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READ.MORE
03-14-2010, 01:33 AM
just a couple of throws for your eyes to see.

CrustOner
03-14-2010, 01:33 AM
No, it wasn't. I just suck at throws and don't have any info to give.


everybody drop your tags....
LOL WUT?

LeaksOne
03-14-2010, 01:36 AM
everybody drop your tags....

simon says?

ReSeM
03-14-2010, 01:36 AM
well thanks for such sharp honesty
much respect

Zest3
03-14-2010, 09:51 AM
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/733/oest.jpg
If you can't see anything tell me Ill make anotehr one

RES4
03-14-2010, 10:00 AM
liked the capital e better

Zest3
03-14-2010, 10:04 AM
Gonna wait for other crits and see whata needa change.

Inlyn08
03-14-2010, 10:41 AM
Gonna wait for other crits and see whata needa change.

Change picture quality.

Zest3
03-14-2010, 01:05 PM
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2685/oe2.jpg

RustySpoon
03-14-2010, 05:53 PM
Zest3- Make the hole in your "e" an oval to match the "O". Then make your "e" the same size as the "o" and clean up your lines. Here's a rough picture to show you what i mean.
http://i449.photobucket.com/albums/qq212/BFP_Sticky/OE.jpg
crits?
http://i449.photobucket.com/albums/qq212/BFP_Sticky/Picture003.jpg

-Dank-DK-
03-14-2010, 06:12 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/sn09j5.jpg

zaco
03-14-2010, 06:37 PM
dank not bad, just clean up the fill in

Xfish
03-14-2010, 06:54 PM
http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/2685/oe2.jpg

actualy i suggest changing the oval to a line itl be easier on a wall

LIZARD
03-14-2010, 10:46 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/1979/photoon20100314at2243.jpg
crits? trying to figure out the new letters so i know its not that good

SHER_WON_WTS
03-14-2010, 10:50 PM
i think the point of Dank's fill was the zig zags.
not bad dank, i like the scribble bubbles

-Dank-DK-
03-14-2010, 11:04 PM
The whole point of it was i was lazy lol

Vagrant
03-15-2010, 03:34 AM
Weekly Toy Battles
Throwie: Patrick | Handstyle: Shamrock
Deadline: Saturday, March 20, 2010, 5pm est.
One seperate entry per person. | PM your entries to me (Vagrant).

Naysayer
03-15-2010, 04:35 PM
http://www.bombce.com/graffitiforucture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3075
http://www.bnce.comm/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3076

Something new. Square root symbol quick throw. Guess you could call it a 'one-letter' kinda' thing. The first white/black came out alright till I tried to outline it in blue. The NY thin I was using didn't want to comply with my demands.

Every time I go around a throw again with a color to make it pop I always fuck my line up and cut into the first outline color. :(

I like it.

Emiliano Zapata
03-15-2010, 04:58 PM
anyone wanna exchange throws? i write caesar

JCooks110
03-15-2010, 06:24 PM
New here, looking for some crit on these semi-throwies I came up with. As for the bubbles on the first image, I was just bored.

http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/776/pic0310.th.jpg (http://img535.imageshack.us/i/pic0310.jpg/)

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8223/pic0309.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/i/pic0309.jpg/)

ChadWarden
03-15-2010, 08:28 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2vmxytv.jpg

trying new letters


case, thats a solid start; you don't have any of those wack ass lumps like most cats starting out.

Armored Bulletz
03-15-2010, 09:00 PM
dope chad

-Dank-DK-
03-15-2010, 09:17 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/315y1s5.jpg

caesar exchange

woonybomber
03-15-2010, 10:12 PM
nice shit dk
and chrd you trows are nice keep it up
here is some ish for talking
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff004-11.jpg

TheToy
03-15-2010, 10:37 PM
I think you should put a stretched tear drop type thing in that 'O' and use some 3D.

woonybomber
03-15-2010, 10:46 PM
ight will do thanks man

massacreman
03-16-2010, 08:27 AM
Woony work on the flow.
Dank work on your E
Chad its delicious.
Case work on the E mostly, than just make sure your letters are the same style.
Go to the new to graffiti thread if you need help.
++++

I dont know what kind of letters will fit this R, but i like the R
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2774/4438154718_5466402f3f.jpg


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4043/4437378061_14ea4afc39.jpg

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4437377775_effa91e01d.jpg


peace out

smoggy_mcfly
03-16-2010, 03:34 PM
8354

watcha think??

massacreman
03-16-2010, 03:38 PM
give crits to get them smoggy

smoggy_mcfly
03-16-2010, 03:46 PM
ok well i only like the blue on the red paper not really feeling the rest

massacreman
03-16-2010, 03:50 PM
dont like my dick ? :(
your a is too fat, n is uneven, balance it out
make the e round, and make the last letter more readable
peace out&stay up

smoggy_mcfly
03-16-2010, 04:00 PM
the last letter is the number 1 how do you make it more noticeable??
i fucking hate numbers grrrrrr.........

