Throwies

[MASE P_2s]

top two are my main
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0081.jpg

[Armored Bulletz]

niice

[MASE P_2s]

thanks bro

[LeaksOne]

do you have any handys that arent one liners? and i thought that throw said caesap

[CrustOner]

Yeah, those handies are hurting, man.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/MASE_THROW_SHER.jpg

yo mase. got bored.

[Zest3]

Name change - Oest
I swear to god, it's been 1 year I'm trying to find sumthing good for ZEST, I can't find a fucking proper Z. Time for change.
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/2424/graffiguess002.jpg

[RES4]

mase- real fresh, m especially

http://i44.tinypic.com/2yy4ggm.jpg

bump

oest- get rid of the space in between its not really a throw

[DoMakeSayThink]

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/Photo201.jpg

[flask1995]

looks pretty clean too me, i love the character, pretty nice :D

[MASE P_2s]

one liners is what i grew up around nice shyt sher id work on da a thou lol

[MASE P_2s]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0084.jpg
got bored sher

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i40.tinypic.com/2rmp8go.jpg

[MASE P_2s]

http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0087.jpg
new throw

[Armored Bulletz]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/MASE_THROW_SHER.jpg

yo mase. got bored.

pretty simple, relly dope though

[MASE P_2s]

sher u gutta teach me to do dat m wen u come bak lol

[rewz]

http://i41.tinypic.com/1yjt6x.jpg
name exchange for mase i write zuek i hate my throws i hate there ugly

[ReSeM]

mase- real fresh, m especially

http://i44.tinypic.com/2yy4ggm.jpg

our names are way too close

[CrustOner]

Battle for it.

[TheToy]

Battle for it.

I think they should battle to the death for it, avec light sabers.

[CrustOner]

I definitely agree.

[ReSeM]

bring me my red shirt its go time haha
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0008.jpg
this doesnt satisfy my but whatever just got off a 10 hour flight

[CrustOner]

Resm wins.

But not by much..

[ReSeM]

crits what do i need to improve
the R is funky to me and E is sketchy

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image033.jpg

[TheToy]

Is that a lower case 'd'?

I see some cleanliness in the 'K'. It's lookin' better. Lose the exclamation point. Add a quick drop to fill in some negative space between letters and bars of letters.

[smokeitup]

i dunno what the fuck its spose to be, looking at it now. hahaha.

[RES4]

our names are way too close

fuck sake the names are different only first 3 letters are the same out of five

[Zest3]

http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/9963/14468320.jpg
What about this

[MASE P_2s]

i like the o id work on the e

[Zest3]

Do you think I should make a low cap e ?

[MASE P_2s]

naah keep the uper case the fix the structure of it

[MASE P_2s]

name exchange for rew http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0089.jpg

[Zest3]

mase, can you make me an example of a fixed e ?
I can't seem to get it right.

[Inlyn08]

name exchange for rew http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c156/emienpimp/Mobile%20Uploads/Photo0089.jpg
Top left looks like a ZH, top right looks like ZL..
I like the bottom one.

[ReSeM]

fuck sake the names are different only first 3 letters are the same out of five

if looked closely at your tag it looks like RESM
Also my tag is RESM cos I dropped the second E

[CrustOner]

Who cares. You're both toy as fuck.

If it matters, there are millions of Resik's, Resm's, Res everything. I write Resist. There are so many Res's it's ridiculous. Now let it go. Jesus.

[Inlyn08]

^ Lol..

[Fury]

If it matters, there are millions of Dicks, Orgasms, Sex everything. I write Sexist. There are so many Sexes it's ridiculous. Now let go of it, Jesus.

Sorry I couldn't resist.

[CrustOner]

Need some sex in your life, Fury?

[Fury]

Unfortunately so. :(

[Inlyn08]

Sit on your hand until it goes numb..
It'll feel like someone else.

[-Empty-Can-]

It's called a stranger. ^

[ReSeM]

pull a couple ribs out suck your own dick

[Inlyn08]

pull a couple ribs out suck your own dick

Didn't Marilyn Manson do that??

