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moonboots
01-05-2009, 11:07 PM
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/DSCF0084.jpg

new word SOHP...crits?

hardwares
01-05-2009, 11:08 PM
den-- bro you got some work.. even out the letter size a bit (the D versus all the rest) focus on your letter style, make the letters flow. and personally, me dont like the crosses in the letters, but thats your call. make the D look less like a N. simple simple simple.

OENE-- good simples, try working on adding your own style tho. but keep it basic, just fuck with the letters some. not bad, but not really good either.



been drawing and shit want some crits reeal bad.

2letter throw
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/6998/2letdv5.jpg

4letter throw
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8044/4letcq5.jpg

CRITS
CRITS
CRITS

MARTYRaz
01-05-2009, 11:54 PM
clean up the stray lines and loops in ur letters and itll look alrite...

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 12:14 AM
mare i like that hit me up for an exchange
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/215/screencapture10gs3.png

hardwares
01-06-2009, 12:38 AM
mare i like that hit me up for an exchange


you mean ware? or someone else..

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 12:42 AM
you mean ware? or someone else..

lol ya ware, im too high for this shit

hardwares
01-06-2009, 12:48 AM
aight i PMd you

moonboots- pretty clean, nice simple style. but almost too simple (in my opinion). mess with the letters a little and shit. keep structure. etc etc.

NouveauP
01-06-2009, 03:08 AM
Throw for a battle no one entered.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/rabid.jpg

white
01-06-2009, 07:10 PM
rabid nice simples

crits -

like it better with or without the e or e and s

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-2.jpg

hardwares
01-06-2009, 07:19 PM
your throw looks like a side view of a really shriveled pennis. lolz. like it better without the S.

B.S. POLICE
01-06-2009, 07:54 PM
it reakky does thats halarious

graffdabusup
01-06-2009, 08:48 PM
bspolice- raw shit
NouveauP- flows nice
hardwares- nice quick style
white- try incorporating your own style by looking at examples. think simple

crits appreciated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pm me for exchange?????:):):):)

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/09.jpg

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/01.jpg

sacwacko
01-06-2009, 08:58 PM
im feeling all that^^^^....kinda

aspen1
01-06-2009, 10:20 PM
http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr250/aspenfuek/galant002.jpg

BigBlueViolence
01-06-2009, 10:32 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

(Breast) Lump.

Noyu- Top one is dope. Not really feeling the wrinkles on the top of the N, though. The bottom of the U is a little weird, too.

Ware- Not really feeling the E. Everything else is lookin' good, though.

moonboots
01-06-2009, 10:42 PM
http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/GAMP.jpg

my bros throwie...Crits please?

LeaksOne
01-07-2009, 12:45 AM
simps

xaaronx
01-07-2009, 01:02 AM
http://www.uscconlinealbum.com/photos/photo01/3f/51/d0e1f1a47c07.jpg

crits/advice? i know it's a bit sloppy; it's been a few months. shitty, shitty weather +surgery.

hardwares
01-07-2009, 01:24 AM
its fucking dope. dont have anything to add.

senkz
01-07-2009, 05:02 AM
xaaronx: good style, only thing i see wrong is the 2 drops should be the same colour as the fill.

smooth_nuts
01-07-2009, 07:08 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3433/3177793506_9a3c1ffb7f.jpg
little quicky on the side of a page in a note book
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/3176957221_0637736564.jpg
a bunch of shit on top of shit...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3330/3177791412_7c952de46c.jpg
new two letter
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3095/3098729383_679b5416c9.jpg
"word to muva,heard 'em frontin'."

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 09:36 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/3176957221_0637736564.jpg

This is what every page in my book looks like, man.

Feeling everything you posted.

smooth_nuts
01-07-2009, 10:04 PM
thanks.
haha,yeah about every 2 out of 3 pages in my book looks like that,some times worse :/

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

Burp

smooth_nuts
01-07-2009, 10:19 PM
new name?
i'm feeling the top c,and i think you should make your o more round and your n less like a moose nuckle....imo.

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 10:20 PM
Dude, I just noticed the moose knuckle,
I'm considerinn whether or not to make it look less like one
or more like one.

http://i39.tinypic.com/24mgxld.jpg

white
01-07-2009, 10:30 PM
since my throwup looks like the sideview of an old mans penis, does someone wanna help me come up with a throwup or help me with my letters.....please

smooth_nuts
01-07-2009, 10:37 PM
truthfuly blue,i dont like either n :/



...i am how ever in love with that r

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 10:40 PM
i like that whole thing besides the kick on the left of the e, it looks out of place

BigBlueViolence
01-07-2009, 10:44 PM
Yeah, the E is fucked up because I wasn't really sure where I was going until after I did it, just fucking around.

B.S. POLICE
01-07-2009, 10:45 PM
true

littlerocky
01-08-2009, 12:11 AM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/0105091656a.jpg
skethcy s

graffdabusup
01-08-2009, 12:14 AM
rocky- that mugs is lookin dope!

ShaolinNy
01-08-2009, 12:24 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/7453/1231394568745bj8.jpg

-CRITS PLEASE-

Ok guys i write sneak but i change my style a little bit here is my 1st 3 letters also sne for short.I still have to figure out what kind of A n K goes good but how is this so far?



Moonboots-needs alot of work,look for your letters and try to see which kinds go together
Smooth nuts-Your to good to be here lol
littlerocky-Awsome im liken that a lot

B.S. POLICE
01-08-2009, 12:26 AM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9021/screencapture14bh2.png

ShaolinNy
01-08-2009, 12:30 AM
Police thats some crazy shit...Any crtis on mine?

