Throwies

[Mr yarbles]

http://i27.tinypic.com/eqc7yb.jpg

Everyone but keso and kem sucks.

Manik just keep practicing that simple shit and lose the dot on your I

Oh and fetusr your f and e are alright but it falls apart after that.

[LeaksOne]

Everyone but keso and kem sucks.

including me??

[gumOnShoe]

keso your throw is straight but the k and e on that simp look pretty damn weird.
and sceez? i dont like that throw or that style
kem you got that down but i dont like your M

thses are some names i fuckin around with. im offically done wih grate.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60045.jpg
the L on this is top heavy

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60044.jpg
ignore the loop on the top of the S

crits?

the 'o' in lipso needs to be wider imo..
that siron sounds like a fresh name, stick with that, but i'm not really diggin' the letters, at all... scrap em'...

[Mr yarbles]

including me??

Nah didn't see you haha
You'rs is pretty good
you just gotta keep practicing you're on the right path
I dig the siron tho
add some shadow to it

[LeaksOne]

hahah i was guna say. uh im sure im guna stick with siron only cuz L's bug the fuck out of me. when i change names i make sure i can worka a throwie with em so thats why they look so rushed so ill be back when i practice this name more and work on a throw.

[B.S. POLICE]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/3921077093_42187995ec_o.jpg

you and everyone world wide killed that joke an hour after he died. congrats i hope you go to hell you unoriginal piece of shit on a stick

[Mr yarbles]

I agree the first one was funny
But i've seen it about five times on this website alone.

[Keso]

http://i27.tinypic.com/eqc7yb.jpg

Everyone but keso and kem sucks.

Manik just keep practicing that simple shit and lose the dot on your I

Oh and fetusr your f and e are alright but it falls apart after that.

Thanks man. I've been working on my simps. Shit's difficult

[Fetusr]

Fixed it a bit
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/Simplet.jpg

uh.. yeah mr.yarbles I can't even read that.

[Zarb]

It got better but why do you keep making the right leg of the R so skinny? It looks stupid

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0913091645a.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0913091645b.jpg

[weakfingers]

Fetus- Your missing shadow on half the throw and the R is ugly as fuck.

[peacebomb]

That is the greatest toy excuse I have ever heard!

[goonzatwork]

sonny...im sorry but dont make excuses. everyone starts somewhere, so having some wack shit is always gonna happen. look in the new to graffiti thread, sketch with some legit dudes get your shit up and lookin fresh excuses won't get you anywhere. I fell off a 6 and 1/2 ft ledge doing a hangover straight letter which dosent sound that high but falling off backwards, and i climbed back up and finished that shit. so...yeah.

[Zarb]

dude your still in your complete not having the slightest clue on what your talking about stage..just listen to them and go to thenew to graff thread...it will help

[BigBlueViolence]

How are you going to influence others when you have no respect?

[Mr yarbles]

Fixed it a bit
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/Simplet.jpg

uh.. yeah mr.yarbles I can't even read that.

Says ralish

THat throw is alot better work on your r though

also thinkin about changin my name to wasoe
WHat you guys think?

[Zarb]

How are you going to influence others when you have no respect?

edit- Just shut up already jeez

[Fetusr]

Wasoe is defs an original name, your gonna have to put a lot of work into those letters though to make it sick, you might be more familiar with those letters, but I hate them, W,S,O. Hard times with those letters personally

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/THROWRRR.jpg

??

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah I already got the throw down adn everything so it isn't really a problem.

Your r is alot better but lose those spikes on the ends of some of the letters

[BigBlueViolence]

edit- Just shut up already jeez
I wasn't even talking to you, brah.

[Zarb]

well now i feel a prick

[l3monade]

http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0320.jpg

knemo.. silent k
i think my k is to small and e is to small
i've been writing about a month now..
but im relly anxious to paint so as much crits as possible thanks

[weakfingers]

Kneeeeemo-Looking really good from the last thing I saw just go with that and draw it over over and over and it will come to you very fast.

Fetusr. Looks super original and Fresh. Some letters still need abit of tweaking but your missing the shadow on the tops of your letters.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Fagtus.jpg

[barks]

http://i99.photobucket.com/albums/l305/pissdrunkz/100_1912.jpg
changed my name

[gumOnShoe]

here's my toss.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo53.jpg

mess; i know you just changed your name n' all, but mess sounds played out...
the s at the bottom left is decent, but it kind of adds on to the playedout-ness, seeing as that s is pretty common, oh yeah, i'm not feeling that 'm' either...

[barks]

is there anyone else who writes mess? ive never heard of one but idk

[gumOnShoe]

is there anyone else who writes mess? ive never heard of one but idk

nah man, it was just my opinion, you can keep on w/ mess, cause wtf do i know, lol...

[barks]

lol yeah i just didnt know if there already was one but yeah i got sick of writing barks lol

[CAN-KILLER]

the only mess i know has 1 s in it

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i30.tinypic.com/345y4o0.jpg
http://i31.tinypic.com/91jn8z.jpg
http://i29.tinypic.com/mjwltu.jpg
http://i25.tinypic.com/w2d105.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/2u8w5tx.jpg
http://i28.tinypic.com/2z8yuew.jpg
shit while im high
crits

[KtRL.]

barks, some guy in my area writes mess but hes toy. just lettin you know.

[weakfingers]

If there's two toys writing the same thing there isent really anything to worry about. You will both probably change names.