[CrustOner]

No, he didn't.

Although Ron Jeremy can self-fellate himself, without taking away two ribs.

[ReSeM]

they're both disgusting
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0012.jpg

[B.S. P0LICE]

next person to reply with their name ill do a throw up

[sank.]

reks

[CrustOner]

Resist.

EDIT:

you little cunt-nugget.

[smokeitup]

everybody drop your tags....

[ReSeM]

I'm guessing my throw was good

[READ.MORE]

just a couple of throws for your eyes to see.

[CrustOner]

No, it wasn't. I just suck at throws and don't have any info to give.


everybody drop your tags....
LOL WUT?

[LeaksOne]

everybody drop your tags....

simon says?

[ReSeM]

well thanks for such sharp honesty
much respect

[Zest3]

http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/733/oest.jpg
If you can't see anything tell me Ill make anotehr one

[RES4]

liked the capital e better

[Zest3]

Gonna wait for other crits and see whata needa change.

[Inlyn08]

Gonna wait for other crits and see whata needa change.

Change picture quality.

[Zest3]

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2685/oe2.jpg

[RustySpoon]

Zest3- Make the hole in your "e" an oval to match the "O". Then make your "e" the same size as the "o" and clean up your lines. Here's a rough picture to show you what i mean.
http://i449.photobucket.com/albums/qq212/BFP_Sticky/OE.jpg
crits?
http://i449.photobucket.com/albums/qq212/BFP_Sticky/Picture003.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i43.tinypic.com/sn09j5.jpg

[zaco]

dank not bad, just clean up the fill in

[Xfish]

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2685/oe2.jpg

actualy i suggest changing the oval to a line itl be easier on a wall

[LIZARD]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1979/photoon20100314at2243.jpg
crits? trying to figure out the new letters so i know its not that good

[SHER_WON_WTS]

i think the point of Dank's fill was the zig zags.
not bad dank, i like the scribble bubbles

[-Dank-DK-]

The whole point of it was i was lazy lol

[Vagrant]

Weekly Toy Battles
Throwie: Patrick | Handstyle: Shamrock
Deadline: Saturday, March 20, 2010, 5pm est.
One seperate entry per person. | PM your entries to me (Vagrant).

[Naysayer]

http://www.bombce.com/graffitiforucture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3075
http://www.bnce.comm/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3076

Something new. Square root symbol quick throw. Guess you could call it a 'one-letter' kinda' thing. The first white/black came out alright till I tried to outline it in blue. The NY thin I was using didn't want to comply with my demands.

Every time I go around a throw again with a color to make it pop I always fuck my line up and cut into the first outline color. :(

I like it.

[Emiliano Zapata]

anyone wanna exchange throws? i write caesar

[JCooks110]

New here, looking for some crit on these semi-throwies I came up with. As for the bubbles on the first image, I was just bored.

http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/776/pic0310.th.jpg (http://img535.imageshack.us/i/pic0310.jpg/)

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8223/pic0309.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/i/pic0309.jpg/)

[ChadWarden]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2vmxytv.jpg

trying new letters


case, thats a solid start; you don't have any of those wack ass lumps like most cats starting out.

[Armored Bulletz]

dope chad

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/315y1s5.jpg

caesar exchange

[woonybomber]

nice shit dk
and chrd you trows are nice keep it up
here is some ish for talking
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff004-11.jpg

[TheToy]

I think you should put a stretched tear drop type thing in that 'O' and use some 3D.

[woonybomber]

ight will do thanks man

[massacreman]

Woony work on the flow.
Dank work on your E
Chad its delicious.
Case work on the E mostly, than just make sure your letters are the same style.
Go to the new to graffiti thread if you need help.
++++

I dont know what kind of letters will fit this R, but i like the R
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2774/4438154718_5466402f3f.jpg


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4043/4437378061_14ea4afc39.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4437377775_effa91e01d.jpg


peace out

[smoggy_mcfly]

8354

watcha think??

