toy simps

[Invert]

i second that. each bar in every letter should be, give or take the same. but practice makes perfect bro. i still dont have it.... at all. like.. i suck at graff lol


Well shit, if you suck I should just put down the marker haha,

Oh well, what can you do but practice eh,

Something I put together just now.. looks more proportional to me, I'm not too worried about how ugly my letters are right now, just working the bars for now.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4382/scan0013l.jpg

[Sbal]

E is muchhhhh better, get a new Y

[Jokz]

E is muchhhhh better, get a new Y
again, agreed. looks much better. once you get those down try different fonts if you will like lower case, rounded edges, etc. keep it up

[Sbal]

Jokz yours are cool, except that bottom J looks like a U, but its straight.
Fuckin with graph paper. Critz?
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/6725/dsc04470hx.jpg

[*Patch!]

your lines should be ALOT straighter considering you're using graph paper

[Sbal]

I know, I gotta shaky hand

[*Patch!]

i would recommend just tracing the entire grid on the page, i remember a teacher making me do that because i had a shaky hand

[Moon]

You going to bend those letters later? Because that would be fucking perfect.

[MoganOne]

quick five min shit
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1006000030.jpg

[dubbed]

mogan those arent simps. i dont really like the M and the E

[Moon]

I agree with dubbed. And 5 minutes? That sounds a bit cocky. But your doing good, no doubt about that.

[dangeri]

Quick simples as am far too smoooshed to paint properly,
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/231b7e4f.jpg

[Stuck]

u being sober wouldnt make ur letters n e better....

[dangeri]

I agree, but it would make them look like they're supposed to, ie not like a child has done them,

[Moon]

I don't know, I'm pretty sure the difference between wasted and sober would be significant enough for your work to be better.

[Stuck]

no cus his structer is shit and i doubt he was wasted cus i duno about u but wen im wasted i would just do somthn grimey and maybe even have some drips cus i wouldnt give two shits about doing cutbacks etc.....his is clean for a drunk night out just sayin

[dangeri]

Dude, not that I have to prove myself, but if you can be bothered to look back through my posts, u'l see my usual standard of painting, and my most resent blackbook doodle, that looks a little like that simps but not retarded, and y would anybody feel the need to lie about something as remedial as drinking! I'm not 10

[Stuck]

its the internet, its full of bullshit

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1009001850.jpg

[Res-tooth Slims]

oh yeaa...clean

but the "E" looks lonely as without any 3d visable

[dubbed]

mogan that looks great. the E does look lonely though lol i think you could get away with adding 3d under the top of it. the letters seem to get smaller after the M though

[MoganOne]

Thanks man yeah I know what u are sayin' my dude

[Moon]

That's fucking fantastic. I would just try to make the "E" more 3D and maybe a bit bigger or something, to balance the sizes of the letters.

[yeah]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1009001850.jpg

ditch the little bars on the M and the O, and make the E a bit bigger.

[LeaksOne]

and on your handy watch your O. looks like Mener

[dubbed]

aw dude hahaha i actually thought it did say mener

[NosE2]

yea, ive been meaning to say that too.

[MoganOne]

Yeah I know, I need to make the loop on the O more apparent I'm workin' on it.. Thanks for the feed back

[Suckkk]

Ive been doing straight letters for like 3 months, Ive done maybe 5. I know my can control sucks I havent been writing that long (about a year painting) (two years tags and shit) I am getting comfortable with bar size and drop shadow. I am kind of looking for some input on how my latest shit is, I feel like its time where I start focusing on letters and get some style goin...

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/7440/straightletters.jpg (http://img830.imageshack.us/i/straightletters.jpg/)





forgot to add this one, this is the fourth straight letter ive done, should of been in there after the shitty white one with no bar consistency.
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4370/63972373.png (http://img375.imageshack.us/i/63972373.png/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[Moon]

Nice variety. I actually kind of like the last one.

[Jokz]

the second to last one is pretty ill. overall good stuff, keep it up

[MakeItTakeIt]

sup
http://i55.tinypic.com/ju72hh.jpg

[lord_plankton]

wonky donky...

