Throwies

[OOPS!]

Wings, do up an oops for me. I like your style =D. O's suck btw. Good luck

edit: I don't mean YOUR O's suck.. I mean it just sucks to have 2 o's defining your name.

[AsherOner]

asher I wanted to try out your name ;P!
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00000.jpg

tryin to make me look bad?;)
i like that "H" a lot

[Flawless Victory]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2uzcpe8.jpg
http://i37.tinypic.com/315kg38.jpg

[Fury]

^ Clean as usual.

[-Wings-]

tryin to make me look bad?;)
i like that "H" a lot

Nah man I dig your style of throwie. Its unique. ;) My isnt that unique, haha.

Oh yea oops I made you a throwie :D
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00001.jpg

And resin you got dope throws. Heres one for ya.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00002.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Haha, that wasn't resin, that was me. I write Earn.
It's all good, though!

[-Wings-]

My bad, heres an earn then :)! (another excuse to sketch, also dope throwies earn ;))
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00004.jpg
(Messed up on the n a bit :P)

[mindtrix350]

Care to try my name? seaer.

[-Wings-]

These are all quickies ;D! But there fun to do.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00005.jpg

[Kios2]

If u arent tired of drawing yet can you make me 1? Kios

[letsgobombin]

Well, if there fun:D, mind trying zombee, I'll hit you back when I can be bothered to get a scan or pic of it.
Edit: Give something away for free and we're all over you.

[BlacktodaFuture]

try a Safe throw up there seyor.

[Flawless Victory]

Damn, you guys are putting homie on blast.

[mindtrix350]

These are all quickies ;D! But there fun to do.
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00005.jpg

:) Thanks man.


Damn, you guys are putting homie on blast.
I was just curious as to how my name would look if he did it. =/

[-Wings-]

Man im never tried of drawing. (Just doing my name over and over has gotten boring.)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00006.jpg
Some people try getting back at me ;D!


edit: holy crap didnt expect that much. Okay ill do them last two and thats it for tonight. I got to goto work.

[mindtrix350]

Some people try getting back at me ;D!

I'll hit you with one when I'm done with my homework.

[-Wings-]

This is it :P. I want time to do a piece. (lol this whole page is me so far)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00007.jpg
I hate f's...

[letsgobombin]

Cheers man, looks good although the left of the b is a lil sketchy but I'm just splitting hairs, now I gotta go find the most permanent marker I've got and write seyor on my hand so I don't forget. I'll say thanks again in case there's any ungrateful bastards who don't :D keep at it.

[Kios2]

Man im never tried of drawing. (Just doing my name over and over has gotten boring.)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00006.jpg
Some people try getting back at me ;D!


edit: holy crap didnt expect that much. Okay ill do them last two and thats it for tonight. I got to goto work.

Thanks.. I like how u make your S. Ill try to make u one later

[AsherOner]

http://i35.tinypic.com/21nmez5.jpg
practicing

[BlacktodaFuture]

This is it :P. I want time to do a piece. (lol this whole page is me so far)
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/CCF08112009_00007.jpg
I hate f's...

thanks man, and i know i hate F's too, ive been thinking of changing it but Save is used, Sabe is used, Sake or Sace is used, i mean Safe is prob used too but less then those. Saze? Sare? who knows

[-Wings-]

Heres a couple names Im pretty sure arent taken.
Sahe, Sade, Sawe, and Sale. Just some ideas. ;D

[Bars]

Eh just noticed Wings was tossin out some nice exchanges and Im bored and like the name so I gave er a try. Props.

I fucked the y cuz it kinda looks like my s and my o I fucked aswell, owell haha.

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5034/img000097.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/i/img000097.jpg/)

[mefe]

HAHA -wings- your on the ball... got one for sinc?

[OOPS!]

Wings, your style makes me all tingly inside. Lmao

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0574.jpg

[mindtrix350]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0574.jpg

The first O sometimes looks like a D for whatever reason, sick none the less.
I messed on most, but I figured I might as well just get some crits.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/scan0007-1.jpg

[OOPS!]

Clean style man, maybe try to make the r a little wider.. seems kinda skinny compared to the other letters. it's dope though

[mindtrix350]

Clean style man, maybe try to make the r a little wider.. seems kinda skinny compared to the other letters. it's dope though

Thanks. Yeah, trying to get it wider without it looking too funky.

[OOPS!]

Yeah my O used to not have the little hump but it looked kinda bland so I added that

[mindtrix350]

It looks dope with the little hump, in my opinion.

[hpir]

seaer-good an clean
which name?top ones what im using now
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneee001-1-1.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/gem-1.jpg
cant seem to get a good hand for this one tho^^
Crits?

[mindtrix350]

which name?top ones what im using now
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneee001-1-1.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/gem-1.jpg
cant seem to get a good hand for this one tho^^
Crits?

