Throwies

[iPwnF00lz]

make the bulgy parts of g and e go straight down to connect with the shape of the letters. aka cut off the extra spaces.

[NICCSACC]

how am i hating ?? it looks like shit. are we llooking at the same throw??? the purple one right? (and i aint saying sorry to you like THAT im just saying it because i feel bad about having to be real.) i hate telling people they suck. fuck you anyway marqueen. just leave me alone lemon head.

[viseversa101]

did u see i said it was new, 1st 1 so yea its gona need help
u saying its ass n sucks does me no good nicklebag

[markingz.]

vise ill tell you some advice make your letters rounder homie try it out man see how it works test it it should help man really try it and tell me how it went

[hpir]

shitty camera
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture142.jpg
crits

[NICCSACC]

did u see i said it was new, 1st 1 so yea its gona need help
u saying its ass n sucks does me no good nicklebag
i was just being honest. ive been called everything in the book when i get crits "you suck" "you arent as great as you think you are" "try simples" "i cant read it" etc...

im sorry if i said something out of line that didnt help you. but id say you should try making all the letters proportionate to each other. throw a drop on it real nice and smooth-like. and youre golden.
again, i didnt mean to get you pissed or whatever.

{{all i said is that its wack. not a big deal.}}

[viseversa101]

no dont get me wrong bro im not heated at all,
and that statement wasnt directed towards u that much
it was a general idea all the people tryna crit
should take into consideration just sayin no its wack doesnt help ne1
thanx for ur input tho il post up urs n markings ideas ina bit, still doodling

[NICCSACC]

great!

it was just real talk. if my shits ever that bad just say its wack strate up.

id take it and build off it.
peace

[The Average Homeboy]

VISE!

This is what I ment by my crits notice I really didnt change much on your throw other than the letters are in line and the ISE are a little tweaked.


http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7442/photolh.jpg

[viseversa101]

ty kindly

[woonybomber]

work on your e vise
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-8.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-13.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff010-6.jpg
crits

[Zookyook]

vise- all u gotta do is throw a straight or squiggly line in the middle of ur E and do the IS like homeboy showed u... and the 3d in this looks bad, use the black for 3d and the light purple to outline it all
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC10981.jpg

woony-i dont like ur W's man, maybe make the straight lines just look like an upside down U instead... the E is real strong, but with the N make those middle lines match up and itll look way better

[NICCSACC]

work on your e vise
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-8.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-13.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff010-6.jpg
crits
shits hot. nuff sed.

[smokeitup]

VISE!

This is what I ment by my crits notice I really didnt change much on your throw other than the letters are in line and the ISE are a little tweaked.


http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7442/photolh.jpg

whats up with that e, it looks fucked. vise's original e was better than that, atleast u can tell its an e.

[markingz.]

the average homeboys new name should be the average sucky artist

[viseversa101]

haha i been chattin with the woman n doodling these ima post em up ina sec,
markings i did what u suggested
n rounded it out too a little n found a style so stay tuned!

[markingz.]

hell yeah homie, glad i could help, ill give you more advice too later

[viseversa101]

top 2 only difference is the left of the v....undecided atm
bottom right is what i came up with with markings suggestions
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC10992.jpg
only sketches

[markingz.]

nice vise,that looks good now just make the lines less shaky and you got it

[viseversa101]

yea im kinda addicted to nicotine so i do that sumtimes
after listening to a few crits il bb it with color n repost
till then, more crits gogo!

[markingz.]

in general lookin prettY FLY

[smokeitup]

if i were you vise, i would do your e like this:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/015.jpg

and heres somethin i did

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/014.jpg

[viseversa101]

u know i had another throwie in mind but was strugglin on the e...
this e tho....i needs to try it!

[TheToy]

Bump Woony.

[Bars]

Woner, shit looks raw. I disagree and think the W is pretty fresh.

I haven't really drawn in a while. Just made this quick one up: RESK.
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/2210/img000204.jpg

[Zookyook]

that looks like an unfinished piece bars... not a throwup by any means... the S and K look too short and fat, the headphone guy looks pretty cool, color that bitch!

[Bars]

Eh not really a piece, it's kind of my throw mixed with a shitty piece.

Have been having troubles working with my K. I agree they look fat and outta place. Will fix.

[viseversa101]

as it stands now ur r and k look identical

[Bars]

Thats the reason im having trouble with the K...

