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*NGONE*
07-16-2009, 06:18 PM
try like mani. u already got a feel for those letters and its alot shorter. also try and make ur letters bigger so it doesnt look as crunched together. Just work with the letters more

Queezy
07-16-2009, 06:50 PM
Did a 2 letter throwie on a billboard last night, it was wobbly as fuck haha. Couple cars honked for like 10 seconds at me while I was up there haha fun night.

JustChillin
07-16-2009, 11:02 PM
try like mani. u already got a feel for those letters and its alot shorter. also try and make ur letters bigger so it doesnt look as crunched together. Just work with the letters moreis Manik Good?

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
07-16-2009, 11:15 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/161ahih.jpg
the shadeing is fucked bc i had to d the outline like 5000 times bc the wall is concrete

wow i havent been in the toy forum in a loooong time...


swine is improving rapidly!
good work.
and i no wat u mean. tht material is very pourus

rewz
07-17-2009, 11:54 AM
SWINE MY ***** WELL SWINE I LOVE U AND U KNOW THAT AHAHAHA
time for some shit next to u gees ahahahahaha
http://i30.tinypic.com/qn0g35.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/11v5yqp.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/10r6yzb.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/30bfp52.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/2ecqlpi.jpg

rewz
07-17-2009, 12:04 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/349ezrp.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/23w9s1.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2zp2z52.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/35d2utd.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2cdeteb.jpg
http://i30.tinypic.com/2aag5dw.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/2e2q7ww.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2uxthuh.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2nu2ema.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/20f2l46.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/14vikcg.jpg

rewz
07-17-2009, 12:11 PM
is Manik Good?

well not really just fuck around with your letters do the alphabet and see what letters your good with like with me gees u suck with 2 es for peaiceing so i right gaes still sounds like gees i dont know why i right gees but w.e try like ment or something like good to hear just sounds good ut u also got to make it look good

Zarb
07-17-2009, 01:10 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0712091502.jpg
Aims- Put your letters closer together, dont make them seperate from eachother
Bump

CrustOner
07-17-2009, 02:12 PM
http://i28.tinypic.com/349ezrp.jpg


first thoughts, everyone: where have we seen this before..

rewz
07-17-2009, 02:40 PM
first thoughts, everyone: where have we seen this before..
u saying im biting or something?

rewz
07-17-2009, 02:40 PM
i know my shits bad

Slant One
07-17-2009, 03:45 PM
Any Crits I Still Think Im Kinda Toy-ish

AzikMania
07-17-2009, 03:48 PM
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9676/dsc00199t.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/i/dsc00199t.jpg/)

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/9676/dsc00199t.th.jpg (http://img504.imageshack.us/i/dsc00199t.jpg/)

Left overs

Slant One
07-17-2009, 04:00 PM
Yo What Did You Hit Up? It Looks Like The Inside Of A Box Truck

rewz
07-17-2009, 04:32 PM
Any Crits I Still Think Im Kinda Toy-ish
to help u dont wright one just put slant the s and the n could use some work and try not to leave space try to make everything eaven

dr.Doom
07-17-2009, 05:15 PM
im brand new to graffiti..i did my first bomb today, so if anybody could give me any advice whatsoever i would really appreciate it... Keep in mind im shit but im new.

klic
07-17-2009, 05:40 PM
first thoughts, everyone: Where have we seen this before..

ohsnap!

dr.Doom
07-17-2009, 05:56 PM
what

B.S. POLICE
07-17-2009, 06:09 PM
lol this ones actually my personal favorite

http://i31.tinypic.com/mab8fm.jpg

Slant One
07-17-2009, 06:35 PM
to help u dont wright one just put slant the s and the n could use some work and try not to leave space try to make everything eaven

See Im Outta Ideas On the S I Have Changed It So Many Times

KASE2
07-17-2009, 06:38 PM
jus keep fuckin wit it, u'll get it done, eray1 goes through hella styles b4 getn there shit, try fuckin wit a stamp 2, shorter and easier but equally as effective as a bomb.

Slant One
07-17-2009, 07:21 PM
Right Right But See Everytime I Change Somethin Bout My Tag It Makes The Rest Of It Look Funny But Fuck It I Guess Try Anyway

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-17-2009, 09:46 PM
lol this ones actually my personal favorite

http://i31.tinypic.com/mab8fm.jpg

no shouts for romero? :(

medacog1
07-17-2009, 10:15 PM
http://i27.tinypic.com/s3q3cn.jpg
( i like two letters)...
*And i know its the most unoriginal thing ever

B.S. POLICE
07-17-2009, 10:43 PM
no shouts for romero? :(

its not mine.....

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-17-2009, 10:58 PM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooh.

MARTYRaz
07-17-2009, 11:09 PM
new throws..which one should i work on to use on da streets??
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922541.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922561.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922521.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922511.jpg
mega..is that a t or a s??..if an s make more like an s..

B.S. POLICE
07-17-2009, 11:10 PM
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooh.


http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5331/screencapture21.png

dr.Doom
07-17-2009, 11:55 PM
Can somebody please critique this
THANKS
i need it, im new to tagging

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10871.jpg?t=1247890026

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10873.jpg?t=1247890001

MARTYRaz
07-18-2009, 12:29 AM
go to new to graff thread..hit the books for a while then come back with some shit u learned..graff isnt handed to u..u need to study up and then start ur drawing..progression is key..

weakfingers
07-18-2009, 12:30 AM
Holy fuck! That shits hot fire! 905 represent!
Doom- keep it on paper for a long time try to get more round and cleeen



havent drawn a throw is a while so my lazy ass did this. crit away!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture51.jpg

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 02:38 AM
new throws..which one should i work on to use on da streets??
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922541.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922561.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922521.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07170922511.jpg
mega..is that a t or a s??..if an s make more like an s..

"da streets" funny kid haha
http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k164/MetalCarlos/thug_life.jpg

aaaannnnyyyways. none of these are street worthy. stick to the books for a while

DeeSquared
07-18-2009, 03:21 AM
yo im from "da streets"

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 03:45 AM
you kno its one thing to post whore but when your doin it an tryin to be funny and your not you should give up.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 03:47 AM
Can somebody please critique this
THANKS
i need it, im new to tagging

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10871.jpg?t=1247890026



first id drop those halo's and crosses in the middle of your letters.it doesnt do your letters any justice and on top of that their too big for the letters
which brings me to my next point.go bigger.no ones gonna even give your shit a second glance if its all small like that...im looking at your letters.
either your paint is 90% water or your holding the can WAAAAY to close to the wall and for way to long.dont idle when your on the wall
thats how you get drips and noone likes the drips.you dont need to put the tip that close.the M doesnt match the rest of the letters at all.
id go simpler like a throw is supposed to be.that m looks like it has bars.and throws dont have bars..the next and most important thing is to
practice practice practice.preferably in your book for a while.no reason to waste paint.save it up for when you can actually use it.and one thing
to remember is that no one gets good over night.its gonna take time.years probably before your even half way decent.dont trip it happens to
the bes tof us.keep on pushin.dont give up.practice your throw and dont be scared to experiment.hope you progress quick.