[massacreman]

give crits to get them smoggy

[smoggy_mcfly]

ok well i only like the blue on the red paper not really feeling the rest

[massacreman]

dont like my dick ? :(
your a is too fat, n is uneven, balance it out
make the e round, and make the last letter more readable
peace out&stay up

[smoggy_mcfly]

the last letter is the number 1 how do you make it more noticeable??
i fucking hate numbers grrrrrr.........

[massacreman]

let it stick out more, show the left "leg" of the 1 and dont make it like a throw number thing, just make the 1 ecactly like this: 1 this shape

[smoggy_mcfly]

8355
like this??

[zaco]

hey woony ive never really seen a W like that. good looks

[woonybomber]

yeah i know its weird

mad people tryd to say i stole it i wonna know wich writer i stole it from ??

[hpir]

shitty prizmas fuck
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture121.jpg
crits?

[mista_dza]

first hpir, that says kan? cus that "n" sorta to me looks like a "H" but thats all i can really think of right now anyway

heres somethin i did today at a friends house, shitty camera phone pic, and i fucked it up and tried to fix it up so dont mind that little half star just above the "E"
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/1.jpg

[woonybomber]

i thought you waz gonna say dont mind that stupid vagina lookin thing in the d

[mista_dza]

haha ok ill fix it up, any other crits..

[woonybomber]

dont make the hoops int he e so big unless its lowercase

[mista_dza]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/1111.jpg

i wanna clarify ...your talkin about where i circled?

edit:
oh and btw heres another picture..this one is a little older
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00177.jpg

[TheToy]

He's talkin' about the center of your 'D'.

[massacreman]

and that old throw is fresh

[woonybomber]

i waz talking about wat you circled

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/9MAY2009009.jpg

done this in may last year, fucked up the fill coz it was dark and i couldnt see shit.

[smoggy_mcfly]

8355
like this??

bump

btw ssmoke youve got a nice handy

[massacreman]

yeah smog its better than before, i dont normally do this but ill give ou some insight with paint, ill up a pic for you

[massacreman]

http://i42.tinypic.com/2z842ee.jpg

[smoggy_mcfly]

ah i see thnx

[mefe]

@smog.. id make the inside of the E clearer/rounder.

the face in the E was just me messing around.
crits?
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image70.jpg?t=1268848642

[massacreman]

how long have you been writing?

[viseversa101]

current throwie but gettin tired of the v 1/2 the time they look like ass
(supposed to be halo on vise/horns on versa for heaven n hell)
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_23454472bb1547129bae4ea817e34f18.jpg

[mefe]

how long have you been writing?
about a year.... why?

[kace91]

Everything shittie, i know.

Do you see anything wich can be improved and become "good"? any idea or advice will be welcome, ive been some time filling papers but i feel like im not advancing at all...

http://s3.subirimagenes.com:81/otros/4222780snc00700.jpg

http://s4.subirimagenes.com/otros/4222775snc00703.jpg

[mefe]

@kace.. dont put the little spike on the K.

i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.

[RemoZ]

OTHER THAN KAN!

Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure

[gumOnShoe]

about a year.... why?

you're a faggot.
you suck horridly.

[mista_dza]

and that old throw is fresh

so you like that older throw?
i guess ill have to go back and mess with that...so you know i was up for about 3 nights messing with that one 0.0 i would hope it looks somewhat good ha

[CrustOner]

OTHER THAN KAN!

Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure

Kan's sucks too. In my opinion, of course.

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image006-1.jpg
which you guys feelin the most?

kace, dumb it down a lil
viseversa? that shit's dumb and too long, all those letters are wack especially the v.. start over, simple, and just write vise or versa instead of both
ber, it's decent just clean it up, get rid of the holes in the e and r
dkode, the o looks like a d too, otherwise, not bad

[Fury]

Middle one

[SHER_WON_WTS]

those throws are great MAWKS, and yeah, middle one.

[Zest3]

about a year.... why?

Give it up.

[Fury]

And Mawk, looking it over again, that A doesn't fit the middle, so change that, and you'll be set.

[Rosie716]

http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/RosieOne716/Rosie1.jpg

I know the E is a little big. something im working on. I actually like it a lot, which is rare because i usually hate all my shit. what do you guys think>?

