tot throwies.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0625090128.jpg
Crits?
Squint- Thats looking hell of a lot better, I agree with Janek though it might look better with the K.
Nems- Keep working on it and make your letters all the same size, Your N is bigger then the rest of your letters and your E is the smallest/
Rek- It's a pretty nice simple, make the right leg of your K thicker and longer.
Dozer- I like it except the Z and the R, they just dont go with the rest of the letters.
Reny- That yellow simple is pretty cool.

[mindtrix350]

klic-I like it, just like most of the throws I've seen from you.
Reny- Not really feeling the E or Y, but I know they can be pretty frustrating.
weakfingers-Just lose the notch on the S, as everyone else said. I would like to see a K too, but I like it the way it is.
cemo954- The hole in the R is a little too big towards the right side, which causes it to look a bit skinny. Maybe just shrink it a bit.
provinT13-I like it, but I feel that the E and S should have some sort of opening as well.
Zarb-I'm feelin' it.
And now, for my crappy throws...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw1.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw2.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Eark- your K looks a lot like the one I use for exchanges and shit.
aren't you that ***** that straight up bit the handy I did for you?


http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7430/photo20w.jpg

done in May.


Squint- not feeling those lines you do inside the I and T, but it's clean.

[B.S. POLICE]

thats why i dont do exchanges with toys anymore

[mindtrix350]

klic-I like it, just like most of the throws I've seen from you.
Reny- Not really feeling the E or Y, but I know they can be pretty frustrating.
weakfingers-Just lose the notch on the S, as everyone else said. I would like to see a K too, but I like it the way it is.
cemo954- The hole in the R is a little too big towards the right side, which causes it to look a bit skinny. Maybe just shrink it a bit.
provinT13-I like it, but I feel that the E and S should have some sort of opening as well.
Zarb-I'm feelin' it.
And now, for my crappy throws...
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw1.jpg
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw2.jpg
Bump to next page.
Crits?
Wow, major bite... Looks good BigBlueViolence

[Zarb]

Yeah I got the K from the exchange with you, I wanna keep using it and trying to tweak it but if it's not cool with you I'll drop it.

[Flert1]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/80/l_42ada54557d64243ab3154487aba25bf.jpg

[Flert1]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/93/l_ad159e6554b440b18b644a4d34e0b7bb.jpg

[Juicee]

Eark- your K looks a lot like the one I use for exchanges and shit.
aren't you that ***** that straight up bit the handy I did for you?


http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7430/photo20w.jpg

done in May.


Squint- not feeling those lines you do inside the I and T, but it's clean.

that k looks hella generic though lol

[StayHyE]

^ love the sig

[Azul]

WeakFingers- Use a ticker pen for the fill
Sneak- Your A looks a bit like a R
Colz- Try drawing it a bit smaller, change your C i reckon
Delae- Dope keep it up
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/7800/dsc00647i.jpg
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1452/dsc00646mvi.jpg
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/531/dsc00644f.jpg
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8766/dsc00649b.jpg
One liner of some sort.
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/8715/dsc001651x.jpg
done with cheap paint and aeroguard caps lol
crits?

also..
MJ is dead!

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00504.jpg

my [direct photo] links for phtobucket aren't working...fucking limited bandwith


But check the link out anyways.



CRITS:

kurse: DROP THE GOD DAMN FUCKING NAME!!!!!

FFFFFUUUUCCCCC----

Flert: The drawn one is hella nice, drop the face on your painted throw though...

Zarb: fag

[BigBlueViolence]

Dope dude,
looks a lot better than the shit you were drawing

[skull-e]

a thousand thank yous in your face bbv



and I did it with no shorts on


I was sketched out thinking i was gonna step on a needle or like, step on someones corpse.

but between the fill, the outline and the forcefield


I would come out of the water to hit some hash in a hookah we had brought.

I didn't even go with graff friends either, just normal friends.

and my friend drew this with some hardcore he bought:

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/DSC00506.jpg

Not the greatest flick, but its le lock ness monster and it stretched out to about 20 meters long

[BigBlueViolence]

No shorts on?
Like, nude?

Fuck *****, that's hardcore.

[Shurik*n]

Keyboard letters/straight letters:

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image527.jpg

and here is one of my attempts at trying to make it better:

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image526.jpg

The z for the second pic is just a backwards s...caz i couldn't really think of a z that fit in...


Anyways, I'm prob gonna stick with the keyboard letters and build up on them...crits?

[Shurik*n]

Flert: ur better than me so idk if u wanna listen to what i gotta say...but the T kinda looks detached from the rest...and the f is good, but could u make the short horizontal bars of it have a bit more length (still keep it bubble like though, just more length)...it kinda looks like the f and l or forged together, so i looks like and h.

[SPRAY yoface407]

http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0492k.jpg
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0491e.jpg

[KidReny!]

shits nawce real naaawce
work on dat handy though

[colz]

flert-your F is a little messed up and you R kinda looks like an A
zise-on the keyboard throwie your S is to curvy, try making it straighter

started to try more shadows. didnt do the S shadows, crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/redscelthrowie.jpg

[Aesir]

That saber is fresh. Sorry, I mean sabor.

