Throwies

[Saker2000]

I like the throw in the bottom right more then the large one. Seems to flow a lot better.

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6725/img000207.jpg

yeah good shit man. but make the top part of the B if you know what I'm sayin.

[Saker2000]

how bout this?

http://s997.photobucket.com/albums/af97/Saker2000/?action=view&current=P1210002.jpg&newest=1

[Bars]

It is an R haha. Says RESK.

Sake your picture didnt work.

http://img532.imageshack.us/img532/8266/img000210.jpg

[Saker2000]

god damn kids.

[ReSeM]

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0018.jpg
for a battle

[ILL STREET BLUES]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/sketch.jpg i got 7 mack 11's

[bzerkyetii]

crits please
http://i39.tinypic.com/2ciided.jpg

[LeaksOne]

resm im feeling that. nice and simple with a nice consistant flow. only thing i would change is the E. take the tooth out. and on the S the little bump to the right at the top could disappear. other then that though nice work.

mevsr that would look better if you had steady hands haha. and maybe instead of extending your R like that try to make it look like the right side of the M. altogether though you got a solid throw.

joc if thats in fact a throw STOP CUTTING OFF YOUR BOTTOMS! and those sharp edges make it look less like a throw and more like a piece intended to be huge.

[Mr yarbles]

yo leaks check out my black book shit

[bzerkyetii]

wuts so bad about cutting of my bottoms?
i cant seem to make it look good without doing it

[RES4]

well then you cant do a proper throw. if you dont try them youl never be able to do them will you?

[ReSeM]

if you're gonna cut the bottom then i'd make it a blockbuster or something
if you paint it then make it huge so you it comes from the bottom of the wall
idk a top to bottom burner i guess you'd call it that

[RES4]

http://i40.tinypic.com/ambar5.png

[PRANEONE]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/3403/picture063m.jpg
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/1277/picturecb.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

move the P in closer to the R.

[ReSeM]

the one you linked was dope except for the ginormous A
that wasn't the best idea

[bzerkyetii]

http://i40.tinypic.com/ambar5.png

thanks
i like that
but why did u get rid of some of my lines?

[Zookyook]

because those lines make it have less flow and thus look less like a throwup... it looks better like that, but its still in pain, that J needs changed somehow, and a 3d always makes shit look cleaner

[Sesh-it-up]

keep tryin boys.

[Sbal]

First throw with paint with this name

[Sbal]

crits

[massacreman]

give them to get them, tard

[Sbal]

Sorry massacre, I just thought i was to toy to crit or give advice but...
Ill street- I would say lose those lines that are going into each other, you know? like sorta keep them to themselves.
Resk- I think that you should maybe make the bottom right leg of the K a little sharper like the rest of them

[Wolf Tits]

Sbal-Work with simples first man. It's been said a million times before but just work with the letters on your keyboard. If you're fixed on the bubbles try to make the letters consistent. Some parts are fat while others are too skinny like on your s and it looks weird.

[iPwnF00lz]

I like the H but I honestly don't know what the first letter is, a J with a hole and bump on it? Maybe less of an angle on it would be better too.

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/a14dcef0.jpg
crits please! I need to practice throwies after the ones last night hah

[Sbal]

Yeah I think that if that is a J deffinitely lose the hole. And Sab i think you should lower that line in the A a little bit.

[Wolf Tits]

It's an A actually but you think it looks too much like a J?

[Sbal]

Yeah you should move the hole more left and up.

[Zazza]

Heres a throwie I painted a while ago. Painted on a old trailer in the woods over some old paint tests and crap. It's not very good I know, say what you want I can take it.

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/7133/13561725.th.jpg (http://img514.imageshack.us/i/13561725.jpg/)

[Sbal]

Yeah man your really going to want to work on that Z and clean up the A
Crits on these?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

I like that middle on sbal, I think the B & L are good the rest need minor tweeks

[slax]

I like the S on the white one, and the L on the red one, B and A are pretty good to, cept the B looks kinda funky on the orange. But thats just my opinion.

[CrustOner]

No, whole thing is wack. Start over. Start observing throws and learn how to construct a good one.

[flask1995]

sball all that shiet is whack, i agree with him
i suggest going like to page 51 and going onto from there, or start studying other people's throwies that are up and get on from there.

