Throwies

[weakfingers]

It was referance to the tommy the clown picture you posted.

But id be down for a freindly krump throwie battle just for the lulz

[Flawless Victory]

alright, but it'll have to be set for later today/tomorrow, I'm about to dip.

I have everyone's entries for the current battle so far,
so just start sending them in next battle.

[ShaolinNy]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2641/4049498620_5421f54eae_m.jpg
Shitty shits at work.

Thats pretty sick thx man,Any ideas of how todo RIP?if not ill figure it out

i was thinking of doing it with rip on top then j-ray on the bottom in red n black,like this in the center of this wall i know i can take my time on

R.I.P
J-Ray


http://photos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc1/hs093.snc3/16035_1072046541688_1841886459_144384_8134365_n.jp g

[||BREAD||]

I didn't quote the picture.

i was talking to Nyc sno :]

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mevz6.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mevz3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mevz5.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/mevz1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/redhot6.jpg

[suparjafar]

your throw is nice, really liking that m especially
where did you paint that, just wondering

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

well, believe it or not the black and white paint is 99 cent quick color from home depot. there pretty good. and pink and brown is rusto painters touch. and thnx btw

[suparjafar]

i meant where you painted not what with, and yeah quick colors are pretty decent i found a half empty black one a few days ago. but yeah where did you do that?

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

my cousin has wood in his backyard he wanted me to do. just practice and shit

[suparjafar]

ohhh. you write mevsr? i think i saw your tag on an electrical box by a home depot? or maybe it was someone else, you in li somewhere? or does someone else have that name

[mefe]

crits please
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image44.jpg?t=1256690534

[suparjafar]

scrap the s and n, make the c have a smaller space

bored

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0137.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

The bottom bar of line on your N is too long and it makes it look like a V.

[mefe]

does anyone agree with supa.. cuz i cinda like my s :P but thank you supa, for the crits

[suparjafar]

well i like where youre going with it but i think you should keep it simple for now atleast

[RESToners]

http://s260.photobucket.com/albums/ii3/x...

[RESToners]

http://s260.photobucket.com/albums/ii3/xopenyoureyesx33/?action=view&current=restthrowieexample1.jpg new throwie thing.. critz? i know its a lil sloppy but i like the form

[nik]

asdf delete this post

[hpir]

shit iv been doin the past week
mefe-clean up yor lines there mad shaky and dont make the tall of the s go that high
ReallyTrustFullStrangersthat throwie is nice and clean
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneee001.jpg
crits?

[suparjafar]

i like the bottom ones. for the simp one id say lose the n tumor

[Darkeist]

grin - lose the hole in the N, try a capital R, maybe a capital I

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091025.jpg

repost

[Nyc Sno]

^^make your o's look like the n

[Nyc Sno]

http://i37.tinypic.com/20k64x3.jpg
dont paint on peoples fencess it makes the cops more out to catch graffers

[Darkeist]

then they wouldnt be o's....

[boodah]

he wants you to bend the right part of the O's like the right part of the N.

[sinkilla1]

http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/5721/1028091829.th.jpg (http://img4.imageshack.us/i/1028091829.jpg/)
i like under 2 min

[KRE1]

that J looks janky to me

[sinkilla1]

i really dont know how to make a j so i kinda just threw that in there

[nik]

dont paint on peoples fencess it makes the cops more out to catch graffers

thats not a persons fence just some fence by a path

[weakfingers]

whats on the other side of that fence?

[Vagrant]

Jews

[false@toronto]

My very first throwie, crits? (I know where I fucked up on the S for sure):
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/6749/imag0021fy.jpg

Also, crits on my new throw sketch please:
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/3420/2009102901469.jpg

[Vagrant]

Your first throw and you climbed all the way up there?
Props

[Inlyn08]

jews
l
o
l
!
!
!

[false@toronto]

Your first throw and you climbed all the way up there?
Props

Yeah, it was only like a story and a half. I saw it walking home one day and it's right facing a major road (I took that pic from the sidewalk of the road), so hopefully it'll stay up for a little while but idk.

[HalfGangstaShit]

blah.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp2AD.jpg
False, nice stuff man, good spot.

[false@toronto]

blah.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/nucleart/tmp2AD.jpg
False, nice stuff man, good spot.

Thanks man, only been writing for like 3 months at the most :)

I like yours but maybe connect the R a little bit at the top? It kinda looks like KNAK, if you don't see the little X.