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 03:50 AM
thanks for coverin doom for me mero.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 03:52 AM
word.i feel like helping him out.he hasnt said anything stupid for me to want to troll his ass lol.







yet...

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 04:20 AM
haha thanks guys...heres something i just worked in in my book..i think ima change my tag too because doom doenst flow too well i changed it to STP..

heres a look on paper..any suggestions to how i could make it flow better or anything at al dont hold back :P

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Tags/SDC10878.jpg?t=1247905580

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:23 AM
you shouldnt write random letter like that cuz people will mistake it for a crew. try step or somethin like that

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 04:37 AM
ok will do...what about the look of the letters though..any tips?
and also when your paining do you use your arm or wrist more? I do it like im writing but i dont know if thats right..

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 05:10 AM
with your letters try like keyboard letters or a style you like an jus practice practice practice. and when painting you should use your arm more depending on how big whatever your painting is. wrist are more for details and flare tags

EP!K
07-18-2009, 05:24 AM
Well this is my first time trying any type of graffiti... The only markers I had available were yellow orange and red so I just went with yellow and red... If I had a wider selection the colors probably would have been a little different but I didn't :\ Well anyways here it is tear me apart please give tips though... Sorry my phone takes horrible pics and that is the only thing available to me for pictures...

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/3141/0717092147a.jpg

Alone_NC
07-18-2009, 05:42 AM
Well this is my first time trying any type of graffiti... The only markers I had available were yellow orange and red so I just went with yellow and red... If I had a wider selection the colors probably would have been a little different but I didn't :\ Well anyways here it is tear me apart please give tips though... Sorry my phone takes horrible pics and that is the only thing available to me for pictures...

http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/3141/0717092147a.jpg

I'm a toy as well, but I just thought I'd say that I thought the PI was an A with how they're so much closer than the other letters. So.. That's my two cents.. have them more evenly spaced apart or something.

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 05:50 AM
another thing. this is the throwie thread no tags but dont two tone your tags like that make your letters closer lose the quotes for now make your e go the right way extend the bottom left leg of your k dont make your i upside down and change your p. oh yea dont do edgy letters

get a grip!
07-18-2009, 07:25 AM
---

after party boredom gotta stay awake till work

NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED

AzikMania
07-18-2009, 08:07 AM
Yo What Did You Hit Up? It Looks Like The Inside Of A Box Truck
Actualy that was an abandoned shack

Zarb
07-18-2009, 10:13 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0718090945.jpg
Get a grip- I like that its a pretty cool style, I would say make the E alittle less fat

VaNdAL xBA!x
07-18-2009, 11:08 AM
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7417/gesusthrowx.jpg

after party boredom gotta stay awake till work

NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED

keep fuckin round with that n u might get somethin nice with it
the bottom half of your S's is lackin as well as the U

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 11:56 AM
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7417/gesusthrowx.jpg

after party boredom gotta stay awake till work

NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED




thats sick
damn i feel like such a nub

iselldope
07-18-2009, 12:09 PM
doom: i'l make an throw on ms paint for ya,so you know what we're saying

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 12:11 PM
i know what your talking about..i just cant draw that well for beans...
...yet
keep in mind im new lol

iselldope
07-18-2009, 12:18 PM
ok,just stay on bombingscience,when i started i dodn't go to bs and i was so shit,i learned very much from bs and the crits

ReallyTrustFullStrangers
07-18-2009, 12:21 PM
i know my shits bad

theres a diffrence of biting and just being bad.

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 12:34 PM
snap

klic
07-18-2009, 12:39 PM
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7417/gesusthrowx.jpg

after party boredom gotta stay awake till work

NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED

nah this guy sucks, all he did was bite the gezra faggot off youtube

zarb - looks to me like you completely stole earn's style

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 12:56 PM
thats probably why he said
"
NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED"

klic
07-18-2009, 01:06 PM
thats probably why he said
"
NOT MY NAME JUST GOT BORED"

i dont see how thats relevant to what i said. that doesnt change the fact that he bit someone and didnt give credit

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 01:11 PM
well at least he said that it wasn't his.. :\

klic
07-18-2009, 01:12 PM
he did not say that lol, all he said is thats not what he writes

CrustOner
07-18-2009, 02:48 PM
Zarb, get the fuck out.

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 03:28 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0718090945.jpg
Get a grip- I like that its a pretty cool style, I would say make the E alittle less fat

you must look up to bigblue or somethin. everything you do looks like his

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z78/aristolochioide/100_1432.jpg
THIS PICTURE IS NONE OF MY WORK THIS BELONGS TO BIGBLUEVIOLENCE AKA EARN
ladies and gentleman pay attention to earns e on his throwie and his tags. look familiar???
zarb you either need to gtfo or change your whole style. at least bite someone from another website so its not so obvious.

klic
07-18-2009, 03:29 PM
he even identically bit his handstyle lol

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 03:43 PM
maybe he thinks we wont notice haha. ive seen blue tell him to stop bitin his shit. maybe he doesnt kno how to read

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 03:43 PM
Can somebody please critique this
THANKS
i need it, im new to tagging

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10871.jpg?t=1247890026

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10873.jpg?t=1247890001



Leaks I took your advice and changed to step...i went out today and finished the paint i had left, so that explains the lack of colours. I think it looks a lot better comp[ared to my other throw, though..

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10882.jpg?t=1247946161

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 03:46 PM
that is better but your e and t are styled like simps and your s and p are like throwies. change your e and s up a bit and do a capital t and work on your p.

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 03:53 PM
on the zarb bigblue controversy.he more than likely bit that shit but id also like to point out that that style,particularly the handstyle is pretty generic even i rock that style of writes from time to time.the E only letter of his that is really original.also earns n.that shit to...but when you add up the e looking so similar and the handstyle matching yeah he probably bit that shit.whatever thooo...

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:00 PM
on the zarb bigblue controversy.he more than likely bit that shit but id also like to point out that that style,particularly the handstyle is pretty generic even i rock that style of writes from time to time.the E only letter of his that is really original.also earns n.that shit to...but when you add up the e looking so similar and the handstyle matching yeah he probably bit that shit.whatever thooo...

yea i knew someone was guna say that. i agree its pretty generic but the back story to all this is they did an exchange with zarbs old name and zarb bit the letters on the next thing he posted then he changed his name to eark and stole the k blue did for him in an exchange so hes all about bitin blue. plus like i said i even saw blue callin his bite out

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 04:07 PM
word i remember that shit too haha.