[Moon]

Nice, but I'd like to see how that would go if you actually bombed it. I don't think lines that thin are even possible.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1012002200.jpg

[twisties]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1012002200.jpg

dont mind the lettering...not so sure on the colouring though. From the scan looks like the main colours inside the letters was done with a pen :confused: But I'm thinking that is wrong..haha.

[MoganOne]

All Sharpies man... Just built up on top of eachother

[Zookyook]

that fill is nice mogan, gives it depth without highlights.... no ifya put some highlights on that shit itd really pop off!

[MoganOne]

Thanks my dude! Yeah What should I use for highlights? white out pens are wack...

[Res-tooth Slims]

From the scan looks like the main colours inside the letters was done with a pen

NO SHIT....a pen

http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0348.jpg
nova piece battle
http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0347.jpg
the twk down the bottom is my simple contribution...never mind the misguided throwies..haha

[Keso]

NO SHIT....a pen

http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0348.jpg
nova piece battle
http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0347.jpg
the twk down the bottom is my simple contribution...never mind the misguided throwies..haha

haha i used to hit up TWK here. lol The Wall Killaz.

[Res-tooth Slims]

oh yea..tbh i was going to drop it...cos i started it just on the letters..but i havent been able to think of any good meanings nd shit..but i might steal that now haha

[molotow_15]

Alright took your advice, just trying straight bars for now.

Even though I just realized that it's crooked in the picture. Fuck.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/4384/scan0011fm.jpg

I like this one..

[ReSeM]

fuck M's haha
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0020-2.jpg

[MoganOne]

That is dope Res

[mattxgrace]

http://i56.tinypic.com/ws205l.jpg

quick, simple. I'm not that into it but I wanted to post. Crits?

[dubbed]

your S's should be the same. its not bad, i like goofy block letters like that

[mattxgrace]

your S's should be the same. its not bad, i like goofy block letters like that

I was thinking the same thing, the last S just sticks out from the other letters. Preesh the crit homie

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff006-13.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-15.jpg

[MoganOne]

The shit on your first pic looks legit... But the rest is not so fresh : )

[MoganOne]

MONEhttp://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1024102343-1.jpg

[woonybomber]

The shit on your first pic looks legit... But the rest is not so fresh : )

ight thanks ill keep working on it

[dubbed]

mone that M is kinda iffy lol. but i really like your N

[Res-tooth Slims]

yea ^
the m is av...n is nice...and if your going to do a connection like the 'N'>'E' one either do it for all the letters or none at all...(with some exceptions of course)

[MoganOne]

mone that M is kinda iffy lol. but i really like your N
Lol yeah I need to work on this rounded M... But thanks my man

[enseR]

http://i1101.photobucket.com/albums/g433/enseR_/IMG_0095.jpg

any crits?

[GnarR]

lose the arrow.

[ribcage]

started this 1, then came back to it and did the c-h, turned out lookin like shit

[XCES]

reach_ im just going to say the one most obvious and important thing. the C needs to fill out the space to its left a little better, not such a gap from the a

[ribcage]

^ o yup all the letters are close to each other then the c spaces the h away from the rest
its ballpoint pen, once i started the top of the c like that there was no turning back

[Lado]

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/se.jpg

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/SEA.jpg

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/EA.jpg

Let me know what you think. All crits are appreciated :)

[weedeater]

that A in the second one needs to be taller

[ribcage]

lado- the 2nd pic is a ice little simple looks clean, and the 3d is on point

[Sbal]

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Lado that first pic is garbagey. The second one is nice except the cross bar of the A should be thicker.
Reach i dont think the CH really flows, especially the c.

[JesterOner]

mone; straight up fire but the m's a bit weird....
ense; nice letters but i dont like the arrow.
rib; dont like the r-e connection or the c
lado; 2nd one it aiiite
sbane; as i said in toybook bar consistency and the top of the e is slanting down too much.

critz?
http://i475.photobucket.com/albums/rr113/KidsOnLsd/IMGP4179.jpg

[massacreman]

http://i56.tinypic.com/258ufl3.jpg
last summer in france

[ribcage]

my bad about the blurry pic, god damn web cam camera sucks dick
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[ironcrack]

every thing in here needs more aeroe's

[Gosk FYA]

trying to get as much criticism and advice as possible..