I guess the top one, I don't know, it's really up to you. You should try to keep the letters proportionate.

[hpir]

yea ik, fuck prportions lol

[l3monade]

mindtrick350- i would try making ur e wholes match thats just me though, i like it alot though
hpir- the top one in my opinon just keep working on it and porpotions and stuff

[OOPS!]

Make the dot on your I bigger Grin. And lose the accents or shines or whatever you wanna call them. I like the gradual size increase style

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0577.jpg

[CrustOner]

Oops, you just inspired me. Ah, how I love cartoon throws..

EDIT: Work on cleanliness now.

[OOPS!]

Haha I am clean. I was bored and slopped it down. I'll do a clean one

[OOPS!]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0580.jpg

BAM! Let's kick it up a notch!

[suparjafar]

have you painted that yet

[CrustOner]

I'll definitely have some to post tomorrow. Maybe tonight, but I doubt it.

[OOPS!]

Nope. Havent painted since I wrote Cauz

[Gezra]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/SnapShot15.jpg

[OOPS!]

I like the style man. Looks clean

[CrustOner]

Get the fuck out of here you fucking youtube toy.

[Gezra]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/SnapShot16.jpg

[OOPS!]

Get the fuck out of here you fucking youtube toy.

Uh oh.. biter or somethin?

[suparjafar]

yo oops paint it

[CrustOner]

Look up Gezra Oner on Youtube.

His SN is DirectAdvertisement.

Seriously though, he's a rich tween who paints shitty throwups over and over again, and reps an online crew.

[OOPS!]

I will. I have paint.. Looking for a chill spot. I need to get my arm motion down for ovals.. it's gonna be weird at first. Been so damn long since I've painted.

Edit: Damnnn sounds like that kid goes hard. Haha.

[skull-e]

yo gez, doesn't your mother supply you with spray cans and mop style markers bought off www.********.com so you can then apply the medium provided with said utencils on a piece of plywood in your backyard because you live in frisco and you'd get killed if you actually got up?

[OOPS!]

LMAO I just watched one of his vids. He sounds fucking 4 years old

[gumOnShoe]

http://i680.photobucket.com/albums/vv163/gezgraffiti/SnapShot16.jpg

that whole toss looks bitten man.. couldn't even get the K E to flow...

[Flawless Victory]

That's an N,
and I swear I've seen that G.

[CrustOner]

It kind of reminds me of your old shit, Earn. Like he was looking at it from a while back. then started thieving.

[gumOnShoe]

That's an N,
and I swear I've seen that G.
ah, it really looks like a K though, i thought he changed what he writes in his backyard.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i34.tinypic.com/2chkuoj.jpg
http://i33.tinypic.com/6zyq7d.jpg
http://i34.tinypic.com/nd93k2.jpg

here some throwies for ya

[weakfingers]

Dank, Your really are getting a style down. Paint some shit homie!

[-Dank-DK-]

dude i was just in chraleston its like 4 hour drove from me i get there paint and no fuckin cam but its w/e ill be having pics up soon with paint no ink haha

[OOPS!]

Dank your shit so dope as fuck

[Mr yarbles]

Uh oh.. biter or somethin?

Yes.
Bit his handstyle off sezer
His throw is pretty much bits and pieces of other writers tosses
He has about one style and it's shit
He thinks he's bomb cus all the faggots on youtube think he's good.
YOu don't believe me about the bitten shit go look at his gezra hand
SHit's straight broken
GO chop your dick off homie real talk, no one will ever give you respect.

[KRE1]

GO chop your dick off homie real talk, no one will ever give you respect.

ouchhh. ;[ BME pain olympics style right there.

[Waxaddict]

Lol Gez. Biggest joke ever.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i37.tinypic.com/r23xa8.jpg
my throwie

[weakfingers]

Every one shut it gezra runs youtube. withh 100 subs and a online graff crew.... the dudes got it made!

[letsgobombin]

I'm not willing to play along with this like eel, Gezra, you're a fucking mug.
Edit: Have you looked at the shit on youtube? People do the shittest pieces and get fucking compliments, toys telling them they're "ill" and shit. Gezra, this is the main reason I hate you, also because you probably put your videos up so you would get your ego stroked or so people would think you were "cool". Rageee!!!!!!

[massacreman]

latsgobombing, ur definately right, i think gezra should change his name to trane or something :P
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2625/4067755295_a50135e728.jpg
i may already have posted this but i forgot, no need to crit, i know what to change and it had been changed.

[MarsWTF]

massacreman - Im liking that throwie man, its fresh (in my opinion). Just need to make the G bigger or the rest smaller, so the letters are all the same. Keep it up man.

[milk boxx]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seidthrow.jpg

[weakfingers]

^^^^ i'd tap that!

