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Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 10:10 AM
yo that throwie is on point akel..like the colors....
heres some ish we did yesterday..i was mad shaking so it didnt turn out how i wanted it to..the spot was a lil hot
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01494.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01496.jpg

freshair
07-17-2008, 10:31 AM
needs work

Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 10:39 AM
it looks diff. on paper..its just the process of actually painting it that im struggling with

Chump
07-17-2008, 10:55 AM
it looks diff. on paper..its just the process of actually painting it that im struggling with
Can control.... only way to get better is to use a paint can

bradnowell
07-17-2008, 10:58 AM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a267/bikerboy1391/000_0327.jpg

crits?
i know its bad, i did it in like 2 seconds. and ignore the handy because my handstyle is weeeeeeak

Nine9
07-17-2008, 11:05 AM
Didn't come out as nice as the last few attempts, but it took less than half the time, which is good. Fucked up the first N tho.

Used Astro Fatcaps for the first time. Amazing for the fill, but a bit thick and hard to control for the outline. Bit more practice needed with 'em I reckon.

Also, E is taking shape. Or is at least better than last few tries.


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3266/2676771623_063258b2b4.jpg


Rise - Your R kinda looks like an N. Also, not feeling the I with the lower part bigger than the top part. Otherwise it has potential.

iVIBE
07-17-2008, 11:08 AM
take out the dead space between letters and work on each letter individually

Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 11:09 AM
nine i see you gettin that can control down son!
wheres my exchange negro!
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01500.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01501.jpg

Nine9
07-17-2008, 12:52 PM
nine i see you gettin that can control down son!
wheres my exchange negro!


Lol on it's way dude. My throwie is starting to piss me off, so it'll be nice to get working on different letters again.

Wallace
07-17-2008, 02:42 PM
joga- your stuff looks alright on paper but you really need to practice painting more
nine- looking good, outlines not too bad.

Tonberry
07-17-2008, 02:58 PM
Wow, Joga, that's pretty fucking dope. The only thing I suggest is to make the G look more like one, I can tell it's a G anyway, but it kinda looks like a C at first glance. This probably doesn't make any sense, but I'll try describing the thing I'm talking about; the straight line in the middle of the G should be cut from the bottom, and then make the uncircumsized weiner-thing go further into the character (where as right now, it stops as soon as it hits the line [that should be cut in half] half way through the letter).

... Shut the fuck up, it made sense!

Hater-AiD~>
07-17-2008, 03:39 PM
do it in microsoft paint..i have no idea what youre talkin about..haha

bradnowell
07-17-2008, 10:42 PM
i think this is what he means.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a267/bikerboy1391/DSC01501.jpg

if not then im clueless.

631
07-18-2008, 03:18 PM
nine- yo i like the style keep it up

akel- i like it overall but maybe a little change to the K and E

meko- feelin the idea just watch your can controll

mekosbc
07-18-2008, 03:20 PM
yo cans905 i got you... it was mad dark i didnt wanna fuck my lines up wit the aura so i did it like that i went back the next mrning and fixed it...

wider
07-18-2008, 03:42 PM
Didn't come out as nice as the last few attempts, but it took less than half the time, which is good. Fucked up the first N tho.

Used Astro Fatcaps for the first time. Amazing for the fill, but a bit thick and hard to control for the outline. Bit more practice needed with 'em I reckon.

Also, E is taking shape. Or is at least better than last few tries.


http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3266/2676771623_063258b2b4.jpg


Rise - Your R kinda looks like an N. Also, not feeling the I with the lower part bigger than the top part. Otherwise it has potential.

really fellin that throwie man. props

respERATION
07-19-2008, 04:24 AM
pretty old one....havent taken my camera on sessions recently :/
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0006-3.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0007-1.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-19-2008, 07:48 PM
:P
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/NewStylelol.jpg

631
07-19-2008, 11:01 PM
OENE- good potential, i would try a new O

mekosbc
07-20-2008, 01:17 AM
yo oene i did a throwie for you
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/Photo-0016.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-20-2008, 01:57 AM
wow man .. its sad that u can right my name better then me lol... thnx alot :D u want one in return? what do u wrtie meko?

mekosbc
07-20-2008, 02:05 AM
yeah post one up... and yeah i rite meko

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-20-2008, 02:29 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/meko.jpg

here man not the best so..yeh thnx again for the oene

mekosbc
07-20-2008, 02:55 AM
itz good just try to do 2 bumpz on the top of the m

respERATION
07-20-2008, 03:17 AM
pretty old one....havent taken my camera on sessions recently :/
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0006-3.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/CRIM0007-1.jpg

bump for crits?

Nine9
07-20-2008, 04:58 AM
Can't really see it too well dude, you took the pic too close.

respERATION
07-20-2008, 07:35 AM
ergh....i'll do a paper one later....

satesbc2
07-20-2008, 12:04 PM
yo, sup meko

LiMe..S.B.C
07-21-2008, 03:21 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0739.jpg

rocking my one liner....

Hater-AiD~>
07-21-2008, 03:21 PM
hell yeah lime..that shit is sick..nice and clean

GaZm13
07-21-2008, 04:09 PM
LIME's one liners are looking great. All of his stuff is progressing very nicely.

Sarto
07-21-2008, 04:10 PM
agreed ,

fOrSaQeN
07-21-2008, 05:05 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/xq9smg.jpga quick one done for someone on youtube

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-22-2008, 12:21 AM
Opers i love the letters but ur O looks like a D

cans905
07-22-2008, 08:06 AM
opers- work on ur o a lot and round the bottom of the s a bit more

fOrSaQeN
07-22-2008, 11:28 AM
Opers i love the letters but ur O looks like a D

thanks thats not even my name..i just did it for someone on youtube... ;)

Synaesthesia
07-22-2008, 10:11 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i70/dori_boy/DSC00200.jpg

not my best but i only just started this new word

Spraycan Stories
07-22-2008, 10:47 PM
Thats pretty clean

Nine9
07-23-2008, 04:32 AM
Yeah I'm feeling that, one of the best I've seen in this section for a while.