massacreman
03-16-2010, 04:15 PM
let it stick out more, show the left "leg" of the 1 and dont make it like a throw number thing, just make the 1 ecactly like this: 1 this shape

smoggy_mcfly
03-16-2010, 04:37 PM
8355
like this??

zaco
03-16-2010, 04:57 PM
hey woony ive never really seen a W like that. good looks

woonybomber
03-16-2010, 09:16 PM
yeah i know its weird

mad people tryd to say i stole it i wonna know wich writer i stole it from ??

hpir
03-16-2010, 09:54 PM
shitty prizmas fuck
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture121.jpg
crits?

mista_dza
03-16-2010, 10:58 PM
first hpir, that says kan? cus that "n" sorta to me looks like a "H" but thats all i can really think of right now anyway

heres somethin i did today at a friends house, shitty camera phone pic, and i fucked it up and tried to fix it up so dont mind that little half star just above the "E"
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/1.jpg

woonybomber
03-16-2010, 11:00 PM
i thought you waz gonna say dont mind that stupid vagina lookin thing in the d

mista_dza
03-16-2010, 11:01 PM
haha ok ill fix it up, any other crits..

woonybomber
03-16-2010, 11:15 PM
dont make the hoops int he e so big unless its lowercase

mista_dza
03-16-2010, 11:44 PM
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/1111.jpg

i wanna clarify ...your talkin about where i circled?

edit:
oh and btw heres another picture..this one is a little older
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00177.jpg

TheToy
03-17-2010, 01:58 AM
He's talkin' about the center of your 'D'.

massacreman
03-17-2010, 05:20 AM
and that old throw is fresh

woonybomber
03-17-2010, 06:37 AM
i waz talking about wat you circled

smokeitup
03-17-2010, 07:58 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/9MAY2009009.jpg

done this in may last year, fucked up the fill coz it was dark and i couldnt see shit.

smoggy_mcfly
03-17-2010, 08:15 AM
8355
like this??

bump

btw ssmoke youve got a nice handy

massacreman
03-17-2010, 11:47 AM
yeah smog its better than before, i dont normally do this but ill give ou some insight with paint, ill up a pic for you

massacreman
03-17-2010, 11:55 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2z842ee.jpg

smoggy_mcfly
03-17-2010, 01:52 PM
ah i see thnx

mefe
03-17-2010, 02:00 PM
@smog.. id make the inside of the E clearer/rounder.

the face in the E was just me messing around.
crits?
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image70.jpg?t=1268848642

massacreman
03-17-2010, 02:14 PM
how long have you been writing?

viseversa101
03-17-2010, 02:22 PM
current throwie but gettin tired of the v 1/2 the time they look like ass
(supposed to be halo on vise/horns on versa for heaven n hell)
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/l_23454472bb1547129bae4ea817e34f18.jpg

mefe
03-17-2010, 02:23 PM
how long have you been writing?
about a year.... why?

kace91
03-17-2010, 03:02 PM
Everything shittie, i know.

Do you see anything wich can be improved and become "good"? any idea or advice will be welcome, ive been some time filling papers but i feel like im not advancing at all...

http://s3.subirimagenes.com:81/otros/4222780snc00700.jpg

http://s4.subirimagenes.com/otros/4222775snc00703.jpg

mefe
03-17-2010, 04:35 PM
@kace.. dont put the little spike on the K.

i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.

RemoZ
03-17-2010, 07:35 PM
OTHER THAN KAN!

Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure

gumOnShoe
03-17-2010, 09:33 PM
about a year.... why?

you're a faggot.
you suck horridly.

mista_dza
03-17-2010, 09:49 PM
and that old throw is fresh

so you like that older throw?
i guess ill have to go back and mess with that...so you know i was up for about 3 nights messing with that one 0.0 i would hope it looks somewhat good ha

CrustOner
03-18-2010, 12:02 AM
OTHER THAN KAN!

Everyone here needs to do the letters as they appear on their keyboard for awhile,not hating but none of that shit has any structure

Kan's sucks too. In my opinion, of course.

mawks
03-18-2010, 01:25 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image006-1.jpg
which you guys feelin the most?

kace, dumb it down a lil
viseversa? that shit's dumb and too long, all those letters are wack especially the v.. start over, simple, and just write vise or versa instead of both
ber, it's decent just clean it up, get rid of the holes in the e and r
dkode, the o looks like a d too, otherwise, not bad

Fury
03-18-2010, 01:30 AM
Middle one

SHER_WON_WTS
03-18-2010, 01:43 AM
those throws are great MAWKS, and yeah, middle one.

