Throwies

[moonboots]

http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/DSCF0084.jpg

new word SOHP...crits?

[hardwares]

den-- bro you got some work.. even out the letter size a bit (the D versus all the rest) focus on your letter style, make the letters flow. and personally, me dont like the crosses in the letters, but thats your call. make the D look less like a N. simple simple simple.

OENE-- good simples, try working on adding your own style tho. but keep it basic, just fuck with the letters some. not bad, but not really good either.



been drawing and shit want some crits reeal bad.

2letter throw
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/6998/2letdv5.jpg

4letter throw
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8044/4letcq5.jpg

CRITS
CRITS
CRITS

[MARTYRaz]

clean up the stray lines and loops in ur letters and itll look alrite...

[B.S. POLICE]

mare i like that hit me up for an exchange
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/215/screencapture10gs3.png

[hardwares]

mare i like that hit me up for an exchange


you mean ware? or someone else..

[B.S. POLICE]

you mean ware? or someone else..

lol ya ware, im too high for this shit

[hardwares]

aight i PMd you

moonboots- pretty clean, nice simple style. but almost too simple (in my opinion). mess with the letters a little and shit. keep structure. etc etc.

[NouveauP]

Throw for a battle no one entered.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/rabid.jpg

[white]

rabid nice simples

crits -

like it better with or without the e or e and s

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0003-2.jpg

[hardwares]

your throw looks like a side view of a really shriveled pennis. lolz. like it better without the S.

[B.S. POLICE]

it reakky does thats halarious

[graffdabusup]

bspolice- raw shit
NouveauP- flows nice
hardwares- nice quick style
white- try incorporating your own style by looking at examples. think simple

crits appreciated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pm me for exchange?????:):):):)

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/09.jpg

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/01.jpg

[sacwacko]

im feeling all that^^^^....kinda

[aspen1]

http://i488.photobucket.com/albums/rr250/aspenfuek/galant002.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

(Breast) Lump.

Noyu- Top one is dope. Not really feeling the wrinkles on the top of the N, though. The bottom of the U is a little weird, too.

Ware- Not really feeling the E. Everything else is lookin' good, though.

[moonboots]

http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww47/jessek_is/GAMP.jpg

my bros throwie...Crits please?

[LeaksOne]

simps

[xaaronx]

http://www.uscconlinealbum.com/photos/photo01/3f/51/d0e1f1a47c07.jpg

crits/advice? i know it's a bit sloppy; it's been a few months. shitty, shitty weather +surgery.

[hardwares]

its fucking dope. dont have anything to add.

[senkz]

xaaronx: good style, only thing i see wrong is the 2 drops should be the same colour as the fill.

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3433/3177793506_9a3c1ffb7f.jpg
little quicky on the side of a page in a note book
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/3176957221_0637736564.jpg
a bunch of shit on top of shit...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3330/3177791412_7c952de46c.jpg
new two letter
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3095/3098729383_679b5416c9.jpg
"word to muva,heard 'em frontin'."

[BigBlueViolence]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3108/3176957221_0637736564.jpg

This is what every page in my book looks like, man.

Feeling everything you posted.

[smooth_nuts]

thanks.
haha,yeah about every 2 out of 3 pages in my book looks like that,some times worse :/

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2i0wweh.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/dhehlj.jpg

Burp

[smooth_nuts]

new name?
i'm feeling the top c,and i think you should make your o more round and your n less like a moose nuckle....imo.

[BigBlueViolence]

Dude, I just noticed the moose knuckle,
I'm considerinn whether or not to make it look less like one
or more like one.

http://i39.tinypic.com/24mgxld.jpg

[white]

since my throwup looks like the sideview of an old mans penis, does someone wanna help me come up with a throwup or help me with my letters.....please

[smooth_nuts]

truthfuly blue,i dont like either n :/



...i am how ever in love with that r

[B.S. POLICE]

i like that whole thing besides the kick on the left of the e, it looks out of place

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, the E is fucked up because I wasn't really sure where I was going until after I did it, just fucking around.

[B.S. POLICE]

true

[littlerocky]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk14/Mugs53/0105091656a.jpg
skethcy s

[graffdabusup]

rocky- that mugs is lookin dope!

[ShaolinNy]

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/7453/1231394568745bj8.jpg

-CRITS PLEASE-

Ok guys i write sneak but i change my style a little bit here is my 1st 3 letters also sne for short.I still have to figure out what kind of A n K goes good but how is this so far?



Moonboots-needs alot of work,look for your letters and try to see which kinds go together
Smooth nuts-Your to good to be here lol
littlerocky-Awsome im liken that a lot

[B.S. POLICE]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9021/screencapture14bh2.png

[ShaolinNy]

Police thats some crazy shit...Any crtis on mine?

[B.S. POLICE]

loose all the spike bring the n closer to the s

[NouveauP]

I'm feeling that MUGS. Seriously.

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00119.jpg

[Scheme*119]

http://i41.tinypic.com/207ugxu.jpg
exchange with the bs police force, i dont know what was up with that n, i shoulda made it like the a, oh well

[Amore]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/9021/screencapture14bh2.png

Yo that shit is fire.

