Throwies

[KASE2]

HM throwie
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q226/D_510/orngehm.jpg
critz por favor

[*Spectone*]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2208/0622081440qh6.jpg

crits please

[drop one.]

its actually not to badd maybe try n fix up ur letters for a better flow

[shun]

shie-from what i can see those are pretty dope.
smob- yeah, move the m and other letters more to the left, closer to the s
kase2- do a fill on that bitch next time man. looks pretty good, the H could use some work
speak- i like it alot. the A and K are your weakest letters imo. pretty clean though

[tazeone]

yo yo

[KASE2]

http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2208/0622081440qh6.jpg

crits please
fix tha rite leg on tha "k" kuz that little thing finside it is ugly
and fix tha "a" at tha bottom so its rounded and matches tha rest

[Thrice]

Exactly what kase said, and kase that is looking sick man, how tall is it?
patches-looking nice man, try fixing up the top of the S and get ride of the one sharp point, sticks out.
Need to keep practicing and cleaning up, but new style im getting at.
http://i25.tinypic.com/9tlaf9.jpg

[einsamkeit]

http://photos-656.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v256/51/65/616670656/n616670656_3374439_8486.jpg
http://photos-656.ll.facebook.com/photos-ll-sf2p/v256/51/65/616670656/n616670656_3374440_8787.jpg

[KASE2]

^^^ not really feelin tha faces in tha "e" or tha "o"

[Thrice]

Ya get rid of the faces, and fix that M. You're A is nice a shit, keep it up.

[Fize]

Heres mine

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t174/BMX3r17/IMG00113.jpg

[HëRbN]

Quick little straight letter throwie. crits?

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/1976/phazerstraightthrowjr7.jpg

[Thrice]

You should know better, give crits to get em....
Herb-Looks nice, although i'd change the bottom of that E, and also be a bit more careful with the can, the red exceeds the outline. Kind of sticks out, other than that real nice and simple.

[KASE2]

herbn- fix ur R

[KASE2]

http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l17/3ride/heloo.jpg
crits?
names taken

[Mr yarbles]

http://i30.tinypic.com/o5ug76.jpg
Crits?

eins I actually like your e and o
Pretty nice

ahem
THe a and m look kind of off to me
Just something wierd about them.

[HëRbN]

Change the bottom of the E like how so? the entire bottom of the E? And yeah i know its alittle sloppy. It was in a huge tunnel that was dark as shit and thats the first try with paint at that style.
And what Dont you like about the R kase?
thanks for the crits guys

[traP905]

names taken

thats so old.

wheres the name taken from?

[vus_01]

heres mine, not feelin tha B

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/5116/benipz3.th.jpg (http://img378.imageshack.us/my.php?image=benipz3.jpg)

[HëRbN]

me either

[beyondyereyes]

BENR? Keep the letters close and try to make them go straight up. No bends or anything, like your 'B'. Make your 'N' lowercase also.

NIZE, make your 'N' lowercase to, then add a drop shadow or something.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/barf.jpg

[Shoook]

get rid f some of the sgiggle lines and stuff but yeah (Y)
http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll12/ShukonE/throw1.jpg

[vus_01]

eyes, it says BENI , it was a throwie battle so i put it here also...i dont like the B , cuz its style don't fit...and I could be lowercase.....thx

[remos]

shook yours is pretty cool i would get rid of the bubbles and the bubbly thing to the left of it, but other than that it looks pretty sick

[DLove]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/mike031-1.jpg

[osnapizzel]

that red and white looks like an ugly bite of my S, I maybe wrong and just being an asshole, or not.http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2197/picture198wc1.jpg

[Wallace]

ohsnap, i do one of my s's fairly common to yours without ever of seeing your specific throwys, i just think its somewhat close to a usual S.


http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6702/phone00161bn4.jpg

[MEH2]

haha im terrible at throw-ups
at least i think i am? im really hard on myself sometimes

[shie-ster]

baha. i hope your not trying to call a bite. i hope your just stating the similarity,and not trying to be a dick.i dont need to bite you nor anyone else. and to say its an ugly attempt at a bite is funny, your looks like an ugly bite off mine. not saying yours is ugly, nor that you bit me. but ill bet ive been using that s longer than you.plus theyre both different, notice yours is straighter and not rounded. just because mine has a tail doesnt mean i bit it.blah, im rambling on, bottom line is i didnt bite your s.nuff said.
p.s. dont try to call bites, just to be a dick.

[RetroLikeWhoa13]

yeah, so you guys are pretty much just using your stereotypical "s".
there is no reason to get so caught up in it, or to claim someone bit it, because God knows you didnt come up with it.