Zest3
03-18-2010, 08:27 AM
about a year.... why?

Give it up.

Fury
03-18-2010, 03:26 PM
And Mawk, looking it over again, that A doesn't fit the middle, so change that, and you'll be set.

Rosie716
03-18-2010, 03:46 PM
http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/RosieOne716/Rosie1.jpg

I know the E is a little big. something im working on. I actually like it a lot, which is rare because i usually hate all my shit. what do you guys think>?

kace91
03-18-2010, 04:26 PM
@kace.. dont put the little spike on the K.

i kinda like the E thats on the second pic in the middle of the page.


kace, dumb it down a lil

Thanks for the tips. I also like that E, but it seems a lot worse when used in the whole name, i think it doesnt "match" there.

So, you think i can stick to this one and work from it?

http://s2.subirimagenes.com/otros/4227850snc00705.jpg

Rosie716
03-18-2010, 04:38 PM
KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.

CrustOner
03-18-2010, 05:32 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/mjslcx.jpg

Thought I'd try my hand at making an original throw..

Any thoughts?

Rosie716
03-18-2010, 05:48 PM
idk man, hard for me to crit, i can barely read it, i like throws you can read. only because, whats the point of bombing if it cant be read by the majority of people ya know?

CrustOner
03-18-2010, 05:52 PM
You can't read it? It says Resist.

LeaksOne
03-18-2010, 05:57 PM
i think its coo. just work on your S's a bit and at first i mistaked your E for an S. the line down the middle threw me off

Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help.

Rosie i dont like that S and thin up the E

Zest3
03-18-2010, 06:37 PM
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/2659/62353000.jpg

LeaksOne
03-18-2010, 06:38 PM
is that what you write or is that a 2 letter? and its kinda plain. and i dont like how the E looks like a smiley face.

Rosie716
03-18-2010, 06:51 PM
oh word alright, RESIST.. its not bad. i dont like the T tho.

Zest3
03-18-2010, 06:59 PM
It's a 2 letter.
Yeah, what should I add ?

Xfish
03-18-2010, 07:07 PM
i like the throw crust i think it takes a lil bit of time to read graff when i started writing i couldnt read much graffiti and zest i personaly think you should change the ovals to lines but thats just me idk. kace the k is biger than the rest and rosie i might try a capital R but not looking too bad

LeaksOne
03-18-2010, 07:07 PM
well i would just make it basic but thats your steez. or work on the whole name then establish a style then incorporate the style in the 2 letters

Zest3
03-18-2010, 07:43 PM
Tryin new names.
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4204/31730094.jpg
Kinda like it.

kace91
03-18-2010, 09:21 PM
KACE- your K is HUGE compared to everything. That Clooks bad cuase its outta porportion. make all the letters the same size, forget bout shaddows right now. and just work on even strokes. a throwie should be something you can flow through quickly. and that doesnt look like it can be very "flowfull". just keep workin on it. keep it simple and uniform.

Thanks, i now what you mean by flowful, and you are probably right, my throwie will probably be a lot harder to paint fast than the good ones, even if the writer have the same skills. Ill try to improve that and stay simple, and of course ill work in proportion.



Kace look at big writers for inspiration on your throw. it will help.


Any suggestion? I dont know a lot of famous writers apart from seen and some others as famous as him.

LIZARD
03-18-2010, 10:20 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/857/photoon20100318at22163.jpg
new style...crits?

Xfish
03-18-2010, 10:41 PM
i really like the s but i think the rest needs work

LIZARD
03-18-2010, 10:47 PM
i was screwin around tryin to make a new S and i came up with that one which i like so all the other letters i kind forced them to match

Rosie716
03-18-2010, 10:58 PM
u can read graff man.. i just couldnt read that at first.. and idk about a capital R, i cant get one to flow as nicely, i kinda like the looks of that, pluss everything else is lowercase so i like to keep it one or the other.

Xfish
03-18-2010, 11:01 PM
yeah you could make it work if you developed those and and its cool rosie just a suggestion

LIZARD
03-18-2010, 11:39 PM
the lower case r was a bitch but i did it it to match the others ill give capital letters a try

Flawless Victory
03-19-2010, 01:50 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/260beo0.jpg

Missed last weeks battle, so fuck it.

weakfingers
03-19-2010, 01:56 AM
Tryin new names.
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/4204/31730094.jpg
Kinda like it.

This is so lazy, I really dont like it. Dont sketch your throwies, its gonna hurt you in the longrun

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 02:02 AM
Any suggestion? I dont know a lot of famous writers apart from seen and some others as famous as him.

google graffiti then. or buy a graff book. or even look in the big boy thread. lots of shit in there to see

AlecR2K
03-19-2010, 03:11 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/f2ld2u.jpg

sk 1line

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 03:12 AM
that K is really akward looking

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 04:42 AM
KACE- some big writers from my area that i always find good inspiration from are , HERT, LIONS, ATAK, CREMS. they are all pretty fucking good and different styles. check them out. justt google, "LIONS GRAFF" ect.. theres a good video of lions on youtube too.