[Bink1]

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/3783/dsc06207mf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/dsc06207mf7.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img159/dsc06207mf7.jpg/1/)

shayk-that dog dont looks good.
snap-dope

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

nice bite of my e... :P its a common e but still lol

[smooth_nuts]

haha,much to generic to be bitten....
teps,your p looks like a retarded lower case e
sanp,im feeling everything but the r
scheme,im feeling that a man
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture1208.jpg
just some scribles for talking...

[Gort]

Still need to work on my throwie but this is what i got now...the G is gort sooting at the letter O ull get it..

http://i44.tinypic.com/34y8okx.png

Comments please..good or bad like both types of comments :)

[WoeInfinite]

^ dont add characters or shit yet unless its an O or something
work on that G bro, i know how hard they are..prolly my least favorite letter to do...cuz i suck at em.

[Gort]

Thanks im not rlly feeling the G either. I got a few different ones but thatwas kinda my fav

[-HasH-The best]

hey guys tell me which is better for my throw up


http://i44.tinypic.com/2jg1gft.jpg

http://i40.tinypic.com/9tehz4.jpg

[sacwacko]

in yaks book.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/blackbook.jpg

[woonybomber]

Still need to work on my throwie but this is what i got now...the G is gort sooting at the letter O ull get it..

http://i44.tinypic.com/34y8okx.png

Comments please..good or bad like both types of comments :)

your g looks lik a c madude

[woonybomber]

quick trowy mad old tho

[woonybomber]

my bad
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/wone254003.jpg

[white]

mugs - that throw is lookin fresh as hell
b.s. - nice man that is lookin good
shayk - loose the extension on your S
ohsnap - nice "fuck p's" lmao
bink - i would lose the drips or whatever that is but it might just be me

new throw ive been workin with

ya and i realize that my E and my K look like everybodys

CRITS
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0007-1.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006-1.jpg

[TRY'N]

gort-- work on that g cuz it doesn't really look like a G and same with the O
nuke-- define your letters some more. especially the K
aspek-- looks cool
dank-- the a is probably the best letter but they all need work. and that blue cloud thing doesn't look too good

alrightttt here goes my ish:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338a-1.jpg
and
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338-1.jpg

crits??

[sacwacko]

the second N is fucking dope.

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/lexi2.jpg

some girl in one of mmy classes. i know the bottem shits wack but im helllaaaaa hihg.

[Scheme*119]

http://i41.tinypic.com/4g165k.jpg
another one for ohsnap, i wasnt happy with the first one, so here ya go snap

[Baron]

Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

[ShaolinNy]

http://i40.tinypic.com/23ud44g.jpg


I did this is my blackbook yesterday crits?Didnt come out as good as i wanted.Tries to make the k look kinda heart shaped if y0ur wondering why the bottom is pointy

-CRTIS PLEASE-


Scheme thats dope
Bs police i added that tongue to my e if you dont mind.

[Scheme*119]

Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

haha meh, maybe, i like the style to be honest, so many people hate on it, i cant see why

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00128.jpg

[TRY'N]

alrightttt here goes my ish:
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338a-1.jpg
and
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff269/trynladii/0108092338-1.jpg

crits??
buummmpppp

scheme-- looks dope except i'm not really feeling the spiral in the A

[exitus]

i think the hole on the r is really weird

[remos]

that ohsnap is fucking hot

[.HATESONE.]

Lol excange.... Scheme is going hipster now?

??? whats hipster style.i hear people talk about it buuut...

[Baron]

haha meh, maybe, i like the style to be honest, so many people hate on it, i cant see why

When used correctly, I like hipster, a lot.

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

[militia]

dope S, but as ive said many times:P i dont like that E.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.

Remos- digging the E, not the S.

Tryn- I like the bottom one, minus the R.

Sheme- dig it all but the swirls in the S and A.

Shayk- I don't recommend combining silver and gold.

[remos]

im workin on it ;)

[shayk]

Good idea I fucked up the color skeem and faled at trying to fix it

[Baron]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

Uhhhhhhhh..... scheme's SE throw much?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up.... :P


Scheme- Bah dope!
shayk- i just don't know...letter structure
Try'n- i like it but work on the t
remos- good
Big - like it, just not the 3 dots

[cesspool]

yesss im lurkin on tha left!

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

lol?

[B.S. POLICE]

http://i40.tinypic.com/23ud44g.jpg


I did this is my blackbook yesterday crits?Didnt come out as good as i wanted.Tries to make the k look kinda heart shaped if y0ur wondering why the bottom is pointy

-CRTIS PLEASE-


Scheme thats dope
Bs police i added that tongue to my e if you dont mind.


dont bite the damn faces, i wouldnt mind if your shit was decent but you should really pay attention to having dope letters before you start to add faces especially if their a bite

[Scheme*119]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw1.jpg
simple throw idea

http://i41.tinypic.com/11ta77l.jpg

dude, just use this one, i dont anymore

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.