[ChadWarden]

http://i39.tinypic.com/29xw51s.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

^^^

fuckin dope i love it

[LIZARD]

bars-the R and the K look exactly the same other then the dot on the R...make it more defined,dope though keep it up

[otter]

Vise-Ill do your name tomorrow,cause most of these crits don't make sense

[Werse]

http://i39.tinypic.com/29xw51s.jpg

Sooo steezy

[viseversa101]

sounds good my man

[Sesh-it-up]

chad thats too stezzy imo
Edit... six oh three ???

[Werse]

Yeah.

[Zookyook]

i think itd be the perfect 'steez' if it had a quick 3d... just doesnt look right standing alone like that... but chad merks throws...

[Werse]

You should print those out on vinyl and sell it to me so I can put it on my snowboard haha.

[otter]

Vise:if you are sketching now change your e make it like this: E without the openings

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image1482.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image1082.jpg

[smokeitup]

1 more..

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image1242.jpg

[viseversa101]

Vise:if you are sketching now change your e make it like this: E without the openings


a square 8?

[take2]

CHAD IS SOOOO STEEZY

fugaround I heart sharpy paint markers
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/8990bd90.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/d57db113.jpg

[viseversa101]

u need to practice ur k, 1st 1 i cant even tell wtf it is, 2nd 1 looks like an h in my eyes

[The Average Homeboy]

That K is weak and what is tha shit coming off your e?

Id add an extra little bump to the K just to show its a k.

[Zookyook]

yea im not even gonna say anything bout the e... but the k just needs another bump, like deez....(i suck at mspaint but u see what i mean)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2772/4531745353_94a914045c_o.jpg

[take2]

lol thnx.

I fixed the E and the K but messed up a bit on the bump but it doesnt matter cus i'll get used to it. E is still a little big and my marker is running out of ink but w/e
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/ec89e1a5.jpg

[The Average Homeboy]

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/82/l_582e14459a034953828ac92e268c2b41.jpg

[The Average Homeboy]

http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/145/l_3df7b3604dc64fcbbe2112df14ff380b.jpg

[LIZARD]

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8712/photoon20100418at2318.jpg
i was just doodlin and i kinda like this but ill redo it cuz the letters get bigger as it goes on and i dont know if ill keep the face....crits?

[The Average Homeboy]

The G is more of a C. Just keep practicing, you're on the right track.

[LIZARD]

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/ad286/lad17/Photoon2010-04-19at1238-1.jpg
better G?

[NICCSACC]

cool jason mask guy and also the ginsu blasde is fresh.

[Zookyook]

wore nice size on the throws... id work on the lower half of the R and W though, lines crossing looks good but not going both ways u know what i mean? only let the lines cross in one direction and itll look fresha!

[IllLogic]

http://i790.photobucket.com/albums/yy190/beeazyy901/slick-1.jpg

http://i790.photobucket.com/albums/yy190/beeazyy901/retro.jpg

http://i790.photobucket.com/albums/yy190/beeazyy901/slick2.jpg




i have better but my cameras busted for now. crits...?

[gumOnShoe]

um, don't sketch your throw, first off.
doing so is not the way to go, trust me.
do it without sketching next time.
(The Third Picture)
the L is too high up, try lowering it a bit.
the I kinda saggs down like a 70 year old's tits, make your letters erect.
you can LEAN them, if you like, but don't sag it.


oh, and was that retro bitten?
looks familiar....

[gumOnShoe]

crit this.
VVV
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo33.jpg

[IllLogic]

yeah it said metro but i just changed it cuz its not my tag, but thanks ill try that. & i like your style

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000707.jpg

[liquid dreams]

throwie exchanges?

[Zookyook]

the A and S are good smoke... they match, but none of the other letters match those

[NICCSACC]

illogics is pretty fresh to me. just gotta try to put your shit up fast as you can. thats the key basically. AND make it look good.

[Zookyook]

what he said ^^

throws are all about speed and style, start with speed and work ur way to style when ur comfortable with doing faster lines

[IllLogic]

thanks for the crits ill deff try tht

[gumOnShoe]

http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo38.jpg

[Fury]

^ Looks pretty solid dude. Nothing to really change about it, just get some 3D and do it quick.

[TheToy]

http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo38.jpg

I dig your 'E'.

Kinda' reminds me of mine but yours is way better.