[Vagrant]

And tighten up the space between the letters. No black holes.
but the letters are getting there.

[weakfingers]

False toronto- Lol at that school throwie spot. Any one who skateboards and lives in the toronto area will know what im talking about. Next time i skate there ill check that bomb.

[Nyc Sno]

then they wouldnt be o's....
i didnt mean it alike that make them have shape instead of being round like your n

[Vagrant]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2687/4055511910_578ba02f2e.jpg
still need to work on a few details. Crits?

edit: upsized the pic

[weakfingers]

Unless you got great can controll That might be hard to do out on a wall.

[Flawless Victory]

how?



Knar and Vag- You're letter aren't bad, but they are really far apart.

[||BREAD||]

thats pretty bad ass vagrant, that g is ca-razE haha

[weakfingers]

I wasent trying to say it looked bad like it looks good, but theres those really small bar parts and alot of super straight lines and bars that look really detailed, I myself would find it hard to do that throwie and thats how I critted it. If vagrant can do that like a normal throwie its sick but that was the only crit i could think of.

[Vagrant]

your 3d is kinda inconsistant

yeah, its supposed to be a lower left drop shadow, but looks like down 3D under the G and R.
Not too bad though.
I blame the black marker because it was too big and the paper just soaked it up.
I'm not a retard that doesn't know how to do drop shadows or 3D.

[mawks]

I think the shadows on point, just needa work on your r, try making the leg come off the rounded part instead of the straight bar

[haze4life]

Vagrant that G is boom but the R seems a little plain compared too the other letters.
just my 2 cents

[Vagrant]

thanks for the crits guys. i've been neglecting my throwie skills for way too long and have been wanting to get some good feedback to help me progress.

heres another version of the same throw. i did this one before the other one
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2488/4055415018_a8e9fda528.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

use that R, man.

[Vagrant]

i'll sketch a couple more with that R, but tweaked a little. maybe not sticking out so far.

edit:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3478/4056153517_70501eb75f.jpg

[KRE1]

lol not a fan of that R... :/

[GOATHEAD]

false@toronto- nice spot man did you climb up that pipe?
Vagrant- thats looking noice dude loving that g, G's are a bitch.

[ReallyTrustFullStrangers]

ohhh. you write mevsr? i think i saw your tag on an electrical box by a home depot? or maybe it was someone else, you in li somewhere? or does someone else have that name

lol. yea yo

[suparjafar]

My very first throwie, crits? (I know where I fucked up on the S for sure):
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/6749/imag0021fy.jpg

props on this spot

strangers PM'ed

[HalfGangstaShit]

how?



Knar and Vag- You're letter aren't bad, but they are really far apart.

I tried to bring them together for that one though.. lol oh well I'll keep sketching..
thanks for the crits.

And Vagrant those be some hot letters, I'd make the lines inside the throw like go from fat to skinny as they go in, you get me? like flared cuts or something like that.. other than that it loos cool, but yeah do use the second R the first one is kinda awky, it does go with the concept of the letters, but I think the execution didn't come thru? anyways good shit man.

[mefe]

Yo false, were is this... i skate in Toronto and dont know... well dont recognize it

[mefe]

sry about the lines... i have a LD bou that shit.. thats why i like paint so mutch (spray brush.. anything)

crits? i didnt know what to do with the n -_-
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image46.jpg?t=1256862898

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo201.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1.png

[Flawless Victory]

AY YO




Throw battle due tomorrow.

[Vagrant]

hot damn!

@RADAWG: you're getting there. got some awkward points on the upper right R and upper left A. Search for work by Basin. He does a two letter throw that looks like what you're trying to go for.

[gumOnShoe]

i'd make the top left part of the A round.... it looks awkward like that..

[suparjafar]

yeah and the top right of the r.

[Vagrant]

thanks for repeating what i said, guys

[gumOnShoe]

no prob. :)

[xSonnyTx]

@mefe Don't bend the letters into themselves, especially that n. To me it looks like they're biting their lip or somethin. Also try to get all the letters the same height

[Vagrant]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2482/4056183229_5681a9d15f.jpg
vaguerone dookie

[Mr yarbles]

lol @ ra's ja bite
Jus sayin.