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[weedeater]

your G needs to be more proportionate at the bottom so its the same size as the rest of the letters. that being said, your drop shadow looks good on the right side of the word, but lacks on the G. it should be easier to make it look right if you fix that G.

[MoganOne]

The drop shadow on the second one's K kills it... Not bad tho I like the second pics "S"
Do it like this
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[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1219102145-1.jpg

[SicK-]

Mone i like that waay more then your other stuff, you should mess around with that some more, and the right bar of your N looks kinda fucked

[Gosk FYA]

The drop shadow on the second one's K kills it... Not bad tho I like the second pics "S"
Do it like this

il note that down.. also, got another, improvement?
(i need some better sketching pens)
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[MoganOne]

looks legit. any pen should do

[anarone]

Mone and Gosk those are both fresh... Gosk just make do with what youve got man... pen doesnt matter too much at the end of the day unless its for colour schemes etc.

[_BEAR_]

Just started last week. Can i get some crit please.
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[NosE2]

For one, LUKE, don't write your name on your work, and then post it on the internet. This is kind of similar to putting your hand on a hot stove, ya dig? I know you don't want to burn your hand...so don't put it on the stove.

Secondly, I feel like I've read this sentence 500 times on this forum, but DO KEYBOARD LETTERS. So, it should look like this BEAR. Work on proportions, and structure, and then onto the color schemes and 3d.

[ironcrack]

keep rockin the bottom one. dont listen to these fags talk about keyboard letters and bars

[spek.]

the more and more i look at it i dont like the bits on the E..crits?

[SicK-]

Tesm? thats definity work on your spacing and fuck with a differnt style that one isnt working to well for you

[dujuan]

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[Sbal]

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Tesm not likin S.

[H1P30N3R]

the simp is cool sbal the top of the r looks a little small and the a needs cleaned up just a little ..

been workin on throws forever so my simp is super simp lol crits to advance please...

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/1293934141.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

double post

[Phillip McDougall]

Watch your bar width.

[Lado]

Working with letter structure
http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/0101111338.jpg

The bottom left of the E kills the flow
http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/5304772191_9d0f53373a.jpg

[Mippi]

1st simple. How is it :/

[weedeater]

E's a little big but other than that im diggin it

[Lado]

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/0105012123a.jpg

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/0105012124.jpg

[weedeater]

also, mippi, dont know if its your camera, or if you are just being mad careful with your markers. but just go with the flow man, your shit will look alot cleaner if you dont worry about keeping a straight line, and just go with the flow. the more careful/slow you get, the more some markers like to bleed. i say this because of your fill/forcefield. not saying i know what im talking about, i just have the same problem with wanting to go slow sometimes, and my lines getting inconsistent. the more you practice, the better you'll get.

@sea - keep your letters consistent, the bottom of the top bar of the E should be sitting on the same place of the grid line as the equal bar of your S. also, Im digging that E

[Mippi]

naw bro ur right i am really slow and worried about the results. I`ll try going with the flow, thanks for the advice! Heres another one I did last night, really generic looking but im a toy so what do you expect :) Also I have no idea where to start with bending letters... -_-

[Lado]

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/0105012123a.jpg

http://i373.photobucket.com/albums/oo179/ladotch/0105012124.jpg
just a bump


And Mippi, that is really awesome.

[otter]

U write se? Thats one of my projects, i love onelining se
I dont write it tho

[Lado]

I write SEA but SE for short. but I couldn't think of an A yet hahah. How's it look though?

[MoganOne]

Mipe that looks pretty fresh to me...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1227100151-1.jpg

[kaykells]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5041/5375235401_fd67483ff5.jpg

your thoughts, it's just me real name for a change ...

[Cl4sh]

I'm not big on our K. Especially the top half.

[.Cuore]

I disagree, I like it. Maybe make the I a little taller though.