["Sin"]

http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0492k.jpg
http://i313.photobucket.com/albums/ll375/krum407/img0491e.jpg

you that a sick throwie man. keep it up

[skull-e]

too many toys


ugh

[SPRAY yoface407]

skull ur orange splash attempt is way wrong and ur shadow is way off and how u gonna hate on other toys when ur one yourself

[Shurik*n]

colz: ur shadows aren't really good. don't end them like they are a rounded off cube (i'm talking about the ones on the bottom). Think of a shadow as there is a sun on ur top right hand corner of the paper. the shadows should be a bit down and to the right of the actual letters, but have the same outline as them too

[SPRAY yoface407]

shadow and 3d are different

[Azul]

too many toys


ugh
Hey dipshit, have you realized this is the toy forum yet?

[BigBlueViolence]

Y'all *****s need to chill

this internet business is too damn serious to be dicking around.

[Azul]

Oh yeah, forgot sorry..

EDIT:
http://img.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2008/04_02/RickAstleyREX_468x608.jpg

[skull-e]

I ment too many toys as in, i dont ever get crits back, ever.

I also never use paint, ever.

and whoever called me a toy, spray yo face i believe it was?

let's have a handy battle



*edit*

im making a long post because iml leaving for a week.


Fuck you

fuck you

fuck you

your cool

and Fuck you im out!

[klic]

i suck with paint :(
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie6.jpg

[weakfingers]

Man.. go to a better bridge spot,

[mindtrix350]

Eh, just a couple mistakes here and there, just comes with practice I suppose. I bet I'm worse than you with paint anyway lol.

[bak]

are u rockin stocks??

[klic]

are u rockin stocks??
yep

and i'll go to a better spot next time weakfingers

[bak]

all u need is ny thins.

they work good with cheap cans and rustos etc give u crisp lines too

[klic]

you cant get rusto here, and all the hardware stores around here only have male cans. i'll have to buy some female caps off someone on here sometime

[BigBlueViolence]

I'm almost positive hairspray has some fat caps on it.

[zenne]

has anybody every used the needle cap off a wd-40?

[Stussy]

they do blue, and the new elmers spray glue has a nice cap aswell

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

I'm almost positive hairspray has some fat caps on it.

they clog really quick.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image531.jpg

..i'm having a hard time finding a z that will fit...

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i42.tinypic.com/a4c6lj.jpg

[skull-e]

thats fucking niiiiice



Shouts from montreal

hom of tha *****s

[Marke]

Zise- Keep working on that man, not ready to hit walls quite yet.
BigBlue- I'm not really feelin your second letter.

Just a 2 letter
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw013.jpg

[bak]

you cant get rusto here, and all the hardware stores around here only have male cans. i'll have to buy some female caps off someone on here sometime

get caps off of the internet ur letters are good and decent paint all u need is crisp lines

[skull-e]

Don't blame lack of can control on the paint/caps you use

[klic]

Don't blame lack of can control on the paint/caps you use

im not, im blaming it on the fact that i never paint. i probably wouldnt even notice a difference it i switched paint/caps

[skull-e]

I was talking to bak, he was trying to tell you to buy expensive caps so you can be a better artist.

don't worry, I wouldn't call you out.

[klic]

yeah i know, i didnt take it offensively. i am going to need to get some fat caps sometime though when i start to do bigger throwies

[skull-e]

if you Are gonna buy caps, buy em off *********

[klic]

i cant buy shit off them cause my parents dont know i write and there not gonna let me borrow there credit cards, i'll just buy them off someone on here and send cash in the mail

[skull-e]

Or you can mail order off bombingscience, i ordered a few markers when I started writing a While ago.

[sank.]

anyone down for a throwie exchange? i write sarek. pm meh!!!!

[bak]

skull-pee i wouldnt be talking

expensive caps?? really 100 for 6 dollars?
i was giving him two cents not ur ignorant toy ass

[Marke]

Zise- Keep working on that man, not ready to hit walls quite yet.
BigBlue- I'm not really feelin your second letter.

Just a 2 letter
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw013.jpg

Bump the 2 letter.
Plus the full throw
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

yeah i know, i didnt take it offensively. i am going to need to get some fat caps sometime though when i start to do bigger throwies

ELMERS GLUE
Don't be wastin your money elmers glue caps are all you'll ever need.

[ErrorOner...]

^^buddy bumped his own shit. ha

[Marke]

^^buddy bumped his own shit. ha

Ya trying to get a crit amongst all this stupid bullshit about caps.

[Stussy]

bigblue i owe you a throw don't i.

[BigBlueViolence]

Maybe, haha.
I don't know.
Either way you should do one.

[Stussy]

word, i've tried i just hate starting with fucking E's. haha

[walkwiththelion]

I hate messin' with e's man. Which sucks cause they are in everything.

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah they are,
twice, actually




see what I did there?

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

http://meow.catsplz.com/cats/pictures/234/I-see-what-you-did-there.jpg

[walkwiththelion]

the above said it best.

[walkwiththelion]

A two minute sketch I did just to get a small amount of feedback, I personally like it, but I got a feeling everyone else won't. Oh well.

http://i665.photobucket.com/albums/vv12/walkwiththelion/DSCN5281.jpg

[CrustOner]

it'd be better if there were little baby circles for the dots in the P's.

[walkwiththelion]

alright.

[thedudeman]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/graff040-1.jpg

[JackieChanRollin]

walkwiththelion- I agree with crust on the dots. I think you should keep working with it. Eventually youll get a solid throw. Keep working with them E's. You may hate them now but you can get a lot better at them if you keep practicing them. That goes for every letter.

thedudeman-Those handies are lookin pretty nice name.
As for the throws, i think you should use the A on the one to the left. Maybe try an Uppercase N? And make the middle of the M more visible.

