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smooth_nuts
02-11-2009, 07:56 PM
it's better then before,but,you should be doing just straight keyboard lettersat this time,nothing else.....oh and post sketchs in the toy blabk book thread not the toy throwie thread ;)

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
02-11-2009, 08:06 PM
it's better then before,but,you should be doing just straight keyboard lettersat this time,nothing else.....oh and post sketchs in the toy blabk book thread not the toy throwie thread ;)

haha alright sorry man, kinda new to this.

Syke1FTP
02-11-2009, 10:04 PM
haha alright sorry man, kinda new to this.

ey doggy just a lil constructive crit....try and make all the letters the same as you may have read in the new to graff thing....so like in your lil sketch...notice how theyre all straight letters then you got the lil thing on the "L" try to make everything the same style...and dont forget that just straight up tags will help you too aight

mekosbc
02-11-2009, 10:08 PM
Yo oh snap down for a thrrowie exchange? Pm me and let me know

B.S. POLICE
02-11-2009, 10:31 PM
if that top or bottom ones a sticker,you better fucking send me them!

abor-your b looks like a c,even with the dots,imo.

they all are lol the middle ones are just exacto cut so you cant tell until you peel em

smooth_nuts
02-11-2009, 10:45 PM
well them i think you should get to pming me so we can set up a trade ;)

k'n1ve
02-12-2009, 01:42 AM
ohsnap- those are fuckin ill bromie
analyze- listen to smoothie simple as fuck man...

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k172/Kevin_1_/DSCF0266.jpg
hook up the crits...[/QUOTE]

BUMPDIZZLE from a few whiles ago...

Scheme*119
02-12-2009, 05:10 AM
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/8053/screencapture8px4.png

this mufucka right here, and i can see where youre coming from with my b

~Star~
02-12-2009, 12:12 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/bomb4life/SneakOne008.jpg

capy
02-12-2009, 01:27 PM
http://i688.photobucket.com/albums/vv247/kingz_07/DSC000591.jpg

woonybomber
02-12-2009, 04:01 PM
http://i405.photobucket.com/albums/pp138/woonybomber/wone022.jpg
crits

Bink1
02-12-2009, 04:06 PM
sick its very bad.
wone-start out giving crits and stop postin these pieces in throwies thread, just burn these pages.

woonybomber
02-12-2009, 04:17 PM
ight

SONE.
02-12-2009, 06:13 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090210_3.jpg
mad fucked my E. but itsa door...

skull-e
02-12-2009, 06:52 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture87.jpg

SONE.
02-12-2009, 06:54 PM
nooot feelin that one bit. tighten it up. T needs more symetry and that A is too wide..

CRIMSON
02-12-2009, 07:31 PM
this is my first throwey in like 3 years i stoped for a while when my friend got busted but its in my blood...

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-12-2009, 08:03 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/anoe.jpg
BUMP?

Zarb
02-12-2009, 10:02 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0212092254a.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0211091041.jpg
crits?

BigBlueViolence
02-12-2009, 10:10 PM
Switching shit up a little
http://i43.tinypic.com/dn2ex1.jpg
http://www.mybumpmaternity.com/images/bumpbabies/bumptastic%20pink.jpg

Reel- that green one would be dope without all of the cloudy tumor things.

Tasr- I'm not really feeling the T, but everything else is looking nice.

Teadrinker- Definitely felt your old shit better.

B.S.5-0- Really feeling the bandana one.

Blox
02-12-2009, 10:12 PM
Your getting way to technical Reel.
With the shadowd hand styles, and the bubble backgrounds, and the open R's/
Just take er way more simpol man.

peacebomb
02-13-2009, 03:17 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/soopthrowie001-1.jpg

SONE.
02-13-2009, 05:39 PM
drop what ever is on top of ur letters. the lil rectangle thing

dogowar
02-13-2009, 08:49 PM
yeah soop drop those liitle things on the top, are they ment to look like bombs?. And make the holes in the o and p diffrent im not likeing them were they are. Plus your P looks a bit like and e. But you do have the same style flowing through all your letters which is good.

capy
02-14-2009, 09:24 AM
sick its very bad.
wone-start out giving crits and stop postin these pieces in throwies thread, just burn these pages.

whats so bad about it pls tell me so i can improve
ps my name isn't sick its capy

Bink1
02-14-2009, 12:52 PM
imrove it by lookin in new to graff thread or look at sum flicks of throwies to get some inspiration, looks like u dont get it for now.

ShaolinNy
02-14-2009, 06:06 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/fcpt0m.jpg


Im messin with a new name Dent,Did this in the dark since my lights are broke in my room lol


Crits?

sellers E.
02-14-2009, 06:15 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo1.jpg

WikedRequiem
02-14-2009, 06:17 PM
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo1.jpg

back to the drawing board.......

weakfingers
02-14-2009, 10:12 PM
Daylo- I dont know if you know about this marker but you basicly stole the name www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZgdnEquEZk . They spell it Dalo. Other then that for starters I'd looze the x things and just do circles.

ShaolinNY- That shadow is mad wack, its chillen on the top and bottem. Work on making the letters the same size and not letting them grow/shrink throughout the throw.

Aight then, I've been trying to work on new style for the past 2 weeks and come-up with straight shitty throws and went back to a simple bubble look and tried to fix up a couple letters. Can any body give me some help on what to do with my T?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Untitled.jpg

pandemik
02-14-2009, 11:21 PM
skwint, man ive really liked your stuff except for the t, which isn't too bad, i just don't dig it man. Other than that, I like it.

weakfingers
02-14-2009, 11:47 PM
Tell me about it, I find them so weird in throws,
The problem with my T is I dont like bringing it out to show the other side because I get a lot of dead space and the whole flow of the bomb is off-set. So I'm still working on fixing it and any suggestions on how I would re-arrange shit would be greatly apreceated.

ShaolinNy
02-15-2009, 12:32 AM
Tell me about it, I find them so weird in throws,
The problem with my T is I dont like bringing it out to show the other side because I get a lot of dead space and the whole flow of the bomb is off-set. So I'm still working on fixing it and any suggestions on how I would re-arrange shit would be greatly apreceated.


you can try and do sumthin like my t

Queezy
02-15-2009, 01:32 AM
Make the top bar of the T short 'n fat, and the bottom like the s.

mtown
02-15-2009, 06:07 AM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8766/zanepinkonpinkuq8.jpg

Bink1
02-15-2009, 09:59 AM
Daylo- I dont know if you know about this marker but you basicly stole the name www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZgdnEquEZk . They spell it Dalo. Other then that for starters I'd looze the x things and just do circles.

