tot throwies.

[klic]

shaolin, the first six months you were on here you never posted anything of your own and just begged for everybody to do shit for you... and blox, your style is generic as fuck and isnt any better than shaolins.. you both need to listen to romero and shut yur traps lol

[Muse.one]

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture136.jpg
http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m249/veggieman_photos/Picture131.jpg

i really want to progress on my throwies , any crits or tips ?

[Blox]

Shaolin=Bitch
Romero=True True True
Klic=Haha, Gotta start somewhere

[weakfingers]

Havent drawn in weeks and everything I'm drawing tonight is to shaky but crits?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0290.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/toy.jpg

[Zarb]

Fixed up the R
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/rawell.jpg
Skwint- I like all of it, it flows so nice together

[DirtyDozen520]

Skwint-nice, i cant really point out anything wrong...
RA-i dnt really like the space inside of the R


simple is good right?
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02970.jpg

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090313.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

get rid of the doodads in the S and O, and I think your N is a little goofy looking,
maybe straighten the lines in it?

[sallybsk]

ahhahah you said doodads
AHAHAHHAHAHA
I can't stop laughing.
I think i'm high :(
marry me?

[smooth_nuts]

sooooooooooooo much talk in here...

***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:Evil.
Deadline:March 15th
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[DirtyDozen520]

so is this halfway decent atleast?
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02970.jpg

[blunttokes]

keep doin ur thing... play wit the letters.. u got a lower case A capital G lower case E try n make the A and E capitals maybe... just my 2cents...

like this AGES not aGes ya kno.... pce

[Bink1]

Crits?

Zarb-pretty fresh


are u kidding>?

[Zarb]

^^ how about instead of acting like an asshole you can give me an idea on how to make it better.

[provinT13]

Zarb- the top half of your second letter still seems to have too much space
DirtyDozen520- Getting better, but try simple block letters like on your keyboard, although your letters are looking more consistent which is good.

my second attempt

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0857.jpg

[what4joke...]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090313.jpg
thats solid. stay up

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0217.jpg

first time taking paint to something since i started writing, i know it sucks but w/e.


provin- slim up the n a little and fatten that t to take up a little but of the dead space inbetween the e's.

[DirtyDozen520]

eten-I think the E's should be the same..and uhmm go simpler with the T? im new so idk much

FOER- ilike the F, all the letters look a little bit..crooked?
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC00146.jpg
sorta changed the G a lil bit, you think it has some potential if i work on it?

[provinT13]

just tried an e and n instead of the whole eten. Ignore the blue that's from a previous attempt, and ignore the white, and yes the black outline sucks because my can was almost out and cloging up.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0859.jpg

Five Six Ace- F and the R need work.
DirtyDozen520- I like that one muuuuuch better then all the others. (thanks for the crits, yes I can never get my second e the same as the first)

[Apocalypse]

New stuff...

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/56/l_a79930281a05434abdef2b43e3c6d6ad.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/61/l_a96798bf82ba49fc9b091f970d3d3a7d.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/23/l_c1015aab96b94c38821e5cff9dfcaca9.jpg

Crits?

Zarb-pretty fresh
Shayk-wow improvin a lot, definitely since your first stuff which was major toy
Shek-not bad
Ages-looks like a college letter print, it's okay, but don't just copy fonts, but yeah still an okay blockbuster thing.

Bump for crits?

[provinT13]

not feelin the last letter, wtf is it, an r? c?

[Apocalypse]

not feelin the last letter, wtf is it, an r? c?


....r?

[sallybsk]

your W is consistently bigger than the rest of your letters.
your A is the smallest.
aaand not digging the random shit on the top
the bottom part of your "R" is as big as the top, so your letter goes: FAT SKINNY FAT.
fix all those.
work on letters in general.

actualy the A isn't that bad, try curving the second hump more like in the middle picture. And lose the tumor on the right side

and lose the one quote near the W. looks better without it. the first W is the best.
your shadows suck. make them stop on the bottom... if you know what I mean?

[walkingcarpet]

Crit Please
Just started last week. Disregard the cartoons, I was bored lol.
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/CarpetThrow3.jpg
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/CarpetThrow2.jpg
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/Carpet.jpg

[sallybsk]

try not making your shit so big.
the image size I mean.
jesus.
LOSE THE ARROW ON THE T.
The extension on the P in the last picture. Make your C rounded.
work on your E.
oh... and that's not a throwie? just looks like a zoomed in tag.
learn your shiet. NEW TO GRAFF THREAD. NEXT?!

[walkingcarpet]

Alright cool, Thanks Alot Man!
Will work on that stuff, oh and sorry bout the image size
Hm, photobucket mustve resized them then. Thanks again

[B.S. POLICE]

are you seriously thinking about writing carpet? i meant really??

[weakfingers]

just a quick note, photobucket doesent resize it, you have to resize it to large then the photo will be proper size.

for talking ...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/haha.jpg

[klic]

my k is brutal

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow3.jpg

carpet - lol horrible name no offence, and it isnt really a throwie, read through the new to graff thread

war - work on your r

provin - good job practicing it on plywood or whatever first, try an uppercase E and a lower case n

foer - same deal as provin, and you forgot the 3d for your R

[Apocalypse]

^I like it up to the n, after that it seems to fail, the K especially is terrible IMO, except the last one, and use the lower case e in the 4th one, mesh them all together and get it worked out so it doesn't get small as you draw them, and see how it is then.