:p

[LeaksOne]

gum ive always liked your throws. keep it up man!

[CrustOner]

Just not diggin' how thin the I is.

[gumOnShoe]

gum ive always liked your throws. keep it up man!

Thanks man, means alot.

@Crust: Yeah, i see what you mean.
at the time i was just doing it and it looked proportionate to me, so i just kept on. i'll watch out for my proportions next time though, thanks.

[NICCSACC]

I dig your 'E'.

Kinda' reminds me of mine but yours is way better.

:pyo i lwant to see that painted cuz its fresh to death @ gumonshoe

[Zookyook]

i think the I is fine in thickness, its the dot thats too small... big dots look betta!

[viseversa101]

it is what it is
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11015.jpg

less shit more crits

[viseversa101]

gum-make the dot of the i larger......

[markingz.]

haha yo vise that shits juicy, there are some things i would add though, i have such a dope throwy idea for you, but i know you dont like usings others styles but still i hope youll try mine once i post it up

[Jwhite]

Vise that shit is on fire, your improving bro

New name, first throw attempt on it, Crits?
http://i42.tinypic.com/s49i85.jpg

[markingz.]

hey dude, change the flat lines to curves but well rounded curves

[viseversa101]

that idea came from ur suggestions, heres the og
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11017.jpg
crits?

[Jwhite]

prolly the best crit ive gotten, made it look much better man thanks

[markingz.]

np brah, post the finished one ill try an help ya more peace;)

[markingz.]

thats dope vise comin along!

[Xfish]

it is what it is
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11015.jpg

less shit more crits

really good sept im not digging the e the middle part is too big

[CrustOner]

Vise, those aren't dope, homie. Keep working at it.

[markingz.]

yo vise, make the right part of your v taller, and make the whole top s bar point straight and the e bars straight try it out

[Jwhite]

http://i40.tinypic.com/13z9vvd.jpg

improv on the last?

[markingz.]

hey vise, alot of your color schemes look european, some good solid bomb color schemes in america are black fill, yellow out, white fill blue out, black fill red out, yellow fill black out, white fill green out

[markingz.]

http://i40.tinypic.com/13z9vvd.jpg

improv on the last?
thats better man, heres some tips to help you, first k's are hard to do a bomb with heres what i suggest for your throw, first do a normal k but make it puffy try not to have alot of straight lines in it, thne use a lower case r but make it puffy too, the n do a normal o but make it more puffy then you have it in the picture, then keep the m and e but make the middle m part where you have a triangle a curve then keep the same e, try that out and see how it goes

[Jwhite]

http://i41.tinypic.com/t7fion.jpg

as such? i need to improve the r, i dig this though.

[LIZARD]

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/ad286/lad17/Photoon2010-04-21at20032.jpg
quick sketch but i turned out to like it...i know the lines are gross and the shadow is off but i was stuck waiting in a car for a while and i got bored

[markingz.]

http://i41.tinypic.com/t7fion.jpg

as such? i need to improve the r, i dig this though.
much better man, work on making the bottoms and tops of the letters more and more round and you got it,

[NICCSACC]

it is what it is
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11015.jpg

less shit more crits
now THAT "SE" is funky. work on the "V" and "I" and youre golden. props cuz its alot better than before.

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000403.jpg

[del4sel]

Don't be putting that shit up ^^^ around my neighborhood, it makes my blood boil :mad:

[TheToy]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000403.jpg

The 'e' is decent. The rest is a big mess. Better step it up.

Catch a fuck *****' throwin' up bullshit in my hood like that and it's all over.

[NICCSACC]

looks fresh son. keep that ish up yo!!

[fuckit]

feedback on some stuff?
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8079.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8077.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8078.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8073.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8075.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8072.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

4th is the best. Keep doing things like that.

[fuckit]

some simples
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8081.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8082.jpg

[markingz.]

nice simples eons!

id go with that first!

[Werse]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4030/4543801879_a009af4015_o.jpg

Got bored in geometry today haha. I suck at 3D and I hate that Y.

[NICCSACC]

that G is tight

[fuckit]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8084.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8085.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8086.jpg
different steps of the same thing. not sure which one i like the most. i think the first basic color one.
i only have a black orange and red right now lol

[NICCSACC]

first one is betetr

[Werse]

Thanks niccsacc.

Eons, dont worry about coloring your shit and just keep sketching that simp out in pencil.

