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answerrr
02-23-2009, 08:15 PM
here ya go
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w159/04lmoney/t1.jpg

klic
02-23-2009, 08:40 PM
wanna make me a page homie?

ill put some tags up for you when i get the chance

do me up some sanek throwies, and what do you want me to write for you?

Scratch
02-23-2009, 09:13 PM
just some shit for people to critique and whatnot
wanted hear what people thought. says YAER by the way..

bouche!
http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/img0203194246_50c31f-2.jpg

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq68/slaphousekids/0102091233.jpg

sike_21
02-23-2009, 09:22 PM
i thought it said skoe. maybe work on h. and are you from mass dude?

nah RI

Syk X
02-23-2009, 10:29 PM
Scratch- to me it seems alittle to squished together. Its hard to make out the letters
Sike- The "h" looks alot like a K, but other than that its pretty dope

sike_21
02-23-2009, 11:57 PM
ahhhhhhh im keeping sike

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_00012.jpg

Syk X
02-24-2009, 12:06 AM
Yeah man, all three of those look sweet
like the drips.
what is WAN??

sike_21
02-24-2009, 12:11 AM
we are nocturnal

eyeneversleep
02-24-2009, 12:48 PM
Two letter toss...i write stank...crits please

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f284/fkn_fast/scan0001.jpg


sike-good stuff man

answer-thanks for saving this thread, good stuff bro

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-24-2009, 08:06 PM
eyes- letters too chunky
sike- nice dont know why u would wanna switch
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/possek.jpg
my p is chunky :(

mmmburgers
02-24-2009, 08:38 PM
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff286/mmmburgers/newTHROW.jpg
something i did today, still needs work. but meh

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-24-2009, 08:42 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/possek.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/psek.jpg
bump:P

DirtyDozen520
02-24-2009, 08:51 PM
^, the P is sort of chunky and the K is weird..but dnt take my crits seriously kuz im new myself

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02886.jpg

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02887.jpg

DirtyDozen520
02-24-2009, 09:13 PM
Sounds good, thanks for the help man

smooth_nuts
02-24-2009, 09:14 PM
Throwie battle callout.
word: Demigod

deadline: March 3rd.

rules: No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.

pm your entries to smooth_nuts

BigBlueViolence
02-24-2009, 10:29 PM
fuck that word, smooth.
I cant get past the I without it looking like shit.

eyeneversleep
02-25-2009, 09:52 AM
Two letter toss...i write stank...crits please

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f284/fkn_fast/scan0001.jpg


sike-good stuff man

answer-thanks for saving this thread, good stuff bro

bump

Zarb
02-25-2009, 03:30 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0225091018.jpg
Posek- I like it alot especially the k
eyeneversleep- Nice and simple I like it

Shamy
02-25-2009, 05:50 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9870/p00161.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p00161.jpg)
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/p00161.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img19/p00161.jpg/1/)

new name... i do know the H and the shading is off but meh.. any crits?

Worms
02-25-2009, 06:00 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG00046.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-25-2009, 06:49 PM
not feeling the s or t...too chunky!

Shamy
02-25-2009, 08:54 PM
worms i agree with thatguywhodrinkstea your T is a bit to fat

sike_21
02-25-2009, 08:59 PM
im pretty sure it an R not a t but for real worms were the sore simples go?

throwies!!!!!
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_00102.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_00092.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0012.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/101_0004.jpg

skull-e
02-25-2009, 08:59 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00122.jpg
Bump for crits
Worms: I really dig that E but fix the S
Zarb: Deff. fix that O

ANDRO
02-25-2009, 09:55 PM
looking for crits please!

sike, good stuff. keep the name!

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/6612/dsc0331vy2.jpg

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/5732/dsc0323oi9.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2812/dsc0338qf2.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3058/dsc0342zp7.jpg

sorry for the picture overload. but crit me! and yea, im a toy.. thats why im in the toy thread..

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-25-2009, 10:20 PM
anoro- ur very last throw i like and ur straight letter... but everything else sucks.. in all of them cept maybe ur straight u need a new r.. but its comming along..
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/0225092202.jpg

Worms
02-25-2009, 10:21 PM
[QUOTE=sike_21;1328602]im pretty sure it an R not a t but for real worms were the sore simples go?
QUOTE]


ill be droppin some soon,,,just been lazy and to cold latley

sike_21
02-25-2009, 11:35 PM
worms- i can understand that l0l i went out the other almost caught frostbite or atleast it felt like it
andro-deff got potential just define you letters some especially your d's cuz as of now they could pass as a o
posek- it looks straight exept for the k looks a little like ket's i personally dont care but if you trying to save yourself the grief of heads going over you i say change it up some besides it just sticks out compared to your other letters

B.S. POLICE
02-26-2009, 12:28 PM
Throwie battle callout.
word: Demigod

deadline: March 3rd.

rules: No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.

pm your entries to smooth_nuts

ya i got that...

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-26-2009, 05:28 PM
posek- it looks straight exept for the k looks a little like ket's i personally dont care but if you trying to save yourself the grief of heads going over you i say change it up some besides it just sticks out compared to your other letters

yeh i guess it looks like ket's k lol.. wasnt even trying to bite.. but meh i guess i should.. back to the drawing board -.-

denaaa
02-26-2009, 06:22 PM
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/dethrow1.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/debridgespot.jpg

somee throwws

Zarb
02-26-2009, 06:37 PM
Rae.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0226091825.jpg
Posek- Like it
Dena- I like the first one more
Worms- Basicly what everyone else said but its pretty nice

TastySesamcrew
02-26-2009, 06:51 PM
let's all post stupid comments so this page is done becouse it SUCKS TOTAL ASS!!
you kids bite every letter you see on BS and act like its all yours.

denaaa
02-26-2009, 07:20 PM
yoo if your talking about me the only letter i bit was the second e and it wasnt off anyone on bombingsciencee it was off my friend soo i dont know what yourr sayingg

Worms
02-26-2009, 07:39 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1734.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
02-26-2009, 07:42 PM
sore- make ur e less fat at the bottom and ur good myfriend :)

Five Sixx Ace
02-27-2009, 01:36 AM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0210.jpg



i started writing a few weeks ago. im high and drew this, its kinda a throwie and random handstyle/tag.