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 04:10 PM
yeah i remember him callin him out on that, i donno exchanges are weird like that, i remember when i was just starting to get throws down and did one exchange with baze, and his shit was just like yeah, i get it! so i asked him if i could build off that and well the rest was history. yeah i got my style from baze and i have no problem ever admitting that shit, mad respect

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:14 PM
thats the respectable thing to do bs. zarb just takes the shit without askin an calls it his. buildin off a style and bitin are two different things.

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 04:18 PM
its a conflict with me, like id love to help kids out and have them progress with my help but at the same time i hate to see them bite. but at the end of it all i guess you just gotta stay humble and take the bites as a sign of how far you come and how heads look up to your style and want their shit to be like that.

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:23 PM
true. i guess blue should be honored. i dont understand why he cant just ask blue to help him out ive seen him give crits an hes pretty damn good at it

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 04:28 PM
i donno man graff is a very touchy world, theres beef everywhere. like ive learned to laugh at the bites i see on here but its a very different story if i catch a bite on on the street. like bigblue should be honored but at the same time it was him taht sweated and pushed to get that ish and then some toy just took it, like thats not right. toys should admit to who helped them get on their feet, theres no shame in that everyone should have a mentor not only for ish but for everything that has to do with graffiti like dealing with cops, finding spots and all the way down to what your bring with you and how to dress. toys dont know that shit and the sad part is most of them like me, will only learn those things once they get caught



which reminds me sizirup you wanted help on your s i cleared up my pm though and lost your sketch so im having ahard time remembering how yours went hit me up ill help you out

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 04:32 PM
word.i think cats rely on this site to much instead of going out there and learning it for themselves.most kids nowadays want shit handed to them.they want to be dope overnight and it takes alot of time and dedication to get anywhere...in anything in life really.fuck im bored.

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:35 PM
yea and thats the thing i really respect blue that why im callin out this bite like all the other shit i just laugh at like you said an watch other people go at it but he should at least shout out blue or somethin.show some form of respect and thats why i said he should just ask blue for advice or tips so when there shit looks alike we'll know the reason is cuz blue mentored him

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 04:39 PM
i know but at the same time i cant blame them, i came to thi site a complete arrows everywhere thinking its dope toy. and this site alone made my ish the way its at today, through critts and battles. i think that any of these kids can get dope if they just listen to the critts and push themselves trough battles, its a proven stategy take it from me once you get it (and by get it i mean get bars and general leter structure in both pieces and throws down) the sky really is the limit, its the amount of dedication your willing to put in thats gonna determine how nasty you are. shit i remember there was aperiod of about 6 months that i did nothing but throws all day every day, and guess what it fucking helps but you gotta realize that throws pieces and tags are each a skill of its own and you have to dedicate time to each for all of them to get nasty


except tags... i donnno mine have been getting better for no reason latelly. but in graff theres a point when your toy and you do shit ath looks good to you even though it sucks, tahts cause you dont know the rules you dont know what good is. then you learn the bars and the even swoops of throws and flow and it becomes so simple, like you can look at your own work and know where you fucked up

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:47 PM
oh i know what you mean. when i came here i actually made my lower case letters smaller then my L. this site can be helpful through all the bullshit. i been tryin to help some of the new cats out and theyve been workin hard. i got way better from bs especially since only one of my friends paint. but as for the zarb bigblue thing i guess blue will have to handle that.

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 04:53 PM
blues a big boy he can handle his own shit. but like every single battle i do theres always some kids that pm me asking to do their name, and taht shits ridicilous like *****s you can see what something straight looks like, learn from it dont ask for hand outs cause honestly i would love to help out every kid on this site but i have shit to do, i dont understand why kids cant learn by example anymore

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 04:56 PM
Dicks everywhere!

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 04:58 PM
too lazy. like mero said they wana be fresh over night. no one wants to work for raw styles anymore. they may want to build off your style but then there would be alot of little snaps postin. they just dont understand how much work it takes. it took me a year just to get my shit where its at now and i still got alot to learn

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 05:00 PM
kids just dont understand that it takes work. like ive been at this since 07 and i still cant get intot he big boy thread, and that shit frusturates me but at the same time its motivation to push myself to get better.


and mero, well meros just a dick lol
btw mero wtf is my exchange you lazy broke bastard

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 05:04 PM
im gonna do you a piece because i suck so hard at p's...i mean i can do you a throw..and i did but i just dont like it.i got a real generic throw style haha.whatevs tho...ill post that shit sometime.

B.S. POLICE
07-18-2009, 05:05 PM
you fuckin fail, like a bush fail....or that karate guy with nunchucks

TheMurderousMisterMero_
07-18-2009, 05:10 PM
or like you fail at handstyles....oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh burn!!!!








jkjkjkjkjujjkjkjjkjkjkjkjkjkjk

dr.Doom
07-18-2009, 05:11 PM
Leaks I took your advice and changed to step...i went out today and finished the paint i had left, so that explains the lack of colours. I think it looks a lot better comp[ared to my other throw, though..

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10882.jpg?t=1247946161


only quoting to see progress...
i took your advice and changed it up, made the T capital and put more flare on the letters.

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10886.jpg?t=1247951428

LeaksOne
07-18-2009, 06:18 PM
dont worry bout 3d and drop shadow. change your e and change your p. make your t bigger and lose the things the top of the letters

hpir
07-18-2009, 08:09 PM
Im just gonna say ive seen cats rock E's that are really similiar to the one zarb used, its not really an original E so even if he saw it from big blue hes probably seen it before also which is why he was using it. And the handstyle is SO fucking generic and its not like he said "yo diz shit is my original hand" He probably was just fucking around with handstlyes, he never asked for crits of it...Sorry if it seems im standing up for zarb haha cause I know ive seen him bite shit in the past but I feel like lately people have been saying hes biting shit that is just so damn generic that it shouldnt even be considered a bite.
Drunken Rant Over.

