tot throwies.

[-Dank-DK-]

Fuck you faggot, my shits better than his cause i actually sketch all day instead of posting on BS. You just don't like me cause I called you out on being a dick to Con, so now you try to E-thug after my posts. I haven't seen you post any pics lately so I don't care if you are better than me or not your still a fucking joke who spends too much time on BS and not enough time actually painting or drawing.

Went and found this. Oooooh man do you have the mad skills to be talking that much trash.............

hey do me a favor
go to a sex shop buy to two biggest dildos u can find
go home stick one up your ass then the other on down your throat
SO U WILL SHUT THE FUCK UP !

[zennegen]

lets all remember this is the TOY thread where TOYS bring theyre crappy TOY throws to get crits to get BETTER.

[weakfingers]

Clops Aka Colz Just try and do this or better yet do your throwie IN between lines or on lined paper.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/clops-1.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/clops.jpg

[Alone_NC]

http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03059.jpg

Bring hell upon me with crits. haha

Looking at the picture I noticed I need to bring the right side of the top of my n down.. It looks massive when it goes into the d so high. Anyone else got crits? Please.. Tear me apart.. Please? haha

[hpir]

and-the name idk, yr a is basic good start yr n is prety fuckd dont make the d go so far into it, make all yr letters basicly the same size
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Kemchar.jpg
crits?

[Zarb]

Kem lovin that shit PM me I wanna paint monday

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image627.jpg

there's a line in the o on the top..just ignore it. it's from the other side of the page

kem: love it
and: yea, bring down the n. and what's with the bulge. i'm guessing that's the end of the n? i would say don't put that there.

[Fury]

Con - The right bar in the N isn't the same as the others.
Hpir - Not digging the M.
and - Change the d a little.

[Gully Head]

hpir-i like the k,you need to work on the e make that shit flow a lil,just try a different m.
con-not feeling it,the c looks mad shaky and the n doesn't go,keep working on it try other styles and shit

first try at a one liner
http://i624.photobucket.com/albums/tt321/Gullyhead/Photo44-1.jpg

[YOLK01]

Doesnt look like a oneliner at all I see two spots where it stops and starts again.

[Facedorateur]

KEM - nice and clean
CON - round up your C and make your O more...idk...fun?
MERC- your C is iffy, take out the two bottow extensions

heres mine, completely redesigned
crits plz
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/6387/pict0619a.jpg

[YOLK01]

^^Looks good but to me the e is kinda to spaced out for that style. diggin the R and h

[Facedorateur]

Better?
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/8439/pict0626.jpg

[JustChillin]

Dont know why you tilted the "I" like that like its almost laying it down. It covers the "R" to much.

[Alone_NC]

http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03063.jpg

I don't know if I like it or not. I just don't know about a lowercase a and a capital D... I don't hate it though.. so.. crits?

[hpir]

looks better than before

[Alone_NC]

looks better than before

Thanks. I agree. The capital d looks way better than the lowercase d.

http://i641.photobucket.com/albums/uu137/Alone_NC/DSC03066.jpg

I feel like I bit this style from somewhere which is why I refuse to use it. But I love it. Someone help me find out where I took this style from?

[PegCityBoy]

no we're not gonna look to see if you bit it because you obviously did (poorly may i add) and you're just asking to see if anyone recognizes it to see if you can get away with it, i don't mean to sound like a dick but jus callin it as i see it

also your throws are taking up the entire sheet of paper and i can't quite tell but if you're using decos for the fill thats a fuck ton of paint wasted shrink it down a lil bit

[Alone_NC]

no we're not gonna look to see if you bit it because you obviously did (poorly may i add) and you're just asking to see if anyone recognizes it to see if you can get away with it, i don't mean to sound like a dick but jus callin it as i see it

You do sound like a dick because you are being one. I don't KNOW where I found that style from which is why I'm wondering if anyone knows and can point me in the direction. I don't want to use it. As I said I refuse to use it because I think it's very much someones else.


also your throws are taking up the entire sheet of paper and i can't quite tell but if you're using decos for the fill thats a fuck ton of paint wasted shrink it down a lil bit

When you don't pay for the markers, you don't care if you use the whole sheet of paper doing a throw. I like to do throws big on paper. So what...

[Abor Rudest]

^ thug lyfe

[Alone_NC]

^ thug lyfe

HAHA Hardly. I just don't care to much about things I don't pay for.

[Abor Rudest]

well lets hope you care more about your throwie, cause that shit is hurting. you can start with getting rid of that little extension on the bottom of your n.

[Abor Rudest]

for talking
http://i29.tinypic.com/keix5c.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I think you should make your O rounder,
and your R looks a lot like your A,
but the AB and R are nice.

[Abor Rudest]

yeah, my o usually doesnt even look like that, this is the only picture of my throw i had on my computer suprisingly. didnt you and i do an exchange awhile ago?

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah man, I believe so.

[Alone_NC]

Arbor. I know I'm not anyone to take advice from.. but I love symmetry. I'd go with the O having the same top half as the other 3 with a round bottom.. In my mind it sounds good.. haha..

[Anion]

Fix that 3D on the top of your R. It's going off in it's own direction.

Then it's mint.

Sick sig pic by the way.

[klic]

abor - i like the AB, not feeling the OR that much

http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekThrow15.jpg

[noholdups_jusswrite]

klic- that shit is tight..

[weakfingers]

Kilc- Thats nice n kleeeeen.



Fuck! I cant draw throws anymore, All my propotions get out of wack n shit and i gotta go reall slow. I took a break for like 3 weeks. could that be a problem? Im super bummed on all the shit i draw latly does anyone else get that?

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6331.jpg

[LeaksOne]

me. all the time. thats gettin better and better though. i remember your work when you first came here and your progressing nicely. i have a nice G in my book but i cant finish because i feel ill fuck my R up and i cant pencil first. you just have to stay at it and try and stay motivated. if you have friends that write sketch with them. makes it some what more fun

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo85.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo93.jpg
Been working on another style
Weakfingers- I dont think you really got worse but yeah 3 week break can probably fuck you up alittle. As for the throw I like it, I feel like the T looks alittle to simple for the rest of the letters though
Klic-Your throw is nice, I have nothing to really crit honestly
Abor- I personally don't like the style but thats just me, keep doin what you wanna do

[-Dank-DK-]

for talking
http://i29.tinypic.com/keix5c.jpg

all the crits i have is

i want to rape the holes it has

and thats a good thing

[LeaksOne]

abor i like that but your R does look like an A
zarb thats a coo style but round the top of your A. that point throws it off
janek nice as always
sqwint your progressin nicely

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60036.jpg
crits?

[Zarb]

Kept workin on this style, I like it alot now! Gonna paint it soon
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo94.jpg
Leaks- You got a nice style, the R is cool but it kinda sticks out from the rest of your letters, maybe make the A like that too?

