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ReallyTrustFullStrangers
06-13-2009, 12:16 AM
dont put shadow on the right side of ur letters
do it like this....http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/curbstomp1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/eweeeey.jpg
or like this...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/tropical.jpg
or...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
i think you get my point but yea keep practicin

klic
06-13-2009, 12:18 AM
whats the difference? hahah

edit:

panda i mean when your letters are touching, the letters should be going over your other letters no the 3d

Mr yarbles
06-13-2009, 01:11 AM
im tired of people saying my jk throws look exactly like jaone. so what should i do to change it?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

Tell them to shut the fuck up

I can see how they'd think that but honestly there's not much other way you can do a j and make it look good

weakfingers
06-13-2009, 01:15 AM
I slack to much, crit my shitty throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture24.jpg

mmmmtasty905
06-13-2009, 01:59 AM
I slack to much, crit my shitty throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture24.jpg

not bad but could use some work.

mmmmtasty905
06-13-2009, 02:30 AM
critz please

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t51/thedop/DSC04364.jpg

rave

mmmmtasty905
06-13-2009, 02:30 AM
ofuck

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t51/thedop/DSC04365.jpg

Manupro7
06-13-2009, 03:52 AM
i need some held with my d's....can u guys upload some of ur d's plz

colz
06-13-2009, 09:20 AM
JOL. pretty simple, i need to work on it
crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Picture-1.jpg

rinoh
06-13-2009, 09:35 AM
^atleast you arent doing wildstyles,just do this 1000 times and then iw will evoluate just like a pokemon,just sketch it much man

rinoh
06-13-2009, 09:38 AM
im tired of people saying my jk throws look exactly like jaone. so what should i do to change it?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

dope, just do jk whocares what they say,everyone who looks longer than 1 second at it see's that its jk not ja and if youre up wit hjanek then they see the same letters and know its janek not ja

Shurik*n
06-13-2009, 10:06 AM
dont put shadow on the right side of ur letters
do it like this....http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/curbstomp1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/eweeeey.jpg
or like this...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/tropical.jpg
or...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
i think you get my point but yea keep practicin


sooo...

rewz
06-13-2009, 11:32 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/2dgrrfa.jpg

JEES

CrustOner
06-13-2009, 12:07 PM
This is the first thing I've seen from you that I like, Jeez.

Janek, if you want it to look more like a K, maybe try going a little lower with the diagonal? I'm not sure what else you can do.

rewz
06-13-2009, 12:09 PM
ahaha thanks yea i did it like 2 nights ago
some recent shit

Zarb
06-13-2009, 09:08 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0613091558.jpg
Yeah its on the floor haha
Im not too happy with it this time, messed up my letters pretty bad. Crits?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0613090933.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0611091458.jpg

Shurik*n
06-13-2009, 10:11 PM
panda....how's it look now?
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3637/dscn0541numba2.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/dscn0541numba2.jpg/) http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/dscn0541numba2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img19/dscn0541numba2.jpg/1/)

KidReny!
06-13-2009, 10:17 PM
did these while i was bored at cousins grad party crits

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090613_2213.jpg

weakfingers
06-14-2009, 12:19 AM
Reny- Proportion...You need more of it...
EDIT** Your shadow looks horrible, look at how others do it then take note. or even better yet do the exact same shape just shifted abit.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture1-1.jpg

Deck
06-14-2009, 02:15 AM
Reny, you need to give some crits to get them don't just come here demanding that shit.

Zarb
06-14-2009, 10:12 AM
Squint- I like everything except the ball on top of the N
but I liked your newer style that you were using before more

funhouseXcast
06-14-2009, 10:56 AM
Reny- there should be no shadow on the top part of the R, other than that it looks alright, i like the blue and silver one the best.
Sqwint- unless ur a girl, ditch the heart. hearts aren't hardcore.

rewz
06-14-2009, 12:17 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/w7ew0i.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/24mtgrn.jpg
I know the second jees sucks the e,s r not the same sizes

Some Jees G,S jeas geas how ever

slipyslipyslipymegeee
06-14-2009, 12:22 PM
the one in the lower left work with the bottom of the s and itll look good

rewz
06-14-2009, 12:30 PM
thanks swine (;

slipyslipyslipymegeee
06-14-2009, 12:33 PM
no problem mokea cola

rewz
06-14-2009, 04:44 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/33nwwli.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/347b4ec.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29xb609.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jfuicg.jpg
some of my shitty throws

KidReny!
06-14-2009, 09:33 PM
i aint feelin the question marks yo but ur shadow is nice

skull-e
06-14-2009, 09:57 PM
^atleast you arent doing wildstyles,just do this 1000 times and then iw will evoluate just like a pokemon,just sketch it much man

I fucking lol'd

Deck
06-15-2009, 01:35 AM
Rewz, looks real good
Squint, why is there a ball on the top of your N?
Zarb, dope

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/deckthrow2.jpg

BigBlueViolence
06-15-2009, 01:45 AM
man,
I'd say scrap that and start all over
http://i40.tinypic.com/2qip6z6.jpg

Deck
06-15-2009, 01:59 AM
Word, I'm just trying new things out I'm still fucking with it.

weakfingers
06-15-2009, 10:28 AM
Deck- to many overlapping lines
Blue- That k is fantastic

Shurik*n
06-15-2009, 11:09 AM
i don't know if there's any change since my last ones...but anyways, i think i messed up the shadowing

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image489.jpg

Stussy
06-15-2009, 11:37 AM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1384/rayz.jpg
my simple/throw ive been working on
shurik-no, start over. you need to look at more graffiti to understand the concept of a throw. take away all the pointy things on the bottom of your letters. make all letters same size and yes the shadow is way off.

BigBlueViolence
06-15-2009, 01:23 PM
where do you live at, panda?

Shurik*n
06-15-2009, 02:04 PM
where do you live at, panda?

pittsburgh...y?

BigBlueViolence
06-15-2009, 02:07 PM
There is a PANDA SEX in SF,
but it doesn't matter.

In all honesty,
you'll probably change your name soon anyways,
if you stick with writing at all.

Shurik*n
06-15-2009, 02:08 PM
There is a PANDA SEX in SF,
but it doesn't matter.

