tot throwies.

[[MiTH] hovz]

zane-- new colors... and i second what baron asked.
BBV-- that one made me laugh, haha, change the flag to say BANG! haha, it be dope shitz
LSd -- those dark fill ins on the letters seems strange to me, fill them with the same color as the fill around it
Synps- i liked the second one the most.

any more critz for my throw?? not sure where to go with it.. maybe rounding off the edges, but i kinda like it.

it says roci, just random letters thrown together. (the r kinda looks like a p)

[Bars]

bump for crits


http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9219/newthroue3.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newthroue3.jpg)http://img208.imageshack.us/images/thpix.gif (http://g.imageshack.us/thpix.php)

crits?

[unsuccsessfull]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u255/biker123456789/IMG_2004.jpg
2 letter

[-sense-]

zane i dont know if that shadow is going towards a center vanishing point, but if so then that z is off.


i kinda like painting in the cold better than warm
yeah the finger gets numb as fuck, but its more calming...
hmm, guess it just depends on the spot

sens
http://i33.tinypic.com/30iwawk.jpg
finger is still numb

i was runnin outta white , so came up a wee bit short on the last s.

[danskates]

first throwie, crits?
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/2115/image068yv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thats sick mtown, would look better if the n & E were thickened up a bit tho i reckon

weakfingers the last two letters could be spaced out a tiny bit more... i think im subscribed to you on youtube?

milkboxx tone down the spikes a bit or lose emm and focus more on the letters

[Masta Blasta]

im trying to get a Super bubble Style down for "ARMS" but i cant seem to figure it out. can anyone PM me some tips or like Flix of some shit(not trying to bite) just need some help getting my hand back.

[Lsd]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/slunkthrowupp.jpg and older throw with the wooorst "U" xD.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/slunkonehollow.jpg Big hollow on a work trailer.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/sic33hollow2.jpg My homie Sic33 putting it down.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/sic33.jpgAnother one of his.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/Snkburnerr.jpg A burner at the skatepark (Snk is short for Slunk).

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/muckhorns.jpg A muck hollow.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/testhollow.jpg Super old test one with a paint stick.

[tempest]

*blink*
ok i know this the toy forum and all but could you guys work on ur shit before you go out and paint? this community is here for a reason. get criticism before u waste your paint.

[Lsd]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v689/subzero999666/scan0005.jpg Just some shit i did when i was baked haha.

[Baron]

*blink*
ok i know this the toy forum and all but could you guys work on ur shit before you go out and paint? this community is here for a reason. get criticism before u waste your paint.

.

[Gyse]

LSD- make that bump on the left side of the S by continuing the line you made to form the whole bottom part of the S. DOn't pick up the marker then make another separate line, get it? Same thing on that bump on the right side of the L. Make the line in the middle of the U come further in, and make a new K or change it somehow, it doesn't look so good. The N is alright though. Oh, and skip decorating throw ups, at least for now (forever in my opinion..) That was about the orange one btw. Also, if you did that Test with the paint marker, you may want to switch back to that name if it isn't taken because aside from the T's, it doesn't look bad.


Ease- Get a new name first. But those letters look kinda crappy because they're a mix of block and bubble, just do bubble for throwies. Keep working, try doing it faster, the lines look shaky.

Zone- Dope shit as always. Your simples kick ass too.


I think this needs work, but I'm kind of content for now.
http://i33.tinypic.com/usk5u.jpg

[TASR]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/scan0001.jpg

quick times in class

[GETRAD]

2 letter thows:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo52.jpg

trying to learn some fills:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo51.jpg

[dark2]

getrad -the fill is prety sweet imo but ur g e t need a bit of work but still beter then my shit haha keep it up

Crits? thinking of changing name to this but not sure
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081117.jpg

[k'n1ve]

why would you show your face? wtf?

[[MiTH] hovz]

i think people here are forgeting the main theme of this thread, "give em to get em" but imma be nice..


ASK... umm.. i guess keep working on it, try to slowly manipulate the letters. just follow where your hands want to go, and start to develope a unique style. I wouldnt bother with a shadow/outline for now either, just work on letter structure.
GETRAD... shave the stubble haha just kidding,, um i like that last one best, its pretty good, i think if you took out those holes in the letters and left them filled, and try a line or dot instead of opening it up (understand?)
GYSE... i think its pretty good for now, better than any of my shit.. i like the simplicity and balance of it.
UNSUCCESSFUL.. im liking it, the colors seem pretty chill to me, nice work imo.

just a quick sketch for the night, idk im not really feeling it,, just trying to work with different things.. what are you guys thinking? the second is one ive trying to get some critz for but so far its been unsuccessful...

[GETRAD]

thanks for the critz, im shaving the stubble, still sad i can grow proper facial hair :(
anyways....
ask- its definetly better than when i started, start working on some drop shadow and maybe some basic fills, its a good start so far
hovz-i really like the little character inside your letter

[XskeletorX]

Getrad - I like your G...I wish I could come up with a creative capitalized G

[dark2]

thanks 4 the crits ill keep working on it for sure i usualy write dark but decided 2 try something new 4 a bit

[whosthisguy]

what an idiot showing his face. wow.

[SANEKONE]

SK throwies :)

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11378.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11379.jpg

[EgoZen]

SANEKONE: Love your throwie...

Here are some Z`s of mine..
I stopped doing them ZEN`s full throwies and just keep up the
Z`s.. It is more fun... =)

(I couldn`t see shit while I was doing these two so no crits on the
out of the outline fill..
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/31/l_a3ca06290fd04f378183f008659d5463.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/24/l_ff39f7f11c9748528135f9c5570f474c.jpg

The T is in it for my girl...

