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lolumad?
05-03-2008, 11:07 PM
a quick one liner, crits please?http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2963/imgjn7.jpg

lolumad?
05-03-2008, 11:08 PM
yeah man played cal for two years. i was tired of all the baddies so now all i do is rage noobs, and fags in real life.

La Coka Nostra
05-03-2008, 11:11 PM
what league?
i had a friend who placed 3rd in cal o last year.
was supposed to move up to cal m this year, but his team split.

lolumad?
05-03-2008, 11:13 PM
played cal o first year, did shitty then made a cal m team and we got sponsored and then i missed one practice and was kicked off the team so i was like fuck this

lolumad?
05-03-2008, 11:33 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5529/imghw5.th.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imghw5.jpg)

dark2
05-04-2008, 12:28 AM
2155

lolumad?
05-04-2008, 12:43 AM
dark, id work on makin the letters the same size and style;ex:the a looks way out of place. and clean up the letters

dark2
05-04-2008, 12:46 AM
ok thanx i will keep working on it 4 sure it looked alot better on pappr though lol

Andre
05-04-2008, 08:05 AM
played cal o first year, did shitty then made a cal m team and we got sponsored and then i missed one practice and was kicked off the team so i was like fuck this

yea ur right, stickers are pointless cuz they get ripped off so quickly. my friend worked like 30 min. on a sticker, put it up, and 2 days later it was taken off.

im not a sticker person, but the reason i did it was cuz it was mylast one and i was bored so what other better way to practice?

Anyway, im out of cans too so i needa go get some. ill post pics wen i get some hah

oakstr1
05-04-2008, 02:07 PM
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8672/akakthrowieju6.jpg
bottom page bump.

Bazer
05-04-2008, 02:08 PM
bottom page bump.


oh no u di'iiiint!



:rolleyes:

oakstr1
05-04-2008, 02:09 PM
oh no u di'iiiint!



:rolleyes:


haha what?

Bazer
05-04-2008, 02:11 PM
i dont know... lol

La Coka Nostra
05-04-2008, 02:21 PM
oak, its alright. i wouldn't write "ONER" in the letters.
matter fact...i wouldnt write oner at all.

lolumad?
05-04-2008, 03:45 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5529/imghw5.th.jpg (http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imghw5.jpg)

bumpppp, crits please

maneframe
05-04-2008, 04:03 PM
^^are the letters DP or AP??(its not very clear) sorry,i cant read em. nice one liner though.

lolumad?
05-04-2008, 04:31 PM
its dp they are lower case

Capo Izi
05-04-2008, 07:21 PM
New throws...(ignore the crown, I was bored, and I thought it looked cool)


http://a262.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/89/l_b206de746eb5ab2190166cd0720d8ffd.jpg

http://a761.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/114/l_373af005fa9d8f496f7652ab89740e38.jpg

lolumad?
05-04-2008, 07:47 PM
lose the weird shit like the bump on the c and the shit on the r

sheltr
05-04-2008, 08:40 PM
http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee187/sheltaro/action.jpg?t=1209951599
i know the crown is pushin it, but its just for effect

"Bi2aR"
05-04-2008, 11:16 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0003-7.jpg

critz?

La Coka Nostra
05-04-2008, 11:26 PM
those "shines" make it look incredibly toy.
other than that, i guess its okay.
its not incredibly good, but also not incredibly bad.

Capo Izi
05-04-2008, 11:41 PM
lose the weird shit like the bump on the c and the shit on the r

the regime is just a random word.....but the leg on the C used to be on the top, should it go back to that?

jersOneTIC
05-05-2008, 01:05 AM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9646/dsc00219wj0.jpg

Andre
05-05-2008, 01:39 PM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9646/dsc00219wj0.jpg
You can be a little more creative with the J, and maybe the R
ur E is pretty unique

lolumad?
05-05-2008, 03:20 PM
the regime is just a random word.....but the leg on the C used to be on the top, should it go back to that?

id lose it all together and work on shit that is clean and simple then progress.

Capo Izi
05-05-2008, 04:19 PM
jesus christ, done and done, I had a REALLY simple one and people told me to progress, I did, what the fuck its like go simple, check, now progress, I do, then you just stay start again, FUCKING A mate...

maso1
05-05-2008, 05:56 PM
JersOne TIC: I'm really liking your throwie although you could probably do something with the J to match he other letters

Andre
05-05-2008, 06:19 PM
jesus christ, done and done, I had a REALLY simple one and people told me to progress, I did, what the fuck its like go simple, check, now progress, I do, then you just stay start again, FUCKING A mate...

Capo.. your throwie is not simple. It looks like you're trying too hard on adding style and throwing "cool" extra little things.
Practice on Capo. Forget Regime. Just practice on Capo, start simple. And by simple i mean not with the little crown or with the bumps and stuff on the c and crap. Just do ur basic throwie and keep practicing it and getting the flow right and under control. Once u mastered that, THEN add small things. dont even practice shadowing or outlining yet, just Capo itself.

Step-by-step Progression, my friend, is what gets you somewhere.

Identity Crisis
05-05-2008, 09:20 PM
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj273/PG_Miscreant/IMG_0022.jpg
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj273/PG_Miscreant/IMG_0020-1.jpg

sazek
05-05-2008, 09:21 PM
jers lookin dope..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y24/qwerty87/0505081945.jpg

Fame.
05-05-2008, 09:42 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/efayemee.jpg

Andre
05-06-2008, 03:09 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/efayemee.jpg

Ur style is dope but try working a bit on the M. maybe putting the bottom line Higher vertically or something

And by any chance do u go to Cypress Creek?

ESKiMO2
05-06-2008, 06:52 PM
halp! i suck at throwies.

