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(SoS)Viruz
03-08-2009, 12:50 AM
Your Geeked LOL.

B.S. POLICE
03-08-2009, 01:02 AM
dont you fuck woth snap jr. niikkkkaaaa

LeaksOne
03-08-2009, 01:24 AM
sneak nice progress!
hate keep workin with that it has alot of potential

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff058.jpg
my shadow is horrible but i tried

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff057.jpg
two letter

crits??

B.S. POLICE
03-08-2009, 01:34 AM
feeling the two letter, note really the whole name

LeaksOne
03-08-2009, 01:44 AM
feeling the two letter, note really the whole name

damnit. what this time?

B.S. POLICE
03-08-2009, 01:46 AM
ate looks wack


specially the a and t

EST2007
03-08-2009, 01:49 AM
http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/SP_A0768low.jpg

LeaksOne
03-08-2009, 01:50 AM
there is no pleasing you. aight ill work on that. i agree my e is whack tho

..romero..
03-08-2009, 10:27 AM
leaks,dude....keeep that 2 letter throw.

Zarb
03-08-2009, 11:48 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ra2.jpg
Grate- I like the two letter
Sneak- Soo much improvment

majin_strach
03-08-2009, 11:48 AM
hmm...might aswell throw mine into the pot..

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0509.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0502.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0356.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0185.jpg

any crits appreciated =]

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 12:46 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ra2.jpg


change ur fuckin name you horrible uneducated pussy!

jokes but change ur fuckin name kid!


gyate... try fixin the A a bit.. n do like GT throws GY looks like gypsy's 2letter keep it up yo!



heres a raone for u http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/7599/raonesupe.png (http://img26.imageshack.us/my.php?image=raonesupe.png)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CA7DvbWy7bs dope track for you lil people!

majin_strach
03-08-2009, 12:49 PM
thats not directed at me?
is it?

Zarb
03-08-2009, 12:54 PM
Please just tell me where RA is from cause my cousin used to write RA one and he gave me RA 2 so if its not my cousin your talking about then I will change my name.

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 01:06 PM
u from canada?

and dont write ra2 if ur cousin writes ra1 n u paint wit him ahaha

Zarb
03-08-2009, 01:08 PM
no haha queens NY, hes big? cause i mean if hes just some average writer from a different country then I dont feel the need to change it but w.e Ill just add some more letters cause i like what Ive been doin so far.
Edit- hahah no hes like 30 so he doesent paint anymore

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 01:11 PM
Change ur style... your rippin his entire style apart.. and turning it into garbage...

jus keep drawing letters over n over...

Zarb
03-08-2009, 01:13 PM
alright well I had never heard of him before, maybe my cousin bit him,and he gave me that style so alright ill change it up...fuck

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 01:16 PM
no hard feelings but theres so many words letters etc u can use

Zarb
03-08-2009, 01:49 PM
yeah no problem bro

Apocalypse
03-08-2009, 02:57 PM
RA-good, but deff change your name
GS-that shit is DOPE
GY-keep the 2 letter, or work way more on the 5 letter..

can't decide on a new name...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/14/l_2dae50021c344003a306606a13f1b187.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/19/l_82cd1c6c7276469e9ac97b12bc72ed0c.jpg

crits?

NeVeR4O1
03-08-2009, 04:50 PM
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m47/bang2112/graff001-1.jpg

DirtyDozen520
03-08-2009, 05:48 PM
Apocalypse: I like the first more. I think the "a" could use more work?
NeVeR4O1: Nice, what is the last letter? L?
As, you can prolly tell, I'm not the best at givin crits
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02923.jpg

wpgtags
03-08-2009, 06:48 PM
hes a mod on this website, hes from canada, hes dope, and his balls are delicious

Apocalypse
03-08-2009, 06:55 PM
hes a mod on this website, hes from canada, hes dope, and his balls are delicious


.....who?

denaaa
03-08-2009, 07:34 PM
ages-starting out simplee thats good take off that extra outline thingg though

i know my forcefield iss shitt lol i was drunkk butt any other critss??
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/throwiieer.jpg

SONE.
03-08-2009, 07:39 PM
what is that, DE ?

Germer
03-08-2009, 07:47 PM
i think je

bak
03-08-2009, 07:51 PM
i think ae

denaaa
03-08-2009, 07:53 PM
nahh its de

denaaa
03-08-2009, 08:00 PM
lol i knoww jo i made thiss D before he startedd just writing jo instead of jom

Germer
03-08-2009, 08:04 PM
alright homie
i shouldnt have jumped to conclusions sorry about that.
what do you write then

denaaa
03-08-2009, 08:07 PM
haha its all good but if you compare my d to his j they look really differentt just the bottoms look the same i write denas that throw is de

DirtyDozen520
03-08-2009, 08:39 PM
De - It's nice..is that one of those 'one liner' things? i know that was a stupid question but im new
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02924.jpg
^does that look like a G?

Zase
03-08-2009, 08:48 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/23tqc6o.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-08-2009, 09:11 PM
I think that your Z and S would look better without the angles in them

Zase
03-08-2009, 09:18 PM
wouldnt that effect the ae? maybe making the angles in them lower idk
trows arent really my thing

blunttokes
03-08-2009, 10:32 PM
RA-good, but deff change your name
GS-that shit is DOPE
GY-keep the 2 letter, or work way more on the 5 letter..

can't decide on a new name...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/14/l_2dae50021c344003a306606a13f1b187.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/19/l_82cd1c6c7276469e9ac97b12bc72ed0c.jpg

crits?



horrible names....

and loose the stupid dr. thing.... dr.sex is the only doc in the game :P

shayk
03-08-2009, 10:37 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00173.jpg


crits?