[blunttokes]

them Z dun look like a Z and why write jus 1 letter throwies...

[Scino & Spank]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e96/ScinoandSpank/PICT0128.jpg

[[MiTH] hovz]

zen... id stick with more than one letter imo, one just looks strange. But if you like it and its your thing, then keep to it. try different colors too, they kinda clash (too much christmas).
Sanekone.. i like it, pretty neat and original i think. the only thing i can say is the fill on the line extending from the s i think would look better if it followed the same way as the rest of the fill. but pretty sick nonetheless, i love the little clouds and your tags. what markers do you use??
Scino.. fucking ill, that shits sweet as hell. im lovin it.

any more critz, new shit i was playing around with today. nothing much just sketches. i dont know if i wanna keep it in line, or extend the m down (like in the second one). so far its only mit, im having trouble with an H to fit the style, any opinions on the H too?

[TASR]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture55.jpg

Messing around with some spirals.

[EgoZen]

yeah it is christmas so this is my colour combination for that night haha...
But I use always different colours..
1 letter throwie is my idea just because it looks more like a symbol
and not like a "piece"(throw up) that you have to read...
You see it, you know it`s there and you can catch it in a glimpse, ya know?..

Nice Tasr, love `em spirals...

[TASR]

yeah it is christmas so this is my colour combination for that night haha...
But I use always different colours..
1 letter throwie is my idea just because it looks more like a symbol
and not like a "piece"(throw up) that you have to read...
You see it, you know it`s there and you can catch it in a glimpse, ya know?..

Nice Tasr, love `em spirals...

KIbgs and toys much? jokes man jokes

[SANEKONE]

hovz;1256125']what markers do you use??


prismas

[mekosbc]

SK throwies :)

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11378.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/ByronAVC/SDC11379.jpg

i love this shit but the k kinda thorough me off.... at 1st it looked like an e but i lookz dope...

[EgoZen]

KIbgs and toys much? jokes man jokes

hmm?..
oh you mean the movie...
*THS* it just came in my head that one
of them said something similar *lol*

But anyway it is true isn`t it?...
Or who doesn`t recon the MacD`s logo?

[TASR]

I wasnt saying you were wrong, it's a true therory. I was just pointing out the fact that it was stolen from he movie. no beef sonskies.

[BigBlueViolence]

Sanek- your shit is sweet, but like the other dude said, I thought the K was an E at first.
I would say try and make the top of the K more defined.

Mith- I'm not entirely sure what that says, but it is really lacking flow.
Slow down a little bit, make sure all your letters are even.

Tasr- I think it'd look a lot better without the swirls and the hole in the S.
I dig your hand, though.

Spank- I'm not digging your S, everything else is looking straight, though.

Zen- that Z looks like a lower case B to me, man

[TASR]

you mean the first loop on the S?

and lol, thats not really a hand, I just wrote tasr.

Is there a handstyle thread?

[BigBlueViolence]

Like a picture thread, or a toy thread?

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=702&page=1128
Toy handstlye thread

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=80&page=551
Handstyle picture thread

[Darkeist]

Tasr - I like the T, but idk about the S

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/newthrowyabitbetterpossiblymaybe.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i37.tinypic.com/qycosm.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/97ib6o.jpg
Bumper Bowling

Sero- I dig it.
I think I'd prefer dots over lines inside the letters, though.

[TASR]

Sero- Looks dope, maybe add a ittle squirt at the end, or an exclamation dot, the "O" looks too plain.

[7nationarmy]

http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/101_2406.jpg
painted..sorry
darkeist:not to bad..change up ur e
bbv:like that second e..

[TASR]

Fuck excusses, don't worry.

[mekosbc]

Tasr - I like the T, but idk about the S

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/newthrowyabitbetterpossiblymaybe.jpg


the one in only SERO*ONE FROM BUSHWICK NY
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY1421.jpg

[Darkeist]

Theres always going to be writers with the same name. And since hes in NY, its not gonna matter too much anyway. Not trying to spark beef

[mekosbc]

i know i agree im just sayin he bombs the hell outta shit out there and hes been around since 89, just lettin you know cuz some one out ther will see you writen sero and be like oh dont right sero blah blah blah.....

[Darkeist]

Yeah, word i got ya.

[Dying to live]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1135/picture20024sq8.jpg

[SANEKONE]

^^ i like :)

[GETRAD]

shitty i know:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo55.jpg
a few more 2 letter throws:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo56.jpg

just trying to keep sketching

[Bilnek]

well time 2 post my 1st pics here

[-sense-]

bababump

sens
http://i33.tinypic.com/30iwawk.jpg
finger is still numb

i

[BigBlueViolence]

the S and A are dope, but your Y looks kind of like a V.
You should give it more definition, like your S has.

http://i33.tinypic.com/16a38mw.jpg

[GETRAD]

say- im feeling it, would love to see some color tho
sens-work on another style man, those block letters could be done by a fifth grader

bored as fuck in english class:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo59.jpg

[Blox]

The names Elkr
Anybody got some crits?
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302051.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

a couple from my book...im on a bubble binge
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1210.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1211.jpg

[jester.onest]

Marty those are nice. but the "y" in that orange one looks like a "n" and make the "e" the same width as the "f"

[Darkeist]

dying to live - that throw is fresh

[dark2]

blox- lol go simple n use bars make your leters like on your keyboard 4 now... if don't know what i mean by bars check out new 2 graff thread

marty- those throws r dope shit and as said b4 on the orange one ur y looks like a n


new one crits?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081122.jpg

[PEST!]

getrad-i love it
dark-dig the colors
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1122080415.jpg
crits are appreciated;

[milk boxx]

Pest - try to change your letters a bit and make them curvy, like your letters all cut off at the end and are boxed, try to make them flow smoooooooth

[MARTYRaz]

thanks for the crits guys...
dark-push all ur letters together and lose the spaces....diggin the colors tho...

