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"Sin"
05-19-2009, 02:10 AM
was rushing but what ya think... crits needed
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF2212.jpg

KRE1
05-19-2009, 02:16 AM
like tha lil character mayb develop that

dont kno bout tha exlamation piercing tha bottom part of it

would bring tha top part of tha S closer to tha I to make it fit tighter ya kno? but good sheit props for gettin out there.

"Sin"
05-19-2009, 02:21 AM
ok yeah thanks man. but what do you mean about the top of the s?

SPRAY yoface407
05-19-2009, 02:52 AM
this goes to all of yall.... STRAIGHT LETTER THROWS IS THE WAY TOO GOO. worry about style later get your basics down...

i bet you no one listens though

goober
05-19-2009, 10:53 AM
sin hit the books and work on your handy, same with weak fingers your throwie looks as if your trying way to hard keep it simple..
and reallytrustfullstrangers the 2nd one the 3d makes it look wack but the first one is dope

crits?
new throw


http://i40.tinypic.com/2mds0g4.jpg

Loki X Sho
05-19-2009, 12:10 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/binhia.jpg

KRE1
05-19-2009, 12:34 PM
ok yeah thanks man. but what do you mean about the top of the s?

tha top right part of tha S that leans away from tha I ... me personally i would try to keep that straighter and have it tighter ya kno ?

kinda vague but i think u get wut i mean

skull-e
05-19-2009, 01:14 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00458.jpg
Something I drew on a piece of glass this morning...aaah wake and bake

Loki: whickwhickWHACK, no offence. block letters and make them all the same size,then work your way up.

CrustOner
05-19-2009, 02:28 PM
was rushing but what ya think... crits needed
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/DSCF2212.jpg

Stay on the books, not the street. It just makes you look like a fool.

Get something down, then paint. Graffiti is destroying shit with ART, not with shit.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-19-2009, 08:35 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/1234.jpg

BIGdreamSCHEME
05-19-2009, 09:21 PM
SEKT - don't write sekt (http://www.flickr.com/photos/21729214@N06/2344105597/)
MERS - diggin it, do something about that r tho
DR - you only have two letters in your name, at least make them both original
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image012-1.jpg
bumpy crit plz, besides how it gets bigger

milk boxx
05-19-2009, 11:54 PM
new throw playaz.. reads "newf"

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0637.jpg

cust- thats a dope original style, i like, except for the gap in the S and T.
Sin- keep it in the books for a bit more.. i know its tempting to go out and paint. but just save that shit fo latahhhh.

BigBlueViolence
05-19-2009, 11:56 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/4iooxu.jpg

Cust- I don't really get what is going on with the S and T.
Newf- The E isn't really my style, but I dig the rest.

PeeInTheShower
05-20-2009, 12:00 AM
Stay on the books, not the street. It just makes you look like a fool.

Get something down, then paint. Graffiti is destroying shit with ART, not with shit.

are you fucking serious? by who's regulations? what are you, graffiti police?

i see toy ass shit all the time on the streets. if it wasn't for toys, then there would be no big time crews, just a whole bunch of graffiti writers.

PeeInTheShower
05-20-2009, 12:14 AM
http://images.google.com/url?source=imgres&ct=img&q=http://dave.matusiak.org/weblog/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/wonder_woman.jpg&usg=AFQjCNF7BCBU8AZMkX62YybXr0BLnc3AJg

i know you ain't just call me no woman.

Loki X Sho
05-20-2009, 12:22 AM
uh Skull-e: itsss aight bitches aint sheeeit, and ur bein a wickety WOMAN. I do what I do, I drink some Henny, I write "Hen" fooool, and I dont want to meet your "blocK" standard when my mind is throwin me curves. Do you however, I do me how I do me.

weakfingers
05-20-2009, 12:27 AM
weak fingers your throwie looks as if your trying way to hard keep it simple..

I was copy-ing some one elses throw and trying it with some tweaks not my style at all.

Old ish i felt like posting for crits.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture14.jpg

and a exchange i did with NEWF!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture13-1.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-20-2009, 12:27 AM
uh Skull-e: itsss aight bitches aint sheeeit, and ur bein a wickety WOMAN. I do what I do, I drink some Henny, I write "Hen" fooool, and I dont want to meet your "blocK" standard when my mind is throwin me curves. Do you however, I do me how I do me.


You TOO hip-hop, B.

Now put your tits on the internet, already.

Loki X Sho
05-20-2009, 12:37 AM
Im blazed, tired, and don't care. I'm doing stuff beotch.

PeeInTheShower
05-20-2009, 12:40 AM
well, you can do stuff and take a quick tit pic...

say that fast as hell. quicktitpic.

milk boxx
05-20-2009, 12:49 AM
anyone down for a throw exchange?

BigBlueViolence
05-20-2009, 01:04 AM
For sure, dude


http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/6186/photo30f.jpg
http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/1551/photo31.jpg

delliproof
05-20-2009, 01:24 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d159/dominikF/img001.jpg

MeloUK
05-20-2009, 01:43 PM
My throwie i did with my friends left over paint..
First try keep in mind..

http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s47/va1con/20052009555.jpg

What do you think?

milk boxx
05-20-2009, 01:55 PM
Meso - fix your M to have no space in the middle and make your E more defined, add some drop shadow and it should be dec. ill post a edited pic of it soon.

Loki X Sho
05-20-2009, 01:56 PM
http://picture.vzw.com/mi/397860238_1377611899_373701485_1242841907618.jpeg? limitsize=345,345&outquality=56&ext=.jpg

milk boxx
05-20-2009, 02:01 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/mso.jpg

..romero..
05-20-2009, 02:15 PM
meso the e looks like a turd in all seriousness.it NEEDS MOARcowbell? DEFINITION!!!!!!


as that one guy put it.

MeloUK
05-20-2009, 02:26 PM
Thanks milk boxx, I'll keep it all in mind. =]
romero.. fuck you.

..romero..
05-20-2009, 02:32 PM
Thanks milk boxx, I'll keep it all in mind. =]
romero.. fuck you.

HAHAHAHAHAHA.stfu herb.its fuckiign true and you know it.battle me.i wanna battle.like that one faggot who did the sane piece to make me laugh i give you an honest crit.you e looks like a silver turd and im not the only one who thinks that so you should take that as a hint and fucking better yourself matter of fact you should just stop writing becuase that shit is fucking whack.regardless.people are going to say that to you till you get better so learn to deal with some harsh criticism cunt.BATTLE ME BATTLE ME BATTLE ME.seriously anyone.i dont care.im booored.or an exchange.i dont care which one.im suspended today.i need laughs or maybe some actual competition.

