Throwies

[BlacktodaFuture]

this is my throw up

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/SAFETHROWUP-1.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

and con, each letter is a different style, thats not good. keep working on it

[Eon 1]

...u mean me?

anyways, u guys told me to look at others and...not really bite, but like..develop a style from it. anyways, before i get too into the new way I write it this is what i have so far...instead of doing it for like a week, post, and then get told the same thing. the c came from this dude:

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/showgraff.php?artist_id=12972

the o came from something in one of the old battles...i forget which one, and the n i just kinda made myself

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090822232518.jpg

..so keep trying? or work with this one and see where i go?Your progressing nicely. I would like to see you work on those fills.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/dsdfsdfsdfsdf.jpg

first ever throw up ha

[MARTYRaz]

fail!

[barks]

gee thanks lol that stance is ment to be a joke

[MARTYRaz]

im talkin the throw..hit the books..

[barks]

ooh yeah that sucks too
any ideas?

[MARTYRaz]

start simple..
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/dsdfsdfsdfsdf.jpg

[Shurik*n]

AH! idk what to do. go with backtodafuture and look at more styles? or stick with this one and expreiment more/do fills (like what eon1 said)....

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090822232518.jpg

barks: same as what MartyRaz said...
SOEC: get rid of those points at the top of each letter. start simpler.
Safe:...ur e and a are bigger than the rest of the letters

[Eon 1]

AH! idk what to do. go with backtodafuture and look at more styles? or stick with this one and expreiment more/do fills (like what eon1 said)....

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090822232518.jpg

barks: same as what MartyRaz said...
SOEC: get rid of those points at the top of each letter. start simpler.
Safe:...ur e and a are bigger than the rest of the lettersJust experiment. Draw it the way you want to. Ur the one drawing it and its your name so do whatever you want.

[Shurik*n]

haha true...very true. thanks man. o and btw..here's a fill. the picture is at a slant, not the throw.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823180146.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

looks better.

[Shurik*n]

haha..didn't change anything...

[MARTYRaz]

try this..make all ur letters flow with eachother..not so pointy like my ms paint pic...but u get the picture..
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/20090823180146.jpg

[hpir]

havent posted in a while
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemkscstuf001.jpg
crits?

[Shurik*n]

try this..make all ur letters flow with eachother..not so pointy like my ms paint pic...but u get the picture..
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b110/celivas3/20090823180146.jpg

yea i actually tried that. surprisingly it doesn't look too good..well the c and o do, but not so much the n, it looks better if i take off the pointy thing on the o and leave the c and n the same though

[LeaksOne]

yea no offence marty but that style is ugly. dont do the points. have you tried a name change?

[Shurik*n]

damn haha another one! i guess it can't be helped though.

[LeaksOne]

well you seem like your strugglin with that name. i think a name change would help.

[Eon 1]

haha true...very true. thanks man. o and btw..here's a fill. the picture is at a slant, not the throw.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823180146.jpgI was thinking you should try and experiment wit ur O by putting an open circle in it.

[smokeandmirrors]

by the way it lacrosseplayer80 i just changed my username


also what do u tihnk of the tag to and the throwup crits please

[smokeandmirrors]

also how do i get the pics bigger?

[Shurik*n]

I was thinking you should try and experiment wit ur O by putting an open circle in it.

u mean where my squigly line is? or make the o and actual circle with a hole?

[Shurik*n]

by the way it lacrosseplayer80 i just changed my username


also what do u tihnk of the tag to and the throwup crits please

here..use this

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/

and when the pic loads scroll down the the second batch and click for forums

[Eon 1]

u mean where my squigly line is? or make the o and actual circle with a hole?where ur squigaly thing is at. Put a hole in it.

[Shurik*n]

alright. well just so i don't waste anymore markers..this is what it will basically look like with the circle.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090823180146dod.jpg

o and btw guys, thanks a ton for helping me out

[Eon 1]

Make something like a vertica oval.

[facethetruth]

i think your O would look better as just an oval, without that lame bubbly shit on the side.

[facethetruth]

.

[graffdabusup]

meat - those throws ar pretty damn clean. i like the "T" in the last one

[iselldope]

havent posted in a while
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemkscstuf001.jpg
crits?



k is dope, try this E

[-Empty-Can-]

by the way it lacrosseplayer80 i just changed my username


also what do u tihnk of the tag to and the throwup crits please

It looks like you outlined then filled. The "A" needs a bigger line at the bottom. You tag is ok but maybe put the quote marks on the bottom

[Shurik*n]

does this look any better? i messed up the shading so just completely ignore it.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090824162954.jpg

MEAT: everything looks dope. keep doing it
Kem: add a little bit more of a curve to the right side of the e.

