Throwies

[Fury]

Okay yeah that's what I thought, but I wasn't quite sure haha. It's pretty original, so do what you want

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0568.jpg

[expozay]

milk lookin dope homie.

[skatenate]

http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/9020/25042009329.jpg
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3602/28042009332.jpg
http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/7656/27042009331.jpg


im very muchhh a toy ok, but crits is welcome :)

[Hundred]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2vdib86.jpg
not too great at throws, first time i've actually drawn one.
i know my letters need to be more proportional, other than that.. crits?

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/throw-1.jpg

[white]

vera - i would either round all the bottoms or point all the bottoms...
milk - cant read it

crits

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0002-3.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj173/carguy9135/scan0004-2.jpg

[CAN-KILLER]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/SSPX7409.jpg crits?

[..romero..]

your trying to hard.go simpler...

[skull-e]

LOL deff deff

looks like he sat there for 10 minutes

and don't try to make the first line dip into the letter beofer it, that dort of thing...just happens

[just 1]

i dont see how thats so hard looks like a nice toss wit sum flava not another generic rounded toss keep it up wue and if that take you guys ten mins i suggest to keep practicing

[..romero..]

...who are you???










no one thats who











'swhat i thought foo'

[Queezy]

who are you?


A popular bombing science person

haha awesome

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i43.tinypic.com/sf8mir.jpg

new throwie i think

[Erm...]

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6769/019vma.jpg

CRITS PLEASE?

[..romero..]

give cris to get them fuckers...

[goober]

dank work on your letter structure
white work on your letters
can killer the u and e are dope work on the bottem of the w

trying something diffrent out crits?
http://i40.tinypic.com/2wfldl1.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

thats fresh^

[Queezy]

Aight if we get 3 people to enter there is gonna be a THROWIE BATTLE~ Word will be Auze
If your down to enter send me a PM or post in the Toy Battle Chat Thread! It will be do next friday Get at me

[sanrtizer]

generic throw up FTW!!!!!!
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3273/021isd.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindewunfin1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew2.jpg

crits???????

[ErrorOner...]

i like it...should've made it a sticker...

[MARTYRaz]

fuckin really...ur a tweeker doin all that shit for a simple throwie..like it tho..

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Im a tweeker.?...

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

I'm a tweeker.?
Yea well I do have some nice pieces I was trying a style. I also did it in a piece withch I'll post some. Looks better in pieces your right

[soe]

generic throw up FTW!!!!!!
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3273/021isd.jpg

I have that poster up in my room.

But anyways. My name is soe. I am new to this forum. I stumbled upon the other day and read around for a little and decided to sign up today. Here are some pics of two throwies I did on some trains the other night.
http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs005.snc1/2817_1027230655672_1672474829_42214_2134778_n.jpg
http://photos-a.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs005.snc1/2817_1027230735674_1672474829_42216_7467950_n.jpg

[massacreman]

thats a complete failure
but stay up

[.The.OhZ.]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1618/0000002j.jpg
crits?

deck-keep trying
strangers-i like the first one

[CrustOner]

Soe, that wasn't a good start for you. Start with the blackbook thread, when you get better, then start doing throwies.

[Zarb]

Mers- Both are sick, i really like the face in the E
Oz- The 2 letter one looks the best
Not much else on this page yet
critsss?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0503092239.jpg

[Queezy]

Pretty much a face bite of Snaps throwie, and i'm sure you know it.

[weakfingers]

Zarb,You don't ever try new shit and I shouldent be one to talk, but i see you post the EXACT same throwie ever and over with little to no changes. Try a completly diffrent style or something so you can start progressing the style you have now.

[oxiclean]

mers-pretty dope
soe-definitely work on your s
las-dont like the face, work on your l.its always bugged me
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w206/seam11/Picture4-3.png

[Name the Fresh]

http://cs323.vkontakte.ru/u16395531/92549268/x_4adbd21f.jpg
Z does not obtain=(

[CAN-KILLER]

los-drop the shine marks
sokoz-hit the paper for awhile
soe- dont hit fr8s till you been paintin for an ill min

[Wallace]

las stop biting bs police's face in the a, other than that looks halfway decent

[Name the Fresh]

sokoz-hit the paper for awhile

ok man ... two weeks on paper ..) and then wait for the new)

[B.S. POLICE]

las stop biting bs police's face in the a, other than that looks halfway decent

fo rizzle

[Queezy]

I called it right after too, it's so blatant haha. Anyways:
Throwie Battle: Due This friday May 8th
Word: Auze
Colors: 3 or less
No computer modifications, and send all entries to me!

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindewunfin1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/montaindew2.jpg

crits???????

dam dog that shit tight

like my moms butt hole

[..romero..]

lolwut?

[sex without condoms]

lollercaust xpxp roflcopterskizzes

[B.S. POLICE]

#?

[sex without condoms]

----->>>>>>>>>>>>>?