[AsherOner]

http://i496.photobucket.com/albums/rr328/LuderAlex/IMGP0580.jpg

BAM! Let's kick it up a notch!

shit homie you've been doin work! .. your style has improved that's an ill throwie.. paint that shit

[AsherOner]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/seidthrow.jpg

thats goood .. work on the handstyle a little

[OOPS!]

That looks just like Siron's S.

[ChadWarden]

http://i33.tinypic.com/jztix4.jpg


fuck people with shitty moniters.

[Flawless Victory]

Dope dude.
Do you paint?
Not trying to put you on blast,
I just think it'd be dope to see your stuff painted.

[ChadWarden]

Dope dude.
Do you paint?
Not trying to put you on blast,
I just think it'd be dope to see your stuff painted.

due to some real shit i'm not going to mention online, i haven't been able to paint anything but this one chill spot i have for almost one year now.

brightside is, i don't suck so bad anymore. but i'll be able to paint sometime soon.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

haha i had to tilt my laptop to see that. what was on the other side of the paper? :P

[ChadWarden]

haha i had to tilt my laptop to see that. what was on the other side of the paper? :P

more of the same. i scanned the side i did with this neon oragne higligher that isn't so bright when scanned, i guess.

[PRANEONE]

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/8464/picture037j.jpg
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/4664/picture039x.jpg

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1110092203.jpg

just some fuckin around cause thats how i do.

[Loki X Sho]

oops - looks good.
seed- dig it but the "D" is a little fat
chad - idk...looks a little sloppy, but its interesting. I'd like to see more.
prane- do something with that E at the end. And create a noticeable difference between your R and your A.
Evil- not bad, good shadow. Cool little character guy/ It reminds me of something.

http://i33.tinypic.com/w2htgl.png
http://i33.tinypic.com/2im51qv.png

[OOPS!]

Looks dope loki. What's with the editing? And is that an A or a Z?

[Loki X Sho]

Thanks
I just like to make it pop with the neg.
Its a Z.

[OOPS!]

Yeah, when I first glanced at it.. it kinda looked like an A.. maybe I'm just tired..

[LeaksOne]

That looks just like Siron's S.

a little. i do the top of my S different but the bottoms are similar. i really like his S tho.

[mindtrix350]

milk boxx- Nice, I say just make the D thinner.

ChadWarden- Besides the fact that I had to let my eyes adjust, looks dope to me, haha.

PRANEONE- I agree with Loki X Sho.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle- Shadow is perfect, like the style too.

Loki X Sho- Like your style, man. The negative makes it "pop" as you said.


The first O sometimes looks like a D for whatever reason, sick none the less.
I messed on most, but I figured I might as well just get some crits.
http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/scan0007-1.jpg

[Loki X Sho]

oops - looks good.
seed- dig it but the "D" is a little fat
chad - idk...looks a little sloppy, but its interesting. I'd like to see more.
prane- do something with that E at the end. And create a noticeable difference between your R and your A.
Evil- not bad, good shadow. Cool little character guy/ It reminds me of something.

http://i33.tinypic.com/w2htgl.png
http://i33.tinypic.com/2im51qv.png


bumppp
and mindtrix, I dig it, but the third letter confuses me a little

[mindtrix350]

It's an A, I can try to make it more distinguishable, but I'm not sure how, haha.

[Loki X Sho]

Oh alright I totally see it now...just dont put that line that extends out of the A for the center of it...ifyou do an x or a shorter zig zag it will look way more like an A

[mindtrix350]

Alright, thanks man.

[shem]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2575/4095308313_10594de5fc.jpg
fucked up my shadow when i did the second outline on most of the letters went right through it and forgot it on my M. oh well.

[jprezz]

Chad, that shit is sweet , i like the big arrow that goes through your tag.

[MarsWTF]

shem - Im liking it. I dont really like the top of the E, but thats just me. Maybe paint it on a different surface, cos the fill looks abit weird, I prefer solid fills. :P

Loki X Sho - Liking this aswell, looks pretty complicated for a throwie to me, but if you can pull it off, sweet. Keep it up!

mindtrix350 - I agree with Loki, the squiggle that comes out of the A makes it abit weird, just shorten it and it'll be sweet. Keep it up man!

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i36.tinypic.com/206k3mr.jpg
FOR THE CRACK THROWIE BATTLE

[LeaksOne]

i like your style but ive never been a fan of your K's

[KRE1]

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/5717/picture001h.jpg
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/8500/picture002q.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6138/picture003rg.jpg
http://img697.imageshack.us/img697/5470/picture004r.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5305/picture005hs.jpg

[CrAzOnEr!]

MY THROWIE!
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/METHOS.jpg

[shem]

hevr lose all the bullshit.

[AsherOner]

MY THROWIE!
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn36/TYSHAWNGREEN/METHOS.jpg

your getting better

[Flawless Victory]

Weekly Toy Throwie Battle #12
Word: WHORE
Deadline: Friday, November 20, 2009
Rules: One entry per person. Can be on paper or on a wall.
PM your entries to me (Flawless Victory).