[hardwares]

http://i40.tinypic.com/mm7p8p.jpg
ware

dudeman - your hands and simples are dope, but your throwups are sub-par. the best thing to do i think for a good throw is just fuck around with the letters endlessley until you find something you like.
walkwiththelion - i would like to see that with a clean ass fill on some wall somewhere. that would be ill.

if anyones down for an exchange PM me

[JackieChanRollin]

Looks pretty dope dude, Im digging that W. Try tweaking the R a bit, just to mess around.
When I get my new scanner we gotta exchange some shit..

[hardwares]

for sure. the R is the only thing i mess with lately. cant seem to get the right leg down perfectly.

[Oarsone-FFSC]

hardwares thats a dope throw up. i am down for an exchange

[Wallace]

ware- clean up that a and e and i think youll be in real good shape.
name- needs lots more practice, itll clean itself up after a while
popn- cute start, reminds me of asian candies
game- the amount of time and effort it looks like it took you to make that, its not a throw and it looks bad
bigblue- always been a fan of your style, keep it up
flert- green one looks solid, lets see it up


couldnt get a pic before the buff got to it =/... simple ass hollow takes 10 seconds
so

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/2714/img00393.jpg

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/5403/throw.jpg (http://img265.imageshack.us/i/throw.jpg/)

[Manupro7]

been workin on my throws alot so here wat ive come up with...my z needs some work tho...http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/3182/dsc00343d.th.jpg (http://img223.imageshack.us/i/dsc00343d.jpg/)

Wares-luvin it nice and original...would u be able to do a throw in ur style with my word dozer plz???
popn- looking good, nice and clean

[hardwares]

wallace - the one above the big black square is the most original and my fav. i can see thats what you were going for on that wall so keep it up.
doze - fix up that curl on the D a bit. and i like the E face. also if you want to do an exchange PM me, just so long as you dont just put up what i give you lol.

[ShaolinNy]

Sup guys,im working on a 1 letter S and need help to make it better.

http://i39.tinypic.com/2mm5um9.jpg (full throw just for reference)

Here some shity sketches.crits?

http://i39.tinypic.com/14nmu00.jpg



What do you guys suggest?


thedudeman-Your letters seemed all mushed together and are a little sloppy.Fix thats and should be better
Doze-Im really feeling the Z but not so much the other letters,Fix the curl in the D and maybe swich the E up
Ware-Sick but make the E closer to the
SO-Shits mint i like the top right one the best

[bak]

the shadow is off and only on the s?

[KidReny!]

I suggest that you start writin simples yo ur shadow is off like crazy but thats just me lookin at the supposed S y dont you get a bigger pic of ur full throwie

[ShaolinNy]

the shadow is off and only on the s?


I suggest that you start writin simples yo ur shadow is off like crazy but thats just me lookin at the supposed S y dont you get a bigger pic of ur full throwie


My full throw is great i just need help with a 1 letter S.yeah was just messing around with with the shadow not worried about it yet 1st i wana know what i can make better on the 1 letter s.

[~Star~]

[QUOTE=ShaolinNy;1418035]Sup guys,im working on a 1 letter S and need help to make it better.

http://i39.tinypic.com/2mm5um9.jpg (full throw just for reference)

Here some shity sketches.crits?

http://i39.tinypic.com/14nmu00.jpg



What do you guys suggest?


i sugest you stop writing sneak one, i wrote sneak before you, you pm'd me askin for help with ur style fuck u guyy dont try to pull that shit

[StayHyE]

lolollol pwnt

[ShaolinNy]

[QUOTE=ShaolinNy;1418035]
i sugest you stop writing sneak one, i wrote sneak before you, you pm'd me askin for help with ur style fuck u guyy dont try to pull that shit


lmao yes i do recall asking you for help since we wrote the same name back in the day,And i also recall your style sucks and my new style is better than any sneak you ever wrote haha SO GTFO


I got no time for e-fights so take you shit somewere else this is my own style and like i said better than any sneak you wrote



lolollol pwnt

nahh he got "pwnt"

[Mr yarbles]

It's funny cus both of you suck

[ShaolinNy]

It's funny cus both of you suck

http://i41.tinypic.com/e6248w.jpg

Last time i checked this was pretty badass and way better than that other fag star and Mr yarbles it seems like your always starting trouble


But yeah u guys keep talking shit behind your little computer screens thinking your tough.Im here for graff not fighting i do my fighting in my Judo classes every week not on the fucking internet.

SO if any one can give crits on my 1 letter S that would be great since i gave them out.Like i said shity sketches but let me know what to fix

[weakfingers]

Why dont you two just battle the word.... Oh and shaolin... wasent your letters givin to you?

Crits
Shaolin- the eye in the A is kinda lame and I dont like the way you vut off the right leg of the A.

Critz on mine please.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture41.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Last time i checked this was pretty badass

Last time I checked you were incredibally fucking toy.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

[i do my fighting in my Judo classes every week not on the fucking internet.



wow...your hella hxc.

[ShaolinNy]

Get off your high horse faggot, If you both think your hot shit then battle the word. oh and shaolin wasent your letters givin to you? Man, look at your hand..... Mr Yarbles will kill you... Flicks in abit...

absolutely not thats my own style,if you dont believe then check lol and sure Mr yarbles will kill me in hands but 1/2 the shit he writes in hands you cant read and also aslong as my hand aint terriable idc i got a good throwie and gonna get ups.Also havent practiced/wrote in a long time and never rly practiced a handy.


lol i done with these gay e-fights.Any one got some legit crits?