[Name the Fresh]

new
http://s43.radikal.ru/i099/0905/c7/01b910d888f1.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)
old
http://i068.radikal.ru/0905/10/7cf37edfd5f2.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

[Facedorateur]

Old is better ^

First throwie pic since ever
Crits plz

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3697/pict0575a.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4962/pict0569b.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

dam dog that shit tight

like my moms butt hole


lmao

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/1111.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Russian dude- Old is definitely NOT fucking better, don't listen to that dude.
Keep going the route you're going, it's a good look.
Work on your S and Z, though.

[Facedorateur]

Sorry then
Any crits fur mine

[.The.OhZ.]

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/1513/graff002.jpg
^^^trying something different:p
crits?

[sex without condoms]

mers im only a fan of your M on every throwie you do.

[TJK]

New to graf here some stuff. comments and crits/feedback appreciated
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/6135/dscf3222c.jpg
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4873/dscf3223.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9260/dscf3224o.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1289/dscf3225.jpg

[skull-e]

RTFS: omfg, i love the flow
Face: I'd stick to paper for a bit

[Sizzuurp]

mers i like your work a lot
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3001/0507090010.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

Ruk- i like those...but im not feelin the K
Mers- Love it...but R looks like a sick pacman :)
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/1513/graff002.jpg
Crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

^ lol yea ima work on the r

just keep practicing wit that thro. im not a fan of the tumor thing on the e and the z tho

[.The.OhZ.]

lol should i just round them off ?

[..romero..]

lose the thing on the o..like a tumor or some shit...drop.

[VaNdAL xBA!x]

Old is better ^

First throwie pic since ever
Crits plz

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3697/pict0575a.jpg
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/4962/pict0569b.jpg

you suck dont paint

[Facedorateur]

thanks man, can you point me in one direction that could help me get better

[..romero..]

you suck dont paint

you suck more,go to hell.none battlin ass...


>_>

[.The.OhZ.]

FACE-dont listen to him he is constantly talking shit. just hit the books...and check out new to graff thread. :)

[cemo954]

first time new letter styles

crit away

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/5920/img00116.jpg (http://img116.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00116.jpg)

[.The.OhZ.]

you got the right idea just even up your letters...like the K is too fat

[TJK]

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/6135/dscf3222c.jpghttp://img16.imageshack.us/img16/4873/dscf3223.jpghttp://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9260/dscf3224o.jpghttp://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1289/dscf3225.jpg
crits?

[KASE2]

^^^^^ all i can really say is stick 2 simps, sry bro

[cemo954]

tjk-- ya, not to be a dick or anything man but I really can't make out what it says, sile , silo, and for the others that start with a v, same thing too

[MARTYRaz]

it says selt..not too hard to read..but the other i have no clue..

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fagetaboutit.jpghttp://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fagetabouitigh.jpg
crits? tryn new throw.

[just 1]

nicest thing in the thread the m is mad sick

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Thnx bro

[sham]

mers the one on the truck is ill not feelin the other one




criitttzzzz?http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo03/6c/2c/dc38b81585ea.jpg

[NeVeR4O1]

it says selt..not too hard to read..but the other i have no clue..

apparently its hard for you to read, it says self

stick to simps its garbo

[TJK]

Ya the first couple are self and the last are narl
the grime is sick except for the orange and the exclamation
heres some other shit ive been tryinghttp://img8.imageshack.us/img8/3513/dscf3226y.jpghttp://img6.imageshack.us/img6/2198/dscf3227y.jpghttp://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2128/dscf3228a.jpg

[.The.OhZ.]

tjk-i dont really know what to tell you but im not feelin it
Sham- i like that grime. except what was said above

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3384/graff001a.jpg
this time i rounded them instead of the tumors lol

[MARTYRaz]

oh..aparently so..

[Bink1]

ozoe-do a drop shadow and dont do drips and whats with the hole in e? level the letters

[.The.OhZ.]

oh now you wanna be nice? ... ill squash the beef for now

...but what are you talking about hole in e ?

[Bink1]

do the hole like in the rest of your letters.
and is it Qzoe?

[.The.OhZ.]

no its ozoe i was just trying to not make both o's look so plan

[cemo954]

tjk the pest looked good idk bout the rest

ohz I'm feelin that throwie

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8657/img00119c.th.jpg (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img00119c.jpg)

trying to work on simps, keepin em same size, for some reason I always blow out that k and make it huge

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

tjk-i dont really know what to tell you but im not feelin it
Sham- i like that grime. except what was said above

http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3384/graff001a.jpg
this time i rounded them instead of the tumors lol

see it does looks better with it rounded off. dont do that thing on the bottom of ur o. just round it off aswell. and i agree with the other guy, make a hole in the e like the rest.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

just going thru my photobucket and felt like posting some shit to talk bout.


http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersi.jpg

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/sertruckk3.jpg

[GoGetSome]

umer...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0013-1.jpg
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0013-2.jpg
crits?

reallytrust- work on your E on the 1st and 3rd the S is cool tho

[..romero..]

^how the FUCK do you keep winning battles?

