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ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-01-2009, 07:43 PM
nard i like that d.
this throw has potential

weakfingers
04-01-2009, 08:21 PM
Im doing this at work on my phone so excuse my spelling and shit but thanks for the crits and ill work on a throw when i get home

klic
04-01-2009, 10:11 PM
exchange
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/ASTARThrowie2.jpg

nard - work on giving it some flow

las - 3D's off

cunt = not feeling the cunt lol

sallybsk
04-02-2009, 01:22 AM
nard i like that d.
this throw has potential

I hope that's a joke.
nard, no, i don't like.
hit the books and get at me when you have a different throwie,

LAS
too sloppy
why doesnt your end on the left? xD
but i think it'd look a lot better if you took your time, (don't need colors or shit), just take time.


klic...
eh simple enough,

Name the Fresh
04-02-2009, 06:36 AM
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_c7bdadbd.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_56ad756a.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_76b4c575.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_58cf0328.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_9d11198b.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_caeb5f6c.jpg

Yesterday

skull-e
04-02-2009, 06:51 AM
Since you're painting in russia, I won't give you shit for your gross tjrows and handstyle

Name the Fresh
04-02-2009, 08:28 AM
so what's the difference where I draw? just recently begun, and therefore crap)

Name the Fresh
04-02-2009, 08:52 AM
everyones stuff looks pretty fresh....

i did this for tha enak battle...

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/enakbattlepics.jpg
crits?

enak already .. in Russia
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-459896d1cedc632acf3de49e40c85fd6.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01327.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01303.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC012542.jpg

skull-e
04-02-2009, 09:51 AM
enak is just a word for a battle

skull-e
04-02-2009, 09:58 AM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture116.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00107.jpg
then I happened
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/york2a.jpg

bump for some fucking crits

-Dank-DK-
04-02-2009, 10:05 AM
enak already .. in Russia
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-459896d1cedc632acf3de49e40c85fd6.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01327.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01303.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC012542.jpg

hell ya dude i like all of those

-Dank-DK-
04-02-2009, 10:25 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2zygync.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2ex31o9.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/dg4a3t.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/34jentt.jpg

-Dank-DK-
04-02-2009, 10:35 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2vsnckw.jpg

skull-e
04-02-2009, 11:01 AM
you've been posting for a while, but I don't know what you write...

expozay
04-02-2009, 11:27 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3319/3406578711_b3a970ae4c_m.jpg

first time painting.
definitely need to invest in some better paint. walmart brand isnt cutting it.

yea wtf do u write dank?

apoken it
04-02-2009, 12:03 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01191.jpg

apoken it
04-02-2009, 12:04 PM
emik thats pretty ill but move the i closer to the m.

expozay
04-02-2009, 12:17 PM
apok go simpler that shits ugg.

Name the Fresh
04-02-2009, 02:02 PM
hell ya dude i like all of those
yeah .. enak one of my favorite bombers .. honorable man)

joker954
04-02-2009, 04:12 PM
apok go way simpilar
go to 1001freefonts.com, and work off their

Zarb
04-02-2009, 04:43 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402091736.jpg

expozay
04-02-2009, 04:52 PM
zarb give crits to get some.

nto feelin it.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 04:57 PM
las, you see how it looks better with out it over lapping. the shadow is still off
you cant have a top and a bottom shadow at the same time.
and ur handstyle looks like zas

apoken it
04-02-2009, 04:58 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01193.jpg

simple enough?

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 05:00 PM
not rly feelin that

apoken it
04-02-2009, 05:02 PM
butt fuck.

expozay
04-02-2009, 05:05 PM
much better than the previous one.
drop shadow is way off.

Bars
04-02-2009, 06:41 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6638/img000065.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img000065.jpg)

Dank - Looks legit.
Apok - Work on shadow and I dont like the lines representing the holes.

Black Flag
04-02-2009, 07:07 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2vsnckw.jpg

Lose the crowns faces and arrows.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 07:09 PM
nard. tht is good. i like it. but the bottom of the n the second part dont make it so pointy and the a.i like ur other a better also

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 07:09 PM
^ yea

expozay
04-02-2009, 07:16 PM
can i get some crits?

oxiclean
04-02-2009, 07:19 PM
Emik i dont like the little lumps coming of the sides of the m and k, but i really like the e. The shadow might be a little off too.

smooth_nuts
04-02-2009, 07:28 PM
apok go way simpilar
go to 1001freefonts.com, and work off their
...dont tell kids to bite.

apoken it
04-02-2009, 07:30 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6638/img000065.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img000065.jpg)

Dank - Looks legit.
Apok - Work on shadow and I dont like the lines representing the holes.<<

what holes?!

apoken it
04-02-2009, 07:31 PM
...dont tell kids to bite.


i didnt even go to that website

Bars
04-02-2009, 07:33 PM
nard. tht is good. i like it. but the bottom of the n the second part dont make it so pointy and the a.i like ur other a better also

I didn't mean to make it so pointy but I fucked it up.

apok - your lines that you use in your O, it looks like some ass cheeks.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 07:38 PM
ya lol . i wouldnt rly go to a graff helping website cause my friend started tht way and is a bitter ever since,

Hyphy
04-02-2009, 07:43 PM
Bars - I'm diggin the "r" but is that suppose to be an "o" at the end?

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3896/reach47.png

Queezy
04-02-2009, 07:52 PM
i wouldnt rly go to a graff helping website cause my friend started tht way and is a bitter ever since
haha

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-02-2009, 07:57 PM
any l.i writers here?