In all honesty,
you'll probably change your name soon anyways,
if you stick with writing at all.


yea i'm trying to think of a new name now anyways...but idk what it will be yet

slipyslipyslipymegeee
06-15-2009, 05:05 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/33nwwli.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/347b4ec.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29xb609.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jfuicg.jpg
some of my shitty throws

did your mom take your markers away agian?

colz
06-15-2009, 06:01 PM
crits? couldve made the shadow better
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Picture-2.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-15-2009, 06:15 PM
give crits to get them..

Shurik*n
06-15-2009, 06:34 PM
colz- idk if u wanna listen to me caz i suck too, but maybe shade the inside of the o on the right side a bit...and some on the bottom of the letters?...and idk, i guess...keep working on it...mine's not much better than urs so i've been working on new styles and whatever too

rewz
06-15-2009, 06:43 PM
did your mom take your markers away agian?
ahahaha yea she did i had a shit load of prisms i got from Michael's and now my mom found the stash and took them away threw them away i got crayola now ahaha


dont diss crayola

Shurik*n
06-15-2009, 06:46 PM
yea i'm trying to think of a new name now anyways...but idk what it will be yet


oo...i think i gotta new name: cybe

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image490.jpg


it's a shitty throw, but i'm still trying new things


EDIT: for now it's just a straight letter like zarb said below...but i'm working on it

Zarb
06-15-2009, 06:56 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0615091841.jpg
Jolz- Looks like you just started, just keep fucking around with the letters and you'll get it
CYBE- Thats more of a straight letter, but make your C closer to your Y
Geez- I like the 2nd one the best
Stussy- Pretty cool, your much better then me so I have nothing to really say

Crits? I messed shadow on my E pretty bad.

KRE1
06-15-2009, 06:57 PM
forget about shading for now and just work on making ur letters as sick as they can be.

*EDIT: directed at shurik

provinT13
06-15-2009, 07:11 PM
Zarb- I think the shadow in the middle of the last letter is messed up
Shruk*n- Ditch the 3D for now and work on letter structure and consistant size


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/snappy.jpg

ASTAR.DWSP
06-15-2009, 10:24 PM
ahahaha yea she did i had a shit load of prisms i got from Michael's and now my mom found the stash and took them away threw them away i got crayola now ahaha


dont diss crayola

dude.. stash them in a vent or like under your dresser.. get an old computer and take all the guts out :P if she asks what its for be like its for computer class for extra credits..

weakfingers
06-16-2009, 12:56 AM
Rewz-Wow, If you mom is actully throwing away your markers your gonna have to keep the whole paint obsession way on the DL. Besides you can just say i enjoy drawing with marker, its not like your going out doing drippy prisma tags on mailboxes.... anywayzzzzzzzzzzz,
Jol-Wayyyyyyy basic, Id say draw for a couple weeks to progress then post some ish, just look around and see how others do it for now, But starting simple is how i started and youll progress really fast,
Cybe- I dont really like it. Id say just look back at this forum and see the general direction of others and work from there.
Zarb- Man i like how your trying new ish but The middle line in E's are WAY to overused, well that just my opinion but just yeah the other thing i see way to much is the right leg on the K. Try to think of some fresh shit.
Mes-I think if you have a 3 letters name you should atleast put more work into your throw then that. Get some letters that match instyle then youll be on your way.


I've been focusing on school for the past little bit but im getting back into drawing and so on. Crit away!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture27.jpg

Facedorateur
06-16-2009, 11:59 AM
CYBE : round it up, close the gaps
JOL : good basic start (better than mine), just make you J as round as the rest of your letters
SQWINT: awsome throw, but close the gap between your N and your T

Heres mine, crits plz, i've been trying to ''evolve'' from my basic throwup

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1695/dsc0177v.jpg

KRE1
06-16-2009, 01:51 PM
feir: i dont like tha F and E extensions that much ... mayb its just me but it was hard for me to get that was an F until i read what u wrote saying it says FEIR lol. i like that R tho. keep workin at it

Mr yarbles
06-16-2009, 01:53 PM
You guys realize you should bea ble to do a hollow throw in about 30 seconds right?
and a fills hould take you about 1:30-2:00
You guys goin crazy
That's not what a throw should be
Simpler is better.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-16-2009, 02:34 PM
fuck thirty seconds.more like 15.

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 04:07 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/28kn78k.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2r2nmrt.jpg

idk...i feel like they all need something..but what?

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 04:10 PM
fein: ur better than me caz i just started and u've prob been doing it for years, but the squigly line for ur f...idk, i'm just not really liking it. But u don't have have to take my advice...just saying

colz
06-16-2009, 04:31 PM
squint-I really like it except the gap in the middle of the N and the T
feir-Trying cleaning up the F a little.
cybe-If i could choose to do out of the 4, i'd do the 2nd

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-16-2009, 04:57 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/28kn78k.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2r2nmrt.jpg

idk...i feel like they all need something..but what?




personally i think you should
http://membres.lycos.fr/fredrichung/forum/kill%20it%20with%20fire.jpeg

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 04:59 PM
personally i think you should
http://membres.lycos.fr/fredrichung/forum/kill%20it%20with%20fire.jpeg

think i should what?

edit: the image didn't load up..well it did, but now fast enough so nevermind

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-16-2009, 05:00 PM
kill it with fire!!

ADUB510
06-16-2009, 05:27 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y25/adub510/IMG00188.jpg i write ZEST 1.

Stussy
06-16-2009, 05:41 PM
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7518/photo901.jpg
because i get bored at work..

colz
06-16-2009, 06:48 PM
rayz-lookin great, i like the throwie
zest-can use some work, but i like the fill in

crits. gotta new name. SCEL
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scel.jpg

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 06:56 PM
scel ur shading could use a bit more work...maybe try some on the bottom and less on top (look at stussy's above u). and ur e kinda through me off, thought it was another c.

Facedorateur
06-16-2009, 10:30 PM
Thx for tha crits guys,

CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size

If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 10:32 PM
Thx for tha crits guys,

CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size

If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.

..to teh first two, or all of 'em?