Getting sloppy and working with new letters.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7661.jpg

[LeaksOne]

well now i feel a prick

yikes....lets hope its your own

and knemo...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DRdF4zCxqlo... please watch this entire video

[Nyze]

http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/5299/img0251nm.jpg
dont like my e there
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/9004/img0263jv.jpg
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/5072/img0250pf.jpg

[Zarb]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo155.jpg
Nyze-Pretty nice, ya I dont like the bottom of your E on the first one really but overall pretty nice

[l3monade]

leaks one thatss jokes
i only put the k there cuz i've seen a nemo thats really good and i just couldnt come up with another name
haha

[Keso]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/56/l_f4446336f7254f02a00456b94ba58bbb.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/59/l_53227d7fa59e46f398abe31654371536.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/16/l_6885e052752a4f5ab39342c16a2ed0a0.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_8588b377fbea47a7a1ba444282d30196.jpg

This is some shit I just did.

[LeaksOne]

leaks one thatss jokes
i only put the k there cuz i've seen a nemo thats really good and i just couldnt come up with another name
haha

well then kdo kwhat kyou kplease i kguess.

[hpir]

keso-third ones decent
fetsur-its better,but still dont like yr r
ppl say they dont like my M so..
old m
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/stuuf002.jpg
new m
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/manewish002.jpg
critss

[xDrowsyx]

hpir - think you should not have the hole in the leg of the K just connect it
quickkky
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x85/faceoffman7/peeJ.jpg

[Fetusr]

Nyze - the throwy itself is actually pretty sick but your N is fucked
Zarb - that looks cool but dont do the E inside of the t
Keso - I like your throw just make it cleaner
Kem- I dont like it at all man... sorry but nothing in your throw stands out or anything, I suggest looking at other peoples bombs with your letters and try and gain some inspiration or something
Drowsy - your shadings a little messed up, Id lose the drips at the end....

http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/FINAL.jpg

Final result. Think Im gonna rock this for a while before I change it up again. Anyone down for an exchange? wanna work with other letters....

[suparjafar]

http://tinypic.com/r/vf9m5v/3
no i havent written this 100 times in a blackbook yet just an idea...only doing this in general for a week or two
crits

[gumOnShoe]

here's my toss.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo53.jpg

mess; i know you just changed your name n' all, but mess sounds played out...
the s at the bottom left is decent, but it kind of adds on to the playedout-ness, seeing as that s is pretty common, oh yeah, i'm not feeling that 'm' either...

bump.

[weakfingers]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7661.jpg

Bottom page Bump

Fetuser. Your still missing the shadow on the top of your throwie. The spike shadows should be an exact replica but farther back, Your spikes are right beside the original spikes and for some reason the shadows are really curved.

[l3monade]

leaks k's go with n's
ya know?

[milk boxx]

leaks k's go with n's
ya know?

this is true...

[Abor Rudest]

i really have no crits to give, everyone is looking pretty alright. please give me some though. edit: actually, i do have one, pj, get rid of that crown.
http://i32.tinypic.com/j0usqu.jpg

one i did for this girl ive been talking to. yes, thats me in the picture.
http://i29.tinypic.com/9u3pd4.jpg

[LeaksOne]

leaks k's go with n's
ya know?

true but to use the kn combo in graff is confusing especially if your starting with it and its a normal word with the k. like people arent guna automatically see that and say oh he writes nemo. there guna think you write kuh-nemo. just my thoughts tho. you do you.

[nickstix]

no real crits to give everyones lookin good

possible name change. I like it, and i hope noone else writes it "KESR"

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/DSCN4920.jpg

crits?

EDIT: shit just did some research and theres a KESR already and he seems pretty famous...off to the thinking game again

[Black Flag]

i really have no crits to give, everyone is looking pretty alright. please give me some though. edit: actually, i do have one, pj, get rid of that crown.
http://i32.tinypic.com/j0usqu.jpg




I have no idea what letter that is, but i am diggin it.

[LeaksOne]

i think its a lower case A. i like it too though

[Abor Rudest]

leaks knows whats up, thanks guys

[Mizz]

can i get some info on y's. mine are so shitty they're not even worth getting crits yet

[LeaksOne]

so what the hell do you want us to do? without an example no one can help you.
but heres your info....
y is the 25th letter in the english alphabet
it can also be spelt wye, wy, or wyes in plural form
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Y
^^that is the rest of your info on Y's.


your welcome

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i38.tinypic.com/347zds6.jpg
what u think

[Abor Rudest]

your t looks like an atom bomb, which is awesome.

[-Dank-DK-]

your t looks like an atom bomb, which is awesome.

hahha i didnt mean for it to look like that
i think it sucks
but thanks man

[Abor Rudest]

haha no problem, i might bite the b off you. sharing is caring.

[Regius]

http://i38.tinypic.com/347zds6.jpg
what u think

thats some nice lettering you got going on there dude

[PegCityBoy]

Dank you're throws are pretty dec. but if you're rockin throws like that work on your hand it's hurtin

[-Dank-DK-]

Dank you're throws are pretty dec. but if you're rockin throws like that work on your hand it's hurtin

wait what lol
im confussed

[gumOnShoe]

wait what lol
im confussed

what pegcityboy was saying, was that your throws ups are iight, but your hand
is weak compared to your toss, or your handstyle.

[thedudeman]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk45/antik25/P091609191222.jpg

still trying to find an E to fit this style

[Abor Rudest]

i dont know if you just messed up on your fill in on your n but if not, i would say connect your e, dont put it into seprate pieces or people are gunna think its 2 letters.

my entry for the next throwie battle. im gunna lose because everyone is on keep six's dick, but whatever.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2zyvaj6.jpg

[Waxaddict]

http://i38.tinypic.com/347zds6.jpg
what u think

That's fire. Nice job dude.

