Throwies

[miteone]

bink that T looks very close to a J...just my thought

[Bink1]

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9605/dsc04649cz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/dsc04649cz3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img254/dsc04649cz3.jpg/1/)

HERE IT IS MY 2ND THROWIE EVER. and i change the T a bit , it looked like J tho.

Did it tonight :D , and bubbles thing looks ugly shouldnt do it :@

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/silverthrow.jpg

[jester.onest]

Bink, it looks much nicer painted than on paper. Spend a bit longer on the colouring.

Oene, looks nice, except the 3D seems to be coming off the letters weirdly. Try and make the 3D not curve back up on the letter where it touches. Kinda hard to explain.

[LeaksOne]

bink please change your T. everytime i see it it looks like it says jens.
oene that throw looks shaky

[Bink1]

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/5728/dsc04652ju0.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/dsc04652ju0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img115/dsc04652ju0.jpg/1/)

check it leaks :D

[ShIfTeD]

come on guys...so much blackbook shit in here...go paint

first pic is kinda unproportionate, i used a whole 750ml can on the fill, its fuckin wide as hell

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/7392/dscn0251sa2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/dscn0251sa2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img440/dscn0251sa2.jpg/1/)

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1629/dscn0252cc8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/dscn0252cc8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img167/dscn0252cc8.jpg/1/)

[Bink1]

your shit is tight.

it says KWAKE?

[ShIfTeD]

yezzir

[ShIfTeD]

oh yeah, sorry for the double post but ignore the silver to the left of that throw, its on the right too, i tried doing a final and my outline clogged, so yeah

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/serk.jpg

[Bink1]

serk - dont like it , sumtin makes it bad , cant say what.


IMG]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/2368/dsc04655hs3.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/dsc04655hs3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/dsc04655hs3.jpg/1/)[/IMG]

another try on throw.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/silverthrow.jpg

bottom page bump :D

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/Calvinandhobbes.jpg
calvin and hobbes....

[Duped]

Sacwacko: DOPE DOPE DOPE. nice calvin and hobbes, looks like Bill Watterson did that himself.

[sacwacko]

Sacwacko: DOPE DOPE DOPE. nice calvin and hobbes, looks like Bill Watterson did that himself.
haha, thats cause he did. im just sketching in the book. haha.

[Baron]

haha, thats cause he did. im just sketching in the book. haha.

Bout to say that, a simple, no quote sketch is in the back of every book.

[Baszma]

*ThatGuyWhoDrinksTea*: I like it, but I would pull the top part of that second "e" out a bit more, it looks a little bit like it got crushed into the "n".

[LeaksOne]

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/5728/dsc04652ju0.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/dsc04652ju0.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img115/dsc04652ju0.jpg/1/)

check it leaks :D

i like that. make it bend the other way tho. that should spice it up even more

[Baszma]

Agreed, plus it'll look more like a T and less like J that way. I really like the two holes on the E.

[Silent Bob]

http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g171/novizm/scan0010-6.jpg
drunk throws.....critsss

[Bink1]

well nova your stuff always looks tight .

[Queezy]

High Traffic street and when i'm about to do a drop shadow a fucking hero pedestrian tried to stop me so I couldn't finish.
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyThrowieVentura.jpg

[seywhat]

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage143.jpg
quick slap

nova=nice

[Baszma]

*Seywhat*: looks cool, but throw some color on it! :)

[Bink1]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/237/dsc04657vr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/dsc04657vr4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img186/dsc04657vr4.jpg/1/)

dunno but i like my new throw , im painting with 0.99$ now coz dont wanna waste cash on nice colors till im good :D
crits?

[Baszma]

do you mean 0.99$? I sure hope so...

Just keep it clean, and put some more white in the fill. Idk about the writing in white up at the top, but that's personal opinion.

[kill_fred]

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/237/dsc04657vr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/dsc04657vr4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img186/dsc04657vr4.jpg/1/)

dunno but i like my new throw , im painting with 0.99$ now coz dont wanna waste cash on nice colors till im good :D
crits?

you should work on your can control.do more hollows...more tags and stuff.idk i practiced with axe outside on my little shed thingy...shows up and it gets you used to using a can of some sort..

[miteone]

bink just take your time....maybe just fine really chill spots for the time being

[Bink1]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9049/dsc04665dr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/dsc04665dr6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img149/dsc04665dr6.jpg/1/)

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/8403/dsc04663er1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/dsc04663er1.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img395/dsc04663er1.jpg/1/)

some shit.