[~~Seker~~]

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/1246/p1030591.jpg

SEK

[Nyc Sno]

lol @ ra's ja bite
Jus sayin. alot of people use that a its very generic

[Flawless Victory]

Yeah but I definitely wouldn't put a bite past him.
Dude still uses the R and A I did in that first exchange I did with him, hahahaha.

[RADAWG]

what r and a did you give me?
now i bit ja? you guys are too much, honestly.

[Nyc Sno]

what r and a did you give me?
now i bit ja? you guys are too much, honestly.
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/11252005002030JaColo.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

what r and a did you give me?
now i bit ja? you guys are too much, honestly.
The R and A in your hand, EARK.

[RADAWG]

Im from NY i know what JA's throw looks like...its generic and my A actually does not look too much alike.
big blue we did one exchange like 7 months ago when I was still completly terrible(not saying im good now or anything) and yes i bit your shit then...you cant get over it man
im not using any R or A that you gave me in that exchange. So seriously stop putting me down on every thing I post

edit-ooh i just saw your post....dude that is soooo fucking generic hahaha idc if you think im biting you on that shit haaha
oh and i didnt change my account because i was embaressed if you were trying to like un mask me or something, i had trouble with 5-0

fuck it I think im done with this forum shit no one good is here anymore except BBV and yarbles anyway

Im done.
Peace BBV I would just like to say I always liked your style...it influenced my shit alot...
peace everyone else too.

[Flawless Victory]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1.png

ohforeal? these aren't the same damn R and A that I used to use in my hand?

[RADAWG]

^read my edited post.
ok now im done.
peace

[Flawless Victory]

I realize it's generic dawg,
but straight up,
you only started using it after I did it in an exchange with you.
I don't even really care, I just like making people mad.
Ask Anion about that, hahaha.

[gumOnShoe]

fuck it I think im done with this forum shit no one good is here anymore except BBV and yarbles anyway


ouch.

[Vagrant]

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/11252005002030JaColo.jpg

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1.png

haha
its really generic, but so close

[-Empty-Can-]

bored during 4th hour

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics776-1.jpgI know the letters aren't very consistent

http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics777-1.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

http://i35.tinypic.com/2a4xwrm.jpg

[faser]

http://i36.tinypic.com/dmac5u.jpg

[LeaksOne]

Im from NY i know what JA's throw looks like...its generic and my A actually does not look too much alike.
big blue we did one exchange like 7 months ago when I was still completly terrible(not saying im good now or anything) and yes i bit your shit then...you cant get over it man
im not using any R or A that you gave me in that exchange. So seriously stop putting me down on every thing I post

edit-ooh i just saw your post....dude that is soooo fucking generic hahaha idc if you think im biting you on that shit haaha
oh and i didnt change my account because i was embaressed if you were trying to like un mask me or something, i had trouble with 5-0

fuck it I think im done with this forum shit no one good is here anymore except BBV and yarbles anyway

Im done.
Peace BBV I would just like to say I always liked your style...it influenced my shit alot...
peace everyone else too.

http://blog.willamette.edu/stories/images/2006/144/full/04_Violinist_Daniel_Rouslin.jpg


and stot those need TONS of work. the word bubble style one looks like it says sooo.

[Mr yarbles]

Hey I don't usually call out ja bites just cause I know that fool is the rocking one of the simplest styles out there
But that just looks too close.

[Sesh-it-up]

lol toys make me laugh yo!

[Mr yarbles]

You talkin to me?

[Flawless Victory]

http://moondogsports.com/wp-content/gallery/misc-celebrities/robert-de-niro.jpg

[gumOnShoe]

empty can's hand looks mad gimped, too much add on's IMO..
also, the second one is lacking serious structure, looks like oC!o!

[idk401]

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/155947.jpg
a couple of quick throws crits?

[Nyc Sno]

what do they say sk ss?

[-Empty-Can-]

and stot those need TONS of work. the word bubble style one looks like it says sooo.
It is kinda hard to decipher but I like that style alot. I'm gonna keep using it. The first one i like but i've seen other writers use that style before. It's not a bite just common letters.

[Flawless Victory]

Dude, it's not a style if you don't have style dawwwwwg.
Don't worry about getting more than one style on lock before you even get your structure set up.
Baby steps, *****. Baby steps.

[-Empty-Can-]

I have my own style man. I like to be innovative with my work. If everybody did the same type of letters graffiti would be boring.

[Flawless Victory]

Dude, you seriously don't understand.

YOU HAVE NO STYLE,
YOU ARE JUST FUCKING UP IN MULTIPLE WAYS.