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2587.jpg
crits?

[Apocalypse]

Kam-eh, work on the K a lot, and the M, the a is okay...
Janek-I like it up to the n, after that it seems to fail, the K especially is terrible IMO, except the last one, and use the lower case e in the 4th one, mesh them all together and get it worked out so it doesn't get small as you draw them, and see how it is then.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/34/l_58a5059843a443d991400c1adaee7c8c.jpg

Crits?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

work on the K, the A is pree. dope and the M needs to have some sharp edges to flow with the rest of the throw.

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0222.jpg

racked a bunch of decos today, then after i set up that wall i found my old backpack for hs. i dropped out last may. and looks like i never brought this book back. so its a black book of sorts i guess.

anyway. 2 names. cant decide which to use, fuck.

janek- i like it but the top left cornor of the n looks a liite eh.

kam- i like it, looks good.

war- i see you are making all the letters the same size now. looks good.

[JasK]

http://wimg.co.uk/xhK75X.png
Yeah I know it sucks, I like it though. First throw that's good that I've made.
Any crits?

[B.S. POLICE]

just a quick note, photobucket doesent resize it, you have to resize it to large then the photo will be proper size.

for talking ...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/haha.jpg

such a chill spot and no burners?

[Five Sixx Ace]

"ak" the a looks okay, but the k dosent look right. the bottow of it is all askew and fucked up porportins and idk im high.

just for furture reference. give crits if you wanna get them.

[Apocalypse]

Kam-eh, work on the K a lot, and the M, the a is okay...
Janek-I like it up to the n, after that it seems to fail, the K especially is terrible IMO, except the last one, and use the lower case e in the 4th one, mesh them all together and get it worked out so it doesn't get small as you draw them, and see how it is then.

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/34/l_58a5059843a443d991400c1adaee7c8c.jpg

Crits?

bump for crittss

[-ESO-]

crits??
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5980/006xkf.jpg

[Apocalypse]

crits??
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5980/006xkf.jpg

give crits to GET THEM.

[B.S. POLICE]

the only one that has potential is the middle on the right

[-ESO-]

give crits to GET THEM.

get off my dick
who said i wasnt going to post crits of other peoples stuff in another post.

[-ESO-]

provinT13 - Try to keep all ur letters the same size/ I cant decifer the last letter.
SONE - Get rid of the heart, and the arrow part / your N does look so much like an N
Five Sixx Ace - Try to keep all ur letters the same size / Make your F a little more defined
DirtyDozen520 - This has potential, I bet if you had a nice fatcap you could make this work.
Apocalypse - Not bad, im not feelin ur plane R and i think it could be a bit bigger to match the rest.

[Apocalypse]

get off my dick
who said i wasnt going to post crits of other peoples stuff in another post.


I didn't? but you asked for crits, and the story 'round these parts is give em to get em.

[weakfingers]

such a chill spot and no burners?
No-one goes down there and its more like a practice spot but there will be burners soon ;)

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0222.jpg

racked a bunch of decos today, then after i set up that wall i found my old backpack for hs. i dropped out last may. and looks like i never brought this book back. so its a black book of sorts i guess.

anyway. 2 names. cant decide which to use, fuck.

janek- i like it but the top left cornor of the n looks a liite eh.

kam- i like it, looks good.

war- i see you are making all the letters the same size now. looks good.

bump to new page for crits.

[-ESO-]

I didn't? but you asked for crits, and the story 'round these parts is give em to get em.

Exactly, but literally right after i posted it you bitched.
I wasn't done writing all my crits

[klic]

janek- i like it but the top left cornor of the n looks a liite eh.



lol it looks what?

[Five Sixx Ace]

bland, empty, idk.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

janek- i like it but the top left cornor of the n looks a liite eh.


what.. just like graff. needs structure... english needs sentence structure..

AND FOR THE RECORD JANEK HAS SOME MAD CLEAN LINES!! IM FUCKING LOV'N IT!

[Apocalypse]

Exactly, but literally right after i posted it you bitched.
I wasn't done writing all my crits


Sorry mang, no beef, just wanted to see you give them if ur asking for em....nevermind it all.

[-ESO-]

Sorry mang, no beef, just wanted to see you give them if ur asking for em....nevermind it all.

no problem man.

[weakfingers]

Less talk more flicks, heres a boxy style/really out of proportion throw that i was messing around with... needs alot of work.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/2.jpg

[bulltimeJAMP]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

[oxiclean]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.
Whats a didk?

[Apocalypse]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.


It's called respect, we're all trying to do the same thing, no reason to start fucking beef idiot...

[ASTAR.DWSP]

you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.

dude.. writers should all work together.. not fuck each other up.. times have changed.. we must unite and let the world know we are here to stay.. and they need to deal with it..