Keke
05-06-2008, 07:38 PM
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4996/img0223ow3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4996/img0223ow3.da454d190f.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=180&i=img0223ow3.jpg)
trying somthing new, dont like it too much myself crits please

Soup- am i the only one that cat read this? is it SuPAa? either way , looks good

Gyse
05-07-2008, 07:42 PM
jesia- I like your name, but first, I don't think you should put X's as holes.
the I doesn't look much like one to me and the J seems to need help especially.

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/7672/gysevh2.th.png (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysevh2.png)
how wack is this? I did a really shitty job with the G.

Keke
05-07-2008, 07:58 PM
its not an i its a t XD

Gyse
05-07-2008, 08:03 PM
Oh, my bad. I thought it kindof looked more like a T, but then I looked at the tag and the line in the A made me think it was a capital I. haha, that makes a lot more sense now. in the bomb you should also make the line between the to "legs" of the A come up higher, it will look better.

Keke
05-07-2008, 08:13 PM
thanks, will practice, i like your style on your throwies just dont like the disconecxted parts

Gyse
05-07-2008, 08:17 PM
thanks, will practice, i like your style on your throwies just dont like the disconecxted parts

you mean those triangle kindof parts at the bottoms?

Keke
05-07-2008, 09:25 PM
yeah

Capo Izi
05-07-2008, 10:31 PM
Capo.. your throwie is not simple. It looks like you're trying too hard on adding style and throwing "cool" extra little things.
Practice on Capo. Forget Regime. Just practice on Capo, start simple. And by simple i mean not with the little crown or with the bumps and stuff on the c and crap. Just do ur basic throwie and keep practicing it and getting the flow right and under control. Once u mastered that, THEN add small things. dont even practice shadowing or outlining yet, just Capo itself.

Step-by-step Progression, my friend, is what gets you somewhere.

I just wrote regime for fun, but ahh shit I hate when you're not in a thread for a while, I meant I've already posted TONS of simples that were TOO simple as many people said, so I stepped forward, THAT throw wasn't a simple, bur a step in progression.

You're just trying to back track me, I mean you have good ideas in mind, but I've done the simples and everyone said it was good, just TOO simple, so now I'm trying to progress.

Which here ya go....

http://a358.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_4fbbebe9207c34bfd0060b6f5e3dd955.jpg

http://a972.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/104/l_ee162bd0f58a3d3138f91f25e43ac74b.jpg

Fube
05-08-2008, 02:39 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/IMG-1.jpg

shot at the up coming toss battle.

"Serote"

Andre
05-08-2008, 06:08 AM
I just wrote regime for fun, but ahh shit I hate when you're not in a thread for a while, I meant I've already posted TONS of simples that were TOO simple as many people said, so I stepped forward, THAT throw wasn't a simple, bur a step in progression.

You're just trying to back track me, I mean you have good ideas in mind, but I've done the simples and everyone said it was good, just TOO simple, so now I'm trying to progress.

Which here ya go....

http://a358.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/79/l_4fbbebe9207c34bfd0060b6f5e3dd955.jpg

http://a972.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/104/l_ee162bd0f58a3d3138f91f25e43ac74b.jpg
See that looks way better. Just keep working and practicing on that tille you get the flow under your 100% control. Then you can add shit to it or whatever. Either way, do w/e you want and wat fits your style I'm just givin my 2 cents

Shoook
05-08-2008, 02:27 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/esfootwear20/DSCF4489.jpg
Crits?

traP905
05-08-2008, 03:41 PM
fix the U

Mass Appeal
05-08-2008, 05:47 PM
jesia- I like your name, but first, I don't think you should put X's as holes.
the I doesn't look much like one to me and the J seems to need help especially.

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/7672/gysevh2.th.png (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysevh2.png)
how wack is this? I did a really shitty job with the G.

i really really really like this. The G is dope

lolumad?
05-08-2008, 06:28 PM
i really really really like this. The G is dope

are you serious?

$1LENCR
05-08-2008, 11:17 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/esfootwear20/DSCF4489.jpg
Crits?

hella sik...just work a little bit on your U

GHOST_307
05-09-2008, 04:50 AM
heres i quick one i worked on, critics welcome, im still fucking with it but thatz a blueprint of it

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn193/GHOST_307/gtag.jpg

SAID
05-09-2008, 06:26 AM
loose the blue around it, aswell as the patches in the bottom of your letters.

grat
05-09-2008, 12:59 PM
http://i30.tinypic.com/99jn1e.jpg
constructive critisism please

dark2
05-09-2008, 05:11 PM
grat the g and t look good but use bars for the r and a but deff has some potential keep at it

dark2
05-09-2008, 05:14 PM
2221

Gyse
05-09-2008, 08:01 PM
grat- you may want to try a little simpler stuff cuz I can hardly read that. but thats just my opinion.
shuk- I agree, straiten out that U and the one part of the K and it'll look good.
capo- you may want to try something a little bit different with the top of the A.

thanks mass appeal. you think this is better or worse?
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/2931/gysesx5.th.png (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysesx5.png)

aesopjux
05-10-2008, 12:00 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/25am2dz.jpg:confused:

idk
quick throw

GEIN
05-10-2008, 03:02 AM
I might as well try my luck in here.
http://i168.photobucket.com/albums/u169/spicypersonburger/GEIN.jpg
Not sure if it counts as a throw though.

I'm going to try and find a better one that's a little more proportioned and I used a cheap orange marker that happened to just be sitting there, possibly for days, drying out. But, you get the idea.

Blorbis
05-10-2008, 01:18 PM
My first ever sketch of a possible throwie:

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/1548/throwupjk3.th.jpg

Reson.
05-10-2008, 04:40 PM
Just starting out looking for crits. I know its shitty but i need to hear it

Reson.
05-10-2008, 04:53 PM
Just starting out looking for crits. I know its shitty but i need to hear it. The R and the E are terrible

J-CHICKEN!
05-10-2008, 05:18 PM
keep it simple, try doing like normal block letters to start off

J-CHICKEN!
05-10-2008, 05:22 PM
critz?