MeloUK
05-20-2009, 02:54 PM
Im not battling you, cos EVERYONE here knows for a fact that you'll win, you just want to battle someone so you can gloat to your friends about beating a kid at sketching. Congrat-u-fucking-lations. So your saying I should quit cos I'm whack?

Im sure that if everyone quit in their first week there'd be no such thing as graff, if you want to kill graff, kill it. No one starts out as a pro.

BigBlueViolence
05-20-2009, 02:59 PM
I did.

LeaksOne
05-20-2009, 04:15 PM
i know i did.

Bink1
05-20-2009, 04:32 PM
but seriously, it does look like a turd.

..romero..
05-20-2009, 04:34 PM
see im not the only one who thinks you need work instead of telling me to fuck off maybe you should take it as a hint that you need a overhaul on your shit.

KRE1
05-20-2009, 05:05 PM
meso there isnt anything wrong with staying with tha books until you're good ... or better at least ... why put up something that is sub par and toy instead of working it out and putting sumthing up nice latr ?

MeloUK
05-20-2009, 05:07 PM
okay I'll change it up then. I just found you abit harsh. sorry.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-20-2009, 08:07 PM
well i think meso does need a little bit of work also. but try not to get offended. were all just tryng to help eatchother.
and i do aggree with meso. no one just picks up a can or a pen and is a pro at graff. just hit book. practice everyday for a while.
just my opinion here.

"Sin"
05-20-2009, 08:23 PM
what do you guys think. i know im a toy and my N is weird. im trying to work on it, but crits are needed.
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/IMG00096.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/IMG00097.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/IMG00103.jpg
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/IMG00068.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-20-2009, 08:28 PM
Don't make your S bigger than the other letters, this isn't an essay.
lose the goofy ass "dead face" in the I.
the N looks like an H

http://i41.tinypic.com/2v8hedv.png

"Sin"
05-20-2009, 08:47 PM
ok i see what ya mean with the s and the N.
ima work on it

peacebomb
05-20-2009, 08:57 PM
Pretty cool editing it on paint so people actually get an example.

weakfingers
05-20-2009, 11:26 PM
To the people sin and shit just take all the crits and youll progress alot

From an exchange...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0638.jpg


and my attempt to take some things from the throw and merge...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture18.jpg

MeloUK
05-21-2009, 12:20 PM
Okay thanks guys.
Sorry romero for being all offended. Peace.
Weakfingers - Im liking the S on the first one man, its fresh. Keep it up.

KidReny!
05-21-2009, 06:54 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/throwie.jpg
tryin somethin dif. in throws crits

mtown
05-21-2009, 06:59 PM
damn kid,listen to the crits you idiot,drop the kid thing its lame and just do simples you aren't ready for a long time,now get out of my eyes

mtown
05-21-2009, 07:03 PM
i know sometin better sin write sin like this: SIN if you can do that come back

mtown
05-21-2009, 07:04 PM
kid renys throw looks like weakoner with downsyndrome

CrustOner
05-21-2009, 07:47 PM
triple post whore?

..romero..
05-21-2009, 07:49 PM
ill allow it.

niner1234
05-22-2009, 10:40 AM
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/5255/getattachmentaspxiff.jpg

i know my s is wack.... but hey this forum is to get help hahah any suggestions and crits on the rest of it?

Mr yarbles
05-22-2009, 12:54 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/throwie.jpg
tryin somethin dif. in throws crits

*****h bit me.

I keep tellin you it's not good.

mtown
05-22-2009, 01:01 PM
lol how that kid just doesn't listen to crits let's flame everything what he says or posts,

weakfingers
05-22-2009, 02:26 PM
The last letter doesent look like an I but what ever..... QUIT RENI!

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture19.jpg



Just kidding work on proportion kid....

CrustOner
05-22-2009, 02:51 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/throwie.jpg
tryin somethin dif. in throws crits

Yousuckyousuckyousuckyousuck



seriously... you suck. Take the crown out. Go simpler. Get rid of "Kid". Stop overlapping...it doesn't look good.

or quit, because you suck.

wrekkk
05-22-2009, 03:36 PM
Keeping it simple.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/Scanthrow.jpg

Constructive criticism > flaming.
At least I'm trying.
:|

skull-e
05-22-2009, 04:32 PM
don't be such a sensitive bitch

wrekkk
05-22-2009, 05:39 PM
don't be such a sensitive bitch

Yeah, 'cause you obviously know enough about me from a single post to start in with this shit.

kill_fred
05-22-2009, 05:47 PM
you have ten posts therefore you point is invalid.

wrekkk
05-22-2009, 05:54 PM
you have ten posts therefore you point is invalid.

i give!
to l337 on these forums for me..
lol.

kill_fred
05-22-2009, 05:56 PM
you must be killed.

wrekkk
05-22-2009, 06:02 PM
hah, understanding that stuff has a tendency to be misread via text, nothing here really bothers me, not trying to get into a flame-fest with one another. just lurkin.

kill_fred
05-22-2009, 06:18 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/qnk1l3.jpg

seriously.

KidReny!
05-22-2009, 07:51 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Untitled-1.jpg

simps crits?

LeaksOne
05-22-2009, 08:10 PM
stop overlapping your letters. i kno this is the throw thread but start all the way over with that tag and instead of those boxy simps do keyboard letters

Worms
05-22-2009, 08:32 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/006-3.jpg

KidReny!
05-22-2009, 08:38 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/simple.jpg

did it just now, any better?

Mr yarbles
05-22-2009, 09:12 PM
Thank god you finally did it.
If we were still in school I'd give you one dank ass high five.

Now just work on your proportions
and your tag.
and your throws

KidReny!
05-22-2009, 09:18 PM
aiight,
any way that complimant is better than any high five you really know how to make people feel good about themselves good job champ (lmao)

SirPartyPants
05-22-2009, 10:10 PM
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/4630/002hby.jpg

Hearr!
05-23-2009, 01:49 AM
i have a feeling i wont get crits in here, am i good enough to post in the normal throws thread? (if there is one?)

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0001-5.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0003-2.jpg

JackieChanRollin
05-23-2009, 01:55 AM
Sore- That name is played out, but im diggin the throw. The E was placed awkwardly though.
Reny- Keep practicing, make all your letters the same size.
Relish- That one liners got some potential, but try something different with the R.