Once you get your basic shit down, THEN work on making it your own.

It doesn't matter HOW "innovative" it is if it looks like shit.

[KtRL.]

wow this thread is gay..
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00341.jpg
crits anyone ?

[Flawless Victory]

well, the drips are atrocious.
letter wise, you are in the right direction.
Don't put the folds in the bottom of your K and R.
Keep the line of your K and the Hole of the R both in the center of the letter.
Your L is a little to vague and bubbly to go with the other letters, too.
I would slim it down a bit around the bend.
Your T looks sort of like a lower case R,
I would an A little > shape on the left side of it, just to define it a little bit more.

Definitely not the worst I've seen in here at all, though.

[KtRL.]

i tried to take a few things you said into consideration, kinda sketchy though. haha
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00348.jpg

[weakfingers]

Your T needs a left side to make it more legible and Your R looks like an A

[suparjafar]

^^ what he said, i really dont have other crits, except im not a fan of the handie

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/swhollowslap1.jpg

freckled two letter toss...fuck my shaky lines!

[LeaksOne]

I have my own style man. I like to be innovative with my work. If everybody did the same type of letters graffiti would be boring.

that would be a relevant arguement if your shit was decent. most of what you post isnt letters. its usually just random shapes that supposedly say stot. honestly you need to scrap everything your doin and start over with regular bubble letters and go from there.

[Rin5e]

KTRL-Something like this, fuck with it some more.
http://i38.tinypic.com/25ixmxy.jpg
SW-Well it looks like a SW

[LeaksOne]

KTRL maybe dont curve your letters in at the bottom like that.

SW you got parkinsons? smooth out your lines and dont do slaps yet.

[KRE1]

http://www.canadianactors.info/Michael_J_pointSHOP.jpg

[LeaksOne]

http://www.rougettegallery.com/images/Niles_Lund/shaky%20ground.jpg

Michael J Fox the photographer


fuck im goin to hell for all this

[KRE1]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA wooowwwww.... see u in hell my friend.

[suparjafar]

might sound dumb, but most of my problems center around shaky lines, are there any techniques as to fixing this, and not practice, i mean like what to practice exactly.

[-Empty-Can-]

that would be a relevant arguement if your shit was decent. most of what you post isnt letters. its usually just random shapes that supposedly say stot. honestly you need to scrap everything your doin and start over with regular bubble letters and go from there.
Actually thats the only thing iv'e posted that isn't letters. I can do regular bubble letters. I'll post pictures of my simpler stuff later.

[LeaksOne]

might sound dumb, but most of my problems center around shaky lines, are there any techniques as to fixing this, and not practice, i mean like what to practice exactly.

naw i was playin i have the same problem when i go slow. im actually not sure how people go slow and get straight lines. as long as i have a pulse my hands guna shake. maybe start a line the stop it then continue just to try and keep it straight. or try guiding your wrist with your other hand. i duno. i think practice would help.

[zennegen]

KTRL, i'm kinda feelin that throw, just define your R more.


(see *****s? i can give good crits too)

[KtRL.]

worked on it a bit, what do you guys think..
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00355.jpg
a skaaa throw.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00354.jpg

[LeaksOne]

its exactly the same except the L got a hold to some steroids

[mefe]

^
| true lawl

[headsick123]

yo ska, leave all your letters closed, meaning no space in the K, also make them all the same size.

[headsick123]

quick throwie just did, crits please, workin with new shit.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JoinsTHROW1.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

Not bad man..you should definitely work on a shadow before you add that shine shit though. I'm not really diggin' on the 'n'..maybe extend the central line to elongate the letter so it matches a bit more.

[headsick123]

thanks dude, i can fill it, just didnt really feel like it. i hate drawin with sharpies so i just said fuck it and im feelin you on the N tho. ill try it out.

[headsick123]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b32/headsick123/JoinsTHROW1-1.jpg

[l3monade]

headsick123- id say make the bottom left part of the n round try loosen the extension deal on the top of the s and maybe make ur j the same size... nice drop shadow its good keep workin on it

[headsick123]

thanks dude.

[suparjafar]

looks good joins im just not a fan of the handie

[KidReny!]

you know wat'll make yo shit look real fly?

some arrows

[KtRL.]

Hes right^^

[headsick123]

nah i like it simple, arrows will just complicate it more, if you can incorporate arrows in that go for it, show me what you got.