MARTYRaz
07-18-2009, 11:04 PM
so ima work on this one...since nobody gave me crits i choose for myself...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07180922511.jpg
looks better to me already..this thread sucks now..dont nobody give crits nemore just bullshit about whos rippin whos asshole open with "thier" style...in my opinion the only origanal shit i see in this thread is o snap and rays...so continue to bullshit and not put in work and ima keep bombin regardless...doom/step..find ur own name to write..not what these fucks tell u to write cuz how origanal r u if u write wat other KIDS tell u to write??? just keep it up..i see potential..

get a grip!
07-18-2009, 11:34 PM
nah this guy sucks, all he did was bite the gezra faggot off youtube

sorry but been at work all day then working on my car. i've never heard of gezra, but ill look him up on youtube to see this "bite" i was just fucking around last night. its not my steez and it's not my name. so quit being retarded.

rewz
07-19-2009, 10:27 AM
so ima work on this one...since nobody gave me crits i choose for myself...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/07180922511.jpg
looks better to me already..this thread sucks now..dont nobody give crits nemore just bullshit about whos rippin whos asshole open with "thier" style...in my opinion the only origanal shit i see in this thread is o snap and rays...so continue to bullshit and not put in work and ima keep bombin regardless...doom/step..find ur own name to write..not what these fucks tell u to write cuz how origanal r u if u write wat other KIDS tell u to write??? just keep it up..i see potential..
dont try do get a complicated throw just make it simple the force field is good
shading is bad work on that shit

rewz
07-19-2009, 10:31 AM
only quoting to see progress...
i took your advice and changed it up, made the T capital and put more flare on the letters.

http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10886.jpg?t=1247951428

Ugly dont have really anything to say just ugly

LeaksOne
07-19-2009, 02:46 PM
Im just gonna say ive seen cats rock E's that are really similiar to the one zarb used, its not really an original E so even if he saw it from big blue hes probably seen it before also which is why he was using it. And the handstyle is SO fucking generic and its not like he said "yo diz shit is my original hand" He probably was just fucking around with handstlyes, he never asked for crits of it...Sorry if it seems im standing up for zarb haha cause I know ive seen him bite shit in the past but I feel like lately people have been saying hes biting shit that is just so damn generic that it shouldnt even be considered a bite.
Drunken Rant Over.

listen you fucktard nobody said anything about the E im talkin about the entire style he steals letters from exchanges he does which shouldnt happen without permission

hpir
07-19-2009, 03:29 PM
^^^^^ first of all, the first post of this whole zarb thing you were complaining about his e in the throwie, granted his handstyle on his e was most likely bitin maybe maybe not cause in my town i see shit like that getting tossed around everywere and alot of people put shit up to me looks like big blues style. and i did see the first exchange blue gave zarb and he did change his letters up and chill if he wants to work new styles in

hpir
07-19-2009, 03:40 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE009.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE006.jpg
crits?

SrsBizns
07-19-2009, 04:07 PM
the E in the second one is not defined enough

STFUPPERCUT
07-19-2009, 04:11 PM
http://i602.photobucket.com/albums/tt103/STP1993/Throws/SDC10882.jpg?t=1247946161



dope soem keenur tags

dropt-one
07-19-2009, 05:04 PM
First of all I know im only a toy but....
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k157/s1l3nt_03/0719091657.jpg
i know its garbage but any ideas where to go with this?

LeaksOne
07-19-2009, 06:37 PM
make all your letters the same size and try capital letters.

hpir - the e was the first argument then i remembered he bites almost everything blue does. blue calls him out on his bites. convo dropped we went over this yesterday no reason to keep talkin about it.

dropt-one
07-19-2009, 07:05 PM
thanx for the ideas leaks.... so more like this then?

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k157/s1l3nt_03/0719091902.jpg

LeaksOne
07-19-2009, 07:13 PM
thats better. try fattening the bottom of your T and straighten it out and maybe fatten you P. im not good with p's myself. make your o round and add i lil style to your D and R

dropt-one
07-19-2009, 07:22 PM
well i quick came up with this:

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k157/s1l3nt_03/0719091920.jpg

after lookin at it i can see the R is gonna need some fattening up

LeaksOne
07-19-2009, 07:53 PM
it is and look around for inspirations on your letters

Zarb
07-19-2009, 09:08 PM
Ok I just got back. Uhhhhh, I used a generic E and then my R looks like BigBlues style? Thats biting nowadays? Yeah I am influenced by Big Blues style, I think hes pretty sick. But using a generic E that he also used is not biting, but then again what the fuck do I know, I AM a toy. I think this is mostly coming from where I totally bit his tag awhile ago, yeah I did but thats in the fucking past I didn't bite this fucking time and Im really starting to get pissed off...I think I need to take a break from the fucking toy forum for a little bit and come back in a month or two. Peace.

EST2007
07-19-2009, 09:21 PM
I think I need to take a break from the fucking toy forum for a little bit and come back in a month or never. Peace.

fixed. dude, dont get pissed, why waste ur energy? if ur gonna write, fucking do it and dont give a shit what others think.

BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:09 PM
I fell like a fucking celebrity, *****!

The whole Zarb shit kind of annoys me, yeah.

Like, I know my shit's pretty generic, it ain't news to me and I don't really give a fuck.

If dude came onto the forum doing some shit just like me to begin with, it'd be different.

But the fact that dude was just like "hey, want to exchange?" one day, then starts
using the same damn shit I did is annoying.

But, what can I do? it's the fuckin' internets.

I can't ask him to battle me, we'll just end up with identical entries.

So fuck it, let dude jock. He knows he's doing it, and hopefully he knows his shit won't really matter to himself or anyone until he rocks his own style.

That's all I gotta say on this shit,
I'll post some stuff when I get on my own computer,
I'm on a laptop right now.

JackieChanRollin
07-19-2009, 10:16 PM
Yeah, I mean throw letters are usually pretty damn generic now a days.
But they did look too identical.
Change your style Zarb, thats the only way youll gain any respect from the people on here.

BigBlueViolence
07-19-2009, 10:19 PM
Well, the way I see it, the placement of a throw is so much more important than it being mad original,
but I still think my throw has little tweaks in it that sort of give it it's own identity.

mindtrix350
07-19-2009, 11:53 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE009.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/KEMONE006.jpg
crits?

You should probably fatten the right leg of the K up.

Camer
07-20-2009, 01:18 AM
Dropt - Your new so all I have to say is just practice a lot
Kem - I don't like the "e" in the second one, the one in the first pic is better

Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw019.jpg

weakfingers
07-20-2009, 01:27 AM
dope soem keenur tags
... I hope thats a joke...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/keenthrow-1.jpg

BigBlueViolence
07-20-2009, 01:28 AM
Came- I really dislike that throw.
the extra line in the C, the sperm in the A, your M is crooked as shit,
and your E has a lip. Don't lift up your marker for every new line,
make the whole letter at once.

Kem, you are going in the right direction.
You can do all those letters in one or two strokes,
and the E and M are really nice in that first one.

LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 01:29 AM
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw019.jpg

why did you sketch that out? its suppose to be smooth. all your letters are different styles. try to get a consistent style goin for all the letters. and dont make the bottom of your c cover the top and take that thing out of your e

weakfingers
07-20-2009, 01:38 AM
Dr doom, Yeah, go more simple to keep things cleener. This is a shitty throw i drew up, i know you just changed your name but for myself i really like to see repition in shape in a throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture52.jpg

JackieChanRollin
07-20-2009, 01:55 AM
You have potential dude, but I recommend trying some new names. Thats gonna be a hard one to pull off. Unless you use Doom, or DR for short I guess? Just my thoughts, but you could put together some nice throws.

