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been known ta take that cain
straight up to tha brain
got me calm and serene
boy my yola's mean
cuttin out some rails
my nig it neva fails
ta put me in that phase
that i wanna be
so come hit a line
or nine
wit me
swich
09-21-2006, 11:56 AM
where u at asen?
TalibKweli
09-21-2006, 12:22 PM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 20 2006, 08:43 PM
first off ill merk you bitch/
the worst mistake is to be fuckin with swich/
i have you diced up face down in a ditch/
homicidal tendicies keep me rollin with clips/
i like beef with enimies so keep it commin/
the blood shed and dead bodies keep me gunnin/
be smart kid...get to runnin...
i passed by that ditch, all i saw was swich
naked and crying like a schoolgirl bitch
why you angry kid? cause i stoled your clips?
raped your sister and stoled your grits
simmered that shit up and spread it on ritz
i ll beat you down and make your dad feel the hits
talkin bout homicide and dead bodies
i thought snitchin on real heads was your main hobby
wouldnt know what to do with a 9 if ya had one
talkin bout blastin cats and blood shed, who you foolin son?
you're the last in the food chain, cause i am number one
i eat off silver plates imported from china
while you eat dinner crumbs off your moms vagina
and dont you ever talk bout sportin a trenchcoat
cause i ll rip out your adams apple and watch you choke
turn blue like the color of the sky
while swich tried to yell, IM ONLY 15 I DONT WANNA DIE
fuck with a saint and that's what you get
so quit the tough talk ya faggot and show some respect
your played out lyrics dont proove skills
useless like the skin round my dick and my anti depressant pills
swallow you whole and spit you out
dress you up like carlton banks and show you the college route
analyzing your rhymes was a waste of time
shit i dont even try when i wanna rhyme
if i put half my brain in it
your sorry ass wouldnt last half a minute
DaseONE
09-21-2006, 01:09 PM
k k yo yo, Gee wigga' what gangster gee? cant you see i bust a rap with glee im old gee i can make words rhyme more then a dime yes thats 10, 10 naked men raping the hen oh snap oh snap...Seriously this thread is retarded.
swich
09-21-2006, 01:50 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 21 2006, 11:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 21 2006, 11:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Sep 20 2006, 08:43 PM
first off ill merk you bitch/
the worst mistake is to be fuckin with swich/
i have you diced up face down in a ditch/
homicidal tendicies keep me rollin with clips/
i like beef with enimies so keep it commin/
the blood shed and dead bodies keep me gunnin/
be smart kid...get to runnin...
i passed by that ditch, all i saw was swich
naked and crying like a schoolgirl bitch
why you angry kid? cause i stoled your clips?
raped your sister and stoled your grits
simmered that shit up and spread it on ritz
i ll beat you down and make your dad feel the hits
talkin bout homicide and dead bodies
i thought snitchin on real heads was your main hobby
wouldnt know what to do with a 9 if ya had one
talkin bout blastin cats and blood shed, who you foolin son?
you're the last in the food chain, cause i am number one
i eat off silver plates imported from china
while you eat dinner crumbs off your moms vagina
and dont you ever talk bout sportin a trenchcoat
cause i ll rip out your adams apple and watch you choke
turn blue like the color of the sky
while swich tried to yell, IM ONLY 15 I DONT WANNA DIE
fuck with a saint and that's what you get
so quit the tough talk ya faggot and show some respect
your played out lyrics dont proove skills
useless like the skin round my dick and my anti depressant pills
swallow you whole and spit you out
dress you up like carlton banks and show you the college route
analyzing your rhymes was a waste of time
shit i dont even try when i wanna rhyme
if i put half my brain in it
your sorry ass wouldnt last half a minute [/b][/quote]
these wak bithes keep steppin up to the best/
i put a bullet through ya chest and i must confess/
i made ya mom undress as i caressed her brests...she said i do it the best/
ill barrel you with a gun so big it broke my gunrack/
comeback with so much ammo i dont know where my guns at!/
the metals sideways on ya chicks head as she licks my nut sack/
as you watchin with a bat but too pussy to attack/
now she on my lap and im hearin shit clap/
and after that it still not stoppin/
ill shove the barrel up her ass and give a new meaning to pussy poppin/
punk ass bitch...!
TalibKweli
09-21-2006, 04:20 PM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 21 2006, 12:50 PM
these wak bithes keep steppin up to the best/
i put a bullet through ya chest and i must confess/
i made ya mom undress as i caressed her brests...she said i do it the best/
ill barrel you with a gun so big it broke my gunrack/
comeback with so much ammo i dont know where my guns at!/
the metals sideways on ya chicks head as she licks my nut sack/
as you watchin with a bat but too pussy to attack/
now she on my lap and im hearin shit clap/
and after that it still not stoppin/
ill shove the barrel up her ass and give a new meaning to pussy poppin/
punk ass bitch...!
how could a pussy pop with a barrel in her anus
wack lines like that wont get you props or famous
step to you, fuckin right i did it
cause i just toasted your sorry ass but you'd never admit it
your head is jammed in your ass better call a doctor
wear tight ass shirts so you cant pop your collar
your rhymes aint worth half a dollar
your a pre-school emcee fuckin with a top scholar
you probably wear scarface t shirts to act like a baller
get realistic kid, you aint gifted
i push you out my way cause you just got shifted
dead weight lifted, off my chest, stop while i am ahead kid you cant impress
even your mom says your a joke
i agreed with her then she proceeded to give me deepthroat
while she was suckin and slurpin
you were in the corner of the room jerkin
then your dad walked in like
wait its not what you think
then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink
all of this just to get to the point, you aint talented son, you aint worth a dime
the more i think about
you should start suckin dick for studio time
swich
09-21-2006, 05:49 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 21 2006, 03:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 21 2006, 03:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Sep 21 2006, 12:50 PM
these wak bithes keep steppin up to the best/
i put a bullet through ya chest and i must confess/
i made ya mom undress as i caressed her brests...she said i do it the best/
ill barrel you with a gun so big it broke my gunrack/
comeback with so much ammo i dont know where my guns at!/
the metals sideways on ya chicks head as she licks my nut sack/
as you watchin with a bat but too pussy to attack/
now she on my lap and im hearin shit clap/
and after that it still not stoppin/
ill shove the barrel up her ass and give a new meaning to pussy poppin/
punk ass bitch...!
how could a pussy pop with a barrel in her anus
wack lines like that wont get you props or famous
step to you, fuckin right i did it
cause i just toasted your sorry ass but you'd never admit it
your head is jammed in your ass better call a doctor
wear tight ass shirts so you cant pop your collar
your rhymes aint worth half a dollar
your a pre-school emcee fuckin with a top scholar
you probably wear scarface t shirts to act like a baller
get realistic kid, you aint gifted
i push you out my way cause you just got shifted
dead weight lifted, off my chest, stop while i am ahead kid you cant impress
even your mom says your a joke
i agreed with her then she proceeded to give me deepthroat
while she was suckin and slurpin
you were in the corner of the room jerkin
then your dad walked in like
wait its not what you think
then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink
all of this just to get to the point, you aint talented son, you aint worth a dime
the more i think about
you should start suckin dick for studio time [/b][/quote]
the bullet goes in the ass and out the clit/
thats how the pussy'll pop u stupid bitch/
ill flip ya pre-teen ass with a flik of my wrist/
and fill ya moms cunt with just the tip of my dick/
they say im insane cuz i talk to my bullets and clips/
come too close and ill pop a hole in ya hips/
drop to the floor and swallow the blood on ya lips/
anytime i can man i droppin a hit/
whether it be 4 ya ears or one for ya lip/
fuck all ya shit talkin and get to walkin/
the voices in my head make me get to stalkin/
b4 they were sleepin and silent/
but ya fucked with me and now theyre making me violent!
fucking nice whoa, you in top shape man
swich, im sorry dude, ill hit back when im good and blazed
TalibKweli
09-21-2006, 10:27 PM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 21 2006, 04:49 PM
the bullet goes in the ass and out the clit/
thats how the pussy'll pop u stupid bitch/
ill flip ya pre-teen ass with a flik of my wrist/
and fill ya moms cunt with just the tip of my dick/
they say im insane cuz i talk to my bullets and clips/
come too close and ill pop a hole in ya hips/
drop to the floor and swallow the blood on ya lips/
anytime i can man i droppin a hit/
whether it be 4 ya ears or one for ya lip/
fuck all ya shit talkin and get to walkin/
the voices in my head make me get to stalkin/
b4 they were sleepin and silent/
but ya fucked with me and now theyre making me violent!
if that's being violent then i must admit
your attitude is weaker then the shit you spit
my girls clit got chipped a little bit
but your still dropping sperm cells when you take a shit
why do you resort to guns whenever you drop a line?
i mean i got nothing against your style, that shits fine
the voices in my head are tellin me to continue
blow your mind like snots stuck to a tissue
your dad picked up the newspapers latest issue
front page ''SWICH STILL MISSING'' but he doesnt miss you
you recycle lines and just change metaphors
that shits gettin old like prehistoric dinosaurs
so call it what you wanna, take some time to think
cause EVERYONE on this site knows you're already extinct
a simple memoir of a child turned violent and angry
cause he got served on the internet and rejected by his family
13 bars you dropped....is that all you got?
i got my sleepin bag and tent ready cause im gonna rock the spot
drop whats hot, like it or not, im coming for you swich
you remind me of car2nist, cause all you can do is bitch
id like to stay a lil more swich but im really tired
so wrap this up mr trump
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6903/donaldtrump2vk8.jpg
you're fired
nerdx
09-21-2006, 11:06 PM
this thread is awesome.
swich
09-22-2006, 05:05 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 21 2006, 09:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 21 2006, 09:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Sep 21 2006, 04:49 PM
the bullet goes in the ass and out the clit/
thats how the pussy'll pop u stupid bitch/
ill flip ya pre-teen ass with a flik of my wrist/
and fill ya moms cunt with just the tip of my dick/
they say im insane cuz i talk to my bullets and clips/
come too close and ill pop a hole in ya hips/
drop to the floor and swallow the blood on ya lips/
anytime i can man i droppin a hit/
whether it be 4 ya ears or one for ya lip/
fuck all ya shit talkin and get to walkin/
the voices in my head make me get to stalkin/
b4 they were sleepin and silent/
but ya fucked with me and now theyre making me violent!
if that's being violent then i must admit
your attitude is weaker then the shit you spit
my girls clit got chipped a little bit
but your still dropping sperm cells when you take a shit
why do you resort to guns whenever you drop a line?
i mean i got nothing against your style, that shits fine
the voices in my head are tellin me to continue
blow your mind like snots stuck to a tissue
your dad picked up the newspapers latest issue
front page ''SWICH STILL MISSING'' but he doesnt miss you
you recycle lines and just change metaphors
that shits gettin old like prehistoric dinosaurs
so call it what you wanna, take some time to think
cause EVERYONE on this site knows you're already extinct
a simple memoir of a child turned violent and angry
cause he got served on the internet and rejected by his family
13 bars you dropped....is that all you got?
i got my sleepin bag and tent ready cause im gonna rock the spot
drop whats hot, like it or not, im coming for you swich
you remind me of car2nist, cause all you can do is bitch
id like to stay a lil more swich but im really tired
so wrap this up mr trump
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6903/donaldtrump2vk8.jpg
you're fired [/b][/quote]
13 aint all i got but its all i need/
13 hits of weed and ill make u bleed/
13 times i fucked your mom and she still love me/
13 is my luckies number u fake ass G/
my mind is equivelent to the dictionary/
spit shit so sick some claim its scary/
ya mom needs to clip her slit cuz that shits hairy/
i bet now your feelin weary and a bit dazed/
im smokin the competition so call me purple haze/
the only days i get blazed is when i get paid/
thats 7 days a week bitch, the same days i get laid/
and u havent had pussy since the mutha fucker had u/
13 bars again bitch. and i still managed to beat u...
swich
09-22-2006, 05:07 PM
Originally posted by ASEN@Sep 21 2006, 06:31 PM
fucking nice whoa, you in top shape man
swich, im sorry dude, ill hit back when im good and blazed
aight man.
Lateness
09-22-2006, 08:28 PM
Ayo I spit more than a cobra with bleeding gums/
Imma beat some nuns until jesus comes with freakin guns/
I'm nice when I'm droppin a rhyme/
You're not gonna shine like a diamond in a box in a mine/
I'm talking my mind when I'm freeing right/
Kidnapping Jordan and Jackson is the only time your keeping mics/
So free tonight but I'm stopping on time/
Cause I break up with my bitch at the drop of a dime/
Then I get yours and make her thinks she's my main squeeze/
I'm so cold when she swallows she gets the brain freeze/
I hate thieves but I'm robbing you and grabbin cash/
A cereal killa don't mean blastin caps at apple jacks/
My battle raps grapple cats so best to train hard/
So pass the macks I clack on tracks like a train yard/
I embarrass you in public like Peewie Herman/
Take what I say to the heart like Stevie Irwin/
I'm the king in this city you're my luckiest jester/
And you never could test me like a gutless professor/
wait its not what you think
then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink
a line very similiar to that was used earlier even if it was you its lame to repeat yourself
edit here it is
''you get locked in the clink
your cell mate have you bent over the top of the sink
the guard walked passed he was so shocked he dropped his drink
he tried to pull his pants up talkin about wait its not what you think''
TalibKweli
09-22-2006, 10:37 PM
what's even lamer is when you browse the site to find a punch line and use it against me, get a life junior
TalibKweli
09-22-2006, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 22 2006, 04:05 PM
13 aint all i got but its all i need/
13 hits of weed and ill make u bleed/
13 times i fucked your mom and she still love me/
13 is my luckies number u fake ass G/
my mind is equivelent to the dictionary/
spit shit so sick some claim its scary/
ya mom needs to clip her slit cuz that shits hairy/
i bet now your feelin weary and a bit dazed/
im smokin the competition so call me purple haze/
the only days i get blazed is when i get paid/
thats 7 days a week bitch, the same days i get laid/
and u havent had pussy since the mutha fucker had u/
13 bars again bitch. and i still managed to beat u...
:lol: are you for real?
you take two words and make them rhyme
might aswell quit now cause your wasting my time
13 hits of weed, nickel bag or a dime?
not that it matters much, that aint a crime
but when it comes to being a bitch your mine
and when it comes to spiting true lyrics, im fine
and when it comes to gats and clips your lyin'
your fake ass chain is the only thing that makes ya shine
this is the last time i respond, so take my raps and print it
cause i just ruined your sorry ass in under a minute
*come back at me when you have real shit and real verses, cause your shit aint even worth responding to,i f you wanna go anywhere well first off it isnt over the net, and second of all you should hang up your skills in a closet cause you dont wanna let that shit seep out*
peace
PS- keep my name out of your mouth
I didnt really browse I just remembered the line
Lateness
09-23-2006, 10:48 AM
This one goes out to Swich
I'm a mistake in the matrix a brilliant glitch/
When you switched from clits to dicks is when you really did swich/
There's nothing else to say dawg you're really just gay/
I'm not gonna call your mom a whore cause I didn't even pay/
13 bar verse yo that doesn't compute/
My kids are the realness so even my dick cums truth/
you're done dude like baked surfers rave purgers/
You never had beef like a vegan with fake burgers/
Printing flyers on the back is what I use your verses for/
You're not even worth ten line but to me that's a perfect score/
Go suck your thumb and tell mommy how your rap career is over Swich
TalibKweli
09-23-2006, 02:39 PM
Originally posted by Lateness@Sep 23 2006, 09:48 AM
I'm a mistake in the matrix a brilliant glitch
Cage - Movies for the blind (Teenage Death)
dont try to pull fast ones
The Proof (http://www.lyricsondemand.com/c/cagelyrics/teenagedeathlyrics.html)
sketch3
09-23-2006, 06:51 PM
this is 4 all wack pussys(like myself)
imma choke u,crush ur wind pipe and get a cramp on,
put boot to face , and get ma stamp on,
leave u bloodyed up , like a used tampon,
muerder u like charlse manson,and ur girl mumma thinks im handsom,
i aint got a chance son, of pulling this off,so imma stop,
While the rest of the forum's trainin' vandals
This cypher's bound to hurt cuz of shame n' scandal
Bit from Cage? Lateness ground to dirt in stagnant shambles
Stay down to earth like paintin' mantles in pagan sandals
But you know i loved the way whoa was playin you tards
I seen less pretentious antics from actors displayin' awards
Sayin' you sorry won't change the fact that you playin' atari
In mom's basement, face it, you even a failure to Maury
Evident grabs from a man obsessed with diligent lectures
Switch your intentions like a transient spit in your breakfast
Swich, i don't hate, i even made your wife chuckle
When i told her the way you lose grip with them white knuckles
Your so full of shit, the fanbase supportin' your hype buckles
I don't get the attitude, it's like you been with the mob
But it's no sweat to my brow, cuz whoa's gonna finish the job
sketch3
09-23-2006, 07:54 PM
omg i was soo stoned wen i wrote that i just red it back,''ur girl mamma'' lol. nice stuff asen
Lateness
09-23-2006, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 23 2006, 01:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 23 2006, 01:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Sep 23 2006, 09:48 AM
I'm a mistake in the matrix a brilliant glitch
Cage - Movies for the blind (Teenage Death)
dont try to pull fast ones
The Proof (http://www.lyricsondemand.com/c/cagelyrics/teenagedeathlyrics.html) [/b][/quote]
dude, i've never heard that song
Cage got that from "a glitch in the matrix" in the movie the matrix
TalibKweli
09-23-2006, 09:03 PM
never heard it yet you used the same words but switched them around
TalibKweli
09-23-2006, 09:06 PM
Originally posted by ASEN@Sep 23 2006, 06:17 PM
Swich, i don't hate, i even made your wife chuckle
When i told her the way you lose grip with them white knuckles
Your so full of shit, the fanbase supportin' your hype buckles
this right here
this is the shit im talkin about
props to my boy asen
before yall know it, we just might take over the 514/450
swich
09-23-2006, 11:26 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 22 2006, 09:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 22 2006, 09:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Sep 22 2006, 04:05 PM
13 aint all i got but its all i need/
13 hits of weed and ill make u bleed/
13 times i fucked your mom and she still love me/
13 is my luckies number u fake ass G/
my mind is equivelent to the dictionary/
spit shit so sick some claim its scary/
ya mom needs to clip her slit cuz that shits hairy/
i bet now your feelin weary and a bit dazed/
im smokin the competition so call me purple haze/
the only days i get blazed is when i get paid/
thats 7 days a week bitch, the same days i get laid/
and u havent had pussy since the mutha fucker had u/
13 bars again bitch. and i still managed to beat u...
