tot throwies.

[SrsBizns]

i lol'd

[Oarsone-FFSC]

lol oars its all gotta be one line to be a oneliner.

yeah i guess. but with 3/4s of the name have holes in theres no way it could all be done one line and look right.

[hardwares]

its totally possible to make it look dope with one line, so make that your goal. otherwise its just not gonna be a oneliner maaaan

[Fetusr]

Adapt and overcome, If I've learned anything useful, thats it. So keep at it.
I changed the F and the S for this one.. I have to say though, I miss my tongue.....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/missyou.jpg

[CrustOner]

define the letters more. get rid of the line in the F, or just make it shorter. fix the T, and draw a hole in the middle of your R. if that's what it is..

[weakfingers]

Fetus man, In my opinion. The F looks like a U, The T is way to pointy and the U should be Level.
This is just my opinion but its looking alot better then last time!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5069.jpg

[milk boxx]

squint not really feelin those R's

[Gully Head]

Fetusr-im feeling it yo
weak-the T doesnt really flow,and i cant really tell what the last letter is but overall keep working on it because it starting to come together.

just trying testing this out,not really good at throwies
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo41-1.jpg

[Staz]

just started writing, can anyone give me crits??
http://i473.photobucket.com/albums/rr99/ilovepie247/165458.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'

[Bomb_squad]

hey guys havent been drawning to long
i'd love some help with ideas and what not

[Serpico]

skwint - nice

first oneliner - crits plz?
http://i25.tinypic.com/2zp6wrb.jpg
ware

good one liner work on ure a doh

[Bomb_squad]

heres another
crits holla>>

[weakfingers]

Squint- Your R as an R = not feelin it
Your R as an A= Fucking nice.
Just sayin'
Word, Yeah my R is goofy as fuck. I kinda just winged it when i did the exchange, but yeah thanks for pointing that out for me, I really needed an A.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo43.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo42.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture5.png
I know I said I was gonna stay away but fuck it I cant haha. Been workin on this 2 letter
Squint- I like it man you finally had your N and T go with well eachother
Ware- I cant see the A in it really, maybe stay away from one lines for alittle bit
Sez- Pretty nice start, that Z is straight keep working with it. Make the S the same way as your Z maybe

[Mr yarbles]

Good to see you steppin into your own style
Looks good.

[BigBlueViolence]

Weak E, nice A, weak hand.

Keepin' it simple.

[newbornsek]

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC_0032.jpg
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/DSC_0022.jpg

[weakfingers]

Fear - Try to make your A uppercase like the rest of the letters.

I felt my throw last page for yarbles my R was to fucked so i tried to redo it...
Sticky kfc fingers = shitty lines
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5074.jpg

[LeaksOne]

fear change your whole throw. the a is decent but the f is whack the e is whack and the the r is whack.

[newbornsek]

serious eh, k ill try some new shit this week

[Fetusr]

Skwint, thought I would return the favour, I Lol'd really hard when I saw those grease stains btw xD

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/skwinty.jpg

[Shurik*n]

o boy! haven't been on in a while...caz i've been away and haven't drawn for a while. anyways, got a new name (con.2)...here's some stuff. I stil suck haha

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0623.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0622.jpg

fear: i like it...maybe fatten up the f a bit

[weakfingers]

Skwint, thought I would return the favour, I Lol'd really hard when I saw those grease stains btw xD

Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.

[Bomb_squad]

zarb- those sketchs are dope mang... gotta give some props

[Fetusr]

Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.

Wow, you need to chill the fuck out, I had nothing but good intentions when I drew that, maybe that face relates to the entire name... ever think about that? If you threaten me again we'll see how fast you can run in those air jordans when all these steel toed boots roll up in your hood motherfucker. I'm here for crits, not pussy internet beef, so if you still got shit twisted you can PM me, cause this is honestly the most stupid thing anyone has said about anything I've drawn....

[CrustOner]

...he was fucking kidding.

[STFUPPERCUT]

Relish try a uppercase backwards R
and try a different I, see how that turns out

[BigBlueViolence]

Wow, you need to chill the fuck out, I had nothing but good intentions when I drew that, maybe that face relates to the entire name... ever think about that? If you threaten me again we'll see how fast you can run in those air jordans when all these steel toed boots roll up in your hood motherfucker. I'm here for crits, not pussy internet beef, so if you still got shit twisted you can PM me, cause this is honestly the most stupid thing anyone has said about anything I've drawn....
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/9835/1037p.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

damn chinks if we woulda won pearl harbour this never would have happend


http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c171/m0rph3d/graff/Picture029.jpg
CRITS DOGY

con - make a new one n try to make al lthe letters look liek the C in the second pic dude

[Fetusr]

haha my bad, Not good at picking up sarcasm... No disrespect.

[STFUPPERCUT]

haha my bad, Not good at picking up sarcasm... No disrespect.

word man i can easily see how that went wrong quick not exactly your fault

[Fetusr]

Ye... not the greatest thing to wake up to in the morning, Whatever though.

STFU- the throw itself is pretty dope but you need to make your letters a little more legible, the S and the E seem a little different from the rest of the letters as well, and taking a better photo will help crits as well, but nice work

Con - move your letters together more and throw some 3d on that shit and then go from there

I worked on my throw a lil bit, still working on the T, and not sure if I'm down with the R at the moment... thoughts?