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 04:46 AM
KACE- check out this link bro. http://fiveprime.org/hivemind/Tags/bf,graffiti

Zest3
03-19-2010, 07:09 AM
Better like this Weak ?
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9166/33955448.jpg
I really have the bad habit of sketching.
Needa lose it.

smokeitup
03-19-2010, 07:32 AM
^terrible.

Zest3
03-19-2010, 08:08 AM
Could you be a bit more constructive.
What's so terrible.

AlecR2K
03-19-2010, 11:58 AM
too many broken spots in your lines, dont sketch

RES4
03-19-2010, 01:36 PM
-zest, pick a name longer than 2 letters
-spur, s is only good letter, get rid of the hole in the e and change the r, and overlapping everything more
-flawless, only thing i dont like is the b
-alec, i really like that one liner

http://i44.tinypic.com/2hehaig.jpg

whats better small e or big e?

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 02:33 PM
ZEST- just practice one letter at a time. practice your I without sketching it. just fucking go for it, do like 20 on a page. and keep going, get one you like, the practice that on a page all by itself. start with a straight lowercase I. try to do it in one motion. keep it plain and simple. look back a few pages at how i do mine. I'm not saying that im good, but i just keep everything simple. start by trying the "I" that I do. then progress from there if you'd like.

Fury
03-19-2010, 02:35 PM
Big E. And if that's an R, change it.

massacreman
03-19-2010, 02:55 PM
who wants to exchange?
i write reset

Fury
03-19-2010, 02:59 PM
who wants to exchange?
i write reset

I write Vega. PM it to me when you're done and I'll do the same for you

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 03:00 PM
i will exchange a throwi. ROSIE. be on here later probably. might be able to get it on in a bit if i dont get walked in on while im at community service haha.

massacreman
03-19-2010, 03:10 PM
okay, ill do both. pm me the result. ill do the same
peace

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 03:13 PM
word. got it done, super quick. ill do a better one when i get home and have my shit. i like what i did, just needs a couple adjustments.

TheToy
03-19-2010, 03:27 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3129
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3120
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3121
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3130

massacreman
03-19-2010, 03:28 PM
rewt just 1 thing i dont get.
why are you painting a V with the name rewt?
peace

-Empty-Can-
03-19-2010, 03:30 PM
square "Rewt" dood

Fury
03-19-2010, 03:36 PM
It's a cool idea, but you need to make it more apparent that it's a square root symbol, and not a V.

massacreman
03-19-2010, 03:44 PM
ooooh its a root, now i get it, define it more, the idea is good

TheToy
03-19-2010, 03:47 PM
People that know math know what it is.

It only looks like a 'V' to those who live inside the box...

I want it to be bubbly like a throw. The local writers know what it is.

I'm gonna' start putting "Know your roots." next to that hog. Make people think about that one.

Fury
03-19-2010, 04:02 PM
You could do the square root of negative one, more people might get it then.
Or just put an i for imaginary!

TheToy
03-19-2010, 04:07 PM
You could do the square root of negative one, more people might get it then.

I'll go with a 1. Cause I've been writing UMREWT in my hands. A square root of a negative number is a non-real number.

And I'm real. :p

Fury
03-19-2010, 04:09 PM
That'd be good too haha. Just as long as you make it super obvious what it is (like Pi), you'll be good.

Zest3
03-19-2010, 06:04 PM
Guys, is this better, or is it the letter that suck ?
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/3281/it001.jpg
Maybe I should thicken the bottom of the I

CrustOner
03-19-2010, 07:11 PM
Rewt, I'd suggest bringing the left part down, it'd look better in my opinion.

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 07:28 PM
ZEST if your not gonna take peoples crits then just fucking stop posting dude.. we dont want to see sketched shit, we dont want to see the same exact thing we just saw drawn again, we dont want any of that.. go back and ready every single post for like the past 3 pages.

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

TheToy
03-19-2010, 07:48 PM
REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

It's not my fault if the people that think it's a 'V' didn't make it through 8th grade math...

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 07:51 PM
just an opinion man, i like when people can read my graff. makes me feel good when i hear at a party "did you see that rosie piece off the 190". by all means dude, keep doin what you do. if its gettin you big ups congrats.. i just am givin my opinion.

TheToy
03-19-2010, 08:04 PM
I know where you're coming from.

When I make the bottom part of the symbol that does look like a 'v' with the slant it looks funky. It doesn't look like a throw. I think Crust is right about dropping the left part down a little bit.

