Throwies

[JoseBuerto]

Bars - i dont have a clue what it says but its not good try again

Sellers - your enak entry is a good start keep working eventually youll get it blah blah blah ya already know

Emik- use proportion and make the letters the same size and space them apart a little bit, then your 3d will be better

[Lurkist]

some of my shit
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/SoGheyLikeUhh/jesrainbowbridge.jpg?t=1238550123
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/SoGheyLikeUhh/jesergewalgreens.jpg?t=1238550178
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g105/SoGheyLikeUhh/rattrailsredwhite.jpg?t=1238550221

help with J's anybody?

[Zarb]

yo jes I have a friend who writes jel and I love his J maybe you can get influenced by it
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0331092145.jpg

[milk boxx]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3606/3403293108_d950ab1546_m.jpg

drop shadow is off w.e

zarb im feelin that shit.
sellers need works
my crits are.. stop writing Emik.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07904.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07909.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07886.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07911.jpg
please and thanks.

[apoken it]

http://s735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/?action=view&current=DSC01150.jpg

[apoken it]

http://http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01150.jpg

[apoken it]

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01150.jpg crits

[expozay]

give crits to get them.
honestly not feeling it tho apok k doesnt look a k and the o looks like an avocado lol.

[expozay]

yea but my crits are i dont give a fuck bc were never going to run into each other.

[Aesir]

Some dusty ass shit on my way home from school.
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/9261/deletey2.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deletey2.jpg)
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2720/deletey3.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deletey3.jpg)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1541/deletey.jpg (http://img16.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deletey.jpg)
.BumpForCritz.

Also, JES, i'm feelin' that throw in the second pic...I think the J just needs a little something extra, I can't seem to put my finger on it though....

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0331092304a.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0331092320.jpg
just some more practicing
Epok-dont worry about filling in yet, just work on your letter structure for now
Norse- Your throw has a lot of potential i think but it really needs to be cleaned up

[weakfingers]

The shadow needs more work

5 seconds in ms paint.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Untitled-2.jpg

[Bars]

Bars - i dont have a clue what it says but its not good try again

It says nard.

Apok - I don't like the K and I don't like what you added on the A.

[vice versa]

zarb- fix ure 3d like weakfingers showd ya
milk box- dope.
apoken it- work on ure k, dont clutter ure letters yet
lurkist- nice stuff, i prefer the red outline one
sellers E- fix ure 3d, look at the edit of zarbs throwie down bottom of page
;)

[-Dank-DK-]

dank, do you ever give crits?

tll my dumb ass how

[apoken it]

weakfingers- thats som ill 3d

[weakfingers]

Thanks, The shadow wasent that great.
Oh and dank dk. Just put in your suggestion on how some people can improve there shit.
Photobucket deleted my drawings because I guess it had a bad words or drawings of vaginas...... thats really gay. So I'll bump it again for crits.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture15.jpg

[Wallace]

sucks and that vag looks upside down pretty much..

[Aesir]

What is it with you and "T"'s? They're hard as hell to do if they're not in the front of the word.

[weakfingers]

Its like I've been working with them for a while and like with the style of my throw I guess its just weird to throw one on the end. If i put dead space it makes the throw look off, its kinda like if there was a J at the end of the throw you wouldent see the bottem of it but the letter is still there. Got any suggestions on how I should do a T?

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0401091755.jpg
cant give crits right now gotta go ill give them when i get back

[Bars]

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3585/img000064.jpg (http://img18.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img000064.jpg)

crits

bump for crits.

It says NARD.

cunt - I don't really like the vag in it.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

i like cunt. APRIL FOOLS, jk lol but yea idk bout the vagina in it and work on the structure.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

nard i like that d.
this throw has potential

[weakfingers]

Im doing this at work on my phone so excuse my spelling and shit but thanks for the crits and ill work on a throw when i get home

[klic]

exchange
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/ASTARThrowie2.jpg

nard - work on giving it some flow

las - 3D's off

cunt = not feeling the cunt lol

[sallybsk]

nard i like that d.
this throw has potential

I hope that's a joke.
nard, no, i don't like.
hit the books and get at me when you have a different throwie,

LAS
too sloppy
why doesnt your end on the left? xD
but i think it'd look a lot better if you took your time, (don't need colors or shit), just take time.


klic...
eh simple enough,

[Name the Fresh]

http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_c7bdadbd.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_56ad756a.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_76b4c575.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_58cf0328.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_9d11198b.jpg
http://cs4177.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_caeb5f6c.jpg

Yesterday

[skull-e]

Since you're painting in russia, I won't give you shit for your gross tjrows and handstyle

[Name the Fresh]

so what's the difference where I draw? just recently begun, and therefore crap)

[Name the Fresh]

everyones stuff looks pretty fresh....

i did this for tha enak battle...