Reson.
05-10-2008, 06:22 PM
OK i kept it rly simple here. Crits please

Fube
05-10-2008, 06:30 PM
what are u guys looking for? thats hot, or fuck thats so ill. well, it takes work, this shit is not something u can get in a month, shit theres guys writing for like 4 years and still aint got shit down. something can be simple and still have shitty structure. i dont know how to explane it but your lines just look awkward, like they dont belong. keep working.

GEIN
05-10-2008, 08:19 PM
Please excuse me if I read your names wrong.

Shuk-I agree just fix up that u and maybe the k and its dope.

Sorz-Try making all the letters the same size. So the S is the same as the Z.

Reson-All I can really say is look for the thread about simples and do them until your fingers bleed. Not just simple letters do them like they are on your keyboard.

Not really in the best position to give crits but, it's just my first thoughts at a glance.

Shoook
05-11-2008, 02:19 AM
exchange with sare
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f305/esfootwear20/sareexchange.jpg

ADUB510
05-11-2008, 02:56 PM
good bad really bad what do you guys thinkhttp://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y25/adub510/DSC00135.jpg

ADUB510
05-11-2008, 03:10 PM
good bad really bad what do you guys thinkhttp://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y25/adub510/DSC00135.jpg

globule08
05-11-2008, 05:19 PM
zest, try block simples... dont try run before you can walk...
it looks sloppy, like you put no effort into it. no offense meant.

osnapizzel
05-11-2008, 05:51 PM
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/9035/picture198ce7.jpg

did this on the train yesterday so it came out a little shaky crits would be nice

zale
05-11-2008, 06:10 PM
OHSNAP: decent work on flow

some throw sketches:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P4290231.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v475/EZALE/P4290229.jpg

"Bi2aR"
05-11-2008, 06:32 PM
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0007-3.jpg

osnapizzel
05-11-2008, 07:04 PM
exchange with sare lol the came out messed up and my camera is freaking out

here you go man jsut dont bite the hand that feedshttp://img247.imageshack.us/img247/3051/picture199ji2.jpg

...AMOK...
05-11-2008, 07:18 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f21/holdentitties/amok.jpg

Shoook
05-11-2008, 07:39 PM
i agree with zale withe flow is good ohsnap and statik i like the first one betterand looks good amok work on the m abit

lolumad?
05-11-2008, 08:25 PM
damn the sare would be pretty sick painted with a good color scheme.

Gyse
05-11-2008, 08:54 PM
amok- real good. keep it simple and you'll get there( my god, I'm in a good mood..)but you need to make the 3d on the K thicker.
I like that sare blue and silver except for the S. the E is especially nice I think.
Statik- get rid of that extra little bump on the middle left of the S. and make that bump on the A better if you keep it(more of a perfect circle)
here's a new throwie I've been trying. what's everyone's opinion?
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2093/gysesv6.th.png (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysesv6.png)
(you can click it to see it bigger for those of you unfamiliar with imageshack..)

osnapizzel
05-11-2008, 09:05 PM
appreciate the crits guys, gyse yeah the s didnt come out as good as i wanted, i cant wait to see sareones post

atlok7
05-11-2008, 09:17 PM
any one want to exchange a paper throw?

Shoook
05-11-2008, 10:14 PM
yo atlok ill do a exchange with you

ENOC
05-11-2008, 10:50 PM
ENOC. i dunno about it. something about it is bothering me
im not sure what tho.
crits?

Ohsnap- that SARE one looks dopee. i like your style.
and your color scheme on it. i like the red and silver one you did
for yourself too.


http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h46/Ponyboy_Curtis91/graff/IMG_9342.jpg

PatchesO
05-12-2008, 07:31 AM
really likin the stuff from osnapizzel

Appreciate feed back

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/223/throwielw5.jpg

631
05-12-2008, 08:20 AM
static- i like the second one

ohsnap- im seeing good potential work on flow

ADUB510
05-12-2008, 11:55 AM
zest, try block simples... dont try run before you can walk...
it looks sloppy, like you put no effort into it. no offense meant.
yeah i wasnt really trying just kind of messing around with things fuckin around.

ADUB510
05-12-2008, 12:04 PM
zest, try block simples... dont try run before you can walk...
it looks sloppy, like you put no effort into it. no offense meant.
fsho u said what i did haha.

osnapizzel
05-12-2008, 12:58 PM
atlok im down for an exchange

bowchicabowow
05-12-2008, 02:45 PM
ZALE: Static is one of the biggest writers in MPLS if your care.

631
05-12-2008, 02:58 PM
ohsnap- the exchange looks fresh

Gyse
05-12-2008, 04:00 PM
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2093/gysesv6.th.png (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysesv6.png)

just reposting it cause no one said anything.

smob- your S looks like it needs some work, but the others look pretty good.
just don't put that extension on the bottom farthest right leg of the M- you should make it round so it looks like the other letters but without that extension.

Amok- I did some shitty MSpaint drawing to show you whats wrong with your 3D. the letters looked good though.
http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/4980/amokzu2.th.jpg (http://img229.imageshack.us/my.php?image=amokzu2.jpg)

Basic954
05-12-2008, 04:06 PM
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/9526/p1080042cd8.jpg
my first throwie - critz???

DECO ONE
05-12-2008, 06:27 PM
VERB ONE - CRITZ?


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000103.jpg

Chump
05-12-2008, 06:29 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/6cnsrh0myafyr7gzw65n.jpg

lolumad?
05-12-2008, 06:50 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/6cnsrh0myafyr7gzw65n.jpg

id lose those drips, and mess around with the h i dunno its wierd to me but maybe its just me its deff got potential.

SCIEnce802
05-12-2008, 07:00 PM
switch the s and the E up, take drips out.

Gyse
05-12-2008, 07:12 PM
VERB ONE - CRITZ?