SirPartyPants
05-23-2009, 02:04 AM
all i ask myself is...whats the deal with the oneliners? f*ck it. really. it means nothing.

JackieChanRollin
05-23-2009, 02:13 AM
all i ask myself is...whats the deal with the oneliners? f*ck it. really. it means nothing.

If you have a solid one liner, do you know how quick you can get up and out in heated spots?

SirPartyPants
05-23-2009, 02:21 AM
heated spots? theres no such thing. throw on some head phones drink a sixer and get it started.

JackieChanRollin
05-23-2009, 02:34 AM
heated spots? theres no such thing. throw on some head phones drink a sixer and get it started.

Uhh, what? Sure you may feel more comfortable bombing drunk, but that doesn't decrease your chances of getting caught.

SirPartyPants
05-23-2009, 02:40 AM
i dont know difrient strokes for difrient folks.

JackieChanRollin
05-23-2009, 02:53 AM
If you dont like one liners then thats cool, but I think if you can pull em off, they can look pretty down.

CrustOner
05-23-2009, 11:44 AM
i have a feeling i wont get crits in here, am i good enough to post in the normal throws thread? (if there is one?)

http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0001-5.jpg
http://i711.photobucket.com/albums/ww115/hear2/IMG_0003-2.jpg

You're not ready yet, keep practicing.

hpir
05-23-2009, 09:18 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kem0ne.jpg
crits? need new ideas for an e

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-23-2009, 09:28 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet2.jpg
idk why but the m in the tag was faded.

Worms
05-23-2009, 09:29 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/017.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/021.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/030.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/014-2.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/034.jpg

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-23-2009, 09:29 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fleet2.jpg
idk why but the m in the tag was faded.

Marke
05-23-2009, 09:55 PM
Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw009.jpg
edit#2
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg
Strangers - I like your M, I've never seen one quite like it.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-23-2009, 10:10 PM
Is tht a good thing?^^ it's original.

Marke
05-23-2009, 10:14 PM
Ya dude thats why I like it. It looks good but more importantly its unique.

oxiclean
05-23-2009, 10:22 PM
Is the first one supposed to look like nutsacks came?

Marke
05-23-2009, 10:37 PM
No its supposed to look like a load shot across the wall and its dripping down. I kinda fucked the M up but does it at least look decent? Crits?

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-23-2009, 10:51 PM
Word thnx bro,

Marke
05-24-2009, 02:28 PM
Full throwie
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw010.jpg

peacebomb
05-24-2009, 02:42 PM
Game keep it simple dont add the points on top yet just work on the basic bubble letters then start adding stuff in.
Keep at it though.

Takeout
05-24-2009, 08:37 PM
Any Crits?

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0918.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0915.jpg

ReKoNe~!
05-24-2009, 08:53 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d159/dominikF/img001.jpg

wow my new throwie letters look like that haha

hpir
05-24-2009, 11:12 PM
bump
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kem0ne.jpg
crits?

Marke
05-24-2009, 11:27 PM
Heres a simple.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw011.jpg

B.S. POLICE
05-24-2009, 11:32 PM
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3664/screencapture11.png

EST2007
05-24-2009, 11:43 PM
lol good use of the crown in the logo

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-25-2009, 12:30 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/cityflicks4.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/cityflicks3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/cityflicks2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/cityflicks1.jpg
word new book...crits?

Bash_The_Bomber
05-25-2009, 02:09 AM
5936

-zin-
05-25-2009, 04:42 AM
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c265/-zin-/SDC10259.jpg

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c265/-zin-/SDC10255.jpg

have them on paper for a new throwie ive been doing.

2nd attempt on both

Bink1
05-25-2009, 07:50 AM
ohsnap that first face reminds me of totem :D just reminds..
mers- your throw got all jiggly and juggly keep it as it were before it was dope.. still your chooice
others- u suck,cant even crit that bullshit and dont paint that crap yet.

this is how i roll

http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07097.jpg
http://i708.photobucket.com/albums/ww84/rown10/DSC07098.jpg

ta!
05-25-2009, 01:50 PM
ello everyone, i'm new on these boards. i mostly do throwies and quick fillins so i went out today. i know i need work on the dripping part & the last outlines so don't go very rough on me
http://i40.tinypic.com/wwbs6x.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/24y4y2w.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2ihoxdt.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2ni7kpj.jpg

FrizzleFry
05-25-2009, 01:50 PM
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3664/screencapture11.png

yo thats my shit right there...put a lil captain in ya ha nice:D

milk boxx
05-25-2009, 02:20 PM
zin- make that shit simple.. peace the wiggles
bink - your missing some of your drop shadow in the E's.. i just say you close them up.
Ta- loose the gap in the middle of your letters

B.S. POLICE
05-25-2009, 02:41 PM
yo thats my shit right there...put a lil captain in ya ha nice:D

i drank the 100 proof black the night before and i was so dissapointed witht the regular rum last night.

lesson learned drink captain BLACK

-zin-
05-25-2009, 04:07 PM
zin- make that shit simple.. peace the wiggles



wiggles as in what?

Btw i atarted simple by learning throwies from here, http://www.learngraffiti.net/75290930.jpg.
then making them my own

KRE1
05-25-2009, 05:18 PM
you really started "learning" graffiti by googling it ?

nice.

VaNdAL xBA!x
05-25-2009, 05:23 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2r6h4k4.jpg

Aesir
05-25-2009, 08:24 PM
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/3664/screencapture11.png

That's fresh as hell but I just wouldn't cover up the "N" so much by the "S"

CrustOner
05-25-2009, 09:34 PM
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c265/-zin-/SDC10259.jpg

http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c265/-zin-/SDC10255.jpg

have them on paper for a new throwie ive been doing.

2nd attempt on both

dude, that thing looks like bome's girlfriend. fat, rolly, and not in the good way.

ugly as fuck.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-25-2009, 09:41 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2qnm9p3.jpg boredism

FrizzleFry
05-25-2009, 10:02 PM
resize your flicks dude

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-25-2009, 10:07 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/i35rib.jpg
i tink its smaller

BigBlueViolence
05-26-2009, 12:36 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/j9829c.jpg

expozay
05-26-2009, 01:48 AM
ak love that k dude.
ohsnap dope.
zin kill yourself for wasting that paint.
earn not really feelin the A but the rest looks good.
swine unless u just write swin i cant fuckin read the e. make ur letters the same size and dont do what ur doing now.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2460/3565212539_4d5210339a_o.jpg

KRE1
05-26-2009, 02:11 AM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/8837/004tgr.jpg

im not feelin tha extensions ... and its my first attempt at tha two tone stuff .. iono overall pretty weak

as always crit tha shit outta it

Mr yarbles
05-26-2009, 02:46 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/j9829c.jpg

your n is exactly how I do my n haha
well pretty much

overall I like it except for the first letter it's just too small
But you probably already know

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-26-2009, 09:59 AM
its hard to see in this photo but the e is like a penis lmfao its in the bombing section toys

Deck
05-26-2009, 10:27 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/j9829c.jpg

You should probably work on your handstyle before you start throwing it around.