ShaolinNY- That shadow is mad wack, its chillen on the top and bottem. Work on making the letters the same size and not letting them grow/shrink throughout the throw.

Aight then, I've been trying to work on new style for the past 2 weeks and come-up with straight shitty throws and went back to a simple bubble look and tried to fix up a couple letters. Can any body give me some help on what to do with my T?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Untitled.jpg

just rip off the T , if u dont like that letter why u should write it? well Skwin sounds cool.

B.S. POLICE
02-15-2009, 11:43 AM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/7418/screencapture8gi7.png

bak
02-15-2009, 12:05 PM
skwint try and curve the arm of the t so it connects with the dot at the bottom

Zarb
02-15-2009, 01:55 PM
new name
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture5-1.png
dont know if im gonna keep it yet, how is it?
dent- make your n smaller but it looks pretty good i think
skwint- much better except the t

smooth_nuts
02-15-2009, 10:04 PM
doing some dead cans..
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3548/3282647978_1ffc0b9305.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3295/3281848965_761573f202.jpg

joker954
02-15-2009, 10:20 PM
like that can idea alot

STR-WHO
02-15-2009, 10:39 PM
new name
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture5-1.png
dont know if im gonna keep it yet, how is it?
dent- make your n smaller but it looks pretty good i think
skwint- much better except the t

the name is...frankly its terrible

the C is good, the E is good, the R's iight, the K is FUCKED, and so is the A

Wallace
02-15-2009, 11:09 PM
^^ the c and e really arent that good lol

one version of my shit. sloppy as hell but whatever i hate shit on paper

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5132/img00202gi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7620/img00203dt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2441/img00204gg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

B.S. POLICE
02-16-2009, 02:35 AM
dope i gotcha with that shit you were talking about earlier let me just make a couple more and ill pm you with the shit

respERATION
02-16-2009, 04:58 AM
dope....i can has?
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/16-02-09_1045.jpg

i needddd some help i'm dieing here!!

and skwint maybe just have a really short horizontal T bar?

~Star~
02-16-2009, 11:42 AM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/bomb4life/SneakOne008.jpg

Bump for crits, anythin you see wrong with it leme no, no need to be ncie about it either haha

Scheme*119
02-16-2009, 11:48 AM
your s and h dont have any flow, i like that a though

~Star~
02-16-2009, 11:54 AM
even though there is no H :P it says sneak, do you mean the N or the K

smooth_nuts
02-16-2009, 12:05 PM
dope i gotcha with that shit you were talking about earlier let me just make a couple more and ill pm you with the shit
word :)

dope....i can has?
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/16-02-09_1045.jpg

i needddd some help i'm dieing here!!

and skwint maybe just have a really short horizontal T bar?
you can has....DE'Z NUTS!
the top rep is the best one,you need to work on making all your letters the same size and leved up,and you should move the p back so theres no negitive space and maybe out a hole or swirl or dot in there ;)

Wallace
02-16-2009, 12:53 PM
resp- work on your letters flowing more, the top one and bottom one have potential if they are worked on a lottt
sneak- keep at it, you s need a lot of work
doap- your style is coming alone nicely


^^ the c and e really arent that good lol

one version of my shit. sloppy as hell but whatever i hate shit on paper

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5132/img00202gi0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7620/img00203dt8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2441/img00204gg3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new page bump

ShaolinNy
02-16-2009, 02:54 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/24yutqx.jpg

Heres a crappy throw of a new style i was workin on.Crits pl


Wallace-Im liken the 1st and last one
Resp-Like smooth said try not to ahve any negative space

Mr yarbles
02-16-2009, 03:47 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2cx6sme.jpg

I'm likin them so throws wallace

shaolin its waaaaay too bublly and fat

Resp connect your letters
and r's are some of the hardest letters to start a throw imo
Just keep practicing

Blox
02-16-2009, 05:15 PM
Fuck dent.

Shamy
02-16-2009, 07:04 PM
Here is a new Throw im working on crits? http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/3250/p00158ul5.jpg (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00158ul5.jpg)
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/p00158ul5.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img266/p00158ul5.jpg/1/)

Ps i write Shi!

~Star~
02-16-2009, 07:05 PM
Here is a new Throw im working on crits? http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/5494/p00158mi6.th.jpg (http://img519.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00158mi6.jpg)

Ps i write Shi!

introduction to graffiti

Shamy
02-16-2009, 07:07 PM
have <<

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 07:10 PM
then you fail

try to make a little simpler, practise normal throws before you try going all crazy on us

and change your name its fucking gay

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 07:10 PM
too close to "shiloh"

Shamy
02-16-2009, 07:12 PM
how is my name gay? just because its not something 1030200204 people have? i wanted sumthing i can atleast not worry about people having. and i have done simps. just trying something new.

oh just read ur second post but still it isnt LOL

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 07:14 PM
ya and it sucks

get a new name

~Star~
02-16-2009, 07:16 PM
or just get good with that one and no1 will beef about ur name if u have style

weakfingers
02-16-2009, 08:04 PM
Shamy- Dont write "By Sham" that shits just weak. and don't do block letters. they just don't work out to well for new writers.....
before...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/bside.jpg
after... I know I should not of called him a toy because I'm one, but look at that.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/cuint.jpg

Shamy
02-16-2009, 08:14 PM
you mean like this? *fast just to see if i get what you mean* http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4766/p00160su4.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00160su4.jpg)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/p00160su4.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/p00160su4.jpg/1/)

Queezy
02-16-2009, 08:17 PM
Saying the letters don't flow isn't even a critique. Give reasons why they flow - "The letter styles don't match up", "Letters aren't same size", etc. Obviously toy writers aren't gonna extract the meaning of someone saying there letters aren't flowing, thats the reason it doesn't look the greatest in the first place.

I like that 2 letter throw yarbles.