[.HATESONE.]

Last time i checked this was pretty badass

hate to burst your bubble(not really) but that throw is the embodiment of shit.and not in a good way like "hey do0dz that is da sheeeit" but more like " i think theres something on my shoe"


die.now.

[klic]

absolutely not thats my own style


i highly doubt that, you definately just bit that off an exchange you did with someone. all you did for 3 months on here was beg for someone to make a throwie for you

[ShaolinNy]

hate to burst your bubble(not really) but that throw is the embodiment of shit.and not in a good way like "hey do0dz that is da sheeeit" but more like " i think theres something on my shoe"


die.now.

Cool story bro




Weakfinger-Did you do that on paint?Cause it would probally look alot better on paper.Every thing seems ok except the Q looks like a fucked up O

Im looking for crits on the 1 letter S above.Dont really know how to do a good oone letter so tips would be great




i highly doubt that, you definately just bit that off an exchange you did with someone. all you did for 3 months on here was beg for someone to make a throwie for you

Ok then ask every person on this forum lol i didnt bite shit on that throw

[Mr yarbles]

no but really you suck

and I don't think you should be doggin my hands when yours are as broken as they are.

[weakfingers]

1/2 the shit he writes in hands you cant read

ahahahahah man, you need to check your eyes then...
and nothing i do is on paint, I just tweak the levels to make it easier for the eyes.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture47.jpg
flicks for talking
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0598.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/3-4.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0610.jpg

[hardwares]

i hate to jump on the hatetrain right now but shaolin you are a fucking butthurt faggot. if you want crits then stop hating on everyone in this forum because your just making yourself look like shit.



lol i done with these gay e-fights.Any one got some legit crits?
your last 5 posts have been shit talking. lol.

crits - your shadow doesnt look that good, fix that. lose the faces in the throw and work on letters, along with a new hand. otherwise it looks a little better than the other throws in the toys section.

[ShaolinNy]

i hate to jump on the hatetrain right now but shaolin you are a fucking butthurt faggot. if you want crits then stop hating on everyone in this forum because your just making yourself look like shit.


your last 5 posts have been shit talking. lol.

crits - your shadow doesnt look that good, fix that. lose the faces in the throw and work on letters, along with a new hand. otherwise it looks a little better than the other throws in the toys section.

Thx but yeah my last few post has been shit talking BUT did i start 1st with any one?not at all?I was just backing myself up since people like to run there mouths

yeah im done with anyone who wants to fight on the internet.But if u wana give crits and get them ill be here for that.


Anything for the 1 letter S though?

[hardwares]

i dunno.. make the shadow go to the bottom right or left instead of to the side
as for the letters its not really my style so i cant tell you what to do.

[Fury]

How about everyone shuts the fuck up and does some throwies.

Squint - I think the Q should be a K. I like the last one you did the best, but just work on that Q a little bit

[Wallace]

ahahahhaahahahaha sooo much shitty toy drama.

any advice I can give anyone here is as simple as just keep doing your shit over and over, it will refine itself. took me well over a year to get my throw and handstyle to a halfway decent point. you just start to learn it yourself after you do it long enough.

waste tons of paper, then when people would rather be looking at your throw rather than dirt, waste tons of cans

[colz]

squint-nice man, but you can fix up the U a little
sneak-i agree what Shaolin said

i think i write better with pencil then markers, it seems like im shaking alot while writing with markers. Crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/pencilscelthrowie-1.jpg

[AcosOne]

colz, its a good starting point. Just sketch. a lot.
in time, a throwup will just become one smooth hand motion
simply practice, dont go too wild from the start.

[~Star~]

shaolyn ur handy is fuckin garbage if u wanna talk shit and whatnot cuss on my style ill battle u or whatever the fuck u guys do

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0630091630.jpg
Colz- Its a good start, just keep sketching and shit and only do one line in your E
Squint- Ive been liking your newer shit, but I dont like the Q it looks like an O

I got that K from an exchange, im not going out and painting it until i make it my own so shut up...

[walkwiththelion]

eark- not gonna lie, diggin' it.

[weakfingers]

Eark not gonna lie, but Im not digging any of it, Not trying to hate but the E has that random thing on the left, The A is to egg shaped, The R is kood and the K is abit to over sized, Im not trying to sound mean but I hate when people Just say "I love it, its amazing" when it needs work. Like you said, the more you sketch it the more of your own it will be...

[BigBlueViolence]

http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/6544/imag0003k.jpg

[Zarb]

Yeah man I feel you, the thing on the E I was just trying to add some style to it, and I feel like I always somehow draw my letters bigger as they go on. Does any one have any tips on just keeping my letters the same size as I write them?

[Wallace]

practice, lots of it, and be aware of where your lines are going

[KidReny!]

i really think you should go simple big blue cause i aint feelin this style dog

[BigBlueViolence]

Some don't homie, but fuck it,
most do.

[KidReny!]

ay im jus sayin

[skull-e]

that post was EXTREMELY useless

edit*

so was this one

[Mr yarbles]

Some don't homie, but fuck it,
most do.

you need to fatten your e up

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0630092257.jpg
Just trying to slowly change shit up.
Only other person that's posted a flick since my last post is earn, and I feel I have nothing to say considering he's much better then me haha

[walkwiththelion]

Eark not gonna lie, but Im not digging any of it, Not trying to hate but the E has that random thing on the left, The A is to egg shaped, The R is kood and the K is abit to over sized, Im not trying to sound mean but I hate when people Just say "I love it, its amazing" when it needs work. Like you said, the more you sketch it the more of your own it will be...