[GoGetSome]

i only won 1
i guess its cause of my handstyle
i cant really do throwies tho
thats y im posting 4 crits

[Stussy]

well i'll i hook you up with a throw if you do me a handy.. haha

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/zip.jpg
New/old name. I like it I think
crits?
Umer- The R has potential, that U needs some serious fixing though. The bottem one is pretty cool though keep working on it
Rek- I like your simple letters alot man

[GoGetSome]

well i'll i hook you up with a throw if you do me a handy.. haha

ok im down exchange?

[JasK]

http://wimg.co.uk/wEBpjd.jpg
Which do you guys think is better, the two throwies on the left or the one on the right?

cemo954: Shadow is good but the letters are really plain. Look at ReallyTrustFullStrangers throw, it's funky as shit.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers: I love your throw, but the second one looks really weird.
GoGetSome: Practice the R from the first, then the UME from the second. R is sexy.
Zarb: Got good flow to the letters, but the shadow is messed up.

EDIT: Better throw.
http://wimg.co.uk/x8KM7h.jpg

[Emediation]

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/ask6.jpg

[JasK]

Em, your shadow is messed up in that one. I love the S, hate the first A, I think, and I'm not sure what the last letter is but it looks like a rip-off of that throw-up font for the computer, lals.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

ReallyTrustFullStrangers: I love your throw, but the second one looks really weird.



word i fucked tht up. caus im rly small and tht was huge so i was like streatching so high up and it fucked it up. lol i was also trying out a lower case e.

[JasK]

ReallyTrustFullStrangers: I love your throw, but the second one looks really weird.



word i fucked tht up. caus im rly small and tht was huge so i was like streatching so high up and it fucked it up. lol i was also trying out a lower case e.

Yeah, lol, small taggers have it tough. 5 foot 3 represent.
EDIT: In the last one, what kind of paint was that? I really like it when it looks ghetto like that.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

word well im 5 flat shit sux lol

[JasK]

Yeah lol. I'm a toy, but I always think about doing a freight, I stood next to one the other day, lol, there's no way I'm getting up there.

[..romero..]

EDIT: Better throw.
http://wimg.co.uk/x8KM7h.jpg

this shit looks like it says leva...lol.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

lol word. well im young to so i got time.

[Sizzuurp]

mers wheres my exchange at

[CrustOner]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/CrustOnerThrowup1.jpg

I know, I know, It's messy. Elmer's Painters markers suck my left dick.


inb4 lolwat.

[sellers E.]

that looks like it says "nrusl" work on that and make it more legibal. and left dick?? u have 2?

[CrustOner]

I have 17, around my waist like a hula skirt.

Alright, I'll add a hump on the C, and I usually leave enough room to add the other branch on the T, but this one was a bit too crowded.

[sellers E.]

do that with the c, but i think u should just flip the t upside down. dont worry about drop shadow yet either, that is way off.

[KatsAreCoolBeans.]

Maaaa book.:o:rolleyes:

[TECKN]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/1930/23lyrye.th.jpg (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=23lyrye.jpg)

[JasK]

http://wimg.co.uk/wEBpjd.jpg
Which do you guys think is better, the two throwies on the left or the one on the right?

cemo954: Shadow is good but the letters are really plain. Look at ReallyTrustFullStrangers throw, it's funky as shit.
ReallyTrustFullStrangers: I love your throw, but the second one looks really weird.
GoGetSome: Practice the R from the first, then the UME from the second. R is sexy.
Zarb: Got good flow to the letters, but the shadow is messed up.

EDIT: Better throw.
http://wimg.co.uk/x8KM7h.jpg

Hardcore bump. And don't give me that give crits to get them shit, I did like five.

[.The.OhZ.]

i like that last one...dont put ! tho

and thats a sad attempt at vandalsquad lol

[..romero..]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!

[Stussy]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/746/wmlf1d.jpg
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/9271/xpcvna.jpg
quick umer exchange

[TJK]

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/1492/dscf3330.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1746/dscf3331a.jpg

[JasK]

.The.OhZ.: Lol, ty. I wasn't sure about the exclamation point, 'cause the bar on the left for the J looked sort of like, lonely or some shit, I thought it needed something to balance.
Stussy: Second one is better, and the ' on the left looks better than on the right, imo.
TJK: The T in the first one is sick, but in both the R, E, and S need some serious work, there isn't much flow. If you keep the T like that, I would suggest making the whole throw like this shape: ^, starting off small on the sides and getting taller in the middle.

[Emediation]

@jeva - that last one is so sick!!


http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090511_1603.jpg

[GoGetSome]

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0020.jpg
some quick new throws crits?

crust- straighten out your c other wise itss nice
jeva- good, but fix ur J it looks too much like an l
Stussy- Thanks i pm'd u urs
Rest- fix your holes on the R and E
ASK- dope

[CrustOner]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/CrustOnerThrowup2.jpg

any better?
Emediation I think it's getting a lot better. The whole overlettering thing isn't consistent though. it just kinda makes it look sloppy, in my opinion.
TJK I hate it. It just bothers me for some reason.
Stussy Digging that, I just hate how it's done in pen. It'd look a hundred times better with marker.
TECKN Please be kidding. That thing is ugly as fuck.