Stussy
04-02-2009, 08:29 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...

Zarb
04-02-2009, 08:38 PM
if you mean long island then yeah I am.
oh and stussy that can definetly work just keep brain storming
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402092130.jpg

Bars
04-02-2009, 08:43 PM
Bars - I'm diggin the "r" but is that suppose to be an "o" at the end?

http://img13.imageshak.us/img13/3896/reach47.png

It's a D.

apoken it
04-02-2009, 08:46 PM
I didn't mean to make it so pointy but I fucked it up.

apok - your lines that you use in your O, it looks like some ass cheeks.

haha yeah i realized that.

408Bomber
04-02-2009, 11:29 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...That's fucking sick!!!!

here's a throwie I did today. Sorry I'm not active on here guys haha.
http://i41.tinypic.com/1jkyuq.jpg

get at me on msn or aim or something.

skull-e
04-03-2009, 06:43 AM
nice baby books

Sizzuurp
04-03-2009, 08:19 AM
408- sorry brother that looks awful. u gotta read the new to graff thread. start simple, just like the letters on your keyboard stay uppp.

stus- i like the guy with the mustache

zarb- ur gettin much better. try and work on the bottom left of your L where u connect the whole letter. the top of the S looks too big and the width of the top of the A should be a little bit bigger. work on proportioning your letters. ur 3d doesnt make any sense either but thatll come with practice.

Name the Fresh
04-03-2009, 08:51 AM
http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_a381b0b2.jpg
)

expozay
04-03-2009, 09:45 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3366/3408811955_d109a30a71_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3615/3408811951_5b457d6488_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3408811941_a8f306003a_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3395/3408811937_886849ce82_m.jpg
shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e

stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho

-Dank-DK-
04-03-2009, 10:09 AM
yo emik you should put a dot over your i i think it would look better then with none

-Dank-DK-
04-03-2009, 10:17 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/xc5l2.jpg

kite

expozay
04-03-2009, 10:19 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3366/3408811955_d109a30a71_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3615/3408811951_5b457d6488_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3408811941_a8f306003a_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3395/3408811937_886849ce82_m.jpg
shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e

stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho
bottom of the page bump.


yea i think so tooo now that i look at it thanks.

weakfingers
04-03-2009, 03:49 PM
Reach- I like it, Nice and consistent.
Zarb- Your getting really good you probably know by now the more you write the better your shit will turn out.

Emik- Dont bump yourself after 2 posts. Your shine is not right, You missed on the K, M and E. Make your letters the same height. The shadow doesent follow the letter height or shape. Just fix that up and you should be good to go.

Quick throw, but does the T look better if I move it over to the right abit?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0708.jpg

MARTYRaz
04-03-2009, 04:58 PM
i would move it in more...kinda looks like it says skwin t

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-03-2009, 05:44 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...


yo tht lookes so much like royce from long island . its dope! i would stay away from one letter throws

Stussy
04-03-2009, 06:37 PM
yea...he does do a one letter throw doesnt he...I guess i'll just stick with RZ and do the hair on the 2 letter...

Zarb
04-03-2009, 07:27 PM
Dank- i liked your other name better
Emik- Ya lose the high lights for now and it will be pretty straight
Skwint- Love it except I like the T alittle closer to the rest of your letters
Stussy- I really like the one with the hat, and all the hair ones
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0403092237.jpg

Name the Fresh
04-04-2009, 12:34 PM
2 Las, not bad .. but why the same thing three times to spread?

flowtag
04-04-2009, 12:42 PM
Sqwint- sick i like it
emik - your tags are so fresh but im not feelin ur throwies sorry man. think yours would look better w/o bubble letters

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3351/3411561307_f3684f286b.jpg?v=0

crits please

EDIT:

kite - sorry didnt see urs. I like it, just shrink the bottom bubbleon the k and define your e more

Name the Fresh
04-04-2009, 12:43 PM
font size to zero ..

Name the Fresh
04-04-2009, 12:45 PM
http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_d89a1842.jpg
more sketches

hpir
04-04-2009, 04:19 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2711_edited.jpgcrits

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-04-2009, 09:11 PM
^ i like the k but the rest of the letters need a little work and the shadows off

o and make sure the bottom left of the k is equal in size to the top left part u no wat im saying?

milk boxx
04-04-2009, 09:58 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2711_edited.jpgcrits

Change the top of the M, loose the random little bump in the A on the right side near the bottom, make a nice drop shadow, not really feeling the 2 lines for the hole in the A

weakfingers
04-04-2009, 10:52 PM
Name that fresh- Did you fill the black with a mop then use a deco?
Kam- The shadow is fucked

Just testing a couple of points on my letter and I fucked my shadow in some places.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0721.jpg

Name the Fresh
04-05-2009, 05:16 AM
http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_d31bbec0.jpg
crits

Name the Fresh
04-05-2009, 06:14 AM
Name that fresh- Did you fill the black with a mop then use a deco?

yeah..

Sizzuurp
04-05-2009, 11:22 AM
name the fresh- ur gonna have to read the new to graff thread and start from scratch. ur letters are completely disproportionate and illegible.

Name the Fresh
04-05-2009, 11:40 AM
name the fresh- ur gonna have to read the new to graff thread and start from scratch. ur letters are completely disproportionate and illegible.

no .. I move to the font and me there is no difference ..