[Sbal]

Thanks for the crits guys. I sketched these throws up before I read Flask and Crust's comments so tell me whatcha think. Now, I'm goin into a deep study sesh.

[Bars]

Your lines look maaad shakey, your border is way out of proportion.

The a and l are to big in the first and the a also looks like an r.

[iPwnF00lz]

Shitty marker
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/0458e9fd.jpg?t=1273891552
igrnore the shaky lines, shitty p and not too great e hah. i did this on my lap with a wobbly notebook and shit goin on.

crits specifically on the R/r? I want to get them down, badly. Just don't know which direction to go in.

[soath]

Heres a throwie I painted a while ago. Painted on a old trailer in the woods over some old paint tests and crap. It's not very good I know, say what you want I can take it.

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/7133/13561725.th.jpg (http://img514.imageshack.us/i/13561725.jpg/)

the A need to be as wide as the Z. lose the squiggle for now. my .02

@ RYPE I like those 2. they are not hella OG but then again who is? I think the Y is my fave tho. I ACTUALLY think the E is ur weakest letter. the r's both look fine to me. peace.

[iPwnF00lz]

Thanks for the crits man.

[soath]

yeah, looking at the capital R again tho maybe it should have the little triangle thingy like the E has and the Y shapes too. knawmee?

[iPwnF00lz]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/12db3c48.jpg?t=1273961025
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/cb5a68ca.jpg
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/91a20459.jpg
pick a style any style, crits always appreciated.

ignore the lines inside the top p, in the last picture they were already there.

[soath]

top two are my faves, the right hand side the y dividing line comes down to far.

[Sbal]

Rype- I like those two with the fatty outlines
New style not really feelin the B on SB

[essen]

Sbal your shadows need some work, but thats all i can see
i shouldnt really be talking though because i fucked up on my 3d real bad lol

http://i41.tinypic.com/34e21cg.jpg

[soath]

Rype- I like those two with the fatty outlines
New style not really feelin the B on SB

i would twist ur A counter clockwise a little. so the bar comes over the top and down a bit. also make ur S more like the BA combo, it should have holish sorta spaces in it, so it matches. my .02

[thepekins]

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/976/scan0008n.jpg (http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0008n.jpg)

[Fury]

^ Make the B a little closer and you're set.

[Vinnie Paz]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_000013.jpg
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_00044.jpg
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_000023.jpg
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_000015.jpg

[Vinnie Paz]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_00019.jpg
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_000213.jpg
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/SSPX7545.jpg
good looks on the props

[gumOnShoe]

Damn, philly' goes in yo, i had no idea.

[Zookyook]

dope... the O kinda looks like a U in that last throwup... but u got skeelz... if i could change anything id make the bottom of the N more rounded, kinda looks too flat and messes with the flow... but i love black fill throwups, so grimey... u write with GS??? i saw the thc and he hits up the same shit...

[Vinnie Paz]

yea i know i really ony do 1 letter toss's its kinda my thing, an yea THC is the brand foshow

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo45.jpg
Quick joint for a toy throw up battle.
C'mon, we need more people to get in this.

[4ENOD]

http://i822.photobucket.com/albums/zz143/DONE_FOUR/101_3528.jpg

[LeaksOne]

the O is out of place

[4ENOD]

how do you mean? should it be higher?

[LeaksOne]

put a point on it like the other letters. possibly

[4ENOD]

ok.

[pleasedontstayr]

http://i43.tinypic.com/6ygqdi.jpg
i already know its shitty so theres no point in repeating. crits?

DONE4: i like it but the N kinda kills it for me.

[massacreman]

[QUOTE=pleasedontstayr;1616565]
i already know its shitty so theres no point in repeating. crits?
QUOTE]

its shityy.
fix it.
bars.
sketch.
practise.
new to graff thread although your not that new.

