tot throwies.

[terror.shark]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/3743153636_0391e5920c.jpg

that second one, the two letter, is super sexy.

[Loki X Sho]

i like it lots and lots
thanks brotha!
here!...
http://i37.tinypic.com/2j303tu.png

[norekone]

i've been writing NORSK but just thought of RAEZ hmm...idk which one to pick lol

[Fury]

You just pass them out like food stamps; I'm not special :(

[smooth_nuts]

i want a gold star :[

[STFUPPERCUT]

i want a gold star :[

no, you get one of these http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2047/buddyicons/24546641@N02.jpg

[JustChillin]

kae- you should go with regular plain fills for now. im not feein the dots and extra stuff.
smoothnuts- it looks clean.

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/106/1016091438a.jpg

[threnodyofcrows]

http://i33.tinypic.com/10fdjc9.jpg

say wha?

[Loki X Sho]

connect the line in the top of the H all the way down to the connecting piece, it kinda looks like a K.

[fuckthebuff]

bump, add a shadow and a force field and that shit will be fairly legit

[threnodyofcrows]

thank you :)
ya i tried a couple with a crayola marker fill but it looked like shit
just working on the letter shapes

[Loki X Sho]

yeah don't sweat the fill yet..just get the structure and dimensions down first..then elaborate..I only do one solid color for a fill, if that.

[threnodyofcrows]

anyone else want to try it?
it took me a while to figure out a good shape for the T

[OOPS!]

The T on the top one is fine man

[threnodyofcrows]

http://i33.tinypic.com/waqexu.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

use the first one

[JustChillin]

bottom of page bump
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/106/1016091438a.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

hmm not too shabby...just thicken your shadow a little...wanna exchange for ideas...? I got a throw for u, but i gotta go so pm me later dude.

[Flawless Victory]

Threnody my darling- Out of the 4 you posted, I would definitely be working with #3.
work on that T and E and you have some nice shit going.

[threnodyofcrows]

aw, but i like that E

[LeaksOne]

manik do regular bubble letters. that needs ALOT of work

[terror.shark]

i get mad bored. anyone (you gotta be decent/around here. AKA i'm not doing a throw so you can jack the style(which i lack in)) wanna do an exchange? i'll actually put some effort in it.

http://i34.tinypic.com/2n7l8ad.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

i'll do one pm me

[smooth_nuts]

i'd be done terror.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture5.png
KRE- Make all your letters the same size, your A is so much fatter then your other letters
bump

[KRE1]

loki: i just have to say.. i love your quote. vinnie paz is a beast.

[KtRL.]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/106/1016091438a.jpg
justchillin - you should try to do your letters in one line so that it looks cleaner instead of like sketching a throw

[terror.shark]

different style then i usually draw, also sorry about the wackness http://i35.tinypic.com/fkw6eu.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

DOPE.
I would take that underline off the K though, but leave it as part of the O.

[faser]

terror shark - make the E like your A but upside down

[terror.shark]

the a was so busted, but i couldn't find an eraser so i left it

[smooth_nuts]

word word.
what do you write again homie,i dont think i actualy ever asked lol.

[hpir]

ma shit got fucked up b4
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinone-1-1-1-1.jpg
crits?

bump

[weakfingers]

^^^ Work on proportions, Dont cut off your throwies also, its a bad habit I had for awhile.

[Vinnie Paz]

dont put shines ever it can make the dopest toss look wack

[hpir]

ya i know i was just bored at the time and wanted to add sumthin else

[Graffyk]

I'm not that good with throwies, and this is one i've made after a hell of a lot of attempts

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7853/p1000541u.jpg

I'm regretting that extension off the S

[boodah]

Take out the overlapping lines scape. They're hindering your flow. I'm not digging the little tail on the S or the E. It's getting there, just keep working on it (proportionally expecially).

[suparjafar]

what he said about scape^^

okae i like everything but the underline, id say to lose that

trying to different ideas and sorry about really chicken scratched lines

but which idea should i work on more? the tall one is the one ive been working on

[boodah]

Clean up the second toss and it could be getting somewhere. The N needs work, and try to match the other letters to the style of your S. Keep it simple like that for now though.

[suparjafar]

refined...and thanks for the crit

[boodah]

extend the top two lines of your W, and I like the way you did the S in that other sketch. I was suggesting that you change your other letters, but its your throwup.

[Fury]

Work on the S and N. S is too fat.

[LeaksOne]

I'm not that good with throwies, and this is one i've made after a hell of a lot of attempts

http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/7853/p1000541u.jpg

I'm regretting that extension off the S

um where did you get the idea for that s?

[massacreman]

um where did you get the idea for that s?

toytopia

[Nyc Sno]

http://i35.tinypic.com/20kzjw8.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/rvk9ec.jpg
2 quick throwies crits?

[LeaksOne]

what do they say?

[Nyc Sno]

yuk.. the k is weak i know

[LeaksOne]

id say trash that style. i just looked back at it even knowing what it said and its still barely legible.