:lol: are you for real?
you take two words and make them rhyme
might aswell quit now cause your wasting my time
13 hits of weed, nickel bag or a dime?
not that it matters much, that aint a crime
but when it comes to being a bitch your mine
and when it comes to spiting true lyrics, im fine
and when it comes to gats and clips your lyin'
your fake ass chain is the only thing that makes ya shine
this is the last time i respond, so take my raps and print it
cause i just ruined your sorry ass in under a minute
*come back at me when you have real shit and real verses, cause your shit aint even worth responding to,i f you wanna go anywhere well first off it isnt over the net, and second of all you should hang up your skills in a closet cause you dont wanna let that shit seep out*
peace
PS- keep my name out of your mouth [/b][/quote]
i was just doin this shit for fun...why do u gotta start talkin shit?
swich
09-23-2006, 11:38 PM
all yall bitches gotta gimme some time/
i ran through the verses and there wak next to mine/
whoa talk so much shit he walkin around with a roll a paper/
and first things first i aint tryna get attention/
but i stand out liek a pimp at a comek book convention/
i got a pistol left that im waiten to trade for crystal meth/
whoa dont wanna nother round cuz he knoe u cant beat the best/
if yall bitches dont liek the shit that ya hearin/
then blow me till ya lipstick smearin and i can see my dick dissapearin/
hey fuck whoa as a matter of fact/
ill put a fuckin trojan on the barrel and let ya suck on that...
swich
09-24-2006, 12:25 AM
i been through the deepest toubles and revelations/
chillen at trane stations during my probation/
a picture perfect life is far from my temptation/
my mind is set on depression and hesitation/
i keep pacein as my mind is racin/
it seems the better side of me is in the contemplation/
of suicide and homicide so now im gettin worried/
im leavin this earth in a hurry and gettin burried/
when things go bad instead of gettin mad/
a take out my blade and cut for all the things i never had/
like money and power love and some friends/
i verbalize with my clips and bullets but its only pretend/
even the voices in my head are sayin im crazy/
so i chill with mary jane till my vision is hazy/
im blazin, its amazin how much you can grow/
when ya associations turn from ya friends to ya foes/
so now my friends are my flows, bud and the coke/
liquore in my belly is the best i suppose/
so what happens when ya lose all ya hope/
well just put the gun down ya throat/
and let the blunt and the smoke/
ease the fear of suicide as ya writen a note to let ya family know/
that life was a bitch but now ya really got to go....
swich
09-24-2006, 01:35 AM
as i child i told tales of seein dark entities/
these soul haunters tryna get into me/
lit fires in my room and watched the flames flicker/
while i held my best friends sister, shook and stuck the knife in her/
im a life sinner walkin through allys with spirits in back of me/
taunting and screaming while the police is after me/
crazy? my doctor said that i had to be/
the females in my life are nuthin but bad to me/
tryd the impossible but love was too far/
she left me for the guy with the shiny new car/
now i sit alone in the dark and do lines/
the prison in my mind is makin me do time/
new rhymes keep me level headed and stable/
but for how long will i really be able....
sketch3
09-24-2006, 09:34 AM
dark entities,swich no 1 cares bout ur pointless idieosincressys,
ur not busdriver,so 4 u forever isnt tempory.
ok swich no beef.i really dont take this seriously and i no its wack.so please theres no need to telll me also no beef i just thought i would make entity ryme
Alchohlics_Anonymous
09-24-2006, 12:06 PM
Swich those last couples were much better than your previous ones. But Woah still rocks it.
TalibKweli
09-24-2006, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by Alchohlics_Anonymous@Sep 24 2006, 11:06 AM
Swich those last couples were much better than your previous ones. But Whoa still rocks it.
B) :wub:
my and AA be smugglin cigarettes
swich
09-24-2006, 03:18 PM
i remember runnin from the police with the weed in my chest/
the coke drops and now my hearts about to beat out my chest/
went home late and hoped that shed be undressed/
went in bed and begin to caress/
soft curves and crevases my touch love to linger/
wont go no further than the exploration with my fingers/
next day is payday so im feelin alright/
went to the local music store and bought me a mic/
the verses poured out like a stream in my mind/
my only revelation had become my rhymes/
late nights of writin till my head was a mess/
but nothin could compare to my other state of stress/
caused by a girl from illinois, just her voice/
sent me in a state of complexion/
feelins i never had so i couldnt face rejection/
tried to be with her but her heart was taken/
by a stupid mother fucker who was way over rated/
i persisted and bought gifts that emptyed my dollars/
she still didnt want the love i had to offer/
so depressed and neglected i became an alcoholic/
and walked around with white and a blade in my wallet/
i got worse and she ended up marryin the man/
she dropped out of school and i couldnt understand/
god turned his back on me the man with no hope/
no my life is dedicated to the mic and the dope....
TalibKweli
09-24-2006, 03:28 PM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/6228/horsehw1.jpg
no comment
swich
09-24-2006, 04:52 PM
damn whoa.....ur fuckin ugly!
Alchohlics_Anonymous
09-24-2006, 06:31 PM
I think hes kinda cute...
TalibKweli
09-24-2006, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 24 2006, 03:52 PM
damn whoa.....ur fuckin ugly!
after seeing the pic of your beach whaled bitch i would consider myself quite handsome http://myspace-667.vo.llnwd.net/00998/76/62/998522667_l.jpg
the pic speaks for itself
sketch3
09-24-2006, 07:32 PM
ahhha i laffed soo hard wen i saw this
What Happened to the Letters?
09-24-2006, 09:35 PM
***** im the real g
raised om these streets
of this eastern city
as a baby i was rough
tougher than you *****
i was born in fistcuffs
my rhymes are shitty
and my look is sad
but my life is witty
and my addictions bad
these pills are all thats left for me
to breathe
to see the next day freely
they make it easy
and now i sit here
and type away
as these words flow through
and i know they sound gay
but i dont care
casue its what i say
when im on these pills
and these chills are fading
what did i even say here
i dont know its not too clear
you ask why i do these things
well my mother doesnt love me
and my friends have all left me
to die in fear
in my own criptic line of fire
as my heart grows drier
fading and flaking away
my lfie is torubled but nto today
hahaha what!!!
swich
09-25-2006, 02:06 AM
ahhaah whoa...
u know shes hott bitch..and she's sure finer than anything ur ugly ass could pull...
lemme see a pic of your chik then...and dont fuckin google it pussy.
explosivo_420
09-25-2006, 02:10 AM
just tryin out my new sig complements of havoc ?
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 07:32 AM
Originally posted by swich@Sep 25 2006, 01:06 AM
ahhaah whoa...
u know shes hott bitch..and she's sure finer than anything ur ugly ass could pull...
lemme see a pic of your chik then...and dont fuckin google it pussy.
i googled shamu, and i found a pic of your girl
sup with that?
i dont have a girl, so why would i google up something to make you happy, and if i did, i wouldnt post a pic of my girl on this site
dont need people shooting off knuckle children while staring at a pic of my girl
sketch3
09-25-2006, 12:06 PM
haaaaaa shamu
nerdx
09-25-2006, 12:57 PM
i know im not up to par with you cats
but im ganna try and spit a quick rap
my shit aint the best belive me, i know that
but you talkin shit like you are the best
but really your just like all of the rest
a dude that boasts and beats on his chest
hell yeah you know what your sayin
and i come here some might think im playin
think your a hardass how you somke maryjane
when in all reality your a toy like me
but at least im not part of the crew-still free
give it some time and soon you will see
that all you wanna do is be like me.
im trying.
Bruce_1nR
09-25-2006, 01:17 PM
Fuck you wheat pastin pussys, stencil sprayin sissys,
get with the real shit, killin all citys!
Killin all crews, walls, freights and hoes,
rockin rusto til the day I goes, but hold...please wait applause,
for the fact that its true, Se4 is ya boss!
Droppin bombs on freights, walls, holdin these balls like ya girlfriends drawz
Killin these kids like jacko smokin wacko,
I attack your throat and leave you without a cackle
fuck this, I give up...
peace
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 01:35 PM
Damn, only Asen and myself burnin shit up
Bruce_1nR
09-25-2006, 01:40 PM
yeah bitches, 100 posts
who got the most?
...that was just spam for 100 posts...congrats to trac for also achevin 100 posts....yeah buddy
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 01:47 PM
take your chit chat elsewhere
nerdx
09-25-2006, 02:13 PM
yo whoa, can i get some feedback on my lines
Well, you could slip in some metaphors every once in a while, a little colour never hurt anyone
Plus all you're doin is relating to whats happening here and now, if we all did that, this thread would suck, even more so than now
Take example, but DON'T BITE from more skilled mc's who pack a punch and a fair bit of wit too.
Please remember that this isn't a serious thread, and petty beef is unwarranted, as well as unnecessary.
If you need to vent, go duke it out with some homeless guy. here, we just flex words.
(that goes to whoa and swich more than anybody else)
nerdx
09-25-2006, 02:32 PM
thanks a lot yo.
swich
09-25-2006, 05:10 PM
Originally posted by ASEN@Sep 25 2006, 01:21 PM
Please remember that this isn't a serious thread, and petty beef is unwarranted, as well as unnecessary.
If you need to vent, go duke it out with some homeless guy. here, we just flex words.
(that goes to whoa and swich more than anybody else)
yeah thats true...
a lil keystyle cuz im bored...
i get so much titties im thinkin bout wearin a mens bra/
my wallets so fat it look like ana nicole smith b4 trim spa/
the ice is appealin, got these bitches mesmorized/
so many hoes id have to have 100 gigs to get there names memorized/
im chasin bitches down with a hack saw like we was tom and jerry/
sometimes these hoes are liek the exorcist, now that shits scary/
i got more white than a date with a redneck/
no disrespect but i leave ya girls bed wet/
when i see 5-0 ima ghost and i aint even dead yet...
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 05:22 PM
yah aint nobody takin this serious, i mean i got under swich's skin a lil with his girl n all but i aint hatin or anything
freestylin live is thrillin, i love it
here its like you drop some ill bars and nobody goes OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH or laughs, so it sucks
whoa needs props to advance to the next level :lol: jk
anyways keep at it
nerdx
09-25-2006, 05:27 PM
haha, not really lookin for props just some feedback.
i got some from asen so im ganna keep workin at it.
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 05:31 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Sep 25 2006, 01:13 PM
yo whoa, can i get some feedback on my lines
you still need some work, like asen said.....need to get a deeper vocabulary
cause its easy to rhyme 3,4 or 5 letter words
its hard to explain, ''keystylin'' is far from being a real sypher, i mean sometimes id be at the bus stop or wherever and i just drop bars, its nice when other's get involved, beatboxin and you just created a mini sypher
i ve done some freestyles on live mics and it isnt has easy as i thought it would be
all the pressure cause people are lookin at you, your opponent staring you down
so its more stressful
concentrate, especially when its keystylin, nobody is waiting for a reply, so you can take the time to think, rhyme in your head, punch lines, extensive bars and of course some metaphors
you need to check out some shit from supernatural
type it up on youtube, this guy is a pro when it comes to freestylin, no writtens, from the heart.....one of the best out there
keep at it
peace
MainEvent
09-25-2006, 06:04 PM
feelin the anna nicole smith line.
i had a couple bars in my head today, so imma put em down.
Ayo, haven't written in a while but I'll drop a little key
My melodic lyrics induce euphoric states like THC
Or shit gets you high strung like mass amounts of cocaine
Cause sometimes I even blow my own mind like Kurt Cobain
Taking mainstream shit and dicing it up with precise incisions
I only see underground, so I guess I got tunnel vision
Proclaiming to bomb walls, not impoverished third world nations
Shoot that bunny between his eyes to end imperalist domination
If you wanna see some real MCing, shoot over to Raptism.com
This was the first of many, prefecting the science on how to bomb
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 06:24 PM
that was nice
i just went to that site
i saw the Juvenille pic
so i got my ass out there quick
MainEvent
09-25-2006, 06:28 PM
the admins bad taste in music doesnt reflect on the general user base.
TalibKweli
09-25-2006, 06:43 PM
but Juvenille is a fesant
i ll check it out no doubt
MainEvent
09-25-2006, 08:05 PM
another verse i keyed up. took me a little longer, kinda hit a writers block in the middle of it.
Striking with my Immortal Technique cause my style is unkillable
Regaining my poetic precision with each freestyled syllable
Skills are luster embellished, blessing mics without any doubt
My lyrical Arsenal will gun you down in any overtime shootout
Aerosol scorches walls like pieces from Dondi and Seen
I'll batter you til you're black and blue like the site's color scheme
Verbal revolutionary vocalizing my opposition via hip hop rhymes
Cause the US has been bombing cities longer than Cope2 and JA combined
Executive branch trying to rationalize torture to constituents
Occupy D.C. to show them the true meaning of "Capital Punishment"
I'm tired of cats only spitting about their guns, bling, and hoes
Feelin like Black Rob cause I'm spittin rhymes "like Whoa!"
nerdx
09-25-2006, 08:36 PM
that was good man.
liked both of thoes.
somethin i was thiking of eairlyer.
as you write your lines down, im takin a look
your stuffs wack like readding a picture book
when i read your shit I see lines not words
every now and then theres a noun or verb
MainEvent
09-25-2006, 08:58 PM
thanks man, appreciate that.
TalibKweli
09-26-2006, 12:50 PM
that was pretty good MainEvent
''I'm tired of cats only spitting about their guns, bling, and hoes'' very true
keep it real
peace
swich
09-26-2006, 06:32 PM
i spit about guns, bling and hoes cuz thats all i know/
in this life of sin im known to get blown/
comin out with AK's , boddies droppin like the coke on my pay day/
we slay from far away so call it a slay day/
hostages in my closet i feed um wheat bread/
watch um shake and shiver, BANG and now he dead/
the blood spilling is thrilling and gives me pleasure/
so many occult cults i reside in the treaure no man can measure/
resistance is persistant among many of my victums/
and as far as hoes go...i just bend um over and dick um....
Ares_23us
09-27-2006, 09:32 AM
I rip and rhyme
i rhyme and i rip
this is the way dilon spits
TalibKweli
09-27-2006, 09:43 AM
the best of all time
dilon, dilon, dilon, dilon and dilon
cause i spit hot fire
explosivo_420
09-28-2006, 01:19 PM
hot fire for when your hearts in desire
>SM!7K<
09-28-2006, 01:31 PM
This desire to not feel like a lier
dont be a pussy like jewish kyle
DOC and ARU coming out
Comming out with killer style
swich
09-28-2006, 06:22 PM
commin out with killer style/
freestlyle wild for a while/
and retain the fame i was dubbed with as a child/
i know no bounds so i keep pushin on/
cherish every moment b4 swich is gone...
Alchohlics_Anonymous
09-28-2006, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by >SM!7K<@Sep 28 2006, 12:31 PM
This desire to not feel like a lier
dont be a pussy like jewish kyle
DOC and ARU coming out
Comming out with killer style
Coming out of the closet!!!! Ohhhhh!!!!
...... :unsure:
*Door squeeks and out walks AA*
"Yeah I finally came out guys...its cool though...."
Lateness
09-29-2006, 12:25 AM
WHOA, this is so u shut up!!!!!
So I guess it's on to me/
He's probably not even black, still a talib wannabe/
I'll give you one percent of respect a little solace see/
Your girl goes down under on me like a wallabe/
You're a one hit wonder like monagamy/
You're not to be stopping me like a broken octagon on streets/
So cut it out like a labotomy now you can't talk to me/
I hate your father G cause now you walk the earth constantly/
The worst day was your first birth you wordsworth/
Take my rhymes and run em through a word search you nerd jerk/
Your boyfriend you're probably into sex for him/
Your whole life revolves around an internet forum/
You suck dicks you dumb bitch/
You want a threesome with your mum's tits and some young kids/
Stop saying I'm biting, you're really gone bitch/
The only thing you've look up more than lyrics is kiddie porn pics/
So go home WHOA, I aint' impressed with you fag/
The last thing we need in here is another kid dressing in drag/
Go get some krylon to get your style on/
I bomb at 2 AM every day cause I'm a fucking time bomb/
I got a nice flow you're just a type "O"/
And my name ain't Black Rob So I don't "Like WHOA"/
The New King is Here
What were you doin the second before you wrote that?
I bet it involved a walkman, paper, a pencil, and a tote bag
I never seen your name, yet i still find time for this
Oh wait, you co-authored ''How to write rhymes for kids''
Hey moron, earth to Late! better turn n' face facts
Won't learn your place? okay, here's a curb to face slap
And i ain't gotta check to trace that a page back you were laid flat
By me n' whoa, so face it Lateness, your games wack
I wouldn't count on you flexin' verbs for dollar bets
And the real Talib would spit on that mess you call a text
YOU the new king? Lie down, see i'm here to help herbs
Make you realize that Cage's rhymes ain't a self-serve
YOU schoolin' whoa, is like ME preachin' the apostle
ME losing this battle to YOU is like mini-ME bein' colossal
So FUCK whoa, cuz your brand new opponent is me
Send your line-bitin' ass right back to roamin' the streets
sketch3
09-29-2006, 09:10 PM
the streets,im spitin fire an u run from the heat,
u cant stand the heat in hells kitchen,well,stop bitching,
cuss ull never b ready 4 the lyrical eleite,
my finger aint on the trigger,its not itching,
im not physacly violent,and i like to keep peace,
but if clash with this tyten,i can no longer stay silent,
ill stab u with posidens trident,like greek mytholighy,
and ur chatin more shit than a folower of scientology,
iv got an endless interlect,but i digress,dont get depressed,
cuss ur wack asss throw got etched,dunno hu dun it,
but all the weed they was bunin,i asume it was sketch
TalibKweli
09-29-2006, 10:01 PM
Originally posted by Lateness@Sep 28 2006, 11:25 PM
WHOA, this is so u shut up!!!!!
So I guess it's on to me/
He's probably not even black, still a talib wannabe/
I'll give you one percent of respect a little solace see/
Your girl goes down under on me like a wallabe/
You're a one hit wonder like monagamy/
You're not to be stopping me like a broken octagon on streets/
So cut it out like a labotomy now you can't talk to me/
I hate your father G cause now you walk the earth constantly/
The worst day was your first birth you wordsworth/
Take my rhymes and run em through a word search you nerd jerk/
Your boyfriend you're probably into sex for him/
Your whole life revolves around an internet forum/
You suck dicks you dumb bitch/
You want a threesome with your mum's tits and some young kids/
Stop saying I'm biting, you're really gone bitch/
The only thing you've look up more than lyrics is kiddie porn pics/
So go home WHOA, I aint' impressed with you fag/
The last thing we need in here is another kid dressing in drag/
Go get some krylon to get your style on/
I bomb at 2 AM every day cause I'm a fucking time bomb/
I got a nice flow you're just a type "O"/
And my name ain't Black Rob So I don't "Like WHOA"/
The New King is Here
:lol:
are you fuckin serious? do you even know the fuck a metaphor is, let alone ''keystylin''
took you long enough to dare mention my name
the new king is here, so you claim
i aint stressin, its not like im all about fame
but when it comes to this shit i control the game
you're a fake, use writtens and claim them as spittens
i ll just steal them from you and fry that shit up like chinese kittens
my life revolves around this site, dont push your luck
you're nothing but a degenerate wannabe cock riding fuck
what? you suck? that's a fact
more overated then anthrax during the al qaida attacks
get up on stage. show them what you got
you'll be so shook the only shit you'd spit is your bile and snot
you fuckin twat, dont try to be something your not
took me 30 seconds to find your girls fuckin g-spot
see what i mean, i spit true shit, i dont beat around no bushes
unless i eat your girl out and stick my dick in and she pushes
her mom walks in and starts to scream
WHERE'S LATENESS, AND WHO IS THIS FIEND
glad to meet you misses smith, my name is whoa
i was busy with your daughter, cause, well...she's a cheap hoe
deepthroat you know, spanish fly action
i wore my work boots to bed to get better traction
im the sexual rapper, i spit more then peter north
i just raped your mind with verbal intercourse
seriously......why the fuck would you even think of respondin to Asen or Myself
thats like signing your will....... i dont wanna act tough or sound smart.....but me and Asen had this thread on lock FROM THE START
i was actually feeling the last text from lateness a lot
hope this goes on and on
swich
09-30-2006, 02:52 AM
im in a new catagory of keystylers/
i spit fire, and lite blunts with a one liner/
these females these days is gold miners/
diggers who only fuck with *****s who got 6 figgas(figures)/
so i barrel um and pull triggas, teach um a lesson/
keep arms, legs, and heads in my closet so im limb stressin/
these fags ive been stretchin look like a peace of taffy/
when i beef with enemies its like givin AK's to bugs and daffy/
but on this show no one laughin, i keep my barrels blastin/
hold up traffic with a 45 to my head as the poice askin/
why kill yourself when you still have you health?/
cuz i have a heart filled with hate and my consiounce killed itself...
sketch3
09-30-2006, 10:45 AM
lol im soo bad no one ever replies to my stuff
MainEvent
09-30-2006, 06:12 PM
sketch, work on your spelling or use spell check.
swich
09-30-2006, 08:52 PM
drip goes the blood drops red to the floor/
hip to the metal one shot then the floor/
body lie dead man spirit come out/
body stay shook and my pain come out/
sex to the female and she screame out/
1 hour later and my cream commin out/
brake to the heart and bullet to the head/
bang to the skull then swich lie dead...
yeah i know that was pretty weird but it was just a new style i tried...