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/NEW.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

ya man thanks will do,

i need a better camera im acutally gonna try to get a scanner off someone, this webcam is shit but its all i have.

the reason the S E probbably look different cause those letters are in my name so i do them alot. i need some practice so ill be posting in the exchange thread.

first of all i would bring the ! down to size a bit. Ts are a bitch to get to flow, i hate it its my least favorite letter. try making ur R a bit fatter and with a little kick if you know what i mean

[weakfingers]

Yo fetus chill. It was a complete joke. I thought you could connect the dots to my race after I caught you capping other people shit.
The T in the throwie is gonna be a bitch for you and once you find one you gotta tweak it like hell to match the style and flow. Its taken me a while.
Look around for a guy called ALTR I've seen his throw and he makes it happen.


New style I just drew up, still alot more tweaking to be done, I guess its considerd a throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5076.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i25.tinypic.com/9i47c0.jpg

Here you go squint
Pretty shitty with no q but whatever

[CrustOner]

Fetus, fix that R, but the rest is looking a lot better. it's hard to tell what your T is, though.

[Shurik*n]

o boy! haven't been on in a while...caz i've been away and haven't drawn for a while. anyways, got a new name (con.2)...here's some stuff. I stil suck haha

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0623.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0622.jpg


bump for crits..

squint: i like it, fatten up the s and t imo

[Mr yarbles]

You need to stop going to graffiti creator

[B.S. POLICE]

for real that c is the worst bite ever

[weakfingers]

Thanks Yarbles.

Man graff creator makes everything so cash!
No one can even tell you used it either!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5078.jpg

[mindtrix350]

New style I just drew up, still alot more tweaking to be done, I guess its considerd a throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF5076.jpg

I kind of like it.

[B.S. POLICE]

new ish critts are welcome

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3162/screencapture43.png

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i26.tinypic.com/qrerkw.jpg
crits ?

[Mr yarbles]

new ish critts are welcome

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/3162/screencapture43.png

so fresh
fucking frresh as fuck holy fucking tittie fucking shit fuck

[B.S. POLICE]

yeah u kno that was like my original ish, some guy liked it so much he asked to use it on his website. never heard from him since....

[EST2007]

yeah u kno that was like my original ish, some guy liked it so much he asked to use it on his website. never heard from him since....

lmfao

["Sin"]

mindtrix- work on that S but other wise looks cool

[milk boxx]

ohsnap - shits dopeeeeeeee

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0706.jpg
new throwwww

[mindtrix350]

mindtrix- work on that S but other wise looks cool

lol that's not mine, that's weakfingers...

[Shurik*n]

alright then i guess it's keyboard letters for me...the 2 sucks i know...

http://s1d4.turboimagehost.com/t/1922212_DSCN0625.JPG (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/1922212/DSCN0625.JPG.html)
http://s1d4.turboimagehost.com/t/1922211_DSCN0626.JPG (http://www.turboimagehost.com/p/1922211/DSCN0626.JPG.html)

..sorry that it's just thumbnails...are there any other image hosters other than image shack?

[LeaksOne]

stop puttin the 2 on your throw.

[Camer]

Or he could do whatever the fuck he wants cause its his throw?

[LeaksOne]

how bout you shut your mouth bitch. he asked for crits thats my advice to him. this didnt involve you at all.

[Camer]

Ya but that has nothing to do with anything constructive. When people ask for crits they want to know how the letters and style looks not be told how to write there name. Everyone on here always says "do graffiti for you" or some bullshit but if you dare question anything anyone says they fly off the handle about "you asked for crits" like some product of cousin fucking retard, fuckin hypocrites.

[BigBlueViolence]

He's saying the 2 looks doo doo,
so the guy is better off not even doing it.
You're trying to create drama over the internet, homie,
trying to stick up for a dude that wasn't even being attacked.

Fuck off, you munson.

[B.S. POLICE]

eat a dick nigggaaaa

[KtRL.]

Oh so you think im asian with the face in the Q?
I'll stomp you with my size 16 air jordans, Or ill slap you to death with my 14 inch penis.
I'm not asian but nice try though.

whats wrong with being asian =\

[Shurik*n]

[QUOTE=BigBlueViolence;1438706]He's saying the 2 looks doo doo,
so the guy is better off not even doing it.
QUOTE]


yea...this is how i took it..but thanks for trying to stick up camer.

[ShaolinNy]

Messing around in summer school..Crits please!


http://lh6.ggpht.com/_w8-v_aPBjTk/Sm844HsKEtI/AAAAAAAAAEE/XQOIRhy4_jU/s720/2009-07-28%2013.42.52.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

What the fuck happened to your old shit?
That stuff is dookie, man.

[ShaolinNy]

What the fuck happened to your old shit?
That stuff is dookie, man.

Im still with it i just wanted to try a different style lol.Will post that stuff along with a one letter ive been working on when i get a chance

[rewz]

Messing around in summer school..Crits please!


http://lh6.ggpht.com/_w8-v_aPBjTk/Sm844HsKEtI/AAAAAAAAAEE/XQOIRhy4_jU/s720/2009-07-28%2013.42.52.jpg
looks like shit cant even tell if its a peaice or a throw

[Mr yarbles]

You're a fucking retard
It's obviously a piece
Don't be a toy callin other people toy you toy.

[LeaksOne]

yea...this is how i took it..but thanks for trying to stick up camer.

its just weird puttin a number on your throw like that. if anything make the bottom right side of your n pop and put a 2 in it and the period looks weird too. but once you get into piecing you can put your 2 on the end. all i was sayin.