[klic]

some quick shit... my e and l are really shitty

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000221.jpg

tens - keep working on it, your e kinda looks like a p

seyar - nice letters, not really much flow to it though

queezy - your q looks like it has a tumor on it, keep working on it

[GETRAD]

klic- i really like the h and the p, i think the s needs some work, add some color to
bink- i have no idea what those hollow 2 letter throws say, keep to pen and paper for a while

2 letter throw (trying to work on shading)
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo81.jpg

[Bink1]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/7439/dsc04679uq4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/dsc04679uq4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img155/dsc04679uq4.jpg/1/)

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3755/dsc04666yw6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/dsc04666yw6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img155/dsc04666yw6.jpg/1/)

http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/287/dsc04672ua3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/dsc04672ua3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img386/dsc04672ua3.jpg/1/)

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/3681/dsc04670sx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04670sx3.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img509/dsc04670sx3.jpg/1/)

well getrad mine says TE.

but yours G looks like C and D like O tho.

[Queezy]

Getrad- Too many things going on with the top of your G, especially for a throwie, and the D does look like an O. Take your time trying to make it look good then start working on doing it fast after you have it down.
Bink- No disrespect but the first letter looks nothing like a T...at all. And same critique as getrad, just take your time on paper and it will translate to your street work.

[Stussy]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/4473/photo676el7.jpg

exchange i did.

[Queezy]

It looks dope, I don't think the drips on the O look bad, but it's just not my thing.

[Darkeist]

stussy - really feeling it. especcially the K
getrad - looks real good, but maybe work on the E a little bit.
bink - work on can control, and throw up in general, the hollow next to the See throw up, is good, i like the R(?) on that one better. And is the first letter E? If it is, you might want to extend the top bar some...

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081211_4.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081211_1.jpg

[LeaksOne]

do your whole name in the style of that two letter simp. thats raw as hell

[cesspool]

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/4577/img1471os7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


sorry darkeist but im gonna have to pint out that your second e is a blatant sake bite

[Darkeist]

flicks cuz i dont know who sake is. i didnt bite, promise.

[cesspool]

hes a well known montreal based writer.. uhh just flickr "sake hyh"

[Darkeist]

Alright, but i didnt bite anyway.

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000222.jpg
the S on the left is the one i originally used. the one on the right is the one i developed into by listening to crits... which one should i stick with?

spare - make your r look like a normal r and not the kind of R that everybody tries to do

seror - try fattening up your letters

[B.S. POLICE]

the second one man its obvious

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000222.jpg
the S on the left is the one i originally used. the one on the right is the one i developed into by listening to crits... which one should i stick with?

spare - make your r look like a normal r and not the kind of R that everybody tries to do

seror - try fattening up your letters

bump

[jester.onest]

Lol, the left one is better. Crits can't do everything. (:

[7nationarmy]

kinda diggin them s's
99 cent thow..not feelin at all..u should b rackin ur paint anyways :\
some new throws and charecters ive been playin around with
http://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/Photo82.jpghttp://i431.photobucket.com/albums/qq40/axefee/Photo83.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

u should completly close ur letters cuz they just look like a blob wen u dont(the throw in the 2nd pic top left)....and the colors are garbage...

[cesspool]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000222.jpg


spare - make your r look like a normal r and not the kind of R that everybody tries to do




lol i write spore, it must be that orange circle in the a making it look like a lower case a , otherwise, idk why you would think it says spare :S

[7nationarmy]

u should completly close ur letters cuz they just look like a blob wen u dont(the throw in the 2nd pic top left)....and the colors are garbage...

wat i was going for...i know how to do a throw man..i was just tryin somethin diffrent..na mean
and for the colors...all i had...

[MARTYRaz]

i got u dog...no beef just opinion

[Bink1]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3430/dsc04684gm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/dsc04684gm8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img210/dsc04684gm8.jpg/1/)

why the fuk it cant be fkin t? i dont have thought of another hallow T's

[Queezy]

Take your fucking time, that looks like shit, and once again does not look like a T.

[pixystix]

doesnt look like a T at all

and when your starting out dont rush your shit take your time till you have it down then work on speed............work on look before speed

[7nationarmy]

i got u dog...no beef just opinion

i know...i know u dint mean nothin about it man

[kill_fred]

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/3430/dsc04684gm8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/dsc04684gm8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img210/dsc04684gm8.jpg/1/)

why the fuk it cant be fkin t? i dont have thought of another hallow T's

wtf is this? looks like it says elc.you should just drop this shit....

[Facedorateur]

make it more simple Bink

[kill_fred]

nah it doesnt need to be more simple necessarily it just needs to look more like a t.instead of god knows what...

[NO_1]

^^simplify

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/throwieroz.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6531/getoff0001zk4.jpg

[kill_fred]

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6531/getoff0001zk4.jpg

do i know you from somewhere?