Bumpskis.

[Worms]

you know what i hate about some ppls throwies nowadays... theyre virtually bubble letter peices. throwies were supposed to be simple and or legibal not some... no ones heard of a whild style throw ... sry for the rant i had to get is off my chest

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up...


bahhh i give crits so BUMP!!!!

[cesspool]

lol?

whats with the question mark... got beef!!?? wanna scrap it out HUH HUH HUH HUH!? lol


anyways, ur bump showed up after i posted this ..
yo dawgydawg, ur getting better just structure dem letters some more and i can see good things comin for ya with alot of practice (y)

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

hah! im just wondering that is u?

[Scheme*119]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tracks.jpg
i know i fucked the o up...


bahhh i give crits so BUMP!!!!

dont put that line in your e's, those e's would look better without them

[cesspool]

hah! im just wondering that is u?

if youre asking with youre confusing sentence structure if that is I on the left, then yes sir it is I, Lord GangstaFresh

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

lol gotta ask u something, it reads after did u change your name from spore?

[cesspool]

yeah man, found out there was a writer named spore who used to run st. clair back in the day, so i figured it was a good idea to switch names..

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

well.. couple things u went over me.. at st. mewh whatever got my revenge.. but you know the girl character all over the city.. thats a writer named after.. gotta switch again my friend.. lol

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

lol.. i was close xD

[nine one]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/1149/008sd4.jpg

i dont think you should be hitting freights, great way to loose respect. i personally hate when i see people that arent ready to hit the streets dropping stuff on good spots, just trust, stick to a bridge till you develope better can control and shit. it will help you on the long run

[Bink1]

fuck it DONTPLAYKETCHUP stop posting your shit its fuking ugly , how many times u have to been hitted in face to understand that dog? ITS CRAP DONT WRITE IT , EVER . u never listen to crits and keep postin it and i keep throwin up all the time i see it. bitch.

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00129.jpg
crits

[Scheme*119]

you can START with getting rid of the character in the a

[what4joke...]

yea, keep it simple. just got more smooth, not so planned

[BAGS]

hahaha.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/lcbotruck.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tennis1.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/tennisplace.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/trucker.jpg
one night 1 can of paint ...:P

shayk- no face..

[cesspool]

dont hit those city bathroom things lol
and uh, just throwin it out there, order's 2 letter was "oe"
and maybe i wouldnt put those things on the top of the e...
alright im done criticizing you lol

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

thnx... lol

[Scheme*119]

my camera sucks
http://i43.tinypic.com/24vtp2r.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/dxiy6p.jpg

[Basic954]

I vote Scheme for the official nastiest sig in the history of the World Wide Web.

[Baron]

Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

[shayk]

abor the caricter in the o on the top one is dope

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00131.jpg

[Scheme*119]

Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

i think the hipster holes look fancy thank you very much and about the b and r, im trying to make it not so generic and lets be honest, if someone couldnt tell thats a b (it has two holes in it for fucks sake) there is something wrong with them.

and uh. bump

my camera sucks
http://i43.tinypic.com/24vtp2r.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/dxiy6p.jpg

[shayk]

i like the b but i would curve the line that seperates the two halvs down and not bring it into the a

[Scheme*119]

hush, it makes it steezy...

[shayk]

just a thought

[Scheme*119]

i feel ya bro, thanks for it, im just fucking with you

[shayk]

got any crits on mine i know its kinda plain but keep in mind i only started two or three weeks ago

[Scheme*119]

well i mean, its as simple as can be, nothing really sticks out, but if i had to say one thing its make the lines on the s the same, like the top and bottom, make both of those little lines straight since that seems to be the consistent theme of it, other then that, keep it rocking for awhile till you perfected then try messing with your letters a bit, dont try to make it too different from what you see though, keep it in the boundaries of being some what generic, from there youll progress, just keep one thing in mind, if you think it looks good and dont want to change anything about it, then fuck what everyone says, keep that shit

[shayk]

aight thanks man

[SLY 303]

i need mad help crits please

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg

Trying to clean up that E.


bububump

Abor- try using a marker instead of a pen.

Oene- I don't really dig the extra bump on the E.

[sike_21]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0103.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

dope character

[Black Flag]

Sike your throw is looking good, I like it at least, the second came out a lot better then the first. Maybe try out something new for your I? It looks fine, but maybe something would fit better with your style.

[Facedorateur]

Sike, the beige sticker is dope, love it man

heres mine, thats the best throwie i came up with until now

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7535/sn851167ns6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/sn851167ns6.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img525/sn851167ns6.jpg/1/)

(bad quality pic sry)

[B.S. POLICE]

dont do the shark fin top things

[BigBlueViolence]

Facedorateur- does it say Fern? way too curly, man. Plus the shadow is all fucked up

Sike-Dope, but the Is on your painteds look like Cs.


More boredom type shit

http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg

I know the A is haggard.