Facedorateur
06-16-2009, 11:17 PM
the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 11:20 PM
the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl

nice...simile i guess u could call it.

but yea, i can picture some bubbles in there making it look better, i'll work on that. thx

Shurik*n
06-16-2009, 11:41 PM
wow...it actually doesn't look to bad a bit more bubbly imo

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image502.jpg

and my attempt at shadowing...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image503.jpg

aekone
06-17-2009, 02:18 AM
Zest- Brilliant shit I really like it. Also the same guy from youtube?
Rayz- I am diggin that shit. Makin me not even wanna post my shit.
Scel- Just keep working. Try to add your own style to it. Not just bubble letters.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo62.jpg

provinT13
06-17-2009, 04:23 AM
shruk*n- Looking good man, only thing that sicks out to me is the top of the C, doesn't look right

aekone- Love it man. I like how the lines are connected in a few spots and it's not just plain bubble letters.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1153.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1154.jpg

Shurik*n
06-17-2009, 10:00 AM
aekone: i think there are too many overlapping lines...like for the indents for the e's, m's, etc...it seems to me like you were trying to do it fast, try and do it slower, and take your time

Shurik*n
06-17-2009, 10:11 AM
Mes, ur right, the C doesn't look right...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image504.jpg

the c still kinda looks a bit off to me, but nothing but a bit of playing around with it should fix that. o and my sharpie was running out so i had to use pen for shadowing...but i prob shouldn't worry about shadowing now

provinT13
06-17-2009, 12:41 PM
That looks a lot better

Shurik*n
06-17-2009, 12:57 PM
yea, then i decided to color it in and shit. it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image505.jpg

KRE1
06-17-2009, 01:12 PM
yea, then i decided to color it in and shit...i think it looks pretty cool, agree? it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image505.jpg

cybe ... for starters, if you are saying ur work looks cool/is good/is not BAD, etc., be prepared to get RIPPED. cuz bud that is NOT that good. at all.

your letters are not uniform, tha bubbling is off in that regard, tha shading is weak, but thats ok cuz erryone is new at this at some point so keep working HARD on it. let OTHERS tell you it looks good (if it does indeed look good) and dont self promote cuz ur gonna look straight silly.

DirtyDozen520
06-17-2009, 01:49 PM
cybe, i like the B and the E but not the C and Y

heres mine,
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image011.jpg

ErrorOner...
06-17-2009, 02:14 PM
i know this is the throwie thread...but yo mes good job taking my advice with the add-ons! the spiral looks good but try the dots on the other side next to the M...

provinT13
06-17-2009, 02:34 PM
ErrorOner- :)

Shruk*n- Kre1 is right

Shurik*n
06-17-2009, 02:39 PM
ErrorOner- :)

Shruk*n- Kre1 is right

yea, i was looking back at what i said, and i shouldn't have done that...sorry, if i offended anyone, if that's possible with what i said

aekone
06-17-2009, 02:45 PM
Cybe- Stay consistent. Different heights fuck it up.
Fero- Scratch all those letters. Make them all consistent.
Mes- Work on your shading Like a lot. And consistency.

I tried to make the overlapping lines a theme. For originality. Does that make it look bad? Also is my shading in check? Thanks guys.

Gezra
06-17-2009, 03:02 PM
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_6e898eb562ee4b62b9e01b499eed780e.jpg

BigBlueViolence
06-17-2009, 03:10 PM
Aren't you that ***** that doesn't even paint?

http://www.forumammo.com/cpg/albums/userpics/10063/gtfo.png

KRE1
06-17-2009, 03:12 PM
looking good gezra ^^

skull-e
06-17-2009, 03:15 PM
Why do you keep posting here?


noone likes you, period.

skull-e
06-17-2009, 03:18 PM
Aren't you that ***** that doesn't even paint?

http://www.forumammo.com/cpg/albums/userpics/10063/gtfo.png

his mom orders shit off ********* too

aekone
06-17-2009, 03:23 PM
I'm sorry is Big Blue referring to me?

And Gezra that shit is looking mad fresh. I'd avoid the drips though.

Stussy
06-17-2009, 03:27 PM
that gezra is fresh as fuck...
exchange?

skull-e
06-17-2009, 03:36 PM
He probably won't be able to, he bites all his letters and has no skill.

Stussy
06-17-2009, 03:40 PM
damn... i wish i could bite that well haha

klic
06-17-2009, 03:48 PM
stop hating, he does have the fastest throwie on youtube, show some respect hahahah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OOlKph5PDkc&feature=channel_page

DirtyDozen520
06-17-2009, 03:53 PM
im stil workin on mine, trying to be 'consistent'
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image014.jpg

and thats cool gezra, i jst dnt like the drips and i think the A is too small, but hey, what do i know

aekone
06-17-2009, 03:57 PM
There you go Fero. I think we've all tried a style similar to that at one point.
It has the ability to be rocked tho. Just keep working.

LeaksOne
06-17-2009, 04:06 PM
stop hating, he does have the fastest throwie on youtube, show some respect hahahah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OOlKph5PDkc&feature=channel_page

im not guna lie but he does have skill. his throws are decent but he shouldnt paint. just draw kid. "make sure you add me on myspace" word? thats incriminating info if you did paint but keep doin you an wastin your moms money in your backyard

BigBlueViolence
06-17-2009, 04:13 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y5WuxStTcP4

This ***** looks like he's 11 years old.

skull-e
06-17-2009, 04:43 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y5WuxStTcP4

This ***** is 11 years old.


fixt

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-17-2009, 04:54 PM
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_6e898eb562ee4b62b9e01b499eed780e.jpg

lol at you repping online crews.hahahaha.



gez is a faggot.he doesnt get up,bites all his shit and yet gets hella props.i'll never understand why.fucking poser.

CrustOner
06-17-2009, 05:15 PM
I think it's generally agreed that Gez is a pussy that nobody likes.