TalibKweli
09-30-2006, 09:01 PM
used floor twice
out 4 times
dont try this at home
stick to your old stuff, its cool when you try other ways to write but that was just horrible (im not hating on you, i made it clear, this shit is strictly freestylin)
peace
MainEvent
09-30-2006, 10:03 PM
swich, if you are going to have the same word at the end of the bar in two consecutive bars, then you need to rhyme the word before it. such as this
Original
body lie dead man spirit come out/
body stay shook and my pain come out/
Modified
the body lie dead man spirit come out/
saw the sheer horror in his eyes when I pulled the gun out/
sketch3
10-01-2006, 08:58 AM
thank u for the advice mainevent but im deslexic(i cant even spell my dissorder)and i only try and to ryme wen high so i dnt take it seriouly.
MainEvent
10-01-2006, 10:24 PM
lol gotcha. my bad
swich
10-02-2006, 02:01 AM
old style...since the other wasnt well recieved...but yeah yall were right.
im losin brain cells from drinkin too much/
but its alright cuz i never liked thinkin to much/
grip the clutch and swerve fast, enimies on my ass/
a black lac with black gats out the barrel they blast/
bitches always ask what happened when i come home bloody/
so i slap her in the head, i dont answer to nobody/
want me to show mercy, no buddy/
did he stand a chance? no but he.../
got shot in the head and got my shoes bloody/
females these days all look slutty/
scared to fuck cuz they boobs puddy/
roll through cemetaries in storms so i cruise muddy...
Lateness
10-04-2006, 01:52 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Sep 29 2006, 09:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Sep 29 2006, 09:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Sep 28 2006, 11:25 PM
WHOA, this is so u shut up!!!!!
So I guess it's on to me/
He's probably not even black, still a talib wannabe/
I'll give you one percent of respect a little solace see/
Your girl goes down under on me like a wallabe/
You're a one hit wonder like monagamy/
You're not to be stopping me like a broken octagon on streets/
So cut it out like a labotomy now you can't talk to me/
I hate your father G cause now you walk the earth constantly/
The worst day was your first birth you wordsworth/
Take my rhymes and run em through a word search you nerd jerk/
Your boyfriend you're probably into sex for him/
Your whole life revolves around an internet forum/
You suck dicks you dumb bitch/
You want a threesome with your mum's tits and some young kids/
Stop saying I'm biting, you're really gone bitch/
The only thing you've look up more than lyrics is kiddie porn pics/
So go home WHOA, I aint' impressed with you fag/
The last thing we need in here is another kid dressing in drag/
Go get some krylon to get your style on/
I bomb at 2 AM every day cause I'm a fucking time bomb/
I got a nice flow you're just a type "O"/
And my name ain't Black Rob So I don't "Like WHOA"/
The New King is Here
:lol:
are you fuckin serious? do you even know the fuck a metaphor is, let alone ''keystylin''
took you long enough to dare mention my name
the new king is here, so you claim
i aint stressin, its not like im all about fame
but when it comes to this shit i control the game
you're a fake, use writtens and claim them as spittens
i ll just steal them from you and fry that shit up like chinese kittens
my life revolves around this site, dont push your luck
you're nothing but a degenerate wannabe cock riding fuck
what? you suck? that's a fact
more overated then anthrax during the al qaida attacks
get up on stage. show them what you got
you'll be so shook the only shit you'd spit is your bile and snot
you fuckin twat, dont try to be something your not
took me 30 seconds to find your girls fuckin g-spot
see what i mean, i spit true shit, i dont beat around no bushes
unless i eat your girl out and stick my dick in and she pushes
her mom walks in and starts to scream
WHERE'S LATENESS, AND WHO IS THIS FIEND
glad to meet you misses smith, my name is whoa
i was busy with your daughter, cause, well...she's a cheap hoe
deepthroat you know, spanish fly action
i wore my work boots to bed to get better traction
im the sexual rapper, i spit more then peter north
i just raped your mind with verbal intercourse
seriously......why the fuck would you even think of respondin to Asen or Myself
thats like signing your will....... i dont wanna act tough or sound smart.....but me and Asen had this thread on lock FROM THE START [/b][/quote]
WHOA, you little bitch I'm not signin my will/
You're just upset and mad because my rhymin is ill/
And I don't claim shit dawg and don't lie I rap all truth/
You should come back after you get your last adult tooth/
Stay in your bed and sleep cause Lateness is too scary/
Don't need cash for my teeth I got great head from the tooth fairy/
I'm a dro head and I need sess dude/
Only game you control is your PS 2/
I'm a PS 55 my hits be live/
I rip these supposed nifty guys and make em take up knitting twines/
You fuck my girl? That's a trite, another white lie/
You couldn't find a G spot if your crack dealer was a nice guy/
And I'm not breaking bread till I got a vacant head/
I hope this shit goes on and on like ASEN said/
I'm ripping it right I'm dissin your wife/
You probably wish Peter North's dick was your mic/
Shit, WOAH I eat emcees another competitors through/
And when all's said and done his dick spits better than you/
I'm glad you admitted this forum's your life/
In 10 years I'll be explorin your wife at four in the night/
Straight up your rappin's the worse/
You know you rap whack when you have to talk shit before and after your verse/
Unbreakable
10-04-2006, 01:56 PM
he wrote that on September 29th
today is October 4th
why did it take 6 days to respond?
faggot
Whoa owns all of you
holy shit lateness.... i love it. regardless of how long that took.
take a stab at me partner
TalibKweli
10-04-2006, 02:23 PM
Originally posted by Lateness@Oct 4 2006, 12:52 PM
WHOA, you little bitch I'm not signin my will/
You're just upset and mad because my rhymin is ill/
And I don't claim shit dawg and don't lie I rap all truth/
You should come back after you get your last adult tooth/
Stay in your bed and sleep cause Lateness is too scary/
Don't need cash for my teeth I got great head from the tooth fairy/
I'm a dro head and I need sess dude/
Only game you control is your PS 2/
I'm a PS 55 my hits be live/
I rip these supposed nifty guys and make em take up knitting twines/
You fuck my girl? That's a trite, another white lie/
You couldn't find a G spot if your crack dealer was a nice guy/
And I'm not breaking bread till I got a vacant head/
I hope this shit goes on and on like ASEN said/
I'm ripping it right I'm dissin your wife/
You probably wish Peter North's dick was your mic/
Shit, WOAH I eat emcees another competitors through/
And when all's said and done his dick spits better than you/
I'm glad you admitted this forum's your life/
In 10 years I'll be explorin your wife at four in the night/
Straight up your rappin's the worse/
You know you rap whack when you have to talk shit before and after your verse/
alright faggot, dont try and act smart
you knew i owned you from the very start
i got to admit, you gave it time and some heart
but like the overpasses in laval, you fell apart
you aint got skills so stop tryin to compete
you build your vocabulary by watching seasme street
big bird and elmo they run with your crew?
i tickled that lil guy and he spits better then you
i aint got enough time to respond to this
but prepare your sorry ass for a quality diss
Lateness
10-04-2006, 02:33 PM
Originally posted by Unbreakable@Oct 4 2006, 12:56 PM
he wrote that on September 29th
today is October 4th
why did it take 6 days to respond?
faggot
Whoa owns all of you
Here's another one for you WHOA dick riders/
I grow slick I'm the known so quick rhymer/
You're the faggot your mom and dad were makin you wrong/
I actually have a life that's why I took 6 days to respond/
Actually I was on six lick my dick dates with your mom/
She rides the prick great on a mix tape in a thong/
You be frail kid I detail this/
Only thing WHOA owns is the largests collection of shemale vids/
ASEN so far you the only one in here with a brain/
But I'll still leave you bloody in the rain crying for mummy in some pain/
You ain't UNBREAKABLE, soft like a bunch of cute kittens/
Cause you're Samuel L. and I'm Bruce Willis/
TalibKweli
10-04-2006, 02:46 PM
:lol:
didnt your mom every teach you
when you aint got anything good to say, dont say nothin
yah i got dickriders, i got support
the only support you'll ever get is for your male tits ya fat ass
fuck outta here amateur
Lateness
10-04-2006, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Oct 4 2006, 01:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Oct 4 2006, 01:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Oct 4 2006, 12:52 PM
WHOA, you little bitch I'm not signin my will/
You're just upset and mad because my rhymin is ill/
And I don't claim shit dawg and don't lie I rap all truth/
You should come back after you get your last adult tooth/
Stay in your bed and sleep cause Lateness is too scary/
Don't need cash for my teeth I got great head from the tooth fairy/
I'm a dro head and I need sess dude/
Only game you control is your PS 2/
I'm a PS 55 my hits be live/
I rip these supposed nifty guys and make em take up knitting twines/
You fuck my girl? That's a trite, another white lie/
You couldn't find a G spot if your crack dealer was a nice guy/
And I'm not breaking bread till I got a vacant head/
I hope this shit goes on and on like ASEN said/
I'm ripping it right I'm dissin your wife/
You probably wish Peter North's dick was your mic/
Shit, WOAH I eat emcees another competitors through/
And when all's said and done his dick spits better than you/
I'm glad you admitted this forum's your life/
In 10 years I'll be explorin your wife at four in the night/
Straight up your rappin's the worse/
You know you rap whack when you have to talk shit before and after your verse/
alright faggot, dont try and act smart
you knew i owned you from the very start
i got to admit, you gave it time and some heart
but like the overpasses in laval, you fell apart
you aint got skills so stop tryin to compete
you build your vocabulary by watching seasme street
big bird and elmo they run with your crew?
i tickled that lil guy and he spits better then you
i aint got enough time to respond to this
but prepare your sorry ass for a quality diss [/b][/quote]
You get caught and served for all your faulty killable lines/
For once in your life try using some multi syllable rhymes/
I need to sell quick you need to spell Q U I T/
You're from Quebec so you're probly on some ESL shit/
I'm ripping the toughest dissing your subjects/
I can't believe you just talked about ticklin muppets/
I can smell you from here sort of smells like whack vapour/
Write your lines on graph paper to make your raps straighter/
Cause you sound like you enjoy dicks in your bum/
My decisions to gun you down until my diction is done/
Aint no battle verses that were spit on the "Quality" disk/
so Kweli how you gonna make a "Quality" diss/
See I can write for every situation in a minute or two/
And this ain't mortal kombat but I'mma still finish this dude/
That's it, you're through, I suggest you come with your best verse/
You think you're better than me but you'd be scared to check with the experts/
This is a death curse and I'm the devil I'm Satan/
I'm done with WHOA it's time to move on disassembling Asen/
TalibKweli
10-04-2006, 03:59 PM
Originally posted by Lateness@Oct 4 2006, 01:58 PM
You get caught and served for all your faulty killable lines/
For once in your life try using some multi syllable rhymes/
I need to sell quick you need to spell Q U I T/
You're from Quebec so you're probly on some ESL shit/
I'm ripping the toughest dissing your subjects/
I can't believe you just talked about ticklin muppets/
I can smell you from here sort of smells like whack vapour/
Write your lines on graph paper to make your raps straighter/
Cause you sound like you enjoy dicks in your bum/
My decisions to gun you down until my diction is done/
Aint no battle verses that were spit on the "Quality" disk/
so Kweli how you gonna make a "Quality" diss/
See I can write for every situation in a minute or two/
And this ain't mortal kombat but I'mma still finish this dude/
That's it, you're through, I suggest you come with your best verse/
You think you're better than me but you'd be scared to check with the experts/
This is a death curse and I'm the devil I'm Satan/
I'm done with WHOA it's time to move on disassembling Asen/
i aint sweating shit fool check my status
i spit eternaly like a breathing aparatus
i ve been doin this shit since i can remember
you joined this shit in september and YOU'RE STILL under pressure
constant blows that make your brain bleed and eyes water
bruise your kidneys and mentaly affect your unborn daughter
see kid, you bit off more then you can chew or swallow
spittin syllables that aint weigh shit cause they hollow
and so what if im from quebec, bitch you best respect
cause my french homeboy's can snap your neck when you least expect
want me to spit in english or french, you choose?
mais sa change rien parce que sa reste que ta mere s t une criss de bouze
see that move, you wont be able to stress it
cause you'll be exhausted by the time you disect it
bitch dont you see, you cant compare to me
the only lights that shine on you are from a christmas tree
i rhyme for free, open mic battles with wild emcees
girls on their knees giving out cd's while they beg us please
i try to keep my shit on the down low
but seems these days its harder to be an unsigned hype no?
you called me out, i replied, you dissed
i keep recording my sample cd's, you with your floppy disks
i got you pissed, you came at me with the best you got
but lights out bitch cause your time is not
i expect another challenge cause i know how you work
do what you gotta do with asen, i ll sit here with a smirk ;)
Lateness
10-05-2006, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Oct 4 2006, 02:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Oct 4 2006, 02:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Oct 4 2006, 01:58 PM
You get caught and served for all your faulty killable lines/
For once in your life try using some multi syllable rhymes/
I need to sell quick you need to spell Q U I T/
You're from Quebec so you're probly on some ESL shit/
I'm ripping the toughest dissing your subjects/
I can't believe you just talked about ticklin muppets/
I can smell you from here sort of smells like whack vapour/
Write your lines on graph paper to make your raps straighter/
Cause you sound like you enjoy dicks in your bum/
My decisions to gun you down until my diction is done/
Aint no battle verses that were spit on the "Quality" disk/
so Kweli how you gonna make a "Quality" diss/
See I can write for every situation in a minute or two/
And this ain't mortal kombat but I'mma still finish this dude/
That's it, you're through, I suggest you come with your best verse/
You think you're better than me but you'd be scared to check with the experts/
This is a death curse and I'm the devil I'm Satan/
I'm done with WHOA it's time to move on disassembling Asen/
i aint sweating shit fool check my status
i spit eternaly like a breathing aparatus
i ve been doin this shit since i can remember
you joined this shit in september and YOU'RE STILL under pressure
constant blows that make your brain bleed and eyes water
bruise your kidneys and mentaly affect your unborn daughter
see kid, you bit off more then you can chew or swallow
spittin syllables that aint weigh shit cause they hollow
and so what if im from quebec, bitch you best respect
cause my french homeboy's can snap your neck when you least expect
want me to spit in english or french, you choose?
mais sa change rien parce que sa reste que ta mere s t une criss de bouze
see that move, you wont be able to stress it
cause you'll be exhausted by the time you disect it
bitch dont you see, you cant compare to me
the only lights that shine on you are from a christmas tree
i rhyme for free, open mic battles with wild emcees
girls on their knees giving out cd's while they beg us please
i try to keep my shit on the down low
but seems these days its harder to be an unsigned hype no?
you called me out, i replied, you dissed
i keep recording my sample cd's, you with your floppy disks
i got you pissed, you came at me with the best you got
but lights out bitch cause your time is not
i expect another challenge cause i know how you work
do what you gotta do with asen, i ll sit here with a smirk ;) [/b][/quote]
I work with my hands, don't test the surgeon/
Disect your Francais? I took French Immersion/
I'm the best dispersing have you asking questions cursin/
Even with high blood pressure you can't stress this person/
I'll leave ASEN alone cause he seems to understand real/
You're a town fair, I'm big time, got the Wonderland feel/
I rip this track I'm sick like that/
Even my unborn daughter could kick your ass/
I fuck girls of all types, the Don Juan on this track/
I ain't deaf but J'entends rien quand tu rap/
But I am def and you're fat without the PH/
You suck so much dick your jaw hurts and your knees ache/
Here you can have this mic as a keep sake/
You should free base my beat breaks cause I'm dope on each tape/
And I dont' need cash or money to prove I'm the best/
I need to be known as a guy who's influenced the rest/
I'll put two in your chest I'm ahead of my time/
How come all your rhymes always come at the end of your line/
And I always be dope just trying to get my style on/
Only thing under pressure is my can of krylon/
TalibKweli
10-05-2006, 06:05 PM
Originally posted by Lateness@Oct 5 2006, 03:34 PM
I work with my hands, don't test the surgeon/
Disect your Francais? I took French Immersion/
I'm the best dispersing have you asking questions cursin/
Even with high blood pressure you can't stress this person/
I'll leave ASEN alone cause he seems to understand real/
You're a town fair, I'm big time, got the Wonderland feel/
I rip this track I'm sick like that/
Even my unborn daughter could kick your ass/
I fuck girls of all types, the Don Juan on this track/
I ain't deaf but J'entends rien quand tu rap/
But I am def and you're fat without the PH/
You suck so much dick your jaw hurts and your knees ache/
Here you can have this mic as a keep sake/
You should free base my beat breaks cause I'm dope on each tape/
And I dont' need cash or money to prove I'm the best/
I need to be known as a guy who's influenced the rest/
I'll put two in your chest I'm ahead of my time/
How come all your rhymes always come at the end of your line/
And I always be dope just trying to get my style on/
Only thing under pressure is my can of krylon/
you took french imersion, that means you should be smart
check the chart, dont start with an emcee that can tear you apart
ill dice you up and feed you to the haters
or better yet bury you with erwin and feed you to the gators
you need to recycle my rhymes to test my flow
that's kinda like sniffing heroin and shooting blow
it doesnt make sense, that shit isnt right, take some time to think
you aint playin your cards right, you aint bright, your waisting your own time
you cant beat a royal flush with a three of a kind
stupid, i ll get you lifted off my spittens
wouldnt wanna see you react when i toss in some writtens
you aint def, mais tu t entend right, c ca ta dit?
tu vien te repeter, branche toi mon sti
yah right, dont even touch that language
cause i ll cook you up with fried eggs and make you into a sandwhich
stuck between 2 frenchman with you in the middle
your brittle, you can either learn alot from me or a little
you did learn some stuff, i cant go against that
you learnt that its okay to steal my verses and still have the nerve to call me wack
waste of sperm, your dad never heard of lubiderm cream?
probably concided your sorry ass at the age of 16
i see this shit is gettin to be more and more intense
cause im always on the offense and you on the defense
yada yada yada i gotta split
so i ll catch up to you soon ya greedy son of a bitch
Unbreakable
10-05-2006, 06:09 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Oct 5 2006, 05:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Oct 5 2006, 05:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Oct 5 2006, 03:34 PM
I work with my hands, don't test the surgeon/
Disect your Francais? I took French Immersion/
I'm the best dispersing have you asking questions cursin/
Even with high blood pressure you can't stress this person/
I'll leave ASEN alone cause he seems to understand real/
You're a town fair, I'm big time, got the Wonderland feel/
I rip this track I'm sick like that/
Even my unborn daughter could kick your ass/
I fuck girls of all types, the Don Juan on this track/
I ain't deaf but J'entends rien quand tu rap/
But I am def and you're fat without the PH/
You suck so much dick your jaw hurts and your knees ache/
Here you can have this mic as a keep sake/
You should free base my beat breaks cause I'm dope on each tape/
And I dont' need cash or money to prove I'm the best/
I need to be known as a guy who's influenced the rest/
I'll put two in your chest I'm ahead of my time/
How come all your rhymes always come at the end of your line/
And I always be dope just trying to get my style on/
Only thing under pressure is my can of krylon/
you took french imersion, that means you should be smart
check the chart, dont start with an emcee that can tear you apart
ill dice you up and feed you to the haters
or better yet bury you with erwin and feed you to the gators
you need to recycle my rhymes to test my flow
that's kinda like sniffing heroin and shooting blow
it doesnt make sense, that shit isnt right, take some time to think
you aint playin your cards right, you aint bright, your waisting your own time
you cant beat a royal flush with a three of a kind
stupid, i ll get you lifted off my spittens
wouldnt wanna see you react when i toss in some writtens
you aint def, mais tu t entend right, c ca ta dit?
tu vien te repeter, branche toi mon sti
yah right, dont even touch that language
cause i ll cook you up with fried eggs and make you into a sandwhich
stuck between 2 frenchman with you in the middle
your brittle, you can either learn alot from me or a little
you did learn some stuff, i cant go against that
you learnt that its okay to steal my verses and still have the nerve to call me wack
waste of sperm, your dad never heard of lubiderm cream?
probably concided your sorry ass at the age of 16
i see this shit is gettin to be more and more intense
cause im always on the offense and you on the defense
yada yada yada i gotta split
so i ll catch up to you soon ya greedy son of a bitch [/b][/quote]
roses are red
violets are blue
lateness tried to rhyme
but whoa destroyed you
:lol:
whoa burns all you
swich
10-05-2006, 07:49 PM
nah man...i think lateness took whoa out..
swich
10-06-2006, 03:39 AM
im chillen on the right side of a double homicide/
i freestyled, and wreked the mic at least ten hundred times/
got the dime? i smoke two 20's/
left the bank safe so damn empty/
these dumb ass females think they such a tease/
i fuck um with the retail and smash with tall T's/
all of these hoes got my 6 digits/
pullin up with candy paint drip drag drippin/
man we trigga clicken get a fuckin ticket/
see the show VIP status how im livin/
these bitches got no game unless they on the x-box/
i keep my brain cookin cuz i still chop rocks/
bout to go and pop locks and take all the money/
got the platnum swangin like im cash money/
these sluts are so funny, i spread um like butter/
rape um with a smirk, then do the same to they mother...
chyeah!