KtRL.
07-20-2009, 10:17 AM
dope soem keenur tags
hahaha keenur.:D

klic
07-20-2009, 06:42 PM
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrow14.jpg

weakfingers - not feelin your R, and your D's and O's look too similar. i know you dont write it so i guess it doesnt really matter haha

Mr yarbles
07-20-2009, 07:29 PM
... I hope thats a joke...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/keenthrow-1.jpg

Way to go post a shitty keen trying to defend him

slipyslipyslipymegeee
07-20-2009, 08:33 PM
... I hope thats a joke...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/keenthrow-1.jpg

keen... what happened on that fill in you should loose cans untill it is approved by a bombing science member
you are a fuckingdrod ***** DROID!
http://i26.tinypic.com/315lefk.jpg

weakfingers
07-20-2009, 10:02 PM
Way to go post a shitty keen trying to defend him
I wasent trying to defend keenur at all. That guys a joke.

LeaksOne
07-20-2009, 10:06 PM
again hot shit janek.

my weak shit again. tryin to change my r
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60027.jpg

Eon 1
07-20-2009, 10:10 PM
^^ I like the R on this one than the other..I think you should make a few tweaks on your G but thats just my opinion..

klic
07-20-2009, 10:12 PM
looks really shaky grate, clean it up and it will look good, i like that R btw

Eon 1
07-20-2009, 10:13 PM
Ya I agree wit klic..

EST2007
07-20-2009, 10:32 PM
again hot shit janek.

my weak shit again. tryin to change my r
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60027.jpg

please fix up that G. G's can be wicked fun man

BigBlueViolence
07-20-2009, 10:40 PM
Leaks man,
I gotta be honest,
I like your lowercase letters a lot more.
These ones are all heavy on the left side.

KidReny!
07-21-2009, 01:02 AM
throw ups i did earlier
http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_00512.jpg

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/WebCam_20090721_00513.jpg

Grate- like ur R

LeaksOne
07-21-2009, 01:54 AM
looks really shaky grate, clean it up and it will look good, i like that R btw

its shaky cuz its done on cardboard


Leaks man,
I gotta be honest,
I like your lowercase letters a lot more.
These ones are all heavy on the left side.

i cant help it blue im left handed plus i couldnt put my hand down cuz the markers were wet.

overall im not to happy with this but it was all i had at the moment. i duno what i can do with my G. everything that looks good is from a famous writers shit

SrsBizns
07-21-2009, 05:24 AM
borrow sum ideas...

weakfingers
07-21-2009, 08:04 AM
Being left handed is no excuse, I'm left handed its just a matter of doing things diffrently aka working right to left.

KNS13
07-21-2009, 10:55 AM
crits?
http://i457.photobucket.com/albums/qq296/graffitiking13/scan0022-3.jpg

milk boxx
07-21-2009, 12:14 PM
janek - make your K bar that flops out as skinny as the A and N, it's a bit over weight.
keem- do it straight and make all your letters the same size. That K's a bit handicapped too.

LeaksOne
07-21-2009, 02:28 PM
Being left handed is no excuse, I'm left handed its just a matter of doing things diffrently aka working right to left.

it is when you cant put your hand all the way on the cardborad like i usually do. i would have smeared it and theres no way i can work right to left that would be the worst lookin sketch. when i draw throwies on paper they look better then that. ill post one later

hpir
07-21-2009, 02:32 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo35.jpg
Tryin to fatten up my k

klic
07-21-2009, 02:37 PM
haha i never realized how much it would suck to be left handed

LeaksOne
07-21-2009, 02:43 PM
haha i never realized how much it would suck to be left handed

hah naw it doesnt suck. only on that kind of thing. but you just have to do the outline then turn it upside down for everything else. only if your usin paint markers. some people dont have a problem but i write with my hand resting on the paper. but i have the advantage in fights and basketball

colz
07-21-2009, 04:03 PM
janek-i like your new throwie but your K looks a little like a N
Leaks-you can work on it but work on your G the most
reny-your progressing but work on your E a little
keem-work on your K and M and also try taking a better picture next time
kem-i like the new K but the bottom-right of the M seems out of place

got a nwe name. Clos, what do you guys think so far. Crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/closfillin.jpg

smooth_nuts
07-21-2009, 05:29 PM
janek your shit got mad dope since the last time i saw it!
kem-keep working with it
reny-in the first one,the toomer on your n seems random and doesnt really fit in

...havent posted in a while,havent done a throwup in a while haha,anyway
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2425/3742363725_84ea32084c.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/3743153636_0391e5920c.jpg

Gezra
07-21-2009, 06:46 PM
back in black
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezoner.jpg

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraaa.jpg
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gthth.jpg

rewz
07-21-2009, 07:54 PM
get rid of thous shitty add ons

slipyslipyslipymegeee
07-21-2009, 07:58 PM
get rid of your name gees
and im mailing you your bbook ina captan crunch box

weakfingers
07-21-2009, 09:45 PM
Gezra- I like the style except the stupid extentions on the G.
And theres another writer named Trik in Toronto and he kills it.
Just giving you a heads up about the name. (http://iloveletters.ca/BOMBS/images/Photos/_UD100208/trik_B7.jpg)




Not untill recently I've been sketching out all my throws before i drew them. I could do a throw clean and smooth on the wall with a can but when it came to paper I found it really hard to draw smooth and consistent proportions like without sketching the bomb out before. I think its because I'm left handed and cant see the letter I did before. Does anyother left handed writers have this problem?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF1690.jpg

Gezra
07-21-2009, 10:03 PM
Gezra- I like the style except the stupid extentions on the G.
And theres another writer named Trik in Toronto and he kills it.
Just giving you a heads up about the name. (http://iloveletters.ca/BOMBS/images/Photos/_UD100208/trik_B7.jpg)




Not untill recently I've been sketching out all my throws before i drew them. I could do a throw clean and smooth on the wall with a can but when it came to paper I found it really hard to draw smooth and consistent proportions like without sketching the bomb out before. I think its because I'm left handed and cant see the letter I did before. Does anyother left handed writers have this problem?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF1690.jpg
actually, Trik is in my crew (If your talking about the canadian one)
I know his little brother quite well, and thats how he joined.

Mr yarbles
07-21-2009, 10:05 PM
back in black
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezoner.jpg

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraaa.jpg
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gthth.jpg

Why don't you just leave dude seriously no one's going to respect your shit youtube fame and your shit youtube fucking videos stop biting seze's hand and get the fuck out.

weakfingers
07-21-2009, 10:14 PM
actually, Trik is in my crew (If your talking about the canadian one)
I know his little brother quite well, and thats how he joined.
Yeah, I'll have to take your word for it. If hes in your crew how come I never see any gezra bombs/tags in toronto. Trik is everywhere.

klic
07-21-2009, 10:58 PM
back in black
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezoner.jpg

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gezraaa.jpg
http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/gthth.jpg

lmao at him repping his legal online crew

faser
07-21-2009, 11:13 PM
all gez does is throwups
wtf

ShaolinNy
07-22-2009, 12:44 AM
Did this in summer school obviously i didnt rly take time one it and did it shiity but in general what do you guys think?

