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IbuprofenTablets
05-16-2010, 08:42 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo45.jpg
Quick joint for a toy throw up battle.
C'mon, we need more people to get in this.

4ENOD
05-17-2010, 01:05 AM
http://i822.photobucket.com/albums/zz143/DONE_FOUR/101_3528.jpg

LeaksOne
05-17-2010, 01:08 AM
the O is out of place

4ENOD
05-17-2010, 01:13 AM
how do you mean? should it be higher?

LeaksOne
05-17-2010, 01:18 AM
put a point on it like the other letters. possibly

4ENOD
05-17-2010, 01:21 AM
ok.

pleasedontstayr
05-17-2010, 11:08 AM
http://i43.tinypic.com/6ygqdi.jpg
i already know its shitty so theres no point in repeating. crits?

DONE4: i like it but the N kinda kills it for me.

massacreman
05-17-2010, 12:08 PM
[QUOTE=pleasedontstayr;1616565]
i already know its shitty so theres no point in repeating. crits?
QUOTE]

its shityy.
fix it.
bars.
sketch.
practise.
new to graff thread although your not that new.

Zookyook
05-17-2010, 12:10 PM
NAW is right! hahah... jk man, just work on the bars for sure, the N and W are totally fucked, the right bar of the A is the only thing that has a chance

pleasedontstayr
05-17-2010, 12:51 PM
my sketches are decent, not to be conceited. i just havent had that much painting practice. thanks for the crit massacre but i know bars etc.

overall thanks though. its like the 4th time ive been painting in the 6 something months ive been writing? D:

Zookyook
05-17-2010, 01:35 PM
its cool man the first time i attempted a painted piece i went over myself with a throwup cuz it was so fuckin terrible lol i wish i had a pic of that one... just keep practicing... and id actually consider that more of a simp than a throwie, lots of negative space between the letters and there was obviously some cutbacks

Mask one
05-17-2010, 03:17 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=460&pictureid=3415 MASK 1

pleasedontstayr
05-17-2010, 04:55 PM
yeah i dont consider it a throw at all, i just had NO clue where to post a painted pic in the toy thread cause theres the piece thread... but this is nowhere near a piece. lmfao

Blar
05-17-2010, 05:31 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/ka4jmh.jpg

iPwnF00lz
05-17-2010, 05:37 PM
does that say be? if so try doing the e different, so it's not slanted maybe.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/c1f8af4e.jpg

Zookyook
05-17-2010, 06:03 PM
yeah i dont consider it a throw at all, i just had NO clue where to post a painted pic in the toy thread cause theres the piece thread... but this is nowhere near a piece. lmfao

toy bombs/pieces is the place... cuz thatd be a bomb or a burner even

pleasedontstayr
05-17-2010, 08:21 PM
ill keep that in mind thanks zook!

Sbal
05-17-2010, 11:34 PM
Bare, lose the tongue

mawks
05-18-2010, 10:50 AM
rype - the y doesn't seem like it fits, so work on that i guess
sbal - your s doesn't match the b and a
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image046-1.jpg

massacreman
05-18-2010, 10:54 AM
mawks, dope.
but maybe make the a lowecase, it could flow better

iPwnF00lz
05-18-2010, 02:52 PM
alright thanks, the m looks too overdone imo.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/e0817eb2.jpg

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 02:59 PM
rype that R needs another bump in the middle to make it more like an R... try something like this maybe...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4619730260_e004c4e334_o.jpg
that tiny bump in the middle where the line kicks into is actually pretty crucial with R's
and 3d that shit yo, u have the middle colored in and no 3d on the outside

iPwnF00lz
05-18-2010, 03:48 PM
rype that R needs another bump in the middle to make it more like an R... try something like this maybe...

and 3d that shit yo, u have the middle colored in and no 3d on the outside

word ill try something like that out.

I wasn't 3ding I clean it up with contrasting the negative space and the letters.

Flawless Victory
05-18-2010, 04:17 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo45.jpg
Quick joint for a toy throw up battle.
C'mon, we need more people to get in this.
Bump this, it's dope.

im not a cop or anything
05-18-2010, 04:36 PM
RYPE- r needs a little work. the bottom loooks like a old mans scrotom just saying.
BLAR?-chill with the characters. there so played out

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:31 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture7.jpg
new throwie.

im not a cop or anything
05-18-2010, 05:34 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture7.jpg
new throwie.

work on the shadow. you cant have it on both sides of a throw. the shadow lays on one side of it. pick 1

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:36 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture10.jpg
this is a better one, new throwie enjoyy.

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:37 PM
yeah thanks. I'll get on that.

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:38 PM
hows that one?

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-18-2010, 05:41 PM
RYPE- r needs a little work. the bottom loooks like a old mans scrotom just saying.
Somewhat true

And I must say you probly have the best name EVER lol

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-18-2010, 05:44 PM
Looking good mask but the K looks like an H make the legs more distinguishable/apart ya know

sinkilla1
05-18-2010, 05:46 PM
yeah rype is a good name cept theres a big old head who writes rype from where im from and im pretty sure thousands of people write that

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:47 PM
yo thanks, peepz tell me that it looks like an h.