[B.S. POLICE]

reffer to the sig




in ohter words yes you do but shhh

[kill_fred]

gotcha

[gomaESB757]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6605/gomablackbookoe8.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gomablackbookoe8.jpg) I wanted to get some crits before i use this...

[BigBlueViolence]

icoe- dope, not really feeling the spermy I, though.

B.S.- also dope, but I don't really get the D, did you forget a dot or something?

Fucking around with the fill.

http://i40.tinypic.com/30dkufq.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenefuckwinter.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenerfuckwinter.jpg

[WoeInfinite]

^^ definitely gotten better dude.
keep up the good work

[kill_fred]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenefuckwinter.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/Oenerfuckwinter.jpg

i dont get your name.oh-n-er? is that how you say it....regardless of what it says i really dont have any crits but i would drop that little arrow on your tag.looks kinda tacky.




man i want that gta4 soooooo bad.has anyone played it?

[dont=play=ketchup]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/1149/008sd4.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

i dont get your name.oh-n-er? is that how you say it....regardless of what it says i really dont have any crits but i would drop that little arrow on your tag.looks kinda tacky.




man i want that gta4 soooooo bad.has anyone played it?

yeah its nasty

[Scheme*119]

http://i41.tinypic.com/34nno5g.jpg
few are illa then this koopa killa fluid spilla

crits

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

i dont get your name.oh-n-er? is that how you say it....regardless of what it says i really dont have any crits but i would drop that little arrow on your tag.looks kinda tacky.




man i want that gta4 soooooo bad.has anyone played it?

Gta4 is pretty dope, as well its pernounced oene=own oener=owner.. lol

[hardwares]

hey. i wrote my name all bubbly and all. some feedback would be very nice. sorry bout the weird surface, it was the biggest piece of paper in sight.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6950/throwoc0.jpg

says "ware"

thanks.

[kill_fred]

Gta4 is pretty dope, as well its pernounced oene=own oener=owner.. lol

why dont you just write owner then?lol to each his own right.omg im sooo late for school im gonna get expelled.



ive been absent like 90 times haha.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

lol damn.... i duno just picked oene didn't really think about it..

[Blox]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302063.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302064.jpg
The names Elk
Any critz?

[kill_fred]

drop the crown.your e looks like a lima bean.not an e.

[kill_fred]

your writes suck too.fix those up...

[Blox]

Im down with lima beans.

[Baron]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302063.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302064.jpg
The names Elk
Any critz?

Poor hand stlye, poor structure, E looks like a half-ass bite, names taken.

[kill_fred]

yeah but its just you know.......hella ugly.thats all im sayin.







:D

[Blox]

HAHAHA
Glad all yall take a liking to my shit.
HAHAHA

[cesspool]

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/2509/img1539ju9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9955/img1540oz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/250/img1541ti0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7572/img1544wa4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/img1544wa4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img166/img1544wa4.jpg/1/)

[woakone]

BLOX:
instead of being so negative i thought id try n help weather you pay attention is up to you,

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk101/tsgreendesign/exampleelk.jpg

loose the crown.
extension up on your e, make it look more like an e instead of a 'lima bean' as someone said.. also loose the eye or w.eit was use a circle/oval or something to give it more shape..

i lost the extended line in your L , without it you should be able to draw the L with one line..

your K looked squashed up so i fattend it out a bit but tryed to keep it the style you drew it in the first place..

i know ths isnt the best improvement but its a start ..
keep practising both your throw and the handstyle needs work aswell ..

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/2509/img1539ju9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9955/img1540oz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/250/img1541ti0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7572/img1544wa4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/img1544wa4.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img166/img1544wa4.jpg/1/)

nice, feeling it you live in Tdot right?

[cesspool]

yes sir, i guess you can tell where this this.. lol

[kill_fred]

the fourth one is the best.im off to play teh bideo gamzes.whatever.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

yes sir, i guess you can tell where this this.. lol

yep i can see one of my crappy tags lol

[gentrifried]

http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/BasementGraf_dec100008.sized.jpg
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/ISA_Dec150010.sized.jpg
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/ISA_Dec180003.sized.jpg

[miteone]

better can control...dont overlap letters for now

[BigBlueViolence]

icoe- dope, not really feeling the spermy I, though.

B.S.- also dope, but I don't really get the D, did you forget a dot or something?

Fucking around with the fill.

http://i40.tinypic.com/30dkufq.jpg

Zero crits bump

Spore- Not really feeling the E, the rest of it is pretty dope, though.

Isi- I would just keep it to paper for now.