Dent - For the D put a drop shadow in the hole, and if your going to do a hole in the letter do it for the e also. On the N make the top line farther right than the bottom line(look at your keyboard N) and the T should be the same size, and not to crazy haha.

weakfingers
02-16-2009, 08:37 PM
Shamy- I'm not saying you cant do a block letter throw, All I'm SUGGESTING is that you should start trying to get something clean and simple, because once you get a nice and clean throw you can start adding small things like highlights then fades etc etc etc Just go to the picture thread and look at the shit in your area or even the Throw Up thread.

Aight...
Thanks for helping me with my T.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0097.jpg
Crits?

Aesir
02-16-2009, 08:51 PM
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/6025/skwintthrowmv5.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/skwintthrowmv5.png/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img12/skwintthrowmv5.png/1/)

Quick little throw and tag I made for you in Paint. Use it or not. Whatever. The "W" doesn't look that great in the tag tho....

Zarb
02-16-2009, 09:27 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture10-1.png
Hows my R? idk i feel like it doesent look enough like an R, what do you guys think?

skwint- MUCH better

Queezy
02-16-2009, 09:44 PM
Looks like an A to tell you the truth.

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 10:03 PM
or just get good with that one and no1 will beef about ur name if u have style

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaw

if your name sucks dick and you have style, I'LL still beef your queer ass name

so your telling me if someone tagged "PENIS" it wouldn't matter, as long as it looked good? Or tagged "QUEER"?

and Shil is a homo ass name

for once and for all CHANGE THAT FAGGOT ASS SHIT

STR-WHO
02-16-2009, 10:04 PM
Shamy- I'm not saying you cant do a block letter throw, All I'm SUGGESTING is that you should start trying to get something clean and simple, because once you get a nice and clean throw you can start adding small things like highlights then fades etc etc etc Just go to the picture thread and look at the shit in your area or even the Throw Up thread.

Aight...
Thanks for helping me with my T.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0097.jpg
Crits?

T's lookin good, and i like your name sounds dope, it rolls of my tongue :D

WoeInfinite
02-16-2009, 10:47 PM
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaw

if your name sucks dick and you have style, I'LL still beef your queer ass name

so your telling me if someone tagged "PENIS" it wouldn't matter, as long as it looked good? Or tagged "QUEER"?

and Shil is a homo ass name

for once and for all CHANGE THAT FAGGOT ASS SHIT

theres a dude who tags boner and hes fuckin ill...and youre gonna hate?

Queezy
02-16-2009, 10:50 PM
He's got a point... Plus my homie writes Catpis, and he has style for days. Once I flick this roof tag I'll post.
http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyThrowFreestyle.jpg

WoeInfinite
02-16-2009, 11:02 PM
Shamy- I'm not saying you cant do a block letter throw, All I'm SUGGESTING is that you should start trying to get something clean and simple, because once you get a nice and clean throw you can start adding small things like highlights then fades etc etc etc Just go to the picture thread and look at the shit in your area or even the Throw Up thread.

Aight...
Thanks for helping me with my T.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0097.jpg
Crits?

that looks alot better.
stick with it
just fix the s, k and dont bend that top bar of the W.
nahmeeeeeeen?

Sizzuurp
02-16-2009, 11:03 PM
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9317/02160922473lo6.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/41/icevp9.jpg

skwint- not really feelin the S but i like the flow of it
zarb- yea it kinda looks like an A. its more like a mystery letter lol. but i dont really think any of ur letters match very well. play around with it some more

Gort
02-16-2009, 11:24 PM
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7658/sadsadfd6.png


Why should i redraw my throwie lol and go thru all the trouble of uploadin it.

Its inside of the gort robot. Crits?=D

Gort
02-16-2009, 11:27 PM
I fotoshopped it to go with my slap

Block Is Hot
02-17-2009, 12:02 AM
yeo ESK you should just stop tryin to write.. son your shit is so played out and stop bitin dude forreal

Block Is Hot
02-17-2009, 12:07 AM
shit is poop son...stick to your books for good..stay in that shit for like 5 years before you even think about hittin the streets...

Sizzuurp
02-17-2009, 12:11 AM
yeo ESK you should just stop tryin to write.. son your shit is so played out and stop bitin dude forreal

who are you talkin about?


and GORT im feelin the robot lol, not really feelin the G though and the hole for the R. kinda seems like the letters dont match

Block Is Hot
02-17-2009, 12:14 AM
hittin the popos so i rushed the fill,well i rushed...
http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff314/ghettobomber594/esk1.jpg[/QUOTE] yo esk yous a wack bitch and you suck you should just quit

Gort
02-17-2009, 12:22 AM
who are you talkin about?


and GORT im feelin the robot lol, not really feelin the G though and the hole for the R. kinda seems like the letters dont match

Thanks yo :) They dont fit hao ? care to help me out real quick

btw i appreciate all crits =D

hpir
02-17-2009, 09:49 AM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/DSC02592.jpg

Zarb
02-17-2009, 10:44 AM
New name, needs alot of work I know but hows it coming along?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0217091136.jpg

baez- needs work
skwint- i like it

Bink1
02-17-2009, 11:47 AM
that robot is fuking illness :D sticker would look fukin ill. p.s. without the throw :D

quezzy- dude your Q fucks your throw , no offence but that thing coming out of it looks like a fuking tumor.

hpir
02-17-2009, 11:49 AM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/DSC02594.jpg

oxiclean
02-17-2009, 11:57 AM
Baez I liked the last one more....
A few throws and few simples:
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/IMG_1929.jpg

Sizzuurp
02-17-2009, 12:11 PM
oxi- make your simples more parallel and aligned. keep up those bars.
your first throw is real sloppy. idk y but i kinda like the E but it needs lots of work. fuck around with it and get it more symmetrical and get all of the letters lookin similar. keep it up

Zarb
02-17-2009, 01:40 PM
Still working on this name
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture7.png
crits?

shek-nice start
baez-better

Queezy
02-17-2009, 01:46 PM
Lookin better zarb

STR-WHO
02-17-2009, 04:05 PM
theres a dude who tags boner and hes fuckin ill...and youre gonna hate?

ya i obviously am, who the fuck are you, and if you think that a name has nothing to do with a tag and style, get the fuck out the graff game kid

Stussy
02-17-2009, 04:08 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7113/dsc0127gd4.jpg

Zarb
02-17-2009, 04:11 PM
I love that R man

.HATESONE.
02-17-2009, 05:16 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/7113/dsc0127gd4.jpg

cooll shit dude keep it up.