Vinnie Paz
05-18-2010, 05:55 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture10.jpg
this is a better one, new throwie enjoyy.

looks good but i'd lower the center of the m and the a so itll flow with the other letters

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:56 PM
>;1617352']Looking good mask but the K looks like an H make the legs more distinguishable/apart ya know

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg
more like this?:confused:

Mask one
05-18-2010, 05:58 PM
looks good but i'd lower the center of the m and the a so itll flow with the other letters

also is this better?
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

im not a cop or anything
05-18-2010, 06:10 PM
damn when you give this kid crits he fixes it right away. good ambition. its already much better

Vinnie Paz
05-18-2010, 06:31 PM
that look better just keep doing them and youl find whats natural.

Flawless Victory
05-18-2010, 06:54 PM
the only thing that really needs work on that throw is the K, but DAMN does it need some work.

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-18-2010, 07:02 PM
And I think the 'a's stomach should be lower but that's guna be tricky seeing as the bubble on the M would probly block it but you gotta make it work somehow

Mask one
05-18-2010, 08:16 PM
thanks alot guys

syne7
05-18-2010, 11:54 PM
Mask: Great progression, you throw looks alot better than it did, just that K is alittle off.

http://i48.tinypic.com/rms31v.jpg
My E never comes out the way I want it to :/ crits on this?

ILL810
05-19-2010, 03:45 AM
could someone help me out with why my 1liners so shitty? its the first one ive ever tried. any detailed crits or examples would be helpful! thanks!

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/8516/0519000430.th.jpg (http://img41.imageshack.us/i/0519000430.jpg/)

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 04:03 AM
does it say arsot??? oneliners are tricky, u gotta have the steez to pull em off right, usually the faster u do it the cleaner they look... but the biggest problem i see is the A, maybe u should start it in a different place (looks like u started in the middle) or just change the shape make it lowecase or something

Mask one
05-19-2010, 05:17 PM
Syne your n is sick

ILL810
05-19-2010, 05:23 PM
does it say arsot??? oneliners are tricky, u gotta have the steez to pull em off right, usually the faster u do it the cleaner they look... but the biggest problem i see is the A, maybe u should start it in a different place (looks like u started in the middle) or just change the shape make it lowecase or something
arkot.. ive tried lowercase 20 diff ways, im just not diggin it.

Mask one
05-19-2010, 05:23 PM
Mask: Great progression, you throw looks alot better than it did, just that K is alittle off.

http://i48.tinypic.com/rms31v.jpg
My E never comes out the way I want it to :/ crits on this?
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture14.jpg I think this is a better k...
crit :)

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 06:02 PM
man i hate that K lol no offense but work out somethin else, same with the M... the a and s arent bad though

Blar
05-19-2010, 07:05 PM
http://i45.tinypic.com/i39s9d.jpg

Mask one
05-19-2010, 07:41 PM
yo want me write somethin else?

hpir
05-19-2010, 08:04 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture179.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture182.jpg
crits?

Mask one
05-19-2010, 08:20 PM
I have a friend name kane lol btw nice

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 09:18 PM
the KA in the top one looks good... didnt u write kan before?

Sbal
05-19-2010, 11:11 PM
Kane- Personally, im diggin that green one.
Mask- i guess like everyones syain, just tweak the k more, but you dont gotta change your name unless you want...
Blar- That A looks gross with the tongue haha =D
A new sorta blocky style im tryin, screwed up my shadows as usual, but im focusing on the letter structure
Crits greatly appreciated

H1P30N3R
05-20-2010, 02:09 AM
kane- the green one is pretty fresh
mask- read last crit
blar-pretty nice n simple
sbal-s kind of resembles a 5 but other than that i think it has potential jus need to play with it

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/hipeinblackbook.jpg

syne7
05-20-2010, 03:33 AM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture14.jpg I think this is a better k...
crit :)http://i49.tinypic.com/2vb6jrl.jpg
instead of that line in the middle try it off the side like in the pic and space out you M like you did here:
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

Oh and:
Sbal: Its getting better.
Hipe: Um, there are much easier ways and better looking ways to do that throw, no offence, your h looks like an x, i know your trying to make a creative throw, but you don't have actual letters down yet, i would say start over but just fix that h and see what happends with it.
Kane: Good throw, your e is a bit simple compared to the other letters
Blar: I can't tell what that second letter is, the facial expression is kind of hiding the lines that define the letter.

Blar
05-20-2010, 05:30 AM
It is a lower case e.

Sbal
05-20-2010, 08:43 AM
Oh for some reason i was seeing an upper case A. you should lose that line that pops up in the middle of the e

mawks
05-20-2010, 11:40 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-3.jpg
still having trouble with the a.. get at me if you have any ideas.
i tried working with a lowercase a but it still looks outta wack

Saker2000
05-20-2010, 11:47 AM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-3.jpg
still having trouble with the a.. get at me if you have any ideas.
i tried working with a lowercase a but it still looks outta wack

good shit mawks. im likin that M. but the W trips me out a bit.

Mask one
05-20-2010, 12:19 PM
http://i49.tinypic.com/2vb6jrl.jpg
instead of that line in the middle try it off the side like in the pic and space out you M like you did here:
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

Oh and:
Sbal: Its getting better.
Hipe: Um, there are much easier ways and better looking ways to do that throw, no offence, your h looks like an x, i know your trying to make a creative throw, but you don't have actual letters down yet, i would say start over but just fix that h and see what happends with it.
Kane: Good throw, your e is a bit simple compared to the other letters
Blar: I can't tell what that second letter is, the facial expression is kind of hiding the lines that define the letter.

