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inker
09-07-2005, 01:29 AM
^^^^thanks I've been rhyming for about 4-6 months how long you've been rhyming
inker
09-07-2005, 01:32 AM
your shit is pretty complex i like it though i try to do shit complex and stuff but then it either comes out violence,hate or anarchy
Jugga
09-07-2005, 02:35 PM
I been kickin' rhymes since 8th grade... I'm in 12th now...
So... I'd say 4 1/2 - 5 years...
I used to be on some violent shit too...
But I wasn't feeling that style.. its too generic and doesn't really fit me..
So I just started messing around with more wordplay and metaphors instead of street shit, and its a lot easier to do, at least for me...
keep on writing man, you're good....
Jugga
09-07-2005, 02:48 PM
Some more shit..
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What’s with MC’s putting up a front?
Something I’ll never understand..
A completely different person in the booth like Superman..
I am who I am..
I am, cause that’s the only thing I know how to be…
I’ll be damned if TV or any other form of media molds me..
………………………..Hold me confined..
My mind can’t take the acrimony outside, and it’s too fucking flagrant to hide..
Even while closing my eyes..
I still see your silhouette..
I don’t mean no disrespect..
But if you blatantly neglect….......................
and don’t get support for the problems that are under your nose..
The burden on your chest will hang out of control…
Under your clothes.. (eww!)
POSE!
Said the model on the centerfold..
But I’m the one giving the orders around here, I’m holding the camera, you shut the fuck up..
Abet me to make dumb bets based on dumb luck..
I NEED TO WIN..
But shucks, I’m never gonna get the bread like dumb ducks..
Generic MCs full of raised roofs and what-what’s…
I crush all that motherfucking garbage like a dump truck..
I am…..
inker
09-07-2005, 04:50 PM
thats cool ^^^^ im in 10th grade now I really dont like to come out violent I try to voice my opinion and shit but I cant come up with anything I started writing when I moved to palmdale there isn't shit to do here other than fuck,steal,write and write
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-08-2005, 04:48 PM
Jugga has some pretty dope stuff
i like
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-08-2005, 05:02 PM
woke up this morning with voices in my head
looked around the room to see if i left my mind on the bed
thought it would go away but i was wrong
cause the voices in my head kept on getting strong
my mind is the center of my imagination
flooded by demons and creeps like the bush administration
dont know what to do, cant ignore the voices
should i go to the emergency,doctor,pills HAAAAAAAAAAA so many choices
should i wait and maybe they'll go away
or are these voices stuck in my head and planning to stay
i cant take this anymore, i hate this feeling
so i blew my head apart till it hit the cieling
has the blood dripped down on the wooden floor
my once life filled body laying cold next to the door
nobody understood, no answers to be told
just the corpse of ol whoa laying cold
has my mom walks in she bursts into tears
cause i still had my fuckin headphones plugged in my ears!
swich
09-08-2005, 06:45 PM
man she got me, fell in love with that look in her eyes/
look how her hips move when she usein them thies/
man it hurts though cuz i know i cant get her/
as soon as i leave her i start ta miss her/
man oh man its like im addicted/
feel sick in ma stomach, that shit i predicted/
i feel like dyin now, do they plan this shit out?/
feelin so depressed im about to shout out/
look at her there, her sight blows me away/
its like the ultimate beauty, i just cant explain/
it messes my brain, and puts the ache in ma heart/
girl how do you do that? dont make me start/
oh,her simplest moves,yeah, the thought of her voice/
it gets me so crazy, i got no other choice/
i love her cuz i have to, she took ma heart/
but at the same time, yeah that girl broke ma heart....
swich
09-09-2005, 05:52 PM
they pick you up and throw you down/
emotions are felt where words cant be found/
a feeling of sadness begins to surround/
a species so ruthless, with a limitless bound/
even the thought can make your heart pound/
and on that same pound you can feel the ache/
please save me jesus cuz i feel the hate/
maybe its time for you ta open your gates/
let me in, these creatures cant be ma fate/
apearence on the outside are a pleasure to see/
but its cold and dark when you reach enternally/
money hungry, heartless beasts/
so close yet so out of reach/
the way they walk, the way they talk.its a trap, its a trap/
cant be stopped but can be bought. this is crap, this is crap...
Jugga
09-10-2005, 12:56 PM
FINALLY…
When I looked into your face..
I came to realize that happiness isn’t abstract..
Its in fact, carbon based..
How could I have been such a fool?
Out searching for a feeling..
When the person right in front of me is the drug for which I have been fiendin’..
All this time..
Every tear shed ..
every visualization read and deciphered to spell out the words “lost cause�..
When my own foolishness forced it to be that way..
I was blind to the signs..
I let nature take the course she found suitable, and she uncovered your name..
AMAZING..
How I was plummeting for so long..
Way passed reaching terminal velocity..
And you, which have been there since the beginning, was the one to be responsible for stopping me…
To put me back on the right path…
Better me as a person and switch up my fate..
You sweeter than ‘fruit-punch’, and constantly put a ‘Kool-Aid’ smile on my face..
Is it possible?
I’m finally happy…
No..
it isn’t how I truly feel..
Too many parts of me have died for happiness to be real..
I must confess, its just a front I put up to hide the feelings I’m not ready to reveal..
Feelings I think should remain perpetually concealed..
Now, I’m not proud about having to fake it…
But I’m glad that I finally care enough to do so…
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-10-2005, 01:48 PM
that's deep!
very nice
Jugga
09-11-2005, 05:42 PM
Thanks man...
I appreciate it...
Here's one I just did today...
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Insanity is walking down my corridor..
I'm off the walls and half past 7, its blatant..
I'm out my mind, and demons are trying to sneak inside while its still vacant..
but I'm adamant..
I'm buttressed against even the strongest push..
I was asked to spill the beans and plead the fifth before the burning bush...
Ready for war…
A proud trot through a long hallway, adjacent to death..
Saddled on high horse..
Armored with chain mail, wielding a foot soldier’s broad sword..
Medieval armament in a modern battlefield..
A wooden shield put up against explosive lead and steel..
But I’m still here..
When the fog clears…
I’M STILL HERE…
In my b-boy stance..
I’m still bravery’s worse fear…
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-11-2005, 06:22 PM
word
where you live Jugga?
that be dope, form a group
ASEN,WHOA,JUGGA
move out the way Ludacris
*WOUFF
:lol:
Jugga
09-11-2005, 06:36 PM
Hahaha....
I'm from South Florida....
these are nice..!
first post....kinda old i'll post new ones up when i write em...steadliy improving and crits are welcome..
I spit sick leprosy ridden sentences ,
with such vivid images,
you'll wake up missing appendages,
yeah the bible has psalms,
but my lyrics are hotter,
I challenge believers 'til they experience stigmata,
James Brown raps, ya'll dont understand what I'm sayin',
you demand I explain,read a book, expand your own brain
I dont spit repetitive raps of peddlin crack,
I make somthing for your head, like the man who invented the hat,
why? 'cause I'm better at that,
ya'll's heads in the governments hands, like federal gats,
matter of fact, ya'll aint much differnt than that,
old enough to be sent to Iraq but you dont even know where its at,
what, do you expect the face on Saddam on the map !?
media infects you with agent orange,
to have your mind born deformed like ya mom was on crack,
using everything threy know,
to mold your mind like Play-Do,
you a non-toxic edible toy,
'til i spike you with lyical arsenic...so we can see them destroyed
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-11-2005, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@Sep 11 2005, 06:36 PM
Hahaha....
I'm from South Florida....
word
Asen and I are from the same city
we will get p.diddy to fly us out there
maybe we can sign with
GgGgGgGgGgGgG UNIT :lol:
peace jug, keep up the fresh stuff
Jugga
09-11-2005, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by DÜM
old enough to be sent to Iraq but you dont even know where its at,
ILL....
Ya verse was cool...
Liquid flow and you stayed on topic...
keep spittin'....
thanks...
more olds stuff
MKULTRA rhymes will leave you in a retinal haze,
like you were on LSD for over seventy days,
dont worry, its only an ephemeral stage,
i'll electroshock you until your memory's blazed,
against me, you will never live on,
like runnin thru iraq holding a burning Quran,
I believe in only myself, and i confirm with this song,
this rhymes got me growing colder and harder like magma rock,
galactus, using boulders as fodder i spit RAGNAROK,
never biting and cheating, i'll battle odin with one eye closed,
ya'll roaches, im shedding light on you with these sunrise flows,
i am the rooster waking these narcoleptic times,
breaking your mind, cos what the media has in your head --
is not far from septic slimes...
_
insomniac, dreaming with eyes wide,
im starved and deprived to the point where my minds fried,
line after line signed, my pen keeps a fine stride,
spitting out sick thoughts that have me coughing for days,
temperature rising, 451, so i burn my thoughts off the page,
so i dispose of my pen and i pick up the mic,
and i begin to recite,
things i didnt know i knew,
words that could leave my lips cold and blue,
spitting death, the first horsemen hes with me,
causes me to spit it coars'ed and gritty,
I blacken the water in all the faucets of the city,
spittin pestilence, the next of them is here,
so even sicker things are whispered in my ear,
spittin holocaust, another of them in my presence,
to crush and control all of the peasants with a sentence,
I spit orders they reply in acquiescence,
without repentance i starve them to show their obsolescence,
spittin famine, my mind will never be satiated,
i stare them down holding my mic with which i'm infatuated,
this story is so true, like im spittin an affidavit,
i step back and realize they're here for a me,
so i raise my mic...but im gone before they can hear me plea.....
Originally posted by InvisblSkratchPiklz+Sep 11 2005, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (InvisblSkratchPiklz @ Sep 11 2005, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Jugga@Sep 11 2005, 06:36 PM
Hahaha....
I'm from South Florida....
word
Asen and I are from the same city
we will get p.diddy to fly us out there
maybe we can sign with
GgGgGgGgGgGgG UNIT :lol:
peace jug, keep up the fresh stuff [/b][/quote]
I'll be damned if P.Diddy flies me down to South Florida
Nice stuff Juggalo... although im not really into that insightful style
$NAKE$
09-12-2005, 09:52 PM
:blink: Yo' listen, bitch your stupid i'ma grab a hammer put it threw your mommas Cadavur. mice rats birds all the natures terds, comming out shootin off bullets. man this mean trouble my man tony shuttle be on the mic ima bring it to yeah. Snakes to the dubble S is hear to stay ya'll people think he's gay. mad rhyms he be pullin in his new drop top mazda 6, Reppin the 705 im alive now, but for how long? Gimme that bong i'll fuckin hit it till my eyes turn purple. Man this shits wack i'ma attack my english teacher, try to Preach about startin fires. im a Brigde a kid kicked in my ribs. my VIA rail workers got my back i'm the one they got the rap...SHeet for, i'm makin them poor, sloppy my tag with a blue rag ovA my face. you dont know who i be run play hide and seek, while your daddys dick leak, hes got AIDs now your moms in the Porad. i was like BITCh make me some Kool aid as i reach for my 44 i opend the door, my hoe be standin near, sucked my dick till the fish all dead. PUMpin lead on the streets, dumpin dem bodys of in da creek. :ph34r:
IS WATER A GAS Or A LIQUID?!!??
Jugga
09-12-2005, 10:05 PM
I am my only nemesis..
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I battle myself..
and I'm always down when I tally up the score..
I may very well win every battle and still won't win the fucking war..
I'm my own blockade..
Only I prevent me from getting things done..
cause I elude father time and win staring contests with the sun..
I unsheathe my sword and to my surprise its but a bladeless handle..
But luckily with brawn and will-power this weaponry is ample..
I got the strength to strike a dead horse, center-mass, and make it gallop..
But if I don’t apply it to anything, what the fuck ’s it really matter?
Anti-social..
I only speak in soliloquies.. Where objections are prisoner and my opinions are free..
My conversations consist of eavesdroppers throwing their pennies at me…
Trying to penetrate my fort, but reinforcing it is my forte`..
My temperance is a free spirit..
and I use unorthodox methods to control it..
Cause fighting fire with fire sounds a little counterproductive, don’t it…
Originally posted by $NAKE$@Sep 12 2005, 09:52 PM
:blink: Yo' listen, bitch your stupid i'ma grab a hammer put it threw your mommas Cadavur.
man this mean trouble my man tony shuttle be on the mic ima bring it to yeah.
mad rhyms he be pullin in his new drop top mazda 6
Man this shits wack i'ma attack my english teacher
im a Brigde a kid kicked in my ribs
hotness.
$NAKE$
09-13-2005, 10:05 AM
" bitch your stupid i'ma grab a hammer put it threw your mommas Cadavur. "
:lol: such fucked up things to say
this threads sweet
Vulture
09-13-2005, 10:31 AM
oh lord help me this aint a fuckin battle
its a bunch a fuckin babies fightin over a rattle
why bother spittin, its a fuckin choke fest
i just represent all my *****z on the west
ok fine ill drop a fuckin dime
wish i had a beat fer this fuckin waste a time
lord please help them they lack the fuckin skills
unlike the thug in me who drops and fuckin kills
its not there fault, they should stick ta taggin
i pull up there bullshit my comp starts laggin
anyway im done, its been fun
when you see me hit the ground and run
just spittin, no disrespect
Jugga
09-13-2005, 04:23 PM
Your style clings to garbage like a swiffer sweeper duster..
fucking buster...
you whole crew is a lackluster cluster...
...
I'm cold hearted for this rap shit, and liable to blow a gasket..
I swab the deck with this scalawag...
.........................................dip 'em hydrochloric acid..
You need to work on your lyricism..
You need to develop a tight flow..
Fuckin' with me is a HUGE mistake, that's why your heart pumps that type-O (typo)...
...
The fact you front like you hard and mean it is truly riveting..
..you scared of this prophet's divinity..
it's evident cause you're an absolute zero, yet ya' molecules are still shivering...
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@ Vulture..