[MëZ ™]

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa296/Mezoroni/Picture001.jpg

First ever attempt at this sort of thing.

[Wallace]

ask- get the letters closer together and work on the s and k mainly.
pest- needs tons of work, the e and s are just blocks with lines in them, and your T looks like an r
mez- thats not really a throwy
say and getrad- looking good, keep it up

bored as fuck so ill just post what i have on my computer, this isnt what i write btw just did it for fun. and i dont normally fill the inside of the last two letter's loops like that, i never sketch so i thought id try it on paper.

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/5/img00014qj7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MARTYRaz]

looks pretty dope wallace

[mtown]

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6258/img03031pp0.jpg
my e has down syndrome:D

[Blox]

Im deciding to strikly write ELK
Fuck the R

[mtown]

anyone critzz?look up for the picca

[soath]

i've posted this elsewhere, but it truly belongs here:

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/sbomb.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/soathdrips.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/djpenis.jpg

[osnapizzel]

DOPE lets do an exchange, hit me up homie

[RSN Zene naIN]

im not to sure about the i.
4166

[MARTYRaz]

mtown fix ur e

[Black Flag]

blox- lol go simple n use bars make your leters like on your keyboard 4 now... if don't know what i mean by bars check out new 2 graff thread

marty- those throws r dope shit and as said b4 on the orange one ur y looks like a n


new one crits?
http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/Snapshot_20081122.jpg

its up to you, but I suggest getting a new name: ASK has good ups in NJ

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/IMG_2038.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/PA140073.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/PA120059.jpg

[Bilnek]

wadda you think about this1... don't be harsh i am only 12

[balance42020]

age doesnt really matter... its how long youve been doing it, that looks pretty good, but on the H the left bars dont match.. hit up the new to graff thread

[mtown]

and dont make plus things in your o it means white pride(rasist shit)

[MARTYRaz]

mtown that second pic looks mor like simples than a throwie

[MARTYRaz]

its up to you, but I suggest getting a new name: ASK has good ups in NJ

http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/IMG_2038.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/PA140073.jpg
http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j190/cutekid88/PA120059.jpg
wow....busted by blackflag....

[mtown]

it doesn´t care to much if dark2 is living far from ny
i found out that there was another zane but he lifs in the usa and i in europe

[soath]

i've posted this elsewhere, but it truly belongs here:

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/sbomb.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/soathdrips.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/djpenis.jpg


any critz... YOU gotta give 'em to get 'em. works both ways.

[wider]

well it's kinda strange to paint dicks.. it's actually pretty gay.

[BigBlueViolence]

I think it's funny as shit.

[ober]

I think it's funny as shit.

Quoted for truth.

[soath]

well it's kinda strange to paint dicks.. it's actually pretty gay.

it's not gay. Something like 8% of kids do it, but whatever.


I think it's funny as shit.

yeah, my cock gets buffed a lot but that's fine, at least it's up for a few minutes.

[soath]

what about the soath? the A is like a universal bite... whoops. ideas?

[Blox]

Really diggin both the ones besides the dick Soath,
The dicks wached out though man.

[whosthisguy]

http://i37.tinypic.com/xeeuxj.jpg

[soath]

http://i37.tinypic.com/xeeuxj.jpg

like the D for sure... it is a D right?

[whosthisguy]

yeah

[soath]

yeah

yeah i see it all now. the D and e and S are all curves and the P and O are wavy... looks a little weird, not bad. the P is a little vague. short.

[emaf816]

any critz... YOU gotta give 'em to get 'em. works both ways.



that black and white middle picture is sick



crisp lines

[soath]

that black and white middle picture is sick



crisp lines

thanks yo.

[mtown]

mtown that second pic looks mor like simples than a throwie

thats my sig!

[MARTYRaz]

o my fault

[TastySesamcrew]

Dicks are awesome, you have one so you better use it.
I have no camera so I have to get spotted to get a pic
full color
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/piratefullcolor.jpg

some bitch tried to make a star over my shit
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/onelinercrossed.jpg

another one
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/oneliner2.jpg

[mtown]

is dat landbouwbelang taste???
laterr

[BigBlueViolence]

Taste, I dig the throw, but i don't think you should at the shadow to the lines inside the letters, it makes it look cluttered.

[soath]

Taste, I dig the throw, but i don't think you should at the shadow to the lines inside the letters, it makes it look cluttered.


yeah, i agree or just thicken the 3D so those are filled completely. dope tho.

[emaf816]

the shadow on the inside makes all the little extensions pop off the wall


yadig

[soath]

the shadow on the inside makes all the little extensions pop off the wall


yadig

no not really. they don't look like shadows because they are so small. they look like periods sorta... i'm sure the write knows what I mean, it's prolly sumthin he's constantly working on, yadig?

[whosthisguy]

no it doesn't. it takes away from the letters.
why not stray away from the one liner and try a normal throw

[soath]

the S is terrible... ran outta fill, couldn't be fixed.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soath/poorSoath.jpg

[osnapizzel]

oak! chemist! yaaaa boiiii

[DontBeSAME]

yeah, i fucked up HARD on the "E"
i write SAME2.
crits i guess. forget the mess-up on the "E", thats a useless crit.

[b*ez]

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PB230041.jpg

[dont=play=ketchup]

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/8215/004vf6.jpg

[soath]

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PB230041.jpg

try to make all you letters the same size and aprox shape. move them all closer together. write the entire alphabet out in the same size and shape 100 000 times.

