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xylene hug
12-20-2005, 03:43 AM
Originally posted by Hack.+Dec 17 2005, 04:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hack. @ Dec 17 2005, 04:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by xylene hug@Dec 17 2005, 04:00 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-TREP@Dec 16 2005, 07:49 AM
^^^wtf man^^^

lol good to listen to if ur high,,,im down for the audio battle but i g2g to fukin school,,,,last day then i get 3weeks off hoes

im out
ok hit me when you can
i need to get off my lazy ass and record soomthin'
fuck man..just go first..i wanna hear what im up against.dont get me wrong tho..i promise nomatter what i'll come back to any audio you drop.

i'll be patiently waiting. [/b][/quote]
word home slice

Mute1
12-20-2005, 03:57 AM
Originally posted by jinx671@Dec 18 2005, 10:43 PM
yo..yo..fuck yur crewz..fuck everything you stand for..fuck yor horz..fuck yur baby mommaz..fuck yur dramaz..you kant ryme for shyt..you wanna hear a line listen n sit...im sicka you bitchez tryina byte dis dezine..kant you see da SIGN..it says STOP bitch..you keep goin you gunna fall in ditch..wif all them other rapperz n dat 1 dude dat snitch...tryina step up2 diz..you kant..to me youz a tiny ant.. i'll smash you..wif no sweat..catchu n pull u in wif diz rhyme-net..yo..the warz won..yo, yur rymez done..ya fatez sett... ;)
Ahahahahahahahahahhahahha....

"kant you see da SIGN..it says STOP bitch..you keep goin you gunna fall in ditch..wif all them other rapperz n dat 1 dude dat snitch"

Hilarious...you should be on the chappelle show or something.

"your a depression to the oppression of suppression
you need some pressing im repoessing no stressing
of agression just learn you lession from tony that
*****s is phoony im bony hes stoony im getting signed to
sony take me to coney island im on the highland straight
to rhode island no styling im smiling they complying
your dialing up you pup..***** whats up "

Just because you rhyme every other word doesn't make it even close to good.

jinx671
12-20-2005, 06:40 AM
CoRReCtIOn="TiNy AnT"

jinx671
12-20-2005, 06:48 AM
shut the fuck up..wherez yur fuckin linez you little bitch.. :blink:

Visualaid
12-20-2005, 10:44 AM
Rite i seriously am new to this shit so dont start dissin straight away gimme some crit.

Like i said up there, Im new to this game/..
So ya'll can shut the fuck up, n hold ur head in shame/..
im young on the block im not every1's pick/..
shit i even make some peopls sick/..
cause my rhymes are contagious/..
the outcomes outrageous/..
the only cure for the ill/..
is to listen to another line/..
sit back relax n chill/..

animalsonwheels
12-20-2005, 12:12 PM
lyrical fitniss witness the submission and pin its,
reasons for you to re think, another dream? sink,
i die often is why i say bring coke and ex,
getting my dick sucked living like a king with a tresure chest
another guess, hit the brother less, stompin kids for business,
rip rap and then quiz kids, whiz at rhyming but thats just practice,
come back next week to laughter, replace the benefactor,
uproot the government and start graphing, another level,
basterds, bring it back again,

magic nyc
12-21-2005, 06:58 PM
Originally posted by Mute1+Dec 20 2005, 04:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mute1 @ Dec 20 2005, 04:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-jinx671@Dec 18 2005, 10:43 PM
yo..yo..fuck yur crewz..fuck everything you stand for..fuck yor horz..fuck yur baby mommaz..fuck yur dramaz..you kant ryme for shyt..you wanna hear a line listen n sit...im sicka you bitchez tryina byte dis dezine..kant you see da SIGN..it says STOP bitch..you keep goin you gunna fall in ditch..wif all them other rapperz n dat 1 dude dat snitch...tryina step up2 diz..you kant..to me youz a tiny ant.. i'll smash you..wif no sweat..catchu n pull u in wif diz rhyme-net..yo..the warz won..yo, yur rymez done..ya fatez sett... ;)
Ahahahahahahahahahhahahha....

"kant you see da SIGN..it says STOP bitch..you keep goin you gunna fall in ditch..wif all them other rapperz n dat 1 dude dat snitch"

Hilarious...you should be on the chappelle show or something.

"your a depression to the oppression of suppression
you need some pressing im repoessing no stressing
of agression just learn you lession from tony that
*****s is phoony im bony hes stoony im getting signed to
sony take me to coney island im on the highland straight
to rhode island no styling im smiling they complying
your dialing up you pup..***** whats up "

Just because you rhyme every other word doesn't make it even close to good. [/b][/quote]
Battle me you bitch ass toyy ****** pussy im calling you out!

magic nyc
12-21-2005, 07:06 PM
IM CALLING EVERYONE OUT TO BATTLE ME!!! MAGIC VS THE WORLD!!!

Nesty
12-21-2005, 09:17 PM
Hilarious...you should be on the chappelle show or something.

Oomps pow SURPRISE !

jinx671
12-22-2005, 04:45 AM
hahahahahahahahahhhhhhahahah....

jinx671
12-22-2005, 04:46 AM
"bitch ass toyy ****** pussy"...hahahahahahhahahahahahhhahhahahhha!!

jinx671
12-22-2005, 04:53 AM
"bitch ass toyy ****** pussy"...hahahahahahhahahahahahhhahhahahhha!!

jinx671
12-22-2005, 05:03 AM
you better slowdown ther son for you get hurt..;)

jinx671
12-22-2005, 05:36 AM
fucker you kant afford 2 battle..i gotchu gripped up in the palm of my hand...rattle..if you dont fuckn understand..muthafucka im like a snake in the sand...when i strike you im not gna aim fo yo hand..imma strike ya neck wif venom cumn straight from my poisinous-gland...byte chu ryte wher you stand..muthafucka these linez are not planned..fresh off da boat..or fresh off da plane..ready to land..i drop bombz fucka..the last time i knew those bitchez ran cuz it waz to ill..sadistik fucka spitn ne thing i feel..feel pronounced "fill" but fuckit..ill poor dis hot acid in this bucket on ya face...bitch i dont got time for ya slow pace..youz a disgrace..."suckit" thatz what i said to yur bitch wen i cumd all over her tits...it waz cool tho cuz yur momma waz lickin my asshole alsOo..fucka..

jinx671
12-22-2005, 05:43 AM
wawawawhatt...

Jugga
12-22-2005, 12:19 PM
call the paramedics, I'm about to set it, and I ain't talking rotisserie ovens so I won't forget it...
you pair up with me- and you'll regret it,
on your own track you'll get it,
I'm leaving the beat deaded, and your vocals straight shredded...
my writtens are potent, and spoken they're a powerful potion,
give you a lobotomy unnoticed cause you already lack the emotion,
my words pack the explosion that insinuate eardrum erosion,
you couldn’t spit hard if your saliva was frozen..
on some sneaky acts, you get jacked while I spit these raps..
like constipated motherfuckers, have you wondering where your shit be at...

sace66
12-22-2005, 09:27 PM
Originally posted by Mute1+Nov 24 2005, 03:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mute1 @ Nov 24 2005, 03:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by ASEN@Nov 21 2005, 04:47 PM
^^^Going through your posts, i found this.

<!--QuoteBegin-sace66
Sace approached the wall and stood there for a few moments with a can held in his sweaty hands. He began to swiftly guide each line to shape every letter in a unique style that could only be created by a experienced writer. His finished product was composed of a red outline and filled by shades of yellow and orange. "Practice makes perfect bro", said sace. Drake nodded and took a few seconds to take in the vibes that the piece spewed out. This was inspiration. This was the reason he had gotten up this morning. This was the motivation to become a better writer. This was his cure for that itch he had gotten since the moment he laid eyes on the first well put together piece of graffiti. An addiction that was stronger than any drug habit, an addiction he never thought possible.

Your little make believe stories suck, on or off the net. Don't judge what you don't know.
how gay. the only thing you should be writing is romance novels. [/b][/quote]
wut a bunch of pussys....its called creativity motherfuckers...sensitive pricks cant handle critizism...

jinx671
12-23-2005, 05:21 AM
yo magic watz you gots 2 say man..? you STILL tryina come up with sum gay ass plann...well youz take 2 long..while im waitn ill fuck yur momz puss while im rippn her thong..doin it wrong..watchu tryina write a song or sumtn...man itz takin you so long juz to ryte down nuthn...cmon i thought yur gna battle everyone here.."magic VS the world"...cchhh...you little quier...yur rhymez are nuthn and nowhere near to be found...wen you hear diz sound..of rhymez cumn outcha computer..yull be on the ground kneeling beggn i be yur tutor..but NO..kuz you kant even flow..you little hoe..yur linez dont show like mine..wen itz a stop i go fuck if itza crime..ill stand in front of a gang datz tryina form a line..ill throw ther gang sign up fast and then ill wype it on my ass...shove der faces in da grass..afta dat ill makem suck on my fingers..yah the onez i used to wype my ass...where the shit lingerz..muthafuckaaah!!!

animalsonwheels
12-25-2005, 01:27 AM
author often tossin opposition further with wisdom,
you lack the precision yah docters botched the circumsision,
left with nothing, you're lyrical batting practice shatter acters,
matter of fact dont come back after your craft is matress, (soft)
you end up on fire while my firends laughing, your bitchs asking,'
questions of location of the murder aprons, sure was taken
precaution off alot now youre in a coffin, your manager asking,
what happened to that kid,

"dont worry about it scum"

HEAT
12-25-2005, 03:00 AM
WHATS GOOD?

HEAT
12-25-2005, 03:08 AM
we got the most graf of all time..the most dead ***** chalklines.../
stop tryin, your ass is dying, cant fuck with sicka's greatminds.../
like grape fines i hear everything.../
what i been hearin lately from yall's just embarrasing.../
grab some matches or a light an dowse your self in karosene.../
you'll still never be hot or be on top cuz u cant bury me.../
it rhymes in my head, my accents spoon fed likeplatinum and shit, i was raised on superior DNA.../
thats why u call the kid Sicka than Aidz.../
im like gandalf, take out any mutherfuckin dragon,.../
your shits weak son, no mercy eithre so forget fuckin beggin.../
and quit taggin, u just a fucked up toy,.../
run up on you money with my truck an squash all you an your boys.../
cuz they aint shit like u aint shit.../
shit if u's shit ***** someone needs to get over with you and flush you bitch

yeah!

fuckthatshit
12-25-2005, 12:32 PM
this internet rap
wont even get ya a hand clap
or a pat on the back
n i heard my main boy say your bitch was relly slack
i drink colt45 forteez
picture me on the 211 rocking hella tight scratchies
you kids cant touch deeez.

animalsonwheels
12-25-2005, 03:31 PM
proposterous punk rocker
dropping kids like gotti spits
shells from pavement,
leaving my dates overdosed on extasy while raving,
waving fire arms in,
do or die terrorism,
bombing secret societies
violent trying to stop the ride from slavery,
they on the side of me, with a siren,
flashing gang signs, trying to stride in,
i magnify the wicked lies
then tie police to a stick then they die
before fire licks their skin from the bone,
making sure they wifes home alone with a costodian
show them in while youre wondering,
what the fuck happened to your drunk buzz

fuckthatshit
12-25-2005, 06:15 PM
if i was drunk your rhymes be killin my buzz
dont even front tryin to make it cuz,
isas got ryhmes
at the same time comitting crimes
and i know i be stickin in your minds
cause isaisa one of a kind.
ketch me on the grind
nothin but hate you gona find
its xmas and iont even got no eggnog
but no matter how drunk you be your girl still looks like a dog.

Jugga
12-25-2005, 07:09 PM
Can't leave the mic alone, I blast with this, I'm no pacifist, I don't lend a helping hand for shit, I pass a fist, when I'm smashing kids.. in your whole style faking is a factor, you're an actor, the only dude to win an Oscar just off of rap, cuhh...And it you want it, we can battle daw.. and I'll just babble on, from here to Babylon, and bring the beef along like a cattle farm.. I'll send you home, showcasing my skills on the microphone, without a microphone, I can't leave the mic alone, its right at home, cause it resides inside of my fuckin' dome..

Ease1
12-25-2005, 08:31 PM
I spit my tight rhymes let em flow... let em flow
I drop em on a dime let em go ... let em go

It's so easy to diss u, I just open up my mouth
Any thing I say, it done diss u by it self

I don't know why I'm battlen whichu
Battlen whichu, and battlen whicher crew

I gonna kill u, gonna kill u on sight
Cause I'm polished gold, and I'm king. THAT'S RIGHT!

fuckthatshit
12-26-2005, 08:40 AM
i roll platinum
and i pack a fucking magnum


and if you guys wana hear some GOOD ASS philly rap peep RAPTA
http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...iendID=14923706 (http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=14923706)

alive
01-01-2006, 10:08 PM
my name is RISE and i will rise to the skies above all of your lies, and if your trying to stop me, it don't matter, i will survive and you'll just have to say your goodbyes because i will be your demise. you see im just a boy looking for fame in this game and im trying not to be just the same but i will mame any motherfucker who stands in my way so remember my name. my name is RISE. thats my word to the wise. so the next time you see me dont look with surprise like it took you that long to surmise, my life ain't just a roll of the dies, and this ain't just some poser trying to sensationalize. this is just me as i improvise.

Jugga
01-02-2006, 06:55 PM
Keyed this up pretty quick...
its a battle-type verse with graffiti punchlines...

hope y'all like it...