[smooth_nuts]

ohsna your a moron your throws already ugly hows that supposed to be an ugly bite...and if i remember right thats an old throw from shiesss anyway,so bite it you frozen used tampon
so im not flickless..
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb207/doap1/Picture739.jpg
im planing on nailing them to wooden light poles :D

[Wallace]

^^ exactly (i like the top DO a lot), could i get some crits though ;)?

meh2- i couldnt really tell you because i dont see any of your throwys on the past 2 pages

[MEH2]

yeah, so you guys are pretty much just using your stereotypical "s".
there is no reason to get so caught up in it, or to claim someone bit it, because God knows you didnt come up with it.

haha its sure. ive seen that same basic S type like billions of times.

[shie-ster]

yeah, so you guys are pretty much just using your stereotypical "s".
there is no reason to get so caught up in it, or to claim someone bit it, because God knows you didnt come up with it.

i didnt mean to get cought up in it. i just wanted to tell the kid i didnt bit his generic s, and ended up rambling. but fuck it, im going to stop talking before i end up rambling again.

[osnapizzel]

wow look at the shitfest i got started, everyone needs to chill its a stereotypical s i was just pointing out the similarity with mine on the bottom. shit i wish ppl gave crits like they beef

[smooth_nuts]

haha beef,its the internet :p

wallace-your a doesnt flow at all i'd come up with a new one if i were you....

[DLove]

just tryin shit
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y93/New_zoo_York/mike031-1.jpg

[smooth_nuts]

vedo?
cant tell what anything after the e is

[SLEEP905]

^^ exactly (i like the top DO a lot), could i get some crits though ;)?

meh2- i couldnt really tell you because i dont see any of your throwys on the past 2 pages

fix your A up a little, get it flowing with the S and it'll be solid.

[beyondyereyes]

VEDO? Try out a lowercase 'D' or an uppercase 'E'.
DOAP. Looks ill but the 'A' kinda looks like an 'R'.

My U is a mess.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/ugh-1.jpg

[Chump]

http://www.tinypic.ws/files/uncc2wfsje4not9jytgd.jpg
Doap... good stuff

[MEH2]

the ghoul U isnt bad idk what ur talkin about haha just a normal U.
good stuff guys.

[letsgobombin]

m+s, your stencils are nice but your letters are pretty bad, you should work on that a bit before you start doing stuff like this. or just do stencils alone but i dont recommend having sick stencils and then not being able to put together decent letters

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/img048.jpg
crits are welcome

[HëRbN]

i know this has nothing to do with throw ups, but yo d those look good, im still tryin to figure out the best way to make them hard to take down, i was thinking about street signes with the holes in the poles. maybee puttin bolts through them, i donno. if you ever get those up send me a pic

If you use screws use big ones and strip the shit out of the top, if you use bolts bend them over so they can be unscrewed. Nails are a no go cause theyll pop right out unless you do it on something small enough that what you use can be bent over on the other side. Google it, its been done before. If you do go street sign bend what ever you use over on the back side. and bend it down into the form of the sign post so that it will be nearly impossible to get at it with bolt cutters.

[beyondyereyes]

NARC? Try making all your letters either lowercase or uppercase. Put your color down first and then do the black outline.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/itsastart.jpg

[lolumad?]

ghoul- i like, except for the face on the "O".
remos- i really dont like the letters, id just start over.
i got busted so i have to change my name, crits?http://i25.tinypic.com/358a2o6.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

New throw
http://i32.tinypic.com/4vh1xz.jpg
Any crits?

met
Dope Love them oneliners

ghoul lose the edge on the l, also I like the other hrow you did the page back more

Narc
Go simpler

[MontanaPainter]

devolop into your own style

kinda generic

[smooth_nuts]

well he has to start some where my throw looked like that when i first started but it changes :D
haha
met-kill the loops,loops are wack unless its a one liner
ghoul-im liking that one just the middle part of the u...make that astraight line :D

[smooth_nuts]

same idea
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/7792/plaque1withflashlr1.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4104/plaque2vf6.jpg
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1659/plaque3iz2.jpg

i know this has nothing to do with throw ups, but yo d those look good, im still tryin to figure out the best way to make them hard to take down, i was thinking about street signes with the holes in the poles. maybee puttin bolts through them, i donno. if you ever get those up send me a pic
theyre going up tommorow night man(hopefuly)i'll mkae sure and get flicks.. i wanna try getting some like long pieces of wood(like 3 or 4inches wide and 3 feet long)and just doing a ton of two letters going down it and nail it into wooden light poles,idk....

sorry for the double post peoples
edit*i had that street sing idea to but since theyre wood im afraid som little faggets would snap em :-/
i guess its just the chance you take

[Chump]

http://www.tinypic.ws/files/uncc2wfsje4not9jytgd.jpg
Doap... good stuff
bump

[smooth_nuts]

your flicks arent showing up man :(

[DECO ONE]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/P3120064.jpg

[Thrice]

Chump-clean and nice, if that last letter is an H i'd tweak it a bit.
Deco-looking pretty good man, not a huge fan of the E, but the R is real nice.
Needs to be cleaned up but here is what im working on as well as a one liner, post a flick of that soon.
http://i29.tinypic.com/14cza0h.jpg

[lolumad?]

thrice-the first two letters are straight but i dunno what the third letter is, im guessing an "e"? and i would do something else with the "m".