Apocalypse
03-08-2009, 11:10 PM
horrible names....

and loose the stupid dr. thing.... dr.sex is the only doc in the game :P

Horrible? nah


I'm going with Warrior though, and ya I gotta hand it to ya, Dr.sex is the only ***** who can pull off the doc in this shit. I'm just too toy.


anyway here's a quickie...

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/20/l_30c49cc8d9194096888c95d672a924d3.jpg

Crits?


Shayk-that's....horrible...
Zase-not bad, maybe make em less vertical....more fat and short.

Five Sixx Ace
03-08-2009, 11:11 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0214.jpg

yeah i started a few weeks ago, i regret with the white in the letters but oh well. i never realized decos were so easy to rack.


shayk- idk why but the a dosent look right.

SONE.
03-08-2009, 11:21 PM
foer- stay off MR.wigglez or graffiti creator. only hurts you in the long run. go mad simple, if u just started. block letters man, time to learn structure.

smooth_nuts
03-08-2009, 11:22 PM
toy throwup battle callout
Word:HipHop
Deadline:March 10th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

Sizzuurp
03-08-2009, 11:26 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5975/0305091620.jpg

bump ZASE throw real nice

BigBlueViolence
03-08-2009, 11:29 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/dfislw.jpg

War- even out your letter size.

Sizzuurp
03-08-2009, 11:33 PM
big im diggin the top right one

Apocalypse
03-08-2009, 11:35 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/5975/0305091620.jpg

bump ZASE throw real nice

that shit is MEGA tight.....hard to understand your letters at first, but it just looks sick...

Sizzuurp
03-08-2009, 11:50 PM
it reads aNK . i kinda dont like uppercase with lower any ideas? i need to make the letters more similar too.

BigBlueViolence
03-08-2009, 11:55 PM
Ank, dude, I just think there is too much shit going on inside of it.
Simplify it a lot. A whole lot
it looks like nNn to me

KSFone
03-09-2009, 12:06 AM
hmm...might aswell throw mine into the pot..

http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0509.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0502.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0356.jpg
http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk188/majin_strach/IMG_0185.jpg

any crits appreciated =]

first one personally looks the best b/c you kept a consistant style throughout, on the others i didn't think so much but great work!

keep it up!

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 12:11 AM
gyate... try fixin the A a bit.. n do like GT throws GY looks like gypsy's 2letter keep it up yo!




GY-keep the 2 letter, or work way more on the 5 letter..


can someone please tell me who the hell gyate an gy are?? i definately write gRate. my two letter doesnt even look like a y.

edit: dont crit this but does this look like a y to anyone except these two guys???
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff057.jpg

Apocalypse
03-09-2009, 12:19 AM
can someone please tell me who the hell gyate an gy are?? i definately write gRate. my two letter doesnt even look like a y.

edit: dont crit this but does this look like a y to anyone except these two guys???
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/Graff057.jpg


Oh sorry man, maybe if you take the thing on the right of the r and like point it downwards more it'll look more r-ish, it just seemed to look like a y....

BigBlueViolence
03-09-2009, 12:21 AM
haha, looks like an R to me, homie,
and I still think it looks dope as hell.

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 12:27 AM
haha, looks like an R to me, homie,
and I still think it looks dope as hell.

haha thanks. everyones tellin me keep this an work on my full name more cuz the ATE is slackin

BigBlueViolence
03-09-2009, 12:37 AM
The T and E kind of are, but I dig the A

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 12:47 AM
The T and E kind of are, but I dig the A

eh... the T is coo but i hate my E an the A could probably be improved. i jus need some ideas of how to change em cuz i wana make a full throw from my 2 letters

NouveauP
03-09-2009, 01:01 AM
Trying out a new throw. Crits?
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/throw.jpg

smooth_nuts
03-09-2009, 01:02 AM
haha, looks like an R to me, homie,
and I still think it looks dope as hell.
lookes like gt to me man...

sallybsk
03-09-2009, 01:37 AM
JAEP
can control looks shaky to me,
work on that.

to pull that style off the most i think you need that shit to be CLEAN
so kind of opposite of what you want.

snooot
03-09-2009, 02:13 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/eb4olz.jpg

post crits???

sallybsk
03-09-2009, 02:49 AM
make the bottom portion of your S come back into the s some more. make it somewhat similar to the top part, it looks like you did a normal S, than like cut it with the shadow.
No good.

The HUGEE space in the O stands out, it grabs the person's attention and doesn't let it go, fix that shit.
Your N is mediocre, keep playing around with that shit.
Your T is barely mediocre, you don't have to show both sides of the bottom bar, you know what I mean? Like each letter overlaps the next. but the O doesn't overlap the T as much, make it overlap moree. NEXT

snooot
03-09-2009, 03:07 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/1zq35av.jpg

hows that

PAN1K
03-09-2009, 05:56 AM
Sizzuurp - that throwie is badass

skull-e
03-09-2009, 07:07 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/1zq35av.jpg

hows that

http://www.earsnot.org/earsnot.jpg

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 01:24 PM
http://www.earsnot.org/earsnot.jpg

i was thinkin that same thing. even if you only write snot earsnot writes ear and snot alot so i duno if you wana write that

smooth_nuts
03-09-2009, 04:39 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3622/3342575068_7765f59111.jpg
possibly a side name...droga,means dope in italian,idkthough,i dont really like this one,but it's my first try with the word,soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....

edit*
toy throwup battle callout
Word:HipHop
Deadline:March 10th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

Germer
03-09-2009, 04:46 PM
nice letters.

B.S. POLICE
03-09-2009, 04:51 PM
gheeeyyyyyy

smooth_nuts
03-09-2009, 05:29 PM
nice letters.

your sarcasm does not amuse me.

Germer
03-09-2009, 05:31 PM
its not sarcasmmm. haha its hard to make it seem like im not sarcastic now that you read it like that. but ya i was being genuine.

oxiclean
03-09-2009, 05:32 PM
smooth, i like it. I think it looks better without the colors reversed though.