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/enakbattlepics.jpg
crits?

enak already .. in Russia
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-459896d1cedc632acf3de49e40c85fd6.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01327.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01303.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC012542.jpg

[skull-e]

enak is just a word for a battle

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture116.jpg
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00107.jpg
then I happened
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/york2a.jpg

bump for some fucking crits

[-Dank-DK-]

enak already .. in Russia
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-459896d1cedc632acf3de49e40c85fd6.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01327.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC01303.jpg
http://www.cans.ru/forum/gallery/files/6312-DSC012542.jpg

hell ya dude i like all of those

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2zygync.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2ex31o9.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/dg4a3t.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/34jentt.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i43.tinypic.com/2vsnckw.jpg

[skull-e]

you've been posting for a while, but I don't know what you write...

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3319/3406578711_b3a970ae4c_m.jpg

first time painting.
definitely need to invest in some better paint. walmart brand isnt cutting it.

yea wtf do u write dank?

[apoken it]

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01191.jpg

[apoken it]

emik thats pretty ill but move the i closer to the m.

[expozay]

apok go simpler that shits ugg.

[Name the Fresh]

hell ya dude i like all of those
yeah .. enak one of my favorite bombers .. honorable man)

[joker954]

apok go way simpilar
go to 1001freefonts.com, and work off their

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402091736.jpg

[expozay]

zarb give crits to get some.

nto feelin it.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

las, you see how it looks better with out it over lapping. the shadow is still off
you cant have a top and a bottom shadow at the same time.
and ur handstyle looks like zas

[apoken it]

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/DSC01193.jpg

simple enough?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

not rly feelin that

[apoken it]

butt fuck.

[expozay]

much better than the previous one.
drop shadow is way off.

[Bars]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6638/img000065.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img000065.jpg)

Dank - Looks legit.
Apok - Work on shadow and I dont like the lines representing the holes.

[Black Flag]

http://i43.tinypic.com/2vsnckw.jpg

Lose the crowns faces and arrows.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

nard. tht is good. i like it. but the bottom of the n the second part dont make it so pointy and the a.i like ur other a better also

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ yea

[expozay]

can i get some crits?

[oxiclean]

Emik i dont like the little lumps coming of the sides of the m and k, but i really like the e. The shadow might be a little off too.

[smooth_nuts]

apok go way simpilar
go to 1001freefonts.com, and work off their
...dont tell kids to bite.

[apoken it]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6638/img000065.jpg (http://img10.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img000065.jpg)

Dank - Looks legit.
Apok - Work on shadow and I dont like the lines representing the holes.<<

what holes?!

[apoken it]

...dont tell kids to bite.


i didnt even go to that website

[Bars]

nard. tht is good. i like it. but the bottom of the n the second part dont make it so pointy and the a.i like ur other a better also

I didn't mean to make it so pointy but I fucked it up.

apok - your lines that you use in your O, it looks like some ass cheeks.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

ya lol . i wouldnt rly go to a graff helping website cause my friend started tht way and is a bitter ever since,

[Hyphy]

Bars - I'm diggin the "r" but is that suppose to be an "o" at the end?

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3896/reach47.png

[Queezy]

i wouldnt rly go to a graff helping website cause my friend started tht way and is a bitter ever since
haha

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

any l.i writers here?

[Stussy]

http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...

[Zarb]

if you mean long island then yeah I am.
oh and stussy that can definetly work just keep brain storming
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0402092130.jpg

[Bars]

Bars - I'm diggin the "r" but is that suppose to be an "o" at the end?

http://img13.imageshak.us/img13/3896/reach47.png

It's a D.

[apoken it]

I didn't mean to make it so pointy but I fucked it up.

apok - your lines that you use in your O, it looks like some ass cheeks.

haha yeah i realized that.

[408Bomber]

http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...That's fucking sick!!!!

here's a throwie I did today. Sorry I'm not active on here guys haha.
http://i41.tinypic.com/1jkyuq.jpg

get at me on msn or aim or something.

[skull-e]

nice baby books

[Sizzuurp]

408- sorry brother that looks awful. u gotta read the new to graff thread. start simple, just like the letters on your keyboard stay uppp.

stus- i like the guy with the mustache

zarb- ur gettin much better. try and work on the bottom left of your L where u connect the whole letter. the top of the S looks too big and the width of the top of the A should be a little bit bigger. work on proportioning your letters. ur 3d doesnt make any sense either but thatll come with practice.