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture18.jpg I tried that heres the pic

Zookyook
05-20-2010, 12:41 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4624867906_2fc6e7e75e_o.jpg

yo mawk... heres how i would change it... u gotta clean it up a bit of course but a lowecase A like this and making ur K match the M a little more looks better, and it makes the K look less like an H

mawks
05-20-2010, 01:54 PM
good crit, thanks

Zookyook
05-20-2010, 02:01 PM
i do what i can lol... post the revised version when u get it figured out, should be hot

syne7
05-20-2010, 02:02 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture18.jpg I tried that heres the piclooks a lot better

Zookyook
05-20-2010, 02:35 PM
the 3d coming off that M.... turrible just turrible.... work on that part, i still dont like that K but its better

LeaksOne
05-20-2010, 02:54 PM
battle throw

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60100.jpg

Fury
05-20-2010, 03:13 PM
The E and C need work, but especially the C. The rest are good though

Flawless Victory
05-20-2010, 04:04 PM
I don't see anything wrong with it.

AteskOne
05-20-2010, 04:22 PM
i dig leaks.


go vote on the toss battle fuckers!

Zazza
05-20-2010, 09:33 PM
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/57/throwup2z.th.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/throwup2z.jpg/)

Painted this one on top of an old store. It was dark and my friend kept on turning off the flashlight cause he was paranoid witch is why it sucks pretty bad. Some guy came after us once we were done too, it was kinda messed.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3865/throwup3.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/i/throwup3.jpg/)

This one I painted on the old trailer in the woods again over my last one. I think its better than my last one but I messed up on the A and the fill wasn't as thick as I would want it to be. What you get with cheap paint I guess.

Mask one
05-20-2010, 10:52 PM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy

Mask one
05-20-2010, 10:53 PM
battle throw

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60100.jpg

yo leaks I digg everything but the R yo fresh man!!

Sbal
05-20-2010, 11:56 PM
looks sick Leaks
Make those letters uniform Zazza
Continuing with this style
crits please(Left one is lame)

AteskOne
05-21-2010, 12:12 AM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy
think again.

LeaksOne
05-21-2010, 02:13 AM
The E and C need work, but especially the C. The rest are good though


yo leaks I digg everything but the R yo fresh man!!

i hear ya fellas. i hate R's as first letters and i never use C's so mine hurt pretty bad. and the E on that does look kinda funny

haha im surprised no one noticed the shadow to the right of the T :D

soath
05-21-2010, 05:56 AM
weak ass attempts. still no throw.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P5190027.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P5190026.jpg

NiL
05-21-2010, 07:24 AM
too straight with round bruh

RES4
05-21-2010, 07:28 AM
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy

you think thats sick?

soath
05-21-2010, 09:24 AM
too straight with round bruh

yeah, i figurd that too. it's been a few years now and still no throw. it's bullshit.

Zookyook
05-21-2010, 09:49 AM
soath it just looks like 5 individual letters... u should make the letters overlap... look at the RESPECT throw that leaks did, the E is behind the R the S is behind the E and so on... try it like that and itll be a throwup, then just put a small 3d on it and ur in business

soath
05-21-2010, 10:11 AM
ya i know about putting it together, i just don't think these letters are legit...

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soaththrow.jpg

the cross should be in the S top not the bottom.


little diff style.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soathrow.jpg

soath
05-21-2010, 10:35 AM
bottom of the H looks like nuts. :D

Zookyook
05-21-2010, 10:53 AM
are u a super-christian or something? too many crosses... and the 3d should come off of the side of one of ur letters too... like it does on the R in RESIST make it come off ur S the same way

soath
05-21-2010, 11:11 AM
are u a super-christian or something? too many crosses... and the 3d should come off of the side of one of ur letters too... like it does on the R in RESIST make it come off ur S the same way

haha, yeah I wouldn't call myself SUPER christian but i thot it was a way to tie the letters together... the whole time I was thinking it was to much. yeah as for the 3d I was considering it a drop shadow, like head on light from the top or the bottom... i'll repost something later. thanks for the help. suprised you don't hate the letters or at least didn't mention how played they are, seems like 90% of throws look this way.. maybe I've just been trying to hard. peace.

Zookyook
05-21-2010, 11:18 AM
anything with a TH is gonna be a pain in the ass i think... just keep practicing... it shouldnt matter to u if u bite a few things from different places, ur new so its not gonna be frowned upon if u take letters from someone else and change them a bit, just dont copy someones shit identically... and above i meant RESPECT not RESIST lol

AteskOne
05-21-2010, 01:05 PM
yo!


go vote on the toss battle fuckers!
it's been a dead tie between me and FV for like 3 days now. a little enthusiasm fellows. take 5 seconds and go vote.

yeah i see this new method of battling failing miserably.

massacreman
05-23-2010, 04:46 AM
Soath, everyone is right
Mesh. blackbook thread and use bars

Im going to write Roets i think.
But i cant't get my R to flow in throw, fo sho.
Anyways, any help is appreciated.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ewikig.jpg
Here are some ideas on my R.
http://i47.tinypic.com/23tp0sl.jpg

Stuck
05-23-2010, 07:36 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo2-1.jpg

massacreman
05-23-2010, 08:15 AM
give crits to get them bye!