Ya but that has nothing to do with anything constructive. When people ask for crits they want to know how the letters and style looks not be told how to write there name. Everyone on here always says "do graffiti for you" or some bullshit but if you dare question anything anyone says they fly off the handle about "you asked for crits" like some product of cousin fucking retard, fuckin hypocrites.

as for this little e-fag. i duno what the fuck your prob is but while your tryna stick up for other people you need to be workin on your whack shit. you need to get better at your shit before you pop off at me like that. that is all bitch.

[Shurik*n]

^^wait...u mean put a two in the n like a tag? if u mean that..then should i just put my whole tag in there?

[LeaksOne]

no like a throw. i mean you should put the 2 on your tag too but if you wana put it on your throw just put it inside the n

[neb3636]

You need to stop going to graffiti creator

I dont get how they think no one will notice. especially when they have a graffiti creator version next to there actual one, it just makes it stick out more.

[kringe]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9638.jpg
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9626.jpg
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9625-1.jpg
http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/0718092053-1.jpg

[STFUPPERCUT]

Or he could do whatever the fuck he wants cause its his throw?

iot would look better without the 2


donno why your beefing leaks nigguh



kringe -digging the throw shark, dont use a swastika for your A, ike what the fuck man, if i ever saw that shit up id diss you just for that, my word.

[CrustOner]

If I ever saw you throwing a swastika on your tag, I'd beat the shit out of you on the spot.

[kringe]

yeah. im german. not jew-hating-nazi shit tho. i wanted something other than a line to put in, but i didnt know what to put. saw some shit on ww II and saw that it wasnt just a jew-hating-nazi sign, and not all the nazis killed/hated jews so im like, hell. throw some of my heritage in there. but im gonna change it once i get an idea for something else to put in there...

[dreaken1993]

man yall need2 stfu, "if i say you with that on YOUR throwie id beat you up" stfu cause no you wouldnt, and like *****s said the swastika is a Buddhist sign that signifies equal harmony so stfu, and not all nazis were racist and not all Germans were nazi

[kringe]

thats where i heard it from!
dreaken. lmao

[MARTYRaz]

y not just use an X? im with crust...i would hold u down while crust stomps ur face...
a swaztica is prodominately used by skinheads and nazis..so its a hatred sign now..if ur german y not use a black red and yellow color sceme if u wanted to throw some "heritage" in there..
u done fucked up b4 u hit the 10th post mark..

[dreaken1993]

who cares how it was adopted the actually meaning of it has no racial value, who cares what he puts in his throwie its his, damn stfu

[MARTYRaz]

stop crying bitch and stand up for somethin u kno is wrong and shouldnt be brought in to the graff world...u kno that its a symbol of hatred and u still stick up for him??turn off the history channel on ur mommys cable box and open ur eyes to wat it means today..this aint the 17 century nemore...times have changed and thats a symbol of racism and hate...id crack ur skull in person if u stuck up for him on the streets bombin that shit...fuckin ignorant..

[BigBlueViolence]

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/f/f7/Nazi_swastika_clean.svg/200px-Nazi_swastika_clean.svg.png
Nazi Swasi

http://www.breadonthewaters.com/add/0651_manji_Buddhist_Swastika_clipart.jpg
Buddhist swasi

There is a difference, and I think it does matter.

BUT, saying that you are doing it because of your "german heritage",
then you are implying that it is meant to be a nazi swas.

Nazi swasis are cocked at a 45 degree angle.
Also, whether people because nazi soldiers out of hate or cowardice is no matter,
they all took place in the extermination of human beings,
and should not ever be glorified.unless it's in a a funny manner

[Shurik*n]

no like a throw. i mean you should put the 2 on your tag too but if you wana put it on your throw just put it inside the n
o i get what u mean ok...so which n then...i'm thinkin it would look better with the lowercase. but wat were u thinking

and sorry to break the whole swastika debate...but i'll put in something..don't really know if it affects it in anyway but the swastika (before it was used by the nazis) actually represented life, sun, power, strength, and good luck...

[CrustOner]

Buddhist swastikas were a symbol of good luck and prosperity. When the Nazi party adopted it for their campaign, they used it because of that. Hitler was wayyyy into luck and other superstition. Either way, you are using it in a manner that is not acceptable for "German heritage." I'm sorry. I'm sure you may see "Brown Pride" wherever you go, but it does not make it okay to do. I'm against any sort of racial pride. I think we shouldn't fucking worry about where we are from.

/rant.
anyway, get rid of the swastika. hahaha and Marty, I'm wearing my nazi-stomping boots right now :D

[LeaksOne]

o i get what u mean ok...so which n then...i'm thinkin it would look better with the lowercase. but wat were u thinking

yea a lower case n

[funhouseXcast]

Swastikas are bad. end of story. we want people to love graffiti, not be degraded by it. unless of course those people happen to be cops. plus if you throw a swastika in your shit its getting buffed ASAP.

i don't take offense to it, but it isn't "cool". plus it drops your chances to get laid by any jewish girls after they see your shit up haha.

just my 2 cents

[edit] as wrong as it is, people arent as open minded as you guys seem to think. no one sees a swastika and thinks it's a sign of buddhist harmony or whatever the fuck you said. they see it as nazis hate jews.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo56.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo50.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo55.jpg
All basicly the same
Shark- I think that style is pretty original but next time dont use the bottem of the page, I used to and it fucked me up for quite a bit couldnt make the bottems of my letters at all
Sneak- Yeah man stick with working on your older style, that shit has no structure

[massacreman]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kthxbai/sets/72157621757891807/
It's a set of throws on flickr, im into graffiti for a year now, this is not my best shit but i just wanted to be part of the toy section :P

-Zarb if its says EA, its really cool, im not a sticker guy but there good for throwies

[BigBlueViolence]

Well man,
that stuff is just terrible.

