Throwies

[KidReny!]

i chuckled actually were'd u get that real talk

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

the reason i posted that red throw(for clarificaton) is becuase your getting to cocky reny and i thought id just knock you down a peg before you look like a fool.


and rapist...i have no idea i got it off jj.am in the horror gifs around page 7ish.it should have a link to the vid

[BigBlueViolence]

30 days of night, b!
The movie about vampires fucking shit up in Alaska.

[Dessik]

damn vampires
first, i know this is like someone else's style i just wanted to try it out so i expect someone to tell me it's a rip idc i just wanted to get a feel for it and i know the fill sucks, i have blisters on my hands to prove it
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_3092411d34594876a74b242302fbde69.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i43.tinypic.com/mlqfxd.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/vox3ld.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2z50q6h.jpg
just some shit
Only been using the name for two days.

kid reny that shit is siiiiiiick
haha

[klic]

damn vampires
first, i know this is like someone else's style i just wanted to try it out so i expect someone to tell me it's a rip idc i just wanted to get a feel for it and i know the fill sucks, i have blisters on my hands to prove it
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_3092411d34594876a74b242302fbde69.jpg

dont ever bite that guy again haha, his letters suck

thats dope relish, i like the new name too

[BigBlueViolence]

I don't like your R,
digging everything else, though.

[Mr yarbles]

DAMMIT.
I can never do r's :(
oh and I know that hand isn't so great
But I have a shit load of style and they're all consistent which is alot more then I can say about rapist
Ya'll havn't even seen the loads of shit rapist hands I've hit in all the same style
SO that's why I'm changing


also here's a picture of my girl
http://i43.tinypic.com/wb9fsl.jpg

she's gonna let me paint on her tommorow :D

[Black Flag]

damn vampires
first, i know this is like someone else's style i just wanted to try it out so i expect someone to tell me it's a rip idc i just wanted to get a feel for it and i know the fill sucks, i have blisters on my hands to prove it
http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/78/l_3092411d34594876a74b242302fbde69.jpg

Use cans that use female caps, they don't fuck up your hands.

[StayHyE]

http://i42.tinypic.com/sqr411.jpg

[KidReny!]

is it just me or does the face in the 1st letter look kinda like angelicas dad drew pickles from rugrats

https://www.apoxi.com/lighthouse/Avatare/Drew%20Pickles.gif

[Dessik]

oh yeah thanks, i am gonna get good caps for now i was just using generic ones that dig into my fingers
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/80/m_18dac41b82224bf1b7c1799efbde81e4.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

is it just me or does the face in the 1st letter look kinda like angelicas dad drew pickles from rugrats

https://www.apoxi.com/lighthouse/Avatare/Drew%20Pickles.gif

juding from this comment and your sig you've got to be like 9.







i mean his name is kid reny.enphisis on kid.

[StayHyE]

haha i dont know i just made it on the fly just added glasses and the buck teef :D

[KidReny!]

naw yo those are old shows and when i see that letter i see Drew Pickles smiling at me im just sayin thats just me though

[StayHyE]

he dropped the screw in the tuna

[BigBlueViolence]

The only episode of K&K I ever enjoyed was the Tuba Phone one.

[Zarb]

A quick fill in another spot in the middle of the woods lol
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0611091458.jpg
Crits? I think this is my best painted shit so far

[StayHyE]

keenan lost his funny on the way to snl

[KidReny!]

LMAO i remember that one made me wanna join band just to have a tuba to a phone in for like 5min, how come K&K was the shit wat was watching back then

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

reny is nine.i know it.

[Mr yarbles]

Naw hes 16 I go to school with him

[CrustOner]

wow. that makes him twice as retarded.

[Mr yarbles]

hah believe it or not the kids actually pretty funny

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0611092125.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0611091458.jpg
Crits?

[BigBlueViolence]

your A looks like a tittie, man.

[KidReny!]

simple throws tried to different styles on N crits

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090611_21422.jpg

[Zarb]

haha yeah I need work on my A alot

[skull-e]

I like the fact that you didn't fill the right part , instead of using a white marker to go over it

[KJay]

kidreny good to see ur makin ur stuff simple and whatnot, big improvement from before just keep working at it

and by the way rugrats is my life

[KidReny!]

what do u mean?

[KJay]

about what, rugrats?
u remember that comment u said about drew pickles face?
i noticed

[KidReny!]

i meant wat skull-e meant with the fill thing, and yeah i remember that post wat was like 5 hours ago

[klic]

im tired of people saying my jk throws look exactly like jaone. so what should i do to change it?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

[weakfingers]

JAONE had a really basic style of letters, That being said your style is very simple and looks very close to his, and since the letters almost look identical it looks almost the same bomb. Graff is all about you and what you think looks good. If you really like the way it looks then keep on doing it for yourself but in the long run I'd listen to the people on here and progress your style.

[BigBlueViolence]

Why not just do JE?

[LeaksOne]

or JN

[klic]

or JN

i was doing jn but everyone said my n looked like an A so i started doing jk.

and i suck at e's

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

well practice e's dont just not do them cause you cant. thts why u practice. and yea ja is a simple style of letters but they r similar.