[l3monade]

http://i896.photobucket.com/albums/ac170/icelemonade_photos/PIC_0399.jpg
havent posted in a while, crits? (the exclamation point and the 50lines for the o is just for jokes,)

[n8galicia]

http://i984.photobucket.com/albums/ae326/damanseen/Mobile%20Uploads/1112091544a.jpg

crits, thanks. ugh ignore the blue fuck-up in the background. It's wack, this was my entry for the toy throwie battle lol

[CrustOner]

"Heevr", the only one worth a pile of shit is the last one, but it's not worth anything more than that. Lose all the extra shit, work on your letters.

Methos, shit sucks. Try again. Also, stop writing in your letters. Nobody gives a fuck that you live in Connecticut. And that you're a part of 6 different Toy crews.
You also misspelled "throwie." I mean, what the fuck?

Lemonade, keep working with that. The O is too far away from the rest of the letters. and what does it say? Knemo? It's getting there though.

"Sekose" Stop trying so hard, shit. hahaha.

[OOPS!]

I fuckin love your crits man.. haha

"Nobody gives a fuck that you live in Connecticut. And that you're a part of 6 different Toy crews." Epic

[n8galicia]

lol @Crust. but also, how am I trying too hard haha

[smokeandmirrors]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/kaspalive.jpg

crits?

[LeaksOne]

K-hideous
A-needs work
S- tweak the back bottom part
P- dont indent the top of the P

altogether it needs work and some cleaner lines. for right now just to preserve your markers just do hollows. worry about fills later

[TrikAssHoe!]

http://i36.tinypic.com/5dt5zn.jpg
i fucked up the flair off the k.

[LeaksOne]

tone your A down a bit. theres alot of space around the dot. and it kinda looks like an R. all in all its a hot throw

[TrikAssHoe!]

tone your A down a bit. theres alot of space around the dot. and it kinda looks like an R. all in all its a hot throw

thanks for the crits. haha yeah the only time you can tell the difference between the A and the R is when i do a lowercase A. should i just use a lowercase all the time?

[LeaksOne]

if it flows nice then yeah.

[TrikAssHoe!]

yeah i just cant get a solid lowercase A.

[smokeandmirrors]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/betterthrow.jpg

alot better than what i posted before idk i think its kinda dope

[-Empty-Can-]

It's slightly better than when you first started posting but it is pretty bad. Lose that random line in your K. Make your lines in the A centered. And either make all your letters blocky or bubbly because they look mixed.

[mindtrix350]

thanks for the crits. haha yeah the only time you can tell the difference between the A and the R is when i do a lowercase A. should i just use a lowercase all the time?

I feel that with the upper case A as the "hole", it's easy to tell the difference, but I'm curious to see what it looks like with the lower case A.

[TrikAssHoe!]

I feel that with the upper case A as the "hole", it's easy to tell the difference, but I'm curious to see what it looks like with the lower case A.


well give me a second and ill try to draw somethign similar with a lowercase.

[TrikAssHoe!]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2z871bk.jpg
i tried.

[gumOnShoe]

this one actually looks worse...
your other shit was tough.

[mindtrix350]

I say, keep the upper case A.

[TrikAssHoe!]

hahaha yeah it's all fucked up. the G is pretty gay and the O doesnt look like shit. lol

[LeaksOne]

http://i36.tinypic.com/5dt5zn.jpg
i fucked up the flair off the k.

use this but make your A somewhat like these if youd like

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60066.jpg

[massacreman]

now thats some good critisism leaks!

[Bars]

kasp - try and make all of your letters the same width and size. I agree with EmptyCan you should lose the random line in your k or just make it smaller and possibly connect it.

kargo - First throw is pretty tight, leaks has the crits down.

Just a quickie, still working on it but I wouldnt mind some crits.
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/8434/img000099.jpg (http://img35.imageshack.us/i/img000099.jpg/)
shittypictureisshitty

[TrikAssHoe!]

use this but make your A somewhat like these if youd like

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60066.jpg

yeah yeah appreciate it broskee.

[sinkilla1]

Yo chad do a throw but fill it in it should look really fucking dope

[imSYKEtoy]

http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/DSCN0901.jpg


Crit?

[NiHL]

^^^^

The 3D is pretty cool. Don't like how the letters kinda get small at the bottom plus them being connected it's hard to decipher. The K looks like a V almost.

http://i917.photobucket.com/albums/ad19/nihl/Graff%20pics/1111092159.jpg

Crits?