[CaughtSlippin]

http://i643.photobucket.com/albums/uu157/ramjoshi/100_0134.jpg

Heres something i did when i was Bored in Class. Any pointers

[CrustOner]

hahahaha revolt..


get rid of the arrow. The R has nothing to do with any of the other letters.

[KRE1]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/142/002fyv.jpg

[Emediation]

@reboot - you're missing 3-d on the "R" and it's not consistent thickness,
but it looks ill!
@crust - i agree with the other guy, flip your "T"
@umer - i like the "UM" of the top and "ER" on the bottom haha

[TJK]

Revolt: what was said above and the letter spacing needs to be better the o looks like a D. just try to get an overall style for you letters
Reboot?: don't like the r but the character is sick
http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/8391/dscf3333p.jpghttp://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2479/dscf3335k.jpg

[KRE1]

thx for tha crits ye its just a real rough draft imma work on it tonite.

[JasK]

Emediation: I love the S, K, and the shadow but the A needs work and it looks weird overlapped.
GoGetSome: You have some good ideas, but your letters are really sloppy. Clean 'em up a bit and make the lines straighter and it'll look good.
CrustOner: I love the U and the T, but the rest seems pretty out of flow with the whole thing. What markers did you use for that, btw?
CaughtSlippin: It seems obvious that you're new to graffiti, but read up on some styles first, I can't really crit this. I'm not sure about this being a throw, but usually throws have curved lines, not super sharp points on the corners of letters. Also, the arrow is weird. The letters don't really look fat, there isn't an overall flow to it either. Keep working at it, but I bet there's like ten writers named Revolt, so try coming up with a more original name, maybe with less letters since you're a beginner.
KRE1: I like everything except the R and the B, your character is awesome, though.
TJK: The one on the left I'll refer to as 1, the one on the top right is 2, and the one on the bottom right is 3. This is how I see it. ES from 1, R and T from 2. Three is the worst there, and the shadow is weird. I really like the T from 2.

[KRE1]

TJK: i like tha T and E in tha second pic but tha R doesnt flow its a bit small

[CrustOner]

I used the Elmer's Painters Markers. They suck.

[weakfingers]

KRE1-Make your ish the same size.
EDIT:Crits on throwie?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture1.jpg

[KRE1]

KRE1-Make your ish the same size.
EDIT:Crits on throwie?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture1.jpg

yeah i was going for a goofy ass look cuz i was going for a stoned kind of theme but yeah i think it would look waay nicer if it all flowed tha same size

[KRE1]

also diggin tha S but iono mayb tha top part i wouldnt box it off like that i would round it out

[KRE1]

http://img27.imageshack.us/gal.php?g=003hvv.jpg

[KRE1]

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/46/004qsm.jpg

[KRE1]

new to tha site couldnt figure out how to upload more than one pic at a time ha.

["Sin"]

did this today in math... still trying to stay simple.....
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF2195.jpg
what ya think.CRITSS needed i know the N is a little weird

[KRE1]

did this today in math... still trying to stay simple.....
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF2195.jpg
what ya think.CRITSS needed i know the N is a little weird

ey breh i like your tag looks pretty clean tha quick throwie tho iono youre right tha N is pretty goofy id maybe try to tighten tha whole thing up a bit ya know ?

btw feel free to crit tha shit outta my stuff

[KRE1]

also id definitely get rid of that dangly piece off tha N it just makes it look real goofy

["Sin"]

lol yeah thanks man. after i got done with the N i was just like....wtf is that.
but your shit is kinda sick man. i love how people incorporate characters with there throwies

[Publik Enemy#7]

reboot-its got flava but the structure is all wacky, fix it up
sin- like said by others loose the dingleberry

here is my ish from the weekend(not all of it but what I felt like showing)
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1241997541.jpg
^^older style throw
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1241997764.jpg
^^new style throw pulled off horribly
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1241997851.jpg
^^new throw pulled off good
http://i578.photobucket.com/albums/ss224/phukstick/1241997959.jpg
^^random day hollow in the west end of town

[KRE1]

ye i agree my flow is shit. im making a new one where there's some uniformity

i digg tha 3rd pic tyte spot

been peepin ur other stuff i gotta say im a fan i like that you get in sum grimey spots too pretty sick.

[Publik Enemy#7]

haha I love the hood, its soo chill, no one cares about anything as long as your not fucking up there shit or there money, any spot in the hood can be a day spot if your willing to risk getting shot

[..romero..]

then its not a chill spot is it???

[KRE1]

lol imma call you rowdy romero ... startin online beef like that.

[Publik Enemy#7]

haha well sorta kinda, since Im a white boy its not a real chill spot for me but I also have a lot of homies in the hood that keep the lurkers in check. Im not scared to get shot so Ill paint the hood anyday, altho I wont take more than $20 with me when I paint out there cause if Im alone and a group of hoods show up that I dont know Im probably gonna be out $20. but other than that the hood is really chill to paint, especially once you have gotten up out there a bunch because people start recognising the name and and realise your no punk you get up in the hood regularly, I figure here in a few months to a few years Ill be up in the hood so much Ill practically have a hood pass. lol

[KRE1]

LOL shiiiiitt ill take a hood pass anyday.