[Name the Fresh]

http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_a381b0b2.jpg
)

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3366/3408811955_d109a30a71_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3615/3408811951_5b457d6488_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3408811941_a8f306003a_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3395/3408811937_886849ce82_m.jpg
shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e

stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho

[-Dank-DK-]

yo emik you should put a dot over your i i think it would look better then with none

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i40.tinypic.com/xc5l2.jpg

kite

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3366/3408811955_d109a30a71_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3615/3408811951_5b457d6488_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3371/3408811941_a8f306003a_m.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3395/3408811937_886849ce82_m.jpg
shitty robot.
there was like ten workers right around the other side of this wall cutting up a big ass tree that fell over. haha.
threw in those highlight things kind of wish i didnt but w.e

stussy im feelin those. i like the one with the comb over haha.
reach looks good go put that shit up.
408 looks ok dont like ur k.
name the fressh- really feelin ur k. dont really like your o's tho
bottom of the page bump.


yea i think so tooo now that i look at it thanks.

[weakfingers]

Reach- I like it, Nice and consistent.
Zarb- Your getting really good you probably know by now the more you write the better your shit will turn out.

Emik- Dont bump yourself after 2 posts. Your shine is not right, You missed on the K, M and E. Make your letters the same height. The shadow doesent follow the letter height or shape. Just fix that up and you should be good to go.

Quick throw, but does the T look better if I move it over to the right abit?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0708.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

i would move it in more...kinda looks like it says skwin t

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i43.tinypic.com/126438z.jpg
i have a 2 letter, but im debating on doing a 1 letter..
some ideas...


yo tht lookes so much like royce from long island . its dope! i would stay away from one letter throws

[Stussy]

yea...he does do a one letter throw doesnt he...I guess i'll just stick with RZ and do the hair on the 2 letter...

[Zarb]

Dank- i liked your other name better
Emik- Ya lose the high lights for now and it will be pretty straight
Skwint- Love it except I like the T alittle closer to the rest of your letters
Stussy- I really like the one with the hat, and all the hair ones
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0403092237.jpg

[Name the Fresh]

2 Las, not bad .. but why the same thing three times to spread?

[flowtag]

Sqwint- sick i like it
emik - your tags are so fresh but im not feelin ur throwies sorry man. think yours would look better w/o bubble letters

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3351/3411561307_f3684f286b.jpg?v=0

crits please

EDIT:

kite - sorry didnt see urs. I like it, just shrink the bottom bubbleon the k and define your e more

[Name the Fresh]

font size to zero ..

[Name the Fresh]

http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_d89a1842.jpg
more sketches

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2711_edited.jpgcrits

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ i like the k but the rest of the letters need a little work and the shadows off

o and make sure the bottom left of the k is equal in size to the top left part u no wat im saying?

[milk boxx]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2711_edited.jpgcrits

Change the top of the M, loose the random little bump in the A on the right side near the bottom, make a nice drop shadow, not really feeling the 2 lines for the hole in the A

[weakfingers]

Name that fresh- Did you fill the black with a mop then use a deco?
Kam- The shadow is fucked

Just testing a couple of points on my letter and I fucked my shadow in some places.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0721.jpg

[Name the Fresh]

http://cs4280.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_d31bbec0.jpg
crits

[Name the Fresh]

Name that fresh- Did you fill the black with a mop then use a deco?

yeah..

[Sizzuurp]

name the fresh- ur gonna have to read the new to graff thread and start from scratch. ur letters are completely disproportionate and illegible.

[Name the Fresh]

name the fresh- ur gonna have to read the new to graff thread and start from scratch. ur letters are completely disproportionate and illegible.

no .. I move to the font and me there is no difference ..

[Bink1]

no .. I move to the font and me there is no difference ..

wtf u just said?

[Zarb]

Name the fresh- New to graff thread
Skwint- always liking it
kam- i like your k but you your other letters dont really go with that style with your k
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405091158.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405091334.jpg
workin with these two styles. which is better you think?

[Bink1]

why are u doing this to us?

[Apocalypse]

Sqwint- sick i like it
emik - your tags are so fresh but im not feelin ur throwies sorry man. think yours would look better w/o bubble letters

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3351/3411561307_f3684f286b.jpg?v=0

crits please

EDIT:

kite - sorry didnt see urs. I like it, just shrink the bottom bubbleon the k and define your e more


Yo man I already know a flow that is 10 times better and has ups around here, and I think there already was a train bomber named Flow....I'd go to a new name if I was you.