B.S. POLICE
01-08-2009, 12:34 AM
loose all the spike bring the n closer to the s

NouveauP
01-08-2009, 02:01 AM
I'm feeling that MUGS. Seriously.

shayk
01-08-2009, 03:11 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00119.jpg

Scheme*119
01-08-2009, 05:04 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/207ugxu.jpg
exchange with the bs police force, i dont know what was up with that n, i shoulda made it like the a, oh well

Amore
01-08-2009, 02:33 PM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9021/screencapture14bh2.png

Yo that shit is fire.

Bink1
01-08-2009, 02:39 PM
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/3783/dsc06207mf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/dsc06207mf7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img159/dsc06207mf7.jpg/1/)

shayk-that dog dont looks good.
snap-dope

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-08-2009, 03:31 PM
nice bite of my e... :P its a common e but still lol

smooth_nuts
01-08-2009, 03:44 PM
haha,much to generic to be bitten....
teps,your p looks like a retarded lower case e
sanp,im feeling everything but the r
scheme,im feeling that a man
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture1208.jpg
just some scribles for talking...

Gort
01-08-2009, 04:15 PM
Still need to work on my throwie but this is what i got now...the G is gort sooting at the letter O ull get it..

http://i44.tinypic.com/34y8okx.png

Comments please..good or bad like both types of comments :)

WoeInfinite
01-08-2009, 04:57 PM
^ dont add characters or shit yet unless its an O or something
work on that G bro, i know how hard they are..prolly my least favorite letter to do...cuz i suck at em.

Gort
01-08-2009, 06:00 PM
Thanks im not rlly feeling the G either. I got a few different ones but thatwas kinda my fav

-HasH-The best
01-08-2009, 08:11 PM
hey guys tell me which is better for my throw up


http://i44.tinypic.com/2jg1gft.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/9tehz4.jpg

sacwacko
01-08-2009, 08:17 PM
in yaks book.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/blackbook.jpg

woonybomber
01-08-2009, 10:20 PM
Still need to work on my throwie but this is what i got now...the G is gort sooting at the letter O ull get it..

http://i44.tinypic.com/34y8okx.png

Comments please..good or bad like both types of comments :)

your g looks lik a c madude

woonybomber
01-08-2009, 10:24 PM
quick trowy mad old tho

woonybomber
01-08-2009, 10:24 PM
my bad
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/wone254003.jpg

white
01-08-2009, 10:34 PM
mugs - that throw is lookin fresh as hell
b.s. - nice man that is lookin good
shayk - loose the extension on your S
ohsnap - nice "fuck p's" lmao
bink - i would lose the drips or whatever that is but it might just be me

new throw ive been workin with

ya and i realize that my E and my K look like everybodys

CRITS
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0007-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006-1.jpg

TRY'N
01-08-2009, 11:10 PM
gort-- work on that g cuz it doesn't really look like a G and same with the O
nuke-- define your letters some more. especially the K
aspek-- looks cool
dank-- the a is probably the best letter but they all need work. and that blue cloud thing doesn't look too good

alrightttt here goes my ish:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338a-1.jpg
and
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338-1.jpg

crits??

sacwacko
01-08-2009, 11:38 PM
the second N is fucking dope.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/lexi2.jpg

some girl in one of mmy classes. i know the bottem shits wack but im helllaaaaa hihg.

Scheme*119
01-09-2009, 06:18 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/4g165k.jpg
another one for ohsnap, i wasnt happy with the first one, so here ya go snap

Baron
01-09-2009, 08:03 AM
Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

ShaolinNy
01-09-2009, 03:11 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/23ud44g.jpg


I did this is my blackbook yesterday crits?Didnt come out as good as i wanted.Tries to make the k look kinda heart shaped if y0ur wondering why the bottom is pointy

-CRTIS PLEASE-


Scheme thats dope
Bs police i added that tongue to my e if you dont mind.

Scheme*119
01-09-2009, 08:11 PM
Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

haha meh, maybe, i like the style to be honest, so many people hate on it, i cant see why

shayk
01-09-2009, 08:25 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00128.jpg

TRY'N
01-09-2009, 09:54 PM
alrightttt here goes my ish:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338a-1.jpg
and
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338-1.jpg

crits??
buummmpppp

scheme-- looks dope except i'm not really feeling the spiral in the A

exitus
01-09-2009, 10:09 PM
i think the hole on the r is really weird

remos
01-09-2009, 10:12 PM
that ohsnap is fucking hot

.HATESONE.
01-09-2009, 10:16 PM
Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

??? whats hipster style.i hear people talk about it buuut...

Baron
01-09-2009, 10:16 PM
haha meh, maybe, i like the style to be honest, so many people hate on it, i cant see why

When used correctly, I like hipster, a lot.

remos
01-09-2009, 10:40 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

militia
01-09-2009, 10:45 PM
dope S, but as ive said many times:P i dont like that E.

BigBlueViolence
01-09-2009, 10:47 PM
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.

Remos- digging the E, not the S.

Tryn- I like the bottom one, minus the R.

Sheme- dig it all but the swirls in the S and A.

Shayk- I don't recommend combining silver and gold.

remos
01-09-2009, 10:57 PM
im workin on it ;)

shayk
01-09-2009, 11:00 PM
Good idea I fucked up the color skeem and faled at trying to fix it

Baron
01-09-2009, 11:01 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

Uhhhhhhhh..... scheme's SE throw much?

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-09-2009, 11:07 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up.... :P


Scheme- Bah dope!
shayk- i just don't know...letter structure
Try'n- i like it but work on the t
remos- good
Big - like it, just not the 3 dots

cesspool
01-09-2009, 11:20 PM
yesss im lurkin on tha left!

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-09-2009, 11:32 PM
lol?