[Lado]

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[Phat 2]

mipe: that's great, keep doing what ure doing, worry about bending letters later on. practice this kinda shit some more. and forget about the little kick at the end of the e, I know u like it, i remeber it in ur throws

lado: the SE is great. top bar of s and lower bar of e need to be thicker to match the widths of their mirror bars (the top bar of the e, and the lower bar of the s)

kieran: make the i taller or add a dot to it, slant the e to match the rest of the word's direction, make the a's mid section a bit wider so that the middle bar would actually show as a BAR rather than just a slit, and separate the n from the a a bit more so that its left bar gets more definition.

mone: kill the negative space between the n and e by extending the top part of the e further back, connecting it wit the n

lado again: first flick has potential, lose the intersecting lines, and retouch the A's bars, especially the middle one - gotta be thicker

[Lado]

thanks a lot man, will do

[Jokz]

something new i tried. any comments are welcome. im not pleased with the fill so dont worry about that.

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5038/5914090047_43fb367588_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5914090047/)
Im back from Suffragette City (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5914090047/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

Mipe: not bad bro, you are defs on the right track

Lado: i dig the first sketch but i agree that you should get rid of the intersecting lines.

Mone: all ur shit ive seen so far is mad dope, keep it up

[STUSH]

what happen been doin stuff off and on but want to get seriou. used to write under the name SONNE but I like how STUSH flows. Done some simps over the weekend realised I have to work on my proportion and spacing. still enjoyed doin em gonna get betta anyhoo here they are!! 27144271452714627147

[POKET5]

needa rack some markers, crits? 284522845328454

[thatguy1234]

2866628666


First ever simp any tips or anything would be cool

[Graff2k11]

http://i1086.photobucket.com/albums/j454/graff2k11/IMG_0221.png
critsss

[manik00]

2971229705
crits and advice please

[MoF.]

mank the top one is gud i would say get rid off the overlaping cross bar one the A and make it one with the rest of it, not relly feeling the k (i have trouble with k's aswell )on the bottom one aswell loooks a bit mishapen at the bottem other then that nice work :)

[MoF.]

crits please ? advice

[aaesoo]

work on letter structure, and space out your letters more so they don't overlap. and lose the extensions on your e.

[MoF.]

shots

[PETER]

work on letter structure, and space out your letters more so they don't overlap. and lose the extensions on your e. And work on your 3d. Study up on single point perspective and two point perspective. Use a ruler for now if you have to.

[MoF.]

thanks, yea ive using the single vanishing point n dat but i lost alot of the the angles when i went over my penicle sketch and it became mis-shapend
what two point perspretive though ?

[Skeletor1134]

to add on to the crits just make your letters way more simple. more box like.

[LIZARD]

k looks a little weird on the top half, i think make the top 2 lines on the k longer...but keep tweaking it u got the right idea just don't worry about extensions on ur letters just get basic letters down first before u start adding shit to em

[fatcapfader]

a-yo pocket... whats your area code? has to do with region you wanna write that

[Strange Journeys]

haha your my flickr contact

[ribcage]

yo can we revive this thread please?

[PETER]

I like 1 and 3 a lot. The Soar is cool too. you do that or someone else. The 4th one, honestly I don't much care for. It has potential, but the A looks like it has a bad tupe.... and I don't like the bend on the H. I like the connection between the R and E, but don't like how the leg of the R over laps so hard on the top of the E. Maybe take the top portion and work on that RE connection/overlap and use it as a throw. just the RE that is.

[PETER]

lets see some new new shit... like the last few min. then.

[ribcage]

o shit son, been to busy to draw today. Ill get a simp up in the next 10-15 min tho

definetly gotta rework this 1

[MN Nice]

from a lil while ago. not sure if i posted this in blackbook thread or not. no need to crit, pretty shitty even for a simp.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00293-20110902-0001.jpg?t=1314939765

[LIZARD]

mues: id say do that but put a tiny space between the letters so they don't look so crunched up

[ribcage]

slackin hard lately... R sucks on the pen freebie... whatevs

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/09131119591.jpg

[MN Nice]

A on the second one is the business.

[LiveFreeDieFree]

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I think I may have used too many colors?