New throw..

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/110/l_a4a5b9aefc3d44d797459dffb668bcd9.jpg


Skwint-that newest one is your best so far, keep it up.
Stussy-I love those R's, but stay away from one letter, do 2 or 3 at least....but with those R's, that way you'll have a good personal flair everyone will notice.

[milk boxx]

zarb - i personally like your more boxy style letters than your bubbles.
war - shits lookin wayy better than before. keep er up

[bak]

apacalypes(?) that r is freshh
but the w is plain

new throw
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/04-05-09_1219.jpg

[linear]

Apocalypse: I love your style, you just need to work on your "w."
bak: You need to get your shadow consistent to the letter and you'll be golden.

Here's one I just finished. Crits much needed.
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc234/planetaryexit/IMG_0595.jpg

[bak]

i like ur message but the rest is illegable

[bulltimeJAMP]

the noncomformist thing is a little old buddy. maybe if you had even tried to change the words around...

[skull-e]

Apocalypse: I love your style, you just need to work on your "w."
bak: You need to get your shadow consistent to the letter and you'll be golden.

Here's one I just finished. Crits much needed.
http://i212.photobucket.com/albums/cc234/planetaryexit/IMG_0595.jpg
This has been said millions of times before but, use keyboard letters...SIMPLESIMPLESIMEPLKSOKXS:<COCKBURNANDCP

[fitzy36]

new name, trying to develop a new style
http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6ujh4.jpg

[TheWorldGoneMad]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3637/frink.jpg
http://img187.imageshack.us/img187/4204/frinkshaded.jpg

[milk boxx]

^^ you should make the character the I that would be dope.

[S4d3n]

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww351/S4D3N/NaesrThrows.jpg

I know there's a Baesr in Toronto so I'll either write it Naers or try something else.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405092143.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0405092142.jpg
War- I like it especially the R, idk about that A though
Grim- I like all of that! keep it up
Frink- Do what milkbox said! that would be sick

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

las- top one is better
war- its looking good bro
grim -looks great also but dont do that big of a hole in it

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/IMG_2717.jpg
crits?
zarb-love the new style

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

i thought u wrote kam?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

new name, trying to develop a new style
http://i39.tinypic.com/2h6ujh4.jpg

all i can see in tht is a f and a e.

[bak]

thanks for the crits we need to give more

kem nice k but the e is chubby

fullstrangers i agree i can only make out the f and e

las the second one is better

frink not bad keep hittin the books

saden i like the style

[Stussy]

http://i43.tinypic.com/feh3b5.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i43.tinypic.com/feh3b5.jpg



bump!

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ but thew shadow is alittle off. but rly dope

[rootpl]

what do you think about this ?

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/444.jpg

[KJay]

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6369/sdc10361m.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8629/pizzah.jpg
shitty pic
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/2171/roofi.jpg
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/3536/pusateris.jpg
TASR heres yours
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/4902/tasr.jpg

graffdabusup- i really like that, especially the m. its killin
rootpl- i definitly like those. love how the styles are so out there and dope

[peacebomb]

Graffdabusup, is it supposed to say move? If so fix the v.

Dont mind the date on my camera.......

http://i192.photobucket.com/albums/z123/xyxzxk/0022-1.jpg

[Aesir]

it says MONE.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0406092005.jpg
Mone-Really unique man i like it
Izoe- Nice man but you might wanna hold off on the faces for now
Res- keep practicing and lose the star for now
Rootpl- Those look sick but i cant read it haha

[milk boxx]

Kjay- i say you keep the capital E for your throw man, not feelin the lower case.
peacebomb- keep drawing that shit, the s is decent but the R and E still need alot of work.
zarb - i'd say make the bubbles on top just a bit smaller and fix up the shadow a bit, and work on that handy son!

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC07917.jpg
EM and EK
crits?

[klic]

exchange with snow

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SNOEThrowie.jpg

em - dont cut off the top of your E

las - the tops of your letters are too big

res - keep practicing, maybe make your R a little simpler. fill up pages full of hollow throws

izoe - i dont like how close the center lines are in your Z

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers5.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mers1.jpg

really quick sketches
crits?

[S4d3n]

Last one has potential for looking dope, just work on it a bit, just do it over n over till you get add some more to it.