Crits plz
http://lh6.ggpht.com/_w8-v_aPBjTk/SmactUz2f6I/AAAAAAAAADo/2_Tq-jyGpco/s720/2009-07-22%2000.07.58.jpg


Squint-Not to sound like a dick but im rly not feelinf the throw i saw some of your thows in the past that i though were better

B.S. POLICE
07-22-2009, 12:46 AM
yo ima do your s in a min, im drinking right now.

luster
07-22-2009, 12:58 AM
new throw im playing with.. lines are really chopy and shit but fuck it.crits?
http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh161/hooooosander/P7141389.jpg
gezra: like been said lose the add ons , PLEASE!
sneak: the only thing im really not feeling is the A change that up, other then that its pretty good

LeaksOne
07-22-2009, 01:47 AM
all gez does is throwups
wtf

so does JA.....

CrustOner
07-22-2009, 02:41 AM
except JA gets up.

LeaksOne
07-22-2009, 02:46 AM
except JA gets up.

well duh but his complaint was that he only does throws. gezr is a joke. but some people dont do pieces.

JustChillin
07-22-2009, 03:39 AM
gezra: if your going to post something please try and take your time. Take the time to actually fill in your letters. scribbling across it and then writing to the side "shitty fill in" doesn't automatically make it ok. i still cant make out with the first letter is and like everyone keeps saying the extension on the R doesnt look good.

shaolin:I really like what your doing. I kind of wish you would loose the little hole/gaps in between your letters though. you do it in all your letters except the E. Also if it was me I would get rid of that little money sign cus it looks kind of cheesy.

i hope these were good enough crits :/

ShaolinNy
07-22-2009, 12:58 PM
shaolin:I really like what your doing. I kind of wish you would loose the little hole/gaps in between your letters though. you do it in all your letters except the E. Also if it was me I would get rid of that little money sign cus it looks kind of cheesy.

i hope these were good enough crits :/

Yeah good crits but not sure if i could take away the holes since that how i draw them...ill see how it looks without them though


yo ima do your s in a min, im drinking right now.

Great thanks!!!

colz
07-22-2009, 01:15 PM
gezra-loose all the add ons and try to do the fill in's better
sneak-i like it but loose the money sign and the holes in most the letters
luster-pretty good start, continue playing around with it

another throwie. Crits?
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/niceclos.jpg

milk boxx
07-22-2009, 01:21 PM
Clos- keep all your letters the same size and don't make them get bigger as it goes on.

CrustOner
07-22-2009, 01:37 PM
try the word Clops. like cyclops. clos is kinda boring.

colz
07-22-2009, 01:38 PM
Clos- keep all your letters the same size and don't make them get bigger as it goes on.
ya i know what you mean, that happens to me alot

colz
07-22-2009, 01:52 PM
took Crust0ner's idea, tryed doing clops, C and L are a little smaller then the O, P, and S. what do you guys think i should do. Crits??http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/clops.jpg

JustChillin
07-22-2009, 02:04 PM
i can tell when you go to form a new letter you start from the top and you kind of overlap each word making each letter get bigger and bigger. Start lower. and also your S at the bottom looks disporportioned compared to the top.

milk boxx
07-22-2009, 02:10 PM
took Crust0ner's idea, tryed doing clops, C and L are a little smaller then the O, P, and S. what do you guys think i should do. Crits??http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/clops.jpg


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/clops.jpg

JustChillin
07-22-2009, 02:16 PM
exactly ^^^

Eon 1
07-22-2009, 04:29 PM
I wrote JNA. Its short for JENGA. Crits please.http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2093

colz
07-22-2009, 07:22 PM
jenga-keep the J the same size and dont try to not add those "lumps" on the N and A

thanks guys for the help. did i do it any better. Crits???
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/anotherClops-1.jpg

milk boxx
07-22-2009, 07:32 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/clops-1.jpg

still doin it

R.E
07-22-2009, 07:36 PM
KInda shit at throwss need some lil nice helpful critsssss

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/354/tutruyrur.jpg

R.E
07-22-2009, 07:37 PM
and the arrow is coverin a shitty mistake my bad

colz
07-22-2009, 08:06 PM
thanks milk box for helping me again but i just keep getting it wrong, ill practice alot

HalfGangstaShit
07-22-2009, 09:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/DSC00339.jpg
Marker tag
on a wall
lol it looks like paper

Oarsone-FFSC
07-22-2009, 11:35 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2456/3747716633_e6f7548997_b.jpg
one liner

Eon 1
07-22-2009, 11:51 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2096

milk boxx
07-23-2009, 12:03 AM
thanks milk box for helping me again but i just keep getting it wrong, ill practice alot

maybe just try drawing 2 parallel lines and drawing the throw inbetween to keep it straight.
__________________

CLOPS <--- then draw it in there
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SrsBizns
07-23-2009, 12:04 AM
eon that J isn't a J

Eon 1
07-23-2009, 12:12 AM
I will put one up later.. I will work on my J.. But I do like the J on the throwie i did on the other one..if you want to see what it looks like its a couple posts up from the one I just did..

PegCityBoy
07-23-2009, 01:24 AM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2599/3748728092_598414f4ee.jpg?v=0
not happy with it :( supposed to come out like this

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3526/3725238462_d98a6cdc18.jpg?v=0

smooth_nuts
07-23-2009, 01:39 AM
janek your shit got mad dope since the last time i saw it!
kem-keep working with it
reny-in the first one,the toomer on your n seems random and doesnt really fit in

...havent posted in a while,havent done a throwup in a while haha,anyway
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2425/3742363725_84ea32084c.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/3743153636_0391e5920c.jpg

bottom bump,spam dont down your self dude your letters are dope,i just wish you would of took the time to clean your outline/dropshadow up a bit though :/

STFUPPERCUT
07-23-2009, 07:48 AM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture002.jpg
can i get some crits??

medacog1
07-23-2009, 10:07 AM
http://i28.tinypic.com/2886wqv.jpg

Crits?