Zase
03-09-2009, 06:01 PM
wow quite active thread
i like the ank throw it looks phat
just cant really spot the first A
maybe make it summulair to the K that u will have a higercase A

DirtyDozen520
03-09-2009, 06:50 PM
I think the 'A' looks sorta weird, smooth. And I dont like the whole inverted thing, but thats just me..

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02925.jpg

I feel that i sorta fucked up on the 'e' but ahh

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 06:55 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02925.jpg

I feel that i sorta fucked up on the 'e' but ahh

really? just the e???? i think you need the new to graff thread. asap

snooot
03-09-2009, 07:00 PM
i was thinkin that same thing. even if you only write snot earsnot writes ear and snot alot so i duno if you wana write that

ye i watched infamy yesterday i cant be bothered to change my name but cause ive been writing for snot a bit and hadnt even heard of ear snot till yesterday + i live in australia and theres no ear snots here

DirtyDozen520
03-09-2009, 07:00 PM
is it kuz its not all the same size?

LeaksOne
03-09-2009, 07:07 PM
ye i watched infamy the other day i cant be bothered to change my name but + i live in australia and theres no ear snots here

oh ok i guess thats fair


is it kuz its not all the same size?

no its cuz it doesnt look good. write straight letters cuz that curvy look isnt workin. did you write that with a flowpen type nib?

DirtyDozen520
03-09-2009, 07:58 PM
K, I understand what your sayin, and naw..it was just a.idk normal marker?

shayk
03-09-2009, 08:45 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00174.jpg

Fube
03-09-2009, 09:08 PM
spots open for the battle royale.

last chance to get in.

check the toy battle forum for details.


Fube.

snooot
03-09-2009, 09:08 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00174.jpg

the y would be beter if it didnt get so thin what do u think of mine http://i43.tinypic.com/y2a1d.jpg

shayk
03-09-2009, 09:25 PM
i dont realy like giving crits because im not good at all. but i like the n its nice but your s needs some work make it the same size as the rest of the throw i also would leave the o empty keep workin tho and ill do the same

BigBlueViolence
03-09-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/dfislw.jpg

War- even out your letter size.
http://athens.activote.com/files/imagecache/blog_image/files/victory-bump-sac1105cd.jpg

ESKiMO2
03-09-2009, 09:33 PM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/8930/honeyoftheeskimo.jpg

I'm not very experienced with throws but I think I got the flow down. The K didn't come out as I wanted it to.

Sizzuurp
03-09-2009, 09:40 PM
ur style is the illest eskimo. i like ur pieces better than ur throws though. its still hot but it could use some messin around with, im not likin the k or the spike in the i

B.S. POLICE
03-09-2009, 10:49 PM
im actually digging that throw a lot man, good job

wpgtags
03-09-2009, 10:59 PM
stop making the lines so erratic and calm the fuck down with the lines inside the letters, make it all round, that spike in the i is gay

Sizzuurp
03-09-2009, 11:02 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/23tqc6o.jpg

bump this

your dad
03-09-2009, 11:59 PM
thats hot zase, paint it.

some bullshit with highlighters
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8459/sethrowinvertedcolors.png

sallybsk
03-10-2009, 12:07 AM
YOUR DAD
dead space.
looks gheyyyyy
wtf is up with the floating bar above the E?

doesn't flow, like a throw should flow, you know?
holy fuck, I'm a god damn emcee.

your dad
03-10-2009, 12:10 AM
i write s

KSFone
03-10-2009, 12:14 AM
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/8930/honeyoftheeskimo.jpg

I'm not very experienced with throws but I think I got the flow down. The K didn't come out as I wanted it to.

that looks sick man keep it up!

k'n1ve
03-10-2009, 12:51 AM
yeah Zase and eskimo both of yours look dope...

Jonny Go Steady
03-10-2009, 01:13 AM
zase, nice man. i love the a, not too much the s. i cant recommend what to do with it though, sorry.

lyonssb321
03-10-2009, 02:03 AM
ya i write SIN. this was about 3-4 months ago. i think i have improved a lil since then
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/IMG00016.jpg?t=1236668441

SONE.
03-10-2009, 02:13 AM
thats hot zase, paint it.

some bullshit with highlighters
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/8459/sethrowinvertedcolors.png
lmao i do SE throwies aswell.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/untitleddd.jpg

Sin- stick to paper man. i don wanna hate, but that throw is garbage. work your stuff out in the books before you hit the streets.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090306.jpg
Ive finally fixed this one!
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090310.jpg

lyonssb321
03-10-2009, 02:29 AM
Now what do you think of these?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1647.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1648.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF1570.jpg

SONE.
03-10-2009, 02:33 AM
sin youre getting way ahead of yourself. check out the "new to graff" thread.

lyonssb321
03-10-2009, 02:48 AM
sone, you think its an "ok" start for someone whos been writing for about 6 months....

SONE.
03-10-2009, 03:10 AM
probably not. youre about where i was 6 months in. but i was going about it with no guidence. just doin what your doing. on bombing science people help out alot, and 6 months on bs would make you wayyyy better than what you are now. keep at it.

lyonssb321
03-10-2009, 03:20 AM
ok thanks man.
but what do you think that i should work on the most/first.

SONE.
03-10-2009, 03:30 AM
all in the "new to graff" thread. letter structure, bars, keeping it simple as fuck

Bink1
03-10-2009, 09:16 AM
lmao i do SE throwies aswell.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/untitleddd.jpg

Sin- stick to paper man. i don wanna hate, but that throw is garbage. work your stuff out in the books before you hit the streets.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090306.jpg
Ive finally fixed this one!
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090310.jpg

there are loads of ppl doin that throw coz its easy as fuck, i mean SE.