[crystalmeth and abortions]

zarb- thats dope but whats it say?

first time painting in 6 months, drew it out like 45 min before i painted it. F n T are raped. but any improvment suggestions?
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/81/l_71b5dee545494b8e9f7ad727b73e9860.jpg

[Fury]

If I were you, I'd blur out the face.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

good call

[PegCityBoy]

yo abor you'r letter sizes are gettin bigger an bigger i have the same fuckin problem jus draw it out a fuck ton and be very concious of the size even draw out 2 parrallel lines at the top and bottom and keep the letters between other than the sizeing looks hot

[Abor Rudest]

i do it on purpose.

everyone on this page (aside from that guy with the clown face, no offense) is looking clean, keep it up.

[PegCityBoy]

You do sound like a dick because you are being one. I don't KNOW where I found that style from which is why I'm wondering if anyone knows and can point me in the direction. I don't want to use it. As I said I refuse to use it because I think it's very much someones else.



When you don't pay for the markers, you don't care if you use the whole sheet of paper doing a throw. I like to do throws big on paper. So what...

i don't pay for shit either but but i care about my markers + it looks awful and when you blow it up that big it's just highlighting the flaws

i don't usually beef but i could burn your ass so shut your mouth faggot

[crystalmeth and abortions]

abor, offense none takin, cuz i did that shit pitch dark n first sessiion in 6 months... and its the only actually painted throw on this page... smoke your ass any day

[Abor Rudest]

honestly, thats probaly the only thing on the page that shouldnt be painted. i wasnt dissing you, but youre not burning anyone with that broke throwie.

[Abor Rudest]

also, be right back. ill be sure to take a flick to shut you up.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

hah. yo me with a pen n a pad will burn any yer shit... like i said..... pitch dark, just gettin can controll back... was a dis... cuz every ones was clean cuz its done with a pen or a pencil...oviously. im guessing your like 15? 16? painted a real spot like once, if that?

[JustChillin]

abor i like that but your R does look like an A
zarb thats a coo style but round the top of your A. that point throws it off
janek nice as always
sqwint your progressin nicely

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60036.jpg
crits?um you used 1 bar for all your letters and then busted out 2 bars for your r? only letter that looks clean in the whole thing is that A. Your G looks nothing like a G, the only way I could somewhat tell is because Im a graffiti writer. That handstyle looks wack also i would keep practicing it to find flow.

[BigBlueViolence]

You're a clown, and nothing you say is ever valid.

Leaks- The G looks exactly like a capital G. the R being open and the A being closed is a little weird, I'd try to stick to one style. Something about the T bugs me, but I don't know what. the E is a little small, but nice. Your Hand is fine except for the T being a little small.

[JustChillin]

Your a fool and you need to get off your knees. By saying anything i say is invalid but then going around and pretty much agreeing with what i had to say in the first post about the R shows how wrong you are also. Good job making yourself look like a dumbass. If you don't agree then explain to me why the R and the A look "weird" together.

[BigBlueViolence]

Dawg, if you knew how to read, you'd realize I already explained why they look weird together.

That G is simple as fuck. Ray Charles would be able to tell that shit was a G.

The hand is nice and simple too, definitely not "whack".

Oh yeah, you used "your" wrong, you were supposed to use "you're".
Good job fucking your shit up and making YOU look like a dumbass.


Battle me or kick rocks, kid.

[JustChillin]

so then if your agreeing with part of what I had to say then that must meen you are invalid as well. Maybe i was wrong about the G but you cant say that handstyle doesnt need work. The A doesnt match and the T looks a little uncomfortable and doesnt fit. It also looks like he was a little insecure and unsure of what to with that E so he boxed the top and rounded the bottom.

nothing else to say right? so you had to point out a grammar error that no one or I cared about because its the fuckin internet and people dont give a shit how they type because its a forum not a class essay. i would be glad to battle you. not because I think im better than you but just because I have nothing else better to do at this time at night since im not gonna be writing for a while.

[Abor Rudest]

hah. yo me with a pen n a pad will burn any yer shit... like i said..... pitch dark, just gettin can controll back... was a dis... cuz every ones was clean cuz its done with a pen or a pencil...oviously. im guessing your like 15? 16? painted a real spot like once, if that?

worst throw ive ever done, shitty cell phone flick, ass of a can using a stock cap, fucked up my own r, no shadow, and its still better than that shit you posted. if you really want to take this further and make more of an ass of yourself, ive got no problem doing a throwie battle with you.

http://i31.tinypic.com/30js19j.jpg

[crystalmeth and abortions]

hahahahaha

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yo u suck abor. straight up.. did u run to your garage n throw that there to prove a point? thinkin of me every second? looks like shit... ill take it further til u mail me all ur paint caps n markers cuz ur bout to quit... how old are u?

[Abor Rudest]

im 18 years old, im done talking shit to you, throwie battle me or shut the fuck up.

*edit* you dont even have to pick a word, we'll use your own damn un-creative name. "soft"

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yo fuck throwie shit... im bigger than that.. lets see what u know bout real art.... REAAAL burners son... see i u know what a color wheel is... n if u know how to use it... son ill rape your mind with what i know

[Abor Rudest]

im off tonight but oh well, i usually dont do this internet beef nonsense but there is something about you that i really fucking hate.

http://i31.tinypic.com/21kgx2f.jpg

now do your own damn name and the people in this thread can be the judge.

for the record, im deleting my past few posts because im sure everyone doesnt want to have to go through a page of us talking shit to eachother. you should do the same.

[PegCityBoy]

zarb- thats dope but whats it say?

First time painting in 6 months, drew it out like 45 min before i painted it. F n t are raped. But any improvment suggestions?
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/81/l_71b5dee545494b8e9f7ad727b73e9860.jpg

holy fuck thats a t?!?!

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yea its no chalenge to write my own name... heres yours

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/110/l_38d8a437585a424492c8b6095e6555d8.jpg

u should know i dont start beef.. just thought what u said was a little unnessisary when im askin for improvments and already stated what i know i fucked up on

[Abor Rudest]

all good. i got worked up for no reason anyway. im done now.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

wasnt tryin to start shit by postin. so if we good bro. i kinda dig the concept of that s

[Abor Rudest]

haha, no doubt. yeah, its straight, dont even worry about it.

[Fury]

Oh how I am tired of reading
http://www.biblelife.org/beef-porterhouse.jpg

[Abor Rudest]

sorry bout that.

[Fury]

It's all good brotha, now go bomb some shit!

[LeaksOne]

bigblue - lookin at that throw i see some stuff i could change already. im just tweakin shit little by little. thanks for explainin my throw and simple hand to him while i was away :cool:

chillin - i didnt bust out two bars on my R. i didnt lift the pen on one that except for the dot. i let my hand go and it went too far and created that space. wasnt intentional. as for my hand im not in to that comlicated squished shit. simple does it for me. i dont want just writers to know what my shit says. my E to me is fine and how dos the a not fit?


how come lately everyone is quick to bash shit instead of jus sayin oh i dont like that or you should change that.everyone needs to take a chill pill and crit others like were suppose to do in here. not beef and bash shit.