[-Empty-Can-]

hahahaha.

do you not get the joke? Look at ktrl's signature

[LeaksOne]

empty im still waitin to see some of your simple shit.

[headsick123]

oh shit i get it i get it.

[fuckthebuff]

theres already a guy in winnipeg that writes raone, hes dirty sick. dont bite. and vagrant, stop incouraging internet steez, its ruining the game....


pce

[-Empty-Can-]

empty im still waitin to see some of your simple shit.
Yeah sorry. I was going to post some but i'm lazy as fuck. I'll post it tomorrow for sure.

[suparjafar]

^^crits up there

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0150.jpg

[LeaksOne]

Yeah sorry. I was going to post some but i'm lazy as fuck. I'll post it tomorrow for sure.

got it.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60064.jpg

[headsick123]

theres already a guy in winnipeg that writes raone, hes dirty sick. dont bite. and vagrant, stop incouraging internet steez, its ruining the game....


pce



are you sayin im biting raone? cause im not. never heard of him.

[headsick123]

siron, close your S, your R is too fat, and that will make it look much better i think

[fuckthebuff]

im not saying your biting his steez but your a toy and you write the same word as one of the most talented artists in canada which isnt really great for your reputaion if yaa knoww whaaat i meeeeen

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0547.jpg
http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0548.jpg

[headsick123]

i write joins and not raone, wtf are you talking about

[KidReny!]

Shit be to fresh

[smooth_nuts]

got it.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60064.jpg
bump
looking legit man.

[LeaksOne]

thanks. i remember seein your shit when i very first came here. back when you wrote dope/doap. matter of fact we did an exchange. thanks for the crits tho

[gumOnShoe]

im not saying your biting his steez but your a toy and you write the same word as one of the most talented artists in canada which isnt really great for your reputaion if yaa knoww whaaat i meeeeen

dude, is headsick even from canada (don't feel like checking all of the guys posts..)?

if he's not, he can write whatever the fuck he wants...

[headsick123]

lol nah im not from canada, but im very close!! but yeah, i dont know, basically if i looks up "joins graffiti" online and get basically nothing. i can write it.

[gumOnShoe]

yeah man, if you're not from that specific area, who gives a fuck, go wild w/ that name.

[PRANEONE]

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9113/picture014pd.jpg

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/4339/picture015uf.jpg

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1346/picture016u.jpg

[KidReny!]

One dolla sign? One arrow? wtf is this ***** add some more arrows and dolla signs to that shit. show u get that money and know which way u goin.

[headsick123]

PRANE- ditch the first one, work on letter structure and size for the second one, make all the letters the same widths at the same parts, pretty basic, PM me if you dont understand that, and for the third, its not bad, work on the shaddow, and get rid of all the signs, just use straight lines. it will look much cleaner. make your E more symmetrical as well on the third one. like the bottom and top should be close to the same. hope this helps. i know crits are hard to take sometimes but thats what these forums are for.

[Rin5e]

http://i33.tinypic.com/11qs3tu.jpg

E doesn't match up.

[LeaksOne]

prane the rule on this site is give crits if you want them

[ironcrack]

One dolla sign? One arrow? wtf is this ***** add some more arrows and dolla signs to that shit. show u get that money and know which way u goin.

so true.

[-Empty-Can-]

he ya go leaks. My letters aren't very consistant.
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics783-1.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics782-1.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics781-1.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics780-1.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics779.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics778-1.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics732.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics720.jpg
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics784-1.jpg
old simple
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics520.jpg

[PRANEONE]

your t look likes an i
http://i713.photobucket.com/albums/ww131/pics4bscience/MIchael-Random-pics732.jpg

[KRE1]

yikes....

[suparjafar]

^^

[Flawless Victory]

http://samhemingway.co.uk/OMFG.gif

[DECO ONE]

yo flawless... wanna do up a RESIN throw? i love the style you have, its simple. but stylish and very uniformed. what u write.? ill do one

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/l_6423e9f5078c49f4a68e798b2a3dc074t.jpg

[imSYKEtoy]

I recently got into this stuff (ive just been doing tags in bathrooms) so any crits would be nice,


http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/scan0006.jpg


http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/scan0007.jpg

http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/scan0001.jpg

[headsick123]

STOT- keep it even simpler, dont try thats goofy pointy shit where your shit points down, just keep it simple, and get good flow before you try that goofy shit.