[ribcage]

not really... but you should stop using any color until you get your shit down a little cleaner

[nickelbagger]

@rib that all red one is dope

i started trying to colour this one but had no plan and faded out to soon i think to put anything else in so i just left it

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[ribcage]

^ you put a throwie type S on with straight letters. Go simpler on that I, I dont wanna see any extensions from you until your straight letters are clean. SO that means extension on top of S, extension on top of C, and extension on bottom of I should go for now. Your E is the best looking letter on there, Poise your letters like like that. Your B and S are the worst letters, you need to structurally figure out how to draw a B, and an R, cause their almost the same letter... For the B, the two curved bars need to overlap once they get to the vertical bar ya digg? questions?

[nickelbagger]

^ nope thats wicked advice dude, i honestly didnt really understand the simple till i looked a little deeper in the thread, so are the ones you did considered simples too? even though they have extensions or is that not what your going for there, either way thanks for the crits, the next simple will be....simpler

[ribcage]

The one in the middle aint really a simple when it comes to style, but when it comes to execution I consider it a simple cause I didnt do any funky coloring or cool 3d or background. A simple to me is something with easy to read letters and no effects or backgrounds.

Dont confuse a simp with a straight letter. Straight letters are just that, straight font lettering. And thats what you should try and focus on, straight letters and handies. When you move to paint a well layed out straight goes a long way compared to a shitty styled piece...

[nickelbagger]

gotcha, today ill try and do a simp an a straight to try to differentiate the two, thanks again for the good advice boss

[PETER]

not really... but you should stop using any color until you get your shit down a little cleaner

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0913112138.jpg IMO a capital F would work better here. Nice work dude. The first "Reach" you posted after my would be challange the R and E look damn good. and the R you where complaining about isn't bad, maybe make the top part of the loop a little bigger. As it is now it gives the top of the word a nice flow.

[ribcage]

fucked up another R
http://i1099.photobucket.comd0915111333.jpg

[MN Nice]

Just a quick simp for the night.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00337-20110915-2120.jpg?t=1316140290

[ribcage]

best not be jackin my shit

[MN Nice]

I like that A too, but maybe to keep the styling of your letters, you could throw a slight kink in the right leg of it and drop the extension on the left leg so it can fit. Just an idea.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

i like you ribcage

[ribcage]

^ I like me too:D

@niceguymn If the C was a little larger and level with the rest, The A being straight would balance everything out... Or at least to my eyes.

[MN Nice]

Very true. That would be better actually. Less negative space.

[ribcage]

I botched that C, but I only sketched it out roughly with the fill color

[LiveFreeDieFree]

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Crits please?

[dankbudz]

yo i think thtd look doper if no letters overlapped on that. and just clean it up alot.

[SynOne]

Very simple. Crits? Yes... I stole Mues way of connecting letters XD.

[ribcage]

I stole Mues way of connecting letters XD.

who stole it from me, who stole it from the millions of people who have done it before me

[SynOne]

Another Simp. Crits Appreciated.

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[GuyGuyer of Guyland]

thicken the thin bar on the Y, its off balanced. make it flow upwards into the spine of it like the Y in your tag. make your tag S the S you use, that one isnt fresh and its blocky and completely imbalanced. have the kick of your N flow up from that bottom and come down. as the top half of your Y comes down and smoothly curves up, do that with your N.

[SynOne]

Guy thanks for the crits, really appreciated. Will upload new one taking Guy's advice.

[SynOne]

New Simple, with Guy's advice.

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[MoF.]

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[MoF.]

syn i would say take away the extention on ur n and the the line around the whole thing kinda takes away from the 3-d

[SynOne]

Mof, agreed about the line around it. I noticed that too... But I was too lazy to erase it lmao, it was all about the letter structure anyways. The extension on the N was something another user told me to try out. I'm getting it down. Thanks.