Bink1
04-05-2009, 12:43 PM
no .. I move to the font and me there is no difference ..

wtf u just said?

Zarb
04-05-2009, 12:44 PM
Name the fresh- New to graff thread
Skwint- always liking it
kam- i like your k but you your other letters dont really go with that style with your k
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405091158.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405091334.jpg
workin with these two styles. which is better you think?

Bink1
04-05-2009, 01:10 PM
why are u doing this to us?

Apocalypse
04-05-2009, 01:10 PM
Sqwint- sick i like it
emik - your tags are so fresh but im not feelin ur throwies sorry man. think yours would look better w/o bubble letters

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3351/3411561307_f3684f286b.jpg?v=0

crits please

EDIT:

kite - sorry didnt see urs. I like it, just shrink the bottom bubbleon the k and define your e more


Yo man I already know a flow that is 10 times better and has ups around here, and I think there already was a train bomber named Flow....I'd go to a new name if I was you.

New throw..

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/110/l_a4a5b9aefc3d44d797459dffb668bcd9.jpg


Skwint-that newest one is your best so far, keep it up.
Stussy-I love those R's, but stay away from one letter, do 2 or 3 at least....but with those R's, that way you'll have a good personal flair everyone will notice.

milk boxx
04-05-2009, 01:20 PM
zarb - i personally like your more boxy style letters than your bubbles.
war - shits lookin wayy better than before. keep er up

bak
04-05-2009, 02:34 PM
apacalypes(?) that r is freshh
but the w is plain

new throw
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/04-05-09_1219.jpg

linear
04-05-2009, 03:33 PM
Apocalypse: I love your style, you just need to work on your "w."
bak: You need to get your shadow consistent to the letter and you'll be golden.

Here's one I just finished. Crits much needed.
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc234/planetaryexit/IMG_0595.jpg

bak
04-05-2009, 04:18 PM
i like ur message but the rest is illegable

bulltimeJAMP
04-05-2009, 04:42 PM
the noncomformist thing is a little old buddy. maybe if you had even tried to change the words around...

skull-e
04-05-2009, 07:12 PM
Apocalypse: I love your style, you just need to work on your "w."
bak: You need to get your shadow consistent to the letter and you'll be golden.

Here's one I just finished. Crits much needed.
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc234/planetaryexit/IMG_0595.jpg
This has been said millions of times before but, use keyboard letters...SIMPLESIMPLESIMEPLKSOKXS:<COCKBURNANDCP

fitzy36
04-05-2009, 07:17 PM
new name, trying to develop a new style
http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6ujh4.jpg

TheWorldGoneMad
04-05-2009, 07:56 PM
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3637/frink.jpg
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4204/frinkshaded.jpg

milk boxx
04-05-2009, 08:16 PM
^^ you should make the character the I that would be dope.

S4d3n
04-05-2009, 08:30 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/NaesrThrows.jpg

I know there's a Baesr in Toronto so I'll either write it Naers or try something else.

Zarb
04-05-2009, 08:51 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405092143.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405092142.jpg
War- I like it especially the R, idk about that A though
Grim- I like all of that! keep it up
Frink- Do what milkbox said! that would be sick

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-05-2009, 09:22 PM
las- top one is better
war- its looking good bro
grim -looks great also but dont do that big of a hole in it

hpir
04-05-2009, 09:25 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2717.jpg
crits?
zarb-love the new style

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-05-2009, 09:36 PM
i thought u wrote kam?

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-05-2009, 09:42 PM
new name, trying to develop a new style
http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6ujh4.jpg

all i can see in tht is a f and a e.

bak
04-05-2009, 10:45 PM
thanks for the crits we need to give more

kem nice k but the e is chubby

fullstrangers i agree i can only make out the f and e

las the second one is better

frink not bad keep hittin the books

saden i like the style

Stussy
04-05-2009, 10:48 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/feh3b5.jpg

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-06-2009, 11:35 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/feh3b5.jpg



bump!

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-06-2009, 11:35 AM
^ but thew shadow is alittle off. but rly dope

rootpl
04-06-2009, 12:14 PM
what do you think about this ?

graffdabusup
04-06-2009, 12:26 PM
http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/444.jpg

peacebomb
04-06-2009, 07:22 PM
Graffdabusup, is it supposed to say move? If so fix the v.

Dont mind the date on my camera.......

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/0022-1.jpg

Aesir
04-06-2009, 07:34 PM
it says MONE.

Zarb
04-06-2009, 07:38 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0406092005.jpg
Mone-Really unique man i like it
Izoe- Nice man but you might wanna hold off on the faces for now
Res- keep practicing and lose the star for now
Rootpl- Those look sick but i cant read it haha

milk boxx
04-06-2009, 09:08 PM
Kjay- i say you keep the capital E for your throw man, not feelin the lower case.
peacebomb- keep drawing that shit, the s is decent but the R and E still need alot of work.
zarb - i'd say make the bubbles on top just a bit smaller and fix up the shadow a bit, and work on that handy son!

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07917.jpg
EM and EK
crits?

klic
04-06-2009, 09:45 PM
exchange with snow

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SNOEThrowie.jpg

em - dont cut off the top of your E

las - the tops of your letters are too big

res - keep practicing, maybe make your R a little simpler. fill up pages full of hollow throws

izoe - i dont like how close the center lines are in your Z

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-06-2009, 10:51 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers5.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers1.jpg

really quick sketches
crits?