[Flawless Victory]

yo flawless... wanna do up a RESIN throw? i love the style you have, its simple. but stylish and very uniformed. what u write.? ill do one

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/l_6423e9f5078c49f4a68e798b2a3dc074t.jpg
I write Earn man.
Are you from NY?
Your shit looks like it would be from there.

[DECO ONE]

Nah, im not from NY. im a Boston Guy. born and Bread.. Aight. ill do a EARN throw.

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0555.jpg

[provinT13]

Syke- Go simple, loose all the colors, arrows, connected letters and garbage, go simple

[OOPS!]

Syke has got to be the most common name ever.

[LeaksOne]

syke/sike and wreck/reck

[DECO ONE]

nah, i think ACE is the most common name.. haha.. in my area alone i have seen atleast 4 different ACE's

[EST2007]

nah, i think ACE is the most common name.. haha.. in my area alone i have seen atleast 4 different ACE's

yah, ACE is def common from our area

[OOPS!]

and theres like 800 tranes because of that fucking video game

[JR1]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0555.jpg

not bad oops but play with the arrows for your s and stop with the colors just get used to running your outlines first

[OOPS!]

I have arrows on my S? And I like colors when im fucking around in school. lol

[weakfingers]

The threads looking good now time for me to wreck it, I just got one of those handy tablet things and was messing around with some word.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/Police.png

[408Bomber]

http://i34.tinypic.com/be7jhu.jpg
lil something crits?

[Darkeist]

weakfingers - whered you get that program. everyone in the handy exchange thread usin it. idk what the hell it is but it looks kew.

[weakfingers]

The guy who first used it said not to tell anyone what it was. just use google and common sense. its online thats all i can really say. I found it just by googling

[KRE1]

weakfingers that shit is pretty cool is that the tablet thing? i think it goes for a straight hun is that wat u got?

[401Son]

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2809.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2800.jpg
collabo with one of my boys

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2798.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2797.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2794.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2790.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2788.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2784.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2782.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2781.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2780.jpg

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h156/lazy_rican/IMG_2779.jpg

that face reminds me of something close to sloe's handies

[suparjafar]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0555.jpg

your style got 100X better since i last exchanged with you

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0153.jpg

[Bars]

http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/4220/img000090.jpg (http://img685.imageshack.us/i/img000090.jpg/)
still workin on it.

OOPS - I really like it it flows really well.

Snaw - I would get rid of the crosshare in the A.

[408Bomber]

http://i34.tinypic.com/be7jhu.jpg
lil something crits?
crits?

[Nyc Sno]

crits?
id get rid of the point on the e and tweak your letters a lil bit all those letters in esco you could freak them

[cemo954]

bars, your hands say resk but the sketch you can't tell your rs and ks apart

fork got shit down with some fire hands to match

esco the point in the e doesn't flow with the rest

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9274/img00336.jpg

a more traditional style throw
crit away

[nikehead192]

that face reminds me of something close to sloe's handies

show me sloe's handies because i never seen this cat

[imSYKEtoy]

http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/scan0002.jpg


crit? the v looks retarded :/

[Culture_Shock]

resk, your r and k look too much alike. either change the top arm of the k, or put a hole in the 'loop' of your r.

[CrAzOnEr!]

it looks ok to me but check this out !

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/image091.jpg

[AsherOner]

http://i34.tinypic.com/302t62q.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/9sfasy.jpg
crits plz

[LeaksOne]

^^^^asher paul roth????

[FSMone]

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/4349/picture002ft.jpg
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1107/picture003yq.jpg

not the best. really blazeddd 0.0

[iselldope]

http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/9746/zane3.jpg

[hpir]

iseldope- yor hand is hurtin bro, make yor throwie letters closer together
fsmone-make the bottom of your p less fat cause it looks like a b, your t looks like a lower case r so i would make the bottom part of that skinnyer aswell
asher-yr E looks like a betters than your actual s so i wold make your e an s and for your E bringout the bottom part so it looks more like an uppercase
crazoner-your z is just completly fuckd

[hpir]

oops and forks that shits freshhhh

[JMANN.23.HTK]

http://i34.tinypic.com/302t62q.jpg
http://i35.tinypic.com/9sfasy.jpg
crits plz

nice throwie, flow and structure's ill, chars nice... would make a clean piece, and nice sticker too, you got a link to any more of your stuff ?

