lol. Whoa be acting like a bitch thas why...

Come with the mic like a razor, leaving your chest split,
the proof that I blaze ya, even before the tec spit,
I'll test the best clique,
disrespect it, then NEXT, BITCH!
drop your set quick, with a smile, and refresh kids,
on who the best is Chi town never rests shit,
all y'all motherfuckers trying to battle better check this,

you coulden't get dope on the mic if it wiped the blow from your nose,
you woulden't have hope if you were type to be biting your flows,
I'm taking your soul like pictures and African superstition,
you askin your crew to: "listen this bastards the truest spittin'",
you're wack, you're crude, and wishing my tactics for you get with,
like Iraq: a murder mission, in fact if you weren't nitwit, you would know,
UFOs are my Folks with newer equipment, so who can diss this?

"I know I got no skill", yeah I can read your mind,
and I can read your girls too, she like the guys who can rhyme,
The type to drive through life in a borrowed car, so you acheive none,
Tired going to sleep son cheifin is the reason.

I can't rhyme... :(

[ASEN]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____+Jun 20 2005, 03:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (_____JEKLROKS_____ @ Jun 20 2005, 03:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASEN@Jun 19 2005, 11:35 AM
i take annual sabbaticals at temples to contstruct styles
explorin mental breaches all alone in the dark like a fucked child
anyone who beat the first two guards weaponless can enter
fuck up at the gates and get buried miles away from the sector
upon entering you might notice random post-its containing punchlines
hung up on the temple walls to remind myself this aint a fun time
systematically i understand methods preached to civilians ages ago
buried deep in tomes, verses one to five just turn the pages and know
it aint all work, female savages around here keep my balls jerked
blowin me with sharp teeth, keep em wide-eyed like an appalled clerk
i take small bites out of diseased bread covered with cheese spread
inflict self-torutre, pointin my joints with hot coins til my knees bled
make my brain create chemical reactions transalated to fractions
that of which are translated to words, to burn these forum rats with
stay opposed like same-polar magnets, stop rotations like tired planets
after my one-year absence i return in the form of a higher fragment
Aww shit!!! Man no beef lol. Whoa be acting like a bitch thas why...

Come with the mic like a razor, leaving your chest split,
the proof that I blaze ya, even before the tec spit,
I'll test the best clique,
disrespect it, then NEXT, BITCH!
drop your set quick, with a smile, and refresh kids,
on who the best is Chi town never rests shit,
all y'all motherfuckers trying to battle better check this,

you coulden't get dope on the mic if it wiped the blow from your nose,
you woulden't have hope if you were type to be biting your flows,
I'm taking your soul like pictures and African superstition,
you askin your crew to: "listen this bastards the truest spittin'",
you're wack, you're crude, and wishing my tactics for you get with,
like Iraq: a murder mission, in fact if you weren't nitwit, you would know,
UFOs are my Folks with newer equipment, so who can diss this?

"I know I got no skill", yeah I can read your mind,
and I can read your girls too, she like the guys who can rhyme,
The type to drive through life in a borrowed car, so you acheive none,
Tired going to sleep son cheifin is the reason.

I can't rhyme... :( [/b][/quote]
Dope.. though i dont understand why you quoted me and told me whoa was a bitch.

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

yah why am i a bitch?

cause i can actually rhyme
DUDE, you said it yourself
''i can't rhyme :( ''

dont deny it, you know who's better

ASEN MA MAN, ya killlllllllllllllllled it ;) props

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

Originally posted by _____JEKLROKS_____@Jun 20 2005, 03:04 AM
I can't rhyme... :(
the proof is in the puddin

[_____Dasil_DasOne_____]

Cause I was just fucking around trying to battle sombody and tryed to make sure they won't think I was on some personal shit, and Whoa been a bitch lol. He must love using scarcasm as much as me. Come at me on whatever media; text, audio, whatever ***** you wack.

[_____Dasil_DasOne_____]

I can't rhyme... :(.

[KaOs-OneR]

Originally posted by Atic@Jun 19 2005, 12:03 AM
You's a bitch kid, don't put on a dope front, u wack as fuck
& my fists are no joke, although they'll have ur skull crackin up
I cant be fucked with, truly Atic is Stealth
So we can handle this like men...Or you could be yourself
You wack son, trust that I'm the best, this fuckers done
Cuz my life's a bitch, u just spend yours dressin up as one
Your mom's the biggest slut, I can't wait to meet her, it's true
& I'd diss ur dad, but I don't know him...then again, neither do u


you hoes aint on my level.
who you think you are dawg raggin on everyone here..
ill have you stunned for life, not talkin for years..
watch what i say, learn from my vocabulary..
ill fuck you up worse then i fuck up the constabulary!
and i met your mom yo, i thought she was kinda scary..
took her to the bedroom and she was kinda hairy!
she did suck a good dick though, i gotta admit..
but the real turn-off were her sagged-tits!
so when we were done i said goodbye to her..
and when she said iloveyou i said it back and lied to her!
she asked for a kiss, but i didnt want it..
that bitch fukced me hard, with more impact then a comet!
so now buddy, dont thin kyou run shit..
cause if you met me youd be stunned by the gun im wit..