[Zookyook]

NAW is right! hahah... jk man, just work on the bars for sure, the N and W are totally fucked, the right bar of the A is the only thing that has a chance

[pleasedontstayr]

my sketches are decent, not to be conceited. i just havent had that much painting practice. thanks for the crit massacre but i know bars etc.

overall thanks though. its like the 4th time ive been painting in the 6 something months ive been writing? D:

[Zookyook]

its cool man the first time i attempted a painted piece i went over myself with a throwup cuz it was so fuckin terrible lol i wish i had a pic of that one... just keep practicing... and id actually consider that more of a simp than a throwie, lots of negative space between the letters and there was obviously some cutbacks

[Mask one]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=460&pictureid=3415 MASK 1

[pleasedontstayr]

yeah i dont consider it a throw at all, i just had NO clue where to post a painted pic in the toy thread cause theres the piece thread... but this is nowhere near a piece. lmfao

[Blar]

http://i39.tinypic.com/ka4jmh.jpg

[iPwnF00lz]

does that say be? if so try doing the e different, so it's not slanted maybe.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/c1f8af4e.jpg

[Zookyook]

yeah i dont consider it a throw at all, i just had NO clue where to post a painted pic in the toy thread cause theres the piece thread... but this is nowhere near a piece. lmfao

toy bombs/pieces is the place... cuz thatd be a bomb or a burner even

[pleasedontstayr]

ill keep that in mind thanks zook!

[Sbal]

Bare, lose the tongue

[mawks]

rype - the y doesn't seem like it fits, so work on that i guess
sbal - your s doesn't match the b and a
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image046-1.jpg

[massacreman]

mawks, dope.
but maybe make the a lowecase, it could flow better

[iPwnF00lz]

alright thanks, the m looks too overdone imo.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/e0817eb2.jpg

[Zookyook]

rype that R needs another bump in the middle to make it more like an R... try something like this maybe...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4619730260_e004c4e334_o.jpg
that tiny bump in the middle where the line kicks into is actually pretty crucial with R's
and 3d that shit yo, u have the middle colored in and no 3d on the outside

[iPwnF00lz]

rype that R needs another bump in the middle to make it more like an R... try something like this maybe...

and 3d that shit yo, u have the middle colored in and no 3d on the outside

word ill try something like that out.

I wasn't 3ding I clean it up with contrasting the negative space and the letters.

[Flawless Victory]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo45.jpg
Quick joint for a toy throw up battle.
C'mon, we need more people to get in this.
Bump this, it's dope.

[im not a cop or anything]

RYPE- r needs a little work. the bottom loooks like a old mans scrotom just saying.
BLAR?-chill with the characters. there so played out

[Mask one]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture7.jpg
new throwie.

[im not a cop or anything]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture7.jpg
new throwie.

work on the shadow. you cant have it on both sides of a throw. the shadow lays on one side of it. pick 1

[Mask one]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture10.jpg
this is a better one, new throwie enjoyy.

[Mask one]

yeah thanks. I'll get on that.

[Mask one]

hows that one?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

RYPE- r needs a little work. the bottom loooks like a old mans scrotom just saying.
Somewhat true

And I must say you probly have the best name EVER lol

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Looking good mask but the K looks like an H make the legs more distinguishable/apart ya know

[sinkilla1]

yeah rype is a good name cept theres a big old head who writes rype from where im from and im pretty sure thousands of people write that

[Mask one]

yo thanks, peepz tell me that it looks like an h.

[Vinnie Paz]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture10.jpg
this is a better one, new throwie enjoyy.

looks good but i'd lower the center of the m and the a so itll flow with the other letters

[Mask one]

>;1617352']Looking good mask but the K looks like an H make the legs more distinguishable/apart ya know

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg
more like this?:confused:

[Mask one]

looks good but i'd lower the center of the m and the a so itll flow with the other letters

also is this better?
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

[im not a cop or anything]

damn when you give this kid crits he fixes it right away. good ambition. its already much better

[Vinnie Paz]

that look better just keep doing them and youl find whats natural.

[Flawless Victory]

the only thing that really needs work on that throw is the K, but DAMN does it need some work.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

And I think the 'a's stomach should be lower but that's guna be tricky seeing as the bubble on the M would probly block it but you gotta make it work somehow

[Mask one]

thanks alot guys

[syne7]

Mask: Great progression, you throw looks alot better than it did, just that K is alittle off.

http://i48.tinypic.com/rms31v.jpg
My E never comes out the way I want it to :/ crits on this?

[ILL810]

could someone help me out with why my 1liners so shitty? its the first one ive ever tried. any detailed crits or examples would be helpful! thanks!