Zarb
06-17-2009, 05:43 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0617092023.jpg
Dirty Dozen- Im not sure if I like the points on the bottom and the top. Maybe try them only on the top or something. Or maybe just lose them

provinT13
06-17-2009, 07:50 PM
aekone- show me a mes with good shading, i'm not sure where i'm getting it wrong

colz
06-17-2009, 08:49 PM
zarb-lookin good, nice shadowing
gezra-i like the throwie, try changing up your G a little

Crits? i tryed changing it up a little. forgot to shadow
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scelone.jpg

aekone
06-17-2009, 09:08 PM
Mes- Sorry the actual throwie looks like shit but the shading goes a little like this.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Mes.jpg

Just try to spread it out equally. Since it looked like you were trying a drop shadow the best advice I can give you is to draw your throwie a little over and down from where your throwie is and shade it.

Hope that helped a little :]

weakfingers
06-18-2009, 12:59 AM
Zarb, It's progressing but I want you to do dome original letterz. Not many people have a z in there name and thats where you can get creative.
Colz, Your getting there.
Aekone- getting better.




My one liner N sucks huge member!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture29.jpg

provinT13
06-18-2009, 01:28 AM
aekone- I see what you're saying, i'll get some sketches goin tomorrow and pratice with the flick u just put up, thanks.

weakfingers- The N is waaaaaaay the fuck outta place, same with the top left nipple of the T

Mr yarbles
06-18-2009, 02:13 AM
lol at you repping online crews.hahahaha.



gez is a faggot.he doesnt get up,bites all his shit and yet gets hella props.i'll never understand why.fucking poser.

lawl seriously.
Have you seen his gezra hands?
The gez looks nice then he can't figure out how to flow haha
Fucking biting ass toy.
Youtube is where everyone that's shit goes when they have no idea what's good an what's shit
They think what they're seeing is good because they have no knowledge.

Black Flag
06-18-2009, 02:25 AM
aekone- I see what you're saying, i'll get some sketches goin tomorrow and pratice with the flick u just put up, thanks.

weakfingers- The N is waaaaaaay the fuck outta place, same with the top left nipple of the T

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2038/shadowc.png (http://img31.imageshack.us/i/shadowc.png/)

LeaksOne
06-18-2009, 02:37 AM
lawl seriously.
Have you seen his gezra hands?
The gez looks nice then he can't figure out how to flow haha
Fucking biting ass toy.
Youtube is where everyone that's shit goes when they have no idea what's good an what's shit
They think what they're seeing is good because they have no knowledge.

yea bbv he definately is 11 and yarbles go to youtube and type graffiti sketch and see all the ugly shit on there that everyone says is good. it should give you a good laugh

provinT13
06-18-2009, 02:42 AM
Black Flag- Thanks for that, but the only problem I have with shading is round letters, do they all taper off or what?

colz
06-18-2009, 07:33 AM
sqwint-i like it but the N is pretty fucked, keep trying man your progressing

THAT JERZ KID
06-18-2009, 08:29 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0617092023.jpg
Dirty Dozen- Im not sure if I like the points on the bottom and the top. Maybe try them only on the top or something. Or maybe just lose them

I like it u got a style goin now can u paint that in uner 2 min ?

PegCityBoy
06-18-2009, 12:38 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3320/3638293861_2bf7a03e54.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2471/3638292465_a2ac76e17d.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3652/3638291527_b6ef1f43e5.jpg?v=0

.. you prob. get the idea

aekone
06-18-2009, 12:45 PM
Thanks for the diagram black flag! :D A little simpler than my explanation.
And Mes just do exactly what that diagram does. Draw Mes then a litle over and down draw Mes again. Make the top layer solid and make the bottom one shaded.
Sorry I'm kinda bad at verbal explanations. Just keep workin it man you'll get it in time.

Spam I am Diggin that throwie yo. May just wanna form the A up a little more. That's all I can think of.

PegCityBoy
06-18-2009, 12:48 PM
yea my a is def. hurtin

KRE1
06-18-2009, 02:59 PM
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

Deck
06-18-2009, 04:01 PM
Zarb-So dope
Spam-Your last one is probably the best one
Kre-I'm not a huge fan of spirals in letters other than that it's fine
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/Throw12.jpg

haze4life
06-18-2009, 05:27 PM
is that last letter suposed to be a K? weeeeaaakkk

Deck
06-18-2009, 05:29 PM
Appreciate the crtis, thanks man.

rewz
06-18-2009, 07:47 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/dqmbs3.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/29pye0m.jpg
Eons some good kid thats like 10 i met helped him by doing the eons

http://i41.tinypic.com/358a1wx.jpg
GS says GEES

http://i40.tinypic.com/2s985cj.jpg

crtis
And if there is another JEES/ GEES/ GS w.e then i dont care if hes big and everyone knows then thats different

Five Sixx Ace
06-18-2009, 10:43 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0400.jpg


spam- liking it
bleek- looks good.
deck- is it deow?
rewz- looks good.

shayk
06-19-2009, 12:56 AM
<a href="http://s130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/?action=view&current=IMG_0109.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG_0109.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

Shurik*n
06-19-2009, 09:14 AM
^^ur link didn't work

CrustOner
06-19-2009, 01:13 PM
why would you post a picture of yourself...?

PegCityBoy
06-19-2009, 01:44 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3616/3641123935_6be8c38181.jpg?v=0

paint'd :)

provinT13
06-19-2009, 02:19 PM
Peg- Looks nice, haven't really seen an A like that before
FiveSixxAce- Fix the shadow

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1170.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1171.jpg

SrsBizns
06-19-2009, 02:21 PM
spam: pretty good, the p looks weird to me

rewz
06-19-2009, 05:20 PM
spam- i like the style but the s not that great

Mes- could look better make the letters the same size

Stussy
06-19-2009, 05:39 PM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7533/photo903.jpg
exchange with dim, eh?

KRE1
06-19-2009, 06:01 PM
stussy: stop being so fresh its making us look bad. k thx.

Stussy
06-19-2009, 06:02 PM
quote-able?

KRE1
06-19-2009, 08:42 PM
oh hell yea.

StayHyE
06-19-2009, 09:37 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2di2g4n.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/izb7mx.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4udt8k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/o6d3cj.jpg

.StOne
06-19-2009, 09:40 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/2di2g4n.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/izb7mx.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4udt8k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/o6d3cj.jpg

love the red one guy

KRE1
06-19-2009, 09:48 PM
shit needs work. ^^

StayHyE
06-19-2009, 09:49 PM
^^ why dont you try critting it then smart guy?