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000103.jpg

fucking sick. I'd like to see the full throw if you've got a pic already on your computer. I dont even know what could be wrong with that.

bsc- work on that S and C. The b will be ok for now.

anything on mine? I know that thing is fucking toy, someones gotta have an opinion right?

lOZE1
05-12-2008, 08:00 PM
http://a664.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/10/l_acb407b834b79c35ef6cf1c989f6594f.jpg

lOZE1
05-12-2008, 08:01 PM
:phttp://a664.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/10/l_acb407b834b79c35ef6cf1c989f6594f.jpg

dark2
05-12-2008, 08:03 PM
gyse- make all your bars the same width like ur e but keep it up p.s mines not much better but ya lol

heres my most recent one critz ?

2253



nice double post loze.. but just work on your can control

Gyse
05-12-2008, 08:46 PM
gyse- make all your bars the same width like ur e but keep it up p.s mines not much better but ya lol

heres my most recent one critz ?

2253



nice double post loze.. but just work on your can control

Alright, thanks. and before I forget, Loze- you can click edit and delete your second post so you dont get any shit for a double post. and dark, you dont actually have to give a reason for deleting or editing posts.

about your throw loze- its not so bad, but I think, aside from the can control issue, you should make those bars on the middle of the Z the same width. and dont make the E a bubble letter if the others are more blockish. A lower case E might look good with that.

dark- lose the thing on the bottom right of the R first. and on the A, do something with the top part that curves down, it just doesn't look right.the K and D look pretty good.

dark2
05-12-2008, 10:35 PM
ok good to know and thanx ill try that

PatchesO
05-13-2008, 12:53 AM
A few opinions


GYSE - I like it, id play around with the middle part
of your E a bit and maybe make the top right of your G wider.

LOZE - pretty much what GYSE said, play with that Z and try
keep your letters consistant.

VERB ONE - all good.

Worked in one a bit today I reckon its a bit better, still dunno about the M tho, let me know

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7807/newthrowieswb0.jpg

Basic954
05-13-2008, 09:25 AM
the m looks like two seperate letters to me.

~Star~
05-13-2008, 07:50 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/IMG-1.jpg

shot at the up coming toss battle.

"Serote"

Thats fuckin DOPEEE guy, keep bombin bro

Gyse
05-13-2008, 08:08 PM
A few opinions


GYSE - I like it, id play around with the middle part
of your E a bit and maybe make the top right of your G wider.

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/7807/newthrowieswb0.jpg

thanks. the first one looked best but I think you might want to open up the top right section of the S. and the M might look better without that extension. the bottom of the B could be more circular.

here's that red and black I did and a new one I made today. which looks better?( and if the old one is better, then I'll make those changes you said smob.)
old
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2093/gysesv6.th.png (http://img103.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gysesv6.png)
new
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8308/gyseps1.th.png (http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gyseps1.png)

thats me
05-13-2008, 08:21 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll150/JYwriter/011.jpg

Shoook
05-13-2008, 08:23 PM
thats a tight throw man i dont even know if there is anything to crit about

thats me
05-13-2008, 08:36 PM
my throwie???

FlipOneSon
05-13-2008, 09:04 PM
http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii35/FLIPAEA/Picture015.jpg
crits?

thats me
05-13-2008, 09:07 PM
work on your f and l
they look like an e and c
but other than that pretty good

lolumad?
05-14-2008, 06:21 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2ykx8ah.jpg
dark-try and keep letters the same size
thatsme- i like it alot
i hate my "u" crits please?

Gyse
05-14-2008, 06:32 PM
flip- that's a pretty generic name, but if you wanna keep it then whatever. your P also needs a little work. dont make the lines cut into it so much.
dup- the U isn't that bad, I just don't like how it moves into the P. I'm not sure what would look better, but I wouldn't put that loop on top of the P and the right of the U. It looks better with just one there.
was my old throw better than the other one I posted?

Juicee
05-14-2008, 06:45 PM
lolumad: your "D" is fresh but i'd like 2 see a cleaner version

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/sober1watwat.jpg

i like the S and O on mine but i hate the rest.

lolumad?
05-14-2008, 06:50 PM
the new one is better but i would make the tops of the letters match. yeah its just like a 5 sec one liner with pencil so its really rough, i need new markers. and sober if i were you id mess around with the b and e the rest is straight man.

lolumad?
05-14-2008, 06:52 PM
lol yeah gyse thats what i hate about it i need help on connecting them.

traP905
05-14-2008, 07:23 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/heloo.jpg
crits?

lolumad?
05-14-2008, 07:49 PM
i like every thing except the n and the quote bubble

traP905
05-14-2008, 08:07 PM
i need seriouse help on an N. cheesing me for awhile......

lolumad?
05-14-2008, 08:14 PM
idk i hate "n's" my advice is keeping the legs the same size

SPRAY yoface407
05-14-2008, 08:47 PM
krum

IlikePie
05-14-2008, 08:56 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/dde387b2.jpg

I'm bored as fuck... I hate not having work now, I got nothing to do all day...

osnapizzel
05-14-2008, 09:39 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3940/picture204qr4.jpg

crits?

traP905
05-14-2008, 10:17 PM
letters are kind of hidden towards the end there haha

osnapizzel
05-14-2008, 10:51 PM
yeah i was kinda limited on space lol

IlikePie
05-14-2008, 10:54 PM
The middle bar on your N goes too far down.

osnapizzel
05-15-2008, 12:22 AM
thanks dude ill make sure that wont happen next time around

Xored
05-15-2008, 01:17 AM
Nase - That n is real bad :P

traP905
05-15-2008, 07:32 AM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/nase-new1.jpg
crit again

Gyse
05-15-2008, 04:28 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/nase-new1.jpg
crit again

nah, the older one was better. use the old S, it was sick. but on the older one, make all the tops of the letters like the top of that S. make the bottom of the left leg on the A round not pointy, and lose the extension on the bottom left of the E. The old N looked better too. just play with it, you'll get something eventually. and lose the tear drop, those are so played out.