[Zarb]

Kept workin on this style, I like it alot now! Gonna paint it soon
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo94.jpg
Leaks- You got a nice style, the R is cool but it kinda sticks out from the rest of your letters, maybe make the A like that too?

Bump

[klic]

um you used 1 bar for all your letters and then busted out 2 bars for your r? only letter that looks clean in the whole thing is that A. Your G looks nothing like a G, the only way I could somewhat tell is because Im a graffiti writer. That handstyle looks wack also i would keep practicing it to find flow.

dude, you dont use bars for throwies lol. and his hand looks dope. you have no right to tell him his stuff is wack when this is all your bringing to the table

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/BS%20Battles/Maniac.jpg

[-sense-]

the a's middle bars need ta be widened

[klic]

its not mine lol

[JustChillin]

bigblue - lookin at that throw i see some stuff i could change already. im just tweakin shit little by little. thanks for explainin my throw and simple hand to him while i was away :cool:

chillin - i didnt bust out two bars on my R. i didnt lift the pen on one that except for the dot. i let my hand go and it went too far and created that space. wasnt intentional. as for my hand im not in to that comlicated squished shit. simple does it for me. i dont want just writers to know what my shit says. my E to me is fine and how dos the a not fit?


how come lately everyone is quick to bash shit instead of jus sayin oh i dont like that or you should change that.everyone needs to take a chill pill and crit others like were suppose to do in here. not beef and bash shit.
i said the T didnt fit not the A. and klic i did that a long time ago and even said myself that it was shit. next time why dont you pull something up that ive done recently instead of something thats old.

edit: and this is what i meant by the bars

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0812091325.jpg

[Regius]

i don't pay for shit either but but i care about my markers + it looks awful and when you blow it up that big it's just highlighting the flaws

i don't usually beef but i could burn your ass so shut your mouth faggot

:p:p:p

hilarious how he doesnt even reply. someone just got put down haha!

[klic]

i said the T didnt fit not the A. and klic i did that a long time ago and even said myself that it was shit. next time why dont you pull something up that ive done recently instead of something thats old.


ok, heres your most recent (a couple days ago).your old blockbuster looks better but whatever.

http://i714.photobucket.com/albums/ww141/Davon2093/0801092145.jpg

im not trying to start anything with you, just dont go calling grate wack when hes a lot better than you

[LeaksOne]

i still have no idea whats your talkin about chillin. like klic said there arent bars in throws

[BigBlueViolence]

He's saying it's weird that there is a space between your R, but your A has no space.
However, he is speaking dumbfuck, which can be very hard to translate at times.

[99%Shit]

I kind of understand what duke's saying, I think. But it looks fine the way it is. And the G is fine, but maybe you should listen to him, he's a graffiti writer. Haha. Oof at those Maniks.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2425/3816999620_70321e0a89.jpg

[peacebomb]

Maniac your throw and handi are improving. Keep at it.

[LeaksOne]

He's saying it's weird that there is a space between your R, but your A has no space.
However, he is speaking dumbfuck, which can be very hard to translate at times.

haha thanks for translating that for me. but like i said earlier my hand went to far while i was doin it so that space is unintentional

[weakfingers]

Zarb- The shines are weird.

The maniac shit is wack i dont know where people are going with that.

99%shit-Looks good to me.

Its kinda weird to see people on here with more then 100 posts with a horrible throwie. No hating but it kinda shows that you might be spending to much time on a computer. No hating or anything its just something I noticed.

Thinking about a name change. Im tired of writing six letters all the time it sucks when your boming n such. and keeping proportion throughout the whole thing is tough...
Tell me wacha think!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6381.jpg

[LeaksOne]

The maniac shit is wack i dont know where people are going with that.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6381.jpg

with the manik thing klic was sayin he shouldnt try an bash my shit since his isnt good.

your throw looks pretty solid to me maybe tweak your C and make your N a lil thinner. other then that its straight

[expozay]

yo someone want to do a shem throwie for me i'm havinf mad trouble getting something i'm happy with need some inspiration.

[Alone_NC]

:p:p:p

hilarious how he doesnt even reply. someone just got put down haha!

Or maybe I'm not sitting around my computer everyday.. Amazing how that works.

Peg- You have a valid point, but if I'm trying to tweak a throw.. wouldn't I want to see all my flaws and fix them? I'm not trying to beef with you. I'm garbage, that's why I'm here. To get crits and get better. You just bashed me without helping. I haven't been trying to be an ass. I'm just trying to defend myself. Not start shit.

I come here. Get crits for a bit and leave, work with what I got and put something up again in like 2 weeks. Hell. I changed names between times I was here last and came back. Until I have something I feel semi good about. I'll be gone.

[B.S. POLICE]

you guys make me sad all these toys talking shit about whos toyer. no offence but 99 is the most decent shit i saw on here in the past 3 pages so all you guys should sit down stfu and keep practicing

[EST2007]

lol makes me think of that quote, i forget who said it...

bombingscience = toys arguing about who's more toy

[EST2007]

i guess while i'm in this topic, BS, last time we were out u said u had ideas to tweak my throw....

[B.S. POLICE]

it was jet who said that, and hes damn right, yeah yeah send me a two letter sketch ill help you out real quick. i gotta do a final paper and its due at midnight tonight so i dont have much time

[EST2007]

no rush, i'm at work, i'll send it tommorrow sometime

[B.S. POLICE]

word up

[expozay]

yo someone want to do a shem throwie for me i'm havinf mad trouble getting something i'm happy with need some inspiration.

bump

[B.S. POLICE]

no...

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah man, not doing it either.

[Camer]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6381.jpg

Looks good, the only thing I don't like is how the E overlaps.

And Leaks, lets stop the back and forth its just clogging up the throwies thread. I didn't want to start beef and I never said I was better than you, shit I've been drawing throwies for like 2 months so I obviously wouldn't over hype myself. I'll still battle you if you want though.

There's my attempt at making amendments and being an adult.
I just went on a roadtrip so here's a few diff things I tried while sitting in a car for 6 hours.
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw020.jpghttp://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw023-1.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw025-1.jpghttp://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw022-1.jpg
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw021-1.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

Or maybe I'm not sitting around my computer everyday.. Amazing how that works.

Peg- You have a valid point, but if I'm trying to tweak a throw.. wouldn't I want to see all my flaws and fix them? I'm not trying to beef with you. I'm garbage, that's why I'm here. To get crits and get better. You just bashed me without helping. I haven't been trying to be an ass. I'm just trying to defend myself. Not start shit.