[ChadWarden]

nyc sno: you got a really different style from what most cats are rocking. i wouldnt quite say give it up but definetly work on it. being able to kinda read it would be nice too.

unless you do want to change it but then you'd just be like everyone else right?

[shem]

yuk that style has potential keep working on it. i like it for some reason.

[||BREAD||]

hallo

happy Halloween :] first piece in about a year. . .colours aren't vibrant due to sharpies lol
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2672/4027675028_39631e5d53_b.jpg

oh! and i realize my 3d is fucked but w.e

[hecktor]

I FUCKING LOVE LESBlANS, BRO!

hahahaha

[suparjafar]

bic start with keyboards first, everything looks really off. plus thats not a throw...

thinking of painting this first one this week... the top ones are just dumb experiments...p.s. dont pay attention to the handies

[KRE1]

i would fix that N and round out the W a bit more before you paint that

[TheToy]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/56/l_f4446336f7254f02a00456b94ba58bbb.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/59/l_53227d7fa59e46f398abe31654371536.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/16/l_6885e052752a4f5ab39342c16a2ed0a0.jpg

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/74/l_8588b377fbea47a7a1ba444282d30196.jpg

This is some shit I just did.

My eyes are burning...

[suparjafar]

...wee

[hpir]

the toy- i wouldent bring beef into this because keso will probly burn u
||BREAD||- thats for toy blackooks not throws
yuk-i cant see the k but work with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinone.jpg
crits?

[||BREAD||]

my bad for not putting it right. and ive been writing for awhile, i just was on hiatus
for like a year lol ill get some legit throws up for ya'll tonight

[RADAWG]

Grin- I think the letters are all too fat, make them skinnier

[mefe]

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image36.jpg?t=1256079958

[suparjafar]

grin thats clean

[||BREAD||]

Some new Some old
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0071.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0072.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0073.jpg
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0074.jpg

[Eon 1]

Bread- I advise you that you should work on ur letter structure before you add fills.
Mefe- I don't like ur "S". Don't make it swoop out like that.
HPIR- Im liken the style. work on the "E" though.

[||BREAD||]

what do you mean letter structure?

[weakfingers]

Real talk.... knemo is mad progressing, Watch out in 2 months
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8484.jpg

[mekosbc]

freeessshhhhh^^
the only thing is your shadow is really brawlic haha try to make its smaller but the letters are on point

[Bars]

Weakfingers that knemo is looking pretty good, not the biggest fan of the N but its definetley got potential.

Bread, don't go so crazy with the colours man just do simple fills and work on the structure of your letters first.

http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/7255/img000088.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/img000088.jpg/)

Still trying to get some style but appreciate crits

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1021090235.jpg

[KRE1]

fukn around.

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/2562/001ngc.jpg

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/9169/002pw.jpg

[HalfGangstaShit]

Man fuck anion, you suck kid.
All I've been reading is the dry ass trynna be smart remarks from that faggot, they're all bad puns or yardschool comebacks..
Los Throw Ups!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp213.jpg

[TheToy]

You're gonna' talk shit and post pictures like that in the same post?

Trashy. Your work and your attitude.

[HalfGangstaShit]

I FUCKING LOVE LESBlANS, BRO!
They know how to have fun!

[HalfGangstaShit]

You're gonna' talk shit and post pictures like that in the same post?

Trashy. Your work and your attitude.

Just how I like em, trashy and curvy.

[Flawless Victory]

Real talk.... knemo is mad progressing, Watch out in 2 months
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8484.jpg
This is dope.
The only thing I'm not feeling are the cutbacks.
Seems kind of purposeless on a throw.
The line on the O could be longer, too.

[TheToy]

Just how I like em, trashy and curvy.

Sounds like a 'dry ass tryna' be smart remark/bad pun'.

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp29F.jpg

http://www.miamigraffiti.com/writer.php?id=True

[massacreman]

girls girls,
go to the beef section for les-bians and fights

[TheToy]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp29F.jpg

I didn't ask for the exchange. But thanks.
Thanks for the kind words, as well.

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/1256154873328.jpg


karmo - nice, i also think the line on the o could be longer
resk - the r looks more like a k to me...

[weakfingers]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1021090235.jpg



I think i saw this in toronto at the graffiti research lab projector thingy.



Edit***That is sick! http://senseslost.com/wp-content/uploads/grl3.jpg
http://senseslost.com/wp-content/uploads/grlto4.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

holy shit, nice find man. looks tough btw.

[hpir]

Bread- I advise you that you should work on ur letter structure before you add fills.
Mefe- I don't like ur "S". Don't make it swoop out like that.
HPIR- Im liken the style. work on the "E" though.

wat "e"?

[mefe]

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_Image40.jpg
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_Image39.jpg
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/th_Image37.jpg

[suparjafar]

This is dope.
The only thing I'm not feeling are the cutbacks.
Seems kind of purposeless on a throw.
The line on the O could be longer, too.

sweeeeet. o is kinda fat, short line in it so yeah id thin/elongate it but whatever

bored

[l3monade]

con- lookin good nice and simple
snew- try to slant ur n to match the middle lines so they all go together

tryin new stuff, sloppy job but w.e
Crits please...

http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0380.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Your K looks like kind of like a backwards lowercase N to me on that one, man.

