Throwies

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image041.jpg
what you guys think, bunk or should I mess with it some more?

[expozay]

not feelin it.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i41.tinypic.com/xqhlr8.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0418091855.jpg
Dank- How is that a throw up?
Skwint- Sick throw but the straight letter could use more work
Stussy- Really nice
Nate- Make your letters more basic for now

[remos]

any tips to get better?

bars keep simples as shitty as it is
new to graff thread

[[MiTH] hovz]

i been outta the game for a while. starting to get back into it. some shit ive done in the little spare time ive got. i doubt its any good.

Zarb - im diggin it man.
Rays - good work as usual man.

any crits on any of my crap???

[MARTYRaz]

there slaps but there throwies...crits...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/PICT1680.jpg
bump... got no crits cept my e is used too much...
i like ur simps man...

[sellers E.]

mith- those first 2 look dope.
marty- those look good...

this is what im working with for a throw. i painted it at a practice spot because its obviosly not ready yet.

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/unknownmybone-1.jpg crits??

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0418091855.jpg
Dank- How is that a throw up?
Skwint- Sick throw but the straight letter could use more work
Stussy- Really nice
Nate- Make your letters more basic for now
last page bump

[plan]

heres my throw...
http://up57.siz.co.il/up1/grmiqzmmnrmx.jpg (http://www.siz.co.il/)
crits ?

[ding1]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3600/3456014612_1da6ccb22a.jpg

[sellers E.]

mith- those first 2 look dope.
marty- those look good...

this is what im working with for a throw. i painted it at a practice spot because its obviosly not ready yet.

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/unknownmybone-1.jpg crits??

bump for crits. its been on here a few hours and nada.

[MARTYRaz]

i dont think it looks bad...i like...keep practicing it and it will look better everytime u do it

[Zarb]

Yeah, just keep practicing it. Crits on mine?

[blunttokes]

http://i381.photobucket.com/albums/oo257/CaNaDuH905/roal.jpg
crits even tho its jus a hollow

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
crits?

[faser]

fix the R on the last throwie

[weakfingers]

Blunttokes-Hollow on a freight? I'm not one to say shit for a writer thats been doing it longer then me but c-mon you can do alot better.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers-I like your R in your book its really original.
Sellers-I dont really like the second and third letter but that just my opinion, I prefer simple throws.
Plan- I really love that throw, and the shine is so skinny, what cap did you use?
Zarb- Do you write lag? I can't tell if the middle is an A and the last letter is an s or an g.
Mith Hovz- I really liek your first one, I like the style and flow
Vader-I just will say do another E its to small for the throw but thats in my opinion.





Practice makes perfect?... Cell phone flick. Critz
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0803.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/oneer.jpg
Give crits to get them...

[sellers E.]

Yeah, just keep practicing it. Crits on mine?

zarb, yours always look dope as hell. i like it. the l s is dope.

[sellers E.]

Blunttokes-Hollow on a freight? I'm not one to say shit for a writer thats been doing it longer then me but c-mon you can do alot better.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers-I like your R in your book its really original.
Sellers-I dont really like the second and third letter but that just my opinion, I prefer simple throws.
Plan- I really love that throw, and the shine is so skinny, what cap did you use?
Zarb- Do you write lag? I can't tell if the middle is an A and the last letter is an s or an g.
Mith Hovz- I really liek your first one, I like the style and flow
Vader-I just will say do another E its to small for the throw but thats in my opinion.

thanks for the crit, i fucked up on those letters. painted it again today and they looked better.





Practice makes perfect?... Cell phone flick. Critz
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0803.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/oneer.jpg
Give crits to get them...




u did your throw exact, perfection.

[sellers E.]

mers- does that painted throw say mers?? the doesnt really look like an r. maybe show the other line in it.

[Stussy]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1033/photo841.jpg
Vader-To many random wiggles in your letters, and all the points arent working
Sellers- i can only tell what half your letters are, and dont bump shit on the same page
Plan- that style never work, i would just start over...
Ding- you seem to have the idea right, just workin on it... i like your first letter, keep going with that
blunt- you've been at the game for awhile now, i expect something abit better than that
Mers- looks good, keep at it
skwint- not a big fan of your style or name, you seem to have that style down pat, try and prank out and try some new styles... expand your idea of a throw

my 2 cents

[sellers E.]

ding1-dope
stussy- i like that alot. the y is sick.

alittle more legibal??
it says "DAYLO"
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo-2.jpg

[blunttokes]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
crits?

select?
from c2m?

[blunttokes]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1033/photo841.jpg

blunt- you've been at the game for awhile now, i expect something abit better than that

my 2 cents

word haha... i used scraps that day but w.e next time itll be a better throw i hope or a str8.

[Sizzuurp]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9523/0420090238.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5726/downsized0420090237.jpg

[Black Flag]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/9523/0420090238.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/5726/downsized0420090237.jpg

Wait!?!
I am so confused, are you in MHS? Or you just doing a shout out?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

blunttokes- what does select?
from c2m? mean?????