[AsherOner]

nice throwie, flow and structure's ill, chars nice... would make a clean piece, and nice sticker too, you got a link to any more of your stuff ?

I'm gonna upload a bunch more tonight

[Flawless Victory]

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/4349/picture002ft.jpg
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/1107/picture003yq.jpg

not the best. really blazeddd 0.0

Your shit is decent, but I wouldn't write post

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3426/3386846325_267c27a7f1.jpg

[KRE1]

coulda sworn he was writing posr...?

[Flawless Victory]

It says post in his sig.

[KRE1]

LOL.... overlooked that one boss.

[iselldope]

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/7516/zane6.jpg

[FSMone]

Your shit is decent, but I wouldn't write post


been writing it for months and I'm from australia. i knew there was already a post up. but I doubt we'll ever cross paths :rolleyes:

[Flawless Victory]

Oh, yeah.
He's from NY.
He's been putting that up for years though man, mad work put in.

[Bars]

bars, your hands say resk but the sketch you can't tell your rs and ks apart

fork got shit down with some fire hands to match

http://img258.imageshack.us/img258/9274/img00336.jpg

a more traditional style throw
crit away


resk, your r and k look too much alike. either change the top arm of the k, or put a hole in the 'loop' of your r.

I know whatcha mean the R does have a dot you just cant really see it well.
This may be a little better?
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/4019/img000095.jpg (http://img194.imageshack.us/i/img000095.jpg/)


Cemo you deffinetly have a solid throw.

[FSMone]

Oh, yeah.
He's from NY.
He's been putting that up for years though man, mad work put in.

if i keep my nose clean and dont bite his stuff then I'll be fine :)
i'm not from a big city either. graffiti is all for me and nobody else.

http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/1461/picture004m.jpg

[suparjafar]

its lookin like bosr. fix your p and straighten the t

other than that its good

[CrustOner]

PostAgreed with Suparjafar, but it's very fucking clean, props on that.
Rek/Cemo I'd change my name if I were you, and no, your throw isn't solid. Take some more work. Try to make it balance more. and your E is lame. Your R and K are really generic, but not in the good way. I'd work at that.
Zane Work with that bottom one. and try to write a decent handstyle.

[Flawless Victory]

http://i38.tinypic.com/64jypy.jpg
stay steady not giving a fuck!

[LeaksOne]

post you need to tweak your P. the pink fill looks like a p but the blue fill looks like a b.

fv no need for crits homie. shits raw!

[FSMone]

fv thats sickkkkk
i cant get the T right its toy as hell
http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7697/picture006j.jpg

[CrustOner]

Earn, nice Crass quote/Aus Rotten quote.

But you spelled "You're" wrong.

I am the graffiti grammar/spelling Nazi.

EDIT:

Post, you could always try pushing the T a little more to the right and just add a little loop on the left side.
That should give you what you want. Hopefully.

[LeaksOne]

fv thats sickkkkk
i cant get the T right its toy as hell
http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7697/picture006j.jpg

that p is the one you shuld stick with. thats pretty legit i actually like the T but change your S. dont make it so long on the top

[FSMone]

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/6755/picture007bc.jpg
sorry the second one was fairly rushed but i did the changes

[Flawless Victory]

Thanks Leaks,
and I didn't realize the spelling error, crust.

[LeaksOne]

post round the top of your S. ill let you borrow some ideas...
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60060.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60054.jpg

pretty whack i know but ideas.

and fv no prob bb

[FSMone]

hows this?
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5285/picture008it.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Leaks- I'm digging all of that Lowes except the L.
The Siron ain't really my style.

Post- There are a bunch of little things about your throw that make me not like it.
The dot in the P is too high,
I'm not feeling that bend you have in bottom of your S,
and I'm not really feeling the T.

[FSMone]

eh i tried :)

[LeaksOne]

fv fuck that siron. i attempted a piece then gave up and half assed the rest.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60064.jpg
this is what i think im guna stick with. ill just put the R on a diet

[FSMone]

i like it except make the line in your O smaller. if not a dot or something other than a line. can u draw faces?
and fix your S im not feelin that one much

aaand use a light colour for your highlights imo

[LeaksOne]

if i change my S too much ill end up changing the entire throw and i wasnt too worried about highlights on this. and faces in O's are SSOOOOO played. ill just shorten the line

[iselldope]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg

no crits to give:(.