EgoZen
02-17-2009, 06:09 PM
workin on a new style here. any crits appreciated
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/905/ezerthrowsce9.jpg

hpir- its not too bad , just keep workin on it. cept i dont really like that thing inside the B
oxiclean- Try and make your K on the throws look less like an H
zarb- a little less overlap on those letters, especially the L and the A
zussy- awww ye


Love your splatter throwie!.. Keep it cooooming!

hpir
02-17-2009, 06:11 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/DSC02595.jpg
crits?

B.S. POLICE
02-17-2009, 06:29 PM
Love your splatter throwie!.. Keep it cooooming!

are you being sarcastic? cause that throw is garbage!

CRIMSON
02-17-2009, 07:27 PM
first proper throwie in paint
what do you think?

Black Flag
02-17-2009, 07:34 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/DSC02595.jpg
crits?

Not digging the "holes" in your B. If you are going for originality, you sure didn't win any medals there...

skull-e
02-17-2009, 08:05 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture94.jpg

blackflag: Not feeling that Z, but the A is dope

WoeInfinite
02-17-2009, 08:22 PM
tasr - youre on fuckin point my brother.
STR - youre a fucking idiot. and i havent seen shit posted from you. so do something, or gtfo because if youre just gonna hate, no one needs you here. even slushi posts shit once inna while...

Black Flag
02-17-2009, 08:35 PM
blackflag: Not feeling that Z, but the A is dope

That was not mine, I was criting that flick, just pointing it out to stop any further confusion.

CRIMSON
02-17-2009, 08:45 PM
Baez I liked the last one more....
A few throws and few simples:
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/IMG_1929.jpg

shek there is already a sheks in the uk... been painting for over a decade...

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-17-2009, 09:10 PM
rayz- dope
tazr-golden
ezar-not feeling it :(
las- its coming along make ur letters even
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/posekthrow.jpg
i know the k is fucked.. reads posek

Sizzuurp
02-17-2009, 09:18 PM
thatguy- i dont like the P and the O they dont match. its got potential though. try and make everything similar

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-17-2009, 09:20 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/posekthrow.jpg
bumpige

^ i know what u mean :(

bak
02-17-2009, 09:28 PM
i like the R or K? but the p and o need work

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-17-2009, 09:28 PM
its a k

nine one
02-17-2009, 09:38 PM
resp- work on your letters flowing more, the top one and bottom one have potential if they are worked on a lottt
sneak- keep at it, you s need a lot of work
doap- your style is coming alone nicely



new page bump

does that say 416?

and relaly fucking dope, im feeling it

Zarb
02-17-2009, 09:40 PM
Bump!

Still working on this name
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture7.png
crits?

shek-nice start
baez-better

nine one
02-17-2009, 09:43 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture87.jpg

thats my bitchh

keep it up tawzerr

Sizzuurp
02-17-2009, 09:46 PM
zarb- sry man i dont like it at all. fuck around with it a lot. make your letters wayyyy more simple and similar

Black Flag
02-17-2009, 09:46 PM
Bump!

Try some new A variations, your l and s don't look too bad together.

oxiclean
02-17-2009, 09:50 PM
shek there is already a sheks in the uk... been painting for over a decade...

I'm in The us...

Zarb
02-17-2009, 11:24 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0218090001.jpg
crits?

milk boxx
02-17-2009, 11:27 PM
zarb - lookin good, work on the shadow!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/PIC_0075.jpg
crits on a technical throwie?

sallybsk
02-18-2009, 02:34 AM
^^milk it looks pretty. but I just don't like your letters, details are pretty decent though.

Queezy
02-18-2009, 03:10 AM
The three humps at the top of the E is a little too much

STR-WHO
02-18-2009, 07:11 AM
tasr - youre on fuckin point my brother.
STR - youre a fucking idiot. and i havent seen shit posted from you. so do something, or gtfo because if youre just gonna hate, no one needs you here. even slushi posts shit once inna while...

thats cause you'r not GONNA see shit posted by me. I started a BS account to be a shit disturber. Derrr.

STR-WHO
02-18-2009, 07:11 AM
you kids can take it, your all big boys now :)

nine one
02-18-2009, 12:27 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/r926o2.jpg

Billboard throw

crits?

was pretty unconfortable up there, wasnt the easiest thing to write on, so give me a break here :p

Sizzuurp
02-18-2009, 01:09 PM
zarb- fix that A the right leg of it makes no sense, it looks awkward. ur L looks better, its comin along slowly keep workin on it!

nine- the 3d on the bottom is real choppy. id like to see a cleaner version of it. its still a fresh throw. stay up

peacebomb
02-18-2009, 02:17 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/soopthrowie2001.jpg

I think I got the s but im not liking the o's.

Crits please.

Scheme*119
02-18-2009, 02:52 PM
catchin some flicks of shit i did last night in a bit, caught an ill spot, theres a abondoned building i hit and theres a big sign that says "everyday hundreds of people read this, if you want this to be your ad call (insert number here)" right under it blaoh, "ABOR" staring at you as youre on the freeway:)

piff12plus07pawz08
02-18-2009, 03:38 PM
im Piff
my boyfriend is Pawz
keep that in mind...

i did these
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14223.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14386.jpg

i fucked this one up...
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14504.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14509.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14649.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14651.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14652.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14654.jpg

Pawz did these
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14341.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14342.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14460.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14493.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14523.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14524.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14543.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14560.jpg

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc274/nawlige_is_stupidity/SDC14563.jpg

CRIT AWAY!!!

sike_21
02-18-2009, 03:41 PM
stay away from graffiti creator bitting is a no no

Scheme*119
02-18-2009, 03:45 PM
CRIT AWAY!!!

get a new boyfriend

piff12plus07pawz08
02-18-2009, 03:47 PM
why would i get a new boyfriend??

Scheme*119
02-18-2009, 03:54 PM
maybe he could teach you a thing or two...