B$uR2EaTyOuRc0oKiEs
07-23-2008, 09:46 PM
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/8424/jecu0.jpg

mekosbc
07-23-2008, 10:25 PM
yo bern lovin the throwie

Mr yarbles
07-23-2008, 11:39 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/9st6k1.jpg
Fucking around with pens

je good letters the fill is fresh

bern that's dope

Synaesthesia
07-24-2008, 01:38 AM
thanks heaps guys, i'll try post up some flix of some better ones:)

je...really like the fill, the letters are rad
mr. yarbles...digging the a but not so much the e. just cant put my finger on what though

mekosbc
07-24-2008, 05:03 PM
yo yarbles im liken ur throwie but the pointz need a little work..... the point at the top of the e doesnt seem right like itz too tear droppy... i dunno it lookz good... thiz is how i would modify it.... http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/jaja.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
07-24-2008, 09:56 PM
Like it Yarbles.
B$ Like it but its really not a Throwie.
Syn.- Nice Throwie. You just need to come up with a Differnt color Scheme I've seen that allot.

mekosbc
07-24-2008, 10:42 PM
any one down for a online throwie exchange? ill throw up any onez name who iz down for the exchange... pm me

suckafree
07-24-2008, 10:46 PM
http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/6978/0724082317mn0.jpg
how can i get better?

mekosbc
07-24-2008, 11:59 PM
im tryin to get a better throwie for NOE...so far i came up with this.... critz are respectedhttp://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0028.jpg

calculating infinity
07-25-2008, 03:44 AM
sucka free whats your third letter?

Klaz
07-25-2008, 04:00 AM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i70/dori_boy/DSC00200.jpg

not my best but i only just started this new word


man the E and R on that are fresh. not feelin the other letters tho.
great start though. keep it goin.

esoteric
07-25-2008, 08:49 AM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f293/xmoneymike55/new002.jpg

didnt come out as well as i would have hoped i have a good idea of what needs to be changed but any crits would be appreciated

Klaz
07-25-2008, 09:11 AM
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f293/xmoneymike55/new002.jpg

didnt come out as well as i would have hoped i have a good idea of what needs to be changed but any crits would be appreciated


hmm, i would say "back to the drawing board" or something. but ill be constructive.

1)replot your letters, make sure they are all in proportion and are consistant.
2)sketch, sketch, sketch until doing your throw is like taking a piss.
3)if your gonna do a highlight then do it in a thinner cap.
4) fills should be either entirely smooth or entirely scratchy. try to take bigger strokes and go in a more orderly kind of fashion. it looks better and its quicker.


peace

esoteric
07-25-2008, 09:26 AM
thanks ill be back soon with some progress

LiMe..S.B.C
07-25-2008, 01:19 PM
well since im still waiting for approval of the oneliner thread ill post this here...
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/30887352.jpg

SAID
07-25-2008, 01:24 PM
shits fucken nice lime.
iud only put one bar in your e though, not 2.

new steez:
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/629/picture83wt2.jpg

GaZm13
07-25-2008, 01:44 PM
Nice stuff LIME. Still need to fix that L in your tag though.

-GEKS-
07-25-2008, 04:07 PM
said- i like it but i cant read some of the letters, whats it say?
lime- i dont think you should be doing one liners right now, i mean it just looks like you're trying too hard. its not worth it to have lines all going through your letters, i'll post up some of my one liners in a little bit

anyone wanna exchange...i write sor

http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1721.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1722.jpg
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1723.jpg

crits welcome.

p.s. notice how in my one line no lines are crossing all over each other, besides the o a little bit but i made it into a mouth so its all good
and look how in the one where i added one at the end, i could have stretched a line across the n to make the one all in one line, but I didnt cuz it would look wack

i hope that made sense

Wallace
07-25-2008, 06:10 PM
what ive been throwing up lately, crits are really appreciated
i want to push the "a" in closer but then it messes up the top of the "s"

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9158/phone0010pm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

sor- the r doesn't seem like it fits
said- i like it, nice flow
lime- looks good, the ! is a little off though

mrkurto
07-25-2008, 07:28 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3065/2702590210_6a8038b513.jpg

feedback?

mekosbc
07-25-2008, 08:53 PM
every one that wanted the one liner thread...it finelly got aproved hit it up

krosswithrampagepaint
07-26-2008, 12:55 AM
i know the drips are horrible...but besides that....CRITS/COMMENTS/TIPS? PLEASE. THANKS.
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc103/juliapaigeraytown/SANY1151.jpg
KROSS '08
RPS

SAID
07-26-2008, 06:57 AM
give to get.
:o

-GEKS-
07-26-2008, 10:09 AM
or we could be straight up and just tell him its wack and to stop painting for a few weeks, and sketch all day err day.

and lose the devil face

rsakens
07-26-2008, 01:15 PM
keane
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSCF3637.jpg?t=1216113593

mekosbc
07-26-2008, 02:07 PM
yo keane love the letterz but not feelin the fill lookz weird to me i dunno... try to keep it side side

GaZm13
07-26-2008, 02:20 PM
KEANE the green on green doesn't make it pop enough. Other than that looking pretty good. A lot of you guys are progressing pretty nicely. Keep getting up!

smooth_nuts
07-27-2008, 01:59 AM
asie-for your a dont make the back slanted and get rib of the little bulb on what would be its ass...
keane-i like the color skeme actualy haha,try doing a drop shadow instead of 3d and it needs to be bigger...im not really feeling your letters either :/
sor-finish your s even if it means you DONT get to do a oneliner...oneliners are mad played

some throws with the new name...x's are a bitch!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3027/2704526383_9efdacfc8c.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3101/2704521869_da8e4e5317.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3238/2704515461_eb3b829c46.jpg

Scratch
07-27-2008, 02:02 AM
what are you guys talking about

limes shits ill as-is. theres no need for change. keep it up

Wallace
07-27-2008, 02:06 AM
nuts, thanks for the crits =). last letter is a C though not an E

smooth_nuts
07-27-2008, 02:10 AM
oh shit my bad man....i though i was a line in the top of the c guess not haha

Wallace
07-27-2008, 02:24 AM
no worries, im not sure what to do with that part of the A though. dont mind the lame ass fill here i got bored for a second.. fucked up my proportions a bit, im terrible at sketches

http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/3521/phone0010ys3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

smooth_nuts
07-27-2008, 02:45 AM
maybe try a capital a?

asie-for your a dont make the back slanted and get rib of the little bulb on what would be its ass...
keane-i like the color skeme actualy haha,try doing a drop shadow instead of 3d and it needs to be bigger...im not really feeling your letters either :/
sor-finish your s even if it means you DONT get to do a oneliner...oneliners are mad played

some throws with the new name...x's are a bitch!
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3027/2704526383_9efdacfc8c.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3101/2704521869_da8e4e5317.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3238/2704515461_eb3b829c46.jpg
bottom page bumper cars...for crits of course!
haha

SAID
07-27-2008, 08:24 AM
that s is ill nuts, im trying to make faces in my letters too man, lookin' good!