[provinT13]

my k is brutal

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow3.jpg

provin - good job practicing it on plywood or whatever first, try an uppercase E and a lower case n



Thanks.

I'd say you got some nice, consistent, stuff. Time to move on?? You seem to have simple throwies and tags down.

And to everyone that is bitching, leave all the fucking chit chat to the chit chat thread, post flicks, give and get crits, and get the fuck out, there are actually people that wanna see some posts with helpful advice

[Hammertime]

http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/throwie.jpg

The letters COULD mean something but it's actually rather because I like these forms. The 'S' I've practiced a lot, the p and the m almost not. I don't consider this finished, nor the way I want it (the shadow is mediocre/bad, the bubbles on top suck ass)
Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

[DirtyDozen520]

^i dont really like the middle/bottom of the M..those grey things on the top of the letters looks weird. I mean if you did it all around the letters, it might look kool. but idk
and SPM is a rapper

[Hammertime]

Thanks for the reply, I completely agree!

[walkingcarpet]

I like the S, Hammertime but I would lose the bubbles on the top or maybe just, as DirtyDozen said, put it all around the letters. The top mart of the M looks a little wierd to me, maybe make the two top parts of the M equal?

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0224.jpg


quick one becuase im bored. working on making them the same size.

hammertime- work on not having so much dead space going on in the m.

[bulltimeJAMP]

Whats a didk?

It's called respect, we're all trying to do the same thing, no reason to start fucking beef idiot...

etc.. you guys are idiots read what went on before my post.

ie. people using the term dickriding as if it meant insulting.

[JasK]

http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/throwie.jpg

The letters COULD mean something but it's actually rather because I like these forms. The 'S' I've practiced a lot, the p and the m almost not. I don't consider this finished, nor the way I want it (the shadow is mediocre/bad, the bubbles on top suck ass)
Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

The M seems way too square compared to the S and the P. And boxes don't look good unless the rest of it is relatively boxy, which you won't get with an S like that.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i44.tinypic.com/23h6g00.jpg

[JasK]

http://i44.tinypic.com/23h6g00.jpg
Like no flow here. The letters don't flow well, the colors are bad.
Whatevs. Needs work for sure, man.
http://wimg.co.uk/_zGtA1.png

[ASTAR.DWSP]

Like no flow here. The letters don't flow well, the colors are bad.
Whatevs. Needs work for sure, man.
http://wimg.co.uk/_zGtA1.png

fix the J and the K the

J looks like a blob..

K needs the the right leg extended and the right arm..

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i44.tinypic.com/mj0f2r.jpg


i fucking forgot the fucking m in shriiimp lol but i still like it

[ASTAR.DWSP]

http://i44.tinypic.com/mj0f2r.jpg


i fucking forgot the fucking m in shriiimp lol but i still like it

oww that fill makes my eyes bleed..

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i44.tinypic.com/vpw4sm.jpg

there mother fuckers

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i44.tinypic.com/vpw4sm.jpg

there mother fuckers

Thats more of a Peice than it is a throwie. Learn from the other Examples on here.

[-Dank-DK-]

sorry i didnt want to put it in the pieces cause its on paper next time i will

[Bink1]

Crit Please
Just started last week. Disregard the cartoons, I was bored lol.
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/CarpetThrow3.jpg
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/CarpetThrow2.jpg
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/Carpet.jpg

and biting character off that youtubes guy is fucking dumb , coz everyone has seen it. and u cant even redraw it normal looks like your hand is shaking like a fuck.

[klic]

Thanks.

I'd say you got some nice, consistent, stuff. Time to move on?? You seem to have simple throwies and tags down.


im going to have to disagree with you about my throwie there lol, ive been practicing my handstyle alot for the last month, i just started practicing my throwies two days ago and it looks like shit in my opinion haha

[KSFone]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0224.jpg


quick one becuase im bored. working on making them the same size.

hammertime- work on not having so much dead space going on in the m.

did you do that in a textbook which you will have to return with your name on it?

also, looks sick, keep it up

[provinT13]

im going to have to disagree with you about my throwie there lol, ive been practicing my handstyle alot for the last month, i just started practicing my throwies two days ago and it looks like shit in my opinion haha

Well then I guess I ment your handy is good, my bad :p

[KnoxIn]

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1451/p3153038.jpg

ok i haven't painted in a year and this is what came from it as of today so crits??

[Genghis Tron.]

go ways simpler. take off that orange background, focus on the letters, not colors, addons, etc.

[KnoxIn]

i know like i got my drawings down pretty good but i just cant do this shit anymore i mean it wasn't good before but now its just shitty as hell...

[sike_21]

faze stay away from paint for a while go practice on some paper
nothing else to crit really
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0997.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0993.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_0998.jpg

[Five Sixx Ace]

did you do that in a textbook which you will have to return with your name on it?

also, looks sick, keep it up

well you see the thing is, i dropped out last may and never took it back.

so im looking at is as a form of black book till i get a better one.

[KSFone]

http://i545.photobucket.com/albums/hh386/sitonsiton/DSC00807.jpg

For the Evil throw contest, didn't show up for some reason so just wonderin what you guys thought about it, crits please!