[Black Flag]

^^^^

The 3D is pretty cool. Don't like how the letters kinda get small at the bottom plus them being connected it's hard to decipher. The K looks like a V almost.

http://i917.photobucket.com/albums/ad19/nihl/Graff%20pics/1111092159.jpg

Crits?

need a better H

[Steezy McCreezy]

Agreed, try a capital h

[NiHL]

cool will try it out, thanks

[suparjafar]

nihl i personally like that h actually...but i hate that handie no offense

thinking of name change snaw to snam...flow better?
crits too please

http://i38.tinypic.com/1roow6.jpg

old snaw
http://i36.tinypic.com/24gvjhf.jpg

[imSYKEtoy]

^^^^

The 3D is pretty cool. Don't like how the letters kinda get small at the bottom plus them being connected it's hard to decipher. The K looks like a V almost.


Crits?


When the letters were even (simples) it was kind of boring looking so I was trying something new. Next time Im gonna make short tops of letters with tall bottoms.



The HL in your tag looks like a k so I would watch out for that. Also Im not feeling the colors. Id love to see that done as a one liner with cotton candy colors though

[hpir]

seaer-good an clean
which name?top ones what im using now
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/grinoneee001-1-1.jpg
Crits?

bump

[NiHL]

The HL in your tag looks like a k so I would watch out for that.

Yeah Def not "Nitk" anyhow I'm working on the handstyle trying to maybe scrap it and come up with something new

[AsherOner]

http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp269/skatemoreft/DSCN0901.jpg


Crit?

not very good.. the letters are wack keep the shapes more uniform

[AsherOner]

http://i33.tinypic.com/2b8rrb.jpg
i tweaked my letter style
critz plz

[JustChillin]

nihl- Your H doenst look like an H, it looks like another one of yours N"s
Snam- your S doesnt match what you have going on with the other letters.

quick pen throw i did in class.



http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/101/1115090859a.jpg

[ChadWarden]

asher, not feeling the s of h and the e needs a little more of a stub on the bottom to really show its an e, but i like the and and r.

[TrikAssHoe!]

Asher no offense but i only know what your throw says by the handstyle but it looks like it says ACUPR.

[AsherOner]

hahah fuck i liked that one .. back to the books..

[AsherOner]

http://i35.tinypic.com/3st8p.jpg
quick attempt at a slightly more traditional style throwie

[Flawless Victory]

http://i36.tinypic.com/ws72j5.jpg

[OOPS!]

Asher that looks dope man. Alot better than your other one

[ChadWarden]

Asher that looks dope man. Alot better than your other one

fuck this guy. i think you should stick with your original style and keep working with it. the second throw you posted looks like a stereotypical throw-up. nothing original or eyecatching about it.


true it needs work, mainly the s and h, but i think you should stick with it.



BBV, i love your vagina/halo.

[AsherOner]

theres no reason i cant use both.. i mean i personally like the more unique one people just hate on everything that isnt typical throw style

[-Empty-Can-]

I like the other one too. Like what Chad said, its better because its not like every other throwie. I agree with you on that people hate non typical throwies.

[OOPS!]

Yeah but it doesn't even look like Asher......

[zennegen]

Yeah but it doesn't even look like Asher......

this.

[Flawless Victory]

I second that.
Originality is only part of the equation, bro.
No one is going to give a fuck if they don't know what it says.
Stot, people don't hate on your shit because it's original,
they hate on it because it fucking sucks.

[-Empty-Can-]

I wasn't talking about myself. Just in general.

[smokeandmirrors]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/goodkasp.jpg

hows this? crits

[xSonnyTx]

@Kasp I don't like how your a and p don't have openings while your s is completely open. I think you should open or close all the letters to help it flow more

[imSYKEtoy]

3d on the k is big and non existant on the others

A&P are closed while S is open

[imSYKEtoy]

I like the other one too. Like what Chad said, its better because its not like every other throwie. I agree with you on that people hate non typical throwies.

Its good because it is original, I think you should work with making it readible instead of conforming to what people want you to do. No one develops unique style by conforming.

[Fury]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/goodkasp.jpg

hows this? crits

First of all, give some crits. Second, you need to do mad work on your letters. Fuck 3D. Stick to normal bubble letters and draw the keys on your keyboard using bars.

If that's not good enough: your K looks bad, your 3D is varied, K and A are closed with no negative space but the S has some, the P looks way different than the rest.

[drOping]

Yo kasp make the top part of the P bigger

This is the closest thing I have to a throw...ahhh
and my handstyle suckkkksss
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/122/1003151o.jpg

[MarsWTF]

drOping/Slek - I like it, nice and simple, I dont know about it being a throwie, but what ever you want, goes. I think that the fact the L is squashed between the S and E makes it look funny as the other letters are all apart, either bunch it all up or keep them apart, but not too far apart. My opinion. Keep at it though!

[smokeandmirrors]

slek i like it. its not bad my opinion though is dont attach the E to the K

[RADAWG]

This forum sucks hahahah

[Fury]

^ Obligatory hate comment.