[..romero..]

haha well sorta kinda, since Im a white boy its not a real chill spot for me but I also have a lot of homies in the hood that keep the lurkers in check. Im not scared to get shot so Ill paint the hood anyday, altho I wont take more than $20 with me when I paint out there cause if Im alone and a group of hoods show up that I dont know Im probably gonna be out $20. but other than that the hood is really chill to paint, especially once you have gotten up out there a bunch because people start recognising the name and and realise your no punk you get up in the hood regularly, I figure here in a few months to a few years Ill be up in the hood so much Ill practically have a hood pass. lol
nah man.thats not how it works.if your not from the hood or have family from there.and i mean fam they respect.your a target.even if your from the hood youd still be a arget unless your down with those cats who run it.escpecially as a white boy your gonna get fucked.fools in the ghetto are shysty you cant trust these ghetto bastards.im not gonna tell you to stop writing/bombing there but you should definitely watch your back.

[..romero..]

lol imma call you rowdy romero ... startin online beef like that.

lol rowdy romero.nah im not starting beef im jus sayin.if you could get shot at then its not chill enit?

[BigBlueViolence]

Being in the hood basically means don't fuck around.
Don't look at *****s, and definitely don't talk to any *****s.
If they talk some shit, ignore it.
I mean, Detroit is basically one big hood, and I get around alright.

[..romero..]

Don't look at *****s

definitely.learned the hard way haha.

[.The.OhZ.]

lol yah i hear you there ^^^

[Culture_Shock]

Being in the hood basically means don't fuck around.
Don't look at *****s, and definitely don't talk to any *****s.
If they talk some shit, ignore it.
I mean, Detroit is basically one big hood, and I get around alright.

Detroit is fucked up.











last time I went down there a hooker sat on the hood of my car at a stoplight.

[KRE1]

Don't look at *****s, and definitely don't talk to any *****s.
If they talk some shit, ignore it.


exactly why everyone should fuck around with hookers.

[.od.]

hey first time posting here
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfdsfsdfsda003.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfdsfsdfsda004.jpg

[KRE1]

hey first time posting here
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfdsfsdfsda003.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfdsfsdfsda004.jpg

tha only one i kinda like is tha one on tha bottom in pink ... iono im not a fan of those loopy stuff u got on tha tops of tha other ones.

kinda like tha overlapping you did wit tha letters tho

[KRE1]

and ur D looks like an A.

[TECKN]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/2923/image025knr.th.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image025knr.jpg)

[PeeInTheShower]

if you haven't written smek for a long time, don't start. someone in south florida's been writing smek for a while

[TECKN]

damn
you serious?
fuck

[GoGetSome]

umer...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0021.jpg
^ tryna get the throws down crits?

o.d- dont stick the D over the o
smek- straighten it out

[KRE1]

umer...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/PICT0021.jpg
^ tryna get the throws down crits?

o.d- dont stick the D over the o
smek- straighten it out

yo ur R is all over tha place on that one.

if you trying for a real boxy kind of look maybe try making tha other letters uniform in that regard ya kno ?

[KRE1]

lol rowdy romero.nah im not starting beef im jus sayin.if you could get shot at then its not chill enit?

this is tru this is tru

imma still call u rowdy romero tho.

[KJay]

crits please, and if anyones down for an exchange lemme know, i need some throw ideas
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1153/sdc10494l.jpg
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7226/sdc10472m.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/705/sdc10512.jpg

gogetsome i love those boxy styles, and ur doin it pretty legit.MR is good, work on the E and U
OD like said before dont put the o under the d, looks nice tho keep playin with it

[GoGetSome]

^
izoe- pretty nice drop that thing on top of the o on the first one tho

[cemo954]

kjay I like that shit
gogetsome, the boxy letters are riding
od I'm all for that pink one, I've never been hyped on oneliner lookin throws that's just my opinion
smek I'm with peeintheshower, smeks got a good name and some good ups down here best idea would be to rock a new name

anyways . rip it apart

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3734/img00122.jpg

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture135.jpg

crits

izoe>all

[KJay]

crits please, and if anyones down for an exchange lemme know, i need some throw ideas
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1153/sdc10494l.jpg
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/7226/sdc10472m.jpg
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/705/sdc10512.jpg

gogetsome i love those boxy styles, and ur doin it pretty legit.MR is good, work on the E and U
OD like said before dont put the o under the d, looks nice tho keep playin with it
bump

CUST>ALL
DOPE SHIT

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2qty5ja.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/35nd5ld.jpg

Cust- not really feeling it, the C would look dope if you made the left side thinner, and bring the line in the U all the way down, and loose the L shape

[Emediation]

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090513_0016.jpg

i can't decide on a k,
and where to put the '|' in the middle of the A

[Publik Enemy#7]

nah man.thats not how it works.if your not from the hood or have family from there.and i mean fam they respect.your a target.even if your from the hood youd still be a arget unless your down with those cats who run it.escpecially as a white boy your gonna get fucked.fools in the ghetto are shysty you cant trust these ghetto bastards.im not gonna tell you to stop writing/bombing there but you should definitely watch your back.
dude dont worry about me, Ive lived in the hood, and back when I was 13 I ran away from home and practically was livin with my homie dirty d who lived in victory park. I might not be incredibly known in the hood but Im a familiar face non the less