FLSteele16
07-27-2008, 10:13 PM
Asic nice job.
smooth nuts i really like that style but the on the first one change the six's S
This is my first throwie in a while i have been trying to get my tag down crits welcome
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5707/scan0013dd0.jpg

Tonberry
07-27-2008, 11:42 PM
Honestly, the only thing I'm feeling in that COSMIC throw is the M. Everything else is too simple. Style the letters or something.

numberonestunna
07-28-2008, 12:04 AM
actually for me the m is the only thing i dont like. make the middle part fat like everything else

KASE2
07-28-2008, 01:03 AM
fix tha u thing u got goin in that M and ur I and tha second letter

Asic nice job.
smooth nuts i really like that style but the on the first one change the six's S
This is my first throwie in a while i have been trying to get my tag down crits welcome
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/5707/scan0013dd0.jpg

FLSteele16
07-28-2008, 01:03 PM
Hey gusy thanks for the crits i will work on it.

osnapizzel
07-28-2008, 02:34 PM
smooth nuts freshh

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4314/picture300ll7.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
07-28-2008, 03:17 PM
dope

FLSteele16
07-28-2008, 05:06 PM
ohsnap that is tight as hell.
i just did this one i made all the tops of my letters fatter i think it looks better.
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2982/scan0014ji7.jpg

mekosbc
07-28-2008, 06:35 PM
yo cosmic ur gettin better...ur handy is better too

mekosbc
07-28-2008, 06:46 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY0838.jpg

FLSteele16
07-28-2008, 07:30 PM
Thanks Noe. Dude i like the new name and that throwie is sick i really like those big drips

cans905
07-28-2008, 09:35 PM
meko- dude im so glad u write noe now cuz u so much better at it

smooth_nuts
07-28-2008, 10:28 PM
noe and ohsnap are looking freshtastic
edit*but wroking on your fuckign hand ohsnap shits grabgae :(

BigBlueViolence
07-28-2008, 10:44 PM
http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll220/hssjos/DSCF0304.jpg


Already a dude in detroit writing noe. I can't find any pieces by him right now, but if you searched the detroit thread over at 12oz, I'm sure it wouldn't take you long to find one

letsgobombin
07-29-2008, 07:03 AM
tried to spice up my throwie a bit
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/fac8a79f.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/2a231522.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/6685fac8.jpg
my original:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/67b57fcc.jpg

Lass
07-29-2008, 09:34 AM
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3751/221713mv5.jpg
This is my first try ever. So give some tips for a rookie.
Didnt have my camera home, so i had to use my cellphone.

Crits, any?

Edit
-Damn, extremely big picture.

mekosbc
07-29-2008, 01:01 PM
damn dude resize the picz befor posting them... killz the forum

Klaz
07-29-2008, 01:52 PM
^^word.

and should we keep this thread painted? and leave blackbook throwies to the Toy Blackbooks section? makes sense right?

mekosbc
07-29-2008, 02:38 PM
yo blue vilolence... i honestly dont care if there is a noe... becuz im not a biter... i chose letters im good at and got noe....

SLEEP905
07-29-2008, 02:45 PM
http://i37.tinypic.com/rwm6n5.jpg
quick two letter
http://i38.tinypic.com/2h3d7v4.jpg
wackkkk but i need crits

Klaz
07-29-2008, 03:20 PM
bottom ones not bad. just keep doin it till you get a flow with it. not much else you can do really.

FLSteele16
07-29-2008, 03:41 PM
sleep- those are good keep practiceing
lass- curve your lines
letsgobombin- those are fresh

Im thinking of changing my name to just cos instead of comsic tell me what you think.
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8738/scan0015rl5.jpg

Eack
07-29-2008, 04:45 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/281/img0366zb2.jpg

sleep i like ur first one, the second one the first letter is wackkk...

cos i guess in a way its good cuz all the letters have the same shape... but u messed up ur 3d/shadow bad....

Nine9
07-29-2008, 06:30 PM
http://i287.photobucket.com/albums/ll128/LIMESBC/SANY0739.jpg

rocking my one liner....

That is sick.

ShaolinNy
07-29-2008, 06:35 PM
Here a quick throwie i did...Figure i post this just so u know how bad iam..
https://www.t-mobilepictures.com/myalbum/photos/photo19/8e/1f/dea1ffdad3b4.jpg


Crits please what can i do to get better?I write Sneak..I would also give crits but i dont know what im doing lol....Crtis!

Nine9
07-29-2008, 06:37 PM
It's actually not too bad, although you should keep all the letters kinda the same size and on the same level, and slowly just add stuff, change your letters around.

They all need work, but the N and S look promising.

BigBlueViolence
07-29-2008, 08:39 PM
yo blue vilolence... i honestly dont care if there is a noe... becuz im not a biter... i chose letters im good at and got noe....
I was just letting you know because you live by the D. Do what you want, bro

mekosbc
07-29-2008, 08:50 PM
bro im from pa 610 is a pa area code

SLEEP905
07-29-2008, 09:03 PM
FL - fix up the 3d and it should be nice and clean
Eack - i think if you went white with a black outline or something i'd be abit easier to read, its still pretty fire though


http://i35.tinypic.com/35aof2w.jpg
another one here lol

PROJECT LINK
07-29-2008, 09:19 PM
i was just wonderin cuz ive never did throwie style iss it just bubble letters?

smooth_nuts
07-29-2008, 10:33 PM
" throw-up or "throwie" sits between a tag and a piece in terms of complexity and time investment. It generally consists of a one-color outline and one layer of fill-color. Easy-to-paint bubble shapes often form the letters. A throw-up is designed for quick execution, to avoid attracting attention to the writer. Throw-ups are often utilized by writers who wish to achieve a large number of tags while competing with rival artists. Most artists have both a tag and a throw-up that are pretty much fixed compared to pieces. It is mostly so because they need to have a recognizable logo for others to identify them and their own individual styles."

PROJECT LINK
07-29-2008, 10:36 PM
true..well im gunna try 1 idk how im gunna do they look pretty simple..yo i want a 1v1 with a throwie battle that would be kool..

ShaolinNy
07-29-2008, 10:49 PM
It's actually not too bad, although you should keep all the letters kinda the same size and on the same level, and slowly just add stuff, change your letters around.

They all need work, but the N and S look promising.

Thx bro when i get a chance ill fix it up and post it right now im in serious need of a handstyle

smooth_nuts
07-29-2008, 11:00 PM
i might get in on that battle depends ont he word though...