[DirtyDozen520]

I dnt like the pink. i dnt like the 'e' or 'v'

---------------------------
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02972.jpg
still messin around with styles

[Eack]

ages = work on it a bit, it looks kinda toy, no offence
evil = not bad, i would take out the eye of the I tho
sike= DOPE

http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/8231/mailgooglecom2f.jpg

[Wallace]

rusty as fuck from the winter

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8864/img00235j.jpg

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6094/img00236.jpg

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3194/img00239.jpg

[ASTAR.DWSP]

rusty as fuck from the winter

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8864/img00235j.jpg

http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/6094/img00236.jpg

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3194/img00239.jpg

you lucky fucks... i want the snow to be gone :( we still have like 3 ft :(

[Zarb]

Made the R a little too skinny but w.e
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1-2-1.png
Sike- So sick
Faze- Not really a throwie, read the new to graff thread maybe?
Evil- I like it but the letters need more definition
Ages- Keep sketching
Eack- I like it alot, especially the R
Wallace- Sick stay up!

[Q_2__L__1_G]

KFSone- i like the evil

[sallybsk]

RA,
lose the huge circles on the bottom of your R... your A is way too wide, try making the line for the left side of it showing, but only a little bit(like right next to the R)
or don't.
it still works. Redefine the top of your R...the bottom bar(the one that extends outwards) also doesn't have to be right below it. you know what I mean? It's all squished together.
don't look at other people's throwies; in throwies is where you can be most creative. So do that shiet.

[KJay]

zarb im not gonna lie but ihate that throwy. dont take offence from it, just come up with something waaay different, cuz it looks kinda gross to me. maybe thats just what i think, i dunno

[DirtyDozen520]

RA- yea the bottom of the R is ugly.. and like sallybsk said, the a is like huge

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/DSC02974.jpg
still tryin to get somethin goin

[MiggityMAK]

THE HORROORRRR!!!!
Have you no sympathy???

[provinT13]

DirtyDozen520 Bars bars bars bars and more bars!!! Stick with block letters.

[bulltimeJAMP]

^You are fucking retarded this is a throwie thread. There shouldn't be bars in throwies. What he wants to do is maybe observe what's going on in other throwies by looking at galleries or something, and then make one thats just a bit of your own style of whateverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

[Mr yarbles]

http://i44.tinypic.com/n3t9vm.jpg

Bars are not for throwies


Everything on the last page but eraso and sike wern't very good
Wallaces was alright but still needs some work

[Wallace]

rusty as fuck lol i need to clean it up

work on that R and the bottom lip of that 2nd e and it will be on a solid start. name change again aeks?

[Mr yarbles]

haha nah just a little somethin for a homie from my crew
and damn aeks havn't written taht in months haha

and yeah the white and blue look pretty good but the fillin is hurtin a bit

[smooth_nuts]

yarbles thats looking good,but your r seems a bit smooshed

***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:What You Write.
Deadline:March 22nd
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[da1]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/da.jpg
crits?
yarbles- Thats hot but maybe work on the R

[..romero..]

those letters dont work at all together.

[sallybsk]

^You are fucking retarded this is a throwie thread. There shouldn't be bars in throwies. What he wants to do is maybe observe what's going on in other throwies by looking at galleries or something, and then make one thats just a bit of your own style of whateverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

are you the fucking graffiti dictionary? I HATE THROWIES BECAUSE OF PEOPLE LIKE YOU. everything is generic as fuck. when people use bars, they get a sense of letter structure. and can make shit their own easier.
who are you to tell me what my graffiti should look like? sorry /rant
and no you don't use bars for throwies, but you can get letter structure. Not just bite a letter, or look.

DA...
lol you changed your name? make your A less wide(like I said). and those letters don't work that well... idk.
I don't like the D... especially the part where it touches. looks like a mirrored C or something

[smooth_nuts]

...if your using bars for throwups your doing something wrong,pointblank.

[Mr yarbles]

I thought my r was my best letter :(
haha
yeah bars for throws is not right
Unless you're doing a bomb like inbetween piece and throw type thing
and even then not really

[sallybsk]

not for throwies, I didn't say that.
but you should be doing bars before you do throwies.
and shouldn't be trying to make your work look like everyone elses. Who gives a fuck about people's standards. Obviously they still have to have skill, but this whole mentality of everything in graffiti is supposed to look like ______, is absurd.

[smooth_nuts]

truthfuly mr.rapist,i never like you r's they always look smooshed...
edit*
fool,i said point blank,that means conversation over,GAWD,really though man you should stop getting so worked up about someshit said on the internet before i has to give you smack in the face.

[sallybsk]

ahahahahaha
no
:3

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0237.jpg

one from eailer today at my buddies house.

feter-i like everything but the r, the bottom right looks to cramped.

[Save and Kill]

Foer- keep them letters the same size! and that F look like an upper case E to me. i would just stick with doing the letters and add the shadow later. dont wanna waste paint! =P

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0228.jpg

from a couple nights ago.