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/8516/0519000430.th.jpg (http://img41.imageshack.us/i/0519000430.jpg/)

[Zookyook]

does it say arsot??? oneliners are tricky, u gotta have the steez to pull em off right, usually the faster u do it the cleaner they look... but the biggest problem i see is the A, maybe u should start it in a different place (looks like u started in the middle) or just change the shape make it lowecase or something

[Mask one]

Syne your n is sick

[ILL810]

does it say arsot??? oneliners are tricky, u gotta have the steez to pull em off right, usually the faster u do it the cleaner they look... but the biggest problem i see is the A, maybe u should start it in a different place (looks like u started in the middle) or just change the shape make it lowecase or something
arkot.. ive tried lowercase 20 diff ways, im just not diggin it.

[Mask one]

Mask: Great progression, you throw looks alot better than it did, just that K is alittle off.

http://i48.tinypic.com/rms31v.jpg
My E never comes out the way I want it to :/ crits on this?
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture14.jpg I think this is a better k...
crit :)

[Zookyook]

man i hate that K lol no offense but work out somethin else, same with the M... the a and s arent bad though

[Blar]

http://i45.tinypic.com/i39s9d.jpg

[Mask one]

yo want me write somethin else?

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture179.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture182.jpg
crits?

[Mask one]

I have a friend name kane lol btw nice

[Zookyook]

the KA in the top one looks good... didnt u write kan before?

[Sbal]

Kane- Personally, im diggin that green one.
Mask- i guess like everyones syain, just tweak the k more, but you dont gotta change your name unless you want...
Blar- That A looks gross with the tongue haha =D
A new sorta blocky style im tryin, screwed up my shadows as usual, but im focusing on the letter structure
Crits greatly appreciated

[H1P30N3R]

kane- the green one is pretty fresh
mask- read last crit
blar-pretty nice n simple
sbal-s kind of resembles a 5 but other than that i think it has potential jus need to play with it

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/hipeinblackbook.jpg

[syne7]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture14.jpg I think this is a better k...
crit :)http://i49.tinypic.com/2vb6jrl.jpg
instead of that line in the middle try it off the side like in the pic and space out you M like you did here:
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

Oh and:
Sbal: Its getting better.
Hipe: Um, there are much easier ways and better looking ways to do that throw, no offence, your h looks like an x, i know your trying to make a creative throw, but you don't have actual letters down yet, i would say start over but just fix that h and see what happends with it.
Kane: Good throw, your e is a bit simple compared to the other letters
Blar: I can't tell what that second letter is, the facial expression is kind of hiding the lines that define the letter.

[Blar]

It is a lower case e.

[Sbal]

Oh for some reason i was seeing an upper case A. you should lose that line that pops up in the middle of the e

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-3.jpg
still having trouble with the a.. get at me if you have any ideas.
i tried working with a lowercase a but it still looks outta wack

[Saker2000]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-3.jpg
still having trouble with the a.. get at me if you have any ideas.
i tried working with a lowercase a but it still looks outta wack

good shit mawks. im likin that M. but the W trips me out a bit.

[Mask one]

http://i49.tinypic.com/2vb6jrl.jpg
instead of that line in the middle try it off the side like in the pic and space out you M like you did here:
http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture12.jpg

Oh and:
Sbal: Its getting better.
Hipe: Um, there are much easier ways and better looking ways to do that throw, no offence, your h looks like an x, i know your trying to make a creative throw, but you don't have actual letters down yet, i would say start over but just fix that h and see what happends with it.
Kane: Good throw, your e is a bit simple compared to the other letters
Blar: I can't tell what that second letter is, the facial expression is kind of hiding the lines that define the letter.

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture18.jpg I tried that heres the pic

[Zookyook]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4624867906_2fc6e7e75e_o.jpg

yo mawk... heres how i would change it... u gotta clean it up a bit of course but a lowecase A like this and making ur K match the M a little more looks better, and it makes the K look less like an H

[mawks]

good crit, thanks

[Zookyook]

i do what i can lol... post the revised version when u get it figured out, should be hot

[syne7]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture18.jpg I tried that heres the piclooks a lot better

[Zookyook]

the 3d coming off that M.... turrible just turrible.... work on that part, i still dont like that K but its better

[LeaksOne]

battle throw

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60100.jpg

[Fury]

The E and C need work, but especially the C. The rest are good though

[Flawless Victory]

I don't see anything wrong with it.

[AteskOne]

i dig leaks.


go vote on the toss battle fuckers!