KRE1
06-19-2009, 09:50 PM
^^ why dont you try critting it then smart guy?

i just did fagget. IT.NEEDS.WORK.

looks sloppy as hell tha characters in tha E's look retarded. get to work.

StayHyE
06-19-2009, 09:56 PM
youre callin me the faggit? lulz you little twerp quick to talk shit on the keyboard i know thats what the site is full of but cmon youre quick to act smart shit i got more style if i wrote with my foot better then youre shit didnt take me long to troll your posts kill yourself faggot


writing shit like this i sure would....

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

fOrSaQeN
06-19-2009, 09:57 PM
youre callin me the faggit? lulz you little twerp quick to talk shit on the keyboard i know thats what the site is full of but cmon youre quick to act smart shit i got more style if i wrote with my foot better then youre shit didnt take me long to troll your posts kill yourself faggot


writing shit like this i sure would....

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gif

KRE1
06-19-2009, 10:03 PM
actually thats a lot better than ur stuff. so uhh...


get.to.work.

KRE1
06-19-2009, 10:04 PM
oh and its because i have proportions down, my shading is on point, and its not overdone with retarded little characters. but hey thanks for bumping my stuff! :D

StayHyE
06-19-2009, 10:12 PM
new name

just experimenting :D

Shurik*n
06-19-2009, 11:14 PM
alright so i'm sure that u some of u guys think that i'm trying to do graffiti without understanding it. and well, i do agree with u...So, i'm gonna start all over, and start with regular letters, and learn as i progress. and yes i did sketch them with pencil first, the camera didn't pick up the lines so i retraced them in marker. (some of the pencil line were too skinny for the marker, so some of the lines are messed up like the holes for the b)

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0554.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0555.jpg

Shurik*n
06-19-2009, 11:33 PM
StayHye: i'm guessing it says delap right? well anyways, i really like the red one, i would probably also like the green one if the e's didn't have big "noses"...nice faces haha

BigBlueViolence
06-19-2009, 11:42 PM
Yall *****s all need to chill out,
because you all need some fucking work.


Cybe- dude, that shit is all out of whack.
I don't even know how to help you along.

bleek- your shit needs work. the shading on the inside of the letters is whack,
and the tounge is madddd played out.
your B is goofy looking, and all your letters are stuffed as far back as they can into the letter behind it.
Check yourself before you act like a dick.

Delay- your shit really isn't BAD bad, but it could use some work.
Try to move your letters close together, and don't go so crazy with the shadows.
The first one is best IMO, and those E faces are pretty whack.



http://i43.tinypic.com/9kwdux.jpg

Redone for stuss because I fucked up the last one.

Still looks like shit, though

KRE1
06-20-2009, 12:13 AM
bigblue thx for tha crits

i dont act like a dick until someone makes a smartass comment at me.

bigblue im not liking that handy at all

Zarb
06-20-2009, 10:53 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0619091051.jpg
Working on a 2 letter, crits?

Bleek- Make your L and K less hidden
Delae- I like the second one most, but yeah get rid of the faces

weakfingers
06-20-2009, 11:36 AM
Delae- Yeah the first would be good if you moved the A in closer to the L and just did dots where the faces where
Stussy-The rihno throw you did on the other page was fucking tight!
Zarb, I Dont like it personally. The top part of the E is ugly. and the top left arm of the K needs to be smaller. Sorry if i sound mean, I just havent been feeling your shit lately.
BigBlue- I like the repition at the bottom of the throw. but the second last letter, I think its a Z. To me its a little to covered by the I at the bottom.
KRE1-
oh and its because i have proportions down, my shading is on point, and its not overdone with retarded little characters. but hey thanks for bumping my stuff! :D GET OFF YOU FUCKING HIGH HORSE! We all need to work on our shit but get off your ego trip! I can see two horrible characters on it and why the fuck are you adding letter shading on a throw with a shadow already on it? and by the way your shadow is "not on point". Its totally off on the drips. IT.NEEDS.WORK!
Cybe-Your actully going in such random fucking directions, Just sit down and look at what others are doing. I think right now you need to bite some letters, and i know other members will disagree but personally I think after you have some letters to work off youll develope a style completly diffrent from them.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture30-1.jpg



Crit as usual...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture31-1.jpg

Bink1
06-20-2009, 11:38 AM
lmfao kre your stuff is crap and u dissin normal toss wtf is wrong with u?

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 01:10 PM
lmfao kre your stuff is crap and u dissin normal toss wtf is wrong with u?

lmao

ShaolinNy
06-20-2009, 02:46 PM
Watup guys haven't wrote in like forever but im gonna be back!Also getting a car in a few weeks


1st throwie in ahwile and it was on a desk while taking a regent lol.Crits??

http://i40.tinypic.com/260pfyu.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2h54isl.jpg


StayHyE-I like you style but its sloppy fix it up a little not so much negative space
BigBlueViolence-Looks good maybe try to make you letters straighter,seems like there going to the right
Zarb-Def need try a different E or soemthing and fix the K up a little maybe make it a little wider

KRE1
06-20-2009, 03:16 PM
*damn dint know so many of you suck stay's dick! hahahaha*

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 03:23 PM
*damn dint know so many of you suck stay's dick! hahahaha*

bawww


found a pic of KRE1


http://i44.tinypic.com/mwt8o4.jpg

KRE1
06-20-2009, 03:24 PM
*sluuuurp slurp slurp*

stop suckin my dick breh

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 03:26 PM
whats with you and the dick facination, homo.

weakfingers
06-20-2009, 03:29 PM
A moderator can delete this post if he/she wants but...

Kre1 just shut the fuck up, where all here to help eachother develop our throws, You just like starting shit. If you dident spend your whole day posting in the toy throwies thread like 5 times a day maybe you would have some time to spend to clean up your own shit.
If you two wanna beef keep it to the PM's so the rest of us have to see it!

flick for talking
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture32-1.jpg

BigBlueViolence
06-20-2009, 03:29 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/20tgmxw.jpg

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 03:33 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/20tgmxw.jpg

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z32/Strider2K99/nbavlc.gif

KRE1
06-20-2009, 03:39 PM
slurp.