It's an abstract throwie. I want people to think a little bit.

hpir
03-19-2010, 08:51 PM
toy- not a bad idea make it more disticd tho
zest3-make your bottems tha same size i suppose
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kan001-2.jpg
crits?

RemoZ
03-19-2010, 09:00 PM
KAN - Do you just keep posting the same thing asking for crits? It seems every time you post it is the exact same...

hpir
03-19-2010, 09:37 PM
no actualy first post of this in here so...

Rosie716
03-19-2010, 10:31 PM
KAN your bomb on the right looks decent. needs work. deff looks bit, your thing in the middle is ugly. too fat. the N should have openings if the rest of it does. loose the extensions. they dont look good.

Zest3
03-19-2010, 10:33 PM
ZEST if your not gonna take peoples crits then just fucking stop posting dude.. we dont want to see sketched shit, we dont want to see the same exact thing we just saw drawn again, we dont want any of that.. go back and ready every single post for like the past 3 pages.

REWT- you said, "writers around here know what it is..." but dude, you should want everyone to know what it is..to layman's your just a person writing a V, wouldnt you rather be thought of as a, "mathmetician writing graff" idk just my opinion.

By sketch, do you mean like i should color and shit ?

Xfish
03-19-2010, 10:35 PM
no draw lines dont pick up the pencil when you do just draw

LIZARD
03-19-2010, 11:25 PM
kan-bullshit thats ur first post,i told u that the shadow under the N doesnt make sense and u can see where u erased it hahaha

Jwhite
03-19-2010, 11:53 PM
Just a few quick ones, toy or not? crits?

LIZARD
03-19-2010, 11:56 PM
go simple and lose all those extensions

Jwhite
03-19-2010, 11:57 PM
go simple and lose all those extensions

Ight, the basics of the letters decent at least?

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 12:01 AM
id say the 2nd one is a little better but both should look alot simpler...i know everyone on this site says the same thing but do keyboard letters first and once u get those down try to get ur own style goin. i wouldnt really call those throws either

Jwhite
03-20-2010, 12:04 AM
i know everyone on this site says the same thing but do keyboard letters first and once u get those down try to get ur own style goin.


Keyboard?

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 12:08 AM
look down at the letters your typing on and do those :)...do bars just keep it simple for a while

Jwhite
03-20-2010, 12:21 AM
haha thanks ^.^

ReSeM
03-20-2010, 03:40 PM
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0011.jpg
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0014.jpg

Zest3
03-20-2010, 04:22 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4792/it002.jpg
Kay this time (yellow thing) wasn't sketched .

Discretion
03-20-2010, 04:43 PM
http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r358/future101000/032010124947.jpg

http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r358/future101000/032010124312.jpg

Zest3
03-20-2010, 04:46 PM
Discretion : I thought, at first, your R was a fucked up H, so yea.
Oh and for the block letters, practice your paper before.
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4792/it002.jpg

Fury
03-20-2010, 04:47 PM
Keep working on your simp. As for your throw, I don't feel like the R and the E match up.

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 04:52 PM
rase-alot more paper before u paint it
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style, i couldnt think of a good r to match...crits?

smoggy_mcfly
03-20-2010, 04:58 PM
lizard i like it

Discretion
03-20-2010, 05:03 PM
thanx for crits. i found this spot walking home and it was chill so i went home and grabbed a can to go practice

Zest3
03-20-2010, 05:04 PM
rase-alot more paper before u paint it
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style, i couldnt think of a good r to match...crits?
Is it a U or a V ?
Anyway, I don't like the bubble under the U or V, but I like the rest.

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 05:06 PM
its a V, bubble v's always look like u's...what about the r cuz i have a feeling it sucks more then the rest

CrustOner
03-20-2010, 05:09 PM
yeah, that R is weak. Eliminate negative space

BlacktodaFuture
03-20-2010, 05:14 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03471.jpg?t=1269119598

quickie, not a fan of my R

Zest3
03-20-2010, 05:19 PM
My eyes r burnin.
Seriously, I can't see any of the letters, and if the first is a S, def work on your structure.

kew1
03-20-2010, 06:53 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-20_1247.jpg

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 07:11 PM
negative space?

Flawless Victory
03-20-2010, 08:20 PM
My eyes r burnin.
Seriously, I can't see any of the letters, and if the first is a S, def work on your structure.
No, that S is straight.
Not my style, but it's not bad structure wise, Safe.
The R could be a little better, maybe try a capital one.

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
03-20-2010, 08:25 PM
use more eye friendly colors. jeeeszus

Rosie716
03-20-2010, 09:36 PM
ZEST- Finally gettin it dude! someone who actually takes advice, i like it.. keep workin at it tho.. always room for improvment!

Zest3
03-20-2010, 10:09 PM
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/6821/it003.jpg
Is it getting better?