Chump
05-15-2008, 04:51 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/f1gfud98st9a35xux2kb.jpg

hazetheone
05-15-2008, 05:11 PM
haha i remember a month ago you were stuck
you've improved a lot man keep up the good work

Chump
05-15-2008, 05:16 PM
yea man i was having some major problems lol... then i change my name and went with a new style...I really like the nasty, messy kind of style...so im trying to go towards that

DEAR
05-15-2008, 06:41 PM
http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3940/picture204qr4.jpg

crits?

paintin on the ol tarp.. ya ur letters get smaller as u go on, not to shabby at all tho

IlikePie
05-15-2008, 08:37 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i217/Supermanexists/dde387b2.jpg

I'm bored as fuck... I hate not having work now, I got nothing to do all day...

Yes??? No??? Damnit folk :(

Gyse
05-15-2008, 08:43 PM
Yes??? No??? Damnit folk :(

I'd keep the R open you know? don't close that leg next to the A off. maybe try a lower case R. and I like the A.

Kruxos
05-15-2008, 10:10 PM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2296/picture14nf2.jpg
like tuna, tunafish..crits?

chump - lookin very nice, i like the style.

dear - nice simple, work on that o and the h a little more tho. i cant really see how your control is cuz of the tarp, but it looks pretty good.

maso1
05-15-2008, 11:40 PM
Kruoxs that look dope, paint it.

sylent
05-15-2008, 11:55 PM
http://a44.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/29/l_850db79fc762ee0982873f05f23ac943.jpg
http://a117.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_edf78c4d552da202a527ffcf6e0b8d64.jpg
http://a949.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/59/l_9a55acd373c39570e799a5d0afe08b3c.jpg
http://a264.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/49/l_d599d3a72355005d57706e46b51dc1e7.jpg
some stuff i did for some friends

osnapizzel
05-16-2008, 10:54 AM
kruxos, the tarp is pain in the ass for can control cause its constantly an uneven surface, thanks for the crits man

Kruxos
05-16-2008, 02:59 PM
yea i figured. the tarp is just deceiving

Fluffy Bunnies
05-16-2008, 03:08 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/4-4.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-8.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/2-14.jpg

drop one.
05-16-2008, 04:27 PM
http://a350.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/31/l_17fb458a97a61c31f77b72b58cf56f15.jpghttp://a697.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/108/l_c60acec322b79d6a43a3b06c25f06190.jpg

lolumad?
05-16-2008, 06:36 PM
drop one- i think i saw one of your video's on youtube or one of your crew's members or something, a heavy latino kid, but try and keep it simple and lose all the shines and stuff, heres a one liner;crits?http://i32.tinypic.com/292r7g2.jpg

lolumad?
05-16-2008, 06:37 PM
fucked up nib

drop one.
05-16-2008, 08:58 PM
drop one- i think i saw one of your video's on youtube or one of your crew's members or something, a heavy latino kid, but try and keep it simple and lose all the shines and stuff, heres a one liner;crits?
nah thats e kuz no one in my crew got vids but na im not latino the pink one was at a chill spot

white
05-17-2008, 01:31 AM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2296/picture14nf2.jpg
like tuna, tunafish..crits?

chump - lookin very nice, i like the style.

dear - nice simple, work on that o and the h a little more tho. i cant really see how your control is cuz of the tarp, but it looks pretty good.

i like the glare on your shading, you should paint that up and post a pic

drop one.
05-17-2008, 06:50 AM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)
http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU (http://youtube.com/watch?v=iE5a8GGZypU)


My Graff Vid

shiva - the destroyer
05-17-2008, 06:52 AM
read your comments on youtube

letsgobombin
05-18-2008, 05:49 AM
some new throw ideas, pretty simple
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1191.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1192.jpg

dup(?)- downsize it then repost it
poze- the pink one was horrible you need to work on that alot, your throwie is ok, simple, just evolve it now
kils- those are fresh, i like your style on the 3rd pic make the k bigger it is smaller than the other letters
sylent- simples, go to the new to graff thread if you havent already
tona- looks pretty good, give it a drop shadow instead of 3d
pie- is that ra? if so make your a look less like an r, dont make it overhang so much, dont close off the top
of the r from the bottom
ohsnap- i remember paintin on the tarp, i like your style just not your n, it seems like a block with a line through
diagonally also add some jazz to your p
sokeh- i like your style, round off the end and the edge of the h and make the bit on the e like the bottom of the s

Cliff
05-19-2008, 07:19 PM
Lets see some painted shit

fonone
05-19-2008, 10:23 PM
crew throw

http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/5100/may20167oi6.b50fef2b7a.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=261&i=may20167oi6.jpg)

Reson.
05-19-2008, 10:54 PM
Ok well heres a couple things i did first time out

pepe.teh.prawn
05-20-2008, 08:12 AM
hmmmmm, its okay but when you do thro ups make sure your outline is just outside the fill in so the outline isnt inside the fill-in and there is also no gaps between out line and fill in.

what paint did you use?

Chump
05-20-2008, 09:23 AM
reson...do simples...

DECO ONE
05-20-2008, 09:33 AM
Back to my Old Throwie......any critz?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000120.jpg

Chump
05-20-2008, 09:49 AM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/ljy7q9kyqqqcqgkw0bbn.jpg
workin on a 2 letter...
Deco- i like the R but i cant tell what the 2nd letter is... i guess its an E?

DECO ONE
05-20-2008, 09:55 AM
Back to my Old Throwie......any critz?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000120.jpg
Chump- Yeah, its an RE Throwie.