[Waxaddict]

i dont know if you just messed up on your fill in on your n but if not, i would say connect your e, dont put it into seprate pieces or people are gunna think its 2 letters.

my entry for the next throwie battle. im gunna lose because everyone is on keep six's dick, but whatever.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2zyvaj6.jpg

S is banging.. maybe make the L the same level at the bottom of the letters.. see if it looks any better. Try taking the holes outta the I also. I dig it though.

[mefe]

you cant see the silver highlights.

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_sinc.jpg

please comment.. or just say toy

[Beats_His_Wife]

you cant see the silver highlights.

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_sinc.jpg

please comment.. or just say toy

Learngraffiti.net?

[PegCityBoy]

i dont know if you just messed up on your fill in on your n but if not, i would say connect your e, dont put it into seprate pieces or people are gunna think its 2 letters.

my entry for the next throwie battle. im gunna lose because everyone is on keep six's dick, but whatever.
http://i33.tinypic.com/2zyvaj6.jpg

fresh throw


what pegcityboy was saying, was that your throws ups are iight, but your hand
is weak compared to your toss, or your handstyle.

haha yea what he said

[LeaksOne]

you cant see the silver highlights.

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_sinc.jpg

please comment.. or just say toy

didnt think id have to do this again......


http://i181.photobucket.com/albums/x127/fiascofreak/gtfo-take-fail.jpg

[shun]

Dank- nice shit man, i would focus on the B and the T.

thedudeman- the E is indecipherable, the M needs lots of work. think about the raw form of the letters more.

abor- i love that throw, it reminds me of funky retro lettering a little bit. i would focus on the E more, prob the weakest letter.


not sure if this is more of a throw or simple, but either way, just started sketching this name today, give it to me.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/hemp/tu1.jpg

[NiL]

fresh throw


http://img.slate.com/media/1/123125/2158911/2159086/2159087/070221_CL_HitlerEX.jpg
haha yea what he said


Bastard

[nickstix]

Shun-not really a throw. and if thats supposed to be a simple Id advice you to check out the new to graff thread or go back to block letters.

abor rudest-looks really nice. Im personally not a fan of the left side of the S but thats just my opinion.

New name, and experimenting with new letters...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091450.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091451.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091453.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091455.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091456.jpg

[Waxaddict]

Use a marker or summut, and have single clean lines instead of loads.

[Fury]

Why a marker? Markers don't change letter structure.

[-Empty-Can-]

look how terrible his lines are. It looks like he went over it 15 times

[99%Shit]

Haven't been on in a mad minute. Been working a lot. New name that I am probably gonna use for hands, straights, and throws. Sadly my hand is absent from this flick, but I should be able to up it soon.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2479/3919706765_f322c46381.jpg


"Eskr" not everything has to be squared off like that. If you're from Ontario or Quebec, a name change might be an okay idea. Esker had a name change, but still.

http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_5.jpg
http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_6.jpg
http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_7.jpg
http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1186602079_5.jpg
http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_4.jpg

Those are just ones from the BS galleries. Again, if you're not from anywhere near the GTA or MTL it's probably not a concern.

That 'slime' throw would be ace w/o the holes, as those don't exist in any lowercase 'i' I've ever seen. (: Also, connect the middle hump in the 'm' to the left leg.

[nickstix]

look how terrible his lines are. It looks like he went over it 15 times

just because its alittle messy dosent mean you cant crit on the letters themselves...like i said i was experimenting and try to come up with new letters so it was alittle sloppy...you can still read everything fine and get the idea of what the letters looks like...so crits would be nice

[Anion]

The letters are legible. They're all pretty uniform.

Just watch your drop shadow near the E. If your lightsource is gonna' be the top right of the page and force the shadow to the bottom and left, make sure that E has the shadow it needs.

Ok. I think I explained that poorly. Lol. Sorry.

Don't stop at the little bumps on the E. Just do a complete replica outline of your original letters left and down of your letters.

[chimmy stacks]

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/4440/img0403kg.jpg

let me kno wut ya think...

[Keso]

hahaha!!! I used to write eske(r).


Shun-not really a throw. and if thats supposed to be a simple Id advice you to check out the new to graff thread or go back to block letters.

abor rudest-looks really nice. Im personally not a fan of the left side of the S but thats just my opinion.

New name, and experimenting with new letters...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091450.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091451.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091453.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091455.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091456.jpg

[Gezra]

Shun-not really a throw. and if thats supposed to be a simple Id advice you to check out the new to graff thread or go back to block letters.

abor rudest-looks really nice. Im personally not a fan of the left side of the S but thats just my opinion.

New name, and experimenting with new letters...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091450.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091451.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091453.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091455.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/0922091456.jpg

Yea, Try to just have 1 line for the letters. You dont need to make many lines, as you progress your lines will get cleaner.

[PegCityBoy]

Bastard




....wut

[shun]

ESKR- everyone else said it, clean thems up. the S looks like its missing a chunk by the E in a couple of them, and the circles on the K and R don't look so good on the top 2. I think the third one down is your strongest.

99%shit- fuckin cool. the bubble on the R is weird, and the F could use improvement, but the cigarette I is awesome.

alright here's a throw.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/hemp/tu1-1.jpg

[Elno]

telos gotta fix that L bro
and just realized someone a few cities over from me writes manr so what do you guys think of this...
http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/Photo184.jpg

Bump thats dope for a first attempt

[shem]

masn lose the shine and drips. that m is wack.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3503/3949503343_8535d20431_o.jpg

[Waxaddict]

Why a marker? Markers don't change letter structure.