Takeout
05-26-2009, 10:35 AM
Swine - I'd think about making the "S" the same height as the rest of your letters. You should also try using bars to get the same flow throughout the whole piece.
Kre1 - I would personally round off that sharp edge on the "B". Also, for now I would just lose the extensions.

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-26-2009, 11:17 AM
dude thats my throw?

peacebomb
05-26-2009, 04:31 PM
Swor keep it simple. Its a throw not a piece start simple.
Are you from jersey?

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-26-2009, 07:35 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/cityflicks3.jpg


hmmmmm.........lol




http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2460/3565212539_4d5210339a_o.jpg

..romero..
05-26-2009, 07:47 PM
yeah becuase black with gold outline is suuuuch an original choice of colors...

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-26-2009, 07:57 PM
. ino its not but idk y but i lold

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-26-2009, 08:06 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/newbook2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/newbook1.jpg
new book

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-26-2009, 08:20 PM
prettty sexy throw right there loose the thing at the end im not into it

JustChillin
05-26-2009, 08:58 PM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0526091614.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-26-2009, 09:11 PM
what the fuck did you do on that it looks like you had a stroke

..romero..
05-26-2009, 09:41 PM
what the fuck did you do on that it looks like you had a stroke

your shit is just as whack.save the funny quips for people with some level of skill.like me...

Fury
05-26-2009, 09:54 PM
Har - The R doesn't look that great. And all the letters look like there wasn't much control over it. Go simpler.

S4d3n
05-26-2009, 10:44 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/569/naersslapthrow.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=naersslapthrow.jpg)


Something quick that I used for a few slaps.

Mr yarbles
05-27-2009, 12:44 AM
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0526091614.jpg

What the hell did you do?
It looks like you had a stroke.

Somebody fucking qoute me or I swear to god

also naers that's good and all but what the fuck is up with your n?

KRE1
05-27-2009, 01:13 AM
Swor keep it simple. Its a throw not a piece start simple.
Are you from jersey?

its swob breh. but ye i mean i was fuckin around and ye came out real shitty.

nd im from LA.

weakfingers
05-27-2009, 01:37 AM
swine unless u just write swin i cant fuckin read the e. make ur letters the same size and dont do what ur doing now.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2460/3565212539_4d5210339a_o.jpg
Its funny how you tell others to make there letters the same size yet you fail to do so yourself

milk boxx
05-27-2009, 11:27 AM
yeah i'm not feeling those little swirly things at all.. and Zin i was talking about like the upwards spike wiggle things.

Bink1
05-27-2009, 11:45 AM
You should probably work on your handstyle before you start throwing it around.

whats wrong with all u toys hating on dope hands? just get the fuck off and keep doing your shit coz it stinks. bitches
this is the second lurky comment i saw first one was about tezers hand.
maybe not by u , but still , fuck this.
cant hand be simple? why dont u hate on whynotse,mostoe ? bitch.

WYGD
05-27-2009, 12:22 PM
A quick block trowie :D

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/500/lastscanbam.jpg

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-27-2009, 12:24 PM
i love simp hands <3

Mr yarbles
05-27-2009, 12:55 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2vs2fs9.jpg
Just some shit I did
Never been too good at throws.
Just like to have something i can thrown down almost as fast as a hand

also block throws are disgusting and no one should ever do them.
sorry man

Aesir
05-27-2009, 01:01 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/569/naersslapthrow.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=naersslapthrow.jpg)


Something quick that I used for a few slaps.

Fresh "N", just don't cover up the "A" too much. Also, that "E" looks somewhat out of place.

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 01:54 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2vs2fs9.jpg
Just some shit I did
Never been too good at throws.
Just like to have something i can thrown down almost as fast as a hand

also block throws are disgusting and no one should ever do them.
sorry man
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/8018/boratverynice.jpg

The T looks a little like a lowercase R, though.

CrustOner
05-27-2009, 02:29 PM
a quick block trowie :d

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/500/lastscanbam.jpg

uygo?

Mr yarbles
05-27-2009, 02:58 PM
The T looks a little like a lowercase R, though.

thanks

and yeah I know I can't figure out how to make it look like a t without out looking like shit haha

Deck
05-27-2009, 03:33 PM
whats wrong with all u toys hating on dope hands? just get the fuck off and keep doing your shit coz it stinks. bitches
this is the second lurky comment i saw first one was about tezers hand.
maybe not by u , but still , fuck this.
cant hand be simple? why dont u hate on whynotse,mostoe ? bitch.

Have you seen his handstyle? Shit has like wiggly lines with gross looking letters.

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 03:35 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/j9829c.jpg
Bump.

GTFO, deck.

I saw your shit in the sticker thread, you have no room to talk about anything.





http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/sticker3.jpg

Deck
05-27-2009, 03:39 PM
I would hope you would see it after all I did post it. But I mean sure your throw itself is good but the hand is wack, shit wasn't meant to start a flame war. Goddamn.

Bink1
05-27-2009, 03:50 PM
hand aint wack bro.

Deck
05-27-2009, 03:52 PM
You're going to tell me if someone new came in here flaunting that hand you would praise it?

Mr yarbles
05-27-2009, 04:06 PM
It's not bad it's a just a straight hand

Also I'm pretty sure he lvies in texas?
I know a few writers who moved here from texas and for some reason they all rock striaght hands like that
Maybe it's an area thing

taht and he's writing with pen
It's hard to make shit good with pen

But here's a word of advice
Take a lighter and light the tip on fire
The ink flows better and darker and it writes smooth as fuck
you're welcome

Deck
05-27-2009, 04:27 PM
And it isn't really just that one but the ones he has on stickers with the wiggly question marks and shit. Damn.

Bink1
05-27-2009, 05:12 PM
thats one tough kid . throw in what u got.

Deck
05-27-2009, 05:33 PM
Of what?

weakfingers
05-27-2009, 06:16 PM
Deck- Its just a different style of letter. In my opinion I think its super new and fresh. Theres two guys in my area (chillen and belio) that have such a good hand thats kinda the same. We all have are likes and dislikes so give it up his style doesent effect you.

