Throwies

[idk401]

just a quicky..
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/Untitled.jpg
i know.. give me crits..

seperate your letters first step then we will see what we got to go on.

[LeaksOne]

it clearly is a S

Its clearly weak. Stop posting whack shit in clusters and post one and take the tips we give you.

[del4sel]

there's an a in there at the end shit is way recognizable!

[H1P30N3R]

just a quicky..
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/Untitled.jpg
i know.. give me crits..

don't buy paint.. invest your money into notebook paper and markers.

[(SoS)Viruz]

it clearly is a S

Its Clearly not.

Phre1- Try to take the character out of your throw and try simple throwies. Ones in which people can read. Your getting way ahead of your self.

[Phillip McDougall]

Holy shit Hipe, it's obviously not really painted...

[phre1]

for fuck sake, it's Z . O . A
oh and i was not gonna do a throwie, i started a character. then said 'fuck it' and went for it.
here is a simpler version,
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/james.jpg

[LeaksOne]

ZOA? is that a crew? and by the way there is no way in hell the top one has a Z in it.

and thats not any better.....your Z is terrible. and the lines on the O and A should be more centered. the lines that define the openings

[phre1]

okaaayy.... lemme try another..
and its not a crew, its the plural http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/kirby.jpg

[REMS F.U.]

you know how i know youre gay phre?

haha

[Mr yarbles]

why the mods always deletin my posts.

[Flawless Victory]

Haters Gon' Hate.

[REMS F.U.]

i admit, i fail.

[Flawless Victory]

http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/7783/88795649.jpg
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=throw_up_font

We all write, we all have the internet, we all know the "throw up" font.
Don't bite.

[Dr01d1]

okaaayy.... lemme try another..
and its not a crew, its the plural http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/kirby.jpg
To me it looks like 20 and a blob with a T in it

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/P3210020.jpg

[ARRA159]

http://img710.imageshack.us/img710/2492/1240055.jpg
pink pen & black sharpie
honest opinions.

[Sbal]

Hey Prea, I think that's pretty dope, just clean it up a little and move the P closer to the R. My only problem with it is that the E is a different style, and those tags in the letters seem like they take up too much space. Just round out the E a little bit.

[PREA672]

thanks for the constructive criticism.

peace

[essen]

Prea that shit is nice dude. I agree though, the P could be closer to the R; the space there was a little awkward

Braces i like the style, but i'm not sure about the drips

[Ted Logan]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4032/4717796021_86a1aa9411_b.jpg

guyssss what about this throw?

[PREA672]

honestly its a dope style, but i cant really read it.. make it more readable.. 3d.. clean it up and it should look way better.

keep trying homie

[Ted Logan]

thanks for the help.
what should i try to advance?

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4710572673_e9a9383867_b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4718744962_34f009c5a1.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1266/4717777881_72839af57b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4034/4717745399_357bf06ca4_b.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

Keanu, quit trolling.

[Ted Logan]

dont understand what trolling is.
im being serious.

[ChadWarden]

dont understand what trolling is.
im being serious.

this is trolling. but you know that.

[Ted Logan]

oh. i get it now.
but like. how come i cant get some critsz. or post some flicksz. without
people thinking im being a dicksz.

[ChadWarden]

we've already answered that one.



next question.

[Juicee]

thanks for the help.
what should i try to advance?

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1266/4717777881_72839af57b.jpg




why do you have 666 there and your cross is right side up lol so contradictory

and your 'e' and 'a' look exactly alike. try to change up your 'a'. also space em out, if it wasnt for that tag above it, i wouldnt of been able to read that lool

[ARRA159]

thanks for the help.
what should i try to advance?