[Sizzuurp]

no im absolutely not in mhs or at there level lol. im just shoutin out my man OC. i paint with them cats sometimes but i dont rep mhs

[-AnTi-]

Heres a few quick stuff that I've just done.
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w262/steve0118/scan0002.jpg Hate that one but crits please.

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w262/steve0118/scan0003.jpg just a quick simp.

http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w262/steve0118/Lertnew.jpg I like this one but it needs improving.

Crits please

[sham]

http://i198.photobucket.com/albums/aa259/sham_acsc/Picture001.jpg


lert go simpler and make your letters round

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3540/3460935682_ea8a9cc837_m.jpg
ignore that line.

lert second one is the best. i kno u like that last one but dont do that.
future. looks pretty good. like ur e the best.

[XskeletorX]

future - lookin ok, keep practicing
lert - yeah, go simpler. also try to make your letters pretty much the same size
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g313/Wes-Is-A-Mess/fister.jpg
critzzz. fucked up on the bottom of the i. oh well

[Black Flag]

no im absolutely not in mhs or at there level lol. im just shoutin out my man OC. i paint with them cats sometimes but i dont rep mhs

Oh haha, I figured, but I don't know anyone in that crew personally so not gonna act like I am all up in their shit.

Anyways, the throws look decent, I suck at bubble styles so I can't give you much advice there. But I think if you keep heading the way you are now you will end up with a solid throw eventually.

[sellers E.]

ding1-dope
stussy- i like that alot. the y is sick.

alittle more legibal??
it says "DAYLO"
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/daylo-2.jpg


bump for crits.

[sellers E.]

ruk- looks pretty good.
lert- middle ones the best. work on it.
expozay- looks good. e is dope.
skeletor- its ok. i like what your doin with the s. clean it up

[weakfingers]

Daylo-Your d looks like an A
Fist-I love the dick T.... no homo...
Emik- Don't draw on the bottom of the page, its a horrible habit, I used to do it and my shit would look wack on the walls
Lert-Go way simpler and get clean shit going and youll progress alot quicker
Ruk-I like how its nice and simple.



skwint- not a big fan of your style or name, you seem to have that style down pat, try and prank out and try some new styles... expand your idea of a throw

my 2 cents
Word. Thanks for the advice, The name has a small meaning behind it but I'm trying to work on new styles.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0804.jpg
Critz

[sellers E.]

skwint- i dig that style. thanks for the crit. but i already drew this one and the d is the same some im gona go ahead and post.
daylo.http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/11222222.jpgcrits.

[[MiTH] hovz]

yo skwint, the only thing i can see is that first bottom on the "n", make sure its going in a consistent direction ar the other letters. the bottom of the other letters are going down to a point, but that one is goin kinda crooked. idk it looked out of place to me

[weakfingers]

Daylo-Your shadow should be the same throughout the throw its way farther down on the bottom then it is on the top left edge

[klic]

throwies definately arent my strong point

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow7.jpg

daylo - keep at it, your D doesnt really go with your other letters

skwint - i dont like that K, and use a fatter marker so the lines arent so skinny

fist - lose the line on your T so it doesnt look like a dick

emik - dont draw on the bottom of the page

future - from left to right, your letters go from worst to best. that FUT needs some work

lert - give crits to get crits

ruk - those first ones are dope, nicest shit ive seen on here lately

[[MiTH] hovz]

klic - its aight. make sure the letters are all the same size, the ones at the end seem lower, it might just be the camera angle. im not liking the k though.

Skeletor - im not liking the f, it doesnt seem to fit to me. the rest is ok.

sham - i like it. the shadow seems a little too big tho.

expozay - you got it simple, now just try with different styles and such.

here are some of mine... shit?

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3645/3461747300_e8df32f59a_o.jpg

ruk- so fresh.

janek work on that k.

daylo- fix that drop shadow

[XskeletorX]

fist - lose the line on your T so it doesnt look like a dick


it's supposed to be a cock hahah. everything's good, but your K needs some tweaking

[..romero..]

http://i42.tinypic.com/j8o1dy.jpg

FORREAL GUYS...WHAT YALL THINK ABOUT MY THROW?

[[MiTH] hovz]

expozay - im really liking that one man. idk something about it. maybe make the top part of the k a little thicker. it seems squished.

romero - hahaha good one

[weakfingers]

Needs more quotation marks and i don't see an arrow anywhere.

[..romero..]

really? i was sure i made up for the arrows absence with the 7 point krown.cant get much more gangster than that.