[smooth_nuts]

first two letters suck....start over and kill all the tummer things on your letters start simple man,SIMPLE!
haha

[Baron]

The M looks a little screwed up, i think its just compacted too much, work on your A too, but other than that it looks clean

[KASE2]

nice nd simple, good can control

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c342/Skitzo6990/P3120064.jpg

[(SoS) Flu]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_0634.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_0636.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_0638.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k84/akuma117/IMG_0640.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

Flue - your bottom throw looks like it says "MEN"..im sure you dont want that
Ahem - that shit is fresh
deco - nice clean lines
chump - i would take that little bump off of the E
yarbles - id work on the E a bit aswell

heres my shit...crazy sketch lines cause im fuckin around with crazy ideas that come in my head..i think im going to end up connecting the sticky parts that come out of my J and G to the main letters..
anywho..i would like some crits on what I could possibly do with the G..im kinda stuck..i think it looks nasty but i think the throw has potential
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/Picture111.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/Picture113.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/Picture108.jpg

[letsgobombin]

just keep thinking of different ideas eventually you'll get one that is half decent and then you can build on that

[beyondyereyes]

Meh, keep your letters the same size and keep practicing you'll get there. Just practice your bubble letters and maybe keep them the same color with a contrasting outline instead.


Working and experimenting.
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/groovy.jpg
http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/groovy2.jpg

[Wallace]

your outline/shadow is messed up on the second one, and too large

[cans905]

ghoul- lose the lines on the 2nd one, it makes it confusing

ive only been doing this for less than month so take it ez plz

[Haze..]

cans, that sucks to be honest.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i28.tinypic.com/2dcg2o9.jpg
there was better ones but Iw as too lazy to go to them

Cans the e is alright if you lose the extension
But that z needs alot of work

Joga lose the sharp extension of the j and the g
and make the o a full circle

[aemer_oner]

yeah beyond, those throws are nice!

heres a crappy one i did in ms paint...

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm227/aemer_oner/idontcare-1.jpg

im gonna try to paint it tomorrow, ill put up more pics soon!

[cans905]

aimer-looks good, keep it the way it is

this is a new one i just thought of quickly

[KASE2]

^^ y "ZE" if u write CANS?????

[-GEKS-]

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/chromething.jpg
inversion is the new black

ze- lame
ae- fresh!

[osnapizzel]

thanks bazer

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9625/picture267il9.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

http://i25.tinypic.com/2urpjqs.jpg
New throw ideas
any crts?

snap
Bottoms best

[Nine9]

First attempt at painting a throwie.

Know it looks like shit, but still.

Sorry bout the size.

Ohsnap - Looking pretty sweet dude.
Yarbles - I like the bottom one best, except for the way it kinda gets too thin at the top.

http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/713/dsc00780do1.jpg

[aemer_oner]

yeah those OHSNAPs look so fresh, im gonna post another toss up tonight, hopefully i can get some cans to paint it instead of using ms paint.

[Amase]

http://a503.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/83/m_549d3a32b960cedc8bda211536e9ff26.jpg

R's kinda fucked up i know but you get the idea ignore the handstyle its shitty too was messing with flares

but snap- both look straight to me
MrYarbles - i like the third AE the best but the first is alright too
Nine- its not bad for your first but dont try 3D yet get your letters down first i mean your close with it but your off in some spots

[clockmodel]

random assortment of throweroo's
critiques are welcome!

http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/zombie.jpg
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/serote.JPG
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/P6100049.JPG
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/jerm.jpg
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/edet1.jpg
http://postthatpic.com/files/2855/clckthrow.JPG

[Nine9]

Digging the first two.

Like the fade effect too.

[Nine9]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/8071/dsc00785xs0.jpg

[Leadpoisining]

http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/2270230632_2d81cccbe3_m.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/2271056595_d45a1c8f51_m.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-45.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn285/reinman22/get-attachmentaspx-48.jpg
REIN AVC WASH DC

[FLIP FLOP]

i like the first and last ones the most. the second one is kinda hard to see.

nines is good too

[beyondyereyes]

Is that KN? Definitely use a fill next time. It'll be clean. I'm not too big of a fan of the pointed bottom and suggest just rounding them out. Whatever floats your boat though.

nine... try making them stand up straight. I think that'd fix them up.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/beeanddub.jpg

Hopefully I'll be putting this up on a wall soon. I'm sticking with this for a bit. I'm unsure about the 'L' though. Tell me your thoughts.