Decide
02-18-2009, 04:04 PM
last 2 and the can is dope

Scheme*119
02-18-2009, 04:05 PM
theyre really not though..

piff12plus07pawz08
02-18-2009, 04:10 PM
i had a bf that thinks hes rly good at graff...
and he actually sux...
im in love with the one im with now and graff isnt going to change that

peacebomb
02-18-2009, 04:12 PM
God Fucking damnit! Will people please stop biting wiggles. You get no were copying someone elses style.

haze4life
02-18-2009, 04:55 PM
lool yea so 1- dont bite graffiti creator, so the two last ones
2- work on that handy ALOT and take out the gay arrow at the end
3- and dont copy youre bf's style cause youre just making something bad worst

piff12plus07pawz08
02-18-2009, 05:15 PM
iight

conr
02-18-2009, 05:21 PM
piff are you a girl?
my advice is stick to simples, build letters up with bars, DONT STEAL SHIT (we call that biting, kinda defeats the whole purpose of graffiti but I wont go into that) and just keep sketchin.

peacebomb
02-18-2009, 05:27 PM
http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/soopthrowie2001.jpg

I think I got the s but im not liking the o's.

Crits please.

just bumpin it

Mr yarbles
02-18-2009, 06:08 PM
last 2 and the can is dope

Come back in a year when you learn what's dope and what isn't.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-18-2009, 07:43 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0218092033a.jpg

oxiclean
02-18-2009, 07:49 PM
I like it except the P. Nice.

iBoMs
02-18-2009, 07:55 PM
just found the old flix of my first throwie wow sooooo toy!http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww201/iBoMs/100_3119.jpg
http://i720.photobucket.com/albums/ww201/iBoMs/100_3119.jpg

smooth_nuts
02-18-2009, 09:46 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3141/3288821344_36a1d5e774.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3290/3288004023_29288bfd64.jpg

BigBlueViolence
02-18-2009, 10:10 PM
That bottom one is what's up, Smoother

weakfingers
02-18-2009, 10:53 PM
Thatguywhodrinkstea- Your shadow souldent be on the top and bottem.

B.S. POLICE
02-19-2009, 12:05 AM
peacebomb fail
iboms fail
posek ive seen better from you your p and s are fail
piff EPIC FAIL if your gonna bite anyone bite doap not mister wiggles
piffs boyfriend SUPER DUPER MEGA FAIL for sucking at graff and not hitting your (im assuming) girlfriend for biting mister wiggles

Bink1
02-19-2009, 12:18 AM
piff are you a girl?
my advice is stick to simples, build letters up with bars, DONT STEAL SHIT (we call that biting, kinda defeats the whole purpose of graffiti but I wont go into that) and just keep sketchin.

fuck you. u dont need no fucking bars for a toss. and why talkin simples in throw thread?

Sizzuurp
02-19-2009, 12:27 AM
shes new to graff. u should start with bars before u do anything in my opinion. if i see a shitty ass throw that means that they most likely cant do a simple letter.

TastySesamcrew
02-19-2009, 09:50 AM
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/BorieToes.jpg

Borie by me, Toes by a friend, he was out of space for his S so he had to do it like that... crits?

oxiclean
02-19-2009, 10:14 AM
That shits hot tasty.

Sizzuurp
02-19-2009, 12:32 PM
damnnnnnnn. that throw is ill tasty

iBoMs
02-19-2009, 12:53 PM
peacebomb fail
iboms fail
posek ive seen better from you your p and s are fail
piff EPIC FAIL if your gonna bite anyone bite doap not mister wiggles
piffs boyfriend SUPER DUPER MEGA FAIL for sucking at graff and not hitting your (im assuming) girlfriend for biting mister wiggles

i wasn't really asking but i guess youre opinion would have been nice 4 years ago when the pic was taken! if oyu had read the caption you would no it was my first throw and that i myself called it sooooooooo toy but thanks anyway!

B.S. POLICE
02-19-2009, 12:54 PM
nah i dont read i just look and critt

oxiclean
02-19-2009, 12:58 PM
says shek. I'm working on my k's, they always end up looking like n's or h's.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/IMG_1939.jpg

eor
02-19-2009, 01:10 PM
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/6390/mailgooglecomjf6.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mailgooglecomjf6.jpg)
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/mailgooglecomjf6.jpg/1/w1600.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img23/mailgooglecomjf6.jpg/1/)

crits would be nice.

peacebomb
02-19-2009, 02:04 PM
Fail doesnt help me improve

B.S. POLICE
02-19-2009, 02:27 PM
get rid of the spike on the left of the s and all the pubes looking things inside the tops of your o's and e

peacebomb
02-19-2009, 02:33 PM
Thanks for actual being helpful.

BigBlueViolence
02-19-2009, 03:10 PM
Eor, Kjay- Rezise your fucking pictures.

Taste- dope.

ShaolinNy
02-19-2009, 03:11 PM
Was messing around in school with a one letter.Crits please(Ones that help instead of saying its shit)Thanks!


http://i43.tinypic.com/9t25id.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4qhll4.jpg







Tasty-Thats shit hot
Shek-Try to connect your letters so u dont have alot of negative space,K's are pretty easy esp when there at the end.Check out guys with K's int here name to get a idea on how todo one.

Black Flag
02-19-2009, 03:13 PM
Was messing around in school with a one letter.Crits please(Ones that help instead of saying its shit)Thanks!


http://i43.tinypic.com/9t25id.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4qhll4.jpg







Tasty-Thats shit hot

Isn't your drop shadow messed up? How is it extended out from both left and right?

smooth_nuts
02-19-2009, 03:14 PM
piff EPIC FAIL if your gonna bite anyone bite doap not mister wiggles

snap,if you were a female i'd fuck you in the mouth.






....in a good way.
edit*
looking good tastiecakes,keep it up homie!
shaolin,the top pen one is looking descent,your drop shaows really messy and the motuh seems out of place though...l

ShaolinNy
02-19-2009, 03:34 PM
Isn't your drop shadow messed up? How is it extended out from both left and right?

Thx for the crits...
Hmm i guess your right..So is there any way i can give the S a drop shawdow while giving the ! one as well?




snap,if you were a female i'd fuck you in the mouth.

....in a good way.
edit*
looking good tastiecakes,keep it up homie!
shaolin,the top pen one is looking descent,your drop shaows really messy and the motuh seems out of place though...l


Thx ill fix the mouth,Question since i have a mouth do you think i should add a eye/eyes or somthing to make it look more like a face or is a mouth ok?