[senkz]

some from today
http://i43.tinypic.com/3522ccg.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/30bp5jb.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29yf2ix.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/4k9xdl.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/15i2d0p.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/k2iiw9.jpg

[LeaksOne]

your s is coo but you may want to fix that k

[graffdabusup]

bigblue- raw "n" i like that....maybe another exchange? =]
senks- nice throw change the "k"
sike- raw

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/throwie.jpg

crits plz!!!!!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?

[what4joke...]

yo, loving that pink

[what4joke...]

and "SH" maybe focus more on the shadow fill then do cutbacks, and the exclamation point. i would get rid of. i like the S tho

[graffdabusup]

bigblue- raw "n" i like that....maybe another exchange? =]
senks- nice throw change the "k"
sike- raw

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/throwie.jpg

crits plz!!!!!!?!?!?!?!??!?!?

bumpizzle for the next pageizzle

[Worms]

it kinda looks like a claw bite just with tha three points n watnot

[smooth_nuts]

it looks nothing like a claw bite,specialy since's claws throw up is a claw!
you cant call a bite cause it's pointy,thats like saying he bit barbie cause it's pink!!

...i mean c'mon,really?
mr.dabus,you should make the top of your letters round and smooth,not all jagged and shit,doesnt look right with those letters

[Facedorateur]

Gotta love da pink:)

Anybody has a nice ''f'' to give me?

[hardwares]

sk- dont like the pointy nip on the k. it does not flow.

[Stonk]

graffdabusup...leave out the devil horn looking things.. either square them off or round em out...it will look 20x better

[fitzy36]

some shit i'm trying out crit.? just trying new things

[Bink1]

Abor, doesn't look like a B I think you shouldn't separate the two halves, and not every hole has to have the hipster three holes. The R's leg should be attached to the body too.

the r's leg dont have to be attached to body.

[Baron]

the r's leg dont have to be attached to body.

Those R's with one leg are know as P's in my book.

[white]

graffdabusup - dig da pink
fitzy - does everyone have that damn K (including me)

crits -

second one i was way drunk so sorry about the fill....

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0010.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0008-1.jpg
some shit from last week i wanted to repost
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0006-1.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg
Let a homie get some crits?

[shayk]

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00139.jpg
crits plz god knows i need them

[Blox]

Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

[graffdabusup]

violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

[B.S. POLICE]

looks better

[BigBlueViolence]

Graffdabus- Dope, man. I'd just mave that V shaped thing in the Y a space in the letter, though

[ShaolinNy]

violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

Looking ill nice job.

[milk boxx]

quick hollow
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/21.jpg

[white]

Ya give em to get em boys.
Don't just come on here expecting people to crit your shit.
No disrespect, Just filling your guys in.

And yo, Nukes, Your right man, Your Ks are SO much alike,
One of you should change that shit up, Its not like you chomped eachother, But still.
Originality yo.

ya my only prob is that i cant develope K's for shit i suck bad and a shit load of people that have K's in their name have that K

[weakfingers]

Aight, from what blox said above me about giving crits to get them, well... here they go.

Abor- I really like that seperated style and theres 2 guys doing that in my area and it looks so fresh, That being said I would only do the three dot holes on some of the letters. The seperated B is really nice and it fits the style but I would have to say make the leg on you're R look like its attached because it looks abit off to me.

Facedorateur- You're off to a good start just keep on working out small kinks and shit BUT PLEASE take out the face, it looks super dumb and like face's only look good in well done bombs(In my own opinion).

Senkz- Get rid of that one spike because it looks really out of place with the whole style of letters in the bomb.

Milk Boxx- That shits tight, keep it up.


Phew, With all those crits done heres a new throw i was working on.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9738.jpg
Crits?

[milk boxx]

quick hollow
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/21.jpg
new page bizzzzzump
crits?
i'm liking that sike stuff. keep it up man.
skwint, looks like a good start to a nice throw.

[ShaolinNy]

weakfingers-looking good but the k looks like an H just fix the letter up a little.
milkbox-Im liken it good shit
shayk-your getting there,keep working on it




Here mine crits please, its a little sloppy.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2ymjevs.jpg

[Cesk]

For above:
http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/3393/asdasdnt2.png
3d is shit and the E is sketchy, the rest seems pretty nice imo.

[luster]

skwint-that shit looks tight
milk boxx- i like it alot just not feeling the first e too much..just my 2 cents tho
shaolin-its a good start not feeling the n but just keep working on it
cesk-like you already said 3d is off and the e

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P1160130.jpg
i was too lazy for 3d..and fill is shit too..
crits?

[a4w.dinak]

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled4.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled2-1.jpg
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r279/HimmyJimi/other/Untitled1.jpg
crits....
dope, the ones u colored in were clean, and ur hand styles are pretty good

[Wallace]

sacwacko - the 2nd and 3rd ones are nice, put them up
luster- not a fan not sure why, smooth the letters out a little maybe
cesk- try to go a little simpler, 3d makes no sense as well
milk boxx- nice base, keep working with it should get better and better
ShaolinNY- keep workin
weakfingers- work on the I and W then i think it could be looking real clean
graffdabusup- im realllyyy liking your most recent one, fix the U up and its good to go

what ive been putting up recently'
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7484/img00107lk6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Bink1]

dfians-dope stuff especialy 2 letter
skwint-nice
wallace-that S is tight , but why only 1 letter? woulda look moreb tter if 2 :D

http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/281/dsc06287ix8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/dsc06287ix8.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img519/dsc06287ix8.jpg/1/)

[Wallace]

spanks, it is a two letter though.