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/dfhy001.jpg

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/bba013.jpg

[rolling fresh kush]

http://i1097.photobucket.com/albums/g355/grafffkid1er/002-2.jpg

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00372-20110928-1049.jpg?t=1317243890

[ribcage]

is that all pencil? ...anyways, flow isnt to good for it being a straight letter. The left most bar of U is fucked up, the way its positioned now, there should be a part showing in the M. The way it looks now the left most bar of M is slanted to the right, and all the left most bars of all your letters is straight(the page is bending tho so I could be wrong). But I think its safe to say this the best thing u ever posted

[MN Nice]

Yeah you're right on the page bending, just your normal notebook paper. Now that I look at it, I did have the bottom left of the U showing, but mistook it for negative space. Thanks for the crits

[sane.]

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[sane.]

can i have some crits? :)

[LIZARD]

sane: that invader zim one has to go, don't worry about arrows get ur letter structure down first...other then that its ok just make u lines cleaner and u might wanna choice a new name

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crits?

[MoF.]

you CANT write sane his a legend ! reasearch your name first !

[Shit Outta Luck]

You can write whatever you want, it's about you and nobody else. However even though Sane is a common name it can be seen as disrespectful by other writers. You should AT LEAST know the history of a famous writer like Sane 182 before coppin the name Sane.

[eriekid]

bump fokes n sanes characters!

[porkyPig]

sane.. change your name and get simpler. make your bars the same size. sevr thats fresh but looks like a roller.

[shush4]

it looks like potentially a block buster. lol

[SynOne]

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Crit it.

Naked: Not really any complaints besides it needs to be more clean. Keep it Going.

[LIZARD]

ur 3D doesn't make sense,use 1 vanishing point

[Takeiteasy]

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[MTK]

you need to put them all on one post so we can see some more than just yours

[Takeiteasy]

I can't. I'm doing it via my phone. I don't have acess to a comp man. And I'm pretty sure you can still see other peoples. Thanks for the constructive criticism.

[inthecity]

http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/3460/karet.jpg

[MN Nice]

Stop posting the same page in 3 different threads. Just keep working with letters like that and you'll get better probably.

[inthecity]

o geez

[MTK]

hows this for criticism... your shit sucks ... sure its readable but the 2 silver ones look to much alike just different positions and the first one you need to work on the 3-d there is places where it points in different directions and some places that you need 3-d. The last one you need to fix the stars, make the letters the same size and work on letter structure cuz the E sucks and the R and the K... and like the first one your missing some places on the 3-D so workon that then post again... not being mean just helpful. thats why we post in the toys thread.

[PETER]

Not to mention they are a bit dramatic for simples. They lack structure and flow. Please see some of the tutorials in the "new to graffiti" thread. There are several really good ones about structure and flow.

[inthecity]

hahahaha

[Lado]

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Apologize for it being sideways. Too lazy and unaware of how to fix it.

[MoF.]

do you really write witch craft ?

[Takeiteasy]

^^^^^lulzzzz.

[week101]

LOL hella funny xD I cant tell if that was a joke or not xD

[Lado]

do you really write witch craft ?

nah hahah. That's way too long. I was in english class watching the Salem Witch Trials and the word popped up. But 'Witch' is a fun word.

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[knowtheledge]

theres a witchkraft up in oakville/hamilton

[Lado]

theres a witchkraft up in oakville/hamilton

Jersey? You from Jersey too?

[mace2200]

Is the e the end letter? Lol

[Coleo]

^ wow dude

[mace2200]

^ i cant even remember who tht was at lol one of the first pages

[JesterSmile]

These are actually the only things I have done. I think all of them are simps. I don't have anything crazy.

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[Skadeem]

Do straight letters......estos son no buenos

[spiltink]

there is a TOY BLACKBOOK THREAD for A REAISON

[JesterSmile]

I am a "toy". I started less than a month ago.

[spher]

quantity and repetion is key

[Iyk]

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[GortGort]

just lookin for crits comments etc. new to this thanks
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0086.jpg
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j273/dethbycattle/IMAG0097.jpg

[Zest3]

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[R3bel1995]

some of my earlier simps:

[R3bel1995]

^^ after doing these i had a new sense of respect for ANYONE who knows how to use one of those white-out pens…

["Braze"]

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Simple throwie in college to pass the time, crits?

[Willis1989]

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/lewd.jpg?t=1333554749