[Wallace]

izoe getting better, use that upper case E
and try to make your i flow better, maybe a bigger I

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

yea

[Mr yarbles]

http://i42.tinypic.com/29glocm.jpg
faded.

the mers with the face is best

I like the snoe

the em's are pretty good too

zarb and peace need to go to new to graff
Or go look at some real throws.

[weakfingers]

Milkboxx-Ireally like the silver throw its super clean
Isoe-You got it, that shit is tight.

Fuck I'm slacking really hard, Here's my board
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture25.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

painting your name on your board= bad idea man

[skull-e]

LOL, seriosusly

[graffdabusup]

ok heres my share of crits
MERS-really like tht style... pm me if you want exchange
SNOE-nice flow
MILK BOXX-everything is on piont!
ZARB-needs a lil work. not so scrunched up.
RES-change the r annd the e... the s is ok
IZOE-good shit!
RAYZ-good shit! like the style

[weakfingers]

Yeah after a day of riding it it seemed like a bad idea i'm probably just gonna go and put it on my somewhere on my wall and get a new one.

[Mr yarbles]

Anybody down to do and ri throw for me I ust ca't get my r.
I'll return the steez hah
preferably someone good

[..romero..]

http://i40.tinypic.com/krw9g.jpg


its kinda shitty but here ya go...

[Bink1]

everything looked so good on last page (especialy izoe keep doin that bro)- except zarb and piecebomb - cant give crits to u guys coz just dont listen and shit.


http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2113/dsc06622y.th.jpg (http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc06622y.jpg)

[iPwnF00lz]

So.. I have never tried a throwie or practiced one on paper, I just tried to wing two last night and see how they turned out.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0407091515a.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0407090752.jpg
The y in the second makes me cringe, and they are both horrible, glad I stuck to where it won't get seen much.

Bink- I'm obviously not one to give crits for throwies but it looks good, maybe a thicker white so we could see it better, but besides that not bad keep it up man.

[milk boxx]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/downsized_0407090752.jpg
.

rype - thats better than my first throw that i winged. but try to keep all your letters the same size and in proportion..

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/toyz.jpg

[iPwnF00lz]

Yeah I realize what I did wrong and everything I should have been way more smooth with it and took my time so that I would make sure to not mess up but at the same time I was just trying to see what I could come up with and hurry.

I'm not going to be writing rype anymore either, I searched it on flickr and only one of the images was mine, apparently someone hits up freights with Rype too.

[klic]

and dont paint on someones fence if thats what that is?

[Mr yarbles]

thanks romero whatchu right?

But to be honest I really don't see what's wrong with mine
Too skinny?

[iPwnF00lz]

and dont paint on someones fence if thats what that is?

Noo, I'm not an idiott man lol.

[..romero..]

thanks romero whatchu right?

But to be honest I really don't see what's wrong with mine
Too skinny?

im currently in the mist of finding a new name to write...but the last i was writing was west.


personally i think the legs are where your r is lacking.the i is straight tho.but that is how if i wrote your name i would do it.i think if you go simpler on the r it would work out better for you.not with all the fold in bends in it or whatever.then when you get the hang of it go for the wilder stuff.your handstyles are on point last i saw.just work on throw and your straight.

[peacebomb]

yo i listen to you guys when you give advice. this is the only place i can get advice from....

[weakfingers]

Man my first throwie was so bad I'll get a picture of it and post it here. Thats pretty good for a first throw. Lately I have been trying to work on not sketching my throws but staight up marker and trying them quickly.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0747.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0407092054.jpg
Just some quick idea, i dont think i like it but whatever
RA

[Spraycan Stories]

doesnt seem to flow well ^^

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ to much squigilly wiggilly lol

[Stussy]

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/9079/photo825v.jpg
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/7508/photo826.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/553/photo827.jpg
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5093/photo828.jpg

exchange for RhodeIsland

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

thats dope!^^
anyone up for a exchange hit me up. (pm0

[Mr yarbles]

im currently in the mist of finding a new name to write...but the last i was writing was west.


personally i think the legs are where your r is lacking.the i is straight tho.but that is how if i wrote your name i would do it.i think if you go simpler on the r it would work out better for you.not with all the fold in bends in it or whatever.then when you get the hang of it go for the wilder stuff.your handstyles are on point last i saw.just work on throw and your straight.