[Mr yarbles]

Try rounding the l out and move the last part of the l up a little bit more ten see how it looks

Just an idea

Rn add some shadow to it looks a little too plain
the last two throws are nice though
So keep those

nine make it just a little less wavy and make your shadow a bit smaller

http://i26.tinypic.com/2s1qd8y.jpg
Exchange with maloe
http://i26.tinypic.com/35n0u9w.jpg
First attempt at a full letter throw

[Nine9]

Yarbles, looks a bit too messyfor me. Not messy like messy, but too much going on if you know what I mean. Too many lines and little things in there.

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/3632/dsc00786an3.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

find something to do with your n nine
so do I

but heres my exchange with nine
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01414.jpg
exchange with doap
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01417.jpg
new throwie..looks better now but heres an example
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01419.jpg

[lolumad?]

hater id try and make it more simple, on the bottom one, and lose some of the negative space, on the "doap" take the foot off of the p.

[Nine9]

Met, not feeling the different levels on the top of the M.


Gone for a rounder bubbly look.

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/9310/dsc00793xd9.jpg

[Leadpoisining]

i like it met...but thats just me...id keep it

[Leadpoisining]

Met, not feeling the different levels on the top of the M.


Gone for a rounder bubbly look.

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/9310/dsc00793xd9.jpg

dont even look like nine look like ncne

[beyondyereyes]

Met, make the M the same size with the rest of the letters.

Nine, I think you have something good but you definitely need to polish it up. Practice it more.

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/groovy-1.jpg

[Nine9]

Yeah it does look like a C.

Cheers guys, I'm getting there slowly yeah. Prefer that N to the other N I had anyway, just gotta do something about it overall.


Ghoul - The G seems a bit thicker than the rest of the letters, and I don't like the up/down lines coming off the joint of the H, but otherwise it's looking nice.

Maybe just add two lines for your H cross.

[lolumad?]

ghoul i like the "h" id keep it.
thanks for crits guys.

[Nine9]

Little tidier.

I think I just need to get the bubbles/round bits all the same size and shape or summut. The I doesn't really work either I don't reckon. I dunno, any help would be appreciated.

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/781/dsc00794my2.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

nine it's getting there keep practicing
Try making the top of your e go down a little bit more

ghoul it looks pretty nice
you should go out and paint it imo

[(SoS)Viruz]

For The Koudiq battle. CRITs?


http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan.jpg

Beyond- Touch it up and next time you do that fill it in look nice.
Nine- Like it just fill it in next time looks dope tho.
Yarbles- Dope

[jersOneTIC]

^^^get rid of those circles.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/3708/thowupqe9.jpg

[aemer_oner]

ghoul, that shit it sick!
but the h is kinda wierd but its pretty original, im gonna upload some shit tonight but yeah.

[SkuzSCT]

Try rounding the l out and move the last part of the l up a little bit more ten see how it looks

Just an idea

Rn add some shadow to it looks a little too plain
the last two throws are nice though
So keep those

nine make it just a little less wavy and make your shadow a bit smaller

http://i26.tinypic.com/2s1qd8y.jpg
Exchange with maloe
http://i26.tinypic.com/35n0u9w.jpg
First attempt at a full letter throw

Do you like Lesen?

[Mr yarbles]

Do you like Lesen?
The one from the sdk youtube?

[Dying to live]

http://a331.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/53/l_16bed28d09258130e30575ec503f2172.gif
my very unoriginal throwie lol

[Nine9]

^ Looks sick, maybe make the L a touch bigger like the other letters.

Getting a bit better, fucked the E up though.

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/6057/dsc00796tl0.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

^ Looks sick, maybe make the L a touch bigger like the other letters.

Getting a bit better, fucked the E up though.

http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/6057/dsc00796tl0.jpg
your throwie is getting much better!

[klic]

looks awesome nine except it kind of looks like it reads NENE (your lowercase I kind of looks like an upercase E)

[Leadpoisining]

no it looks like an lower case e with out the dot thingy

[Hater-AiD~>]

this is how i think it should be
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5088/dsc00796tl0ln9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/5088/dsc00796tl0ln9.595272e0cb.jpg (http://g.imageshack.us/g.php?h=224&i=dsc00796tl0ln9.jpg)

[smooth_nuts]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3142/2637022545_c4cd0bb0a2.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3120/2637848860_cbf1896349.jpg
a little name im fuckign with on the side...fucking x's are hard as shit man

joga dont think i forgot man i'll have your throw up some time tonight haha

[Hater-AiD~>]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/Picture155.jpg
crits?