Preaching longer than teaching slow learners..
Making sure cats don’t come misplaced- like extensions on toy burners..
Fake thugs, think its cool throwing gang signs when they rap..
I got words to leave their handstyles faded like German fats..
Dudes rock with less flair than stocks on low pressure cans..
I spit violence- straight up and down like philly hands..
I defeat competition with a dope verse, and crack kills..
MCs that’s faking the funk, I see right through them like scratch fills…
My spit is solid like sakuras- my execution is clean..
Ain’t stoppin till I’m all over Hollywood, adjacent to Seen…
no matter the the tactics you know, you can't damage my flow..
put your face up against the wall like a character throw..
I don't expect you to take it to heart, with the shit that I drop..
cause this was initially just for kicks, like modified kiwi mops...

magic nyc
01-02-2006, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by jinx671@Dec 23 2005, 06:21 AM
yo magic watz you gots 2 say man..? you STILL tryina come up with sum gay ass plann...well youz take 2 long..while im waitn ill fuck yur momz puss while im rippn her thong..doin it wrong..watchu tryina write a song or sumtn...man itz takin you so long juz to ryte down nuthn...cmon i thought yur gna battle everyone here.."magic VS the world"...cchhh...you little quier...yur rhymez are nuthn and nowhere near to be found...wen you hear diz sound..of rhymez cumn outcha computer..yull be on the ground kneeling beggn i be yur tutor..but NO..kuz you kant even flow..you little hoe..yur linez dont show like mine..wen itz a stop i go fuck if itza crime..ill stand in front of a gang datz tryina form a line..ill throw ther gang sign up fast and then ill wype it on my ass...shove der faces in da grass..afta dat ill makem suck on my fingers..yah the onez i used to wype my ass...where the shit lingerz..muthafuckaaah!!!
whacccck, you rhymin with the st-t-t-uterer effect
i treat you like a check, cut it and jet
i move through the streets like butta you aint got a set
you aint got a plan unless you count when you ran
if you count that then you'z a stan
you seem a little stressed
stan, it might be from ridin jay-z's shit like kanye west
three little pigs, three litte bears, it aint no shock
you on that nursery rhyme shit, aesop rock
but it O-K homeh, everyone got they flow so i wont knock it
you got that fakeass hoesby flow like andy milonakis

Klaz
01-03-2006, 10:21 AM
FAME your stuff doesnt rhyme

Jugga/Magic your rockin it

good
01-04-2006, 12:07 AM
listen to my tracks is like smokin that lyrical weed it gets u so high like u picked the stems and seeds u dont puff puff and passs dont need n rotation juss smok it all up until ya done blazin

animalsonwheels
01-05-2006, 05:37 PM
who you approaching?
slapped, wrapped up, kids roasting,
weed roach got me toasted,
cant approach the magician, leave you comotosed stuttering and stammering,
another bug man, rub him out and take his dough, on the low though,
you so slow, fucking homo, play my fire your on no glow,
shit yo, christmas missed giving you 3d stereo, yah dating a scarey hoe,
youre so angry your face red like tomato

good
01-05-2006, 10:30 PM
heres a lil one liner fa yall i i whip a bitch i poppin clips put bullets through ya chest cuz kevlar wont stop this

GeSuS_KRiST
01-05-2006, 10:35 PM
hahahahaha
kid your a clown!!!!!

your ass never held a gun, never shot one, never slaped a bitch let alone whiped her, never wore a vest, and ill stop you..... god you kids are clowns man

stop tlakin about what u think mother fuckers wanna hear and start spittin real shit fuck

_Sic_
01-05-2006, 10:36 PM
meh at these emcees

screw_loose
01-05-2006, 10:54 PM
yo yo yo yo im the sickest em cee, you can't stop me, wonna see? open your mouth so i can take pee, your mom opened your legs and i said this BETTER be free, i hit you like a golf ball off a tee.man don't talk just fade, i remain un-injured, but you need clinic aid.yo yo yo yo yo yo. stop talking, i remain king.




ahhaha yoyooyoyoyoyoy im white. don't take that seriously.

Hack.
01-05-2006, 11:10 PM
Originally posted by xylene hug+Dec 20 2005, 04:43 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (xylene hug @ Dec 20 2005, 04:43 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by Hack.@Dec 17 2005, 04:37 PM
Originally posted by xylene hug@Dec 17 2005, 04:00 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-TREP@Dec 16 2005, 07:49 AM
^^^wtf man^^^

lol good to listen to if ur high,,,im down for the audio battle but i g2g to fukin school,,,,last day then i get 3weeks off hoes

im out
ok hit me when you can
i need to get off my lazy ass and record soomthin'
fuck man..just go first..i wanna hear what im up against.dont get me wrong tho..i promise nomatter what i'll come back to any audio you drop.

i'll be patiently waiting.
word home slice [/b][/quote]
*COUGH!*
ahem...
*clears throat*
*cough*
so yeah...
who's droppin the first vocal post?
i may not postwhore like i used to.
but i still lurk occasionally.


iiiiiii'm ssssssssssssstill wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwaiting.

i just dont wanna go first cuz once i do nobody else will post.
:lol:
beg to differ?by all means.post a track.otherwise.suckle my testicles. ;)

Scene*
01-06-2006, 12:21 AM
Originally posted by good@Jan 5 2006, 11:30 PM
heres a lil one liner fa yall i i whip a bitch i poppin clips put bullets through ya chest cuz kevlar wont stop this
hahahhahahahah your fucking stupid

yo


your like that bitch who murderd ramsey
a fucking two timing pansey
you could never face anything bigger then your shit
like the 15 color krylon coughs i spit
ill shut you out with no sympathy
you will be crying like a cut wind pipe symphony
i fucked your girl now she wants me infinitely
i cant believe you think your style is wild
but its as dead as a iraqi child

GeSuS_KRiST
01-06-2006, 12:38 AM
ill even throw in a free beat and level the person vocals and mix it if someone spittin reall hiphop whats to post one

Scene*
01-06-2006, 12:39 AM
i have other rhymes
i would do it but i only have one of those head phone mics

GeSuS_KRiST
01-06-2006, 02:02 AM
that sucks... yall need some profesinal mics... i have 3 the best one i have is a shure SM58, its consistently the first choice of performers around the globe, for studio recording and live shows.... ima have a few local emcces come over and riprip-rip ishill post um up in the ungerground hiphop thread after the weekend

faint rem one
01-06-2006, 02:20 AM
i wana be a dope rapper yo.



so this thread is just for random free style lines u think up?

or is it serious?

HEAT
01-06-2006, 07:00 AM
ITS FUCKIN SERIOUS MAN!

HEAT
01-06-2006, 07:05 AM
oh shit back up in bomb science.../
yall luv enjoyin the silence.../
i love causing mad violence, im like your heiness.../
there's no contest, not a chance u can fuckin win.../
king AIDZ invented this rap shit,...yep, first to begin.../
tearin up emcees and squashing the phony homies.../
ask anyone who knows me, got my celly cam filmin your girl while she blows me.../
this is fuckin lame, yo im drunk, fuckin alarm clocks, ima boundce

HEAT
01-06-2006, 07:06 AM
oh shit back up in bomb science.../
yall luv enjoyin the silence.../
i love causing mad violence, im like your heiness.../
there's no contest, not a chance u can fuckin win.../
king AIDZ invented this rap shit,...yep, first to begin.../
tearin up emcees and squashing the phony homies.../
ask anyone who knows me, got my celly cam filmin your girl while she blows me.../
this is fuckin lame, yo im drunk, fuckin alarm clocks, ima boundce

HEAT
01-06-2006, 07:07 AM
hold on, i can t stand this niggeaz alarm clock

HEAT
01-06-2006, 07:11 AM
fuck it, cant believe the shit cats can sleep thru.../
my ass cant pass out an im on beer # twenty two.../
drinkin since new years, just found my stash../
first of the month, scored my cash,.../
went out with some fly breezy with the bombest ass.../
hit the sheets long before the festivities an proceeded to smash.../
im gettin real fucked up,... fuck it,...rap sucks

peace

QuestionMark?
01-06-2006, 08:08 AM
i take to the streets after dark
lookin' for a virgin wall to tear apart
find one, break out the cans and start
fill, outline, maybe drop some 3d
depending on if someone sees me
i finish up quickly
move on to my next enemy
that's how i also do it in my freestyles
i stick around for a short while
until i damage your self esteem
because im a lyrical flow machine.

QuestionMark?
01-06-2006, 12:32 PM
freestyle a verse to quench your hip hop thirst, this flow was developed from eatin' up the worst, i'll get to the rest but i'm battling you first, i'll beat you with my 'vast bag of knowledge', using crazy wordage, you've never heard, cuz my shit's absurd, take a number and you'll get your turn, you shitty textcees aren't even a concern, first you've gotta learn, you learn by gettin' burned, go ahead and bite my style, i don't care because i change it up every once in a while, can't stick to the same boring shit, wait til' i get on the mic and spit, bitche's is havin' fits, askin' me to rub their tits, hold up a min. i'll try to keep my lines G rated, because i know all ya toys just hate it, my rhymes is so hot they'll get ya cremated, anyways i think it's time to end this show, that's it you've just witnessed questionmark's flow.

Jugga
01-06-2006, 04:31 PM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST@Jan 6 2006, 01:38 AM
ill even throw in a free beat and level the person vocals and mix it if someone spittin reall hiphop whats to post one
yo, when I get some shit recorded, I'ma send it to you to peep...
cause, my boy does beats and got a makeshift lab at the crib...
but I don't really like rocking his beats..
cause his shit is ALL kinda dark and angy sounding, you feel me?..

maybe if you like my shit we can get some shit going...

cause I'm thinking of getting a mixtape together soon...
and I need origional beats in order to sell it...

I ain't really with that passing out for free shit anymore..

Jugga
01-06-2006, 05:15 PM
some stupid shit I just found in one of my word folders..
I wrote this about a year or so ago...




----------------------------

BAM!

Night time hits…

The moon smacks my face and I transcend from bed to floor with a back flip..

I grab a quart out the fridge and I roll me a tight spliff..
Dressed in black from head to toe, geared with a katana and nightstick..

I’m out the door…

Pop n locking as I make my move down the street..
Getting tossed around by cars, but I always land on my feet…

A spectacular feat…

rockin' an air guitar as I'm jammin' on beat..

I scam the police…
Chop off heads and run across walls when I dash and I flee…

And if they were ever to catch me…
I would ‘POOF’ and disappear in a cloud of debris..

...
..
.

Posted up on top of a building, scopin’ the scenery…
Eyes bloodshot red cause of the booze and the greenery….

I spot a club that seems FRESHHH…
And there’s only 8 bouncers at the door…
So I walk off the building’s ledge and I float to the floor…

Without missing a beat, I pull out my sword, insinuating gore…
Kicked the first dude in the gut and dropped him with incredible force..
the shock wave from the impact disintegrated two more..
Chopped the next man’s head off, now its just me and the four…

They were gonna try to stop me until I lifted a car..
Turned to them quickly and asked them “who wanted to spar..?

I told them that I ain’t got any money to pay for the fee..
And that if I wasn’t going to get in for free, they got a battle with me…

They obviously didn’t want to dabble degrees…
Cause as soon as shit got heated they dropped to their knees in a plea..

So fuck that…

I dropped the vehicle and walked in the club…
The only ninja in the room, I was surrounded by scrubs..

Shit..

I’m on the dance floor and I don’t even dance..



I just pull up my pants and two step in my b-boy stance..

Hack.
01-06-2006, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by GeSuS_KRiST@Jan 6 2006, 01:38 AM
ill even throw in a free beat and level the person vocals and mix it if someone spittin reall hiphop whats to post one
hit me up on the pm's.
we'll exchange emails.

as for you people posting written, stop, get on yer shitty mic and prove yourself.unless yer just scared cuz you sound like babbling children and those rhymes took you all afternoon to type.prove me wrong.

and yeah shure mics rock.ive got one i use for events.but it's not hooked up to the pc. :(

but my shitty one will do just fine.


im hungry for a battle.
and ready to eat another *****'s food...BRING IT@

_Sic_
01-06-2006, 08:23 PM
ye I could freestyle on sound recorder open It up with audacity and add a beat and post it up here but Idk

Hack.
01-06-2006, 08:47 PM
Originally posted by _Sic_@Jan 6 2006, 09:23 PM
ye I could freestyle on sound recorder open It up with audacity and add a beat and post it up here but Idk
"but idk"??!!
more like u're scared.

like nike
just do it.

magic nyc
01-07-2006, 12:48 AM
"***** what you think/ ill fuck your mom and wash my dick in the kitchen sink" -40cal

screw_loose
01-08-2006, 01:01 AM
yo yo yo im white but i can still rap, got your mom in bed and went tap tap - tap. that was just a random line i shot up in the air, you can't hit a snare, not that i would care, you aint got no flare, i swear. open your moms legs and i thought i saw a bear. yeah i throw up a lot of mom lines, thats okay my real insults would be likes steppin on land mines, fuckin swined. yo yo yo this is me, i stay real, im white, no i don't got a fro, this is just me thinking and typing as i go. yo.





bauhauhauahah im so white.

magic nyc
01-08-2006, 01:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.

scopethedope
01-08-2006, 12:20 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!

Hello, my name is scope the dope,
i can kill u 99 different ways with cantelope,
dont even think of giving me rope,
cause of survivng u will have no hope,
goddamn my rap is a joke,
but still i rhyme better than u when im on coke,
i dont abuse my talent, if i did id be like 50 and his daton spoke,
man get back in ur place
ill pistolwhip u in the face,
wipe out all of ur race, and blast u into fucking space,
my rhymes are like a a falling mace,
they crush you if u cant keep up the pace,
im gonna fucking win the race,
cuz u forgot to tie ur shoes and tripped on ur lace,
find a bombshelter, hide, and pray,
cuz tonight im huntin and ur my prey,
u bettter hope today is the day,
that i lose my first battle
cuz compared to me my foes are like cattle,
they gotta chew my rhymes 4 times before they digest,
my spit so contagious and dangerous it will infest,
no, not like the disease u got on ur fake breast,
dont try to keep up with me cuz im superior
and ull just fell inferior.......




fuck freestyling then typing that shit down...
o well fun anyway...
::slams cock into spell::..... man fuck spelling

screw_loose
01-08-2006, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult like that?
cunt.

screw_loose
01-09-2006, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult people like that? god damn you're good!




seriously, im white, it's not like i tried on that.

magic nyc
01-09-2006, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by screw_loose+Jan 8 2006, 05:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (screw_loose @ Jan 8 2006, 05:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult like that?
cunt. [/b][/quote]
youre white but you cant rap/you think you got skill, but what you put out is crap/come along with me tupac shakur, hail mary say a prayer/i run this city ***** fuck the mayor/your shit rolls small like a snowball, im like jeezy a snowman, yeeeeeeeeah/put out your crappy ass bars, i dont care/when you fuck with me, your life is like your lines, "up in the air




shitting on *****s daily....