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3169/2716081940_91fe29d1d3.jpg
i cant come up with a s i liek for the life of me man,the one on this throw i tried basing off my little 6 throw but dont think it came out to great :/

PROJECT LINK
07-29-2008, 11:11 PM
i was thinkin i juss do my name an u do urs or letes do-RITE

smooth_nuts
07-29-2008, 11:26 PM
rite?
word,im down for that i'll have mine up in a bit if....

PROJECT LINK
07-29-2008, 11:45 PM
ya ur gunna have to do it cuz i dont no how to post forums like that unless were doin here...would i send u my copy..

smooth_nuts
07-30-2008, 12:06 AM
jeah....

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 01:12 AM
yo u ready?

john inue
07-30-2008, 02:26 AM
go to http://www.rewards1.com/index.php?referrer_id=177653

smooth_nuts
07-30-2008, 05:36 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3070/2715903631_3cee901e97.jpg
post your or pm it to me and i'll poll it i guess :/

letsgobombin
07-30-2008, 05:45 AM
tried to spice up my throwie a bit
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/fac8a79f.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/2a231522.jpg
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/6685fac8.jpg
my original:
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/67b57fcc.jpg
bumpo
smooth- im surprised you're having trouble with the s as that is probably the easiest letter and x's are the complete opposite, anyway you should just try some of the basic ones if trying to find a fancy one isn't working out, eventually you'll get an idea. and on your second one the i reminds me of fube, the t is a little hard to see its a t because the line on the left is quite small. also, the top of all your letters seem to curve aprt from the top of the r, you should try make the r more like the others, otherwise thats nice
veo- its ok for a base but put some sort of whole on the e and o, its not so important on the o but make sure you do it on the e, other than that just keep experimenting
sneak- make sure all your letters are the same size and are in a line, also, dont worry about filling them in for now, what i did was get a big pad i had like a 200 page one and just sit their thinking of ideas, eventually you'll get a good one which you'll develop. its also good when you look back in it abd you're stuck on something and it just gives you inspiration, i've got at least 100 throwie ideas but i only really work on a few and its mainly my current style which im trying to develop
crase?- its a bad angle, go back and get a straight on one if you can, from what i can see it looks ok apart from the a and possibly the r but i cant really see
cos- thats it you're gettin their but the main thing to remember is that you never have a final throwie, it can almost always get better, don't settle on it until you're guaranteed it can be no better and keep experimenting

bakerone
07-30-2008, 06:44 AM
Rite - that throw is fire!!!
Pocs/Pacs - im not sure if it says pacs or pocs, but you should stick with your original throw looks good.

Crits on this please?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3064/2716780536_02849a7bce.jpg?v=0

Hater-AiD~>
07-30-2008, 10:17 AM
ba you need to hit the books..somethin serious
lets go bombing - i think it will look really good once you start workin with it some more
smooth nuts - dope

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01566.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01565.jpg

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 10:38 AM
http://http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=448

it sais rite i was gunna battle smooth

bak
07-30-2008, 11:58 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/07-27-08_1723.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/07-27-08_1722.jpg

crits? they're my first throw ups

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 12:10 PM
http://http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=449
second copy that i did

bak
07-30-2008, 12:16 PM
the purple and pink combination looks better but both are good

the star and the small arrow on the second one would look better with a shadow

ShaolinNy
07-30-2008, 12:57 PM
bumpo
smooth- im surprised you're having trouble with the s as that is probably the easiest letter and x's are the complete opposite, anyway you should just try some of the basic ones if trying to find a fancy one isn't working out, eventually you'll get an idea. and on your second one the i reminds me of fube, the t is a little hard to see its a t because the line on the left is quite small. also, the top of all your letters seem to curve aprt from the top of the r, you should try make the r more like the others, otherwise thats nice
veo- its ok for a base but put some sort of whole on the e and o, its not so important on the o but make sure you do it on the e, other than that just keep experimenting
sneak- make sure all your letters are the same size and are in a line, also, dont worry about filling them in for now, what i did was get a big pad i had like a 200 page one and just sit their thinking of ideas, eventually you'll get a good one which you'll develop. its also good when you look back in it abd you're stuck on something and it just gives you inspiration, i've got at least 100 throwie ideas but i only really work on a few and its mainly my current style which im trying to develop
crase?- its a bad angle, go back and get a straight on one if you can, from what i can see it looks ok apart from the a and possibly the r but i cant really see
cos- thats it you're gettin their but the main thing to remember is that you never have a final throwie, it can almost always get better, don't settle on it until you're guaranteed it can be no better and keep experimenting

thx man i hear u i need alot more practice but i did a quick thowies in summer school...What do you think i need to work on?


http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/2310/2b0fa9f29bafhn1.jpg

Crits please

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 01:22 PM
looks prety nice for a start just add somthin like color or shde so it brings out the picture...and the a needs some work

freshair
07-30-2008, 03:29 PM
no stop...dont listen to wat he just sed^

the A is the best thing u have on that paper
u can do somethin with that style..if anything all ur other letters need help..
...ill try n help yall out if i can...work too much...

LINK...STICK WITH THE FIRST r WHICH EVER i AND THE SECOND t and e...
...not bad man


smooth nuts....wreckd the RITE...r n e are alittle off but still

smooth_nuts
07-30-2008, 04:26 PM
polled the battle just need to wait for it to be approved....any one else wanna jum off on a battle while im still bored as shit?
edt*
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2718118060_43ea8874d4.jpg
finally a s i like :D

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 05:26 PM
and...thanks for the crit bro..(fresh) yo -smooth- u did my second copy right...cuz i dont want the first copy in the battle

smooth_nuts
07-30-2008, 05:33 PM
yeah the second one man...the second one;)

bakerone
07-30-2008, 05:36 PM
Rite - that throw is fire!!!
Pocs/Pacs - im not sure if it says pacs or pocs, but you should stick with your original throw looks good.

Crits on this please?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3064/2716780536_02849a7bce.jpg?v=0

bump
only crits i got was hit the books,
any others??

ShaolinNy
07-30-2008, 07:12 PM
no stop...dont listen to wat he just sed^

the A is the best thing u have on that paper
u can do somethin with that style..if anything all ur other letters need help..
...ill try n help yall out if i can...work too much...

LINK...STICK WITH THE FIRST r WHICH EVER i AND THE SECOND t and e...
...not bad man


smooth nuts....wreckd the RITE...r n e are alittle off but still


Ok cool man what ya got?Cause i need some help badly

SLEEP905
07-30-2008, 07:13 PM
bump
only crits i got was hit the books,
any others??

get a new A, add some 3d and it'll look alot better

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 07:13 PM
yo son when they gunna aprove man!!! lol

BAK-ay man ur letters a pretty plain work on em a lil bit

Eack
07-30-2008, 07:19 PM
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/281/img0366zb2.jpg

pretty much got ignored the first time it was posted :(

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 07:23 PM
EACK-pretty str8 man i think if u had some diffrent colors shit would be pretty dope

"Riot"
07-30-2008, 07:34 PM
http://i121.photobucket.com/albums/o227/JakeRidesBmx23/yo003.jpg
whitetrash.