ALright I'll get that done as quick as i can

and thanks for the crits I'll work on my r

[crevette]

romero - that R is utterly dope. finish that.
zarb - concentrate on the letters before putting a dollar sign and stuff. and it doesnt really look like RA.
stussy - clean it up. make the letters same size and shit.
rype - clean that shit up.
weakfingers - W is weird, and so is the T, other letters look decent but make it clean.

i was using a really weird marker.
crits. thanks.


http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/img021-1-1-1.jpg

[DoMakeSayThink]

hye i like those theyre dope

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/sc00cf3912.jpg

[DoMakeSayThink]

o hyte sorry

[ESKiMO2]

People wanted me to make this character more so I did today...

http://fc41.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/098/5/8/The_Two_Faces_of_Graffiti_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

These are the two faces (or perspectives) of graffiti. One says crime, the other says art. The one who says crime has no arms, so cannot create. It's basically a visual metaphor.

[weakfingers]

People wanted me to make this character more so I did today...

http://fc41.deviantart.com/fs44/f/2009/098/5/8/The_Two_Faces_of_Graffiti_by_Rhino_fish.jpg

These are the two faces (or perspectives) of graffiti. One says crime, the other says art. The one who says crime has no arms, so cannot create. It's basically a visual metaphor.

That is so sick. Also, new page bump

[Zarb]

^^^That is really sick
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0407092153.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

las- looking good man. but in the s when you make the space in the middle dont make it so pointy let it flow...

[Fantaaa]

http://i42.tinypic.com/10y2txg.jpg
old (:

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2d6s20j.jpg

[SPRAY yoface407]

http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/Unnamed-7.jpg
KRUM
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/038.jpg
SABOR

[Zarb]

Im stuck between names
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0408092308.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0409091347.jpg

[Worms]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/001-12.jpg

[..romero..]

not able to finish.fucking cops...also i totally didnt do it.totally.but said person will probably finish it by tomorrow.so yah.thought id post it for the luls.
http://i44.tinypic.com/156d79t.jpg


props to eskimo.cool stuff.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

looks like it would come out good^


nah mean!

[Worms]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/003-8.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/005-5.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/013.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/010.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2a8qjvb.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2urniol.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/dlp0uv.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ds1pig.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vhw0gz.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/3329uz5.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/29zugb4.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2hyyo2b.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nkhnci.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ntvyg.jpg

[graffdabusup]

Sore.... time to move up to the big boys thread... GOOD SHIT!!!

[Worms]

I think ill stay down here were its nice and peicefull....the big boys will rip my ass apart

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0410091328.jpg
Sore Good shit man

[graffdabusup]

lol worms can i sig that?

Zarb your getting alot better keep it up

[Worms]

w.e floats ur boat bud lol

[goober]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2lx715h.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/rswkuf.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/j9obk5.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/ballsagna.jpg
just for shits and giggles

[EIL09]

critsss... http://i677.photobucket.com/albums/vv134/chrisgraff09/Photo69.jpg

[Aesir]

Yo DK, nice pajamas. I'm diggin them hearts.

[Manupro7]

crits plz

[KJay]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5848/yellows.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3360/straat.jpg
manupro- i dig it, try and make the Z more like the S, but its pretty nice

[Zarb]

Manupro- Its a pretty nice start
Izoe- Fresh!
Tryin to add some steez to my throw now that I got the basic lettering down. This is just the first idea it still needs to be cleaned up
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lasgood.jpg
crits?

[skull-e]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5848/yellows.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3360/straat.jpg
manupro- i dig it, try and make the Z more like the S, but its pretty nice

YES I lov the second IZ

and bump since you can see my little skull-es face on the top one =D

[Maser Oner]

dnt paint much so dis how it came out
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/0331091611.jpg

[mekosbc]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5848/yellows.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3360/straat.jpg
manupro- i dig it, try and make the Z more like the S, but its pretty nice

kinda looks like iz the wiz'z iz..... but fresh

mase- you need to learn better can control... and your letters are kinda wack

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
Izoe- Fresh

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpagenew.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2a8qjvb.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2urniol.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/dlp0uv.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ds1pig.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vhw0gz.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/3329uz5.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/29zugb4.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2hyyo2b.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2nkhnci.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ntvyg.jpg

your a fucking JOKE

[INKdKRINK]

http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2716/185/5/642825581/n642825581_6286097_4848495.jpg
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs020.snc1/3035_164675495581_642825581_6352415_3835571_n.jpg
I do mostly marker cause Im on probation with a 4 way search clause. So i just hit up my college alot.

[sike_21]

wahahahahaha bathroom throwie with a marker seriously? how much of a loser do you have to be to look at that and decide you wanna post it to represent you....

[Stussy]

lol you hit up your college?
your a dumb fuck...