[Zazza]

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/57/throwup2z.th.jpg (http://img3.imageshack.us/i/throwup2z.jpg/)

Painted this one on top of an old store. It was dark and my friend kept on turning off the flashlight cause he was paranoid witch is why it sucks pretty bad. Some guy came after us once we were done too, it was kinda messed.

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3865/throwup3.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/i/throwup3.jpg/)

This one I painted on the old trailer in the woods again over my last one. I think its better than my last one but I messed up on the A and the fill wasn't as thick as I would want it to be. What you get with cheap paint I guess.

[Mask one]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy

[Mask one]

battle throw

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60100.jpg

yo leaks I digg everything but the R yo fresh man!!

[Sbal]

looks sick Leaks
Make those letters uniform Zazza
Continuing with this style
crits please(Left one is lame)

[AteskOne]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy
think again.

[LeaksOne]

The E and C need work, but especially the C. The rest are good though


yo leaks I digg everything but the R yo fresh man!!

i hear ya fellas. i hate R's as first letters and i never use C's so mine hurt pretty bad. and the E on that does look kinda funny

haha im surprised no one noticed the shadow to the right of the T :D

[soath]

weak ass attempts. still no throw.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P5190027.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P5190026.jpg

[NiL]

too straight with round bruh

[RES4]

http://i830.photobucket.com/albums/zz221/BarerEthan/Picture21.jpg
this aint a throwie but its sick guyyy

you think thats sick?

[soath]

too straight with round bruh

yeah, i figurd that too. it's been a few years now and still no throw. it's bullshit.

[Zookyook]

soath it just looks like 5 individual letters... u should make the letters overlap... look at the RESPECT throw that leaks did, the E is behind the R the S is behind the E and so on... try it like that and itll be a throwup, then just put a small 3d on it and ur in business

[soath]

ya i know about putting it together, i just don't think these letters are legit...

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soaththrow.jpg

the cross should be in the S top not the bottom.


little diff style.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/soathrow.jpg

[soath]

bottom of the H looks like nuts. :D

[Zookyook]

are u a super-christian or something? too many crosses... and the 3d should come off of the side of one of ur letters too... like it does on the R in RESIST make it come off ur S the same way

[soath]

are u a super-christian or something? too many crosses... and the 3d should come off of the side of one of ur letters too... like it does on the R in RESIST make it come off ur S the same way

haha, yeah I wouldn't call myself SUPER christian but i thot it was a way to tie the letters together... the whole time I was thinking it was to much. yeah as for the 3d I was considering it a drop shadow, like head on light from the top or the bottom... i'll repost something later. thanks for the help. suprised you don't hate the letters or at least didn't mention how played they are, seems like 90% of throws look this way.. maybe I've just been trying to hard. peace.

[Zookyook]

anything with a TH is gonna be a pain in the ass i think... just keep practicing... it shouldnt matter to u if u bite a few things from different places, ur new so its not gonna be frowned upon if u take letters from someone else and change them a bit, just dont copy someones shit identically... and above i meant RESPECT not RESIST lol

[AteskOne]

yo!


go vote on the toss battle fuckers!
it's been a dead tie between me and FV for like 3 days now. a little enthusiasm fellows. take 5 seconds and go vote.

yeah i see this new method of battling failing miserably.

[massacreman]

Soath, everyone is right
Mesh. blackbook thread and use bars

Im going to write Roets i think.
But i cant't get my R to flow in throw, fo sho.
Anyways, any help is appreciated.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ewikig.jpg
Here are some ideas on my R.
http://i47.tinypic.com/23tp0sl.jpg

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo2-1.jpg

[massacreman]

give crits to get them bye!

[CrustOner]

H needs a hell of a lot of work. The other letters look fine.

[Sbal]

I like that stuck, just make the H go in a straighter line with the other letters.

Some more shitty attempts. Crits?

[massacreman]

Soath, everyone is right
Mesh. blackbook thread and use bars

Im going to write Roets i think.
But i cant't get my R to flow in throw, fo sho.
Anyways, any help is appreciated.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2ewikig.jpg
Here are some ideas on my R.
http://i47.tinypic.com/23tp0sl.jpg

bump

[Stuck]

dont bump it. it looks crappy theres no flow. it looks like u just stuck letters together.....id bebummed if i saw that on a wall

[massacreman]

lol dude shut up, im asking for crits not for hate, and your stuff sucks too, maybe even harder... fuckface

[Stuck]

Xd lulzzz I GAVE A CRIT WORK ON THE FLOW

[Sbal]

Yeah i see like no consistency just random letter styles

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/052210_144800.jpg
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/052210_145901.jpg

[Zookyook]

hot shit hot shit

[Vinnie Paz]

im feelin that evil

[Saker2000]

crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

[H1P30N3R]

evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg

[Saker2000]

evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg

yo, thanks for the advice ill work on it fer show. you got some pretty good shit goin there but i see that "h" alot. not bad though!