B.S. POLICE
01-09-2009, 11:40 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/23ud44g.jpg


I did this is my blackbook yesterday crits?Didnt come out as good as i wanted.Tries to make the k look kinda heart shaped if y0ur wondering why the bottom is pointy

-CRTIS PLEASE-


Scheme thats dope
Bs police i added that tongue to my e if you dont mind.


dont bite the damn faces, i wouldnt mind if your shit was decent but you should really pay attention to having dope letters before you start to add faces especially if their a bite

Scheme*119
01-09-2009, 11:57 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

http://i41.tinypic.com/11ta77l.jpg

dude, just use this one, i dont anymore

BigBlueViolence
01-09-2009, 11:59 PM
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.

Bumpskis.

Worms
01-10-2009, 12:00 AM
you know what i hate about some ppls throwies nowadays... theyre virtually bubble letter peices. throwies were supposed to be simple and or legibal not some... no ones heard of a whild style throw ... sry for the rant i had to get is off my chest

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 12:02 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up...


bahhh i give crits so BUMP!!!!

cesspool
01-10-2009, 12:02 AM
lol?

whats with the question mark... got beef!!?? wanna scrap it out HUH HUH HUH HUH!? lol


anyways, ur bump showed up after i posted this ..
yo dawgydawg, ur getting better just structure dem letters some more and i can see good things comin for ya with alot of practice (y)

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 12:04 AM
hah! im just wondering that is u?

Scheme*119
01-10-2009, 12:08 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up...


bahhh i give crits so BUMP!!!!

dont put that line in your e's, those e's would look better without them

cesspool
01-10-2009, 12:20 AM
hah! im just wondering that is u?

if youre asking with youre confusing sentence structure if that is I on the left, then yes sir it is I, Lord GangstaFresh

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 12:22 AM
lol gotta ask u something, it reads after did u change your name from spore?

cesspool
01-10-2009, 12:27 AM
yeah man, found out there was a writer named spore who used to run st. clair back in the day, so i figured it was a good idea to switch names..

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 12:29 AM
well.. couple things u went over me.. at st. mewh whatever got my revenge.. but you know the girl character all over the city.. thats a writer named after.. gotta switch again my friend.. lol

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 12:30 AM
lol.. i was close xD

nine one
01-10-2009, 12:34 AM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/1149/008sd4.jpg

i dont think you should be hitting freights, great way to loose respect. i personally hate when i see people that arent ready to hit the streets dropping stuff on good spots, just trust, stick to a bridge till you develope better can control and shit. it will help you on the long run

Bink1
01-10-2009, 04:28 AM
fuck it DONTPLAYKETCHUP stop posting your shit its fuking ugly , how many times u have to been hitted in face to understand that dog? ITS CRAP DONT WRITE IT , EVER . u never listen to crits and keep postin it and i keep throwin up all the time i see it. bitch.

shayk
01-10-2009, 07:32 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00129.jpg
crits

Scheme*119
01-10-2009, 08:03 AM
you can START with getting rid of the character in the a

what4joke...
01-10-2009, 01:28 PM
yea, keep it simple. just got more smooth, not so planned

BAGS
01-10-2009, 02:00 PM
hahaha.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 05:00 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/lcbotruck.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tennis1.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tennisplace.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/trucker.jpg
one night 1 can of paint ...:P

shayk- no face..

cesspool
01-10-2009, 05:28 PM
dont hit those city bathroom things lol
and uh, just throwin it out there, order's 2 letter was "oe"
and maybe i wouldnt put those things on the top of the e...
alright im done criticizing you lol

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-10-2009, 11:29 PM
thnx... lol

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 07:46 AM
my camera sucks
http://i43.tinypic.com/24vtp2r.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/dxiy6p.jpg

Basic954
01-12-2009, 08:03 AM
I vote Scheme for the official nastiest sig in the history of the World Wide Web.

Baron
01-12-2009, 08:06 AM
Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

shayk
01-12-2009, 08:36 AM
abor the caricter in the o on the top one is dope

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00131.jpg

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 08:43 AM
Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

i think the hipster holes look fancy thank you very much and about the b and r, im trying to make it not so generic and lets be honest, if someone couldnt tell thats a b (it has two holes in it for fucks sake) there is something wrong with them.

and uh. bump

my camera sucks
http://i43.tinypic.com/24vtp2r.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/dxiy6p.jpg

shayk
01-12-2009, 09:19 AM
i like the b but i would curve the line that seperates the two halvs down and not bring it into the a

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 09:20 AM
hush, it makes it steezy...

shayk
01-12-2009, 09:23 AM
just a thought

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 09:25 AM
i feel ya bro, thanks for it, im just fucking with you

shayk
01-12-2009, 09:31 AM
got any crits on mine i know its kinda plain but keep in mind i only started two or three weeks ago

Scheme*119
01-12-2009, 09:36 AM
well i mean, its as simple as can be, nothing really sticks out, but if i had to say one thing its make the lines on the s the same, like the top and bottom, make both of those little lines straight since that seems to be the consistent theme of it, other then that, keep it rocking for awhile till you perfected then try messing with your letters a bit, dont try to make it too different from what you see though, keep it in the boundaries of being some what generic, from there youll progress, just keep one thing in mind, if you think it looks good and dont want to change anything about it, then fuck what everyone says, keep that shit

shayk
01-12-2009, 09:40 AM
aight thanks man

SLY 303
01-12-2009, 04:41 PM
i need mad help crits please

BigBlueViolence
01-12-2009, 06:31 PM
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.


bububump

Abor- try using a marker instead of a pen.

Oene- I don't really dig the extra bump on the E.

sike_21
01-12-2009, 07:11 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0103.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-12-2009, 07:39 PM
dope character

Black Flag
01-12-2009, 08:36 PM
Sike your throw is looking good, I like it at least, the second came out a lot better then the first. Maybe try out something new for your I? It looks fine, but maybe something would fit better with your style.