[B.S. POLICE]

much better

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0824091613.jpg
quick two letter

[facethetruth]

zarb, make the right leg of your k go out further.

[thadanks]

ek, right? I like it, real smooth lines. i bet a little more time spent would clean it up right to where it needs to be

[hpir]

iselldope- wat e?

[smokeandmirrors]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/100_1007.jpg

crits please

[Eon 1]

does this look any better? i messed up the shading so just completely ignore it.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090824162954.jpg

MEAT: everything looks dope. keep doing it
Kem: add a little bit more of a curve to the right side of the e.What I think is get rid of the line in the middle of the O. See what it looks like blank.

[Loki X Sho]

nah, keep the line, it ads consistency with all the letters..Now that you have a basic sketch try contorting...for a little bit of variation.

[Fayless]

does this look any better? i messed up the shading so just completely ignore it.

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090824162954.jpg

Looks good but its boring, Add some style up into your letters and it'll look alot better.
Same to you Kase.. or is that Kasp? If its supposed to say Kasp make the P's bar more defined, because it looks like an E. The handstyle could use some work. looks plain.

[smokeandmirrors]

yea its kasp and what could i add to the handstyle to give it some more flare. any ideas you could show me?

[Fayless]

Since your a toy and all, go to the handstyle thread and bite whatever you think looks good.

[Loki X Sho]

just fool around with it a little...try adding some style to each letter individually, but keep the pattern going throughout. Then throw it all together...ya know..just simple stuff...try to bring a shadow into it..just add some dimension

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1835.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1836.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1838.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1842.jpg

[Fayless]

@Barks, The stickers you've done with Decos are pretty bad, sorry to say. Work on pen control with Decos. Looks like theres alot of unwanted line thickness all over em and they look pretty shakey. Your throwie (If you did it cleanly) On the first three would've looked good, the last picture's letter structure just hurts to look at, sorry to say.

[Mr yarbles]

The first three are bad also.

[BigBlueViolence]

Yeah, 9 times out of ten,
if your throw is attached to the ground
it doesn't look very good.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1844.jpg

any better?

[LeaksOne]

barely. stop makin wavy lines. clean round or straight lines. and get a notebook stop wastin your slaps

[milk boxx]

anyone wanna xchange?

[jel0n3uh]

http://i32.tinypic.com/widc8.jpg

the reall con smart

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1853.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1851.jpg
shitty little throw ups

[milk boxx]

If you know yourself that their shitty then why post em up on slaps?

[-sense-]

yeah barks dont even fuck with the shadow until youve got your letter in good condition

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13908.jpg
a page from a while back

[barks]

If you know yourself that their shitty then why post em up on slaps?

that stickers in my book
and i felt like using my stickers...

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1855.jpg
hows this? lol
tried new letters kinda
i dont really like it

[Eon 1]

I tried to use bars. Crits please.http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2298

[Eon 1]

Srry put it in wrong thread

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2299Crits. there will be more to come.

[Shurik*n]

http://i32.tinypic.com/widc8.jpg

the reall con smart

i think that says smarf not smart...but anyways, I think I might have to change my name today caz i saw a piece that said cons on a train passing by....but my name is con (no s) so do I have to change my name?

[milk boxx]

neet- simple looks dec, but loose the dots on the throwie. the shadow is a bit sketchy too
sense - loose the swirls

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2310
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2303
CRITS.!

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1861.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1864.jpg
any ideas?

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1865.jpg
made the s more bubbly, still didnt figure out the damn b

[Eon 1]

Barks- make you B wider.To me it looks to thin.

[Culture_Shock]

lol, con dont change your shit for anyone. Unless you were writing cope or saber or something like that. even then, only the other graff kids would care, and chances are they're assholes anyway, fuck em write what you want.

[Mr yarbles]

i think that says smarf not smart...but anyways, I think I might have to change my name today caz i saw a piece that said cons on a train passing by....but my name is con (no s) so do I have to change my name?

DId you honestly just say that?

First of all who the fuck would name their crew smarf
Second of just
wow
I mean jesus christ.

Oh barks you suck
Peace

[barks]

DId you honestly just say that?

First of all who the fuck would name their crew smarf
Second of just
wow
I mean jesus christ.

Oh barks you suck
Peace

i dont see you posting any of your shit
i mean all i see is you talking shit on the internet lol

[Fury]

Barks, just go simple, simple, simple. Learn bars, go to the new to graff thread, etc.

Yarbles knows his shit, so don't bag on him for it. Basically what he's saying is that there's so much wrong with your stuff that he can't hit every point. Just start over and head over to the new to graff thread and go simple.