No beef, duke...
this wasn't a response to your verse...
just a diss type verse inspired by yours..
easy..
swich
09-13-2005, 09:21 PM
i can see us together foreva and eva/
so bright its luminosity even in the darkest of weather/
i need ta get betta, but only you can ease the pain/
adrenalin pumpin at the slightest glimpse of your name/
wheneva in rains, youll be there ta ease the stress/
i can say "girl your the best" as your brests i caress/
all i gotta do is pass the test, and well be each others for good/
eternally yours from hood ta hood/
like robin hood, ill take from the wealthy just ta get what you want/
you make me feel so high, but thoughts of me without you continue to haunt/
i feel deeply, spiritually, and physically inclined/
together foreva keeps beatin my mind/
i need ya so bad, im feelin so sad, please make me glad/
i can feel the burning in ma soul its tellin me we were meant to be/
but as soon as im ready to go, something keeps stoppin me/
im a slave to your essence, id kill just be be in your prescence/
the meer thought of you just seems oh so pleasant/
girl because of you im facin insanity/
how can it be.....without you i cant be happy...
swich
09-13-2005, 09:31 PM
check it *****....
fuck them hoes who be killin the streets/
im killin some fleets, and graff with no sleep/
got ma pac chain and yeah its shinin/
i got the silver but fuck the diamonds/
crews roll low when they be pussy *****s/
i roll with the crews who be pullin da triggas/
yeah we get bigga and aim for faim/
wanna see me? hit me up on AIM/
im gettin the fame as im gettin ma brains/
but remain un-tame, cuz i gotta stay street/
keep movin up till im at the top of ma fleet/
*****s run with they mouth instead of they feet/
so i stuck um in the face with a pair of my cleets/
make cds and hustle on the streets/
gotta make money to get them eats/
we live that thug life everyday/
keeps gettin hawder each time i pray....
Jugga
09-13-2005, 09:42 PM
Pretty dope stuff, Switch...
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Malice (Got my mind on suicide)
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Malice doesn't seem to want to use a contraceptive when she fucks me..
and its not a one night stand deal for her,
the bitch loves me...
Its impossible to deal with the burden, but I'm just the type of dude that does..
To me the norm is a difficult place to fit, like un-powdered rubber gloves..
I'm outcasted by society, people look down upon me..
cause of the hate child Malice conceived and bore upon me..
She’s all up on me...
GET UP OFF ME...
I timidly yell it softly...
Not enough for her to hear, but I know the impact was made..
Her physical is amazing though..
There's no expulsion for emotion..
My words become puffs of air and my body gestures, poetry in motion....
when in her presence..
I'm in no way a better person nor at all happy....
but I feel at home..
cause discomfort is the only feeling that I’ve ever known…
I suffer from a severe case of insomnia..
And now, knowing that sleep is the cousin of death…
I’ve developed the same kind of relationship with haste and distress..
I’ve got to get some shut-eye..
GET SOME FUCKING REST..
And a barrel in my mouth turns to a sleeping pill…
Vulture
09-13-2005, 11:41 PM
hard ta drop without a beat
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-14-2005, 02:05 PM
damn Jugga is spittin hot
Im gonna do a lil something....
Vulture how dare you step into this thread
the way you spit shit you're better off dead
i mean come on what kind of name is vulture?
laughin in your face while givin your girl a throat culture
fighting for a rattle? the fuck does that mean
the only thing that will rattle is your neck rubbin against your spleen
i do this stuff cause i enjoy it, not to start any beef
but sometimes you need to slap emcees and make em red like maple leaf
has for nake, come on, you made a mistake
tie you up with vulture and make you sleep in a lake
your pic..very funny
you look like a latino immitating the energizer bunny
the fuck is up with a bandana covering your face?
you scared to show yourself, ya fuckin disgrace?
why isnt there more jugga's asen's and whoa's
im sick of rhymin with a bunch of 13yr olds
props jugga,asen,swich
nake and vulture
i aint hatin
just keystylin
dont hate
appreciate ;)
$NAKE$
09-14-2005, 04:12 PM
i woke up dis morning a quarter to 8 click on the internet and all i see is hate. Bitches Swiming around like Fishes Damn my breakfest was Delicious. I hopped on my 125 in about 6 minutes i aint gonna be alive. Blendin colours like your shits retired Brown paint is ugly and when your girl walk by i crack her skull. "S.N.A.K 40 spray!! Rounds shootin off like its the summer, seen a rabit on the tracks barffed a pupa roach CD and Smoked my hash. I stumbled to the Liqa sto to pick up a 60 of whiskey, passed out for 3 days did you miss me? my parents noticed the paint on my clothes but when i'm stabin holes in your face its hard to listen. Breakin in my new shoes kicked in your face for being confused. I be Reppin J$C and i'm thinkin to my self "thats the place to be", used to live in Milton/A.k.a halton hills remembered the time i copped me those bills. i only like Bombs that have fill. Makin mad cash spending it all on the fuckin price of gas. Stok's real name is Jeff i came here to confess.
Are Turtles Stronger then a can on Flat black, or should i say Gloss white.
Vulture
09-14-2005, 04:31 PM
*finally finishes readin Snakez spit*......what tha fuck u sayin? *lights a cigar*
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-14-2005, 05:04 PM
:lol:
shits hot
swich
09-14-2005, 05:33 PM
kappers keep kappin in the back of dey ass/
looters keep lottin and runnin so fast/
playas keep playin and havin a blast/
but i keep graffin and copin that cash/
but the governement comes and takes it away/
in a day its all gone, all my hard earned monay/
payin 400 a month for fines thats not fine/
they take it away, all that shit that was mine/
i did a lil bombin on the side of a bridge/
but they be actin like i blew up a national bridge/
man i dont kid, this shit just aint right/
hows it gonna take $5,000 to paint over right?/
they out ta get ya, dont lose the game/
if a bulge in ya pocket, theyll blow out ya brain/
this shit is insane, but part of the game/
young *****s in jail keep gettin slain/
i swear i was framed, but that dont even matter/
as the days go by i keep gettin sadder/
and a lil bit madder, and plus i dont have HER/
but ill stay strong and see this shit through/
thought i was through, or thought that you knew/
shit dont stop, but thats reality/
now i cant even talk to ma dad it seems....
swich
09-14-2005, 05:48 PM
relocated, man im hated, man i swear my ultimate fate is-/
in the hands of none other but me/
i live this life so ridiculosly/
i can help it if i really wanted/
but still trapped in my mind, thats not what i wanted/
but what i wanted is what i cant have/
girl so sweet its my ultimate glad, and my ultimate mad/
but most of the time shes my ultimate sad/
sayin shit rad when ya dont really mean it/
thats some mean shit even if ya dont mean it/
yup ive seen it, and ill see it again/
two timin *****s be betrayed by their friends/
the reality is what we often ignore/
even if it lies just beyond the door/
we got the lock but we dont got the key/
what i didnt know was that the key was in me/
now all i gotta do is seek it out/
and believe its true without the slightest doubt/
harder than it seems but im lucky it seems/
not many people get this opportunity/
well then again, yeah they do/
but in theyre heart they refuse to persue/
now i gotta realize what i already knew.....
Vulture
09-14-2005, 06:42 PM
see i dont spit, i make people spit up blood
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-14-2005, 07:12 PM
:lol:
funny, your girl said the same thing after i finished introducing my penis to her trachia
no but for real im just a big joker
i hate nobody
Jugga
09-14-2005, 07:20 PM
Fed Up
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I don’t take shit from anyone anymore..
My temperance has been evicted..
Life gave me lemons, and I squeezed ‘em in her paper cuts which I myself inflicted..
Heavily addicted..
Being an asshole has become my daily assignment..
My bitterness’ refinement ‘s put me in heavy confinement..
But I’ve been around……
And no, I’m not a fucking clown…
My insight is quite enough profound to tell a sphere is up-side down…
I know I’ve got to simmer down..
I’m close to coming right off of my bracket..
That would really fuck me up, cause all my eggs are in one basket..
……….
I’ve been having a hard time, handling all this misfortune that life has bequeathed me..
Every time I’m on a stepping stone, the bitch crumbles beneath me..
…
Nothing goes my fucking way…
I’ll have to give it up eventually..
Or else I’ll plummet in this emotional nose-dive perpetually…
I’m fed up….
$NAKE$
09-14-2005, 08:59 PM
i respect that. but why do you put so many lines between all the words?
do you have that shit writin before you post. or just wreck shit while your chillin in Add a reply?
Jugga
09-14-2005, 09:09 PM
I do it to show pauses and flips on the flow....
My shit isn't on that straight 1 2, 1 2...
and that's also how I seperate my bars..
Jugga
09-15-2005, 05:49 PM
Mother Nature's Downfall...
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The norm is imminently faced with devastating deterioration…
Mother Nature had a sex change, stumping her and Father Time’s chance of procreation..
But even with all the destruction her creations will inevitably face..
The bitch had no trace of mixed feelings..
Cause now she can expand herself, she can fooled the glass ceiling..
The glass ceiling she was once expected to wash..
The one with stubborn stains that were merely spread by her cloth..
She was living in the burden of what she had created..
And found herself in a clangor of emotions with her happiness belated..
When she found a way out, she figured why even debate it?……
………….
With confronting reality evaded, she took the easy way out..
Not carring about, what the fuck she stepped on while she followed that rout..
But deep down she wasn’t feeling it..
She was torpidly dragging her feet the whole time..
and intertwined with a struggling mankind and withering vines..
But she was beyond the point of no return….
Passed wondering why..
…………….
…
She doesn’t know what to think anymore..
Overwhelmed by regrets and her bitterness..
Engulfed in a ‘forest of confusion‘, lost inside the ‘bewilderness’..
……….
She couldn’t take it anymore..
And started to cry..
She finally accepted the reality of what she had done..
Laid down and died..
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-15-2005, 05:55 PM
Jugga you have some fuckin deep skills man
i really like your stuff man
props
Jugga
09-15-2005, 05:57 PM
Good looking out man...
I'm glad you like it...
swich
09-15-2005, 11:35 PM
yeah jugga your shits dope.
bok krew
09-16-2005, 01:32 AM
ima cannable ill leave mc's faint my mouth spits flame like a can spits paint like a montana im hardcore powerful like a lions roar im the greates man on the chatty i got some papers a rusto and a enough weed 2 roll a fatty if u think u got ill skill ***** get at me
bok krew
09-16-2005, 01:34 AM
a snake is that girl a porn star she's fine as a muthafucka tho
InvisblSkratchPiklz
09-16-2005, 07:06 AM
please do not keystyle ever again
for our sake
and for the sake of the people on BombingScience.com
we thank you in advance
A little fun i had
I'm the feather-lite word gaiden come from a better life
Versus you, the leather tight turd ASEN, come to settle strife
From the first movements, i calculated the risk of attackin' first
I needed three steps, like street theft: the art of grabbin' purse
Decapitate you with a high kick n' my fabulous six-spin
You weak from hemoglobin leakin' til ya healin' power kicks in
Connect two jabs til i shatter ya tool-ass glass jaw and your doo-rag
Choke you Sensei school fag till ya last calls die and your crews mad
Now i got six beckoned, talk my way out of turn and quit steppin'
In a split second, i blinded three, the others learned my fifth lesson
No one left but me, with the arena soiled the real battle commences
Spit some complex text to my own self just to rattle my senses
Luckily i was quick and answered back with my own rap attack
But i countered that, no surprise like can't afford a Cracker Jack
The final move was planned out, but the defense caliber wasn't
So i chopped my own head off and left the stage janitor cussin'
Jugga
09-17-2005, 01:28 PM
Thats some sick shit...
Here's a VERY old verse of mine...
From.. a little over 3 years ago...
I'm posting it cause its a way different style from what I do now...
its like... a cocky/ battle style...
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don't be prejudge mental, and quick to jump to conclusions
because my shit is hotter than thermonuclear fusion
blowing up like an H-bomb, lyrically assassinating
always act out of spite, there's no time for contemplating
or procrastinating upon actions
no time to be thinking twice about every single infraction
and just cause you're on top, don't mean that you're greater
cause like old age, I'm catching up to you sooner or later
and if it were true that people are what they eat
you'd probably be the shit, but since that isn't the case
you're just full of it
so don't step to me, with your utter blasphemy
cause your brain cavity's got minor capacities
and I'm a genius, who's been around since the beginning of time
the first multicellular organism exploiting my rhymes
I'm the most lyrical vocalist that's known to exist
remained hidden, but learned to shine through the fog of the mist
I'm constantly pissed, and express it through my every word
so don't ignore shit, plus my flow's way to hot
like poppa bear's porridge
so my spit is liable to alter respiration
from slow labored breathing, to hyperventilation
I’m the result of god's extreme attempt to showcase his creations
I'll cut your speech short like acronyms and abbreviations
my lyrics weaken you like sickle cell anemia
I make people throw up hands like cannibals with bulimia
my flow is so perfect it makes your mind float
and i should always be taken serious like suicide notes
I stay on point, and deliver with precision
step up, and expose dickheads like circumcision
blur your vision, eat MC's like provisions
full of ambition.................