[Shurik*n]

it says panda...btw...

jsyk, it's panda caz i'm azn and my friends think i look like po from kung fu panda...


http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9933/dscn0537pmz.th.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0537pmz.jpg)
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/9051/dscn0536h.th.jpg (http://img15.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn0536h.jpg)

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

those pics are to big i cant see them.

[Shurik*n]

those pics are to big i cant see them.

u talking about mine?

[klic]

well practice e's dont just not do them cause you cant. thts why u practice. and yea ja is a simple style of letters but they r similar.

i may start doing je's because its pretty much all i have left. either that or i might just say the hell with two letter throws and just write my full name from now on

edit:

panda - the 3d shouldnt be going over your letters

[Shurik*n]

i may start doing je's because its pretty much all i have left. either that or i might just say the hell with two letter throws and just write my full name from now on

edit:

panda - the 3d shouldnt be going over your letters

alright...so more like this?

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/8152/dscn0539.th.jpg (http://img190.imageshack.us/i/dscn0539.jpg/)

if i had enough markers i would've probably put some type of backround on it. other than that, how's the style? and the tag?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

dont put shadow on the right side of ur letters
do it like this....http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/curbstomp1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/eweeeey.jpg
or like this...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/tropical.jpg
or...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
i think you get my point but yea keep practicin

[klic]

whats the difference? hahah

edit:

panda i mean when your letters are touching, the letters should be going over your other letters no the 3d

[Mr yarbles]

im tired of people saying my jk throws look exactly like jaone. so what should i do to change it?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

Tell them to shut the fuck up

I can see how they'd think that but honestly there's not much other way you can do a j and make it look good

[weakfingers]

I slack to much, crit my shitty throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture24.jpg

[mmmmtasty905]

I slack to much, crit my shitty throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture24.jpg

not bad but could use some work.

[mmmmtasty905]

critz please

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t51/thedop/DSC04364.jpg

rave

[mmmmtasty905]

ofuck

http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t51/thedop/DSC04365.jpg

[Manupro7]

i need some held with my d's....can u guys upload some of ur d's plz

[colz]

JOL. pretty simple, i need to work on it
crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Picture-1.jpg

[rinoh]

^atleast you arent doing wildstyles,just do this 1000 times and then iw will evoluate just like a pokemon,just sketch it much man

[rinoh]

im tired of people saying my jk throws look exactly like jaone. so what should i do to change it?

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow11.jpg

dope, just do jk whocares what they say,everyone who looks longer than 1 second at it see's that its jk not ja and if youre up wit hjanek then they see the same letters and know its janek not ja

[Shurik*n]

dont put shadow on the right side of ur letters
do it like this....http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/curbstomp1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/eweeeey.jpg
or like this...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/tropical.jpg
or...http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mersy3.jpg
i think you get my point but yea keep practicin


sooo...

[rewz]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2dgrrfa.jpg

JEES

[CrustOner]

This is the first thing I've seen from you that I like, Jeez.

Janek, if you want it to look more like a K, maybe try going a little lower with the diagonal? I'm not sure what else you can do.

[rewz]

ahaha thanks yea i did it like 2 nights ago
some recent shit

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0613091558.jpg
Yeah its on the floor haha
Im not too happy with it this time, messed up my letters pretty bad. Crits?
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0613090933.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0611091458.jpg

[Shurik*n]

panda....how's it look now?
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3637/dscn0541numba2.jpg (http://img19.imageshack.us/i/dscn0541numba2.jpg/) http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/dscn0541numba2.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img19/dscn0541numba2.jpg/1/)

[KidReny!]

did these while i was bored at cousins grad party crits

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090613_2213.jpg

[weakfingers]

Reny- Proportion...You need more of it...
EDIT** Your shadow looks horrible, look at how others do it then take note. or even better yet do the exact same shape just shifted abit.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture1-1.jpg

[Deck]

Reny, you need to give some crits to get them don't just come here demanding that shit.

[Zarb]

Squint- I like everything except the ball on top of the N
but I liked your newer style that you were using before more

[funhouseXcast]

Reny- there should be no shadow on the top part of the R, other than that it looks alright, i like the blue and silver one the best.
Sqwint- unless ur a girl, ditch the heart. hearts aren't hardcore.

[rewz]

http://i42.tinypic.com/w7ew0i.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/24mtgrn.jpg
I know the second jees sucks the e,s r not the same sizes

Some Jees G,S jeas geas how ever

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

the one in the lower left work with the bottom of the s and itll look good

[rewz]

thanks swine (;

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

no problem mokea cola

[rewz]

http://i40.tinypic.com/33nwwli.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/347b4ec.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29xb609.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jfuicg.jpg
some of my shitty throws

[KidReny!]

i aint feelin the question marks yo but ur shadow is nice

[skull-e]

^atleast you arent doing wildstyles,just do this 1000 times and then iw will evoluate just like a pokemon,just sketch it much man

I fucking lol'd

[Deck]

Rewz, looks real good
Squint, why is there a ball on the top of your N?
Zarb, dope

http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/deckthrow2.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

man,
I'd say scrap that and start all over
http://i40.tinypic.com/2qip6z6.jpg

[Deck]

Word, I'm just trying new things out I'm still fucking with it.