Neet - Lookin' clean.

[barks]

its just frustrating cuz ive been writing on and off for about 2 years and and i didnt think i was that bad i mean i knew i sucked but then i got on here and was just disappointed haha

[Fury]

Lol I went through that same thing. Don't worry about it, you'll actually get a lot better because of this forum. That's what happened to me anyway.

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/08-26-09_1639.jpg

quick letter A I did gonna try and continue with the style...

[Loki X Sho]

i dont really see the a...well, I get the jist, but its a little too much..chill on the lines and stuff, cause it takes away from the focus points...

[Bombing With Insurance]

Haha arite, Yeah I was just playin around with it trying to go with a knight helmet type of thing.

Going to go back and do one in pencil

[Loki X Sho]

you can still go for it, cool idea, just make the letter more prominent than the character aspect.

[Eon 1]

http://i32.tinypic.com/widc8.jpg

the reall con smart
Not really feelen the pointy things on the C. I do like that you did a good job on ur fill. Now start to add a shadow to it.

[Eon 1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2308
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=296&pictureid=2306
CRITS.!

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1886.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

i dont see you posting any of your shit
i mean all i see is you talking shit on the internet lol

http://www.flickr.com/photos/33669198@N08/
Now please stop telling me I don't put in work or that Id on't know shit

and please don't tell me about how you're frustrated I have no simpathy
I've started over from scratch at least 3-4 times
It's frustrating but it's graffiti
The frustration is in the end what seperates toys from kings.
Cus the toys couldn't handle the pressure
But the kings
They wen't through alot of shit just for their art.
You need a fresh start barks your stuff isn't good
Don't give me dog shit and tell me it's a fine wine.

[barks]

i never said my shit was good ever i know its bad
so why dont u try to help people instead of just saying you suck cuz thats fucking pointless yeah im frustrated but im still posting shit for people to help me i dont go cry and quit
i dont want you to help me anymore your just a fucking asshole straight up no wonder no one likes you

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah no wonder toys don't like
Cus I tell them straightup
I shoulda told you you were good so you could keep doing the same wack shit
:rolleyes:
Like I give a fuck dude, seriously

[BlacktodaFuture]

mr. yarbles doesnt give a fuck about SHIT!

[barks]

theres a difference between telling someone straight up, giving advice and just being an asshole
and if you didnt give a fuck dude seriously then you wouldnt of said anything in the first place

[Bombing With Insurance]

Barks YOu got a point, if he didnt care he wouldnt be posting.
But Mr Yarbles is right you are barley progressing.

[Mr yarbles]

mr. yarbles doesnt give a fuck about SHIT!

I actually do care
i care when toys try to tell me they know more than me and call me an asshole
But they'll know with time.
"oh we we're all toys at one point"
Yeah that's true but you don't realize how annoying toys are until you're good.

[Bombing With Insurance]

I would completely understand you if you were way up there on the good level...
But you really aren't...

This is in the TOY section, the point is to get crits and to share and learn from others.
If you don't want to be bothered by toys then get out of the toy section!

Then you don't have to look at stuff like barks.

[barks]

i never said i was better then you i know im a toy
your no cope2 yourself either lol

[barks]

i know hes like one of those guys that hate the real world or something but still watches every second lol

[Bombing With Insurance]

YO! i'm not tryin to start Beef im just sayin that i dont think its right hatin on people unless they've got a Ginat EGO

[barks]

haha yeah im sick of it
anyway got any tips?

[Bombing With Insurance]

Advice?
Get out of this thread and go to something where you can progress faster and learn how to do bars. Keep your letters simple and forget about the 3D and shadow just worry about your letters
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=5041&page=30

[(SoS)Viruz]

i know hes like one of those guys that hate the real world or something but still watches every second lol

How about you guys alll chill....Or handle, this the old way...Battle

[Bombing With Insurance]

Haha its not a matter of beef its a matter of bullying really.

It's like a 5th grader pickin on a third grader.

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/ygf.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Aint my fault yall're pussies.

oh and lawl at comparing to cope 2
That pretty much puts it in stone you're a toy.
I know I'm not some fucking master
But I know what's good and what isn't
I don't get why I always have to explain I'm not going to be easy on anyone.
Especially kids who cop an attitude
I want to see you get better not pussy foot around the fact you're terrible so I don't hurt you're "feelings"



Oh and safe keep your letters the same size.

[MARTYRaz]

lmao at these last 2 pages..
yarbs tellin truth..graff isnt about ppls feelings gettin hurt and gettin all bootyhurt cuz someone said u suck...either ur down to get better and show ur shit off or ur not gna make it in this graff world...u should take that u suck and use it to get better and blow ppls mind wen ur all city...do some trollin..check out wat other writers r doing on here and come back in a month or so and we'll see ur progression..its all bout gettin better..