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

dude dont worry about me, Ive lived in the hood, and back when I was 13 I ran away from home and practically was livin with my homie dirty d who lived in victory park. I might not be incredibly known in the hood but Im a familiar face non the less

you're still dumb because people get shot for being mistaken as another cat ALL the time... so even if you say you are a familiar in the hood, where you draw the line or invisible parameter to what constitutes familiar hood territory is all subjective, especially to those looking to kill a motherfucker. you are doing graff in a dangerous spot regardless if you know people or not, you don't know everyone with a gun and a nasty triggerfinger....

and being so young graffiti should not be the be all and end all of your life, you're not even good at it... whats the point of dying for it? wtf

[Publik Enemy#7]

sorry dude but im not scared of dying either, I could care less, dying is the only a part of life, everyone dies, I just try to live my life without fear in hopes that after I am dead I will be remembered for something.
As for me not being good at graff give me a break Ive only been painting for a year, let me develop(rome wasnt built in a day).
Dude if your scared to paint the hood then thats you, dont call me dumb for doing me.

[KRE1]

i wanna try somethin ... it mite sound goofy to yall ...

mayb wen we get into lil internet squabbles like this one bout who is really hood nd death a part of life blah blah blah ... mayb we can post up sum work wit it ? iono thas just me ...

[KRE1]

i mean after all ... this aint myspace bruddahs we post to show work nd get better ... not pick fights bout tha hood haha

[Publik Enemy#7]

whos fighting, Im not tryin to sound like some thug or act all hard online Im just saying whats wrong with me painting in the hood

as for work all I can do is draw up some throws and post um but foreal I dont really post my paper work

[weakfingers]

KRE1-Make your ish the same size.
EDIT:Crits on throwie?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture1.jpg

Bring for crits!
Bigblueviolence: THE FIRST ONE... OMFGBBQSAUCE! SOOOOO CASH!

Skull-e: In my opinion i think the dip at the top of the C comes down abit to far but then again its hard to come up with an original C. I'm really diggin the C and the S in your handy though.

KJay: On the first two work on proportion. Basicly speaking make the second letter the same height as the first. The only other thing i would say is take your time and work on can control the double outline is pretty loose

[KRE1]

whos fighting, Im not tryin to sound like some thug or act all hard online Im just saying whats wrong with me painting in the hood

as for work all I can do is draw up some throws and post um but foreal I dont really post my paper work

i got u i got u im jus saying it would b nice to try to steer all this banter away from stuff like that nd focus on our work ya kno ?

but i feel u bout not posting work i mean i think we all hav ghost tags we write under ... i kno i do nd ill nvr b posting them online haha

[Zarb]

New name and I think this one is finally permanent.
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0513091618.jpg'
Squint- The Q is definetly better then the k but I dont like the circle on the N
Earn- You have the niiiiicest throw styles, the E on the second one was alittle to skinny though in my opinion.
Cust- I dont really like the thing on the C but like squint said its hard to make C's original, the U is sick.
Rek- Your simple style is dope
Umer- The U kind of looks like a Y but U's are hard in my opinion, everything else is good.
Ask?- I think thats what it says, go much simpler for now
Zo- Hold off on painting for awhile and stick to the book
I better get some crits haha

[.HATESONE.]

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/Graffiti/WebCam_20090513_0016.jpg

i can't decide on a k,
and where to put the '|' in the middle of the A

this is just shit...you should quit.
seriously.becuase those are horrible.i think you want to do a one liner but just lack the capacity to do such..
at the very least go waaaaaaaaaaay simpler.

[cemo954]

emeditation ifeel you on the ks they're a bitch for me to come up with the concept of a throw styled k

the top left one is the best one there but I'd stay stick to simples

more simples from me, switched the e around some

http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1600/img00126.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/scantron.jpg

[JasK]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/scantron.jpg

Lol, if you handed that in.

[Emediation]

this is just shit...you should quit.
seriously.becuase those are horrible.i think you want to do a one liner but just lack the capacity to do such..
at the very least go waaaaaaaaaaay simpler.

no, im not trying to do a one liner...
but I'll simplify it fer you.
http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090513_1933.jpg

yes, i spelled to wrong...

[get a grip!]

are you trying to be an ass, or do you actually think when he says simpler that means shorten your name...

[Zarb]

^ wow hahahahah

[skull-e]

Guys, chill out.

Hes from Montreal (A place where french is mainly spoken)

It's also the home of Jesus and Sex

Edit*

Also Zarb, until you post some half decent painted shit, i suggest you learn your place.

And whoa re you to tell someone not to use a certain medium for practise? as far as I'm concerned, paint is for everyone.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

Hahahahahhh.
And LOL that would be funny if I handed it in.

[Zarb]

If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.