Emediation
05-27-2009, 08:32 PM
bigblue - i dig it, do you have one done with marker or something? bet it'd look illfresh..

new tag, new bomb.
I donno about it...
crits plz

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i104/Emediation/WebCam_20090527_2030.jpg

GoGetSome
05-27-2009, 10:00 PM
umer...(running out of marker ink)
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/blockstylethrow.jpg

working on my block style crits?

big blue- ill style and and idk what deck's talking about straight hands are sick
Emediation- its not that flowing but yeah practice makes perfect and your i does look like a J, drop the extension thing on the left side of it that might help

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 10:01 PM
Umer- The idea you have going is sick,
but I'd get rid of all the dead space between letters.

COBALT
05-27-2009, 10:04 PM
shitty cell phone pic
fuck the E
http://i44.tinypic.com/6yi2o7.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-27-2009, 10:05 PM
I gotta say dude,
the right of your M is a better E than your actual E.

COBALT
05-27-2009, 10:08 PM
hahahaha yeah
my first throw wit this name hahaha

ESKids
05-27-2009, 10:48 PM
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/eskchef/chef004.jpg

my throw

people have bin saying I am bite so I dont really like posting this picture but its just my other E what do you think crits??http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/eskchef/chef001.jpg

Emediation
05-27-2009, 11:10 PM
first e fo sho dude

Wallace
05-27-2009, 11:50 PM
bigblue looking good, get that up

crevette
05-28-2009, 04:54 PM
aiiight so chef - i like the big one you did without the fill. c is a little fucked up cuz the curves arent smoot n shit. dig the e and the f
cobalt - work on that s, it looks like something else.
gogetsome - dope as fuck. i would not mind seeing that on a wall. the color is nice too.
bigblueviolence - cool style. but the first letter is... ambiguous. the handstyle is wack. but that doesnt matter that much.

first throwie not on a piece of paper, hehe. shits fun. CRITS.

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/IMG_0076-1.jpg

http://i318.photobucket.com/albums/mm413/kurumaebi/IMG_0077-1.jpg

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 06:08 PM
What the fuck is it with these no style cats hating my hand?
Not enough fucking extensions?
Maybe it's the lack of quotation marks?

crevette
05-28-2009, 06:19 PM
handstyles aren't about extensions or quotation marks. make it flow and shit. it's just square and awkward. handstyles gotta be quick, gotta flow. worry about the extensions later.

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
05-28-2009, 06:22 PM
word on that

slipyslipyslipymegeee
05-28-2009, 06:36 PM
bigblue- i like ur hand style but the only thing i would try is tighten it and make it tall it wierd just make it tighterrr

LeaksOne
05-28-2009, 07:57 PM
i kno im kinda late but all i have to say is deck stop hatin on big blue he burns you. earn keep doin your thang homie. umer kill the dead space an fatten the right side of your U

graffdabusup
05-28-2009, 10:11 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/j9829c.jpg

shit came out fressshhhh!

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 10:15 PM
On some real level shit,
if someone that was better than me told me my hand was shit,
a dude that generally knew style better than me
and not what he thought should be t3h gr4ff171,
I would sit the fuck down and take it all in.

But all you fucking been-writing-for-6-months-
picking-Getting-Up-out-of-the-bargain-bin *****s
telling me my shit "doesn't flow"
can eat dicks.

CrustOner
05-28-2009, 10:18 PM
The only suggestion I'd give, Earn, is to bring your R and N a little closer together. I'm not sure if I'm a person whose opinion you'd consider, but if I am, then great. If not, then go ahead and disregard everything I've said. I'd also consider the line on the left of the A to either be a little shorter, or closer to the A, as to not look like an I.. It's easily readable, recognizable, and a great straight letter handstyle, but I'm just trying to help you improve it.

/my 2 cents.

true Zen
05-28-2009, 10:24 PM
What the fuck is it with these no style cats hating my hand?
Not enough fucking extensions?
Maybe it's the lack of quotation marks?

This site has issues picking up sarcasm.

skull-e
05-28-2009, 10:30 PM
On some real level shit,
if someone that was better than me told me my hand was shit,
a dude that generally knew style better than me
and not what he thought should be t3h gr4ff171,
I would sit the fuck down and take it all in.

But all you fucking been-writing-for-6-months-
picking-Getting-Up-out-of-the-bargain-bin *****s
telling me my shit "doesn't flow"
can eat dicks.

im sorry but...

cool story bro.

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 10:36 PM
Yeah, I fucking walked into it
but I mean fuck

http://www.americanthinker.com/blog/Islamic%20Rage%20Boy.jpg

My toy thread face as of late




The only suggestion I'd give, Earn, is to bring your R and N a little closer together. I'm not sure if I'm a person whose opinion you'd consider, but if I am, then great. If not, then go ahead and disregard everything I've said. I'd also consider the line on the left of the A to either be a little shorter, or closer to the A, as to not look like an I.. It's easily readable, recognizable, and a great straight letter handstyle, but I'm just trying to help you improve it.

/my 2 cents.

I can dig this.
This is good shit.

I'm just sick of
"Bro your shit is whack bro make the lines curvier and not so straight bro. Crits? It says Ace bro."
http://i39.tinypic.com/sdhbte.jpg


On that note, I officially drop this shit.
no one talk about my hand on this thread anymore.
Hit me up on a PM, or in the tags thread if you hate my shit that much

true Zen
05-28-2009, 10:52 PM
Needs more arrows.
Dig the crown.
Only one question mark?

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 11:04 PM
Yeah man, I know what you mean,
I had a revelation.
Thanks for the input.

JustChillin
05-28-2009, 11:13 PM
What the hell did you do?
It looks like you had a stroke.

Somebody fucking qoute me or I swear to god

also naers that's good and all but what the fuck is up with your n?stroke?

Takeout
05-28-2009, 11:14 PM
eel - New to graff thread. Use bars.

crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0992.jpg

skull-e
05-28-2009, 11:14 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture144.jpg

ilu bbv

true Zen
05-28-2009, 11:15 PM
Damnit eel, I saw that shit on mr. wiggles site.
It's a goddamn bite, GTFO.

Takeout
05-28-2009, 11:19 PM
eel - New to graff thread. Use bars.

crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0992.jpg

bump for crits.

Fury
05-28-2009, 11:20 PM
Noir - He's joking and I kinda like the bent feel to it. I also like the R, but I feel like more should be there. I just don't know what.