[barks]

he didnt hurt my feelings lol i know i suck but hows just saying you suck help me?
you could say you suck you should work on this or that
but i know youve tried to help me martyraz

[BlacktodaFuture]

i noticed that, im just working on keeping them the same size bc sometimes i make the S too small and the E too big

[drOping]

I'll be back later...gotta go do my simples...

[Fury]

I put my heart and soul into this throwie, I hope you guys like it.

/s

[Save and Kill]

http://i295.photobucket.com/albums/mm123/CuchulainnRiastrad/5251_1195252290830_1514144264_30511.jpg
first throw

Safe- I'm not feelin the second E, and try making the bottom "bubble" of your s bigger.

[Loki X Sho]

a kid I know writes safe...way better.
http://i30.tinypic.com/21cx9vb.png

[BigBlueViolence]

Lol'd at both of you.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2515/3779593486_ea54aa8017.jpg

Get over it, write Safe.

[Fayless]

I highly doubt Either Safes will ever run into each other, so theres no real reason to stop writing safe unless they're in the same area, because chances are he lives more than a 1000 miles away so theres no point to drop a name because someone else has it. Chances are everyone atleast has 1 person who writes the same name.

[Fury]

But I write sajdshwr, somebody else has it? :(

[DestroyLA]

i write saber. nobody has that.

[Nine9]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2632/3862351564_465f3f7636.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2513/3856353118_77e20dbdea.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2457/3820023577_34f27db225.jpg

[MARTYRaz]

im diggin those nine..

[Bombing With Insurance]

I actually do care
i care when toys try to tell me they know more than me and call me an asshole
But they'll know with time.
"oh we we're all toys at one point"
Yeah that's true but you don't realize how annoying toys are until you're good.

You are a toy, I know it's hard to realize...
But I'm sorry That i'm the one that had to tell you...
Whena thorwie is the the best thing in your flickr and you say you aren't toy its kinda funny..
http://i469.photobucket.com/albums/rr51/z0mbi3z_bucket/3769802262_41268082bb.jpg

[Crayola Tags]

So here's what I'm witnessing here...

We have two dudes in here that were originally here to help, but were just assholes about it and just said "You suck. Fix your 'E'," and that was it, which essentially provided absolutely NO help at all. If they knew what was wrong with the 'E', they would fix it.

For starters, most of you guys are just trying way too hard to write "graffiti"; just relax! If you check out books like "The Art of Getting Over" (which should be your new bible if you don't already have it), most writers start with REALLY simple shit for throws like bubble letters ONLY.

BARKS- Serious question that you should think about--

You said you don't know how to "fix" your 'B'... think about what you don't like about it really hard, then change it. I think that your letters in your throw are too narrow, which is why they look so funny and take up such little space.

[Crayola Tags]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2457/3820023577_34f27db225.jpg


GTFO of this thread, dude. Your throws are straight.

[Bombing With Insurance]

So here's what I'm witnessing here...

We have two dudes in here that were originally here to help, but were just assholes about it and just said "You suck. Fix your 'E'," and that was it, which essentially provided absolutely NO help at all. If they knew what was wrong with the 'E', they would fix it.

For starters, most of you guys are just trying way too hard to write "graffiti"; just relax! If you check out books like "The Art of Getting Over" (which should be your new bible if you don't already have it), most writers start with REALLY simple shit for throws like bubble letters ONLY.

BARKS- Serious question that you should think about--

You said you don't know how to "fix" your 'B'... think about what you don't like about it really hard, then change it. I think that your letters in your throw are too narrow, which is why they look so funny and take up such little space.

ehh basically, but i was trying to help him but whatever,
Lets just drop it.
It's done.
Post some pics haha

[Bombing With Insurance]

GTFO of this thread, dude. Your throws are straight.

Yeah those are dope

["art threat"]

nines are sick

["art threat"]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac32/artthreat1/artthreat002.jpg

crits plz?

[shem]

suede i have a strong feeling you bit the fuck out of those letters..

[faser]

why wud u bite that shit

you cant even tell the first letter is, the D could be an O and its just messy as fuck which doesnt look cool

["art threat"]

why would u say i bit them...

[shem]

bc ive seen those letters before and thiis the only thing youve posted has anyflow what so ever.

["art threat"]

yeee its a throw im sure uve seen a tone of em that look the same

[dingd0ng]

of all the shit he could have bit, he bites that? get real.