TalibKweli
10-06-2006, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by swich@Oct 6 2006, 02:39 AM
im chillen on the right side of a double homicide/
i freestyled, and wreked the mic at least ten hundred times/
got the dime? i smoke two 20's/
left the bank safe so damn empty/
these dumb ass females think they such a tease/
i fuck um with the retail and smash with tall T's/
all of these hoes got my 6 digits/
pullin up with candy paint drip drag drippin/
man we trigga clicken get a fuckin ticket/
see the show VIP status how im livin/
these bitches got no game unless they on the x-box/
i keep my brain cookin cuz i still chop rocks/
bout to go and pop locks and take all the money/
got the platnum swangin like im cash money/
these sluts are so funny, i spread um like butter/
rape um with a smirk, then do the same to they mother...
chyeah!
now i got a 2 on 1 battle up in this spot
im giggling like a school girl cause i got more pimples to pop
ya silly twat, tryin to be somethin you not
you guys are expired meat fuckin with the cream of the crop
you think not? i give it all i got, constantly rhymin cause i cant stop
this here is a sickness, and there is no cure
genetic emcees messin around with someone who is pure
give up the rap shit, cause you aint got no skills
i ve scene more talent from schitzo's poppin all kinds of pills
my shit kills, you just barely hurt
fuck tearin your beats apart, i ll rip your skin from under your shirt
little squirt, who you tryin to impress
the only shit you'll be spittin when im done is phlem from the holes in your chest
and no bullets were involved in that incident
fuckin a guilty plee bitches you know im always innocent
haha yah right, do the math right quick
unbreakable is on my balls and lateness doesnt seem to quit
swich comes in later and says i got dissed
did you actually think that would get me pissed?
think again my friend takes more then corny rhymes to affect me
im still flawless while you guys are falling apart like leparcy
tested me, you guys did a good job
yah i got a big ego, so what if im a fuckin snob
i eat emcees like you guys, like corn on the cob
im gonna wrap this up, cause im imagining your faces
full of acne, buck toothed rockin fuckin braces
you both nameless, you got alot to proove
so take your best shot bitch, make your move
swich
10-07-2006, 02:23 AM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Oct 6 2006, 09:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Oct 6 2006, 09:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Oct 6 2006, 02:39 AM
im chillen on the right side of a double homicide/
i freestyled, and wreked the mic at least ten hundred times/
got the dime? i smoke two 20's/
left the bank safe so damn empty/
these dumb ass females think they such a tease/
i fuck um with the retail and smash with tall T's/
all of these hoes got my 6 digits/
pullin up with candy paint drip drag drippin/
man we trigga clicken get a fuckin ticket/
see the show VIP status how im livin/
these bitches got no game unless they on the x-box/
i keep my brain cookin cuz i still chop rocks/
bout to go and pop locks and take all the money/
got the platnum swangin like im cash money/
these sluts are so funny, i spread um like butter/
rape um with a smirk, then do the same to they mother...
chyeah!
now i got a 2 on 1 battle up in this spot
im giggling like a school girl cause i got more pimples to pop
ya silly twat, tryin to be somethin you not
you guys are expired meat fuckin with the cream of the crop
you think not? i give it all i got, constantly rhymin cause i cant stop
this here is a sickness, and there is no cure
genetic emcees messin around with someone who is pure
give up the rap shit, cause you aint got no skills
i ve scene more talent from schitzo's poppin all kinds of pills
my shit kills, you just barely hurt
fuck tearin your beats apart, i ll rip your skin from under your shirt
little squirt, who you tryin to impress
the only shit you'll be spittin when im done is phlem from the holes in your chest
and no bullets were involved in that incident
fuckin a guilty plee bitches you know im always innocent
haha yah right, do the math right quick
unbreakable is on my balls and lateness doesnt seem to quit
swich comes in later and says i got dissed
did you actually think that would get me pissed?
think again my friend takes more then corny rhymes to affect me
im still flawless while you guys are falling apart like leparcy
tested me, you guys did a good job
yah i got a big ego, so what if im a fuckin snob
i eat emcees like you guys, like corn on the cob
im gonna wrap this up, cause im imagining your faces
full of acne, buck toothed rockin fuckin braces
you both nameless, you got alot to proove
so take your best shot bitch, make your move [/b][/quote]
this wak cat think he got skills like swich does/
cant be hard if ya gigglin just liek a bitch does/
you give it all you got im only rhymin 2 percent/
cream of the crop? bitch you love the cream of men/
this aint no squirt, cuz i hit ya where it hurts/
led'll rip through ya like my girth rips ya g/f's skirts/
and for all its worth i wasnt tryna make u pissed/
speakin my mind bout ya rhymes, face it lateness got u dissed/
you proly speak with a lisp from suckin the dick/
ya balls hang low cuz unbreakable swangin from them/
and i just made my move, i was skooled by the older dudes/
now i wrek like a solider do/
stay hard like a boulder do,and this the fuckin thanks i get?/
whoa u my son, U SHOULD THANK MY DICK...
TalibKweli
10-07-2006, 09:33 AM
:lol:
seriously swich, your other rhymes were aight, i come back at you with something and you respond with a useless 14 bar diss
learn what punchlines and sylables are then maybe you can actually have a chance to rhyme better
nice try though
sketch3
10-07-2006, 01:28 PM
how come ppl never rap about shit they know?/
talking all gangster,bout gunz n hoes/
if ur so gangster,wat u doin at home/
go rob a bank,and put it in ur flow/
no/
thats wat i thought,u an ethug,a fourm gang banger/
now me ,i spitt the truth,yea i brag about smokein, ganja/
but that truth is spoken,i thought i warned ya/
iv never said ill leave u dead,bust a cap in ur ass and 1 in ur head/
cuss id be lieing,im mellow, and im down to earth,
now it pains me to tell u,i mean it these words hurt,
but ur just a pussy,sorry folks cant finnish gota go paint
swich
10-07-2006, 04:44 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli@Oct 7 2006, 08:33 AM
:lol:
seriously swich, your other rhymes were aight, i come back at you with something and you respond with a useless 14 bar diss
learn what punchlines and sylables are then maybe you can actually have a chance to rhyme better
nice try though
like i said...2%..
so yeah im not the one tryna prove something over the internet man...
but yeah its kool if you respond with some shit talkin instead of some rhymes..
get back at me when you think your ready for me kid.. ;)
TalibKweli
10-07-2006, 08:06 PM
:lol:
kid
good one
with your generic raps i wouldnt let myself worry that much
where you live?
let me know, peace
swich
10-08-2006, 08:09 PM
texas
Lateness
10-08-2006, 10:02 PM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Oct 5 2006, 05:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Oct 5 2006, 05:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Lateness@Oct 5 2006, 03:34 PM
I work with my hands, don't test the surgeon/
Disect your Francais? I took French Immersion/
I'm the best dispersing have you asking questions cursin/
Even with high blood pressure you can't stress this person/
I'll leave ASEN alone cause he seems to understand real/
You're a town fair, I'm big time, got the Wonderland feel/
I rip this track I'm sick like that/
Even my unborn daughter could kick your ass/
I fuck girls of all types, the Don Juan on this track/
I ain't deaf but J'entends rien quand tu rap/
But I am def and you're fat without the PH/
You suck so much dick your jaw hurts and your knees ache/
Here you can have this mic as a keep sake/
You should free base my beat breaks cause I'm dope on each tape/
And I dont' need cash or money to prove I'm the best/
I need to be known as a guy who's influenced the rest/
I'll put two in your chest I'm ahead of my time/
How come all your rhymes always come at the end of your line/
And I always be dope just trying to get my style on/
Only thing under pressure is my can of krylon/
you took french imersion, that means you should be smart
check the chart, dont start with an emcee that can tear you apart
ill dice you up and feed you to the haters
or better yet bury you with erwin and feed you to the gators
you need to recycle my rhymes to test my flow
that's kinda like sniffing heroin and shooting blow
it doesnt make sense, that shit isnt right, take some time to think
you aint playin your cards right, you aint bright, your waisting your own time
you cant beat a royal flush with a three of a kind
stupid, i ll get you lifted off my spittens
wouldnt wanna see you react when i toss in some writtens
you aint def, mais tu t entend right, c ca ta dit?
tu vien te repeter, branche toi mon sti
yah right, dont even touch that language
cause i ll cook you up with fried eggs and make you into a sandwhich
stuck between 2 frenchman with you in the middle
your brittle, you can either learn alot from me or a little
you did learn some stuff, i cant go against that
you learnt that its okay to steal my verses and still have the nerve to call me wack
waste of sperm, your dad never heard of lubiderm cream?
probably concided your sorry ass at the age of 16
i see this shit is gettin to be more and more intense
cause im always on the offense and you on the defense
yada yada yada i gotta split
so i ll catch up to you soon ya greedy son of a bitch [/b][/quote]
I'm sick your just hurtin my tradition is cursin/
Half of those lines are too long, you couldn't spittem in person/
And I didn't wanna bring it up but you did first/
Go ahead Whoa kick another stupid verse/
Talk about poker man you're stallin it's just wrong/
You wanna a real play son, I'm all in on your mom/
I got a straight inside her, so fly, never touch the soil much/
And I'm the King so when I cum it's a royal flush/
On your best day you'll only be half as whack/
You fucking tabernack battle rap backpack bitch with packaged raps/
I'm nice man whether cordless or mic stand/
UNBREAKABLE jerks you off with his right hand while acting as your hype man/
What Happened to the Letters?
10-09-2006, 01:59 PM
just agression...
souls colapsin as the last jabs done
you got the nerve to correct me son
havnt you heard about that guy
the one who beats men and fucks their wifes
well i am that man im just having fun
you wonder why your dad died before you were one
i raped your mom and out popped you
your dad killed himself when he found out you're not a jew
MainEvent
10-09-2006, 03:09 PM
Timing and rhythm checked, while rap and mystism intersect
Throwing a disruption in the equation like the butterfly effect
And of course this cypher is legit cause Main is blessing this shit
Infected my salivary glands to anatomically show how sick i spit
On some Coup d'Etat style shit, taking control of the cypher
Kidnap some oil CEOs then kick the stomach of pregnant Pro-Lifer
You'd get ya mandable shaddered if you ever tried bit these
Cause my shit would flat line you like Keira Knightley's titties
I be handing out lyrical hysterectomies to you bitch ass dudes
A young master at the art of sivering off kid's flow-opian tubes
Nothing to choose, fuck around with my crew and ya gonna lose
Infect you with leukemia and track the progress while cancer cells diffuse
What Happened to the Letters?
10-09-2006, 03:13 PM
kierra knightley is fine as hell
as main event sure did till
anyone know where i cna cop a flick
of her beautiful tits
and this i spit
to come with it
the midgets follow
as i go down anb alley
to wonderland hello
and i kick in the face of the pastor
shut the fuck up and suck my dick faster
jsut liek teh scarlet letter
i read it in schol
book sucked
jsut like you you tool
damn im so fly
my rhyms are so wild
laugh out loud i joke you dumb child
swich
10-10-2006, 04:42 AM
i see ya mom on 2 of 3 porn sites/
the odds are right i just might light the night.../
with the piece on my neck, leave shards of blood on your g/f's steps/
while ya head is hangin, drugs is what im slangin and bitches im bangin/
feel free to be the victum of my MC slayin/
verbal assaults and the best are left prayin/
today i might just adjust the flow a bit/
the dust and lust can make a man slow a bit/
the rubber and dick is what i show a bitch/
and the chrome and the moans is what a give a snitch...
TOOK one
10-10-2006, 01:07 PM
i dont freestyle, i write rhymes that make poetry,
ill take 5 kids with my fists, then comit adultry,
and how are you gunna battel, if you can't even read,
my words come complicated, if u listen.. ur ears will bleed.
ill take all u punks, from letters to switch,
cuase tommarrow night, ill be rhyming to ur bitch,
and dont think took ones, is one to fail,
ill call up my homebois, oh wait, most of them r in jail,
ill verbally destory you, and make you lyrically tear,
when u read my shit on this forum, its like im yellin loud and clear,
cause u might say im new, cause well i just found this thread,
but ill make ur mom hurt so bad, shell wish she was dead.
TalibKweli
10-10-2006, 02:10 PM
go home, nobody likes you
lateness, im at work right now, i get home at 5pm, i ll post a little later
and yesterday bs was down for awhile
so thats that
later
peace
why so much hostility whoa?
you should relax and have fun instead of lashing out man.. it's way better
alive
10-10-2006, 09:18 PM
these arent really raps but i didnt know where else to put em. i would love to learn to rap, but i dont know where to start. do u just let it flow and practice? or is there something to learn? stupid question? probably.
anyway:
you cannot stop my self expression
be it legally written
or if im professin
it on our city walls
in spite of your constant oppression.
everybody talk about how much they hate the fake fuckin laughs on every single show that they watch
but when they wanna see real art, where do they go?
to the local museums next fuckin art show.
to see some shit, behind bulletproof glass
made so many years ago, in the safety of home
and then walkin home, they see our art, and start talkin trash
"what a disgrace, the criminal outlash!"
dont they see? that this is real art!
doesnt take smarts
to see that were better then a modern da vinci
we risk our lives for this shit
runnin from cops
we put our lives in this shit
give it everything we got
but we aint got no bulletproof glass
our shits exposed -
to da street! like us
to the cops on the beat
to the weather, to the buff, to the kids playing ball
its a wonder that any of it, or us, survive it at all
and yet you could care less, cant see past the law
the same law that denied women their vote,
and put blacks behind bars
but now to suggest, that they are beneath us?
would stop you in stride, to chastise my thinking.
cant you see now that struggle is one and the same?
that this game is not, only just for the fame
that we're on a mission not to vandalize
but to bring color back to our city, whose color has died.
i hope you appriciate it.
peace.
swich
10-10-2006, 11:47 PM
im drunk and still standin/
wood grain im handlin/
come through bustin ribs like my name was marilyn manson/
im goin through titties like a gucci bra sale/
leave bodies in the ocean, but nah i only saw shells/
shotgun shells that is, i slay women and kids/
specially bitches cuz theyre the reason i did/
i got the highest bid when it comes to auctions/
pistols poppin and the bullet proof is blockin/
i keep choppin enemies like im cookin with veggies/
left a girl in the trash and i think her name was reggie/
who cares though, its just another female/
gut um up pass um on and buy another hoe retail/
see cuz these sluts need sales to keep there legs open/
her legs lookin like the waves when moses split the ocean/
sketch3
10-11-2006, 06:04 PM
took one is a bitch hu took 2 or 3 dicks up his ass at a time/
last i checked fisting little kids was a crime/
yet u still do it,i gusse its a habbit/
call me a fagit,i wont have it/
ur gay,had more men inside u than the ymca/
and as swich says/
''ill bust ur ribs'',as u bust a nut, over 1 of ur lover men, as i ruff u up/
but not in that way, cuss im no gay/
wat u even doin in this thread?/
u aint got enuff brains in ur head,to spit bars spontainiously/
if u question me,i got the quoat/
''i dont freestyle, i write rhymes that make poetry,
so wat u tellin me,that u cant read,this is the FREESTYLE thread/
not shit that dont come off the top of ur head,wat u lie awake in bed?/
writeing all night,just as u said,ur stuff is prewriten/
and i could still makes better sounds if u recored me shiting/
cuss to b honest/
u a lttle bitch,say how u cuold take asen letters woha and swich/
please thats rich, u cant eveen out do me a dyslexic stoner/
just get off bs and go write some pomes yea/
What Happened to the Letters?
10-11-2006, 07:21 PM
its 716 and im tired as fuck
slpet 4 hours befpre i woke up
last night sucked i jsut itched and scratched
the pill i popped relieved my sore back
i hope tonight ill get some rest at last
but doubt it all with these trakcs making clacks
im ready to go to sleep but not so soon
its 716, 7 hours past noon
with 16 minutes on top of the hour
man you smell, you need a shower
what the fuck am i trying to do
besides rap botu life, somethign thats true
im not tlakign liek a thuig or a gnaster or more
im jsut stting here tired and sitting here bored
i got no gun on me nad no money left
my pockets are empty and my body feels wrecked
how did i een start this rhye off
oh yeah i fucked your mother, nah im a fraud
haha i just love writing in here
swich
10-14-2006, 12:43 AM
now this shit aint 4 beginners/
im a life sinner/
and when the trigga clicks then the pistols eat um up 4 dinna/
learn the lesson that stressin leads to blessins/
forget askin questions and let the bitch ease ur erection/
lips im streatchin, keep ya enimies close/
most a days the metal wants to make me a ghost/
im the host of homicide it resides in my eyes/
the liquore in my belly will be the event of my demise/
hit *****s with bats and cause masive head trauma/
guns like osama, spittin more than a llama/
fuck all the drama, i get down with strippas/
fuck gun control cuz we sum trigga grippas!...
sketch3
10-14-2006, 07:26 AM
good1 swich,u have really got this style down.much beter than that new style u worked on
swich
10-16-2006, 05:46 AM
thanks 4 the crit. sketch.
verbal visions depicted as i slay with precision/
suicide is my religion as well as hittin these Bitches/
never roll with snitches, i leave um in ditches/
im trigga grippin as the safty is switchen
insane in the brain hit up trains as i inhale the paint/
leave ya faint i chill with devils and saints/
stackin paper so im gettin my bank/
ya expression is blank, known as tank/
so much beef but no one reachen my rank...