Facedorateur
01-12-2009, 08:43 PM
Sike, the beige sticker is dope, love it man

heres mine, thats the best throwie i came up with until now

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7535/sn851167ns6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/sn851167ns6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img525/sn851167ns6.jpg/1/)

(bad quality pic sry)

B.S. POLICE
01-12-2009, 08:48 PM
dont do the shark fin top things

BigBlueViolence
01-12-2009, 11:22 PM
Facedorateur- does it say Fern? way too curly, man. Plus the shadow is all fucked up

Sike-Dope, but the Is on your painteds look like Cs.


More boredom type shit

http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg

I know the A is haggard.

senkz
01-13-2009, 12:21 AM
some from today
http://i43.tinypic.com/3522ccg.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/30bp5jb.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29yf2ix.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/4k9xdl.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/15i2d0p.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/k2iiw9.jpg

LeaksOne
01-13-2009, 12:36 AM
your s is coo but you may want to fix that k

graffdabusup
01-13-2009, 05:15 PM
bigblue- raw "n" i like that....maybe another exchange? =]
senks- nice throw change the "k"
sike- raw

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/throwie.jpg

crits plz!!!!!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?

what4joke...
01-13-2009, 05:16 PM
yo, loving that pink

what4joke...
01-13-2009, 05:18 PM
and "SH" maybe focus more on the shadow fill then do cutbacks, and the exclamation point. i would get rid of. i like the S tho

graffdabusup
01-13-2009, 05:25 PM
bigblue- raw "n" i like that....maybe another exchange? =]
senks- nice throw change the "k"
sike- raw

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/throwie.jpg

crits plz!!!!!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?

bumpizzle for the next pageizzle

Worms
01-13-2009, 05:26 PM
it kinda looks like a claw bite just with tha three points n watnot

smooth_nuts
01-13-2009, 05:51 PM
it looks nothing like a claw bite,specialy since's claws throw up is a claw!
you cant call a bite cause it's pointy,thats like saying he bit barbie cause it's pink!!

...i mean c'mon,really?
mr.dabus,you should make the top of your letters round and smooth,not all jagged and shit,doesnt look right with those letters

Facedorateur
01-13-2009, 06:15 PM
Gotta love da pink:)

Anybody has a nice ''f'' to give me?

hardwares
01-13-2009, 08:18 PM
sk- dont like the pointy nip on the k. it does not flow.

Stonk
01-13-2009, 08:38 PM
graffdabusup...leave out the devil horn looking things.. either square them off or round em out...it will look 20x better

fitzy36
01-14-2009, 11:19 AM
some shit i'm trying out crit.? just trying new things

Bink1
01-14-2009, 11:52 AM
Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

the r's leg dont have to be attached to body.

Baron
01-14-2009, 12:19 PM
the r's leg dont have to be attached to body.

Those R's with one leg are know as P's in my book.

white
01-14-2009, 09:46 PM
graffdabusup - dig da pink
fitzy - does everyone have that damn K (including me)

crits -

second one i was way drunk so sorry about the fill....

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0010.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0008-1.jpg
some shit from last week i wanted to repost
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006-1.jpg

BigBlueViolence
01-15-2009, 12:40 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg
Let a homie get some crits?

shayk
01-15-2009, 01:06 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00139.jpg
crits plz god knows i need them

Blox
01-15-2009, 12:11 PM
Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

graffdabusup
01-15-2009, 07:56 PM
violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

B.S. POLICE
01-15-2009, 08:00 PM
looks better

BigBlueViolence
01-15-2009, 08:23 PM
Graffdabus- Dope, man. I'd just mave that V shaped thing in the Y a space in the letter, though

ShaolinNy
01-15-2009, 08:48 PM
violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

Looking ill nice job.

milk boxx
01-15-2009, 08:55 PM
quick hollow
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/21.jpg

white
01-15-2009, 09:30 PM
Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

ya my only prob is that i cant develope K's for shit i suck bad and a shit load of people that have K's in their name have that K

weakfingers
01-15-2009, 11:49 PM
Aight, from what blox said above me about giving crits to get them, well... here they go.

Abor- I really like that seperated style and theres 2 guys doing that in my area and it looks so fresh, That being said I would only do the three dot holes on some of the letters. The seperated B is really nice and it fits the style but I would have to say make the leg on you're R look like its attached because it looks abit off to me.

Facedorateur- You're off to a good start just keep on working out small kinks and shit BUT PLEASE take out the face, it looks super dumb and like face's only look good in well done bombs(In my own opinion).

Senkz- Get rid of that one spike because it looks really out of place with the whole style of letters in the bomb.

Milk Boxx- That shits tight, keep it up.


Phew, With all those crits done heres a new throw i was working on.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9738.jpg
Crits?

milk boxx
01-16-2009, 02:38 PM
quick hollow
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/21.jpg
new page bizzzzzump
crits?
i'm liking that sike stuff. keep it up man.
skwint, looks like a good start to a nice throw.