[snooot]

http://i40.tinypic.com/zjgvhk.jpg




foer the F kinda looks like an E

[oxiclean]

http://i40.tinypic.com/zjgvhk.jpg




foer the F kinda looks like an E

big improvement from last time.

[provinT13]

bulltimeJAMP All throwies don't have to be bubbly but whatever

First attempt at a throwie with the new name during german class, first try at shadow too. Ignore the line through the S

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/0_IMAGE_107.jpg

*wow thats the worst cell phone pic ever lol

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/5wbi28.jpg

Done for the toy toss battle

[ShaolinNy]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/da.jpg
crits?
yarbles- Thats hot but maybe work on the R

Zarb why you make a new account?

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/5wbi28.jpg

Done for the toy toss battle
Bottom of the page bumpppppp

[Zarb]

sneak - I forgot my password for alittle haha but i just remembered it today haha

[bob...hope...]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/da.jpg
crits?
yarbles- Thats hot but maybe work on the R

wow i think i puked a little.

[Zarb]

Ok so Ive basicly just been writing random names lately and I like these 2 that ive done. I know they both suck, but which do you think has the most potential?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1-2-1.png
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0317091735.jpg

[bob...hope...]

they both suck and you should feel bad.infact.just stop writing becuase everyone hates you.especially me.bob hope.from beyond the grave.

[Zarb]

alright thanks I quit!

[snooot]

The Botom One is beter than the top

[Queezy]

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyBSThrow.jpg

[provinT13]

Zarb We've told you so many times, do something with the space in the top of the A. Maby a line coming from the R so that it doesn't look like it's massive and takes up all the space behind the R. Same with the A in Lasto, the top is just waaaay to big.

[snooot]

http://i40.tinypic.com/zjgvhk.jpg
bump!

[expozay]

fill in the white space in the S. it should be in the shadows.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

they both suck and you should feel bad.infact.just stop writing becuase everyone hates you.especially me.bob hope.from beyond the grave.

hey bob.. i have looked through all the pic. threads.. and i havnt seen shit from you.. you run your fucking mouth like one of those fucking rich bitches.. so fucking post up or shut the fuck up and get the fuck out of here you fucking joke!

[ASTAR.DWSP]

fill in the white space in the S. it should be in the shadows.

/agree.. and fill that shit.. remember filling in makes you .001% less toy! :P

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3445/3364846666_2c5f69192d_m.jpg
crits?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3445/3364846666_2c5f69192d_m.jpg
crits?

work on the letters.. good.. but the letter structure could be better..

and for a throw i would just write expo.. or eo for a really short throw..

[cesspool]

queezy ur e's are lookin nice and da ur throw has potential, just keep workin on it....
fuck sometimes i hate givin crits it makes me feel all snobby and shit like "ooh you should do this ooh you should do that, i know best" lol, but i like getting them =)
anyways..http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/4599/12964090.png (http://img11.imageshack.us/my.php?image=12964090.png)
i write lerch, not lerc, but im stuck for an h

[provinT13]

Is that in ms paint? Why not pratice on paper or atleast a white board

[snooot]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3445/3364846666_2c5f69192d_m.jpg
crits?

get rid of the thing above the e

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm feeling that shit, lerch.
Sadly, I can not say that for anything else on this page.

[provinT13]

sorry, moving to blackbook thread.

[expozay]

get rid of the thing above the e

its an accented e, part of the word.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/5wbi28.jpg

One more bump.

[KJay]

bigblue fresh
the fill got fucked cuz i had to do the outline first with a sharpie, then the the silver fill with a paint marker
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1129/izoe002.jpg

[sallybsk]

looks like you're trying to bite too much.
it's real sloppy.
your Z looks like it has down syndrome.
don't like the hole in the O... or the shape of the O.

[KJay]

not sure what im tryin bite. and no shit its sloppy the silver covers the red and fucks up the outline

[sallybsk]

calm down sir, I'm giving you crits.
well I've seen those letters before, it just looks like you bent them(the I and the E).
and the two letters that I haven't seen look baaaad.
why do you have your I on top of your Z? it's unnecessary and no lookey good.
just try keeping your letters going straight, and the same size.
and take that huge hole out of the O...bout it.

[Sizzuurp]

if you already knew it was sloppy then why would u post something u dont think looks good

[denaaa]

new throww anythingg i should change on itt just made it todayy
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/newdethrow.jpg

[DoMakeSayThink]

kJay- as said before just clean that shit up its pretty sloppy, and id say have more of a round O than a square O like the one you have there.

dena- looks dope dude, i like the S a lot but i think the D could be cleaned up a bit

[denaaa]

lol it says de

[DoMakeSayThink]

oh true haha it looks like an S man, maybe make the middle part of the E a little smaller, kinda hard to see

[denaaa]

yaa i can see the s your talking about it depends on the angle you look at itt haha

[DoMakeSayThink]

haha yeah for sure dude

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0318091713.jpg
crits? my A is fucked

Big Blue- So sick
Kjay- I like the I and E but work on the Z and O

[weakfingers]

BigBlue-I enjoy the sharp handstyle.
Zarb- Work on the shadow its abit off



I got bored (pun intended)
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0385.jpg

[Apocalypse]

DS-BALLIN DUDE..sick
Lasto-not bad, lose the drips for now...work on the a, s, and t....and make them all one size
bigblue-dope man

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/59/l_1f7bfdf6ab834c34808df6248e59e4ac.jpg


Crits?