I didn't say I loved it, man most of us could pick over any throw we saw on any wall or in any book and find fault in it, but I think it was a decent looking throw.

[BigBlueViolence]

you need to fatten your e up
Yeah man it's normally larger than that
http://i39.tinypic.com/2dqixpt.jpg

[Juicee]

bigblue: im feelin it; nice and clean. but idk i think the e should be the same size as the R, but thats just me

eark: not diggin the 'r' and 'k'.. i dont like how the bottom right leg of the 'k' has that big cut through it. idk bout the 'r' though im just not feelin it for some reason

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/dmkyoyo.png
quicky trying out a possible new name
i messed up on the last letters of every word tho

[thebigman]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/tearrr.jpg
critics????

[CrustOner]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0630092349-1.jpg

because a while back, i did an exchange with Earn. And now I had to redo it. So here you go BBV.

[Marke]

http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg
crits?

[Black Flag]

crits?

get rid of the sperm doo-dads.

[EGO31]

http://i434.photobucket.com/albums/qq66/delawarekid302/tearrr.jpg
critics????
worst fucking name ever. teat? What the fuck. change Names! I just have random letters in mine, in a vaugue semblence of a word. Christ man. seriously, teat?
Also, the A has that stuid add on at the bottom, just no.

[noxi]

it says tear, and the t looks like a dick.

[joker12joe]

http://i467.photobucket.com/albums/rr38/joker12joe/nark-1.jpg

NARK any advice

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0701092208.jpg
Working on a two letter.
Tear- It's an alright start, I would lose the points for now and I don't like the tail thing on the A
Juice- I can't read it too well man, maybe write slower for now because it looks pretty half assed.

Other people, give crits to get them.

[proNYNJA]

nark: erm weird name, i wouldn't wanna hang out witta a writer named nark but make your throwie rounder, and ur R looks lika C

zarb: pretty gewd pretty gewd i just think letters would look better with a hole in the middle instead of that question mark lookn thingy

[Zarb]

I'm really bored tonight, heres another quick one/
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0701092345.jpg

[Oarsone-FFSC]

hardwares-i got my part of the exstange done. its not bad. W's are a bitch.

[provinT13]

Zarb- yellow one is better because there is no dead space in the first letter

[MARTYRaz]

http://i467.photobucket.com/albums/rr38/joker12joe/nark-1.jpg

NARK any advice
change ur name...thers a nark in nj...

[weakfingers]

joker12joe-Theres already a person who writes nark, Ive seen it and it was alot better. http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/514 In the future learn to lurk harder, Took me 5 seconds on google images...


Zarb_ The thing on your E is ugly as fuck!


hardwares-i got my part of the exstange done. its not bad. W's are a bitch.
There weird at first but once you have a couple idea's you man turn them into M's and E's. These are some I rushed super quick so there super sloppy.
Probably my favourite letter to mess around with right now... so many bends with them.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9138.jpg

[colz]

tear-the A is fucked and loose the points at the top
zarb-i like it but use something different then the swirls in the middle of both letters

another pencil throwie. Crits????
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/SCEL1.jpg

[weakfingers]

Scel, i dont see any progression, it seems like every time you do a drawing you flick it and post it and ask for crits, we gave you crits now try to listen to them and improve.

[colz]

weakfingers-can you give me crits so i can progress?

[THAT JERZ KID]

http://i467.photobucket.com/albums/rr38/joker12joe/nark-1.jpg

NARK any advice

1. Keep Hitting Your Books

2. Theres a NARK out of jerz a lottttttttttttt better than you so id think on changing your name!
This is him VVVVV

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_Es1mILD2J10/R_WRUC2yKxI/AAAAAAAAAb4/Fl3YjnthDnA/s320/Nark_Graffiti_Burner.jpg
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/090920071756261000732.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3175/2392909379_3c678698ba.jpg?v=0

[THAT JERZ KID]

Bump the 2 letter.
Plus the full throw
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg

stick to simps

[MARTYRaz]

how many times we gna bust this kids balls to change his name???

[THAT JERZ KID]

how many times we gna bust this kids balls to change his name???

till he changes it

[THAT JERZ KID]

:)

[MARTYRaz]

lolz

[weakfingers]

weakfingers-can you give me crits so i can progress?

I would say personally start super simple and go from there. Thats how i developed my throw but its different for everyone...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9141.jpg

[skull-e]

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture158.jpg

ynotse

edit*

hope you guys can see it, if not:

http://i391.photobucket.com/albums/oo359/dopeyman/Picture158.jpg

[StayHyE]

how many times we gna bust this kids balls to change his name???


till he changes it

honestly who gives a fucken shit its not like the kids from jerz


if you got a hard on for having people change their names why dont you try the lookie lookie thread and have this guy change his name since there is a ruger in LA...

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/6774/ruger5.jpg

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/107/309939233_209c26cc73.jpg?v=0
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/218/478755105_be7575ca16.jpg?v=0
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/99/364164710_0cfaef3511.jpg?v=0

[MARTYRaz]

^^this guy e thuggin..lolz...

i couldnt give a shit who writes what..as long as there aint 2 names in the same state...and where that nark is looks like jerz to me with the wooded backround and all...so go FUCK UR MOTHERS TITS!