ShaolinNy
01-16-2009, 03:43 PM
weakfingers-looking good but the k looks like an H just fix the letter up a little.
milkbox-Im liken it good shit
shayk-your getting there,keep working on it




Here mine crits please, its a little sloppy.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2ymjevs.jpg

Cesk
01-16-2009, 06:10 PM
For above:
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3393/asdasdnt2.png
3d is shit and the E is sketchy, the rest seems pretty nice imo.

luster
01-17-2009, 01:23 AM
skwint-that shit looks tight
milk boxx- i like it alot just not feeling the first e too much..just my 2 cents tho
shaolin-its a good start not feeling the n but just keep working on it
cesk-like you already said 3d is off and the e

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1160130.jpg
i was too lazy for 3d..and fill is shit too..
crits?

a4w.dinak
01-17-2009, 09:27 AM
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled4.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled2-1.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled1.jpg
crits....
dope, the ones u colored in were clean, and ur hand styles are pretty good

Wallace
01-17-2009, 02:36 PM
sacwacko - the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice, put them up
luster- not a fan not sure why, smooth the letters out a little maybe
cesk- try to go a little simpler, 3d makes no sense as well
milk boxx- nice base, keep working with it should get better and better
ShaolinNY- keep workin
weakfingers- work on the I and W then i think it could be looking real clean
graffdabusup- im realllyyy liking your most recent one, fix the U up and its good to go

what ive been putting up recently'
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7484/img00107lk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bink1
01-17-2009, 03:55 PM
dfians-dope stuff especialy 2 letter
skwint-nice
wallace-that S is tight , but why only 1 letter? woulda look moreb tter if 2 :D

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/281/dsc06287ix8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/dsc06287ix8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img519/dsc06287ix8.jpg/1/)

Wallace
01-17-2009, 04:04 PM
spanks, it is a two letter though.

"So"

try to make your T and R look more like a t and r. the r looks like a lowercase e

Bink1
01-17-2009, 04:05 PM
ahh im a goon :D - its tight tho.
crits on mine

fitzy36
01-17-2009, 10:37 PM
some shit i'm trying out crit.? just trying new things

yo any one have any ideas of developing anything else out of these letters cuase i've been trying to make it more unique and shit but i'm just stuck....

NoCanControl
01-18-2009, 01:54 PM
is it officall throwie tiem nao? throwies for the like the past two pages

edit.



HAHAHAH. i thought i was in the black book, tots. sorry. hahahah.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-18-2009, 04:36 PM
wallace- looks good post a colored one :)
sare- dont feel the s
blink- make ur t a t :)

Keke
01-18-2009, 06:26 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/e0irzp.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3858/img00148qd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/img00148qd5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/img00148qd5.jpg/1/)

yortseD.eht.hturT.
01-18-2009, 06:44 PM
likin the E R

Keke
01-18-2009, 07:36 PM
likin the E R

its an "A"
/cry

ThatguywhodrinksTea
01-18-2009, 07:58 PM
maybe u should make it an er ;)..lol looks good tho

B.S. POLICE
01-18-2009, 08:07 PM
keke thats nice keep working on that

Zarb
01-18-2009, 11:23 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0119090016.jpg

crits?

Wallace
01-18-2009, 11:28 PM
sarz- keep workin on it and clean it up
keke- find a way to close up that e, good start
zip- go simple and fix up the z and i

more pen shit
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/350/img00109er7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Den1
01-19-2009, 02:41 PM
wallace-i like it
zip- fix up the z and the p and forget the face on the i for now till you have something solid

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0544.jpg

crits please

Worms
01-19-2009, 04:46 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-5.jpg
the fills shitty on purpus so ges can see hes been hit

ShaolinNy
01-19-2009, 07:03 PM
crits please.i know overal it came out like complete shit espicaly the E i fucked up but considering the fact that this was my 1st throwie ever and it was pitch black and i coundent see shit i dont think it was that bad of a job.Crits would be helpful!(Def would of done better if i couild see wat i was doing)

http://i42.tinypic.com/1ptjzp.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/21ahija.jpg


wallace-good shit im liken that s alot
zarb-your Z kinda looks like an S,work on your letters more
den-Idk not really feeling the e & n

Keke
01-19-2009, 07:14 PM
^^^ make sure to keep the bottom of your letters level and make them a little cleaner, the style of the letters are great just a little poorly executed, ^^^^

BigBlueViolence
01-19-2009, 08:19 PM
Keke, Wallace, Worms- dope
Sneak- You've got the same problem I had forever, take extra care to make sure your letters are straight, and try to reduce the strokes in each letter to 1 or 2.


http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg
Bump

Worms
01-19-2009, 08:29 PM
shaoline... u need to do ur lines in one try... that means getin ur throw down on paper and being able to do it by second nature... then wen u get to a wall just think bigger.... same shit but biggeer... also can control plays a part in how shit comes out

Zarb
01-19-2009, 09:00 PM
I changed up the Z
crits?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0119092153.jpg

weakfingers
01-19-2009, 10:46 PM
Okay first, here's my rambalings.

Wallace- I really like the one liner S. It will look good in a hollow throw but it might be abit hard to do with a fill unless you can go over your original outline again but yeah its looking really clean.

Den- The style is super simple and its looking clean but in my opinion the n looks abit sharp with that smooth style so I would round it out abit to match the others.

Worms- I really like the S you did, I havent seen a s like that but the top and bottom curve seems abit small to me.

ShaolinNY- I'm basicly going to say what others have said, keep your letters with minimal lines so you dont have lines that dont meet up and work on a solid throw with all the same letter size before you go paint. If you do feel the urge to practice with a can, I would suggest going to a low key small bridge in your town that has nothing on it and if it does make sure your not going over anyone important in your area.

Zarb- I think your Z as well as the rest of it had those added curve things that changed the structure so much I couldent tell what it said at first glance, Keep it more simple and it should be looking good in no time.


As for me I just tried to get more of the same letter style into my throw,
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9743.jpg
Any things I should change? Oh and i know my K looks like an H, I'm gonna try to fix that.

ShaolinNy
01-19-2009, 11:32 PM
Thanks for the crits everyone I will work on it on paper till I got it down pat


Weakfinger~its looking real good just got to make your k better and your t reminds me of an r every time I look at it,other than that good shit

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 01:42 PM
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9885/knar9ak0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/w600.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/)

A little critiscism?

thnks

Worms
01-20-2009, 02:04 PM
duno how practical those are if your gona be bombing with em

-HasH-The best
01-20-2009, 04:56 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/15p1si9.jpg


tell me if its good

Keke
01-20-2009, 05:39 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/15p1si9.jpg


tell me if its good

no , i will not

HalfGangstaShit
01-20-2009, 05:57 PM
yo hash, get rid of the shroom for now work on your letters, specially the K, and maybe do something to the A, I'd tell you to keep the shroom if you had better colors, work on that also.