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0318092113.jpg
Doin some cleaning up
War- Pretty ill but your R is alittle to small for the rest of your letters i think
Skwint- Sick always liked your throwie

[weakfingers]

Apocalypse- I don't like the under lining of the words with the last letter. Also the arrow off the word on the R (KAR?) is super lob-sided. Like Zarb said, fix up the letter size and you'll be on you're way.

Zarb- If thats an O at the end of the throw and not a period then make it the same size. Other then that make everything the same size and itill be looking great!

As for me I was thinking about writing another word, (not ditching my last one) Just starting to write both. Here's what I'm starting out with, I dont know witch one I like more MILF or MILPH
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0387.jpg
Crits would be greatly appreceated. Oh and I bit the fuck out of EMEK'S M.

[walkingcarpet]

weakfingers- thats awesome, i should do that with my skateboard lol
war- im not really feeling the A or the R
zarb- i like it but the L looks a little funny in my opinion
milf- i really like the first one, simple, i like it lol

just messing around with different letter styles, crit please =]
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/AboveThrow2copy.jpg

[Save and Kill]

walking carpet
you need to do what Reach is doing over in the blackbook thread
and what i am about to do
straight up BARSSSSSS plain and simple

now i am going to go do my own bars haha

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

shitty cam flick
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image027.jpg

[shayk]

bigdream- make your v the same size as the rest of the throw

rough first skech of new name

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00202.jpg

any crits? keep in mind i t
just threw this down in like 15 min its more to see what you guys thought of the new name

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0319091642.jpg

Shayk- I dont really know what the 2nd and 4th letters are, E? or I? and i think i liked your old name better

[provinT13]

shayk Old name is way better.

[PROJECT LINK]

dude i cant get the throwie style down man...

[smooth_nuts]

***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:What you write.
Deadline:March 22nd
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[snackmachine]

KJay- sloppy yo, clean it up and it would be nice.
Shayk- i agree with provinT13, not sure about the 2nd and 4th letter.
weakfingers- im liking milph better, but both of them are tight.

http://i704.photobucket.com/albums/ww49/snackmachinery/001.jpg
^shit from geometry, crits please?

[Facedorateur]

its not really geometrical.... hahahahahahahahahaha..haha...ha...

not funny eh

Just work more on your bars, make them evenly fat, and your E is too small

[shayk]

i loved my old name but i got busted so i gota change it but i dont think im going to ill just go to buffalo or rochester when i wright and they are e's

[*NGONE*]

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3355/0317091850as.jpg
what do u guys think?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:What you write.
Deadline:March 22nd
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

im making a thread on this..

[ASTAR.DWSP]

Zarb - fix the O

[*NGONE*]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3445/0319092331u.jpg

feedback?

[ASTAR.DWSP]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/3445/0319092331u.jpg

feedback?

dont smoke crack.. and what i mean by this is try n keep your hand steady..

[B.S. POLICE]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4979/screencapture31.png

[ASTAR.DWSP]

^^ fucking rad man..

[BigBlueViolence]

dude, that shit would be fucking fire without all the loops in the N

http://i39.tinypic.com/afg5r4.jpg

Just fucking around.

[ASTAR.DWSP]

^^that shit is funny man made me lul (a good funny)

[B.S. POLICE]

lol are you mocking my faces nikkkaa??? i donno i like the loops for some reason, theve like grown on me

[BigBlueViolence]

Nah man, I'm not saying totally loose the loops,
just that having them on top and bottom kind of squishes it.

[*NGONE*]

dont smoke crack.. and what i mean by this is try n keep your hand steady..

alright. thanks man ill work on it.

[Apocalypse]

Oh-not bad...
BS-pretty tight
Nage-shakey shit work on it

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/75/l_a92efd16f1714c4280f61dc3a14a04b5.jpg

Crits?

[expozay]

not feelin it war. just looks sloppy as fuck. idk wat crits to give really just not feelin it.

id say definitely get rid of the face tho.

[B.S. POLICE]

faces in throws are like unnessesary extentions and arrows coming out of no where in pieces, toys love to used them but they just dont understand them

[Apocalypse]

not feelin it war. just looks sloppy as fuck. idk wat crits to give really just not feelin it.

id say definitely get rid of the face tho.

Ight, yeah I was just trying it out, and I'll work on it....sharpies don't really look good and bleed bad not in my favor...


faces in throws are like unnessesary extentions and arrows coming out of no where in pieces, toys love to used them but they just dont understand them


You talkin about the hand with the arrows? I'm workin so friggen hard on that thing to be a one liner with actual steeze, but yeah it wasn't my best I admit.