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

thanks for the crits. i just got a job so hopfully ill post lots more hahah.
it would be better if the top of your H's bars didnt overlap imo

[massacreman]

dont bump it. it looks crappy theres no flow. it looks like u just stuck letters together.....id bebummed if i saw that on a wall

lol i was reading it wrong, i thought you said u suck, but you said u sTuck

["awesome"ONE]

evil - nice throws
saker - needs work the a looks confusing and the bottom of the k makes it not even look like a k jus crits from 1 toy to another ..

scrap cans tryin another throw crits ??

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/scrapcanhipe.jpg
interesting throw idea

[CrustOner]

It looks like each letter was bitten individually.

[kace91]

http://s2.subirimagenes.com/otros/4555221snc00844.jpg

Simple as shit, i know, but i cant come up with anything better.
With simples you can work from straight letters, and the same with tags, but what do you use as a base in throws?

Also, i dunno what to do with the k. the others letters match better with each other, but the k just doesnt seem to fit.

And a question: would you start hittin the streets at my level, or just stick with tags until coming with something more developed?

[H1P30N3R]

It looks like each letter was bitten individually.

just trying different throw ideas my style hasn't came together yet and im not biting but everyone is entitled to there own opinion

[Sbal]

Hipe- make the P squareish at the top like the others
Kace- Most definetly do not hit the streets. Make the upper right leg of the K a little fatter like the other. Extend the left leg of the A to the other. Make the C and E flat towards the bottom like the K and A.
Sake- that K takes too much space and the other letters just have weird styles.


Bump for teh crits

[BlacktodaFuture]

sake. i was gonna write that until i went to montreal and saw how the Sake there killed shit.

[Saker2000]

sake. i was gonna write that until i went to montreal and saw how the Sake there killed shit.

yeah i heard he tares up montreal but im just tryin to get some flow going with words an shit.

["awesome"ONE]

yeah i heard he tares up montreal but im just tryin to get some flow going with words an shit.
sake tarin up montreal is an understatement lol hes a king forsure

[Blar]

First time trying this new throw on a wall..

http://i48.tinypic.com/2rnzhhi.jpg

[Sbal]

Gross

[kace91]

First time trying this new throw on a wall..

http://i48.tinypic.com/2rnzhhi.jpg


well im just a toy as seen on the previous page, but i think i can give some advice (give to get and all that)

Leaving apart all the fails related to can control, such as leaving space between the trhow and the powerline/aura/howyouwannacallit, all is absolutely irregular. Just look at the main bar of the E and you can see that in the upper part is much fatter than in the end, and the same happen with all the bars in the b (i know that bars arent so important in throwies, but still you have to keep some basic structure.)

Besides, the purpose of the powerline/aura its to contrast, if you use almost the same color its hardly noticeable and it has no point. Anyway, powerlines and brights are to use in pieces, and maybe simples, but not in throwies because throwies are made to be painted fast. if you have time to make all of that, youll be able to make a simple instead.

and also, shades are real wack, but i dont know if is a problem of the throw or you just couldnt make them as you wanted because of can control.

[Saker2000]

sake tarin up montreal is an understatement lol hes a king forsure

hah yeah true dat.

[Sbal]

Bare its just not lookin good. Hit more books and practice can control.

I've been givin crits to you guys for the last couple pages and got no crits on my shit. So if i've given you crits before, return the favor.
Ezac is not mine.

[IllLogic]

he last one is the best, your hand is kinda shaky tho

[Sbal]

thanks man

[AlecR2K]

crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

Sake is kinda huge. just sayin

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-ssfp001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-cst001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/b080.jpg

[Sbal]

That roller is fuckin gnarly

[AlecR2K]

fuck yea

[pleasedontstayr]

lol kace... its not a powerline... or an aura.

forcefield.