.maneone
01-11-2006, 12:54 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc+Jan 9 2006, 05:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Jan 9 2006, 05:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by screw_loose@Jan 8 2006, 05:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult like that?
cunt.
youre white but you cant rap/you think you got skill, but what you put out is crap/come along with me tupac shakur, hail mary say a prayer/i run this city ***** fuck the mayor/your shit rolls small like a snowball, im like jeezy a snowman, yeeeeeeeeah/put out your crappy ass bars, i dont care/when you fuck with me, your life is like your lines, "up in the air




shitting on *****s daily.... [/b][/quote]
Still wack... . . . lmao.

Scene*
01-11-2006, 01:27 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc+Jan 9 2006, 05:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Jan 9 2006, 05:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by screw_loose@Jan 8 2006, 05:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult like that?
cunt.
youre white but you cant rap/you think you got skill, but what you put out is crap/come along with me tupac shakur, hail mary say a prayer/i run this city ***** fuck the mayor/your shit rolls small like a snowball, im like jeezy a snowman, yeeeeeeeeah/put out your crappy ass bars, i dont care/when you fuck with me, your life is like your lines, "up in the air




shitting on *****s daily.... [/b][/quote]
i love it how nyc calls him a toy
its so uhhh whats the word
when someone is something and they are talking shit about that same something that the person they are talking shit to

woah
omfgz!
can you understand that?

jinx671
01-11-2006, 09:02 AM
yo....im back from weeks of meditation..homie grip tight cuz these linez gunna have you shakin..fry yur brain like bacon..tryta turn away yull be cursed wit evil..spiritz yull be facin..im out on probation..fuck the government nation..fuck da copz wit der graffiti laws..why dont they spend there time bustin child molesters or sum shitt..i only spray da wallz for art which iz a cauze itz legit..if you dont understand read carefully shit reread what i write..and im sick of diz nonsense crap muthafuckaz wanna rap juz free mind..lett the ideaz flow through yur thoughtz like mine..but im done for now ill be back..2 show fuckerz dat wanna flow how..hahhhahh!!

screw_loose
01-12-2006, 05:17 PM
Originally posted by Scene*+Jan 11 2006, 02:27 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Scene* @ Jan 11 2006, 02:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by magic nyc@Jan 9 2006, 05:55 PM
Originally posted by screw_loose@Jan 8 2006, 05:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
And toy.























In every way possible.
whoa, you sure showed me. where did you learn to insult like that?
cunt.
youre white but you cant rap/you think you got skill, but what you put out is crap/come along with me tupac shakur, hail mary say a prayer/i run this city ***** fuck the mayor/your shit rolls small like a snowball, im like jeezy a snowman, yeeeeeeeeah/put out your crappy ass bars, i dont care/when you fuck with me, your life is like your lines, "up in the air




shitting on *****s daily....
i love it how nyc calls him a toy
its so uhhh whats the word
when someone is something and they are talking shit about that same something that the person they are talking shit to

woah
omfgz!
can you understand that? [/b][/quote]
contradiction.....hypocrite...he was garbage anyway. i don't even like tupac.

716DropsBombs
01-12-2006, 07:12 PM
yo, yo i drop bombs like raindrops to the ground
you betta step the fuck back before you drownd
im the king of suburban underground sound in ma town
where i rome, ill get ya bitch to give me some dome
ill fuckin shoot up ya club like p diddy combs
my rhyme styles are long like an endless droan
and fuck all the rappers who rap about chrome
i dont wanna hear that shit thats not my tone

underground_culture
01-12-2006, 07:13 PM
i dont know y i should even start, the battles won , pop tha champagne/ i got more support from the nation then a presidential campaign/ i dont have much to lose, and yet so little to gain/ now u hope uve neva fucked with a white kid who is mentally insane/ so all yall writers thjink yous is the next jiggy, th next mad hova/ if yall shine liek a star i must be shining like supernova/ suprised taht i used rapping with science/ cuz i think like a mastermind, i got certain defiance/ im the main power source and you wanna bees are my appliance/ hah all i gotta do is pull the plug/ and this lil thug/ is gonna get KILLED. i hope yall are thrilled

haha wow im one cool kid.

Rend
01-13-2006, 07:59 PM
ha. cool. at school, i wrote down this rap to make fun of one of my frens thats a lezbo, and she wrote bad about me to. wanted to show her whos betta at rap. i suck but does anyone wanna see it? its pretty stupid lol, it has like elemantary rap kind.

Rend
01-15-2006, 07:18 PM
so, anyone like battle? common!

madsencarl
01-15-2006, 08:21 PM
just post the fuckin rap

inimical critic
01-16-2006, 02:42 AM
ill spit verbs to jerks, say'n wat ever works/
i get made props robbin store clerks,
im in the game for real money honey,
girly betta bring chips to feel my tummy/
i seen more flicks than a movie critic,
type of shit that will claud ur blood have ya taken a thrombolytic/

jinx671
01-16-2006, 08:14 AM
srayt to da heart my rhymes will pierce through like an angelic sent dart..one m.c. who'll lay you flat for actin smart..dissin me ill rip yur 3rd eye out from yur forehead using alchemy so u kan see whoz the illest m.c. who speakz in unheardof unspoken messages..sendn dis out to ne 1 whoz ignorant through holy written passages...muthafucka im the original descendant nonsubliminul defintion of perfection fucka im that voice those whispers in yur ear you hear that sweat drippn down yur chin equals fear..bitch fagit ill fuck you up wit no challenge you kant hackit yur rhymes garbage fuckn stinks emtyness like a blank gun cartridge so go on home practice somore before you try jumpn off da rhyme bridge fall srayt on da fuckn floor....

Rend
01-16-2006, 04:40 PM
ha idk, ill just come up with something.. hold on, its gon be stupid

Rend
01-16-2006, 04:49 PM
Sup Bombing Science
Moderators and clients
Now I’m breaking the silence
Cuz I spit stream and I write fire
Endless rap stream, now you’re under my tires
And you are my bitch and I am your sire
You wanna rhyme like me cuz it’s your desire
Shaking you off is just way too easy
My rap chokes you, and mikes you dizzy
You lips are blue and bruised cuz you consume too much jizzy
This rhyme was written, Rend handcrafted
You can try talk, but you’ll just get shafted
This can if I want to, an endless rap stream
I got left overs, finish off my whip cream
You graff life is pure procrastination
Because you spend a lot of time with gay homo masturbation
I’m almost done, so now visualize, ha
You just got paralyzed
Clean your style, make it sterilized
This is so long, you must of got it memorized
Done with this rap song, m.c rend, betta recognize

TricksForKids
01-16-2006, 08:22 PM
im the never plan B type, but my clever words seem right, get me stuck so deep i start severing my dreams light, its better that i cease fight, and tonight im sagging low, id love to quit, but iv run out of white flags to throw, light matches, blow, equipped with some swords too, blissed and remorseful, cuz you seem to shake everytime i blow a whipser towards you, tripped when i stormed through, caught my head in a noose, said id refuse, now i toss and turn cuz this beds awfully loose,bet on me, choose, prepare for the best fun snare me in sets, run, but ive taken so many stpes, forget to put a stair for the next one....done...



lol tricks bringin ya the emo hip hop

one

.maneone
01-17-2006, 12:00 AM
yo... . . .

killin' blackbooks an spillin' that hook
so fast y'all can't look..
Girls? i act good,
so see this an believe it when it's recieved kid,
...y'all get decieved bitch,
just like some beats dude,
i Leave cats chopped an screwed,

believe that....

flippin' styles like skateboards
an take your fake whores
to the end like date rape stores...
...listin' up..
Quit kissin' up, i'm in this just
to say what i gotta say,
an i said it, so this is done...



1

Jugga
01-17-2006, 12:06 AM
A pagan heart..
Keeps the cloud above my head raining hard..
But it keeps deception away and holds my ignorance at bay..
It plays..
A role in what I know, a role in what I’ll learn..
I burn- my own esteem, until respect is what I ’urn’..
My own person..
I live my life for me and how I want to..
And I can’t do myself wrong, so I picked the righteous path and followed through..
Till the end of my days, I’ll stand strong behind my cause..
Live fast and die young tattooed in scars across my heart..
The tale of discontent written in scars across my arm..
Perpetually alarmed..
But cigarettes help in maintaining my clam..
The nicotine ain’t half as addictive as the apprehension of harm..
Tell my story through verifiable psalms..

fuckthatshit
01-17-2006, 05:31 PM
i smoke these trees
like ive got a fucking disease
cats be sayin they stop that shit
but fuck that and gimme another hit
i can smoke boobonix until the day that i die
cause my concern is thay i stay high
my mouth is dry
cause i got that old skool high
picture flying way up high in the sky
cause mary mary is so damn fly.


double ryhmmmmmmmes soooooooon

Rend
01-17-2006, 09:27 PM
Yo, my words and rhymes are just straight down strategic
Ill leave you and mic chords laying down, parapelegic
So be gone, you cant ever beat a battle
So just join your mom in the living room, playing classical piano
Yea, I know those words are crazy
Others cant think um, cuz there just to lazy

fuckthatshit
01-18-2006, 05:12 PM
brop bop bop let isa spit it from the top
im fresh wid a fowtee when i sip it but i can rock even a soda pop
i bop down my street like it aint no thang
watch the fuck out or ill make you skeet when we bang
ina minute
and i know you wont forget it
cause a dime like me
you cant find easily
im stackin cheese and puffin dope
can you please advise the pope
that isa isa is mad fuckin dope
fuck your soap on a rope.

dcite
01-18-2006, 08:33 PM
oh ahh man i got a craving for a burger
one maybe two, all the grease is really murder
lettuce only, i dont like a tomato
and also ill fucking puke if i eat mayo
get it at wendys, they make them right
if they dont want to serve me i'll have to put up a fight
if worst come to worst ill ride to taco bell,
a crunchwrap supreme would be mighty swell.
what

fuckthatshit
01-18-2006, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by dcite@Jan 18 2006, 09:33 PM
oh ahh man i got a craving for a burger
one maybe two, all the grease is really murder
lettuce only, i dont like a tomato
and also ill fucking puke if i eat mayo
get it at wendys, they make them right
if they dont want to serve me i'll have to put up a fight
if worst come to worst ill ride to taco bell,
a crunchwrap supreme would be mighty swell.
what
someones got tha munnnnchieees
and im cuter than those pupppiieeees
so encountering me you be luckiees :lol:

.maneone
01-19-2006, 04:14 PM
these hoes suck my shit off like it's meant to be,
an mentally sever these fucks with depression penalties...
i erect easily when it comes pleasin' these sex machines,
cus dude...Beatin' me is either gay or just a dream!... . .. . B)

Rend
01-22-2006, 03:09 AM
Life passes by
I just wanna die
Be like a bird and fly into the sky
Everyday my life is tiking away
Get away from this world cuz I dont wanna stay
Get away from the pain with rhythem and rhyme
With rap-ing and spraying just a bit at a time
Because I have all this anger, held in my chest
Causing my soul to be full with stress
It seems like life is gods test
With all the answer are hidden away in a locked up chest

shalf
01-22-2006, 03:26 AM
ill bite your style just to make it fresher
and when you complain i wont b afraid 2 deck ya
muthafukin toys you cant touch this
next tiime you try youll leave covered in piss


^_^ :huh:

shalf
01-22-2006, 03:29 AM
one more time

on the mic im a master
complete unlyrical disaster
yo bitch i hear ma homeboy bashed ya
i stroll in to this place got a gun at ma waist blow your muthafukin brains all over the place then laugh in your face hahaha

ASEN
01-22-2006, 01:17 PM
That was you rhyming?
I though some retard was readin' a menu
Guess it's kids and and trauma victims,
And you cats completin' the venue

=skimble=
01-22-2006, 01:25 PM
youre talkin smack, you smokin crack?!
Why you dissin on each other
youre' rymes are whack, yall rap like Shack
Now go home and fuck yo mothers

JETc17
01-22-2006, 01:29 PM
spray vandal? no, im random. scandalized and tangelized by the lies that devide the eyes, the look the rate of hate in the game. people doin it for the fame, were all the same. no setting the pace, judged by your color or face. we do it anyways, undeniable. set back cause your unreliable. defiance is the word that changes science. now be silent. you just gotta use it, but dont abuse it. choose the way to play, thats all i have to say.


blah.. im white.. what can i say.... peace.

fuckthatshit
01-22-2006, 02:33 PM
ok somethin litte

you slob on my whut? its ok?
if you bust a nut on that shortay
im gona have to cut you like a porkay pig
fuck this stab you in the gut i want a cig.