Zarb, I don't like the hole in the E coming up out of it, but I like your A.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i30.tinypic.com/8yvllg.jpg
http://i27.tinypic.com/2rcsc21.jpg

Weed makes drawing fun

[massacreman]

your shading is wrong on the 2nd pic
and you should thicken up your black lines (outlines?)
But nice letters bro

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah I know my shading was wrong :/
It's whatever though it's just in the books
but thanks

[dreaken1993]

i was just saying that it really isnt a racial symbol, and i dont care if he puts it in his throwie, but i dont think you should use it to represent your german heritage i think thats dumb, im german and i think nazi germany was the worst thing to happen to germany, idk and dont really care

and relish, i like the RSH

[colz]

zarb-all those throwies are nice, good A
yarbles-same what dreaken said, nice RSH

new throwups. Crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/clopsbluefillin.jpg
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/blueclops.jpg

[CrustOner]

Clean up your lines. Try moving a little faster with your marker strokes. and fix your S :)

[LeaksOne]

why is there a shadow on the top and bottom of your first throw??
i guess its good for a start but its boring

[dreaken1993]

.........i know ive seen a clops before and hes alot better but write whatever you want i guess

it looks okay, the 1st one just looks sloppy

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-6.jpg

[colz]

ya i know i have to clean up ALOT in it and i have been moving slow in my throwie

[WRAK]

graffiticreator much? lol...

[dreaken1993]

me?

[-Dank-DK-]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kthxbai/sets/72157621757891807/
It's a set of throws on flickr, im into graffiti for a year now, this is not my best shit but i just wanted to be part of the toy section :P

-Zarb if its says EA, its really cool, im not a sticker guy but there good for throwies

a year holy shit
you need alot of practice still

[Shurik*n]

yea a lower case n

yo, this one sucks a lot..but r u saying do it like this?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0629.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0630.jpg

[Eon 1]

^^ I dont think you should add the thing connected to the N...

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-6.jpg

bump for critz

[StompBolts!]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0718.jpg

Crits?

[StompBolts!]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0712.jpg

[kringe]

that s is god awful

[Camer]

I like the n in the picture but not in the throw. The shape changed too much from paper to wall.

Also I wasn't trying to start beef with Leaks, I was just sticking up for the Con2 cause kids come on here and get pushed around n shit. My bad if you took it as me beefing you leaks.

[weakfingers]

Stompbolts- I like the S, The N is kinda wonky. I like the sharp edges on the E but I think the bubble should connectAnd the A should Be the same size as the rest of the letters.

[kringe]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9597.jpg

[UncleFester]

My first attempt, no drop shadow or anything.
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w136/mxcp204/005.jpg

[kringe]

dont paint.

[milk boxx]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9597.jpg

ryan sheckler <3<3<3<3<3 omgg!1!!!\

[kringe]

what?

[funhouseXcast]

i know it's not well developed, but it's a new name.
steam
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=294&pictureid=2150

[mindtrix350]

^Not really feeling the S or the E. I think that you can mess around with the A a bit more too.

what?

Your shoes are Sheckler models, no?

[mmm_spraypaint]

stomp bolts ur pink throwie is good

[milk boxx]

stomp bolts ur pink throwie is good

Is my pink throwie good? ^_^
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0766.jpg
heheeee

[StompBolts!]

Is my pink throwie good? ^_^
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0766.jpg
heheeee

Ye i like your pink throw, it looks really familiar though??

[Shurik*n]

yo, this one sucks a lot..but r u saying do it like this?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0629.jpg
http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0630.jpg

bump...mainly for the second one.

steam: i'm not feeling the s but everything else looks good to me

ek: I like it...e looks a bit off, but it still looks good

[kringe]

^Not really feeling the S or the E. I think that you can mess around with the A a bit more too.


Your shoes are Sheckler models, no?

could be.
didnt think so.
their etnies scans...
http://http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9597.jpg
bump

[Rites]

con2the first c is the best letter you have
steamto start cut that ball thing on the top right of the s
ekI like the form, but theres no reason why you can't keep your fills solid when your on paper

[slipyslipyslipymegeee]

http://i32.tinypic.com/2w6a43s.jpg
super slopy ik ik clean u the lines yea yea ik
buttheres a railing right in th middle

[Staz]

http://i473.photobucket.com/albums/rr99/ilovepie247/215926.jpg
tried to work with is a little. Crits???

Con.2- its ok u just gotta work with it a little bit and the n is kinda weird and the c u could make better

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i26.tinypic.com/wbf1ip.jpg

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0634.jpg

sez: it's ok...go keyboard first and then experiment more..but the e is huge

[JustChillin]

Staz really work on your outlines

[kringe]

deffinately work on outlines.
do keyboard letters before throws

[dreaken1993]

http://i26.tinypic.com/wbf1ip.jpg

i like that

[EST2007]

http://i594.photobucket.com/albums/tt22/skate7861/DSCF9597.jpg

you picked the wrong side.