Blox
02-27-2009, 05:02 PM
De- Don't write De, Go to Victorias thread, BUT, it is looking alright, Get rid of the one line aspect of it, and take the E outa the D and it might look better,

denaaa
02-27-2009, 05:36 PM
loll thankss butt dont really matter whoever de is dosnt write near me and its just my 2 letter of denas

Bink1
02-27-2009, 06:00 PM
De- Don't write De, Go to Victorias thread, BUT, it is looking alright, Get rid of the one line aspect of it, and take the E outa the D and it might look better,

no its decent ,and there is loads of ppl writin same twoletterz, duh.

Capo Izi
02-27-2009, 07:15 PM
Went over this really toy piece thing...

trying to develop my "style"...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/45/l_3112c797cc184280bae374ad0c49e8e3.jpg

DirtyDozen520
02-27-2009, 07:30 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02913.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02914.jpg

Capo Izi: I'm really not the best at givin crits but I think the letters should be the same size as one another.

SKONE
02-27-2009, 07:38 PM
http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt211/sk0n3/Throwie1Marek.jpg

Iknow, sloppy.
Crits?

goober
02-27-2009, 10:00 PM
you should go more simple skone

bak
02-27-2009, 10:33 PM
good fill capo but the rest is...umm i dont like

Icons
02-27-2009, 10:52 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2z8yx79.jpg

HRbN
02-27-2009, 10:58 PM
worms - dont make your e so big like said above, and do the bottom of your S differently the s ruins it

icon try doing the second to last one (the blue n black one) with the c from the very bottom one.

DirtyDozen520
02-27-2009, 11:44 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02915.jpg

icon: i agree wit herb

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
02-28-2009, 01:12 AM
what do you think?http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0228090054.jpg?t=1235801367
Critz ploz and it says "Mistah. B, my fag friends source name

Icons
02-28-2009, 01:52 AM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/8158/picture003g.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/oit6dd.jpg
any better? just some quickies...

SKONE
02-28-2009, 02:44 AM
looking good man i'd fix up the n a bit...

Icons
02-28-2009, 02:46 AM
yeah im still trying to figure out what wrong with it... :(

SKONE
02-28-2009, 09:51 AM
maybe the bottom right half is too rounded and elongated try changing that

Aesir
02-28-2009, 10:21 AM
The right part overlaps the left part. It should be the other way around. Do you know what I mean?

goober
02-28-2009, 02:23 PM
icon fix up the n, and try drawing the bottem part of the n first so it doesnt overlap and see how it looks

capo nice fill, but you need to work on your can control and letter structure

sike_21
02-28-2009, 07:06 PM
proof-stop the swirls its wack
icon- idk its like i seen it somewere dont know tho
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0111.jpg

DirtyDozen520
02-28-2009, 10:37 PM
I colored the swirly thing and made two more, is it still bad??

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02917.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02918.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02916.jpg

Aesir
02-28-2009, 10:49 PM
icon fix up the n, and try drawing the bottem part of the n first so it doesnt overlap and see how it looks

capo nice fill, but you need to work on your can control and letter structure

^ essentially what I was trying to say

Icons
03-01-2009, 01:19 AM
^ essentially what I was trying to say

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6706/picture001p.jpg
tried that, still looks wrong dont ya think?



and dirty dozen, go simpler, i can't make out what the letters are.

goober
03-01-2009, 02:17 AM
it looks better just play around with it till it looks right

nine one
03-01-2009, 02:31 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2e19ct2.jpg

New name

crits n comments?

Icons
03-01-2009, 02:45 AM
^ lines are a bit shaky, try doing a better copy or something.

http://i43.tinypic.com/2jfkc1s.jpg

does that look alright? :(

Big Slippy
03-01-2009, 04:21 AM
Icon - dope e/o holes, but your N... Try using a lower case N,
instead of N use a n

SKONE
03-01-2009, 05:19 AM
[QUOTE=Icons;1330698]http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/6706/picture001p.jpg
tried that, still looks wrong dont ya think?


lightblue looks dope

Icons
03-01-2009, 05:43 AM
thanks
http://i39.tinypic.com/bg72pj.jpg

tried some lower case n's

Smore
03-01-2009, 06:07 AM
thanks
http://i39.tinypic.com/bg72pj.jpg

tried some lower case n's

Look's good.

Really want 2 see it with paint though.

Icons
03-01-2009, 06:34 AM
so you think im ready to start gettin up?

might go out soon...

goober
03-01-2009, 11:48 AM
the throwie is pulling together, much better then the first throwie i did and yes you may as well just go practice it somewhere and go big i renember when i first started i made a mistake of making it really small and it just makes it look terriable

DirtyDozen520
03-01-2009, 12:25 PM
so would this look wack on a wall??