[weakfingers]

Deck- to many overlapping lines
Blue- That k is fantastic

[Shurik*n]

i don't know if there's any change since my last ones...but anyways, i think i messed up the shadowing

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image489.jpg

[Stussy]

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1384/rayz.jpg
my simple/throw ive been working on
shurik-no, start over. you need to look at more graffiti to understand the concept of a throw. take away all the pointy things on the bottom of your letters. make all letters same size and yes the shadow is way off.

[BigBlueViolence]

where do you live at, panda?

[Shurik*n]

where do you live at, panda?

pittsburgh...y?

[BigBlueViolence]

There is a PANDA SEX in SF,
but it doesn't matter.

In all honesty,
you'll probably change your name soon anyways,
if you stick with writing at all.

[Shurik*n]

There is a PANDA SEX in SF,
but it doesn't matter.

In all honesty,
you'll probably change your name soon anyways,
if you stick with writing at all.


yea i'm trying to think of a new name now anyways...but idk what it will be yet

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

http://i40.tinypic.com/33nwwli.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/347b4ec.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/29xb609.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jfuicg.jpg
some of my shitty throws

did your mom take your markers away agian?

[colz]

crits? couldve made the shadow better
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Picture-2.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

give crits to get them..

[Shurik*n]

colz- idk if u wanna listen to me caz i suck too, but maybe shade the inside of the o on the right side a bit...and some on the bottom of the letters?...and idk, i guess...keep working on it...mine's not much better than urs so i've been working on new styles and whatever too

[rewz]

did your mom take your markers away agian?
ahahaha yea she did i had a shit load of prisms i got from Michael's and now my mom found the stash and took them away threw them away i got crayola now ahaha


dont diss crayola

[Shurik*n]

yea i'm trying to think of a new name now anyways...but idk what it will be yet


oo...i think i gotta new name: cybe

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image490.jpg


it's a shitty throw, but i'm still trying new things


EDIT: for now it's just a straight letter like zarb said below...but i'm working on it

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0615091841.jpg
Jolz- Looks like you just started, just keep fucking around with the letters and you'll get it
CYBE- Thats more of a straight letter, but make your C closer to your Y
Geez- I like the 2nd one the best
Stussy- Pretty cool, your much better then me so I have nothing to really say

Crits? I messed shadow on my E pretty bad.

[KRE1]

forget about shading for now and just work on making ur letters as sick as they can be.

*EDIT: directed at shurik

[provinT13]

Zarb- I think the shadow in the middle of the last letter is messed up
Shruk*n- Ditch the 3D for now and work on letter structure and consistant size


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/snappy.jpg

[ASTAR.DWSP]

ahahaha yea she did i had a shit load of prisms i got from Michael's and now my mom found the stash and took them away threw them away i got crayola now ahaha


dont diss crayola

dude.. stash them in a vent or like under your dresser.. get an old computer and take all the guts out :P if she asks what its for be like its for computer class for extra credits..

[weakfingers]

Rewz-Wow, If you mom is actully throwing away your markers your gonna have to keep the whole paint obsession way on the DL. Besides you can just say i enjoy drawing with marker, its not like your going out doing drippy prisma tags on mailboxes.... anywayzzzzzzzzzzz,
Jol-Wayyyyyyy basic, Id say draw for a couple weeks to progress then post some ish, just look around and see how others do it for now, But starting simple is how i started and youll progress really fast,
Cybe- I dont really like it. Id say just look back at this forum and see the general direction of others and work from there.
Zarb- Man i like how your trying new ish but The middle line in E's are WAY to overused, well that just my opinion but just yeah the other thing i see way to much is the right leg on the K. Try to think of some fresh shit.
Mes-I think if you have a 3 letters name you should atleast put more work into your throw then that. Get some letters that match instyle then youll be on your way.


I've been focusing on school for the past little bit but im getting back into drawing and so on. Crit away!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture27.jpg

[Facedorateur]

CYBE : round it up, close the gaps
JOL : good basic start (better than mine), just make you J as round as the rest of your letters
SQWINT: awsome throw, but close the gap between your N and your T

Heres mine, crits plz, i've been trying to ''evolve'' from my basic throwup

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1695/dsc0177v.jpg

[KRE1]

feir: i dont like tha F and E extensions that much ... mayb its just me but it was hard for me to get that was an F until i read what u wrote saying it says FEIR lol. i like that R tho. keep workin at it

[Mr yarbles]

You guys realize you should bea ble to do a hollow throw in about 30 seconds right?
and a fills hould take you about 1:30-2:00
You guys goin crazy
That's not what a throw should be
Simpler is better.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

fuck thirty seconds.more like 15.

[Shurik*n]

http://i42.tinypic.com/28kn78k.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2r2nmrt.jpg

idk...i feel like they all need something..but what?