[weakfingers]

Wow I leave for a while and come back and like an explosion of like ten toys come out and some of them yelling and calling out Mr, Yarbles... ahahahaha

Ughm Okay here go my Crits.

Art Threat I cant see an S and you gotta work on proportions. Also I'd drop the drip 'cuz it looks abit outta place.

Crayola Tags Get off nine's cock. His throw is clean but the swirls in the E is abit goofy to me.

Bombing with insurance SHUT THE FUCK UP!

To the whole SAFE drama I already posted a link to a safe a couple pages back.
Who the fuck cares, you'll probably change your name.... everyone does.
http://iloveletters.ca/WALLS/PhotoPages/SAFEwall1.htm

Save n' Kill One letter throws are gay as fuck!
Blacktothefuture Your progressing alot but the S kinda reminds me of skufs S only kinda.
Barks Thats not really a throwie...
Click the blue arrow thing---^
Eonone I like the direction your going, just keep on drawing that throw and it will slowly mould into itself
CON Loose the spike things and make your N more distinguishable.




Okay, I'm done. I know my throw aint to detailed but I felt like posting. Sorry for the gay picture of the lake but im to lazy to flick another one...
Oh and I'm thinking about a name change.... any crits?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7112.jpg

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF6895.jpg





Ps whens the toy throwie battles going up?

[Camer]

Looks good Coen, except the letters slowly get bigger but I don't really have to tell you about that shit.
art threat- not feelin it at all.

Crits?
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw.jpg

And I tried that super simple Montreal/Toronto style
http://i705.photobucket.com/albums/ww55/Duddits/draw001.jpg

[Devils_Advocate]

have you heard of sepokku? you should try it...

[LeaksOne]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7112.jpg

i think you should go with dosish

[Save and Kill]

Save n' Kill One letter throws are gay as fuck!
actually that's two letters and S and an O, so far those are the only letters I can make look okish, when i get some others down i'll post a new one with more letters

[Crayola Tags]

Crayola Tags Get off nine's cock. His throw is clean but the swirls in the E is abit goofy to me.


Well that was necessary. On his cock? Really? Who gives a fuck if YOU or ANYONE thinks it's goofy? I don't think kids are in here to get your approval. I think they're here to get the basics and structure down so that they can get down their OWN style, not YOUR style.

All I'm sayin' is that it doesn't look toy at all. You bitches in here are so quick to say that someone's on some other dude's nuts, then go and apologize about the "gay" picture of the lake? What the fuck is that? If you're sorry about it, then why'd you post it? Why didn't you crop out the "gay" lake?

Stop making excuses about shit that you post. It's fuckin' graff, douchebag.

Camer- The second one looks much cleaner.

[faser]

Leaks - your A would make a cool looking R
and why dont you just go with DOSI

[Crayola Tags]

Save n' Kill One letter throws are gay as fuck!
Like BONER, right? 'Cause no one recognizes his one letter throws...

[Save and Kill]

Um I don't know, mines on the page before this, pretty shitty considering he thought it was a one letter. I'll work on it

[LeaksOne]

Leaks - your A would make a cool looking R
and why dont you just go with DOSI

im sorry what?? i havent posted any pics besides the exchanges in the tag thread in like a month. thats weakfingers pic not mine

[weakfingers]

i think you should go with dosish
Leak's Read the whole thing aloud and youll see the word I tried to spell but it was to long...
superalafragalisticexpialadosish

Oh and faser, My A did start out as a R But others on here pointed out that it looked better as an A.

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7112.jpg

[faser]

im sorry what?? i havent posted any pics besides the exchanges in the tag thread in like a month. thats weakfingers pic not mine

oh yeh i misread that

[hpir]

weakfingers i love yr a

[medacog1]

http://i29.tinypic.com/5vmzhh.jpg

[hpir]

havent posted in a while
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemkscstuf001.jpg
crits?
bump crits?

[MARTYRaz]

not bad but ur M is ginormous..

[faser]

http://i29.tinypic.com/5vmzhh.jpg

good luck passin that as a throwie:rolleyes:

[barks]

i have writers block on my throwie. no idea what i should do with it
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1893.jpg
http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1894.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

peace sign fail.

[barks]

advice giving fail

[BlacktodaFuture]

touche

[Mr yarbles]

advice giving fail

Bombing science fag win.

[barks]

lol shit talker pass and a sure original one at that hahaha fag... wow

[Mr yarbles]

lolumad?

[barks]

nope i think its funny hence the "hahahas"

[Mr yarbles]

Well that's not what the pm you sent me said.

[barks]

oh ahhahaah good one r u that desperate for people to like you?
oh hey mr yarbles what do u think about my new throwup?!