[soath]

quick crap throw killing old painthttp://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3709/screencapture16cn2.png

dope.

[b*ez]

try to make all you letters the same size and aprox shape. move them all closer together. write the entire alphabet out in the same size and shape 100 000 times.

thanks

[retnemed]

Dicks are awesome, you have one so you better use it.
I have no camera so I have to get spotted to get a pic
full color
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/piratefullcolor.jpg

some bitch tried to make a star over my shit
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/onelinercrossed.jpg

another one
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/oneliner2.jpg


I like the 3rd throwup , because it accually does'nt look like something I've seen before, good creativity , and decent can control, not too shabby.

[Keke]

http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/3152/img1315mq2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/img1315mq2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img511/img1315mq2.jpg/1/)

[b*ez]

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PB250051.jpg
i fucked up on alot..

[Bilnek]

is this good???'.... i only made better colors in comp... they were bad...

btw does anyone know any good but cheap markers... i use Schneider markers and they are bad....

[soath]

...
all old. thought id post them anyways though.

post your most recent S please. so I can ...........BITE it. :eek:

*just kidding. I see you use a few different ones, man I'm having trouble getting mine to match my other letters.


http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e201/time2fightbak/PB250051.jpg
i fucked up on alot..

is you went ahead and drew this after what i told you then you need to give your head a shake. my gurl looks over at me after a few hours of ignoring the TV and she's all like "what are you drawing? howzit?" and I show her a few pages of the good old alphabet in pencil and she's like "Oh."

just work on writing everything the same size the same width apart with all matching parts... like a D that is eually bulbous as a P and a d and p with the same size stem and bulb...

[b*ez]

yezzziirr should i just do regular letters or give my own little tweak to them?

[b*ez]

nevermind jsut read my pm

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELGreenThrowandHandys.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELPencilThrowups.jpg

bez - that looks horrible, and give them to get em

bilnek - what is it? new to graff thread

shie - those are looking nice, i was thinking about writing shie back three months ago but then i decided to go with shpel, id work on your e a little more though

ea - im pretty sure youve posted that before but like i said, do whole letters unless you plan on always writing on the left side of whatever your writing on

taster - i like your charac, but on your last throw there, id work on your second t cuz it kinda looks like a y

snapone - ive always liked your style but your s looks wack

soath - stick to the books for now

crits...

[jester.onest]

I like the green one and the very top 2 letter. The S on the second Shpel in pencil is the best.

[osnapizzel]

yeah that last s was hella wack

talking about my last throw that is

[devil at sea level]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e338/spikes10392/graffer017.jpg crits?

beasy-letters the same size, and scrap the piece and do keyboard letters, with bars
shie-dont make the s and e extend out so much
snap-dont make the lines over lap make it 1 line, like in the top of the s,n

[Popatance]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Or_r4IC_qd0

Im no toy, but I didnt feel like posting in the blackbook thread in the other section. I'd get kicked out of it :P

Hope you like it

[devil at sea level]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Or_r4IC_qd0

Im no toy, but I didnt feel like posting in the blackbook thread in the other section. I'd get kicked out of it :P

Hope you like it

nahhhh, your still a toy...

[joker954]

somone plz crit

im a up and comer plz tell me wat i can work on

i kno i didnt finish the g

[BigBlueViolence]

...what's it say?

GRCL?

GEZ- Definitely feeling that throw, bro.

[joker954]

says grfl
first throwup ,i got better blackbooks

gez?lol
think i should change it?

[Worms]

golly gee some shit from mee
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Reken2.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/reken3.jpg

[Baron]

What happened? Seriously guys. Its give crits to get crits, its not that hard. Some of you post the same pictures and bump them from page to page expecting some good semaritan to crit then for you. Its a system we have been using for ever learn it.

[osnapizzel]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/174/screencapture20hh9.png

ohsnap for the silver

[Bilnek]

i give crtits from now on.... i know u won't need my crits but... who knows


also piczor


worms try to do simplier graffiti...
devil at sea level try new styles... and try 2 make your own....
heymynameisjohnlawl get better at paper and then do walls
b*ez... it is junk.... no off

also i seen alot of good not toy graffiti.... it is weird why they post on this thread..

[Bilnek]

why would pros read toys forum... to find a new pro???'

[emaf816]

he said po


as in police [[i'm assuming]]


shpel; hella feeling this new style, i was not a fan of the one you're using in your sig.. glad to see you're developing some style

joker, first throwup huh? i'm sure you now realize how much different it is to paint than to draw!

well, when you started drawing you should've started drawing simples, do the same thing with paint.. don't try all those extensions and style yet.. just start with basic letters, you have to learn all new techniques, new medium & whatnot

devil at sea level; i like that but some of your black lines cut through others, ifyou had stopped at the line it'd be a whole lot cleaner.. know what i'm saying? and the right side of the o, is like blue like the shadow is on the left side, it looks like the right side should be black.
shit just keepworking at it

osnap: man i've been lurking for awhile.. like i started back when you were doing simple and everything you drew looked alike.. but now i'd love to paint with you!

that is dope, i can see where you fucked up on the bottom of the O and the H and the top of the S and N, but if you had just added a forcefield in the same color as the fill, or in another color period, it would've covered that up.. brought it off the wall if the color was vivid but that's dope

i think i'd fuck with the extension type thing on the top of the N and H, and maybe bring the mouth on the S down a little bit just to see how it'd look

something's weird looking about that line on the H, on the right side, the horizontal one that matches the S and the N.. besides the fact that when you went back over it you made it like double thick, that's not what i'm talking about

blnek; i'd say work on letter structure.. but i'll wait until i see something you drew or painted.. unless you drew that and then colored it online, in which case, work on letter structure.. hella.. that could've looked alot cooler..