I come here. Get crits for a bit and leave, work with what I got and put something up again in like 2 weeks. Hell. I changed names between times I was here last and came back. Until I have something I feel semi good about. I'll be gone.

i'm not even gonna bother replying this thread has enough beef as it is

[DestroyLA]

Came i think you should make the middle hump on your "M" smaller.

im still practicing on my throw
i used a fat marker on the outline so it didnt come out well.
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0813091858.jpg

[Fury]

Bezar - Your B is weird; take off the extensions on the left. Your E is too long on the bottom. Make both ends of the Z match. Take that extension off the R, and make the leg the same length as the other one. Basically, practice and work on your bars.
Came - I like the fourth the best, work with it.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/safethrowup.jpg?t=1250219589

[weakfingers]

^^^The only thing i like is your name. Made my night.
There's already a Safe.... He kills it -----> http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SAFEwall2.htm



Im on the verge of changing names. I like SQUINT but its super long and i can change the letters around but on the other hand COEN is super easy to draw but theres not a lot I can do with the letters. Advice anyone?

Oh the that squint throweeeeee is really out of proportion.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6389.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

[QUOTE=weakfingers;1450510]^^^The only thing i like is your name. Made my night.
There's already a Safe.... He kills it -----> http://www.iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SAFEwall2.htm

damn i didnt even know there was another but im not surprised, ive been thinking about changing my name anyway, but i wont since im the only one w. the name in my area, also yeah i just made the throwup recently and i need crits.

[BigBlueViolence]

I like the coen shit better, weak.

I'd make the N fatter.
If you are gonna do glasses, I'd go all out with a face.

http://i26.tinypic.com/2zqsg79.jpg

[klic]

if you sent me an entry for the 'little vagina' handstyle battle or 'cyan' throwie battle, send it to me again because i did a system recovery on my computer and deleted everything. The deadline for both of these battles has been extended until sunday if your still looking to get in

[Fury]

You write on cardboard? Make all your letters the same size

To safe.

Coen - I'm not digging the name that much, but your throwie is alright.

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000094.jpg


crits yo

[EST2007]

im still practicing on my throw
i used a fat marker on the outline so it didnt come out well.
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0813091858.jpg

the whole point of a throw is to get up quick and big. it's alllll about flow. you lack flow in your letters when put together. you should be able to bust out a hollow like nothin.

if you're thinkin "so what do i change to make it better?", stop right there. fuck with your lines, look how the letters flow together (if at all. if not, pick better letters). don't ask for anyone to exchange with you, i feel it's best to practice "trial and error" cuz it forces you to get familiar with your letters and it'll help progress your own style. what you write is your name, and your name should flow naturally...

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0641.jpg

bezar: start with simpler keyboard letters..like actually just copy them, and then tweak out some stuff

[DestroyLA]

thanks everyone for the advice. Is this better?

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0814091655.jpg

[Shurik*n]

^ lose the...drop? on ur b.

[DestroyLA]

ok how about this.

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0814091835.jpg

[weakfingers]

Throws ar usually bubbly kinda. Like its hard to do a tech throw when your just starting out. My advice is to keep your shit like the most basic of letters and go from there. Ill post an example in abit.

[Shurik*n]

^^ yes..exactly

[aekone]

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo22.jpg

Con- Work on your shading. Like try to get it all lined up and stuff. And make sure your outline color is the same color as your shadow. For throws at least.
Bezar- Try to stay away from lower case R's. Just personal experience. Other than that it's just the evolution of your letters.

Crits please? Plen blows had to outline a few times....

[Aesir]

^ see? Not dead.

[LeaksOne]

edit: comment was directed to swim but he deleted his post.

[weakfingers]

What? That ghoul is amazing, Well thats just my opinion. The lines in the H that connect the two seems kinda messy but thats probably a stupid mistake.



First throw, with a new name, I know it looks like shit. And I know the fetusR skinhead kid is gonna see this on here, Your throw was dissed..... fucked up on the hole in the O up and N.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6482.jpg

[LeaksOne]

i think you should make your C like your E. and i wasnt talkin to ghoul. his is gravy. i edited the post

[Swim]

Here, this more to your liking? Sorry for the crap quality, had to hold the comp and the notebook and press the goddamn button haha
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/9785/swimthrow.png

[LeaksOne]

all the letters need to be the same height. define your W and M more. and change your S

[Shurik*n]

does my shadowing still need work?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0650.jpg

swim: make the lines in the m and w longer...

[aekone]

Con- Shadowing is good. Now work on the flow of your letters.

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1995.jpg
didnt come out great but u get the idea

[weakfingers]

The shadow is good on the bottom but its not correct at the top. Try more of this. I fixed it up and added a few things here and there...

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/coooon.jpg

[faser]

I need crits/help on my throwies
these were both done in less than 2 mins in pen so yeh

stuck - i like that throwie, but in the E i reckon u shud just put one line through so it flows better

con- decent throwie but i guess its lacking flair especially since u only have 3 letters to work on

[thephillafromma]

faser make ur letters the same size they get bigger and bigger or at least in that second one they do

[nmm]

con - on your n add a little curve to the bottom instead of a straight line
bezar - dont put that thing on your B
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6154/pictures018w.jpg (http://img188.imageshack.us/i/pictures018w.jpg/)http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/pictures018w.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img188/pictures018w.jpg/1/)
URL=http://img43.imageshack.us/i/pictures020h.jpg/]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/7798/pictures020h.jpg[/URL]http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/pictures020h.jpg/1/w320.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img43/pictures020h.jpg/1/)

[crystalmeth and abortions]

nmm that first one... the a is clean man.
Stuck- shits good. just i feel the lines are a little sloppy. keep doin over and over and over til its burnd into ur brain n flows right outta u.. but ima say keep it the way it is.

posted few days ago n got dissed....
i desided i realie am happy with the SAW, i have a good f.. just fucked this one up.. but ive gone threw so many fucking T's and can not find one to fit this style.. can any one help me out please? id really appreciate it
http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/81/l_71b5dee545494b8e9f7ad727b73e9860.jpg

[weakfingers]

Im not trying to be mean but that shit sucks! Its not in proportion. The S is basic, but why did you get huge when it came to the W. You cant see a T there at all. If your gonna do a T you need to show both sides. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just trying to help you out. The S and the F are the only basic letters. I know this might sound harsh but when you get better and look back on this your gonna understand.
I know my throw sucks but I tried your name.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6517.jpg

[crystalmeth and abortions]

this was my first time out in 6 or 7 months n i drew it out like 30 min before. n i did it in like 20 min on a hot as fuckin spot 2 am, pitch dark... trust me, it looks like i suck. but thats not my origonal shit. its also the first time i spelt it SAWFT. all my other premeditated shit is soft. the shit i already worked out the kinks.. so give me credit and take the enviorment and new letters... n a little bit of booze.. into concideration... imma post the origonal drawing and show u what the W was sposed to look like. but yea man, what u drew actually really helps cuz i dig that style. it cool if i kinda work from it?_______________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ______________________
soo this is what i drew 30 min before we got to the spot (remember i was tipsy lol so im really not that bad) hopfully ull see what i was tryin to get at.
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/92/l_75bb7cbeaaa94774af2efe9714e2faf3.jpg
though still a terrible sketch. drew it with cell phone light in a car

[Black Flag]

this was my first time out in 6 or 7 months n i drew it out like 30 min before. n i did it in like 20 min on a hot as fuckin spot 2 am, pitch dark... trust me, it looks like i suck. but thats not my origonal shit. its also the first time i spelt it SAWFT. all my other premeditated shit is soft. the shit i already worked out the kinks.. so give me credit and take the enviorment and new letters... n a little bit of booze.. into concideration... imma post the origonal drawing and show u what the W was sposed to look like. but yea man, what u drew actually really helps cuz i dig that style. it cool if i kinda work from it?