S4d3n
04-06-2009, 10:55 PM
Last one has potential for looking dope, just work on it a bit, just do it over n over till you get add some more to it.

Wallace
04-06-2009, 11:03 PM
izoe getting better, use that upper case E
and try to make your i flow better, maybe a bigger I

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-06-2009, 11:04 PM
yea

Mr yarbles
04-06-2009, 11:51 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/29glocm.jpg
faded.

the mers with the face is best

I like the snoe

the em's are pretty good too

zarb and peace need to go to new to graff
Or go look at some real throws.

weakfingers
04-07-2009, 12:37 AM
Milkboxx-Ireally like the silver throw its super clean
Isoe-You got it, that shit is tight.

Fuck I'm slacking really hard, Here's my board
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture25.jpg

B.S. POLICE
04-07-2009, 12:54 AM
painting your name on your board= bad idea man

skull-e
04-07-2009, 07:21 AM
LOL, seriosusly

graffdabusup
04-07-2009, 08:07 AM
ok heres my share of crits
MERS-really like tht style... pm me if you want exchange
SNOE-nice flow
MILK BOXX-everything is on piont!
ZARB-needs a lil work. not so scrunched up.
RES-change the r annd the e... the s is ok
IZOE-good shit!
RAYZ-good shit! like the style

weakfingers
04-07-2009, 09:21 AM
Yeah after a day of riding it it seemed like a bad idea i'm probably just gonna go and put it on my somewhere on my wall and get a new one.

Mr yarbles
04-07-2009, 11:55 AM
Anybody down to do and ri throw for me I ust ca't get my r.
I'll return the steez hah
preferably someone good

..romero..
04-07-2009, 12:05 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/krw9g.jpg


its kinda shitty but here ya go...

Bink1
04-07-2009, 02:23 PM
everything looked so good on last page (especialy izoe keep doin that bro)- except zarb and piecebomb - cant give crits to u guys coz just dont listen and shit.


http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2113/dsc06622y.th.jpg (http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06622y.jpg)

iPwnF00lz
04-07-2009, 02:47 PM
So.. I have never tried a throwie or practiced one on paper, I just tried to wing two last night and see how they turned out.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0407091515a.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0407090752.jpg
The y in the second makes me cringe, and they are both horrible, glad I stuck to where it won't get seen much.

Bink- I'm obviously not one to give crits for throwies but it looks good, maybe a thicker white so we could see it better, but besides that not bad keep it up man.

milk boxx
04-07-2009, 03:17 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0407090752.jpg
.

rype - thats better than my first throw that i winged. but try to keep all your letters the same size and in proportion..

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/toyz.jpg

iPwnF00lz
04-07-2009, 03:30 PM
Yeah I realize what I did wrong and everything I should have been way more smooth with it and took my time so that I would make sure to not mess up but at the same time I was just trying to see what I could come up with and hurry.

I'm not going to be writing rype anymore either, I searched it on flickr and only one of the images was mine, apparently someone hits up freights with Rype too.

klic
04-07-2009, 03:52 PM
and dont paint on someones fence if thats what that is?

Mr yarbles
04-07-2009, 04:47 PM
thanks romero whatchu right?

But to be honest I really don't see what's wrong with mine
Too skinny?

iPwnF00lz
04-07-2009, 05:10 PM
and dont paint on someones fence if thats what that is?

Noo, I'm not an idiott man lol.

..romero..
04-07-2009, 05:39 PM
thanks romero whatchu right?

But to be honest I really don't see what's wrong with mine
Too skinny?

im currently in the mist of finding a new name to write...but the last i was writing was west.


personally i think the legs are where your r is lacking.the i is straight tho.but that is how if i wrote your name i would do it.i think if you go simpler on the r it would work out better for you.not with all the fold in bends in it or whatever.then when you get the hang of it go for the wilder stuff.your handstyles are on point last i saw.just work on throw and your straight.

peacebomb
04-07-2009, 06:13 PM
yo i listen to you guys when you give advice. this is the only place i can get advice from....

weakfingers
04-07-2009, 07:26 PM
Man my first throwie was so bad I'll get a picture of it and post it here. Thats pretty good for a first throw. Lately I have been trying to work on not sketching my throws but staight up marker and trying them quickly.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0747.jpg

Zarb
04-07-2009, 08:01 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0407092054.jpg
Just some quick idea, i dont think i like it but whatever
RA

Spraycan Stories
04-07-2009, 08:22 PM
doesnt seem to flow well ^^

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-07-2009, 09:06 PM
^ to much squigilly wiggilly lol

Stussy
04-07-2009, 09:44 PM
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9079/photo825v.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7508/photo826.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/553/photo827.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5093/photo828.jpg

exchange for RhodeIsland

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-07-2009, 09:54 PM
thats dope!^^
anyone up for a exchange hit me up. (pm0

Mr yarbles
04-07-2009, 09:57 PM
im currently in the mist of finding a new name to write...but the last i was writing was west.


personally i think the legs are where your r is lacking.the i is straight tho.but that is how if i wrote your name i would do it.i think if you go simpler on the r it would work out better for you.not with all the fold in bends in it or whatever.then when you get the hang of it go for the wilder stuff.your handstyles are on point last i saw.just work on throw and your straight.