[Mr yarbles]

THe screenshot dosn't lie barks.
http://i25.tinypic.com/14tlsue.jpg

Oh and nice job on trying bite tie's peace sign in the throw
Reall good dude
Oh and writers block is the least of your problems when you can't even draw in the first place.

[barks]

lol your right that does look familiar are you 12 years old?
oh and thanks! your such a inspiration i wish i could be just like you i mean your so fucking good at graffiti its so amazing...

[Mr yarbles]

lol your such a tool
You're the one with dookie ass throws putting peace signs in them so everyone thinks your a l33t tagger king.
what the fuck are you, 12?

I have more ups then you could ever imagine to get kid you should just give up right now with your sense of entightlement
I hope you get stabbed or something.

[barks]

whats a l33t tagger king? lol
and i like how you took the time to make that fake letter it shows how pissed off you are over this whole thing lol
i think your in love with me actually i mean you keep talking about me and shit
you cant have that many ups seeing how you sit in front of your computer all day
and fucking come stab me lol

[Mr yarbles]

Please this shit is what I do in my spare time
I love kids like you cus you're so angry at me
But you just try to hide it by putting in lol or something
You know you're terrible and I'm not the only one to tell you.

[barks]

you must have a whole lot of spare time then lol
and no im really laughing out loud at this
no but seriously whats a l33t tagger king??

[Mr yarbles]

I doubt it you're probably cutting yourself.

[barks]

fuck are you outside my window?
dude your more entertaining then TV
but dude seriously whats a l33t tagger king?!?!
im thinking about cutting it in my arm but id like to know what it means first

[Mr yarbles]

Barks you're such a failure all the time.
I'll be back tommorow to make fun of you some more
Peace

[barks]

im sure you will lol

[nickstix]

this is alittle messed up...o well, any advice?

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/DSCN4950.jpg

[smokeandmirrors]

@ nickstix: not to bad bro just work on that shading

[faser]

lol barks you sound like a little cunt
stop "tagging" you little bitch you cant even draw letters for shit

[barks]

dude ive seen your shit and u really have no room at all to talk
you should roll your eyes at your own shit cuz it also really fucking sucks lol

[Mr yarbles]

You have no room to talk either you retard hahaha

[barks]

well im the the fucking idoit talking shit to random people and think my shits bomb lol cuz ive never said that retard

[faser]

what shit? if anything its a lot fucking better than urs barks

how old r u anyway.....do u know anything about graffiti :rolleyes:

[barks]

the shit on this website? lol the point is dumbass that your a fucking idoit for saying shit about people stuff when urs is no better

[faser]

haha give me an example........
cos half are simples anyway :rolleyes:

[barks]

idk dude u pick one cuz none of them are anything special i dont really care

[faser]

o well its still better than ur shit

[barks]

ok im done with this shit we all write graffiti i dont get why you have to hate on other writers but whatever

[nickstix]

How about you guys quit bitching at each other and do what your supposed to do on this forum...help other writers get better...

why is it that I am the only one who put a picture up on this page? ...Im actually looking for help to better myself...and it got looked over because you guys cant stop fighting...

[barks]

i know dude thats what i was saying about the helping thing but yeah maybe work on the shading and try to make them more bubbly on the top and see how that looks but other then that i think its pretty straight man
but what do i know?.

[LeaksOne]

ok im done with this shit we all write graffiti i dont get why you have to hate on other writers but whatever

dont want to interfere or start a page full of talk again but barks yarbles burns you point blank. dont like it battle him dont like what im sayin battle me until then keep practicin your own shit and stop tryna bash people. you fuckin new comers need a punch to the jugernum your all whiny little bitches. well a majority of you

[Zarb]

thats cause most kids on this forum are just rich kids who stumbled upon a graff site, there all gonna quit the second there mom sees them doing it haha

[weakfingers]

THANK YOU!^^^^^
faser and barks both of you quit now.
all you little toys that came in the past week have no respect for the people that know more then you. Yeah yeah everyone was a toy at some point etc etc etc but most of us here had respect when we first got on the forum. Now quit all your your whining and post a fucking picture .


Barks- Your throwie is garbage and if you would take the time to notice it or maybea draw it out a couple times instead of staying on bombing science all day bitching then you could improve. I know my throw of barks isent looking to good but maybe it could help your...... "writers block" or whatever you call your inability to draw.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7115.jpg



and can a mod please clean all of that garbage up?