[fuckit]

tried simple but a little diff. this would be for like the bottom of a wall.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8087.jpg

[zaco]

[QUOTE=fuckit;1604060]feedback on some stuff?
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8079.jpg
the bottom orange one is dope

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/daisssssssssss.jpg
feedback

[Werse]

tried simple but a little diff. this would be for like the bottom of a wall.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8087.jpg

Much better imo.
Keep the bars consistent all the way through and it will be good.

[NICCSACC]

Yeah but tha handy gotsta go

[fuckit]

lol. i still dont know the idea behind tha handy. ive always had massive amounts of issues with them.

[IllLogic]

feedback on some stuff?
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8079.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8077.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8078.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8073.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8075.jpg
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8072.jpg

im digginn the second one style is dope

[IllLogic]

3rd i ment

[adio1218]

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp172/adio1218/bomb1.jpg

[Jwhite]

i dunno what your talking about lol that handy is pretty simp and clean

[fuckit]

just found this thought it was funny.http://kyletalbott.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/dont-press.jpg

[viseversa101]

ahaha fuckin a

[SicK-]

eons- i really like your 4th one i think you should continue doing that. but your N definitly needs some work

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Daisthrowie.jpg crits?

[fuckit]

did this for an exchange.
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8088.jpg

[viseversa101]

nice 1, look at it though the spaces in the r dont go with the rest that well...good tho

[fuckit]

yea im not used to the Rs. and i knew it didnt look right. lol.
nowww loooking at it
i didnt keep the overall right to left downward line design going. the leg on the R fucks the flow.

[viseversa101]

so yea ughh...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11019-1.jpg

[LeaksOne]

dont do faces....and that looks like it says U E/I S T/E

[markingz.]

what? telling dood dont do faces, that throw is good vise now just paint it, btw very unique idea with the faces man very unique and original

[markingz.]

hey weak id like to battle you once just for fun lol

[LeaksOne]

haha how are faces unique? and that throw needs more definition. the E looke like it could be a lower case T, im not sure why the I is 2 dots, the S needs work and the arrow is not helping it at all, and the V doesnt even look like a V.

[markingz.]

hehe kids gettin there...

[kringe]

Fuckit, I write Eons too. Lol.

[ReSeM]

post your pieces kringe

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03600.jpg?t=1272060385

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03594.jpg?t=1272060099

[fuckit]

are u in america kringe?

[tobY flendersoN]

dont matter unless you guys are in the same state or anything

[fuckit]

unless i plan on goin all country :) i like to travel. bishes.

[del4sel]

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/S9Ng2KRHVSI/AAAAAAAAADY/jVsyKeAsYUA/s1600/Sav-Ice.jpg

[Jwhite]

http://i44.tinypic.com/awytkp.jpg

Crits / help with improvements?

Edit: yes i know the proportions are off i did it in 2 mins for an example

[MoganOne]

http://i44.tinypic.com/awytkp.jpg

Crits / help with improvements?

Edit: yes i know the proportions are off i did it in 2 mins for an example

The "e" bottom right side needs a full curve rather than a drop..
The Middle of the M is really wack. It need to look way different than the "Y" look you gave it...
Mogan<~

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0425001311.jpg

Crit?

[LeaksOne]

MEquestionmark!

regular bubble letters. your getting ahead of yourself. your forcing that style

[fuckit]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8090.jpg

[fuckit]

and mogan ur shadow is a little off.

[Mr yarbles]

http://i41.tinypic.com/xmjvh3.jpg

FK and SAFE.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mog.jpg

Crit?

[fuckit]

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m85/Sohc94/DSCF8091.jpg

[LeaksOne]

mogan you didnt change a thing....now it looks like meg. simple bubble letters

eons thats not a throw....

[smokeitup]

http://i44.tinypic.com/awytkp.jpg

Crits / help with improvements?

Edit: yes i know the proportions are off i did it in 2 mins for an example

dope man, i like your steez

[SKM]

I fucking suck so hardcore at throwies, crits would be much appreciated.
Apologies for the shitty colors, I have limited supplies.
http://i43.tinypic.com/55hsv5.png

[Zookyook]

fuggin 'round with sharpies while vice finishes my exchange... nothin fancy...
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3465/4554009271_fd23b234eb_o.jpg

broke out my decos on my box of markers... OTR has these plastic boxes n its a cool texture to paint over... i miss my one4all's
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4023/4554649378_1f90001fa9_o.jpg

[smokeitup]

that first throwy is dope man.