ALright I'll get that done as quick as i can

and thanks for the crits I'll work on my r

crevette
04-08-2009, 07:04 AM
romero - that R is utterly dope. finish that.
zarb - concentrate on the letters before putting a dollar sign and stuff. and it doesnt really look like RA.
stussy - clean it up. make the letters same size and shit.
rype - clean that shit up.
weakfingers - W is weird, and so is the T, other letters look decent but make it clean.

i was using a really weird marker.
crits. thanks.


http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/img021-1-1-1.jpg

DoMakeSayThink
04-08-2009, 10:50 AM
hye i like those theyre dope

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/sc00cf3912.jpg

DoMakeSayThink
04-08-2009, 10:50 AM
o hyte sorry

ESKiMO2
04-08-2009, 06:42 PM
People wanted me to make this character more so I did today...

http://fc41.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/098/5/8/The_Two_Faces_of_Graffiti_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

These are the two faces (or perspectives) of graffiti. One says crime, the other says art. The one who says crime has no arms, so cannot create. It's basically a visual metaphor.

weakfingers
04-08-2009, 09:47 PM
People wanted me to make this character more so I did today...

http://fc41.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/098/5/8/The_Two_Faces_of_Graffiti_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

These are the two faces (or perspectives) of graffiti. One says crime, the other says art. The one who says crime has no arms, so cannot create. It's basically a visual metaphor.

That is so sick. Also, new page bump

Zarb
04-08-2009, 10:27 PM
^^^That is really sick
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0407092153.jpg

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-08-2009, 10:38 PM
las- looking good man. but in the s when you make the space in the middle dont make it so pointy let it flow...

Fantaaa
04-09-2009, 10:22 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/10y2txg.jpg
old (:

-Dank-DK-
04-09-2009, 10:33 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2d6s20j.jpg

SPRAY yoface407
04-09-2009, 10:34 AM
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/Unnamed-7.jpg
KRUM
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/038.jpg
SABOR

Zarb
04-09-2009, 10:39 AM
Im stuck between names
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0408092308.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0409091347.jpg

Worms
04-09-2009, 04:07 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-12.jpg

..romero..
04-09-2009, 05:14 PM
not able to finish.fucking cops...also i totally didnt do it.totally.but said person will probably finish it by tomorrow.so yah.thought id post it for the luls.
http://i44.tinypic.com/156d79t.jpg


props to eskimo.cool stuff.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-09-2009, 08:33 PM
looks like it would come out good^


nah mean!

Worms
04-10-2009, 01:55 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-8.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005-5.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/013.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/010.jpg

-Dank-DK-
04-10-2009, 10:25 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2a8qjvb.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2urniol.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/dlp0uv.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ds1pig.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vhw0gz.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/3329uz5.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/29zugb4.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2hyyo2b.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nkhnci.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ntvyg.jpg

graffdabusup
04-10-2009, 10:29 AM
Sore.... time to move up to the big boys thread... GOOD SHIT!!!

Worms
04-10-2009, 01:21 PM
I think ill stay down here were its nice and peicefull....the big boys will rip my ass apart

Zarb
04-10-2009, 01:22 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0410091328.jpg
Sore Good shit man

graffdabusup
04-10-2009, 01:53 PM
lol worms can i sig that?

Zarb your getting alot better keep it up

Worms
04-10-2009, 01:55 PM
w.e floats ur boat bud lol

goober
04-10-2009, 08:41 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2lx715h.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/rswkuf.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/j9obk5.jpg

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-10-2009, 09:24 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/ballsagna.jpg
just for shits and giggles

EIL09
04-10-2009, 09:25 PM
critsss... http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv134/chrisgraff09/Photo69.jpg

Aesir
04-10-2009, 09:37 PM
Yo DK, nice pajamas. I'm diggin them hearts.

Manupro7
04-10-2009, 10:58 PM
crits plz

Zarb
04-11-2009, 08:21 AM
Manupro- Its a pretty nice start
Izoe- Fresh!
Tryin to add some steez to my throw now that I got the basic lettering down. This is just the first idea it still needs to be cleaned up
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lasgood.jpg
crits?

skull-e
04-11-2009, 10:45 AM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5848/yellows.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3360/straat.jpg
manupro- i dig it, try and make the Z more like the S, but its pretty nice

YES I lov the second IZ

and bump since you can see my little skull-es face on the top one =D

Maser Oner
04-11-2009, 01:17 PM
dnt paint much so dis how it came out
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/0331091611.jpg

mekosbc
04-11-2009, 10:11 PM
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5848/yellows.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3360/straat.jpg
manupro- i dig it, try and make the Z more like the S, but its pretty nice

kinda looks like iz the wiz'z iz..... but fresh

mase- you need to learn better can control... and your letters are kinda wack

Zarb
04-12-2009, 08:20 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
Izoe- Fresh

sacwacko
04-12-2009, 09:12 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpagenew.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-12-2009, 09:41 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2a8qjvb.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2urniol.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/dlp0uv.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ds1pig.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vhw0gz.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/3329uz5.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/29zugb4.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2hyyo2b.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nkhnci.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ntvyg.jpg

your a fucking JOKE

INKdKRINK
04-12-2009, 11:11 PM
http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2716/185/5/642825581/n642825581_6286097_4848495.jpg
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs020.snc1/3035_164675495581_642825581_6352415_3835571_n.jpg
I do mostly marker cause Im on probation with a 4 way search clause. So i just hit up my college alot.

sike_21
04-13-2009, 10:43 AM
wahahahahaha bathroom throwie with a marker seriously? how much of a loser do you have to be to look at that and decide you wanna post it to represent you....