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1895.jpg

[Facedorateur]

BARKS - Work your B a little

http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6682/pict0716.jpg
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/1948/pict0717.jpg

[dingd0ng]

How about you guys quit bitching at each other and do what your supposed to do on this forum...help other writers get better...

why is it that I am the only one who put a picture up on this page? ...Im actually looking for help to better myself...and it got looked over because you guys cant stop fighting...

who gave you the thread running ego?

facedoratuer - it looks a little busy yakno? like the forcefields and shit, lose that and the x's and make your letters the same size cause it looks kinda wonky with your first letter being rly weird at the bottom

[DestroyLA]

your a jerk! I know.

[nickstix]

who gave you the thread running ego?


And who gave you the idea you can talk? you only have 11 posts

shut the fuck up and post a pic

[-sense-]

damn mad bullshit the last few days.
barks you need to take the advice thats given. your shit really aint improvin.
face that shit made your week? really? i dont know man. dont use a pen yet. lol

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13913.jpg
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13915.jpg
http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13916.jpg

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/SDC13910.jpg

[dr.Doom]

CAn somebody give me a tip for an X in a throw/tag? I cant get one to flow..

im writing 'anxious'

[smokeandmirrors]

@ klic: haha i do have a simple handy here check it lol

[smokeandmirrors]

ooh my bad i posted in the wrong spott

[Facedorateur]

Originally posted by -sense-
Face that shit made your week? really? i dont know man. dont use a pen yet. lol


It did, I was on a writers block for my throw, and that pretty much freed me from it, it may be sloppy, but i figured a new style, i just need to polish it

[MARTYRaz]

wat is everyone claiming "writers block" wen theyre shit sucks?? must be a new trend..lame..keep at it and that shit wont happen...

[Facedorateur]

dunno, i guess everybody learned a new expression and we are all eager to use it

[dingd0ng]

And who gave you the idea you can talk? you only have 11 posts

shut the fuck up and post a pic

yaaaa post count chirpin
you dont know shit cause i've been on here on and off with different accounts, & who fuckin says i cant talk when your the one telling people to post pics, if you dont want to read it scroll fuckin down

[BigBlueViolence]

http://imagemacros.files.wordpress.com/2009/07/eva-stfu.jpg

[dr.Doom]

help for a throw 'x'

im writing anxious

[BigBlueViolence]

You're the one writing it,
not us.

Come up with it yourself.

[dr.Doom]

where do i go for help

[BigBlueViolence]

Dawg, why are you unable to process this?

You don't "go for help", you come up with that shit YOURSELF.

If you can't get it, then you can't get it.

[hpir]

exchange enyone? i write kem

[smokeandmirrors]

hows this for a throwie?

[nickstix]

Kasp...its not terrible, a little boring though...try adding a drop shadow and some color and that will make it alittle better.

Here you go Hpir...exchange...sorry its not that great
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/kem.jpg
I write 'REK' by the way

[LeaksOne]

change your handy. based on the way the ink looks it looks like your not able to do it fast. i know this isnt the tag thread but i figure ill help you out. just simplify your tag abit and write it over and over again until you can do it fast and clean.

[nickstix]

change your handy. based on the way the ink looks it looks like your not able to do it fast. i know this isnt the tag thread but i figure ill help you out. just simplify your tag abit and write it over and over again until you can do it fast and clean.

I can do the handie decently fast but i was using a sharpie and everytime i try doing my handing normally the marker grips the paper and moves it...plus im still working on it, still changeing it slightly here and there to make it better. once its set and done ill have it pretty quick

[faser]

^yeh thats why u hold the paper down so it doesnt move..

[Nine9]

Kinda wonky.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2519/3869932097_54148b5f5f.jpg

[weakfingers]

Dr doom- Learn like the rest of us, try and experimenting, noones gonna draw your striaght letter or your first peice. Besides I already did your throw when you asked a month ago, X's are pretty basic.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF1750.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7112-2.jpg

[Nine9]

^ Dunno why but I keep thinking STAR when I look at your first throw.. prob 'cos the P is shaped like an R.

Dig the I on the second, although the letters go from pointy-ish to round as the word goes on.



http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2525/3871287038_2fcf8065c9.jpg


Gotta work on the E.

[weakfingers]

Nine, Id make the two ends of the E meet up, Also since your letters are overlapping so much I wouldent cut off the opening from the top of the E to the bottom
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/nine.jpg

[Nine9]

Cheers yeah, I'll give it a go.

Gotta find a nice cap for the outline (NY Fat maybe), last throw was a silver super fat and I had no control.

[BigBlueViolence]

I feel like that's a really bad idea, weakfingers, what you did males it looks like a P to me.



http://i25.tinypic.com/opy6w7.jpg

I would lose the bump on top,
and don't make the E so small, it's half the size of your N.

[Black Flag]

Kinda wonky.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2519/3869932097_54148b5f5f.jpg


^ Dunno why but I keep thinking STAR when I look at your first throw.. prob 'cos the P is shaped like an R.