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02916.jpg

sike_21
03-01-2009, 12:28 PM
yes it wouls get rid of all the swirls they are really wack

SKONE
03-01-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i613.photobucket.com/albums/tt211/sk0n3/Throwie1Marek.jpg

Iknow, sloppy.
Crits?

bumbididyump

smooth_nuts
03-01-2009, 03:45 PM
Toy Throwie battle callout.
word: Demigod
deadline: March 3rd.
rules: No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
pm your entries to smooth_nuts

TastySesamcrew
03-01-2009, 04:13 PM
everyone on this page and the one before needs work except for sike (nine and icon try to give the throwies more flow)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3320494622_9eb0f3cf39_o.jpg

yup I need work too. crits?

Shakespeare
03-01-2009, 06:21 PM
everyone on this page and the one before needs work except for sike (nine and icon try to give the throwies more flow)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3543/3320494622_9eb0f3cf39_o.jpg

yup I need work too. crits?

Its pleasing to the eye.

`SassAsaurus_ReXX`
03-01-2009, 06:53 PM
was lanning last night and ended up dead... a lot...(i suck ass at counter strike source) anyways some cunt slut asked me to tag her name and i had my labels and markers with me so i went to work. many crits peashttp://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss358/SassAsaurusReXX/0301091617.jpg?t=1235951143

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 07:01 PM
new to graff thread, check it out....please

mekosbc
03-01-2009, 07:09 PM
agreed^^^

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 07:55 PM
smooth should i enter taht demigod battle? i just dont know how toy is it you know what i mean? let me know if anyone that knows what their doing entered cause i dont wonna hog all the votes

ShaolinNy
03-01-2009, 08:20 PM
Need some help on a one letter S

http://i41.tinypic.com/25ggfm9.jpg


Crits please


Dirty-Cant really read it
tasty-Looks pretty good

Zarb
03-01-2009, 08:30 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0301091851.jpg

Sneak- definetly going in the right direction
Tasty- I like it

smooth_nuts
03-01-2009, 08:49 PM
smooth should i enter taht demigod battle? i just dont know how toy is it you know what i mean? let me know if anyone that knows what their doing entered cause i dont wonna hog all the votes
uhhh,i havent got anything really "good" yet :/

...but hows about this,i'll enter if you enter ;)

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 08:54 PM
ill show you mine if you show me yours....





mine is small and blue....




;)

smooth_nuts
03-01-2009, 09:00 PM
hahaha,i'll post something FOR THE BATTLE up in a second homie

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 09:21 PM
just pm me, ill pm you mine as soon as i figure out why my digital camera is freaking out

smooth_nuts
03-01-2009, 09:25 PM
bleh,im to lazy for pm's homie,here's my entre,i honestly don't like it :/
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture10663-2.jpg

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 09:28 PM
oh god dont invert that dude, as a non color blind person that knows the word i can berally read that

ESKiMO2
03-01-2009, 09:33 PM
Demigod? Only thing I had trouble with was the G. I thought it was a typical lower case A.

smooth_nuts
03-01-2009, 09:35 PM
....sep the dots in the top that makes it a g,a lower case g homie.

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 09:57 PM
http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/8265/screencapture5.png

Germer
03-01-2009, 10:17 PM
yo ohsnap somewone has to tell you,

progress fuck.

honestly i suggest you bite everything good you see (if you can be trusted to decide whats good and whats not) and from there, maybe develop an actually good style.

no beef i dont know you, but your style is not that great and i feel like shitty toys praise you and you think thats good enough. its not.

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 10:20 PM
i cant be trusted with annyytthiinggg and i rather suck than bite. maybe you should post something of yours that i can work with? pleeaaaasseeee??

.HATESONE.
03-01-2009, 10:21 PM
bleh,im to lazy for pm's homie,here's my entre,i honestly don't like it :/
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/new%20shit/Picture10663-2.jpg


i like it dude.good stuff.

Germer
03-01-2009, 10:24 PM
osnap - take a look around... im assuming you want to improve the throwies the most, because i see them alot more.
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/city/121/style/2

ShaolinNy
03-01-2009, 10:32 PM
Need some help on a one letter S

http://i41.tinypic.com/25ggfm9.jpg


Crits please


Dirty-Cant really read it
tasty-Looks pretty good

bump bottom of page


BS n Smooth sick as always

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 10:44 PM
osnap - take a look around... im assuming you want to improve the throwies the most, because i see them alot more.
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/city/121/style/2

nah thats not what i meant. i wanted to see why i (not trying to be all cocky here) should take you seriously. i like to think i have a pretty solid throw style, the progression is a bit slow but thats cause ive been practicing my piecing a lot more latelly the throws you see me post on here and in battles are pretty much just me picking up a marker and banging one out and submitting. as for the toy dick riding the polls are public and some (not all) of the people that vote for me are pretty solid writers, and i like to think they can tell the difference between whats wack and whats not.

.HATESONE.
03-01-2009, 10:46 PM
your letters arent original enough for you to rock a one letter throw homeboiiiii.just my opinion.i try rocking 2 letter throws sometimes but really its just cheating.


also B.S. im still down for that exchange if you are.....

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 10:53 PM
hell yeah im down, as a matter of fact ill actually bump you up to first place in the exchange line ive got going.






no homo. lol

.HATESONE.
03-01-2009, 11:00 PM
kewlio. yeah ill try to do it tonight or maybe tommorow.i got english tomorrow.cuz whu da fuk needz englush? not me,TAHTAS WHU.

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 11:00 PM
lol its looking like a snowday for me. im not sure though

Aesir
03-01-2009, 11:13 PM
http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/6154/1010528ej0.jpg

.........Fuck.