worms; clean up your sketches before you post them, i know you might think the random sketch lines look tight, but they don't, it just clutters everything up, and i feel like i've seen that style somewhere.. but other than that keep working at it.. not too bad

[emaf816]

i feel you there

i want to bring big ass lights with me to gopainting but then i'm like oh shit this is still illegal.. scratch that

[Worms]

emaf there just sketches there not clean all i do is a light outline then redo it but i press harder. thats why u get all the lines. im just makin up throws

[H3TT1NG3R]

http://i36.tinypic.com/1gpzth.jpg

[Darkeist]

shpel - fix your E
lasek - fix the k at the end. kinda throws it off.


and a self crit for me. the last R is kinda terrible.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081128_2.jpg

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELGreenThrows.jpg

thanks for the crits guys...

seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know

lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I

bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread

ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick

reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick

grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else

gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though

sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s

and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELGreenThrows.jpg

thanks for the crits guys...

seror - im not really feeling it, work on your letters some more, maybe a line or a dot or something would look better than the holes in your letters i dont know

lasek - youve been developing pretty good lately, id just fix your L up so it doesnt look like an I

bilnek - simples bro, read through the new to graff thread

ohsnap - looks pretty good, add some 3d and an outline to that and it would look sick

reken - youve got some pretty nice letters. the bottom right bar of the r on the bottom throw on the first flick

grfl - i dont see how that is an f. stick to the books for now, and id think about writing something else

gezr - nice letters, im not a fan of your g though

sarz - good flow, lose the random bump on the top left on your s

and like baron said, give crits if you want to get them

bottom bump

[osnapizzel]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/174/screencapture20hh9.png

\ohsnap for the silver!

shpel keep working on it man, i would do a better critt but its to late and i need to go to bed

[whosthisguy]

snap, the squiggle in your S, i'd say put a little bit lower than that. i see what you're doing with the face, but i think it'd still work with the squiggle lower. also work on the N a little bit. and the P doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters.

[Bilnek]

How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/
Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers....
Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz
H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..

[devil at sea level]

How do ya mean letter structure????.... i am not very good with english :/
Klic-try to color it....try to color them even if u have crappy markers....
Darkiest-try 2 make bigger pics with thinner marker so u can better letterz
H3ttinger try to overspray that down blue lines.... it would look better without them..

go to the new to graff thread, theres alot of helpful stuff in there to explain things..

[Darkeist]

klic - the reason i did the holes, was because when i posted before i was told to put holes in them. but whatever.

[ShIfTeD]

really shitty pics and really shitty quality stuff but whatev


http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5632/dfghdfhto5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/dfghdfhto5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img300/dfghdfhto5.jpg/1/)

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1962/dscn0192px4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/dscn0192px4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img114/dscn0192px4.jpg/1/)

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/989/dscn0193se8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/dscn0193se8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img213/dscn0193se8.jpg/1/)

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3769/dscn0194ur3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/dscn0194ur3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img114/dscn0194ur3.jpg/1/)

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1228/dscn0195dg0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/dscn0195dg0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img509/dscn0195dg0.jpg/1/)

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3522/sfgfsfghl9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/sfgfsfghl9.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img114/sfgfsfghl9.jpg/1/)

[FlippingChickens]

snap the H needs work and that swiggle arrow on the s is weak

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN1765.jpg

[soath]

Oh Snap! i said it out loud as soon as the picture loaded. the P is off, needs a lil somma somethin. I like the S.

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/1228/dscn0195dg0.jpg

these dudes rule. *all those ups are dope tho. the purple fill is sorta ugh.

[FlippingChickens]

loool
yea idk wtf is so funny im just giving u shit to work on its better than saying ohsnap that shit looks fresh instead im giving u something to fuck with

[FlippingChickens]

i loled at you sayin the arrow on the s is weak. sketch spots have a funny way of making your shit look like crap, ill keep practicing and so should you

give me some pointers then cuh thats what im here for

[osnapizzel]

i see where you were going with the faces and they look pretty good but your letter structure is way off, like i cant read that. spend less time on colors and more time on letters

[ShIfTeD]

soath...thanks bro, yeah...i wasnt happy with the purple fill either...idk...for some reason, whenever i use any other color besides black and white my shit looks sketchy...idk...

osnap...i think your p fits, i jsut think you can do somthing way better with it, and dont change y0ur n, that shits dope....idk though man, i would condense it a little more because thats kinda long, like with my throws...i barely have enough to fill the throw, and trust me...you dont want to be lugging around 3 cans for a throw...try just osnap...cuz my throws are 5 letters long and it feels like im there forever doing it compared to my crew throws which take me like 3 miniutes

[osnapizzel]

ive gotten used to it, a fatcap and some bomber rustos is all it takes

[checkcheck]

pest-not a huge fan of the color. style is alright.
Ask-yeah i would change my name. I've had to before.
Soath-i like it stick with it.

[ShIfTeD]

i just started tossing this shit up and its a bitch because its either i have a quick shitty fill and i only use 1 can or i get a solid fill and it takes more then a can...but then again im a big motherfucker so its hard for me to do small throws

[osnapizzel]

what cap did you use to do those?

[AdRe*]

http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/Pic0167.jpg

[jester.onest]

that looks nice adre*, but try and make the second r more like the first.