Lateness
10-16-2006, 08:48 PM
ayo I spit dope like chokin on e/
Your girl last night, straight up, she was chokin on me/
provokin the steaze hopelessly chokin emcees/
Infact I got your bitch on both of her knees/
Nice when I'm rappin/
Roll a stone down a hill to gain satisfaction and you hate that I'm packin/
Erase your crew like pentel make my pen swell/
Instrumental I'm mental but I ment well/
I'm the nicest at this rap shit, drop a classic when I write it/
Even though I like it it's true that I'm overly decisive/
Nice with the dopest shit you've ever heard/
I'm a clever nerd sever herbs with all these extra words/
The best to serve you like greatest waiter/
The paper chaser, do me a favor and just die in a lake of vapour/
Player hater just mad cause I fucked your hoe/
Snuffed your hoe, she was a slut with a butt to show/
But it was too fat and when she talked I had to mute that/
I abuse tracks, have the people listening like "who's that"?/
nerdx
10-16-2006, 11:55 PM
Originally posted by swich@Oct 16 2006, 04:46 AM
thanks 4 the crit. sketch.
verbal visions depicted as i slay with precision/
suicide is my religion as well as hittin these Bitches/
never roll with snitches, i leave um in ditches/
im trigga grippin as the safty is switchen
insane in the brain hit up trains as i inhale the paint/
leave ya faint i chill with devils and saints/
stackin paper so im gettin my bank/
ya expression is blank, known as tank/
so much beef but no one reachen my rank...
switch im liking it.
swich
10-17-2006, 05:14 AM
thanks nerdx
i got the best babes, the best yay/
i keep a scale to see how much her breast weighs/
on my ipods the best plays/
when swich hit the block enimies ya best pray/
and next may ill be glitzin with fame/
grippin the grain and gettin my brain/
switchin these lanes at the top of my game/
hittin the trains with a bag full of paint/
so die slow when i get high off hydro/
the bi's know i get more than one hoe to eat my pole/
my flow is so slow but still unstopable/
got the mic and god said, "go head and rock these hoes"/
my minds a gate for the fate of fake MC's/
push weight, hott dates, and double d's/
thats all i know and thats all i need/
hit the weed and ill make her bleed/
X girl friends lie stacked in my closet/
next ill die with a metal deposit/
the rhyme aint over but lemme just pause it....
fuck buyin shit i get pakz on consignment .../
Fuckin fire dog hydroponic trackwreck gettin high an shit.../
360 hittin frieghts tag your entire enviroment.../
Time for u toyz to start thinkin bout early retirement.../
And get bent like the hood ornament on my lac.../
yank out your teeth one by one starting from the back.../
Real talk sickarock on some bad acid about to attack.../
labeled a shocap before i had hair on my sack.../
Now im rich ridin dirty wit a 9point record lookin over my back.../
Incarceration aint shit i no every thing about it.../
Knockin out the 500 club crossin out wack tattoo'd *****z never take no shit.../
Im used to it, while they was writing letterz i was hittin jail wallz.../
make *****z put money on my bookz cuz they think they gonna get laid out with my ballz.../
I seen it allz lay more montana than 138 in montreal.../
Dont need to know french to see the bitch in most of yalll.../
Can be hard to keep it real i feel energy in the innercity.../
From uptown to vancity committee grafilthy got me all jittery.../
Wasting cats you know
sketch3
10-17-2006, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by swich@Oct 17 2006, 04:14 AM
thanks nerdx
i got the best babes, the best yay/
i keep a scale to see how much her breast weighs/
on my ipods the best plays/
when swich hit the block enimies ya best pray/
and next may ill be glitzin with fame/
grippin the grain and gettin my brain/
switchin these lanes at the top of my game/
hittin the trains with a bag full of paint/
so die slow when i get high off hydro/
the bi's know i get more than one hoe to eat my pole/
my flow is so slow but still unstopable/
got the mic and god said, "go head and rock these hoes"/
my minds a gate for the fate of fake MC's/
push weight, hott dates, and double d's/
thats all i know and thats all i need/
hit the weed and ill make her bleed/
X girl friends lie stacked in my closet/
next ill die with a metal deposit/
the rhyme aint over but lemme just pause it....
lol first line sounds like u just watched scarface,uv really got this style worked out
swich
10-20-2006, 04:44 AM
the fear is so near, by my bed keep beer and drop tears/
gimme head and then rear, ice on my steer so im sitin froze here/
she bout to gimme some blows here, there and then after/
kick back smoke a black and enjoy the laughter/
on the tar we drive faster, known as the blaster/
got so much white, they also call me casper/
bitches call me master, flow like my name/
swichin the beat so now im swichin my game/
keep a list of the same, *****s to blame/
ill make u run for shelter like the sky was droppin some rain/
not for the fame and not for the bitches/
i do this shit for the mutha fuckin ritches/
so far from sanity, can it be that the man in me wants a life of vanity/
reside in the dark, and murder the narks/
rack cans from wall mart, and go tear walls apart/
my world fell apart, please do not start/
im the lonely man with a can and no heart....
epikstyles
10-20-2006, 06:42 AM
my lifes so fucked up i feel suicidal/
fuck that american soap opera bull shit like american idol/
i cheated on my baby and she cheated back/
i started on dope, e and smoking crack/
but that shit didnt help just made me depressed/
or at least wasted sick and fucked up at best/
im not interested in gangsters thugs or packn/
i just want ladys and girls lets get to mackn/
i had some cash for a holiday i' been stackn/
then it got robed naw im fuckn broke and
choken/ its hard cuz im tryna get threw
it seems like every mother fucker is out to get you
what the fuck is wrong with my brain cant i stop this pain.
im so stressd out of shit i need another hit,
another lie to my baby i said i had quit
now sittn here wallown in my sorrow
tryna think of a plan for tomorw
fuck it ima get high again
TOOK one
10-20-2006, 05:17 PM
^^^ dope.
i write my words in ink, so they blead through pages,
think about my rhymes like life, just contimplatin the stages,
my words can kill, and rip harder then a knife,
sketch y u hatin, you turn your girl into a dike,
i know that fisten kids is illegal, so why did you do it,
you gunna mess with my words, but my rhymes come fluent,
like english or french, like fucken chinesne,
if you EVER WENT TO JAIL, ud be bent ova, or down on ur knees,
and i might be knew to this thread, but i never asked for beef,
i was just testin out my rhymes,a white kid from the east,
but now im fucken tired, and to hung over ta battel
and chill with lil kids, u probaly a farm boy who enjoys fuckin cattel...
°MARS°
10-20-2006, 05:41 PM
aight
Act I: The Foundation
It Begins On Hills Of Molten Stone, Holding Poems
Can The Prodical Son Return When No One Shows Him Home?
So A Golden Clone Arose From My Genetics
No Trifle Menace, Sick Whims Hidden Inside A Crevice
& No Matter To Whom The Plight Accredits
Perverse Thoughts He Surmounted Despite A Fetish
Delight In Medics: Bloodshed! See Doctors Cut
As Satan Paced Hell, Muttering "I've Fathered What?"
Touch A Child's Mind? I Never Bothered Such
So I Stratch My Potential Not Matter The Rot Or Rust
Filling Pots Enough Til Overflows The Basin
Servant Of Shadows? The Title Of Prince Goes To Satan
Self Styled Samuria Not From The Home Of Asians
Invaded Hades With Rabies, Now Enthroned A Pagan
With Obsidian Armor, He's Formed UnGodly
Scorned Angelic Figurine Of A Scorched Burned Body
Nor Turned Cocky Within This Tortured Hobby
A Sport So Rocky In Which No Man Is Born To Stop Me
Torn & Oddly Tainted Since His Day Of Birth
Mind Shamed At First Until He Overcame The Thirst
For Fame Thru Works, No Holding Back Distain Or Worse
A Pain Reversed Into A Sneer He Gave The Church
With This Proposal: These Three Ways Emersed
Each A Faded Curse Saved For The Shadowed Day He Lurks
To Parade A Verse Upon Calm Angel Wings
Greet Future Likeminded Ones, He A Fable Sings
With Fatal Dreams Imprinted On Navel Rings
Visual Angle Swings To Slow As He Strangled Things
Objects He Disconnected Himself From Coldly
A Zigzagged Spine Grown, "No One Knelt To Hold Me
Or Help Restore Me!" They Watch & Bestow Advice
Shoulder Past Sober Acts, Shining Like Englowing Ice
Holding Strife By The Horns To Bring About
Death By Numbers Untolled In Single Counts
Simple Types Can Not Restrict The Digits
Underneath The Beat Of A Glimpse They Fidget
Stopping Small Dreams, He Pinches Midgets
Only The Worse Sinner Until The Prince Admits It
Flinching Crickets Jump To Blacker Magic
The Rapture Happened When He Mastered Habits
Tracked A Rabbit With Clans Of Weakness
While Cocooned Besides A Preying Mantus Fetus
Chanting "We Swallow Grams To Clean Us"
Reaching Cario, Buried The Holograms Of Egypt
Swam To Shallow Anviled Beaches Of Rotten Flesh
Engrossed In Texts, They Fought & Lost The Best
He Caught His Breath On A Prancing Horse
Leading Advancing Hordes With Golden Lance & Swords
No Chance Of Course As He Taunts The Skies
No Comprimise, Standing Solemn Screaming Haunting Cries
I Flaunt My Rise With A Middle Finger & Smile
No Lingering Child Left Alive To Sing Or Defile
This Cold Place, Their Tongues Severed Once
Bodies Covered In Blood Stains That Never Crust
Cutting Angel's Wings, Stole The Feather Dust
Kept With The Eyes Of Nicodemus' & Hooves Of Pegasus
swich
10-21-2006, 07:47 AM
in high school id never date, rape bitches in my highest state/
contemplate till 10 past 8, im bout to columbine style assassinate/
my flows they fascinate, never did get past the hate/
took my liquore str8, got to hell and passed the gate/
came back a a changed man, we need to really step up our game plan/
understand the blood stains on my hand get washed by the rain and...
the body in the back of my van look like a brain land/
im listnen for footsteps upstairs, got a shotty close so no im not scared/
ghosts of past victums still scream in my dreams/
rubbin on my dick so she made me cream in my jeans/
takin out teams, ima sexuall fiend, get high at work offa lean and the green....
sketch3
10-21-2006, 12:02 PM
took 1 ur foolish,ask me y im hateing/
please start concentrateing and stop masterbateing/
u starting beef in ,another thread/
ill lyricly kick ur teeth in, and out the back of ur head/
call me a farm boy,ur fucking stupid/
u bring ur nife ill bring my battle axe/
and take ur shitty flows about cattle back/
im from the endz,inner city london/
all the people i clash,i verbally stuned them/
took one ur a shook one/
u can say u spit fire,i spit a cyclone,lighting and thunder/
u got few rymes,i got a hundred/
spit a verble blizzerd,leave in a icey tundra/
u talk about ur ink bleeding through ur pages/
thats just cuss ur toy and havent painted in ages/
and if i ever went to jail id b on my knees,oh please/
im not dumb enough to get caught,and left distraught/
cuss unlike u i wouldnt be Buba's peice of ass/
ur backdoor were he sticks his cock bitch/
buba left u with a corn hole more bagy than a clowns poket/
and if u could get a girl,she would want to srew me/
and be my groupy,cuss im a member and ur a newbi/
i know ur post count dont gauge ur tallent/
but i just destroyed u its, apparent/
i dont want ur beef so ill tell u how to make it into a vrbale sandwich/
and dont get testy,ill tell u like big dady kain/
ur a butter nife and im a machete,and like public enemy/
im a rebel with out a pause/
back to cooking,we got beef and a lets add some tomateo sauce/
and take ur butter knife and cut some bread with it/
imma stop with this sanwich stuff,i quite high and got the munchies/
lets end the hosstilitys u and me, im not the agressive type/
but we can still battle,to be honesst i liked ur ur flow about the cattle/
and i want u to reply,imma stop now my mum just made pie,no lie/
took 1 lets battle,im really gunna go get me some pie.also im stoned so this probally wont make sense. peace
SoDamnFresh
10-21-2006, 06:00 PM
Catch jokes! Only here to have a laugh,
shakin out so hard,
I'm desperatly in need of a bath,
I'm lookin daft! But i'm feelin happy tho,
actually, I feel like the king of the world so Fuck DiCaprio
My style is unruly but I come across cooly, calmly,
dont harm nobody so nobody harm me,
thats my philosophy that I try to apply,
only one guarantee in life... your gonna die!
other than that, its on you, the balls in your court,
if you choose to confuse the truth you will fall short,
genuine lyrical skill becomes more sought,
I can practically reach my faculty of speech!
Intrinsic linguistics derived from the mystical,
whimsical! The power of love is invicible,
no need to carry a gun, that shit's dumb,
coz i'm just doin my thin, yo, i'm just havin fun!
SoDamnFresh
10-21-2006, 06:01 PM
^^ not a battle lyric... the opposite in-fact.
sketch3
10-21-2006, 06:08 PM
lol
were abouts u live in london,
Originally posted by °MARS°@Oct 20 2006, 04:41 PM
aight
Act I: The Foundation
It Begins On Hills Of Molten Stone, Holding Poems
Can The Prodical Son Return When No One Shows Him Home?
So A Golden Clone Arose From My Genetics
No Trifle Menace, Sick Whims Hidden Inside A Crevice
& No Matter To Whom The Plight Accredits
Perverse Thoughts He Surmounted Despite A Fetish
Delight In Medics: Bloodshed! See Doctors Cut
As Satan Paced Hell, Muttering "I've Fathered What?"
Touch A Child's Mind? I Never Bothered Such
So I Stratch My Potential Not Matter The Rot Or Rust
Filling Pots Enough Til Overflows The Basin
Servant Of Shadows? The Title Of Prince Goes To Satan
Self Styled Samuria Not From The Home Of Asians
Invaded Hades With Rabies, Now Enthroned A Pagan
With Obsidian Armor, He's Formed UnGodly
Scorned Angelic Figurine Of A Scorched Burned Body
Nor Turned Cocky Within This Tortured Hobby
A Sport So Rocky In Which No Man Is Born To Stop Me
Torn & Oddly Tainted Since His Day Of Birth
Mind Shamed At First Until He Overcame The Thirst
For Fame Thru Works, No Holding Back Distain Or Worse
A Pain Reversed Into A Sneer He Gave The Church
With This Proposal: These Three Ways Emersed
Each A Faded Curse Saved For The Shadowed Day He Lurks
To Parade A Verse Upon Calm Angel Wings
Greet Future Likeminded Ones, He A Fable Sings
With Fatal Dreams Imprinted On Navel Rings
Visual Angle Swings To Slow As He Strangled Things
Objects He Disconnected Himself From Coldly
A Zigzagged Spine Grown, "No One Knelt To Hold Me
Or Help Restore Me!" They Watch & Bestow Advice
Shoulder Past Sober Acts, Shining Like Englowing Ice
Holding Strife By The Horns To Bring About
Death By Numbers Untolled In Single Counts
Simple Types Can Not Restrict The Digits
Underneath The Beat Of A Glimpse They Fidget
Stopping Small Dreams, He Pinches Midgets
Only The Worse Sinner Until The Prince Admits It
Flinching Crickets Jump To Blacker Magic
The Rapture Happened When He Mastered Habits
Tracked A Rabbit With Clans Of Weakness
While Cocooned Besides A Preying Mantus Fetus
Chanting "We Swallow Grams To Clean Us"
Reaching Cario, Buried The Holograms Of Egypt
Swam To Shallow Anviled Beaches Of Rotten Flesh
Engrossed In Texts, They Fought & Lost The Best
He Caught His Breath On A Prancing Horse
Leading Advancing Hordes With Golden Lance & Swords
No Chance Of Course As He Taunts The Skies
No Comprimise, Standing Solemn Screaming Haunting Cries
I Flaunt My Rise With A Middle Finger & Smile
No Lingering Child Left Alive To Sing Or Defile
This Cold Place, Their Tongues Severed Once
Bodies Covered In Blood Stains That Never Crust
Cutting Angel's Wings, Stole The Feather Dust
Kept With The Eyes Of Nicodemus' & Hooves Of Pegasus
:o
FUCK
Nothing close to a freestyle, still a fine piece of work
DC_Crane
10-22-2006, 12:22 PM
Yo, I'm bored with these hoards of rappers
Using mic cords as nooses for fans intellegence
Like people can afford to find value in shit thats irrelevent
In their words exsist a hellish hint of the future
Rip apart the culture can't be fixed with a suture
Shit will be a fiasco if the noose can't get looser
Fans stop hanging on the words of bling prophets
And we can't sit back and watch it
And by it I mean watch the roots of this hiphop
Form a tree of knowledge that bares strange fruit
The seeds of this fruit spit shit thats uncouth
Unnecessary, uneeded, not even close to unique
Brothers who speak of the street in a romantic context
I laugh at their weak feeble minded intelect thats not stretched
Beyond the parameters setup by those that set us up to fail
When it was written in quail that we were 3/5ths of a person
Explode is what my words do
Road side rap, iraq, cause black outs of the wack out
Fuck a gun for a weapon I'll whip a track out
Rhyme to the beat till I pass out
You garbage man take tht trash out my face
Of the warning take heed your rhymes is like bad weed
Laced with coke, your mc liscene I revoke
Don't try to cloak your lies, brothas is to smart for that black,
Sure niggus ain't, but rhyming for them is like painting for the blind
Mind in a bind it's time to pull a nas and rewind find what works
Protest out side G-Unit records with Got Lyrics? t-shirts
Whatever gets it done...or gets the message across
Bomb the port of miami to rid us of rick ross
Let the pedel hit the floor
Go to ATL and run over young joc while in a chevy with the butterfly doors
Rapper for life thats what I plan on being
Rakim said there's no black rapper better then Em
With me thats what you should plan on seeing
And fleeing from a challange is not in my characta
I destroy rappers in battles with this lyrical darenga
"Night get off that soap boxs no body's hearin ya"
Now yall done made me come done and strike gods fear in ya
I upped the singal strength of my radar so now I'm aware of ya
It wasn't weak before, but rather yall weren't strong
It worked perfectly well in the 90's
And now I'm sittin here wonder what went wrong
I look at the focus of songs
And see 1000 about some stupid bitch and her thong
I'm like yall people can't be serious
I can't be hearin this right
I take a second look at my peers and get weary at the sight
I'm thinkin now that yall love the irony of someone named night leadin yall to the light
I'm like...it's cool to do songs about women, fuck that it's natural
But the shit yall releasin is past the borderline of laughable
It's down right hilarious
And is causing all us folks embarassment
A sick freestyle that I layed down not even a track
So they don't no payola of that I don't have record contract
No contact with the shady execs
And I don't have to deal with the aftermath of them trying to play me
Sayin I'm not next, swearin that my album is gonna bomb like flex
Cause they say it lacks the bounce, they want me to treat the song like bad checks
Write about shit thats not in my memory bank
About how I'm brooklyn's biggest drug lord and how many people I shanked
In the yard in the prison...they rent me a big house so I can front on how I'm livin
Bought me a grill n chain, expensive clothes, expensive cars, I just laugh at it though
I shoveled all the shit they piled in the deal
And what was left was some slave shit the would barely pay for my meals
Fans would think I'm livin large in the hamptons mansion with a lake adjacent
When in reality I'd probably be livin in my mother's basment
Tip and Phife already lived through that and I'm not trying to
And all the big names on koch shows I'm not lyin through, my teeth
Other people are lyin through a grill about their supposed life on the street
Weaving tales of feats that rivials Aesop's gift
I wonder how long we let this shit subsist
Peace, mans best concept is the least likely to happen
People'll be steady scrapin, warrin, divided into factions
Except for the wealthy who'll be sitting back relaxin
Far from the bombs and tanks
They sleep well at night cause the crys for help seem faint
When in reality it's a channel away
But the crys are never conveyed cause the people never listen
They call the media biased and declare its all fiction
The hypocracy of these so called christians
With their double diction or double talk
Actin like everythings cool when they know trouble stalks the poor,
Scorned, hungery, tired, and war torn
meh...this shit is wack...i didn't even finish it
SoDamnFresh
10-22-2006, 05:20 PM
YO...
I mix words with sense, a powerful mechanizm,
bring in the rythme,
anythin to make em listen,
now I be here treatin this platform like a gift
and will never shift,
straight to your brain like that cocaine ya sniffed!
swift on the topic, debate what I relate to,
cannot connect or associate with a fake crew,
never could make do with rappers from the states who
talk about the 'whips' they 'floss'...Like I give a toss!
Back here in London,
I hope we rise above them,
reclaim the beats and treat your earholes to sumthin
Bumpin!
I serve an edifying purpose,
and still catch joke like monty pythons flyin circus!
'Hes not the messiah!'
I'm just a realy good rhymer,
i'm a find a sumblime rhyme ta climb
inta ya head, far from dead,
full of spirit not livid,
you act timid coz you choose to peruse your life instead of live it!
Lets have a Pit-Stop!