Stussy
04-13-2009, 11:11 AM
lol you hit up your college?
your a dumb fuck...

ErrorOner...
04-13-2009, 01:15 PM
random early morning bombing sesh wit my boy TH...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0304.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0305.jpg

sellers E.
04-13-2009, 01:58 PM
sacwacho-dope.
inkdkrink-wtf?
error-sick.

my 2 letter throw.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpgcrits?

Stussy
04-13-2009, 02:00 PM
DA?

apoken it
04-13-2009, 02:08 PM
http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/graff1.jpg

sellers E.
04-13-2009, 02:18 PM
DA?

i write "DAYLO" and i couldnt get a good throw for the whole thing so i just did "DA"

INKdKRINK
04-13-2009, 02:38 PM
wahahahahaha bathroom throwie with a marker seriously? how much of a loser do you have to be to look at that and decide you wanna post it to represent you....
Yeah if i get caught with paint its a violation of my probation. And i get 4 months in county.

sacwacho-dope.
inkdkrink-wtf?
error-sick.

my 2 letter throw.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpgcrits?

Hell yeah i hit up my college. No one would guess i write thats why.

sike_21
04-13-2009, 02:43 PM
well just pay attention to school cuzz your future in graff is never going to happen

Zarb
04-13-2009, 02:45 PM
writing is not drawing big box letters in a college bathroom

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-13-2009, 07:05 PM
random early morning bombing sesh wit my boy TH...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0304.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0305.jpg

you painted that spot in the day???!

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-13-2009, 07:06 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
Izoe- Fresh

i like it las...
just dont do the shadow on top of the throw thats not supposed to be there.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-13-2009, 07:21 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/niggggggggggerjuice.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-13-2009, 07:33 PM
http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2716/185/5/642825581/n642825581_6286097_4848495.jpg
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs020.snc1/3035_164675495581_642825581_6352415_3835571_n.jpg
I do mostly marker cause Im on probation with a 4 way search clause. So i just hit up my college alot.

your fucking one of the most brilliant people ever......
no not really
you got a tat of a krink marker
why?
you dont got shit to show for it :o

Zarb
04-13-2009, 08:46 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0413092141.jpg
Been working with these two styles. Which one you guys think is better? I think I like the top one alittle more

Mers- That is really nice
Sp- Im really liking that too
Izoe- Really good also
Wet- lol

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-13-2009, 09:38 PM
Top is better las and thanx,
Any one else got crits for me?
Fuck! I hate typing on my iPod! LOL


Any one down for an exchange hit me up....

INKdKRINK
04-13-2009, 10:43 PM
your fucking one of the most brilliant people ever......
no not really
you got a tat of a krink marker
why?
you dont got shit to show for it :o
I got the tat cause at one point in my life i sold yola and my grandfather found out and went to the art store bought me a krink marker. Told me to stop fucking with that shit and start drawing. He saved my life with a marker. Or atleast from doing hard time. Thats why i have the Tat.

..romero..
04-13-2009, 10:47 PM
your full of shit...

Publik Enemy#7
04-13-2009, 11:36 PM
izoe-its aight alil drippie on the E
error- nice day hit for real

So this weekend I didnt feel like piecing so I decided to get some throws around
these are the ones I got fliks of
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239680495.jpg
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239682155.jpg
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239682243.jpg
couldnt get much of a pic of this highway hit since it was rush hour when i got the flik
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239681272.jpg
any crits
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239681272.jpg

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-14-2009, 06:02 AM
lol ya still wouldnt give me a reason for the tat
you should of atleast had someone who is decent with tats doo it
lol what are you gunna tell your kids when there like 10 years old

GETRAD
04-14-2009, 11:01 AM
i hope to god that tats homemade, if anyone recieved money for that there is somethng wrong

sike_21
04-14-2009, 02:02 PM
l0l life story wahahhaha

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-14-2009, 06:28 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/lockofirush.jpg
luck of the irish!

VaNdAL xBA!x
04-14-2009, 06:47 PM
who punched him in the eye

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-14-2009, 06:58 PM
Supposed to be sqinting but I mad it to big.

weakfingers
04-14-2009, 07:54 PM
InkedKrink- The letters on the marker are horrible. I think its a joke but I've seen worst ink. well almost worse. Oh and the bathroom marker hits, please just stop and write in a book for a while.
Zarb- I like the second one
Kjay- I like it alot.
Did someone say skwint?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture40.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0756Stitch.jpg
crits plox?

sellers E.
04-14-2009, 08:24 PM
bump.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpg
crits????

sellers E.
04-14-2009, 08:27 PM
weakfingers-that first one is dope.

sacwacko
04-14-2009, 08:30 PM
http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage1.jpg

ReadyToStrike
04-14-2009, 08:48 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg

Been working with these two styles. Which one you guys think is better? I think I like the top one alittle more


Wet- lol

ouchhh...the first one is a complete bite of los dude..cmon..
http://i567.photobucket.com/albums/ss111/xBaker666/los.jpg

Gezra
04-14-2009, 10:22 PM
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraffiti-1.jpg

joker954
04-14-2009, 10:36 PM
^^^^
work on ur R

Bars
04-15-2009, 01:41 AM
ouchhh...the first one is a complete bite of los dude..cmon..
http://i567.photobucket.com/albums/ss111/xBaker666/los.jpg

No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

Neg_INFLUENZ
04-15-2009, 01:49 AM
^^^^
work on ur R

and your g and your e and your z and your a

faser
04-15-2009, 01:53 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/ws8qap.jpg

for a friend that writes reload

Zarb
04-15-2009, 05:47 AM
haha i can see my l looking like it, the A and the O looks similar but thats a really basic shape I bet a bunch of people have that same kind of O or A. And the S looks nothing alike really. I change up the style more though since people are seeing it as a bite.