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 11:23 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/8vn5af.jpg

ILY2 Skull-e =D

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 11:32 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/30avo1i.jpg

Idk if you can see your influence in it,
but it's there.

BigBlueViolence
05-28-2009, 11:48 PM
Fuck that's dope man,
homeboy goin hard with that balloon.

I ain't even going to try that shit, I know it'd just look like shit if I tried.

true Zen
05-28-2009, 11:54 PM
Balloons....shit...
I am speechless...

expozay
05-29-2009, 12:21 AM
trying to improve my shitty throws not gettin any better
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3636/3574501629_36dc43808e.jpg
crits
?

KRE1
05-29-2009, 12:36 AM
http://img43.imageshack.us/gal.php?g=001mtk.jpg

as always crit tha shit outta it

KRE1
05-29-2009, 12:39 AM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/1010/001ork.jpg

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5435/002nwh.jpg

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/3937/003lja.jpg

last post dint work sorry. as always crit tha shit outta it.

CrustOner
05-29-2009, 01:25 AM
Get rid of the pink shit/shine. rip out the cloud background. stop making the O so small. the B is way too fucking huge, and the bottom hole is bigger than your O. -____-

Make them closer if you want it to look like a throw. don't shade yet.

KRE1
05-29-2009, 01:35 AM
word

mtown
05-29-2009, 04:35 PM
quick throw yo crits? any one down for a battle?
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/3255/sdc10557.jpg
bigblue that first earn handstyle was pretty wack to be honest man, but that one u just did the ace one is hype yo. u just need to start incorporating more flow, more arrows, and more graffiti styles like crown, qoutations, and even jester hats. but just hang in there, dont get too mad when people say they dont like ur stuff, and just keep improving ull get a good handstyle eventually

whahahaha i lol everytime i see a sketch from you whahaha i just can't stop


and i think bspolice wants to exchange with you, i think you win because you know all the ins and outs of the world of graff such as crowns and arrows and shit lol


laterr

hpir
05-30-2009, 12:31 PM
mtown- i dont realy no wat to say
KRE1- sickk
emik- i like it try to fix up yr k
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemone005.jpg
crits?

J-Real
05-30-2009, 12:48 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh283/Jplaz/IMG_0117.jpg
basic shit, what letters/lines are the best?
hahah i suck ass

Takeout
05-30-2009, 01:48 PM
Kerv - I really don't like any of them. But if I had to say, the third one is decent. Work on bars to get proportions down right. The top of all of yours R's are way too big.
Kem - Lookin' good man.
Swob - I'd lower your O and make it a bit bigger. But I'd make your B way smaller.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0996.jpg
Very very very basic. But what do you think?

mtown
05-30-2009, 01:52 PM
mtown- i dont realy no wat to say
KRE1- sickk
emik- i like it try to fix up yr k
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemone005.jpg
crits?

that;s not mine man lol

true Zen
05-30-2009, 02:23 PM
Kerv - I really don't like any of them. But if I had to say, the third one is decent. Work on bars to get proportions down right. The top of all of yours R's are way too big.
Kem - Lookin' good man.
Swob - I'd lower your O and make it a bit bigger. But I'd make your B way smaller.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/51d35h0w/DSCN0996.jpg
Very very very basic. But what do you think?

I had never liked your N, but this one looks better. It is just bigger than everything else...

Blox
05-30-2009, 05:20 PM
Ahahahaha,

BIGdreamSCHEME
05-30-2009, 08:29 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image032-1.jpg

weakfingers
05-30-2009, 08:41 PM
Noir- I like where your going with the really really basic shit, I started that way to, Just draw that out alot and alot and you'll start doing small things with some letters, I like the direction your going in.... Nice and simple. That way when you go and paint it youll have a better chance doing it clean sooner then later.
Nic- Thats not really a throwie...
Lusid or Lusib? - Fix the last letter up.

Zarb
05-31-2009, 02:19 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/las-1.jpg
noir- Ya stay with thw basic letters but keep practicing making them all the same size cause your N is alot bigger then everything else.
Big Dream Scheme- Its not too bad but I have no idea what the last letter is. Try making the bottem of your S the same size as the top
Kem- I like that but make your E and M alittle skinnier to be the same size as your K
Swob- Lay off all the extra stuff until you have some solid letters down
EEL- Wait is all of that a joke? Im not trying to be a dick but cmon

Zarb
05-31-2009, 02:24 PM
alright im geussing its a joke haha

Deck
05-31-2009, 03:08 PM
zarb are u serious with this shit? u really want beef with me? why dont u back that up by battlin me

Eel, man don't worry about what he said your shit is ill.

Zarb
05-31-2009, 03:14 PM
I am so confused.

J-Real
05-31-2009, 04:55 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh283/Jplaz/P1250811.jpg
Lucid(?)-pretty ill, but the last letter could be better... (i think it's a d?)

Black Flag
05-31-2009, 05:07 PM
http://i259.photobucket.com/albums/hh283/Jplaz/P1250811.jpg
Lucid(?)-pretty ill, but the last letter could be better... (i think it's a d?)

I am sorry if I sound like a dick, but for that first thing, there is no letter in the alphabet shaped like that?

J-Real
05-31-2009, 06:24 PM
its supposed to resemble a K, ill work on that hahaha...*sigh*

peacebomb
05-31-2009, 06:54 PM
Wayyyyyy to manty troll acounts going on.

hellagargoyle
05-31-2009, 07:03 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7237/video200m00s.jpg

i do not know about this one...:confused:

smooth_nuts
05-31-2009, 07:04 PM
zarb-everything after your l is tardo cakes.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3602/3581189830_4ceb565e1a.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3350/3583192240_fd7028f081.jpg
my e's are tardo cakes too :(

hpir
05-31-2009, 07:06 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemonee.jpg
crits?

-Dank-DK-
05-31-2009, 07:57 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2cgisz7.jpg

so is this a ok throwie

mmm_spraypaint
06-01-2009, 12:04 AM
cn i please get sum crit 4 this one? did it with paint markers on a skateboard 4 my bro i dont write dope kidd thats just their nickname <a href="http://s145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/?action=view&current=NEWRWR083.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/NEWRWR083.jpg" border="0" alt="pic"></a>

mmm_spraypaint
06-01-2009, 12:05 AM
http://<a href="http://s145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/?action=view&current=NEWRWR083.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r214/OpotikiShawty21/NEWRWR083.jpg" border="0" alt="pic"></a>

intifada
06-01-2009, 01:08 AM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d159/dominikF/img001.jpg

sutan?

is that Arabic surrounding the piece?