Thicker lines, saves going over them like that.

[mefe]

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image27.jpg?t=1253822925

[Anion]

Sick?

[chimmy stacks]

6995

slime-that shit is ill keep it up
dank-sick throw style
99%shit-lookin good but i would work on that i an do somethin about the left side of the r
mefe-keep tryin man you'll get it down sooner or later

my bad about the super small pic...

[BigBlueViolence]

Sick?

That would be ironic.





http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0065.jpg?t=1253825840

[chimmy stacks]

6999

bigblue- im diggin that shit man
shem-how u gonna say that the m on that masn thow is wack an then post ur throw with that weak ass m

[mawks]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2zyvaj6.jpg

bump over a lot of wack shit
edit:
bump this too
http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0065.jpg?t=1253825840

[Anion]

That would be ironic.





http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0065.jpg?t=1253825840

I was just inquiring if that's what his toss said.

But I do like that color scheme.

[BigBlueViolence]

I was saying it would be ironic if his name was sick,
because his throw is not very sick at all.

[-Empty-Can-]

did this during school. new style that i call Baloon

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics720.jpg

[KidReny!]

id let the baloon go and go bak to ur old shit imo

[gumOnShoe]

bigblueviolence; overall looks pretty good, but the top of the 'n' is tucked behind the 'e' too much, try pushing it out a bit.

abor rudest; the 's' is too high, move it down and you're set. i'm also not feeling that
'e'

mefe; new to graff thread, you'll learn shit there. also stay away from the shine thing, cause i know you didn't come up w/ that yourself ``coughmr.wigglescough``.

shem; i like it, few things though; move the top right of the 'h' just a tad higher. also, i like the whole concept of the 'm' but try making the outer legs rounder.

here's an exchange i did w/ shun.
got crits.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo57-1.jpg

[Anion]

I was saying it would be ironic if his name was sick,
because his throw is not very sick at all.

Lol.

[gumOnShoe]

id let the baloon go and go bak to ur old shit imo

word, i'm not feeling that style either.

[-Empty-Can-]

word, i'm not feeling that style either.

i don't even remember how i made it. i was just screwing with random shapes and was like hmm i should try this.

[gumOnShoe]

i don't even remember how i made it. i was just screwing with random shapes and was like hmm i should try this.

lol s'all good man, just keep practiing.

[BigBlueViolence]

Gum, that shit you have going on looks like a good style to have in your back pocket,
for small walls and shit,
but I don't know if I'd feel seeing that regularly.

[gumOnShoe]

Gum, that shit you have going on looks like a good style to have in your back pocket,
for small walls and shit,
but I don't know if I'd feel seeing that regularly.

oh, i felt comfortable w/ that style too, i'll try to branch out though.

[xSonnyTx]

Well i was a complete and total faggot last time I was here so I'm trying to redeem myself.
If anyone has anything to say go ahead.

Pretty shitty but its what i've got
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i254/motoxracer433/chalkthrowie.jpg

[faser]

oh shi-

[Fetusr]

Holy shit, that needs work. get rid of the spaces in between, get rid of the dotted ass lines, take a look at some writers who use the same letters and you and try and draw influence, and you seem pretty new so let me be clear that I mean INFLUENCE. don't just bite. Peace

[EGO31]

Throwies shouldn't have dead space (space between letters)
If you have time to put highlights like that on a throwie, you probably have time to do a piece.

Yeah, bite letters, then switch 'em up.

[Anion]

I didn't get any crits on my pencil throws when I posted in BB.
I thought this was for throwies in paint, on walls.
But, saying as everyone is posting sketches...
Lookin' for crits on the 'Trew' throw. I fudged the 'T' but I kinda' like it. I doubt I'll try for that exact 'T' on a wall though.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=317&pictureid=2483
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=317&pictureid=2482

[crailtap]

maybe you could use the e from the lyme in the trew one
can i have some help on these?
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/4302/throw2.jpg
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/6258/throw1.jpg

[shun]

CHALK- the A is disproportionate, the bubbles on the ends of the C look bad, and like the rest say about the shine.
ANION- I'm not digging the R or E on the trew, or the M on lyme. E is nice tho.
crailtap- lose the top extension on the right side of the K, keep workin it.

fun with sharpies and china markers. crits??
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/hemp/tu2.jpg

*edit may as well add my first one for comparison/crits
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk47/shunbucket/hemp/tu1-1.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

don't the 'e' behind the 'h' so much, same goes w/ the 'm'.

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemoner.jpg

[klic]

mehh,
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekThrow17.jpg

kem - make your shadow wider

[smokeandmirrors]

new word the S is kinda weird but w/e lol crits please


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/0925092257.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

new word the S is kinda weird but w/e lol crits please


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/0925092257.jpg

idk man, not digging it. the 's' isn't that bad, the dead space at the beginning is
hurting your whole toss. make the 'l' thing or leg, taller, and the 's' is also big compared to the rest of the letters..

[CashOverEverything]

are u in kelowna?

[One Evil]

shutup uve said that in a shit load of threads. your a lousy newb n probly have no idea how to paint.
and im sure tck and pg dont need u in there scene hah

[Abor Rudest]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kemoner.jpg

youre not allowed to write that.
http://i35.tinypic.com/2eobbxc.jpg

[Anion]

mehh,
http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JanekThrow17.jpg


Lookin' good, Klick.
Just lose the shadow bits at the top of your letters and drop it a little lower. I think it'll give more defintion to the letters. I like the little flare type squiggles at the top of your letters but that bit of shadow kinda' ruins 'em. Maybe just keep a little bit of that shadow on the sides of the tops. I only say drop the shadow a little lower cause then you wouldn't be seeing them at the top and it'd be pretty mint.