Also does any one know any good writiers that have one letters?Not gonna bite just want to check out other 1 letters.Only one i know thats big is boner

smooth_nuts
02-19-2009, 04:00 PM
the mouth in general seems out of place..

nine one
02-19-2009, 04:05 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/r926o2.jpg

Bumppp

crits are welcome :D

shit is sloppy, i know, but other then that, criticize away !

ShaolinNy
02-19-2009, 04:09 PM
Was messing around in school with a one letter.Crits please(Ones that help instead of saying its shit)Thanks!


http://i43.tinypic.com/9t25id.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4qhll4.jpg







Tasty-Thats shit hot
Shek-Try to connect your letters so u dont have alot of negative space,K's are pretty easy esp when there at the end.Check out guys with K's int here name to get a idea on how todo one.


BUMP-Botttom of page




the mouth in general seems out of place..

Ill see what i can do,Although that seemed like the best/only place to put it

Nine-pretty good,just fix up the 2nd letter

TastySesamcrew
02-19-2009, 05:11 PM
http://i487.photobucket.com/albums/rr234/TastySesamcrew/BorieToes.jpg

Borie by me, Toes by a friend, he was out of space for his S so he had to do it like that... crits?

bizzump

nine one
02-19-2009, 05:26 PM
Bumppp

http://i41.tinypic.com/r926o2.jpg
crits are welcome :D

shit is sloppy, i know, but other then that, criticize away !



bump dazzle smack wazzle

BigBlueViolence
02-19-2009, 05:28 PM
is it really necessary to bump your shit twice on one page?

~Star~
02-19-2009, 06:02 PM
PEOS shadow is dirty, other than that, pretty good and the bottom of the E?

nine one
02-19-2009, 07:31 PM
is it really necessary to bump your shit twice on one page?

yes it is (:

keeps the thread alive

Wallace
02-19-2009, 07:52 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3141/3288821344_36a1d5e774.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3290/3288004023_29288bfd64.jpg

bottom one is cleannn

Capo Izi
02-19-2009, 08:22 PM
been working on my tag more and more...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/17/l_2c906b7afde747078e83788d3362ef33.jpg

Crits?

Dope-pretty sweet

nine one-if it wasn't so scratchy it'd be sick, is that on an overpas?

tastysesamcrew-HELLA SICK...keep up

weakfingers
02-19-2009, 11:16 PM
Capo- Make your letters the same size, and if that's an O at the end I would put a hole in it.

answerrr
02-19-2009, 11:25 PM
hey guys just started sketching some throwieeeees

crits please???

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5981.jpg

answerrr
02-19-2009, 11:39 PM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5982.jpg

weakfingers
02-20-2009, 12:46 AM
Still learning the lines and curves of my throw.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0123.jpg
CRITS?

calculating infinity
02-20-2009, 01:04 AM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5982.jpg
lololol
i really did
especially at the comment where the kid gave you crits.
but really, dont you think you should have asked for crits before you did this?
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8041/69503259ms6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
funky fresh
http://l.yimg.com/g/images/spaceball.gif

answerrr
02-20-2009, 03:23 AM
haha just havin fun... too much time on my hands.... big up!

answerrr
02-20-2009, 03:24 AM
Answerrr-First off don't double post. Secondly don't do faces in new throws they just look toy but then again you are in the toy thread...
Start off simple and try to get all your letters the same size and style. I would not skip letters because it looks stupid if your not intentionally trying to shortform.


Still learning the lines and curves of my throw.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0123.jpg
CRITS?


yeah you got a long way to go homie... let me show you whats good

B.S. POLICE
02-20-2009, 04:06 AM
smooth thats so disturbing lol

answerrr
02-20-2009, 04:30 AM
k SKAWINT... first off this word is wayyy too long for a throwup. Second i dont even know what it says. To have proper flow in a throwup your gonna want to have 5 letters max. Anything after that is gonna start looking jumbled.
My passion with throwups started around 99-2000 when i was first getting into graffiti. The local kings in Vancouver Virus, Dedos, and Acrow were teaching this graffiti class at the community centre. I was really young and passionate about graff, and when Virus and Dedos gave me basic throwups, i was realy motivated to get better, i drew thousands. For years my throwups were terrible, but i sketched and painted them over and over and over. It probably took me 4-5 years b4 i started doing throws that i can still look back on and like. Developing from a really simple bubbly throw that the older heads gave me. When starting throwups, the key is simplicity with style. It takes a long time to fully get the feel for the flow and characteristics of every letter. So only time and practise will give you a good throwie. Im fully down to help with younger people trying to make throwups, even if it means just tweaking or simplifying there throwup a little bit, it can go along way....

i took you word and shortened it to SKAW, with your exact same letters, i tweaked the proportions a lil bit
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0123.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5985.jpg]

this one is a little more fun
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5984.jpg

answerrr
02-20-2009, 06:06 AM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_baf0cc85f602807e2e71ace8d5564a-1.jpg
brooklyn 2005
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_f8e8823fae4ec5328f8db6808c5c6a1a.jpg
thailand 2007
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_b9bf9dd1a0279e6d562946aff63309bd.jpg
San Fran 2004
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_7163a0cd9155e1440b38193bd7227aeb.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_17fc8049f40296f606200f53fabf9d-1.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_8a8dad6ac90aed69d8b79704bb13e88f.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_0eb5011e5a30c3ce2456956a3aabf4cf.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/ann3.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/1400555576_l.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/985995729_m.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_2687-1.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_ce70f808aec39ce4ab226cd4c02ba372.jpg

weakfingers
02-20-2009, 08:18 AM
Okay I'm like a fucking idiot.... I'm really sorry for what i said I dident know the ups you where getting. I'm just gonna stop talking because i fucked up huge...

what4joke...
02-20-2009, 08:45 AM
yo. dopest shit up there^ love the first one. and ur little faces.

calculating infinity
02-20-2009, 11:05 AM
Okay I'm like a fucking idiot.... I'm really sorry for what i said I dident know the ups you where getting. I'm just gonna stop talking because i fucked up huge...
the dude just gave you some real ass help man, suck that shit up and dont be embarrassed, this is the toys forum after all.