[ShhImACop]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v655/DrewRC/faaack085.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

shh, i like it just work on the fill make the bottom of the e a little bigger and make the r smaller so they all are the same size =D

[Baszma]

Agreed. The worst thing to me is the fill, as it looks to me like the letters are supposed to get bigger from the E to the R. If that's so, just exaggerate it a lil bit more.

[Anyone]

http://i471.photobucket.com/albums/rr77/RUNE_GRAF/deuce.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

deuce, im feelin it, but im not at the same time.. i duno

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/xmasoener.jpg
merry xmas?

[markingz.]

shh, i like it just work on the fill make the bottom of the e a little bigger and make the r smaller so they all are the same size =D
shut up you bitch that fill is hard shhimacop dont listen all your stuff is sick as hell.

[mtown]

http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zane003io0.jpg

[mtown]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8717/zane003io0.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

shut up you bitch that fill is hard shhimacop dont listen all your stuff is sick as hell.

lol.... he posted for crits... i gave him some

[Bink1]

eor-letter same size and it will look fine.
oener- what happpened to O?
zane-move your stuff in middle of page

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

blink do u mean my o is not round?

[Bink1]

yeh :D and i see that all your other letters are same size but the O is bit fked up :)

[Aekersaw]

I really need crits and advice, i'm kind of stuck, and unsure if i am ready to start painting.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i302/m_Crimson_lies_m/230802.jpg

Sorry for really bad picture quality

[S4d3n]

I really need crits and advice, i'm kind of stuck, and unsure if i am ready to start painting.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i302/m_Crimson_lies_m/230802.jpg

Sorry for really bad picture quality

Bad pic, but from what I can see there is structure, not feelin the 3d though, doesn't look good on a throwie, try with a shadow style instead, and try to get a better pic too.

[Aekersaw]

Bad pic, but from what I can see there is structure, not feelin the 3d though, doesn't look good on a throwie, try with a shadow style instead, and try to get a better pic too.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i302/m_Crimson_lies_m/000521.jpg

here thats a little more clear

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3216/3124799772_c8f2b0ee89.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3096/3099563794_6ef776619b.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3058/3098730927_d83be5973e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3125/3095681575_6b0a5a219d.jpg

[Aekersaw]

The face on the first throws real dope

[-Zeal-]

bump that DOAP shit
that is striaght up sexy

[ShhImACop]

haha thanks for the crits, whether i choose to listen to them or not, thats the first time i have painted in close to a year so i am a little rusty for sure.

[mtown]

http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8717/zane003io0.jpg

bumperthebump:D,need crits:P

[smooth_nuts]

bump that DOAP shit
that is striaght up sexy
got Technique dripping out my butt cheeks
sleep on my stomach so i dont fuck up the sheets :D

...by the way,you get your pack yet homie?

[mtown]

nuts:i like the blue and the jellow one the best stay with them

give me some crits people

[smooth_nuts]

just keep going with what you have there,and do the bottom of your letters and maybe throw on a drop shadow instead of a shitty 3d?

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0683.jpg

pretty shitty, only my third painted throwie

zane - keep working at it, make the bottom of your a bigger and the top smaller

dope - looks fresh, im not feeling your A though, maybe try a lowercase.. or just write dope instead of doap lol

aeker - make it simpler, your a and r look the same, your k reminds me of flubber, the slime thing from the movie lol, and your not ready to paint that yet sorry bro
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/tr4_z.jpg

crits

[smooth_nuts]

kilc-
1.stick to paper for a bit
2.fill in your letters all the way
3.invest in some fat caps.

[Name12345]

Not trying to start anything here, but why do people always say stick to paper. I know it's for practice and getting better, but it doesn't help you learn can control or anything for that matter except get an idea of what you're painting. Wouldn't it be better to just find a chill spot and practice on a wall?

Klic: Definitely work on filling it in. Take that extra time to do a nice job, or just leave it hollow.

[klic]

kilc-
1.stick to paper for a bit
2.fill in your letters all the way
3.invest in some fat caps.

yah i know my fill sucks, i didnt have much red paint left and there were guys working at the dam that was only about 50 meters away so i needed to do something half quick

i would buy fat caps but i live in the middle of bumfuck nowhere and its pretty much impossible to order shit online without the rents finding out

and yah, ill stick to paper for now

[smooth_nuts]

name,no,theres no point in painting if you dont have anyletters...control is easy to gain,for most people that is :/

klic-thats sucks man :/
there used to be a list in the tools and tips section of caps you can get off areosol cans at places like wallmart and the dollarstore you can use on paint...maybe you should go short for that

[Name12345]

I suppose you're right.