SONE.
03-10-2009, 12:49 PM
HM. w.e ive never seen anyone do it like me,

DoMakeSayThink
03-10-2009, 01:18 PM
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02754.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02749.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02748.jpg

Sizzuurp
03-10-2009, 01:28 PM
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/02252009102237011.JPG

the dood far left kills it in NJ with his SE throws. this ones nice but hes got more real real clean ones

SONE.
03-10-2009, 01:45 PM
well good im in a different country and a different coast.

Bink1
03-10-2009, 02:24 PM
HM. w.e ive never seen anyone do it like me,

im not saying that your bitting someone , just ppl doing these throws coz i think S and E are the easiest and most fuked throw letters. :eek:

capy
03-10-2009, 02:57 PM
here's a quick throwie with my new name tell me what you think
http://i688.photobucket.com/albums/vv247/kingz_07/DSC000581.jpg

provinT13
03-10-2009, 03:08 PM
First throwie after 2 weeks of writing

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/etenthrowie.jpg

And no I didn't paint over someone, that spot was already buffed. And since it was day time I was too worried about someone seeing me so I didn't do a fill or anything.

I think I should throw a little line below the lip of the first e to complete the T, so the top of the T is sticking into the stem like on the right.

LeaksOne
03-10-2009, 03:58 PM
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02754.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02749.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02748.jpg

what does this even say?? pots? pors?

shayk
03-10-2009, 03:59 PM
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00179.jpg

to high to give crits sry

and hears a one letter i tryed


http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00180.jpg

Black Flag
03-10-2009, 04:01 PM
what does this even say??


edit: my bad it says oops.

LeaksOne
03-10-2009, 04:03 PM
edit: my bad it says oops.

no that first letter wont pass for anything but a p for me. cuz the little thing on the bottom

Black Flag
03-10-2009, 04:05 PM
no that first letter wont pass for anything but a p for me. cuz the little thing on the bottom

look at the tag under the first throw.

shayk
03-10-2009, 04:13 PM
can some one say battle things are heating up

HRbN
03-10-2009, 04:27 PM
capy - your K is oogly

provin - you are in much need of style.

shayk- also in much need of style although your letter arent bad, its a start. keep at it but stay away from the snake snail one letter thing lol

BigBlueViolence
03-10-2009, 04:33 PM
look at the tag under the first throw.
The throwie and handstyle both look like they Cops.

HRbN
03-10-2009, 04:35 PM
especially on that fiirst flick. popo be catchin tags hah

Germer
03-10-2009, 04:35 PM
look at the tag under the first throw.

clearly says cops but why would he make that up? dunno people are wierd.

LeaksOne
03-10-2009, 04:37 PM
it didnt look like it said cops to me but i guess. it needs ALOT of work cuz the c an p is hideous

einsamkeit
03-10-2009, 04:51 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3400/3340964992_6299cda963.jpg
meep meep.

BigBlueViolence
03-10-2009, 04:53 PM
The middle of the M is a little goofy looking, but pretty straight overall
http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/muppet/images/thumb/d/d4/Beaker_and_Wacky_WallWalkers.jpg/300px-Beaker_and_Wacky_WallWalkers.jpg

sallybsk
03-10-2009, 07:31 PM
I read it as "cops", HMMM that's just me. or maybe POTS.


MEEP,
your name is fun to say, MEEP MEEP
Your M is a little off, but it's refreshing to see something new. your E is too normal and bland(for a throwie), I've might have seen that E more times than my own dick. And don't make your P bigger than the rest! woop.

provinT13
03-10-2009, 08:09 PM
provin - you are in much need of style.

I know, i'm gonna start trying more in my blackbook, but I wanted to keep it simple, and try to get my letters the same size and width, and it looks ok from that aspect, i'll be looking at some bubbly throwies to get some inspiration.

skull-e
03-10-2009, 08:10 PM
What looks like cops?

LeaksOne
03-10-2009, 09:10 PM
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02754.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02749.jpg

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/DSC02748.jpg

there you go skull

milk boxx
03-10-2009, 09:57 PM
what does this even say?? pots? pors?


it says Cors

milk boxx
03-10-2009, 10:25 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC02075.jpg
crits on my 2 letter?


I know cors ^

Wallace
03-10-2009, 10:30 PM
lookin good, put it up

SONE.
03-10-2009, 11:14 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3400/3340964992_6299cda963.jpg
meep meep.

Meep, beautiful. fantastic word haha. but the M does need work on the bottom, doesnt look right :/

skull-e
03-10-2009, 11:18 PM
Leaks: thanks ._.

BigBlueViolence
03-10-2009, 11:30 PM
Milk- fucking niiiiice M.

provinT13
03-10-2009, 11:32 PM
I finally got a bit of inspiration and tried a bubbly style, first attempt so advice is really appreciated (i'll fix the second e so lines aren't showing)

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0856.jpg

SONE.
03-10-2009, 11:51 PM
ive youre going for bubbly you should round out the T more. and that N need serious work. the bottom legs are too stubby.

oxiclean
03-10-2009, 11:52 PM
i really like the t.