CrustOner
05-23-2010, 10:51 AM
H needs a hell of a lot of work. The other letters look fine.

Sbal
05-23-2010, 11:32 AM
I like that stuck, just make the H go in a straighter line with the other letters.

Some more shitty attempts. Crits?

massacreman
05-23-2010, 03:00 PM
Soath, everyone is right
Mesh. blackbook thread and use bars

Im going to write Roets i think.
But i cant't get my R to flow in throw, fo sho.
Anyways, any help is appreciated.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ewikig.jpg
Here are some ideas on my R.
http://i47.tinypic.com/23tp0sl.jpg

bump

Stuck
05-23-2010, 03:08 PM
dont bump it. it looks crappy theres no flow. it looks like u just stuck letters together.....id bebummed if i saw that on a wall

massacreman
05-23-2010, 03:20 PM
lol dude shut up, im asking for crits not for hate, and your stuff sucks too, maybe even harder... fuckface

Stuck
05-23-2010, 03:32 PM
Xd lulzzz I GAVE A CRIT WORK ON THE FLOW

Sbal
05-23-2010, 05:06 PM
Yeah i see like no consistency just random letter styles

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-23-2010, 06:01 PM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/052210_144800.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/052210_145901.jpg

Zookyook
05-23-2010, 07:32 PM
hot shit hot shit

Vinnie Paz
05-23-2010, 09:30 PM
im feelin that evil

Saker2000
05-23-2010, 11:35 PM
crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

H1P30N3R
05-24-2010, 12:18 AM
evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg

Saker2000
05-24-2010, 12:22 AM
evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg

yo, thanks for the advice ill work on it fer show. you got some pretty good shit goin there but i see that "h" alot. not bad though!

FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle
05-24-2010, 04:36 AM
thanks for the crits. i just got a job so hopfully ill post lots more hahah.
it would be better if the top of your H's bars didnt overlap imo

massacreman
05-24-2010, 07:55 AM
dont bump it. it looks crappy theres no flow. it looks like u just stuck letters together.....id bebummed if i saw that on a wall

lol i was reading it wrong, i thought you said u suck, but you said u sTuck

"awesome"ONE
05-24-2010, 12:10 PM
evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg
interesting throw idea

CrustOner
05-24-2010, 12:54 PM
It looks like each letter was bitten individually.

kace91
05-24-2010, 03:50 PM
http://s2.subirimagenes.com/otros/4555221snc00844.jpg

Simple as shit, i know, but i cant come up with anything better.
With simples you can work from straight letters, and the same with tags, but what do you use as a base in throws?

Also, i dunno what to do with the k. the others letters match better with each other, but the k just doesnt seem to fit.

And a question: would you start hittin the streets at my level, or just stick with tags until coming with something more developed?

H1P30N3R
05-24-2010, 04:01 PM
It looks like each letter was bitten individually.

just trying different throw ideas my style hasn't came together yet and im not biting but everyone is entitled to there own opinion

Sbal
05-24-2010, 07:28 PM
Hipe- make the P squareish at the top like the others
Kace- Most definetly do not hit the streets. Make the upper right leg of the K a little fatter like the other. Extend the left leg of the A to the other. Make the C and E flat towards the bottom like the K and A.
Sake- that K takes too much space and the other letters just have weird styles.


Bump for teh crits

BlacktodaFuture
05-24-2010, 07:41 PM
sake. i was gonna write that until i went to montreal and saw how the Sake there killed shit.

Saker2000
05-24-2010, 11:21 PM
sake. i was gonna write that until i went to montreal and saw how the Sake there killed shit.

yeah i heard he tares up montreal but im just tryin to get some flow going with words an shit.

"awesome"ONE
05-25-2010, 12:58 AM
yeah i heard he tares up montreal but im just tryin to get some flow going with words an shit.
sake tarin up montreal is an understatement lol hes a king forsure

Blar
05-25-2010, 04:54 AM
First time trying this new throw on a wall..

http://i48.tinypic.com/2rnzhhi.jpg

Sbal
05-25-2010, 08:48 AM
Gross

kace91
05-25-2010, 09:04 AM
First time trying this new throw on a wall..

http://i48.tinypic.com/2rnzhhi.jpg


well im just a toy as seen on the previous page, but i think i can give some advice (give to get and all that)

Leaving apart all the fails related to can control, such as leaving space between the trhow and the powerline/aura/howyouwannacallit, all is absolutely irregular. Just look at the main bar of the E and you can see that in the upper part is much fatter than in the end, and the same happen with all the bars in the b (i know that bars arent so important in throwies, but still you have to keep some basic structure.)

Besides, the purpose of the powerline/aura its to contrast, if you use almost the same color its hardly noticeable and it has no point. Anyway, powerlines and brights are to use in pieces, and maybe simples, but not in throwies because throwies are made to be painted fast. if you have time to make all of that, youll be able to make a simple instead.

and also, shades are real wack, but i dont know if is a problem of the throw or you just couldnt make them as you wanted because of can control.

Saker2000
05-25-2010, 04:05 PM
sake tarin up montreal is an understatement lol hes a king forsure

hah yeah true dat.

Sbal
05-26-2010, 11:45 AM
Bare its just not lookin good. Hit more books and practice can control.

I've been givin crits to you guys for the last couple pages and got no crits on my shit. So if i've given you crits before, return the favor.
Ezac is not mine.