[Flawless Victory]

I just call it a second outline...

[Fury]

I call it a stroke. And yeah, that roller is dope.

[kace91]

lol kace... its not a powerline... or an aura.

forcefield.

its funny, cause i find a different name for that in every place. in my country (and i think in other parts of europe too) its called powerline by everyone, or just power... and here in bs ive read aura, forcefield...

but well, as long as you understand what im talking about, its ok xD

["awesome"ONE]

we all know what he means who cares

[ironcrack]

forcefeild/ final. you can use 3 colors and paint a 'thowie' fast

[syne7]

http://i46.tinypic.com/nxkuf6.jpg
new e, crits?

[Stuck]

your E is to small and its slackin

[Mr yarbles]

Whos down for a good throw battle?

[H1P30N3R]

tried making the p flat at the top like the crit suggested any better ?

http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/ad308/slash440022/DCFC0167.jpg

[Wolf Tits]

Hipe- Bring the lines that separate the two bars of the H closer to the center and add some horizontials to distinguish it as an H.

[H1P30N3R]

yea agreed thanks

[essen]

http://i41.tinypic.com/34e21cg.jpg

bumpo por crito

[IbuprofenTablets]

Quick dollar store crayon joint for a throw battle.
Y'know, i'm starting to appreciate cheaper shit now.
oh, and we need more people for this battle.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo54.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

LYNGUISTICS!
Dope throw
Cunninlynguist sound

[Sbal]

The music makes me high even though i stay away from cannabis

["awesome"ONE]

bumpo por crito
alright man this will make your throw look way better

first, make the sides of your letters straight, only round the tops, also take the lean off your letters, and make the 3-d better

[Flash_One]

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1385/img88imageshack.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/i/img88imageshack.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[MoganOne]

Quick throw not to happy with the G
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/mog-1.jpg

[Flash_One]

crits?
http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/2818/p2080006.jpg (http://img443.imageshack.us/i/p2080006.jpg/)

get a a new name, already a sake in montreal and hes a fuckin vet

[LeaksOne]

Flash- maybe try making all your letters the same thickness and lower the outward bar on the L. at a glance it could be mistaken as a T and the big hole in the S draws too much attention and the H needs some reworking. all in all though you got a solid throw

Mogan- not sure why you have a hole in your M at the top and if i didnt know you wrote Mog/an i wouldnt be sure what the middle letter was. and fix the G

[AteskOne]

go vote on the throwy battle right meow.

[KAZonee]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=3361

wat yahh think?

[MoganOne]

Flash- maybe try making all your letters the same thickness and lower the outward bar on the L. at a glance it could be mistaken as a T and the big hole in the S draws too much attention and the H needs some reworking. all in all though you got a solid throw

Mogan- not sure why you have a hole in your M at the top and if i didnt know you wrote Mog/an i wouldnt be sure what the middle letter was. and fix the G

LOL I put that hole in it because I was bored but I normally would not put it... I came up with a better G and O I will post it eventually

[SMIL]

your all fuckin toys mon i am the grandmaster smil and fuck cop, fuck terrible tkid, fuck seen, fuck mister cartoon, fuck vfr its all about me and my homie trane representin sfc bitches

[soath]

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/bakery9.jpg

[HaLo_07]

your all fuckin toys mon i am the grandmaster smil and fuck cop, fuck terrible tkid, fuck seen, fuck mister cartoon, fuck vfr its all about me and my homie trane representin sfc bitches

Sais the fool that won't say what he writes, where he writes, and only writes one post and its to diss the legends...

What ever *****, mother fuck them? Naw, Mother fuck YOU! hahaha

[soath]

Sais the fool that won't say what he writes, where he writes, and only writes one post and its to diss the legends...

What ever *****, mother fuck them? Naw, Mother fuck YOU! hahaha

hold steady mang. it's just sum gooftroopin' TROLL, he's talking about Marc Echo's "getting up" and its still free crew. not legit.

[SMIL]

i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

[Wolf Tits]

i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

Ok lets see it playa?

[HaLo_07]

i paint ever where my name is nick williams i am elusive mon, you can rip this chedder cheez yo, i paint in edmonton alberta canada n ya mon marc ecko bit my friends shit cause we iz that good mon, ill fuckin wreck you toys, and g , next time i catch you bickerin imma vamp your ass toy,
-smil :)

...? So you put your goverment out there and talk about Vampin cat's and all this junk...You is some poser like the rest of them hipsters out there...