"from the spliff that i lift inhale..it aint hard to tell"
isa ouuuuuuuuuuuuuut

Klaz
01-28-2006, 08:42 PM
ha bump!

i cant believe this shit slipped to page 4//
We are runnin of rhymes so we need some more//
and yes i know these are obvious rhymes but these are obvious rhymes for some obvious times//
Toys makin threads 6 times on this site//
Toy suckas always runnin lies on this site//
They cant get there own style so they start to bite//
Omg MaN I wAs PaIntInG Wit My BoIS//
You never got chased cops dont chase toys//
Bitch if u got burned you shouldnt of the been there in first place//
Get up with some toy shit and u get smacked in the face//
And nobody cares bout that mark eckos joint//
Ok so it good but 50 threads i really dont see the point//
But it aint all bad there is the one who paint freights//
Smack toys,run things and jump over gates//
Go out at 2 o'clock and sneak into the yard//
Get yo shit done quick dont draw the death card//
Be quick or be dead thats the life we living//
All the true writers on here nuff love we givin//
We finish off 400's so quick they be shakin//
My throw-ups in london got San Francisco quakin//
Acting like your legend but your just toy//
Acting like your a bomber but your a paperboy//
Us bombers only do throws and tags//
but we dont represent the mutherfukin tag-fags//
Bombers put up with the fear and the violence//
Artists go solo do big shit in silence//
We be climbing phone lines and 12 at night//
Artists kill walls but they dont have to fight//
I see your tag in my lay-up and i get stressed out//
I cross out all your crews shit and start a brand bew bout//
I'll destroy all your pieces and handstyle through your turf//
i'll be happy and you'll be blue like a fuckin smurf//
I'm hard like rock and your soft like Nerf(braap B) )//
You dont own shit you aint a bomber or writer//
you aint a fuckin artist your shit dont even get tighter//


My bombs are like Jews they're tight//
They r like glocks with fake toys in there sight//
I'm sayin this shit cos im fuckin bored//
At 2:40 in the mornin kickin the phone cord//
Listenin to old rap battles from rainy days in school//
My rhymes cuttin through *****s that though deys cool//
OK IM GONNA STOP HERE IM FUCKIN MADE//
I KEEP IT UP LIVE LIFE SWEET LIKE KOOL-AID//


man i cant sleep :(

koper
02-01-2006, 12:12 AM
i'm no rapper
but i like crackers
and next time you jack her make sure you ask her
what the hell she was thinking
and if she's been drinking
cuz you now have std's
but not as much as steve
he hangs with real G's
who drink honey straight froom trees

mufuka

Rend
02-08-2006, 10:45 PM
Bitch, imma gonna fuck your cunt
like how i smoke a blunt
cuz i run thru these halls
wit big ASS BALLS!!!

Rend
02-08-2006, 10:54 PM
i come to the brick walls with my word and my history
i let out the spray, decorate the dignity

screw_loose
02-08-2006, 11:43 PM
^^that barely rhymed.

SEED3
02-09-2006, 12:59 AM
fuck it.
2 tearz ina bucket.

Klaz
02-11-2006, 12:00 PM
OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH^^

Rend
02-11-2006, 08:49 PM
When everbody's gone
I take out the krylon
To add a little spice to the walls Im gonna write on

Rend
02-11-2006, 08:54 PM
In spite the fact that you think you can rap
I'll rest and kick back
Take a little nap
So when your done
I'll give you a bitch slap

Rend
02-11-2006, 09:11 PM
I hate all the fuckers that always be hating
There losers at home assholes, masterbating
One day, I'll beat the shit out of there face
Make there body burn, like getting sprayed in the face with mace
One hit in the eye, make them feel like they gone die
Make them fucking fly, right into the sky
Making them so fucked up, they'll think there high

fame
02-12-2006, 12:57 AM
WoW I NEVER BEEN ON HERE IN A MINUTE YO

Klaz
02-12-2006, 07:36 AM
wtf?^


ur rhymes suck Fame.They dont even rhyme come to think of it

KaOs-OneR
02-12-2006, 11:34 PM
Originally posted by Klaz@Feb 12 2006, 08:36 AM
wtf?^


ur rhymes suck Fame.They dont even rhyme come to think of it
Lmaooo.

Rend
02-15-2006, 12:41 AM
bump

When everbody's gone
I take out the krylon
To add a little spice to the walls Im gonna write on

ASEN
02-15-2006, 12:24 PM
^^ we heard you the first time. sub-par.

news
02-25-2006, 06:10 PM
but if i get caught by the btp
plz go eze on me
plz dnt send me 2 juvee
im a gd kid reli
and i very very sorri truley
i wont do it agen
u c da uva 3 times dnt count
it was my friends peer pressure u c
yhyh blame my m8s
dey forced me 2 paint those frieghts













lol :D:D:D:D:D:D

Rend
03-05-2006, 11:22 PM
Writing at night is creepy
I dont wanna see a scary ass bitch cunt ghost ugly

SMTXgraffin
03-06-2006, 01:04 AM
Originally posted by news@Feb 25 2006, 07:10 PM
but if i get caught by the btp
plz go eze on me
plz dnt send me 2 juvee
im a gd kid reli
and i very very sorri truley
i wont do it agen
u c da uva 3 times dnt count
it was my friends peer pressure u c
yhyh blame my m8s
dey forced me 2 paint those frieghts













lol :D:D:D:D:D:D
I got the matches, lets get the gasoline/
The fact is you wacker than a tub of vaseline/
Takin' bites out of MC's, where their neck and their chest meet/
I curl sawed offs....... And that's just to flex heat/
Impress me, HOMO, better bow down/
You'za bout to get beat up like pussy in a crack house/
Eat my vitamins just so i'll never diminish/
Fuck bruce willis this isn't gone in sixty seconds but should only take a minute/
I'm gettin tired of roasting you tards..../
Call me xanax because I'm quick with the bars/

HieroHead20085x
03-07-2006, 06:40 PM
SMTXgraffin nice diss..yo ima show yall somethin..

blast-energy amassed in the hip-hop i grasp..
mind lapse.never this clever-sever wack cats..
act-true never conqued when most ammuse..
the muse-streetlight-fuse burn to blast-boom..
the looney toon radio consume-the beauty set to bloom..
but alass-fast cash mash hard work and crash..
thru most minds.while divine shine intertwined ina self design..
a nine-at hip-rip flesh-walls drip like toy tags.exiquist to the left..
you never met an emcee wita abstract sense yet-bent..
on politrick destruction-this function cross most-railway junction..
make no assumption ill drop the next in abruption-test..
i manifest-pope like bless but never religion.never diminish..
i pop eyes with no spinach..twist.then lift the wack and tear the script..
flipped-hands to wrist-slash like exorcist-finished...

just a lil somethin off the top of my dome..
ill be able ina few to get yall some audio..PEACE.ONE

jinx671
03-07-2006, 08:33 PM
im ok
juz got outta d.y.a.
fuck that place..
wake up 4 in tha mornn juz to brush my teeth n wash my fuckn face..
lookn at tha same ol peoplz face..
pullgrass sweep mop tha floor every fuckn day..
cudnt run no matter how much i didnt wanna stay..
stare outta my cell watchn tha moon ray..shine brite..
smackn scratchn tha mosquito bytez..
tearin me up inside..
i waz trapped..
so i told my self
never NEVER again wud i get fuckn clapped....

FWBMeth
03-07-2006, 09:00 PM
atics rap was dope the rest of you suck

Kingz514
03-08-2006, 04:09 PM
ima graffiti writer
drop bombs and throw ups
u better start runnin cuz im about 2 blow up
i challenge your punk ass, but u wont even show up
mess with me will lead to ya demise
leave ur body rottin for maggots and flies
dont lie mothafucka i can see in ur eyes
try to front on me with your bullshit crew
try to prove somethin u aint never do
i run thru you faster than 1-2
im out to rack a fresh can of belton
start shit ill bust your head like a melon
for paintin on walls fuckin right im a felon

Kingz514
03-08-2006, 04:10 PM
double post

HieroHead20085x
03-08-2006, 05:17 PM
FWBMeth

wtf...those guys do suck but you cant say that bout my free of the dome..cmon!

MUSASHI
03-08-2006, 08:04 PM
staying up all night ,in search of a spot to stay up for ever
one word,one night, one life it's now or never
a four letter word the whole worlds destined to see
it goes like ADRO in your brain it's been infected by me

let's go on a bombing run together mayne
we'll hit it up in this town like we done gone insane
and when we look back at this moment in time we'll see
it's not a crime it was our destiny...WE bombin',we free!!

stocker
03-09-2006, 09:01 AM
(Taggin trains effecting my brains)

BY: Stok


jsc grabs da heat motha fuckin seeking out the next spot where we will rise to the top. i tie my shoes and tightin my back pack hopeing i get no slap back from the workers. I've been tryin to pay dues and get my name out keepin shit real always. Stok is the man and cobn's a BITCH i'll crack that nikkas wig before he gets to spit now its about 8 in the morning reaching for the roach clip about to hit that fine shit. the cronics takin its place as the buzz acts like Mase my eyes watering now and i cant see clearly. call my hommie Lowpro says hes got that go go, i rush my self to the shower for about 17 minutes come out and the chicken wings are finished. i paint more then 85% of you but when you stand next to me your like yo is that Business lee? sorry bitch i cant stay for tea.




JSC Crew!!! STOK, KIKS, LOWPRO,TANK, A-BO, NUGZ, R.I.P "$NAKE$"

HieroHead20085x
03-09-2006, 11:02 PM
uppin the STOCK-wita retrospect-intelliect 95% i rock..
the last five-coincide-you jock like socks-to sweatbands-a lock..
oldschool-true-do what i do to move the groove past consqued..
rubics cube-type complex to leave the poets blessed-dont intrude..
my mood went from rude-to slash the next dude-boulder..
type hard-coulder-the moulder of the shoulder you leaned upon-soldier..
naw justa deminon of this mission-contradiction what the prez is livin..
but dont ask upon his task-i ripped the mask to reveal a past..
hitler-lookalike blast-the genocide beetween the eyes..
no compromise-stop the penetretion beetween thighs.the baby cries..
the creation of human demise-robotic-optic-eyes bleed-death concieved..
this make believe childs dream-reality scheemes-slates cleaned..
hand out the barcode-drones-implode-flames and steam..
yall know what i mean? but you scared to stand..man..
the taste is bitter yet bland-i watch time pass trying to catch the sand..
i watch trying to catch the sand-where i stand-a revolutionist but still only MAN

MUSASHI
03-09-2006, 11:14 PM
^^^WOOOO!!!!

Ray of Today
03-10-2006, 11:53 AM
Some nice stuff in here, mixed in with a lot more bad stuff. Not an MC, but I play one on BS....

I read a few pages and most of this shit sucks
So all you chickens on the dick more pecks and less clucks
People biting lines trying to make delivery like Aesop
Better MCs John Travolta on the mic when they take your face off
So stay soft, most will never harden, be original
Or just another hoe inside this garden
Be stupid? Step up and learn your lesson
Cause my shit is so hot it's burning my intestine
:unsure:
:o
:(

ACRO
03-10-2006, 12:11 PM
u all suck at rap....

Ray of Today
03-10-2006, 12:29 PM
True, but stop bitching like a female
Drop it hot, or go back to your AIM and e-mail
while I set sail, and cruise past all you semen
I'll collect your bones later with that ***** Morgan Freeman

Jugga
03-10-2006, 02:51 PM
I’m an oxymoron..

A fucking-impotent bitter-sweet, well organized-clutter..
A lackluster impenetrable glass structure, but I stay slick as butter…

Boo-yah!

I cleansed my filthy hands of caked guilt..
Rubbed it, scrubbed it..
Dried ‘em off with a soiled rag and fucked it…

SHIT!

I’m so counter productive…
I don’t feel comfortable in my own skin..
Am I counter adjusted?
Do I give a flying fuck?
--No..
I’m yet to be a member of the mile high club..
They called me a scrub and rejected my membership..
But the truth was..
They were overwhelmed by my penmanship…

fuckas..

HieroHead20085x
03-10-2006, 07:50 PM
I read a few pages and most of this shit sucks
So all you chickens on the dick more pecks and less clucks
People biting lines trying to make delivery like Aesop

I hope that isnt directed at me, mine did have an aesop style but thats 100% me. .i come with diff styles, once my shit is all up online ill let yall hear some tracks. and also alot of you guys need practice only a few im feeling..Jugga's shit was dope and a few others

A fucking-impotent bitter-sweet, well organized-clutter..
A lackluster impenetrable glass structure, but I stay slick as butter…

nice line...very nice you got anything recorded?

HieroHead20085x
03-10-2006, 08:11 PM
..

the reason-this treason create a police state..
elevate past-the greed to take-fake-i pull the emergency brake..
STOP-this talk of glocks rewind the clock of iggnorant thought..
we act bought-wrapped in plastic antics-caught..
ive fought only to be pulled back-smack beetween the cracks..
itsa fact-if i switched my IQ to PIMP id be the biggest mac..
slap the next-but instead vexed the contents have me stenched..
in the will to rise-peasents to god seein eyes-ive tried..
but radio vibes promote self genocide-so i ride..
wishin on the day we can expand-from grams to takin stands..
switch-as we command the soul of every twisted man..
take the gun from his hand-load-explode-to temple BLAM....

-wrote that real quick right now..just testin..PEACE

MUSASHI
03-10-2006, 08:37 PM
best line eva!!!..

"If it's too simple y'all just don't get tha basics"

Li'l Wayne
"Shooter"
CarterII

Jugga
03-10-2006, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by HieroHead20085x@Mar 10 2006, 08:50 PM
I read a few pages and most of this shit sucks
So all you chickens on the dick more pecks and less clucks
People biting lines trying to make delivery like Aesop

I hope that isnt directed at me, mine did have an aesop style but thats 100% me. .i come with diff styles, once my shit is all up online ill let yall hear some tracks. and also alot of you guys need practice only a few im feeling..Jugga's shit was dope and a few others

A fucking-impotent bitter-sweet, well organized-clutter..
A lackluster impenetrable glass structure, but I stay slick as butter…

nice line...very nice you got anything recorded?
I'm actually in the process of getting a mixtape together....
as of now, I'm just doing the writing to several beats that producers from my area are giving me for free... I've got 3 cats that give me beats and only charge me a shout-out... so that's straight...

nothing recorded, though.....
I been wanting to get some shit together for over 5 years, now.....
hopefully soon...