Dude... no excuses.

Everytime anyone on here sees a flick of a bomb, we are already taking all that shit into consideration. Besides paper and legal walls, there is no such thing as the perfect or normal environment for writing. Everytime you go out crazy shit is going down and there is always something to hamper your ability to paint.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

no im sayin i pretty much stoped drawing graf for that long in general.. they are excuses. but any one that stops for a min has to get there barrings back.. but u think the paper is more a reasonable consept than the wall?_____________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________________________ tryin to find flix of my old shit with SOFT n all i could find is my shortned toss n this flick is actually the first time i painted the SO lol. i gotta go out and get flix of all my shit i took time on
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/104/l_9e8588fb0c4949ecad5957f17272d9bf.jpg
but i dig my s for the SO... im just to lazy to think up a F n T

[weakfingers]

Black flag just said it all... No excuses.

I think big blue violence Posted it before but It went something like this.
"No one see's "drunk as fuck" or " First time out" and thinks oh there better now." If you havent drawn in awhile dont go out and paint its a simple as that. Go ahead and get some ideas off my letters where all here to help each other.



I Got bored waiting for work so i threw this together, The face is gay... I know.
Done with oil pastel.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6518.jpg

[crystalmeth and abortions]

oh yea, i didnt expect to go out n crush it first time out in a while. i was just goin for the fun n the rush n to get my barrings back.
just so im not just talking heres another old SOFT throw i was doin for a while
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_84fd7c17ceeb576b959790b10a4301cf.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

oh yea, i didnt expect to go out n crush it first time out in a while. i was just goin for the fun n the rush n to get my barrings back.
just so im not just talking heres another old SOFT throw i was doin for a while
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_84fd7c17ceeb576b959790b10a4301cf.jpg
THAT says "Soft"?
*grunts in disgust*
looks like "Isfe"

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yea its not that hard to tell homeboy.. only thing hard to grasp is the attachment on top of the o... dont talk shit then not post what u got....
ANY WHOOO weakfingers. i actualy changed it up so im not usein your throw. but i really liked your A and W, n im goin to paint in a few min. imma throw it up n post later... thanks alot bro.

[gumOnShoe]

yea its not that hard to tell homeboy.. only thing hard to grasp is the attachment on top of the o... dont talk shit then not post what u got....
ANY WHOOO weakfingers. i actualy changed it up so im not usein your throw. but i really liked your A and W, n im goin to paint in a few min. imma throw it up n post later... thanks alot bro.
lol, if you were to check back a few pages i posted like 2 throws, which aren't too good, but they definitely kick the shit out of that throw in particular.

[Staz]

Bezar- its alright i just think ur Z doesnt flow with your letters
made up a new name crits???
http://i473.photobucket.com/albums/rr99/ilovepie247/153325.jpg

[crystalmeth and abortions]

just looked. and no. u suck... bad... and that was drawn on paper... uu cannt even paint. little shit talkin new ass toy. u dont even have fucking marker controll bitch. n if u wanna try to prove me wrong then lets battle tonight. ill write your name n u write mine. at 12.. punk bitch

[Black Flag]

Bezar- its alright i just think ur Z doesnt flow with your letters
made up a new name crits???
http://i473.photobucket.com/albums/rr99/ilovepie247/153325.jpg

Don't do bubble letters. They are probably one of the hardest style of throws to create with no prior experience.

Honestly, work on straight and block letter work and handstyles. You won't believe how much better you will get if you practice those enough.

[gumOnShoe]

just looked. and no. u suck... bad... and that was drawn on paper... uu cannt even paint. little shit talkin new ass toy. u dont even have fucking marker controll bitch. n if u wanna try to prove me wrong then lets battle tonight. ill write your name n u write mine. at 12.. punk bitch
lol, you have to be joking, even if i don't have "marker control" as you say, it still kicks the shit out that other horrible ass throw you did on this on this page,
"new ass toy", lol, talk about contradiction, you have some shitty ass just started writing for like 2weeks style gtfo outta here w/ that "Isfe" throw, lol.
go ahead, lets see you attempt at my name, i also saw your other beef exchange, and i swear i laughed....so yeah, please, shut me up since your so confident in your self.
lol, and that "T" at the top of the page looks like a deformed K LMAO

[STFUPPERCUT]

Im not trying to be mean but that shit sucks! Its not in proportion. The S is basic, but why did you get huge when it came to the W. You cant see a T there at all. If your gonna do a T you need to show both sides. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just trying to help you out. The S and the F are the only basic letters. I know this might sound harsh but when you get better and look back on this your gonna understand.
I know my throw sucks but I tried your name.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6517.jpg

looks more liek a E dude

[BigBlueViolence]

I really enjoy that a, though.

[BlacktodaFuture]

looks more liek a E dude

its would be a pretty nice E.

[PegCityBoy]

oh yea, i didnt expect to go out n crush it first time out in a while. i was just goin for the fun n the rush n to get my barrings back.
just so im not just talking heres another old SOFT throw i was doin for a while
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/62/l_84fd7c17ceeb576b959790b10a4301cf.jpg

yo that shit does look like isfe you're pushing the steeze on it to much... and quit making excuses and accept that you're toy along with the rest of us

there is no way in hell anyone would be able to tell that says soft unless they were told it was then stared at the letters for a bit

[LeaksOne]

what the fuck is up with everyone in here? everybodys lookin for beef. oh you suck, yeah so do you go look at my shit its better, so what my suck is better then your suck blah blah. how bout everyone shut the fuck up give constructive crits and go on about there day. if your hurt by someones comments pm them and dont be so quick to bash shit the toys thread is for us to help each other not to start beef. ive given up pretty much all hope on these threads which is why i seldomly post my shit. we need a complete turn around in here.

weak work on that F. i really like your W for some reason. keep it up

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/blackbookhgck004.jpg?t=1250464554

i need serious help w. my throw. i have been putting off working on it for a while, crits please.