[smokeandmirrors]

asher-throw is dope i like it(second one) just make it flow a little more i like it though alot


http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/simple.jpg

i changed it up a bit made it more open i think

[cesspool]

old-ish
http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/2218/zzzzvs.jpg (http://img197.imageshack.us/i/zzzzvs.jpg/)

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

lurch man you are simply killing these tot pages. props to you

[cesspool]

thanks bro

[Flawless Victory]

http://i36.tinypic.com/ws72j5.jpg

Shit's due on friday, *****s.

[RedEyes]

trying something, crits?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo22.jpg

[AsherOner]

trying something, crits?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo22.jpg

I think you should open up the o instead of using those lines since the c opens up... it would just improve the balance... i think its a really nice throwie though.. (work on your tag)

[Keso]

I think you should open up the o instead of using those lines since the c opens up... it would just improve the balance... i think its a really nice throwie though.. (work on your tag)

I agree. I think that closed O messes up the flow because it's like 3 open letters and one closed.. But other than that, try doing some just plain black n white throws. Color comes later.

Slek - Your tag looks like Arabic writing. Is that the purpose? Change it up a bit. Try making the handstyle a tad more readable. Props for being unique though...

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i49.tinypic.com/2eq53t5.jpg

here some thing good for this page

[TheToy]

The paper to paint ratio is at like 1,000,000:1.

:(

[smokeandmirrors]

@ sico- its not bad but try and open up your S more on the top and the same with the O get ridda the lines also ur tag isnt bad i like it just make the I a little bit bigger

@dank dk- i like it lol

[smokeandmirrors]

http://i609.photobucket.com/albums/tt171/lacrosseplayer80/simple.jpg

crits?

[Fury]

^ Kasp, give some crits.
Dank - that shit is dirty as fuck, but I like it.
Sico - Open the O, but good job.

[masenz]

Crits are welcome.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i47.tinypic.com/30bmzja.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/18hsae.jpg

bored

[xSonnyTx]

@masenz, give crits to get 'em
@dank idk what it is but I absolutely LOVE your style. Fresh as fuck. Plus your shadow is spot on. I think you should paint that

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i46.tinypic.com/2d7e9a1.jpg

[cold0]

dank- yea ur style is really g. where did u spray that shit from yesterday?
sico- somehow ur s doesnt suit with ur c
kasp- i thikn it wud look better if it wasnt dat wide

my first throwie, messed up on the highlites on the d, and i think i should put the o in front of the c. cus the d is behind the l so itll look better

[smokeandmirrors]

@cold0- eh needs some work i like the C and the D you O and L need some work

@dank- you gotta paint that shit u got style

@masenz- whats that say?

[masenz]

says NAST
just nast not like nas-t

[smokeandmirrors]

@masenz: bring you tag to the toy tags section needs some work and get ridda the lower case A make it a capital and your T looks like a J get ridda the curve start off simple ya know?

[hpir]

dankdk-u got yr self an ill style,keep up the good work
new name kan, just mixin in some letters
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kan002-1.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kan001-1.jpg
crits?

[JasK]

Dank - your stuff is perfect.
smokeandmirrors - your letters are too fat and they are shaped weird
hpir - the hole in the a should be more ovally, it shouldn't spike like that I think. also i really don't like those little circles at the bottom right of the k and the n, but that's just me.

http://i962.photobucket.com/albums/ae102/gfxsheep/fuckthatK.jpg
tell me everything except about the k, i ran out of paper
its supposed to say ROADBLOCK

[smokeandmirrors]

@Jask: make the O's look more like o's they look kinda weird lol

[hpir]

jask - i cant make out your o's and d , they looks rely fucked, define them more by taking the bumps off the top and the sides of them

[JasK]

http://i962.photobucket.com/albums/ae102/gfxsheep/DorO.jpg

[Keso]

Dank - your stuff is perfect.
smokeandmirrors - your letters are too fat and they are shaped weird
hpir - the hole in the a should be more ovally, it shouldn't spike like that I think. also i really don't like those little circles at the bottom right of the k and the n, but that's just me.

http://i962.photobucket.com/albums/ae102/gfxsheep/fuckthatK.jpg
tell me everything except about the k, i ran out of paper
its supposed to say ROADBLOCK

Damn thats a dope ass throwie! The letters flow nicely. I like the style for real. The K is alright too.

[LeaksOne]

actually that throw needs ALOT more work. the k is not that nice.

[ChadWarden]

the only thing that's acceptable about that throw is the c.

[Black Flag]

I have never digged throws with wholes in them. For me it usually throws the whole flow out of whack.

[Darkeist]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20091121.jpg

i really dont know what to think about that above throw..