.HATESONE.
03-01-2009, 11:21 PM
lol its looking like a snowday for me. im not sure though

your fucked hahahahahahahaha.have fun.man i wish it would snow here more.i need to get a snow day.

shayk
03-01-2009, 11:22 PM
i like that alot aesir http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00157.jpg

Aesir
03-01-2009, 11:22 PM
Lol B.S. where you live? I'm in Central NJ and we're supposed to get at LEAST 6 inches. We have two already where I'm at.

EDIT: Thanks Shayk.

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 11:23 PM
new england man

Aesir
03-01-2009, 11:26 PM
Yea? Guess its the whole Northeast then :P

B.S. POLICE
03-01-2009, 11:30 PM
i like that

Germer
03-01-2009, 11:30 PM
yo that is the nicest so far. really nice first d. but i dunno the rules, is there not supposed to be an i?

BigBlueViolence
03-01-2009, 11:31 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/dmactg.jpg

Redone

Germer
03-01-2009, 11:32 PM
hahaha ive never seen that done before lol.

Zarb
03-01-2009, 11:35 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302090121.jpg
Can somebody help me out with what i need to fix with this?

Aesir
03-01-2009, 11:51 PM
I'm pretty mad that we all had essentially the same Idea for the DEMIGOD throwie.

Aesir
03-01-2009, 11:55 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/67/1010539pp5.jpg
Also, this is how the outside of my house looks already and its only been snowing for a little while.

smooth_nuts
03-02-2009, 12:13 AM
thats nothing dude...
anyway,
first vinyl
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3657/3321082873_f5e11d67ea.jpg
close up
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3594/3321912556_be1c18b554.jpg
edit*
anyone else think i should put painters tape over the toss and redo the background?
....cause i sure as fuck do.

Aesir
03-02-2009, 12:14 AM
Thats pretty "Dope" as the kids would say.

smooth_nuts
03-02-2009, 12:18 AM
HawHaw.

...thanks.

shayk
03-02-2009, 01:09 AM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00157-1.jpg
crits?

that is dope smooth

Zarb
03-02-2009, 01:35 AM
you need more flow in your letters

Bink1
03-02-2009, 08:10 AM
you need more flow in your letters

says ''Zarb'' - THE MASTER OF THROWS.

Zarb
03-02-2009, 09:23 AM
says ''Zarb'' - THE MASTER OF THROWS.
haha well you people get mad when some one wants crits for their work but doesent give ant crits out. But then you also get mad if that person giving the crits isnt good enough.... In the toy section?

Stussy
03-02-2009, 10:13 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2r5qoti.jpg
me and morek

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 10:24 AM
says ''Zarb'' - THE MASTER OF THROWS.

lawls...1 for the binkster..wow that sounded whack haha.

shayk
03-02-2009, 10:25 AM
lol the "hi mom" is a nice touch

ShaolinNy
03-02-2009, 11:20 AM
your letters arent original enough for you to rock a one letter throw homeboiiiii.just my opinion.i try rocking 2 letter throws sometimes but really its just cheating.


also B.S. im still down for that exchange if you are.....

Any suggestions for the S i really dont wanna change my name.


Here a one letter e i did,what u guys think


http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7821/eeeeeeeeeeeeeecz4.jpg


Stussy-thats fresh,stay up!
shayk n zarb-keep working you guys made improvements

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 11:24 AM
Any suggestions for the S i really dont wanna change my name.


Here a one letter e i did,what u guys think


http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7821/eeeeeeeeeeeeeecz4.jpg


Stussy-thats fresh,stay up!

ok now your biting....i know exactly who that it.thats gators e.i can give a link straight to the myspace page you bit that from.do you want it??? becuase i have it.and i know your not gator because i saw your other throw and your writes and that niggha burns the fuck out of you....

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 11:26 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/10dtt03.jpg

you kids...you cant fool the great hatester himself...never.

Bink1
03-02-2009, 11:53 AM
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/236/dsc06518.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06518.jpg) http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06518.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img230/dsc06518.jpg/1/)

my entry.

shayk
03-02-2009, 12:12 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00161.jpg

name change???? yes, no, maybe.

crits plz. oh yea that hand at the bottom is dope bink

Zarb
03-02-2009, 12:45 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302091230a.jpg

Paint Pot & Pussy
03-02-2009, 02:41 PM
shayk just try and keep the same width in all of your letters.. just my 2 sense :D

ShaolinNy
03-02-2009, 03:03 PM
ok now your biting....i know exactly who that it.thats gators e.i can give a link straight to the myspace page you bit that from.do you want it??? becuase i have it.and i know your not gator because i saw your other throw and your writes and that niggha burns the fuck out of you....

Sure.i bet he burns me but i never herd of gator in my life so post away

Zarb
03-02-2009, 03:17 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302091511.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302091230a.jpg

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 03:20 PM
Sure.i bet he burns me but i never herd of gator in my life so post away

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewProfile&friendID=229009542
the e's not their anymore but yeah.this is the guy you bit it from.not even a bite really more or less you just stole his pic and posted it as your own...

smooth_nuts
03-02-2009, 04:12 PM
shaolin-i swear i've seen that same e,same flick,posted on 12oz over a year ago...


anyway,bump the battle an my vinyl

Toy Throwie battle callout.
word: Demigod
deadline: March 3rd.
rules: No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
pm your entries to smooth_nuts
(i've seen alot of you post them in here,make sure you pm them to me!)

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3594/3321912556_be1c18b554.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 04:18 PM
you got my entry, right smoothie?

smooth_nuts
03-02-2009, 04:19 PM
yeah man,your good...

Bink1
03-02-2009, 04:33 PM
got my entry smooth?

smooth_nuts
03-02-2009, 04:40 PM
as long as you pm'd it to me,i have it....