[PegCityBoy]

scrap the S and the A the GE looks pretty dec. wellll scrap the s for sure and tweak that a around a little bit

edit: shit just realised it's supposed to the safe lol as an f it's kinda off IMO good G though lol

[BlacktodaFuture]

scrap the S and the A the GE looks pretty dec. wellll scrap the s for sure and tweak that a around a little bit

edit: shit just realised it's supposed to the safe lol as an f it's kinda off IMO good G though lol

i think i will just make the S simple the A i will work on, i will figure something out, and idk how the F looks like a G.

[Stuck]

lolololol crystal meths look like isee aha no one can trueley decipher his steeze....

[PegCityBoy]

i think i will just make the S simple the A i will work on, i will figure something out, and idk how the F looks like a G.

if you put a line in the top part it kinda does i unno

[BlacktodaFuture]

if you put a line in the top part it kinda does i unno


ohh haha i see it now, haha, you're right.

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i29.tinypic.com/15q3nl3.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i29.tinypic.com/15q3nl3.jpg

thx, but i dont like the A. but thx again.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

yo that shit does look like isfe you're pushing the steeze on it to much... and quit making excuses and accept that you're toy along with the rest of us

there is no way in hell anyone would be able to tell that says soft unless they were told it was then stared at the letters for a bit

? i dont do that throw any more? thats an excuse? shits more than a year old. lol ur all gettin worked up on my old throw. its not even what i put up any more... n the one with me in it isnt my throw either. i was dickin around. gumonmyshoes... u really do suck. and if u wanna battle ill fry ur little 15 year old bitch ass

[Stuck]

guys guys guys....we all noe im the best aha jks
but crystal meth u do suck....accept it and move on

and big blue how is that an A it looks like a z with a dot in it.... and ur e and f look to simeler it looks like it says SZEE

[crystalmeth and abortions]

i do. and u know what i write now... totaly... not just what i have from a year ago...

[crystalmeth and abortions]

its funny. cuz ur prolly a little 15 16 year old n just love talkin shit... i posted sayin it sucks. askin for improvments, n i guess u suck is a crit... if u got balls give me some info about u. whats your myspace? facebook, anything. addresss.......... know what im sayin

[Stuck]

well then why r u posting up old shit buddey boy post up new shit...god dam
and how about u give me ur info becuase and ill check it and if we live even remotley close ill come over with my colouring book and teach u couple things :D

[crystalmeth and abortions]

i did.... and i posted old shit just cuz i was talkin. im not gonna talk and not post... come on... give me some info on u. are u affraid? u really think ill leave state to find u? u got the mouth. back it up

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/87/l_b0383ffe39654ee68c231df743cb13c3.jpg
not gonna fil a thead with talkin n no posts...

[Ume]

You give graffiti a BAD name.

[Stuck]

lol amen to that...god dam kids dummer then eminem sniffin gasoline....btw if u wana post ur information up on a site that is most likely monitored....nock ur self out bud and i probably am younger....but way better....widsom comes not from age but from experience SUCK ON THAT KNOWLEDGE =D

[crystalmeth and abortions]

that throws fine, basic and readable... n its in the toy sec just like u.... but stuck.. pm me it then... u got the mouth on the internet...

[Stuck]

first off... ill tell u this toronto and second off can we please battle so i can humiliate ur stubbern ass?

[crystalmeth and abortions]

im stuborn cuz i posted askin for improvments n insted got some little 15 year old cock suckers talkin shit... we'll battle over email. what u scarred cuz ur just across a river from me? psh nah. dont be. whats ur info. pm me or shut your pre pubecent fucking mouth

[BlacktodaFuture]

will u guys shut the fuck up? post pics.

[Stuck]

o dear lord.... i didnt put in work and i made u a throw for u to use...your welcome and pwease stop tewifiying mwee :(
enjoi
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1996.jpg

[LeaksOne]

battle and stop fuckin arguin you little girls. fuck

[BlacktodaFuture]

o dear lord.... i didnt put in work and i made u a throw for u to use...your welcome and pwease stop tewifiying mwee :(
enjoi
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1996.jpg

i like this, make the bottom of the E alittle bigger. thanks. i like the penis handstyle too hahaha

[Stuck]

u can work with it its ur throw now

[crystalmeth and abortions]

thats for me?

[BlacktodaFuture]

thats for me?

no fool.

[gumOnShoe]

thats for me?

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH..... his first reaction was to see if he could bite, lol.

[PegCityBoy]

lol fuck crystal meth stop being a little bitch shut up and move on unless you're that stubborn in which case either me gumonshoe or stuck will battle you and burn your ass

[BlacktodaFuture]

somebody battle him.

[weakfingers]

All this toy beef is getting dumb, If you wanna bitch at each other thats what PM's are for other then that doont trash the forum.



SAFE
Go simple with a throw. Keep it to bare minimums that way it will be easier for you to do in the street. And Out of them so far, id go with Big Blue's Its the most simple and That A is mad original. With some tweaking that would look pretty cool. Heres my wack at it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6519.jpg


Oh and 2 page buump on this one...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6518.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

All this toy beef is getting dumb, If you wanna bitch at each other thats what PM's are for other then that doont trash the forum.



SAFE
Go simple with a throw. Keep it to bare minimums that way it will be easier for you to do in the street. And Out of them so far, id go with Big Blue's Its the most simple and That A is mad original. With some tweaking that would look pretty cool. Heres my wack at it
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6519.jpg


Oh and 2 page buump on this one...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6518.jpg



thx for the help, especially since your throws are usually fresh as hell

[weakfingers]

Sorry for all this shit posting but heres something i threw together for a little homie, Criits please.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6520.jpg

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1999.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1998.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1997.jpg

playin around with diff throws

[Anion]

Ya'll talk a lot of nonsense. It's nice and sunny all over the USA. Go out and paint. Do work.

[crystalmeth and abortions]

my bad for all the beeef, wastin space, Weakfingers, thats hot. you really got your letters on lock.
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/110/l_02e1f256242a4132825d8d059b752403.jpg
painting i did that i liked the throw, though i never used it again

[BlacktodaFuture]

end result of working on my throw

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/SAFETHROWUP-1.jpg?t=1250543798

[thadanks]

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/482/a1487b65a65112505156420.jpg

shortened "dk" throw, i definitely see how out of proportion they are, but im wondering if anyone has any suggestions of what to do with the k, im not really feelin it

[noholdups_jusswrite]

DK- just make the top of the K shorter and it would look so much better

[your dad]

dk: try adding 3d

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0960.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0962.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0979.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0980.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0981.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0992.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0965.jpg

[Shurik*n]

so i tweaked out the o a bit..and the n..how's it look?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/dscn0652.jpg

i drew with a flat marker so it's not shadowed...and i know my hand needs work

devor: in ur last two, the d's don't really fit in imo

[LIZARD]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1997.jpg
that o looks like a bs bite...i know its a common thing to use but even the mouth is the same

[STFUPPERCUT]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1997.jpg
that o looks like a bs bite...i know its a common thing to use but even the mouth is the same

i noticed that too..