[Mr yarbles]

Damn joga it's getting really nice

But the a kinda looks like an n so add a dot or something to the
top

Othr than that can't really see much
Just keep working at it

[Hater-AiD~>]

thanks...i had a line there to separate it but it got messed up when i went over in sharpie

[klic]

looks awesome JOGA

[hammer_time]

honestly i would lose the little bulb on the top left of the J but other than that, dopeness

[letsgobombin]

no offence, but has everyone gone crazy, joga you have the right idea in trying different styles but keep trying to find something because i'd rather see simple bubble letters than that but thats what you get when you experiment. i've nothing against anyone's opinion but that throwie is quite bad and everyone is saying that its good, joga, always compare your throwie to a good one just to see the huge difference and then you will realise that people who are more toy will say it is good because they use their self as a standard

[lolumad?]

I COMPLETELY AGREE
no offence, but has everyone gone crazy, joga you have the right idea in trying different styles but keep trying to find something because i'd rather see simple bubble letters than that but thats what you get when you experiment. i've nothing against anyone's opinion but that throwie is quite bad and everyone is saying that its good, joga, always compare your throwie to a good one just to see the huge difference and then you will realise that people who are more toy will say it is good because they use their self as a standard

[Nine9]

These are not mine but some kid called AEP.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3183/2645541597_5b72863e2e.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3278/2645539637_3c7a6c2ed9.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3042/2646355528_2a2eea132f.jpg

[Leadpoisining]

no offence, but has everyone gone crazy, joga you have the right idea in trying different styles but keep trying to find something because i'd rather see simple bubble letters than that but thats what you get when you experiment. i've nothing against anyone's opinion but that throwie is quite bad and everyone is saying that its good, joga, always compare your throwie to a good one just to see the huge difference and then you will realise that people who are more toy will say it is good because they use their self as a standard

yesss ur like my hero for sayin that....no homo

[letsgobombin]

anyone for a throwie battle? word is sipping, pm entries to me

[mekosbc]

1)
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0009.jpg
2)
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0008.jpg


which one should i run wit? advice respected..

[Mr yarbles]

Keep them both
The bottom one needs a bit of work
But it's always good to have a couple different styles to go with

[mekosbc]

these are ppl i know that wanted advice but dont have a computer to get on the forumz...
my girl ms.sasy
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0536.jpg


my boy zeus
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0536.jpg

[mekosbc]

shit my bad wrong wrong f***ing img code for zeus.... heres the pic
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0439.jpg

[Fube]

dont look like a hot spot, take your time, make it clean, need some can control brotha.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture009-1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/Picture004-1.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

Fubeilte first r a little so people can tell it's an r and not a wierd n or smething
other than that they're nice though

meko
that green one needs a whole lot of work
Lose the drips or watever on th bottom lose the accent lines on the inside you don't need those for a throw
The y is alright and the second s is alright but the first two letters eed som work

[FLSteele16]

This is my throwie crits welcome

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6782/scan0001oa8.jpg

[Nine9]

Not feeling the little O & I like that, small in front of the other letters.

Should make each letter equal in size man. If the word is a bit long maybe shorten it to COS, COSM, or whatever.

[Baron]

Change the I and O and make the M smaller

[Leadpoisining]

ughgh
make ur letters the same size for now

[letsgobombin]

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/67b57fcc.jpg
cosmic- the letters are ok but make sure all the letters are the same size and then re-post it.
sorry to keep plugging this but i don't know if my.favourite.addiction will come through so their is still spaces for the throwie battle. word is sipping, deadline is thursday. if i've got at least 4 entries by thursday i'll just post then so be quick

[FLSteele16]

Hey guys thanks a lot for your tips. I rewrote it but i fucked up on the m.

http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6554/scan0004sm6.jpg

[Nine9]

I still looks a little small.

POCS(?) - Looks pretty sick IMO.

[*SIZE*]

just a little something...yea pinks bubbles kick ass

[*SIZE*]

workin hard

[mopin dopin mike]

http://i37.tinypic.com/qxwiz9.jpg

just another tweak

[knightsafe]

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/191/5/2/throwie_2_by_fastnloud.jpg

[FLSteele16]

Hey changed the style a bit i did a shity job. Crits welcome.

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/664/scan0005bl4.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

Steel I reccomend that you dont color intill you get you sketches down packed. But yo make your throwies quick. Thats why their thorwies also not feelin the Whole.

[Tonberry]

M+S, if that's an "R" at the end, I'd change it to an upper case letter. I never see mad bombos with lower case "R"s.

Cosmic, Keep sketching. You'll get better with practice. And for comparison's sake, the older style is better then the sharper one you just posted.

Here's one of mine that reads "Golem". It's a one-liner, and I kinda fucked up the "E", and a little tiny bit on the "M", any crits?

http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u1/NeoGarland/n669267154_1044003_6092.jpg

[Leadpoisining]

ummm cosmic.....work on makin ur letters look the same for now...like hold on ill show u

[lolumad?]

why the fuck would you do a throwie with a marker?