Sesh-it-up
03-20-2010, 10:48 PM
kew-drop that w now.
backtodafuture- black white chrome blue and red
sevr- i dont like the bottom of the V but dont get me rong she is nice and smooth

Sesh-it-up
03-20-2010, 10:49 PM
sevr spin the bubble on the R so it looks like its a speech bubble comin outa the bar of the R...i donno how it'll look just an idea.

Edit: that doesnt make sence.. but spin the bubble so the poin is inside the R not on the out side.

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 11:43 PM
zest-bring the t out farther from the i, its kinda lookin like a p cuz half of the like on the t is behind the i
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg
better R?...crits?

BlacktodaFuture
03-20-2010, 11:45 PM
those two cans were the only ones i had left. i said the same thing. R is too big and weak, structure is fine should be cleaner but the cans were also running out. but thx for crits

kew: looks too smushed down

RemoZ
03-20-2010, 11:47 PM
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp255/grewupafuckenscrewup/egobomb.jpg

kew1
03-21-2010, 12:11 AM
kew-drop that w now.
backtodafuture- black white chrome blue and red
sevr- i dont like the bottom of the V but dont get me rong she is nice and smooth
ik dude like for reall i cant come up with one

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 12:41 AM
new R...crits?
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg

Jwhite
03-21-2010, 01:39 AM
new R...crits?
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg


im not really feelin the bubble on the bottom of the V,

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 02:40 AM
other people said that to, its just there to make it look more like a V then a U...how else can i do it to look like the right letter?

Bets369R
03-21-2010, 03:00 AM
looks like SEYR.

make it pointed at the bottom like a normal V

Zest3
03-21-2010, 08:06 AM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5443/it004.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
03-21-2010, 11:09 AM
bottom T

top I

markingz.
03-21-2010, 12:19 PM
http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp255/grewupafuckenscrewup/egobomb.jpg
stop biting remos cunt face

RemoZ
03-21-2010, 12:27 PM
Who calm down douche dick, first of thats not me. 2nd who is he biting?

markingz.
03-21-2010, 12:35 PM
haha you joke, ima just post people idont know or that are not me cuase i suck cock lmfao fag

RemoZ
03-21-2010, 12:45 PM
Right...I'm joking it isn't possible to throw the work of a friend on here at all. I've posted MY work on here you ass. I do not write EGOS, I'm sure quite a few people here can tell you that.

Why the fuck am I even defending myself against you...

Zest3
03-21-2010, 12:51 PM
stop biting remos cunt face
Hey bro calm down.
This kid may be bitin but he still has the guts to do this shit.
Anywayhttp://img718.imageshack.us/img718/2098/44109692.jpg

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 01:01 PM
you really need to stop filling like that. even if its just on paper

Zest3
03-21-2010, 01:06 PM
Well, I'm quick filling cuz I'm just working on the structure for now.
But yea, I'll consider that next time

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 01:18 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/65namh.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/e0oc1.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/35n66q9.jpg

Zest3
03-21-2010, 01:24 PM
Alec - I like it except for the K or H, i can't tell.

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 01:25 PM
i could tell it was a k but it needs work compared to the other letters, i like it though other then that

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 01:26 PM
its sink & sk. the Ks kinda give me trouble, first two are so wack, 3rd is improved, i like it.

CrustOner
03-21-2010, 01:39 PM
I dig it.

Zest3
03-21-2010, 04:11 PM
Which one ?
This : http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/4117/which1.jpg
This : http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/863/which2.jpg
Or This : http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/3200/which3.jpg

mefe
03-21-2010, 04:35 PM
yo does anyone have any tips on throw up G's... im having mad troubles with G's.

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 04:52 PM
zest-i like the face on the i but the whole heart thing sucks...do the first one but make the bottom of the t thinner

Zest3
03-21-2010, 04:58 PM
Yeah, I fucking suck with Ts right now xD

mefe
03-21-2010, 05:06 PM
this is a very..very ruff drawing (new name)

crits? (i know that the sizing is bad)
http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz336/mefeman/Image71.jpg?t=1269205454

Zest3
03-21-2010, 05:10 PM
Rouge... You know what it means right ?
First, your throwie (especially the R) looks like it has been shaked. By this i mean that the lines are really sloppy.
Second, the size of the letters. Compare the O and the E.

Anyway, there's a lot o' work to do, but I'm sure you could come up with sumthin good.
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8033/it010.jpg

-Empty-Can-
03-21-2010, 05:36 PM
I like it. Just make the T as tall as the I.

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 06:08 PM
zest-alot better

savager
03-21-2010, 06:18 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m111/1CES/iPhonee010.jpg

crits? I was thinking about getting this up all over a wall at school or something.
LOLOLOL carried on and on...

Zest, looks legit man, keep up.

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 06:21 PM
make the L round so it matches the O more....why lol?