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 03:45 PM
enjoy the white syrup faggot

KRE1
06-20-2009, 03:56 PM
lol stay ur a funny kid.



slluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrp.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-20-2009, 04:03 PM
kre is starting to annoy me. god i wish i had teh ban hammer. id be bussin skulls mayne.

ShaolinNy
06-20-2009, 04:04 PM
All you fags STFU and stop fighting on the internet lol,,,,crits would be nice!

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 04:07 PM
kre is starting to annoy me. god i wish i had teh ban hammer. id be bussin skulls mayne.

http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt160/TaijuSekki/permaban.gif

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 04:08 PM
All you fags STFU and stop fighting on the internet lol,,,,crits would be nice!

letters arent bad...but they seem to get smaller toward the end....why not write on plain paper so we can actually see the letters?

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-20-2009, 04:08 PM
your shit is had to read but if you did an SK throw(those being your stronges letters) it would be legit but the other letters in the midle are seriously hurting.




http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt160/TaijuSekki/permaban.gif

lulz

CrustOner
06-20-2009, 04:28 PM
actually thats a lot better than ur stuff. so uhh...


get.to.work.

Um. Get off the internet until you can at least put together a decent throwie and tag. sorry.

ShaolinNy
06-20-2009, 05:04 PM
letters arent bad...but they seem to get smaller toward the end....why not write on plain paper so we can actually see the letters?

I posted that because it was most recent lol here a pic i did awhile ago.If i tried to make it this good again it would come shitty since i stoped practicing

http://i43.tinypic.com/726c1g.jpg

Crits??





your shit is had to read but if you did an SK throw(those being your stronges letters) it would be legit but the other letters in the midle are seriously hurting.





lulz

If you talking to me that might be a good idea,Only thing is some kid in my hood actually write Sk so dont think i would be able todo that as a throw.I was thinking of doing a 1 letter S with like an exclamation point what do you think?

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/5mkbde.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2qknrc1.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jhd8go.jpg

colz
06-20-2009, 10:07 PM
stayhye-i like the 3rd throwie the best but keep your letters the same size
sneak-lookin great, my favorite letter is the S

new SCEL throwie, any crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scelthrowie.jpg

Werse
06-20-2009, 10:11 PM
Stay your 'e' reminds me of seize, just sayin.
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0067-1.jpg

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 10:18 PM
well it is the same letter :P

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 10:23 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/2poealz.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2qivguc.jpg

provinT13
06-20-2009, 10:58 PM
^^ Maby it's just me but the D looks too small

StayHyE
06-20-2009, 10:59 PM
yeah it is...i gotta work on that

Azul
06-21-2009, 05:14 AM
WeakFingers- Use a ticker pen for the fill
Sneak- Your A looks a bit like a R
Colz- Try drawing it a bit smaller, change your C i reckon
Delae- Dope keep it up
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7800/dsc00647i.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1452/dsc00646mvi.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/531/dsc00644f.jpg
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8766/dsc00649b.jpg
One liner of some sort.
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/8715/dsc001651x.jpg
done with cheap paint and aeroguard caps lol

medacog1
06-21-2009, 04:41 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2wgvvxz.jpg

dreaken1993
06-21-2009, 05:38 PM
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-6.jpg

Black Flag
06-21-2009, 08:25 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2wgvvxz.jpg

You have a pretty good base going so far.

-Make the O bigger.(slide to the right)
-Fix the N / Get rid of the flip at the bottom of the leg
- Scrap that I
- Make the K look more "natural" (best way to put it i guess)

DECO ONE
06-21-2009, 09:31 PM
Yo KURSE!!!! QUIT writing that name, theres already a big name Kurse one in Boston, and has been since 86
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IM_A0257.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/kurse1_boston.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/kurse1_boston.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IM_A0267.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/d302x_odcopy.jpg

Zarb
06-21-2009, 11:28 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0621092324.jpg
Fucking around with some different styles...Crits?

Bink1
06-22-2009, 05:25 AM
omfg that guy is writing kurse ffs. fuck toys like him.

LeaksOne
06-22-2009, 06:27 AM
omfg that guy is writing kurse ffs. fuck toys like him.

you kno i would agree but i would bea hypocrit. all the major writers that write that write kerse he uses a u instead. i cant say shit tho cuz i write grate not to be confused with great from europe

Zest3
06-22-2009, 09:22 AM
http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6507/dscf1884.jpg

A quick throwie on paper. I know the letters are not well disposed and not the same size, but I didn't really pay attention to that.

provinT13
06-22-2009, 12:35 PM
You need to make the Z way more distinct.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-22-2009, 02:55 PM
Yo KURSE!!!! QUIT writing that name, theres already a big name Kurse one in Boston, and has been since 86


HEY DECO!! who cares...if he doesnt write in your area then fuck it.lots of cats write kurse/kerse...its not like thats a original name at all.if he was up all over the country or some shit then aybe bu he's not so fuck it




seriously....write whatever the fuck you want and if anyone gives you shit battle him for the name.

klic
06-22-2009, 03:24 PM
yeah.. but kerse was up everywhere and passed away a while ago. he was up as much as anyone in seattle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow12.jpg

zest - resize that picture and make the lines extend a lot longer on the inside of your z

scel - its a good start, keep filling pages full of hollow throws like that

LeaksOne
06-22-2009, 03:51 PM
yeah.. but kerse was up everywhere and passed away a while ago. he was up as much as anyone in seattle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow12.jpg



oh man kerse and adek were killin shit in my city!! rip KERSE. by the way your progress has been nothing short of amazing man. keep it up

ErrorOner...
06-22-2009, 04:02 PM
yo zest look that name up on youtube...i'd change names...

KidReny!
06-22-2009, 07:27 PM
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1910.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_19111.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1911.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1912.jpg

did these today yo crits

klic
06-22-2009, 10:19 PM
reny stop posting shit asking for crits, without giving crits, and thanks leaks :D

KidReny!
06-22-2009, 10:31 PM
i have given crits :/.......

klic
06-23-2009, 12:17 AM
no you didnt...