HieroHead20085x
03-10-2006, 09:48 PM
yea i feel you, ive been trying to get my stuff together to. I produce a lil but havnt had time with work and then taken some classes at my local JC haha..but yea where you from?

Ray of Today
03-10-2006, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by HieroHead20085x@Mar 10 2006, 08:50 PM
I hope that isnt directed at me, mine did have an aesop style but thats 100% me. .i come with diff styles, once my shit is all up online ill let yall hear some tracks. and also alot of you guys need practice only a few im feeling..Jugga's shit was dope and a few others

I often feel that people are a bit too sensitive online, especially since they're putting their stuff out there for opinion/commentary. I also said in the beginning that there was some good stuff on here. Why not think I was talking about you then? It was more generalized commentary. I see/hear a lot of people wanting to be down with hip-hop and MCing but they come like wannabe El-P or Aesop and think they're fresh (not necessarily talking about anyone on here). Also a lot of overused shit in lyrics in my opinion, like one can only rock on til the break of dawn so many times. Anyway, so what I'm saying is that whether you're a pro or a nerd who rhymes like Urkel I'd still be happy to step inside your circle. We can use mics to beat each other black blue and purple in this exchange we call a battle, some stampede and get herded up like cattle, blunted, I be that pale rider, high in the saddle.

madsencarl
03-10-2006, 11:04 PM
yo i'm sick of hearing this bullshit, none of you can rap
so put down the mic, run away, and stick with graf
just 'cos you can paint doesn't mean you can spit
so leave this thread and don't plague it with your shit
from the look of some of the stuff here, half of you are up to your 6th beer
and what the fuck you're posting, well to me it's fuckin' unclear
every second bitch in this thread, is a motherfuckin' wannabee
saying shit like "look at me, my tag is cope number 23"

meh

jinx671
03-11-2006, 06:54 AM
nooooottt..

FTAG
03-11-2006, 07:08 AM
Originally posted by madsencarl@Mar 11 2006, 12:04 AM
yo i'm sick of hearing this bullshit, none of you can rap
so put down the mic, run away, and stick with graf
just 'cos you can paint doesn't mean you can spit
so leave this thread and don't plague it with your shit
from the look of some of the stuff here, half of you are up to your 6th beer
and what the fuck you're posting, well to me it's fuckin' unclear
every second bitch in this thread, is a motherfuckin' wannabee
saying shit like "look at me, my tag is cope number 23"

meh
big up,brap

jinx671
03-11-2006, 07:31 AM
damn itz been a LONG fuckn time since ive said or thought up a line but ohwell fuckit...

im down to my 6th beer..pretty buzzing.. itz alryte cuz im still here..still stepping to theze wannabez,,that i define queer...still graffing n still rapping to those eyez glaring wif fear...so fuckyou.. n everything you stand for..i'll fuck yur mom and make yur bitch bleed from her puss while im screaming whos yur daddy horr...and if thatz not enuff you needa do me a favor n slit yur neck.. cuz if i find yur fake ass i wont hesitate or flex.. i'll straight rhyme blast you wif my powerful rhyme written tex thatll kill....ryte now i may not be thinking clear but hear thiz fagit you needa take a step back think harder n watch yur rear... now imma go chow n slam sum h2o b4 i passout from dehydration while im thinkn of sum dum flow..

FWBMeth
03-11-2006, 09:03 AM
gayest thread yet

westsida
03-11-2006, 09:08 AM
gayest member yet

Jugga
03-11-2006, 09:40 AM
Originally posted by HieroHead20085x@Mar 10 2006, 10:48 PM
yea i feel you, ive been trying to get my stuff together to. I produce a lil but havnt had time with work and then taken some classes at my local JC haha..but yea where you from?
Miami, FL..

Dondii
03-11-2006, 09:51 AM
ok ill tell you bout me,
had to bite the name dondi, cuz hes the graff master,
almost everyone else is a disaster.
Im 17 years old, love to graff, got hiphop in my soal,
Im keepin it real, to be myself is my only goal.
Fuck rules, i dont care what the gouvernment has told,
i will never stop my thing, my soal wont get sold.
I also love to skate, its my 5th year,
love to be with my friends, go to partys and drink beer.
it should be clear for you guys now bout who`s sitting here

:)

Jugga
03-11-2006, 10:18 AM
Here's something I'm working on with one of my boys...
I don't have his verse, so, I'll give you the premise so you won't be lost....

basically, he gets a new cat, and it bites him... so he smothers it with a pillow... then he takes it back and tries to pet the cat.... I'm the cat...





Tryna call me on some humble shit, after trying to kill me?
Tough luck, you dumb fuck, now I’ma show you what’s up..
a hand of apology, I don’t believe in that shit..
Countered with a hiss, and paw swipe that juliennes the fingertips..
He shot back, stunned, and I leaped after his bitch ass..
He caught me with a right center mass and sent me flying passed the sliding glass..
Door- as a sprawled through the crystal debris..
I can’t believe that he’s boxing with me..
Now we’re outside..
I could’ve easily ran away and ended it..
But ain’t stopping till his body’s chopped into percentages..
I continued the action, pounced on his face and started slashin’..
Like PETA, my entire fur is coated in the blood that he be splashing..
He grabbed me by the tail, and slammed my head against the floor…
My fragile body stood still, still he did it some more..
I feared for my life, and I anticipated my demise..
But grabbed a paw-full of dirt and I propelled it towards his eyes…
He screamed “my god, I’m blind” and let me go in the same motion…
I went straight for the Achilles tendon like if he was a Trojan..
He fell, and couldn’t get up, but that doesn’t mean he was gonna quit..
Closed his fist, hammer-like, resembled Thor when he swung that shit..
Caught me off guard, I was left shook and slid across the ground..
Fell inside of his pool but can’t swim, I think I’m gonna drown..
he crawled to where I was, held his hand out, "GRAB IT NOW!.."
But instead I pulled his ass in with me and we both went down…

JETc17
03-11-2006, 12:28 PM
ive seen the words master and disaster rhymed a thousand times.

Dondii
03-11-2006, 12:49 PM
im honored to be your 1001

HieroHead20085x
03-11-2006, 02:39 PM
Tryna call me on some humble shit, after trying to kill me?
Tough luck, you dumb fuck, now I’ma show you what’s up..
a hand of apology, I don’t believe in that shit..
Countered with a hiss, and paw swipe that juliennes the fingertips..
He shot back, stunned, and I leaped after his bitch ass..
He caught me with a right center mass and sent me flying passed the sliding glass..
Door- as a sprawled through the crystal debris..
I can’t believe that he’s boxing with me..
Now we’re outside..
I could’ve easily ran away and ended it..
But ain’t stopping till his body’s chopped into percentages..
I continued the action, pounced on his face and started slashin’..
Like PETA, my entire fur is coated in the blood that he be splashing..
He grabbed me by the tail, and slammed my head against the floor…
My fragile body stood still, still he did it some more..
I feared for my life, and I anticipated my demise..
But grabbed a paw-full of dirt and I propelled it towards his eyes…
He screamed “my god, I’m blind” and let me go in the same motion…
I went straight for the Achilles tendon like if he was a Trojan..
He fell, and couldn’t get up, but that doesn’t mean he was gonna quit..
Closed his fist, hammer-like, resembled Thor when he swung that shit..
Caught me off guard, I was left shook and slid across the ground..
Fell inside of his pool but can’t swim, I think I’m gonna drown..
he crawled to where I was, held his hand out, "GRAB IT NOW!.."
But instead I pulled his ass in with me and we both went down…

you dont see that kinda premise alot anymore in Hip Hop, seems no one wants to take the time to really get visual with it, so i thought that shit was dope. Oh by the way im from The Bay in Cali. Keep droppin that real ish im feelin it man. PEACE.ONE

HieroHead20085x
03-11-2006, 02:54 PM
Heres a lil somethin ive been working on. I got the beat for it just need to get it right so i can record..feedback is appreciated..but yea..the premise on this is i find myself travel to diff assasiantions thru out history..this is what i got so far..

INA BLINK..

Torn pages of ancient natures.words of creators..
images of redeye lazer.tazer-i reach and grasp..
facts.and fiction combined as i climb the ladder to shine..
a new view-abstract consqued-image of Wilks Booth..
move.a shot fired and missed. the list transfer..
after the sounds of laughter.chatter.below..
not knowin i was stowed..library shelves took a sec to delve..
page after page till the stage of my vision percieved-the rifle..
knowin the violent cycle i didnt trifle..
buta sudden burst from behind told my mind to grasp and immerse..
amassed in intinct i didnt think.ina blink..
osbourne would sink to knees diseased..
looked as a convertable passed-then with a flash..
i came to find myself amassed-confined in hotel room nine..
exit-quick as i heard the loadin ofa clip-tripped..
back on feet-face to face to meet. an outstreched hand.and..
as i went to greet.hearin the distinct shot.ina blink jumped..
to grasp my new friend and witha thump.ducked..
snuck outta the bullets scream-ended an evil scheeme..
later learned my friend succeeded in his dream..
damn what a thing..
INA BLINK

..

Wise One
03-11-2006, 03:21 PM
yo the shit ive seen on here is dope. you guts got talent. i made this song like a year and a half ago

whys rap gotta be about beef?
its like frontin is takin over the streets
if i have to ill rearange your face
fuck that how about your head gets misplaced
in the back seat of my car my friend starts to blaze
cause hes all high of hip hops cosmic rays
i remember when life was good
growing up in the hood
but the cops were always chasing us cuase graff is misunderstood
now im older and got nowhere to bombs
but my name is still seen cause i freed your thoughts
and a free mind gives birth to free soul
so that means rap has gone full circule
and i feel used to my new home.

what do you think

Ray of Today
03-11-2006, 04:01 PM
Again, lots of good shit here, and then again a lot of babble. Some of these cats need to check a Speak & Spell, or maybe a game of Scrabble. But don't let your mind get boggled, it was my piece you ogled, bit and borrowed. How sad, now I feel sorrow. Next time please keep it in your mental, when you peep a dope style please don't bite it with your dental.

Jugga
03-11-2006, 09:20 PM
Nice shit, Hiero...

Wise, I think it was pretty dope...
just got a simple rhyme scheme, feel me?
its real 1-2 1-2 kinda shit.... not bad though...





Here’s some simple shit..
Too chill, can’t be hype to begin this..
I been- twisting more joints than an amateur gymnast..
But I still wreck shit..
Walk into the freestyle thread to smack queers..
put dudes up against the wall like cotton swabs during a pap smear..
Weak fucks that run in packs..
Need back when spittin’ raps..
While on the attack, projectiles leaving you cracked..
Without the necessity of ever packin’ a gat..
Compelling enough to lure you in traps..
Curiosity killin’ these cats..
let me know..
You wanna battle daw?
I’ll just babble on from here to Babylon..
and bring the beef along like a cattle farm..
I flip beef like kosher slaughter houses..
You’re all assed out like old couches..
I rip lames by the thousands..
By the thousands I rip lames..
leave you deaf dumb and bind simply by stating my name...
the illest thoughts dwell in my brain..
and I blast with it..
I'm no pacifist, I pass a fist..
I don't lend a helping hand for shit..
I just smash these kids..

HeIsT422
03-11-2006, 09:36 PM
^ dope jugga

chill
03-11-2006, 09:48 PM
a lil something something

starlight creates movies of ever-moving leaf stencils
for soldiers tears falling wishing to be gentle
smearing and warping letters wrtiten home by pencil
striving for that place where guns and grenades don't define a man
but instead soothing hands nurture the burning budhists land
stripped and burned from an unknown source of hate
if they only knew love they could rearange they fate

tell me if yall r feeling it or not
peace

chill
03-11-2006, 09:50 PM
yo hiero im really feeling that, ur style reminds me alot of mine

Dondii
03-11-2006, 10:01 PM
hey jugga, whats all this with smashin and blastin,
you sure a good lyracrist, but your rapstyle aint lastin.
Not cuz your rhymework is bad, just becouse you are mad,
all these violent shit makes me sad.
Have you ever heard the phrase ¨Squash all beef¨?
dont think so, your all into smash this shit.
im sick of these fuckas startin fights for nothin,
cuz someone is whack, or the guy aint black,
doesnt make you a reason to fight and attack.
If someones a toy, leave em alone,
you know theyll never get your throne.
so just own em on the microphone.