[B.S. POLICE]

nah man im not talking about your hand man if youve ever seen mine you would know i have no room to talk about that i was talking about those sketches u usually see ppl post fallowed by the usual HOLY SHIT GO TO THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD comments

i was talking about the face you have in the throw, not to try to be an asshole here but your letters are garbage, and when your letters are garbage putting faces inside the makes them look even worse. learn your letters first and then put faces in them

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't get what the fuck is going on with your shit war, it just looks like a bunch of blobs.
Believe it or not, throwies DO have structure to them.

http://i44.tinypic.com/2qbszdt.jpg

[Apocalypse]

I don't get what the fuck is going on with your shit war, it just looks like a bunch of blobs.
Believe it or not, throwies DO have structure to them.

Oh, well I'm the only dude who graffs around here so I kinda gotta learn on my own...this throw was experimenting, my older one though people said it was pretty good so I figured I could try a little more.


nah man im not talking about your hand man if youve ever seen mine you would know i have no room to talk about that i was talking about those sketches u usually see ppl post fallowed by the usual HOLY SHIT GO TO THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD comments

i was talking about the face you have in the throw, not to try to be an asshole here but your letters are garbage, and when your letters are garbage putting faces inside the makes them look even worse. learn your letters first and then put faces in them


Yeah it's fine, as I said I gotta learn on my own so I'm just trying shit out, the face I see isn't workin, and I've been workin on the letters for a while, and some people said they were okay and basic, so I've just been trying to progress.

I'll get to drawing

[BigBlueViolence]

I edited a picture in the post above to kind of show you what I mean.
All the letters are the same size, the style is consistent and (not all writers agree that this is important for a throwie) it's easy to read. see what I'm getting at?

[Apocalypse]

I edited a picture in the post above to kind of show you what I mean.
All the letters are the same size, the style is consistent and (not all writers agree that this is important for a throwie) it's easy to read. see what I'm getting at?

yup, thanks dude, I don't prefer your more square style as much, but yeah man I see, thanks again.

[BigBlueViolence]

Well the rules can go with anything, just make sure the style you pick is consistent

[B.S. POLICE]

yeah listen to him he knows waht hes talking about

[Apocalypse]

ight, thanks dudes.

trying it out...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/90/l_99d19de271a74d969461bd6994554b92.jpg

[Queezy]

Not feeling the R

[provinT13]

^^ agreed, but the A does look better.

[-ESO-]

Not feeling the R

was gunna say the same thing, maybe try capital R

[provinT13]

BigBlueViolence I took your W and turned it over for an M, I hope that's ok :)

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG0901.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't have a W in my name dude, go for it.

[B.S. POLICE]

a look at you soo huummblleee

[provinT13]

I ment the W you did for war

[ShaolinNy]

http://i39.tinypic.com/33ubdk7.jpg


eh havent written in a while decided to fill one in.Crits please!

[sevenohsavage]

http://i44.tinypic.com/1zmfmlt.jpg

[sike_21]

wow big improvement sneak see its all practice and taking your time stay up and try and work a lil on them handies

[B.S. POLICE]

sneak be consistant B-E CONSISTANT

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/3162/screencapture43.png


you welcome

[sike_21]

bite!!!!!!!! l0l jk

[B.S. POLICE]

lol i would shit if someone ever bit me and made it look better.

[ShaolinNy]

Thanks guys.And thanks ALOT bs!!!

Ya my big problem is bein consistant.Like my stuff will be great then i wont practice for a few days and it will look shitty.Any tips for consistanity?Im guessing just practice my throw every day until it comes 2nd nature?What about copying other peoples throws just for practice.Ya my handies are bad i got to work on em,Im gettin my car in june so i wanna get ups when i get it so i need my shit to be fire.


Thx again

[B.S. POLICE]

dont practice other ppls ish it wont help you progress your own. dont use your car, tahts how i got caught. practice the one i gave you, its your style after all...just tweaked.

[SONE.]

yeh best way to learn throwies is to just do your own 12345432345654323456543 times. until you can do it with ur eyes closed. practicing other people stuff just fucks you up. stick with it sneak, youre commin along nicely.

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/DSC02909.jpg
crits? any tipes for shading?

[LeaksOne]

you need to focus on your letters before you worry about shading

[smooth_nuts]

i hope you mean dropshadowing not shading...


***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:What you write.
Deadline:March 22nd
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[weakfingers]

I hate going out in my car, Its alot easier getting to spots but If you are going out in a car, park far from a spot in case you need to run.

As for throwie repitition, I really need to work on that. I cannot just draw mine without going back and fixing a line or two not to mention going super slow. Would it help if I drew a really clean one then just practiced from that rather then going off the top of my head?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0480.jpg
yeah my handstyle blows

[provinT13]

I think if you can get a nice clean sketch, you might as well reference it when you're sketching another. I hate going out in my car but my city is so spread out that I have to drive to get to any spot.

[ShaolinNy]

yeh best way to learn throwies is to just do your own 12345432345654323456543 times. until you can do it with ur eyes closed. practicing other people stuff just fucks you up. stick with it sneak, youre commin along nicely.


dont practice other ppls ish it wont help you progress your own. dont use your car, tahts how i got caught. practice the one i gave you, its your style after all...just tweaked.

Ok thx alot guys will do!