Eon...i think you should lose that fat thing on the N..and i didnt know that was an A till i read your sig/

luvsac
07-23-2009, 11:57 PM
http://i729.photobucket.com/albums/ww297/luvsacc/etysv.jpg

medacog- make the straight bar line on the bottom of the K straight. make the K less covered by the T and drop the cliche water drop thing
luse- feelin it but the upper left part of the S seems a little awkward even though im sure its meant to be that wide to keep the flow going
smooth nuts- got no complaints, its nice and clean. the 3rd letter's a little hard to make out...is it a J?

milk boxx
07-24-2009, 01:45 AM
smooth nuts- got no complaints, its nice and clean. the 3rd letter's a little hard to make out...is it a J?

lower case A....

niner1234
07-24-2009, 02:20 AM
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/4111/photo2c.jpg

GORE

CrustOner
07-24-2009, 12:44 PM
Viruz writes Gore. and your throw sucks. your drips are going in different directions.just start completely over.

luvsac
07-24-2009, 02:30 PM
lower case A....

ok gotcha..lulz

JustChillin
07-24-2009, 06:01 PM
luvsac- i know its elementary but stay in side the lines when you fill.
gore- i wouldnt do drips but thats just me.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0724091454.jpg

luvsac
07-24-2009, 08:35 PM
hahahahah thanks justchillin, i'll be sure to practice in my graffiti coloring book while i sip on my apple juice.

my crits for you- drop the T looking thing inside the A and make the bottom vertical line of the N straight, not slanted

niner1234
07-24-2009, 09:02 PM
Viruz writes Gore. and your throw sucks. your drips are going in different directions.just start completely over.

ok i admit i fucked up horribly on the drips. no excuses besides i did it mad fast to post on her at 2 in the am... but really elaborate on why it sucks.. i would really like to hear it. and dont throw in that some one else writes it...

smooth_nuts
07-24-2009, 09:24 PM
...gore,i like your g,your o's proper,your r needs work,mostly in the pointy areas and your e's wack as shit,all i have to say,good day sir.

rewz
07-24-2009, 11:52 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/2hqatyc.jpg
http://i32.tinypic.com/2zye9s8.jpg

SrsBizns
07-25-2009, 01:34 AM
why is there a crown on that throw?

PegCityBoy
07-25-2009, 12:30 PM
why is there a crown on that throw?

cause he's all city king. duh:rolleyes:

Fetusr
07-25-2009, 03:40 PM
Rews those throws are tight, except the fact that your putting a crown on your shit, come on dude, your posting in a toy forum..

Just Chillin - I think you forgot to shade the bottom..

Gore - Lose the drips and work a little on the sharp lines and it will look a lot better, I really like how you put the letters inside of it, thats pretty sick.

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/THROW.jpg

hmmmmm?

milk boxx
07-25-2009, 03:59 PM
Fetusr im not really feelin the tiny S bruh

weakfingers
07-25-2009, 04:02 PM
Fetus, I cant see the F at all in the throw and also Shadow shouldent be on the top and bottom, one or the other.

Camer
07-25-2009, 04:52 PM
Fetus- I dislike that throw, mainly for the F and S and U
Rewz- I like the first one except for the crown because its shitty, not cause your a toy.

The e on the bottom one isnt long enough and the a in the second one needs to be fixed but other than that what do you guys think of these 2?

http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg

Mr yarbles
07-25-2009, 04:55 PM
Whos down to exchange
I want someone good
None of you bullshit been wiritng for 5 months mothafuckahs

milk boxx
07-25-2009, 05:03 PM
Whos down to exchange
I want someone good
None of you bullshit been wiritng for 5 months mothafuckahs

i'm down

rewz
07-25-2009, 05:54 PM
i was fuckin around with the crown i dont put crowns on walls if i did thats would be just fucked
yes im all city :P

weakfingers
07-25-2009, 06:24 PM
Fetus, Yeah like i said, You need to go super simple.

Yarbles, I dont know if im good enough but Ill try to do a sketch.

Stupid shadow...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF3962.jpg

Mr yarbles
07-25-2009, 07:38 PM
Jus tell me your names and I'll get em done

Squint hope you don't mind but I'm gonna leave to q out
Don't feel like going crazy tonight

milk boxx
07-25-2009, 08:14 PM
you write Relish right??

i write Neufi

Serpico
07-25-2009, 08:20 PM
Fetus, Yeah like i said, You need to go super simple.

Yarbles, I dont know if im good enough but Ill try to do a sketch.

Stupid shadow...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF3962.jpg

lik that work on it a little more lik u got it down just u kno

hardwares
07-25-2009, 09:57 PM
skwint - nice

first oneliner - crits plz?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zp6wrb.jpg
ware

weakfingers
07-25-2009, 10:06 PM
I cant see the A in the one liner but the rest of the letters are legible

Here you go Mr Yarbles.
I made the R to small for the rest but oh well.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5068.jpg

Oarsone-FFSC
07-25-2009, 11:36 PM
one liner critz??

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2456/3747716633_e6f7548997_b.jpg

Fetusr
07-25-2009, 11:58 PM
thanks for crits, did a little more work, will post tommorow, oh yeah, the f, look at it as a cursive lower case f. That relish you did squint is pretty tight, the only thing i'd change is making the L move out a bit more from the e cause it looks a little too close together, but nice work.

hardwares
07-26-2009, 01:55 AM
lol oars its all gotta be one line to be a oneliner.

SrsBizns
07-26-2009, 02:15 AM
i lol'd

Oarsone-FFSC
07-26-2009, 02:52 AM
lol oars its all gotta be one line to be a oneliner.

yeah i guess. but with 3/4s of the name have holes in theres no way it could all be done one line and look right.

hardwares
07-26-2009, 04:12 AM
its totally possible to make it look dope with one line, so make that your goal. otherwise its just not gonna be a oneliner maaaan

Fetusr
07-26-2009, 01:00 PM
Adapt and overcome, If I've learned anything useful, thats it. So keep at it.
I changed the F and the S for this one.. I have to say though, I miss my tongue.....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/missyou.jpg

CrustOner
07-26-2009, 01:28 PM
define the letters more. get rid of the line in the F, or just make it shorter. fix the T, and draw a hole in the middle of your R. if that's what it is..

weakfingers
07-26-2009, 01:40 PM
Fetus man, In my opinion. The F looks like a U, The T is way to pointy and the U should be Level.
This is just my opinion but its looking alot better then last time!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5069.jpg

milk boxx
07-26-2009, 01:54 PM
squint not really feelin those R's

Gully Head
07-26-2009, 04:24 PM
Fetusr-im feeling it yo
weak-the T doesnt really flow,and i cant really tell what the last letter is but overall keep working on it because it starting to come together.

just trying testing this out,not really good at throwies
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo41-1.jpg

Staz
07-26-2009, 05:05 PM
just started writing, can anyone give me crits??
http://i473.photobucket.com/albums/rr99/ilovepie247/165458.jpg

BigBlueViolence
07-26-2009, 07:25 PM
Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'

Bomb_squad
07-26-2009, 08:53 PM
hey guys havent been drawning to long
i'd love some help with ideas and what not

Serpico
07-26-2009, 09:20 PM
skwint - nice

first oneliner - crits plz?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zp6wrb.jpg
ware

good one liner work on ure a doh

Bomb_squad
07-26-2009, 09:36 PM
heres another
crits holla>>

weakfingers
07-26-2009, 10:20 PM
Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'
Word, Yeah my R is goofy as fuck. I kinda just winged it when i did the exchange, but yeah thanks for pointing that out for me, I really needed an A.