[kace91]

@kace.. dont put the little spike on the K.

i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.


kace, dumb it down a lil

Thanks for the tips. I also like that E, but it seems a lot worse when used in the whole name, i think it doesnt "match" there.

So, you think i can stick to this one and work from it?

http://s2.subirimagenes.com/otros/4227850snc00705.jpg

[Rosie716]

KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.

[CrustOner]

http://i43.tinypic.com/mjslcx.jpg

Thought I'd try my hand at making an original throw..

Any thoughts?

[Rosie716]

idk man, hard for me to crit, i can barely read it, i like throws you can read. only because, whats the point of bombing if it cant be read by the majority of people ya know?

[CrustOner]

You can't read it? It says Resist.

[LeaksOne]

i think its coo. just work on your S's a bit and at first i mistaked your E for an S. the line down the middle threw me off

Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help.

Rosie i dont like that S and thin up the E

[Zest3]

http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/2659/62353000.jpg

[LeaksOne]

is that what you write or is that a 2 letter? and its kinda plain. and i dont like how the E looks like a smiley face.

[Rosie716]

oh word alright, RESIST.. its not bad. i dont like the T tho.

[Zest3]

It's a 2 letter.
Yeah, what should I add ?

[Xfish]

i like the throw crust i think it takes a lil bit of time to read graff when i started writing i couldnt read much graffiti and zest i personaly think you should change the ovals to lines but thats just me idk. kace the k is biger than the rest and rosie i might try a capital R but not looking too bad

[LeaksOne]

well i would just make it basic but thats your steez. or work on the whole name then establish a style then incorporate the style in the 2 letters

[Zest3]

Tryin new names.
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4204/31730094.jpg
Kinda like it.

[kace91]

KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.

Thanks, i now what you mean by flowful, and you are probably right, my throwie will probably be a lot harder to paint fast than the good ones, even if the writer have the same skills. Ill try to improve that and stay simple, and of course ill work in proportion.



Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help.


Any suggestion? I dont know a lot of famous writers apart from seen and some others as famous as him.

[LIZARD]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/857/photoon20100318at22163.jpg
new style...crits?

[Xfish]

i really like the s but i think the rest needs work

[LIZARD]

i was screwin around tryin to make a new S and i came up with that one which i like so all the other letters i kind forced them to match

[Rosie716]

u can read graff man.. i just couldnt read that at first.. and idk about a capital R, i cant get one to flow as nicely, i kinda like the looks of that, pluss everything else is lowercase so i like to keep it one or the other.

[Xfish]

yeah you could make it work if you developed those and and its cool rosie just a suggestion

[LIZARD]

the lower case r was a bitch but i did it it to match the others ill give capital letters a try

[Flawless Victory]

http://i44.tinypic.com/260beo0.jpg

Missed last weeks battle, so fuck it.

[weakfingers]

Tryin new names.
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4204/31730094.jpg
Kinda like it.

This is so lazy, I really dont like it. Dont sketch your throwies, its gonna hurt you in the longrun

[LeaksOne]

Any suggestion? I dont know a lot of famous writers apart from seen and some others as famous as him.

google graffiti then. or buy a graff book. or even look in the big boy thread. lots of shit in there to see

[AlecR2K]

http://i42.tinypic.com/f2ld2u.jpg

sk 1line

[LeaksOne]

that K is really akward looking

[Rosie716]

KACE- some big writers from my area that i always find good inspiration from are , HERT, LIONS, ATAK, CREMS. they are all pretty fucking good and different styles. check them out. justt google, "LIONS GRAFF" ect.. theres a good video of lions on youtube too.

[Rosie716]

KACE- check out this link bro. http://fiveprime.org/hivemind/Tags/bf,graffiti

[Zest3]

Better like this Weak ?
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9166/33955448.jpg
I really have the bad habit of sketching.
Needa lose it.

[smokeitup]

^terrible.

[Zest3]

Could you be a bit more constructive.
What's so terrible.