[weakfingers]

I think i need to work with some letters to match the style because it seems off to me.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0482.jpg

[Hyphy]

My first pathetic attempt at a throwie...

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2536/reach14.png

[Zarb]

Hyphy- thats not a bad first attempt at all. lose the lining around the throwie and just keep working on your letters, youll get it.

[SONE.]

try a drop shadow. and lose the M's dick.

[SONE.]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090320.jpg
ive been doin some thangs.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/P1010004.jpg
^old

[Queezy]

Skwint- Everything looks good besides the T in my eyes. Once you figure out a good style for that it'll look much better, and maybe bring the top right part of the K down lower.

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q68/JuicinIt/QueezyBSThrow.jpg

[-ESO-]

I fucked up on this but whatev.
ill get flicks of my better throws later

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3186/0316091511.jpg

[snackmachine]

Queezy- shits nice bro.
Sone- i like the older one better, but both still look good.

[B.S. POLICE]

oh god, waht is that???!!

[sallybsk]

yea... i know right? I can't even see an E... :\
it just looks like a bunch of lines.
is that a k? or an h?

[smooth_nuts]

the what you write battle ends tomorrow,so you better enter or catch a nutcsack to the forehead!

***toy throwup battle callout***
Word:What You Write.
Deadline:March 22nd
Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/tytty.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

That's nice, bus, but I would lose the little hump on the top of the E.

http://i44.tinypic.com/mtt5x5.jpg

Brainstorming causes shitty Es and stray lines.

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/moners.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't dig the limp dick looking things all over the place.
The E is goofy too, man

[graffdabusup]

I don't dig the limp dick looking things all over the place.
The E is goofy too, man

thanks for the honesty =P

[BigBlueViolence]

that M without those things would be dope, though.
Just a flat bar across the top.

[denaaa]

mone-i like your simplee nott your throwiee soo much thoughh
bigbluee-i like your a and r butt your e needs work
crits??
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/3dethroww.jpg

[bulltimeJAMP]

ok thats an alright two letter but i suggest that you makeyour full word with that, and to make it look good youll have to make the middle prong on the e smaller.

[Zarb]

I dropped the O and put a period there instead
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0322092116.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0322092117.jpg
Sone- That 2nd one if fire
Queezy- I have no complaints, i like it
Mone- Your simples good but do what big blue said about your throw
Big Blue- ya every thing except the E looks nice
DE- I like your 2 letter alot also, now maybe try working on your full name

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2urt8p5.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

mone-i like your simplee nott your throwiee soo much thoughh
bigbluee-i like your a and r butt your e needs work
crits??
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee58/all_apolegies/3dethroww.jpg

this can really be something, just keep practcing your lines are too shaky

[Sizzuurp]

ur gettin much better zarb keep at it. i like the period better than the o. ur L needs some tweakin along with the rest of ur letters, but keep at it/

i really like that DE its lookin raw as hell. but yea your lines could be smoother.

[EST2007]

still workin on my throw, ehhhhh still needs work

http://www.hookedonhiphop.com/images/uploads/SP_A0804.jpg

[EST2007]

http://i39.tinypic.com/33ubdk7.jpg


eh havent written in a while decided to fill one in.Crits please!

i dont mean to shit on you, but it looks like ur trying too hard to emulate cliche bubble bottomed letters. the S needs to lose the hard angled tumor, since your letters are really rounded it downst flow. the K also needs a lot of work and it too needs to lose the tumor.

[EST2007]

ight, thanks dudes.

trying it out...

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/90/l_99d19de271a74d969461bd6994554b92.jpg

def has potential, R is mad weak tho

[EST2007]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/Snapshot_20090320.jpg


i like ur throw but i hate that E, and it seems like everyone uses it. dont make the bobble on the N so big, it draws attention from the other letters. i'd make it the same size as the S's bottom bubble if that makes sense

[EST2007]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/tytty.jpg

imo simples like this i dont consider throws. too many corners and angles. you should be able to bust out a throw just like BAM

but for what it's worth, ur letters have good structure. clean simple bars

[EST2007]

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4979/screencapture31.png

love it.... BUT i dont like how the cut into the N is so deep, and on the N the bottom is pointy, but none of the letters are like that, fucks with the flow

[EST2007]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1-2-1.png

check up on that A. JA got that A on lock already
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i242/WESTCOAST_ROCKER/DSC00682.jpg

[shayk]

you shuld probly put your paint on lock "JA"

http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG00207.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

your retarded that is ja on the pics

[Juicee]

your retarded that is ja on the pics

i lol'd hahahahahahha

also shayk, your flow is pretty bad; it looks like you took an hour to do that lol..
imo you should work on making your letters less blocky and makin it flow right

[Bink1]

wtf shayk, u didnt knew who JA was? (u prolly know now -.-)

[EST2007]

I lol'd...

[B.S. POLICE]

the whole fuckin world lol'd, cept for ja...

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, he took a hit of rock.

[B.S. POLICE]

true story

[bulltimeJAMP]

happened to a friend of a friend of mine.

[PaKt PaKt]

Just trying out a new throwie. Just wanted to know how you all felt about it. Thanks in advance for any crits and advice.