[B.S. POLICE]

est pm me

[kringe]

you picked the wrong side.

na.

[weakfingers]

Bout 2 months ago i dropped a throwie on my deck.... Bad mistake, if your not gonna hang it up people at the park are just gonna give you mad looks and ask you what it says... Worst mistake ever...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Picture25.jpg

[massacreman]

and ask you what it says... Worst mistake ever...

what does it say?:p
@ dank, nice throw man i like the change to pink

[massacreman]

a year holy shit
you need alot of practice still

Hahaha, I said i just wanted to post something :P and i hate throwies, i like tags and pieces more :P but thanks on not laughing me out

- is there like a site on which you see some throwie styles? i mean some people have madd throwies and i want to learn (not bite :P) from them:D

[MARTYRaz]

ur on it..look in the throw ups thread..

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i31.tinypic.com/154hcsh.jpg
just fuckin around

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i26.tinypic.com/65o9qs.jpg
for werse

[mmm_spraypaint]

yea ur ones very good :D now paint it up
Is my pink throwie good? ^_^
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF0766.jpg
heheeee

[hpir]

milk boxx- i like the e its fresh, but i liked the M better than the K
dank dk- im sorry but i cant tell wat u reaaly write
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/K3m0N3.jpg
crits?

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i29.tinypic.com/s0xwzq.jpg
fuckin around and made a new throwie
(but not my throwie im still yac)

[Zarb]

..

[colz]

B.S. was fucking around with a kid

[MocStickers]

B.S. was fucking around with a kid

Ooo sry I should of looked around more sry lol

[LeaksOne]

Hahaha, I said i just wanted to post something :P and i hate throwies, i like tags and pieces more :P but thanks on not laughing me out

- is there like a site on which you see some throwie styles? i mean some people have madd throwies and i want to learn (not bite :P) from them:D

graffiti creator.....mr wiggles

[milk boxx]

Kem - try to make your letters taller, their chubby looking.. and try to slim your M down a bit. keep all em the same size.

[Shurik*n]

i think i'm gonna pay more attention to the con part instead of the 2 in my name for now..but just in case..any pointers where I should put the two?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0635.jpg

kem: i feel like if u close up the gap in the k just a little bit it would look a little better...

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-10.jpg

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0003-1.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo62.jpg
Kem- Your K is alot better this time, maybe make the m alittle less fat
Aeok- The straight letter is pretty good. I dont feel like the throws letters are placed well it doesent't flow well.

[colz]

zarb-pretty dopee
aeok-i kinda like the green one but try losing the point at the bottom of the E
con-getting better, my opinion is that you should just do con, not con.2

throwie. i have to make my letters the same as the others. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Cl0Ps.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

here's a throw-up i did.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo1-1.jpg
hpir: the K looks solid, but haven't i seen that before? the E looks alright, maybe a little slanted but that can be fixed, i also like that whole concept of the M youre trying to do, but it's really slanted, i would also try widening that semi-circle thing in the middle of the M.

[ShaolinNy]

1st time making stickers crits please!DO you guys think i should cut them out like on the right or leave them on the full sticker??

(Hopefully if i can make the S more cleaner they should look mint)

http://lh5.ggpht.com/_w8-v_aPBjTk/SnXgqiH527I/AAAAAAAAAEk/z5jeG9tD4dU/s800/2009-08-02%2014.51.48.jpg


Zarb-Shits tight wish my stickers were that good
Kem-Fix the K up it dosent seem right
Milkbox-I like it just make the K cleaner and your good
Dank-Not rly sure hard to read,But in the sticker thread those looked good

every one else new to graff thread


Crits????????????

[gumOnShoe]

here's a darker version on the throw up i did.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo2.jpg
ShaolinNY: looks pretty good, one thing i'd suggest is completely taking off the point edge on the upper right side of the S.
Zarb: coming along nice, but the of the E looks weird to me, try making the "chin" of the E a litte bigger and rounder.

[CrustOner]

Your other letters don't go with your S too well.. work on that.

[gumOnShoe]

Your other letters don't go with your S too well.. work on that.

yeah, looking back it doesn't fit too well.
i'll fix that.

[ShaolinNy]

1st time making stickers crits please!DO you guys think i should cut them out like on the right or leave them on the full sticker??

(Hopefully if i can make the S more cleaner they should look mint)

http://lh5.ggpht.com/_w8-v_aPBjTk/SnXgqiH527I/AAAAAAAAAEk/z5jeG9tD4dU/s800/2009-08-02%2014.51.48.jpg


Zarb-Shits tight wish my stickers were that good
Kem-Fix the K up it dosent seem right
Milkbox-I like it just make the K cleaner and your good
Dank-Not rly sure hard to read,But in the sticker thread those looked good

every one else new to graff thread


Crits????????????

Bump bottom of page

[.od.]

really quick hate or dont hate i dont care
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/pk1.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

tried to make an S that would fit the rest of the letters.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo3-1.jpg

[Eon 1]

ShaolinNy- I think you should just try out both.. I like the one that isn't ccut out cause to me it stands out more.

[Eon 1]

Gum on shoe I think you should try a more simple S.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0638.jpg

spore: i'm not really liking the s..try a simpler one like eon1 said.
shaolinny: i agree, use the one that's not cut.

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo62.jpg
Kem- Your K is alot better this time, maybe make the m alittle less fat
Aeok- The straight letter is pretty good. I dont feel like the throws letters are placed well it doesent't flow well.