Bink1
03-02-2009, 04:48 PM
now i do :D

niner1234
03-02-2009, 05:14 PM
what do you think

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/3395/0226090021a.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0226090021a.jpg)
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/0226090021a.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img15/0226090021a.jpg/1/)

Aesir
03-02-2009, 06:14 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4089/ghgfhfg.png (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ghgfhfg.png)

Stussy
03-02-2009, 06:19 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2r5qoti.jpg
me and morek

bumper

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 06:21 PM
Only digging the C on this
http://i39.tinypic.com/2n0sv2d.jpg

Rays- the only crit I'd give would be I'm not really diggin the placement of the hole on the R

niner1234
03-02-2009, 07:08 PM
http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/4089/ghgfhfg.png (http://img513.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ghgfhfg.png)

what the hell is that

Capo Izi
03-02-2009, 07:45 PM
Working on it....

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/9/l_6bcabda925db4cc89534fd0130a765d3.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/8/l_a5f022a4bc8a4a68a0eeba22bca101f6.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/52/l_7f9004a172144e9f8ff5dc17f57f3d16.jpg

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/46/l_bad2970fd9e443079085643faaf14c67.jpg

Crits?


Rayz-that shit is tight
Cres-your shits not bad, keep it up

.HATESONE.
03-02-2009, 08:30 PM
kapo-keep working on it....alot.

Aesir
03-02-2009, 08:46 PM
Its my suggestion for your throw done in paint. I'm not going to waste paper just to show you what I think you should do to improve your throw.

BigBlueViolence
03-02-2009, 09:01 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/e0ldv6.jpg

tried out a new style for my homeboy

tried it with my own name, didn't turn out so hot.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2mxoaok.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
03-02-2009, 09:54 PM
rayz- dope
dope- dope
big blue- like it but it looks messy in a way maybe just the style
kapo- shaping up.
cres- r and s are chunky.
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/poseks.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
03-02-2009, 10:00 PM
oh ok lol...
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/poseks.jpg
bump!

coldpizza
03-03-2009, 12:50 AM
Have not posted in a while. Trying to get my throw down. Any suggestions?

SONE.
03-03-2009, 12:52 AM
that looks good man, just needs to be cleaned up. focus on making it even, uniform hight all the way over. and try to keep the lumps the same curve

BigBlueViolence
03-03-2009, 12:53 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/e0ldv6.jpg

tried out a new style for my homeboy

tried it with my own name, didn't turn out so hot.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2mxoaok.jpg

Rump

SONE.
03-03-2009, 12:57 AM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090123_1.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090124_5.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-03-2009, 12:59 AM
I really like your G

I really dislike your R

coldpizza
03-03-2009, 01:11 AM
SONE - I like the first one better than the second one. I dont like the top of the second one.

SONE.
03-03-2009, 01:20 AM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090302_1.jpg

k'n1ve
03-03-2009, 02:52 AM
sone your shit is lookin dope

SONE.
03-03-2009, 03:01 AM
thanks guy.

Azul
03-03-2009, 06:16 AM
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/7846/dsc00423nm3.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/2706/dsc00415vo6.jpg

Crits please.

east.LCF
03-03-2009, 06:58 AM
your shadows/3d are all over the place. clean that up and those drips dont look smooth at all. focus on your letters first before tryin to knock out all the little extras around it. hit the black book for a while. congrats on gettin up but get your pieces polished home before you bust em out in public.

Zarb
03-03-2009, 03:26 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302091511.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0302091230a.jpg

Bump
crits please?

b0gus
03-03-2009, 04:33 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q220/scum11/P1020526.jpg

Blox
03-03-2009, 04:34 PM
Note-Vomit.
Rak-Stop doing so much fancy shit, Like Whats up with the Urine background man?
Your shadow is fucked, MORE SIMPLE!!!! Oh ya, and pick a fucking name haha.
Bogus-Don't bother with the whole "One line" Shit right now, Like your hand style AND your throw are all one lined.. Shit looks FUCKED UP man.
Why do three colours dude? Like get shit down before you go all "fancy". Even though that don't look fancy at all.

Stussy
03-03-2009, 04:38 PM
azul- dont write note

Blox
03-03-2009, 04:38 PM
Not to old but I left that hand style in the dust.
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k106/duckys1223/S6302116.jpg
Give some critz home DAWGS!!! haha.

coldpizza
03-03-2009, 04:44 PM
Rak- Try using an upper case R
http://i39.tinypic.com/29c07td.jpg

these might not be awesome but i think it would help your flow.

Blox
03-03-2009, 04:47 PM
An S with a butt?
What the fuck haha.

Zarb
03-03-2009, 05:03 PM
Rak-Stop doing so much fancy shit, Like Whats up with the Urine background man?
Your shadow is fucked, MORE SIMPLE!!!! Oh ya, and pick a fucking name haha.


haha ya ill hold off on the details but whats wrong with the shadow? and hows the letter structure?
Blox- I dont like the A or the N but I really like the E and the I and the L is nice too

coldpizza
03-03-2009, 11:41 PM
Doodled all day. Worked on the A and used a different N.
http://i44.tinypic.com/2yyxowk.jpg

Any improvement?

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 12:03 AM
are you trying to bite an 'A' from answer? lol?