[KJay]

i dont think thats what he was talkin about

[skull-e]

You're dumber than a sack full of cum.

edit*

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If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.
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[Zarb]

Alright I get it.basicly until I put anything that's half decent out I shouldn't give anyone my opinion.... You've never heard anyone say hold off on painting until you get better? That's all I said man and it makes perfect sense. Learn m. Y place? All I said was to maybe not paint until his shts alittle better he doesent need to listen to me it's just my opinion....it's not like I'm telling him toquit or some e gangster shit like that.

[skull-e]

You can tell him how to structurally get better(letter wise) , but don't give him orders.

[Zarb]

Sorry I didn't type clearly enough in my opinion. Now if this little feud with us is over how about you tell me how to structurally get better and not give me orders.

[weakfingers]

Start simple, I drew this a while ago and the m is horrible but yeah keep it simple!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture9.jpg

[CrustOner]

I don't like that style.. Other people may, but I really don't. It's kinda TOO simple to me.

[weakfingers]

Yeah, its super basic but I think alot of new writers that come here would progress alot faster if they go overly simple then develop from there instead of trying a crazy throw... Kind of like the saying: "Crawl before you walk".

[skull-e]

If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.


Sorry I didn't type clearly enough in my opinion. Now if this little feud with us is over how about you tell me how to structurally get better and not give me orders.

Don't be such a fucking smartass.

[Zarb]

Hahaha alright man whatever. All I told your boy to do was stick to the books, I already admitted that I made it sound to much like an order. Just stop already.

[Gezra]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gez.jpg
yee ha

im not too toy but this thread is popular so i need some crits holmes.

[CrustOner]

not too toy, you say?

[BigBlueViolence]

I agree with him,
but the G E looks like a capital A without further inspection.
I'd separate the too, otherwise it's nice

[KRE1]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/2484/002lkl.jpg

crit tha shit outta it

[CrustOner]

it's Ewok with an R...

[..romero..]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gez.jpg
yee ha

im not too toy but this thread is popular so i need some crits holmes.

instead of ripping you a new one or flaming your vids like i did on youtube(until you blocked me that is) im going to give you some actual crits.one.get off this im not to toy shit.becuase you are.sorry.its the truth.like i said before.make the E round on the bottom and not a point.it doenst flow at all.neither does that A.which you should drop.the g is dope buuuuut yeah.it doesnt flow with those letters at all.you really need to work on that shit.ill do a throw for you just becuase i have nothing better to do really.also work on thedropshadow.its a littleoff.

[CrustOner]

Holy shit, it's... THAT gez? DirectAdvertisement?!

I FUCKING HATE YOU

[BigBlueViolence]

Haha, the fact that you don't paint that throw on the streets makes me retract my previous statement,
You are THE biggest toy on the forum.

[KRE1]

was any of that directd at me ... ?

btw workin out a K to replace tha R but tha R is sumthin i need work on so i decided to try it and practice it

[expozay]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3368/3530684096_c8b741b416.jpg
drunk.dark.

[skull-e]

very.
dark.

[weakfingers]

FIXED! oh and your M in the handy is definatly a W.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3530684096_c8b741b416.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2qty5ja.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/35nd5ld.jpg

Cust- not really feeling it, the C would look dope if you made the left side thinner, and bring the line in the U all the way down, and loose the L shape
bump

Expo, my man, I realy think you should stick to marker tags for a while.
That shit is shiesty looking.

[KRE1]

http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/2484/002lkl.jpg

crit tha shit outta it

bump

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

If your saying that my shit is ok enough to start puttin up In not too high profile spots then I'll post some shit this weekend or the next. I just don't wanna look like an idiot out on the street. so I've been taking my time.


see, this is why i like you man. ur smart. othere toys on here just go out and paint in eye view stupid hot spots wen they suck. ur smart ur doing what i did. dont paint till you got a solid thorw down. just keep practicig.



emik. stick to books and tags a lil bit longer.....

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

it's Ewok with an R...

ewok is a dope writer! yea looks like ewok to much. new name

[Stussy]

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9650/photo874a.jpg
i fucking suck... workin on that throwie

[expozay]

yea i went back to that shit today so i could see it sober.
considering buying some paint and buffing it my self tonite.

[KRE1]

ewok is a dope writer! yea looks like ewok to much. new name

fuck i shoulda known sumbody had that dope name haha

aaaite time to hit tha books again thx strangers .

[.od.]

thanks for all the crits last time guys still workin on it
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfgyrthjvd001.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfgyrthjvd002.jpg

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

pretty nice dude^

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/69.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/69.jpg
crits?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

[QUOTE=ReallyTrustFullStrangers;1385849]http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/69.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/scantron.jpg

[adreniline_zero]

http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p297/skye_038/DSC00182.jpg
temp til i get a better name

[CrustOner]

Kill me, kill me, kill me.

[Zarb]

see, this is why i like you man. ur smart. othere toys on here just go out and paint in eye view stupid hot spots wen they suck. ur smart ur doing what i did. dont paint till you got a solid thorw down. just keep practicig.



emik. stick to books and tags a lil bit longer.....