[suparjafar]

snaw, fixing a right away...lol

[KtRL.]

knar - you should work on moving your letters closer together, so that there are no gaps.
knemo - your shits looking tight, im diggin the new N in your throw

[take2]

make the left side of the k less rectangular

[terror.shark]

http://i36.tinypic.com/14idddy.jpg

http://i35.tinypic.com/9ztzqb.jpg

random idea... says africa
http://i37.tinypic.com/ion4u9.jpg

[milk boxx]

knemo, that M goes hard niggggggguh

[suparjafar]

diggin those e's terror. any help on n's appreciated..a's too small i know

[Flawless Victory]

Terror- The letters on their own are dope,
but they just sort of sprawl out in different directions.
Try and make them all flow in one general direction.

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/P1060696.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Your letters are way too far apart, man
Try for around 3/4 or each letter showing, the other 1/4 is tucked behind the letter before it.


http://i33.tinypic.com/500fhx.jpg

huge ass A oner.

[hecktor]

first throw attempt crits?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/untitled-2.jpg


flawless that shit is fire son!

[hpir]

the toy- i wouldent bring beef into this because keso will probly burn u
||BREAD||- thats for toy blackooks not throws
yuk-i cant see the k but work with it
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinone.jpg
crits?

bump

[suparjafar]

clean but not a fan of the handie

[crailtap]

hecktor- make the top left part of your k narrower, and the the top right wider and a little taller

[klic]

Weekly Toy Handstyle Battle #34
Word: Crash
Deadline: Friday, October 23, 2009
Rules: One entry per person.

PM Your Entries To klic (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/private.php?do=newpm&u=35195)

--------------------------------------------------------------------------

Weekly Toy Throwie Battle #11
Word: Opium
Deadline: Friday, October 23, 2009
Rules: One entry per person.

PM Your Entries To klic (http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/private.php?do=newpm&u=35195)

[||BREAD||]

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0092.jpg

Meh?

[HalfGangstaShit]

Your letters are way too far apart, man
Try for around 3/4 or each letter showing, the other 1/4 is tucked behind the letter before it.


http://i33.tinypic.com/500fhx.jpg

huge ass A oner.
I'll take your advice bro, thanks for the exchange shit looks proper.

[BERS1]

yah digg?
http://i634.photobucket.com/albums/uu61/jesc4prez/Photo-0407.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

I'm feeling the RS, not really the BE

[BERS1]

yeah im workin on them the e usally lookz better... and the b im still comin up with diff ways.. any suggestion on makin it better?

[Eon 1]

wat "e"?LOL. I meant to right "I"

[suparjafar]

that s is fucking hot. that r is nice too. i like everything but the b.

[.nolove.]

yah digg?
http://i634.photobucket.com/albums/uu61/jesc4prez/Photo-0407.jpg

first off i would lose the random ass tumor thingy coming off your b.infact i would scrap the b all together and make it match the r in shape.at least the top part of the r.that way there will be more symetry.the hole in the s should be a bit smaller to match the size or the hole inside the r.trust me when you go to the wall you'll thank me.you got the right idea with the e mimmicking the S.my advice is to make it a bit less bunched up particularly around the top of the e.just keep working on it.i suggest you get a dry erase board to practice.or atleast dry erase board markers to use on your mirror.that way your not wasting a shitload of paper.but this is all my opinion and you should make the throw look like what you want it to look like.im just giving you something to think about when you draw your throw the next time.try it and see how it looks maybe youll like it.cheers.

[weakfingers]

So much going on in that throw but I like the S.



Sorry spin for the eye bite but i was just fucking around.
I had to distort the Vagina In the U or photobucket would delete my pictures.
This was one of my reject throwies for the battle coming up

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8462.jpg

[.nolove.]

use image socket dude.it lets you put up whatever...

[weakfingers]

I'm super lazy to switch and plus its not every day i draw and post a dick or vagina

[snooot]

afdsjdkfsjndlfsfd

[BERS1]

yo nolove addvice taken ill post up the new one with ur suggestions and actually i like it better

[massacreman]

ey bers, wher u from man?

[BERS1]

im from PA dude

[terror.shark]

http://i35.tinypic.com/2q3r9y8.jpg

i suck.

[hecktor]

you spelt midTerms wrong.


oh your t and e are the same thing...

[KidReny!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Throw.jpg

New markers, new black book, and new style, crits.

snoot- I'd try working on proportion but other than that letters are nice
terror shark- just start all over with a simple style

[faser]

^are you joking about what you said on terror sharks throw

[KidReny!]

it could be better not sayin its bad but still the only letter i think is decent is the last k, but yo thats just imo

[suparjafar]

nevr i like it but lose that r extension.

[hecktor]

just threw this up at the water tower 1 pm like 30 min ago.
i know my H needs work.
P.S THE RANDOM BLACK LINE IN MY H SEEPED THROUGH MY ORANGE FROM THE GUY BEFORE ME
Crits?