"So"

try to make your T and R look more like a t and r. the r looks like a lowercase e

[Bink1]

ahh im a goon :D - its tight tho.
crits on mine

[fitzy36]

some shit i'm trying out crit.? just trying new things

yo any one have any ideas of developing anything else out of these letters cuase i've been trying to make it more unique and shit but i'm just stuck....

[NoCanControl]

is it officall throwie tiem nao? throwies for the like the past two pages

edit.



HAHAHAH. i thought i was in the black book, tots. sorry. hahahah.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

wallace- looks good post a colored one :)
sare- dont feel the s
blink- make ur t a t :)

[Keke]

http://i43.tinypic.com/e0irzp.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3858/img00148qd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/img00148qd5.jpg/1/w1280.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/img00148qd5.jpg/1/)

[yortseD.eht.hturT.]

likin the E R

[Keke]

likin the E R

its an "A"
/cry

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

maybe u should make it an er ;)..lol looks good tho

[B.S. POLICE]

keke thats nice keep working on that

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0119090016.jpg

crits?

[Wallace]

sarz- keep workin on it and clean it up
keke- find a way to close up that e, good start
zip- go simple and fix up the z and i

more pen shit
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/350/img00109er7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Den1]

wallace-i like it
zip- fix up the z and the p and forget the face on the i for now till you have something solid

http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0544.jpg

crits please

[Worms]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-5.jpg
the fills shitty on purpus so ges can see hes been hit

[ShaolinNy]

crits please.i know overal it came out like complete shit espicaly the E i fucked up but considering the fact that this was my 1st throwie ever and it was pitch black and i coundent see shit i dont think it was that bad of a job.Crits would be helpful!(Def would of done better if i couild see wat i was doing)

http://i42.tinypic.com/1ptjzp.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/21ahija.jpg


wallace-good shit im liken that s alot
zarb-your Z kinda looks like an S,work on your letters more
den-Idk not really feeling the e & n

[Keke]

^^^ make sure to keep the bottom of your letters level and make them a little cleaner, the style of the letters are great just a little poorly executed, ^^^^

[BigBlueViolence]

Keke, Wallace, Worms- dope
Sneak- You've got the same problem I had forever, take extra care to make sure your letters are straight, and try to reduce the strokes in each letter to 1 or 2.


http://i42.tinypic.com/2m4yglj.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/4403/photo42mc5.jpg
Bump

[Worms]

shaoline... u need to do ur lines in one try... that means getin ur throw down on paper and being able to do it by second nature... then wen u get to a wall just think bigger.... same shit but biggeer... also can control plays a part in how shit comes out

[Zarb]

I changed up the Z
crits?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0119092153.jpg

[weakfingers]

Okay first, here's my rambalings.

Wallace- I really like the one liner S. It will look good in a hollow throw but it might be abit hard to do with a fill unless you can go over your original outline again but yeah its looking really clean.

Den- The style is super simple and its looking clean but in my opinion the n looks abit sharp with that smooth style so I would round it out abit to match the others.

Worms- I really like the S you did, I havent seen a s like that but the top and bottom curve seems abit small to me.

ShaolinNY- I'm basicly going to say what others have said, keep your letters with minimal lines so you dont have lines that dont meet up and work on a solid throw with all the same letter size before you go paint. If you do feel the urge to practice with a can, I would suggest going to a low key small bridge in your town that has nothing on it and if it does make sure your not going over anyone important in your area.

Zarb- I think your Z as well as the rest of it had those added curve things that changed the structure so much I couldent tell what it said at first glance, Keep it more simple and it should be looking good in no time.


As for me I just tried to get more of the same letter style into my throw,
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9743.jpg
Any things I should change? Oh and i know my K looks like an H, I'm gonna try to fix that.

[ShaolinNy]

Thanks for the crits everyone I will work on it on paper till I got it down pat


Weakfinger~its looking real good just got to make your k better and your t reminds me of an r every time I look at it,other than that good shit

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9885/knar9ak0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/w600.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img98/knar9ak0.jpg/1/)

A little critiscism?

thnks

[Worms]

duno how practical those are if your gona be bombing with em

[-HasH-The best]

http://i41.tinypic.com/15p1si9.jpg


tell me if its good

[Keke]

http://i41.tinypic.com/15p1si9.jpg


tell me if its good

no , i will not

[HalfGangstaShit]

yo hash, get rid of the shroom for now work on your letters, specially the K, and maybe do something to the A, I'd tell you to keep the shroom if you had better colors, work on that also.

Sorry I can't tell you it's good.

Keep on pushing that pen!

[PEST!]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1111110120091803.jpg

crits?