Now realy gimme that real hip hop and dont stop until the whole cookie crumble,
tumblin down into the rabbit hole I used to have it all... then Hip hop would call!
I cant get enuf of it, count how much you love it then double it,
Its way to blatant to cover it up,
its Hip Hop!
I be kickin it in reeboks and flip flops i spit hot lava!
and carve a deep groove on the record so mans can check it out,
respect the ways that i say it loud!
It pays to fake it, but i'll never debate it
coz my love for this music will always be celebrated
I have elevated, and i'm glad that i made it,
you too should move thru the mist and demonstrate it!
It was a mix between and evil vortex and a lethal raw flex when 'Hip Hop' hit my cerebral cortex! yo!
yeah... not a freestyle... whatever...
TOOK one
10-22-2006, 11:00 PM
Originally posted by sketch3@Oct 21 2006, 11:02 AM
took 1 ur foolish,ask me y im hateing/
please start concentrateing and stop masterbateing/
u starting beef in ,another thread/
ill lyricly kick ur teeth in, and out the back of ur head/
call me a farm boy,ur fucking stupid/
u bring ur nife ill bring my battle axe/
and take ur shitty flows about cattle back/
im from the endz,inner city london/
all the people i clash,i verbally stuned them/
took one ur a shook one/
u can say u spit fire,i spit a cyclone,lighting and thunder/
u got few rymes,i got a hundred/
spit a verble blizzerd,leave in a icey tundra/
u talk about ur ink bleeding through ur pages/
thats just cuss ur toy and havent painted in ages/
and if i ever went to jail id b on my knees,oh please/
im not dumb enough to get caught,and left distraught/
cuss unlike u i wouldnt be Buba's peice of ass/
ur backdoor were he sticks his cock bitch/
buba left u with a corn hole more bagy than a clowns poket/
and if u could get a girl,she would want to srew me/
and be my groupy,cuss im a member and ur a newbi/
i know ur post count dont gauge ur tallent/
but i just destroyed u its, apparent/
i dont want ur beef so ill tell u how to make it into a vrbale sandwich/
and dont get testy,ill tell u like big dady kain/
ur a butter nife and im a machete,and like public enemy/
im a rebel with out a pause/
back to cooking,we got beef and a lets add some tomateo sauce/
and take ur butter knife and cut some bread with it/
imma stop with this sanwich stuff,i quite high and got the munchies/
lets end the hosstilitys u and me, im not the agressive type/
but we can still battle,to be honesst i liked ur ur flow about the cattle/
and i want u to reply,imma stop now my mum just made pie,no lie/
took 1 lets battle,im really gunna go get me some pie.also im stoned so this probally wont make sense. peace
hahah i didnt read the whole thing but yeah. im down when i get some trees in me. intill then
swich
10-23-2006, 12:01 AM
its the boy from the states, where bodies lay/
rob banks with capes and take all ya yay/
as kids we were promised with better dayz/
but all i got was dodgin fists and strays/
we play all day with big thangs that click/
suck a cigarett then she can suck my dick/
the man with bricks, the man with chiks/
got the best kicks and a bag of trix/
these days are my weed days/
get blazed and my P.O say i seem dazed/
back away or else youll be tazed/
im in a state thats far from sane/
high jack a plane filled with a kamikaze gang/
crash into the white house and watch all the flames/
my spirit will haunt the rich and those with all the fame/
and ill slay with dark intention to all these hoes/
females are my foes, ill take off there clothes/
rape um in there sleep,till there body leak/
on there face ill leave a naughty streak/
ghostly encounters of paranormal activities/
chillen on the other side with all these dark entities...
TOOK one
10-23-2006, 02:49 AM
sketch this aint for you. just up late and rhyming.
goodbye to my boys, the last kings and toys,
the last reason to exsist, fogged up in this mist,
thoughts come ruff, like scared up tissue,
you back talk to me, better off pistol whip you,
got more jucie then lil jon, and more crunk then then his cup,
i got 99 reasons to kill my self, and my bitch might make it one up,
i make more sex tapes then paris, and im actually in one with her,
pushin that long blonde hair, i aint talkin about that fur,
rhyming comes easy, stubblin sweet and fun,
but if you cross on my side, u get burned like the sun,
ill trip ya like dywane, and smack you like jeter,
i got the celebs on my side, incudling arnold and sqitor,
my shoes fresh of the shelf, my shirts come starch,
i rock white T's and beats, from october to march,
locked up in a cell, ill still be the freshest in the room,
fresher then the guards, probally rob the jainotor and kill him with the broom
swich
10-23-2006, 02:50 PM
jus tryna pass time b4 work..
its the thrilla who a hoe killa/
liquore sippa, and big money getta/
digga in the trigga, droppin mo *****s/
countin all my figgas, im a go getta/
so fly im gettin slapped at/
she love my flow so now she back track/
on the floor i make her back that/
ass so sweet im bout to tap that/
so drunk im like where my gat at/
on my lap but where the strap at/
as a matter of fact where my black at/
im bout to get high offa cronic/
i made so much plates im tectonic/
the pussie so mean i got the tech on it/
when i see a mic i wrek on it/
the plages i face are bubonic/
mace to my face, now i get my crew on it....
TOOK one
10-26-2006, 12:14 AM
got stoped by the police.. for stayin fresh
Feliks
10-26-2006, 04:37 AM
Originally posted by swich@Oct 23 2006, 02:50 PM
so fly im gettin slapped at/
I love you swich, you made me smile.
See it's like I said before, stick to the score an' I won't use you to mop the floor
or wipe your blood off the door where I evened the score
And there still lying mangled and bleeding, pathetically weeping
Beggin me to waste you 'cause I found you was cheatin
Faking a rhyme, wanna be rapper and emcee, spare me
I pop your head like a used coke can
and throw out the trash, a gift for the garbage man
You should be grateful, I grant you noble death
A cap to the chest is worth three in the head
swich
10-27-2006, 03:29 AM
i paralyze the center of the city/
must be a implant cuz im goin through these titties/
im always in plan, i carry hundreds and fittys/
i shine like my rims can, anything but itty bitty/
i've been in love and had my soul shook/
got my first tag and i destroyed the whole book/
my money and heart this fuckin hoe took/
tore this style apart and mastered the whole look/
cant stop the crime, so im chillen with mo crooks/
get a couple a dimes, a couple of nines/
go downtown and get a couple of fines/
brought the whole town down with a couple of minds/
the surround sound make bullets sneak from behind/
her ass so round i wanna break down and cry/
the hatred found the homicidal look im my eye/
so face the facts bitch dont u deny...
swich
10-29-2006, 01:48 AM
yeah im drunk.....
im drunk again like literally/
bust a flow and takin more citys/
got my game up so im countin more fittys/
my love is dark and cold/
so bold i sold the dro from the back of my old/
thats the old mobil i steal gold/
sell on ebay they dont care what we say/
unless we got a gat that black, these r my G dayz/
sit back and mess with that G play/
got my nails long so i seem gay/
but its for the coke that i love to choke.../
on... guns like sadam, lay a big bomb/
stay high all day long, forgive me if im wrtong/
but i dont give a shit, get a hit i just spit/
all the competition is so wak, talk shit but cant bak.../
up the stuff they say, im bak away with my ak and let it spray/
retain the fame but im not fray, lonely all day, enimies at bay/
yeah im drunk........
DC_Crane
10-29-2006, 02:04 AM
Originally posted by swich@Oct 29 2006, 01:48 AM
yeah im drunk.....
im drunk again like literally/
bust a flow and takin more citys/
got my game up so im countin more fittys/
my love is dark and cold/
so bold i sold the dro from the back of my old/
thats the old mobil i steal gold/
sell on ebay they dont care what we say/
unless we got a gat that black, these r my G dayz/
sit back and mess with that G play/
got my nails long so i seem gay/
but its for the coke that i love to choke.../
on... guns like sadam, lay a big bomb/
stay high all day long, forgive me if im wrtong/
but i dont give a shit, get a hit i just spit/
all the competition is so wak, talk shit but cant bak.../
up the stuff they say, im bak away with my ak and let it spray/
retain the fame but im not fray, lonely all day, enimies at bay/
yeah im drunk........
you're literally drunk again?...or just figuritively? (sp?)
swich
10-30-2006, 04:34 AM
literally...
RepUrSet
10-30-2006, 05:55 PM
its the king of hood hop
grab mah glock
and put it to ya toy fuck
the way i produce throws
and nobody knows
the secret life of mine
get mad ups
and avoid cops like land mines
my rhymes r diabolic
kid ill have yo bitch
all up on my dick
the way that i spit shit
at yo face literally
im sick lyrically
you dunno about me
cross me out and ill bomb
u so ull be in the ground im standing on--done.
Rap dont make me laugh this a graffiti site ...!
RepUrSet
10-30-2006, 06:52 PM
yeah, its also a GENERAL DISCUSSION THREAD
einstein...
PureSole
10-30-2006, 09:18 PM
My gats go clack clack
Paint in my back pack
Whos the best dont ask that
Your level? Way past that
lol
peng.2
10-30-2006, 09:45 PM
i chill on kontiki street with that C.S.T
man you betta step back,cuz you aint shit compared to me
i stay in 2-10 yeah i stay in TEXAS
i got my benz out side but im swangin in my lexus
swich
10-31-2006, 03:36 AM
i break back bones, i break neck bones/
break thousand dollar bills and my flows break headphones/
dont stop chokin till i hear silence/
and blood drips out your ears , i love violence/
scarred up from fight clubs, and stray slugs/
wobble and shake becuz im on drugs/
in the corner of the room shakin like a fiend/
just a mourner in the loom of makin all this green/
dried up and tossed aside, my heart died where the hopeless reside/
findin love , believe me i tried,but i was left cold and white with hatred inside....
ToXiK
10-31-2006, 05:28 AM
theses cats are mad,
but this mime is sad,
free cheetos over here,
make the girls smack their rears?
RepUrSet
10-31-2006, 07:49 AM
CHEETOS?!
lol was that random orrrrr is it another new "cheese" word for money :unsure:
TalibKweli
11-01-2006, 07:59 AM
Originally posted by PureSole@Oct 30 2006, 09:18 PM
My gats go clack clack
Paint in my back pack
Whos the best dont ask that
Your level? Way past that
lol
that was actually good
swich
11-02-2006, 06:34 AM
why do women have mouths? hmm...to suck i suppose/
and if i cant stick my dick in um theyll get fucked by my flows/
lol!
swich
11-02-2006, 06:34 AM
edit
sketch3
11-02-2006, 11:54 AM
im so angry every time i reply to took1 i write sum long ass flow and wen i finish it fucking flood controles on me.this is like the fourth time,ur secretly a mod rnt u ur just scarde to battle me lol
swich
11-05-2006, 04:05 AM
these females are naturally mad at me/
reject me b4 the first date and glad to be/
the reason i walk around with a tech and a noose on my neck/
let bullets spray till there aint nuthin left/
im runnin out of breath it must be the stress/
ladies suck a dick and then get undressed/
ima made man keep a mit on my gun hand/
see me hit the block u better run man/
the pain in my back is pullin me down/
pistols pop but no one heard a sound/
boddies drop and flop to the ground/
im livin life foul/
so im playin outta bounds/
SoDamnFresh
11-05-2006, 07:16 PM
yo. Its not a freestyle but i wanna know what ya'll think of it. Its a CSI crime story type rhyme...
as the 2 detectives step into the scene of the murder,
a scene so horrific niether one of them had heard-a.
hands clasp across the face to stop the inhilation,
of rotton flesh, the victims death extreme mutilation.
blood across the floor and the walls even more so,
the 1st detective crouches down and kneels by the torso
whoever did this held a grudge, he had to presume,
a dedicated killer with the time it consume
to brutally bash the body till the man was half dead,
a struggle had ensued, he could tell by the tread-
marks on the floor made in the blood that he had bled,
the 2nd detective shouts out 'hey! I found the head,'
it was trapped behind a speaker and some other music gear,
the skull was so severly crushed it was no longer sphere,
and even tho the eyes were gouged and cut from ear to ear,
there still appeared a very clear expression of fear!
Now they fond the head they could I.D. the victim,
and get one step closer to why the killer picked him,
and acted out these extreme scenes of pestilence,
the 2 detectives get to work to find more evidence,
and relevance to how this gruesome story had to start,
but more was revealed as they dicover body-parts!
the victims left hand was found chopped behind the sofa,
a force enflicted on it that his body couldnt cope-a,
they almost missed it coz down there was darker then
they pulled it out and still gripped to the severed hand was a marker pen!
the plot thickens, they look around for discarded scraps of paper,
maybe he had written a note that would uncover the caper,
but all they found was a black-book that was covered in graffiti,
with all the pages ripped out in a mannor so indescretely,
the 1st detective ponders as he starts to write the file,
maybe the killer held a grudge against this writers style?
but then they spot a hole in the wall by the light stand,
and lodged in this hole's the victims right hand!
as they carefully move the limb they discover its not alone,
coz gripped in this appendage was a microphone!
'I might of known,' said the first detective to the other,
the second says, 'what? tell me, what did you un-cover?'
the first sighs,' its the same old song...
this is the scene of an MC battle thats gone wrong!
and i've only ever seen 1 man cause this much damage,
but no-one knows who he is coz afterwards he would vanish
all we know is he's ill and his style is never shoddy,
and he always leaves a note some-where on the victims body!'
they take the mangled corpes for an autopsy check,
and find the blood-stained note stuffed down the victims neck,
they read the note aloud to put an end to this thriller,
it read, 'Amber MC, the Cereal Wack Toy MC KILLER!'
heheheh
sketch3
11-06-2006, 01:18 PM
good kind of like slick ricks story telling style
fuckthatshit
11-06-2006, 04:11 PM
WOOOOSH! what all this woman hating
what you act like you never seen a chick painting
nah my mouth isnt just for suck
and if you can do the deed you one lame fuck
and if you cant make your chicken cluck
then you shit outta luck
what this emo shit ?
y'all scared to be yourself?
you gotta hide like you a piece on the shelf?
lemme tell you what i know about oneself..........
see so maybe isa one dont got a sick reputation
but i get shits done i do this through art communication
not by proving myself on a forum
because this is a result of extreme boredom
yeh damn right i gets my throw down
and my ground up aint full blown
but im hitting your town
so watch out you never knwo when isa will be around
g;ye :ph34r: :ph34r:
TalibKweli
11-06-2006, 04:34 PM
hehe
i liked it
killah-EF
11-06-2006, 05:05 PM
holiday-Ef up in this ass-bitchez....
like on 12oz u knwo my name...smash-snitchez
I be...drinking fortees in court
I be...hitting shortees with my fork
i burse....re-earse...****...i freestyle, fuck a verse...
im dirty but my pieces iz clean like my man kers.....
isa....comes dope like rza....laid back, got me smiling like mono..lisssa
i gives you no (advice to rap)...i listen to sean price cuz im (nice like that)
styles i break-sunn....
i gets fatter n fatter over the years.... like raekwon
yall feminen.....you gets worse n worse like eminem
most of yall rhyme with only one sylables anyways........(cuz you faggets dotn understand double or triple rhyming lyriciswm)
SoDamnFresh
11-06-2006, 07:14 PM
ha ha... fuck you.
I'm liberal,
when it comes to the lyrical,
i'm not typical,
aint no miricle, other MCs? make them sound pitiful,
I get rid of all the stress
fuck you and your jiggly breast,
test me? you wanna get off my testes! please,
coz i vocaly express openly the feeling comin over me,
aim to please with no jiggery-pokery
i rip it totaly! right infront of your red eyes,
once i got a word in edgwise my head size
INCREASE
coz i live peace,
in these days of war,
your vocal chords could do much more,
to stop the violence,
stop fuckin up our enviroments
coz I'll rinse all you tyrants tryin to silence
the AMBER!
heheh...
killah-EF
11-06-2006, 09:42 PM
i dids not "appreach ya sample"....yalll fruit get smoked like "shisha fo example"
i sip colt45 and drive, yo im live,
no lyer...no one gets flyer......
faggets like the hobbits...i put the sire..on fire....
quick n slick like whena steel at canadian tire......call me sire.....
what up amber.....i dont know your wife...but i bang-her....
with no manner......kill her...and hang-her
no disrecpect.....from the efeckt....im jsut a battle emcee...dont temp me
SoDamnFresh
11-07-2006, 07:20 AM
aiight... its all love man. check it-
now I roll the dutch
with the golden touch
and fold it such
the rizla can hold as much as possible
raps colossal by force of habit
and I never except any less than 24 carrot
I'ma ignite like propane,
people think i'm so vain,
but yo, they just got they eyes on the gold chain!
whats up with me? you know, same ol same ol'
still storin my lyrics in a pot at the end of the rainbow
I'm after gold like ocean eleven,
and i got the gold finger, fuck double O seven, yo!
low and behold there's no comparison,
I'm goin for gold like Audley Harrison,
just embarassing MCs, my skills tend to flatten 'em
I rock the gold coz I cant afford platinum,
I batter 'em, bussin it like Jill Scott told 'em
'I'm livin my life like its Golden' whut!
SoDamnFresh
11-07-2006, 07:26 AM
the microphone I clutch,
with the golden touch,
and flow with such,
immense passion no-one can budge me!
If you hold a grudge be
extra cautious
my gold septer wrapped around ya head will make ya nautious
got the flawless gold smuggled over from Calais,
in a 60ft yaght dressed like Spandau Ballet,
'Gold, GOLD! Always believe in your soul'
your indestructable,
saw the police but i ducked em all
fuck them all! coz i just break loose, I know the feds,
sleeping easier, I got the goose that lays the golden eggs,
on the regs, but had to tie it down cos it flew!
I got the golden touch man beleive me its true!
heheh... written, but whatever.
kids tryin tame styles and ridin em like they wilds
fuckin simple minded, pimple windin mill horse forced to run with blinders, blinded
fuck a petty bum thug and a stale stagnant freshness,
kids throw em up like I asked 'em if they had any questions
fuck a dumb verse, stick to your little formulated prose,
fuck this terse novice freestyle contingent, cause their "freestyle" BLOWS!
maLLe
11-07-2006, 09:15 AM
music in ma headphones
ken ring, its some dark tones
the night has been long
but i continue to bomb
its quite an exposed place
but risk is why im here
its what i like to face
i like the fear
finish the line
sign in with a tag
chrome gives it a nice shine
this is a damn nice piece!
shit what was that noise?
fuck theres the police
throw away my montana
shoulda run alot fasta...
fuckthatshit
11-07-2006, 11:22 AM
fag dont knwo bout double ryhming
but im accurate like the hubble in timing
A lot of people hear things and say things
check me empty of fear while i spray things
you know what im saying three letter steez
but youknow you aint playin you cant get bettre then these double D's
I keeps it real no doubt
when my pager beeps it means clout
isa ones out
keep it comin
like beatbox humming
and lil faggots prematurally cumming
isa isa one is suprisingly stunning
keep keep you running
killah-EF
11-07-2006, 11:46 PM
you want to fuck withme.....no one can stand next to me....
in line...front of me....on extacy....i give sex fo free...the EF i be...
my ass blast.....atms we starts riot like chino and ras kass....
holiday-ef....
i fuck bitches.....by the back...
i stab snitches....cuz they wack...
i... smoke grass.....holiday-ef only do.....dope graff....
bitchez find me hot but hate me cuz i gots...no classs
im up...yo ass.....
i got the.....double rhymes...
got the.....troubled mind....
peace to amber...that **** is hot....(what)
peace to all the gurls that take it in the butt....
swich
11-08-2006, 03:20 AM
i try to be nice to these sluts/
buy ice with the cuts and free ice with the punch/
play dice for her lunch and pay the price for her cunt/
but whats the repay? "i think that we need space"/
so all ladies can die slow cuz only hoes exist these days/
need pay? well hey not from me babe/
why not try sellin ya shit offa ebay?/
well hey this isnt a tragedy so dont feel bad 4 me/
feel sad for the hag thatll gag on the rag for me/
im tipsy still staggering, drink till i pass out/
go to the dealership and let all my cash out/
dont even ask how i got it in the first place/
i get my money the worst way/
see on your birthday its really your curse day/
cuz ill come around and let my ak have its first spray/
so to end the freestyle and say bye...i got 1 message/
if you got a pussy between your thighs then bitch count your blessins/
SoDamnFresh
11-08-2006, 09:18 AM
I'ma Terrorist!
now get with this!
all the infidels get dead to this!
took enuff shit, now feel the fist!