i cum bud
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3311/3270178710_9ec2974d8d.jpg?v=0
anybody gonna help a brother out and give me some advice on this?

milk boxx
02-20-2009, 12:57 PM
the dude just gave you some real ass help man, suck that shit up and dont be embarrassed, this is the toys forum after all.

i cum bud
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3311/3270178710_9ec2974d8d.jpg?v=0
anybody gonna help a brother out and give me some advice on this?
im feelin it, nice and clean

answerrr
02-20-2009, 01:08 PM
Okay I'm like a fucking idiot.... I'm really sorry for what i said I dident know the ups you where getting. I'm just gonna stop talking because i fucked up huge...


dont sweat it bro, no offense taken. The first throwie i posted was hella sloppy anyway

sallybsk
02-20-2009, 01:48 PM
Shit's hotter than my bathtub water.

piff12plus07pawz08
02-20-2009, 02:45 PM
Yessir im a girl
and iight

answerrr
02-20-2009, 02:54 PM
anybody gonna help a brother out and give me some advice on this?[/QUOTE]

yo this throwie is nice. It just needs to be simplified a lil bit. I think upper case E's are too busy usually to.

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/3270178710_9ec2974d8d.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5996.jpg

for POSEK
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/t1.jpg

FOR SHEK
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_1939.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5990.jpg


FOR PEOS- GOOD LETTERS, KEEP EM CLEAN
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/r926o2.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5993.jpg

FOR DOAP- NICE THROW, THE A NEEDS A LIL WORK, DO THEM NICE AND CLEAN IN BLACK SHARPIES FOR PRACTICE
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/3288004023_29288bfd64.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5992.jpg

FOR THIS GUY DOING MY 'S' .... DONT DO IT LOL
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/4qhll4.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5989.jpg

FOR SOOP- KEEP IT BUBBLY
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/soopthrowie2001.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5987.jpg

FOR PAWZ- DOPE THROWUP! ITS REALLY OLD SCHOOL LOOKING. JUST DO IT A LOT TILL YOU GET A GOOD FEELING FOR THE FLOW OF THE LINES, AND PROPOTIONS
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/t2.jpg

KAPO- HERES A BUBBLY BASE FOR A THROW TO WORK FROM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/l_2c906b7afde747078e83788d3362ef33.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5991.jpg

answerrr
02-20-2009, 03:00 PM
im not saying im the god of graffiti, but i have a fairly good understanding of throwup letters and proportions. If I have time, I'd be more than happy to help dudes with their throwies... older cats helped me when i was starting out, so its just the circle of life. I personally like throwups more than pieces. If your an amazing piecer, but you have bad tags or throwups you get no love... you gotta be well rounded in this game... or if your more into bombing, just focus on your throws and tags

calculating infinity
02-20-2009, 03:35 PM
thanks anser, youre a big help. its refreshing to see someone with real skills out trying to help out the newer generation of writers.

answerrr
02-20-2009, 03:43 PM
no worries. i like your throwup better than the one i did for you. the J needed a lil work, and the space between the A, but other than that it flows nice, and has a fun clean style to it

B.S. POLICE
02-20-2009, 05:16 PM
ansr hit me up if you wonna exchange

answerrr
02-20-2009, 05:18 PM
for my man sneke

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5999.jpg

Capo Izi
02-20-2009, 05:19 PM
Hey thanks answerr, but i've done many just bubble letter stuff for about a year and now I'm trying to move on to a different style, I've never seen anyone do drips off both sides like splattering off like I do, and so I'm trying to pull off a way like that. It's a style I've been working on, just wondering, thanks for the help again, but what is your thoats on the one i did....?

B.S. POLICE
02-20-2009, 05:22 PM
for my man sneke

http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_5999.jpg


weird that top s you crossed out looks like your best one imo

answerrr
02-20-2009, 05:23 PM
whats your name, we'll exchnage

B.S. POLICE
02-20-2009, 05:59 PM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2084/screencapture10qv0.png

answerrr
02-20-2009, 06:00 PM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6001.jpg

answerrr
02-20-2009, 06:00 PM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6005.jpg

Stussy
02-20-2009, 09:21 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2zxs5kx.jpg
Answer- shits dope... my boy was talking about your shit earlier today actually lol

BigBlueViolence
02-20-2009, 09:42 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/qp2tsk.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2lsts02.jpg
Yo ansr, I was just wondering what you thought about my shit, sloppiness aside

Rayz- I'm feelin it, but the R is really squished on the left side, throws it all off.

ghozt
02-20-2009, 10:11 PM
i think my throw belongs in hereee

http://i42.tinypic.com/sxn9rs.jpg



edit: no crits because i suck at giving them :/

Wallace
02-20-2009, 10:58 PM
big blue im really liking the style, its coming along nicely

ansr, your shits clean and pretty simple. keep at it

Zarb
02-21-2009, 02:59 PM
Still working on it but how is it so far?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/LASTO.jpg
Big Blue- What Wallace said
Stussy- Likin that

milk boxx
02-21-2009, 03:07 PM
ansr your a man... haha

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/PIC_0072.jpg
new kinda technical throw with dripps and accessories chigggguh
ill post new better shit soon, my E is fucked in all these flicks.
crits?

Fat4l_ONE
02-21-2009, 04:33 PM
i think my throw belongs in hereee

http://i42.tinypic.com/sxn9rs.jpg



edit: no crits because i suck at giving them :/
pretty good style IMO better than my plain overlapping bunbble throws

Mr.NiceGuy
02-21-2009, 05:34 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8511/pic0182.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/4420/pic0187.jpg

the outline is a little nonvisible cuz my marker was dying. crits welcome

(SoS)Viruz
02-21-2009, 07:09 PM
^^Thats not a Throwie. Learn for the other Examples

hpir
02-21-2009, 07:47 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2486.jpg
crits?