-GEKS-
07-30-2008, 07:45 PM
eack- not really diggin the overlappin squares thing, but if thats ur steez then just go with it not everyones gonna like it. its nice and clean
just posted in another thread so i will only post one flick.
edit: riot- i dont like it for some reason, idk it seems forced or somethin. maybe just sloppy
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/lizardman92/DSCF1735.jpg
crits

"Riot"
07-30-2008, 07:50 PM
pretty much forced.
i did it in like 2 minutes. so thats prob why.

i like that throw.
little sloppy looks like the can was low.

freshair
07-30-2008, 08:16 PM
well here u go...sum simple..

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk90/dsilva25/2008_07300007.jpg

http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk90/dsilva25/2008_07300008.jpg

lolumad?
07-30-2008, 08:20 PM
pretty much got ignored the first time it was posted :(

i like it, i think the colors are sick

freshair
07-30-2008, 08:21 PM
like the CRASE...just change the R n A .. ..

smooth_nuts
07-30-2008, 08:29 PM
polled the battle just need to wait for it to be approved....any one else wanna jum off on a battle while im still bored as shit?
edt*
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3134/2718118060_43ea8874d4.jpg
finally a s i like :D

bummmmper cars,out for them crits ;)

PROJECT LINK
07-30-2008, 08:48 PM
YO FRESH-UR SHIT IS FUCKING WAK!...na jk i like it man it all flows clean add some color an youl be str8 as a gate son..lol
SMOOTH-UR SHITS EVEN WORSE..lol jk with you too....i like it man...

cans905
07-30-2008, 10:13 PM
smooth- s and i are good but i cant find flow with the x

noxi
07-30-2008, 11:27 PM
bump
only crits i got was hit the books,
any others??

You should stick too books. Your need to change everything.

PROJECT LINK
07-31-2008, 12:03 AM
http://http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=456

somethin i wipped up reall quick...still gettin the hang of this style

beefisforburgers
07-31-2008, 12:24 AM
Rite - that throw is fire!!!
Pocs/Pacs - im not sure if it says pacs or pocs, but you should stick with your original throw looks good.

Crits on this please?
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3064/2716780536_02849a7bce.jpg?v=0

this throw is sick baker pg is so siick your all lucky to see a legend like this in the toy thread.

beefisforburgers
07-31-2008, 12:27 AM
ba you need to hit the books..somethin serious
lets go bombing - i think it will look really good once you start workin with it some more
smooth nuts - dope

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01566.jpg
http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn30/AiC-TN/throwies/DSC01565.jpg

wow you are a piece of shit , quit writing you generic fag. y(j)oga is a gay word get some originality, and learn to do a handstyle faggot.

FABLE IR CRU
07-31-2008, 12:33 AM
bummmmper cars,out for them crits ;)

Damn man u went from an easy name DO....To a hard ass name SIX...Cuz to me the letters S & X Are the hardest to do.But u have some sick styles goin on for the new name plus u get to use the number six.for this one i wood say just round off the bottom of the I but every thing else on point.

smooth_nuts
07-31-2008, 12:49 AM
haha thats one if the reason i picked up six cause i get to use the number 6 for throws...but thanks alot man

beef get the fuck out here with all that bull shit you do realise this is the TOY forum

BadUncing69
07-31-2008, 12:53 AM
this is my first throwie i ever did tell me what yall think.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=98&pictureid=454

turkey train
07-31-2008, 04:11 AM
this is my first throwie i ever did tell me what yall think.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=98&pictureid=454

That's pretty good for a first throw, bottom one is better than the top, s and L need work and the other letters are too simple. Also on the h don't make one side heaps bigger than the other. Just keep practicing.

BadlilDuck
07-31-2008, 04:36 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01071.jpg
i know they r stickers but they r still throwies rite?.


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=456
dope asssssssss

baduncing69- i kinda like the 1st one more, just maybe make the leg of the l shorter and bring out the t and h. and maybe replace the 1st h with the 2nd one? idk its just my 2 cents.

turkey train
07-31-2008, 06:27 AM
Throwie i've been working on, crits would be appreciated.
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Throwie33.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
07-31-2008, 07:39 AM
wow you are a piece of shit , quit writing you generic fag. y(j)oga is a gay word get some originality, and learn to do a handstyle faggot.
shut the fuck up you punk bitch..that name actually has meaning behind it unlike a lot of you little new writing pussy ass bitches who pick shit that has letters that you feel more comforatable with..pussy ass bitch probably hasnt touched a can of paint in your life faggot ass hoe

bakerone
07-31-2008, 09:09 AM
beef has 10 times the style you do joga,
and most deffinately way better with a can then you are..

SLEEP905
07-31-2008, 09:52 AM
shut the fuck up you punk bitch..that name actually has meaning behind it unlike a lot of you little new writing pussy ass bitches who pick shit that has letters that you feel more comforatable with..pussy ass bitch probably hasnt touched a can of paint in your life faggot ass hoe

who cares if a name has meaning behind it if you cant rock it with a decent style?

Hater-AiD~>
07-31-2008, 10:13 AM
i love how half of you fuckers are so quick to hop on a dick that its hilarious..he said my name wasnt original which is funny as hell...and how are you going to tell me a name doesnt have meaning behind it without style? the fuck? im posting in the toy thread for a reason you iliterate fucks..thats why I come here to get crits to improve..i dont post shit on here for the fun of it because I know im not that good yet

i just love how some of you go off on tangents on some shit I didnt even say

freshair
07-31-2008, 10:29 AM
i think wut he meant to say wus...who cares if ur name has a meaning or not.....

,,,if u can rock it then thats all that matters....

names dont need meanings....

......23

SLEEP905
07-31-2008, 10:31 AM
i love how half of you fuckers are so quick to hop on a dick that its hilarious..he said my name wasnt original which is funny as hell...and how are you going to tell me a name doesnt have meaning behind it without style? the fuck? im posting in the toy thread for a reason you iliterate fucks..thats why I come here to get crits to improve..i dont post shit on here for the fun of it because I know im not that good yet

i just love how some of you go off on tangents on some shit I didnt even say

no ones hoppin on dicks,

i said it doesnt matter if your name has meaning, you cant fuckin rock a decent style

Nine9
07-31-2008, 11:04 AM
But when you can, you have a name with style and meaning, not just style.