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120091608.jpg

[Worms]

GOOOO SIMMMPLLLEEEEEE
STOP ADDING STUPID LINES AND UN NEEDED BUMPS
your letters look nothing like a Z I or P

[diggitydoggz]

lol weakfingers... the "w" looks like it has a boner... diggin' the s and the k tho.

[JackieChanRollin]

violence- raw n
senk- change up the k
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/noyuthrow-1.jpg

crits appreciated???!!!????!!!

You write noyu? Is it pronounced "NO U?" If it is, thats lulz.
The throw looks pretty good.
I think the Y could use a little work though.
Other than that, it looks pretty fresh.

[PEST!]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/1111110120091803.jpg

crits?

bump

[Den1]

weakfingers- i like it everything flows nice
halfgangsta-i like it but ur letters are a little spaced out
thanks for the crits i tried to make this flow a little better
http://i163.photobucket.com/albums/t305/pbfreak192/IMG_0574.jpg
its a little out of proportion cuz i had to do it quick but let me know what you think

[PEST!]

are my posts invisible or something?
DEN-i'm diggin the tag. loookin nice

could i get a crit or two ^^^

[JackieChanRollin]

bump

Does it say JE, or AE?
I would say keep practicing your E's.

[PEST!]

Does it say JE, or AE?
I would say keep practicing your E's.


well i use it as a DE but a lot of people are saying it looks like AE so maybe it is? :D it's really just two letters i just thought looked cool together but thanks for the crit on the E.

[Zarb]

Ok I went much simpler
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120092149.jpg
any better?

[Worms]

go look at throws in the throwups/bombs thread
get inspired but dont bite... cus u have no idea

[JackieChanRollin]

well i use it as a DE but a lot of people are saying it looks like AE so maybe it is? :D it's really just two letters i just thought looked cool together but thanks for the crit on the E.

Ohh ok. Now I see the D. It looked like a lowercase A without the line in the center. No problem. Try making the extensions from your E come off horizontally, instead of at an angle.

zipper- try making the lines on your Z come in more. Try making your P's have more of a round top. Work on that E, I cant really make it out. Try a different style that fits with the rest of the letters.

[Worms]

no pest dont listen to jacki chan hes chinese and cant see well obviously ... ur throw needs to be simpler its got unnesesary shit... throws should be simple there not made to be burners lulz at least thats how i feel

[PEST!]

something like this?

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a200/rivsfan/0120092111.jpg

[Worms]

even simpler

[fitzy36]

PEST!- lookin iight i'm not really feeling the "bulb" thing on the d

eh messy

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0120092243.jpg
any better?

[weakfingers]

Pest- Keep All you're letters very basic and then go from there, My best advice would do a REALLY simple two letter throw without any extras then check out the thread in your area or check the bomb thread and like copy some of the shit, dont write it on walls just copy the style and the more you write it on paper you'll change small things and then eventully it will be a new style but look at the original and you will still se some simmilarities. But yeah start simple.

Den1- I really like how it is looking, Its super simple and clean, just add a dope shadow and like you said keep the same proportion and you should be on your way.

Zarb- Youve make alot of progress and its looking alot better, The one thing I would suggest to make it look better would be make some lines in the throw longer so you can tell what the letters are like the P's

I was just working on a new S because I hate the way mine look but what do you all think?
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j35/mouman/IMG_9749.jpg
Crits? Oh and yeah i kinda squished the T on the end

[Wallace]

den - start with something simpler for 2 letter. on the long one mainly clean up the N, but it still needs a lot of work.
zip- your letters need more definition, i agree with worms just look at a tonnn of throws and get some ideas for how the letters are formed and things of that sort.
skwint- i liked your S from pages back, t is moving in the right direction though (it looks awkward with a long top at the end of the throwy). keep practicing on your letters the k is basicccc

[shayk]

den- make your n the same size as the d and the e i like the one tag thow

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00143.jpg
crits

[Capo Izi]

Shayk-it's okay, developing, but the K is not really good at all, or the y (hard letter), and the 3D is off pretty bad. Looks okay, but def needs work.

Skwint-pretty damn good, just get the T out there( I realized you squished, just making sure you know). And work on the bottom of the S, it doesn't really flow with the rest of the tag.

De-looks much better, and cool tag anyway. The d has flavor now...

Anyway now me...

Ive been working on 2 different tags (same name, Capo) and I can't figure out which one is better...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/17/l_253197baae6246eca7dabd131d06dbee.jpg

The ones on the right are the ones I've been bombing with, but I've been trying to develop a new style (on the left) that has more character to it, then the ones on the right (my older style)...

So can anyone help me, by telling me which one is better? left or right ones?

[JackieChanRollin]

no pest dont listen to jacki chan hes chinese and cant see well obviously ... ur throw needs to be simpler its got unnesesary shit... throws should be simple there not made to be burners lulz at least thats how i feel

Lolwut? You seriously need to work on your spelling and punctuation.