[ShIfTeD]

pink dot

[ShitzEasy]

that looks nice adre*, but try and make the second r more like the first.

lol at your sig

[GETRAD]

doodling
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo65.jpg

[Stussy]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2nate0i.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Rayz that is dope.
Altough it does look lik it says raye

[BigBlueViolence]

Rayz, I really don't get what's going on inside that R.
Dope otherwise, though.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/6f3ymf.jpg

Get rad just keep practicin man go look around t differnt styles to get the feel for how throw letters look just go int flickr and type in throwies don't bite just get some ideas to work with

rooster
Sorry just not diggin it

flipping chickens the faces are god but the letter structure isn't so great don't do faces for a while and just work on letter structure

shifted dope throw dude the flairs are fire

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/sf_001-1.jpg

yarbles - thats looking a lot better than before its not looking as forrced as it used to, keep it up

rayz - work on your handy, im not feeling your r and make your z look less like an E

getrad - that looks fresh, i cant say im a fan of your a though

rooster - looks good except i dont like how the middle bar of your e is pointy and the bottom one is curved up, and id make the hole in your r a little more obvious so people dont confuse it for an n or h

crits...

[Darkeist]

Shpel - you should really work on your E. I like your H though.
stussy - that is fresh. just work on the Z


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081202.jpg

or

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081128_2.jpg

the E's are different.

[[MiTH] hovz]

wow ive been outta it for a while... some good sit and some bad..

error - on the colored throw, try to make the bottoms of the R alll the same size/width, and dont do the hollow thing withh the holes, just put lines instead.

mr yarbles- im liking it, looks madd dope.

Shpel - idk it seems weird to me, to straight forward and simple.. but i guess its good to do that, start somewhere and develope a style. thats probably what i should do.

a new throw ive been working on, idk where the fuck i came up with the name "stay" but whatevs, its homo, and ive just been working with that shit..

[ShitzEasy]

http://i38.tinypic.com/x1ipfn.jpg
thats the full thing
http://i37.tinypic.com/zmceo1.jpg
close up of the charecter

so whaddaya think boys should i paint that shit?

[ShitzEasy]

ah yeah darkiest you definetally have a real nice concept i would suggest playing around with the holes and just tweak things so its just the way you want it... your definetally not far from being ready to hit the walls

[[MiTH] hovz]

enzo - nice character, hes g. but i can see your school and adress and guidance counselors names haha, watch out for that, some of the 5-0 be lookin for that shit (idk if you do walls or anything?). Id say lose the drips on it, theres too many too.

[ShitzEasy]

hovz;1266711']enzo - nice character, hes g. but i can see your school and adress and guidance counselors names haha, watch out for that, some of the 5-0 be lookin for that shit (idk if you do walls or anything?). Id say lose the drips on it, theres too many too.

no worries its not my school i was at my cousins and that was all the paper they had

[Darkeist]

What if the pigs go to your cousins house eh?

[B.S. POLICE]

sucks to be him lol

[CandyRain88]

but how would they know who it is? there must be at least 300 kids at that school and thats worst case scenario

[jester.onest]

hovz;1266668']

error - on the colored throw, try to make the bottoms of the R alll the same size/width, and dont do the hollow thing withh the holes, just put lines instead.



Lol I think that says Seror, cos I'm Error. (:

[CESP.one]

I havent been on here for a while and I recently got back up into writing
so ill post a few sketches ive done
Theyre not the best...

Cesp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img034.jpg

Ces
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img033.jpg

Ces
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img032.jpg

Cesp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img040.jpg

Wally
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img041.jpg


AMDG
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img045.jpg

I started to play around with more than just cesp.

cirts?

[CESP.one]

Heres two more

Sunday
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img044.jpg

Choice
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img036.jpg

crits?

[Bink1]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9843/dsc04507lw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/dsc04507lw6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img87/dsc04507lw6.jpg/1/)

i had problems with B's so i changed mah name to TEKZ , so this is new throw what ya think?

[ShitzEasy]

cesp1 i like your style a lot

[Bink1]

I havent been on here for a while and I recently got back up into writing
so ill post a few sketches ive done
Theyre not the best...

Cesp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img034.jpg

Ces
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img033.jpg

Ces
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img032.jpg

Cesp
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img040.jpg

Wally
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img041.jpg


AMDG
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img045.jpg

I started to play around with more than just cesp.

cirts?

dope

[kasher_one]

CESP.one i like your little character that shits dope and your style aint to bad either

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9843/dsc04507lw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/dsc04507lw6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img87/dsc04507lw6.jpg/1/)
That E is looking kind of similar to me, bro.
http://i38.tinypic.com/97ib6o.jpg

Cesp- Try and take that shit out of the corners.
Start off in the middle of the page.

[Bink1]

damnit. wasnt really bitin'.im thinkin of changin that.

[ShitzEasy]

damnit. wasnt really bitin'.im thinkin of changin that.

its not really similar cept the color and the eye ... i think its good just make a swirl for the hole in the E and clean it up ... pretty good though

[Beats_His_Wife]

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4536/upnu9.th.jpg (http://img257.imageshack.us/my.php?image=upnu9.jpg)
I've only been writing for about a month or so, any crits would be sick

[fase one]

Here are some small pieces that I did playing around with colors.
I just started writing so any tips would be good.
Fase
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00057.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00065.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00070.jpg

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyu1.jpg

crits???

[mekosbc]

graffdabusup is the only descent one on this page...

[CandyRain88]

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1127082056.jpg
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1124081901.jpg
my normal style^
a new style i just triedVV
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1130081926.jpg
i got another new style too imma upload some in a little bit

everyone above me exept cesp just try something simpler like look at cope or seens throws and dont try to add style just yet because you arent skilled enuf yet and imo simple throws are really dope
and cesp is pretty dope

and crits on my shit? i dont really know what to think about my new style at first im thinking its pretty dope but then im wondering if the letters aree too much of different styles

[Dying to live]

Here are some small pieces that I did playing around with colors.
I just started writing so any tips would be good.
Fase
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v461/pntgio/IMG00057.jpg


don'ttry and pass mr wiggles letters as your own lol rookie mistake

[ShaolinNy]

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo24/23/81/a4bfc1d7c957.jpeg


Crits please...Ive been messin around with my name Sneak for a long time now and this is the best thing i got so far def needs work but im not sure what to do,can any one help please?