Chump
05-20-2008, 09:58 AM
not a big fan of the e

letsgobombin
05-20-2008, 11:16 AM
some new throw ideas, pretty simple
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1191.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1192.jpg

bump
sokeh- i would use your normal s
resin- its better than your normal stuff, make the top bit of the e protrude more
irekn- thats k is sick, make the c like the a so that it doesnt touch the other lines

Chump
05-20-2008, 11:49 AM
i would use the same S but i hate having the same letters in a 2 letter as in my throw

AdRe*
05-20-2008, 12:05 PM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd201/adre89/HPIM1209.jpg
crit

letsgobombin
05-20-2008, 12:22 PM
give to get and graff creator e. cant be botherd to check the rest

Cliff
05-20-2008, 02:03 PM
Chump keep that H

Reson.
05-20-2008, 03:27 PM
I used Montana thats the only paint that the art store near me sells lol

seywhat
05-20-2008, 08:47 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage86.jpg

$1LENCR
05-20-2008, 09:52 PM
http://a44.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/29/l_850db79fc762ee0982873f05f23ac943.jpg
http://a117.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/1/l_edf78c4d552da202a527ffcf6e0b8d64.jpg
http://a949.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/59/l_9a55acd373c39570e799a5d0afe08b3c.jpg
http://a264.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/49/l_d599d3a72355005d57706e46b51dc1e7.jpg
some stuff i did for some friends

not feelin ya A's brah

Pootie13
05-20-2008, 10:49 PM
So i've been searching for where to post throws, and i can't find one for painted throws, i'm not used to bombingscience even though it seems like it's bascilly exactly like peegee, anyways here's some of my throws from older to newer..sincerly sorry if it's not in the right thread..

http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky13.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky16.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky15-1.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky17.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/winky19.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/winky18.jpg
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky20.jpg

HELLOMYNAMEIS,
05-21-2008, 12:29 AM
^^
your bottom throw reminds me of teeth.

drop one.
05-21-2008, 03:46 PM
1st one is the best

Pootie13
05-21-2008, 04:46 PM
I've been told by tons of people that the first one sucks the worst, which is why i started trying to get a different one..

ALA!
05-21-2008, 07:02 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2yz0c4j.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2125pux.jpg
second time using paint :/
critiques?

DECO ONE
05-22-2008, 01:05 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2yz0c4j.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2125pux.jpg
second time using paint :/
critiques?

one thing....dont write alone...theres already a very accomplished writer with that name...

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/036.jpg

Heres a Throwie i did for a friend that writes BOND....ant Critz?

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IMG000122.jpg

letsgobombin
05-22-2008, 10:35 AM
http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n291/Poot13/Winky13.jpg

that first one is the best, who said it was the worst?

Cliff
05-22-2008, 01:41 PM
That n is fat

aesopjux
05-22-2008, 02:25 PM
Alone-Name is already taken
Deco-Like the N. B seems like its missing something.
Pootie-Looks good. Props for using paint.

Did this VERY quickly.

Constructive Citicism Please?

http://i29.tinypic.com/2uz4dgz.jpg

Chump
05-22-2008, 02:41 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/26fcg3pijuu7gjj5o37w.jpg
workin out the kinks...

letsgobombin
05-22-2008, 02:48 PM
your h looks alot like your k for some reason

SWIV3L
05-22-2008, 03:09 PM
h's and k's are pretty muck the same thing

letsgobombin
05-22-2008, 03:15 PM
ye but the edges of k's have to stick out more or h's have to stick out less

ALA!
05-22-2008, 06:26 PM
one thing....dont write alone...theres already a very accomplished writer with that name...

I'm pretty sure theres a lot of accomplished writers with my name. but seeing how i like my name (been writing it for almost half a year) and it means something to me, along with the fact that it's technically AL-one and i live in a small, suburban, graffiti-deficient town, I think I'll keep it. I surmise it would be difficult to find a decent name not comprised of random letters that isn't used by at least one other person in the world.

can get some feedback on my technique rather than name?

-chump, I'm really diggin that. pootie ur shit is nice as well.

osnapizzel
05-22-2008, 08:11 PM
deco that bond throw is fresh man


just some battle words

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5771/picture205nq0.jpg
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9696/picture207jx4.jpg

crits?

Crieg ya ya DIG
05-22-2008, 08:19 PM
idk throwies idk

osnapizzel
05-22-2008, 11:03 PM
??

BigBlueViolence
05-23-2008, 11:11 AM
http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u291/asthXmagrind/Picture108.jpg


Chump- that throwie is sweet, I just think the leg on the k is too thin, and the bottom of the s is kind of awkward tooking, you should try to smooth it out a bit

$1LENCR
05-24-2008, 02:11 PM
Alone-Name is already taken
Deco-Like the N. B seems like its missing something.
Pootie-Looks good. Props for using paint.

Did this VERY quickly.

Constructive Citicism Please?

http://i29.tinypic.com/2uz4dgz.jpg

don't like the outline.
other than that, it looks pretty good.

mada focka
05-24-2008, 03:18 PM
osna- i think those are pretty sick, but i might make the O a little smaller on "group"


http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/southpark033.jpg

seywhat
05-24-2008, 05:10 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage86.jpg

bump

evade<~~~~
05-24-2008, 06:43 PM
this is my first attempt at a throwup i just started any criticism? http://a262.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/12/l_543755c91b9e59b5332bf2c7b55e978d.jpg

aesopjux
05-24-2008, 11:12 PM
haha yah i dont even like the outline either.
i was gonna shade then i got lazy, and just drew lines around it.

evade- Keep workin on it. Change up your "d". You'll get alot better.

Evasion Of Invasion
05-25-2008, 01:33 AM
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/DSC01385.jpg
go simple bubble letters my crappy graff clone! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

thats me
05-25-2008, 10:24 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll150/JYwriter/Photo0194.jpg

crits??

drop one.
05-25-2008, 10:34 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll150/JYwriter/Photo0194.jpg

crits??

its ight you should try and do your fills better and shadows better

my.favorite.addiction
05-26-2008, 01:46 AM
yo,I dont know where else to put em so here seems a fine spot...


http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0010-2.jpg


sorry,this NO jus wont go smaller...
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0011-2.jpg

sticky with some throws..
http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff48/2cure/IMAG0014-2.jpg

crits porvfavor?