IllLogic
05-26-2010, 12:32 PM
he last one is the best, your hand is kinda shaky tho

Sbal
05-26-2010, 12:34 PM
thanks man

AlecR2K
05-26-2010, 02:14 PM
crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

Sake is kinda huge. just sayin

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-ssfp001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-cst001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/b080.jpg

Sbal
05-26-2010, 02:18 PM
That roller is fuckin gnarly

AlecR2K
05-26-2010, 02:22 PM
fuck yea

pleasedontstayr
05-26-2010, 02:37 PM
lol kace... its not a powerline... or an aura.

forcefield.

Flawless Victory
05-26-2010, 02:57 PM
I just call it a second outline...

Fury
05-26-2010, 03:33 PM
I call it a stroke. And yeah, that roller is dope.

kace91
05-26-2010, 03:44 PM
lol kace... its not a powerline... or an aura.

forcefield.

its funny, cause i find a different name for that in every place. in my country (and i think in other parts of europe too) its called powerline by everyone, or just power... and here in bs ive read aura, forcefield...

but well, as long as you understand what im talking about, its ok xD

"awesome"ONE
05-26-2010, 05:29 PM
we all know what he means who cares

ironcrack
05-27-2010, 09:53 AM
forcefeild/ final. you can use 3 colors and paint a 'thowie' fast

syne7
05-27-2010, 10:52 AM
http://i46.tinypic.com/nxkuf6.jpg
new e, crits?

Stuck
05-27-2010, 11:00 AM
your E is to small and its slackin

Mr yarbles
05-27-2010, 05:22 PM
Whos down for a good throw battle?

H1P30N3R
05-27-2010, 05:53 PM
tried making the p flat at the top like the crit suggested any better ?

http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/ad308/slash440022/DCFC0167.jpg

Wolf Tits
05-27-2010, 06:09 PM
Hipe- Bring the lines that separate the two bars of the H closer to the center and add some horizontials to distinguish it as an H.

H1P30N3R
05-27-2010, 06:14 PM
yea agreed thanks

essen
05-27-2010, 09:45 PM
http://i41.tinypic.com/34e21cg.jpg

bumpo por crito

IbuprofenTablets
05-27-2010, 09:55 PM
Quick dollar store crayon joint for a throw battle.
Y'know, i'm starting to appreciate cheaper shit now.
oh, and we need more people for this battle.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo54.jpg

Mr yarbles
05-28-2010, 10:09 AM
LYNGUISTICS!
Dope throw
Cunninlynguist sound

Sbal
05-28-2010, 06:06 PM
The music makes me high even though i stay away from cannabis

"awesome"ONE
05-28-2010, 06:13 PM
bumpo por crito
alright man this will make your throw look way better

first, make the sides of your letters straight, only round the tops, also take the lean off your letters, and make the 3-d better

Flash_One
05-30-2010, 04:27 PM
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1385/img88imageshack.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/i/img88imageshack.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

MoganOne
05-30-2010, 06:03 PM
Quick throw not to happy with the G
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/mog-1.jpg

Flash_One
05-30-2010, 07:13 PM
crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

get a a new name, already a sake in montreal and hes a fuckin vet

LeaksOne
05-30-2010, 10:01 PM
Flash- maybe try making all your letters the same thickness and lower the outward bar on the L. at a glance it could be mistaken as a T and the big hole in the S draws too much attention and the H needs some reworking. all in all though you got a solid throw

Mogan- not sure why you have a hole in your M at the top and if i didnt know you wrote Mog/an i wouldnt be sure what the middle letter was. and fix the G

AteskOne
05-31-2010, 11:14 AM
go vote on the throwy battle right meow.

KAZonee
05-31-2010, 09:09 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=3361

wat yahh think?

MoganOne
06-01-2010, 08:36 AM
Flash- maybe try making all your letters the same thickness and lower the outward bar on the L. at a glance it could be mistaken as a T and the big hole in the S draws too much attention and the H needs some reworking. all in all though you got a solid throw

Mogan- not sure why you have a hole in your M at the top and if i didnt know you wrote Mog/an i wouldnt be sure what the middle letter was. and fix the G

LOL I put that hole in it because I was bored but I normally would not put it... I came up with a better G and O I will post it eventually

SMIL
06-01-2010, 04:55 PM
your all fuckin toys mon i am the grandmaster smil and fuck cop, fuck terrible tkid, fuck seen, fuck mister cartoon, fuck vfr its all about me and my homie trane representin sfc bitches

soath
06-01-2010, 11:13 PM
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/bakery9.jpg

HaLo_07
06-01-2010, 11:18 PM
your all fuckin toys mon i am the grandmaster smil and fuck cop, fuck terrible tkid, fuck seen, fuck mister cartoon, fuck vfr its all about me and my homie trane representin sfc bitches

Sais the fool that won't say what he writes, where he writes, and only writes one post and its to diss the legends...

What ever *****, mother fuck them? Naw, Mother fuck YOU! hahaha

soath
06-01-2010, 11:38 PM
Sais the fool that won't say what he writes, where he writes, and only writes one post and its to diss the legends...

What ever *****, mother fuck them? Naw, Mother fuck YOU! hahaha

hold steady mang. it's just sum gooftroopin' TROLL, he's talking about Marc Echo's "getting up" and its still free crew. not legit.