[viseversa101]

smoke where u been? ....u dont associate much no moe

[smokeitup]

i've been on here, just not posting much anymore.

[viseversa101]

haha same here bro just enough to show im alive

[SKM]

I fucking suck so hardcore at throwies, crits would be much appreciated.
Apologies for the shitty colors, I have limited supplies.
http://i43.tinypic.com/55hsv5.png
bizzump.

[fuckit]

u ever taken a picture before? focusss

[SKM]

u ever taken a picture before? focusss
Yeah, I sharpend it in photoshop however I didn't shoot in the best lighting conditions. It gets the structure across, anyway.

[LeaksOne]

i've been on here, just not posting much anymore.

THAT IS SUCH A FUCKING LIE

you posted in EVERY thread last night telling people in the toy thread how much they sucked and blah blah.

[SKM]

Alright, here's a clearer shot. Crits plz, I fucking suck at throwies, obv.
http://i42.tinypic.com/2qvwmix.png

[weakfingers]

^^^shits dope, new name steeze, tell me watchu think?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0047-1.jpg

[LeaksOne]

i dig it. reminds me of flaw

[weakfingers]

ahahahahaha do you read what it says? sorry flaw :(
Heres some simple shit ive been working on.....
I kinda wanna learn how to do my throwie upside down and backwards so i can trip some people out when they see it think thats a good idea?


http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0046.jpg

[Hepatitis]

I hate hipsters so bad. But backwards and upside downs stuff would be way cool if you could do it well i think.

[LeaksOne]

yeah i read it. it was the P and R that reminded me of flaw.

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Dais2letterthrowie.jpg
can i get crits please?

[smokeitup]

THAT IS SUCH A FUCKING LIE

you posted in EVERY thread last night telling people in the toy thread how much they sucked and blah blah.

hahaha thanks for noticing. :)

[SKM]

can i get crits please?
The d is a little smaller than the s, but I like it.
Maybe try a capital D?

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/April-28_0447.jpg

[pleasedontstayr]

im not feelin that W. their hard D:

[kew1]

ik for real i just cant make one work

[pleasedontstayr]

http://i39.tinypic.com/724kur.jpg

crits? sorry for the double post.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0411101512.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0428101613.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0428101655.jpg

[MoganOne]

You got nice style man

[||BREAD||]

I agree, work on can control and proportions.

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11052.jpg

[pleasedontstayr]

it is a new day when i like one of vise's flicks. nice to see you finally got it man,

[viseversa101]

sry please i dont need ur crits hence ur already ignored

[The Average Homeboy]

lose the line on the extension of the V where it come into the letter. Just have the extension withough that extra line in.

Your S is a bit fatter than the rest of your letters, fix it.

[SicK-]

vise your s killed it for me

[LeaksOne]

then the E buried it

[Flash_One]

http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/8163/photoon20100429at0154ph.jpg (http://img594.imageshack.us/i/photoon20100429at0154ph.jpg/)

any advice>?

[LeaksOne]

close the hole in your S and make the H look like an H

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

That flash is sick
Here's mine
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA3NDgtMjAxMDA0MDctMjE0N.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA3NDktMjAxMDA0MDctMjE0N.jpg
smoke for those who don't know

[DAXR]

IRAK... let me know what you think.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Its alryte but looks like you've been watchin keep6 a little too long the A looks like his x and the k looks like a B to me
Just keep workin on it

[DAXR]

thanks for the feedback

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Ya separate the bottom of the k make it a fully developed leg kuz itz kinda like mutated together and the r would do. Well with out that stick inbetween the top and the right leg idk how to crit that goos sorry bro lol

[pleasedontstayr]

Lol vise ignored me because i said i finally liked his throw, shits wack. anyways. bump for crits?
http://i39.tinypic.com/724kur.jpg

[LeaksOne]

IRAK... let me know what you think.

IRAK? who do you think you are? Earsnot?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Hahahahaha exactly what I was thinking(leaks)

And stayr I like the second from the top cause that lower case r is perfectly puffed
All the other letters are pretty good/clean u can put the bars on the beginning of each end on the s for a lil more flavor and love the quote lol

[Flawless Victory]

I was finna say...