What a joke. iight back to buisness where the REAL writers at?

[Phillip McDougall]

It's an obvious troll, guys..

[Sbal]

Dude no way that kid is dead serious

[syne7]

Dude no way that kid is dead serioushahah, goin in my sig

[soath]

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/flicks/bakery9.jpg


bump for crits, I tried doing what y'all said here. peace.

[Sbal]

I dont like the ath that much, oh and sorry about your board homie

[soath]

I dont like the ath that much, oh and sorry about your board homie

yeah, was trying an uppercase A too, I have no other ideas for the T

I mean the SO are easy... the rest is really tough for me.

[Sbal]

Yeha i dont really know how to do a legit T with that style, but i also think you should make the tops of the H and the O jut out at an angle like the rest of the letters, not just rounded.

[Fury]

I'm glad I'm not the only person who paints boards haha

[Jrose152]

some help?
http://i139.photobucket.com/albums/q281/Jrose152/PRE_2010-06-01-022030.jpg

[YaPp3RoN3R]

ummmm..... better pic ,
and some 3-d , alot of practice
for me thats too normal , but thats just my style , try to expirement with different letters , go find some inspiration

[iPwnF00lz]

Spok or Spook? If spook make letters the same size. Fix the k, tune the o. Try again and post up.

[Sbal]

Yeah dont do the baby O like that. And dont use paint yet your just wasting it

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image057.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image054-1.jpg
which?

[-NAUZ-]

i prefer the letters of the top one

[woonybomber]

there the same fucking sped

[RES4]

no ther not, top is better

[soath]

i agree.

[Shay70]

get a a new name, already a sake in montreal and hes a fuckin vet
yea hes in VC which is one of the biggest crews in Toronto/Montreal
i think he mite b in KPS too whihc the other big crew in Toronto

[4ENOD]

http://i208.photobucket.com/albums/bb265/Jaimes420187/101_3809.jpg

[Mr yarbles]

:rolleyes:

[AteskOne]

go vote on the toss battle.

[Havoc97]

Time to crit!
http://i914.photobucket.com/albums/ac341/Isaac-Ashton/throwupbomb.jpg?t=1275938967

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image049-1.jpg
somebody exchange with me

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF1655.jpg?t=1275954623

mawks. lets exchange. Safer.

[Sbal]

What happened to giving crits to recieve them homies

[YaPp3RoN3R]

i love that throwie

[skull-e]

Sake is kinda huge. just sayin

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-ssfp001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-cst001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/b080.jpg

I made a post like this earlier, but he didn't listen, so I'm gonna bump your post.

CHANGE YOUR FUCKING NAME ALREADY, STOP ASKING FOR CRITS.

*EDIT

He painted with Causr, Trik and Ensoe on that picture, and if you haven't heard of any of these 3 names, you shouldn't be writing.

[dave the pirate]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4006/4578243033_060de1fdcf.jpg

[2FNK?]

Who is writing sake on here that isn't the real one?

[skull-e]

"saker2000"

[Onsub]

feel free to critique.
I'm open to positive and negative criticism

http://i49.tinypic.com/2ufzz4p.jpg

[viseversa101]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11100.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11101.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/SDC11108.jpg

[Onsub]

damn..
Looking at your throwies makes me feel like even more of a toy.
The colors in the first two pop like no other.
And the rabbit, creative.

[viseversa101]

i figure the rabbit gives me a chance to leave messages thru facial expression, or messages hes sayin...this here was done cuz i did 8 pieces over a crews yard...they got caught sleepin

[Phillip McDougall]

OH GAWD kill me now.

[viseversa101]

over an internet forum? ur cool

[IbuprofenTablets]

i think he's trying to say it's shit, bruh.

[Sbal]

The shadow looks off on that rabbit one, and that E is fuckin fatter than a motherfucker
Onsub thats not a throw, and dont make the letters loop through each other like that

[Onsub]

Someone explain to me how those are shit..
I think they are well done to say the least..

[IbuprofenTablets]

you trollin'?

[BlacktodaFuture]

damn..
Looking at your throwies makes me feel like even less of a toy.

[Onsub]

I meant more of a toy. what do you expect? I have like 5 posts.

[IbuprofenTablets]

You Trollin'?