Vulture
09-17-2005, 01:32 PM
^ ill take my dictionary back thnx
:)
Jugga
09-17-2005, 04:59 PM
err..
swich
09-18-2005, 12:53 AM
dreams of ambition, quick in thought and action/
i cant be dealt with like addition and subtraction/
im on a more spiritual plane than an intellectual/
by looks they judge me as real unprofessional/
i keep my sleep to a max of 5 hours/
cuz i gotta surf the net and seek the powers/
hour after hour, buildin up my hours/
just 64 more and all be off these hours/
the drive for fame led me to this service/
community that is, yeah, community service/
off in the distance my mind begins to wander/
free from thought as my soul begins to ponder/
real graff lies within the artistic mind/
i feel this truth so the "law" wont inflict with my mind/
right is right even if the law says its wrong/
what they gonna get me for, writin this song?....
sicka than aidz
09-18-2005, 02:28 AM
yeah, this is some funny shit, just a verse
sicka than aidz
09-18-2005, 02:38 AM
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:18 am Post subject: yo, peep this verse...sicka than aidz
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yo,...I'll fuckin land u in a ten year coma.../
like kill bill 1 you'll wake up an find out *****z been payin to bone ya.../
kick your ass from toronto to tacoma.../
silly bitch,...its so damn easy to own ya.../
anyways.....barnyard drive-by,...say goodbye to your mother.../
the nine'l blow your fuckin face off while u tappin that utter.../
you aint shit plus your troops r goofy.../
u must be proud of your self,...your hiphop's version of officer doofy.../
I make bitches "scream" while i count my cream,...this text is the script for the next "scary movie".../
yall aint shit,...spare clips an some throw away heat.../
roll up on your hood an splatter yall with the ak...not gonna be sweet../
creepin with the sweeper,..fuckin burn down your sesame street.../
i was slangin rocks when u thought fraggle rock was hot.../
fuckin muppets in the house,..i was rich as hell before u tots could even walk.../
I seen it all,...but yall's the worst.../
u so pathetic an miserable ima do u a favor an clip you first.../
gotta allotta work to put in,...grind till it hurts.../
money for days,...one thing i dont play.../
touch my paper an the last face you'll ever see's gonna belong to Sicka than aidz.../
your a disgrace *****,...wipe off that screen an peep your reflection../
after that you'll why your stupid ass never gets any affection.../
str8 up,...if we battle..ill have u boo'd str8 out the election.../
steppin in my direction will be bad for your mid-section.../
shit...unless your IQ is 2,...you prolly figured out my point.../
im sicka than aidz an ill roast yall muthafuckaz alive an set fire to this joint.../
peace
sicka than aidz
09-18-2005, 02:42 AM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 18 2005, 12:53 AM
dreams of ambition, quick in thought and action/
i cant be dealt with like addition and subtraction/
im on a more spiritual plane than an intellectual/
by looks they judge me as real unprofessional/
i keep my sleep to a max of 5 hours/
cuz i gotta surf the net and seek the powers/
hour after hour, buildin up my hours/
just 64 more and all be off these hours/
the drive for fame led me to this service/
community that is, yeah, community service/
off in the distance my mind begins to wander/
free from thought as my soul begins to ponder/
real graff lies within the artistic mind/
i feel this truth so the "law" wont inflict with my mind/
right is right even if the law says its wrong/
what they gonna get me for, writin this song?....
i liked it, its cool, keep tearin shit up, peace
Jugga
09-18-2005, 11:14 AM
Here's something I just keyed up....
6-7 minute job...
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(untitled as of now)
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Let the villagers choose…
From their limited array of poor choices..
Speaking up for self with timid indecisive voices..
A plethora of melancholy feelings shared amongst the common crowd..
Nor accomplishments or strengths are gonna make ‘em proud..
I for one am not concerned by that which most concerns the masses..
Nonconformity is evident in what I practice..
The fact is..
I often get distracted..
I even made a mural in water based paints across the walls of Atlantis..
I even tried salmon farming in Glamis..
Yeah I’m starting to be a real fuck-up, but I’m a real pro at it..
I’m prolific…
Why?
I’m not gonna get specific..
Just know I’m touching on free will while you’re living life how it’s scripted…
And for that, no man has power over me…
I write the book of my life, and make the ending what I want it to be…
And these stupid fucks don’t really understand me…
Belittling what I stand for, when they don’t know where they’re standing…
amet one
09-18-2005, 11:53 AM
yo this is where it starts
listen to my rhyme speaking of smarts
and here i go again, rapping with no attention
even i broke the convention
tripped, slipped and onto life
make sure the government dont grip the knife
vandal toughts
with a vandal cause
could it be true the only thing hold together the system is glue
fools dont know and fools dont speak, you know their there when the door begins to creek
making choices beyond the mind
hustle objects, getting ready to grind
making sense is my cause
i can make your blabber turn to pause
silence is somtimes the solution
that is what bring all the execution
quit rhyming what is wrong
you need fake players to make a song
amet one
09-18-2005, 11:55 AM
eyes low,
little do I know,
dreams are coming back to show,
cant handle this,
I got no choice,
try to yell for help, but wheres my voice,
people singing, iron bells ringing,
start to sweat,
need to awake,
I cant tell if im dying, or if its fake,
cant fight back, because their to strong,
homeless man in the corner singing a song,
think quick,
thats what your brains doing,
I need to escape,
im the one pursuing,
in a room, with flames,
in the presence with people, who have no names,
im sick of playing these deadly games,
cant think real clear cause the roaring of the trains,
got to run, need some shelter from the rain,
im misunderstood,
like aristole or robin hood,
making my point to the people,
keep bleeding from the streets to the steeple,
the storm slows me do, its turning me to feeble,
now im in a cloud of dust,
in god we trust,
at this point we must,
they can find you, they have your brust,
my mind is beat,
so as my feet,
my body is sick from deadly heat,
suddenly I arise,
but to my suprise,
I have no more allies,
im here alone,
three o clock in the morn,
with handcuffs on,
my eyes open,
and I hear a song,
I see bars,
im caged in,
where did these dreams take place,
and where do i begin.
-
-- step into the underground, --
-- can you hear a sound? --
-- only crickets on the ground, --
-- theres more than this, --
-- turn 'round, see, doors you missed, --
-- light bulb hanging, metal banging, --
-- write rhymes, on paper, bleed ink, --
-- no one around, makes it easy to think, --
-- damp and cold, what have dreams told? --
-- fog with mist, paint the anti-racist, --
-- think tough, rusty sink rough, --
-- mice and rats, no need for traps, --
-- read the vandal sentences, --
-- some make sense, --
-- subway, two floors up, --
-- no more coffee in the cup, --
-- might as well send your song out, --
-- its the only way, --
-- thats good music no pay... --
Jugga
09-20-2005, 01:34 PM
This is my favorite steelo...
Its hella easy for me to write like this...
I do it real fast, and the flow is way better than on my other shit....
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I’m doomed to be alone..
IT’S THE FUCKING TRUTH!
My loneliness’ genesis ain’t have no forbidden fruit..
Its foolproof
Full proof is unnecessary..
Its evident…
LOOK AT ME..
Held tightly in the grip of confinement and misery..
But, shit..
The fuck am I supposed to do about it?
I guess I’ll just be cool about..
No use in complaining and being a tool about it…
How you feel?
SHOUT IT…
Motherfucker I’m ‘bout it bout it…
About what?
Shit… I don’t know, I’ve never asked…
Its never been a task I’ve had in mind..
Never something I tried to figure out..
I’m just following the crowd around..
Force feeding my sound…
TRYING TO GET ATTENTION…
Have people notice what I say..
Notice my flow..
On top of a table at Denny’s, rapping pantless into a bowl..
Whoa, whoa, whoa ..
Did I take it too far?
NERP!..
Cause now you know my name..
I bet you’ll never ever EVER look at me quite the same..
Now I’m a somebody…
Even if that's somebody is a nobody in your mind..
Its still somebody that's in your mind..
Now I ain’t that hard to find…
Shit, I’m free…
Jugga
09-20-2005, 10:44 PM
A ninja's life is the life for me..
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BAM!
Night time hits…
The moon smacks my face and I transcend from bed to floor with a back flip..
I grab a quart out the fridge and I roll me a tight spliff..
Dressed in black from head to toe, geared with a katana and nightstick..
I’m out the door…
Pop n locking as I make my move down the street..
Getting tossed around by cars, but I always land on my feet…
A spectacular feat…
I always rock the air guitar when I jam on the beats…
I scam the police…
Chop off heads and run across walls when I dash and I flee…
And if they were ever to catch me…
I would ‘POOF’ and disappear in a cloud of debris..
Posted up on top of a building, scopin’ the scenery…
Eyes bloodshot red cause of the booze and the greenery….
I spot a club that seems FRESHHH…
And there’s only 8 bouncers at the door…
So I walk off the building’s ledge and I float to the floor…
Without missing a beat, I pull out my sword, insinuating gore…
Kicked the first dude in the gut and dropped him with incredible force..
the shock wave from the impact disintegrated two more..
Chopped the next man’s head off, now its just me and the four…
They were gonna try to stop me until I lifted a car..
Turned to the dudes and asked them “who wanted to spar..�
I told them that I ain’t got any money to pay for the fee..
And that if I wasn’t going to get in for free, they got a battle with me…
They obviously didn’t want to dabble degrees…
Cause as soon as shit got heated they dropped to their knees in a plea..
So fuck that…
I dropped the vehicle and walked in the club…
The only ninja in the room, I was surrounded by scrubs..
Shit..
I’m on the dance floor and I don’t even dance..
I just pull up my pants and two step in my b-boy stance..
scOpeOne
09-25-2005, 01:03 PM
here is my hardcore rhyme. u ready for this shit?
ope
cope
dope
fope
gope
hope
jope
kope
lope
mope
nope
oope
pope
qope
rope
sope
tope
vope
wope
xope
yope
zope
BAAAAAAAAAAM
vegimite on toast
09-26-2005, 04:00 PM
Ya'll talk for too long, got'sta be quick to the point.
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7021/purpleant8aa.png
And he tells me ''Stop sounding so educated''
cream soda
09-28-2005, 09:33 AM
i ll give this a go... haha lol...don't no how to rap
cream soda
09-28-2005, 09:43 AM
im young im dumb im im crazy YES, Most my beats lay benath my fucking lexus, U can't touch this! my rymes be scadalous, im causin a fuss! yall rymes startin to rust, i like my girls with bust! yo moms a slut! yo dads a mut. and yer about to get cut from this rap game. yer face is a shame no one soeaks my name because they scared and lame. what ever its all the same wether its shine or rane ill still be insane. it's hard to keep up or maintain...i no. I will qiuit talkin shit and realize i gots no flow! but when i come to yer neighbour hood you be run and say "lets go!" Ill burry you under me man.. thats right deep and beneethhhh. yall just mad that i gots over 100 000$ in my fuckin TEEF. hahahhah . i no i can't rap but just for fun. ha.
ToTheDeath....
09-28-2005, 10:59 AM
the evil in the men, the evil is sin
backthrow a punch and ill bunny hop my nuts off your chin
you take the time to relize, that your mesmerized by nothing
watch your life as its plumiting, downhill faster then a risen moon
death will be soon, to take that path, you must be
cant finish it with a good sounding rhyming word....
Jugga
09-28-2005, 02:59 PM
I'm recording this, this weekend on the "I'm a King" beat (T.I.).
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My words on wax are like a buck-shot straight to the dome..
And word is bond, I’m more deadly in the physical form…
Let it be know..
I’ll put a bad glitch in your breathin’…
Uppercuts turn mortals to celestial beings…
Mercilessly mass-murdering all of these cats verbally…
Certainly y’all heard of me..
Kickin’ out words urgently…
I walk around with my head held up high…
Like a freeloading lion cause I depend on my pride…
Bandana over the face part of our everyday garb..
Turn any block party into a masquerade ball…
Leaving you folded, we stay on that body contortion..
You couldn’t [de-fetus] if you practiced abortion…
Emotion blockade, I got me an ironclad soul..
Walk a mile in my shoes, you get a sock full of holes…
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I'm still in the process of writing...
$NAKE$
10-05-2005, 04:15 PM
Yo check it you fuck around with this kat, you'll be gettin your hat took. You a hoe ass mo fucka and the firm isnt Foolin anyone. buddy we know what your up too, and its not chill, you better tuss them bills in my dorection, i got them Connections. Snakes is dead but stok lives on and when i'm on the cron is when i produce. Taggin the shit outta the Caboos. ya'll talk shit but actions speak loader, come around my turff and wont get founded. your a puss that hates the fumes, and i'll be wearin that mask. Cops are harsh but you gotta deal, all this trouble is causing me to stress. i be layin a bomb while hittin my new Zong, see but still i catch you standing in line for my CD. SNAKES is on the cover, damn bitch i fucked your mother and didnt even use a rubber. Got that shit called aids, and lookin pretty bummy "hey wait" did you owe me money?. Oh yeah thats stok,AKA Joker, Pokin his head out when it needs to be done. i think if you dont start respecting people might start dissapearing and i hope your of the hearing.CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT, 705. JSC.
-god made dirt and dirt fucks your ass up.
InvisblSkratchPiklz
10-05-2005, 04:16 PM
shut your face fool
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/5167/stok2go.jpg
$NAKE$
10-05-2005, 04:18 PM
i'll poison you
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:24 PM
this one for you snakes
im makin the most of graffiti
any other faggot wanna beat me?
step up, make your move
cut on your lip and your nose witta brouse
you dont want none of this, this is where i stand
try jerk me fam?
listen to me
i got verses you gotta see
they so fresh, you would never believe
check this dont disrepect this
i dont spit shit like john lynch
like mike jones
at least i dont spit numbahs of cell phones
look at the rhyme that im writing
while cats keep fightin
this is the game
make you look lame its my name
i tag dem walls and trains
you got drown in your own spit
and still you think thats ligit
the wigger snakes, hes a bitch ass fool
cant write for shit he tag his school
like its cool
faggot you done
start to run son
suck dick, little bitch what the fuck you gonna do?
ill twist, slap and tee bag all over you
listen to me
shit on your face
nothin here to see
I ATE YOU SNAKES
InvisblSkratchPiklz
10-05-2005, 05:34 PM
:lol:
zing
swich
10-05-2005, 05:38 PM
livin this hood life, broke as a muthafucka/
but its a good life, croke now u mutha fucka/
got one of my nines staight to ya head/
homeboy pulled his trigga, well now hes dead/
gettin big as im gettin fame/
commitin sins, and ill burn in the flames/
hittin up trains keeps me alive/
graff life ***** till the day that i die/
the pigs they try, but they cant catch me/
im sky high, hittin the punch line snappy/
ur girl looks crappy, get the punch to the stomach/
your hair looks nappy, then i get straight to runnin/
on her face i am cummin, while the police is commin/
i put the petal to the metal as my diomonds is stunnin/
instigatin on your homeboys neva got anyone higher/
got caught my first time graffin with that ***** named skyer/
and jap is a liar, a hurrican of hate awaits his soul/
next time im gonna just hit up and go/
cant stop my flow, cuz ya plain just dont got the skill/
im ready to go,but my ***** uni cant stop takin dem pills/
yo this shit ill, can i get anotha clap/
look at me so sexy as i slap dat ass/
yeah my pockets aint fat, but i be workin/
yall *****s lookin at me like, how dat be workin?/
my money go to the pigs, cuz i got caught graffin/
and i got 80 hours while the coppers be laughin/
ill hit up now 10 times as hard/
and send a few of dem bitches staight to the graveyard...