[ErrorOner...]

random early morning bombing sesh wit my boy TH...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0304.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0305.jpg

[sellers E.]

sacwacho-dope.
inkdkrink-wtf?
error-sick.

my 2 letter throw.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpgcrits?

[Stussy]

DA?

[apoken it]

http://i735.photobucket.com/albums/ww358/nick_bucket_2009/graff1.jpg

[sellers E.]

DA?

i write "DAYLO" and i couldnt get a good throw for the whole thing so i just did "DA"

[INKdKRINK]

wahahahahaha bathroom throwie with a marker seriously? how much of a loser do you have to be to look at that and decide you wanna post it to represent you....
Yeah if i get caught with paint its a violation of my probation. And i get 4 months in county.

sacwacho-dope.
inkdkrink-wtf?
error-sick.

my 2 letter throw.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpgcrits?

Hell yeah i hit up my college. No one would guess i write thats why.

[sike_21]

well just pay attention to school cuzz your future in graff is never going to happen

[Zarb]

writing is not drawing big box letters in a college bathroom

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

random early morning bombing sesh wit my boy TH...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0304.jpg
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0305.jpg

you painted that spot in the day???!

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
Izoe- Fresh

i like it las...
just dont do the shadow on top of the throw thats not supposed to be there.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/niggggggggggerjuice.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

http://photos-b.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2716/185/5/642825581/n642825581_6286097_4848495.jpg
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs020.snc1/3035_164675495581_642825581_6352415_3835571_n.jpg
I do mostly marker cause Im on probation with a 4 way search clause. So i just hit up my college alot.

your fucking one of the most brilliant people ever......
no not really
you got a tat of a krink marker
why?
you dont got shit to show for it :o

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0413092141.jpg
Been working with these two styles. Which one you guys think is better? I think I like the top one alittle more

Mers- That is really nice
Sp- Im really liking that too
Izoe- Really good also
Wet- lol

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Top is better las and thanx,
Any one else got crits for me?
Fuck! I hate typing on my iPod! LOL


Any one down for an exchange hit me up....

[INKdKRINK]

your fucking one of the most brilliant people ever......
no not really
you got a tat of a krink marker
why?
you dont got shit to show for it :o
I got the tat cause at one point in my life i sold yola and my grandfather found out and went to the art store bought me a krink marker. Told me to stop fucking with that shit and start drawing. He saved my life with a marker. Or atleast from doing hard time. Thats why i have the Tat.

[..romero..]

your full of shit...

[Publik Enemy#7]

izoe-its aight alil drippie on the E
error- nice day hit for real

So this weekend I didnt feel like piecing so I decided to get some throws around
these are the ones I got fliks of
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239680495.jpg
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239682155.jpg
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239682243.jpg
couldnt get much of a pic of this highway hit since it was rush hour when i got the flik
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239681272.jpg
any crits
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1239681272.jpg

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

lol ya still wouldnt give me a reason for the tat
you should of atleast had someone who is decent with tats doo it
lol what are you gunna tell your kids when there like 10 years old

[GETRAD]

i hope to god that tats homemade, if anyone recieved money for that there is somethng wrong

[sike_21]

l0l life story wahahhaha

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/lockofirush.jpg
luck of the irish!

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

who punched him in the eye

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Supposed to be sqinting but I mad it to big.

[weakfingers]

InkedKrink- The letters on the marker are horrible. I think its a joke but I've seen worst ink. well almost worse. Oh and the bathroom marker hits, please just stop and write in a book for a while.
Zarb- I like the second one
Kjay- I like it alot.
Did someone say skwint?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture40.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0756Stitch.jpg
crits plox?

[sellers E.]

bump.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/graff2.jpg
crits????

[sellers E.]

weakfingers-that first one is dope.

[sacwacko]

http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc141/sacwacko/aspekpage1.jpg

[ReadyToStrike]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0412090910.jpg

Been working with these two styles. Which one you guys think is better? I think I like the top one alittle more


Wet- lol

ouchhh...the first one is a complete bite of los dude..cmon..
http://i567.photobucket.com/albums/ss111/xBaker666/los.jpg

[Gezra]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraffiti-1.jpg

[joker954]

^^^^
work on ur R

[Bars]

ouchhh...the first one is a complete bite of los dude..cmon..
http://i567.photobucket.com/albums/ss111/xBaker666/los.jpg

No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

[Neg_INFLUENZ]

^^^^
work on ur R

and your g and your e and your z and your a

[faser]

http://i44.tinypic.com/ws8qap.jpg

for a friend that writes reload

[Zarb]

haha i can see my l looking like it, the A and the O looks similar but thats a really basic shape I bet a bunch of people have that same kind of O or A. And the S looks nothing alike really. I change up the style more though since people are seeing it as a bite.