SMIL
06-02-2010, 09:40 PM
i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

Wolf Tits
06-02-2010, 11:03 PM
i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

Ok lets see it playa?

HaLo_07
06-03-2010, 02:44 AM
i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

...? So you put your goverment out there and talk about Vampin cat's and all this junk...You is some poser like the rest of them hipsters out there...

What a joke. iight back to buisness where the REAL writers at?

Phillip McDougall
06-03-2010, 08:30 AM
It's an obvious troll, guys..

Sbal
06-03-2010, 08:39 AM
Dude no way that kid is dead serious

syne7
06-03-2010, 12:48 PM
Dude no way that kid is dead serioushahah, goin in my sig

soath
06-03-2010, 07:39 PM
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/bakery9.jpg


bump for crits, I tried doing what y'all said here. peace.

Sbal
06-03-2010, 10:10 PM
I dont like the ath that much, oh and sorry about your board homie

soath
06-03-2010, 10:39 PM
I dont like the ath that much, oh and sorry about your board homie

yeah, was trying an uppercase A too, I have no other ideas for the T

I mean the SO are easy... the rest is really tough for me.

Sbal
06-03-2010, 10:53 PM
Yeha i dont really know how to do a legit T with that style, but i also think you should make the tops of the H and the O jut out at an angle like the rest of the letters, not just rounded.

Fury
06-04-2010, 12:37 PM
I'm glad I'm not the only person who paints boards haha

Jrose152
06-05-2010, 06:09 AM
some help?
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-01-022030.jpg

YaPp3RoN3R
06-05-2010, 11:19 AM
ummmm..... better pic ,
and some 3-d , alot of practice
for me thats too normal , but thats just my style , try to expirement with different letters , go find some inspiration

iPwnF00lz
06-05-2010, 11:24 AM
Spok or Spook? If spook make letters the same size. Fix the k, tune the o. Try again and post up.

Sbal
06-05-2010, 01:41 PM
Yeah dont do the baby O like that. And dont use paint yet your just wasting it

mawks
06-05-2010, 05:43 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image057.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image054-1.jpg
which?

-NAUZ-
06-06-2010, 05:05 AM
i prefer the letters of the top one

woonybomber
06-06-2010, 08:28 AM
there the same fucking sped

RES4
06-06-2010, 08:56 AM
no ther not, top is better

soath
06-06-2010, 11:47 AM
i agree.

Shay70
06-06-2010, 03:01 PM
get a a new name, already a sake in montreal and hes a fuckin vet
yea hes in VC which is one of the biggest crews in Toronto/Montreal
i think he mite b in KPS too whihc the other big crew in Toronto

4ENOD
06-07-2010, 12:41 AM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb265/Jaimes420187/101_3809.jpg

Mr yarbles
06-07-2010, 10:00 AM
:rolleyes:

AteskOne
06-07-2010, 01:34 PM
go vote on the toss battle.

Havoc97
06-07-2010, 02:33 PM
Time to crit!
http://i914.photobucket.com/albums/ac341/Isaac-Ashton/throwupbomb.jpg?t=1275938967

mawks
06-07-2010, 02:39 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image049-1.jpg
somebody exchange with me

BlacktodaFuture
06-07-2010, 06:51 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1655.jpg?t=1275954623

mawks. lets exchange. Safer.

Sbal
06-07-2010, 07:37 PM
What happened to giving crits to recieve them homies

YaPp3RoN3R
06-07-2010, 09:39 PM
i love that throwie

skull-e
06-08-2010, 12:13 PM
Sake is kinda huge. just sayin

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-ssfp001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-cst001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/b080.jpg

I made a post like this earlier, but he didn't listen, so I'm gonna bump your post.

CHANGE YOUR FUCKING NAME ALREADY, STOP ASKING FOR CRITS.

*EDIT

He painted with Causr, Trik and Ensoe on that picture, and if you haven't heard of any of these 3 names, you shouldn't be writing.

dave the pirate
06-08-2010, 04:26 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4006/4578243033_060de1fdcf.jpg

2FNK?
06-08-2010, 06:15 PM
Who is writing sake on here that isn't the real one?

skull-e
06-08-2010, 06:43 PM
"saker2000"

Onsub
06-08-2010, 06:55 PM
feel free to critique.
I'm open to positive and negative criticism

http://i49.tinypic.com/2ufzz4p.jpg

viseversa101
06-08-2010, 07:11 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11100.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11101.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11108.jpg

Onsub
06-08-2010, 07:15 PM
damn..
Looking at your throwies makes me feel like even more of a toy.
The colors in the first two pop like no other.
And the rabbit, creative.

viseversa101
06-08-2010, 07:17 PM
i figure the rabbit gives me a chance to leave messages thru facial expression, or messages hes sayin...this here was done cuz i did 8 pieces over a crews yard...they got caught sleepin

Phillip McDougall
06-08-2010, 07:18 PM
OH GAWD kill me now.

viseversa101
06-08-2010, 07:19 PM
over an internet forum? ur cool

IbuprofenTablets
06-08-2010, 07:21 PM
i think he's trying to say it's shit, bruh.

Sbal
06-08-2010, 07:23 PM
The shadow looks off on that rabbit one, and that E is fuckin fatter than a motherfucker
Onsub thats not a throw, and dont make the letters loop through each other like that

Onsub
06-08-2010, 07:23 PM
Someone explain to me how those are shit..
I think they are well done to say the least..