Klic: For fat sprays, I heard Elmers Spray Glue caps are good (trying em out tomorrow). Just check your Wal-Mart or Michaels for em.

[mekosbc]

the only throwie on this page that doesnt need work is that DOPE throwie... all yo other dudes...wrk on it... shpel...stay on paper...get you style profected and your hand style needz a lot of work

[mtown]

bumperthebump:D,need crits:P

ya'll now yhe deal:o:p

[ShaolinNy]

https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo24/23/81/a4bfc1d7c957.jpeg


Crits please...Ive been messin around with my name Sneak for a long time now and this is the best thing i got so far def needs work but im not sure what to do,can any one help please?


Fase-Needs alot of work just keep practicing
Candyrain-Your normal stlye look pretty sick
Beats his wife-Not bad at all for only a mont keep practicing

ok i worked on it alittle more.Obviously it still needs alot of work.Dont mind that gay eye i drew in the A lol...Crits please.im not sure if i should keep working on this thowie on start with something completly differnt cause it seems my name is hard to right n i dont plan on changing it..help please!


https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo11/dd/0b/f12f0c4449f5.jpeg


Shapel-Def stick to paper for a little longer before u try on a wall
Dope-thats is dope!Lets see it on a wall
cesspool-Good shit...U in NY?

[BigBlueViolence]

Sneak- Don't make the lines inside your letters so curvy, and don't connect them all together.
And just personal preference, but I'm not feeling the mouth in the A.
If you got rid of it,
and lowered the eye to the middle of the letter it'd be dope, though.

[shake n bake]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/5517/graffpics018px7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/3001/graffpics023bt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[BigBlueViolence]

that CBW is alot fucking better than that Shake, man

[shake n bake]

yeah, the CBW is by my bro

[BigBlueViolence]

well, man, a big tip is to start in the middle of the page.
It will get you moving a lot faster than chilling at the bottom of the page.

[klic]

my first ever painted throwie (did it last month)... ignore my shit handstyle, i have no can control
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0706.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0707.jpg
and my second one, same day, sorry bout the shitty flick, my color choice was pretty bad too
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG_0708.jpg

shake - your k needs some work, bring the bottom line to the left more... and make the bottom of your s kind of extend a tiny bit longer if you know what i mean

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

shpel can't really see it =(

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/boes1.jpg
might change... i duno

[Basic954]

Did you bite that e from Cope? XD

[smooth_nuts]

wow,so basic im guessing you've been writing for like a month and the only writers you know are the ones featured in that mark echo game....cause thats the most generic and used e a person could draw.

boes(?)-other then the huge retarded lower case b your letters arent that bad.
shpel-i like the little face you should keep going with that.
bigblue-your sig is the shit....gave me a woody.

[Masta T]

thatguy - straighten up ur letters bro

crits on this? any help on wut i should do wit da k?

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/1223082204.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

make the k more a k.. left ends shot stick out more, kinda looks like a h with a twist =D
thnx for the crits

i might change it to bose..cause it can sound like boys :P

[Mr yarbles]

make the k more a k.. left ends shot stick out more, kinda looks like a h with a twist =D
thnx for the crits

i might change it to bose..cause it can sound like boys :P

Are you a chick?
No beef just wonderin

[Baszma]

if so, why would she say yes, and subject herself to the 2498349873498573194 creepers and lurkers on BS.

Not saying you are, I respect you Yarbles, but there are others on this board I wouldn't trust around my gramma....

[BigBlueViolence]

Me.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

lol... im not a chick...

[Mr yarbles]

hah word you're probably right

Edit: alright lets keep it that way...
hahaha I don't even kno what the fuck I'm saying
Sorry I;m high

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

yarbles is that my crit.."are u a women"? lol

[Mr yarbles]

Make your b different looks like a tumor or something hahah
Other than that it's straight

Damn I sound like such a dick online
Like a bully or something

[BigBlueViolence]

Tea guy- That B is fucking doodie, but the rest is straight.

[Mr yarbles]

Oh and are you like shakin or something when yu paint and draw cause yur eltters just look kinda jagged
GO faster an work out that dropshadown a bit

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/3boes.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

bottom two are dopeski.
throw some dots in the B, lose the line in the O,
and you're fucking set.

http://i41.tinypic.com/16gwvw2.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

i duno what to do with the b.. everything looks gay :P

[BigBlueViolence]

the capital B is dope, man, just put dots in it.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2hnt11y.jpg

Just for the fuck of it.