[~Star~]

since you seem to be name experts, anyone know of a EFOF anywhere?

[MARTYRaz]

if u aint seen it use it

[StayHyE]

^^this guy e thuggin..lolz...

i couldnt give a shit who writes what..as long as there aint 2 names in the same state...and where that nark is looks like jerz to me with the wooded backround and all...so go FUCK UR MOTHERS TITS!

how is that e-thugging you fucken lop

[mindtrix350]

Crits?
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/throw3.jpg
tear- I think you should try and mess around with it more, not really feeling it.
Juicee- Looks good, I like the S.
Marke- I think you should do the C, A and E without the notches.
Zarb- Yellow throwie looks good.
BBV- Dope as always

[BigBlueViolence]

You throw looks nice man,
but it looks like it says Spapr to me.

[mindtrix350]

You throw looks nice man,
but it looks like it says Spapr to me.

Alright, thanks, I'll make the e more distinct.

[skull-e]

I don't like pronouncing seaer

[mindtrix350]

I don't like pronouncing seaer

Aha, how are you pronouncing it?

[LeaksOne]

Aha, how are you pronouncing it?

im guessin cee-er or say-er

[mindtrix350]

im guessin cee-er or say-er

After looking at it, I figured people would pronounce it like that. I pronounce it more like sear (to burn, scorch, etc.)

[LeaksOne]

oh ok so cee-er was right. gotcha

600th post!!

[skull-e]

I'm pronouncing it syur

[hpir]

mindtrix350- i like your last throw the best
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kEm1.jpg
critz?

heres somthing for my boy colz
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/scel1.jpg

[mindtrix350]

I think you should play around with the K and M a little bit more. Whatever pops in your head draw it down. To be honest, I don't really like the right side of the M.

I'm pronouncing it syur

Oh, I can see why you wouldn't like pronouncing it then.

[EGO31]

it says tear, and the t looks like a dick.


thank you, it does too.
Yeah, T looks like a dick, stupid add on for the A, R is just plain boring, man. Keep sketching, bite other writers letters, then change them around a bit.

[colz]

kem-lookin good
mindtrix-nice but you can change up the A and E's a bit

thanks guys for the help, i thought of a new way to write it, not my best shadowing. Crits???
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/fixedupscel.jpg

[hpir]

ya colz getting ther, keep practising

[skull-e]

getting better?

hurhurhur, you aren't his dad, you don't have to tell him hes doing good even tho its horrible.

colz, keep drawing, stretch your letters a bit more and practise a dropshadow, its like the exact same letter but under it moved over a bit.

[hpir]

actualy hes my brother so fuck off

[StayHyE]

actualy hes my brother so fuck off

nobody likes faggots, bottom line, dont be a faggot, faggot.

[hpir]

my bad about the fuck off part, got alittle to mad

[weakfingers]

kem-lookin good
mindtrix-nice but you can change up the A and E's a bit

thanks guys for the help, i thought of a new way to write it, not my best shadowing. Crits???
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/fixedupscel.jpg

Seriously, You dident think of a new way to write it, Heres the past 4 youve drawn form your photobucket... aside form VERY minor changes nothing is new. Sorry if I'm sounding mean or shit but you come here asking for crits and to get help but it seems your posting the same shit over and over without taking our advice... PROOF
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/critz.jpg


oh and...

actualy hes my brother so fuck off
Man... you don't need to say good job online why dont you just open your bedroom door and yell it or even better tell him at the dinner table...

[mindtrix350]

Man... you don't need to say good job online why dont you just open your bedroom door and yell it or even better tell him at the dinner table...
lol.

I agree though, even when I was lurking, I didn't see much of a difference.

[idk401]

quick throwie on sum book
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222212.jpg

[Heartless]

quick throwie on sum book
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222212.jpg

pretty good

[idk401]

yupp thankz man =D

[Marke]

idk- I'd fix the top of the E, I don't like how the top of the E meets the straight middle edge

Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw015.jpg?t=1246676670

[proNYNJA]

whuts with all the 2 letter throwies?

it looks more lika bomb then a throwie to me.

[Zarb]

What?

[proNYNJA]

i mean i seen alotta people on here only doing a throwie with 2 letters and im wondering what happen to the regualr throwies with all the letters in ur name.

[Marke]

I draw 2 letters just to try styles, if it looks like shit I don't waste time on the whole throw. But what did you think of the 2 letter?

[Wallace]

no offense its terrible. you need to go to the extreme basics. its not even really a throwy

[Mr yarbles]

everything on this page is terrible
you're welcome.

also there's no difference betweeen a throw and a bomb.

[Oarsone-FFSC]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2640/3686698934_5dd292a65c_o.jpg

[idk401]

idk- I'd fix the top of the E, I don't like how the top of the E meets the straight middle edge

Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw015.jpg?t=1246676670

dats actually an I but its 2 crammed to differ. and u got qiute a problem there ur self man.

[CrustOner]

heres somthing for my boy colz
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/scel1.jpg
haha you kids are funny.. brothers... he stole your wack letters...

ANYWAY. http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0704090951.jpg
DEPENDS is my slap name. Mainly a deterrent for my parents.

I don't see anything even halfway decent on this page, except for Oars' sick slap combo. The only advice I can give everyone is to practice changing your letters, but in a good way. and don't post it if you don't like it.