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4710572673_e9a9383867_b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4718744962_34f009c5a1.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1266/4717777881_72839af57b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4034/4717745399_357bf06ca4_b.jpg


i likes, but the full circles on the bottom of the K and R culd prolly do without
also the ghost you got going in red pen you shuld post that

[ARRA159]

Prea that shit is nice dude. I agree though, the P could be closer to the R; the space there was a little awkward

Braces i like the style, but i'm not sure about the drips

thanks i dont write that jus practice. i didnt like the drips either jus seeing how good i can get them

[*Patch!]

http://i912.photobucket.com/albums/ac329/uKnobGobblers/scan0008.jpg

[ARRA159]

http://i912.photobucket.com/albums/ac329/uKnobGobblers/scan0008.jpg

i like it. R kinda looks like an A tho. how does it look in paint?

[Sbal]

That is an A

[*Patch!]

lol its supposed to look like an a.. it says mak

i havent gone out to paint it yet cause im trying to get a decent throw down before i go out

[PREA672]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/001-4.jpg

[ARRA159]

i cant believe i said that, hope im not dyslexic or some shit.
the bump on the A kind on makes it look like an R

[KtRL.]

@ KEANU
you really need to work on your A and N.

[weakfingers]

that whole 666 shit and upside down cross's are so lame.

[RES4]

an inverted cross was actually a christian symbol

[Ted Logan]

thanks guysz.

[Prickster]

ANY Advice???
http://i50.tinypic.com/2iw13l.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/23kc5sn.jpg

[IllLogic]

thanks guysz.

I like it

[hab112]

http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/4299/snapshot20100707.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20100707.jpg/)

crits?

[*Patch!]

give em to get em. anyways its pretty simple, i like the A but you need to spice up the H and B, especially the H since its your starting letter. Also handy needs some work

[hab112]

meh i messed up on the hand style, this is a throwie thread so i just put it down haha.
ill try to spice up the h and b, any tips or should i just mess around with it

[*Patch!]

well mess around with it, its all about finding your own style. But i think even just putting a nub on the left part of the H where the middle bar is would improve the way it looks

http://i912.photobucket.com/albums/ac329/uKnobGobblers/Habhelp.jpg

it sorta just spices it up in my opinion

[St3vO]

http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa41/steve-o_070/0708000040.jpg

Needs work. Gettin there tho, crits welcome.

[Sbal]

Your n curling up on itself makes it resemble an R

[St3vO]

Thanks for pointing that out, now I cannot un-see it haha.

lol you from T-town? I lived there for like 10 or so years. (random)

[Royalblue]

http://i985.photobucket.com/albums/ae339/PushYourEdge/DSCN2531.jpg

Tell me what yal think of this throwy. The dserv and rpsk tags i've done better but this is the new throwy i'm thinking about making official i'm def feelin it. I've only practiced this throwy a few dozen times so once I get more reps in I'm sure it will be lookin proper as fuck. Tips and critiques welcome so please hit me with em. Peace

[xXABEONEXx]

http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9840/003qth.jpg

crits

[Prickster]

ANY Advice???
http://i50.tinypic.com/2iw13l.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/23kc5sn.jpg

[Cobra716]

figured i would put a couple up since i might need some coaching on my throwies.

[Sbal]

Haha your gonna get so much hate for doing that! Don't write cap, it is taken, and you will be ridiculed for using it.
PS: Yeah stevo im from temecula, this place sucks dick. Did you ever write down here?

[PREA672]

werd dont write cap...

[guywithacamera]

yeah the name cap has a bad rep

[Flawless Victory]

...a bad rep?
The ***** is a LEGEND.
Lrn2graffiti.

Nask, your throws are fine. Take a break and work on those hands though, man.

[essen]

Dserv: I like the style, but i feel like the R could be less bumpy on the right side, and the V doesn't really fit with the other letters

my first time using paint lol:
http://i30.tinypic.com/37mtz.jpg

[KidHesler]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g111/ourhome2004/tres.jpg

any advice?

[Prickster]

^^^^keep tryin dude all the letters are 2 doofy

[Loki X Sho]

Essen...sketch more. Develop more of a style. Things are looking pretty simple..Yes I know you're new, but plan. Throw a shadow in there, find a practice spot. Cardboard es no bueno.