[fitzy36]

a quick throw
http://i43.tinypic.com/osz686.jpg

[gentrifried]

http://www.cactusface.com/cactusgal/albums/Graf/Jan21_0006.sized.jpg

[Wallace]

not a throw, really work on your can control, letter structure is very poor, 3d is nonsense.

random sloppy shit
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5908/img00113cr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[gentrifried]

not a throw, really work on your can control, letter structure is very poor, 3d is nonsense.

thanks im still in the basement learning phase.. i was trying to do a drop shadow and not 3d if its not a throw what would it be then ? just curious

[B.S. POLICE]

straight letter or simp

[-HasH-The best]

fuck ya i love this shit

http://i40.tinypic.com/25rnwi0.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/sy2pue.jpg

[goober]

Messy fill and outline,
http://i44.tinypic.com/spaira.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2mnhkqf.jpg

[Capo Izi]

Shayk-it's okay, developing, but the K is not really good at all, or the y (hard letter), and the 3D is off pretty bad. Looks okay, but def needs work.

Skwint-pretty damn good, just get the T out there( I realized you squished, just making sure you know). And work on the bottom of the S, it doesn't really flow with the rest of the tag.

De-looks much better, and cool tag anyway. The d has flavor now...

Anyway now me...

Ive been working on 2 different tags (same name, Capo) and I can't figure out which one is better...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo56.jpg

The ones on the right are the ones I've been bombing with, but I've been trying to develop a new style (on the left) that has more character to it, then the ones on the right (my older style)...

So can anyone help me, by telling me which one is better? left or right ones?

bumppp.....need help.

[weakfingers]

Not to be mean but the ones on the left blows, I know your probably working on them but like, if spikes are done wrong they look kinda bad to me. I'd stick with the one on your right and make the letters match, and round out your C and work on making youre bubble drip thing more smooth there both kinda misshapen.

[white]

capo use the one on the right - the one on the left looks like your trying to hard....

[SNAP!]

even the right looks like he's trying too hard..

[Capo Izi]

k thanks, just wondering, I'm gonna keep developing both, but I only tag with the right one.....and I definitely don't try to hard on that one, I have that one on the right down easy, I can do it in like a minute on the street....

[Zarb]

did this quick in school
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122091137.jpg

[fitzy36]

a quick throw
http://i43.tinypic.com/osz686.jpg



bumping...ehh:confused:

[Zarb]

i like it except i had to take good look at it before i realized the first letter was a k, i had the same problem you should make it more legible

[fitzy36]

i like it except i had to take good look at it before i realized the first letter was a k, i had the same problem you should make it more legible

yeah i've been working for a new style this k is kinda new for me... oh and thanks for the advice man

[fitzy36]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2u5q6vr.jpg

a try at a throwie other than "kasm"

[SNAP!]

http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1784.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/100_1785.jpg

[fitzy36]

SNAP!- looks pretty cool, really good potential... but not really diggin the diamond shape things in the second one

[SNAP!]

me either.. just fuckin around

[fitzy36]

yeah, i like the 's' in the first one though

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122091758.jpg
crits?

[SNAP!]

thanks. that s is actually a one liner

[Wallace]

not many people understand give crits to get crits...

-HasH-The best - copied the shit out of the mario mushroom. work on your letter proportions
goober - keep at it, work on the E in the first throw. not a fan of the 2 letter
Capo Izi - ditch the one on the left, keep working with the right one and you may get something. the A and water drop or whatever you want to call it is hurtin.
zippsta - keep at it, work on your Z and I more... p's are simple. remember a z is only a backwards s lol.
fitzy36 - kasm isn't too bad. its a decent start, work on your M and S. just keep on practicing, style will improve no doubt. deconer is way too long, not liking it either.
scone - lol finally not writing snap anymore (no beef =P just saying). if youre going to use that style try to use more bars maybe. not liking the diamonds in the second one.

little advice for everyone... bang out mad hollows with pens and sharpies before you waste a ton of markers.


random sloppy shit
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/5908/img00113cr6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[fitzy36]

wallace- thanks for the crits, i mainly only write deconer when i'm bored, never bombed it.... and your throws looks pretty sick really diggin the s

http://i42.tinypic.com/sxoiu9.jpg

[Zarb]

K so I changed up my Z and my I alittle, hows this?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122092126.jpg

[Stussy]

this place is a mess

[SNAP!]

thats why its the toy section guy

[Worms]

ye agreed...

[ShaolinNy]

this place is a mess

lol

[Wallace]

this place is a mess


http://i34.tinypic.com/2nate0i.jpg

lol, nice handy
and your Z definitely looks like a Z

zip seems like youve been trying a lot, and i have a massive headache so im bored out of my mind tonight. did your name really quick, i dont really like it but maybe it could help.
fucked up camera angle my bad, makes letters look way smaller at the end

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3170/img00117hq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Worms]

stussy is right guys... just cus your toys doesnt mean ur stuff has to look like total shit... you should look around at pictures of other shit n study them and see how they flow and wat not... everything evolvs from somthing else

[Zarb]

Ok so i'm back again haha and I changed up my shit alittle more. i kinda fucked up the Z alittle I think but w.e Oh and thanks for the help wallace
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0122092254.jpg

[Stussy]

lol, nice handy
and your Z definitely looks like a Z

zip seems like youve been trying a lot, and i have a massive headache so im bored out of my mind tonight. did your name really quick, i dont really like it but maybe it could help.
fucked up camera angle my bad, makes letters look way smaller at the end

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/3170/img00117hq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

are you trying to joke on somthing i posted almost 2 months ago?
my handy sucked and this is a throwie thread dumb ass...

yea this place is a mess... these kids keep posting the same ole shit over and over.... work on it yourself some guys... look at other peoples shit and dont ask for crits for every little throw you try to do... think for yourself, ask yourself what you like or dislike about it

[Capo Izi]

not many people understand give crits to get crits...