[Stuck]

eh i was jus playin around seeing what it would look like...didnt really dig it n e ways

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_2010.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_2008.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_2009.jpg

[Anion]

There are sour power candy straws that have faces like that on the label...

So ya, they're prevalent.

[PegCityBoy]

crystalmeth: les fry up the beef an make burgers the faces look dope it jus doesn't work to well with the throw keep hammerin it out you've kinda got the right idea going but scrap that T an u might wanna forcefield it in black

blacktodafuture: looks a helluva lot better, the only letter i might change up a bit would be the f i was playin around with it it's a hard letter, and watch the size of your E

thedanks: keep that in the books for now needs a lot of work

RGB: looks better than the last stuff i've seen from you good to see you're painting unlike myself : (

Devor: keep workin on your D it's hurting in general though it's looking pretty hot

[B.S. POLICE]

i noticed that too..

it happens so often that ive grown to not care anymore, if it helps their progression then great. however if i see it or them at a wall bitting my shit, theyll get crushed

[haze4life]

evrytime theirs a caracter in a O, its called out as an ohsnap bite..... he didnt invent characters in letters

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, no direspect to BS 5-0, but I wouldn't call a face in a letter a bite.

Granted, a lot of dudes on this forum that ARE doing it because they see Snap doing it, but there are just as many dudes coming up with shit like that on their own.

I could understand Snap getting pissed
if he saw dude in his city
with the same face that he uses in their O,
but just a face in a letter isn't a bite.

[Staz]

Devor- its ok but im just sayin i think u need a new style

[B.S. POLICE]

ive never claimed to invent the face in letters throws, god knows im deff not the first one to use them, but ive seen some stuff on here before thas just like come on... when its too blatant i might say something but usually like the kid on top of the page even if i influenced him its far off enough that i dont care

[BigBlueViolence]

That's what I'm saying.

Not you, but dudes on here are quick to say "Nice Ohsnap face",
just to feel like they're an important part of the internet.

[B.S. POLICE]

i know, it makes me feel special :)

[Stuck]

actually for the guys that say im biting....sorry to kill ur fun but ive been putting faces in throws for a long time for example an old name

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/062.jpg

[B.S. POLICE]

lol settle down stuck you dont want any part of this discussion

[Stuck]

this discusion started with me lol btw u should put my name in ur mad respect list lolz

[B.S. POLICE]

and why would i do that?

[Stuck]

cus im a funkey cat :D

[B.S. POLICE]

ill tell you right now, you will NEVER be on my respect list. no beef but all those heads have helped me progress and become the writer that i am today

[BigBlueViolence]

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/__OJDwy1dbbo/R5uVQYVpQzI/AAAAAAAAAJ8/0Puet0yyqB0/s320/crying%2Bvotey%2Bsmiley.bmp

I'm flattered

On an unrelated note, that vile shit you did is nice, mayne.

[Stuck]

tru the only head who helped me was Rasek but then they banns him :(
this was wen i had my old account

[BlacktodaFuture]

i feel like me and bigblue have started to bond more, maybe one day we will move in together =-D

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo106.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

the A doesnt feel like it fully fits for me but your R and K are good.

[weakfingers]

Your R doesent looks liek a R and The K looks to me like an H

[graffdabusup]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image1.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

I would lose the bumps on the top of the letters, just make the top of the R round on the right and flat on the left.

I think it'd look better with lines instead of holes.

[weakfingers]

Reep,I tried to freestyle your name..... did not turn out to well.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6698-1.jpg



One liner throw ive been working on all night... Critisizm wanted please.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6697.jpg

[e97]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/e.jpg
http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/throwup.jpg

[weakfingers]

Are you actully repping swastika's in your throw?

[Bombing With Insurance]

whats with the nazi?

[BlacktodaFuture]

soup nazi... graff nazi? anyone else seeing a trend here?

[DestroyLA]

the swastika is a pretty powerful symbol. Don't know why you would want to go that route anyways in graffiti unless you are writing for a political reason.

[aciddemos]

crits?
http://img35.yfrog.com/img35/8679/photo94h.jpg

[weakfingers]

^^^The K is getting a little out of control.


The guy who's writing his name with the swastika your probably giving graff a bad rep in your area. There's a fag in my area that writes STRK whos a wanna be skinhead and he does drippy upside down crosses everywhere. In turn when regular civilians see that shit it just adds to all the bad stereotypes of graff.

[e97]

the swastika is a pretty powerful symbol. Don't know why you would want to go that route anyways in graffiti unless you are writing for a political reason.
What you interpret the swastika to be and what it actually is are completely different things. The swastika is a symbol of peace and prosperity, which has been use by India, China, japan and many more other countries.

[Bombing With Insurance]

The 卐 is a Hindu symbol.

The 卐 is a Buddhist symbol.

The 卐 appears on maps in Asia to denote temples.

The 卐 is famous.

The 卐 means good luck.

The 卐 is drawn on houses in India.

The 卐 is a common design in many cultures.

There is a town named 卐 that has refused to change its name.

The 卐 is one of the most powerful symbols in the world.

The 卐 is an ancient symbol which was abused by racist Europeans.

The 卐 was banned by Google from showing up in its search trends.

They display of the 卐 is found to be offensive by Europeans.

Even though the 卐 is a holy symbol in much of the world.

The European Union tried to prohibit the 卐, but failed, because racist European ideas about it don't fit in with a multicultural society.

The 卐 is a Chinese character.

The 卐 means myriad, or 10,000 in Chinese.


Matter what it is I don't think it really needs to be on your piece.. Respect the others on the forum

[BigBlueViolence]

whats with the nazi?
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-17-09_0123.jpg
I am 99.5% sure I have seen this on the internet as a "graffiti font"

[Anion]

The 卐 is a Hindu symbol.

The 卐 is a Buddhist symbol.

The 卐 appears on maps in Asia to denote temples.

The 卐 is famous.

The 卐 means good luck.

The 卐 is drawn on houses in India.

The 卐 is a common design in many cultures.

There is a town named 卐 that has refused to change its name.

The 卐 is one of the most powerful symbols in the world.

The 卐 is an ancient symbol which was abused by racist Europeans.

The 卐 was banned by Google from showing up in its search trends.

They display of the 卐 is found to be offensive by Europeans.

Even though the 卐 is a holy symbol in much of the world.

The European Union tried to prohibit the 卐, but failed, because racist European ideas about it don't fit in with a multicultural society.

The 卐 is a Chinese character.

The 卐 means myriad, or 10,000 in Chinese.