[pleasedontstayr]

thanks smokers,
your shits pretty fire man,

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Thanks bro
Another tip on the r like on the puff(dot) like twist it inward like so..
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA4NzEtMjAxMDA0MjktMTMwM.jpg

[LeaksOne]

kinda looks like a P

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Ya I know but the trick is no dot or any sort of symbol to make the hole thing
...Oh ya and I ddnt really do much of the twist but trust me its sick if you do it right

[LeaksOne]

i hate dealing with lower case R's. in my current name the only time i use lower case R's is when its a simp. in a throw i always use capital

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Exactly for simples mainly throwies but for pieces & hs I uppercase them sluts

[pleasedontstayr]

http://i41.tinypic.com/30cm3og.jpg

exchange with perso. sharpie magnum fucks up right in the middle of the tag, my luck amirite?

Edit: FUCK i suck at throws. :/

[LeaksOne]

throw away your sharpie magnum, unless you huff.

[pleasedontstayr]

oh fuck that was the wrong thread,
ma bad.

[Flawless Victory]

Sharpie King sizes are dope, though.

[pleasedontstayr]

i dont think its a magnum its just a big ass sharpie with a chisel tip

[LeaksOne]

http://static.www.odcdn.com/pictures/us/od/sk/lg/202812_sk_lg.jpg

http://content.etilize.com/Large/11969546.jpg

which one?

indeed, Flaw.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

The bottom one dies quick and king sizes and magnums are the best kuz there always free...if you know what I mean and there pretty good for handstyloz

[LeaksOne]

nah. king size is straight but magnums arent. invest 2 bucks in a pilot.

[pleasedontstayr]

bottom, chisel tip.

[LeaksOne]

i hate those. just use a regular sharpie

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

For drawing yes reg sharpies but I was talking bout gettin up with the magnums and pilots are a major no-no out here in AZ they fade in a week or so magnums last a long while I'd say a couple months

[LeaksOne]

no i was talking to him about that chisel. but seeing as were in different weather conditions i prefer the pilots. using a regular sharpie to get up is pointless. might as well get a craylola

[-Empty-Can-]

When I went to Mexico before the bus seats were tagged with crayons.

[pleasedontstayr]

fuck that i bomb with halloween pencils.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Oh I knew you were saying that leaks I just added that about the reg sharpies I know you didn't mean it like that but I use oil pastels as streaks and rocks for scribers no joke infact I think the oil pastels last longer than some streaks

[pleasedontstayr]

i just make mad drips from acrylic paint and bingo dabber ink. shit works like a charm and doesnt fade.

[LeaksOne]

fuck all you guys

http://blog.en.chatelaine.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/smelly-markers.jpg
get a whiff of my shit!!!

[pleasedontstayr]

I REMEMBER THAT SHIT.
it used to smell GODLY.

[LeaksOne]

not black....black licorice FTL

[pleasedontstayr]

Did yall *****z say you bomb? same here!
pic related. its me bombing.
http://i44.tinypic.com/1e0vo4.jpg

[Fury]

http://www.rc4systems.knoxfarms.com/mrp/images/middle_finger_flame.jpg

[TheToy]

When I went to Mexico before the bus seats were tagged with crayons.

Damn, yo. I missed out on Crayola ups on city transit...
Shucks.

That's ill though.
Saw some grimey shit down there.

[zaco]

that dexter throw is pretty good, i just dont like the proportions. every letter has got a different size goin on

[Flawless Victory]

fuck all you guys

http://blog.en.chatelaine.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/smelly-markers.jpg
get a whiff of my shit!!!

DON'T POST TEH SECRET CANDY lNK, LEAKS.
WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU?

[Fube]

yes, secretly teaching kids its ok to huff markers. the man who invented that needs to be awarded.

[Mr yarbles]

But they don't realize you have to place all the markers in a bag for a half hour then start huffing and doing whippits with the the cracker that comes with it to expand your mind and draw good.

...wait

[LeaksOne]

SHIT! sorry Flaw im just scarred from smelling all those delicious scents then topping it off with the black one.

and Fube he is/they are a genius/es. what better way to get kids high then attractive scents haha.

and Yarbs now i see where your info comes from haha. spending a little too much time with Mr.Sketch's watermelon pal haha

[syne7]

http://i40.tinypic.com/52gtw0.jpg
When you don't have any paint and you want to test your throw out with a can, what do you do? You grab some old spice and test it on the back porch.