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:38 PM
lol fuck stok
$NAKE$
10-05-2005, 05:41 PM
lol buddy your a fag. you got nothin.
and how long did that take you?4 minutes, fuck. make that shit longer
next time.
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:45 PM
lol nice job you lame chode... if it took my less time its takes more skill bitch... go suck on your dogs pussy with that gay ass rhyme of yours
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:46 PM
bust back at me faggot
$NAKE$
10-05-2005, 05:49 PM
:lol: you call your self a Mayja playa, but you motha fuckin couldnt get a girl if you payed her.CLiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:52 PM
i never said i was a player... and what does fuckin your mom last night have to do with this? oh, and i didnt pay her..... she payed me
InvisblSkratchPiklz
10-05-2005, 05:52 PM
snake please, you havent reached puberty yet, you probably use that ugly ass bandana of yours to wipe off your baby batter after a solo job with that sig of yours
amet one
10-05-2005, 05:54 PM
lol snakes.. everyone hates you! we all love your mom though
Does anyone remember why you hate him so much anymore?
amet one
10-05-2005, 06:00 PM
1. he writes stok
2. he sucks at life and graffiti
3. little puk who cant rap
4. poser who thinks hes a king
those are my reasons
InvisblSkratchPiklz
10-05-2005, 06:00 PM
i just like hating :)
fuck you asen :wub:
mekos
10-05-2005, 11:45 PM
Y'all fucking suck at rapping - You are all like white and australia jumping on the mike acting like your american... what the fuck? Look at the rap industry... Only 1 successful white rapper - Eminem ... He isn't australian - Y'all notice that? You all just come on here, Dissing out each other, When you are like australia - Aussies don't rap... But even when they do they don't act like americans...
What's the deal with you white cunts going Yo yo yo wat up my *****hz - How racist is that? First of all it's Waddup and you dun like ***** and what the fuck do y'all mean by my? you don't own black people... You should say Yo Waddup Dawg but if you white dont say it to a black person, act loco...
Aight - I would know how the shit rolls... I'm a DJ, I speak to ***** frequently, I'm one of them, You can't just think your one and act like one cos that gonna get u hurt... hate you white dickheads who think they american and like yo yo yo - what's the stuff about fo shizzle and my nizzle... makes no sense - even when an aussie says it... white trash - go fuck yourself dip shits... stop acting black you were born white so be white...
AoAssis
10-05-2005, 11:48 PM
Originally posted by $NAKE$@Oct 5 2005, 04:15 PM
Yo check it you fuck around with this kat, you'll be gettin your hat took. You a hoe ass mo fucka and the firm isnt Foolin anyone. buddy we know what your up too, and its not chill, you better tuss them bills in my dorection, i got them Connections. Snakes is dead but stok lives on and when i'm on the cron is when i produce. Taggin the shit outta the Caboos. ya'll talk shit but actions speak loader, come around my turff and wont get founded. your a puss that hates the fumes, and i'll be wearin that mask. Cops are harsh but you gotta deal, all this trouble is causing me to stress. i be layin a bomb while hittin my new Zong, see but still i catch you standing in line for my CD. SNAKES is on the cover, damn bitch i fucked your mother and didnt even use a rubber. Got that shit called aids, and lookin pretty bummy "hey wait" did you owe me money?. Oh yeah thats stok,AKA Joker, Pokin his head out when it needs to be done. i think if you dont start respecting people might start dissapearing and i hope your of the hearing.CLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT, 705. JSC.
-god made dirt and dirt fucks your ass up.
this sux fuckin dick snakes dont try and rap u fukin suck worse at rapin then u do at graff or w.e u call that......i saw like 5 rhymes in there, thats horrible.....
snake sux, dont do fuckin graff/
go bak to school, learn math/
ur shit sux like hell u fuckin pussy as poser bitch/
y dont u just go kill ur self, ill dig u a ditch/
talkin bout fukin my mother and not usin a rubber/
$NAKE$ FUCKED MY MOTHER put that on ur CD cover/
u pretty desprite if u fukin a 40 year old laddy/
white ass mother fuker thinkin he slim shady/
u like the new kids on the block, u suk alota dick/
go tag shit up with ur crew sayin "thats sick!!!"/
wen u kno that ur tag sux and everyone hates u/
so kill urself but dont forget to tell ur crew too/
Originally posted by mekos@Oct 5 2005, 11:45 PM
Y'all fucking suck at rapping - You are all like white and australia jumping on the mike acting like your american... what the fuck? Look at the rap industry... Only 1 successful white rapper - Eminem ... He isn't australian - Y'all notice that? You all just come on here, Dissing out each other, When you are like australia - Aussies don't rap... But even when they do they don't act like americans...
What's the deal with you white cunts going Yo yo yo wat up my *****hz - How racist is that? First of all it's Waddup and you dun like ***** and what the fuck do y'all mean by my? you don't own black people... You should say Yo Waddup Dawg but if you white dont say it to a black person, act loco...
Aight - I would know how the shit rolls... I'm a DJ, I speak to ***** frequently, I'm one of them, You can't just think your one and act like one cos that gonna get u hurt... hate you white dickheads who think they american and like yo yo yo - what's the stuff about fo shizzle and my nizzle... makes no sense - even when an aussie says it... white trash - go fuck yourself dip shits... stop acting black you were born white so be white...
You get a C for effort
Cccp.aeroC
10-06-2005, 12:37 AM
Yeah man that didnt rhyme at all.. hahaha
InvisblSkratchPiklz
10-06-2005, 05:48 PM
im really not feelin 100%
this is how i feel
has i sit down in front of my computer
my thoughts eat away my reality like a tumour
why is it always me that feels sad
or does somebody up there like gettin me mad?
as i sit down in front of the TV
i think of all those punk kids that use to pick on me
come pick on me now guys we'll see if its still funny
i ll pound your faces in with a lock and wont stop like the energizer bunny
think its funny? hey dummy, why you tryin to run away
stay here, whoa isnt done today, stay a little i wanna play
its my time to shine, my time to rhyme
i ll beat your eye sockets in till your pupils resemble a nickel and dime
sadistic thoughts eat away at my brain
try to ignore them but it aint the same
i feel alone, i feel hated, how do i get true love in my life? how do i get appreciated?
damn, i dont need a pen and paper
just like you didnt need a condom when you slapped my cousin and raped her
shit was harsh and you got off pretty easy
but its gonna be another thing when you get out and you see me
see me, runnin towards you with a spiked bat
up,down up,down bitch you like that?
didnt think so, but thats what ya get when you fuck with me
rapped my cousin and now she lives a life of misery
i cant wait till you get out next june
that day of recognition is coming pretty soon
i hope you had enough time to think of what you did
left your wife alone with a seven year old kid
you ruined a life and thats something you cant take back
but come june 2006 buddy, im gonna make your skull crack
amet one
10-06-2005, 06:25 PM
suppose i was to get mad like i havent before
pull my gun out and say, get the fuck on the floor
speak to me, are you dead, that bullet must be deep in your head
i got rhymes that kill, make the moutains shake, yeah im that ill
you say $NAKE$ sucks, i say hes gay, either way, hes a bitch in this game
who writes stok, are you serious? your throw-ups make me delerious
you think im playin around? these rhymes distort you face, make you run the race
this is my time, my rhyme, sucka bitch fam....
the newest one
Jugga
11-19-2005, 04:04 PM
Time to bring this shit back..
----------------------------------------------------------
I bedazzle my own, I speak in tongues when I’m preaching to the choir..
A liar, can’t be frank without the Oscar Meyer..
Fire, dope.. I base your face like Richard Pryor..
Hold comedic bonds, I’ll be your laughingstock provider..
I, verbal hyperbole, self embellishing..
The grass is always greener on the canvas that’s painted with jealousy…
As for me..
I walk around on all threes..
I make freeze frame pictures of trees motion blur with my steez…
Breezy…
Stay on that paper chase..
Like a business man in high winds with a faulty briefcase..
Witness the business I do, impromptu..
Punch you in the dick till I beat the fuck out of you…
I don’t mess with kittens, don’t practice abortion..
But lame cats birth lame raps and I’m leaving them orphaned..
closed minded motherfuckers, I'm forcing them open...
like rape victims..
on my quest to conquer the token...
Hack.
11-19-2005, 04:12 PM
oh no you didn't
ill be back later tonite with some verses that'll leave ya in hearses.
Hack.
11-20-2005, 11:32 PM
Originally posted by Jugga@Nov 19 2005, 05:04 PM
on my quest to conquer the token...
an i carry a big stick cuz im soft spoken
unleash a beast when a start the provokin
there's no antidote for when i rip your throat open
pack ya nose full of buds and smokin
through the gaping wound i left open
i take long draws but no chokin
i can take any mc and leave his hopes broken
when they wanna come step to dis
sometime i can be a little wreck-a-liss
but i hope you're payin attention an you're gettin this
cuz my lips can spit
shells like they teflon tipped
stacked in double parabellum clips
always crisp
and my lines never drip
unless it's that cocaine tip
im not an addict cuz i dont fiend for the hit
but i do fiend for some script
and a sucka mc that i can lyrically pimp
my words will fuck ya so hard it'll make walk with a limp.
that's all for now.
maybe we should drop freestyles over instrumentals and post the link.
have as real of a session as possible.
who's down?
pick an instrumental and bring it i'll come back.
delay
11-20-2005, 11:49 PM
when im through with you, its like you wanna die
cuz ugly dudes like you could make an onion cry
Originally posted by ASEN@Aug 18 2005, 04:11 PM
Out of hate for Hollywood I kill Johnny Depp with a pog magnet
And spent time penning out elaborated commie texts to Bob Saget
Roll up on set with an m-sixteen, grenade blast then i'm shootin' fiends
That new flick you saw? I killed the cast, actors and producin' team
They didn't want me on game shows, now Bob Barker's job's harder
Don't make me make a sequel to Stallone's flick, they already Got carter
I start my own SitCom, with one big sister and a shit mom
With a hit song, cuz parents need wholesome models to base they kids on
My guest celebrity today couldn't make it to the show's set
He was too busy bustin' off in some other network hoe's chest
Anti-Social? Fuck y'all, I'ma take part in Big Brother season five
Pack a war mace in my guitar case and have these fuckers bleedin' live
I co-starred on Three's Company, cuz of the woman i was humpin', see
Re-did my stunt for free, less fans for them but more free cunt for me
On Gilligan's isalnd, i'm splitting em' sideways with my trusty machete
Have Mary-Anne spillin' em' eyelids, screamin' ''Fuck me already!''
Move on to the set of The Simple Life, left Missus Hilton a crippled spine
Sharpen' my sickle n' knives to meet with Nicole Ritchie's nipples n' thighs
Time for Sports Talk with some lame fuck, face it your fame's up
Who gives a shit about sports? Since the 1990's, every game sucks
The televised broadcast is a nation-wide brainwashin' milestone
Just run the fuck away before that shit reaches your time zone
It's fuck hollywood part 2, and i ain't sparin' a head
Like hungry cats packin' Subway, praisin' Jared again
But unlike the last time, i'm exploitin' your casual wack mind
Kinda like Mythbusters, 'cept i'm destroyin' your national pastime
Scared the Fear Factor crew deer hunter style, america's killin'
Joe Rogan host bitch and a horse met, now it's bearin' his children
Moguls honestly think we eat up ratings like that poverty shit
They got enough dough, telethons fuck us like a sodomy binge
Back to the fun stuff, 8 simple rules won't get you bottled up
First rule: get off the placemat, or i place the gat on Donald Trump
These bastards got me so hot headed that i strive to cook em'
Chances of livin' in my vision slimmer than Survivor: Brooklyn
So i chill n' pace with my pill n' base till it's time for Will & Grace
I'm pretty damn sure the show's spark rekindles my killin' days
Quote from Newsweek: ''the one-hour time slot jocking boredom''
Pretty sure Joe Pantoliano got a prime spot on Crossing Jordan
that's all the time i have right now
sace66
11-21-2005, 12:38 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
rapping on the net
is stupid as shit and thats the truth
^^^Going through your posts, i found this.
Originally posted by sace66
Sace approached the wall and stood there for a few moments with a can held in his sweaty hands. He began to swiftly guide each line to shape every letter in a unique style that could only be created by a experienced writer. His finished product was composed of a red outline and filled by shades of yellow and orange. "Practice makes perfect bro", said sace. Drake nodded and took a few seconds to take in the vibes that the piece spewed out. This was inspiration. This was the reason he had gotten up this morning. This was the motivation to become a better writer. This was his cure for that itch he had gotten since the moment he laid eyes on the first well put together piece of graffiti. An addiction that was stronger than any drug habit, an addiction he never thought possible.
Your little make believe stories suck, on or off the net. Don't judge what you don't know.
neaksta
11-21-2005, 07:06 PM
Originally posted by ASEN+Nov 21 2005, 04:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Nov 21 2005, 04:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> ^^^Going through your posts, i found this.
<!--QuoteBegin-sace66
Sace approached the wall and stood there for a few moments with a can held in his sweaty hands. He began to swiftly guide each line to shape every letter in a unique style that could only be created by a experienced writer. His finished product was composed of a red outline and filled by shades of yellow and orange. "Practice makes perfect bro", said sace. Drake nodded and took a few seconds to take in the vibes that the piece spewed out. This was inspiration. This was the reason he had gotten up this morning. This was the motivation to become a better writer. This was his cure for that itch he had gotten since the moment he laid eyes on the first well put together piece of graffiti. An addiction that was stronger than any drug habit, an addiction he never thought possible.
Your little make believe stories suck, on or off the net. Don't judge what you don't know. [/b][/quote]
:lol: hahahahahaa thats funny
neaksta
11-21-2005, 07:10 PM
i tihnk fame is retarted
COME HOMIE I HAVENT HEARD NOTHING WEAKER
YOU LOOK LIKE A FUCKING TWEEKER
YOU LOOK RETARDED
PEW IT SMELLS LIKE YOU FARTED
Urban Ninja
11-21-2005, 08:14 PM
yooo fuck this im not tryin to be philisophical, im just atronomical, meaning i blast threw this stratus....
aperatus im unstopable
cause i keep it movin, while you repeat an do this,
same ol' shit, but i bin' spittin since the school days
been threw a thousand styles an' compiled to hit this new stage.....
ok, yo
resentless attacks
to ascend or relapse
my attempt to react
to this astonishing crap
spread threw the human race
ig-norant human waste
i roar an still they hate
boneless words
man its time to debate.
so whos decidein my fate?,
im,
the lyricist who got mo' flava then a grape,
vine......