XskeletorX
06-01-2009, 02:35 AM
I am sorry if I sound like a dick, but for that first thing, there is no letter in the alphabet shaped like that?

hahahahah it kinda looks like a w. hahaha i dont know why i lol'd so hard at this

wrekkk
06-01-2009, 07:33 PM
I fucking like this. I like simple, i throw simple.
Opinions def welcome, just don't be a cock and tell me "it looks like shit"
because i'm not writing the way you do.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/blackbookiethrow.jpg

CrustOner
06-01-2009, 07:38 PM
Definitely work on your letters. They look like fat people rolls right now, eventually, you'll work up to marshmallows, then you'll be at throwup style. Good first try though.

wrekkk
06-01-2009, 07:40 PM
hahaha fat people rolls.
work eg; shape + structure or just thin them down?
thanks for the input btw.

BigBlueViolence
06-01-2009, 09:34 PM
not rely on the ()()() shapes so much.

Make it look like it's own object, not a series of repeating shapes, ya dig?

wrekkk
06-01-2009, 09:38 PM
not rely on the ()()() shapes so much.

Make it look like it's own object, not a series of repeating shapes, ya dig?

Ahh yeah i see.
truth be told, i was almost aiming for repetitive circular shapes.
I meant it for more of a quick throw anywhere you go as opposed to an eye-catching piece.

But I'll mess around with it going off ya'lls advice, and see if there's anything i can dig on more.

Definitely appreciate hearing what you think. (that wasn't sarcasm)

BigBlueViolence
06-01-2009, 09:48 PM
Mine is quick, but not the same shape over and over.

try making each letter only one or two strokes each.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2lbfhmx.jpg

wrekkk
06-01-2009, 09:54 PM
Mine is quick, but not the same shape over and over.

try making each letter only one or two strokes each.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2lbfhmx.jpg

I mean I hear what you're saying, I'm just not a big fan of that letter styling (not joking on anybody's throw, it's just not for me)

And the only letter in mine that has more than one stroke is the "w"

By the way I'm not trying to be argumentative, only trying to completely grasp what people are trying to explain. Definitely open to learning if you didn't notice hah.

B.S. POLICE
06-01-2009, 10:00 PM
I fucking like this. I like simple, i throw simple.
Opinions def welcome, just don't be a cock and tell me "it looks like shit"
because i'm not writing the way you do.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/blackbookiethrow.jpg



it looks like shit

Zarb
06-01-2009, 10:06 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0601092142.jpg
critsssss
Earn- I like everything except the the first legs on the R and N, thats just my opinion though.
Yac- The only thing i really like is the A kind of. The Y isnt really legible
Kem- Better but I think your E and M are too fat
Smooth- Always liked your shit, your E isnt really tardo cakes either haha. Bottom 2 are the best.

hellagargoyle
06-02-2009, 02:08 AM
i like it zarb, ide take the lil squigly out of the middle and make it a little more fat but yea it dont look bad.

-Dank-DK-
06-02-2009, 10:33 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/ncm9tg.jpg

is this a ok throwie

weakfingers
06-02-2009, 01:28 PM
Zarb, Try something new, You do the same shitty throw over and over. It annoys me to see you not progressing at all.

Dank, proportion

Mr yarbles
06-02-2009, 01:30 PM
I fucking like this. I like simple, i throw simple.
Opinions def welcome, just don't be a cock and tell me "it looks like shit"
because i'm not writing the way you do.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/blackbookiethrow.jpg

Don't be cocky you fuck that shit is wack and disgusting.
Go back and work for a few more months then come back

intifada
06-02-2009, 01:30 PM
Mine is quick, but not the same shape over and over.

try making each letter only one or two strokes each.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2lbfhmx.jpg

im sure a lot of people dont, but i think that looks tight.
maybe do something extra with the E though

intifada
06-02-2009, 01:33 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g312/iamjohng/S5000013.jpg

I am not a fan of my H really, but I am working on it

slipyslipyslipymegeee
06-02-2009, 01:35 PM
I fucking like this. I like simple, i throw simple.
Opinions def welcome, just don't be a cock and tell me "it looks like shit"
because i'm not writing the way you do.
http://i722.photobucket.com/albums/ww223/wreckteck/BB%20shit%20for%20forums/blackbookiethrow.jpg

i dont even think thats a word wrwl

B.S. POLICE
06-02-2009, 01:37 PM
its wrul... cant you read the tag?

intifada does letters are weak kid work on everything

Mr yarbles
06-02-2009, 01:38 PM
Read his wack ass tag inside the l
It says wrul

hahahaha but that aint much better

Don't be cocky kid you just get shit on by everyone.

Shit bs police beat me to it :(

slipyslipyslipymegeee
06-02-2009, 01:42 PM
thats a fucking u? ik im not the grand master of throws but wtf

Zarb
06-02-2009, 03:01 PM
I do the same one cause i wanna lock down the style so I have a throw I can always do when Im out painting. Does it suck? Cause if the whole style is fucked then w.e Ill start over

Zarb
06-02-2009, 03:33 PM
Give crits to get them.

wrekkk
06-02-2009, 03:37 PM
Read his wack ass tag inside the l
It says wrul

hahahaha but that aint much better

Don't be cocky kid you just get shit on by everyone.

Shit bs police beat me to it :(


it looks like shit

To you two, for the most part.

Basically, fuck you.
i'm not being cocky, all I said was "I like it so far." i never said I couldn't improve but I'm sick and fucking tired of seeing the same exact fucking letter style come out of EVERY single post I see. Go through them. They all look THE SAME and most (with BigBlue and Crust actually being the helpful exception) you l337 graff fucks say "Oh thats cool."

No, fuck that, and fuck what you think for the most part. I know I can improve, no shit, everyone can.

RANT;
You shitheads come into the toy forums solely to talk shit to people it seems.
That must make you feel like you have a big dick,
that you can do all this on the internet.
This shit was intended to help others.
Not talk shit, which is apparently all anyone on here can do.

ESPECIALLY "Mr. Yarbles" commenting on my "Wack ass tag."
lol. Way to be constructive with your crits, shithead.

Glad you got an awesome laugh out of my attempt.
Fuck how long you've been writing,
you're still as big of a piece of shit as any.

-Dank-DK-
06-02-2009, 03:53 PM
To you two, for the most part.