KidReny!
06-23-2009, 12:23 AM
check my posts then -.-"

klic
06-23-2009, 12:39 AM
i did, you never give any crits. you told somebody there stuff looks good in a different thread a week ago, so what. you should always give crits when you post a flick of your work especially if your asking for crits, i dont see why its such a big deal it takes like 20 seconds to give a crit

EGO31
06-23-2009, 01:04 AM
Y has always been a bitch for me, but I would say you really need to just, make someting that really distinguishes it, because even though it's on paper, it hasn't got anything that makes your eye stick. it's very rectangular also, try making it rounded with little sort of bubbly outbursts.

Manupro7
06-23-2009, 08:50 AM
been workin on my throws lately..need to work on my r tho...got any ideas???
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/9126/dsc00341vhu.th.jpg (http://img190.imageshack.us/i/dsc00341vhu.jpg/)
klic- looking really good i like it
reny- keep workin on it you get it soon

Bars
06-23-2009, 01:26 PM
Gee that O and E look really familiar.:rolleyes:

klic
06-23-2009, 02:09 PM
thats like the simplest o and e you can do, its not a bite lol. i assume you meant he was biting cope..

dreaken1993
06-23-2009, 02:57 PM
all basic letters are going to looka like

cemo954
06-23-2009, 03:04 PM
dozer I like that throwie, its clean

reny the only one I'm really down for is the simple block letter yellow one

zest like others said you def gotta make that z stand out more

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/112/l_14635ef8abf54926a1caa432cb8554ff.jpg

stock tips, dollar fill, and a male painters touch baby blue

klic
06-23-2009, 03:20 PM
rek - it would have looked better without the clouds. your R's to skinny in some spots, your E's good, make the right leg of your K thicker.

Zest3
06-23-2009, 04:40 PM
Rek - The clouds look more like sperm to me. Or maybe it was sperm.
Anyways, the R is smaller on some spots like klic said and the K legs are too small.
Work on that bro.

weakfingers
06-24-2009, 02:57 AM
I felt like everything on that last page was hurting pretty bad. except for janek. I REALLY like the Three letter. I REALLY want to see that painted. For the rest of the stuff nothing really caught my attention.

Ive been lurking around the big boy forum and stole some styles.
The S I stole from someone and the rest is off the top of my head, I like the style of the S and will tweak it alot befor I try to paint it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture33-1.jpg

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-24-2009, 12:24 PM
weakfingers...loooking alot better from the last time i saw your stuff.loke how you show the t for once lol.
rek-it has potential.

provinT13
06-24-2009, 01:35 PM
weakfingers- I think you need to open the top part of the S, like this

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/sssssss.jpg

Had to change from mes to nems

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1194.jpg

Azul
06-24-2009, 07:26 PM
Can someone actually give me crits instead of arguing about my name for once...
Also I'm from Australia were most ppl are too dumb to know of kerse. I will change my name when I get a better one though.

klic
06-24-2009, 07:30 PM
I felt like everything on that last page was hurting pretty bad. except for janek. I REALLY like the Three letter. I REALLY want to see that painted. For the rest of the stuff nothing really caught my attention.

Ive been lurking around the big boy forum and stole some styles.
The S I stole from someone and the rest is off the top of my head, I like the style of the S and will tweak it alot befor I try to paint it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture33-1.jpg

thanks, i might paint it tommorow, i'll post some flicks if i do. your throws looking good except for the Q. id use a k instead if i were you

Zarb
06-25-2009, 11:46 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0625090128.jpg
Crits?
Squint- Thats looking hell of a lot better, I agree with Janek though it might look better with the K.
Nems- Keep working on it and make your letters all the same size, Your N is bigger then the rest of your letters and your E is the smallest/
Rek- It's a pretty nice simple, make the right leg of your K thicker and longer.
Dozer- I like it except the Z and the R, they just dont go with the rest of the letters.
Reny- That yellow simple is pretty cool.

mindtrix350
06-25-2009, 01:23 PM
klic-I like it, just like most of the throws I've seen from you.
Reny- Not really feeling the E or Y, but I know they can be pretty frustrating.
weakfingers-Just lose the notch on the S, as everyone else said. I would like to see a K too, but I like it the way it is.
cemo954- The hole in the R is a little too big towards the right side, which causes it to look a bit skinny. Maybe just shrink it a bit.
provinT13-I like it, but I feel that the E and S should have some sort of opening as well.
Zarb-I'm feelin' it.
And now, for my crappy throws...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw1.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw2.jpg

BigBlueViolence
06-25-2009, 01:40 PM
Eark- your K looks a lot like the one I use for exchanges and shit.
aren't you that ***** that straight up bit the handy I did for you?


http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7430/photo20w.jpg

done in May.


Squint- not feeling those lines you do inside the I and T, but it's clean.

B.S. POLICE
06-25-2009, 02:11 PM
thats why i dont do exchanges with toys anymore

mindtrix350
06-25-2009, 02:13 PM
klic-I like it, just like most of the throws I've seen from you.
Reny- Not really feeling the E or Y, but I know they can be pretty frustrating.
weakfingers-Just lose the notch on the S, as everyone else said. I would like to see a K too, but I like it the way it is.
cemo954- The hole in the R is a little too big towards the right side, which causes it to look a bit skinny. Maybe just shrink it a bit.
provinT13-I like it, but I feel that the E and S should have some sort of opening as well.
Zarb-I'm feelin' it.
And now, for my crappy throws...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw1.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw2.jpg
Bump to next page.
Crits?
Wow, major bite... Looks good BigBlueViolence

Zarb
06-25-2009, 02:15 PM
Yeah I got the K from the exchange with you, I wanna keep using it and trying to tweak it but if it's not cool with you I'll drop it.

Flert1
06-25-2009, 03:43 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/80/l_42ada54557d64243ab3154487aba25bf.jpg

Flert1
06-25-2009, 03:44 PM
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/93/l_ad159e6554b440b18b644a4d34e0b7bb.jpg

Juicee
06-25-2009, 03:50 PM
Eark- your K looks a lot like the one I use for exchanges and shit.
aren't you that ***** that straight up bit the handy I did for you?


http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7430/photo20w.jpg

done in May.