Brake brake yo
hidden entities, the bright stars fall.... as if sent to me (brake)
i see society (brake), i see the green earth (brake), i see the night sky (brake) i see the bright stars (brake) i see it all come tumblein ...........
Urban Ninja
11-21-2005, 08:27 PM
yah that was all boneless words, i actually fucking suck at rappering
Urban Ninja
11-22-2005, 03:19 PM
yo i think i was drugged just before that last part "break break YO!"
Urban Ninja
11-22-2005, 06:37 PM
haha, im not ape2..... but u have me on msn :rolleyes:
then you're either havoc, bruce, psykaoz or ume
or incredible D
Urban Ninja
11-23-2005, 10:23 PM
wrong again sucka...........
"Urban Pirate - I had Michelangelo put down the horse hair brushes, started doin end to end burners on buses!"
shit, you didn't even get on my new list... let me fix that
good to see you back on here
GLEW1_LUV
11-24-2005, 02:03 AM
Beyond the comprehension, of mere mortal skills, I bomb freights wit precision, like a sniper when he kills, perfect lines, shading and what not, copious paint doses, representin hip hop, the movement most faked, raped and murdered, by the commercialists, and minority herders, creating mergers, and billions in wealth, while the consumers starve, "But they're dressed well...", well tough for them, they've been brain washed, double crossed and just plain robbed, by what they think is "cool", and gangster and shit, what ever happened to just reppin the shit, cargo pants or sweat suits, camoflauge and red shirts, keepin it real, not stealin for a nice skirt, money aint all, its art that's in, so all my vandals, please join in, this is comin from the 1st in Glew Krew, Glew 1er, this the end foo... B)
GLEW1_LUV
11-24-2005, 02:04 AM
Hmmmm...lemmie try this
Mute1
11-24-2005, 02:08 AM
Originally posted by ASEN+Nov 21 2005, 04:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Nov 21 2005, 04:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> ^^^Going through your posts, i found this.
<!--QuoteBegin-sace66
Sace approached the wall and stood there for a few moments with a can held in his sweaty hands. He began to swiftly guide each line to shape every letter in a unique style that could only be created by a experienced writer. His finished product was composed of a red outline and filled by shades of yellow and orange. "Practice makes perfect bro", said sace. Drake nodded and took a few seconds to take in the vibes that the piece spewed out. This was inspiration. This was the reason he had gotten up this morning. This was the motivation to become a better writer. This was his cure for that itch he had gotten since the moment he laid eyes on the first well put together piece of graffiti. An addiction that was stronger than any drug habit, an addiction he never thought possible.
Your little make believe stories suck, on or off the net. Don't judge what you don't know. [/b][/quote]
how gay. the only thing you should be writing is romance novels.
The world is a fat man on the toilet, i stood underneath him caught his crap n boiled it, the mixture was brown till i added a HB pencil, gave the shit to fame n said its detremental <_< ( dunno how to spell :( ), i took a reaallly gay white guy, showed i really ugly gurl like the one that belongs to psy, he'd go insane n suck his own tits, then he'd fuck her in the armpit, then eat his own liver, then id take psy's bitch to dinner, i suck at rapping and this kinda crap, buti i get insulted ill take a shit in your lap
there i had a perverted urge to do that :P
spost to say a not i :angry:
jinx671
11-24-2005, 09:14 PM
[FONT=Arial][COLOR=red]thanks giving one of my many favorite holiday..itz wen ppl of many diffrent races say der graces n' stuff der faces wit turkeyz n' shit ham mash potatoez maybe gritz but itz all legit ..and diz all i write so be happy wit dat and if u not heres a pen n pad..and i stick around to chat so shootshoot i gotta splat
Havoc411
11-24-2005, 09:18 PM
is this the freestyle rape thread?
PureSole
11-24-2005, 09:48 PM
Yo, son I got you lames...
my games --bigger then biblical proportions
*****s never heard of a wild style --
till they seen my style, so tell me if its like that
dun I been through the file
you a pussy, a fake
I been on the grind while you got fat
not your bank account, ***** i got to count
my dough, my game sprays like a fat cap
you cats cant rap
stick to your day job before i run up on you
pull the two up on you
***** i been with my capers getting paper
dont forget it
the gaup, lucci what you wanna call it?
nah, i take that back
forget it, all you cats get deaded
call me marker because im on the run
Ekwol
11-25-2005, 02:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
seap!
11-25-2005, 02:46 AM
if any one has,
raps like cracks by doom and grimm,
pm me and send it to me through msn please
i lost my cd.
InvisblSkratchPiklz
11-25-2005, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by Ekwol@Nov 25 2005, 03:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
you rap worst then supermarket students
i leave you breathless and clueless
with a marker i scratch cali off the map
making writters scared having a panic attack
aint nobody takin you serious in this thread
after i finish rhymin you just scratch your head
DVS crew, i never heard of them young fucker
oh DVS, has in Dirty Vagina Sucker
now i know who you be talkin about
those 13 yr old boys passing out cookies for their cub scout
i havent rapped in this thread for a long time
so i basically decided to drop a line
it sucks that it had to be you
i bet you didnt see that coming like a chinese jew
Havoc411
11-25-2005, 05:28 PM
blind hooker would have been funnier than chinese jew
jinx671
11-27-2005, 05:07 AM
..been caught up wit da tobacco industriez durty skeem..since i waz 14..feenin for dat nicotine n' crystalmethampetamine..hoping i cud wake one morning and it cud all juz be a dream..but itz all gud like peachez n' cream..wishin i kud slit the throatz of those fuckerz so they cudnt skream..but ill juz chillout sit dow smoke a stogie n' let out sum steam..polluted by da smoke like toxic wastez dumped on fishez in a stream..i put the "phine" in meth...if you concentrate hard enuff you kan smell it in my breath..scrap my throat muthafucka watchall find iz frost..put it inna pipe moke it watch yur eyez go cross..twirl dat shit..keep da lighter lowlite..wen u done fuckin swallowit...after dat wype on dat wet napkin.. muthafucka you needa stop actin..like youz not high az shit..bitch you alwayz high so stop havin dat fit....yayah you knoe itz legit...
Scene*
11-27-2005, 05:48 AM
Originally posted by InvisblSkratchPiklz+Nov 25 2005, 06:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (InvisblSkratchPiklz @ Nov 25 2005, 06:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ekwol@Nov 25 2005, 03:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
you rap worst then supermarket students
i leave you breathless and clueless
with a marker i scratch cali off the map
making writters scared having a panic attack
aint nobody takin you serious in this thread
after i finish rhymin you just scratch your head
DVS crew, i never heard of them young fucker
oh DVS, has in Dirty Vagina Sucker
now i know who you be talkin about
those 13 yr old boys passing out cookies for their cub scout
i havent rapped in this thread for a long time
so i basically decided to drop a line
it sucks that it had to be you
i bet you didnt see that coming like a chinese jew [/b][/quote]
they call me hybrid child
i exhale neurotoxic fumes
and my style is wild
my lyrics are chemicly unstable
like when i fucked your girl under the table
ill burn you and turn you into a fable
i dont applaud you and your whack rhyme
when i bust mine ill leave you like a crack child and time
your face leaves people in revulsion
there eyes burn like a chemical cumbustion
Scene*
11-27-2005, 05:57 AM
Originally posted by InvisblSkratchPiklz+Nov 25 2005, 06:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (InvisblSkratchPiklz @ Nov 25 2005, 06:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by Ekwol@Nov 25 2005, 03:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
you rap worst then supermarket students
i leave you breathless and clueless
with a marker i scratch cali off the map
making writters scared having a panic attack
aint nobody takin you serious in this thread
after i finish rhymin you just scratch your head
DVS crew, i never heard of them young fucker
oh DVS, has in Dirty Vagina Sucker
now i know who you be talkin about
those 13 yr old boys passing out cookies for their cub scout
i havent rapped in this thread for a long time
so i basically decided to drop a line
it sucks that it had to be you
i bet you didnt see that coming like a chinese jew [/b]
roses are red
violets are blue
rapping on the net
is stupid as shit and thats the truth
[/QUOTE=]
its true but i will give it a shot
<!--QuoteBegin-Ekwol@Nov 25 2005, 03:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
you rap worst then supermarket students
i leave you breathless and clueless
with a marker i scratch cali off the map
making writters scared having a panic attack
aint nobody takin you serious in this thread
after i finish rhymin you just scratch your head
DVS crew, i never heard of them young fucker
oh DVS, has in Dirty Vagina Sucker
now i know who you be talkin about
those 13 yr old boys passing out cookies for their cub scout
i havent rapped in this thread for a long time
so i basically decided to drop a line
it sucks that it had to be you
i bet you didnt see that coming like a chinese jew
they call me hybrid child
i exhale neurotoxic fumes
my flow is wild
listen to these mascabre tunes
your words are whack
mine will eat you like a heart attack
your lyrics dont rhyme
they will be forgotten erased from history
like a crack head kid and time
you make walls scream
graff that gives people darkening dreams
wearing abercrombie and fitch
trying to be the next eminem
think your ill? your not bitch
vegimite on toast
11-27-2005, 06:53 AM
Originally posted by InvisblSkratchPiklz+Nov 26 2005, 09:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (InvisblSkratchPiklz @ Nov 26 2005, 09:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ekwol@Nov 25 2005, 03:01 AM
heres one:
yo its ekwol from the DVS krew
i thought yall knew
we be gettin up all across town
your toy krew will be shut down
orange county is where its at
where bombs and different styles is phat
yo we be writin till tha break of dawn
when tha pigs come were long gone
cant no one in my race write better than this samo-1
from tha Bay thru LA
its love for cali-forn-i-a
you rap worst then supermarket students
i leave you breathless and clueless
with a marker i scratch cali off the map
making writters scared having a panic attack
aint nobody takin you serious in this thread
after i finish rhymin you just scratch your head
DVS crew, i never heard of them young fucker
oh DVS, has in Dirty Vagina Sucker
now i know who you be talkin about
those 13 yr old boys passing out cookies for their cub scout
i havent rapped in this thread for a long time
so i basically decided to drop a line
it sucks that it had to be you
i bet you didnt see that coming like a chinese jew [/b][/quote]
Whoa is a ho. :)
InvisblSkratchPiklz
11-27-2005, 07:44 AM
vege just BURNEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD everyone :lol:
you crazy aussie
jinx671
11-27-2005, 08:34 AM
intoxicated off da beer..yah u noe it no fear..wat im sayin may not be clear..but fuckit herez a cheerz..if you dont like it get on yur rearz..so i kan spank you..afta dat i better here a fuckin thankyou..if i dont imma fuckin shank you..kick you wit my shoe..showin all fagit foolz..alwayz ready for duelz..breaking all rulez..shinin brighter than jewlz..sluggin on budweiser tolkn off diz stick of koolz... :lol:
jinx671
11-27-2005, 08:58 AM
creating lyrikal myrikalz in my mind..so heavenly divine generating hatred and jealousy from those unlike the radiation of my rhymes that shines down on every line..that i spitout..forcing kidz 2 listen az i shout..giving them the right rout 2 jurney..but diz iz only for the wurthy and if you feeling skeptikal then you just anotha fool..think im cruel..itz all cool..im like an unbreakable jewl that shines..alwayz ready 2 duel wit just 1 line..commiting crimez for a living..alwayz giving never shifting outta place..too fast for you 2 keep up with the pace..alwayz winnin da race..why da grinn on da face..want me 2 fix it..ill tie dis lace around yur neck and lift it.. yo itz me jinx one of the gifted...
Originally posted by jinx671@Nov 27 2005, 09:58 AM
so heavenly divine
Jedi mind
Heavenly divine
Steadily shine in 99'
I love that beat
TricksForKids
11-27-2005, 12:39 PM
An amazing feat, to meet the street, in a deadlock embrace of face, and concrete, a hard kiss, that’s hardly missed by a band of families, friends and kids, send the bids, to stop this shit, mops and kits, clean up bits, of memories, shit you said to me, id be a bit of everything, now just a kid whos trembling, his wits remembering, what a hug feels like, tugs at life, smug, but quite, afraid of never again,
being tucked in at night, duck from lights that blind your eyes, find the lies, to climb the sky, and mind the my, cuz now your selfish and still the kind who cries, try to fly, think of it that way, just sink till your back breaks, quick it’s the fast lane, this wick just aint lasting, a trick, but no clapping, just sick sounds of snapping, till silence fills your ears now you miss everlasting? called a bitch “your just acting�, till you flew over, said screw it, your threw with this blues shit, few knew the true bits, thatd youd jump for no reason, just to prove you could do it, yet nothings wrong with you? Its true you lunatic, youd fight for days for your best buds, and right away youd create love, but you’ve never been in love, so you bite your nails till you taste blood…the next to say that this attempt, youll be afraid, and it’s a bet, that even if you jumped your expectations make a net… sex was meant but never met, but kissing was so great, wishing for more dates, went fishin, just so late, now with seconds to go, you reckon youll know someone’s missing their soulmate….
Urban Ninja
11-27-2005, 01:33 PM
ohhhhhh shit, that was hot as fuck tricks
keep em commin
edit:
"duck from lights that blind your eyes, find the lies, to climb the sky, and mind the my, cuz now your selfish and still the kind who cries, try to fly, think of it that way, just sink till your back breaks, quick it’s the fast lane, this wick just aint lasting, a trick, but no clapping, just sick sounds of snapping"
hotnesss!
madsencarl
11-27-2005, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by Atic@Nov 6 2004, 12:41 AM
theres already a freestyle thread...but oh well. here sumthin all for you, fame.
When I cut and scar you, you're gonna die, so fuck power...
Cause you're supreme reign is more like a minor sun shower...