BIGdreamSCHEME
03-10-2009, 11:54 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image140.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image145.jpg

milk boxx
03-11-2009, 12:04 AM
veser, work on those letters in the book a bit more homie..
that looks like a dope place to paint though
and thanks big blue!

provinT13
03-11-2009, 12:30 AM
ive youre going for bubbly you should round out the T more. and that N need serious work. the bottom legs are too stubby.

yup I cracked open my black book and rounded the t, and cleaned up some of the dead space, pics tomorrow. Like I said it took me about 20 seconds to draw that one. Thanks for the crits

shayk
03-11-2009, 12:40 AM
damn milk boxx that shits nice



http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00183.jpg




crits?

provinT13
03-11-2009, 12:44 AM
what's up with the line on the a going into the h?

shayk
03-11-2009, 12:47 AM
i dont know just thought it gave it a lil more style and it makes it easyer to tell its an a but thats just me

SONE.
03-11-2009, 12:49 AM
drop the black space in the K. no other letter has it. make it just a line coming up and over.

smooth_nuts
03-11-2009, 12:52 AM
toy throwup battle callout
Word:Evil
Deadline:March 15th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

pm your entries to smooth_nuts

shayk
03-11-2009, 12:56 AM
werd i know what you mean s one

snooot
03-11-2009, 02:00 AM
http://i41.tinypic.com/f07vyt.jpg

sallybsk
03-11-2009, 08:00 AM
SNOT
you didn't take my crits man, except for the overlapping part.
LOSE THE HUGE HOLE IN YOUR O
THE BAR THAT CURVES BACK INTO YOUR S ON THE BOTTOM LOOKS LIKE A TUMOR, fix that shit.
your N is ew, but it's better than all the other letters? So just try out different letters if you'd like.

Bink1
03-11-2009, 09:53 AM
it says Cors

why tag is cops?
and if its a R , thats definetly looks not like one , more like T,P.

ShaolinNy
03-11-2009, 10:36 AM
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/02252009102237011.JPG

the dood far left kills it in NJ with his SE throws. this ones nice but hes got more real real clean ones


that se is from ma hood SI but i guess he got ups in NJ if u seen him,that pic of se omit and reph is in front of the movies i chill at

milk boxx
03-11-2009, 10:50 AM
why tag is cops?
and if its a R , thats definetly looks not like one , more like T,P.

he did a capital R that he usually never does and i guess he fucked it up and it went with the S so it looks like COPS not CORS

Sizzuurp
03-11-2009, 12:22 PM
snot- the bottom of ur s is lookn weird and the tops of ur n are kinda lookin pointy.
shayk. the bottoms of the AYK in the throw are all shorter than the first 2 letters. work on proportioning. sometimes i take a ruler and make 2 parallel lines and fit my letters inbetween em. practice that a lot and ull start to see em even out when u free hand it.

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/553/03110912532.jpg
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/3414/03110912542.jpg

snooot
03-11-2009, 05:35 PM
yeah i dont get how to close off the s without making that thing come out

milk boxx
03-11-2009, 06:38 PM
shayk - i say you take that dead space in the K away, maybe round your letters a bit more, but yeah its lookin pretty good
snot - change the S and take the big hole out of the O and change the T so it is more compact and doesnt look like an R
sizuuurp - they're good but they could look better, loose some of the huge bubbles and swirls

ShaolinNy
03-11-2009, 06:42 PM
Eh kinda sketchy.Crits please!!Any tips for shadow?

http://i39.tinypic.com/b8jtxc.jpg





Sizz-Shits tight,Just kinda hard to see what your name is
shayk-Make your letters more even/level
Snot-take advice given above

blunine
03-11-2009, 07:47 PM
crits pls
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j291/T-Murch/irony015.jpg

Facedorateur
03-11-2009, 08:51 PM
abstract?

Genghis Tron.
03-11-2009, 09:28 PM
i'm in need of a throwup, so bad. I just need a throwy L, anyone wanna do it up for me? just an L.

shayk
03-11-2009, 10:21 PM
im pretty shur your gona have to do it your self. not to come off as an ass hole or any thing

SONE.
03-11-2009, 10:22 PM
i'm in need of a throwup, so bad. I just need a throwy L, anyone wanna do it up for me? just an L.

im gunna come off like an asshole. DONT FUCKING ASK PEOPLE TO MAKE YOUR SHIT FOR YOU. SUCK IT UP AND DO IT YOURSELF YOU LAZY FUCK.

coldpizza
03-11-2009, 10:23 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/16a3bz6.jpg
Crits?
=3

SONE.
03-11-2009, 10:24 PM
did you fuck her after?
and the N is too big on the top left. and the F is too blocky for the rest of the word.

Apocalypse
03-11-2009, 10:25 PM
Sneak-That shit is mad tight
Sizzuurup-I still can barely tell what those letters are..


http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/32/l_97abc3a3620245a78e765268ce45e9ee.jpg

Crits?

TaxThis
03-12-2009, 12:01 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/CREAMTHROWIE.jpg

old cream throwie for a toy battle alonnnnnnnggggg time ago the dumbass mod wouldnt accept it cuz it didnt say "cream"
lol. I DONT WRIGHT SONE ANY MORE!!!

Sizzuurp
03-12-2009, 01:03 AM
it reads aNK. but everyone else has a hard time readin it too. i think i gotta scrap it and start somethin new >.<

shayk
03-12-2009, 07:10 AM
as far as i can tell you have some sick style sizzuurp. i cant wait to see what the next one is gona look like.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00191.jpg


crits?

ShaolinNy
03-12-2009, 08:03 AM
Eh kinda sketchy.Crits please!!Any tips for shadow?

http://i39.tinypic.com/b8jtxc.jpg





Sizz-Shits tight,Just kinda hard to see what your name is
shayk-Make your letters more even/level
Snot-take advice given above

bump,crits plz!

Sizzuurp
03-12-2009, 10:36 AM
shaolin- im not feelin ur handstyle but i like the style of the throw. what i used to do to practice shadows was i would cut out my throw and then just move it around on the cutout. any part thats cut out is the shadow and just look at it like that to see the dimensions of how u wana place the shadow. make sure the tops of ur letters are all aligned with one another. the bubble on the bottom right of the n should be the same size as the other bubbles and u should try another e out. when this is finished i think its gonna look hot

shayk- you are definitely starting to really develop ur own throw style and its comin along nicely. ur handstyle on the other hand is lookin shaky >.< i think u shoulod make the circle on the A a little smaller and round it out a little more. maybe make the extensions in the middle of all of the letters drop a little higher, to leave u more room for the circle of the a

shayk
03-12-2009, 10:51 AM
thanks man most of my shit on papper looks grose because my hands are mad shakey thats why i wright shake ha but i couldint help but paint last night and it came out beautyful

SONE.
03-12-2009, 10:53 AM
wrd sneak! lose the faces.