[smooth_nuts]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/3boes.jpg
the secnd ones dope steez myles just throw a dot or two in the b and try to keep all the letters the same size ;)

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

im fucked how do u know my name lol

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

the secnd ones dope steez myles just throw a dot or two in the b and try to keep all the letters the same size ;)

myles is my name... :confused:

[smooth_nuts]

im fucked how do u know my name lol
haha no worries,
when i quoted your post it shows the link(which has your photobucket name in it) to the flick not the flick it's self....tis how i know myles ;)

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

oh.. lol i was like wtf

[BigBlueViolence]

Well, while we're all here, do either of you ******s mind critting my shit?

[smooth_nuts]

hahaha i figured that'd get you freaked out...
earn-the little toss on the bottom is alot better then the top,do that one!

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm really feeling that A man,
but I don't think it should have an eyebrow.
lowercase A's aren't really face-y looking.

[revid!]

pull that p out a bit smooovie

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/boesb.jpg

attempt at the b.. lol

[smooth_nuts]

boes the b looked alot better in the other flick :/
had to edit the flick cause i realised you could still read the few bars i skribbled out at the top of the page haha,anyway...
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture1195.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

should i just leave the b plain?

[smooth_nuts]

its the middle part,your bring it to far back...dig?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

i got it ..

[your dad]

boes the b looked alot better in the other flick :/
had to edit the flick cause i realised you could still read the few bars i skribbled out at the top of the page haha,anyway...
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture1195.jpg

pretty dope but you should define the eyes on the dude a little better i think and also not extend the line from the A as much over the other letter

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/boes2.jpg

think i did what u said

[smooth_nuts]

yeah thats better,now work on keeping your shit all the same size and keeping your drop shadow in the right places and you'll be set

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

thnx =D

[ShaolinNy]

Sneak- Don't make the lines inside your letters so curvy, and don't connect them all together.
And just personal preference, but I'm not feeling the mouth in the A.
If you got rid of it,
and lowered the eye to the middle of the letter it'd be dope, though.

Thx alot for the crits but some one told me the same thing and honestly i have no idea what u mean wen u say dont connect them together?Can u show me an example please?So im suppose to make them straight?



https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo11/dd/0b/f12f0c4449f5.jpeg


Also bump^^

[Snew]

never really tried a throw before so heres my attempt..
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo48.jpg
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo47.jpg
sneak.. id lose the points..

[k'n1ve]

Makin my negro smear3 look fuckin good, but he always makes me look silly cuz hes fuckin ill...

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00495.jpg

I fuckin hate my e but was outta paint 3-d is all kabakai too but what can i do?

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00496.jpg

old bubbly

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSC00498.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

nice knive, loving the whole thing cept the right top of ur k, besides that good shit

[mekosbc]

ugly color choice......should have used the white to out line...blue n dark purple looks horrible... but that smear? is dope love the can control

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/mountpleasentbridge.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

ive seen better from u b4 teadrinker...not feelin this one...

[mekosbc]

damn oene? you hit a block you were progressing slowly and now with that pic, your style went back down 4 notches... need to work on it... didnt i do a throwie for you a while back?

[Blox]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302073.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

whats so bad about it =(

[smooth_nuts]

your letters arent really that bad myles you just crammed em to close together ya know?




....and what happened to bose?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

hmmm... long story bout bose, and it was a small space lol

[blunttokes]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/mountpleasentbridge.jpg


decent for sure...

keep it going

and how would u pronounce that lol...Oiner? OENER ....

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

it took me a while to find the right way to pronounce it but it's own

[Darkeist]

told to open up the back leg of the R last time

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081227_4.jpg

Oene - I really like the capital N you have, but none of the rest really flows with it, it seems.
knive - work on your E, doesnt really go with it
snew - i like it except the W, keep working on it.

[k'n1ve]

i no the color sucked on that one mekosbc, thought it would work better... but oh well, And darkeist i no that fuckin E sucked ass-- your throw looks pretty sick

[Darkeist]

Thanks man, oh yeah i just re read your post. Id just try to squish it in a little closer maybe im not sure

[blunttokes]

make the 2 Es capitals OENE

[k'n1ve]

kool man ill try that... you shoulda seen when we were there... I was about to kill someone cuz that fukin e bro.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

i will try that blunt =D
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/capitales.jpg
:P

[Ink me]

Working on throwies.....what do you think? Other thanthe black blob in the "R".
Secret=Ckret

http://i39.tinypic.com/fkaej7.jpg

[Darkeist]

told to open up the back leg of the R last time

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081227_4.jpg

Oene - I really like the capital N you have, but none of the rest really flows with it, it seems.
knive - work on your E, doesnt really go with it
snew - i like it except the W, keep working on it.

bump.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

dark looks good to me just maybe clean the e up a little? i duno doesnt really need work =D

[Darkeist]

Word thanks.