[Zarb]

youre not allowed to write that.
http://i35.tinypic.com/2eobbxc.jpg

He's aloud to write what ever the fuck he wants.

[KidReny!]

not when there's other writers out there writing it who are better

[weakfingers]

Janek- Your shadow is on point. I cant see anything wrong with it.

Kems- Look at your stuff then look at that whole car. Theres nothing stopping you but if you make it semi big people will just be like well theres another kem killing it....

[Anion]

I still think the tippity top of the letters looks a little funky.

[Zarb]

i just dont like the way he said it.."your not allowed"

[shem]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3448/3955594523_3a06b2267d.jpg

kem write w.e the fuck u want. theres multiples of all kinds of big names.

janek im feelin it. something about the e bothers me i just dont know what it is.

[RADAWG]

My A is too fat http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture2.png

Kem- I think the one on the bottom is sick, big and legible.
Janek- I like when you do your lower case E better

[weakfingers]

Looks alot like zarbs stuff ^^^

[hpir]

ima just out to kill it myself but isnt this guy kem5 im kem1 theres a diffrence and weres he from anyways

[DestroyLA]

would I be aloud to write Cope1?

[smokeandmirrors]

you dont dig the word or the style lol? and hows this also
@kem: you can write what you want
@klic: i diggg

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/siel.jpg

crits on this

[RADAWG]

I made a new account. And that other kem is no cope so that point is invalid. There's obviously gonna be more then one kem get over it if there is no one in your tri state area writing the same name as you then fucking write it.

[klic]

Looks alot like zarbs stuff ^^^

well zarb just bites everyone elses stuff

[99%Shit]

Kems stomps Cope in any conceivable way, so your point is null. But odds are, the Kem in this forum will have like 10 more names before they start going real hard, so work with whatever you want for now. For the most part, posters in this forum shouldn't be on the streets at all, so there shouldn't be an issue. Learning by doing is one thing, but griming up a city with toy stuff is waste.

And Kem, on your hand, don't connect the M, it makes it look like KEY, especially when you're doing that underline.

[KidReny!]

i just dont like the way he said it.."your not allowed"

yeah i got u he actin like he a king or some shit

[weakfingers]

Klic- I'm really diggin the lean your throw has. It looks really comfertable. The J just needs to be a little more tilted the the top part of the K needs to be a little wider.

What did zarb bite?

99%- There's a couple of cats in here that try to improve and can make a throw clean but from what i have been seeing most of them just post the same shit day in day out.

Shem-Work on proportions.

Kid Reny- Regardless or not if theres another name rocking whole cars and it rolls into town and it burns your shit. Your gonna look like a fool.

Messing around with stupid names and bitin' letters. Nothing to seriouse but crits as you may.
(I'm aware I bit cope's C)
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7725.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

Klic- I'm really diggin the lean your throw has. It looks really comfertable. The J just needs to be a little more tilted the the top part of the K needs to be a little wider.

What did zarb bite?

99%- There's a couple of cats in here that try to improve and can make a throw clean but from what i have been seeing most of them just post the same shit day in day out.

Shem-Work on proportions.

Kid Reny- Regardless or not if theres another name rocking whole cars and it rolls into town and it burns your shit. Your gonna look like a fool.

Messing around with stupid names and bitin' letters. Nothing to seriouse but crits as you may.
(I'm aware I bit cope's C)
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7725.jpg

lol, that's not cope's "c", or cap's cause he gave em' that toss. that's just a simple "c", oh and no beef or anything, but that "e" is REALLY bad looking, like REALLY BAD...... make it like your "c", cept' with a hole or line in it....

[Anion]

I watched a video on Cope2 and he said one of his boys gave him the COPE throwie outline and he just started runnin' with it...

What's up with that?

[gumOnShoe]

I watched a video on Cope2 and he said one of his boys gave him the COPE throwie outline and he just started runnin' with it...

What's up with that?

lol, you thought that fat fuck came up w/ that toss by himself?

[RADAWG]

I cant do a good A that goes with the R
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo167.jpg
Weakfingers- Thats not your new name right? Cause I think your Coen shit was much better, yeah sorry I dont like that E at alll

[gumOnShoe]

I cant do a good A that goes with the R
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo167.jpg
Weakfingers- Thats not your new name right? Cause I think your Coen shit was much better, yeah sorry I dont like that E at alll

that actually looks good, i dig.

[BigBlueViolence]

The overall shape of that A looks like it should be a capital A.

[Mr yarbles]

Theres another raone on here who kills shit.
Not even calling you out
Just lettin you know

[RADAWG]

Oh well Im writing RA2 over my cuz who used to paint in the 90's, as long as hes not from where Im from it doesent really concern me. thanks for the heads up though

Maybe Ill give a capital A a shot alittle later then

[Abor Rudest]

about this kem business, kem 5, to people who actually know the graff scene and whats going on in it, is a big fucking name. hes one of the biggest players in the freight scene. so you can write that, but anyone who knows their shit is going to give you zero respect. no beef or anything, i was just trying to help you out but whatever. and to everyone else who tells him he can write whatever he wants: there are more big writers than just the cast of style wars and all those shitty graf flicks you watch on youtube, pick up a fucking book. for talking.

http://i33.tinypic.com/j0yb28.jpg

[hpir]

about this kem business, kem 5, to people who actually know the graff scene and whats going on in it, is a big fucking name. hes one of the biggest players in the freight scene. so you can write that, but anyone who knows their shit is going to give you zero respect. no beef or anything, i was just trying to help you out but whatever. and to everyone else who tells him he can write whatever he wants: there are more big writers than just the cast of style wars and all those shitty graf flicks you watch on youtube, pick up a fucking book. for talking.

http://i33.tinypic.com/j0yb28.jpg

yes im aware there is a kem bigger than me but weres he from?
nd i have no idea wat yr throw is supposed to be and A im guessing?