Kid...you have the right idea going. Just work with it. The more you practice, the more you'll develop your letters. I see some potential for sure. Try not to put the slits in your letters...it makes it look too compact...you could easily give your bomb more depth if you fix that a bit.

prickster....keep it up. I dig that. The second page is looking more on point!

Royal....personally, I don't know how I feel about the arrows in the letters. The S and E are okay, but the D and R, I don't know man..as a whole it works alright, but I just dont know about those arrows. Maybe round off the right side of your V so its in sync with the rest of the throw.

Cobra....Cap is too simple and cliche..thats only my opinion...but I think that your stuff doesn't look too bad and you can definitely challenge yourself a bit more.

Abeone.....its on its way. Try making the D look a bit more D like, haha. I thought it was an O at first glance. I kind of just get a sloppy vibe, not to be offensive at all...but I think you should round the legs of the K and R off a lot more...bubble that up a bit more because I know exactly what you're going for. Almost there man...The S is looking alright. I like the top. Just try and keep everything flowing.

http://i28.tinypic.com/260v2fd.png
I'm aware that it overlaps...its because paper is just sloppy copy for wall.
Just a little somethin' somethin'..

[nickstix]

I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/rekthrow-1.jpg

crits?

[LeaksOne]

I'm feeling that K. The R could use some work though

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture14.png

[LeaksOne]

your K doesnt look like a K.

[IbuprofenTablets]

I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/rekthrow-1.jpg

crits?

Hey, I like where that throw is going. Now the next time you do the throw, don't sketch your throw, just draw it.
Also, make the E round in a shape similar to the leg of the R, and K.

[otter]

loki your e is lacking, the LOK part is dope especially the L

[Loki X Sho]

thanks man...
yeah I used to do a different lowercase E...it flows a bit nicer with the round letter approach. I'll put up a pic when I'm around my books.
I just need change..I can't figure it out. I was thinking of a name change all around...
The few that ive always worked with are losing their luster, but I can't break the habit haha

[Ted Logan]

earnz!

[Flawless Victory]

you rang?

[xXABEONEXx]

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3292/002jc.jpg

more on point?

[ASHiS]

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8867/picture18h.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/picture18h.jpg/)

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please crit..

[H1P30N3R]

kersd- the k is ok but lose the drips for now and where is the e? also work on your handy

ashis- the a looks lowecase trying to make it uppercase ..scratch it also not feeling the outside leg on the h and i

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-3.jpg

[xXABEONEXx]

ive been workin on th handy, that was just really small.
and i didnt do e in the last one i posted, but i like e so ill include it from now on.

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6783/001qli.jpg

[ASHiS]

looks cool man!

[TheToy]

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8867/picture18h.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/picture18h.jpg/)

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please crit..

Here's a decent 'ASH' combo for you to work with.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3650

[ASHiS]

Thx man.. i like that A and the H.. im gonna tweak them to my style though!:p

[xXABEONEXx]

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8837/002kfl.jpg

improved further...

[B.S. P0LICE]

ill do the name of the next person to reply

[nickstix]

Kersd- The pound sign, equal sign, and dollar sign are kinda cheezy...and the drips on the end of the D seem kinda awkward.

New one I came up with, came out sloppy on the wall... and going with REKT now...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/wall3.jpg

Crits?

[iamBoZ96]

can someone help me out with throwies i wanna do the skinny tall ones but B-O-Z are awkward letters

[Ted Logan]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3364/4575955231_57583a2114_b.jpg

[nickstix]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3364/4575955231_57583a2114_b.jpg

Ive seen that spot, pretty close to me...

does it say KERNS?

[xXABEONEXx]

good point nickstix, ill get on that.

[IllLogic]

can someone help me out with throwies i wanna do the skinny tall ones but B-O-Z are awkward letters



Do an exchange with someone and see how they write it

[TheToy]

Something a little different I've been workin' on. This falls into my 'European' influenced style I'm pushing toward. If I can get all the loops the same width and height I think it will have some nice flow. The 'T' needs some work to fit in.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3669

[H1P30N3R]

I like the potential that has rewt ... the t seems like it going to be hard to get the same flow as the other letters. really can't give crits on anything else because I know nothing of euro style.