Ease_84
05-26-2008, 05:35 AM
attacheddd !
ease-84

dark2
05-26-2008, 10:35 AM
ease- looking good mang keep it up
thats me- it has potential jus go simpler and if u fill it in better it will look alot better

Ease_84
05-26-2008, 10:43 AM
safe man
i got 7 cans and im off bombing tomorrow
so il post my fresh flicks on wednesday

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-26-2008, 11:31 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/P5120229.jpg
hook a kid up wit some CRIIIIITS!

unreal180
05-26-2008, 02:30 PM
wat it say blud?

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-26-2008, 03:28 PM
it says evil...i thought it was clear

La Coka Nostra
05-26-2008, 03:50 PM
i thought it said evol at first.
not diggin the style so much. the V is pretty dope though.

.COPZER.
05-26-2008, 05:15 PM
2370:p

Mr yarbles
05-26-2008, 06:00 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2yxoo3m.jpg
I've never done throws so i really don't know what to do
Crits?
Says TS

I'd give crits but I don' really know anything about it.

drop one.
05-26-2008, 06:15 PM
any body whos good wanna do a throwie exchange

zeno
05-27-2008, 05:48 AM
freek that's pretty cool, im not sure about the I and the L though... the L is a bit odd and it looks kinda plump... the I is really too fat, id change it... V is really cool, though.

some throwies i just came up with
http://i25.tinypic.com/27yzrcw.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/1rwxgg.jpg
crits?

jawsy
05-27-2008, 05:55 AM
ewwwww, go simpler

zeno
05-27-2008, 06:12 AM
yeah you're right, i was just trying some stuff out...
http://i25.tinypic.com/lz6z9.jpg
better?

jawsy
05-27-2008, 06:14 AM
no
oh and ease dont waste 7 cans on those throwies.. just gernz and do simples

Chump
05-27-2008, 08:30 AM
this thread is lookin rough...

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-27-2008, 09:25 AM
ill post some scketches of my throw...it can look good...my old throw was an abomination

zeno
05-27-2008, 09:46 AM
@chump: you'd say? Anyone, some constructive crits please.

*cept*
05-27-2008, 09:54 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2yxoo3m.jpg
I've never done throws so i really don't know what to do
Crits?
Says TS

I'd give crits but I don' really know anything about it.
not bad man. id just take out the chunk in the t

Chump
05-27-2008, 10:13 AM
@chump: you'd say? Anyone, some constructive crits please.
I was just saying this thread is looking rough... havent seen anything too good on the last page....i would crit yours but your picture isnt coming up on my comp...

Mr yarbles
05-27-2008, 11:13 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/sflco5.jpg
Alrght thanks I did
Here's a couple
I kow I did the shadows wrong on the second one I was just practicing shadowing.
Crits?

Zeno
Go simpler.

evil
I like it but the fill could be a bit better the orange coming through the blue is kinda distracting

Kans
05-27-2008, 04:29 PM
ive been trying to develop my throw and this is what i have so far. crits?2394

osnapizzel
05-27-2008, 07:44 PM
kans straighten out the top of the a and the s cause that wavy line makes it look more toy than it has to be

Trestoner707
05-27-2008, 10:54 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/051308_131200.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/fdffddf.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/fri3.jpg
its coming along.

Mr yarbles
05-27-2008, 11:00 PM
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/051308_131200.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/fdffddf.jpg
http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/mm294/shibyking/fri3.jpg
its coming along.


Your first t looks like a j other than that I like it

Trestoner707
05-27-2008, 11:06 PM
true. ill work on that

Mr yarbles
05-28-2008, 12:15 AM
http://i32.tinypic.com/2e1sx8n.jpg
New t
crits?

Oh yeah and don't do the middle lump in your r it makes it looke like an e kinda

osnapizzel
05-28-2008, 01:08 AM
his r is fine but your t deff needs to be wider on top cause it looks like an i

Nine9
05-28-2008, 06:56 AM
Simple 9.

Not really bubble style or a typical throwie etc.. but it works nice as a clean icon I can bang up.

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8365/dsc00635pk4.th.jpg (http://img147.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00635pk4.jpg)

pikser
05-28-2008, 09:42 AM
http://i195.photobucket.com/albums/z146/tollieg08/Picture007.jpg
crits

sacwacko
05-28-2008, 10:07 AM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/3.jpg

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/6.jpg

zeno
05-28-2008, 10:18 AM
nice sacwacko, i like the upper one the most, the subtile shading is awesome, the shading on the last one is a bit much maybe... this way its kinda weird... maybe its just the size though
you gotta buy some new markers too lol

ATE
05-28-2008, 01:31 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk54/zomada/ate-1.jpg kinda fucked up on proportions and the "e" is fucking wack. didnt turn out as well as my other sketches...unfotunatly my other sketches are shitty :D:D:D
zeno- work on your 3D
mr yarbles- work on the "t" there a bitch arnt they :D:D

AcosOne
05-28-2008, 02:14 PM
pikser, the letters are not consistent in shape and structure, try sketching it with the bar method, it really works
sacwaco, dope throwies man i like em a lot!
ATE, try that same thing^ to get your letters in proportion, try to keep the "strokes" the same shape and thickness, it will help

ok my thingy
http://i26.tinypic.com/1znwkle.jpg
what do you guys think?
crits please.

Mr yarbles
05-28-2008, 03:11 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/9u3dd4.jpg
I've been trying to work on the t

Ate the t kinda kills the flow to me for some reason and it's too big
and yeah
T's are a bitch.