[AlecR2K]

too many broken spots in your lines, dont sketch

[RES4]

-zest, pick a name longer than 2 letters
-spur, s is only good letter, get rid of the hole in the e and change the r, and overlapping everything more
-flawless, only thing i dont like is the b
-alec, i really like that one liner

http://i44.tinypic.com/2hehaig.jpg

whats better small e or big e?

[Rosie716]

ZEST- just practice one letter at a time. practice your I without sketching it. just fucking go for it, do like 20 on a page. and keep going, get one you like, the practice that on a page all by itself. start with a straight lowercase I. try to do it in one motion. keep it plain and simple. look back a few pages at how i do mine. I'm not saying that im good, but i just keep everything simple. start by trying the "I" that I do. then progress from there if you'd like.

[Fury]

Big E. And if that's an R, change it.

[massacreman]

who wants to exchange?
i write reset

[Fury]

who wants to exchange?
i write reset

I write Vega. PM it to me when you're done and I'll do the same for you

[Rosie716]

i will exchange a throwi. ROSIE. be on here later probably. might be able to get it on in a bit if i dont get walked in on while im at community service haha.

[massacreman]

okay, ill do both. pm me the result. ill do the same
peace

[Rosie716]

word. got it done, super quick. ill do a better one when i get home and have my shit. i like what i did, just needs a couple adjustments.

[TheToy]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3129
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3120
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3121
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3130

[massacreman]

rewt just 1 thing i dont get.
why are you painting a V with the name rewt?
peace

[-Empty-Can-]

square "Rewt" dood

[Fury]

It's a cool idea, but you need to make it more apparent that it's a square root symbol, and not a V.

[massacreman]

ooooh its a root, now i get it, define it more, the idea is good

[TheToy]

People that know math know what it is.

It only looks like a 'V' to those who live inside the box...

I want it to be bubbly like a throw. The local writers know what it is.

I'm gonna' start putting "Know your roots." next to that hog. Make people think about that one.

[Fury]

You could do the square root of negative one, more people might get it then.
Or just put an i for imaginary!

[TheToy]

You could do the square root of negative one, more people might get it then.

I'll go with a 1. Cause I've been writing UMREWT in my hands. A square root of a negative number is a non-real number.

And I'm real. :p

[Fury]

That'd be good too haha. Just as long as you make it super obvious what it is (like Pi), you'll be good.

[Zest3]

Guys, is this better, or is it the letter that suck ?
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3281/it001.jpg
Maybe I should thicken the bottom of the I

[CrustOner]

Rewt, I'd suggest bringing the left part down, it'd look better in my opinion.

[Rosie716]

ZEST if your not gonna take peoples crits then just fucking stop posting dude.. we dont want to see sketched shit, we dont want to see the same exact thing we just saw drawn again, we dont want any of that.. go back and ready every single post for like the past 3 pages.

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

[TheToy]

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

It's not my fault if the people that think it's a 'V' didn't make it through 8th grade math...

[Rosie716]

just an opinion man, i like when people can read my graff. makes me feel good when i hear at a party "did you see that rosie piece off the 190". by all means dude, keep doin what you do. if its gettin you big ups congrats.. i just am givin my opinion.

[TheToy]

I know where you're coming from.

When I make the bottom part of the symbol that does look like a 'v' with the slant it looks funky. It doesn't look like a throw. I think Crust is right about dropping the left part down a little bit.

It's an abstract throwie. I want people to think a little bit.

[hpir]

toy- not a bad idea make it more disticd tho
zest3-make your bottems tha same size i suppose
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kan001-2.jpg
crits?

[RemoZ]

KAN - Do you just keep posting the same thing asking for crits? It seems every time you post it is the exact same...

[hpir]

no actualy first post of this in here so...

[Rosie716]

KAN your bomb on the right looks decent. needs work. deff looks bit, your thing in the middle is ugly. too fat. the N should have openings if the rest of it does. loose the extensions. they dont look good.

[Zest3]

ZEST if your not gonna take peoples crits then just fucking stop posting dude.. we dont want to see sketched shit, we dont want to see the same exact thing we just saw drawn again, we dont want any of that.. go back and ready every single post for like the past 3 pages.