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/throw.jpg



terror shark- fix your I, im not feelin it with that throw....kind of looks like a cock

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/1256351848263.jpg

Bers: I think there's too much going on imo...

[.nolove.]

just threw this up at the water tower 1 pm like 30 min ago.
i know my H needs work.
P.S THE RANDOM BLACK LINE IN MY H SEEPED THROUGH MY ORANGE FROM THE GUY BEFORE ME
Crits?

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/throw.jpg



terror shark- fix your I, im not feelin it with that throw....kind of looks like a cock

you missed a spot in the fill.take you time on your fill man.other than that just keep practicing it will all fall into place sooner or later.

[gumOnShoe]

i think you should've practiced that more before you painted it.
also, i think you bit that HK

[suparjafar]

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/5784/pic0132d.th.jpg (http://img18.imageshack.us/i/pic0132d.jpg/)

[hecktor]

i think you should've practiced that more before you painted it.
also, i think you bit that HK

i i bit the little hook from sike thats about it

[ChadWarden]

i i bit the little hook from sike thats about it

why are so many kids suddenly, not even biting, just straight up eating this kid's shit. honestly, i don't even think he's that great, but damn this is like the fifth bite i've seen this week. least you straight up admit it. other people make is sooo damn obvious, too.

[Flawless Victory]

No offense to Sike, but those are mad generic add-ons.
Just like the U for holes or the splash marks.

[weakfingers]

Real Talk
Who gives a fuck about biting at the toy stage. Every toy bites shit. Its how they get there style, No toy can ever say that they havent ever tried to make there shit look a certain way or liked how a letter looked and tried it out. Graffiti has been since the 1920s.... thats almost 90 years!
You really think you could make something totally original wihtout any biting or influence that looks good? What do you think makes a good looking girl appealing? Its features that alot of other good looking girls have. Same goes for graffiti. Besides mostly every toy that bites shit will eventully morph it into his own shit.

Nuff' talk, Heres a throwie knemo did that I really enjoy.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8727.jpg

[boodah]

I'm not too crazy about knemo's throwies. They're clean and the proportions are good, that's about it. Those letters are nowhere near original.

[hecktor]

progression wouldnt be progression without a few bites hear and there.

we've all done it. some of us just own up to it

[Flawless Victory]

The way Knemo flaired his hand from top to bottom has been done MAD times,
I call a bite.

[KRE1]

weakfingers knows what he's talking about. who gives a FUCK if u bite when ur a toy. if it helps you progress (which it do) then do it. you fkn naggers.

[boodah]

weakfingers knows what he's talking about. who gives a FUCK if u bite when ur a toy. if it helps you progress (which it doesn't) then do it. you fkn naggers.
fixed.
Biting a letter does not teach you anything. How can you learn from drawing a letter when you don't know HOW it got that way?

[Flawless Victory]

I can kind of dig what Weak is saying.
If dude sees a letter that he likes that isn't
100% a particular writer's letter (Boner's B, Remio's R),
and makes HIS OWN style based upon that one dope letter, then that's gravy, go for it.

But if dude straight up does nothing but jock letters from a writer/writers,
then he's a clown that needs to take up coin collecting,
graffiti ain't the game for him

[KRE1]

by seeing how it looks, understanding WHY it looks good thru other peoples usage, and then practicing that formation over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and OVER. yee. no beef boodah but i mean shit we cant knock bad toys for doing it; at the very least its a form of a compliment.

EDIT: i agree wit bbv. and i kno im toy but shoot i think its a good way to get your letters going in a good direction.

[boodah]

by seeing how it looks, understanding WHY it looks good thru other peoples usage, and then practicing that formation over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and OVER. yee. no beef boodah but i mean shit we cant knock bad toys for doing it; at the very least its a form of a compliment.

EDIT: i agree wit bbv. and i kno im toy but shoot i think its a good way to get your letters going in a good direction.
Who's starting beef?:)

If you're practicing someone else's formation (not saying you are, just you as in anyone in general) that's weak shit, and you should quit. I remember seeing someone straight up just copying a Mek piece in here, bar for bar. That doesn't work. I see how it can sometimes work to look at other people's pieces, but ONLY simples. Appreciate other people's work for what it is, don't jock it up the ass.

We can argue this point forever, but let's just agree to disagree.

[Flawless Victory]

I'm with Boodah for 99.5% of this shit.
I'm just stating that style is definitely influenced by graffiti you think is dope.
It's more or less an inevitability.

[weakfingers]

Flawless victory basicly summed up what i was trying to say.
Small bites that your morph into your own style is fine in my eyes but whole graffiti creator bites are not okay

example,
Right when I came onto the site I saw bspolice's S and really likes it... After a couple of months I noticed the way he does the bottoms of his S and started to try to add it to my throw. I couldent exactly do it the same so i tweaked it because it was easier for me to draw and after sketching it out for a while it turned out totally diffrent from what I started with

[Flawless Victory]

We cool, nig

http://florianjensen.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/11/cool-dog-300x220.jpg

[KRE1]

naggers.

edit: bahaha

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091025.jpg

[KRE1]

snooz: that looks pretty legit man. imo the bottom of the Z could be cleaned up to look more like the S's bottom... make it flow better me thinks

[suparjafar]

snooz, i like it just fix the z. and never that shits awesome, except the second to last n. character is sweet

bumpin for help

http://i37.tinypic.com/2wq5s9g.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

http://i37.tinypic.com/314xch0.jpg

http://i34.tinypic.com/r1mt11.jpg

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2171/2430853160_9f7749307e.jpg


http://farm1.static.flickr.com/32/64959397_cc583ca3f1.jpg






JUST SAYlN'.