F- make the bottom of the F less of just a circle, it looks fucking stupid, remember when you do a bar... its a BAR. I'm not saying it has to be a rectangle. It's just not correct to put it in the middle of the bottom of the letter as you did, try moving it to the left, it will still look ugly though, just less. it looks like a fucking puzzle piece or some shit

R- looks wayyyy better, keep playing around with it though, when you get better, your letters were make their own shape in throwies, don't even sketch, because when you're on paper, just try flowing. Just random shapes or some shit(nothing too ridiculous obviously) ALSO: Make your bars same size. the left of it looks skinnier than right. if you want to do the steez of the right looking bigger, make sure to bring it back, or just make a circle and play around with it at the bottom of the bar.

as I said for the A... is that a bite from answer? lulz? It's on paper though, either way, the A doesn't go with the rest of the letters. Bite a new one.

make the N more DEFINED as an N... specifically the fact that it's lowercase. that little part where you brought it back into the n(the half circle on the left), try making that go straight up, and not towards the right. You knawww I mean?

oxiclean
03-04-2009, 12:24 AM
Does it say Fran or eran?

KSFone
03-04-2009, 12:27 AM
Sooo I think this is my first post ever... CRITS PLEASE!

This one I like the dots, makes it kinda even I think...(i hate the E)
http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00719.jpg

This one I took the dots and made it even on both sides, better E here.
http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00720.jpg

Simple throw, no Idea what I was doing with the accents on it...
http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00721.jpg

Not sure could be a throw, showing some just simple blocks and such.
http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00722.jpg

And last but not least a more colorful and smoother throw, different F
http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00723.jpg

Yea that's it, CRITS PLEASE! Sorry if there's image problems or they're too big, thanks guys!

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 12:46 AM
you're right about the first E, drop it, the other Es look decent.
though you're OKAY at making letters. you always make your letters too shaky and/or make one bigger than the rest. Often it's your K or the bar coming off of the K... and your S.
Try consistency in the E and F... they both have two top extensions... that's just 1 bar away from being the same letter, so If they have some similarity I think it would look dope. That's just me. Because that's really what makes your style YOURS, not just random shapes, something that you can associate or identify is done by a certain writer.
Sometimes your extensions are too little, try making the letters a little less fat and a bit taller. Mix things up,

coldpizza
03-04-2009, 01:51 AM
Thanks for all the helpful advice. that wasnt an attempt at an Answer bite. I just did a few other A's and my friends who better at throws by leaps and bounds just told me no, so i was just trying. But thank you for all the help.
Also it's fran.

sallybsk
03-04-2009, 01:59 AM
aye aye, you're welcome. just remember to use it ;)

throwies are quite amazing and fun once you get them down. and you can play with letter structure in an abstract way also. but that's later on :D

Azul
03-04-2009, 03:25 AM
azul- dont write note
I don't my I posted it for my brother, I still write azule

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2676/f02231835uc0.jpg

skull-e
03-04-2009, 07:45 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture96.jpg

Azule: TRy making the top of your A flat so it matches the rest of your letters

and don't bother putting the drop shadow in yet, master your throw first

coldpizza
03-04-2009, 12:14 PM
Azule, your Z needs to flow a little better. Maybe make the bottom bar a little thicker. Also for the entire thing maybe try making all the edges a little softer.

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9972/mailgooglecomr.jpg


Fixed the F. Rounded the edges and move it back a little. Made it more F like. Kept the R. Changed the A and went with a capitol N.
Better?

Paser1
03-04-2009, 01:37 PM
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2830/photo60.jpg
New to the site need crits please.

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 01:41 PM
im digging everything but the a man, that little bulge on the right bottom bar, make it match hight wise with eh s bulge. and the line that goes up on the s cut taht in half its too long. and the line that goes horizontal throwugh the s, make it match with the line that goes through the e

ThatguywhodrinksTea
03-04-2009, 04:23 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/poseks.jpg
bump again :(

LeaksOne
03-04-2009, 04:28 PM
tea drinker that nice i like it
paser the p an e are alright but the as needs work
tasr thats solid except your sr is alot bigger then your ta an lose the crown

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff055.jpg
jus started sketchin again. nothin impressive. my e is ugly. eh crits?

B.S. POLICE
03-04-2009, 04:30 PM
pase you missed a shadow on the bottom of the e too homie

hpir
03-04-2009, 06:09 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2583.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2581.jpg
new name crits?

DirtyDozen520
03-04-2009, 06:35 PM
Kaw: I think you should define that 'K' a bit more.

Paser1
03-04-2009, 06:55 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8103/photo65d.jpg
Better -A- and -S- ??

yikes3
03-04-2009, 08:20 PM
whats up.. been lurking around BS for a while now, this is my first post. here are a couple fills that i've done in the past few days. looking for some crits and ways to improve and so forth. i have been playing around on paper for a while and this week picked up some cans and started practicing in a stairwell in my yard. any advice is appreciated.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3644/3329865380_ea544daecd.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3571/3329864888_4fa42f09e8.jpg?v=0

smooth_nuts
03-04-2009, 08:21 PM
toy throwbattle yall!


toy throwup battle callout
Word:novel
Deadline:March 6th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

Capo Izi
03-04-2009, 08:27 PM
workin on shit...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/31/l_9853a872612545ae8e535b4ccc46e8a2.jpg

Thatguywhodrinkstea- pretty damn sweet yo..

Azule-definitely work on it..

Crits?

Zarb
03-04-2009, 08:27 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0304092014.jpg
Crits?
Paser- Looks pretty solid.
Posek- Real nice

smooth_nuts
03-04-2009, 08:31 PM
toy throwup battle callout
Word:novel
Deadline:March 6th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

BigBlueViolence
03-04-2009, 09:27 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff055.jpg

I'm feeling the fuck out of this.

oxiclean
03-04-2009, 10:45 PM
As am I.