Bump
Sneak lose the top of the side part and it will look better, I think one letters are retarded though just my opinion.

[ShaolinNy]

Bump
Sneak lose the top of the side part and it will look better, I think one letters are retarded though just my opinion.

Hmm not sure it would look right..If u can skletch it real quick to show me that would be great or on paint watvea

[colz]

zarb-pretty dopee
aeok-i kinda like the green one but try losing the point at the bottom of the E
con-getting better, my opinion is that you should just do con, not con.2

throwie. i have to make my letters the same as the others. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/Cl0Ps.jpg

bump. i need some help

[EST2007]

tried to make an S that would fit the rest of the letters.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo3-1.jpg

i like this, reminds me of ALONE. make the middle of the E smaller and i'd run with it. lets see some paint

[Beats_His_Wife]

tried to make an S that would fit the rest of the letters.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo3-1.jpg

Make all your letters the same size, but i like where thats going

[gumOnShoe]

i like this, reminds me of ALONE. make the middle of the E smaller and i'd run with it. lets see some paint

yeah, i've noticed the proportion is out of whack too, i'll work on that.
"ALONE"? doesn't ring a bell... care to show me some of his stuff?

[MARTYRaz]

ever heard of google??flickr??

[Gully Head]

really quick hate or dont hate i dont care
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/pk1.jpg

i really like a lot.only advice is to clean it up a bit really and fix the e on the end but other than that its all good imo

[Camer]

tried to make an S that would fit the rest of the letters.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo3-1.jpg

Honestly I thought your R was an N for the longest time until I actually looked at your handie and saw your name was Spare

[milk boxx]

yeah i cant really see that R at all?

[thadanks]

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5861/6b7ecfcec73812491777620.jpg

Little drunken throwie I did on my friend's garage wall

[BigBlueViolence]

He should beat the shit out of you once a day,
for the rest of your life,
for doing that on his house.

Why are the D(I think that's what it is) and E twice as big as the A and N?
What the fuck is up with that red highlight? I was completely unaware that red was a purple tone.
Plus your letters are just plain doo doo.

[thadanks]

its supposed to be a k, not an e. and yeah i know the colors are wack, he was just kind of giving me whatever paint he had lying around

also: no more drunk graff i am thinking

[weakfingers]

Thats weird because im thinking no more graff at all...

[noxi]

bump. i need some help

dont use clops.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/26112492@N04/2914639682/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28537163@N06/3556581365/

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0638.jpg



bump...

[MARTYRaz]

^^like the top one..work with that..try shadows and fills..just keep at it..

[colz]

dont use clops.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/26112492@N04/2914639682/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28537163@N06/3556581365/

im conviced now to not write clops. anyways where does he write??

[BigBlueViolence]

It says "bay area graffiti" and "san jose" right under the pictures, dude.

[colz]

It says "bay area graffiti" and "san jose" right under the pictures, dude.

o my bad

[gumOnShoe]

It says "bay area graffiti" and "san jose" right under the pictures, dude.

yeah, i'm sure you probably don't even live in those areas to begin with, so by all means, continue writing clops...

[Crush97]

dont use clops.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/26112492@N04/2914639682/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/28537163@N06/3556581365/

nice i like the secind ALOT

[skull-e]

this thread is epicly shitty

[Fury]

bump...

Keep working on the top one. You're headed in the right direction though

[Facedorateur]

Img dont appear

[klic]

The weekly toy throwie battle is back, the word is "Cyan". Have your entries in by Friday August 14th. I expect to have a lot of entries so get on it. PM Me Your Entries.

[tilt]

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/666/p6260002b.jpg

[JustChillin]

soy really work on your outlines. Make straight clean lines, not chicken scratch.
however though i really like that tag you have at the bottom.


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0805091630.jpg

[medacog1]

soy really work on your outlines. Make straight clean lines, not chicken scratch.
however though i really like that tag you have at the bottom.


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0805091630.jpg

im not felling the color combo.
Your water drops should conect with your letters.
Try using a I or ask some one about lower case i's.
and i dont think your drop back shadow matchs your letters.

[EST2007]

Make straight clean lines, not chicken scratch.
http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0805091630.jpg

take your own advice champ

[facethetruth]

soy really work on your outlines. Make straight clean lines, not chicken scratch.
however though i really like that tag you have at the bottom.


http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0805091630.jpg

are you seriously giving crits?

[JustChillin]

in this forum you have to give crits to get them. so yes. fuck off.

[Mr yarbles]

hahahahahahahahahaha your a looks like a penis.

[LeaksOne]

are you seriously giving crits?


in this forum you have to give crits to get them. so yes. fuck off.

I'm sorry "JustChillin" but apparently you can't understand what people mean when they crit you so ill translate for you. *AHEM*
facethetruth - You suck and you have no room to give crits especially since your doing exactly what your telling people not to do.

this is what i thought when he said that

your welcome

[facethetruth]

in this forum you have to give crits to get them. so yes. fuck off.

then dont post at all. if you cant do a throw up dont tell other people how to do a throw up. fuck off? wow..

[EST2007]

then dont post at all. if you cant do a throw up dont tell other people how to do a throw up. fuck off? wow..

don't give the kid the wrong idea tho... feel free to post all you want, but it was ironic that you crit that kid to make clean, non-chicken-scratch lines, then post something equally as bad with the same exact problem...

and on another note, imo i'd rather see shit on a wall than shit on paper. let's see more walls, less paper!!