[Mr yarbles]

and Yarbs now i see where your info comes from haha. spending a little too much time with Mr.Sketch's watermelon pal haha

It's not me honest
The watermelon just gets to me everytime
SO much knowledge
I can just feel my brain getting fuller with each huff.

haha

also please don't write sane.

[syne7]

it says syne...

[.nolove.]

http://i40.tinypic.com/52gtw0.jpg
When you don't have any paint and you want to test your throw out with a can, what do you do? You grab some old spice and test it on the back porch.

that shit looks alot like sane...which isnt good.make the y more pronounced and fix up that e...shits lacking.

[gumOnShoe]

@Syne

then now you know you need to tweak your Y, so it won't look like and A next time.

[.nolove.]

fuck all you guys

http://blog.en.chatelaine.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/05/smelly-markers.jpg
get a whiff of my shit!!!

figures you would go for the markers with the watermelon on it...













jus sayin yo.

[.nolove.]

but yeah i used to and still do practice with powerspray,furniture polish,starch,hairspray,febreze etc on cardboard and trust me when i say im glad i did...save your paint for when you actually paint.

[syne7]

so the N and the S are good, right?

[.nolove.]

the whole thing needs work but dont trip.everyone has trouble in the beginning.just keep practicing.study your local scene or hit up the throwy thread in here and get an idea of what your shit should look like and then once you've figured out what general direction you want your shit to go tweek it til its you own.develop your own style of throws so to speak.but the only way to do that is to have a grasp of how to get your letters going.and a good way to do that is to check how other people do it...that doesnt mean bite though...just you know gather inspiration and whatnot. the spiral in the S needs to go and the n is kinda bland in the style department but its all good.just keep practicing until you get it down.after a while you'll start getting ideas and shit that pop into your head on how to tweak it and thats how your style evolves...little by little.



the best advice you will ever get from me or anyone else on here is practice practice practice and dont give up on it.keep at it and dont be afraid to experiment.thats the only way your gonna get better.no one can hold your hand through it...

[syne7]

I wasn't going to trip, I know its pretty bland i've been working with throwies for 2 months now and my first throw was horrible
http://i42.tinypic.com/2coivef.jpg

thanks for the crits though, ill keep up the work

[Mr yarbles]

^ needs ALOT of work, start over.


http://i39.tinypic.com/15i18rd.jpg

*****s is illin we the real villains

[syne7]

that was my first throw i ever did, and I did start over lol

oh and nice celph titled quote.

[pleasedontstayr]

yarbles your right bar on the R ( hehe rhymed ) is too small. even for a throwie that shit looks more out of place than a straight guy in a gay bar.

[Mr yarbles]

I don't really care to be honest.
But yeah my r's are fucked I could never do them

Yeah syne I know the feeling it sucked alot when I had my first "start over"
But I think I had even more time invested
Don't worry just try and bite some letters right now because you're style wont start developing till later anyway
Just don't bite too hard and after a while it'll get good.

[pleasedontstayr]

i know your feeling Yarbs, R's are bitcheeeesss
overall a decent throw man, just clean er up

[Mr yarbles]

http://i43.tinypic.com/qs9xz8.jpg

CircleK nigguhs
New name

[LeaksOne]

figures you would go for the markers with the watermelon on it...jus sayin yo.

http://intensities.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/fry.jpg

Touche sir, touche.

[CrustOner]

New name

haha really?

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah man
It actually works too cause I can do the letters good all around

[LeaksOne]

START DOING SLAPS!!!

just put a circle around a K. your set!

[Mr yarbles]

I tried and it looks gay

and I don't have any slaps laying around ever :(

[gumOnShoe]

order some then.

[Mr yarbles]

DOn't feel like it really.
Stickers take too much time.

[del4sel]

:rolleyes:

[Mr yarbles]

Sorry I'd rather get down then be a sticker fag.

[hpir]

yarbles-hot shit
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture163.jpg
crits?

[Mr yarbles]

Throw aint bad k need some work though

Overall it's not terrible but it needs some fine tuning
Just keep practicing and you'll get better at it

[Bars]

I like the throw in the bottom right more then the large one. Seems to flow a lot better.

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6725/img000207.jpg

[KidReny!]

I like the throw in the bottom right more then the large one. Seems to flow a lot better.

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6725/img000207.jpg

i like it