[gumOnShoe]

is it an A? i thought that was like just an upside down face, i feel like a tool now, lol.....

[akro_one]

RADAWG - looks pretty good to me, your A has a nice kick to it

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7013&stc=1&d=1254086537
phone cam

[gumOnShoe]

that K is WAY too lumpy..... the A isn't too bad.

[EST2007]

yes im aware there is a kem bigger than me but weres he from?

he's a freight killer and freights run internationally, so it doesnt matter where he's from.

so yeah write it if u want, i could care less, but just know u got some big shoes to fill if u want any recognition

lets end this conversation now

[LeaksOne]

I watched a video on Cope2 and he said one of his boys gave him the COPE throwie outline and he just started runnin' with it...

What's up with that?

that homie is CAP. he said he tried to venture off and do his own shit but cap told him to stick with the throw




http://i33.tinypic.com/j0yb28.jpg

LADIES AND GENTLEMAN THIS IS A FUCKING A. ITS NOT HARD TO SEE IT. A LOWER CASE A

[RADAWG]

Im not trying to be a dick I just really don't see the A in it, it looks cool though

[weakfingers]

Theres 2 holes in the A and Its super tweaked out.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/again.jpg




Some slaps I made. Dont often do colour because im colour blind.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7744.jpg

[Hepatitis]

no beef but those As look like fucking pig noses

[KidReny!]

squint- 1st one on the top left is dope

[weakfingers]

Yeah i relized after i flicked it thats not really a throw its like a SL.

[LeaksOne]

are you literally color blind? or were you just saying that?

[weakfingers]

I can't tell some shades of blues from purples and lights reds form pinks.

Example. When I go to the bombshelter to grab paint I thought i was getting black but i got Night red by accident. I have to ask my homies what colours im grabbing but I will on occasion think im grabbing one colour and totally pick up the opposite

[LeaksOne]

damn. that could spell trouble if your alone

[Black Flag]

I can't tell some shades of blues from purples and lights reds form pinks.

Example. When I go to the bombshelter to grab paint I thought i was getting black but i got Night red by accident. I have to ask my homies what colours im grabbing but I will on occasion think im grabbing one colour and totally pick up the opposite

You shouldnt ask for help, perhaps if you just went on your eyesight alone you would end up with some sick/unique color combos (well in everyone else's eyes at least).

[-Empty-Can-]

That would suck if you messed up a piece by using the wrong colors but couldn't tell.

[JustChillin]

for the Slime battle.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3538/0927091905a.jpg

[weakfingers]

That would suck if you messed up a piece by using the wrong colors but couldn't tell.

Its happend.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7278.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

Theres 2 holes in the A and Its super tweaked out.





Some slaps I made. Dont often do colour because im colour blind.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7744.jpg

dude, that 1st one is TOUGH.

[cose1]

1st attempt at a basic throwie, crits? looking for something to be my first paint and want it to look half decent

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c36/schonevelds/throwie28-09-09.jpg

[Waxaddict]

The basics are there, just get a bit better proportion wise and make it flow.

The S sucks hard.

Keep drawing it over and over til you get it a bit better.. don't go out and paint that shit.

[Abor Rudest]

Theres 2 holes in the A and Its super tweaked out.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/again.jpg

haha thank you, now people will get it.

[BigBlueViolence]

I read "again and again" and immediately thought of Wu Tang

[Abor Rudest]

well then i got what i was aiming for.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20090920_3.jpg

[suparjafar]

maybe its just me but the n looks a little wide. i like your letters though

[weakfingers]

Besno- The hole O is to big compared to the rest of the Holes in the throw. Just work it out and itill take shape.

Some new style type throws
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7749.jpg

[LeaksOne]

maybe add the swoop and point on the end of the S.

[norekone]

heres a throwie i did 2days ago
crits?

[UpstateHate585]

my first attempt at a throwie.

http://i37.tinypic.com/dyrnme.jpg

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo173.jpg
Upstate Hate- Work on more simpler letters and dont worry about details for bow

[weakfingers]

Upstate, I like the shadow on the throw.
Rawdog, Way to much overlap going on with that throw. Dont like how the A is almost closed on the right side.
Overall I dont like two letters throwies in general if its not someone popular. Most of the time you wont know who the person is doing them unless they have a very unique style and letters.


Picture for talking.... Lost in space.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/lostinspace.jpg

[norekone]

heres a throwie i did 2days ago.
crits?

[Serv1]

Nice man. here are 2 throwies i came up with. i kinda like the one on the right. crits? plz and thank you lol.
http://i530.photobucket.com/albums/dd350/DMW1024/lifljkfc001.jpg (http://s530.photobucket.com/albums/dd350/DMW1024/?action=view&current=lifljkfc001.jpg)

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/photo4.jpg
Serv - You have a good idea, but you tweaked your S a little too much and maybe try a different E. Work on your hand too, btw.
Sqwint - Looking good as usual man, just try a couple different T's, the one you have now doesnt flow as much.
Radawg - looking good.
Upstate - I like your S, work on the other letter though.

[JustChillin]

for the Slime battle.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3538/0927091905a.jpgcrits?