[LIZARD]

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/3268/photo33ouc.jpg
critz

[[MiTH] hovz]

romero - no no no, you need to add in more points, and a big ruby in it. and then put "wEsT SIde FoR LiFE BiTCHes" on the side and "I Smoked weed with tupac" under it.

sore - get rid of that cancerous growth on the s and you should be set

[equator_2012]

sore change your name!
then you'll be set.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

sore - get rid of that cancerous growth on the s and you should be set[/QUOTE]



lmao!!!
but change ur name

[Blank2]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2568/photo5nhj.th.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo5nhj.jpg)

ok so im sorta new to graffiti, kid in my class was doing it so i thought i would too having trouble with a name though i went from blank to lude to mazx and the above pic is just a draw up of mazx so tell me what u think

[Werse]

Looks alright, crowd your letters a little more, but it has good letter structure.

[Blank2]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6831/photo3f.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo3f.jpg)

alright thanks im thnk im gonna stay with that name but here is a picture of LUDE when i was sketchin with that

[Werse]

Yeah man, stick to that name, get rid of the arrows and shit, just letters.
And try to make your pics bigger so we can really see em.

[Blank2]

alright so stick with that pick i just posted (LUDE) but just get rid of the arrows? oh ya if u just click on it it should pop up bigger my b

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2568/photo5nhj.th.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo5nhj.jpg)

ok so im sorta new to graffiti, kid in my class was doing it so i thought i would too having trouble with a name though i went from blank to lude to mazx and the above pic is just a draw up of mazx so tell me what u think



looks like creategraffitiletters.com to me dude.....

[Blank2]

basically is but i didnt trace im still gettin the feel for it ya know

[[MiTH] hovz]

lude - not really feelin it, stick to simples son. but this is also a throw section so....


some shit i did a few minutes ago. my marker decided to crap out on me but heres some of em (ignore the crappy drop shadow)

[Werse]

I've used fonts to get letter structure, just build your own style around it and you'll be set.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

lawl
fool

[Blank2]

gotcha , the name thing is driving me insane though cuz u cant use anything simple like cope or something because their legends

[klic]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/2568/photo5nhj.th.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo5nhj.jpg)

ok so im sorta new to graffiti, kid in my class was doing it so i thought i would too having trouble with a name though i went from blank to lude to mazx and the above pic is just a draw up of mazx so tell me what u think

yeah thats a direct bite off of learngraffiti.net

[Blank2]

ya honestly read what i post after it i said it basically is we all got it i never said no i made that shit up i drew it freehand though and like it says in plain view im still getting a feel for it

[Werse]

Yeah, if your gonna base your letters off a websites shit dont use learngraffiti... I just looked at the site and it teaches you to do arrows and a bunch of wack shit.

[Blank2]

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/513/photo1vzu.th.jpg (http://img18.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo1vzu.jpg)


so when you guys say simple do you mean like this (i free hand this and didnt take it from anywhere)

[Werse]

Yeah, like a throwie, don't try to do pieces with crazy add ons and shit.

[Blank2]

alright , lol does that look good , gah i feel so lost

[Werse]

Nothings gonna look good for a while man hahaha.
Just chill and keep drawin...
http://i39.tinypic.com/33dw49i.jpg

[[MiTH] hovz]

bump from last page...

[Werse]

Mith the first one looks sick, your style is bomb.
Crit mine?

[Stussy]

http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/1033/photo841.jpg

bump because.....

everyone needs to look at graff more

[[MiTH] hovz]

haha rayz your pro in this toys forum, you just rape our cheeks. what do you think of mine man? i could use the crits of someone more advanced

and werse - umm, the w doesnt flow with the rest. make sure you keep the letters in a straight line, and are all the same size. like the first e and the second e are two different sizes. keep workin on it.

[Stussy]

im not sure what it says

[klic]

ya honestly read what i post after it i said it basically is we all got it i never said no i made that shit up i drew it freehand though and like it says in plain view im still getting a feel for it

if i were you, id just practice really simple bubble letters like you just posted, drop the learngraffiti.net letters because 90 percent of the letters on that website suck, and your just gonna get called out on that a lot

[[MiTH] hovz]

oh my b, um it was a random word "stay" i just started writing it and liked the letters

[Werse]

Yeah I can't get a good W to match the rest, I'll try straightening it out and sizeing it up though.

[[MiTH] hovz]

aight ya, i just personally never liked angled throws

[Blank2]

ya i gotcha klic, what about big pieces though would learngraffiti.com be a good place to start and then just branch of from it with my own style or what

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

rayz is dope as always!

[[MiTH] hovz]

blank, to do pieces just start with simples, look around at the "new to graff" thread and the "toy simples" thread. dont even bother looking at those websites again.

[Werse]

Anyone game for like a mini exchange, cause I wanna see what others can come up with my name and vice versa.

[Blank2]

alright thanks dude

[Batman_01]

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm244/NickZende102/Startofbatman_01.jpg

[Werse]

Hhaha, the throws cool, but are you really writing batman?

[Blank2]

wesre im down

[Werse]

Cool man, which name do you want me to do?