;)

[Highfiver]

im on the internet with nothing to do.
so im looking at graffiti sites that seem koo.
i saw a site called bombing science.
were they seemed to form a posting alliance.
this place was looking good.
so i joined it as quick as i could.
now im posting like evvverryyday.
im starting to push myspace awayy.
graffiti fourms graffiti fourms.
what can i say.
i havent freestyled since the 6th grade.

:ph34r: :ph34r:

[skateparadise]

everyone here needs to pratice

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

Originally posted by skateparadise@Jun 21 2005, 01:17 PM
everyone here needs to pratice
this coming from someone with the nickname SKATEparadise!

go listen to nofx and leave the real music to us ;)

[skateparadise]

HAHAHA are you fucking kidding me?

YOU'RE on the INTERNET trying to RAP and BATTLE eachother. Yeah, sure someone can say something and then after they are done... it's your turn.... Well you can sit behind a computer take all the time you want to say something back thats better... You're a fucking joke kid. Go do somehting productive then trying to beef with people.

I like all kinds of music and I have respect for the people who freestyles and shit. Because they are acctually out there face to face spiting lines and then the next persons turn they have to have a good comeback right then in there... they just cant hide behind the computer like a little bitch like you and think and bite other peoples words.

Just go watch 8mile again and be inspired more to free style

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

fuckin spic?

yo retard, im white... fuckin racist!

and i rhyme in real life, i do this on the net for kicks!

go fuck yourself ya pansy

[ASEN]

Originally posted by skateparadise@Jun 22 2005, 07:46 AM
HAHAHA are you fucking kidding me?

YOU'RE on the INTERNET trying to RAP and BATTLE eachother. Yeah, sure someone can say something and then after they are done... it's your turn.... Well you can sit behind a computer take all the time you want to say something back thats better... You're a fucking joke kid. Go do somehting productive then trying to beef with people.

I like all kinds of music and I have respect for the people who freestyles and shit. Because they are acctually out there face to face spiting lines and then the next persons turn they have to have a good comeback right then in there... they just cant hide behind the computer like a little bitch like you and think and bite other peoples words.

Just go watch 8mile again and be inspired more to free style you fucking spic.
WE'RE on the INTERNET writing LYRICS to BATTLE each other! Just how gay is that?
Better question: aren't you supposed to be on car2n's nuts in some thread?

Some decent shit has been posted in this thread, and if you're too much of an ignorant and righteous cocksucker to see that, i suggest you go bump some chump thread.
Go do something productive other then being on this forum, it doesn't seem to be doing much for you

[skateparadise]

InvisblSkratchPiklz: Yeah me 2 Yo. I rhyme to in real life. It just comes natural to me when I speak. There is nothing rong about Posting lyrics. its just asking to battle. thats just a joke.

ASEN: You're just to stupid to get what I said. Yeah, you can post lyrics up. Yeah some of it is good. People can post lyrics and ask for advice and shit, but trying to battle is just stupid. Any 1st grade special ed student can battle anyone over the interent. I dont even talk to car2n nor do I hang on his nuts. So get off my case.

[ASEN]

How the hell can you say ''you guys need practice'' and not post anything better? My point is, if you don't participate to this thread or post anything constructive, don't say anything at all.

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

word ASEN
Quebec's Finest Keystylers
ASEN n WHOA

:lol:

[ASEN]

I don't consider myself one of Quebec's finest keystylers, and never will. Thanks anyways.

Who wants to battle?

[scrabble]

INFER ONE, Rest In Peace(fades way as it repeats)

Feel the realness
In this business of rep
Go ahead




Fresh out the gate again, time to raise the stakes again
Fatten my plate again, y'all cats know we always play to win
S-C-R-A to the B-B-L-E, son
Haters, took this shit too far, son
So thats all for you, I'm whiping out your whole team
I'll splatter your dreams with lyrics to shatter your schemes
The badder you seem, the more lies you tell
The more lies you sell, then by surprise you fell
Into my deathtrap, right into my clutches
Stupid, you know the God must bless every single mic he touches
I've suffered, just so I could return harder
Wanna be the shit starter? Fuck around, make you a martyr
I make ya famous, turn around and make ya nameless
Cause you never understood to me how vital this rap game is
Save it and hold that, you catch a hot one
Rhymes chase a fake ***** down soon as I spot one

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[ASEN]

''Cause you never understood to me how vital this rap game is''

I think Gangstarr said that.