[BigBlueViolence]

Weren't you that kid that was "writing Maniac forever"?

[JustChillin]

not forever but yea any crits?

[BigBlueViolence]

Maniac is my name man and Il write it till I die.

Just sayinnnnnnnnnnn

[LeaksOne]

http://i530.photobucket.com/albums/dd350/DMW1024/lifljkfc001.jpg (http://s530.photobucket.com/albums/dd350/DMW1024/?action=view&current=lifljkfc001.jpg)

no. your s is hideous. take that back. get a new style that ones not workin at all


http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/photo4.jpg

change your b e and o. dont do those big holes. tweak your n and s.


crits?

ugly. i mean its nice and simple but it looks like you tried too hard with that. you need a style of some sort.

[One Evil]

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9444/dscf2663rv.jpg (http://img5.imageshack.us/i/dscf2663rv.jpg/)
http://img7.imageshack.us/img7/7594/dscf2680.jpg (http://img7.imageshack.us/i/dscf2680.jpg/)
OE done by SEC

LRG done LARGE CMK

[LeaksOne]

i dont agree with your E

[One Evil]

which? the one on the bridge wall? ya looks ugly i kno
totally fucked the 3d

[LeaksOne]

not necessarily the 3d. the whole design. add some funk to it since theres not much you can do with an O.

[Waxaddict]

The C on the hollow SEC need a shorter middle line, otherwise it looks like an L or some shit since there's not much of a curve.

[Waxaddict]

The C on the hollow SEC need a shorter middle line, otherwise it looks like an L or some shit since there's not much of a curve.

[dreaken1993]

http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-10.jpg
http://i438.photobucket.com/albums/qq101/dreaken1993/scan0001-9.jpg

[Culture_Shock]

Aenok- Love the throws and the handstyles, but that straight letter is just suffering...
Serv- Needs lots of work, but I too know the trouble of putting an R in the middle of things. The way that the RV connects in the center and lower right tags doesn't work at all, but kind of makes for a nice kick off the R, if you don't cram it up into the loop... I may or may not steal this for my own purposes.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo174.jpg

[One Evil]

The C on the hollow SEC need a shorter middle line, otherwise it looks like an L or some shit since there's not much of a curve.

an L? haha not even bro..
but word
ill keep workin on it.

[BigBlueViolence]

I disagree, I think that Sec is dope the way it is.

[hpir]

huh

[under1flag]

This is my first post... I write Stryk9 (sometimes without the y) and have been for a few months now. Here's my current throw
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss351/under1flag/Picture001.jpg

I've been thinking about changing my word though to Ulsr... throw for that
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss351/under1flag/Picture002.jpg
Critz/suggestions would be much appreciated!

[BigBlueViolence]

WOOOOOOOOOAH.



Nah, B.

[hpir]

oooh haha

[mmmburgers]

The RA throw is tight, the other throw on this page sucks dick.

[mefe]

i like this S

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image28.jpg?t=1254345812

[milk boxx]

strk.. theres already an Ulsr

[KtRL.]

[QUOTE=under1flag;1477861]This is my first post... I write Stryk9 (sometimes without the y) and have been for a few months now. Here's my current throw
http://i591.photobucket.com/albums/ss351/under1flag/Picture001.jpg

throw some shading on that strk

[nickstix]

mefe-it looks like your trying too hard. try using plain and simple bubble letters for now dont worry about it looking cool

radawg- throws good. work on the dropshadow a bit and go paint

some stuff...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/bb1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/bb2.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/ss1.jpg
^I know this looks shity, the fill color sucked. but you can still see the outline

crits?

[KtRL.]

strk -maybe try to put some holes in your letters instead of crosses and make your letters rounder too

[KtRL.]

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/Graffiti/ss1.jpg


throw some shading and an outline up on that otherwize looks aight, maybbe a tag or something beside it

[crailtap]

at least get a different fill color


crailtap- lose the top extension on the right side of the K, keep workin it.

i know that i need to keep working on my k, im still not satisfied with it, but could i get some crits?
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb39/crailtap250/throw_4-1.jpg
http://i205.photobucket.com/albums/bb39/crailtap250/throw_3-1.jpg
i like the top one better

[JustChillin]

Just sayinnnnnnnnnnn
ok? whats the point your trying to make?

[under1flag]

theres already an Ulsr?? damn, he got a good word then.
and thanx KtRL i'll work on them holes, i'll post a shadowed one too eventually

[l3monade]

crail tap- try to fill the white space between the h and the o and maybe try to make the c proportionate to the other letters try to just go simple and then work on gettin stee on your letters

[Darkeist]

The only thing good on this page is the ES on the blackbook and the RA throw.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20090930.jpg too lazy to check my shit from yesterday.

[suparjafar]

benso..awesome

[UpstateHate585]

meh still working on something. im very new to throws, crits?

http://i35.tinypic.com/9hqb6w.jpg

[Darkeist]

The only thing good on this page is the ES on the blackbook and the RA throw.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20090930.jpg too lazy to check my shit from yesterday.

so - the one on the right's S is good.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo174.jpg

bumpp

[Darkeist]

Haha everyones bumpin there shit. give crits.

[gumOnShoe]

RADAWG,looks iight, that R looks familiar though, keep at it man.

Bensohttp://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Snapshot_20090930.jpg
Upstate Hate,you fucked with the bottom of the S so hard, make that part a simple curve.

Crailtap, watch out for dead space on that H, major no-no. i'd try making a capital H.