KSFone
03-05-2009, 12:42 AM
you're right about the first E, drop it, the other Es look decent.
though you're OKAY at making letters. you always make your letters too shaky and/or make one bigger than the rest. Often it's your K or the bar coming off of the K... and your S.
Try consistency in the E and F... they both have two top extensions... that's just 1 bar away from being the same letter, so If they have some similarity I think it would look dope. That's just me. Because that's really what makes your style YOURS, not just random shapes, something that you can associate or identify is done by a certain writer.
Sometimes your extensions are too little, try making the letters a little less fat and a bit taller. Mix things up,

Took your advice ( thanks again ) and here's the outcome...

http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00731.jpg

The pictures a little bright cause the flash was weird and i couldn't figure out how to turn it off, CRITS PLEASE!

LeaksOne
03-05-2009, 01:29 AM
oxiclean and bigblue thanks. i thought it wasnt that good but hey. whatevers clever. anybody think i need to work on anything? look 2 posts up to see the pic

B.S. POLICE
03-05-2009, 01:37 AM
yeah your t looks wack, try and tweak it around alil, also add some shadows

blunttokes
03-05-2009, 01:41 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0304092014.jpg
Crits?
Paser- Looks pretty solid.
Posek- Real nice


reminds me of sirone lol

LeaksOne
03-05-2009, 01:57 AM
yeah your t looks wack, try and tweak it around alil, also add some shadows

like how? i was jus tryna make it flow with the A an R. shadows will possibly be in the next sketch cuz i still need to work on my 3d

B.S. POLICE
03-05-2009, 02:09 AM
i think its the left going throug the a thats bothering me, try to take that line out but basically keep the same shape and see what happens

LeaksOne
03-05-2009, 02:20 AM
i think its the left going throug the a thats bothering me, try to take that line out but basically keep the same shape and see what happens

oh yea i jus did that so i could make the other side of the T. check back tomorrow. the line will be gone an i will have a shadow. i would do it now but if i go in my room im guna start playin video games an then its a wrap for the night.

Azul
03-05-2009, 03:19 AM
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/2677/dsc005061.jpg
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2371/dsc00509a.jpg
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1091/dsc00511.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9761/dsc00510j.jpg

skull-e
03-05-2009, 11:17 AM
tea drinker that nice i like it
paser the p an e are alright but the as needs work
tasr thats solid except your sr is alot bigger then your ta an lose the crown

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff055.jpg
jus started sketchin again. nothin impressive. my e is ugly. eh crits?

love it, just make G the more fluid

TastySesamcrew
03-05-2009, 11:37 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture96.jpg

Azule: TRy making the top of your A flat so it matches the rest of your letters

and don't bother putting the drop shadow in yet, master your throw first

shits fuckin sick, great style man.

RedEyes
03-05-2009, 02:39 PM
Tasty-use a light color to outline make that shit pop! n lose the bracelet.

LeaksOne
03-05-2009, 04:16 PM
love it, just make G the more fluid

how do you mean?

Zarb
03-05-2009, 04:23 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0305091609.jpg
Crits?
Azule- Keep working on it, getting better though
Grate- What everyone else said

skull-e
03-05-2009, 06:48 PM
how do you mean?

on the last corner going into the full 360, make it more rounded off.

LeaksOne
03-05-2009, 06:51 PM
on the last corner going into the full 360, make it more rounded off.

gotcha

Blox
03-05-2009, 08:01 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0305091609.jpg
Crits?
Azule- Keep working on it, getting better though
Grate- What everyone else said

Kid, I just wanna imform you that there is already a Raone, And your A looks like you are Biting the FUCK outa him, Go get some style, Pick a fucking name, get some history and stop posting every little idea you got.

smooth_nuts
03-05-2009, 08:06 PM
raone's not history,he's fresh,but he's not history,and i promise the only reason you've heard of him is because of the internet or you live where he lives...

although he did bite his a hard,i'll have to agree with you there



Edit!*

toy throwup battle callout
Word:novel
Deadline:March 6th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

Aesir
03-05-2009, 08:08 PM
That "a" blows dick anyway, if that's Raone's "a" he probably won't even admit it.

Blox
03-05-2009, 08:11 PM
Yo, Your right there man, Moderators get around hahah.
Lives a province over so,
But by history i ment like, gather history in general, Like to add some more style to your mind,

Zarb
03-05-2009, 10:33 PM
Well my cousin wrote ra one in the late 80's 90, he was from queens and he gave me that style and name so if your talking about him then I didn't really bite cause he wanted to help start me off so he gave me that

Paser1
03-06-2009, 01:31 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/7964/photo3m.jpg
Crits please

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 01:32 PM
noooo not the left hump of the bottom e but the right hump, the shadows have to be consistant man think about it

BigBlueViolence
03-06-2009, 01:35 PM
I would say drop throwies for a while and get that handy somewhat decent.

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 01:43 PM
fuck tags throws is where its at

BigBlueViolence
03-06-2009, 01:45 PM
I have to disagree with you homie.
You can't bust a throw on a lamppost or a mailbox,
and if you're smart you aren't doing fills midday.

Paser1
03-06-2009, 01:45 PM
yea my handstyle is garbage

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 01:56 PM
lol whoever said i was smart..

blunttokes
03-06-2009, 04:21 PM
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/6350/dscf1287.jpg (http://img4.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf1287.jpg)crits? thnx!



Yo, Your right there man, Moderators get around hahah.
Lives a province over so,
But by history i ment like, gather history in general, Like to add some more style to your mind,


hes a few provinces from u blox lol
hes one over from me if im correct

wind was so annoying today
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6196/dscf1272.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf1272.jpg)
crits? thnx!

expozay
03-06-2009, 04:49 PM
first attempt at a throwie

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3576/3333292685_f440abda7b_m.jpg
crits?