[scrabble]

its a guru verse, scrabbled and chopped style

[Nesty]

delete

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

:lol: delete
good one
how about fuckin off if you dont like the thread

*TING, the bright light goes on

[skateparadise]

Originally posted by ASEN@Jun 22 2005, 04:36 PM
How the hell can you say ''you guys need practice'' and not post anything better? My point is, if you don't participate to this thread or post anything constructive, don't say anything at all.
alright that sounds good. ;)

[ASEN]

from the keyboard, we repeat scores to yo screen
me and whoa payin homage to commas with the dope cream
me and whoa never reppin' the caps lock like a dope fiend
me and whoa keepin' it tight like virgins for the home team
fuck scrabble, we monopolize forums with a whole scheme
your petty ambitions are nothin compared to our joke dreams
yo, me and W forum confessionals, real spit professionals
kick-start the session just to see how much you stressin', holmes
I punch digits faster than video-game experts on a telephone
stun heads harder than tetra-hydro cannabinol rolled in a hella cone
kickin commentary like white people who debate arab rights
Skateparadise, i don't hate you but i sure hate parasites
we could still kick it, i aint quick to shit-talkin' cuz it's predicted
my shit's hot like a tennis player's legs with J-Los ass n' clit, kid
ASEN quit this? you stupid like you failed your driver's test
Bad aim like you shootin' wit a crooked barrel and a dancer's chest
I guess i'll see ya, i'm endin this like an A-bomb on hiroshima
need a souvenir? check the time bomb on the back seat of yo beamer

[KaOs-OneR]

o0oo0oo0o0ooOOhhHH!!!!!

[scrabble]

Originally posted by ASEN@Jun 23 2005, 11:13 AM
fuck scrabble, we monopolize forums with a whole scheme


:lol:

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

fuckin WORD
ASEN THE ASSASSIN JUST RIPPED IT
*ZING

While i keystyle please feel free to go hit up a train
I'll walk through any sypher and baffle brains like David Blaine
You mymic motions like a mirror mocking my mentality
When you step onto this stage whoa will show you reality
From Montreal to your screen ill show you what we mean
Cause my lyrics stay gem mint up to pristine
I Man handle your manners like my real name was Jackson
And i hop on stage to dis your crew with my boy ASEN
From the five one four to the four five oh
we bring to you live the whoa n asen show
step down amateurs we'll show you how its done
we aint in this for impressing people, we just do it for fun
so for all those haters who think we aint true
i stay stuck to my lyrics like a fiend does to glue

[HEROIN!]

i like to freestyle rape.
hidin' out in dark alleys with my mask and cape.
shit i think that security camera just got me on tape.
wait.
i didn't do anything wrong.
but sit at my computer and right this dumb "song".
i wish i could quit dope, get off probation, and hit the BONG.

[ASEN]

Originally posted by scrabble+Jun 24 2005, 02:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (scrabble @ Jun 24 2005, 02:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ASEN@Jun 23 2005, 11:13 AM
fuck scrabble, we monopolize forums with a whole scheme


:lol: [/b][/quote]
:D no offense, as you already know.


JEKLROKS!

I split chimes like whoa hit dimes comin with a nice text
Bitch rhymers keep it slower with shit lines, timin' the mic check
We could strike heads, but in between em' are keys and circuits
You fucked up like stepdad gave mother the semen to breed a circus
Wastin' space like yo brain retainin' the shit you believe in you read in churches
Fake-ass artist needs to step back cuz the praise you recieve is worthless
V-unit agrees to it, i'm quick like Vinnie Paz on the beat
I gave jobs to demon burglars to keep your ass on the street
My mess awoke midgets who freestyle your top hat with a gunshot
I guess i wrote this so keystylin' ain't as bad as you once thought
Should i keep burnin' this bitch? Or should i settle for toast
The battles over before it started like Pac-Man versus edible ghost


ha.

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

ah ha

ASEN
jeklroks aint spittin back :o
i guess we know what that means ;)

[ASEN]

That he hasn't seen this yet. I'm confident he'll come up with something clever.

[Tony]

^^^ 1000th post

[ASEN]

Calm down tony, we just met.

[InvisblSkratchPiklz]

Tony is the fast type

1st time i talked to him he wanted my email
BAM

msn ever since