Matter what it is I don't think it really needs to be on your piece.. Respect the others on the forum

You forgot about the Norse god, Thor. He wielded a hammer and a twisted cross.
If it weren't for a certain political party of the early to mid 1900's, there would be no problem related to this symbol in the world we live in today.

I don't find it offensive considering the 20 other things that symbol can mean.

[milk boxx]

weakfingahs - im feelin that one liner

[dingd0ng]

http://i489.photobucket.com/albums/rr259/graffdabusup/Mobile%20Uploads/Image1.jpg

lose the holes and the random bumps at the top homie

[Bombing With Insurance]

I am 99.5% sure I have seen this on the internet as a "graffiti font"

Bet you have, never called it as my style just a throwie

[dingd0ng]

dont bite internet shit then

[Bostonsavage]

crits?
http://img35.yfrog.com/img35/8679/photo94h.jpg

I love it<3

[Bombing With Insurance]

dont bite internet shit then

Just be quiet and post something...
thats useful... like a pic

[STFUPPERCUT]

crits?
http://img35.yfrog.com/img35/8679/photo94h.jpg

digging it man, jsut work on your handstyle some more the thorw is pretty solid dude keep it up i like it

[BigBlueViolence]

Just be quiet and post something...
thats useful... like a pic
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_zYaFP45lGWM/Rx-Ii-TfDOI/AAAAAAAAAig/epmPle52U98/s320/u%2Bmad.jpg

Trying to play biting off like it's an okay thing to do,
THEN telling other *****s that they're counter-productive?
YOU CRAZY, B.

The Dek above me is dope, but I'd work on cleaning up the face in the middle.
If you're going to add that amount of detail to the face, I'd work on making it look less like the letter.

[dingd0ng]

Just be quiet and post something...
thats useful... like a pic

yaya dont get all pissy when i say something you dont wanna hear homie
grab a style that isnt ripped on the internet before you get all defensive

[Shurik*n]

haha..i should probably work on my tag more...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820192442.jpg

dek: looking good.
reep: like what everyone else is saying. lose the bumps, use lines
coen: either it's the c is too small, or it doesn't fit in..i can't really tell, but work on the c.

[ilikekicks]

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s116/Wasd4life/IMG_3035.jpg?t=1250812505

[(RKO) FIN/FLUX]

yaya dont get all pissy when i say something you dont wanna hear homie
grab a style that isnt ripped on the internet before you get all defensive

Ding dong shut the fuck up
Post some of your own shit
People with four fucking post need to shut the fuck up WTF
By the way POST A picture\

ilikekicks I'm liking that maybe work on that hand though

[dingd0ng]

Ding dong shut the fuck up
Post some of your own shit
People with four fucking post need to shut the fuck up WTF
By the way POST A picture\

ilikekicks I'm liking that maybe work on that hand though

this aint my first account here, been here a year just lost my account
dont tell me what to do homie, ill post my shit when i feel like it, fuckin herb

con - its looking good so far, just keep workin mang

[B.S. POLICE]

are you serious?? that con is awful

[BlacktodaFuture]

con: get a style that isnt played out and clean up your lines

[dingd0ng]

are you serious?? that con is awful

to be honest i just scrolled down and gave it a quick glance, its got some potential i guess lol, just gave a crit so whoevers running tings up there wouldnt pms anymore

[Shurik*n]

con: get a style that isnt played out and clean up your lines


so basically..ur just saying start over?

[Mr yarbles]

Just be quiet and post something...
thats useful... like a pic

Why don't you go suck a dick or something
I'm sure youre better at that than graffiti.

HEY TOYS.

You ARE NOT allowed to call cats out until you are actually good.

If everyone went by that rule the game would be a better place.

[BlacktodaFuture]

so basically..ur just saying start over?

no i mean, learn some other style, do some research, then use what you know to make your own and just practice. dont bite, or do, idc what you do

[DestroyLA]

haha..i should probably work on my tag more...

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090820192442.jpg

dek: looking good.
reep: like what everyone else is saying. lose the bumps, use lines
coen: either it's the c is too small, or it doesn't fit in..i can't really tell, but work on the c.
honestly your trying way too hard. Look at other peoples throws that you think is good. go to the battle thread and look at some old entries with words that have the same letters as CON or the word witht he most letters in it. Try mimicking those letters but dont fully bite it. You can learn style that way.

[KidReny!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/6491_101794356502110_10000014638399.jpg

decided on a name change needed something to write that used my best letters, plus I wanted something a little bit longer than 4 letters

kicks- that shit be dope as fuck!
acid- diggin the colors

[BlacktodaFuture]

idk what i dont like about it, but it bores me and you need to work on your handstyle that is all

[B.S. POLICE]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/6491_101794356502110_10000014638399.jpg

decided on a name change needed something to write that used my best letters, plus I wanted something a little bit longer than 4 letters

kicks- that shit be dope as fuck!
acid- diggin the colors

why would you want something longer than 4 letters? trust me its not practical it will fuck you in so many ways in the end

[KidReny!]

makes since

[-AnTi-]

Scratch - Nice And simp, I like it. I'd try shorten it to maybe 4/5 letter. up to you.
acid - shits nice man, good colours too.

Here something I've been working on. Crits please:
http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx326/_LERT_/throw.jpg
this is just a quick outline at the moment. Need some more colours.
many thanks.

[medacog1]

What do you write?

[BlacktodaFuture]

Scratch - Nice And simp, I like it. I'd try shorten it to maybe 4/5 letter. up to you.
acid - shits nice man, good colours too.

Here something I've been working on. Crits please:
http://i768.photobucket.com/albums/xx326/_LERT_/throw.jpg
this is just a quick outline at the moment. Need some more colours.
many thanks.

i think you have the same problem as scratch and that other guy, whatever he wrote, started w. a C i think. learn some more styles, learn from them, dont bite, learn, and make your own.

[KtRL.]

^^^The K is getting a little out of control.


The guy who's writing his name with the swastika your probably giving graff a bad rep in your area. There's a fag in my area that writes STRK whos a wanna be skinhead and he does drippy upside down crosses everywhere. In turn when regular civilians see that shit it just adds to all the bad stereotypes of graff.

i hear repping dicks in your throws is better.

[Shurik*n]

i think you have the same problem as scratch and that other guy, whatever he wrote, started w. a C i think. learn some more styles, learn from them, dont bite, learn, and make your own.


...u mean me?

anyways, u guys told me to look at others and...not really bite, but like..develop a style from it. anyways, before i get too into the new way I write it this is what i have so far...instead of doing it for like a week, post, and then get told the same thing. the c came from this dude:

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=12972

the o came from something in one of the old battles...i forget which one, and the n i just kinda made myself

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090822232518.jpg

..so keep trying? or work with this one and see where i go?

[Five Sixx Ace]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b258/lpu8462/IMG_0451.jpg

idk just a quick one.


con- looking good man.