[Shurik*n]

fein: ur better than me caz i just started and u've prob been doing it for years, but the squigly line for ur f...idk, i'm just not really liking it. But u don't have have to take my advice...just saying

[colz]

squint-I really like it except the gap in the middle of the N and the T
feir-Trying cleaning up the F a little.
cybe-If i could choose to do out of the 4, i'd do the 2nd

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

http://i42.tinypic.com/28kn78k.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2r2nmrt.jpg

idk...i feel like they all need something..but what?




personally i think you should
http://membres.lycos.fr/fredrichung/forum/kill%20it%20with%20fire.jpeg

[Shurik*n]

personally i think you should
http://membres.lycos.fr/fredrichung/forum/kill%20it%20with%20fire.jpeg

think i should what?

edit: the image didn't load up..well it did, but now fast enough so nevermind

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

kill it with fire!!

[ADUB510]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y25/adub510/IMG00188.jpg i write ZEST 1.

[Stussy]

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/7518/photo901.jpg
because i get bored at work..

[colz]

rayz-lookin great, i like the throwie
zest-can use some work, but i like the fill in

crits. gotta new name. SCEL
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scel.jpg

[Shurik*n]

scel ur shading could use a bit more work...maybe try some on the bottom and less on top (look at stussy's above u). and ur e kinda through me off, thought it was another c.

[Facedorateur]

Thx for tha crits guys,

CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size

If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.

[Shurik*n]

Thx for tha crits guys,

CYBE: bubble it up, make it pop, think bubble gum
RAYZ: awsome, maybe add something to the Z
SCEL: use a bigger marker (idk why) and keep your letters the same size

If anybody has a tip on how to do an F that would flow with that style, plz tell me.

..to teh first two, or all of 'em?

[Facedorateur]

the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl

[Shurik*n]

the first two, well, its just me, i like nice roound letters, think about the curves of a girl

nice...simile i guess u could call it.

but yea, i can picture some bubbles in there making it look better, i'll work on that. thx

[Shurik*n]

wow...it actually doesn't look to bad a bit more bubbly imo

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image502.jpg

and my attempt at shadowing...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image503.jpg

[aekone]

Zest- Brilliant shit I really like it. Also the same guy from youtube?
Rayz- I am diggin that shit. Makin me not even wanna post my shit.
Scel- Just keep working. Try to add your own style to it. Not just bubble letters.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo62.jpg

[provinT13]

shruk*n- Looking good man, only thing that sicks out to me is the top of the C, doesn't look right

aekone- Love it man. I like how the lines are connected in a few spots and it's not just plain bubble letters.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1153.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1154.jpg

[Shurik*n]

aekone: i think there are too many overlapping lines...like for the indents for the e's, m's, etc...it seems to me like you were trying to do it fast, try and do it slower, and take your time

[Shurik*n]

Mes, ur right, the C doesn't look right...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image504.jpg

the c still kinda looks a bit off to me, but nothing but a bit of playing around with it should fix that. o and my sharpie was running out so i had to use pen for shadowing...but i prob shouldn't worry about shadowing now

[provinT13]

That looks a lot better

[Shurik*n]

yea, then i decided to color it in and shit. it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image505.jpg

[KRE1]

yea, then i decided to color it in and shit...i think it looks pretty cool, agree? it's colored in blue, u can't really tell, with a pink outline

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image505.jpg

cybe ... for starters, if you are saying ur work looks cool/is good/is not BAD, etc., be prepared to get RIPPED. cuz bud that is NOT that good. at all.

your letters are not uniform, tha bubbling is off in that regard, tha shading is weak, but thats ok cuz erryone is new at this at some point so keep working HARD on it. let OTHERS tell you it looks good (if it does indeed look good) and dont self promote cuz ur gonna look straight silly.

[DirtyDozen520]

cybe, i like the B and the E but not the C and Y

heres mine,
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image011.jpg

[ErrorOner...]

i know this is the throwie thread...but yo mes good job taking my advice with the add-ons! the spiral looks good but try the dots on the other side next to the M...

[provinT13]

ErrorOner- :)

Shruk*n- Kre1 is right

[Shurik*n]

ErrorOner- :)

Shruk*n- Kre1 is right

yea, i was looking back at what i said, and i shouldn't have done that...sorry, if i offended anyone, if that's possible with what i said

[aekone]

Cybe- Stay consistent. Different heights fuck it up.
Fero- Scratch all those letters. Make them all consistent.
Mes- Work on your shading Like a lot. And consistency.

I tried to make the overlapping lines a theme. For originality. Does that make it look bad? Also is my shading in check? Thanks guys.

[Gezra]

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_6e898eb562ee4b62b9e01b499eed780e.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Aren't you that ***** that doesn't even paint?

http://www.forumammo.com/cpg/albums/userpics/10063/gtfo.png

[KRE1]

looking good gezra ^^

[skull-e]

Why do you keep posting here?


noone likes you, period.

[skull-e]

Aren't you that ***** that doesn't even paint?

http://www.forumammo.com/cpg/albums/userpics/10063/gtfo.png

his mom orders shit off ********* too

[aekone]

I'm sorry is Big Blue referring to me?

And Gezra that shit is looking mad fresh. I'd avoid the drips though.

[Stussy]

that gezra is fresh as fuck...
exchange?

[skull-e]

He probably won't be able to, he bites all his letters and has no skill.