Blox
03-12-2009, 10:57 AM
Yo sneak, Wasn't that shit JUST on the last page?
I don't think anyone wants to see the same half bitten shit and haggard ass faces on every page. You got the critz you need now fuck off with it, Sketch something else if you wanna post a new picture, Don't just bump all your shit.

milk boxx
03-12-2009, 02:38 PM
sneak - i would say add that little circle thing in the middle of your letters to the E in the middle too. and take that little notch on the side of the K away. im not really feelin the notch on the S either maybe just round those off, and take off the faces. For shadow, just pretend your throw on the paper twice but one is moved slightly to the side and down and then draw the shadow, yours is way off.

ShaolinNy
03-12-2009, 04:45 PM
Ok thx guys for the crits ill work on it.Although i like my face on the A..Milkbox im not sure if i can do the ball thing with the E.I messed up the e there any way so ill just fix it up.



Yo sneak, Wasn't that shit JUST on the last page?
I don't think anyone wants to see the same half bitten shit and haggard ass faces on every page. You got the critz you need now fuck off with it, Sketch something else if you wanna post a new picture, Don't just bump all your shit.

Half bitten WTF are u sayin i didnt bite any one.Um i only got like 1or2 crits before the BUMP u piece of shit.You obviously have no clue what you are saying and your throw is shit compared to mine.No one likes you so just get off these fourms...Mods ban this worthless fag look through all of his post all he does is rag on people that dont even start with him.Stay the fuck out my buissness

Reap
03-12-2009, 05:00 PM
shayk- looks pretty tight taxthis-
pretty simple but good
war- cool style, nice

mine.
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/2016/sdc11265.jpg (http://img22.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sdc11265.jpg)

Stel254
03-12-2009, 05:02 PM
http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff97/jbang2112/graff002-1.jpg
Was in school....Very bored..In my agenda.

LeaksOne
03-12-2009, 05:11 PM
i'm in need of a throwup, so bad. I just need a throwy L, anyone wanna do it up for me? just an L.
old bump

if you dont kno how to do a throwie L then change your word an dont ask us to baby you.

edit: reap change your style thats not workin
stel lose the arrows especially the random one comin out your S

sallybsk
03-12-2009, 05:44 PM
my favorite quote... "GRAFFITI IS NOT ARROWS"
i'm going to come off as an asshole.

but everyone on this page should learn how to fucking keep their shit simpler, learn letter structure, keep parts of your letters the same fucking size. and stop trying to make complicated shit, you're going to have to learn.

Reap
03-12-2009, 05:44 PM
well thanks for being honest. lol

well good thing i had a different style, ignore my shadowing, its shit.
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/7784/sdc11272.jpg (http://img17.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sdc11272.jpg)

sallybsk
03-12-2009, 06:08 PM
I don't like the pointy style... idk. have you just tried using bars?
think about letter structure.
like why does the bar of your P have to come out at the bototm. and the left side of your r is fucking huge compared to the rest.
and your shadow is horrible. just don't worry about shadow.

LeaksOne
03-12-2009, 06:10 PM
lose the curl in your R E an P an if your guna do your A like that connect the "T" lines in it at least. still kinda ugly tho

LeaksOne
03-12-2009, 06:22 PM
do that again but dont make it a one liner cuz it looks pretty damn nice

sallybsk
03-12-2009, 06:28 PM
lose the huge hole in your O... just try a line or something. or play around with like a squiggly line :D
but i don't like the huge hole.
don't do it one liner like leak said.
and uhm... get a better handy.
your drop shadow on the part on the E... is unnecessary, it doesn't follow the rest of your shadow. you were doing shadow on the left. so it doesn't make sense to do it there... drop shadow is... just imagine your exact throwie right behind yours... so it can't be dropped back to the left AND the right.

Zarb
03-12-2009, 06:35 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ra1.jpg
New Style, still needs work but hows it coming?

oxiclean
03-12-2009, 06:43 PM
Does it say pa or pr?

Zarb
03-12-2009, 06:49 PM
Ra Lol

oxiclean
03-12-2009, 07:08 PM
It looks like it says Pr to me.

Zarb
03-12-2009, 07:29 PM
yeah haha any idea on how i can fix it?

JackieChanRollin
03-12-2009, 07:33 PM
yeah haha any idea on how i can fix it?

Lowercase R's tend to look like other letters sometimes.
I would say try to make a capital R to go along with your capital A.
Keep it up bro.
You'll get it soon, just keep sketching.

oxiclean
03-12-2009, 07:37 PM
Exactly what he said.

milk boxx
03-12-2009, 08:29 PM
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/6780/dsc07876.jpg (http://img6.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc07876.jpg)

milk boxx
03-12-2009, 08:33 PM
ight so i didnt do it one liner, but im not sure if i like it better, what do you guys think? (first ones at the top of this page)
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/4746/ibo.jpg

zarb- at some points it looks more melty rather than bubbly, so watch out for that. and man u gotta give crits to people, ive never seen u give any and i know alot of people help u out all the time

fit your E with the rest of your letters. Make it bigger, dont be scared to make it overlap more and make it bigger. do it the exact same as your oneliner style one but just cut off the not needed lines.

smooth_nuts
03-12-2009, 08:41 PM
***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:Evil.
Deadline:March 15th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

blunttokes
03-12-2009, 09:08 PM
IM IN SMOOTHNUTS^! ill pm it to u in the next hour!
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/7934/dscf1342.jpg (http://img25.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf1342.jpg)
CRITS please.. thnx!!!!