Sorry I can't tell you it's good.

Keep on pushing that pen!

PEST!
01-20-2009, 06:06 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1111110120091803.jpg

crits?

Zarb
01-20-2009, 07:26 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120091608.jpg

Worms
01-20-2009, 07:59 PM
GOOOO SIMMMPLLLEEEEEE
STOP ADDING STUPID LINES AND UN NEEDED BUMPS
your letters look nothing like a Z I or P

diggitydoggz
01-20-2009, 08:08 PM
lol weakfingers... the "w" looks like it has a boner... diggin' the s and the k tho.

JackieChanRollin
01-20-2009, 08:20 PM
violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

You write noyu? Is it pronounced "NO U?" If it is, thats lulz.
The throw looks pretty good.
I think the Y could use a little work though.
Other than that, it looks pretty fresh.

PEST!
01-20-2009, 08:28 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1111110120091803.jpg

crits?

bump

Den1
01-20-2009, 08:32 PM
weakfingers- i like it everything flows nice
halfgangsta-i like it but ur letters are a little spaced out
thanks for the crits i tried to make this flow a little better
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0574.jpg
its a little out of proportion cuz i had to do it quick but let me know what you think

PEST!
01-20-2009, 08:39 PM
are my posts invisible or something?
DEN-i'm diggin the tag. loookin nice

could i get a crit or two ^^^

JackieChanRollin
01-20-2009, 08:43 PM
bump

Does it say JE, or AE?
I would say keep practicing your E's.

PEST!
01-20-2009, 08:49 PM
Does it say JE, or AE?
I would say keep practicing your E's.


well i use it as a DE but a lot of people are saying it looks like AE so maybe it is? :D it's really just two letters i just thought looked cool together but thanks for the crit on the E.

Zarb
01-20-2009, 08:53 PM
Ok I went much simpler
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120092149.jpg
any better?

Worms
01-20-2009, 08:57 PM
go look at throws in the throwups/bombs thread
get inspired but dont bite... cus u have no idea

JackieChanRollin
01-20-2009, 08:57 PM
well i use it as a DE but a lot of people are saying it looks like AE so maybe it is? :D it's really just two letters i just thought looked cool together but thanks for the crit on the E.

Ohh ok. Now I see the D. It looked like a lowercase A without the line in the center. No problem. Try making the extensions from your E come off horizontally, instead of at an angle.

zipper- try making the lines on your Z come in more. Try making your P's have more of a round top. Work on that E, I cant really make it out. Try a different style that fits with the rest of the letters.

Worms
01-20-2009, 09:12 PM
no pest dont listen to jacki chan hes chinese and cant see well obviously ... ur throw needs to be simpler its got unnesesary shit... throws should be simple there not made to be burners lulz at least thats how i feel

PEST!
01-20-2009, 09:15 PM
something like this?

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/0120092111.jpg

Worms
01-20-2009, 09:24 PM
even simpler

fitzy36
01-20-2009, 09:25 PM
PEST!- lookin iight i'm not really feeling the "bulb" thing on the d

eh messy

Zarb
01-20-2009, 09:48 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120092243.jpg
any better?

weakfingers
01-20-2009, 10:13 PM
Pest- Keep All you're letters very basic and then go from there, My best advice would do a REALLY simple two letter throw without any extras then check out the thread in your area or check the bomb thread and like copy some of the shit, dont write it on walls just copy the style and the more you write it on paper you'll change small things and then eventully it will be a new style but look at the original and you will still se some simmilarities. But yeah start simple.

Den1- I really like how it is looking, Its super simple and clean, just add a dope shadow and like you said keep the same proportion and you should be on your way.

Zarb- Youve make alot of progress and its looking alot better, The one thing I would suggest to make it look better would be make some lines in the throw longer so you can tell what the letters are like the P's

I was just working on a new S because I hate the way mine look but what do you all think?
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9749.jpg
Crits? Oh and yeah i kinda squished the T on the end

Wallace
01-20-2009, 10:40 PM
den - start with something simpler for 2 letter. on the long one mainly clean up the N, but it still needs a lot of work.
zip- your letters need more definition, i agree with worms just look at a tonnn of throws and get some ideas for how the letters are formed and things of that sort.
skwint- i liked your S from pages back, t is moving in the right direction though (it looks awkward with a long top at the end of the throwy). keep practicing on your letters the k is basicccc

shayk
01-21-2009, 09:01 AM
den- make your n the same size as the d and the e i like the one tag thow

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00143.jpg
crits

Capo Izi
01-21-2009, 11:58 AM
Shayk-it's okay, developing, but the K is not really good at all, or the y (hard letter), and the 3D is off pretty bad. Looks okay, but def needs work.

Skwint-pretty damn good, just get the T out there( I realized you squished, just making sure you know). And work on the bottom of the S, it doesn't really flow with the rest of the tag.

De-looks much better, and cool tag anyway. The d has flavor now...

Anyway now me...

Ive been working on 2 different tags (same name, Capo) and I can't figure out which one is better...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/17/l_253197baae6246eca7dabd131d06dbee.jpg

The ones on the right are the ones I've been bombing with, but I've been trying to develop a new style (on the left) that has more character to it, then the ones on the right (my older style)...

So can anyone help me, by telling me which one is better? left or right ones?