Squint- not feeling those lines you do inside the I and T, but it's clean.

that k looks hella generic though lol

StayHyE
06-25-2009, 03:53 PM
^ love the sig

Azul
06-25-2009, 07:10 PM
WeakFingers- Use a ticker pen for the fill
Sneak- Your A looks a bit like a R
Colz- Try drawing it a bit smaller, change your C i reckon
Delae- Dope keep it up
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7800/dsc00647i.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1452/dsc00646mvi.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/531/dsc00644f.jpg
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8766/dsc00649b.jpg
One liner of some sort.
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/8715/dsc001651x.jpg
done with cheap paint and aeroguard caps lol
crits?

also..
MJ is dead!

skull-e
06-25-2009, 07:25 PM
http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00504.jpg

my [direct photo] links for phtobucket aren't working...fucking limited bandwith


But check the link out anyways.



CRITS:

kurse: DROP THE GOD DAMN FUCKING NAME!!!!!

FFFFFUUUUCCCCC----

Flert: The drawn one is hella nice, drop the face on your painted throw though...

Zarb: fag

BigBlueViolence
06-25-2009, 07:29 PM
Dope dude,
looks a lot better than the shit you were drawing

skull-e
06-25-2009, 07:41 PM
a thousand thank yous in your face bbv



and I did it with no shorts on


I was sketched out thinking i was gonna step on a needle or like, step on someones corpse.

but between the fill, the outline and the forcefield


I would come out of the water to hit some hash in a hookah we had brought.

I didn't even go with graff friends either, just normal friends.

and my friend drew this with some hardcore he bought:

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00506.jpg

Not the greatest flick, but its le lock ness monster and it stretched out to about 20 meters long

BigBlueViolence
06-25-2009, 07:57 PM
No shorts on?
Like, nude?

Fuck *****, that's hardcore.

Shurik*n
06-25-2009, 08:27 PM
Keyboard letters/straight letters:

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image527.jpg

and here is one of my attempts at trying to make it better:

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image526.jpg

The z for the second pic is just a backwards s...caz i couldn't really think of a z that fit in...


Anyways, I'm prob gonna stick with the keyboard letters and build up on them...crits?

Shurik*n
06-25-2009, 08:33 PM
Flert: ur better than me so idk if u wanna listen to what i gotta say...but the T kinda looks detached from the rest...and the f is good, but could u make the short horizontal bars of it have a bit more length (still keep it bubble like though, just more length)...it kinda looks like the f and l or forged together, so i looks like and h.

SPRAY yoface407
06-25-2009, 08:53 PM
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0492k.jpg
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0491e.jpg

KidReny!
06-25-2009, 09:23 PM
shits nawce real naaawce
work on dat handy though

colz
06-25-2009, 10:26 PM
flert-your F is a little messed up and you R kinda looks like an A
zise-on the keyboard throwie your S is to curvy, try making it straighter

started to try more shadows. didnt do the S shadows, crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/redscelthrowie.jpg

Aesir
06-25-2009, 10:34 PM
That saber is fresh. Sorry, I mean sabor.

"Sin"
06-25-2009, 11:19 PM
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0492k.jpg
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0491e.jpg

you that a sick throwie man. keep it up

skull-e
06-26-2009, 12:05 AM
too many toys


ugh

SPRAY yoface407
06-26-2009, 12:42 AM
skull ur orange splash attempt is way wrong and ur shadow is way off and how u gonna hate on other toys when ur one yourself

Shurik*n
06-26-2009, 12:52 AM
colz: ur shadows aren't really good. don't end them like they are a rounded off cube (i'm talking about the ones on the bottom). Think of a shadow as there is a sun on ur top right hand corner of the paper. the shadows should be a bit down and to the right of the actual letters, but have the same outline as them too

SPRAY yoface407
06-26-2009, 12:55 AM
shadow and 3d are different

Azul
06-26-2009, 02:17 AM
too many toys


ugh
Hey dipshit, have you realized this is the toy forum yet?

BigBlueViolence
06-26-2009, 02:19 AM
Y'all *****s need to chill

this internet business is too damn serious to be dicking around.

Azul
06-26-2009, 02:21 AM
Oh yeah, forgot sorry..

EDIT:
http://img.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2008/04_02/RickAstleyREX_468x608.jpg

skull-e
06-26-2009, 08:51 AM
I ment too many toys as in, i dont ever get crits back, ever.

I also never use paint, ever.

and whoever called me a toy, spray yo face i believe it was?

let's have a handy battle



*edit*

im making a long post because iml leaving for a week.


Fuck you

fuck you

fuck you

your cool

and Fuck you im out!

klic
06-26-2009, 10:18 AM
i suck with paint :(
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie6.jpg

weakfingers
06-26-2009, 11:59 AM
Man.. go to a better bridge spot,

mindtrix350
06-26-2009, 01:28 PM
Eh, just a couple mistakes here and there, just comes with practice I suppose. I bet I'm worse than you with paint anyway lol.

bak
06-26-2009, 01:28 PM
are u rockin stocks??

klic
06-26-2009, 01:41 PM
are u rockin stocks??
yep

and i'll go to a better spot next time weakfingers

bak
06-26-2009, 02:11 PM
all u need is ny thins.

they work good with cheap cans and rustos etc give u crisp lines too

klic
06-26-2009, 02:24 PM
you cant get rusto here, and all the hardware stores around here only have male cans. i'll have to buy some female caps off someone on here sometime

BigBlueViolence
06-26-2009, 02:44 PM
I'm almost positive hairspray has some fat caps on it.

zenne
06-26-2009, 02:52 PM
has anybody every used the needle cap off a wd-40?

Stussy
06-26-2009, 02:56 PM
they do blue, and the new elmers spray glue has a nice cap aswell

TheMurderousMisterMero_
06-26-2009, 03:10 PM
I'm almost positive hairspray has some fat caps on it.

they clog really quick.

Shurik*n
06-26-2009, 03:11 PM
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image531.jpg

..i'm having a hard time finding a z that will fit...

BigBlueViolence
06-26-2009, 03:26 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/a4c6lj.jpg

skull-e
06-26-2009, 03:59 PM
thats fucking niiiiice



Shouts from montreal

hom of tha *****s