Fase-Needs alot of work just keep practicing
Candyrain-Your normal stlye look pretty sick
Beats his wife-Not bad at all for only a mont keep practicing

[exitus]

face u need to start over lol
read the whole new to graffiti thread and then do nothing but tags till you get your handie down

[ShaolinNy]

face u need to start over lol
read the whole new to graffiti thread and then do nothing but tags till you get your handie down

any crits on my Sneak

[MARTYRaz]

some new shit...changed my name...sneak overlap ur letters instead of stopping them where the new letters begin...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/thro2.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/thro3.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/throwie.jpg

[Duped]

MARTYaz : change your e's cause they dont fit in with the others. They kill the flow.

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/juju.jpg

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/jiji.jpg

crits???

sneak- change your "k" up a little. and change the top of the "a"

[knightsafe]

new shit crits welcomehttp://fc68.deviantart.com/fs38/i/2008/342/d/4/throwface_by_fastnloud.jpg

[ShaolinNy]

Thanks for the crits guy...
some new shit...changed my name...sneak overlap ur letters instead of stopping them where the new letters begin...


Im kinda confused on how to overlap them can you show me an example?

[GETRAD]

i think alot of ppl on this page need to take a step back before going for the color, work on the structure. obviously some ppl dont but you shoul dknow who im talking about

trying to work on the fades w/in the fill:
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo82.jpg

[Dying to live]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/pssssedit.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

getrad take your own advice

[miteone]

ill second that

[Stonk]

akel- not so sure about the highlights in the throw..i feel like that only looks good on throws that are filled in really solid..and only sometimes on certain styles ..i do like that throwup a lot though. just minus the highlights..

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/DSC01676.jpg?t=1228764786

[JETPACK!!]

i think it's moreso the color's he chose. i think it'd look aiight with highlights if it was black and gold, or something

tride, i think the E is throwing off your throwie, it's dope and original. but when i look at the E to cap it off, i get that.

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000216.jpg

shitty webcam picture, shitty throw

moms - looks good, not feeling the bump on the bottom left of the s

akels - looks nice, id dot your a's and e's

getrad - make your a and d smaller but other than that it looks good

safe - loos the charrac on your f, the only letter that looks alright is your e so keep working on it

noyu - nice simples, keep working on your y, it doesnt look as good as your other letters in my opinion

crits

[muse2]

stonk, i like your "m" i find them really hard to make into a throw.

[Scheme*119]

made my throw into some d00dz, just experimenting, yes or no?
http://i34.tinypic.com/219auea.jpg

[CandyRain88]

http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1127082056.jpg
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1124081901.jpg
my normal style^
a new style i just triedVV
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq293/CandyRain_UGC/1130081926.jpg
i got another new style too imma upload some in a little bit

everyone above me exept cesp just try something simpler like look at cope or seens throws and dont try to add style just yet because you arent skilled enuf yet and imo simple throws are really dope
and cesp is pretty dope

and crits on my shit? i dont really know what to think about my new style at first im thinking its pretty dope but then im wondering if the letters aree too much of different styles

bump

everything on this page is pretty solid...klic on yur s take out the vertical line on the inside then bring out the bottom line more

[Darkeist]

Just the top right throwy. fucked up on the bottom one.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081208_1.jpg

Shpel - Take that huge line out the inside of your S
Dying to live - fresh
candy - feelin the first throw, not so much the second two

[gcrolla]

Soupkta-Don't connect your letters like that, they letters themselves look alright though.
Darkeist- Dope, did a good job keeping the letters the same size, fill em in!
DyingToLive- Raww, get out of the toy forum haha. Highlights look kind of wierd with that color fill though.
Scheme- Don't make the faces with the letters and it will look better.

[Darkeist]

Soupkta-Don't connect your letters like that, they letters themselves look alright though.
Darkeist- Dope, did a good job keeping the letters the same size, fill em in!
DyingToLive- Raww, get out of the toy forum haha. Highlights look kind of wierd with that color fill though.
Scheme- Don't make the faces with the letters and it will look better.


thanks man. i should have some fill ins. on thursday when i get my camera

[smooth_nuts]

darkiest..get on msn whore

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3125/3095681575_6b0a5a219d.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3046/3096520848_0dd6faba5b.jpg
got my NEWcamera today...and it works :D

[markingz.]

hey man that throw is soo fresh damn. And candy rain that girl in your sig has a really nice rack, wouldn't mind putting my dick between those.

[TASR]

yo smooth, lovin' the dope, but your E looks allot like ohsnaps, but who cares, hes banned.
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture71.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture70.jpg

[Gyse]

http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii245/aerosol-dreams/pssssedit.jpg

Oh shit, I just made a new A for myself today, but before I did, mine looked almost exactly like yours. Anyway, I like it. I agree with Tride about the highlights, but it looks like you needed it with that color combination otherwise you couldn't see the outline very well.

Tride- I like it all except the T. D is awesome.

Tasr- Definitely work on your T, looks like you should make the opening between the top and bottom of the A a little wider. And some of your 3D is off. Pretty nice though.

[Dying to live]

Oh shit, I just made a new A for myself today, but before I did, mine looked almost exactly like yours. Anyway, I like it. I agree with Tride about the highlights, but it looks like you needed it with that color combination otherwise you couldn't see the outline very well.

exactly wasnt the best color choice but thats all i had n the white was empty thats why i didint use for the outline only the high lights

[MontanaPainter]

Everyone bite smoothnuts and youll get style!