I see you gotta make ur verse perfect, it'd be a lie to say I give shits...
U edited that shit, & wow, that caps lock made the difference...
My swings are crazy as fuck, no doubt that this bitch will be fallin..
& they'll call u 2-faced when I make ur left side black, blue and swollen...
I fucked your girl too, fame, she always creep on this faggot...
So when I say your his girls a Jorge, I ain't speaking in spanish...
I'll beat the fuck outta you kid, body numbed out, head bleeding...
But if you're not number 2, I'll make sure you come out dead even...
I'm staying basic, why the fuck should I make the hot shit deeper...
Cuz fame ain't got a lot to lose, so I ain't got a lot to win either!...
aarrgghh, you faggot, you ripped your whole rap off these two pages off rapbattles.com -
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/printthread.php?t=149182
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/printthrea...?t=150150&pp=40 (http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/printthread.php?t=150150&pp=40)
(both by Young Philly)
sure, you mixed the lines around but YOU RIPPED IT YOU FUCKHEAD
dont take cred for other peoples work
and even if you manage to convince somebody that this is your work, you re-used it, you cheap fuck.
so sit down, shut up, and listen to your fuckin shania twain
Urban Ninja
11-27-2005, 11:16 PM
shit son, that put him in place
vegimite on toast
11-27-2005, 11:19 PM
Shit son, yo, nah'a'mean?
fo sheezy my neezy
check 1 2 check check microphone checka bustin out da decka
hahahaha
Urban Ninja
11-27-2005, 11:25 PM
styl yo we rude bwoys! seen?
vegimite on toast
11-27-2005, 11:34 PM
Har har har, lol at you, you hardcore ninja.
Check my rhymes, yo.
Urban Ninja
11-27-2005, 11:57 PM
ok, emence tence relations got me pacein, im facein demons that seemin to be beamin a steam ship of seman to relieve men an re-seed them, lies so fat they could feed 3 men, an i cant take the waitin game, ilusion of optics, play tricks like david blane, aranged to claim your brain, elevation of reality.... is it really real? or sustained to claim a salary, fuck it, i burn kids like calories, 100's hourly, then get in bed an read YOUR raps... cause i need my power sleep, cause this ninja creeps with a sleek phisique to sneak an snatch your pilow sheets,?....
pillow sheets what the fuck am i snatching pillow sheets for..... K that means its time to stop
Urban Ninja
11-27-2005, 11:59 PM
"elevation of reality.... is it really real? or sustained to claim a salary"
haha, that came out dope
jinx671
11-28-2005, 01:25 AM
im ill...rhymez compact in the form of a pill..make you swallow it juz so you kan fill..chills up yur spinal cordz thiz shitz real..alwayz spitn sublimanil thoughtz...light up an ignorant personz mind juz so it dont rote..bust a cap inna bitch a mile away wit juz 1 shot..alwayz runnin beyond the linez of boundary only once i been caught.. guilty by complicity waz the only thing sought..unbreakable tekniq using my mind to untie all knotz..and for the next time 1 of you fagitz try 2 shake mee just remember my flowz are crystal clear like water not like pee... :P :lol:
Urban Ninja
11-28-2005, 01:56 AM
"alwayz spitn sublimanil thoughtz"
so thats why your wack... :P :lol:
"dont push me cause im close"
to the edge back center an front livin life not givin a fuck
jinx671
11-28-2005, 08:10 AM
<_< my bad u guyz..... i meant 2 say "spitn at"....but yah show mee wat u got ninjaman..tsahaah!! :P
jinx671
11-28-2005, 08:57 AM
:blink:
jinx671
11-28-2005, 09:09 AM
maaan u wanna test..ill chew yur rymez n' spit it out inna mess..checkit..youz a fake ass ninja..ill leave on da floor wit just a finga..watch ya crawl around an linga..you cudnt afford 2 buy a sword..muthafuck youz messin witha lord..tryina snatch my pillow sheetz bish..howz about i cut off yur feet n' serve it to ya inna dish..muthafucka ill jinx you with my nex burfday wish.. putchu next on my hitlish..punk ass bitch talkin bout my rymez are wack..bitch u must be sniffn dat crack.. other than dat yur intellijence must have sum lack.. go ahead n' attack fagit ..cuz ill fuckn counter dat shit.. soh stepup bitch..cuz u noe itz legit.. :o :lol: :P
jinx671
11-28-2005, 09:20 AM
damn....you guyz ever heard dat "dedicated" by linknpark.. :huh: ..i juz downloaded it..itz pritty ill..checkitout
jinx671
11-28-2005, 09:23 AM
yo ninja..dont take it ta heart man.. juz tryina spice shitup :D
Dr. Coffee
11-28-2005, 12:51 PM
what are you 8?
animalsonwheels
11-28-2005, 07:11 PM
sitting and sippin henikin in the kitchen
slapping my bitches ass then
fuck up housing like afgans
claiming "we graphing"
really your whack and
your styles slapstick
which happens to be last kid,
everyones laughing when you tag,
"fuck up this fag"
thats why your shits crossed next time you go back
Urban Ninja
11-28-2005, 07:34 PM
yo you wanna hear this rythum... well let me spit wit drunken lyricism
an let me spear my victum...
im talkin jinx 6 7 1
so think quick! I sever tounges with...
my clever numb dumb witt,
brain unplugged *skip*
cause I rock till the deaf kids,
start to get the message!
was your *Development *Arrested cause your wack! (wack as fuck)
bitch u'll never hear em clap even if u bought a laugh track!
hahahahahaha,
but i bet u hear em laugh AT YOU
but u never know? could catch momentum like a fat dude!
still im tempted to retract you,
extract the breath of life, an then slap you
leave you vegied out like some cactue
or a cactie,
yo thats unlucky like a cats eye
or like animalsonwheels, so devious he make the bats fly
Urban Ninja
11-28-2005, 07:39 PM
wurd to the animal ridein on chromed out wheels
*****z since 96'
animalsonwheels
11-28-2005, 10:34 PM
HAM AND FTP we be
thinking with pricision,
opposition lacks coordination
with allah sitting smoking bong sessions
FTP bomb with agression,
blowing up buildings,
letting panic set in,
*scratching dj*
re-read this lesson,
lyrically hipchecking,
anti ref action,
rep up, get smacked, cut,
and with your girlfriend busted nut,
my crew call her 'jugs', what,
we drug her for the buzz, slut
*props to mc chill c passes him back the phone*
FTP
jinx671
11-28-2005, 11:16 PM
2 da ninja wit no spice like ginja......man ill wype yur rhymez wit my ass.. dat shit will never last.. my rhymez are like a chemically proven killing gass.. puttin fake ass fagitz down iz my main task.. dont even ask.. juz sit back n' sniff dat crack..cuz yur skillz are wack..i eat shit like dat every day for snack..smack u so hard u cudnt react..mutha fucka these rhymez facts..sting harder than thumtackz...youz probably givin yur max.. bitch im sitin here chilld n' relaxd..WHAT!?! :blink:
jinx671
11-28-2005, 11:37 PM
yo dr.cofee..so what if i waz 8...bitch you fuckn late like retarded kidz tryina hate..dos guessin pplz age make you feel great??...next time u betta shut yur mouf for i change yur fate........fucka talkin bout 8.. shhiiiiit.. <_<
seckzoner
11-29-2005, 12:00 AM
i always spit raps
tracks that are fatter than caps
your shit is wack
my shits hotter then a match
gotta strategize, got more weight than fatta guys
your ass is askin for assholes to sodomize
but guy, imma take you apart
raps resemblin darts that break you from the start
dudes like you should probably drop the mic
drop that can cuz you dudes could hardly write
ahaha, yeah
thats my rap
Urban Ninja
11-29-2005, 12:04 AM
haha
*mc chill grabs the mic*
yo, its sorta depressin the way im flexin this hecktic rhyme scheem
makin fools look rediculous,
like *****z droppin wallets at the crime sceen
my optical tricks is blinding like eclips',
thats why i dish this with the swiftness,
my words'll grip yah neck an twist it
cause yo im twisted but efficient, at pissin out this "rap" shit
got sylibals doin backflips, an lines way off there axis
now most kids just cant grasp this,
must be the way I drop the word play like..... supercalafragalistic expialadocious
seckzoner
11-29-2005, 12:13 AM
fuck this childs play
you should know your childs gay!
hes the type to write to magazines about his wild ways!
but enough of that fag, i wrap that cat like a bag
have him screamin for his dad, about how hes a mad fag.
have him askin for air but no, i dont care.
have you beggin for your life with your ass half bare
but enough of the tools, got no time for these fools
have you goons leakin blood, like dudes whos not cool
so what you know about a sweet emcee, from the 416
your ass is wack so go suck some dicks
haha okay, those are just completely random lines. i wish i could actually lay an audio track, then you'd be able to hear how my flow is, instead of you guys making it up in your head, nah mean?
Urban Ninja
11-29-2005, 12:20 AM
my flows outa this galaxy
seckzoner
11-29-2005, 12:28 AM
haha, really now...
screw_loose
11-29-2005, 12:32 AM
LAWL.
jinx671
11-29-2005, 09:14 AM
yes its da new filipino kid in town..say one line n' i make a king give up hiz crown..turning upside down frownz around..as they hear my sound..hammerin fake m.c.'s 2 da ground..wit rhymez dat glistenz never missin..juz givin 2 da dissin...shhh...u hear dat listen..datz yur eardrumz shiftin..so bad ill make an angel start sinnin..slurr up sum nitroglicerine..spit it outta ya if i c yu grinnin..slit yur throat if i c u livin..blow up yur house from the gass stove in yur kitchin..rape yur babiez momma..tape her mouf if she bitchin..leave ya scratchin yur head like itz full of lice itchin.. :lol:
animalsonwheels
11-29-2005, 12:52 PM
yo... yo
QuestionMark?
11-29-2005, 12:52 PM
check it
i like to fuck up walls some call it graffiti
i make sure that no authorities ever will see me
once a pig pulled up
as me and the crew was gettin' up
I picked up my krylon
and asked "is something wrong"
my brain said turn and run
he pursued me for a while it was kind of fun
until he finally caught up and got out of his car
He quickened his pace
when he got too close i sprayed him in the face
he dropped to the ground
I booked it to the meeting place and was never found
animalsonwheels
11-29-2005, 12:56 PM
jinx shut yah fucking ugly froglike chops,
murder weapons a knife and hiding place is a bog,
maybe ill grab you and rip off yah arms,
serve you to the wealthy girl with bbq sauce,
drug habits got me frosty,
hip hop is nasty when often
i grab emcees and toss em
turn em into bacon and grate em
add anchovies for a salad ceaser to forsake um
making the ladies orgasm constantly,
dropping the freestles on the bombing Beats
often we, cop jerseys
then go tagging in the streets you fucking heard me
I smuggle guns..... spread the word
Urban Ninja
11-29-2005, 12:57 PM
Originally posted by animalsonwheels@Nov 29 2005, 01:52 PM
sexzoner a white man whos a fucking fairy
not scary, or aware of the facts of rapping,
when this site reads em they skip right past him
while claiming, "fuck making an artificial reaction,
your spastic, your wife goes plastic cause sex?
she cant have it, i help her wheile laughing
acheive multiple orgasms,
then do coke off her titties cause im african
hahahahaha, u wish u were african... u fucking afgahn
animalsonwheels
11-29-2005, 01:08 PM
im gangsta,
smoking weed 4 times a day
protecting property with a sawwed off 12 gauge
i spot opposition above me and aim,
miss the brain, much rather go for the leg
the only way itll be hip hop your dropping is obvious,
youll fall to the floor bleeding like gotti kid,
screaming "FUCK HE SHOT ME HIP"
then i take your spraypaint canisters,
and put em in my backpack and start vanishing,
you cant come back from that ,
go attempt to play hacki sack,
at least that way youll be half a rapper
hanging out in our culture; come back after,
youre nothing in fact sir,
go practice spraying and youll come out blacker
*Props to the Ninja FTP HAM and anyone else who likes my rhymes*
[]ASeR-ONe[]paint slinger
11-29-2005, 04:38 PM
HA! HA! HA! this is the gayest shit! come on kids. this aint freestyling. all this gangsta babble most you kids are spittin off is weak. get some better rhyme schemes. enough with the same lines over and over! god damn! not tyring to put y'all down, but freestyle for real.
:ph34r: ninjas told me, REAL EMCEES AND DJ'S ARE A MINORITY.