[Stussy]

damn... i wish i could bite that well haha

[klic]

stop hating, he does have the fastest throwie on youtube, show some respect hahahah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OOlKph5PDkc&feature=channel_page

[DirtyDozen520]

im stil workin on mine, trying to be 'consistent'
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q234/D12-Proof/Image014.jpg

and thats cool gezra, i jst dnt like the drips and i think the A is too small, but hey, what do i know

[aekone]

There you go Fero. I think we've all tried a style similar to that at one point.
It has the ability to be rocked tho. Just keep working.

[LeaksOne]

stop hating, he does have the fastest throwie on youtube, show some respect hahahah

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OOlKph5PDkc&feature=channel_page

im not guna lie but he does have skill. his throws are decent but he shouldnt paint. just draw kid. "make sure you add me on myspace" word? thats incriminating info if you did paint but keep doin you an wastin your moms money in your backyard

[BigBlueViolence]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y5WuxStTcP4

This ***** looks like he's 11 years old.

[skull-e]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y5WuxStTcP4

This ***** is 11 years old.


fixt

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/98/l_6e898eb562ee4b62b9e01b499eed780e.jpg

lol at you repping online crews.hahahaha.



gez is a faggot.he doesnt get up,bites all his shit and yet gets hella props.i'll never understand why.fucking poser.

[CrustOner]

I think it's generally agreed that Gez is a pussy that nobody likes.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0617092023.jpg
Dirty Dozen- Im not sure if I like the points on the bottom and the top. Maybe try them only on the top or something. Or maybe just lose them

[provinT13]

aekone- show me a mes with good shading, i'm not sure where i'm getting it wrong

[colz]

zarb-lookin good, nice shadowing
gezra-i like the throwie, try changing up your G a little

Crits? i tryed changing it up a little. forgot to shadow
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scelone.jpg

[aekone]

Mes- Sorry the actual throwie looks like shit but the shading goes a little like this.

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Mes.jpg

Just try to spread it out equally. Since it looked like you were trying a drop shadow the best advice I can give you is to draw your throwie a little over and down from where your throwie is and shade it.

Hope that helped a little :]

[weakfingers]

Zarb, It's progressing but I want you to do dome original letterz. Not many people have a z in there name and thats where you can get creative.
Colz, Your getting there.
Aekone- getting better.




My one liner N sucks huge member!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture29.jpg

[provinT13]

aekone- I see what you're saying, i'll get some sketches goin tomorrow and pratice with the flick u just put up, thanks.

weakfingers- The N is waaaaaaay the fuck outta place, same with the top left nipple of the T

[Mr yarbles]

lol at you repping online crews.hahahaha.



gez is a faggot.he doesnt get up,bites all his shit and yet gets hella props.i'll never understand why.fucking poser.

lawl seriously.
Have you seen his gezra hands?
The gez looks nice then he can't figure out how to flow haha
Fucking biting ass toy.
Youtube is where everyone that's shit goes when they have no idea what's good an what's shit
They think what they're seeing is good because they have no knowledge.

[Black Flag]

aekone- I see what you're saying, i'll get some sketches goin tomorrow and pratice with the flick u just put up, thanks.

weakfingers- The N is waaaaaaay the fuck outta place, same with the top left nipple of the T

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/2038/shadowc.png (http://img31.imageshack.us/i/shadowc.png/)

[LeaksOne]

lawl seriously.
Have you seen his gezra hands?
The gez looks nice then he can't figure out how to flow haha
Fucking biting ass toy.
Youtube is where everyone that's shit goes when they have no idea what's good an what's shit
They think what they're seeing is good because they have no knowledge.

yea bbv he definately is 11 and yarbles go to youtube and type graffiti sketch and see all the ugly shit on there that everyone says is good. it should give you a good laugh

[provinT13]

Black Flag- Thanks for that, but the only problem I have with shading is round letters, do they all taper off or what?

[colz]

sqwint-i like it but the N is pretty fucked, keep trying man your progressing

[THAT JERZ KID]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0617092023.jpg
Dirty Dozen- Im not sure if I like the points on the bottom and the top. Maybe try them only on the top or something. Or maybe just lose them

I like it u got a style goin now can u paint that in uner 2 min ?

[PegCityBoy]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3320/3638293861_2bf7a03e54.jpg?v=0
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2471/3638292465_a2ac76e17d.jpg?v=0
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3652/3638291527_b6ef1f43e5.jpg?v=0

.. you prob. get the idea

[aekone]

Thanks for the diagram black flag! :D A little simpler than my explanation.
And Mes just do exactly what that diagram does. Draw Mes then a litle over and down draw Mes again. Make the top layer solid and make the bottom one shaded.
Sorry I'm kinda bad at verbal explanations. Just keep workin it man you'll get it in time.

Spam I am Diggin that throwie yo. May just wanna form the A up a little more. That's all I can think of.

[PegCityBoy]

yea my a is def. hurtin

[KRE1]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

[Deck]

Zarb-So dope
Spam-Your last one is probably the best one
Kre-I'm not a huge fan of spirals in letters other than that it's fine
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/Throw12.jpg

[haze4life]

is that last letter suposed to be a K? weeeeaaakkk

[Deck]

Appreciate the crtis, thanks man.