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 05:25 PM
too many overlapping lines


wayyyy to many

Zarb
03-06-2009, 05:31 PM
Wait so were you guys talking about raone from queens?

ShaolinNy
03-06-2009, 06:10 PM
I took a brake for awhile and came up with a new throw and i think im stickin with this one since it better then all my old ones,I just got to perfect it i guess

http://i41.tinypic.com/51yfpc.jpg

Crits Please?



Pacer-Not to bad make the A less fat and just fix the P and S a little
Expo-What police said
Blunt-I like the 1st one alot
Zarb-Find letter that go together.Isnt there an AR in ACC or is that raze

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 06:12 PM
the last one with the middles e would be mint, i remember your old throw. thats deff better

blunttokes
03-06-2009, 06:54 PM
Wait so were you guys talking about raone from queens?


dont worrie about it kid... raone is from where ever he wants to be.

blunttokes
03-06-2009, 06:59 PM
AHAHA http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/DSCF1219.jpgdid that near the end of 08 n came back today seen it n laughed so hard..
thnx snore... that was a wack bomb anyways :)

http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/DSCF1289.jpg
LOL

SONE.
03-06-2009, 07:08 PM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090306.jpg

..romero..
03-06-2009, 07:52 PM
no.id tone it down a bit...too wild for me man...



edit: I LOVE THE S MAN.

Paser1
03-06-2009, 07:58 PM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7523/photo7z.jpg

blue was a bad choice, crits please

Zarb
03-06-2009, 08:19 PM
Sone- That shits hot
Pase- I like it but maybe a lower case A would look better, just my opinion though

..romero..
03-06-2009, 08:21 PM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7523/photo7z.jpg

blue was a bad choice, crits please

the e and the p look eirily similar to B.S.'s stuff...

smooth_nuts
03-06-2009, 09:14 PM
sone-i liek it,i think maybe if you made the e the same size as the o and n and maybe threw a ! on the end,you'd have something fresh to work with,imo...


anyway,new battle...
toy throwup battle callout
Word:HipHop
Deadline:March 10th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

Gort
03-06-2009, 10:37 PM
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/36/l_b4e994c5520e48f6ad2984641702e594.jpg
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/2/l_abdaa47e1c2248ccb7820a1a98ec9214.png
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/26/l_d09263a1ea6e46ebb6296fc7b1ddee43.png

Just hitten the books. Other peoples of course. crits?

Sone i can see the steez kickin in but i think the big o thing on the S is sticking out a little to far.

B.S. POLICE
03-06-2009, 10:47 PM
the e and the p look eirily similar to B.S.'s stuff...

thats snap jr. son get with it lol


sone i actually like that

reef
03-06-2009, 10:54 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/28bshzc.jpg

tell me what i can do to make this any better.....ill throw something with more color up another time

and sorry for it being backwards, took it on my webcam

SONE.
03-07-2009, 01:43 AM
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7523/photo7z.jpg

blue was a bad choice, crits please

Word, it defiantly looks like ur lookin at OHSNAP's stuff for inspiration. i found the best way to learn throwies as to keep it as original as possible.

you should try doing the throw quick, instead of taking much time like a piece sketch.

ANDRO
03-07-2009, 06:04 AM
x-post from the sticker thread. crits on these throw ups please???

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/9035/yessss.png

ShaolinNy
03-07-2009, 05:02 PM
Kinda messed up the A n K
http://i40.tinypic.com/r7jh8w.jpg


Andro-I like the stickers but u have to make all your lines straight
Pace-What i crited the 1st time
Sone-Looks good just fix the N a little

SONE.
03-07-2009, 06:05 PM
word sneak, its comming along.just keep workin at it, clean it up. make it as uniform is size as possible.

sallybsk
03-07-2009, 06:06 PM
KESFFF
that's some real improvement :D hahaha
keep working, looking pretty good so far.

ANDRO
some clean simples.
your letters remind me of gumby... hahaha idk

GORT
I really dislike your T.. it's not really defined as a T... and your G looks like someone took a poop. Like half of the curves are really unnecessary.

PASE
I dislike your A and S... idk they just don't flow.

SNEAK
sometimes your E and A don't flow as well as the other letters... but they're decent. your K is a bit bigger than the rest, just something to look at.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 10:47 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/5cwx8j.jpg

what yall think?

ANDRO-work on that n dude..it looks,well not like a letter.

SNEAK-like it.

REEF-work on your letters before you try pullin that backwards shit man.especially that r man.the leg of it is funky.

so yeah....CRITS

if oyu havent figured it out im hates i just switched up my profile becuase i was getting tired of it.

Germer
03-07-2009, 10:52 PM
VERY nice a. keep the top parts of the h level with the rest of the throw and ill bury my soul in its vagina.

kthanks.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 11:11 PM
VERY nice a. keep the top parts of the h level with the rest of the throw and ill bury my soul in its vagina.

kthanks.

lolwut?

Germer
03-07-2009, 11:14 PM
you heard me.

..romero..
03-07-2009, 11:15 PM
that was probably the most random thing ive ever heard here ever.lol.but thats for the crits man ill work on it.

sallybsk
03-07-2009, 11:57 PM
I'd bury my cat in it's dad.
WAIT DAD. NO I DIDN'T MEAN IT.




... dad?

Germer
03-08-2009, 12:04 AM
you beat me haha.

B.S. POLICE
03-08-2009, 01:15 AM
pase is my little brother his not bitting hes style is just really influenced by me, let it go guys and give the kid some critts k?