[ReadyToStrike]

No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

hes actually a pretty well liked and established writer in long island/queens

[sike_21]

yea he is

[Zarb]

quick pen sketch
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0415092128.jpg
yeah los is a good writer and im from Long Island too so I wont use that style anymore....really wasnt trying to bite him though

Reload- Lost the face for now
Gezra- Keep workin on it especially that A
Da?- Idk, it just seems so plain and forgettable. Try making the letters alittle more complex
Skwint- Love it, keep working on that straight letter though
Mers- Solid throw, I like the character too
RU- Maybe make the R alittle less fat. Props on the spots though!

[jawsy]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1348/img3273qce.jpg
for teh beast battle
las-looks like your biting.. just get your own shit.. your second one i ok but that s needs to go.
faser- not feelin it at all

[Zarb]

haha i can see my l looking like it, the A and the O looks similar but thats a really basic shape I bet a bunch of people have that same kind of O or A. And the S looks nothing alike really. I change up the style more though since people are seeing it as a bite.
..

[LIZARD]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3023/photo33ou.jpg

critz

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3305/3448732989_56cd737f89_m.jpg


sore looks fresh to me.

[PegCityBoy]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3605/3449599022_b56c6560e0.jpg?v=0

m sucks
!! sucks
shadow's off
:)

[weakfingers]

I really like the loops in the letters and how you put them in the shadow, It shows attention to detail but i think it will be kinda hard to mimick that with paint.

[ReadyToStrike]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3023/photo33ou.jpg

critz
change your name buddy. theres a well established sore in long island

[Stussy]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8503/photo832.jpg
new throw im workin on

Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

[LIZARD]

is it under the long island thread?

[bulltimeJAMP]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraffiti-1.jpg

dude if only you were older and could paint better. thats a classic throwie. the ugliness of the r is actually a good thing. dunno i cant explain it, but it looks like an old school throwie. really nice imo.

[ReadyToStrike]

is it under the long island thread?

he has some stuff on there apparently he doesnt paint anymore but he is still known

[KidReny!]

some quick ones yo crits?

1.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/KidReny.jpg

2.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Graffiti.jpg

3.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Pink.jpg

4.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Tab.jpg

5.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Title.jpg

[Stussy]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/8503/photo832.jpg
new throw im workin on

Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

bump...

i agree with you bulltime, it has a newyork kinda style, that A is sick

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

No offence but who the fuck would want to cop that shit?

dont talk shit bout los hes dope.

[bulltimeJAMP]

and your g and your e and your z and your a

dude he rapes you in terms of how good this throwie is.

[oxiclean]

Gez's a is nice, but i dont think it really goes with the other letters.

[PegCityBoy]

Spam- your s looks like sikes S, and that the only good letter you have..keep workin on it
emik?- middle of your M doesnt line up, e needs work, the I isnt bad i would just make the dot on the I go over the stim...K isnt bad

i swear to jeebus i didnt bite that, it's kind of a generic s

[anger mangement]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e334/mastrblstr/natesketches.jpg
throwie... ehh kinda hack but whatevs

[anger mangement]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e334/mastrblstr/betternatethrowie.jpg

lol sorry last throwie blew ballz heres a better 1

[MARTYRaz]

there slaps but there throwies...crits...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1680.jpg

[weakfingers]

^^^ In my opinion I really hate that E, I see it used to much.
Kidreny- Start all over and go simple your trying to much. Oh and loose the crown in the handstyle.

I went out to a chill spot and practiced my throw and fucked that shit up so here it is on paper.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0797.jpg
And heres a repost of a sl throw with a way better picture.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0780.jpg

[Black Flag]

some quick ones yo crits?

1.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/KidReny.jpg

2.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Graffiti.jpg

3.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Pink.jpg

4.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Tab.jpg

5.http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Title.jpg

Going to be blunt here:

No.

[KidReny!]

Going to be blunt here:

No.

any tips to get better?

[Black Flag]

any tips to get better?

Do simples. ex. what you see on your keyboard.

Don't use any extensions.
Focus on building letters with bars. (really helpful)
If you want to add some creativeness, experiment with bending the bars.
Don't focus on adding things like backgrounds, drips, add-ons, etc. If you can't rock it with a hollow or white & black fill style, chances are its not working.