JackieChanRollin
01-21-2009, 12:49 PM
no pest dont listen to jacki chan hes chinese and cant see well obviously ... ur throw needs to be simpler its got unnesesary shit... throws should be simple there not made to be burners lulz at least thats how i feel

Lolwut? You seriously need to work on your spelling and punctuation.

fitzy36
01-21-2009, 04:06 PM
a quick throw
http://i43.tinypic.com/osz686.jpg

gentrifried
01-21-2009, 05:49 PM
http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Jan21_0006.sized.jpg

Wallace
01-21-2009, 05:55 PM
not a throw, really work on your can control, letter structure is very poor, 3d is nonsense.

random sloppy shit
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5908/img00113cr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

gentrifried
01-21-2009, 06:13 PM
not a throw, really work on your can control, letter structure is very poor, 3d is nonsense.

thanks im still in the basement learning phase.. i was trying to do a drop shadow and not 3d if its not a throw what would it be then ? just curious

B.S. POLICE
01-21-2009, 06:14 PM
straight letter or simp

-HasH-The best
01-21-2009, 09:59 PM
fuck ya i love this shit

http://i40.tinypic.com/25rnwi0.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/sy2pue.jpg

goober
01-21-2009, 10:18 PM
Messy fill and outline,
http://i44.tinypic.com/spaira.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2mnhkqf.jpg

Capo Izi
01-22-2009, 12:25 AM
Shayk-it's okay, developing, but the K is not really good at all, or the y (hard letter), and the 3D is off pretty bad. Looks okay, but def needs work.

Skwint-pretty damn good, just get the T out there( I realized you squished, just making sure you know). And work on the bottom of the S, it doesn't really flow with the rest of the tag.

De-looks much better, and cool tag anyway. The d has flavor now...

Anyway now me...

Ive been working on 2 different tags (same name, Capo) and I can't figure out which one is better...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo56.jpg

The ones on the right are the ones I've been bombing with, but I've been trying to develop a new style (on the left) that has more character to it, then the ones on the right (my older style)...

So can anyone help me, by telling me which one is better? left or right ones?

bumppp.....need help.

weakfingers
01-22-2009, 09:48 AM
Not to be mean but the ones on the left blows, I know your probably working on them but like, if spikes are done wrong they look kinda bad to me. I'd stick with the one on your right and make the letters match, and round out your C and work on making youre bubble drip thing more smooth there both kinda misshapen.

white
01-22-2009, 10:16 AM
capo use the one on the right - the one on the left looks like your trying to hard....

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 10:26 AM
even the right looks like he's trying too hard..

Capo Izi
01-22-2009, 12:50 PM
k thanks, just wondering, I'm gonna keep developing both, but I only tag with the right one.....and I definitely don't try to hard on that one, I have that one on the right down easy, I can do it in like a minute on the street....

Zarb
01-22-2009, 02:54 PM
did this quick in school
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122091137.jpg

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 05:01 PM
a quick throw
http://i43.tinypic.com/osz686.jpg



bumping...ehh:confused:

Zarb
01-22-2009, 05:07 PM
i like it except i had to take good look at it before i realized the first letter was a k, i had the same problem you should make it more legible

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 05:10 PM
i like it except i had to take good look at it before i realized the first letter was a k, i had the same problem you should make it more legible

yeah i've been working for a new style this k is kinda new for me... oh and thanks for the advice man

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 05:51 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2u5q6vr.jpg

a try at a throwie other than "kasm"

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 06:03 PM
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1784.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1785.jpg

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 06:11 PM
SNAP!- looks pretty cool, really good potential... but not really diggin the diamond shape things in the second one

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 06:12 PM
me either.. just fuckin around

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 06:13 PM
yeah, i like the 's' in the first one though

Zarb
01-22-2009, 06:17 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122091758.jpg
crits?

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 06:42 PM
thanks. that s is actually a one liner

Wallace
01-22-2009, 07:02 PM
not many people understand give crits to get crits...

-HasH-The best - copied the shit out of the mario mushroom. work on your letter proportions
goober - keep at it, work on the E in the first throw. not a fan of the 2 letter
Capo Izi - ditch the one on the left, keep working with the right one and you may get something. the A and water drop or whatever you want to call it is hurtin.
zippsta - keep at it, work on your Z and I more... p's are simple. remember a z is only a backwards s lol.
fitzy36 - kasm isn't too bad. its a decent start, work on your M and S. just keep on practicing, style will improve no doubt. deconer is way too long, not liking it either.
scone - lol finally not writing snap anymore (no beef =P just saying). if youre going to use that style try to use more bars maybe. not liking the diamonds in the second one.

little advice for everyone... bang out mad hollows with pens and sharpies before you waste a ton of markers.


random sloppy shit
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5908/img00113cr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fitzy36
01-22-2009, 07:21 PM
wallace- thanks for the crits, i mainly only write deconer when i'm bored, never bombed it.... and your throws looks pretty sick really diggin the s

http://i42.tinypic.com/sxoiu9.jpg

Zarb
01-22-2009, 08:33 PM
K so I changed up my Z and my I alittle, hows this?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122092126.jpg

Stussy
01-22-2009, 08:34 PM
this place is a mess

SNAP!
01-22-2009, 08:38 PM
thats why its the toy section guy

Worms
01-22-2009, 08:39 PM
ye agreed...