[StayHyE]

idk- I'd fix the top of the E, I don't like how the top of the E meets the straight middle edge

Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw015.jpg?t=1246676670

what the fuck are you doing....?








goin for the page save hopefully this would help a few people

http://i44.tinypic.com/15d3tec.jpg

:}

[CrustOner]

haha you kids are funny.. brothers... he stole your wack letters...

ANYWAY. http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e308/sk8ing_is_not_a_crime7/0704090951.jpg
DEPENDS is my slap name. Mainly a deterrent for my parents.

I don't see anything even halfway decent on this page, except for Oars' sick slap combo. The only advice I can give everyone is to practice changing your letters, but in a good way. and don't post it if you don't like it.

Bottom page bump.

[Marke]

what the fuck are you doing....?
Crack

[Spraycan Stories]

Some bombs, i like them.
Its rare for me to like any of my shit.
http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq113/bizzybets/Image031.jpg
http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq113/bizzybets/Image030.jpg

[EGO31]

Dear stayhye.
Your B is un recognisable, your c looks like a g. P is fucking awful, like seriously, I wouldn't even recognise that as a letter if it wasn't for the alphabet, same for your y.
Everything else is dope as though.

Spraycan. Tope one is tight, dude.

[StayHyE]

kinda ran out of room had to smush the y, but i got nothing for the p lol ill work on it

[Juicee]

Some bombs, i like them.
Its rare for me to like any of my shit.
http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq113/bizzybets/Image031.jpg
http://i439.photobucket.com/albums/qq113/bizzybets/Image030.jpg

not really likin the 's' on the top one but the bottom one is fresh

[Spraycan Stories]

Thats an E on the top one.

[EGO31]

Stayhye. Check cope 2. That is a throwie of the mot fantastic and steeziest kind.

[StayHyE]

not a fan of his work

[StayHyE]

i just think he's overrated

been a fan of tkid 170 though he didnt have many throws

[weakfingers]

Bets-I dont liek the E on the two letter but I really like the S on the second picture.




Some of my shitty wacky new shit...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9179.jpg

[Oarsone-FFSC]

yeah but cope is a king. he is over rated but back in the day he killed it. gotta give him that.

[Juicee]

Thats an E on the top one.

the first letter??

[WRAK]

i just think he's overrated

been a fan of tkid 170 though he didnt have many throws

yeah tkid was tight, the few throws you see are cool, real unique.

/EDIT/
i'll post some up here in a little bit for people to tear to pieces haha.

[-Dank-DK-]

people in tampa hit me up just moved here and i want to tag it up

and i want to know where the fuckin spots r down here

[DieHippie]

http://photos-g.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs174.snc1/6536_1118617299964_1662974582_269830_145543_n.jpg
sneak .

[hpir]

diehippie-i like it maybe make yr s alittle less into your k,so seperate it and make it bigger
weakfingers- iliked yr mor basic style better,not into the arrows for holes
spraycan stories-bottom one is best.
crustoner-your names origional i like that lookin good
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/graff002.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/graff001.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/graff005.jpg

[Spraycan Stories]

the first letter??

The top one says BE the bottom one is Bets
Does that help?

[weakfingers]

people in tampa hit me up just moved here and i want to tag it up

and i want to know where the fuckin spots r down here

Tag it up???? This is the throw thread and I hate it when i go to a new place or in my area and someone only has tags and nothing else, Man, looking for writing partners on the internet is pretty risky too.

[Juicee]

The top one says BE the bottom one is Bets
Does that help?

i figured out what the bottom one said
In that case the 'B' on the top one is horrible lol... use the 'b' you did for the bottom one

[JustChillin]

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0706091636.jpg

[hardwares]

chillin - in my style i would lose the gaps and holes in and inbetween the letters, and try having one line seperate the bars instead of two (make sense?)

just sketch sketch sketch until it looks good.

[JustChillin]

Yea i get what your saying just not about the one line separating the bars?

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i30.tinypic.com/14kb7r7.jpg

[hardwares]

thank you blue.

[JustChillin]

is this what you mean?http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0706091805.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

yeah, don't curve the lines in your N and shit though, man.
that shit looks goofy.
I would seriously consider a name change too, but that's just me.

[JustChillin]

Maniac is my name man and Il write it till I die.

[BigBlueViolence]

How old are you dude?

[JustChillin]

16

[PYT!TLC!]

My throwies are pretty toy and probably biting off a lot of people, so please crit. :p
(starve)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8680/dsc03751gsy.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/3102/dsc03755ydi.jpg

maniac - i think the 'i' should be in more proportion with your other letters.
kem - i'm really digging the throwie on paper. nice and clean.
sneak - i think you should lose the money signs. otherwise, it's aight.

[WRAK]

Maniac is my name man and Il write it till I die.

Hah, well thats certainly one way to go about it.
I haven't really been happy with any of the names i've written. Even the one I write now. Just waitin to see some word somewhere that strikes me. until then...fuck it, it's good letter practice.\


OH and starve - I'm diggin the drips, looks real precise from what I can see, just work on letter form.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image533.jpg

idk even know why i posted this^^ caz i'm trying to think of a different name caz i can't get the z and the s to flow very well...anyway, my i write bacs now (don't ask how i thought of it...caz truthfully i don't even know, just kinda popped in my mind)

http://bikealbany.com/i/images/image540.jpg

Starve: I think u should add a small line in the a and the r for the holes of them...just a small line

maniac: same as what starve said to u

[BigBlueViolence]

fuck man.