Nickstix, idk man, isn't that type of E suppose to look like backwards 3s? it just looks like a regular E with a line in the middle.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/bb1.jpg


Mefe, try to go simpler, man. it looks like you tried WAAAAYYYY too hard, just try to go slow w/ it, you'll get the hang of it in time.

i FUCKING HATE Rs, help?
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo8.jpg

[crailtap]

maybe make the bottom of the r a little more like the n, and scale it down too. thanks for the crits

[norekone]

crits?
i know i fuked up on the S,R and N on the full letter.
just if anyone has any good ideas what to fix up let me know :)
the full letter in person it looks way better for some reason..lol
and the PS isn't me

[nickstix]

gumonshoe-R looks fine, Id say just make it alittle smaller so its the same as the other letters.

radawg-just fix the drop shadow and its good


random in class stuff...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/mt1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/mt2.jpg
^this was a random idea I had to shift the top over to give it a slant...not sure if i like it...

crits?

[KtRL.]

KtRL new to graff thread, if you already went there, and READ EVERYTHING, do your next toss simpler, not all spikey n' shit, just like a simple bubbly style, you'll get better.



ahaha, what are you saying man thats not even my post.. i havent posted my bomb yet, i lost my usb cord from my camera but i have a nice throw drawn up

[gumOnShoe]

ahaha, what are you saying man thats not even my post.. i havent posted my bomb yet, i lost my usb cord from my camera but i have a nice throw drawn up

oops, i fell retarded now, i'll go delete that.

[LeaksOne]

eskr you may need to find a new style that one is funny lookin. mostly your k and r.

snore i like that. maybe bring the line in your e down more towards the middle. and that r is solid imo.

now my shit.....
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60047.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60052.jpg
crits??

[suparjafar]

i like that first one, but the second one seems kinda jumbled, i really dont know how to explain it, maybe its the s. like that s but doesnt seem to flow

[JustChillin]

leaks i cant make out what the second letter is and on the first one your letters get bigger and bigger as you go and for the second one i would straighten it out as in if i drew a line underneath it i would a diagonal line. you would like straight 180 degree one. all in all though your letters look good.

[RADAWG]

Leaks both are lookin nice, i fuckin love the second one

[LeaksOne]

leaks i cant make out what the second letter is and on the first one your letters get bigger and bigger as you go and for the second one i would straighten it out as in if i drew a line underneath it i would a diagonal line. you would like straight 180 degree one. all in all though your letters look good.

the first one is kinda old. i just fucked with the second one yesterday and i always have a problem of goin small to big and diagonal sometimes but i was drawin that second one over and over at work and i thought that one came out the best. its not official but im guna go back and polish it up.

radawg thanks for the crits

[l3monade]

leaks - maybe take the bump out of the n on the second one and just make it more round at the top

[Culture_Shock]

Ahh!! Leaks you BITCH!!:mad::mad:
I've been writing Iron for months now, and boy I got it locked! It's a good thing I never actually post anything, or else... uhhm... we'd have beef... or something...?

[LeaksOne]

um shut the hell up you idiot. if you could read youd know i definately write SIRON. you see that?? theres a S in front of the iron. that means its a completely different word.

[niner1234]

GORE
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/3564/photo12zi.jpg
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6370/photo11rn.jpg

[Dek2]

Here SNORE if this helps you

[nickstix]

gore-looks like you have some good ideas. I dont really have much advice b/c I dont know alot about throws I would say just keep working on it and put a drop shadow on it.

siron- try not to have your letters get bigger from left to right (that is unless you wanted to do that)


gumonshoe-R looks fine, Id say just make it alittle smaller so its the same as the other letters.

radawg-just fix the drop shadow and its good


random in class stuff...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/mt1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/mt2.jpg
^this was a random idea I had to shift the top over to give it a slant...not sure if i like it...

crits?

Bump...crits?

[weakfingers]

Nichstix-It looks fine, just roll with that style and it will evolve. My style started kinda looking like that one but the more you do it the more you tweak you letters and the more complex it will get.

For the dgaf battle...
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7714.jpg

Something quick I did for the user Tonka
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7768.jpg

[chiefy]

That bottom one is hella of funny lol

[niner1234]

GORE
http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/3564/photo12zi.jpg
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6370/photo11rn.jpg

bump new page

[RADAWG]

Just adding some letters to my name while I was bored in class
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo179.jpg
Same old shit
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo178.jpg

Gore- Maybe make your R alittle fatter

[BigBlueViolence]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/IMG_0164.jpg?t=1254517306

[UpstateHate585]

crits?

http://i35.tinypic.com/33jtge1.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/1zvsbx3.jpg

[faser]

upstate- the throwie needs to be defined more...

(wat does it say...)

[UpstateHate585]

the first one is "so" and the second says "inso"

[l3monade]

niner1234- maybe get longer flowy lines in ur toss like on the g

upstate hate585- i see the so, but in the second one can;t really see the n definatly try tomake ur letters a little more clear i like how similar they are though also think about putting the hole of the o in the middle

just over a month of writing now this is what ive worked my throw out to be
crits please.

http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0334.jpg

[skatenate]

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1299/sdc11202.th.jpg (http://img204.imageshack.us/i/sdc11202.jpg/) crits?

[BigBlueViolence]

D=

[faser]

mind = blown.

[skatenate]

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2806/sdc11205.th.jpg (http://img36.imageshack.us/i/sdc11205.jpg/)

uh ok. well i was scribbling, and thought this looked alrighttt, any thoughts?

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091002_5.jpg

skatenate - try to go simpler and lose the extensions, nothign really flows there.
lemonade - good basic lettering, keep at it.

[faser]

^ try defining the letters..