ShaolinNy
01-22-2009, 08:47 PM
this place is a mess

lol

Wallace
01-22-2009, 08:54 PM
this place is a mess


http://i34.tinypic.com/2nate0i.jpg

lol, nice handy
and your Z definitely looks like a Z

zip seems like youve been trying a lot, and i have a massive headache so im bored out of my mind tonight. did your name really quick, i dont really like it but maybe it could help.
fucked up camera angle my bad, makes letters look way smaller at the end

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3170/img00117hq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Worms
01-22-2009, 08:56 PM
stussy is right guys... just cus your toys doesnt mean ur stuff has to look like total shit... you should look around at pictures of other shit n study them and see how they flow and wat not... everything evolvs from somthing else

Zarb
01-22-2009, 09:58 PM
Ok so i'm back again haha and I changed up my shit alittle more. i kinda fucked up the Z alittle I think but w.e Oh and thanks for the help wallace
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122092254.jpg

Stussy
01-23-2009, 01:02 AM
lol, nice handy
and your Z definitely looks like a Z

zip seems like youve been trying a lot, and i have a massive headache so im bored out of my mind tonight. did your name really quick, i dont really like it but maybe it could help.
fucked up camera angle my bad, makes letters look way smaller at the end

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3170/img00117hq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

are you trying to joke on somthing i posted almost 2 months ago?
my handy sucked and this is a throwie thread dumb ass...

yea this place is a mess... these kids keep posting the same ole shit over and over.... work on it yourself some guys... look at other peoples shit and dont ask for crits for every little throw you try to do... think for yourself, ask yourself what you like or dislike about it

Capo Izi
01-23-2009, 07:27 AM
not many people understand give crits to get crits...

-HasH-The best - copied the shit out of the mario mushroom. work on your letter proportions
goober - keep at it, work on the E in the first throw. not a fan of the 2 letter
Capo Izi - ditch the one on the left, keep working with the right one and you may get something. the A and water drop or whatever you want to call it is hurtin.
zippsta - keep at it, work on your Z and I more... p's are simple. remember a z is only a backwards s lol.
fitzy36 - kasm isn't too bad. its a decent start, work on your M and S. just keep on practicing, style will improve no doubt. deconer is way too long, not liking it either.
scone - lol finally not writing snap anymore (no beef =P just saying). if youre going to use that style try to use more bars maybe. not liking the diamonds in the second one.

little advice for everyone... bang out mad hollows with pens and sharpies before you waste a ton of markers.


Yeah I need to work on the A, but do you mean the little quote bubble things? I usually write my tag in there so thats pretty much the only reason its there.

B.S. POLICE
01-23-2009, 08:27 AM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6584/screencapture8wv2.png

Wallace
01-23-2009, 11:13 AM
are you trying to joke on somthing i posted almost 2 months ago?
my handy sucked and this is a throwie thread dumb ass...

yea this place is a mess... these kids keep posting the same ole shit over and over.... work on it yourself some guys... look at other peoples shit and dont ask for crits for every little throw you try to do... think for yourself, ask yourself what you like or dislike about it

bahaha youre a tool, im aware of where that is you also posted a throwy.

again.. tool

Stussy
01-23-2009, 11:17 AM
im a tool for telling people to work some shit out on their own?

Decide
01-23-2009, 12:00 PM
im a tool for telling people to work some shit out on their own?
shut up man its over its done

bwesky
01-23-2009, 01:35 PM
hey guys i just started writing a few weeks back, i came up with a tag for myself and was wandering what you guys think, if it sucks, tell me i dont give a fuck!

pic says "BLCL" which i abbreviated for Blau Cel, in german it means blue sky. my nickname is bwesky which reminds me of a blue sky. on the right hand side if you pretend to flip the face 90 degrees counterclockwise, its my initials "BA"

enjoy, and lemme know wuts up!

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1297/tagagetq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/tagagetq6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/tagagetq6.jpg/1/)

MARTYRaz
01-23-2009, 02:12 PM
bwesky...start out by learning letter structure and style...go to new to graff thread and read alot....
heres some shit.....crits please;)
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1529.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1528.jpg

B.S. POLICE
01-23-2009, 03:06 PM
stay off the walls for a while, that hand aint bad but your a and the r are like the same letter in the throw

milk boxx
01-23-2009, 04:38 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/EMEK-1.jpg
crits?

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 05:34 PM
I barely ever do throws (compared to pieces) so do I have the right idea?

CA
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1957/56901485vp7.jpg
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/477/blackbook8dd0.jpg

Sorry I can't criticize because I don't know very much about throws.

sike_21
01-23-2009, 05:41 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0052.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0103.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0112.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_92362.jpg
my boys
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0015.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0024.jpg

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 05:43 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg

As I said before I don't know much about throws but the top row looks dope.

Capo Izi
01-23-2009, 05:47 PM
Hey, I've been studying different writers and who to respect and who's kings and whatnot, just wondering, does anyone who's big write Dope?...

If not any crits on this throw...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo59.jpg


Btw, Sike those throws are pretty good, and the slaps are SICKS as hell, especially the straight down bottom, keep it up.

ESKiMO2
01-23-2009, 06:00 PM
Uh... Dope is kind of a generic name. Better be a bit more creative than that.

Zase
01-23-2009, 06:10 PM
i dont spend much time on trows cuzz i like bombing way more
but i need a slick one standart so imma practise some morehttp://i43.tinypic.com/2nu4vt2.jpg

revid!
01-23-2009, 06:18 PM
Hey, I've been studying different writers and who to respect and who's kings and whatnot, just wondering, does anyone who's big write Dope?...

If not any crits on this throw...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo59.jpg


Btw, Sike those throws are pretty good, and the slaps are SICKS as hell, especially the straight down bottom, keep it up.

my boy smoovvvv nutts writes doap/dope
better switch that up

smooth_nuts
01-23-2009, 06:25 PM
revid always on it,yeah dude i already write that and am alot better then you,so i'd prefer if you changed it ;)

Worms
01-23-2009, 06:29 PM
ur not the only one who writes dope ballsak... n e name theres at least 1 other writer rokin it... its a big world

smooth_nuts
01-23-2009, 06:33 PM
i know that,i'd just prefer not to see it...


ok ballsack?
trying talk all bigbad e-thug and shit,speak proper english ballsack,got that balsack,ballsack,ballsack...





i can be a smart ass too :p