[rewz]

http://i42.tinypic.com/dqmbs3.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/29pye0m.jpg
Eons some good kid thats like 10 i met helped him by doing the eons

http://i41.tinypic.com/358a1wx.jpg
GS says GEES

http://i40.tinypic.com/2s985cj.jpg

crtis
And if there is another JEES/ GEES/ GS w.e then i dont care if hes big and everyone knows then thats different

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0400.jpg


spam- liking it
bleek- looks good.
deck- is it deow?
rewz- looks good.

[shayk]

<a href="http://s130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/?action=view&current=IMG_0109.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p270/jonnyblaze12123/IMG_0109.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

[Shurik*n]

^^ur link didn't work

[CrustOner]

why would you post a picture of yourself...?

[PegCityBoy]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3616/3641123935_6be8c38181.jpg?v=0

paint'd :)

[provinT13]

Peg- Looks nice, haven't really seen an A like that before
FiveSixxAce- Fix the shadow

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1170.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1171.jpg

[SrsBizns]

spam: pretty good, the p looks weird to me

[rewz]

spam- i like the style but the s not that great

Mes- could look better make the letters the same size

[Stussy]

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7533/photo903.jpg
exchange with dim, eh?

[KRE1]

stussy: stop being so fresh its making us look bad. k thx.

[Stussy]

quote-able?

[KRE1]

oh hell yea.

[StayHyE]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2di2g4n.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/izb7mx.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4udt8k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/o6d3cj.jpg

[.StOne]

http://i41.tinypic.com/2di2g4n.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/izb7mx.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/4udt8k.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/o6d3cj.jpg

love the red one guy

[KRE1]

shit needs work. ^^

[StayHyE]

^^ why dont you try critting it then smart guy?

[KRE1]

^^ why dont you try critting it then smart guy?

i just did fagget. IT.NEEDS.WORK.

looks sloppy as hell tha characters in tha E's look retarded. get to work.

[StayHyE]

youre callin me the faggit? lulz you little twerp quick to talk shit on the keyboard i know thats what the site is full of but cmon youre quick to act smart shit i got more style if i wrote with my foot better then youre shit didnt take me long to troll your posts kill yourself faggot


writing shit like this i sure would....

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

[fOrSaQeN]

youre callin me the faggit? lulz you little twerp quick to talk shit on the keyboard i know thats what the site is full of but cmon youre quick to act smart shit i got more style if i wrote with my foot better then youre shit didnt take me long to troll your posts kill yourself faggot


writing shit like this i sure would....

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5872/003gac.jpg

http://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gifhttp://www.dc5nation.com/forums/images/smilies/hyper.gif

[KRE1]

actually thats a lot better than ur stuff. so uhh...


get.to.work.

[KRE1]

oh and its because i have proportions down, my shading is on point, and its not overdone with retarded little characters. but hey thanks for bumping my stuff! :D

[StayHyE]

new name

just experimenting :D

[Shurik*n]

alright so i'm sure that u some of u guys think that i'm trying to do graffiti without understanding it. and well, i do agree with u...So, i'm gonna start all over, and start with regular letters, and learn as i progress. and yes i did sketch them with pencil first, the camera didn't pick up the lines so i retraced them in marker. (some of the pencil line were too skinny for the marker, so some of the lines are messed up like the holes for the b)

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0554.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0555.jpg

[Shurik*n]

StayHye: i'm guessing it says delap right? well anyways, i really like the red one, i would probably also like the green one if the e's didn't have big "noses"...nice faces haha

[BigBlueViolence]

Yall *****s all need to chill out,
because you all need some fucking work.


Cybe- dude, that shit is all out of whack.
I don't even know how to help you along.

bleek- your shit needs work. the shading on the inside of the letters is whack,
and the tounge is madddd played out.
your B is goofy looking, and all your letters are stuffed as far back as they can into the letter behind it.
Check yourself before you act like a dick.

Delay- your shit really isn't BAD bad, but it could use some work.
Try to move your letters close together, and don't go so crazy with the shadows.
The first one is best IMO, and those E faces are pretty whack.



http://i43.tinypic.com/9kwdux.jpg

Redone for stuss because I fucked up the last one.

Still looks like shit, though

[KRE1]

bigblue thx for tha crits

i dont act like a dick until someone makes a smartass comment at me.

bigblue im not liking that handy at all

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0619091051.jpg
Working on a 2 letter, crits?

Bleek- Make your L and K less hidden
Delae- I like the second one most, but yeah get rid of the faces

[weakfingers]

Delae- Yeah the first would be good if you moved the A in closer to the L and just did dots where the faces where
Stussy-The rihno throw you did on the other page was fucking tight!
Zarb, I Dont like it personally. The top part of the E is ugly. and the top left arm of the K needs to be smaller. Sorry if i sound mean, I just havent been feeling your shit lately.
BigBlue- I like the repition at the bottom of the throw. but the second last letter, I think its a Z. To me its a little to covered by the I at the bottom.
KRE1-
oh and its because i have proportions down, my shading is on point, and its not overdone with retarded little characters. but hey thanks for bumping my stuff! :D GET OFF YOU FUCKING HIGH HORSE! We all need to work on our shit but get off your ego trip! I can see two horrible characters on it and why the fuck are you adding letter shading on a throw with a shadow already on it? and by the way your shadow is "not on point". Its totally off on the drips. IT.NEEDS.WORK!
Cybe-Your actully going in such random fucking directions, Just sit down and look at what others are doing. I think right now you need to bite some letters, and i know other members will disagree but personally I think after you have some letters to work off youll develope a style completly diffrent from them.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture30-1.jpg



Crit as usual...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture31-1.jpg

[Bink1]

lmfao kre your stuff is crap and u dissin normal toss wtf is wrong with u?