SLEEP905
07-31-2008, 11:21 AM
But when you can, you have a name with style and meaning, not just style.

Yah but what im saying is dont go around saying "my names got meaning behind it, fuck off" when you cant even rock a decent throw
not saying im better, just saying my opinion

Nine9
07-31-2008, 11:52 AM
Yeah fair enough.

Everybody starts somewhere though man, progression takes time. It might be a bit easier to write a certain word starting out, but if you like a word, use it regardless. Just put that extra bit of time and effort in.

Anyway, kinda on-topic.. I thought I saw a Joga sticker throwie earlier in town.. did a double take lol.

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3620/dsc00903rr8.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00903rr8.jpg)

Mr yarbles
07-31-2008, 12:03 PM
Fucked up on it but whatever.
http://i38.tinypic.com/8xv9so.jpg

SLEEP905
07-31-2008, 12:05 PM
thats actually pretty nice^

Hater-AiD~>
07-31-2008, 02:16 PM
Yeah fair enough.

Everybody starts somewhere though man, progression takes time. It might be a bit easier to write a certain word starting out, but if you like a word, use it regardless. Just put that extra bit of time and effort in.

Anyway, kinda on-topic.. I thought I saw a Joga sticker throwie earlier in town.. did a double take lol.

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/3620/dsc00903rr8.th.jpg (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00903rr8.jpg)

that actually looks like my old throwie

fOrSaQeN
07-31-2008, 02:48 PM
http://i36.tinypic.com/2r4h4l3.jpg

PROJECT LINK
07-31-2008, 04:43 PM
http://http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=456

yo weres the feed back son!! lol

Chump
07-31-2008, 04:52 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/z7s8aw7cyidpw1ofkw2w.jpg
exchange with smooth

PROJECT LINK
07-31-2008, 04:53 PM
i dont man you do his word pretty good theres ome comp lol

Wallace
07-31-2008, 05:28 PM
chump- looks good for an exchange
link- what does it say?
aeks- work on your E maybe
maso- looks too simple, add some style to it

once again ignore the gay ass bubbles, i get bored...
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/1948/phone0001aa8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PROJECT LINK
07-31-2008, 06:19 PM
looks pretty kool man...myne sais len..but the n lokslike a k a lil lol

mekosbc
07-31-2008, 08:42 PM
yo yarbles not feelin the k or what ever letter it is befor the s.....

NE ONE DOWN FOR A THROWIE EXHANGE? PM ME

bak
07-31-2008, 09:22 PM
crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/07-30-08_1211.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
07-31-2008, 09:45 PM
Really not feelin it. Man. Just me. Loose that Arrow and the D.

bak
07-31-2008, 10:23 PM
any better?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/07-31-08_1912.jpg

(SoS)Viruz
07-31-2008, 10:28 PM
Have you seen the New to Graff. Thread. It helps. Cuase you need to work on you letter Surctsure, and Bars. Just check the New to Graff Thread and read it and look at the Examples and you get it down. :)

Chump
07-31-2008, 10:34 PM
http://www.tinypic.ws/files/z7s8aw7cyidpw1ofkw2w.jpg
exchange with smooth
Bumpsy's

acereborn
07-31-2008, 10:51 PM
Have you seen the New to Graff. Thread. It helps. Cuase you need to work on you letter Surctsure, and Bars. Just check the New to Graff Thread and read it and look at the Examples and you get it down. :)

But there really isnt bars in throwies :confused:

Thrice
07-31-2008, 10:52 PM
I like it chump, although I feel like that X needs more style or something. Play around with it, bumping something old for some CRIT.
http://i36.tinypic.com/9k8qif.jpg

BadlilDuck
08-01-2008, 12:19 AM
http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh67/BadlilDuck/DSC01071.jpg

no feedback ? =(

acereborn
08-01-2008, 12:25 AM
It's clean, but I don't really like it. The bottom left half of the S is too tiny, and the top right extension on the S is kinda gay. Meh, play with it

turkey train
08-01-2008, 01:28 AM
Tried adding more style to my throw, still needs work i reckon, any crits?
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0118.jpg

acereborn
08-01-2008, 01:33 AM
Make the top right of the s not have such a big bump. Kinda looks like "mayo"

ThatguywhodrinksTea
08-01-2008, 03:36 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/oneliner.jpg

bah.. trying something new :P crtis

SLEEP905
08-01-2008, 03:51 PM
dont worry about getting a one line at this point^

PROJECT LINK
08-01-2008, 04:40 PM
bad-yo thats pretty kool...are they stickers lol..i like the colors and every thing man nice work..work on the s tho bro..
yo thrice-i like it man its pretty clean add some trim or fill to it tho man..
TURKEY-pretty basic...but its good bro..work on the s.
thatguy-yo i dont even no what it is man its a little sloppy..
AND FINALLY......-bak- yo what virus is sayin is use peoples work as an example, dont coppy.. but just as a reffrence, an work up ur own style..cuz it looks like u are new at the wwhole graffiti thing....but nice clown

BadlilDuck
08-01-2008, 06:29 PM
mm yeh they are lol wud it be better if i lose the lil bump and made it lyk symmetrical?

Mr yarbles
08-02-2008, 12:25 AM
http://i34.tinypic.com/hx6idt.jpg
http://i38.tinypic.com/8x1ro0.jpg
Working with the e

oene
Start over

maso lose the lump off your s and dn't curve your o so much.

408Bomber
08-02-2008, 05:39 AM
http://i35.tinypic.com/1073kzs.jpg New Style. Crit please?

turkey train
08-02-2008, 07:04 PM
Crits?
http://i185.photobucket.com/albums/x62/crowdedtomb/Photo-0119-1.jpg

mekosbc
08-02-2008, 08:58 PM
yo yarbles the e lookz better

CAN-KILLER
08-02-2008, 09:06 PM
408 bomber 1st lose the shine marks and 2nd make the bump on ur n less high it looks like an h

mekosbc
08-02-2008, 09:52 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/oneliner.jpg

bah.. trying something new :P crtis


YO OENE THIS IS HOW I WOULD DO UR NAME IN A ONE LINER...

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/Photo-0031.jpg

PROJECT LINK
08-02-2008, 10:16 PM
yo duz any 1 want to have a throwie battle...word i think would be kool to do is BAM....but it doesnt mater i jus dont no how to post..

(SoS)Viruz
08-02-2008, 10:34 PM
Link I'll have one with you but................. Can you give me some time, cause Im finshing some stuff up, with Ante, and Meko.