[Facedorateur]

facethetruth: im not feeling the ''N'', also, a black fill dosent look good on paper.

Heres mine, first that is worth posting in a while
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/9200/pict0616p.jpg
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/9140/pict0615g.jpg

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image616.jpg

still deciding if i want a two in there or not...

facedorateur: i feel like it's a bit too messy in the middle

[Scratch]

soy- straight letters. no chicken scratches, keyboard letters, nothing complicated whatsoever. no bs, it'll be the best advice in the longrun.

manik- you are doing exactly what you told soy not to do. but you were right to say they shouldnt do that, so its not a bad crit (whether or not you do it yourself) so i dont know why everyones on your case. crit whatever the fuck you want, its the internet.

[MARTYRaz]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image616.jpg

still deciding if i want a two in there or not...

facedorateur: i feel like it's a bit too messy in the middle
what did i say??take the crits and use them or gtfo..add a shadow..some color..pretty sure im not the only one thinkin this...u got 123 posts and every single one has the same thro in it "still debating on the2"..
fuck the 2..get over it...progress a lil bit..stop posting the same bullshit hallow..

[.reflex.]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f61/mindless138/a725e449.jpg

help

[Facedorateur]

ME- make ur M more square, And add a horizontal line in the middle of your E so it looks more like a three

[massacreman]

help

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2454/3797010833_fe3a6b90f9.jpg

More like this. ;P

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/DCAM0062.jpg

[Murphy's law]

Just kinda want some input, they're my first attempts. So don't hold back....
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/97/l_fa9e75de0e884f45aed9295c0875cc30.jpg
http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_c0fb3584801741e081c810ab96429a8e.jpg

[Facedorateur]

u should post that in the blackbook thread, this is throwie

[MARTYRaz]

Or better yet thro that shit out..

[Murphy's law]

fair enough for me... I don't like letterin i'm a character artist...

[Anion]

Murphy - I like where you're goin' with the mouth letters. Maybe fatten the letters up and try and connect them. Get some flow goin' and don't look back. Just keep pushin' forward and re-drawing. I bet it'd look killer with some 3D and a background.

Don't listen to people that say stuff like 'throw that shit out'

Graffiti is art. And Art is expression. There might be rules to 3D and drop shadows but there certainly is not a rule confining you to drawing the 'usual'.

[BIGdreamSCHEME]

stfu you're lame

[weakfingers]

There certainly is not a rule confining you to drawing the 'usual'.

But theres rules on proportion, flow and general overall letter structure. That drawing is wack. I think he needs to learn basics befor trying to start his own style.


fair enough for me... I don't like letterin i'm a character artist...
Man your on a graffiti forum... Its all about the letters.

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/DCAM0062.jpg

bump for crits

[Smore]

http://i31.tinypic.com/wmnv4g.jpg
Like it?

[dreaken1993]

no

your s needs proactive, do a normal M, the r is alright

[Smore]

no

your s needs proactive..

What?

[dreaken1993]

its got all them pimples and shit

dont give it random bumps and shit

[thedudeman]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/08-07-09_0612.jpg

[thedudeman]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/08-05-09_0622.jpg

[Murphy's law]

But theres rules on proportion, flow and general overall letter structure. That drawing is wack. I think he needs to learn basics befor trying to start his own style.


Man your on a graffiti forum... Its all about the letters.

I've seen whole walls devoted to characters with maybe one letter on it, yeah i get that most of it is letterin but not all of it. As far as it goes i love my characters and much rather stick with them and pull off random shit....

[colz]

thedudeman-its alright, but in the 1st picture the E doesnt flow that well with the others
smr-i kinda like it, is that dot on the bottom of S supposed to be there?
aenk-i really like the 2nd throwie, keep it up

throwie. the picture is kinda wierd. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/NEW.jpg

[Anion]

But theres rules on proportion, flow and general overall letter structure. That drawing is wack. I think he needs to learn basics befor trying to start his own style.

I've seen plenty of great murals and pieces that aren't always proportionate with no letter structure at all. Abstract graffiti.

Last I knew, we were all here for the same thing. To be heard.

If he throws that up, as is, it's gonna' get seen. You might not like it but others will.

Some of you people are so stuck up on this by the book shit. Get of your high horses. Not to mention, half you haters don't have flicks or albums.

If anyone has a problem with what I said, PM me. Don't whine on the thread.

[k'n1ve]

dudeman- i like it,,,maybe tweak the n, and a a lil more though

[Camer]

thedudeman-its alright, but in the 1st picture the E doesnt flow that well with the others
smr-i kinda like it, is that dot on the bottom of S supposed to be there?
aenk-i really like the 2nd throwie, keep it up

throwie. the picture is kinda wierd. crits??
http://i672.photobucket.com/albums/vv83/cpirrung/NEW.jpg

Look at everyone elses shit and then look at yours. Do you honestly need other people to tell you it sucks to know it sucks? How about not posting on BS for a month and spend the time sketching and come back with something that blows everyone away.

[weakfingers]

I've seen whole walls devoted to characters with maybe one letter on it, yeah i get that most of it is letterin but not all of it. As far as it goes i love my characters and much rather stick with them and pull off random shit....

Yeah, Not to continue argument and i understand what your saying but those artist who did those things can prob rock a striaght letter pretty well. There is a handfull of people that just do characters but most do both.