DirtyDozen520
03-12-2009, 09:15 PM
SEC-looks nice to me, its simple.

ok heres some more i did..i sorta got the idea of the 'A' from zase
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02963.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02964.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02965.jpg

sallybsk
03-12-2009, 09:22 PM
less shaky lines.
your g looks like a C...
you write ages right?
keep letters same size. your A is sometimes bigger than rest, your S is smaller, sometimes.
siiigh,

DirtyDozen520
03-12-2009, 09:32 PM
okay, thanks.
still havent fixed the G problem but is this what you mean by less shaky lines?
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02966.jpg

sallybsk
03-12-2009, 09:38 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2hxbvaa.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/jb1e7n.jpg

those lines. idk if you're trying to do it, but it looks like it's accidental, and not clean, SHAKY.
your last post doesn't have any lines like that. try to stick with doing those lines.

blunttokes
03-12-2009, 09:39 PM
SEC-looks nice to me, its simple.

ok heres some more i did..i sorta got the idea of the 'A' from zase
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02963.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02964.jpg
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02965.jpg

your hands moving to fast.. your lines are mad shakey.. slow down and take yur time there stickers... u got as long as you want.. and b4 u waist more slaps.. draw on paper
and thnx for the crits on mine.. appreciate it!

DirtyDozen520
03-12-2009, 09:54 PM
thanks sallybsk and blunttokes, i really appreciate the crits, ill try to make it less shaky from now on

blunttokes
03-12-2009, 10:15 PM
word dude... just take your time.. use pencils for a bit longer.. then when you know that you have a good style to draw colour that shit in and keep doin ur thing!

im considered a toy but people all have there opinion.. the picture gallery is full of ignorant fucking retards.. but stay in here till you get told to leave or u gonna get smashed the fuck out over the internet..

only true words.

anyone will tell you the same thing but do what you want n how you want ur the only one holding urself back from being good not other people ya know :)


stay up ages!

shayk
03-12-2009, 10:24 PM
damn blunttokes that shit was deep thats goin on my myspace headline haha but on some real shit hears some of last nights work

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00192.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00193.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00194.jpg

crits would be cool seems so i didint give any. oh wait i gave crits to tokes on his speach

shayk
03-12-2009, 10:26 PM
oh yea ignore the shitty ass hand style i got carried away

joker954
03-12-2009, 10:30 PM
dirty dozen dont waste stickwes with that.... do it on paper more

Sizzuurp
03-12-2009, 10:34 PM
i like the first one shayk nice and big. stay up u got mad potential

provinT13
03-12-2009, 10:39 PM
^^ agreed, first and second are my favs.

shayk
03-12-2009, 10:39 PM
that shits huge dude i took like 5 full steps on each letter haha and its on the onlystore in my town but im like 10 min away from a small ass city. thank you guys for the good crits by the way i was working so damn hard to get somethin going for me

DirtyDozen520
03-12-2009, 11:25 PM
dirty dozen dont waste stickwes with that.... do it on paper more

yea, i sorta went through my notebook and ran out of paper, but i just found like 2 blank pages so heres some more..crappy experiments

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02967.jpg

You think that would look nice on some stickers?

as you can see, im still tryin to get somethin goin for me, ha, hopefully ill get somethin soon

Sizzuurp
03-12-2009, 11:30 PM
not to sound like a dick but no toy stuff looks good on stickers in my opinion lol. just keep at it with pen/pencil/marker and paper
work with bars instead of freehandin AGES. go one nice strait parallel bar at a time. dont be in such a rush

DirtyDozen520
03-12-2009, 11:34 PM
kk, thanks

KSFone
03-12-2009, 11:37 PM
Shayk I would say blackbook for a little bit more, props on gettin up and great work, but the one thing that annoys me in those is the big space in the 'a'.

Becuase in the rest of your throw there's no spaces, and then there's just somethin in the middle...kind of changes the letter style when you do that...

But sick work man! Keep it up!

shayk
03-12-2009, 11:40 PM
i feal the same way im working on that right now

provinT13
03-13-2009, 12:24 AM
kk, thanks

try not to experiment, just stick with good clean letter structure. Imo a good simple tag/throwie is better then a toy trying to go crazy, trippin overhimself. Not trying to bring ya down, but trust us, start simple.

blunttokes
03-13-2009, 12:26 AM
damn blunttokes that shit was deep thats goin on my myspace headline haha but on some real shit hears some of last nights work

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00192.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00193.jpg

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00194.jpg

crits would be cool seems so i didint give any. oh wait i gave crits to tokes on his speach


hahah
thats funny business you planning on doing with my speech lmao...

and for ur stuff keep doin ur thing, work wit ur lettering a bit more.. get the shape of the letters and shit...

DirtyDozen520
03-13-2009, 12:38 AM
I tried doing it simple..yea i know i sort of made the S too small
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02968.jpg

THAT BOY DOWN THE BLOCK
03-13-2009, 12:42 AM
that wuld be sick for a roller, probably not for anything else though

provinT13
03-13-2009, 01:15 AM
Much better. See how the a and the g are nice and structured, they look good together and have the same thickness. Simple and clean. Go get a blackbook from michaels and fill it up haha just don't get ahead of yourself.

shayk
03-13-2009, 01:19 AM
wow that was gay all my paint pens decided to stop working at the same time. im working on makeing it not so sharp.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00199.jpg

damn dirtydozen you really are out of papper huh? what are you wrighting in?

DirtyDozen520
03-13-2009, 08:54 AM
lol thx for the crits guys, ima be workin on this shit at skool today too aha
and that green one was on an old agenda thing i found in my room. ima need to go buy some of those cheap ass wide rule notebooks today

Lost.1.
03-13-2009, 10:01 AM
Fuck i gotta work on my throwie it sucks ass.