Dig the I on the second, although the letters go from pointy-ish to round as the word goes on.



http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2525/3871287038_2fcf8065c9.jpg


Gotta work on the E.

I am digging this shit right hur.

Like you said just work on the e and its gold.

[hpir]

fer rek in a hurry my bad it dont look great
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/rektrade.jpg

[Facedorateur]

MINE - Just bring your E out to the right a little so we see it more, but just a bit

REK - your lines are kind of shacky, take ur time. Also (i have no idea how to say this) dont make ur letters as fat, like make them more delicate (?). Also work on your shadow

Crits plz?
im feeling both, but cant really choose
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6975/pict0723w.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

Not feeling either, but the first one is better

[Nine9]

First one you should go with.

The F & I are sweet, just get a nice E/N and you'll have a solid throw IMO.

[klic]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/3864771581_cae4d9afc0_o.jpg

fein - the only good letters are the F on the top one and both I's

nine - pretty cool but ive never really been a fan of your style. looks clean painted

weakfingers - that expiala is dope

kasp - nothing wrong with it. round your letters out a bit

sense - not feeling it. the little swirls annoy me

barks - nobodys going to think thats a K

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i25.tinypic.com/1431ixe.jpg

[Facedorateur]

Thx guys, it helped alot

[modown]

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4792/crook1.jpg

[LeaksOne]

no.

without that tag i dont think i would know what that said. you need to go back to basic bubbles for a while.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1896.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

it looks like
BRR(?)S

[Firm]

^^Yeaa you can't really tell the difference between the A & R. The "K" looks like a...i dunno but it doesn't fit in.

[LeaksOne]

holy hell!!! barks...your third R is missing the hole and it has a tumor on it. you may wana get that checked out....

and an upsidedown cross......really?? wow

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1897.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

keep working on that.

[LeaksOne]

just dont do that style...
and define your K better. and your A still looks like an R.

[barks]

do you think thats a better A and K blacktodafuture?

[Firm]

holy hell!!! barks...your third R is missing the hole and it has a tumor on it. you may wana get that checked out....

That made me lol.

[Nine9]

Getting better dude.

[barks]

thanks nine any advice?

[klic]

i know this is the toy throwies thread but come on guys haha

[Nine9]

It's a big improvement on his previous shit.

Just keep playing with it Barks, see what works and what don't.

[BlacktodaFuture]

the bottom of the A is fucked, and the top of the K. just work w. it, dont put random bubbles in there like that.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1901.jpg

[BigBlueViolence]

dude, that is the third time you posted that on this page alone.
It looks weak.
Not just one particular letter, but the entire style in general.

[BlacktodaFuture]

try to make the tops of the letters look the same.

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1905.jpg
you mean like that? i dont really like the B

[Fayless]

Make the letter's widths more consistent, add some steez to the B and S. You're getting better though.

[barks]

alright thanks
what do u mean by steez?

[BlacktodaFuture]

swagger, style, steez, dopeness, freshness, personality.

[barks]

oh yeah i figured it meant style lol

[Crayola Tags]

exchange enyone? i write kem

I'm not gonna tell you not to write it, but just so you're informed:

http://www.graffiti.org/kem5/index.html

There used to be a Kem5 thread on here, but I can't find it. Like I said, it's up to you but you'll probably face some heat from other writers for a while. It's still ultimately up to you.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090830203427.jpg
does it look too much like cope2's c and o??? i can't think of an n...i'm workin on it

Barks: lose the "bubbles". if ur going for bubbly letters, make them rounder, not taller

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1906.jpg
shurikn: yeah that c looks alot look copes

[Fayless]

The bottom part of your curve is slightly different on the C, looks similar though. Cope's O changes sometimes between his throwies, because of widths and such, but it looks the same. Best bet is to add some weird style to it so you aren't called a bite.

[springbreak95]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090830203427.jpg
yes first image i found
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/04052008132755Cope2throwup.jpg

[nickstix]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1906.jpg
shurikn: yeah that c looks alot look copes

Anyone else think he bit the A and possibly the R from somewhere...I swear ive seen that A before.also considering the A and R are the only two letters with flow?

[faser]

people here shud to simple bubble writing... like cope style shit
theyr tryin to hard to make it look cool

[nickstix]

Flick for talking

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/rekthrow.jpg

crits?

[faser]

rek - the only things i dont like are the gaps between letters (try overlapping)
and on the R and E bring that little flick up a bit more.. and the top left of E is too curved

[Shurik*n]

alright, i'll keep workin on the c and o..but does this n fit in?

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/20090831155305.jpg