Gangstarr told you that... the sample was used in JMT's Rise of the machines as well.
seckzoner
11-29-2005, 05:47 PM
Originally posted by Urban Ninja+Nov 29 2005, 01:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Urban Ninja @ Nov 29 2005, 01:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-animalsonwheels@Nov 29 2005, 01:52 PM
sexzoner a white man whos a fucking fairy
not scary, or aware of the facts of rapping,
when this site reads em they skip right past him
while claiming, "fuck making an artificial reaction,
your spastic, your wife goes plastic cause sex?
she cant have it, i help her wheile laughing
acheive multiple orgasms,
then do coke off her titties cause im african
hahahahaha, u wish u were african... u fucking afgahn [/b][/quote]
urban ninja, thank you for quoting that, looks like he thought twice or something. haha
NICE EDIT ANIMALS
animalsonwheels
11-29-2005, 09:19 PM
stfu bitch
animals riding in on family travels,
handily stealing marijuana in the after hours,
animalsonwheels
11-29-2005, 09:31 PM
aight yo sexzoner diss tell the "children" to get in bed.... that doesnt even mean anything though thats not a diss to you im jsut kidding around
yo ... yo
sexzoner is a phoney loner,
pretending to recieve phonecalls,
but really its no-one,
yo, you homo, you're foregone,
mopeing like a slomo replay of a goalie getting scored on,
jinx671
11-29-2005, 10:14 PM
animalsonwheels??..chh...wat the fuck is dat??..soundz like sumthing off cartoonnetwork u little twurp..man yur linez dont even rhyme..bitch talkn bout turnin me into bacon..look at dis punkass on bombingscience fakin..listen hear lemme tell you sumthng..lemme make it specific..fuck jersey muthafucka cuz im from the pacific..i juz shit on ya face man watchu gunna do.. gohead n' lickit..and what the fuck iz "froglike chopz"..man i give you give no propz..like goodcopz..you fuckn suck like ya mom on ya pops..flows run deepr than kiwi mops..make u stand on a braken bridge..force u 2 hop till it drops..
animalsonwheels
11-30-2005, 12:23 AM
hahahha :
"gohead n' lickit..and what the fuck iz "froglike chopz"..man i give you give no propz..like goodcopz.."
animalsonwheels
11-30-2005, 01:20 AM
bitches get slapped the fuck up, dismantled,
panic fools, throw you left hooks in the schools,
put my foot down, checkmated the checkboard, look now,
jinx a shook clown, wanna see a small penis? look down
youre prolly an asian wearing a poncho,
not the head hauncho, still got stomped though,
irresponsible rappers acting pompus after shows
i chokeslam these assholes on a beds on nails,
impaled and left able to have rhymes for sale,
taxing payrole
Record Label, sensational, flipping tables,
FTP 05
animalsonwheels
11-30-2005, 01:27 AM
[eon]
Now God blessed me with abnormal tendencies
And granted clemency for illegal chemistry
Ain’t worth your weight in molecular structure
Out of work like jfk jr.’s flight instructor
jinx671
11-30-2005, 07:14 AM
:blink: ......yo im god muthafucka n' i aint blessin u wit shit...or on second thought i might just give you an abnormal clit..fucka...yah and dont wuri bout dat clemency..cuz imma change dat 2 uh death penalty..have you lethal injected chemically cuz you jus love dat chemistry..hahah..muthafucka ill crush dat dignity n' leave you in stupidity if u aint feelin mee!!
seckzoner
11-30-2005, 12:51 PM
it seems that theres quite a few freestylers on this forum, how about we record em on tracks and upload em [to like, yousendit.com or something]. It'd be alot better than reading the words.
And this way, we know its freestyled B)
it doesnt have to be no complicated shit, just have a beat playing, and your pc mic close to the speaker. Then convert it to MP3 for quick uploading
Who's down?
jinx671
11-30-2005, 07:25 PM
ey yo im down if i only knew how.. :unsure:
Clevaness
11-30-2005, 07:40 PM
I hit emcees in the face with my meat like a venice brawl/
When my pen is sprawled I'll serve you like a tennis ball/
Then it's on but there won't be no second chance for you/
You're the ugly bitch in highschool, ain't nobody gonna dance with you/
So keep that Usher track playin till it's over and done with/
I'm dumb sick make girls fall in love when my tongue spits/
I'm like a rhyme doctor I'mma talk about the way I operate/
You're not as great make your bitch copulate when I rock ma tape/
But this is 2005 so get your ipods ready/
My squad's deadly when your crew reminds me of dry rock's hedley/
Cause you're a Canadian Idol a rap actor playin a part/
I'm slayin these charts but not before I'm sprayin my art/
So grab your Krylon's and Rustos cause I'mma bomb banners/
And if you got some cash that shit looks better in Montana/
I'm half french don't matter I'll impail toads/
I kill tracks like I got a fetish for bankrupting railroads/
Go back to Whackfrica
VAbomber
12-01-2005, 07:43 AM
wow what a pointless thread
seckzoner
12-01-2005, 07:44 AM
and you would be?
oh yeah, just getting your post count up.
VAbomber
12-01-2005, 07:45 AM
excuse me? this is a pointless thread. all people are doing is copy+ paste other people raps. probably from google
seckzoner
12-01-2005, 07:47 AM
haha, how sure are you of that?
go back to your postwhoring.
seckzoner
12-01-2005, 07:49 AM
P.s
dont front like you're not
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2389/5658et.jpg
VAbomber
12-01-2005, 07:53 AM
hmmk what does that do. im off work today. and i like to see everything everyone is talking about.
Fuck off. Everyone hates you.
jinx671
12-01-2005, 10:55 PM
yah u stupid fagit!! dont tell me i byte off my shit bitch.. :angry:
jinx671
12-01-2005, 11:16 PM
yo im havin preminitionz..visionz of "vabombaz" mom comitn suicide n' her kithenz...hiz little brotherz n' sisterz drownin in bathtubz...it waz the devil decision....babysittaz shoven little kidz in da oven...sick twistd minded but i still get luvin....darker than satanz coven wurst than sum dude witta ak gunnin..therz no hidin no runnin..burn yur physikal form..scorn till you wish you were never born...az the sky around you turnz krylon black...have you shakin like a baby born addikted 2 crack..buildingz homez crush n' crumbling down into a stack..forming so high the heavenz cudnt react...puttin it in factz ryte down here written in black..!!
jinx671
12-01-2005, 11:25 PM
yah i noe...i said black twice.. :unsure:
animalsonwheels
12-02-2005, 01:42 AM
yo yo
animalsonwheels
12-02-2005, 01:43 AM
llyrically an athelete meeting twice a week in a back alley smiling having a good time all the while when in disguise this guy murks out with a knife robbing yah for weed and taking yah kite when your brother often contemplates a hip toss he rushes in grabs the knife arm and pins him pulls out a firearm with precision shoots the victem this oppurtunity has turned to be a situation when a person feels sorry for lack of humanity group damage be the reasons why society is falling to shambles everyone sorry implore poor proportion on the minority while police patrolling and arresting citazens for drinking thinking their winning and laughing really its just a trap when drug use prevents people from growing global population exploding democracys boring i wanna kill all yur children
vegimite on toast
12-02-2005, 02:13 AM
^That gives me a headache.
TricksForKids
12-02-2005, 03:52 PM
heres some more "emo rhymes" oh well, better than nothing, and anyone who has yahoo chat and a mic, add me : cambig6
and we can do some real freestyling on the mic, and if you dont have yahoo chat. get it! peace!
its fairly obsurd how we're scared of this world, unfair and were hurled into barrels of hurt, till i stood up, brushed off, spotted her, said im gunna marry that girl, i dared to unfurl, perfection at best, i expected much less, my breath?nothing left, and i dunno what love is...cept a heartbeat that just presses my chest, tested and blessed, but her smiles now frowning, from wild to downing, and liqours, just quicker for this child to drown in, file this clown in, he was startin to sail, to smart for the trail, that leads to where?...fuck it, my heart is for sale, apart from its veil, youve never seen it this open, breathing and choking, bleeding and croaking, i cant handle new, it seems like i fiend for the broken, and dream of unspoken words we supress, cursed to be blessed, and at first it was zest, but i got scared bein so high, so this birds in his nest, learning to rest, not to attack with his compliments, hes stacked with untalkingness, so he relaxes and basks at the back with his confidence, lacks an esophagus, hence the short lungs, and a forked tongue with a cord strung between his wants and needs and his for-tune...this wars won..
animalsonwheels
12-05-2005, 12:42 AM
its elementary to drink henesee,
speak of me and you start to bleed mentally,
my telepathy reads your battle steeze,
pussy, strait "look at me", your brain freeze,
im pleased, microphone rocker or hip hop dropper,
unstopable slash undercover rhyme docter;
knocking me out is impossible, ask walker,
no concussions, ask your father,
when hes bothering me for fucking your mother,
soon to discover another person in the household
check yourdelf into another world bastard,
youre fairy like a ballet dancer,
dasher dancer prancer vixen,
its not fiction, send in, a victim,
spell with precision, but i still hit them
pre written for free spitting,
jinx671
12-07-2005, 07:09 AM
yo....
jinx671
12-07-2005, 07:12 AM
yo yo .....ummmm.. :unsure:
jinx671
12-07-2005, 07:28 AM
yo......C what i juz did waz blast my post pointz up by 3.... stupid shit like datz corny...but effective....ryte now my thoughtz defected..afekted...kant think straight...juz chill for now..ill be back..wait..
jinx671
12-07-2005, 07:36 AM
hahaha.....yo yo :D :lol:
Originally posted by jinx671@Dec 7 2005, 08:12 AM
yo yo .....ummmm.. :unsure:
Hows that post count coming along?
SpLiTbomber
12-07-2005, 08:50 PM
im bored as fuck and havent free'd in ages
I assault u like fully automatic weaponry/
as ure organs deplete death has no discrepency/
hectic reactions will be...
countered with full animosity/
for when u beef, beef is on betta get sum protection/
infections come not only mentally but sections/
rot away sentimentally, intently for the cause of murder intentions/
but before i end it wit a finishin move/
ill step back n mark you, with a delicate smooth...
left hook to the temple, rite in the groove/
nowz uz guna b deada than any tears can sooth
jinx671
12-08-2005, 07:37 AM
Yo ....... :ph34r:
Originally posted by fame@Nov 6 2004, 02:29 AM
come back later . REdRum. u not ready to bettel.or get in a fist fight. cause u will never win . leave your ass cut up in bloody.
like a girls pussie. u fuckin with f.a.m.e. your ass i dead cause my click roll so deep that we dont need to even carry gunz.we just swing.and fuck your life up ......bitch *****
lol part of rapping is to RHYME and FLOW not write random sentences and hope people will think its a rap.
magic nyc
12-08-2005, 11:35 PM
Im the freestyle legend
seriously
inimical critic
12-08-2005, 11:56 PM
a little taste of my life
wake up every mornin with a new broad,
chick dont know im runnin a froad/
empty the gurlys pocktes be my sport,
an playin betta than MJ on the court/
and is today thursday, damn i had court,
my p.o gona file a report, but i aint trippn
ill put that ***** on life support/
and i do be actin dumb, gone off some rum
offly proud of what i have become/
what a fool before class,
8 thirty and already got henny in the glass
but latley these been jokes
obviously no one no how much i smokes
cuz these aint no counterfeit rhymes,
what eva you do i do ten times
so catch me on a real flow, as im stuck in seattle
and one of you hoes step up and battle
jinx671
12-09-2005, 12:05 AM
Aktually rymez n' flowz ARE random sentencez..biotch..whether itz 1 sentence or a whole fuckn story..or sum shyt..what matterz iz if itz realdeal n legit....but datz juz MY opinion....hey yur talkn alotta shit n i still havent seen ONE line off ya... :blink:
inimical critic
12-09-2005, 12:07 AM
i hope your talking to me
magic nyc
12-09-2005, 12:38 AM
yea im talking to you bitch did i stutter?
***** my flow is crystal clear i do not mutter
and i stay smooth with the ladys like butter
no other im the finest crown me
your noble prince and highbess
stay strapped for sheesisee
this rap game is eazy like weezee
cause i stay breeze
my nizzee
lolm bored
inimical no beef
i like you rap
sicka than aidz
12-09-2005, 02:46 AM
whoa.
sicka than aidz
12-09-2005, 02:57 AM
when my clique comes thru, grab your ho an run.../
dont be stupid son, I see your face, your shit is done.../
Im like attila the hun an godzilla in one,.../
Jack cats for fun, gimme the skrilla an say goodbye to my gun.../
Always on the run, the aidz villian, america's most wanted.../
Higher price on my head then osama bin laden.../
For fuckin every girl who I ever thought had a fine ass.../
Dont gaurd your go girl so much,.. She made my list but came in last.../
I dont think I can fuck that fast.../
List is quite long, prolly pass it along to my seed so he can grow up in the footsteps of his dad,.../
Never rock the mic with a pen an a pad,.../
Always onpoint with sickest vocab.../
Shit, ill set up shop anywhere, turn your crib into my lab.../
ill detonate the place quicka then u can blink if the heat moves in on your pad.../
Blow u, your kids and wife skyhigh so u may as well say bye bye to your dad.../
Whatever that meant, means im ruthless, no fuckin mercy.../
7 minutes an im finished,..u bitchass weaklings cant handle my hustlin fury.
peace
cool cool lets try this shit out and....
Ill take you both on one of mi quick runs
smokin on shiva, my ryhmes are spit and yours are sung
try doin it a lil less sober,,hitta ***** blunt or white mans tweak,
get the dick outta your mouth and bow when you speak,,
speaking to me and you speak when spoken toos
dont do wut i say, and youll make front page news.
kill and clean the crime scene and youll be forgot,
take lessons from a real killer, i think your ready to be taught
my young padowon you got much to learn,, =you skatin on ice
cause you know my ryhmes burn,,
burn to the touch,,leave un healing scars,
i inflict pain dat rezembles the kul klux klan and czars
but this battle was shit, and i dun kno wut im talkin about
"man im to fucking high"
props peace and latta *****, i think im out,,
i guess ill stay sober for ya next time
but all feel free to PM me with your rhymes
SMOKE WEED EVERY DAY HOES :blink:
inimical critic
12-09-2005, 05:18 PM
wack ass rhymes aint to compare,
you a broke ***** and ima millionare/
punk prolly work at the county fair,
gettin played like a game of solitaire/
ate up like some cheez-itz, fools get poped like these zits,
weed smellier than yo arm pits/
do this shit just for laughfter,
known some cash and a fine breezie is what im after/
i dont give a fuk if my rhymes be short,
im playin hoes like O.J. did in court/
i shit on your chest
smear it around on your breast
i stick my cock in your ear
call u a fucking queer
i spit in your face
then wipe my ass and say grace
Golem
12-09-2005, 07:03 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Dec 9 2005, 12:35 AM
Im the freestyle legend
seriously
***** shut the fuck up you wack
magic nyc
12-09-2005, 07:10 PM
hah...okay you can stick to you nursery rhymes im droping mixtapes on the nyc circut
no contest bitch
Golem
12-09-2005, 07:18 PM
stop attesting to how gay you are ***** PLEASE
magic nyc
12-09-2005, 07:19 PM
kay?