Acos that style's fresh
But the a kinda loks like a b to me

atlok7
05-28-2008, 04:00 PM
trest- i like them, except for that little vertical line at the end of the horizontal line in the E. if you loose that it would b perty solid. just my thoughts

ANY ONE PM ME IF YOU WANNA DO A THROW EXCHANGE

griz
05-28-2008, 05:37 PM
My first throwie as griz:
http://rallytherobots.com/media/1/20080511-griz1.jpg
It's changed a bit since then but feedback would be nice anyway

griz
05-28-2008, 06:27 PM
pikser, the letters are not consistent in shape and structure, try sketching it with the bar method, it really works
sacwaco, dope throwies man i like em a lot!
ATE, try that same thing^ to get your letters in proportion, try to keep the "strokes" the same shape and thickness, it will help

ok my thingy
http://i26.tinypic.com/1znwkle.jpg
what do you guys think?
crits please.

I like it a lot but I'd like to see it without the indents in the A and O.
-edit-
actually i don't know, i'm looking at it again and i'm starting to like the indents. hahaha

AZTEKA
05-28-2008, 09:10 PM
KASPER(KMK.AWA)
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5766/05205rc6.jpg
JAG(KMK)
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2589/05204vk3.jpg
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/7818/05206cs8.jpg
RISK(KMK)
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/6892/05203fk7.jpg

AZTEKA
05-28-2008, 09:12 PM
yo acos work on your a abit i like the flow of the letters.

ATE
05-28-2008, 10:07 PM
pikser, the letters are not consistent in shape and structure, try sketching it with the bar method, it really works
sacwaco, dope throwies man i like em a lot!
ATE, try that same thing^ to get your letters in proportion, try to keep the "strokes" the same shape and thickness, it will help

ok my thingy
http://i26.tinypic.com/1znwkle.jpg
what do you guys think?
crits please.

i know bars..but for a throwie? im not shure i follow..how would i sketch that :D

traP905
05-28-2008, 10:43 PM
http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/DSC00226.jpg
crits?

AcosOne
05-29-2008, 01:42 AM
i know bars..but for a throwie? im not shure i follow..how would i sketch that :D
yeah i dont really mean bars but try imagine your throwie in equally thick "strokes", that might help to make it more consistent.
After that you can start making changes in the thickness of those to make 'em flow better.
haha its hard for me to explain this type of thing because im not from an english-speaking country... so its not your fault if you can't understand me lol

ATE
05-29-2008, 07:39 AM
yeah i dont really mean bars but try imagine your throwie in equally thick "strokes", that might help to make it more consistent.
After that you can start making changes in the thickness of those to make 'em flow better.
haha its hard for me to explain this type of thing because im not from an english-speaking country... so its not your fault if you can't understand me lol

Ahha, its alright i understand now :D fortunatly i had to help teach my best friend english...and i dont think it can get any worse than "Hi food afternoon?"
:D but yea ill try that
Russian FTW :D

MarsWTF
05-29-2008, 12:08 PM
You can use bars to make a throwup, it's just hard to create good style with it. Do sausage type shapes and round off all the edges. I did have a picture of it which I'll post later..

thats me
05-29-2008, 06:13 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll150/JYwriter/Photo0194.jpg

mada focka
05-29-2008, 08:26 PM
thats me - a little slopy, i'd spend more time on the fill

cirts please!
http://i155.photobucket.com/albums/s301/beanshore/southpark003.jpg

braxtons a g
05-30-2008, 04:10 AM
http://i29.tinypic.com/1zf3gra.jpg
newest throw
http://i32.tinypic.com/2m816j4.jpg
i didnt getta finish the outline.. ran out of paint :/
http://i26.tinypic.com/2sb4djb.jpg
super old and i did it with stock tips :/ its a rooftop spot if that makes it any better
http://i30.tinypic.com/ifmqg3.jpg

Keke
05-30-2008, 02:41 PM
life, you need to pracitce on a piece of wood to get the lines better on the first 2, the last one is really bad though man, sorry but just to striaght bars, and bent bars, dont indent them

hazetheone
05-30-2008, 03:16 PM
Hahaha!

letsgobombin
05-31-2008, 04:47 PM
new throwie, ignore the bit sticking out the p and the weird circle in it
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/HPIM1203.jpg

lyfe- block simples, square edges if you're doing simple if not start with generic simple bubble style then try alot of different
styles until you find one which isnt completely bad then bomb it then show us
scan- nice s, bring the black line in the middle of the c more towards the middle, work on the bottom of the a and think of a
n, your sig makes me laugh everytime i look at it whoever did that should be given a turner prize
reks- it looks good re-do it cleaner and post it, its really messy
nase- good, extend the top line of the n down more till it overlaps the end of the end of the bottom and and start workin
for a new e
acos- its meh, do it in the middle of the page so we can see the bottom
risk- k seems to be a bite but i don't know where, the r is basically the k with a hole the i is ok and the s seems poor but i
can't really see
jac- letters are out of proportion and 3d is wrong
kasper- that is really sick man

Incognito
06-01-2008, 11:51 AM
first time painting my new throwie
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/0528081620a.jpg

letsgobombing- the p is too far away from the rest. It looks seperate and throws off the whole thing.

Nesk1
06-01-2008, 12:10 PM
Not bad, but don't write Sane.

DRONE_905
06-01-2008, 01:13 PM
deff change the name

Cliff
06-01-2008, 01:50 PM
Yeah man dont stick with that

Nesk1
06-01-2008, 01:54 PM
Letsgobombin the T and S are nice, but the P and O don't really fit in imo.

ShOne.GUK
06-01-2008, 05:29 PM
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g10/mike__2006/Picture004.jpg

631
06-01-2008, 09:16 PM
shone- nice. i owuld just change the S

Trade
06-02-2008, 10:59 AM
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e122/trademark0013/Photo77.jpg