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

By sketch, do you mean like i should color and shit ?

[Xfish]

no draw lines dont pick up the pencil when you do just draw

[LIZARD]

kan-bullshit thats ur first post,i told u that the shadow under the N doesnt make sense and u can see where u erased it hahaha

[Jwhite]

Just a few quick ones, toy or not? crits?

[LIZARD]

go simple and lose all those extensions

[Jwhite]

go simple and lose all those extensions

Ight, the basics of the letters decent at least?

[LIZARD]

id say the 2nd one is a little better but both should look alot simpler...i know everyone on this site says the same thing but do keyboard letters first and once u get those down try to get ur own style goin. i wouldnt really call those throws either

[Jwhite]

i know everyone on this site says the same thing but do keyboard letters first and once u get those down try to get ur own style goin.


Keyboard?

[LIZARD]

look down at the letters your typing on and do those :)...do bars just keep it simple for a while

[Jwhite]

haha thanks ^.^

[ReSeM]

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0011.jpg
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0014.jpg

[Zest3]

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4792/it002.jpg
Kay this time (yellow thing) wasn't sketched .

[Discretion]

http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r358/future101000/032010124947.jpg

http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r358/future101000/032010124312.jpg

[Zest3]

Discretion : I thought, at first, your R was a fucked up H, so yea.
Oh and for the block letters, practice your paper before.
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4792/it002.jpg

[Fury]

Keep working on your simp. As for your throw, I don't feel like the R and the E match up.

[LIZARD]

rase-alot more paper before u paint it
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style, i couldnt think of a good r to match...crits?

[smoggy_mcfly]

lizard i like it

[Discretion]

thanx for crits. i found this spot walking home and it was chill so i went home and grabbed a can to go practice

[Zest3]

rase-alot more paper before u paint it
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style, i couldnt think of a good r to match...crits?
Is it a U or a V ?
Anyway, I don't like the bubble under the U or V, but I like the rest.

[LIZARD]

its a V, bubble v's always look like u's...what about the r cuz i have a feeling it sucks more then the rest

[CrustOner]

yeah, that R is weak. Eliminate negative space

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03471.jpg?t=1269119598

quickie, not a fan of my R

[Zest3]

My eyes r burnin.
Seriously, I can't see any of the letters, and if the first is a S, def work on your structure.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1247.jpg

[LIZARD]

negative space?

[Flawless Victory]

My eyes r burnin.
Seriously, I can't see any of the letters, and if the first is a S, def work on your structure.
No, that S is straight.
Not my style, but it's not bad structure wise, Safe.
The R could be a little better, maybe try a capital one.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

use more eye friendly colors. jeeeszus

[Rosie716]

ZEST- Finally gettin it dude! someone who actually takes advice, i like it.. keep workin at it tho.. always room for improvment!

[Zest3]

http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6821/it003.jpg
Is it getting better?

[Sesh-it-up]

kew-drop that w now.
backtodafuture- black white chrome blue and red
sevr- i dont like the bottom of the V but dont get me rong she is nice and smooth

[Sesh-it-up]

sevr spin the bubble on the R so it looks like its a speech bubble comin outa the bar of the R...i donno how it'll look just an idea.

Edit: that doesnt make sence.. but spin the bubble so the poin is inside the R not on the out side.

[LIZARD]

zest-bring the t out farther from the i, its kinda lookin like a p cuz half of the like on the t is behind the i
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg
better R?...crits?

[BlacktodaFuture]

those two cans were the only ones i had left. i said the same thing. R is too big and weak, structure is fine should be cleaner but the cans were also running out. but thx for crits

kew: looks too smushed down

[RemoZ]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp255/grewupafuckenscrewup/egobomb.jpg

[kew1]

kew-drop that w now.
backtodafuture- black white chrome blue and red
sevr- i dont like the bottom of the V but dont get me rong she is nice and smooth
ik dude like for reall i cant come up with one

[LIZARD]

new R...crits?
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg

[Jwhite]

new R...crits?
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg


im not really feelin the bubble on the bottom of the V,

[LIZARD]

other people said that to, its just there to make it look more like a V then a U...how else can i do it to look like the right letter?