Hey jugga, this is just friendly. I aint hatin on you, nice sh!t. Keep it up :)

HieroHead20085x
03-12-2006, 10:45 PM
emcee trouble-humble yet ill put any on the bubble..
when you fumble over the beat-the struggle choke to muffle..
this sound.cuz independent underground-was lost then found..
15 year old kids now down.youa clown.bound..
to the style of many-im plenty deep discrete lyrically beat..
any emcee.the pile or hepe rise-as my heart leak.then i blink..
stand above the savage-cabage patch amassed emcee trash..
i dash-flash past the last true-blew his head off his shoulders..
a year older.lyrically bolder hip hops soldier.yet.this vet..
set wit his folder of torn pages-loose leaf discrete means..
of snatchin this dream-we scheem and lean evil like fiends..
the kid you made it thru the laughter..from peers and father..
drugs, a few beers-drunk nights like the presidents daughters..
a martyr-but farther creative never a slave-for fame..
my flame rise. i never compromise self.demise..
seen thru lost wisdom regained in the babies cries..
i wish i could rewid time-adolesent mind.shine..
but to rewind time is assenine-a crime of mine..
nine to my head hopin this chrome can transend..
send my soul in whole to a world of true being..
but for now i walk alone searchin for the meanin..
feindin for truth.finding the comfort to survive in the booth..
THE BOOTH..
PEACE
ONE

Dondii
03-13-2006, 10:01 AM
Damn HieroHead20085x
You got some mad skills man ;)

HieroHead20085x
03-13-2006, 12:23 PM
thanks man..much appreciated

MUSASHI
03-13-2006, 01:41 PM
blank stares, absent minded fools in awe of clever postulations_ I walk alone in a world so cluttered with wanna be madmen tryin to sell them selves off as a new jack breed of quasi dictators, when all they is to me is un original mindless frank takers who will not pass go and won't collect the 200 dollars they think the world is owein' em..directly to jail they join the collective...

take a minute to observe the surroundings you trapped in and walk away if you think you man enough, jus' walk away when you realize that the balls you got can be put to better use in a place reserved for
destiny's desire...

put your kicks on, get your head straight and you will find yourself in a great state strtiking a chord that harmonizes and mingles with society in a manner that reveals your true identity .welcome to humanity we been waiting a while for you to step up to the plate .we can tell you been hungry for the longest time,come get your fill.

EGO31
03-14-2006, 03:30 AM
fuck
a truck

Am i a rpper now mum? lol ahh i'm sorry internet freestyling hell silly.

wanted 3- slave
03-14-2006, 04:06 AM
suck the end of a duck
suck my cak
i wis you luk

hah

HieroHead20085x
03-14-2006, 03:44 PM
its not internet freestyling..well not all, i think its cool to post lyrics and get some feedback..but people like to joke. Its funny personal attacks make up for what you lack? i dont think so, you have that much time to critizize something that is actually cool, and helpful, real emcees postin feed on each others lyrics, its great. PEACE

fuck
a truck

Am i a rpper now mum? lol ahh i'm sorry internet freestyling hell silly.

^^^^those who lack the creative ability and skill to write should not bother droppin here..its embarrsin..PEACE

EGO31
03-15-2006, 01:49 AM
was that meant to rhyme heirohead? your shit's wak,
i bet u wish you were black,
so that you could actually rhyme and be sublime'
but thats fine i aint got no beef so i'm gonna end this,
with a word called.....,
peace. am ia rapper yet? ahah no thinking just wrote it as it came oh yeah i love languge.

HieroHead20085x
03-15-2006, 11:32 AM
...........right

was that meant to rhyme heirohead? your shit's wak,
i bet u wish you were black,

again..do you think personal attacks make up for what you lack?..seems that way, and you obviouslly are not schooled in hip hop culture..you piece of fucking trash..first off wak is spelled wack..im guessin your in middle school? yea...
and you think all hip hop artists are black..look past Eminem in the underground which you obviouslly have no idea of..ever heard of El-P, Aesop Rock, Atmosphere, LMNO, Movemeant, Speck/Enoch, Cage, and those are just a few..learn your self before you make a bigger ass of your self..PEACE


but thats fine i aint got no beef so i'm gonna end this,

..yea you ended it for sure man!..great job.. :blink:

HieroHead20085x
03-15-2006, 01:02 PM
yo..
EGO31..you end shit?..please..Written Freestyle to end this bitch

ya ego may be thirty-one times the norm-born..my storm..
will leave ya bloody-choke wit jesus's crown of thorns..
drone.i expose wita flow thats ice cold.mold this bitch to shatter..
the laughter is from that fact that in reality you really dont matter..
i slit ya wrists like exorcist-twist ya neck so you have a new view and retrospect..
yo.you never met an intellect that could wreck.true cause..
and if you bitch..well im just gonna assume its menapause..
ya flaws basically start wit ya style..
i cut em in half so he can see his own profile.pro-wild..
this child is mild.jaw drop in amazment..
cut his head off leave his body lyin adjacent.this aint entertainment..
this is my life.so when the knife-slice i make you see it clearer..
the only way i lose a battle is when i freestyle ina mirror..
in other words only my reflection can stop my acension..
nota bitch emcee waitin ona pension-you get no mention..
like Tony Danza-you preach to women-woven-in timid..
while my shit shine vivid. David Blaine style dissapear ina instant..
this cat.dont know nothin bout rap.im exact..
i interact wit true fact..you the defention of wack..
i throw the guilotine and let ya neck catch it..calla medic..
i ende his life.aint even good enough to be my apprentice..
thats all to true-leav em consqued-step son style abused..
i blew up like dyanmite wita short fuse.consume..
this edible emcee.chillin in my haven..
you scared to come out..like i was wes craven.half man half amazin..
blazin this cat-smoked like the end ofa splif..
this aint a beef.aint even a riff..
i just want this cat to realize hip hops a gift..
so until you learn how to respect-in time grow older..
ill be outside waitin to pop the head off your shoulders..BITCH

lil free..PEACE.ONE

EGO31
03-15-2006, 05:30 PM
i agree,
no really im sorry ,
but dont get abusive,
i did say no beef and ended it with peace,
I don'tlisten to hip hop.
it's usually rock-no-stop,
my rhymes are wak,
so stop giving me flak,
better than most gangsta rap,
like 50 he's shit,
talking about his bitch and how to pistol whip,
thats not rap that's commercalist crap,
now i'm off the subject,
fun is my object and not a career,
in me you instil no fear,
rather you should be afraid of me if i am near,
the crazy mongrel who'll bite off your ear,
quicker than tyson stronger than a bison. Peace
I used the word bison i am fucking good!!

MUSASHI
03-15-2006, 06:07 PM
past tense emobilized in retoric-misspelled for a view into you, some fell.
abandonned is your sense of timing ,like the spark from a fouled plug- no ignition-ambitions decidedly quelled...look over here when you see that i'm near and repeat to yourself "I'm not worthy" like a sinner to jesus from hell..take it back what you thought in your head,what your reading were never words that I said. you still implyin' that your better than me when I'm not tryin' you can't even hear my beat

cuz it go,

Badda BOOM_Badda BOOM,Badda-gitcha,gitcha Badda BOOM_KIMONO
Hari Kari Seppuku..tha Kaishaku I be tha one cut head I chop off you...

HieroHead20085x
03-15-2006, 06:49 PM
i agree,
no really im sorry ,
but dont get abusive,
i did say no beef and ended it with peace,
I don'tlisten to hip hop.
it's usually rock-no-stop,
my rhymes are wak,
so stop giving me flak,
better than most gangsta rap,
like 50 he's shit,
talking about his bitch and how to pistol whip,
thats not rap that's commercalist crap,
now i'm off the subject,
fun is my object and not a career,
in me you instil no fear,
rather you should be afraid of me if i am near,
the crazy mongrel who'll bite off your ear,
quicker than tyson stronger than a bison. Peace
I used the word bison i am fucking good!!

....... :blink: ...

better than most gangsta rap,
like 50 he's shit,
talking about his bitch and how to pistol whip,
thats not rap that's commercalist crap,

yea i agree 50 is shit thats why i listen to real underground hiphop..dumbass..

can we get some votes? hahahaha :rolleyes:

EGO31
03-15-2006, 07:44 PM
LOL whatevs i suck but oh well but ur l;ast freestyle sounded like gangsta pop your head off your shoulders thats great but me and my crew will rip off your fucken nuts and nipples that should be more gangsta i used the word bison how cool am i?!!!!!! Naah seriously no beef./

Rend
03-15-2006, 08:57 PM
start out with krylon
end up with belton

PureSole
04-25-2006, 04:19 PM
BUMP

Some shit I wrote a week ago...


Yo, It's Aper coming straight out of south Queens,
Fuck all these fake teams, I'll crush you for my street dreams
I'll leave you shook like a shock
Put slugs in you like your name was pac
I'm addicted to rhyming, I'm F.O.B. - fresh off the block
They used to say this kid is wack, now they say I'm Sick(Sikh) like my religion
I'm held down with too many bars, It's like I'm in a prison
Thats why when I smoke, trees let me sit high like a pidgeon
In the crowd, I know I'm just another face and I gotta struggle in this place
Life is a marathon, can I win this race?
And if I fall down or can't keep my pace
Will you gimme a hand and be my ace?
Or will you just laugh and walk by, leave me a memory that'll slowly die
Listen to the hard times of a ghetto youth and a soul that can't cry
Turbulance, my life goes up and down like a seesaw
I am a product of the game, don't you know newton's third law?
Leave you in awe with the words that spit with the movement of my jaw
They told me the truth was in silence, and through the senseless violence
I realized silence is invisible
If the silence was visible then how much shit we speak would be dismissable?
Everyone trying to regulate me like this was school and they the principal
But the only principal I abide to is C.R.E.A.M.
Thats why at night I scheme for this criminal theme
Blinded by the jewlery gleam, this is the American dream
Clicks thats supreme running with the strongest underground regime
Reach out like a fien', will they put a slug in my spleen?

some guy from NCI...
04-25-2006, 04:50 PM
I'm clever like Carol V.
Shit on paper for a 'C'
Rub my dick on the teachers tits,
And bump it up to a 'B'!

I bop round to your mum,
Push my dick up her bum.
Rub my dick on her tits,
And swap my spit for her gum!

Now I've eaten my bun,
Busted my lyrics for fun,
I'll be back up with the sun...

one.

JETc17
04-25-2006, 06:47 PM
eww
wtf are you smokin


you sound like a horny prick

some guy from NCI...
04-25-2006, 06:57 PM
Dont act like you wern't feeling those lyrics ;)

JETc17
04-25-2006, 06:59 PM
the first one is almost funny
but i wasnt really feeling it

im not much of a rapper anyways
ill see if i can find some old stuff

Ceazer
04-25-2006, 07:27 PM
Im a shit talker
pissin in you bitches locker
come up on her, and stalk her
go and catch her cocker-
spaniel and eat like ozzy the rocker

some guy from NCI...
04-25-2006, 07:32 PM
I know what you mean jet... it lacked the humour I normally like to put in freestyles -_-

Next time... next time..

PureSole
04-25-2006, 08:03 PM
I fix it!

I raped this chick she said im a lesbian
her girlfriend karate choped my dick, she was korean
so no I cant get my dick licked
its making me mad might turn into a coke addict
but before that i gotta find some money
some hooker paid me to suck the embilical cord of her babies tummy

acrylic
04-25-2006, 08:04 PM
Tired of this post-feministic shit
Always fucking with the women of our society
Apple of Eve's juice, taking too many sips
Mars you know you're not higher than me
You all think you're the tortured raped and pillaged victims
When you protest with bullets not strikes or sit-ins
Replacing your dicks with some cocks and clicks
Calling 911 with the same 3 am hits
And tired of this segmentation, overdocumentation
Of the kids of our nation
Cause a few gotta be heros
The others the villains
Perpetuating our stereotypes with pointless murders and killings
And the rivers run deep here man,
With toxic wastes and street cred, man
Poisoning the womb of our natural land
When was the last time we didn't have this blood on our hands?

some guy from NCI...
04-25-2006, 08:11 PM
Originally posted by PureSole@Apr 25 2006, 08:03 PM
I fix it!

I raped this chick she said im a lesbian
her girlfriend karate choped my dick, she was korean
so no I cant get my dick licked
its making me mad might turn into a coke addict
but before that i gotta find some money
some hooker paid me to suck the embilical cord of her babies tummy
You're a good person ^_^

apex.
04-25-2006, 08:28 PM
im new to the forums but ill tear it up
i smoke lots of weed,but wont piss in a cup
i aint here to start shit with anyone
im just here to learn and have fun
im new at taggin, not in to braggin
i rock the mic and spit fire like a dragon.
this guys sig is freaking my out
the green motherfucker makes me want to shout
im tired as fuck and need a cigarette
maybee sketch some shit IM OUT


haha whatever lol

PureSole
04-25-2006, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...+Apr 25 2006, 08:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (some guy from NCI... @ Apr 25 2006, 08:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-PureSole@Apr 25 2006, 08:03 PM
I fix it!

I raped this chick she said im a lesbian
her girlfriend karate choped my dick, she was korean
so no I cant get my dick licked
its making me mad might turn into a coke addict
but before that i gotta find some money
some hooker paid me to suck the embilical cord of her babies tummy
You're a good person ^_^ [/b][/quote]
Thank you , kind sir :lol:

EGO31
04-25-2006, 08:34 PM
when the weed's got you high
and the world has no eye's
be happy that the leader's can still cry
when their in hell they'll learn how to fry


writte specifically about john howard and george bush

fuckthatshit
04-25-2006, 08:39 PM
that shit made me think of emo fags
keep talkin like that youll get put in a body bag
i hope this dont make you cry
but your spittin is bearly getting you by
your weeds not giving you the good buzz
come to me i got the i got the chrystal-i
that'll make you finish all the pies.

ps
fuck emooooooooo fags

EGO31
04-25-2006, 09:03 PM
emo's gay fuck that shit! just thought of it randomly wasn't meant to be emo my bad delete the post if you can be bothered

fuckthatshit
04-25-2006, 09:20 PM
i wasnt directing it to you in particular just in general fuck em'

~¨Stop¨~
04-26-2006, 04:35 PM
look at all these e thugs,
arguing over the internet, bunch of bugs.
Playin cold as ice but gotta have momas hugs.
if their father wasnt there, they would be cryin,
fuckin possys, you know i aint lyin.
i have no father, dont even start tryin.
soon their screamin my name ,¨Stop¨,
shut the fuck up little kid this is hiphop.
If you dont like this shit get out of bs and get into pop.
you think your into hiphop but doesnt got one demo,
and your keepin yourself inside cuttin your arm little emo.
Yea im refering to you, who got no crew,
sitting infront of the pc all day ive seen you thru.
congratulations, you just got the 2000 post,
your nothin else than a barbequed toast.
the only job youll get is to be the ¨looser shows host¨.

nah.. just kidding :P Im not good at this shit anyways! hehe.