Basically, fuck you.
i'm not being cocky, all I said was "I like it so far." i never said I couldn't improve but I'm sick and fucking tired of seeing the same exact fucking letter style come out of EVERY single post I see. Go through them. They all look THE SAME and most (with BigBlue and Crust actually being the helpful exception) you l337 graff fucks say "Oh thats cool."

No, fuck that, and fuck what you think for the most part. I know I can improve, no shit, everyone can.

RANT;
You shitheads come into the toy forums solely to talk shit to people it seems.
That must make you feel like you have a big dick,
that you can do all this on the internet.
This shit was intended to help others.
Not talk shit, which is apparently all anyone on here can do.

ESPECIALLY "Mr. Yarbles" commenting on my "Wack ass tag."
lol. Way to be constructive with your crits, shithead.

Glad you got an awesome laugh out of my attempt.
Fuck how long you've been writing,
you're still as big of a piece of shit as any.



ok how about instead of being a fucking cry baby u go practice cause u need to

B.S. POLICE
06-02-2009, 04:06 PM
To you two, for the most part.

Basically, fuck you.
i'm not being cocky, all I said was "I like it so far." i never said I couldn't improve but I'm sick and fucking tired of seeing the same exact fucking letter style come out of EVERY single post I see. Go through them. They all look THE SAME and most (with BigBlue and Crust actually being the helpful exception) you l337 graff fucks say "Oh thats cool."

No, fuck that, and fuck what you think for the most part. I know I can improve, no shit, everyone can.

RANT;
You shitheads come into the toy forums solely to talk shit to people it seems.
That must make you feel like you have a big dick,
that you can do all this on the internet.
This shit was intended to help others.
Not talk shit, which is apparently all anyone on here can do.

ESPECIALLY "Mr. Yarbles" commenting on my "Wack ass tag."
lol. Way to be constructive with your crits, shithead.

Glad you got an awesome laugh out of my attempt.
Fuck how long you've been writing,
you're still as big of a piece of shit as any.


i said that on purpouse cause you had to be a little bitch and ask us not to say it sucks when you know it does.

klic
06-02-2009, 04:16 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

wrul, bihad, dank - fill up pages full of hollow throws, all of you need to work on your letters a lot

earn - im not a fan of the new A, and i think a lowercase e would flow better and go with your other letters better

las - for the 5 millionth time, dont make the top of your A extend so far

B.S. POLICE
06-02-2009, 04:18 PM
klic solid

Mr yarbles
06-02-2009, 04:21 PM
To you two, for the most part.

Basically, fuck you.
i'm not being cocky, all I said was "I like it so far." i never said I couldn't improve but I'm sick and fucking tired of seeing the same exact fucking letter style come out of EVERY single post I see. Go through them. They all look THE SAME and most (with BigBlue and Crust actually being the helpful exception) you l337 graff fucks say "Oh thats cool."

No, fuck that, and fuck what you think for the most part. I know I can improve, no shit, everyone can.

RANT;
You shitheads come into the toy forums solely to talk shit to people it seems.
That must make you feel like you have a big dick,
that you can do all this on the internet.
This shit was intended to help others.
Not talk shit, which is apparently all anyone on here can do.

ESPECIALLY "Mr. Yarbles" commenting on my "Wack ass tag."
lol. Way to be constructive with your crits, shithead.

Glad you got an awesome laugh out of my attempt.
Fuck how long you've been writing,
you're still as big of a piece of shit as any.

Shut the fuck up you fag
YOu coulda been nice and I woulda helped you the fuck out
GO looka t teh tags thread I was a dick t a kid instead of gettin defensive he was nice so I dropped a couple tags for him
SO shut your fucking mouth
Don't come in here telling us your wack shit aint wack.
So shut the fuck up next time.

klic those are sick homie

Black Flag
06-02-2009, 04:22 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

wrul, bihad, dank - fill up pages full of hollow throws, all of you need to work on your letters a lot

earn - im not a fan of the new A, and i think a lowercase e would flow better and go with your other letters better

las - for the 5 millionth time, dont make the top of your A extend so far

Solid throw dude; but people will call you out on a JA bite, even though thats not what you are writing. Throw a 3rd letter on there if you can.

klic
06-02-2009, 04:26 PM
Solid throw dude; but people will call you out on a JA bite, even though thats not what you are writing. Throw a 3rd letter on there if you can.

i have been called out for biting JA several times, i dont get it, we both have a basic J so what

http://i465.photobucket.com/albums/rr11/EYAR_15/JAOne.jpg

B.S. POLICE
06-02-2009, 04:30 PM
its probably cause your k looks almost the same as his a

wrekkk
06-02-2009, 04:33 PM
Shut the fuck up you fag
YOu coulda been nice and I woulda helped you the fuck out
GO looka t teh tags thread I was a dick t a kid instead of gettin defensive he was nice so I dropped a couple tags for him
SO shut your fucking mouth
Don't come in here telling us your wack shit aint wack.
So shut the fuck up next time.

klic those are sick homie

LOL. Ohh. Learn to type and that would have sounded a lot more "intimidating" (since i guess thats what you were going for..)

You're not the only one on these forums to "help someone out."
I was nice to anyone who criticized, even if they did say it wasn't good. I dont give a fuck if you think it's good or not, but saying something is a "wack ass tag" is just being a flamer.

Tips, recommendations, etc etc are a good way to go.
I got defensive because all you did was insult my shit instead of recommending ways to improve it.

There are ways to go about things, and there are ways not to go about things. Just because you're better than someone at graffiti (or anything for that matter) doesn't give you a right to be a dickhole.

wrekkk
06-02-2009, 04:35 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

wrul, bihad, dank - fill up pages full of hollow throws, all of you need to work on your letters a lot

earn - im not a fan of the new A, and i think a lowercase e would flow better and go with your other letters better

las - for the 5 millionth time, dont make the top of your A extend so far

Appreciate it. Yeah I've heard that a bunch, I assume it's just something that comes with time, I've only been writing for 3 months and I've only been writing Wrul for probably 3 weeks or so. Any recommendations?

Get at me through PM if you'd like, I'm down to hear what you'd have to say, just a better way to avoid all the shit talking and insults.

wrekkk
06-02-2009, 04:39 PM
i said that on purpouse cause you had to be a little bitch and ask us not to say it sucks when you know it does.

Whether or not you said that solely to aggravate, I asked only for ways to improve. I can see how I was misunderstood. I only meant I liked it relative to what I was doing before.

I guess people that are out to learn and improve with the help of others are "litttle bitches."

Kindof defeats the purpose of this whole forum now doesn't it?