Starve- NOTHING about those drips are dope.
The only thing that should ever drip is a marker.
Your S looks like half of a snowman, and what's up with the gigantic exclamation point?

Bacs- don't do that thing with the top of your B A and S.
I would go with the 1 line thing that was said earlier, too.

[WRAK]

fuck man.

Starve- NOTHING about those drips are dope.
The only thing that should ever drip is a marker.
Your S looks like half of a snowman, and what's up with the gigantic exclamation point?

Bacs- don't do that thing with the top of your B A and S.
I would go with the 1 line thing that was said earlier, too.

i meant the shape of the (theoretical..we all know thats not a marker) drips looked neat. maybe i liked the colors.
or maybe i'm blind. ha.

[BigBlueViolence]

That's what I'm saying.
Fake drips on anything are whack as fuck.
Real drips on anything except for a mop tag are whack as fuck.

[JustChillin]

What if someone who wasn't toy wrote "Toy" but really sick?

[WRAK]

That's what I'm saying.
Fake drips on anything are whack as fuck.
Real drips on anything except for a mop tag are whack as fuck.

well i agree with you on that ha.
shits super easy to get misconstrued depending on how it's typed.

[Shurik*n]

alright blue, so u mean something more like this?

http://bikealbany.com/i/images/image542.jpg

and here's my attempt at making it more bubbly. i couldn't think of a b that would really fit...suggestions?

http://bikealbany.com/i/images/image541.jpg

or make it shorter and plumper

http://bikealbany.com/i/images/image544.jpg

[WRAK]

http://i27.tinypic.com/25zqob6.jpg

[StayHyE]

lolol

[Oarsone-FFSC]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3431/3696362473_57cff92536_b.jpg

[hardwares]

http://i25.tinypic.com/ofsw9i.jpg
^return of the exchange

[Shurik*n]

ware: i feel like the holes for the a and r are a bit too big...maybe make them a bit smaller

[EGO31]

DOPE!
Shuriken is wrong. DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE oldschool steez!
Except for the dollar sign. That should never be used in a throwie.

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

mero comes to save the day.
http://i32.tinypic.com/juwm1g.jpg

[Oarsone-FFSC]

Ware yours look like your did it pretty quick

[Shurik*n]

i couldn't think of a b that would really fit...suggestions?

http://bikealbany.com/i/images/image544.jpg

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image551.jpg
^^yea, the c and the s are big...caz i accidentally did that. but still crits?

[Azul]

bacs try to make your letters more together like this
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/2798/jake006.jpg
still shit but you get what I'm saying?

[Azul]

I'm bored, does anyone wanna do an exchange?
heres my throw...
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/5371/jake003.jpg

[chalkwalker]

crits??
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2567/3698626983_fdddeb49c7.jpg

[Azul]

crits??
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2567/3698626983_fdddeb49c7.jpg

the B is wack and whats the second letter?
pretty original style tho

[CrustOner]

no it's not. the entire thing needs work, man.I like the S, but hate the lump on it, and the H is meh. the rest needs lots of work.

[chalkwalker]

thanks for the crits
after looking at it totally agree that a lot of work is needed
and the second letter is an R

[ShaolinNy]

Sup guys posted this last week but no help

Im working on a 1 letter S but every time i sketch it just never looks right


What would u guys suggest to make it look better?


http://i39.tinypic.com/14nmu00.jpg

Chalkwaker-As some 1 said B is wack but i like the style just fix the letters and make them looks like the letters they are
hardware-I like your style just looks sloppy
Mero-Looks great just make the 1st letter a little wider

[StayHyE]

drop that lame extension on the left side of the S, on the bottom part of the S bring it out farther to the left, those double loops on top looks like crap experiment with it....

[B.S. POLICE]

what the fuck to you know about throws?

the biggest s on the left is fine the shadow is missing on the top though

[StayHyE]

more then you know about getting pussy you lop

[B.S. POLICE]

hahahaha in your dreams motherfucker i get the girls you jack off to

[StayHyE]

keep dreaming....may be eventually it'll come true

[ShaolinNy]

Bump since i was lat on the page

http://i39.tinypic.com/14nmu00.jpg


Also were i live theres only 1 person with a one letter S and i think it looks great

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/0624200817245806092008233157stop.jpg

Only pic i got the small S on the bottom.Need to make my S look good like that just with my style





drop that lame extension on the left side of the S, on the bottom part of the S bring it out farther to the left, those double loops on top looks like crap experiment with it....

Well the loops kinda go with my full throwie and i wana use the same S





what the fuck to you know about throws?

the biggest s on the left is fine the shadow is missing on the top though


were do you mean missing?When i do a full throw i think my S looks great but when i do the one letter for some reason i aint feeling it that much.What can i add or do to make it better?What would u suggest

[TheMurderousMisterMero_]

more then you know about getting pussy you lop

snap gets he gina.believe it. why do you think we call him the snapper?







































....becuase he has this kickass turtle that all the ladies love.

[StayHyE]

i like turtles.

[.HATESONE.]

queer.

[B.S. POLICE]

them bitches love my turtlesss

[TaxThis]

hahaha im sure you do.\
why does this kid act likes hes a king?
i laugh when ever i see your stupid coments,
i guess its fags like u that keep this site alive tho.

[B.S. POLICE]

who me?



if your talking to me then you better step, i have the girls and the style to back up any game i spit on this site homie