PROJECT LINK
08-02-2008, 10:43 PM
ya bro deff... but what r u doin? do i have time to get in on it...is it a battle

terkoe
08-03-2008, 01:25 AM
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q291/tonygspot/ANSRM_JUNE2408.jpg

rsakens
08-03-2008, 07:12 AM
http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/IMG_0038.jpg?t=1217760030

osnapizzel
08-03-2008, 08:00 AM
i can dig that, its relatively clean and the flows alright

rsakens
08-03-2008, 08:06 AM
mhm you think so i actly hate this one i aren't a bomber ya know i can do pieces and shit but throws aren't my thing =/ but thanks anyways for the crit mate :)

Nine9
08-03-2008, 01:59 PM
Keane that's fresh.

Does have a piece feel to it though yeah. Also, your tag is awesome dude, sick.

rsakens
08-03-2008, 03:46 PM
thankx for the support guys ]

LUCIFER_RISING
08-03-2008, 03:53 PM
lol was the flare on the k and accident

numberonestunna
08-03-2008, 06:56 PM
terkoe - stay off the lines for now.. back to the blackbook.
rsakens - looks good but the forcefield got sloppy on the bottom

Mr yarbles
08-03-2008, 07:47 PM
http://i33.tinypic.com/200uuyo.jpg
Nw throw I'm working on

Keane I don't like how it starts straight and then starts curving near the end
Other than that it's nice

terkoe
New to graffiti stay off the lines.

Incognito
08-03-2008, 09:21 PM
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n219/Bennett179/aroh.jpg
new name and throw crits?

Keane - it seems to lose flow as it goes. the letters get bigger and the curve keeps getting sharper. the style is nice though, i'd just lose some of the curve.

Yarbles - all i can say is maybe bring the second letter to the same size as the first, it kinda dominates the throw

Mr yarbles
08-03-2008, 10:16 PM
Ae
http://i35.tinypic.com/sb0uvk.jpg

Full throw
http://i34.tinypic.com/1pgpyh.jpg

Arok make all the letters same size and lose the wierd end legs on the r and k

osnapizzel
08-03-2008, 10:56 PM
yarbles loose the thing on the right side of the a and make it a continuous curve all the way through, and make the top right a little more square to match the e. also keep it at ae cause its the best looking one

hammer_time
08-03-2008, 11:08 PM
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q291/tonygspot/ANSRM_JUNE2408.jpg

no, just no

PROJECT LINK
08-03-2008, 11:31 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=86&pictureid=471

somethin i was sposed to do last night but i fell asleep..it sais bam!

chronic=straightseedless
08-04-2008, 12:58 PM
looks like pam

Rozwell
08-04-2008, 03:51 PM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a2/fender336/GetAttachmentaspx.jpg

critz?

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 04:09 PM
lay off the paint and hit the blackbook till further notice


stolen alsohttp://img393.imageshack.us/img393/88/picture304dm0.jpg

Rozwell
08-04-2008, 04:18 PM
lay off the paint and hit the blackbook till further notice



this doesnt help...


^btw the shading really sucks

so does the handstyle

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 04:21 PM
this doesnt help...


^btw the shading really sucks

so does the handstyle

yes yes it does help, and thanks for the critts cant wait to see something from you

oh wait...that was something from you!! HAHAHAHAHA i wasnt even paying attention

acereborn
08-04-2008, 04:38 PM
this doesnt help...


^btw the shading really sucks

so does the handstyle

Shut up, he's helping you, if you can't take crits then stop trying to get them.

Mr yarbles
08-04-2008, 04:57 PM
this doesnt help...


^btw the shading really sucks

so does the handstyle

Uh yeah it should help.
Stay off the walls until you get better.


snap the shading is kinda wierd but the letters and fill are solid
and that hand is fine.
also don't make the shading bubbles and small it down a little bit, make it connect to the letter more

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 05:09 PM
Uh yeah it should help.
Stay off the walls until you get better.


snap the shading is kinda wierd but the letters and fill are solid
and that hand is fine.
also don't make the shading bubbles and small it down a little bit, make it connect to the letter more


yeah
certain types of cement suck up paint like a sponge, it happens to everyone

LUCIFER_RISING
08-04-2008, 06:23 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc4/DontWasteLIfe916/DSC01996.jpg
is this thread for painted throws only or for throws on paper too

Mr yarbles
08-04-2008, 08:16 PM
http://i34.tinypic.com/27x3ptw.jpg
Sized the e I tried changing the a up a little but it made it look wierd.

lucifer I can't read it.
Looks nice though, what's it say?

Rozwell
08-04-2008, 08:48 PM
well snap i apologize.

thanks for the critz

no beef intended

Wallace
08-04-2008, 08:53 PM
yeah
certain types of cement suck up paint like a sponge, it happens to everyone

drives me insane when you look at the outline of a throwy right when your'e done and at the start is already fading

hate it

osnapizzel
08-04-2008, 10:58 PM
yeah thats why i like rusto, it beasts lol

$1LENCR
08-05-2008, 08:28 AM
ze only thing i dont like about rusto is that all dem caps make them leak.
except for rusto fatcaps.

yarbles yer shit is lookin sik. why u still in the toy forums?
lucifer- yeah this thread is for any kinna throwie--paper or wall or w/e.
ohsnap- sik throwie, just fucked up the shadow, imho.

letsgobombin
08-05-2008, 10:07 AM
went a bit ott on the bumps, but i think the c and s look ok, its not my normal throwie but i just sprung to mind, im mainly looking for crits on the p and o edit:i just looked at this again and i really dont like it
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/4852a6f5.jpg
started messing with my throwie again
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/d5b0cca2.jpg
aekz- youre getting better every time but you might want to start practicing with all your letters, otherwise your gonna have a nice a and e and a crap k and z. i would suggest taking off the tumour like lump on the a and squareing off the top like the e, other than that youre progressing nicely
acre- i would suggest putting dots or some kind of whole in your letters to make them more distuinguishable, i like that throwie just dont overlap the bottom of the onto the r
snap- your o,h,s and n are good, personally i think that 1. your throwie looked alot better on paper and it hasent transfered over well, keep practicing with paint 2. the a has sacrificed too much just for flow, i think you should take out the sticky out bit and try it on an upper case a because that would flow so much better 3. the p is very plain compared to the rest of your letters, also try to make sure your throwie doesnt curve downwards and i think you can tell the shadow is off
rozwell- does that say aoe? anyway, ohsnaps advice is exactly what you should do and dont bother painting until youre throwies at least half decent, you dont need to paint right now

Mr yarbles
08-05-2008, 08:01 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/1zpijk6.jpg
Ae

http://i33.tinypic.com/vep0gn.jpg
Full throw
toned down the a squared out the e more, the k is still fucking with me though

Fuck schools got me burnt out :/

pocs the gold white one's got potential
the other one maybe lose one of the bumps of the c and s

foureyes
08-05-2008, 08:03 PM
your right the k could use a little work but all in all its looking real good man

numberonestunna
08-05-2008, 08:14 PM
Shie-ster - fresh style. i really like it. just be carefull with your 3d.. like in the last pic on the top of the E. i dont think that 3d should be that present... nice work.