Oene - Your last E doesnt match up with the first one, its kinda slanted, id just keep redoing it and youll naturaly improve

[BAGS]

Oene- I think all of your letters look too mushed up. Space them out a little bit.

Serror- I like your throw. I think it looks pretty good. I'm not really feeling the top part of your E though. Try adding some 3d and shit and post up!



I'm pretty much new to throws but I figured I'd try one out. It's super basic but it's all about baby steps..


http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr171/mccauwi25/Picture027.jpg

[ShaolinNy]

ok i worked on it alittle more.Obviously it still needs alot of work.Dont mind that gay eye i drew in the A lol...Crits please.im not sure if i should keep working on this thowie on start with something completly differnt cause it seems my name is hard to right n i dont plan on changing it..help please!


https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo11/dd/0b/f12f0c4449f5.jpeg


Shapel-Def stick to paper for a little longer before u try on a wall
Dope-thats is dope!Lets see it on a wall
cesspool-Good shit...U in NY?



BUMP crits please dont pay atention to that gay eye i drew in the A

[iThrow]

workin with a new name
http://i40.tinypic.com/qyintu.jpg

[BAGS]

^give crits to get them homie...

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

shaolin- make sure all of ur styles are the same cause some of ur letters have flat tops and some round etc....

sers- make sure ur letters are all the same size, and i duno about the x in the e

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/newstyle.jpg

new style just throwing it out there

[Ink me]

Sers- Cant tell its an "R"....if anything it looks like a "P". Work on keeping same letters even like the "S"

Oene- Im digging your "E"....but your 3d is really messed up. The viewpoints are all over the place. I am by no means good at 3D either...just pointing it out.

Bags - Basic but I like it....the "M" looks funky to me though....Im not sure why either.

Shaolin - Keep letters flowing......the top of the "A" doesnt match up with the others.

http://i42.tinypic.com/24nftbk.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

i think its the inside of my n thats fucked for 3d

[Mr yarbles]

Tat o is straight wack
But your other letters are fire oene and lost that wierd bar thng at the bggining

[Darkeist]

Oene - thats looking really alot better. Just make sure the O is all the way round, and maybe work on your last E a little bit. And lose the bar at the front of it.

Ink me - I cant even read what that says. Ekret?

someone asked for a shadow. So heres one, its not very good but eh. I also tried to change the top of the E

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081229_2.jpg

[BAGS]

Yeah that was me. I think it looks a lot better Seror. Keep at it.

[Darkeist]

Thanks man.

[beefisforburgers]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v655/DrewRC/faaack085.jpg

Bump eor he's the man

[Ink me]

Oene - thats looking really alot better. Just make sure the O is all the way round, and maybe work on your last E a little bit. And lose the bar at the front of it.

Ink me - I cant even read what that says. Ekret?

someone asked for a shadow. So heres one, its not very good but eh. I also tried to change the top of the E

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20081229_2.jpg

The first letter was supposed to be a C and the swirl representing a dot.......for C.Kret.

[BAGS]

Don't do the dot/swirl. Work on your C. Keep working on all of it.

[Blox]

Yo, Sorry about the last post boys,
I didn't give no critz to you homies.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302078.jpg
Oener- Your word is FUCKED lol, But your getting er done, but your O and N have some dead space, I aint diggin.
Ckret- Im liking how you shortend your word, But maybe try using just Secret
Seror- Man, I don't even really got anything to crit about it, Its looking good. But your bottom shawdowing is a little wierd.
Maro- Your totally right man, Start with babysteps, And you did that perfectly, Im really diggin.
Sneak- Man, Make all your letters WAY simpler.

[Blox]

Forgot to say,
I AM THE ALIEN

[Blox]

Which is why my word is alien.

[Uglybetty]

Seror its all good the s doesnt really fit in with the style though if you get what i mean, its a bit simpler than the rest, not that thats a bad thing but maybe piss around with it a bit.
alien lose the slant thing and just take a step back and work on ya letters more, and stop posting after yourself, if youve got something to say and noones posted yet just edit.

[Blox]

Ohhh shitttt
there is a fucking edit button
thats nutty.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/newoene-1.jpg

[revid!]

try not having so much negative space in your third letter and try spacing that last e out a bit more lookin good tho

[Blox]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302076.jpg
Thats a dope throw oene
Like revid said, That space in your N is alittle dead, but besides that, shes good.

[Baron]

Your A looks like a sack.

[B.S. POLICE]

lol!

[Blox]

Damn rights,
I've been getting that alot actually HAHA
Besides my A looking like a nutsac
What ELSE could i do to make er better?