[Blank2]

lude

[Stussy]

stop talking so much... post pics

[[MiTH] hovz]

lol exactly

[Werse]

Here...
I fucked up the L real good haha, the D sucks too.
http://i42.tinypic.com/mua0pu.jpg

[Blank2]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/913/photo5x.th.jpg (http://img25.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo5x.jpg) alright i came up with a cuple the s is really fucked and i see what u mean by the w lol and i actually like your drawing of lude i might have to steal that lol

[Werse]

Go ahead I don't care, Stussy will you exchange, I want someone good to do mine?

[[MiTH] hovz]

people, no offense, but just do your own throws, dont have someone else do it and cop what theyve done. the whole point of graff is to make your own shit that represents you. you have a name, you gotta make it and earn respect. time spent making other peoples could be time spent working on your own. idk thats just what i think.

sorry if i sound like a dick

[Stussy]

yall all need to practice more...

and nah, im not going to exchange, sometimes you gotta figure things out for yourself...
well for now you need to

[Werse]

I know what you mean.
I just want to see what someone who has better letter structure than me can come up with, cause im having trouble with the W.

That was to MITH

[[MiTH] hovz]

ya i get what you mean. just look through the threads at what people do with letters and how they manipulate em. then you can understand what to do i guess. idk. just look for some inspiration. it takes time man.

[Blank2]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7853/photo6xsf.th.jpg (http://img24.imageshack.us/my.php?image=photo6xsf.jpg)

[[MiTH] hovz]

lude, dont bother with drips yet man, keep working on structure. stay simple

[Werse]

Yeah man, I've been through the whole progression thing.
I wrote for almost a year, then I stopped, and I'm trying to get back into it. And it sucks trying to learn new shit all over again.

[Blank2]

what more can i work on like with simple letters?

[Werse]

Do those bubble letters, 1000 times.
It just happens haha.
I can sit around and do my throw and shit for hours, and each time something changes and I'm happy about it, its all practice to me.

[[MiTH] hovz]

idk, im no pro. id say work with those bubble letters. keep writing em over and over, with no shit in em like drips or all. then youll see you get better control of the letters and can tweak em in different ways, then you get flow and then it goes on from there. idk ask one of the senior members maybe.

[Blank2]

alright that sounds like a plan , stussy can u tell me somethings i need to work on in my throwie

[MARTYRaz]

dont trust senior members...just cuz they have high post count dont mean shit...just shows theyre on here more than practicing...but for some senoirs its oposite..(not me i suck)

[weakfingers]

Yall need to post more picture, shitty cell phone flick for now.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3-3.jpg

[[MiTH] hovz]

ohhh i thought you got senior member as like a rank or somethin if you werent a toy lol. i never payed attention to that. haha wow

[sellers E.]

werse- that looks alot like my style haha. its pretty good.

been bombing all day...
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/11111.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1111-1.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/11.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/111-1.jpg
shitty cell phone pic. it was dark.

[Werse]

Yeah man, I just recently started doing the flat tops.

[sellers E.]

yea. there pretty cool. wat u think of mine?

[Werse]

Look alright.
Put a hole in your D, I couldn't tell what it was.

[klic]

ya i gotcha klic, what about big pieces though would learngraffiti.com be a good place to start and then just branch of from it with my own style or what

no, dont use learngraffiti.net for anything, use bars to make your letters (if you dont know what bars are, theres an artical on them in the new to graff thread), and just practice simple keyboard letters

[MARTYRaz]

yessir^^stick to them bars and wen u got those down everything else will come natural...its called style...everything in graff is all about progression...wen u get something down u fuck with it til it becomes UR style of graff...but until then stick to bars...

[sellers E.]

Look alright.
Put a hole in your D, I couldn't tell what it was.

im just not shure how to do that with the style of the throw and the other letters. any tips?

[Werse]

Same way it is with the A

[sellers E.]

ok. i know u just told me that in the blackbooks but w/e.

[milk boxx]

daylo - yeah man, just clean up the bump on the Y and add a dot or line to your D somehow to make it look good.

[weakfingers]

Milk-Don't bump a post on the same page edit that ish.
My first canvas. (It says skwint7)
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0806.jpg
Crits please.

[milk boxx]

Yall need to post more picture, shitty cell phone flick for now.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3-3.jpg

Keep the INT the same size as the SKW, homie..

[crimateNC]

fuck this i'm going outside painting. brb wit throwie.

http://usera.imagecave.com/teaguesy/131251.jpg
fuck that sun is glare crucial.
crits. the dubya needs some work i know haha

[mekosbc]

red can ran out so had to two tone it.... kinda wack but what ever....
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0026-1.jpg

[ReadyToStrike]

meko im really feeling that..just clean up your fill

[sellers E.]

weak fingers- i dig that canvas throw.
meko- looks good.

few throws i did.
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/13.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/14.jpg
crits?