Zarb
07-26-2009, 10:24 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo43.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo42.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture5.png
I know I said I was gonna stay away but fuck it I cant haha. Been workin on this 2 letter
Squint- I like it man you finally had your N and T go with well eachother
Ware- I cant see the A in it really, maybe stay away from one lines for alittle bit
Sez- Pretty nice start, that Z is straight keep working with it. Make the S the same way as your Z maybe

Mr yarbles
07-26-2009, 10:29 PM
Good to see you steppin into your own style
Looks good.

BigBlueViolence
07-26-2009, 10:30 PM
Weak E, nice A, weak hand.

Keepin' it simple.

newbornsek
07-26-2009, 10:41 PM
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC_0032.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC_0022.jpg

weakfingers
07-26-2009, 10:58 PM
Fear - Try to make your A uppercase like the rest of the letters.

I felt my throw last page for yarbles my R was to fucked so i tried to redo it...
Sticky kfc fingers = shitty lines
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5074.jpg

LeaksOne
07-26-2009, 11:02 PM
fear change your whole throw. the a is decent but the f is whack the e is whack and the the r is whack.

newbornsek
07-26-2009, 11:08 PM
serious eh, k ill try some new shit this week

Fetusr
07-27-2009, 12:03 AM
Skwint, thought I would return the favour, I Lol'd really hard when I saw those grease stains btw xD

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/skwinty.jpg

Shurik*n
07-27-2009, 12:37 AM
o boy! haven't been on in a while...caz i've been away and haven't drawn for a while. anyways, got a new name (con.2)...here's some stuff. I stil suck haha

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0623.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0622.jpg

fear: i like it...maybe fatten up the f a bit

weakfingers
07-27-2009, 12:49 AM
Skwint, thought I would return the favour, I Lol'd really hard when I saw those grease stains btw xD

Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.

Bomb_squad
07-27-2009, 11:02 AM
zarb- those sketchs are dope mang... gotta give some props

Fetusr
07-27-2009, 11:33 AM
Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.

Wow, you need to chill the fuck out, I had nothing but good intentions when I drew that, maybe that face relates to the entire name... ever think about that? If you threaten me again we'll see how fast you can run in those air jordans when all these steel toed boots roll up in your hood motherfucker. I'm here for crits, not pussy internet beef, so if you still got shit twisted you can PM me, cause this is honestly the most stupid thing anyone has said about anything I've drawn....

CrustOner
07-27-2009, 11:47 AM
...he was fucking kidding.

STFUPPERCUT
07-27-2009, 11:48 AM
Relish try a uppercase backwards R
and try a different I, see how that turns out

BigBlueViolence
07-27-2009, 12:13 PM
Wow, you need to chill the fuck out, I had nothing but good intentions when I drew that, maybe that face relates to the entire name... ever think about that? If you threaten me again we'll see how fast you can run in those air jordans when all these steel toed boots roll up in your hood motherfucker. I'm here for crits, not pussy internet beef, so if you still got shit twisted you can PM me, cause this is honestly the most stupid thing anyone has said about anything I've drawn....
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/9835/1037p.jpg

STFUPPERCUT
07-27-2009, 12:31 PM
damn chinks if we woulda won pearl harbour this never would have happend


http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture029.jpg
CRITS DOGY

con - make a new one n try to make al lthe letters look liek the C in the second pic dude

Fetusr
07-27-2009, 12:35 PM
haha my bad, Not good at picking up sarcasm... No disrespect.

STFUPPERCUT
07-27-2009, 12:55 PM
haha my bad, Not good at picking up sarcasm... No disrespect.

word man i can easily see how that went wrong quick not exactly your fault

Fetusr
07-27-2009, 01:08 PM
Ye... not the greatest thing to wake up to in the morning, Whatever though.

STFU- the throw itself is pretty dope but you need to make your letters a little more legible, the S and the E seem a little different from the rest of the letters as well, and taking a better photo will help crits as well, but nice work

Con - move your letters together more and throw some 3d on that shit and then go from there

I worked on my throw a lil bit, still working on the T, and not sure if I'm down with the R at the moment... thoughts?

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/NEW.jpg

STFUPPERCUT
07-27-2009, 01:24 PM
ya man thanks will do,

i need a better camera im acutally gonna try to get a scanner off someone, this webcam is shit but its all i have.

the reason the S E probbably look different cause those letters are in my name so i do them alot. i need some practice so ill be posting in the exchange thread.

first of all i would bring the ! down to size a bit. Ts are a bitch to get to flow, i hate it its my least favorite letter. try making ur R a bit fatter and with a little kick if you know what i mean

weakfingers
07-27-2009, 01:41 PM
Yo fetus chill. It was a complete joke. I thought you could connect the dots to my race after I caught you capping other people shit.
The T in the throwie is gonna be a bitch for you and once you find one you gotta tweak it like hell to match the style and flow. Its taken me a while.
Look around for a guy called ALTR I've seen his throw and he makes it happen.


New style I just drew up, still alot more tweaking to be done, I guess its considerd a throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5076.jpg

Mr yarbles
07-27-2009, 02:36 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/9i47c0.jpg

Here you go squint
Pretty shitty with no q but whatever

CrustOner
07-27-2009, 02:40 PM
Fetus, fix that R, but the rest is looking a lot better. it's hard to tell what your T is, though.

Shurik*n
07-27-2009, 03:32 PM
o boy! haven't been on in a while...caz i've been away and haven't drawn for a while. anyways, got a new name (con.2)...here's some stuff. I stil suck haha

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0623.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0622.jpg


bump for crits..

squint: i like it, fatten up the s and t imo

Mr yarbles
07-27-2009, 04:10 PM
You need to stop going to graffiti creator

B.S. POLICE
07-27-2009, 04:42 PM
for real that c is the worst bite ever

weakfingers
07-27-2009, 04:43 PM
Thanks Yarbles.

Man graff creator makes everything so cash!
No one can even tell you used it either!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5078.jpg

mindtrix350
07-27-2009, 04:48 PM
New style I just drew up, still alot more tweaking to be done, I guess its considerd a throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5076.jpg

I kind of like it.

B.S. POLICE
07-27-2009, 04:51 PM
new ish critts are welcome

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3162/screencapture43.png

-Dank-DK-
07-27-2009, 04:52 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/qrerkw.jpg
crits ?