[FLSteele16]

Hey this is my new one i think it turned out better than the other ones. Tell me what you think.

http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/9375/scan0006kx7.jpg

[mekosbc]

yo cosmic ima put up a throwie of ur name....urs is gettin there tho keep it up

[Tonberry]

why the fuck would you do a throwie with a marker?

Because I was just passing by and didn't have anything except a few markers on me.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i35.tinypic.com/33428i1.jpg
Eh

Cosmic It's gettin there keep trying

[*Spectone*]

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/8093/0711080306ut2.jpg

[Wallace]

my garbage, trying out the uppercase A.

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/4796/phone0022ra2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FLSteele16]

Yarbles i think thats fresh.
Spectone looks tight

[Nine9]

Wallace, not feeling the uppercase A too much.

[knightsafe]

crits
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/193/b/7/sketch_by_fastnloud.jpg

[FLSteele16]

Yo safe those are tight I really like the bottom one.

[mekosbc]

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0029.jpg
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0031.jpg
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0030.jpg



my boy sero from bushwick
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0028.jpg


yo cosmic this for you
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0025.jpg

[klic]

i like your newest one cosmic

[Wallace]

i think thats not cosmic, its for cosmic

[WoeInfinite]

meko, your from bushwick?
you heardda NSB?
magic, blaze, blame n them?

[Tokenkaligreens]

wallace that A is diff not fiting with the rest, looks ouuta place.

[klic]

i think thats not cosmic, its for cosmic

no i was talking about cosmics newest one but that cosmic by mekos does look nice

[Wallace]

wallace that A is diff not fiting with the rest, looks ouuta place.

yeah, i cant find anything that works... its pissing me off, ive tried 3 a's

any help?

[mekosbc]

yo wallace i got you ill post it up later... and woe im not from bushwick my boy sero is and he said he heard of them but he doesnt know them but he know 196crew, fuck crew, bfw crew, he knowz thrash, and bev3, serk n all them...he knowz alot of writerz.... he use to run with all the writerz from 196 st...

[WoeInfinite]

cool cool.
yeah i just know a couple kids from nsb..theyre wack haha

[FLSteele16]

Thanks alot Klic.
Meko all of those are ill. The Cosmic you did is sick dude i learned alot from your throwie.

[Wallace]

4th A, cant figure out shit that works out nice

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/9980/phone0023rf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FLSteele16]

Wallace im diggin that A.

[Lemz24]

I'm really digging your first one safe.
The second one is dope to

What you guys think of my one liner throwie

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa122/HannebauerNHK/08-07-08_0052.jpg

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa122/HannebauerNHK/11-07-08_0247.jpg

^^^^^^^Prob can't see that one, I tried to brighten it with photobucket but couldn't figure out how lol. Crits please

[(SoS)Viruz]

Yo need to work on your letters, Make sure their quick even strokes and make sure the letters are the same size, and also make sure it flows.

[dark2]

http://i344.photobucket.com/albums/p331/dark2_photos/005222.jpg

crits?

lems - not bad

[caster oner]

ease... ok toy... but has potential... ok some tips... 1: make your letters more shapes and make them the same width all the way round the letter...
2: change to a different s cause that s is so normal....

[Lemz24]

Alright, well it is my first one liner throwie.
Ill take ur tips you guys,
Thanks alot

[Lemz24]

Oh I forgot to ask
If anyone is good at like photoshop or anything.
Could they please brighten my second picture??

[FLSteele16]

Hey these are my new ones i took mekos cosmic and changed it a bit. Tell me what you think.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/91/scan0009bu3.jpg

[Sarto]

cosmic - i like that s and m , keep it up

[maso1]

Quick throwie i did the other day with left over paint from bombing. Crits?
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/MASone.jpg

[FLSteele16]

Dark 2 on the k the top right stick thing is to little make it fatter.
Maso 1 i like the throwie but the little ball at the bottom of X is wierd(if thats an x) and the left side of the A looks a little too long.

Alright i just did this one like 5 min ago i think its the best one i have done crits more than welcome.

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4108/scan0010rb9.jpg

[GaZm13]

It's getting a lot better. Just keep practicing. I would actually change the S to a Z and the C to a K. I think KOZMIK would look ill. That's just me though. I like the name.

[FLSteele16]

Dude thats a good idea i will think about it.

[liquid swords]

those are good throwies man for being new to the game.
i would suggest doing a shadow instead of 3d perspective.
keep the 3d with your full sketches

[mekosbc]

i can see ppl liked the cosmic i did lol good shit cosmic i like how you changed it up keep it up

[mekosbc]

this iz some quick billboard bombing with my boy lime
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0617.jpg

quicky lol and on the run fill in


http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0614.jpg

[mekosbc]

yo lemz try to make a one liner with out the lines crossing over the letters tomuch it kinda makes it look sloppy but itz all good...... damn i left like 5 postz in a row.... my bad

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7130623.jpg

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7120621-1.jpg



crits :P

[Wallace]

oene- i dont even know what to say lol....
meko- im liking the billboard throw
cosmic- you've definitely improved a little, keep at it

ive been working with a's still, its coming along i think
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6015/throwvx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Nine9]

Second attempt at painting a throw.