[StayHyE]

lmfao kre your stuff is crap and u dissin normal toss wtf is wrong with u?

lmao

[ShaolinNy]

Watup guys haven't wrote in like forever but im gonna be back!Also getting a car in a few weeks


1st throwie in ahwile and it was on a desk while taking a regent lol.Crits??

http://i40.tinypic.com/260pfyu.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/2h54isl.jpg


StayHyE-I like you style but its sloppy fix it up a little not so much negative space
BigBlueViolence-Looks good maybe try to make you letters straighter,seems like there going to the right
Zarb-Def need try a different E or soemthing and fix the K up a little maybe make it a little wider

[KRE1]

*damn dint know so many of you suck stay's dick! hahahaha*

[StayHyE]

*damn dint know so many of you suck stay's dick! hahahaha*

bawww


found a pic of KRE1


http://i44.tinypic.com/mwt8o4.jpg

[KRE1]

*sluuuurp slurp slurp*

stop suckin my dick breh

[StayHyE]

whats with you and the dick facination, homo.

[weakfingers]

A moderator can delete this post if he/she wants but...

Kre1 just shut the fuck up, where all here to help eachother develop our throws, You just like starting shit. If you dident spend your whole day posting in the toy throwies thread like 5 times a day maybe you would have some time to spend to clean up your own shit.
If you two wanna beef keep it to the PM's so the rest of us have to see it!

flick for talking
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture32-1.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i42.tinypic.com/20tgmxw.jpg

[StayHyE]

http://i42.tinypic.com/20tgmxw.jpg

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z32/Strider2K99/nbavlc.gif

[KRE1]

slurp.

[StayHyE]

enjoy the white syrup faggot

[KRE1]

lol stay ur a funny kid.



slluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrp.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

kre is starting to annoy me. god i wish i had teh ban hammer. id be bussin skulls mayne.

[ShaolinNy]

All you fags STFU and stop fighting on the internet lol,,,,crits would be nice!

[StayHyE]

kre is starting to annoy me. god i wish i had teh ban hammer. id be bussin skulls mayne.

http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt160/TaijuSekki/permaban.gif

[StayHyE]

All you fags STFU and stop fighting on the internet lol,,,,crits would be nice!

letters arent bad...but they seem to get smaller toward the end....why not write on plain paper so we can actually see the letters?

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

your shit is had to read but if you did an SK throw(those being your stronges letters) it would be legit but the other letters in the midle are seriously hurting.




http://i607.photobucket.com/albums/tt160/TaijuSekki/permaban.gif

lulz

[CrustOner]

actually thats a lot better than ur stuff. so uhh...


get.to.work.

Um. Get off the internet until you can at least put together a decent throwie and tag. sorry.

[ShaolinNy]

letters arent bad...but they seem to get smaller toward the end....why not write on plain paper so we can actually see the letters?

I posted that because it was most recent lol here a pic i did awhile ago.If i tried to make it this good again it would come shitty since i stoped practicing

http://i43.tinypic.com/726c1g.jpg

Crits??





your shit is had to read but if you did an SK throw(those being your stronges letters) it would be legit but the other letters in the midle are seriously hurting.





lulz

If you talking to me that might be a good idea,Only thing is some kid in my hood actually write Sk so dont think i would be able todo that as a throw.I was thinking of doing a 1 letter S with like an exclamation point what do you think?

[StayHyE]

http://i43.tinypic.com/5mkbde.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/2qknrc1.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/jhd8go.jpg

[colz]

stayhye-i like the 3rd throwie the best but keep your letters the same size
sneak-lookin great, my favorite letter is the S

new SCEL throwie, any crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/scelthrowie.jpg

[Werse]

Stay your 'e' reminds me of seize, just sayin.
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p284/rz3p0w/DSC_0067-1.jpg

[StayHyE]

well it is the same letter :P

[StayHyE]

http://i43.tinypic.com/2poealz.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2qivguc.jpg

[provinT13]

^^ Maby it's just me but the D looks too small

[StayHyE]

yeah it is...i gotta work on that

[Azul]

WeakFingers- Use a ticker pen for the fill
Sneak- Your A looks a bit like a R
Colz- Try drawing it a bit smaller, change your C i reckon
Delae- Dope keep it up
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7800/dsc00647i.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1452/dsc00646mvi.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/531/dsc00644f.jpg
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8766/dsc00649b.jpg
One liner of some sort.
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/8715/dsc001651x.jpg
done with cheap paint and aeroguard caps lol

[medacog1]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2wgvvxz.jpg

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-6.jpg

[Black Flag]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2wgvvxz.jpg

You have a pretty good base going so far.