[CandyRain88]

yo smooth, lovin' the dope, but your E looks allot like ohsnaps, but who cares, hes banned.
]


im almost positive hes that bspolice guy

[MontanaPainter]

is he is ohsnap

sorry for castrating you

[B.S. POLICE]

loooolllll

[Queezy]

Dope^^^
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyThrowieVentura.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

is he is ohshnapiddidle



and dont you toy faggot forget it

[PINK-TACO]

Everyone bite smoothnuts and youll get style!
DAMN SKIPPY!
and for snappy
i was rocking that e before he was on b/s :p
..all though his shit is looking mighty fine ;)

[miteone]

queezy you need to work on your letters before you paint shit like that

and your z is fuckin messed

[TASR]

Your Q is pretty fucked too

[gcrolla]

The u and y are too. Basically the whole thing except the E's.

[TASR]

even then...lol

[Keke]

enzo- good stuff kinda cute though
cesp- cute charak, whack letters
tekz-love the style hate the structure

and i wanted to see if i could do anything high so heres a 2 letter
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7355/img00102xw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/img00102xw8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img228/img00102xw8.jpg/1/)

theres a fuck vandal squad on it because my friend got bagged , and i found out there after me now FUCK EM i want my partner back

[Popatance]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Fi8NhaCHuc

[snooot]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2wmn9f9.jpg critz?

[REDjacket]

there is some nice things on this forum but some people need to take more time with there work.

[The Spade]

Queezy ur Z kinda looks like a C,
snot ur S is kinda messed up on both those pics..

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3558/image060hg5.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image060hg5.jpg)
quick one i just did.. crit svp

[snooot]

Queezy ur Z kinda looks like a C,
snot ur S is kinda messed up on both those pics..

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3558/image060hg5.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image060hg5.jpg)
quick one i just did.. crit svp

ye kinda kooked the last rushed it heres a cleaner 1

http://i33.tinypic.com/vsj0pc.jpg

[The Spade]

yeh thats alot better man any crits for mine?

[Bink1]

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3606/dsc04618yc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/dsc04618yc6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img355/dsc04618yc6.jpg/1/)

[bleh.bleh.bleh]

Work on your S lose the eyes in the E and lose the first lump on the N^^
http://i404.photobucket.com/albums/pp122/blarr/BILD0110.jpg

[Bink1]

Work on your S lose the eyes in the E and lose the first lump on the N^^


gonna work on the S , whats with the eyes? looks fine :rolleyes: , first lump?? wtf is that? :confused:

[bleh.bleh.bleh]

I'm jus not really feeling the eyes, i think it would looks better with just one hole. And the first lump, i dont really know how to explain it, the first lil lump on the top left of you're N

[The Spade]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3558/image060hg5.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image060hg5.jpg)
bump for crits..

[Bink1]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3558/image060hg5.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image060hg5.jpg)
bump for crits..

your shading is wrong i think , and E is too big and work on your D dont look very well. :eek:

[Baron]

Spade, back to the basics, you have 0 bars.

[Bink1]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/429/dsc04640ia6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/dsc04640ia6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img218/dsc04640ia6.jpg/1/)

more shit...

[Keke]

give crits to get crits, do you really think people just come by and leave crits , no

[bleh.bleh.bleh]

If you're talking to bink then you're wrong cus he gave crits to the spade. Anyways. Work on the T, Don't make it bulge out at the back to, And i stil think you should lose the eyes and you know about the S.

[snooot]

ye and bar the tear drops

[Darkeist]

sorry for shit pictures

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081211_1.jpg

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081211.jpg

tonc or tone, cant tell - work on your T
spade - work on your E, and S

[BigBlueViolence]

It says tens,
an I would recommend not writing in the letters,
it can really throw shit off.

Serror- You should drop the bottom of your S, it looks almost like an I or a T.
you should put something to connect the legs of the Rs, too.

[freshsesh]

http://i36.tinypic.com/bjbs6d.jpg

[Bink1]

thanks for crits guys
S(I)ROR OR is it E ? u should make it a bit simpler( i mean the second letter).

TISE and SESN - work on your N

[freshsesh]

its an h , i have , i decided to go with an uppercase h better flow , just dont have any plick on my computer , wait , maybe i do

here it is
http://i37.tinypic.com/2lk7ajm.jpg

[Bink1]

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/1557/dsc04641am5.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/dsc04641am5.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img185/dsc04641am5.jpg/1/)

new T and S

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7792/dsc04642eh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/dsc04642eh3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img265/dsc04642eh3.jpg/1/)

shading is right?

[freshsesh]

bink - ide say make the ball on the n a bit smaller to scoot that s closer , so there isnt that gap on the topbetween them, and work on wich way your dropshadow is goin. , nice letterstructure tho

[Bink1]

its an h , i have , i decided to go with an uppercase h better flow , just dont have any plick on my computer , wait , maybe i do

here it is
http://i37.tinypic.com/2lk7ajm.jpg

this one is tight - nice letter , flow and coloring.

btw is my shadin right on my stuff? i think my shading is a way off.

[freshsesh]

, yeh , if you shadin your letters down , , okay easiest way to do it is , just draw one letter , no fill no nothing , then draw that same letter same size n all just a little to the left , to the right , anyway you want the shadow to go , so if its goin down none if its gonna poke out the top or sides n stuff , atleast that how i learned to to my shadows

[freshsesh]

http://i34.tinypic.com/10dxyet.jpg
some older shit , not haha my h's are always ugly as fuck