[.reflex.]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f61/mindless138/13134021.jpg

like this

[LeaksOne]

Look at everyone elses shit and then look at yours. Do you honestly need other people to tell you it sucks to know it sucks? How about not posting on BS for a month and spend the time sketching and come back with something that blows everyone away.

camer honestly if you think he should leave bs for a month you need to go with him. your shit is worse then his

[Eon 1]

Burn!!!

[JustChillin]

camer honestly if you think he should leave bs for a month you need to go with him. your shit is worse then hisyou really need to stop putting your 2 cents in to what everyone says on here. it explains why you have 1000 and + post. Its like your obliged to tell everyone they suck too. If your so much fuckin better then stop posting in the toy section and move your ass on up.

Ok. clops. Ive given this advice to you before and someone else even gave you an example to here it is again. Dont make your letters get bigger and bigger as you write them because then this makes it look like your throw is lopsided or tilted to the side. When you start writing your new letter, start lower from the top.

[LeaksOne]

you really need to stop putting your 2 cents in to what everyone says on here. it explains why you have 1000 and + post. Its like your obliged to tell everyone they suck too. If your so much fuckin better then stop posting in the toy section and move your ass on up.

is that so big guy? go look at my posts and youll notice i got 1000+ because frequent posting in good afternoon. and there are tons of good people in here but camer definately isnt one of them and i wasnt sayin clops was either they both need work. i mean just beacuse you suck camers dick doesnt mean i have to like him. ive never had a prob with you so get back at me when your off the rag bitch. i bid you ado

[JustChillin]

having a problem or not with somebody still doesnt count for the fact that you talk a lot of shit. why dont you start giving constructive criticism around here instead of acting like a douche about it.

[LeaksOne]

aww am i too mean for you? i do give constructive crits but he was tryin to bash somebody for not bein good when hes not good himself. ill give anyone constructive crits. but dont be a lttle bitch and ill be "nice" to you. not you personally but anyone. im good with crits and im not sayin im the greatest i have alot of work to do also but i dont go around bashin people for no reason.

[Fury]

Shut the fuck up and post shit already.

Clops - Work simpler and make it just like straight bars for a while. Then try to tweak it to how you like it (so you get a feel for proportions).
Name - Go simpler and work on your drop shadow.

[LeaksOne]

and wheres your picture??

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image618.jpg

clop: ur letters still aren't the same size. do what Fury said, "Work simpler and make it just like straight bars for a while. Then try to tweak it to how you like it (so you get a feel for proportions)."

me: looks good to me

[dreaken1993]

why is the top of your c straight edged, and your n looks likea h

[Alts13]

I know this is the toy thread, and I am hardly one to comment due to my throws being shit, but why do something so generic and boring with not an ounce of originality to it, I know your just learning but I have seen you post throws like this a few time, and when you get crits you don't seem to change anything, you need to work on it more and change up the letters a bit, the N definitely looks more like an H

[Shurik*n]

well the only crit i actually got was from MartyRaz, and that was try out shadows and coloring...i'm still tweaking out the letters a bit, but none of them are any better than this one..

[medacog1]

I like your o.. but the other letter look funny..like your not trying....but idk..you might be trying your hardest ever..so i dont know.

[Fury]

Con - Don't worry about 3D yet until you have the throw down. Work on all of your letters, but mainly focus on the N to make it look like an N and not an H. You can work on your style after you get the letters down.

[Camer]

camer honestly if you think he should leave bs for a month you need to go with him. your shit is worse then his

Fuck you faggot, my shits better than his cause i actually sketch all day instead of posting on BS. You just don't like me cause I called you out on being a dick to Con, so now you try to E-thug after my posts. I haven't seen you post any pics lately so I don't care if you are better than me or not your still a fucking joke who spends too much time on BS and not enough time actually painting or drawing.

Went and found this. Oooooh man do you have the mad skills to be talking that much trash.............
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60035.jpg

[LeaksOne]

haha battle me then faggot. you can do your jagged line throws or whatever. i fucked my s up on that ill admit but other then that my shit is way better then yours. and i didnt know you were my day planner sir. how do you know how much time i spend on here? most of my posts are in the morning. and im not e-thuggin but you really shouldnt tell someone to leave if your not any better. when you first posted on here i critted you i have no problem with you but your gettin really bitter now. but pick the word. lets do throws since mine was so horrible up there and your stylin on me

[B.S. POLICE]

regardless camer you have no room to tell others to leave OR to talk shit on leaks, cause believe it or not hes actually a lot better than you

[PegCityBoy]

not really happy with the hands or the blue or pink/purp throw

jus the red an yellow one

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2474/3801595271_753fcb8cc4.jpg

[LeaksOne]

the blue one is gravy. the red one looks weird cuz you did the outline with a calig marker

[PegCityBoy]

my zig's were up stairs an my prismas were down fuck climbing stairs

[B.S. POLICE]

who the hell outlines with the thick end? use the skinny for throws, better yet done even use prismas for throw ups shtis a waste

[PegCityBoy]

i'm not as nuts as you are at fills so i don't really need to save my prismas for pieces

[Alone_NC]

http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03059.jpg

Bring hell upon me with crits. haha

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image621.jpg

so does it look anymore like an n? or still an h?

[YOLK01]

It looks like an N. Have you tried doing the C with the top part over hanging rather than it being the way it was.

[BigBlueViolence]

the lines in the N are too close to each other, space them out.

http://i32.tinypic.com/29qbad0.jpg

[JustChillin]

con why do you point the top of your C? just make that round like everything else.