[MARTYRaz]

worrk on that D some more...ur gettin it tho..

[Five Sixx Ace]

wiss- yeah add the upper part next to i and it will look good.
meko- looking good man, keep it up
daylo - yeah it looks more like a o than a d.

been working on a new name for a while and think i got it kinda good now.

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0326.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0324.jpg

crits?

[niner1234]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/697/photo197m.jpg

new throw

[ErrorOner...]

my newest toss style...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0350.jpg

[BadlilDuck]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9691/dsc01187l.jpg

yes? no? ignore tags at the bottom

[-AnTi-]

daylo - keep working man, its improved a fair bit.
meko - that shits dope.
soec - i like it, nice and simp

heres my new one, made it more rounded i personally like it a lot more.
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w262/steve0118/scan0001-1.jpg
critz please
should i get up with this??

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

red can ran out so had to two tone it.... kinda wack but what ever....
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0026-1.jpg

bump this. do it with a full can. nice and clean left to right can control. looks really nice

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3514/3468747611_e34fc5e318.jpg
crits?

badlilduck feelin that throw.
meko- really like that k.
lert dont do that with the centers of ur letters.

[ErrorOner...]

my newest toss style...
http://i422.photobucket.com/albums/pp301/ErrorOner___/IMG_0350.jpg
bump

meko - im feeling that shit, it looks a little sketchy tho but cleanliness is a bitch i kno...
niner - that looks wrong, keep practicing simples and shit before trying to do letters like that
slier - that looks alright just a little sloppy.. the L and I need work.

[BadlilDuck]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/9691/dsc01187l.jpg

yes? no? ignore tags at the bottom

bump

lert- don't make it all squiggly and stuff
error- lose the halo and fix the s and r make it more rounded

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0423092020.jpg
Bad Duck- I like it but maybe try going a little slower for now because it looks alittle sloppy
Error- I like it all except im not sure about the top of the S
Emik- Its pretty clean but try making all your letters the same size for now
Mek- I agree with everyone else, it looks hot but definetly make it cleaner next time
Skwint- Nice job on your first canvas but I dont think I like the 7 you added

Critsss?

[toucan]

Yeh...its my first attempt at anything...it was a little quick sketch(keep in mind i bit this one like crazy)

[Zarb]

bro were not gonna give you crits on something you bit haha, cause its not your own. And why would you admit that haha

[GoGetSome]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/pict0008-2.jpg
crits?

las- fix bottom of your "s"

[expozay]

las i feel like u post the same thing every day. maybe its just me tho.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/1944/photo22a.jpg

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3617/3469555565_0456bc1517.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3600/3469555561_b4dc27836f.jpg
crits?
go get some not feelin it homie. wtf does it say?

[..romero..]

kill that e...with a shovel.and then bury it where it can never be found..hahahahaha.



im just fucking with ya but yah that e needs alot of work.not only does it not flow at all but is just ugly really.the k on the last one is nice tho...uuuuum.the m needs wrok to.but the e's nose.bring it in more and make it fatter.if that makes sense.probably not tho.

[expozay]

lol. yea it is ugly as fuck but thats kind of why i was feelin it. but thanks illl try all that.

[CrustOner]

daylo - keep working man, its improved a fair bit.
meko - that shits dope.
soec - i like it, nice and simp

heres my new one, made it more rounded i personally like it a lot more.
http://i178.photobucket.com/albums/w262/steve0118/scan0001-1.jpg
critz please
should i get up with this??

Not yet. practice a lot more before you actually go bomb.

[Zarb]

Heres another style Ive been fucking http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0424091528.jpg

Bigblue- Thats pretty cool
Emik- I like it all except for the E
Lert- Ya dont go bombing yet, just keep sketching ideas for now

[eyeneversleep]

i write dak

http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f284/fkn_fast/DSCF1446.jpg

[weakfingers]

Dak-Work on a new A, that doesent really look like one
Last- Try a new style.
Emik-Goway simper that e is fucking ugly and if your gonna get a new E try not to use the line that goes into the middle bubble, I personally see it way to often.


I'm trying a new T out and im probably gonna switch the K for a Q.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture42.jpg

[ReadyToStrike]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0423092020.jpg
Bad Duck- I like it but maybe try going a little slower for now because it looks alittle sloppy
Error- I like it all except im not sure about the top of the S
Emik- Its pretty clean but try making all your letters the same size for now
Mek- I agree with everyone else, it looks hot but definetly make it cleaner next time
Skwint- Nice job on your first canvas but I dont think I like the 7 you added

Critsss?

still biting los i see?