RINS
08-05-2008, 08:35 PM
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/5549/06082008007yr2.jpg
toy as hell, but what can you do?

EDIT: sorry, that image was huge.

Czar One
08-05-2008, 10:14 PM
You can hit the books for a while before painting illegal. Seriously, work it really well on paper first.

smile_
08-05-2008, 10:17 PM
http://i538.photobucket.com/albums/ff342/aykayay_/DSC04013.jpg

any crits? dont mind the face haha, I was fucking around.

Facedorateur
08-05-2008, 10:29 PM
i like the ''m'' but make it more complicated

Wallace
08-05-2008, 10:39 PM
what ive been doing for throwys lately

http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/4255/phone0004gj6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/2791/phone0005hb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

smile_- add more style to itt, props for not trying to start off real complex though

RINS- get your throwy looking at least decent before you go putting it up everywhere, please

caution+spontaneity
08-06-2008, 12:29 AM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/7580/img0571jp0.th.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0571jp0.jpg)
comments and crits. very welcome, tell me how i fucked up my sketch

mekosbc
08-06-2008, 12:44 AM
its not a throwie wrong thread bro

BadUncing69
08-06-2008, 12:49 AM
ok i dont like the eyes try and make them more hardcore and the eyebrow has got to go the colers are nice and if you could put a kik ass outline around it it would look legit.

RINS
08-06-2008, 01:20 AM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/4857/71628764tm5.jpg

@ 'caution+spontaneity'; Your coloring looks good, but if I were you I'd probably make the letters all the same size and thickness.

MiNZ
08-06-2008, 02:13 AM
http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r189/RAHREY_2006/Streetgraffcon08073.jpg
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/rhelact.jpg
crits?

AdRe*
08-06-2008, 02:24 AM
yooo MINZ
that 1st pic
what part of chi is that at?

Worms
08-06-2008, 02:29 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1350.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1349.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1348.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1347.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1346.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1345.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1344.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1343.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1341.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/IMG_1339.jpg

RINS
08-06-2008, 02:53 AM
I really like that "e" Wers.
Nice ups.

letsgobombin
08-06-2008, 06:08 AM
went a bit ott on the bumps, but i think the c and s look ok, its not my normal throwie but i just sprung to mind, im mainly looking for crits on the p and o edit:i just looked at this again and i really dont like it
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/4852a6f5.jpg
started messing with my throwie again
http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn229/letsgobombin_100/d5b0cca2.jpg

bumpo
wers- where'd the outline go in the first one? i like the throw but the r doesnt go in any of them, the pointed one doesnt go and neither does the simple one, ilike it but think of a new r
minz- wahts that second letter supposed to be? and take out that random line in the middle of the m
clue- youre right starting simple, you dont need to paint yet all i would say is to make the hole in the e into the centre, keep practicing that throwie over and over and then start coming up with ideas
asic- put a hole in the middle of the a and try it without the s being so tilted, other than that keep experimenting
smile- its good that youre starting simple but try and make your letters more proportionate and make your s more throwie like
shie- i like em, only thing i can say is practice your one liner on paper because that one does not look good
aekz- i would say to just stop with all your other letters and spend a week or 2 trying to get a k that flows and looks good

MiNZ
08-06-2008, 06:16 AM
yooo MINZ
that 1st pic
what part of chi is that at?

iono man when i paint i usually drink away the names
but i think irving and lincoln maybe

letsgobombin

i write rhel now
rl for short
r is flipped on first pic
also that spider is my girl namu shes ill wit it

letsgobombin
08-06-2008, 06:28 AM
you should really make them a bit more legible, i had trouble reading even it when you told me what it said, anyway, i think part of the l should go inside itself. also, i think you should keep your r the right way round

Worms
08-06-2008, 06:53 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/wers10.jpg

heres the new throwie im gona start hittin wit

originalhomeboy
08-06-2008, 08:30 AM
I never ever do throwies so I can't really give crits but here's my shit attempt at a throwwww.
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/4572/throwiesssvm3.jpg

numberonestunna
08-06-2008, 12:32 PM
smile - keep workin on your style.also id prolly look for a diff name..
minz - good colors on the second throwie. id like to see the whole thing but i think its in the bathroom and hard to get a good view..
wers- keep gettin up. personally im not a fan of your E and R but its all together a good throw up.
originalhb - those are actually not bad. i like em quite a bit.

caution+spontaneity
08-06-2008, 02:20 PM
thanx for the feedback i think i'll work on the S and an outline

bak
08-06-2008, 02:50 PM
crits?
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/cruzchuy/08-02-08_1253.jpg

shie-ster
08-06-2008, 03:02 PM
letsgobombing- i actually kind of like my 1liner. that one was a bit fucked up, ill give you that, but for the most part, i like it. thanks for the crits though.
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z3/shie-izzle/l_533fa5b26e12bcdd9a64d714f43f1f21.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z3/shie-izzle/l_60aa532b25e7390215dfff2f8477b3e3.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z3/shie-izzle/l_6002e8a8b07dc70a17a67af048ddc12d.jpg
^me and a freind did reverse throws, he did my name, i did his^
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z3/shie-izzle/l_8a585f7600bf091f4da694f2e513840b.jpg
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z3/shie-izzle/l_c85b4e5da21cae635cc302261ae0ab7d.jpg
maybe more later..
herts- i really like your idea, just work on the e and r.
wers- im reaally liking it, just work on your right leg of the r.it looks good, but it just doesnt flow with what your doing.
bak- start simple. then start giving your leters more motion and detail.

ETCH 07
08-06-2008, 06:23 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/4476/graff1037dz3.jpg

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/5904/graff1014ri2.jpg

im old school as hell , but i aint done nothing since 84 - 86 era and now my 17 year old son is starting to learn which has got me back into it at 36 .. crazy but im just about doing what i like to do ...

the other i did by my old name , but since changed ... toy as hell , but it is what it is for now till the skills improve ...