Both have mistakes in them, but it's practice I guess. Still can't get the E right either.

Clicky for full screen.

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/1237/dsc00822di1.th.jpg (http://img516.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00822di1.jpg)

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/7485/dsc00824gi7.th.jpg (http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00824gi7.jpg)

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/4333/dsc00825fj2.th.jpg (http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00825fj2.jpg)

[MedTwo]

Nine you have the tightest I've seen in this toy section for a while now, haha.
Keep it up bro. I like them.
Mine from last year..
http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/8168/l43d8aa3add8ea571931caawr6.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Nine9]

Cheers dude.

I used a pink dot cap for those throwies, but to me, the outline looks a bit thin. Problem is, if I move the can further away to get a thicker line it kinda goes all soft edged and messy, not very clean. Anyone know a good technique to get thick but clean lines?

I'm looking to buy those astro fatcaps as I hear they're a bit thicker with harder edges, anyone know if it's true?


Med : Looks sweet apart from the N. I think because the top dips on the end of it if you know what I mean. I know N's are a bitch too. :)

[MedTwo]

Haha yeah, the cap was semi clogged so it wasn't as thick on the N, otherwise I would've done it better.
Yeah it looks fine, I don't like the soft edged look anyway, unless it's a chrome or white throwie on a dark coloured wall!

[klic]

oene were you having a seizure while you did that throwie, its lookin kind of shaky.
keep practicing and it ill get better

[FLSteele16]

Meko and Nine those throws are fresh

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

oene were you having a seizure while you did that throwie, its lookin kind of shaky.
keep practicing and it ill get better

It looks like that because i was on a wood table :(

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7130622.jpg

hopefully this is a little better :P


crits welcome please :)

[WoeInfinite]

http://i60.photobucket.com/albums/h26/SoopaxVillain/071308_13051.jpg
keep it or drop it?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

im not feeling the W but thats just me :P

[WoeInfinite]

yeah i dont know if i like it yet..
haha

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

the rest is dope :)

[Wallace]

oene- i dont even know what to say lol....
meko- im liking the billboard throw
cosmic- you've definitely improved a little, keep at it

ive been working with a's still, its coming along i think
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6015/throwvx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bumper

[(SoS)Viruz]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan0006.jpg

[Nine9]

Asic - Feeling the A now, alot better than the uppercase and previous forms.

Viruz - I like the simpleness of it but it's maybe a little generic if you know what I mean. Like too much like the regular letter form. Your K is basically looking just like a K, O like an O etc..

Maybe try and shape them a little different to how they are regulary, give each letter your own little touch and shape.

[(SoS)Viruz]

Alright thanks, But what about the Fill.

[iVIBE]

wallace- those are pretty good and simple
viruz- its a pretty simple throwie but it works, im not really a fan of see through fills i like them to cover the letter so you dont see the paper underneath but its not bad

[Nine9]

It looks like that because i was on a wood table :(

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7130622.jpg

hopefully this is a little better :P


crits welcome please :)

It's better yeah.

Maybe try and make each part of the letter a similar width/thickness. Like your E's go thin at the front of the hole if you know what I mean. I think if they stayed the same thickness, maybe make the hole dead center, it might look better.

I'm feeling the E's in general, it's just that I'd change.

O is nice and simple, but I'm not feeling the N.

Also, try smaller holes in your letters, see how that looks too.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

Thnx man, any ideas about the N? :P

[Wallace]

painted a couple today, fucked up a few times

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3777/img9449yb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3720/img9451td4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2775/img9463sb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


i still dont think that a fits

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

I like em Wallace :P pretty solid

[Mr yarbles]

asic
try making your a a bit smaller

[FLSteele16]

asic they are looking good but i agree with yarbles make the a smaller

[Tonberry]

Yeah.. The A is a bit big. But the fills and colours are pretty solid. Keep it up.

[Hater-AiD~>]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00128.jpg

[Nine9]

G & A look a bit thin compared to the J & O, but otherwise it's tight. Maybe the A could be better if anything.

I still owe you an exchange too man, haven't forgot. Only time I've had free I've been too obsessed in getting mine down lol.

[Hater-AiD~>]

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01481-1.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01479.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01480.jpg

all diff..i think the last is the best

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

I like it just not feeling the a man :P

[I GOT CLOUT]

I suck ball hair at throws...but heres my newest one..

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16170.jpg

JOGA - Shits good, just change that A. Maybe lowercase?

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/21es0ic.jpg

clout lose the swirls
make the letters all same size

joga lose the extension on the a looks like jogn

[hammer_time]

I suck ball hair at throws...but heres my newest one..