[Bets369R]

looks like SEYR.

make it pointed at the bottom like a normal V

[Zest3]

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5443/it004.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

bottom T

top I

[markingz.]

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp255/grewupafuckenscrewup/egobomb.jpg
stop biting remos cunt face

[RemoZ]

Who calm down douche dick, first of thats not me. 2nd who is he biting?

[markingz.]

haha you joke, ima just post people idont know or that are not me cuase i suck cock lmfao fag

[RemoZ]

Right...I'm joking it isn't possible to throw the work of a friend on here at all. I've posted MY work on here you ass. I do not write EGOS, I'm sure quite a few people here can tell you that.

Why the fuck am I even defending myself against you...

[Zest3]

stop biting remos cunt face
Hey bro calm down.
This kid may be bitin but he still has the guts to do this shit.
Anywayhttp://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2098/44109692.jpg

[AlecR2K]

you really need to stop filling like that. even if its just on paper

[Zest3]

Well, I'm quick filling cuz I'm just working on the structure for now.
But yea, I'll consider that next time

[AlecR2K]

http://i39.tinypic.com/65namh.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/e0oc1.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/35n66q9.jpg

[Zest3]

Alec - I like it except for the K or H, i can't tell.

[LIZARD]

i could tell it was a k but it needs work compared to the other letters, i like it though other then that

[AlecR2K]

its sink & sk. the Ks kinda give me trouble, first two are so wack, 3rd is improved, i like it.

[CrustOner]

I dig it.

[Zest3]

Which one ?
This : http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4117/which1.jpg
This : http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/863/which2.jpg
Or This : http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/3200/which3.jpg

[mefe]

yo does anyone have any tips on throw up G's... im having mad troubles with G's.

[LIZARD]

zest-i like the face on the i but the whole heart thing sucks...do the first one but make the bottom of the t thinner

[Zest3]

Yeah, I fucking suck with Ts right now xD

[mefe]

this is a very..very ruff drawing (new name)

crits? (i know that the sizing is bad)
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image71.jpg?t=1269205454

[Zest3]

Rouge... You know what it means right ?
First, your throwie (especially the R) looks like it has been shaked. By this i mean that the lines are really sloppy.
Second, the size of the letters. Compare the O and the E.

Anyway, there's a lot o' work to do, but I'm sure you could come up with sumthin good.
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8033/it010.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

I like it. Just make the T as tall as the I.

[LIZARD]

zest-alot better

[savager]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m111/1CES/iPhonee010.jpg

crits? I was thinking about getting this up all over a wall at school or something.
LOLOLOL carried on and on...

Zest, looks legit man, keep up.

[LIZARD]

make the L round so it matches the O more....why lol?

[Zest3]

Good idea savager, but I'd work on the fluidity and the fillin. I like the colors though.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m111/1CES/iPhonee010.jpg
crits? I was thinking about getting this up all over a wall at school or something.
LOLOLOL carried on and on...


http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/lol002.jpg
Naww man, this is how you do it =D

[savager]

Thanks for the input guys.

The fill was supposed to be 'ghetto' hahaha, but yee i could definitely work on some shit.

And as for why I might do that, because i can ofc !

EDIT: Empty Can, hahaha thats tight man. i think i might go with a lower case 'L'... Thanks!

[Zest3]

Hey guys !
So I said maybe u'd like to see my progession.
Anyway, scroll at the bottom :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2255&page=11&highlight=progression

[Zest3]

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/6376/78443121.jpg
That's the tallest I can go without making it look ridiculous.

[CrustOner]

It already looks ridiculous.

[LIZARD]

t still should be thinner,make the i thinner to match

[AlecR2K]

lol

[Fury]

CYNDAQUiL!
And oh, how I miss the signature craze when I was around 12 haha.

[Zest3]

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9582/yeaho.jpg
I am not responsible for any eye injury.

[Rosie716]

zest, make your I and T the same size over all.. the I is larger than the T and it doesnt look right. height wise anyway.