[gumOnShoe]

Holy shit, lol.^^

Snaw: try making the slits in the N straight. also, try to avoid sketching your toss. it looks like you practiced it enough already, try it.

now, help me out.
http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w203/_zEt_/Photo28.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

The S is a little subtle compared to the other letters.
I'm not really a fan of the thing in the middle of the E,
but that's just because it isn't really my style.

[gumOnShoe]

subtle? what's that mean? (seriously)
oh, and yeah, the thing in the middle of the E thing was just something i ripped off. don't really know who, but i've seen a bunch of people do it, so i thought, "why not". if it's wack, i'll take it off though.

[weakfingers]

The S you can tell is an S but just make the bottom more defined.

[Flawless Victory]

I'm not saying the E is poorly executed,
just not feeling it personally.

[gumOnShoe]

The S you can tell is an S but just make the bottom more defined.

again, call me stupid, but what do you mean by that?

Edit: do you mean like add a slit to the bottom left part of the S or something?

[suparjafar]

^ yeah, i think you should. also, im not really feelin the e. but when you mean go try it im assuming you mean paint it, correct?

[gumOnShoe]

yep, but before you do that, practice it a few more times without sketching to get a feel for it.

[HalfGangstaShit]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/knarthrow.jpg

i dont really have much to say.. sorry gang

[mefe]

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image43.jpg?t=1256507412
crits

[klic]

lol, huge bite by nevr



Weekly Toy Throwie Battle #12
Word: Treat
Deadline: Friday, October 30, 2009
Rules: One entry per person.

[TheToy]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/knarthrow.jpg

Please tell me this is Paint Shop...

[MESTONE]

Mest throwup black and blue.7398 click on it for close up

[suparjafar]

go wayy simpler mest, try simples first. throws and simples are way different, but it should help because your letters arent proportionate at all.

[HalfGangstaShit]

Please tell me this is Paint Shop...

Graffiti.playdo.com

[klic]

Please tell me this is Paint Shop...

no its on paper, ya dumb fuck :P

[MESTONE]

I just started do you think thats good for a start

[Flawless Victory]

HAHAHA, that Nevr kid deleted his post.

[||BREAD||]

haha thats funny shit man, nice job flawless lol

heres snaw's throwie for an exchange
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0013.jpg

[KidReny!]

http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q25/WestSideG_03/Throw.jpg
Bumpin for crits

Snaw- Colors are nice and all but your A and W work on them, and show a lil more of you r n

[suparjafar]

it was an exchange ^^ and i like it, ditch that r though. bic ill have a few ideas up tomorrow.

[weakfingers]

Stray-Not really feeling that style, Its simple and clean but yeah not really liking it.

Heres a reject throw for the battle that I dont really like and I got board and did a snaw throwie.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8779.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8778.jpg

[suparjafar]

i love that treat r. its original

thanks for the throw too. im thinking of painting the one i posted tomorrow, any tips in general

[weakfingers]

^^^^^^My first tip would be that you might find it hard to paint something from the future... think about it for a second.


And my R aint' that original. I consider my shit really basic, I dont think that hard on letter shapes. Simple and legible is how i play the game.

[KidReny!]

Yeah i always thought it was nicely simple niceley colored, just boring naw i mean

[Flawless Victory]

That's exactly what's up.


Talking about Weak's post.

[suparjafar]

hahahah holy fuck i just got that. i actually laughed at that, give your self a pat on the back. but seriously?

[Flawless Victory]

...What's funny?
I was saying simple shit is what's up


ooooooh, I see what you're talking about now.

[oaph_ezork]

bread: make you w more inrticate
kid reny: add shadow?
heres mine http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7399&stc=1&d=1256531681
two letter http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7400&stc=1&d=1256531733

meh http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7401&stc=1&d=1256531784

[weakfingers]

But seriously....
Like Flawless Victory is sayin, Keeep it simple. That way its hard to fuck things up.
I see alot of toys in real life and on this site trying to much shit at once, If you start simple there's a better chance of you being able to do clean basic shit rather then fucking things up! heres a small example or the toys in my area that think they run shit just trying crazy all out shit rather then basic stuff.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792-1.jpg

[KidReny!]

bread: make you w more inrticate
kid reny: add shadow?
heres mine http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7399&stc=1&d=1256531681
two letter http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7400&stc=1&d=1256531733

meh http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7401&stc=1&d=1256531784

thanks for the crits, this ***** use arrows he def. know whats good thanks man :)

[oaph_ezork]

7402 another

[weakfingers]

^^^^^....My point exactly...