IbuprofenTablets
06-08-2010, 07:24 PM
you trollin'?

BlacktodaFuture
06-08-2010, 07:25 PM
damn..
Looking at your throwies makes me feel like even less of a toy.

Onsub
06-08-2010, 07:26 PM
I meant more of a toy. what do you expect? I have like 5 posts.

IbuprofenTablets
06-08-2010, 07:27 PM
You Trollin'?

Onsub
06-08-2010, 07:29 PM
anyways...on my doodle. What do you recommend instead of the looping through letters..I personally like that style.

cesspool
06-08-2010, 08:10 PM
I made a post like this earlier, but he didn't listen, so I'm gonna bump your post.

CHANGE YOUR FUCKING NAME ALREADY, STOP ASKING FOR CRITS.

*EDIT

He painted with Causr, Trik and Ensoe on that picture, and if you haven't heard of any of these 3 names, you shouldn't be writing.

that engine actually, noob....
and if u said they painted them TOGETHER, ur even more wrong...


on another note fuck u graff nerds get the fuck off the internet

2FNK?
06-08-2010, 08:22 PM
Vice, I'm toy as hell, but it looks like you tagged over a piece that was a shit ton better than your bunny throw. You can halfway see it through your sloppy fill. Just saying, I wouldn't do it. Maybe you got beef with the crew or something, I dunno... good way to get jumped and deserve it.

Nothing against you though, especially if they pieced something gay over your stuff.

2FNK?
06-08-2010, 08:25 PM
http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb265/Jaimes420187/101_3809.jpg

Your N looks like a V. clean it up and don't have lines crossing eachother, make one side over another covering it up.

H1P30N3R
06-08-2010, 11:48 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001.jpg

shotty
06-09-2010, 03:40 AM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/SDC11088.jpg

Wolf Tits
06-09-2010, 04:41 AM
Hipe-You forgot the shadow on the hump of the P. Second, that curvy shit you keep doing to your letters just makes it look like shit. It makes them really uneven and it's like I'm drunk looking at it.
Shot-Read what I said on the bomb thread.

Ughhh...

NosE2
06-09-2010, 06:51 AM
feel free to critique.
I'm open to positive and negative criticism

http://i49.tinypic.com/2ufzz4p.jpg

ok you said you dont see whats wrong with this? first take a look at that triple glow or whatever the fuck you did. you just need one line for a glow. next....overlapping isnt a bad thing to do, but here you took it a little too far. you only really see a "o" and "n" at first glance, try to make it more legible. and this is more of a straight letter style, not a throwie. throwies are bubble letters you know, keep it up though you have potential

Onsub
06-09-2010, 01:51 PM
ok you said you dont see whats wrong with this? first take a look at that triple glow or whatever the fuck you did. you just need one line for a glow. next....overlapping isnt a bad thing to do, but here you took it a little too far. you only really see a "o" and "n" at first glance, try to make it more legible. and this is more of a straight letter style, not a throwie. throwies are bubble letters you know, keep it up though you have potential

Thanks bro. Thats exactly what I wanted.. I know im not good at this point. But having someone give me tips is much appreciated.

H1P30N3R
06-09-2010, 02:47 PM
Hipe-You forgot the shadow on the hump of the P. Second, that curvy shit you keep doing to your letters just makes it look like shit. It makes them really uneven and it's like I'm drunk looking at it

ok ill try straightening my letters up

H1P30N3R
06-09-2010, 03:20 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC00013.jpg

LeaksOne
06-09-2010, 03:25 PM
stop using chisel markers or keep everything one thickness. and the thing on the bottom left of your H is unecessary and tweak the E.

2FNK?
06-09-2010, 04:05 PM
Shot, the first one would look decent if you just did a 1 color fill, even though your letter thickness is madddd off in a lot of places, and why do you have a curved center for your o when its a straight letter......
The second one, fuck man, your t looks like an R and your O is in the wrong place, way too much overlapping, your transitions need to be on every letter or no letters, your letters need to be the same size, letter thickness is still off a bit. Your 3d is off, and you look like you wanted to do a transition on the O and T but you fucked it up by putting a line through it. Either add a transition, or make the 3d go over the T.

You posted in the wrong forum btw.

viseversa101
06-09-2010, 04:15 PM
i believe the 2nd pic for shotty is his signature

H1P30N3R
06-09-2010, 05:26 PM
stop using chisel markers or keep everything one thickness. and the thing on the bottom left of your H is unecessary and tweak the E.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002.jpg

LeaksOne
06-09-2010, 06:53 PM
Better but make your E the same size as the other letters and try adding a dot on your I

Sbal
06-09-2010, 07:01 PM
2Fnk that wouldnt look good with a one color fill the letters are gross

H1P30N3R
06-09-2010, 07:52 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC00014.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
06-09-2010, 08:11 PM
2nd. H (round the top maybe?) and I
1st. E but round the top
new P.

2FNK?
06-09-2010, 08:50 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG00800-20100609-1725.jpg

Sbal
06-09-2010, 09:34 PM
Dont overlap the A

2FNK?
06-09-2010, 09:35 PM
Yeah, my R's structure sucks too obviously haha.
I fixed it when I actually bombed, it's in the bomb/pieces forum.

suparjafar
06-09-2010, 10:14 PM
everything on this page is silly start over fools

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0361.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0365.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0345.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0348.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0340.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

pewp

2FNK?
06-09-2010, 10:18 PM
Paper shit looks good, painting needs work. why no 3d on the throwup you painted?