[weakfingers]

Its a pretty basic style but if Los is a big writer, zarb If I where you I would ditch the style and start over,

I like the throw with a Q more, it suits the style of throw.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0808.jpg

[Zarb]

bro it really doesent look like Los's shit at all. The a is the only similar letter to me and thats just a basic shape. And los did not invent a skinny L.
Anyway heres more ideas
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lasthrow.jpg
Skwint- I like it

[klic]

las - i cant tell what that lest letter is, the S is good, the top of the A extends too far

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow8.jpg

[Fury]

Zarb - I like it except for the last letter.
Janek - Take off the thing on the K, and make the top right line slant more so it's more identifiable as a K and not an H.

[Zarb]

yeah its supposed to be a T, i usually just write las but I wanted to see how it looked with a t
Janek- Your throw got a lot better but i agree with fury that K kind of looks like an H

[..romero..]

las - i cant tell what that lest letter is, the S is good, the top of the A extends too far

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow8.jpg

this is pretty good.the only thing it needs work on is the k.make the top right arm identical with the rest of the letters.like ho the j's top sticks out the right...i think you get what im saying.if you did that then it would look really good

[klic]

thanks romero, i was planning on doing it like that but i didnt really think it would go with the ways the lines curve but i'll try it next time

[weakfingers]

Yeah klic it would look really good if you fixed the k up




http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0808.jpg

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[TheWorldGoneMad]

The U on the last one looks like a double you.

[BigBlueViolence]

I think the U on the last one IS a W, homie.

[Fury]

Squint - I like the second one the best. They all look pretty good though

[weakfingers]

Thanks, Im gonna try to paint it tomorrow with some scrap cans.

[klic]

The U on the last one looks like a double you.

lol.. second one looks best by the way, try painting that one

[Zarb]

ya skwint second looks the best.
Sorry I keep posting every little idea but I wanna go and paint next weekend so I wanna get my throwie down by then.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/lastoss.jpg

[Fury]

I'm not feeling the 3 as the circle for the A, and I feel the A is a bit long on the left side

[weakfingers]

Yeah, Close that shit up with a small line.

[..romero..]

Yeah klic it would look really good if you fixed the k up


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0808.jpg

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for reall homie i think you should just drop this name...go with somethin less complicated i guess.because those letters dont flow well obviously..

[[MiTH] hovz]

las - its getting better i guess, i see you fixed that s too.

klic/janek - just fix that k i think. its funny i can tell your style from a mile away. like even your simples or your throws. i remember it from when i was first on bombingscience like last year.

heres a throw i did on the trusty ol qp. crits?

[sellers E.]

klic- the k looks like an h
weakfingers- dont like the first one at all. the other 2 look good. middle ones the best
zarb-i like it.

i cant figure out wich d i want to use. all these sketches blow i know

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1aaaa.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/14.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1-2.jpg

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3377/3474694108_2cc0ddd884.jpg

squint middle is best.
daylo first one is alrite.

[StompBolts!]

Skwint - i like the last one. nice colours but keep the lines clean

[BigBlueViolence]

Skwint- Don't do highlight with your outline color.
and your Q looks way out of place.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/sertruckk3.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

crits???

[oxiclean]

Not feeling the m, but its ok

[weakfingers]

Thanks for all the crits every one I'm gonna go to work hard on the flow of my letters.

And Romeo, I know your a way better writer then me and have way better flow and shit but my name has a meaning behind it and I know this is gonna sound really gay and cliche' but its more then just letters to me. But I'll think up a couple of names and if i get a good one ill switch it up.

[expozay]

can i get some crits?

[weakfingers]

Never ask just give them and you will get them back

[sellers E.]

klic- the k looks like an h
weakfingers- dont like the first one at all. the other 2 look good. middle ones the best
zarb-i like it.

i cant figure out wich d i want to use. all these sketches blow i know

http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1aaaa.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/14.jpg
http://i221.photobucket.com/albums/dd85/sellersphotobucket/1-2.jpg


bump for crits.

[expozay]

i gave some wen i posted.

[sellers E.]

o thanks. didnt see that.

[weakfingers]

Sorry for sounding like a dick before EMIK. It looks good just make all the letters the same size and you should be good.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0426091301.jpg
Daylo- None of those look like d's man make it more simple
Mers- Looks pretty solid to me
Emik- Its nice except for the middle part on the E, I jsut dont really like how fat iit gets

[mtown]

do it cleaner and give it a color and highlights

[7nationarmy]

dude if only you were older and could paint better. thats a classic throwie. the ugliness of the r is actually a good thing. dunno i cant explain it, but it looks like an old school throwie. really nice imo.

classic??i see about every writters letter in this throw up

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersi.jpg

[sham]

daylo- first one is the best its not really necessary to post the same thing 3 times tho
las- the a doesnt really make sense


crits?http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/11/7a/9759bc86540e.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0426091828.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture2-13.png
My first time working with highlights

Mers- Nice man and glad to see youve started painting
Grime- The letters are pretty good but next time maybe go slower and make it bigger cause your lines look pretty shaky

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

looks good las

[..romero..]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersi.jpg

not very good.personally i like the other ones you were rockin

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

like the one at the top of the page?? i like that one better. i was just tryng like a new style. but ima stick with the other ones

[sham]

http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/93/bd/ca2e8ac6d8d3.jpgredone crits?