Zest3
03-21-2010, 06:22 PM
Good idea savager, but I'd work on the fluidity and the fillin. I like the colors though.

-Empty-Can-
03-21-2010, 06:30 PM
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m111/1CES/iPhonee010.jpg
crits? I was thinking about getting this up all over a wall at school or something.
LOLOLOL carried on and on...


http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/lol002.jpg
Naww man, this is how you do it =D

savager
03-21-2010, 06:33 PM
Thanks for the input guys.

The fill was supposed to be 'ghetto' hahaha, but yee i could definitely work on some shit.

And as for why I might do that, because i can ofc !

EDIT: Empty Can, hahaha thats tight man. i think i might go with a lower case 'L'... Thanks!

Zest3
03-21-2010, 06:55 PM
Hey guys !
So I said maybe u'd like to see my progession.
Anyway, scroll at the bottom :
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2255&page=11&highlight=progression

Zest3
03-21-2010, 07:20 PM
http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/6376/78443121.jpg
That's the tallest I can go without making it look ridiculous.

CrustOner
03-21-2010, 07:30 PM
It already looks ridiculous.

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 07:35 PM
t still should be thinner,make the i thinner to match

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 07:35 PM
lol

Fury
03-21-2010, 07:37 PM
CYNDAQUiL!
And oh, how I miss the signature craze when I was around 12 haha.

Zest3
03-21-2010, 08:01 PM
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9582/yeaho.jpg
I am not responsible for any eye injury.

Rosie716
03-21-2010, 08:08 PM
zest, make your I and T the same size over all.. the I is larger than the T and it doesnt look right. height wise anyway.

mefe
03-21-2010, 08:34 PM
zest.. if you make the ball of your i more attached to the lower part like you did before, you could make the t bigger and it would look cleaner.... i think

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 08:38 PM
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/859/photoon20100321at20332.jpg
how do i make it look more like a v but keep the bubble style....crits?

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 10:21 PM
CYNDAQUiL!
And oh, how I miss the signature craze when I was around 12 haha.

i love my pokes

suparjafar
03-21-2010, 10:23 PM
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg
roes throw from yesterday

BeaN
03-21-2010, 11:41 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb49/Ghostpunk/throwie.jpg

just a quick throwie to start me off at the site

Sesh-it-up
03-22-2010, 12:07 AM
nice bean, hope to see more of u, stick around for a bit.

massacreman
03-22-2010, 05:05 AM
just a quick throwie to start me off at the site

welcome to the BS forum
enjoy yourself

Zest3
03-22-2010, 07:29 AM
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/8580/itlol.jpg
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1462/yayzi.jpg

Sesh-it-up
03-22-2010, 08:32 AM
ok stop with that stupid throw.

massacreman
03-22-2010, 08:51 AM
yeah gtfo outta here fool, no for real dude

Capo Izi
03-22-2010, 12:13 PM
I haven't been in the game for probably 6 months now, but I'm getting back in, this is my throw currently...

8462

Zest3- It's okay...but make the I and T the same size, and work on doing it without letting your pen up, in like one movement, so it all flows better. You can clearly see where you've messed up, by the shaky lines. Also get structure down before color, it helps.

Beanz-I like it, it's new-age looking, not like the ones you normally see, but the B and E need work, so they work better together, maybe it's just me, but I think if you work on those letters, it'll all come together better.

suparjafar-definitely needs work, stick to paper bro.

Punk Cy
03-22-2010, 12:47 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4454028251_5a17d6d0ce.jpg

Rosie716
03-22-2010, 01:23 PM
ZEST, you made them the same height, but you fattened your T so it looks worse.. make them the same width and height..

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 03:47 PM
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/859/photoon20100321at20332.jpg
how do i make it look more like a v but keep the bubble style....crits?

Add an Arrow pointing downwards inside the V instead of that line, thats what i used to do on V's

Also.. New throw with a new name just testing it out. Crits?
Sorry my camera is fuckkedd

RemoZ
03-22-2010, 04:01 PM
PIUS? do the letters as they appear when you type on a computer. Don't try to make them look "GRAFFITI" you have no structure or anything all that looks blobish

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 04:08 PM
PIUS? do the letters as they appear when you type on a computer. Don't try to make them look "GRAFFITI" you have no structure or anything all that looks blobish

just a new name i was testing. and any tips then?

massacreman
03-22-2010, 04:19 PM
remoz just gave you the tip, however he needs to follow up his own crits
do them like on your keyboard. MASTER IT all the letters, keyboard style

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 04:22 PM
remoz just gave you the tip, however he needs to follow up his own crits
do them like on your keyboard. MASTER IT all the letters, keyboard style

just draw the letter reg style from my keyboard then add to it?