[CrAzOnEr!]

umm that looks umm...
check this out.
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/image01111.jpg

[iselldope]

can't read the seconf letter but i guess it's an R

[CrAzOnEr!]

YUP its a cr!

[suparjafar]

dont be doin slaps with that fix that r first

[iselldope]

change everything man

[CrAzOnEr!]

but i can thing of anything to do with the c?

[iselldope]

no tags in your letters except maybe the crew initials

[BlacktodaFuture]

crazeoner, i think that you think you are better then you actually are. Do simples for peices, practice different styles of throwups til you develope your own, and work on handstyles

[CrustOner]

And your C sucks. Seriously. Just start basic.

GET YOUR HANDSTYLES DOWN FIRST.
work on your throws with your handstyles. That way, when you have a decent handstyle, chances are you'll have a decent throw.

Your R looks like a fucked up amoeba.

[OOPS!]

And your C sucks. Seriously. Just start basic.

GET YOUR HANDSTYLES DOWN FIRST.
work on your throws with your handstyles. That way, when you have a decent handstyle, chances are you'll have a decent throw.

Your R looks like a fucked up amoeba.

Epic Crit. "Fucked up amoeba" Lmao

[CrustOner]

I do my best to give helpful crits ;)

[iselldope]

crit me then:D

[mindtrix350]

I do my best to give helpful crits ;)

It's good that you're blunt about everything :)

[CrustOner]

http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/7865/41375648.jpg

no crits to give:(.

Hm. Well it has decent structure, but no flow or real style to it. I'd say you start moving away from the boxes and add more definition to your letters.

[AsherOner]

sorry homies i slacked last night ... okay i need mad crits

http://i38.tinypic.com/23m7t06.jpg
i used highlighters for the fill.. dont judge me

http://i38.tinypic.com/11kaxwl.jpg

http://i38.tinypic.com/k2cjyf.jpg
this ones pretty bad

http://i33.tinypic.com/2nsc3kx.jpg
this is my first throwie with paint.. just a two letter
the fill is silver but its like impossible to tell in that pic

[CrustOner]

I LOVE IT.
except that E. I also don't like the silver highlights you're adding. The best one is the one on the blackbook. Which is great, so now you can do really fast ones and get the fuck out of there.

Fix the E, and don't add highlights. Keep those lines as clean as possible, and you'll be set.


OH, and your handstyle needs work. Lots of it.

[AsherOner]

would it fuck up the flow if the e was lowercase?

[CrustOner]

Depends on how you handle the lowercase E. You'll have to figure it out.

[-Wings-]

Do the same thing as your s but put a line in it to make it an lowercase e.
That could work, anyways the throwup thread in the experienced section doesnt look like anypost up paper work so heres a couple for this thread.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF30102009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01112009_00003.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01112009_00004.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF01112009_00006.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF06112009_00000.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF06112009_00001.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF06112009_00002.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF07112009_00001.jpg

And thats all for now.

[CrAzOnEr!]

looks good.

[AsherOner]

your style and flow are tight but a lot of those are real messy.. i like clean
3rd from the bottom is my fav

[-Wings-]

Those are all just doodles, I dont put much time into them.
I do paint them clean though. (I do loads of these for practice on my letters and for fun)

[AsherOner]

haha shit yeah wings i just peeped some of your complex sketches.. mad good!

[OOPS!]

Wings that throw is dope homie

[mindtrix350]

-wings->mine, haha.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/scan0001.jpg

[AsherOner]

http://i36.tinypic.com/14wqcqu.jpg
i tried a lowercase e... i think its better

[mindtrix350]

Yeah, looks good with the lower case E too.

[sinkilla1]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2mw711i.jpg

my old throwie

[AsherOner]

thats dirty.. it has potential you just need to clean it up

[sinkilla1]

i did it reall fast cause the highlighter makes the paper rip so i hgad to use a pen cause the marker woulod rip the looseleaf

[mindtrix350]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2mw711i.jpg

my old throwie
I think you should use your old name, the throwie looks pretty good. What's the 3rd letter, though?


-wings->mine, haha.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/scan0001.jpg
Impatient? Yes. Small pic? Yes and I'm sorry about that.

[sinkilla1]

its a j i used the word ceje like siege lol corny i know

[mindtrix350]

It could work though, just fix up the J.

[-Wings-]

asher I wanted to try out your name ;P!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00000.jpg