Kingz514
04-26-2006, 04:43 PM
internet freestylings gay lol
you could have sat down and thought of these rhymes for 20 mins

~¨Stop¨~
04-28-2006, 12:05 AM
lol yeah, but who the fuck sits down and makin a rhyme for the net for 20 min? hehe. i used maybe 4 mins on that one cuz i had to check it for typos when i was done writin it.

SMTXgraffin
04-28-2006, 01:09 AM
Originally posted by fame@Nov 6 2004, 02:29 AM
come back later . REdRum. u not ready to bettel.or get in a fist fight. cause u will never win . leave your ass cut up in bloody.
like a girls pussie. u fuckin with f.a.m.e. your ass i dead cause my click roll so deep that we dont need to even carry gunz.we just swing.and fuck your life up ......bitch *****
Man, all the MC's on this forum are wack so i'll assume my stance/
Only thing close to a match is that thing in your pants/
My flow is way to advanced you toys need to stay off/
Before I remove your mug, like NBA FACEoffs/
Just like the playoffs you way soft/
I've got no time to be preachin/
I'll show you how you can catch shells without goin' to beaches/
Cat reflexes, drop your man right when he reaches/
I've got a shell in my clip and it's up for impeachment/
If my crew votes right then you might receive it/
Non-Lyrically I beat the shit out of you.... better believe it/

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 01:58 AM
im that street rat, fucking up your city with a fat cap, the one the fat pigs think that, they can catch, in the act, but infact, while they back track, im launchin an attack, with 12oz of pressurized purness, gerk nfk living this street life to the fullest.

listening to taskforce...so its kinda ment to go good with a british accent...:lol:

SMTXgraffin
04-28-2006, 02:05 AM
Who would like to conceive a battle?

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 11:54 AM
haha, gunna be hard to get someone, your a butcher.

SMTXgraffin
04-28-2006, 12:15 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 28 2006, 11:54 AM
haha, gunna be hard to get someone, your a butcher.
Haha, word, I appreciate it. It's been awhile since i've keystyled but I feel like battling.

epiL*
04-28-2006, 12:23 PM
without warning from the mind of science, a bigfoot beast to bring us all to silence, cans rattling a nuisence, beat down and abuse us, our two cents is useless, vandal squad what a great idea, make it hard for me spray my onomotopia, on a train you see my name i dont do it for the fame, street cred dont get you rich, but gettin busted down hurts like a bitch

i still write graffiti and i still smoke pot, i still hit the spots mad and still run from cops, i aint from the ghetto, but i work with what i got

o mad flow, you want in on soma this hydro, cant have it though you gota fucked up style and you stuntin like its hot, man you cant write and you got shitty pot, these pills i pop make me spin spun, 4 hours later man this shit STILL aint done,
i hope you get that bank role, playin gotta spank ho, sayin she love yayo, whata ho ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!

THEARSENONE
04-28-2006, 05:01 PM
they call me arsen cause of all the shit im busting all the bitches be lovin and wanna get huggin weed is what I smoke everyday cause thats the only way gotta go im about to get laid

some guy from NCI...
04-28-2006, 06:03 PM
Originally posted by apex.@Apr 25 2006, 08:28 PM
i aint here to start shit with anyone
im just here to learn and have fun
That's so corny
I'm so horny

overthrown (by)
testosterone

One hand down my pants, (a)
the other on the mouse. (B)
Shaking away, &copy;
I bring down the whole house. (B)

Horny boy,
I'm a teenage toy.

Overthrown (by)
testosterone...




I dont like this one it's kinda creepy :unsure: ... But there was lots of rhyming words



PAP http://www.rhymezone.com PAP

screw_loose
04-30-2006, 01:34 PM
i always say close,
i have piece of shit clothes.
i cant get girl so i buy hoes.


true story.

ASEN
04-30-2006, 01:37 PM
Originally posted by SMTXgraffin+Apr 28 2006, 12:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SMTXgraffin @ Apr 28 2006, 12:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@Apr 28 2006, 11:54 AM
haha, gunna be hard to get someone, your a butcher.
Haha, word, I appreciate it. It's been awhile since i've keystyled but I feel like battling. [/b][/quote]
I'll take you... i haven't done this in way too long

SMTXgraffin
05-04-2006, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by ASEN+Apr 30 2006, 01:37 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ASEN @ Apr 30 2006, 01:37 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> Originally posted by SMTXgraffin@Apr 28 2006, 12:15 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@Apr 28 2006, 11:54 AM
haha, gunna be hard to get someone, your a butcher.
Haha, word, I appreciate it. It's been awhile since i've keystyled but I feel like battling.
I'll take you... i haven't done this in way too long [/b][/quote]
Alright, buckle up and lets begin...

They call the crib daycare because it's crawlin' with blocks/
You could be on the phone with kobe and still not be callin' the shots/
Battle graffin!? We know who's smokin' the rock/
Asen is a condom, this kids broke and he's lost/
SMTX never goes with defeat/
Keep a keyboard on the pump backspace then delete/
I've got an ill technique but i'm not dealin' the metaphor/
I rapped ages ago, like the last time you metawhore/
Weak wordplay, ain't even bringin' the heat/
Kinda tired, bring round two, im goin' to sleep/

Don't really know how you rap yet but there is a quickie, i'll get more busy with it if i like your plex.

SMTXgraffin
05-04-2006, 03:19 PM
Originally posted by screw_loose@Apr 30 2006, 01:34 PM
i always say close,
i have piece of shit clothes.
i cant get girl so i buy hoes.


true story.
Man FUCK YOU SCREWLOOSE/
I'll rearrange yuh face just change your name to toothloose/
With that new sig pic.... YOUR WHOLE ACCOUNTS MADE OF FRUIT LOOPS/
Man i'd kill myself if I was a bitch like you/
I'm only typin' this to see what a bitch might do/
So think about this verse before you go see your gay lover/
Only thing that out-whores your posts is your own mother/

Big-Inches
05-04-2006, 03:27 PM
most of you cats dont know what rapin is.
ill stick my dick on yo tounge and give you a taste of big inch.
give you some flava one i bust in yo mouth,
wont inpreagnet your pussy ill bust in yo coutch.

underground_culture
05-04-2006, 03:36 PM
i spit cleaner than a shaved vagina
send your asses back to yoru farms in regina

i spit my shit and i can inspire
making ya feel old like ya need'a retire

my style is wild, i turn heads and break necks
leave ya stunnded ya like needa rewind like tapedecks

haha im lame

SMTXgraffin
05-04-2006, 03:42 PM
Originally posted by Big-Inches@May 4 2006, 03:27 PM
most of you cats dont know what rapin is.
ill stick my dick on yo tounge and give you a taste of big inch.
give you some flava one i bust in yo mouth,
wont inpreagnet your pussy ill bust in yo coutch.
Man, yuh pockets broke like your vocabulary your whole gimicks a story/
Only time you got brain it was stachatory/
Your verse is like coke on dicks they're fag lines/
ASEN respond to this thread help these wacks die/

Big-Inches
05-04-2006, 03:51 PM
hahahahaha you suck

SMTXgraffin
05-04-2006, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by Big-Inches@May 4 2006, 03:51 PM
hahahahaha you suck
Man you're a faggot, I bet there is a dickprint on your screen right where that ruler is.

R00k1
05-04-2006, 04:23 PM
Originally posted by Big-Inches@May 4 2006, 03:27 PM
most of you cats dont know what rapin is.
ill stick my dick on yo tounge and give you a taste of big inch.
give you some flava one i bust in yo mouth,
wont inpreagnet your pussy ill bust in yo coutch.
Hahah

Bust in my couch?
yeah thats real good


ide rather bust in yo girls mouth
take it out slap you in tha head
..tell you shake it off after you got knocked out in yo moms bed
yeah cause shes next in line
ganna try this just one more time
fuck it. its not fitting again
shes way too tight
tell your dad to step up his game
but he'll never win this fight.

Big-Inches
05-04-2006, 04:49 PM
this guy rook thinks hes funny.
but the onley thing hes got close to fucking is the playboy bunny.
and yeah there is a dickprint on the screen where that ruler is.
its supersized, my moneter is a 62 inch.
so come back and call me a faggot.
just remember the pussy your geting, i probley allready had it

R00k1
05-04-2006, 05:37 PM
double post.

R00k1
05-04-2006, 05:50 PM
No beef just for fun.
Originally posted by Big-Inches@May 4 2006, 04:49 PM
this guy rook thinks hes funny.
but the onley thing hes got close to fucking is the playboy bunny.
and yeah there is a dickprint on the screen where that ruler is.
its supersized, my moneter is a 62 inch.
so come back and call me a faggot.
just remember the pussy your geting, i probley allready had it
That ruler is only 6 inches long
prolly the size of your slong
62 inches you say hu?
thats funny..
you sure that isnt the size of your play doll bunny?
that plastic shiit is only for nerds who read books
dont be humping it and givin it funny looks
as it deflates on your bed
while your moms still giving me that head
cause the shiit still wont fit!
i thought i told you to tell your dad to step up his game
if he needs help, just give him my name.
ill show him some exercises that'll wow your mom
but for you..
just keep fucking that deflated doll

InvisblSkratchPiklz
05-04-2006, 06:39 PM
i havent been here in a long time
lemme do a lil somethin somethin

yall talk as if you were worldwide, you aint
get off the hip hop scene and stick with the spray paint
yah hip hop n paintin can be rolled into one
but when it comes to rhymin yall know who is number one
notice i didnt mention my name
im in this shit for fun, not for props or internet fame
im the reason jin doesnt battle no more
i battled his ass and made his eyelids touch the floor
i showed him this thread and that 62' shlong
he bursted into laughter that was heard from montreal to hong kong
i told asen the other day that i was back
so i guess you wack emcee's need to stop talkin smack
i didnt fold under pressure, i can take it with stride
you can spot me walkin around with my arm inked SCOTTISH PRIDE
shut up now, its over....dont make me spit again
or i ll roll up on you with proof and eminem
haha what am i sayin proof is six feet under
and eminem....eminem? where is he these days you know i wonder?
i wonder what would he say if another white kid bursts into the scene
and drops 6 LP's and 3 movies on widescreen
or what if 50 cent didnt get shot 9 times
that means his bank account will be missing alot of lines
no playstation games or clothing label
just another man in a wheelchair disabled!
im not stealin fredro starr's lines, im tryin to make a continuation to waste some time
so somethin somethin somethin i ran outta shit
so pick up your jaws and get ready to spit

:lol:


shazam

AMW
05-04-2006, 06:42 PM
this topic is kinda queer
im eatin a deer
yo bitch i need some beer
im the one to feer
OOOOOOOOOO!!!!! B)

AMW
05-04-2006, 06:43 PM
fear*

*RAHCKUS*
05-04-2006, 06:43 PM
Originally posted by InvisblSkratchPiklz@May 4 2006, 06:39 PM
i havent been here in a long time
lemme do a lil somethin somethin

yall talk as if you were worldwide, you aint
get off the hip hop scene and stick with the spray paint
yah hip hop n paintin can be rolled into one
but when it comes to rhymin yall know who is number one
notice i didnt mention my name
im in this shit for fun, not for props or internet fame
im the reason jin doesnt battle no more
i battled his ass and made his eyelids touch the floor
i showed him this thread and that 62' shlong
he bursted into laughter that was heard from montreal to hong kong
i told asen the other day that i was back
so i guess you wack emcee's need to stop talkin smack
i didnt fold under pressure, i can take it with stride
you can spot me walkin around with my arm inked SCOTTISH PRIDE
shut up now, its over....dont make me spit again
or i ll roll up on you with proof and eminem
haha what am i sayin proof is six feet under
and eminem....eminem? where is he these days you know i wonder?
i wonder what would he say if another white kid bursts into the scene
and drops 6 LP's and 3 movies on widescreen
or what if 50 cent didnt get shot 9 times
that means his bank account will be missing alot of lines
no playstation games or clothing label
just another man in a wheelchair disabled!
im not stealin fredro starr's lines, im tryin to make a continuation to waste some time
so somethin somethin somethin i ran outta shit
so pick up your jaws and get ready to spit

:lol:


shazam
thats dope man!

InvisblSkratchPiklz
05-04-2006, 08:24 PM
thank you

you from Montreal? Seen your stuff here n there

so yeah

peace

SMTXgraffin
05-04-2006, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by R00k1+May 4 2006, 05:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (R00k1 @ May 4 2006, 05:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> No beef just for fun.
<!--QuoteBegin-Big-Inches@May 4 2006, 04:49 PM
this guy rook thinks hes funny.
but the onley thing hes got close to fucking is the playboy bunny.
and yeah there is a dickprint on the screen where that ruler is.
its supersized, my moneter is a 62 inch.
so come back and call me a faggot.
just remember the pussy your geting, i probley allready had it
That ruler is only 6 inches long
prolly the size of your slong
62 inches you say hu?
thats funny..
you sure that isnt the size of your play doll bunny?
that plastic shiit is only for nerds who read books
dont be humping it and givin it funny looks
as it deflates on your bed
while your moms still giving me that head
cause the shiit still wont fit!
i thought i told you to tell your dad to step up his game
if he needs help, just give him my name.
ill show him some exercises that'll wow your mom
but for you..
just keep fucking that deflated doll [/b][/quote]
Word. Someone battle me right quick, i been listening to murda mook and t-rex battles all night lol, i need to lay off the gangster rap.

donut holes
05-05-2006, 12:22 AM
yoyo check it. uhhhh im a p.i.m.p. dont mess with me ill bite yo head off like a dog does to a flea.uhh my rhymes are sick yo face looks like a dick, a dick with no head!?! i forgot to take my meds. so i might go crazay and go off and stab a babay. cuz im hardcoreXxXxXxXxX lol.





joke


joke

SMTXgraffin
05-11-2006, 11:56 AM
this thread is in the shitter.