-HasH-The best - copied the shit out of the mario mushroom. work on your letter proportions
goober - keep at it, work on the E in the first throw. not a fan of the 2 letter
Capo Izi - ditch the one on the left, keep working with the right one and you may get something. the A and water drop or whatever you want to call it is hurtin.
zippsta - keep at it, work on your Z and I more... p's are simple. remember a z is only a backwards s lol.
fitzy36 - kasm isn't too bad. its a decent start, work on your M and S. just keep on practicing, style will improve no doubt. deconer is way too long, not liking it either.
scone - lol finally not writing snap anymore (no beef =P just saying). if youre going to use that style try to use more bars maybe. not liking the diamonds in the second one.

little advice for everyone... bang out mad hollows with pens and sharpies before you waste a ton of markers.


Yeah I need to work on the A, but do you mean the little quote bubble things? I usually write my tag in there so thats pretty much the only reason its there.

[B.S. POLICE]

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6584/screencapture8wv2.png

[Wallace]

are you trying to joke on somthing i posted almost 2 months ago?
my handy sucked and this is a throwie thread dumb ass...

yea this place is a mess... these kids keep posting the same ole shit over and over.... work on it yourself some guys... look at other peoples shit and dont ask for crits for every little throw you try to do... think for yourself, ask yourself what you like or dislike about it

bahaha youre a tool, im aware of where that is you also posted a throwy.

again.. tool

[Stussy]

im a tool for telling people to work some shit out on their own?

[Decide]

im a tool for telling people to work some shit out on their own?
shut up man its over its done

[bwesky]

hey guys i just started writing a few weeks back, i came up with a tag for myself and was wandering what you guys think, if it sucks, tell me i dont give a fuck!

pic says "BLCL" which i abbreviated for Blau Cel, in german it means blue sky. my nickname is bwesky which reminds me of a blue sky. on the right hand side if you pretend to flip the face 90 degrees counterclockwise, its my initials "BA"

enjoy, and lemme know wuts up!

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1297/tagagetq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/tagagetq6.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img88/tagagetq6.jpg/1/)

[MARTYRaz]

bwesky...start out by learning letter structure and style...go to new to graff thread and read alot....
heres some shit.....crits please;)
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1529.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1528.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

stay off the walls for a while, that hand aint bad but your a and the r are like the same letter in the throw

[milk boxx]

http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l29/Matthewstephenellis/EMEK-1.jpg
crits?

[ESKiMO2]

I barely ever do throws (compared to pieces) so do I have the right idea?

CA
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/1957/56901485vp7.jpg
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/477/blackbook8dd0.jpg

Sorry I can't criticize because I don't know very much about throws.

[sike_21]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0052.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0103.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0014.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0112.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_92362.jpg
my boys
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0015.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0024.jpg

[ESKiMO2]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/0083.jpg

As I said before I don't know much about throws but the top row looks dope.

[Capo Izi]

Hey, I've been studying different writers and who to respect and who's kings and whatnot, just wondering, does anyone who's big write Dope?...

If not any crits on this throw...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo59.jpg


Btw, Sike those throws are pretty good, and the slaps are SICKS as hell, especially the straight down bottom, keep it up.

[ESKiMO2]

Uh... Dope is kind of a generic name. Better be a bit more creative than that.

[Zase]

i dont spend much time on trows cuzz i like bombing way more
but i need a slick one standart so imma practise some morehttp://i43.tinypic.com/2nu4vt2.jpg

[revid!]

Hey, I've been studying different writers and who to respect and who's kings and whatnot, just wondering, does anyone who's big write Dope?...

If not any crits on this throw...

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n283/punkerizzy/Photo59.jpg


Btw, Sike those throws are pretty good, and the slaps are SICKS as hell, especially the straight down bottom, keep it up.

my boy smoovvvv nutts writes doap/dope
better switch that up

[smooth_nuts]

revid always on it,yeah dude i already write that and am alot better then you,so i'd prefer if you changed it ;)

[Worms]

ur not the only one who writes dope ballsak... n e name theres at least 1 other writer rokin it... its a big world

[smooth_nuts]

i know that,i'd just prefer not to see it...


ok ballsack?
trying talk all bigbad e-thug and shit,speak proper english ballsack,got that balsack,ballsack,ballsack...





i can be a smart ass too :p