[B.S. POLICE]

get rid of the i altogether and write alen

[Tigerstyle]

Crits?
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r191/STEIGERCHILD/Picture010.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

gtfo of here with that shiiiitttt

[Wallace]

^ahahaha, your posts always make me laugh. good shit

seror your throwy is starting to look better and better, just work on your r a little and its good to go i think.

[k'n1ve]

Tiger- Drop the wart on the y and change the s cus its a whole different style...

[B.S. POLICE]

chomp chomp is what it is

[Bink1]

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/1637/dsc06188ow8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/dsc06188ow8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img158/dsc06188ow8.jpg/1/)

oene-nice one
alien-lmfao nutsack,change your I and N.
yosh-what is that little ball at right side of Y?change your S

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00086.jpg
not good at all but i wanted some tips

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

blink- i like everything but ur t, the first one is alright but the second one, make the middle line wider...

shayk- letters all the same size, all on the same page, after that just gets into structure

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00087.jpg

any better

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

thats alot better, just not feeling the s but its looks much better

[blunttokes]

chomp chomp is what it is


sure is.. the y reminds me of YNOT the S reminds me of SPIN

some quick daytime hollow downtown.
kinda wack but w.e same shit as always
http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/SEoe.jpg



blox... change ur LI

[TRY'N]

bink1-- looking good
shayk-- it's better but still, make all the letters the exact same size. your A Y and K are all different from the S and H.

[shayk]

alright thanks ill work on it

[Blox]

Yo, just wanna say thanks for the critz boys.
I appreciate it alot.
But, yo,
If i should write alen, I was just thinking there would be atleast someone else writing that.
You know?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

add a letter to the end then lol like an e,s change the n to a z i duno... if u dont like it then just change ur name in general... just ideas

[kill_fred]

new name im thinkin of rockin.what do you guys think?any advice or comments....http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z241/RAEL_ONE/Picture394.jpg

[ErrorOner...]

yea blunttokes that is kinda wack...no offence
once that looks pretty nice, it's different but nice.
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0102092018.jpg
crits *****s!

[littlerocky]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/1209081455.jpg
guess not really a throwie but fuck it..
bins throwie..
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/0925080908.jpg

[REDjacket]

these are nice

["Bi2aR"]

http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/Photo2-3.jpg
i would crit but i don't know jack shit about throws

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

blunt- i duno what to say it looks good but at the same time, i dont get it because it doesnt look like what u usually write
once- letters all the same size ur o is so small and ur n is huge
scrap- ur R A and P should all have the same middle space... it's hard to explain but ur r has a dot, ur a has a little o and ur p has a d you should make them all the same
little- first pic: ur s shouldn't go off.. keep it together like the rest of the letters to make a square second pic: dope, maybe add something in the p but it looks good right now, try colour?
Bizar- bottom and top of ur r shouldnt colide, not feeling the twirls/eye (maybe switch to lines?), not feeling the teeth, maybe just go simple =D

[slim.47.]

Crits?
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r191/STEIGERCHILD/Picture010.jpg

bump yosh, vkillin shit phat goon squad!

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00095.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

fill in the red =D

[shayk]

i was running out of the red i gota pick up a new one

[GETRAD]

wow, everythings looking pretty good on this page
shayk- good start, id just fill in the shadow instead of that fill
bizar- looks tight, just neaten it up a bit
little rocky- fucking sick, cant think of any crits haha
sirap- my bad if i read it wrong, looks good

fucking around w/ a new 'a', i like it
http://i36.photobucket.com/albums/e31/boogina/Photo215.jpg

[LeaksOne]

^that A doesnt fit in with the rest your D looks like an O your R doesnt really fit in an your G is hard to decipher

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

Seriously considering a name change.

Getrad- the Get half looks alright, but the Rad part looks like shit.

Yosh- Dope, but I think you should put some space in the middle of the Y.

Once- fuckin butter

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

Big blue looks good, fix the second n tho =D

[blunttokes]

yea blunttokes that is kinda wack...no offence
once that looks pretty nice, it's different but nice.
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/0102092018.jpg
crits *****s!


haha

and no offence but thats wack too

[B.S. POLICE]

ya thats pretty whack

[blunttokes]

where u from bspolice?

[Den1]

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0536.jpg

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0535.jpg

let me know what you think
-thanks

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

den i really dont feel that style.. the way the d is and everythind basic letters?

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/002.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

That's the best shit I've seen from you man
That o is finally a round ass circle haha

But remember to give the crits to those above you

oh and do a little line in the middle of the e
Sounds stupid but it kills some of the dead space and makes things look better