Fuck george bush, never kneel to his
train of thought, now its no hold barred,
i gotta react, gonna burn they're heart,
fuck a debate, they're gonna learn they part,
send em anthrax in their birthday card!
crossed the line a long time ago,
done enuff damage now its time to go,
yo, it dont take much for me to find my flows,
like it dont take much for me to find my foes.
all i gotta do is switch on the TV
everyday tryin to decieve me,
false images tryin to feed me,
it aint hard to tell, man, its easy!
...when you meet your demiser,
better believe its gonna be a surpriser
mobile phone connect to the device
makin C4 outta fertilizer!
whom make the place go boom?
litteraly, i mean the place go BOOM!
gonna meet your doom,
too late for sorry when your deep in your tomb!
I could be anybody, hard for you to assume,
1 in a million, still you shoot a brazillian!
heheh...
fuckthatshit
11-08-2006, 10:46 AM
Originally posted by swich@Nov 8 2006, 03:20 AM
i try to be nice to these sluts/
buy ice with the cuts and free ice with the punch/
play dice for her lunch and pay the price for her cunt/
but whats the repay? "i think that we need space"/
so all ladies can die slow cuz only hoes exist these days/
need pay? well hey not from me babe/
why not try sellin ya shit offa ebay?/
well hey this isnt a tragedy so dont feel bad 4 me/
feel sad for the hag thatll gag on the rag for me/
im tipsy still staggering, drink till i pass out/
go to the dealership and let all my cash out/
dont even ask how i got it in the first place/
i get my money the worst way/
see on your birthday its really your curse day/
cuz ill come around and let my ak have its first spray/
so to end the freestyle and say bye...i got 1 message/
if you got a pussy between your thighs then bitch count your blessins/
be and ass to these sluts
theyll call ya telling you bout they emo cuts
a girl is real complifuckingcated
and rarely you'll find one properly educated
most chicks past dated, mind faded..
but yo, some girls gotta get thiers
and it aint nothin when aguy rapes in pairs
..
look it from my view
silly lil girl who juss lost her boo
i gotta say im happier like that too, foo!
but yo all a girl really wants is someone to be real
someone they can cuddle to and feel.........
if the chicks all after your paper
then you gotta picks a chick thats more proper
these stupid lil gold digging sluts
they dont even feel a thing up da butt
what you think you the only one on that fliptop?
so if youre tired of these cheap hoes
lemme know ill stomp em wit my steel toes
now i hope now yu gona find a shorty
a shorty who can kick it and sip a forty
real real raw
but when it get tot eh sack she buckwild
cowboy style..........
i dont got love for bitches
leave they stupid ass in ditches.
isa one is too fresh and isnt hating on girls
im juss saying fill the dumb sluts cheeks like squierrls
dumb bitches i aint got love fo'
TalibKweli
11-08-2006, 11:19 AM
not much of a keystyle, but Isa's verse made me think of my ex and the shit we went through, here's a lil somethin
i usually rhyme to entertain, fuck fame, im in it for game
its a damn shame, bitches aint the same, when they fuck you but scream out another man's name
im gonna take this to a new level, i dont think the same cause of that horny devil
she fucked me, but not just with her body, this bitch was hiding from me a nasty hobby,
i was blind, i didnt see the signs, im sexin with this girl but she aint even mine, c'mon now, that aint right, wherever we went she turned heads, bitch was outta sight, thats right, we were tight, never had a fight, till that one night
It was 7pm, i dropped by to say hi, what did she reply
im with another guy, i dont feel the same about you like i use to, im so confused, im not used to, the fact, that i said i loved you and you loved me back, panic attack, i felt like falling on my back, but for a second, i stopped and i thought, what about all that shit i bought, the times i came over cause you were feeling down, times i made myself look foolish and act like a clown, just to see you smile, turn that frown upside down, a night on the town, she was monkeyin' around, and i didnt have a clue, i loved you, you loved me, i guess things arent what they're meant to be
till this day, you hold a place in my heart, i would give it all up to give it another start, 5 years we've been apart, i heard you had a girl, im happy....but answer me this bitch.....you know who's the babies daddy?
fuckthatshit
11-08-2006, 11:23 AM
theres just one thing i wana make clear
something for all ya'll shittalkers to hear
just because a chicken get her grind on
does it make her a hoe? hang on
so you guys go on a multiple chick fucking rampage
and you celebrate but when its the other way around its another page
..another story
so when you fuck a shorty maybe youll do it properly
cause girls talk and they like to laugh at your lil willy
so take me seriously
im only doing this cuz i got sick personality
they all want me physically
but it aint one can handle this mentality
thats when i say peace buddy
im toooooo raw fresh
and you choked outa that 3 bat sesh!
pusssssssssy!
TalibKweli
11-08-2006, 11:38 AM
zing!
explosivo_420
11-08-2006, 11:47 AM
yo talib theres a talib kweli song on beatbasement.com radio right now
TalibKweli
11-08-2006, 11:49 AM
good, good for em
Jesus Christ Was A Gangsta Rapper
fuckthatshit
11-08-2006, 12:07 PM
yo im fucking CRAZY.
and mad lazy
but all i wana do is puff on this dro
whats that ? you cant tak no mo?
i live for few things
but im open to new flings
one, i live for mary
esp when shes blushing and hairy
also i love my colt forty five
one of those get the party live.
YE YE SHAWN-A PAUL
explosivo_420
11-08-2006, 12:13 PM
whos arm is this? i musta cut it off at the pharmacist for not renewin my 7th perscription of darvocets
killah-EF
11-08-2006, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by explosivo_420@Nov 8 2006, 12:13 PM
whos arm is this? i musta cut it off at the pharmacist for not renewin my 7th perscription of darvocets
im sorry felllow.......buit this aint a freestyle on yur lyrics.....but emiem's first bar on his verse in Watch Dees featuring Thirsten Howl the Third....niggga you cant fool me or my knowledge
TalibKweli
11-08-2006, 04:44 PM
EF drops knowledge
you see eminem's new track with akon i think :lol: oh my god, i wanted to vomit
SoDamnFresh
11-08-2006, 06:52 PM
yo... thirstin howl smaks it on that tune too. 'I hit harder than 4 men with a low blow... with no cup!' heheh
yo!
when it comes to pussy I can never be finniky,
I wanna go down between their legs until my chin is stiky
I could never find the female anatomy icky,
so cut the innocence, this aint Minnie and Micky!
but still I keep it animated,
I salivated over her and now i'm dehydrated,
I need to drink a fuckin brew,
whilst i'm finger fuckin you,
thinkin things up i could do,
to make her more moist,
pass the raw oyst erz!
and other afrodisiacs,
to make her ease relax
into the sleasy acts
i got planned, turn her into roxanne!
so put on your red light and the delight will continue,
I dont stop lickin, suckin and fuckin until you
CLIMAX
I'm larger than life like the Imax,
so lie back
as we get down and dirty to one of my tracks!
I could never consider lies,
for i could never criticise
your style,
but still you cant resist my come hither eyes!
heheh... abit of filth there. for the ladies... :P
TalibKweli
11-08-2006, 06:55 PM
<_<
swich
11-09-2006, 03:34 AM
Originally posted by fuckthatshit+Nov 8 2006, 10:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (fuckthatshit @ Nov 8 2006, 10:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-swich@Nov 8 2006, 03:20 AM
i try to be nice to these sluts/
buy ice with the cuts and free ice with the punch/
play dice for her lunch and pay the price for her cunt/
but whats the repay? "i think that we need space"/
so all ladies can die slow cuz only hoes exist these days/
need pay? well hey not from me babe/
why not try sellin ya shit offa ebay?/
well hey this isnt a tragedy so dont feel bad 4 me/
feel sad for the hag thatll gag on the rag for me/
im tipsy still staggering, drink till i pass out/
go to the dealership and let all my cash out/
dont even ask how i got it in the first place/
i get my money the worst way/
see on your birthday its really your curse day/
cuz ill come around and let my ak have its first spray/
so to end the freestyle and say bye...i got 1 message/
if you got a pussy between your thighs then bitch count your blessins/
be and ass to these sluts
theyll call ya telling you bout they emo cuts
a girl is real complifuckingcated
and rarely you'll find one properly educated
most chicks past dated, mind faded..
but yo, some girls gotta get thiers
and it aint nothin when aguy rapes in pairs
..
look it from my view
silly lil girl who juss lost her boo
i gotta say im happier like that too, foo!
but yo all a girl really wants is someone to be real
someone they can cuddle to and feel.........
if the chicks all after your paper
then you gotta picks a chick thats more proper
these stupid lil gold digging sluts
they dont even feel a thing up da butt
what you think you the only one on that fliptop?
so if youre tired of these cheap hoes
lemme know ill stomp em wit my steel toes
now i hope now yu gona find a shorty
a shorty who can kick it and sip a forty
real real raw
but when it get tot eh sack she buckwild
cowboy style..........
i dont got love for bitches
leave they stupid ass in ditches.
isa one is too fresh and isnt hating on girls
im juss saying fill the dumb sluts cheeks like squierrls
dumb bitches i aint got love fo' [/b][/quote]
check it...
i tried all kinds a bitches/
from those who want rags to those who fiend for riches/
but in the end each rejected me/
so now i rape sluts in there butt screamin"show respect to me"/
true love is one thing i never found/
so im pullin up to a bitch with a tech to eject some rounds/
heartbroke and alone i stayed callin on my phone/
she heard my voice and next i heard the dial tone/
so then i made her cry and moan and die slow/
the hydro caused the death of 5 mo'/
currdling screams pleade please oh please/
my ammo made from gold so im sprayin with cheese/
forgott my ice at home so im delayin the breeze/
your man aint worth a spit so break up fast hoe/
females must love takin shit cuz they keep fallin for assholes....
fuckthatshit
11-09-2006, 11:34 AM
"your man aint worth a spit so break up fast hoe/
females must love takin shit cuz they keep fallin for assholes.... "
i have nothing to say...but it seems cuz they got something bout em chu know! like why go after that chickwhen you know she aint on the dick.....HHAHA word up to raping bitches
if youre at that low
then go kill yourself a hoe
swich
12-06-2006, 04:07 AM
my flow is astronomical, spittin like a llama do/
hit the scene lookin clean, inflictin terror like osama do/
rap will never hounour you, these motanna paints will bomb on you/
ima do, wutever it is i wanna do, wutever it is im gonna do.../
ill make sure i get blazed seeing optical, my females are tropical/
suicide is still topical, so much coke in my throat its undroppable/
my game is untopable,unstopable, ill rock a hoe/
got the flow , got the dro, and got the blow/
its too soon but i really got to go.....
swich
12-10-2006, 07:13 PM
i spend nights cruisin gettin lost in the fog/
free baseing coke as we pass by the cops/
whyd i even do it? well i guess i was lost/
a lonely mother fucker whether i do it or not/
only drink liquore whether i brew it or not/
underground tunes whether i screw it or chop/
high as a birdie cuz i flew to the top/
but swich one aint no better than the other mayn/
drop the top and recline on peanut butter mayn/
got so many rocks and glocks that im makin *****s stutta mayne/
i cut a vein and blood'll rain,goin bizerk so i better close the shutters mayn...
TalibKweli
12-10-2006, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by fuckthatshit@Nov 9 2006, 11:34 AM
your man aint worth a spit so break up fast hoe/
females must love takin shit cuz they keep fallin for assholes
ohhhhh
that right there was sweet
swich
12-12-2006, 05:26 AM
Originally posted by TalibKweli+Dec 10 2006, 08:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TalibKweli @ Dec 10 2006, 08:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-fuckthatshit@Nov 9 2006, 11:34 AM
your man aint worth a spit so break up fast hoe/
females must love takin shit cuz they keep fallin for assholes
ohhhhh
that right there was sweet [/b][/quote]
bout time i got some props from u...
swich
12-12-2006, 05:32 AM
man its swich-eezy-wizzle/
poppin *****s like they pimples/
oh i think she like my dimples/
bout to rock the instrumental/
when i flow i keep it simple/
a womans body aint a temple/
a place to stick my dick up into/
rocks like pebbles like they fruity/
on the block i get to shooting/
on my lot i get to looting/
like a pirate, i get my booty/
lovin how she gimme goodies/
sportin timbs and black hoodies...
swich
12-12-2006, 05:33 AM
man its swich-eezy-wizzle/
poppin *****s like they pimples/
oh i think she like my dimples/
bout to rock the instrumental/
when i flow i keep it simple/
a womans body aint a temple/
a place to stick my dick up into/
rocks like pebbles like they fruity/
on the block i get to shooting/
on my lot i get to looting/
like a pirate, i get my booty/
lovin how she gimme goodies/
sportin timbs and black hoodies...
Ozone
12-12-2006, 08:36 AM
i get straight to the point like a nail
but im not cheap like an oxfam sale
i spit bars till your face turns pale
and you havent got the physical power to exhale
---------------------------------------------------------
Blood i seperate the strong from the weak
im grim when i reap so prepare 4 defeat
n i stay gulley blud from my head 2 my feet
thats y i dont take a step i just leap
my reps so high that it gets a nose bleed
if u dont kno blud then get 2 kno please
cah u sayin 2 me dat my bars aint deep
is like sayin dat der aint 7 days in a week
any level ur on ive gon past it
any gyal ur on den ive alreddy packed it
but the only girl u can get as ya bitch
has fucked evry man on her contact list
ur girls narsty, ur girls grimey
i feel da earth shake wen she starts dutty whinin
if she cums ups 2 me n starts grindin
il hav 2 get out the place lyk quiktimin
------------------------------------------------------
holla atcha boi
Bruce_1nR
12-12-2006, 01:18 PM
Originally posted by Ozone@Dec 12 2006, 08:36 AM
Blood i seperate the strong from the weak
im grim when i reap so prepare 4 defeat
n i stay gulley blud from my head 2 my feet
thats y i dont take a step i just leap
my reps so high that it gets a nose bleed
if u dont kno blud then get 2 kno please
cah u sayin 2 me dat my bars aint deep
is like sayin dat der aint 7 days in a week
any level ur on ive gon past it
any gyal ur on den ive alreddy packed it
but the only girl u can get as ya bitch
has fucked evry man on her contact list
ur girls narsty, ur girls grimey
i feel da earth shake wen she starts dutty whinin
if she cums ups 2 me n starts grindin
il hav 2 get out the place lyk quiktimin
------------------------------------------------------
holla atcha boi
Quick timin' rhymin', the fuck is that?/
Your raps is weak-and-dont-you-dare-sleep-on-that/
Its a fact, its a pun, your 'skills' is no fun, son/
So play dumb, like charles ray with a gun, bum/
I spit one, two, seven days a week/
steppin to me is like one-two, DEFEAT
And the only blood there'll be, is when you lyin on the mat/
oh oh six three oh-right-across ya back/
And thats a fact not a joke, so stop laughin/
Like KRS-1- my rhymes is blastin'
I could go on for days and days spittin at ya 'clown'/
But Ima dip off and let the guilt take you down.
-and I really got nothin...
explosivo_420
12-12-2006, 01:40 PM
i challange you- bruce 1nr,
as a matter of fact i ate your sister out last summer!!
i made her cumer,
not once twice but for the length of a cucumber!
Bruce_1nR
12-12-2006, 01:43 PM
uhhhh....ok
explosivo_420
12-12-2006, 01:51 PM
how come you say it like its an everyday thing?
aru so used to having your sister bein everyone fling?
just for a night the town would ruff her up tight,
the line to get in was 45 people in sight
!ASK?
12-12-2006, 06:13 PM
PULL OUT THE MONTANA, POP OFF THE CAP, YOU GET THE CLICK, CLACK, AND THE SPRAY WITH THE FAT CAP.
G-Fat
12-12-2006, 07:53 PM
ground ups, to pieces give a toy a can and all they'll spray is feces.
ShIfTeD
12-12-2006, 07:59 PM
Originally posted by !ASK?@Dec 12 2006, 06:13 PM
PULL OUT THE MONTANA, POP OFF THE CAP, YOU GET THE CLICK, CLACK, AND THE SPRAY WITH THE FAT CAP.
since when are kids rappin bout caps?
the last time you saw me
i was popin at your cap
you know who i am
the man in all black
walkin up to walls
sprayin with the fats
dropin tags left and right
once you look im out of sight
youll never catch me
cuz im sneaky as the grinch
and if you do catch me
youll find me with some cans
mabe even a homemade
rockin it from home mane
get the drips like rain
drippidy drop
all you hear is the sound of the ink drops
hittin heaven spots
chicago...the place where its at
where your shit gets buffed on a day to day basis
gotta get the good s***
or else you wont get up
cuz thats what its all about..........
gettin ya name up
nah mean!!
G-Fat
12-12-2006, 09:13 PM
...we rock spots too hot for toys to touch
like a stud we be up in yo' bitches g-spot
tits, clits and bong hits what were about
we hear cops shout
we ignore it, cause we know what it's about
we'll never stop bombing, til we out number the ones in iraq
like a bag of skittles we flow colors like no others
fats to skinny's we'll bring it back to the 50's
we aint no "jack-a-ninnies"
swich
12-13-2006, 03:35 AM
who the fuck wanna challenge me/
i dice up this word play like i do human anatomy/
and im a prophecy, to hott to be touching me/
cocky *****s cocky cuz they suckin me/
u better duck from me, i let my fist fly/
leave u skinless like a french fry/
my guns speak to me, all yall is weak to me/
inflict conflict, gats click thats the peak to me/
residents know me as the drunk mad man/
bodies left in trash cans, doin what a man can/
the trench conceils so much ammo/
strapped like rambo, cant stop the damn flow/
flee from the scene, as im sippin codein/
ice on my neck ,ice on my pinkie ring....
Bruce_1nR
12-13-2006, 01:07 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Dec 12 2006, 07:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Dec 12 2006, 07:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-!ASK?@Dec 12 2006, 06:13 PM
PULL OUT THE MONTANA, POP OFF THE CAP, YOU GET THE CLICK, CLACK, AND THE SPRAY WITH THE FAT CAP.
since when are kids rappin bout caps?
the last time you saw me
i was popin at your cap
you know who i am
the man in all black
walkin up to walls
sprayin with the fats
dropin tags left and right
once you look im out of sight
youll never catch me
cuz im sneaky as the grinch
and if you do catch me
youll find me with some cans
mabe even a homemade
rockin it from home mane
get the drips like rain
drippidy drop
all you hear is the sound of the ink drops
hittin heaven spots
chicago...the place where its at
where your shit gets buffed on a day to day basis
gotta get the good s***
or else you wont get up
cuz thats what its all about..........
gettin ya name up
[/b][/quote]
Word up, shifted, the man in black/
cuttin kids up like fiends for crack/
dont front on him cuz you'l catch a smack/
and its a fact jack,that-I got his back/
let me back him up son, yo shit is wack-
they call me the broke one/
and that aint a joke son/
you step up to me-I'll pull your brain out yer throat son
come packin-got ya crew runnin, no frontin/
We'll figure you out like in good will huntin
now Im out-time to dip, goin on a trip/
headin to your hood, its your head Im gonna rip/
so dont come up on me talkin bout ya grip/
come talkin that shit and you might take a slip.