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a103/DeciMatioN/5-16170.jpg



this reminds me of an orfn throw

[I GOT CLOUT]

Never seen his work...post a flick?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

BlaH! tried a new N :P

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7140621.jpg

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7140624.jpg


i duno... critz :)

[Reason To-Shine]

that is a k... or an r

[MessTonic]

^It's an N, he did a handie right next to the throwie..

[CT08]

yeah man chnage up that n. Looks like a K or an R

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/P7130622.jpg


this is my old n :P i duno what to do ...

[lolumad?]

tea guy, how old are you?

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

why? does it matter :P I just don't know N's well...

[nTd JaZyBaK]

just started and this is the best i can do so far..im still trying 2 find my own style

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g58/merda101j/IMG00074.jpg

[Wallace]

try and keep your letters relatively proportional. and the H needs a lot of work its reminds me of a dick


painted a couple today, fucked up a few times

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6015/throwvx6.jpg

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/3777/img9449yb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/3720/img9451td4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/2775/img9463sb0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


i still dont think that a fits

bump, any suggestions for the a would be really appreciated

[nTd JaZyBaK]

lol, yeah i made the H regular...

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

hey Asic, maybe make the upper larger and the lower part smaller... still lower case or go upper case :)

[FLSteele16]

Asic try makeing the circle part of the a smaller

[Wallace]

worked on making the a smaller, its getting a little better

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/5686/phone0007bo0.jpg

[FLSteele16]

yea that looks better

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/oeneyellowthrowie.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/oeneorangethrowie.jpg

critz :P

[Wallace]

get your letters proportional and work on your 3d (you have shadow on the left and right sides, makes no sense)

[Mr yarbles]

http://i34.tinypic.com/21es0ic.jpg

clout lose the swirls
make the letters all same size

joga lose the extension on the a looks like jogn
Bump this

Asic looks a whole lot better
Try giving your letters a little bit of the slant like the a

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

thnx wallace :)

[krosswithrampagepaint]

http://SANYO876.JPG

[krosswithrampagepaint]

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0867.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0868.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0876.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0877.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0878.jpg
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY0873.jpg

[Sicks]

First time I've posted any of my work here. Let me know what you think.


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b221/Agent0range3/HPIM1076.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b221/Agent0range3/HPIM1075.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

your letters need some structure

[Sarto]

quick throws
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm397/sartoner/001-3.jpg

[Keke]

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n265/Rs2sigs/IMG_0552.jpg
i cant get a good name going, meh does this look good, its in a really good spot XD

sick- hot
sarto, i think you should try a new s

[Nine9]

^ Like it dude, not feeling the E's though.

& second letter (dunno what it is..N?), doesn't really fit with the others.

Apart from that it looks good, seems to flow nice.

[Keke]

that would be an A, yeah I really fucked up on it usually flows better oh well ill work on it

[aintnoway]

.

[Skewir]

aintnoway-sweet. The a seems like it should be bigger in the front instead of the back.

http://i349.photobucket.com/albums/q370/SkewerVeed/IMG_0002_2.jpg

["Bi2aR"]

a thowie i'm developing, can i get sum crits?
http://i151.photobucket.com/albums/s154/V_Be_Me/CIMG0004-8.jpg
skewer-define your letters, its hard see the k, w, and r in there

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/blacknwhiteoene.jpg









Working on shadding and being proportional :P

critz :)

[Mr yarbles]

http://i38.tinypic.com/4j6xia.jpg
Here something to help you out a little
Your top shading is oo much
Don't end the side shading so drasticly

lose the circles in the o and e and do lines for now
also the shadowing is off in the circles too

[aintnoway]

yo thanks man

[candykiller]

Some throwies that I've done. Sorry for the poor quality. The pics are from my phone. Crits are widely appreciated. :)

This one wasn't really a throwie but i did it in the 6th grade. the thing that's scratched out was my old, gay tag name:
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/3544/image000im3.jpg

Did this one in the car on the way to Magic Springs, Arkansas(shading is wayyyyyy off. need help on it) :
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/4940/image001nr3.jpg

Don't know when I did this one...
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/3032/image006oo4.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice simps..not really feelin the throwie
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00137.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/IMG00136.jpg

[mekosbc]

http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0699.jpg
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0655.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

joga that bottom ones fresh

meko first throwies nie
Second needs a little work

[Wallace]

joga those are looking pretty good

[cans905]

joga- looking good
meko- luvin ur throwie, but if ur gonna make the letters into characters, get rid of the writing inside the letters and make it around it instead

[cans905]

meko- im also looking at ur aura... if ur gonna do one, take the time and make sure there are no gaps between that and ur outline

[Dying to live]

http://a94.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/45/l_8b8cc4326b878b16019e7dac1732d9e5.gif

mehh

[MarOne...]

Very nice akel. You've got your can control pretty much on point.