[oaph_ezork]

kid reny is your talking about surgen who uses those aarows i no thtat i wouldnt but those in if i was doing one of those, judt clearing that up

[oaph_ezork]

fuck i need to learn how to type sorry

[suparjafar]

weakfingers that picture was pretty horrific...haha yeah im trying to progress by just drawing basic keyboards and throws for now, so ill keep doing that. oaph ezork ditch all that and do simples

[my.favorite.addiction]

http://i850.photobucket.com/albums/ab67/pulpo831/HPIM0237.jpg

haha sum olllllllld ish.
from 5/08 when I used to write NoMas with MPR..

PS
hahahahahaha wow that muthafucker in the purp an yellow put the wild back in wildstyle..fail..

[oaph_ezork]

yeah word suparjafar i agree, that stuff was pretty old anyways ahah

[weakfingers]

Oaph-Just read the new to graff thread and then draw for a week then post your shit here.

Bump from last page!
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8779.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8778.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF8727.jpg

[Fetusr]

But seriously....
Like Flawless Victory is sayin, Keeep it simple. That way its hard to fuck things up.
I see alot of toys in real life and on this site trying to much shit at once, If you start simple there's a better chance of you being able to do clean basic shit rather then fucking things up! heres a small example or the toys in my area that think they run shit just trying crazy all out shit rather then basic stuff.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792-1.jpg

Squint, You don't know ANYTHING about my crew, you get all your info from second hand sources and random people, Don't think I don't hear people talking about how you were asking about us, asking if I have friends in jail and shit. You scared brah? We have never tried to run shit, and both those guys are finally doing simples now. If you don't want beef why would you post shit like this? So I'll tell you one time, Don't open your fucking mouth about my crew, ya digg?

[Flawless Victory]

Are you seriously in that crew?
You really need to get the fuck out of it if you plan on having any credibility any time soon.

[Fetusr]

Those guys are my family, I may be a lot better than them, but I will always write with them, I paint mostly by myself anyways.

[TheToy]

This is all very, lolz.

[oaph_ezork]

lol to the maximum i say

[oaph_ezork]

so ive got a couple more, hopefully an improvement, crits?

Weak: thats some really good shit, i escecially like the knemo trowie. Im not sure if i good enough to give crits but the k kinda looks like a lower case n

7408 two letter

7409

[Flawless Victory]

Not even close, man.
Don't make one half of a letter smaller than the other half.
Don't do highlights that are the same color as anything you already used.
Don't worry about adding faces or any fancy shit at this point.


Do make all your letters the same size.
Do keep your letters simple.
Do work on your hand.

[oaph_ezork]

will do, thanks im having lots of troubles with my k it seems, any suggestions?

[Nyc Sno]

couple quick throws
http://i35.tinypic.com/5cbw48.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/fdveq8.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/qq4oas.jpg
fucked up the 3d on the last one ...any crits?

[Flawless Victory]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/Photo54.jpg?t=1256585817

[oaph_ezork]

NYC Sno: I like the nerd trowie alot, but its kinda hard to tell that the last letter is a D

thanks flawless, i will work on it, i deceided to try one out following your advice.

here it is
7411

[Shurik*n]

http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/1256351848263.jpg

Weak: I don't really like that left-bottom part on ur e in snew...

[oaph_ezork]

i think it says snaw not snew

[Flawless Victory]

Yeah, that's an obvious A.

[suparjafar]

kezor its getting better, round out your proportions of your letters. also, the o and r dont flow. and id say do your drop shadow the other way.

[oaph_ezork]

thanks supar, im not really sure what you mean about the o and r but so you think this looks better?
7413

[false@toronto]

Crits please? (sorry for bad, webcam photos)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3664/falsethrow1.jpg
[http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7341/falsethrow2.jpg

[.nolove.]

Squint, You don't know ANYTHING about my crew, you get all your info from second hand sources and random people, Don't think I don't hear people talking about how you were asking about us, asking if I have friends in jail and shit. You scared brah? We have never tried to run shit, and both those guys are finally doing simples now. If you don't want beef why would you post shit like this? So I'll tell you one time, Don't open your fucking mouth about my crew, ya digg?

hahahahahahaha toy ass *****s starting crews.thats not how shit is sposed to happen.put in work until some real heads notice you and bring you in.dont start a crew while your shit is whack *****s are gonna clown on you all fucking day.

[Nyc Sno]

Crits please? (sorry for bad, webcam photos)

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/3664/falsethrow1.jpg
[http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7341/falsethrow2.jpg
whats it say fls? id say go simpler..lose the drippy force field and space your letters out a bit more..get rid of the highlights in the letters also

[Graffyk]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9514/p1000612r.jpg

still working on throwies.. i think that P is a little awkward

[Nyc Sno]

yu got no flow man try and make all yur letters look the same

[PegCityBoy]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2439/4048273242_f22e72e389.jpg
first sketch of it, needs twekaing i`ll fuck with it later

[gumOnShoe]

the bottom left part of the S needs tweaking.