[Fury]

Grime - I don't like the G or the E.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0426091828.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture2-13.png
My first time working with highlights

Mers- Nice man and glad to see youve started painting
Grime- The letters are pretty good but next time maybe go slower and make it bigger cause your lines look pretty shaky

Bottem page bump

[expozay]

las best ive sseeen from you.

try new things tho i feel like this is the only thing you ever post.

[weakfingers]

I second that notion and up you a shitty filled throw that has a stolen fill from the throw before! Used shitty 2 dollar black... colour place sucks huge dick!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0820.jpg

[klic]

ill fix up the EK later, im planning on putting this up in a couple spots tommorow any crits?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow10.jpg

sqwint - not really a good place for a hollow, fill it in if the walls already painted on

las - getting better, dont extend the top of your A so much like ive already said

[408Bomber]

Old slap
http://i43.tinypic.com/65vj91.jpg

crit?

[ErrorOner...]

janek that looks dope i was thinking your throw would look better without the e and k but i didnt say nuthin...
just extend the shadow a little on the n.

[faser]

sticker looks ugly
looks like u tried too hard.......

[klic]

thanks bro, i just realized i fucked the shadow up there, and feel free to rip it apart if you see something wrong with it

edit, i was talking to error not faser

[Zarb]

Janek- Ya that looks good definetly put it up
Ya I know ive been working with this style for awhile now, just been trying to get a solid throw you know? Im gonna start fucking around with different styles soon though

[BigBlueViolence]

Klic- if you're going to use a dot, I'd bring it closer to the bottom of the A.
Just a little bit.

[klic]

alright thanks, ill have your throwie done today, ive been busy the last couple days

[Chip Daniels]

word... the first picture was originally taken for a camera phone becuase i couldnt find my cmera... that is why it came out... sketchy... at least its sketchy to me...

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/018.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/034.jpg

the 'e' is screwed up... same as the first one.... was for camera phone...
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/035.jpg

http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j151/awfulgoodness/037.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

new throwie

http://i39.tinypic.com/dg2ypl.jpg

[klic]

i cant paint to save my life

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie4.jpg

[..romero..]

dont trip...youll get better sooner or later...



and BIGBLUE YOUR.SIG.IS.AWESOME.FUCK.YEAH.BOOBIES.

[MASE P_2s]

yea bro it takes time to get used to shyt

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

big blue violence i like your signature lol

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead1.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead2.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead3.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead4.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/shithead5.jpg
crits>

[writersblock]

i cant paint to save my life

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie3.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie4.jpg


Quit now.

http://www.citynoise.org/upload/1083262677ja08.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^^^^^ biter!

[Deceptuos]

Here's two quick ones, please comment and crit (:

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/280409/59315_Decept_02.PNG

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/280409/59398_Arson.PNG

[sham]

clean that shit up and go simpler

[klic]

Quit now.

http://www.citynoise.org/upload/1083262677ja08.jpg

OH MY GOD WE BOTH HAVE THE LETTER J AS OUR FIRST LETTER!!!!
your a dumbass, i know who ja is, mine says JN, short for janek.
do you honestly think id bite ja and think id get away with it?

reallytrustfulstrangers - press the enter key in between your pictures so it doesnt make the screen super wide, sorry just kind of annoying haha

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

k lol

[Mr yarbles]

Maybe you should do a jk or je throw or something
Cus that does kinda look like an a

[klic]

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow8.jpg

my E and K are clearly my worst letters, i was doing JK throws but i kept on getting told how hard my K sucks so last night i just decided to play around with some JAN/JN throws for short

now that i look at it, my painted N somewhat looks like a really shitty version of JA's A (only because i suck with paint and it was accidental)
, but if you look at the JAN sketches i did, you can see that it looks nothing alike

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

my E and K are clearly my worst letters, i was doing JK throws but i kept on getting told how hard my K sucks so last night i just decided to play around with some JAN/JN throws for short

now that i look at it, my painted N somewhat looks like a really shitty version of JA's A (only because i suck with paint and it was accidental)
, but if you look at the JAN sketches i did, you can see that it looks nothing alike

im just saying practice on paper with your throw. and to practice with can control, what i did is go a big piece of ply wood and in my backyard i practiced on it and keeped rolling over it. dont paint the streets yet.