-blah..chi town stand up!-
Ozone
12-15-2006, 07:04 AM
y chat manz ... blood u aint got non
say u wanna clash barz u dun drop non
get out my face cah u will get chop don
claim 2 hold shoterz u neva shot non
ur not sik... im da hot 1
u cant murk me say wah u want don
run up gumz bout ur fat mom don
bak hand slap 2 ur face ur a pum pum
and wot don
suk ur mom don
ur crew r waste ill murk on my 1 don
get bak blood 2 were u cum fron
back baked u girl rudeboi no comdon
2nd thought bout givin dis man da 1 bomb
licked so hard dat it bruesed ur son's son
rudeboi i wud run don
bak 2 ur mom n bak ur pum pum
fuck bruce 1nr ur fake like a gal with a wig on roads
-----------------------------------------
Bruce_1nR
12-15-2006, 08:51 AM
uhh....COULD YOU TRY SPEAKING FUCKING ENGLISH!!!!!!
Bruce_1nR
12-15-2006, 01:01 PM
Here we go...
Ozone, More like a Bo-Zone/
Half witted-no style king with NO throne/
I treat you like a dog, so here take this bone/
and run, run, run, run back home.
The Broke One is here son/
yo crew run in fear son/
leavin you like the queer one-dumb son/
And as I pull my gun, I see ya eyes widen/
Phone call to ya moms and she starts cryin
blud, wud, u shut up!/
u, want, 2, step up?/
cum up, u get fuk'd up-wut up?/
yer not up, ya goons git fuk'd up/
my squad just bucked up-fucked up, you and your woman *clack*clack*clack* and left you left footin
Fuck bruce1nr? Boy you doner/
I'm a stunner, you get locked up like Donner->
Donner-the cannable, son I'm an animal-just like ->
the Hanible-the damnable Broke One/
you choke son your rhymes is a joke son/
bend over ya girl and stick my dog in her bun son
Your teeth is yellow, (asian woman:)"Your smile like sunshine"/
My rhymes rhyme, my son shine heres-what-you-should-do-with-your-spare time/
Go home-snort a line of coke/
lay down on the couch and tok til you sputter and choke->
Just forget what you started/
drugs leave you retarded/
my-rhymes-on-time-my-lines-is-cold-blooded.
-----------------------------------------------------
And please, dont be so lazy as to not type out the whole word....fuck what you heard.
swich
12-16-2006, 03:25 AM
bruce get at a cat with skill/
these caps'll peel and blood'll spill/
my gat sends chills and makes u lose ur meal/
try battlin swich and see wut happens/
next thing u know my guns are clackin/
im back to rappin yall still with actin/
actin hard liek u go'n do sumthin/
ur verbal skills amount to nuthin/
im smokin a black in the back of my lac/
u smokin a black named jack with ur wrists and ankles on strap...
get back at me...
ShIfTeD
12-18-2006, 04:29 PM
oh shit mane...here we go
mother fuckers trien to get with the flow
step back......
ill make you get nautious
ill hold you upside down and make you eat garbage
switch...tryin to get nasty
boi ill turn you round and make you feel gassy
we dont switch shit n chicago mane
the only thing we swithin...
is ya mother fuckin gender mane!
ozone soundin like a toy runnin out of batterys
ill give you some of these triple a's
take em in the mornin
wake up...tell me whats on ya mind
dont give a fuck...get back behind
the line
soundin ass lokin mo fucka
tryin to sound like dog off deez nuts!
yeah bruce and shifted holdin it down
in the rap thread...
dont even make a sound
or get spit at!
with my millimeter
cuz in this city youll have nothin but fear!
BEEZ<---631
12-18-2006, 08:30 PM
breakin backs atackin metro tracks with that ultra flat black. leavin heads leakin,creepin with the criminaly insane that be fuckin wit yah brain scrawlin shit across the train, living life on the edge hangin off the side of a bridge on a 2 foot ledge
Whoring for glory--I consider you destitue
Hopping on tracks like a damn rapping prostitute
Selling your soul for five bars below par of this
How did the Devil agree to, straight buy your shit off,
Maybe I should start making calls, at all the fools
Tryin' to fake balls--But never at large, you just grow old
And fall
Fading into the next fad, what you thought was a wife
Was only a fan--And now that you're broke? Onto the next man
Onto the next man even my lyrics is drippin'
The menstrual cycle of life of me stoping the biting
And afterall the planning I'm constantly fighting y'all off
No one thought that a boy of the South could rap about more than pussy and crack
However he's training, consistantly whack
But I'm back, the number one fan of my cause
To prove to the world I was greater than the odds--
But odd-balls tryin' to stall me need to get up off me
Because as a mullatto I'm hotter than Coffy, blaze
Bitches like AIDS and there's no relief foryou ever
EVER
Never spit lies to the streets
Lyrically I'm a heathen, born from the fires of backstabbin' black cabin fever
But much like semen
I impregnate the fallopian form of you brain like a donor and just as a loner
I'm always the f irst mistah to reach the egg
And abort all the misguided shit in ya head--
A litteral mind buff--
I get the walls clean, like a mixed up Mister Clean glossed with Comet
I'm tired of hearin' the gossip
That *****s is sick--it's vomit-- also called Lyrical Nonsense
Ceaselessly violent is all that most spit, and revolution, and drugs, and fuckin' a bitch--Or talk about Kunta when he got the whip
I'm ignorin' that shit
Cause people like that stroke the ego of the bitches that Veto
And give evidence to the circumstance
Of the the battle-stance-called, an'ti-rap
But this is Liberal babble, fighting the Senatorial Cabals
Oh wait, I'm a rapper, my voice never travels
You mute my me 'cause...My vocals is moody, but never forget that I rap
Better than most of your favorite trappers
I never sold dope, never shot at the clits
Called egos that most rappers wind up leavin' wet in a ditch---
swich
12-19-2006, 06:47 AM
hey shifted i leave ya merked with my tag on ya shirt/
feel the girth of my worth and ya lines need some work/
who u kiddin talkin bout switchen my gender/
u been a fag in denial since kinder/
i make deathwishes reality and watch the reaper smilin at me/
tryna get high and happy as my gats is cryin at me/
why u lyin at me, sayin u and bruce holdin it down/
the only thing u hold is my dick as ur knees touchin the ground/
hear the sound? listne closer/
the only toast u packin is what u put in your toster/
and im not a boaster but lets face it prick/
why try to deny ur flow amounts to nuthin but shit.....
Bruce_1nR
12-19-2006, 07:08 AM
*cough cough cough*
Word up, Broke be spittin with skill/
treatin *****z up like I'm Dr.Phil/
Ask around, cats know I'm ill/
Time to make a choice like neo with the pills
Choice one, step to the Broke one/
get called out, played out, leave you feelin dumb son/
now you left out, me an ya girl havin fun/
now you locked out, me an ya girl gots a son
Choice two-Acknowledge what Broke do/
calm down, kick back and have a brew like Broke do/
I'll take you back to school, "'liek' wow, Broke's coo'"/
And that all I gotta say to you/
so tell me lil' homie, whatchu' wanna do?
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Sorry it took me a little bit to get this up...and once my school goes on winter break expect me to not be on here barely ever...
ShIfTeD
12-19-2006, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by swich@Dec 19 2006, 06:47 AM
hey shifted i leave ya merked with my tag on ya shirt/
feel the girth of my worth and ya lines need some work/
who u kiddin talkin bout switchen my gender/
u been a fag in denial since kinder/
i make deathwishes reality and watch the reaper smilin at me/
tryna get high and happy as my gats is cryin at me/
why u lyin at me, sayin u and bruce holdin it down/
the only thing u hold is my dick as ur knees touchin the ground/
hear the sound? listne closer/
the only toast u packin is what u put in your toster/
and im not a boaster but lets face it prick/
why try to deny ur flow amounts to nuthin but shit.....
boit tryin to act hard
i bet you are
last time i saw you
you were up in jail
big black mans female
getin taged fom behind
you said you left your tag on my shirt
look at your behind
only way you get up
is if you climb dudes dicks
i see your stupid ass
lookin all ashy...in the corner boy ill fuck you naaaasty
about that gun of yours
i heard it was fake
i heard you were popin bb's at fools tryin to get that cake
noone wants to hear your sorry ass rhymes
boiii step back and get shifted to this time
the times 3:09
woop :o
DiStOrTiOn
12-19-2006, 05:25 PM
looks like shifted thinks he can spit it
but he deffinatly aint gifted
he just read green eggs 'n ham
he aint the ish but o, iam
ill spit at you fer breakfast
have your family mailed to you by christmas
you dont wanna be on my shitlist
cuz ill find your chick, brick on her tits
split her pussy lips with my dick
ill fuck her so good shell think shes dreamin
then shell wake up screamin
ill jizz on her face and smack her till shes bleedin
and if i see you
ill be like hey dude
that spit was true
ur girls in the cellar
want me to go get 'er fer you?
i tried, no disrespect.
sketch3
12-19-2006, 05:29 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! shifted is SICK. he rymed behind with behind
DiStOrTiOn
12-19-2006, 05:42 PM
just saw a commercial for comcast.
it was three dudes and a bitch rapping about how cool HD tv is
O_o
anyone else see a problem with that?
ShIfTeD
12-19-2006, 06:08 PM
Originally posted by DiStOrTiOn@Dec 19 2006, 05:25 PM
looks like shifted thinks he can spit it
but he deffinatly aint gifted
he just read green eggs 'n ham
he aint the ish but o, iam
ill spit at you fer breakfast
have your family mailed to you by christmas
you dont wanna be on my shitlist
cuz ill find your chick, brick on her tits
split her pussy lips with my dick
ill fuck her so good shell think shes dreamin
then shell wake up screamin
ill jizz on her face and smack her till shes bleedin
and if i see you
ill be like hey dude
that spit was true
ur girls in the cellar
want me to go get 'er fer you?
i tried, no disrespect.
tryin to get at me like you know its on
ima move ya till the break of dawn
i know how to spit
unlike you
you smell worse then week old poo
stinkin up the club
noone likes you
get the fuck back before i get at you
atliest i rhyme
better than a fairy tale
comin in here with less then any votes
the only thing thats distorted is ya tiny ass dick
swich
12-20-2006, 04:05 AM
SHIFTED....
spittin words in all directions wont get u a rep/
first try an make sense, THEN dissrespect/
i make ya bitch wet an she aint even seen my dick yet/
and as far as the trigger, i finger flip it/
boi what u sippin? it look liek grape soda/
i got purple drank in my cup as im blowin the mota/
we fukin with coca, bound and drag ya ass from the bota/
im an instrument of the rap legacy gettin my fame/
yall fake bitches cant level me, u stuck in the rain....
swich
12-23-2006, 03:53 AM
mosta days yall bitches aint stressin me/
the police arrestin me for possesion of killer crack recipies/
at my crib ya bitch confessin she wants to be undressin me/
is this a test for me? this life i lead/
get high of weed and proceed to make cunts bleed/
all i need is a cuarter ounce and few rocks of the white/
burnin the mic and earnin my right to walk away from a fight/
in there eyes im still the victor/
older figures still call me mister/
i got a rep,respect,a tech and a jet/
boast the most cuz i got toast thatll make ya drip sweat/
rockin the dreads they make me look crazy/
slouched on my couch and it make me look lazy/
some hoes so fat i cut um, they bleed gravy/
and still im prayin for the lord to save me/
im a lost cause that keep breakin the law/
this life is flawed so im brakin her jaw/
takin her bra and puttin my paste in her crouch/
she scared now cuz she see the blood stains on the couch/
women are all bitchesd sluts and hoes/
fuck any **** that give um money and clothes....
swich
12-25-2006, 02:40 AM
now im the only **** puttin up posts/
all yall fake ass bitches scared to boast/
pakin toast and yall know im the most/
reaLIZE THE GAME I GOT/
TAK SHOT AT THE COPS THE fME I GOT...YEAH IM DRUNK...
swich
12-26-2006, 01:59 AM
pakin pistols, persistent/
no time for intermission/
hesitation got me facin probation/
im lacin my weed with killer persuasion/
my contemplation of life leads to thoughts of leavin the earth/
ever since my birth ive been facein the curse/
facin the struggle you know that its trouble/
with this much ice on my neck its hard to be humble/
hennessy shots and on the tears commin down/
i get around still clown underground is my sound/
i never found a reason for bliss/
i wanna see her hips bouncin over my dick/
and still im pissed over past re-lay-tionships/
im bassin it got my ears ringin and stingin/
know that im blingin drug feindin and demons/
are still chillen in the back of my mind/
the reaper watches, it'd be a lie to say that im fine/
mentally unstable, close to losin sanity /
the bitches got me spendin dollas on vanity/
and can it be, im just stuck in the lust/
who can u trust no hesitation to bust/
violence in this life i lead is a must....
Tensor
12-26-2006, 05:00 PM
DiStOrTiOn, thought you played alot on sex so i kinda made this for you:
Fuck you cats, your hard n party with trance/trans, (transvestites)
hookin up a dance with mens n no pants,
love at first glance? damn.. dont wanna know where he stick his cans,
got Dirty hands and im not talkin bout the movie or france.
exclusive pictures of explicit content gets posted without note,
careful, this battyboy replys with pics n gayquotes.
I play with words, im the wolf, get that backwards,
you wacktard, got killed for writin in my yard..
some quick shit :D
TalibKweli
12-26-2006, 06:54 PM
swich, you STILL rappin about guns,killing,girls and money
for real, jump off the commercial hip hop bandwagon
wiggahata
12-27-2006, 02:27 AM
i'll eat your kids
once mike tyson said
now holyfield's ear is dead
dude is a foo and a cracka ass wegroid
hitcha wit an astroid
TAGGRBOI.
swich
12-27-2006, 02:57 AM
Originally posted by TalibKweli@Dec 26 2006, 06:54 PM
swich, you STILL rappin about guns,killing,girls and money
for real, jump off the commercial hip hop bandwagon
sure thing buddy....
swich
12-28-2006, 04:23 AM
shes so eloquent must be heaven sent/
or is she just another test that the devil sent/
i find myself dreamin of her, luv her brother/
to me hes a brother from another mother/
and i stutter when i speak to her/
tryna see if she feelin me , but its hard to see through her/
the pressure im facin got me hesitatin/
i wanna be her man, so i keep on chasin/
she could be a blessin, or the reason im stressin/
i luv her hugs, just like drugs, never learn my lesson/
resistance is useless, im fallin for her quikly/
and when i leave i wonder does she miss me/
would she kiss me if i tried, and would she cry if i died/
god give me the gift of love when i look in her eyes/
and if we make it together well wut could be better/
writin love letters sayin how ill never forgett her...
sp4i6
12-28-2006, 01:15 PM
fuck freestyle rapping i wanna see some freestyle stripping
sketch3
12-28-2006, 01:37 PM
u got it.............
when there is a , that means a pause, if there is no , then keep reading and no pause.
since there is no beats,
this is how you read it:
when there is a , that means you pause. If there is no , then countinuesly reading off it with no pauses.
*ahem*
when everybodys gone,
i take out the krylon,
to add a little spice to the walls im gonna right on
----
and i play it cool,
like Humphrey Bogart,
get it deep within the soul, and deep in the heart
so itll wont stop from the first second that you begin to start
because rapping is like writing poems, its a piece of art
and when you create art, you are the giver
so dont get scared when you spit only think of how you deliver
continuesly keep on flowing like the flow of a river
-----------------------------
they usually rhyme whats on there mind
but i have nothing on my mind,
all i want to do is make every line just incredibily rhyme
so at the end of it all, in your mind you'll hear a chime
its been awhile..
its lame,
the fact that you cant change.
your motherfuckn username.. <_<
insane .how can i possibly be noobie again
i was jinx671 i stay true
no pretend always to the end..
Caikerrr one niinee..
01-11-2007, 04:04 PM
Originally posted by Rend@Jan 10 2007, 05:50 PM
to add a little spice to the walls im gonna right on
*write. its *write.
:rolleyes: (and yes i am the fuckin grammar police.)
TalibKweli
01-12-2007, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by Caikerrr one niinee..@Jan 11 2007, 04:04 PM
:rolleyes: (and yes i am the fuckin grammar police.)
:lol:
zing
AKalien
01-13-2007, 01:32 AM
PUt your hands up motherfucker
now turn around and dance
now look at the bulge in my pants
your dog tongues my cock, bestiality is so much fun
my cocks as big as an elephant gun
double barreled get double the pleasure
watch me shoot my cum everywhere
i stick my dick, in your mouth
now watch me turn it inside out
now its a pussy, stare at my new clit
lick, finger it, fuck it, but don't get me pregnant
i stick a shaver in my neighbor's asshole
now shut up and lick my pumping penile pole
think of me while you throw gorilla shit
at the british cops and stick a gun to their clit
i need some sugarcane to put in my hair
with a icepick in my ass i watch the british people stare
i see the people in dresses, clown face paint such a crazy man
he bends me over and hits me with his mini-van
-kNiVeZ-
01-13-2007, 09:58 AM
look at you rappin, u fukin faggit...
i put more holes in you than a tennis racket.
lolz
Kayone707
01-13-2007, 10:02 AM
yo yo yo
its 7am.. shem, dem, kem,bem ...
cheahhhh boooooyyyyy!
yoyoyo
i freestyle rap..
even when im takin' a crap
oh snap..
i think i shit out a bottle cap
Sumoe
01-17-2007, 06:25 PM
AKalien-that is sum grimey shit :blink: , disgusting lmao, funny tho :lol:
TalibKweli
01-17-2007, 09:44 PM
February 3 2007 (Saturday @ 8hooPM)
Freestyle Battle
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Cover: 13$ at the door / 10$ in advance
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MainEvent
01-20-2007, 09:40 PM
is that in monteral talib?
KoreTwo
01-20-2007, 10:13 PM
Chik Chek One Two One Two
It's time to diss every single thing about you
From your face to your hair to your tiny wiener too
Shut your face you dirty mothaf**kin fool
All 2 inches when the going gets hard
Yip yappin rappin like a small dicked tard
Face cratered and grey like the goddamn moon
Blue f**kin mohawk don't make the ladies swoon
You think you so great, think you fly
But the truth is no matter how goddamn hard you try
You'd never spit a rhyme, never break a beat,
You tryin to beef wit me, where the f**k is your meat?
Bring out the guns but I don't see shit
Throw me a punch, what ya trying to hit?
You'll never touch me, im all the way up there
And all you'll ever get to do is f**kin sit and stare.
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Um... Please don't laugh at me :P
I was bored as hell. Took abt 5 mins to get that down.
Albert Fish
01-24-2007, 12:12 AM
ahhhh im bored
yo i just got offa work on the assembly line/
my girlfriend is so ugly it'll render you blind/
pretendin she's fine, but at least her friend is a dime/
i wont get more than eye candy unless im spendin my dimes/
but then she'll be mine, till then it's whatever/
i rhyme colder than a naked nigguh out in december/
i got no agenda, im a spontaneous cat/
you know im rhymin out of boredom miscellaneous rap/
bombing science forums call it graffonometry/
freestyle lyrics sharper than a benihana, b/
throw ups and bombs like a war hungry bulimic/
wastin time spittin rhymes, i don't care if you don't read it
PEACEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
dont steal my sweet metaphors lolsz
Billburg
01-24-2007, 12:52 AM
first try.......
I guess I'll try to lay one down
so yall can clown
but i dont care what ya think
so I'll just keep writin with indelible ink
make a mistake scribble it out
with my hand that bustles about
Man, why do i have to surf BS day in and day out
KoreTwo
01-24-2007, 06:08 AM
Mike Chek One Two One Two/
You think you so fly, what is you gon do/
Tryin to beef wit me, you must be a fool/
All you ever gon do is lie down and drool/
I hit on ur girl for every single meal/
Breakfast Lunch Dinner, I get the full deal/
You shoulda seen your chik climb all over me/
She was like the vines, and i was the tree/
Twisting, Grinding, she had me down/
Fooling with me like she was a clown/
Humping, Bumbping, she took all 8 inches in/
Even when we were done she still had that grin/
Meh...
-Last-
01-24-2007, 05:56 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j2WdHvZAmuA
KoreTwo
01-25-2007, 04:58 AM
The kid is wack. Smack.
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