[Nyc Sno]

couple quick throws
http://i35.tinypic.com/5cbw48.jpg
http://i36.tinypic.com/fdveq8.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/qq4oas.jpg
fucked up the 3d on the last one ...any crits?
bump for critz

[suparjafar]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9514/p1000612r.jpg

still working on throwies.. i think that P is a little awkward

try and make letter shapes somewhat consistent, and seriously work on that handie..

[Flawless Victory]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/Photo54.jpg?t=1256585817
http://sfj70.typepad.com/.a/6a00d834515ddf69e20120a56ff323970c-500wi
KRUMP

[PegCityBoy]

^^^^^ i couldn't have described it better myself

[Flawless Victory]

Haha,
that was just my special way of bumping it.

[weakfingers]

Squint, You don't know ANYTHING about my crew, you get all your info from second hand sources and random people, Don't think I don't hear people talking about how you were asking about us, asking if I have friends in jail and shit. You scared brah? We have never tried to run shit, and both those guys are finally doing simples now. If you don't want beef why would you post shit like this? So I'll tell you one time, Don't open your fucking mouth about my crew, ya digg?



Listen fetus,
How is that beef I was explaining that some toys try alot of hard shit and cant do it. You still need to tone it down and hit the books hard. And by running shit you kids go to every major bridge and do shitty things liek that, your shitty tags or on every mailbox. and I see your crew tagged everywhere. When I say running shit i mean graffiti "ska" everywhere I look. I dont get why you get so mad when I say simple shit. Theres a reason I cropped you outta that picture... its because i had a little bit of respect for you but I guess i just lost it when you flipped out on me.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

lol only thing i'd say is maybe not put that little part of the R inside the T kinda makes it look like an e but w/e good shit though

[suparjafar]

everything in that picture is wacked out except for fetus aint too bad.

[suparjafar]

speaking of which any li toys out there? haha

[||BREAD||]

trying something new: thowie letters and backwards "bic" i like cib 10x better
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0016.jpg

[Nyc Sno]

trying something new: thowie letters and backwards "bic" i like cib 10x better
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/DSC_0016.jpg
make all your letters the same size! and drop that fill son

[.nolove.]

Listen fetus,
How is that beef I was explaining that some toys try alot of hard shit and cant do it. You still need to tone it down and hit the books hard. And by running shit you kids go to every major bridge and do shitty things liek that, your shitty tags or on every mailbox. and I see your crew tagged everywhere. When I say running shit i mean graffiti "ska" everywhere I look. I dont get why you get so mad when I say simple shit. Theres a reason I cropped you outta that picture... its because i had a little bit of respect for you but I guess i just lost it when you flipped out on me.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792.jpg

word.fetus needs to chill on this arguement.go hit the books kid until you get your bars and everything down and THEN practice your can control in a chill ass spot out of the way where no one can see your shit and THEN hit the streets.i got alot more respect for squint right here becuase he puts in work,and doesnt constantly bitch and complain.especially when given crits.and he's on the right track with bars and what not,not with all that shit yall *****s is pullin with no flow,horrible fills,shitty letters in general all over the place.fetus needs to go back to the drawing board jus sayin yall.

[Inlyn08]

Listen fetus,
How is that beef I was explaining that some toys try alot of hard shit and cant do it. You still need to tone it down and hit the books hard. And by running shit you kids go to every major bridge and do shitty things liek that, your shitty tags or on every mailbox. and I see your crew tagged everywhere. When I say running shit i mean graffiti "ska" everywhere I look. I dont get why you get so mad when I say simple shit. Theres a reason I cropped you outta that picture... its because i had a little bit of respect for you but I guess i just lost it when you flipped out on me.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792.jpg

What I'd like to know.. is can we zoom in on the shit on the other side of the tracks!? Shit looks proper..
Also, two things.. and let's not get butthurt with me saying this...
I would not hesitate to cover that, if I saw in person. Rather then get "Hard" online.. lay down some fire.
+10 internetz Weakfingers.

[SAID]

Shit doesn't look that proper to me...
:confused:

NYC:
that second one looks fly!
and extension at the bottom right of your K would look so ill too.

[boodah]

Fetus why would you even let anyone in your crew paint that while you are right there next to them? No beef.

Bread, stop with the fills. Simple one color throws will do for now. Crazy multi color tosses are whack anyways.

[Nyc Sno]

Shit doesn't look that proper to me...
:confused:

NYC:
that second one looks fly!
and extension at the bottom right of your K would look so ill too.
good looks dudeee

[||BREAD||]

alright no more fills, im just used to doing that lol and ya didnt have to quote the pic mayne :]

Edit: fill was an accident, i did the throwie over some white out, but i did try to make it have "bubble shine" lol

[Black Flag]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9514/p1000612r.jpg

still working on throwies.. i think that P is a little awkward

I think you still need to work on everything man, no offense...

[boodah]

alright no more fills, im just used to doing that lol and ya didnt have to quote the pic mayne :]

Edit: fill was an accident, i did the throwie over some white out, but i did try to make it have "bubble shine" lol

I didn't quote the picture.

Scape, work on your handstyle ( I know this isn't the toy tags thread), and those extra little bumps aren't doin it for me in your throws. Work on your letter structure too.