ChadWarden
03-22-2010, 04:22 PM
I was thinking about getting this up all over a wall at school or something.
LOLOLOL carried on and on...


http://i39.tinypic.com/opqwlj.jpg


that's what you should write. just lolololololololololololololololololol

and every time you bomb, just entirely wrap the building you're hitting with lol's.

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 04:41 PM
Amidoinitright?
Rough

Rosie716
03-22-2010, 04:57 PM
JWHITE- you got the idea, keep practicing, keep all your letters the same size. use bars to create your letters. every part should be the same thickness.. on that particular drawing you ushould be able to see the left side of the L inside the P... keep practicin.

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 05:02 PM
Gotcha, thanks

Capo Izi
03-22-2010, 05:11 PM
I haven't been in the game for probably 6 months now, but I'm getting back in, this is my throw currently...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=8462

Zest3- It's okay...but make the I and T the same size, and work on doing it without letting your pen up, in like one movement, so it all flows better. You can clearly see where you've messed up, by the shaky lines. Also get structure down before color, it helps.

Beanz-I like it, it's new-age looking, not like the ones you normally see, but the B and E need work, so they work better together, maybe it's just me, but I think if you work on those letters, it'll all come together better.

suparjafar-definitely needs work, stick to paper bro.

crits?

suparjafar
03-22-2010, 06:28 PM
crits?

the whole thing is wack, start over

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 06:51 PM
Improvement??

Harp
03-22-2010, 08:40 PM
capo- i dig that alot
jwhite- def

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/Mobile%20Uploads/0322102032.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/Mobile%20Uploads/0313100040.jpg
crits?

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 08:42 PM
all the sharp edges look really bad, i recommend you scrap it

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 09:44 PM
lose the the dollar sign,arrows, and that twirl...keep it regular letters until u get it down before u add shit like that

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 09:45 PM
just fucked around with some new prismas i got,

Thanks harp,
i dont like the sharp edges on the last one though

-Empty-Can-
03-22-2010, 09:48 PM
^ I think the first one you posted at the top is the best. Has potential. Try to keep your letters & bars consistent though.


Anyone wanna have a friendly battle? Haven't sketched in a while and need some motivation.

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 09:51 PM
i used bars on the most recent one, but i can definitely see improvement

-Empty-Can-
03-22-2010, 09:55 PM
Yeah, I know. I'm saying keep them the same width and size.

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 10:00 PM
workin on that, thanks man

viseversa101
03-22-2010, 10:14 PM
stock caps suck but i tried my best for being in high populated areas >:(
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/0320101905a.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10791.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10788.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10793.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/0320101939a.jpg

RemoZ
03-22-2010, 10:14 PM
Jwhite, you're already getting a little better. But use bars to from each leeter here is a quick example of what we mean
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/9836/photo44.jpg

Then erase and tweak

woonybomber
03-22-2010, 10:18 PM
vise are you the fat nigguh?
jk

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 10:29 PM
Ye Remoz im doin a bit of that on a new throw right now

viseversa101
03-22-2010, 10:45 PM
No man lmao it aint me its just sum randoms in the way

vise are you the fat nigguh?
jk

-Dank-DK-
03-22-2010, 11:36 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/sdjjhu.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/2dgjo2c.jpg
my girls name
http://i43.tinypic.com/2d6tdgj.jpg

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 11:38 PM
Improvements? :) (connected the letters

RemoZ
03-22-2010, 11:40 PM
It is an improvement, fuck around in the exchange thread too. Doing other names/letters help alot and it helps to see what people can do with your name

Jwhite
03-22-2010, 11:41 PM
It is an improvement, fuck around in the exchange thread too. Doing other names/letters help alot and it helps to see what people can do with your name

Will do, thanks

viseversa101
03-23-2010, 12:19 AM
<<gf then vise>>
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10814.jpg

RemoZ
03-23-2010, 12:26 AM
Lose that style completely.

LIZARD
03-23-2010, 12:34 AM
vise-that first letter has to go...try a different style

CrustOner
03-23-2010, 01:21 AM
Everything about that has to go. And your girlfriend's name is Isis? Dope.

Zest3
03-23-2010, 07:27 AM
http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4967/itz.jpg
Trying to add/remove things.

sex without condoms
03-23-2010, 10:56 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/jules%20and%20jail/142631.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/jules%20and%20jail/181741.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/jules%20and%20jail/181817-1.jpg

Jwhite
03-23-2010, 03:15 PM
Any ideas on what i can change..? im tired of it looking so simp.

smoggy_mcfly
03-23-2010, 03:41 PM
well try to make bubble letters out of your simp
still keep it simple though

AlecR2K
03-23-2010, 03:48 PM
sex without condoms, last one is so fresh. love the colors

-Empty-Can-
03-23-2010, 04:08 PM
Plus- if your trying to make a throwie then round it out and make your letters bubbly. but still keep is simple for now.