ReadyToStrike
04-15-2009, 06:47 AM
No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

hes actually a pretty well liked and established writer in long island/queens

sike_21
04-15-2009, 12:30 PM
yea he is

Zarb
04-15-2009, 08:37 PM
quick pen sketch
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0415092128.jpg
yeah los is a good writer and im from Long Island too so I wont use that style anymore....really wasnt trying to bite him though

Reload- Lost the face for now
Gezra- Keep workin on it especially that A
Da?- Idk, it just seems so plain and forgettable. Try making the letters alittle more complex
Skwint- Love it, keep working on that straight letter though
Mers- Solid throw, I like the character too
RU- Maybe make the R alittle less fat. Props on the spots though!

jawsy
04-15-2009, 09:00 PM
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1348/img3273qce.jpg
for teh beast battle
las-looks like your biting.. just get your own shit.. your second one i ok but that s needs to go.
faser- not feelin it at all

Zarb
04-16-2009, 02:20 PM
haha i can see my l looking like it, the A and the O looks similar but thats a really basic shape I bet a bunch of people have that same kind of O or A. And the S looks nothing alike really. I change up the style more though since people are seeing it as a bite.
..

LIZARD
04-16-2009, 10:18 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3023/photo33ou.jpg

critz

expozay
04-16-2009, 11:49 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3305/3448732989_56cd737f89_m.jpg


sore looks fresh to me.

PegCityBoy
04-17-2009, 12:27 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3605/3449599022_b56c6560e0.jpg?v=0

m sucks
!! sucks
shadow's off
:)

weakfingers
04-17-2009, 02:21 PM
I really like the loops in the letters and how you put them in the shadow, It shows attention to detail but i think it will be kinda hard to mimick that with paint.

ReadyToStrike
04-17-2009, 02:27 PM
http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3023/photo33ou.jpg

critz
change your name buddy. theres a well established sore in long island

Stussy
04-17-2009, 04:36 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8503/photo832.jpg
new throw im workin on

Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

LIZARD
04-17-2009, 07:31 PM
is it under the long island thread?

bulltimeJAMP
04-17-2009, 08:14 PM
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraffiti-1.jpg

dude if only you were older and could paint better. thats a classic throwie. the ugliness of the r is actually a good thing. dunno i cant explain it, but it looks like an old school throwie. really nice imo.

ReadyToStrike
04-17-2009, 09:22 PM
is it under the long island thread?

he has some stuff on there apparently he doesnt paint anymore but he is still known

KidReny!
04-17-2009, 09:23 PM
some quick ones yo crits?

1.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/KidReny.jpg

2.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Graffiti.jpg

3.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Pink.jpg

4.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Tab.jpg

5.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Title.jpg

Stussy
04-17-2009, 09:25 PM
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8503/photo832.jpg
new throw im workin on

Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

bump...

i agree with you bulltime, it has a newyork kinda style, that A is sick

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-17-2009, 09:46 PM
No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

dont talk shit bout los hes dope.

bulltimeJAMP
04-17-2009, 10:13 PM
and your g and your e and your z and your a

dude he rapes you in terms of how good this throwie is.

oxiclean
04-17-2009, 11:51 PM
Gez's a is nice, but i dont think it really goes with the other letters.

PegCityBoy
04-18-2009, 12:14 AM
Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

i swear to jeebus i didnt bite that, it's kind of a generic s

anger mangement
04-18-2009, 02:05 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e334/mastrblstr/natesketches.jpg
throwie... ehh kinda hack but whatevs

anger mangement
04-18-2009, 02:23 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e334/mastrblstr/betternatethrowie.jpg

lol sorry last throwie blew ballz heres a better 1

MARTYRaz
04-18-2009, 01:56 PM
there slaps but there throwies...crits...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1680.jpg

weakfingers
04-18-2009, 03:13 PM
^^^ In my opinion I really hate that E, I see it used to much.
Kidreny- Start all over and go simple your trying to much. Oh and loose the crown in the handstyle.

I went out to a chill spot and practiced my throw and fucked that shit up so here it is on paper.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0797.jpg
And heres a repost of a sl throw with a way better picture.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0780.jpg

Black Flag
04-18-2009, 03:57 PM
some quick ones yo crits?

1.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/KidReny.jpg

2.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Graffiti.jpg

3.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Pink.jpg

4.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Tab.jpg

5.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Title.jpg

Going to be blunt here:

No.

KidReny!
04-18-2009, 04:05 PM
Going to be blunt here:

No.

any tips to get better?

Black Flag
04-18-2009, 04:12 PM
any tips to get better?

Do simples. ex. what you see on your keyboard.

Don't use any extensions.
Focus on building letters with bars. (really helpful)
If you want to add some creativeness, experiment with bending the bars.
Don't focus on adding things like backgrounds, drips, add-ons, etc. If you can't rock it with a hollow or white & black fill style, chances are its not working.