HRbN
02-21-2009, 09:33 PM
^^Thats not a Throwie. Learn for the other Examples

and its 80 feet tall and old poop colored.

hpir- your e is bunk and your other letters are meh.. is just seems really plain.try reworking your letters

Bearrr
02-22-2009, 12:16 AM
looks good not diggin the curved drips tho man,

Fat4l_ONE
02-22-2009, 01:33 AM
noticing alot of ppl throws are being kept to paper....well this was my 2nd throw i ever did. and yeah its the back of a barn.
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3124/2ndthrowie.th.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2ndthrowie.jpg)

Azul
02-22-2009, 06:24 AM
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/277/dsc00441ui2.jpg
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/4097/dsc00443ur5.jpg
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9809/dsc00444jq8.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5131/dsc00445la5.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/641/dsc00448ox7.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5518/dsc00449po9.jpg

Constructive criticism please!

Masta T
02-22-2009, 10:43 AM
answer - yo shit was tight man
azul- make all ur letter the same size, get more flow to it, needs work

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5802/001lkg.th.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=001lkg.jpg)

critz
and any ideas on wut to do wit the "k"?

Scheme*119
02-22-2009, 10:46 AM
what a generic name

Masta T
02-22-2009, 12:03 PM
not rlli. an evn so theres not many good writers who do the name so great job being a douche

Scheme*119
02-22-2009, 12:23 PM
whatever, lose the arrows and make that i into two parts

Zarb
02-22-2009, 12:43 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastotoss.jpg
Crits?
Azul- Make all your letters the same size

Wallace
02-22-2009, 01:55 PM
not rlli. an evn so theres not many good writers who do the name so great job being a douche

theres another sike on here that burns you, sorry kiddo

nice bite of snaps arrows also

Bink1
02-22-2009, 02:01 PM
theres another sike on here that burns you, sorry kiddo

nice bite of snaps arrows also

fucking word.

and btw masta your tag looks like huge horse dick.

provinT13
02-22-2009, 02:11 PM
First throwie ever. Used rusto with regular rusto caps

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/etek.jpg

any advice other then the gaps in the outline? I wanna try to make the T a bit more defined, it kinda looks like a square r

Sizzuurp
02-22-2009, 03:46 PM
all ur bars gotta be similar provin. the k is real outta proportion. u should practice sketchin ur e's more. they should be identical.

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5754/0222091635.jpg
should i keep it simple, or keep the 3D i think the 3d looks wacked out bit idk, crits

provinT13
02-22-2009, 03:53 PM
Yes I have lots of problems with my second E. I can never ever ever get it to be similar. Should I just sketch over and over and over or is there a certain style or technique when i'm doin my fill or the outline in my fill color that will help? And yes i'll work on the proportion. But I did finally get up, not in a visible area, but it was a crazy rush.

Any more crits?

Syke1FTP
02-22-2009, 05:09 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h7/alborzpiri666/throwie.jpg
yes no?

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 05:20 PM
go more simple. don't add all those lumps. just do like 4th grade bubble letters so to speak.

Syke1FTP
02-22-2009, 05:22 PM
go more simple. don't add all those lumps. just do like 4th grade bubble letters so to speak.

aight aight
ty your the first person on here that actually gave me advice =]
imma post a simp in a sec think you could let me know if im on the right track?

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 05:27 PM
of course

Syke1FTP
02-22-2009, 05:34 PM
http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h7/alborzpiri666/simp.jpg

k i did that right when i read your post but like something around there?

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 05:38 PM
try ur letters a little fatter. wait, i'll up a pic

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 05:43 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/349f56o.jpg

obviously it sucks cause i've never done it before. and my throwies aren't like that lol. but yea

Syke1FTP
02-22-2009, 05:46 PM
haha ya but i get the overall idea thanks man...your chill
if you need markers anytime hit me up and ill mail you some
i have 50 of each color(deco only prismas i only have 1 each) but ya
im nice to ppl that are nice to me...thanks again =]

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 05:47 PM
lmao hey thanks =]

Azul
02-22-2009, 06:22 PM
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/277/dsc00441ui2.jpg
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/4097/dsc00443ur5.jpg
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9809/dsc00444jq8.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5131/dsc00445la5.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/641/dsc00448ox7.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5518/dsc00449po9.jpg

Constructive criticism please!

What, make my letters the same size on all all of them? Some of them were kinda ment to have different sized letters.

Sizzuurp
02-22-2009, 06:27 PM
not when ur just starting out. keep it SIMPLE they should all be meant to be the same size

what4joke...
02-22-2009, 07:37 PM
he's right

Azul
02-23-2009, 01:41 AM
not when ur just starting out. keep it SIMPLE they should all be meant to be the same size

Ok I these are the same size I measured them lol
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/8093/f02231834yo0.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9946/f0223183401uq9.jpg
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/310/f02231835nj5.jpg
Any other advice? on letters etc.

answerrr
02-23-2009, 04:57 AM
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6087.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6088.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6089.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6090.jpg
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/IMG_6091.jpg

Fube
02-23-2009, 05:38 AM
i might have to bite that s answerrr (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/member.php?u=18677)

answerrr
02-23-2009, 03:38 PM
naw, the S, N, and lower case A are copyrighted

skull-e
02-23-2009, 03:42 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00123.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00122.jpg
Azule: Nice green and blue straight letter
Answerrrrr: you have wayyyy too much time on your hands

LeaksOne
02-23-2009, 03:43 PM
how sweet answerrr. you gave snap his own page. hot shit tho. that hoer is raw

answerrr
02-23-2009, 04:20 PM
Answerrrrr: you have wayyyy too much time on your hands[/QUOTE]

maybe if you dedicated some more time to graffiti, you wouldn't be posting in the toy forum.

Zarb
02-23-2009, 05:00 PM
Needs cleaning up but i like it so far. Crits to make it better?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0223091754.jpg

sike_21
02-23-2009, 05:24 PM
thinking about changing the name

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_99992.jpg

what4joke...
02-23-2009, 05:36 PM
i thought it said skoe. maybe work on h. and are you from mass dude?

Zarb
02-23-2009, 05:44 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0223091825.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-23-2009, 05:45 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00123.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00122.jpg

bump! good shit taser :p

what4joke...
02-23-2009, 05:46 PM
on the L make the bottom more round. change the ? in the o and your a, why two bottom bumps? i like the S and what lettters after that? maybe define that shit nice work tho

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-23-2009, 06:45 PM
shoe aka sike, i like the name not feeling the o
zarb- ur l is too chunky
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/psek.jpg
reads posek .. but i cant get a good o.. so i just took it out :P