DR FORCE
05-11-2006, 01:16 PM
The world is shit

SMTXgraffin
05-11-2006, 01:30 PM
Originally posted by DR FORCE@May 11 2006, 01:16 PM
The world is shit
I suppose that includes you. You have a great perspective on life.

epiL*
05-11-2006, 01:46 PM
trust me that its straight, and you be trustin when it aint, no tresspassing sign all covered in chrome paint, these fools bitch and whine wana call it a crime, i aint never gone 187, maybe if i can stay fly i'll die and go to heaven, but i'd be dropped for hittin them gates, show up high and late to court in hell, slapped the shit out the devil so they threw me in a cell, these cigarettes are for your safety, its just too hard to smoke when the 5-0 chase me

underground_culture
05-11-2006, 02:27 PM
i explode onto the scene like a grenade
making you envy me skeet into your hand like a fuckin hand grenade
watch out cuz out fuckin with real one
scare ya like a jack in the box imma have sum fun
haha i suck, ride on 24zz in my hummer truck my ryhmes are so thick YALL GET STUCCKKKK

CROW
05-11-2006, 03:19 PM
RAP............................................... .................................................. ...

syrup2
05-12-2006, 12:47 AM
spray vandel
hopped up on vodka srtaight from handel
2 liter messed up my liver
straight shot to the kidneys make you quiver
acholic too many problems to count
cash in the hands but still genaric brands
loud noises like pots and pans
or the rattle from duel paint cans
hoodie paint mask what you wearing
I went to graff cuz i stopped caring
ive hit rooftops and panals
flipped through my mind like 2 am tv channels
watch me tag this and roller that with my fucked up graff covred trucker hat
drippy tags and hard to buffs
secuity on rackers kinda rough
keep on staying up writers

Slushi
05-12-2006, 03:03 PM
You guys have no flow.

underground_culture
05-12-2006, 03:13 PM
we do have flow. youre the 2-bit shit im the real show

cuz im grabbin attetion like a big ass shaking, my style breaks necks like the sound of glass breakin
im the real thing and you are having trouble fakin
off off the richter just my presence and the ground is shakiin

joker00
05-12-2006, 04:22 PM
Originally posted by Slushi@May 12 2006, 03:03 PM
You guys have no flow.
:lol: :D :ph34r: :blink: i agreee i jsut read half of this shit and its wack as hell and has no flow or some if any at all..................cant say this 4 all but most others have good ryhmes

Kl(one)
05-12-2006, 05:40 PM
underground_culture, way to rhyme grenade with grenade,
You bust out that shit, and act like your made
Your lymric so sour I tasted lemonade.

Before you spit, check out the scene,
Cause I'm like the hulk, the big mean green machine,
Big D is what they call me and you best respect,
Or else your face will look like it was rammed by-a-jet

All in all you failed...
So like a teacher I'm a re-assign it,
Take your verbal puke and put-it-back-in
Realignment,

Here's the report, take it or leave it
Your shit is wack and you are a two bit
Don't quite your day job
cause the world needs more big macs,
Oh yah, and don't forget that you're a slob
You best remember that
as your girl polishes my knob.

So mister CULTure, what you got to say?
Sorry, can't here you, your mouth's to full of Kool-Aid
Just cry in your room, like an emo,
As I sit, and hit this wicked premo,

Text just can't convey the flow of-my lyrical con-tant..
And as you stand slack jawed, not relizing, you're an ant.
I can just lift my size 13, and step on yo' face,
Erasing one more mistake from the human race.

What did you learn from that?
When you spit look out for a gat,
Cause I got bro's in 'high' places
And I work hoes from eh-ver-ee nation

Big D, roaming with his bat,
My Wilson, you best admire that
Before it splits your face like the Joker
So now I'm Gatman with-a heated poker

Crusin' in my gatmobile, with my side kick Rollin
And after that rape, your punk ass should-be knowin'
That in my crew we roll in 10's,
Just to fuck up peeps, like you again

So just step down, people won't ask questions.
Clearly your a clown, and I'm the best-in....
Town....

-----END-OF-PWNING------------------------

Yah... I rock, SUCKA HOLMES!!!
No beef... Aight?? Actually... After that I'd want to fuck my ass up... So respond and get owned... Or be quiet and nurse you bitch slapped ego.. Hoe.

JETc17
05-12-2006, 09:01 PM
My throwups bring all the boys to the freight yard,
and they're like,
it's better than yours,
damn right it's better than yours,
I can teach you,
but I have to charge

syrup2
05-12-2006, 11:29 PM
I seen a few toys come up and down jiving about how we aint got no flow
I think us real rhymers got somthign to show
I come at yall nigaz faster then a muthafucking bullittrain
stab you in the head 9 times and put you to shame
how dare you come up to me in my own game
you silly ass *****z just want 3 seconds of fame
you could have 15 minutes but you cant do it
dont try agian bitch you already blew it

Asshat
05-12-2006, 11:54 PM
Cooper no!

jinx671
05-13-2006, 04:11 AM
naahh..

DR FORCE
05-13-2006, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by syrup2@May 12 2006, 11:29 PM
I seen a few toys come up and down jiving about how we aint got no flow
I think us real rhymers got somthign to show
I come at yall nigaz faster then a muthafucking bullittrain
stab you in the head 9 times and put you to shame
how dare you come up to me in my own game
you silly ass *****z just want 3 seconds of fame
you could have 15 minutes but you cant do it
dont try agian bitch you already blew it
Youw are you white ? (so yes NEVER SAY AS A WHITE DUDE ******)
--------------------------------
STRAIGTH OUTA ANTWERP AMARICAN BITCHES :)

DR FORCE
05-13-2006, 10:39 AM
This is for the whit bitches hoe think there black

you hope you are black.
but im sorry you are whiter than my ass.
But maybe you mother go black.
so take a stap back
beceause at nigth you ask why am i not black.
You know why beceause you are wack.
so stop smoking crak.
and stop tinking i am iner black.
beceause its not.
so suck my white koke.
now you know your not black
don't start to think you the new em.
beceause i say it again your style is wack.
so take a stap back.
-----------------------------
you think the CPT is a ghetto? come te belgium and chek antwerp
----------------------------------
im sorry but im from belgium and can write good english.
-------------

fuckin villan
05-13-2006, 10:42 AM
now how many of you could actually spit these ryhmes on a beat?

DR FORCE
05-13-2006, 12:18 PM
Originally posted by fuckin villan@May 13 2006, 10:42 AM
now how many of you could actually spit these ryhmes on a beat?
I made the text while i was lisening to a rap song and i did it on that beat :ph34r:

syrup2
05-20-2006, 01:10 AM
Originally posted by DR FORCE+May 13 2006, 10:24 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DR FORCE @ May 13 2006, 10:24 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-syrup2@May 12 2006, 11:29 PM
I seen a few toys come up and down jiving about how we aint got no flow
I think us real rhymers got somthign to show
I come at yall nigaz faster then a muthafucking bullittrain
stab you in the head 9 times and put you to shame
how dare you come up to me in my own game
you silly ass *****z just want 3 seconds of fame
you could have 15 minutes but you cant do it
dont try agian bitch you already blew it
Youw are you white ? (so yes NEVER SAY AS A WHITE DUDE ******)
--------------------------------
STRAIGTH OUTA ANTWERP AMARICAN BITCHES :) [/b][/quote]
im acutaly black homie but i just aint the best at rappin lol

InvisblSkratchPiklz
05-20-2006, 06:40 PM
Originally posted by fuckin villan@May 13 2006, 10:42 AM
now how many of you could actually spit these ryhmes on a beat?
hand me a mic, spin some shit and i ll blow the spot up!

Kry_20CC
05-20-2006, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by fuckin villan+May 13 2006, 10:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fuckin villan @ May 13 2006, 10:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> now how many of you could actually spit these ryhmes on a beat? [/b]
yea forreal...anyone can write some shit but if you aint got no flow you aint gettin shit. anyone actually record themselves like take rappin seriously...idk if i should post my shit tho cuz its on myspace and i dont want no pigs gettin on there and tracin me or nuttin

<!--QuoteBegin-DR FORCE@May 13 2006, 12:18 PM

This is for the whit bitches hoe think there black

you hope you are black.
but im sorry you are whiter than my ass.
But maybe you mother go black.
so take a stap back
beceause at nigth you ask why am i not black.
You know why beceause you are wack.
so stop smoking crak.
and stop tinking i am iner black.
beceause its not.
so suck my white koke.
now you know* your not black
don't start to think you the new em.
beceause i say it again your style is wack.
so take a stap back.[/quote]

and i hope you werent being serious because that is the wackest shit i ever heard. and i never new COCK was spelled KOKE. sounds like COKE to me hahaha

Mink
05-20-2006, 07:42 PM
...this villain be chillin she new to the scene
can't say she emceein, been out on the streets
spreadin the word to the deaf and the dumb
she's providin them fools with some visual aid
we're all equal people this vandal can say
she treats all fools equivalently




3 of the 4 elements she's into



blahhhhh, I lost it.

cream soda
06-14-2006, 02:10 AM
ill battle any of you....ahhah....wouldnt guess that a kid with tight pants can rap huh..ahhaha....


this is to whoever wants to battle me...


YO man you be a straight wussy
they say you are what you eat and im still not a pussy.
You think you got style, you think you can flow? ill try to remember you well yer lookin up to me at my show, lets be slow, Ya mom be a slut, she be like tee hee, the reasone she needs throat surgery is strictly because of me:) yo ima bout to make these people laugh on, yaa so gay ya mom does you in the ass with a motha fuckin strapon, you eat ya sistas tampon, it be drippin on yer face, all you kids where you come from look at u as a descrace.

sorry for being so disgusting..ahaha...i thot it was funnny






P.S. that was like my 2nd rap ever...so im expecting to get killed....sorry its so short...haha pps..im not a wigger:)

Feliks
06-14-2006, 02:44 AM
Originally posted by cream soda@Jun 14 2006, 03:10 AM

YO man you be a straight wussy
they say you are what you eat and im still not a pussy.
You think you got style, you think you can flow? ill try to remember you well yer lookin up to me at my show, lets be slow, Ya mom be a slut, she be like tee hee, the reasone she needs throat surgery is strictly because of me:) yo ima bout to make these people laugh on, yaa so gay ya mom does you in the ass with a motha fuckin strapon, you eat ya sistas tampon, it be drippin on yer face, all you kids where you come from look at u as a descrace.







P.S. that was like my 2nd rap ever...so im expecting to get killed....sorry its so short...haha pps..im not a wigger:)
That is NASTY.

son, believe I'm holdin my nose cuz followin that shit won't lead me to the pot'o'gold/ and Dirty Harriet's in the back smellin like daisies and fresh grass, while you look like you just came from the back of her ass/ how's that for flow? you punk-ass fag/ bark first, spit first, I'll slake my thirst on your bitch, what's worse is she's cryin to god that the blood won't stop/ t'hell with you son, he's lookin at me. Stop.

newbornsek
06-14-2006, 04:33 PM
yo, this goes out to cream,
your shits go the nasty theme
ur a fagget ass bitch
u can jump on my dick like a witch
i slap u across the face for the shit rhymes
stick u up u tossing me all ur dimes
u fucking hoe
you dont even no
i got the flow
when its time to go
ur a fucking fagget you can talk trash
ill smash u up like glass
im done with this disgusting lil slick,
please dont talk shit, cuz u dont even got a dick

tint1
06-14-2006, 04:41 PM
you guys are hilarious =/

underground_culture
06-14-2006, 05:13 PM
Originally posted by newbornsek@Jun 14 2006, 04:33 PM
yo, this goes out to cream,
your shits go the nasty theme
ur a fagget ass bitch
u can jump on my dick like a witch
i slap u across the face for the shit rhymes
stick u up u tossing me all ur dimes
u fucking hoe
you dont even no
i got the flow
when its time to go
ur a fucking fagget you can talk trash
ill smash u up like glass
im done with this disgusting lil slick,
please dont talk shit, cuz u dont even got a dick
did you learn that in a nursery rhyme book? haha hoe, no and flow


hands down best rhyming skillz ever

i hope you dont think your "ill" because your not.

newbornsek
06-14-2006, 06:51 PM
hmm i really dont,
i just try new shit when im high
oh well..

underground_culture
06-14-2006, 06:56 PM
*phew*


if you were high, then that aiight.

streak!
06-15-2006, 08:11 PM
when ur high anything flows :lol:

Kingz514
06-15-2006, 08:56 PM
agreed
drunk is way better for freestyling i find

newbornsek
06-15-2006, 08:58 PM
man when im high shit flowss so easily, it just comes to me and shit comes out my mouth i had no idea i even cud do, its pretty illl,
and underground, lol, im not to good at catching internet sarcasim

Enmity
06-15-2006, 10:02 PM
your all wack

Synta^x
06-16-2006, 01:00 AM
ummm..oka lets see here =)


They call me sneak cause i creep. next thing ya know i bit ya on ya left but cheek.
lol nah im jp i like to mess around ya see but if i get seriouse ill drop a lyrcal beat that wll knock you off ya feet layin facve first in the street, ima fein for paint it's as simple as can be like 123, MICHEL jackson stfu it's my turn to sing yea i know my gramma aint that good but if you heard me speak, you'd start to clap ya hands an then smoke some reaf with me
lol

syrup2
06-17-2006, 07:44 PM
i like to beat up the homless and spit on my wife next thing you know you can suck on my knife lol

cream soda
06-19-2006, 11:24 PM
totally awsome

Feliks
06-19-2006, 11:28 PM
that was graphic....

BeeOne234...
06-19-2006, 11:49 PM
Ooooowh...imma get all up in this....where's kayone? he still on here?