[klic]

ill fix up the EK later, im planning on putting this up in a couple spots tommorow any crits?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow9.jpg
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow10.jpg

sqwint - not really a good place for a hollow, fill it in if the walls already painted on

las - getting better, dont extend the top of your A so much like ive already said

fuck haha, i post this, everyone tells me it looks dope and to go paint it, i try to paint it, everyone tells me its sucks and to stick to paper... but yah thats a good idea, ill set some plywood up somewhere in my backyard

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

yea i like the ones on paper. jan. thats dope. but it would look better on a wall if you practice your can control. and i advise you dont write jn for short. practice like jk or je

[klic]

yea thats a good idea, i just started fooling around with JAN/JN last night because i was doing JK, but everyone told me my E and K are my worst letters

[Mr yarbles]

Hah paint and paper are completely different homie
Just keep practicin
Stay off the thread for a while take pictures and just judge them yourself ya know
I still suck at painting kinda and I've been at it for months.

[klic]

thats what i was thinking about doing, ill be back here in a month from today, peace

[weakfingers]

Janek just try to make your k look more like your A and your N its basicly the same letter all you have to do is add the top left bump to it and tweak it abit, besides the k you have on it now (in my opinion) doesent match the style of throwie.

[klic]

yea but i cant really have a big bump sticking out of the top right like i do on my other letters

[Werse]

Practicing with walmart paint haha.
I fucked up my e's big time.
Tear it apart...
http://i41.tinypic.com/25klyee.jpg

[weakfingers]

^^^I don't like how you closed the R.

Janek dont give up you got a great style on paper you just have to emulate the style on the wall, Like yarbles said its way diffrent.
The only thing I would change with the throw is put a notch on the N to give it more definition and legibility.
5 minutes in paint and bam here's the idea i kinda had for your K
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Untitled-4.jpg

[Werse]

Thanks I'll work on it.

[Fury]

Werse - How much was the paint? Fix the E's and the R. Remove that line that goes from the S into the R as well.
Janek - You have potential, just keep practicing on walls, and you should improve.
Deceptuos - Go a bit simpler, but I'm loving your character.

[klic]

thanks weakfingers, i see what you mean with the K now, that looks a lot better, and what do you mean by putting a notch on my N?

[Fury]

Maybe he means something like this:
You know the lower-case n has that little line going up, past where the horizontal line curves? That.

[weakfingers]

^^^what he said


I mean liek the A and the N are the same with the exception of the line in the A. So you might want to put a line in the top of the n or even define the shape of the letter abit more to improve the legibility. Ill try to draw what i mean tomorrow but its super late and I got some porn to watch.

[Name the Fresh]

bullshit (
http://cs442.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_e3c7917c.jpg

[Werse]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Chill out man.



Werse - How much was the paint? Fix the E's and the R. Remove that line that goes from the S into the R as well.


Free walmart paint from a friends garage.

[Fury]

bullshit (
http://cs442.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/91057606/x_e3c7917c.jpg

Don't worry about it dude, just keep practicing.

Werse - It any good?

[Venetian]

http://i42.tinypic.com/29bn8fs.jpg

I need some input on this before i put it up on a wall.

[Stussy]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2vsojv7.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

bump dude!!

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee4.jpg

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee2-1.jpg

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/slurpee1-1.jpg

[sham]

jokos- you shouldnt paint walls yet thats really bad stick to the books
http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/a3/d8/79a0b374439b.jpg
crits??????

[Fury]

Venetian - I'm not really feeling the paint dripping, but the rest is cool.
Strangers - I'm still not liking that M, but the last one looks sick.
Stussy - I like that a lot, good job.
Grime - I don't like the G. Make the top end come out a bit more. I don't like the M or the E either. Maybe I just don't like it squiggly

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

word but it lookes mad stupid just flat down

[weakfingers]

Grime- Make the lines not so zigzag and squiggly. The dot is not on top of the I and the M in my opinion is really ugly.

[Werse]

Werse - It any good?

Not at all.
But hey, free shit is free shit.

[white]

havnt been on in awhile..sorry....havnt done much

decept - new to graff thread
janek - i like your "jan" throw more than the jn for obvious reasons
name the fresh - work on shadow...reform j..keep practicing
venet - not into that style..dont know much about it but it looks good
stussy - fresh as hell
grime - lovin the m and e but i would change the zig zag in the e and the g

crits? tag and throw..

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0001-3.jpg

[weakfingers]

White- I like you E. Ant the first letter of your throw reminds be of the boner character but backwards.

I Think I'm going to work on a marshmellow style next. Any tips on where to start?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0833.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/IMG_0827-1.jpg
Crits Please.

[Fury]

weakfingers - Not liking the fill, but everything else is cool. (on the first) On the second, it looks pretty good.
White - I like the last tag the most. Maybe make the E a bit bigger. Change the E on the throwup too, I just don't like it.

[expozay]

looks good squint not really feelin the heart tho.

[milk boxx]

Rayz man... i'm lovin yours and moreks stuff... keep it up
legit spots.

[CrustOner]

http://i42.tinypic.com/29bn8fs.jpg

I need some input on this before i put it up on a wall.

It's not paint dripping, the O is vomiting.

I think it's fucking sick. do it.