BIGdreamSCHEME
04-18-2009, 04:32 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image041.jpg
what you guys think, bunk or should I mess with it some more?

expozay
04-18-2009, 04:40 PM
not feelin it.

-Dank-DK-
04-18-2009, 06:09 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/xqhlr8.jpg

Zarb
04-18-2009, 06:15 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0418091855.jpg
Dank- How is that a throw up?
Skwint- Sick throw but the straight letter could use more work
Stussy- Really nice
Nate- Make your letters more basic for now

remos
04-18-2009, 06:59 PM
any tips to get better?

bars keep simples as shitty as it is
new to graff thread

[MiTH] hovz
04-18-2009, 11:06 PM
i been outta the game for a while. starting to get back into it. some shit ive done in the little spare time ive got. i doubt its any good.

Zarb - im diggin it man.
Rays - good work as usual man.

any crits on any of my crap???

MARTYRaz
04-18-2009, 11:46 PM
there slaps but there throwies...crits...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1680.jpg
bump... got no crits cept my e is used too much...
i like ur simps man...

sellers E.
04-19-2009, 10:27 AM
mith- those first 2 look dope.
marty- those look good...

this is what im working with for a throw. i painted it at a practice spot because its obviosly not ready yet.

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/unknownmybone-1.jpg crits??

Zarb
04-19-2009, 10:32 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0418091855.jpg
Dank- How is that a throw up?
Skwint- Sick throw but the straight letter could use more work
Stussy- Really nice
Nate- Make your letters more basic for now
last page bump

plan
04-19-2009, 10:46 AM
heres my throw...
http://up57.siz.co.il/up1/grmiqzmmnrmx.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)
crits ?

ding1
04-19-2009, 12:34 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3600/3456014612_1da6ccb22a.jpg

sellers E.
04-19-2009, 03:02 PM
mith- those first 2 look dope.
marty- those look good...

this is what im working with for a throw. i painted it at a practice spot because its obviosly not ready yet.

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/unknownmybone-1.jpg crits??

bump for crits. its been on here a few hours and nada.

MARTYRaz
04-19-2009, 03:17 PM
i dont think it looks bad...i like...keep practicing it and it will look better everytime u do it

Zarb
04-19-2009, 04:23 PM
Yeah, just keep practicing it. Crits on mine?

blunttokes
04-19-2009, 04:42 PM
http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/roal.jpg
crits even tho its jus a hollow

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
04-19-2009, 04:52 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
crits?

faser
04-19-2009, 07:43 PM
fix the R on the last throwie

weakfingers
04-19-2009, 10:42 PM
Blunttokes-Hollow on a freight? I'm not one to say shit for a writer thats been doing it longer then me but c-mon you can do alot better.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers-I like your R in your book its really original.
Sellers-I dont really like the second and third letter but that just my opinion, I prefer simple throws.
Plan- I really love that throw, and the shine is so skinny, what cap did you use?
Zarb- Do you write lag? I can't tell if the middle is an A and the last letter is an s or an g.
Mith Hovz- I really liek your first one, I like the style and flow
Vader-I just will say do another E its to small for the throw but thats in my opinion.





Practice makes perfect?... Cell phone flick. Critz
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0803.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/oneer.jpg
Give crits to get them...

sellers E.
04-19-2009, 10:50 PM
Yeah, just keep practicing it. Crits on mine?

zarb, yours always look dope as hell. i like it. the l s is dope.

sellers E.
04-19-2009, 10:53 PM
Blunttokes-Hollow on a freight? I'm not one to say shit for a writer thats been doing it longer then me but c-mon you can do alot better.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers-I like your R in your book its really original.
Sellers-I dont really like the second and third letter but that just my opinion, I prefer simple throws.
Plan- I really love that throw, and the shine is so skinny, what cap did you use?
Zarb- Do you write lag? I can't tell if the middle is an A and the last letter is an s or an g.
Mith Hovz- I really liek your first one, I like the style and flow
Vader-I just will say do another E its to small for the throw but thats in my opinion.

thanks for the crit, i fucked up on those letters. painted it again today and they looked better.





Practice makes perfect?... Cell phone flick. Critz
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0803.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/oneer.jpg
Give crits to get them...




u did your throw exact, perfection.

sellers E.
04-19-2009, 10:55 PM
mers- does that painted throw say mers?? the doesnt really look like an r. maybe show the other line in it.

Stussy
04-19-2009, 11:21 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1033/photo841.jpg
Vader-To many random wiggles in your letters, and all the points arent working
Sellers- i can only tell what half your letters are, and dont bump shit on the same page
Plan- that style never work, i would just start over...
Ding- you seem to have the idea right, just workin on it... i like your first letter, keep going with that
blunt- you've been at the game for awhile now, i expect something abit better than that
Mers- looks good, keep at it
skwint- not a big fan of your style or name, you seem to have that style down pat, try and prank out and try some new styles... expand your idea of a throw

my 2 cents

sellers E.
04-20-2009, 12:20 AM
ding1-dope
stussy- i like that alot. the y is sick.

alittle more legibal??
it says "DAYLO"
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo-2.jpg

blunttokes
04-20-2009, 01:35 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
crits?

select?
from c2m?

blunttokes
04-20-2009, 01:37 AM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1033/photo841.jpg

blunt- you've been at the game for awhile now, i expect something abit better than that

my 2 cents

word haha... i used scraps that day but w.e next time itll be a better throw i hope or a str8.