-Make the O bigger.(slide to the right)
-Fix the N / Get rid of the flip at the bottom of the leg
- Scrap that I
- Make the K look more "natural" (best way to put it i guess)

[DECO ONE]

Yo KURSE!!!! QUIT writing that name, theres already a big name Kurse one in Boston, and has been since 86
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IM_A0257.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/kurse1_boston.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/kurse1_boston.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/IM_A0267.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/d302x_odcopy.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0621092324.jpg
Fucking around with some different styles...Crits?

[Bink1]

omfg that guy is writing kurse ffs. fuck toys like him.

[LeaksOne]

omfg that guy is writing kurse ffs. fuck toys like him.

you kno i would agree but i would bea hypocrit. all the major writers that write that write kerse he uses a u instead. i cant say shit tho cuz i write grate not to be confused with great from europe

[Zest3]

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/6507/dscf1884.jpg

A quick throwie on paper. I know the letters are not well disposed and not the same size, but I didn't really pay attention to that.

[provinT13]

You need to make the Z way more distinct.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

Yo KURSE!!!! QUIT writing that name, theres already a big name Kurse one in Boston, and has been since 86


HEY DECO!! who cares...if he doesnt write in your area then fuck it.lots of cats write kurse/kerse...its not like thats a original name at all.if he was up all over the country or some shit then aybe bu he's not so fuck it




seriously....write whatever the fuck you want and if anyone gives you shit battle him for the name.

[klic]

yeah.. but kerse was up everywhere and passed away a while ago. he was up as much as anyone in seattle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow12.jpg

zest - resize that picture and make the lines extend a lot longer on the inside of your z

scel - its a good start, keep filling pages full of hollow throws like that

[LeaksOne]

yeah.. but kerse was up everywhere and passed away a while ago. he was up as much as anyone in seattle

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow12.jpg



oh man kerse and adek were killin shit in my city!! rip KERSE. by the way your progress has been nothing short of amazing man. keep it up

[ErrorOner...]

yo zest look that name up on youtube...i'd change names...

[KidReny!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1910.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_19111.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1911.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090622_1912.jpg

did these today yo crits

[klic]

reny stop posting shit asking for crits, without giving crits, and thanks leaks :D

[KidReny!]

i have given crits :/.......

[klic]

no you didnt...

[KidReny!]

check my posts then -.-"

[klic]

i did, you never give any crits. you told somebody there stuff looks good in a different thread a week ago, so what. you should always give crits when you post a flick of your work especially if your asking for crits, i dont see why its such a big deal it takes like 20 seconds to give a crit

[EGO31]

Y has always been a bitch for me, but I would say you really need to just, make someting that really distinguishes it, because even though it's on paper, it hasn't got anything that makes your eye stick. it's very rectangular also, try making it rounded with little sort of bubbly outbursts.

[Manupro7]

been workin on my throws lately..need to work on my r tho...got any ideas???
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/9126/dsc00341vhu.th.jpg (http://img190.imageshack.us/i/dsc00341vhu.jpg/)
klic- looking really good i like it
reny- keep workin on it you get it soon

[Bars]

Gee that O and E look really familiar.:rolleyes:

[klic]

thats like the simplest o and e you can do, its not a bite lol. i assume you meant he was biting cope..

[dreaken1993]

all basic letters are going to looka like

[cemo954]

dozer I like that throwie, its clean

reny the only one I'm really down for is the simple block letter yellow one

zest like others said you def gotta make that z stand out more

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/112/l_14635ef8abf54926a1caa432cb8554ff.jpg

stock tips, dollar fill, and a male painters touch baby blue

[klic]

rek - it would have looked better without the clouds. your R's to skinny in some spots, your E's good, make the right leg of your K thicker.

[Zest3]

Rek - The clouds look more like sperm to me. Or maybe it was sperm.
Anyways, the R is smaller on some spots like klic said and the K legs are too small.
Work on that bro.

[weakfingers]

I felt like everything on that last page was hurting pretty bad. except for janek. I REALLY like the Three letter. I REALLY want to see that painted. For the rest of the stuff nothing really caught my attention.

Ive been lurking around the big boy forum and stole some styles.
The S I stole from someone and the rest is off the top of my head, I like the style of the S and will tweak it alot befor I try to paint it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture33-1.jpg

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

weakfingers...loooking alot better from the last time i saw your stuff.loke how you show the t for once lol.
rek-it has potential.

[provinT13]

weakfingers- I think you need to open the top part of the S, like this

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/sssssss.jpg

Had to change from mes to nems

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/graff/CIMG1194.jpg

[Azul]

Can someone actually give me crits instead of arguing about my name for once...
Also I'm from Australia were most ppl are too dumb to know of kerse. I will change my name when I get a better one though.

[klic]

I felt like everything on that last page was hurting pretty bad. except for janek. I REALLY like the Three letter. I REALLY want to see that painted. For the rest of the stuff nothing really caught my attention.

Ive been lurking around the big boy forum and stole some styles.
The S I stole from someone and the rest is off the top of my head, I like the style of the S and will tweak it alot befor I try to paint it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture33-1.jpg

thanks, i might paint it tommorow, i'll post some flicks if i do. your throws looking good except for the Q. id use a k instead if i were you