Thanks for someone finally understanding me haha

[KatsAreCoolBeans.]

fisher priceee toys this is maaa book nigs

[KidReny!]

a quick throw up why I added in the handies idk i jus experiminting
should I leave em out?
critz

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Throwup1.jpg

[skull-e]

you're trying wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too hard bud.

[eel2]

it kinda looks like a bunch of dicks (on the top right of the k, the i, the d,) which is legit tho. me and my boy kidreny are cool about our sexuality

[weakfingers]

Man i think im gonna try to make a throwie of all dicks... ill be back in about 30 minuts... But yeah i agree at first glance it looked like a bunch of dicks... no homo

[milk boxx]

KidReny - maybe just rep Reny??
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5821/dscf0571.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf0571.jpg)
crits on the blue throw?

[Loki X Sho]

lmaoooo crust you are killin me i see you

[expozay]

KidReny - maybe just rep Reny??
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/5821/dscf0571.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf0571.jpg)
crits on the blue throw?

name change? looks dope tho.

[CrustOner]

lmaoooo crust you are killin me i see you

What do you mean you see me...?

[weakfingers]

it kinda looks like a bunch of dicks (on the top right of the k, the i, the d,) which is legit tho. me and my boy kidreny are cool about our sexuality

Too much dicks?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture5.jpg

[SeVeRiTy]

wuttup.
quit graff for a while..
just came back, new name new steez.
any crits or anything at all would be of great help
thanks.

http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00005.jpg

tried my throw backward
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00006.jpg

http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00008.jpg

bunch of rough draft throws...
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00010.jpg

veryyyy oldddd
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00007.jpg

[milk boxx]

squint. .. deff rep that shit
That bottom of the T could deff be a nice chud thoughh...

[Sizzuurp]

http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/6496/05150901422.jpg
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/3025/0515090209.jpg
http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4852/0515090244a.jpg
SKOR that old ones the best one i think. u got too much goin on in your first grp of throws. i can dig where there your going with them but id quiet em down a little

[SeVeRiTy]

SKOR that old ones the best one i think. u got too much goin on in your first grp of throws. i can dig where there your going with them but id quiet em down a little

thanks.
I like your second RuK simple and the mers throws,
any crits i could give is fix the R in the Ruk throw, i feel it but theres something i dont like where you put the I in the middle of it. if u can understand what i mean
but, yeah im trying to develop a new style with the new name then im going to just work on my regular piecing letters. but can u tell me how i shud quiet em down?
Anyone else got any crits?

[Sizzuurp]

in your S there are lots of swirls and it looks like 3 feathers comin out the side. you should work more on simple letter structure rather than complexity. if i were u i would make the O bigger in your old one and work with that, idk y but i really dig that old one

[XskeletorX]

Hey Ruk, I like the first and third styles. Never really liked your letters in the second flick but i really like the new throw up, keep it up

[Desipher]

.

[.od.]

sorry im not very good at criting
skor those r solid just try to make the s more simple not those 3 things commin out
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfgyrthjvd001.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/dfgyrthjvd002.jpg

[Tez-Graf]

Ruk - The second one is best tbh. :)
.od. - Is the third letter on the bottom group a i or a b? - Like the purple one the best.

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/Throwie.jpg

[FLIP FLOP]

tez, try making your letters kind of circular when you start makings throwies. then let your style evolve from there.

[mtown]

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1773/img0390.jpg

[CrustOner]

Ruk - The second one is best tbh. :)
.od. - Is the third letter on the bottom group a i or a b? - Like the purple one the best.

http://i588.photobucket.com/albums/ss321/Tez-Graf/Throwie.jpg

I believe it says Odium, unless I'm sorely mistaken.

like the aforesaid, try to make your letters incredibly bubbly/round, and then move up from there.

[explosivo_420]

if you haven't written smek for a long time, don't start. someone in south florida's been writing smek for a while
yeah but he moved out of town and i havent seen anything from him, even his myspace is gone. OH NO!!!

[sike_21]

new throw
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_7177.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g251/robercito/100_7185.jpg

[expozay]

sike your shit is always fresh. favorite throwies on this site.

[sec_1]

my new throw up which one do you think is better tell me what i can do to make it better

[seone cdk]

sike is dope but tez needs to work on his shit

[weakfingers]

Sec- just lurk on the site till you find your letters that match then draw it about 100 times and youll see a big progression. also try not to write on the bottom of the page, i did it for a while and it only hurt me in the long run. Also to my understanding having a one at the end of your name signifies that you where the first one to write that name and shit and theres a dude in my area that writes sec.

[sec_1]

all righte thanks im prob gonna change cus i dont like having a one at the end

[SeVeRiTy]

wuttup.
quit graff for a while..
just came back, new name new steez.
any crits or anything at all would be of great help
thanks.

http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00005.jpg

tried my throw backward
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00006.jpg

http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00008.jpg

bunch of rough draft throws...
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00010.jpg

veryyyy oldddd
http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/jbotz33/IMG00007.jpg

Alright so so far i got, take the swirls off my S, and work with the last throw more.
but bumping this to see other opinions.

thanks everyone so far for any input.

[rsonone cdk]

bud ya fucked up uploadin hahaha send me it ill up load it hahaha