[Loki X Sho]

nice steez jask keep it up man

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i50.tinypic.com/2lw1xtu.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/2i9iddi.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/11wbybl.jpg

just fuckin around

[Con-Artist]

jask- i like the style, but i cant read it..
dank- wow ur throws have gotten alot better.
heres a throw ive been playin with.. it says sombr, i write somber.
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwzz.jpg

[JasK]

Darkeist - don't use a chiseled tip for your markers, it makes the whole thing look unbalanced and weird. the A is really good, but all the other letters look sloppy and rushed and whatever.

Dank - stop being so fking good, i have no complaints

Con-Artist - all the letters need to be generally the same size, and all the bottoms of the letters dont match, they go from pointy to rounded

[SCOPE2]

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01598.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSCN2268.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/l_2bac7e0aeab8404bbadbdbed29631440.jpg

[Con-Artist]

Darkeist - don't use a chiseled tip for your markers, it makes the whole thing look unbalanced and weird. the A is really good, but all the other letters look sloppy and rushed and whatever.

Dank - stop being so fking good, i have no complaints

Con-Artist - all the letters need to be generally the same size, and all the bottoms of the letters dont match, they go from pointy to rounded

is this beter for my throw?
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz-7.jpg

[Con-Artist]

scope2-i like the char. in ur throw.. but its not that legible

[shem]

dank idk why everyone is always loving your throws to me that shits wack.

work on your K and C especially

[SCOPE2]

scope2-i like the char. in ur throw.. but its not that legible

its supose to be an e.. but thanks

[Flawless Victory]

I think its dope.
Not feeling the hand, though.

[Con-Artist]

Kjay- nice, I like legible throws like that.
Will somone crit my throw?

[KJay]

normally i dont crit cuz i know its pointless and everybody just gotta figure it out on their own, buuuut the o and b are dope, not sure about the blockiness of the other letters, definitly completely redo the M, round of the corners on the r and s.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i47.tinypic.com/2h5nsk1.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/t829h5.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/2r60c9l.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/2wfvdav.jpg

[KJay]

bleh..

[faser]

over some fag
http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/185/scrubsp.jpg

looks like u went over urself?
nice throwie tho

[TheToy]

looks like u went over urself?


That's what I was thinking. Lol.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

maybe he didnt like the piece. i do that alla time :P

[Zazza]

Probably the worst thing ever seen on this forum, but here goes...
Drawn with a ball point pen.
Any tips on how I can suck less?

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/314/zazthrowup.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/zazthrowup.jpg/)

[TheToy]

Definately not the worst thing ever posted.

Is it supposed to be backwards?

Practice makes perfect. Stupid saying but everyone knows it's true. Just take things slow and absorb different styles. Draw whenever you can. Take your time. The progression will be slow and arduous.

[EST2007]

it says ZAZ. how is that backwards???

[Zazza]

Definately not the worst thing ever posted.

Is it supposed to be backwards?

Practice makes perfect. Stupid saying but everyone knows it's true. Just take things slow and absorb different styles. Draw whenever you can. Take your time. The progression will be slow and arduous.

Thanks... I'm defiantly practicing whenever I can. Its not backwards tho, it says ZAZ.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

keep fucking with it and shit. you do it over and over again and you ll notice little things you can do differently. some tiles shit pops out at you that when you think about it seems mad obvious but you only just figured it out. and its not even close to the worst ive seen in here.

[Zazza]

keep fucking with it and shit. you do it over and over again and you ll notice little things you can do differently. some tiles shit pops out at you that when you think about it seems mad obvious but you only just figured it out. and its not even close to the worst ive seen in here.

That's the plan. Maybe something better that a staples ball point pen might help... Gotta get me some good drawing stuff.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

just get some pencils, some super fine markers and maybe a sharpie for now. you really dont want to go out and get the crazy badass markers when your first fucking around with letters and names and shit

[Zazza]

Yeah. Im thinking of raiding my house when I go back home. I know for a fact that we have 1000's of markers and pencils there just collecting dust.

[Poser]

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7792/kuva005.jpg
Crits are more than welcome!

EDIT: Damn it came kinda small but i hope you get something from it!

[Nyc Sno]

http://i49.tinypic.com/2po9xy9.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2lmv59x.jpg
any idea on what i should put inside the d i'm kinda stuck

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

dude there are hundreds of things you can do. you honestly cant think of anything? lol
ok imma help you out but really i should let you suffer for your lack of creativity.

ill list off some of the more obvious ones: dollar sign, cent sign, pentigram, inverted cross. smily face, exclamation point, 09, 2010, hi mom, random words, open it up, your word, peace sign, an x, mi vida loca dots, your area code.....you dont like those then think up somthing on your own. graff it an art and design thing. its all about creativity.