[Graffyk]

no offense taken, but thanks for the crits guys. i'll get back to practice.

[Vagrant]

Anyone want to do some tosses back and forth?

[weakfingers]

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy248/chugleanlikekoolaid/Photo54.jpg?t=1256585817

I really enjoi That A you got there and I like the shape of the R's Leg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTuyXfEbtf4


Vagrant, I'm down but im not the greatest. I write skwint/squint whatever is cool for ya.

[LeaksOne]

i dont understand the video you posted.....

[ShaolinNy]

ANY ONE WILLING TO HELP ME?

To be honest i haven't wrote graff in awhile and im pretty rusty but 2 days ago a teammate and a friend of mine died,He was on my football team and he died in a car crash the same night after we won our homecoming game

And i was thinking about doing a throw up for him on wall some where so i was wondering if someone can just draw something simple for me so i can throw it up.I need it to say R.I.P J-RAY ive been drawing all night but i suck at these letters so if some one can post a pick of that so i can get an idea that would be great.I really wana do this so if some one can help that would be great.I will post pics up if someone helps

thank you

[Vagrant]

I'll work on it in a bit when I'm not busy, but it could turn out pretty nice. J and Y look similar, and a lowercase a matches an uppercase R.

[ShaolinNy]

I'll work on it in a bit when I'm not busy, but it could turn out pretty nice. J and Y look similar, and a lowercase a matches an uppercase R.

Thx man really appreciate it,I sent you a pm

[weakfingers]

Man, sorry to hear that, In the past year I've had two of my homies pass away. Tomorrow I'll draw something basic up.

[ShaolinNy]

Man, sorry to hear that, In the past year I've had two of my homies pass away. Tomorrow I'll draw something basic up.

Kool man thx i really cant wait todo this for him

[shem]

that treats lookin sexy

scape dont do that bumpy shit

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3493/4049378768_1a582c03b1.jpg

im down for some throwie exchanges

edit: sry about all that white space. idk where it came from

[norekone]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5645/acen.jpg

crits? :)

[boodah]

Shem, I would make all your letters the same size and lose those overlapping lines.

[Vagrant]

And improve your outline skills, it looks a little shitty. I agree that you need to get those letters the same size. It seems like the C and E got progressivly smaller. Line those points up.

[boodah]

I was talking to the guy above him.
But yeah Acen, even out your proportions. If you ask me, the C and the E are weak, and having strong middle letters is important. Hell, strong letters in general is important.

[Vagrant]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4049498620_5421f54eae_m.jpg
Shitty shits at work.

[Hork Up Some Blood.]

Listen fetus,
How is that beef I was explaining that some toys try alot of hard shit and cant do it. You still need to tone it down and hit the books hard. And by running shit you kids go to every major bridge and do shitty things liek that, your shitty tags or on every mailbox. and I see your crew tagged everywhere. When I say running shit i mean graffiti "ska" everywhere I look. I dont get why you get so mad when I say simple shit. Theres a reason I cropped you outta that picture... its because i had a little bit of respect for you but I guess i just lost it when you flipped out on me.....
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF7792.jpg
woah talk about a cluster of toys..

[TheToy]

word.fetus needs to chill on this arguement.go hit the books kid until you get your bars and everything down and THEN practice your can control in a chill ass spot out of the way where no one can see your shit and THEN hit the streets.i got alot more respect for squint right here becuase he puts in work,and doesnt constantly bitch and complain.especially when given crits.and he's on the right track with bars and what not,not with all that shit yall *****s is pullin with no flow,horrible fills,shitty letters in general all over the place.fetus needs to go back to the drawing board jus sayin yall.

Yo man, you need to chill. You don't bomb with either one of them cats so see yourself outta' this one.

300 posts in a month and none of them pictures of your work.
There was one, it's been removed. There's a lousy sketch that you even trash yourself on.

Atleast that kid is gettin' out and gettin' up. Can't knock him for trying.

Not really beefin'. Just sayin'...

[weakfingers]

Please anion just stay out of it. Your just looking in to causing trouble. I started this e-argument and im trying to sort it up in the pm's

[Fetusr]

You all need to chill, this doesn't concern any of you. you've clogged pages over something that has absolutely nothing to do with this thread.

Btw I think im doing better than most people posting their shit in this thread. Here is some shit that might make up for the lack of pictures recently.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/quiksketch.jpg
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/THROWRRR-1.jpg

[TheToy]

Please anion just stay out of it. Your just looking in to causing trouble.

Actually, you're wrong.

Don't ruffle your feathers for nothin'. None of it was even directed at you. Relax.

[massacreman]

just shut the fuck up and post pics
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2733/4049882869_61016db5c9.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

I really enjoi That A you got there and I like the shape of the R's Leg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTuyXfEbtf4


Vagrant, I'm down but im not the greatest. I write skwint/squint whatever is cool for ya.
Are you asking me to battle?
Or referencing my Krump Bump©?







ALSO:
Just letting you cats know that I'll be taking over the toy battles from now on, so send your shit over to me, not Klic.