H1P30N3R
06-10-2010, 12:07 AM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC00022.jpg

2FNK?
06-10-2010, 12:22 AM
Yeah, I know SBAL, I just think the purple fade attempt was even worse than his letter structure.

LeaksOne
06-10-2010, 01:43 AM
hipe the top is the best one but dont go into your P so much, if you know what i mean.

H1P30N3R
06-10-2010, 03:08 AM
I know what your saying .. I brought the curve to far in ... thanks

IbuprofenTablets
06-10-2010, 09:28 AM
You had it, then you lost it....
remember the E you did before Leaks told you to make bigger?
do it, and maintain it's form, because it looked good.
Oh, and next time drop the dot of the i on the bar of the i, like don't make it float just yet.

iPwnF00lz
06-10-2010, 02:29 PM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/23da99d8.jpg
obviously, I need crits.. please don't say something about the shadow I know it's not right, just trying to get down letter structure.

Sbal
06-10-2010, 03:36 PM
Rype when i was lookin at yours i was like "yeah, yeah, yeah, no" No flow on the E. Do a lowercase one to match the other letters.

Sbal
06-10-2010, 07:28 PM
double post meh...
First time doin this throw in a public area, not very happy but whatev

One Evil
06-10-2010, 08:35 PM
http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/3715/dsc0358f.jpg (http://img809.imageshack.us/i/dsc0358f.jpg/)
for my homie that has landed above clouds recently. :(

hpir
06-10-2010, 09:33 PM
one evil- keep yr letters the same size
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture201.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture199.jpg
crits

H1P30N3R
06-10-2010, 09:55 PM
You had it, then you lost it....
remember the E you did before Leaks told you to make bigger?
do it, and maintain it's form, because it looked good.
Oh, and next time drop the dot of the i on the bar of the i, like don't make it float just yet.

ill try it here in a few thanks

Sbal
06-10-2010, 10:27 PM
Sorry to hear about your buddy evil

H1P30N3R
06-10-2010, 11:12 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-1.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-1.jpg

Xfish
06-10-2010, 11:16 PM
http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/3715/dsc0358f.jpg (http://img809.imageshack.us/i/dsc0358f.jpg/)
for my homie that has landed above clouds recently. :(

RIP swer he will be remembered

syne7
06-11-2010, 09:03 AM
everything on this page is silly start over fools

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0361.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0365.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0345.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0348.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0340.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

pewp
wow roes you've improved alot.
when are your going to paint that new throw?

iPwnF00lz
06-11-2010, 11:44 AM
Rype when i was lookin at yours i was like "yeah, yeah, yeah, no" No flow on the E. Do a lowercase one to match the other letters.

I have to get upper case E's down, I write RYPE. I'll work on it.

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 01:48 PM
Dude, Rype, your letter height has to be three times your line width, if not a little bit higher, for capital E's to work...

Seriously, write it like Rype, but have the r the capital r the same size as the other letters. It's a shit ton easier. Save the all caps one liners for another day when you can put them to better use.

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 01:56 PM
ROES: Looks like ROPE in one of them. Rotate the E to the left to match the rest of your letters. Your shit overlapping on the left bottom side of the S over the e looks bad.

everything on this page is silly start over fools

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0361.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0365.jpg
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http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0348.jpg
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pewp

Sbal
06-11-2010, 03:03 PM
Pedo battle

iPwnF00lz
06-11-2010, 03:52 PM
You honestly think that looks like a bubble D man?

Sbal
06-11-2010, 03:54 PM
Im not used to writing d's its for a battle
Show me your D

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 03:55 PM
He needs to rotate that shit 180 degrees, so the tips at the top and looks lowercase to match other letters.

iPwnF00lz
06-11-2010, 04:02 PM
Im not used to writing d's its for a battle
Show me your D

I'd make it have a top to match the base is all, don't get your panties in a bunch learn to crit you work yourself so you can tell whats up with some things.. other than that capitalize the e.

2FNK?
06-11-2010, 04:14 PM
His E looks fine bro, you love some capital e's huh?

and when you crit yourself your ego often makes your opinion bias. He want's other peoples opinions if he's posting on here, nobody asked you to crit him. When people give you crits you're supposed to listen to them, which obviously you don't since your last like five tag posts have looked identical, just saying, no beef though.

For future reference, when you crit, you tell them what to fix about their letters. Not ask a rhetorical question first just to be a dick.

Xfish
06-11-2010, 04:28 PM
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/3207/img000029.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/img000029.jpg/)

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finaly made a little progress on my throw
crits anyone?

iPwnF00lz
06-11-2010, 04:30 PM
lololol every letter was caps except the e, I'm not your bro.

Sbal
06-11-2010, 06:14 PM
I'd make it have a top to match the base is all, don't get your panties in a bunch learn to crit you work yourself so you can tell whats up with some things.. other than that capitalize the e.

My "panties" were not in a bunch i was trying to see your opinion on how to do a D. I cant do D's but now i know. Thank you.

Xfish- errrr.. I dont know how much progress you've made man it still looks extremely wack too me. Just start it over

Xfish
06-11-2010, 06:17 PM
trust me its better than before
it really really sucked