Golem
12-09-2005, 07:20 PM
haha funny how angry these *****s get nowadays gotta talk shit through poorly photoshopped sigs damn ***** you straight up suck puh-lease just quit
magic nyc
12-09-2005, 07:21 PM
Golem=Buns
Golem
12-09-2005, 07:25 PM
damn ***** you suck at everything
battle me and we end the beef.
jinx671
12-10-2005, 08:00 PM
ok now kidz settle down... :lol:
panek
12-10-2005, 08:24 PM
to every motherfuckin soul on this site;
dont turn you back
cuz youll be forced to feel your spine snap
im the jedi master, your burnin
im the teacher, your the student, keep learin
i keep murderin
watch your lips, watch your nose, watch your face
im make a fuckin crater, with my fuckin mace
drop your body right here, throw your head were you fear
all i see is a bunch of bitches before me
if you wanna rumble, its your face ill be deforming
i rule the land
i slaughter fams and speicies beyond man
i made the trojan horse
i rip you in half, with a grizzly force
im sick of english, ill spit in morse
im come down from the white tower
while you fuck men in the jail shower
this is my hour
i rock the page
im a mage
im like a bear in cage
wantin to set free
yall suck, cant ever go against me
i killed phillipines
i killed the phillistines
i killed every last bit of their history
but i still stay gods freind
this is war, so i aint sinnin
i stay christain, hard to the core
im the only man in here, times four
so its me your taunting
grab your fuckin body, sell it to the haunting
hell awaits
i watch you from heaven while you burn in that place
you discrace
watch your armpit
better stay cautioned
you need me
ill help you find fuckin needy
ive gone long
i need to stop this bloody song
before i turn completly wrong
magic nyc
12-10-2005, 09:42 PM
ehH... its iffy
Detroit
12-10-2005, 10:19 PM
i drop mo BOMBs than the Taliban call me Osama/
when im threw bombin ill cum sleep wit ur mama/
ill post some real stuff tomorow, just messin around.
jekl>AN
12-10-2005, 11:19 PM
yo this is by far my fav thread
it's got so much sick rhymes
inimical critic
12-10-2005, 11:24 PM
drop a verse then
panek
12-11-2005, 09:22 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Dec 10 2005, 10:42 PM
ehH... its iffy
fuckin idiot....
-NORTENO-
12-11-2005, 03:56 PM
Originally posted by fame@Nov 6 2004, 12:15 AM
I GUESS I WOULD START IT OFF
WHO U KNOW WHO IT BE THE CAT FAME WHO DID 1 MONTH BEHIND BARS
THE COPS COUGHT ME SLEEPING HANDING CRACK TO A CRACK HEAD
THE FED RUN UP ON ME AND POIN A GUN TO MY HEAD SAYING FREEZ U UNDER ARREST THEY GRAB THE K.9 AND LETI HIM CHECK MY CAR FIND MY TREE I HAD TAPE TO MY BALLZ..............
ALL U SUCK DICK WHEN IT COMES 2 RAPPIN AND IM THA $HIT WHEN IT COME$ 2 TAGGIN $O I $UGGEST THAT U $TOP BRAGGIN LIKE LIL BITCHE$ N $NITCHE$ THAT U ARE AND U AINT GOING 2 GET THAT FAR FUCKING WITH ME THAT G THAT RUNS THESE STREEETS SMOKE ABOUT 2 POUNDS OF WEED CAUSE THATS HOW I GET DOWN FROM TOWN 2 TOWN AND ALL AROUND BITCH AND I WOULDNT TRUST ANYBODY AS FAR AS I CAN SPIT AND THATS ABOUT 6INCH OR SO CAUSE U A HO AND IM A PIMP SO BITCH SUCK THAT BIG DICK REAL SLOW THEN QUIT WHEN I TELL U 2 SWITCH 2 MY HOMEBOYS DICK
-resq-love-obk-
12-11-2005, 04:25 PM
fuck the shit that keeps me at home,
i wanna grab my paint and fuckin roam to a land unknown
this shit is meesin with my dome.
i need a car and some money,
some ink thats real runny
im going to freak and it wont be funny.
this mother fucker up here tryin to act so tough
suck on this and that...shut up, ive had enough.
annoying as fuck.
magic tricks rockin nyc
rockin dicks learnin how to ski.
one in each hand
and you catch it in your mouth you fuckin fan.
famwe couldnt rhyme if his life was at stake
just another kid tryna pass off a fake.
if you dont know that how to make two words rhyme.
stop talking and learn how to mime.
wow its been a while.
sicka than aidz
12-11-2005, 07:02 PM
yo
sicka than aidz
12-11-2005, 07:09 PM
yo, u aint shit, just a buncha scab pickin tuna queens... /
Buncha toy fiends, do us a favor an leave the seen.../
I aint tryin to be mean,... What's the use.../
Im more viscious than leatherface, your like a baby carebear, should string u up with the noose.../
What's the use, yall aint shit, why'my typin this shit.../
Fuck with sicka and you'll get beat to shit,.../
Call up the crew an run a train right in front of you, wax your bitch.../
Most of you, really suck.../
Wish i could ban you, you *****z is stuck.../
Ill get my chance, beat this in 5 minutes "good luck".../
Fuck with sicka's like a suicide, bottom line, yalls fucked
peace
sicka than aidz
12-11-2005, 07:11 PM
Originally posted by -NORTENO-+Dec 11 2005, 04:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-NORTENO- @ Dec 11 2005, 04:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fame@Nov 6 2004, 12:15 AM
I GUESS I WOULD START IT OFF
WHO U KNOW WHO IT BE THE CAT FAME WHO DID 1 MONTH BEHIND BARS
THE COPS COUGHT ME SLEEPING HANDING CRACK TO A CRACK HEAD
THE FED RUN UP ON ME AND POIN A GUN TO MY HEAD SAYING FREEZ U UNDER ARREST THEY GRAB THE K.9 AND LETI HIM CHECK MY CAR FIND MY TREE I HAD TAPE TO MY BALLZ..............
ALL U SUCK DICK WHEN IT COMES 2 RAPPIN AND IM THA $HIT WHEN IT COME$ 2 TAGGIN $O I $UGGEST THAT U $TOP BRAGGIN LIKE LIL BITCHE$ N $NITCHE$ THAT U ARE AND U AINT GOING 2 GET THAT FAR FUCKING WITH ME THAT G THAT RUNS THESE STREEETS SMOKE ABOUT 2 POUNDS OF WEED CAUSE THATS HOW I GET DOWN FROM TOWN 2 TOWN AND ALL AROUND BITCH AND I WOULDNT TRUST ANYBODY AS FAR AS I CAN SPIT AND THATS ABOUT 6INCH OR SO CAUSE U A HO AND IM A PIMP SO BITCH SUCK THAT BIG DICK REAL SLOW THEN QUIT WHEN I TELL U 2 SWITCH 2 MY HOMEBOYS DICK [/b][/quote]
dont u got some cabbage to pic?
jinx671
12-12-2005, 12:30 AM
yo check diz you fagit... stop yur fuss youz not dangerus..fuck around you get dust...i put the C cuss...rappn n taggnz uh must...pieces you lust ...yur rhymez are rust... bitch my freestyle bust..gotchu paneking juz like yur name..and you new 2 game...yur not welcome if you aint serious..."panek" you aint a man here youz justa bitchasspunk aktin delirious....curious why you say fuck tha phillipinez...you kan stepup bitch..but you n i know you kan only beat me n yur dreamz... ;)
jinx671
12-14-2005, 10:26 PM
checkit 1 2 3..spitn crazy..illa lyrikz thought up daily..im the shine in the sun..that bullet in that gun...da war haz juz begun..but itz already won..therz no fun here son..drop the mic n walk away...if you not the illest you dont dezerve 2 stay...you kant come up wit yur gay ass linez...you kant rhyme da rhyme...fagit you kant hackit...these linez are like acid... spit at you wit every breaf i have lef...till the end of time to the end of death.....
AKalien
12-15-2005, 07:05 PM
Fly a kite with a spider bite cuz i'm white with very bad eye sight
stab you in the alley way sell you on ebay cuz i'm here to stay you got to go
without a ho sucking on bread dough snorting blow
i'll take a thong put it in a bong naked like king kong cuz i'm crazy singing this song
screw_loose
12-15-2005, 07:22 PM
^^^talkin about your wife there kid? don't worry, after this you'll find yourself hid. your bitch, i can see her thong, shes so loose shes like the WIFE of king kong. fuck you and your bong. you pussy, go do a real drug, you're better of trying to get a hug. i squash you like a bug. you aint thug, admit, your face looks like a pug. got you dug. just walk away and shrug. talk shit and find your body in a ditch, you probly buy your shirts from abercrombie and fitch.
buahauhau.
ACTION NEWS...
12-15-2005, 07:25 PM
YOU'RE ALL FAGGOTS
JUST LIKE BOB SAGET
NOW TAKE YOUR TRASH AND BAG IT
AND LEAVE ME ALONE
xylene hug
12-15-2005, 07:29 PM
ok,
i wanna battle some one on here...audio..
hows this sound?
step one:
record your 1minute or longer battle track.
step 2:
go to www.yousendit.com and email your track to yourself.
step 3:
post the link you get in the email in this thread and i'll do the same.
step4:
i or YOU will make a poll with the 2 links on it.
step5:
get served so bad you will never want to rap again. lol
comment back or pm me
yay!!
:D
AKalien
12-15-2005, 07:55 PM
screw loose
fuck a kite and fight and knock you down "dude you aight" i shoot a load in your mouth stamp you send you to the south with your dildo named ralph i'll throw you in a ditch and give you a huge stitch and you bitch how your clit itches in your britches while i'm goin rags to riches and i stab all snitches and i get your girl i say show me your tit just a little bit and i do a split and hit her with and oven mitt
^^^wtf man^^^
lol good to listen to if ur high,,,im down for the audio battle but i g2g to fukin school,,,,last day then i get 3weeks off hoes
im out
jinx671
12-16-2005, 07:36 AM
yo...muthafuckaz kant be like me ..rap a ryme like me..im the illest m.c. that kan ever be..as i said..i spit krazy..linez of fire..higher..serchin for yur deepest desire..crush it into billion pieces..fuckit...leave you dyin..cryin on the ground..wit my mighty ryme rymer pound...kuz youz a klown..go home..sitdown..grab a pad n practice...for the next time you try da diss it dont sound like piss..and stop aktin wit yur kingkongbong bullshhit...kome up here tryina spit....like you da shhit..it aint legit..yur ryme on da hiphop skale..it dont fit..like yur tiny dick in yo bitchez clit..yur linez suck..iz betta off rewrite... :o
jinx671
12-16-2005, 07:46 AM
Shhhhhiiiitt.....i dont even noe if dat made any sense...im 2 fuckken drunk...lol ;)
StoopKid
12-16-2005, 04:07 PM
yo uh uh uh
i'm rappin'
you be crappin'
fuck eminem
i like skittles
maybe some mcgriddles
oj killed bitches
while i fucked the dead ones in ditches
me and oj
the ultimate tag team
r kelly and michael jackson
ultimate fag team
werd up wigganinjaz
screw_loose
12-17-2005, 10:53 AM
Originally posted by AKalien@Dec 15 2005, 08:55 PM
screw loose
fuck a kite and fight and knock you down "dude you aight" i shoot a load in your mouth stamp you send you to the south with your dildo named ralph i'll throw you in a ditch and give you a huge stitch and you bitch how your clit itches in your britches while i'm goin rags to riches and i stab all snitches and i get your girl i say show me your tit just a little bit and i do a split and hit her with and oven mitt
wtf you talkin about a kite? im aight? look at you, you didn't EVEN put up a fight. to the south with a dildo named ralph? man i stick more than that in your mouth. throw me in a ditch? give me a stitch? is that it? an oven mitt? man you can't rap just quit. at least you made it rhyme, take that to the street, maybe you'll get a dime, against this kid i don't got time, so im out, just make sure you know what you're talking about.
sicka than aidz
12-17-2005, 01:23 PM
this is for screw
sicka than aidz
12-17-2005, 01:28 PM
pull a barnyard drive -by,..say good my to your mother.../
blow your fuckin face off while your tappin that utter.../
fat ass bitch, black angus, madcow ho.../
screwloose cant rap, cows got more flow,,.../
yo kid, u ride my dick constantly, I aint feelin that shit,.../
your graf licks nuts, u should get pistol whipped.../
yo homo, the only graf in your hood's gonna be a chalk outline.../
on the sidewalk where u was last seen tryin.../
to be a thug, u a homo all pretend so quit lying,..../
fuckin with aidz ***** you end up dyin...
bitch
Hack.
12-17-2005, 01:49 PM
voice battle.
im gonna drop one.
just on the phone now
magic nyc
12-17-2005, 02:05 PM
your a depression to the oppression of suppression
you need some pressing im repoessing no stressing
of agression just learn you lession from tony that
*****s is phoony im bony hes stoony im getting signed to
sony take me to coney island im on the highland straight
to rhode island no styling im smiling they complying
your dialing up you pup..***** whats up
-magic
I was trying to do some Papoose shit ...
xylene hug
12-17-2005, 03:00 PM
Originally posted by TREP@Dec 16 2005, 07:49 AM
^^^wtf man^^^
lol good to listen to if ur high,,,im down for the audio battle but i g2g to fukin school,,,,last day then i get 3weeks off hoes
im out
ok hit me when you can
i need to get off my lazy ass and record soomthin'
Hack.
12-17-2005, 03:37 PM
Originally posted by xylene hug+Dec 17 2005, 04:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (xylene hug @ Dec 17 2005, 04:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TREP@Dec 16 2005, 07:49 AM
^^^wtf man^^^
lol good to listen to if ur high,,,im down for the audio battle but i g2g to fukin school,,,,last day then i get 3weeks off hoes
im out
ok hit me when you can
i need to get off my lazy ass and record soomthin' [/b][/quote]
fuck man..just go first..i wanna hear what im up against.dont get me wrong tho..i promise nomatter what i'll come back to any audio you drop.
i'll be patiently waiting.
jinx671
12-18-2005, 09:43 PM
yo..yo..fuck yur crewz..fuck everything you stand for..fuck yor horz..fuck yur baby mommaz..fuck yur dramaz..you kant ryme for shyt..you wanna hear a line listen n sit...im sicka you bitchez tryina byte dis dezine..kant you see da SIGN..it says STOP bitch..you keep goin you gunna fall in ditch..wif all them other rapperz n dat 1 dude dat snitch...tryina step up2 diz..you kant..to me youz a tiny ant.. i'll smash you..wif no sweat..catchu n pull u in wif diz rhyme-net..yo..the warz won..yo, yur rymez done..ya fatez sett... ;)
SpLiTbomber
12-20-2005, 12:49 AM
n e 1 wanna battle?
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