Kester
03-13-2009, 10:09 AM
good for you

oxiclean
03-13-2009, 11:48 AM
I'm changing my name real soon.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/Picture5.png

DoMakeSayThink
03-13-2009, 12:40 PM
that s has some nice potential dude

DoMakeSayThink
03-13-2009, 12:41 PM
just add a bit more style

shayk
03-13-2009, 02:07 PM
i aggree that dose have some nice potential if you throw some steez on it

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00200.jpg

Blox
03-13-2009, 03:54 PM
Don't be throwing paint up yet Homes.
Its an alright throwie
But it just aint up to par for the walls of the street yet.
Yo sneak, When the fuck we battling?
Put your pencil where your mouth is and name a word.

blunttokes
03-13-2009, 04:30 PM
wow that was gay all my paint pens decided to stop working at the same time. im working on makeing it not so sharp.

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00199.jpg

damn dirtydozen you really are out of papper huh? what are you wrighting in?

fix ur S and K then ur good to go
keep it up.. and ur in buffalo area?
u ever been across the border niagara falls?

einsamkeit
03-13-2009, 04:35 PM
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/69/dsc1844.th.jpg (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc1844.jpg)

sallybsk
03-13-2009, 04:48 PM
MEEEEP!
say your name like that, it's fun.
uhm don't make yerr M twice as big, that's pretty much it.
I like your steezo.

Zarb
03-13-2009, 04:53 PM
Still working it, heres a couple ones I liked
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ranew.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ranew2.jpg
Crits?
Meep- Ya just make your M alittle skinnier and it will look sick
Shayk- Getting better everytime you post, keep it up bro but fix that K

shayk
03-13-2009, 05:01 PM
no i havint ben over the boarder in a loooooong time blunttokes. ive ben on probation for 3 years now and have 5 more to go so i wont be there any time soon eather

blunttokes
03-13-2009, 05:17 PM
HAHAHA what 8yrs probation... thats like 15 yrs jail lmao

shayk
03-13-2009, 05:29 PM
i was on it for three, got off and the next week i cought a asult charge. fuck my life

blunttokes
03-13-2009, 05:41 PM
ya id say, fuck man... lay off the illegal shit for awhile hahah

Blox
03-13-2009, 06:10 PM
Nothing that is fun in the world is legal.

klic
03-13-2009, 06:31 PM
for my first throwie in about 3 months, my K is wack
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow1.jpg

blunt - love your sig, too bad were missing the playoffs... again lol

zarb - i have no clue what it says, go simpler, im thinking that second letter is a T but since the '$' is there

shayk - round it out, stick to paper for now

meep - not feeling your E's, just dont completely cut off the middle part, other than that its dope

shen - the letters are pretty good, just clean it up some, try and get some flow going and bring your H closer to your S

oxiclean
03-13-2009, 06:34 PM
haha it actually says shek i just suck at K's.
Janek, looks good but the J kinda annoys me.

Zarb
03-13-2009, 06:48 PM
K so I cleaned up my R and went with a lower case A instead
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/ra1YA.jpg
Crits?
Janek- I like the simpleness of it

oxiclean
03-13-2009, 06:55 PM
Loose the humps and the chunk on the top of the a
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/ra1YA-1.jpg
Like that.

Apocalypse
03-13-2009, 06:56 PM
New stuff...

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/56/l_a79930281a05434abdef2b43e3c6d6ad.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/61/l_a96798bf82ba49fc9b091f970d3d3a7d.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/23/l_c1015aab96b94c38821e5cff9dfcaca9.jpg

Crits?

Zarb-pretty fresh
Shayk-wow improvin a lot, definitely since your first stuff which was major toy
Shek-not bad
Ages-looks like a college letter print, it's okay, but don't just copy fonts, but yeah still an okay blockbuster thing.

ShaolinNy
03-13-2009, 07:24 PM
Don't be throwing paint up yet Homes.
Its an alright throwie
But it just aint up to par for the walls of the street yet.
Yo sneak, When the fuck we battling?
Put your pencil where your mouth is and name a word.

Um were obviously not battling since i never said anything that had todo with a battle.I was just sayin your a gay troll n that i write my name better than u do your.Im done wit you so talk all the shit u want;)

Peace

HATER!

(Sorry for wastin space on this asshole)

..romero..
03-13-2009, 07:26 PM
you both suck and need to shut up about it.e beef is whack.also your a biter ny.i havent forgot about that e niggha.

klic
03-13-2009, 07:41 PM
shaolin, the first six months you were on here you never posted anything of your own and just begged for everybody to do shit for you... and blox, your style is generic as fuck and isnt any better than shaolins.. you both need to listen to romero and shut yur traps lol

Muse.one
03-13-2009, 08:59 PM
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture136.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture131.jpg

i really want to progress on my throwies , any crits or tips ?

Blox
03-13-2009, 09:02 PM
Shaolin=Bitch
Romero=True True True
Klic=Haha, Gotta start somewhere

weakfingers
03-13-2009, 09:03 PM
Havent drawn in weeks and everything I'm drawing tonight is to shaky but crits?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0290.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/toy.jpg

Zarb
03-13-2009, 10:24 PM
Fixed up the R
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/rawell.jpg
Skwint- I like all of it, it flows so nice together

DirtyDozen520
03-13-2009, 11:07 PM
Skwint-nice, i cant really point out anything wrong...
RA-i dnt really like the space inside of the R


simple is good right?
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02970.jpg

SONE.
03-14-2009, 01:14 AM
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090313.jpg

BigBlueViolence
03-14-2009, 01:28 AM
get rid of the doodads in the S and O, and I think your N is a little goofy looking,
maybe straighten the lines in it?

sallybsk
03-14-2009, 01:51 AM
ahhahah you said doodads
AHAHAHHAHAHA
I can't stop laughing.
I think i'm high :(
marry me?

smooth_nuts
03-14-2009, 04:57 AM
sooooooooooooo much talk in here...

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Deadline:March 15th
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