[n8galicia]

a BK for blood killa, SUR13, or Sureno, XIV if you bang norteno, or VK for vikings

[Nyc Sno]

dude there are hundreds of things you can do. you honestly cant think of anything? lol
ok imma help you out but really i should let you suffer for your lack of creativity.

ill list off some of the more obvious ones: dollar sign, cent sign, pentigram, inverted cross. smily face, exclamation point, 09, 2010, hi mom, random words, open it up, your word, peace sign, an x, mi vida loca dots, your area code.....you dont like those then think up somthing on your own. graff it an art and design thing. its all about creativity.
i think i might go with the peace sign ill post a pic in a min..good lookin dogggg

[rasta tagger]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/11242024.jpg

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

dat shit is funkee fresh son. props

[Daken26]

[img=http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/2688/1258999588313.th.jpg] (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/1258999588313.jpg/)

[img=http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/6143/20091122164448.th.jpg] (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/20091122164448.jpg/)

[img=http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/6028/20091122234605.th.jpg] (http://img28.imageshack.us/i/20091122234605.jpg/)

[img=http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/7144/20091122163126.th.jpg] (http://img34.imageshack.us/i/20091122163126.jpg/)

DAKE, quick is wack i know. any advice is welcome

[Beats_His_Wife]

Daken-your K doesn't even look like a K, don;t paint until you get a solid throw down

[norekone]

http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/3676/acenthrowie2.jpg
crits?

[SCOPE2]

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01713.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01727.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01726.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01725.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01712.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01714.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01715.jpg

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

its deace man. you got any whole throw flicks?

[KtRL.]

yeah scope id like to see more than one letter from you hahh
a throw for talking.
http://i827.photobucket.com/albums/zz194/Ilovebabiez/DSC00368.jpg
crits appreaciated

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

im not really feeling it man...that hole in the r is iffy

[TheToy]

Fuck that 'R'. Everyone does it.

The crayons are dope though. I respect that.

[rasta tagger]

Spend 10 more seconds on that character and it'd be decent, I like the character itself just make it look better.

Quick tunnel shit, sorry for the darkness and cell pic:
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/11251526.jpg

[CESP.one]

Dumping...
Im kinda stuck in the corners
ill post one where i get out
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img085.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img086.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img068.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img069.jpg
crits plz?

[CESP.one]

stuck in the bottom :/
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img091.jpg
stuck in the bottom...
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img090.jpg
stuck in the bottom :(
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img092.jpg
and OUT of the corner :D
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y132/GreenDayFanX10/img087.jpg
crits please

[Flawless Victory]

I think that double lined letters are one of the ugliest trends to happen in graffiti.

I would lose the extra lines in the C and S, too.

[iDeemyouSiren]

Spend 10 more seconds on that character and it'd be decent, I like the character itself just make it look better.

Quick tunnel shit, sorry for the darkness and cell pic:
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/11251526.jpg
thats siccccck nice fill

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1126090416.jpg
i tried to do shit quick as i could like i was doing some kids black book instead of my own. i thing other than the shitty lil dude in the corner i did a sick job haha

[massacreman]

pretty good, hate the evilonE E though.

[ShaolinNy]

http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01713.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01727.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01726.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01725.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01712.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01714.jpg
http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l75/ArtemKorobkin/graff/DSC01715.jpg


Good shit bro just saw your hit on the red brick wall on cropsey ave lol,,,,I send u a pm

[Flawless Victory]

Nothing dope about spot dropping, dude.

[Fury]

This forum sure is making me facepalm today...
Oh well, I got turkey.

[rasta tagger]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1126090416.jpg
i tried to do shit quick as i could like i was doing some kids black book instead of my own. i thing other than the shitty lil dude in the corner i did a sick job haha
Good shit! And to those people hating on the toy threads, get the fuck out then!

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

thanks for the props. and yeah for some reason every time i do evil one the last e is always ugly. alllways haha

[suparjafar]

ces i agree with flawless, empty out your letters a bit

evil one looks dope, except i hate the second e

new style compared to my old one. not clean or developed, but should i continue to work with it, or is my old style better?

[n8galicia]

turkeys always better than bacon

[suparjafar]

fucking hate the bottom of the page!!!

sorry for links, you cant bump attachments.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7699&d=1259272970
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=7700&d=1259273037

[gumOnShoe]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1126090416.jpg
i tried to do shit quick as i could like i was doing some kids black book instead of my own. i thing other than the shitty lil dude in the corner i did a sick job haha

that shit looks tough, but you beasted on the right part of the N, because you made that part so big, you ruined the NE's flow. tone the Right part of N down next time.

[KtRL.]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/1126090416.jpg
i tried to do shit quick as i could like i was doing some kids black book instead of my own. i thing other than the shitty lil dude in the corner i did a sick job haha
evil - if i were you i would just rock the same lowercase E as your first letter, that would make it look better than it already does in my opinion.

[Graff J up]

evil- fuck that shit is hott
i love that "evil" handy

one of my first attempts at a throwie
http://i49.tinypic.com/30j6ywi.jpg

[Con-Artist]

Is that a nz? It's not bad. Maybe loose that little penis inside the n