[TheToy]

Thanks, man. Any input is good input.

I'm thinking about swirling that loop of the T all the way around back into the inside of the T. It'll be tacky but that's kind of that Euro feel.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0222.jpg
been a while.
Rewt:the W, move the ball line lower and the arm lines lower ( if that makes any sense lol)
Kern: maybe make the e larger
Rekt: maybe make the top of the e larger.

[PREA672]

posek your 3d is all muffed up.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0225.jpg

betteR?

[PREA672]

yeah much better

[ASHiS]

http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/7131/picture20k.jpg (http://img685.imageshack.us/i/picture20k.jpg/)

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Crits?

[MakeItTakeIt]

http://i25.tinypic.com/2qa8dnm.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/rvgj93.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/s25u03.jpg

I've since fixed the letter size issue, these are old but all I got and I know the shading is shit too haha. Crits on style and execution would be appreciated though

[ASHiS]

Your shit looks tight! Why can't i have that writing hand you have?

[SiNe-VrL-516]

http://i29.tinypic.com/zj6yj6.jpg

can i gett some crits please

[H1P30N3R]

posek- your letters seem to get larger from beginning to end work on proportion
ashis- lose the fish hooks things on the h and the 3d is off doesn't need shadowing at the top of the h
note- top one has best potential the t needs work and lose the shines and add ons for now just work on structure.
sine- resize your image .. but the n looks kind of like a k the i looks like a c and don't extend the bottom bar of the e out like that ..so work on your i and n.

[nickstix]

Sine- I thought your N was a K that sort of looked like an H. Maybe try not making the top right section so large.

Note-top one is the best, and your T's are hurting the worst. as far as the execution with the paint, make sure to cut back with fill colors if your outline drips

messin around with a capital E ...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook1-1.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

rekt- try bubbling out that e like your r and k... just an idea

[MakeItTakeIt]

Wait.. whats trolling?

hes doin it right.

h1p, thanks, thats just what i was thinkin, the t is throwin me off just because of the style of the whole throwie. I'm thinkin name change cuz after i started writin this i realized how much i fucking hate t's and n's lol but i'll keep workin on this for now cuz all practice is good practice.

as for crits, h1p pretty much hit everyone's nail on the head right thurr

[H1P30N3R]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-14.jpg

[MakeItTakeIt]

try rounding the top of the p so it doesn't look quite so much like the e

plus it'll flow with the dot of the i and make the whole piece more symmetrical

im diggin it as a whole though that h is dope

[MakeItTakeIt]

the outermost outline was done with a different can and a different cap, so the fill wasn't the problem there, just amateur can control mixed with shitty paint lol and yeah ive been tryin to fix that t for a while ill post a flik when i get somethin that works thanks for the help

[H1P30N3R]

give me some advice b.s. police your more advanced than most of us here

[B.S. P0LICE]

give me some advice b.s. police your more advanced than most of us here

sketch a throw dude

[H1P30N3R]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-14.jpg

here

[B.S. P0LICE]

that middle bar in the h is too skinny that thing that hangs of the side on the rightis too much. same in the i. your p goes in too much making it look like an e. your e should be more distinct e looking on the bottom to middle part. heres the bottomline your trying to hard with this whole edgy and smooth combo on your letters, i know what you want it to look like but your just no where close to actually make it look like what you want. dumb your style down, dont doo too much aggresive lines on the outside of the letters, remember its a toss that shit is bubble letters. i know i might sound slightly hypocritical here but its like starting with simps and bars. you dont get to aggressive edgy throws without starting with basic round ones first

[B.S. P0LICE]

http://a.imageshack.us/img215/4434/screencapture24.png

[smokeitup]

these are from when i first started writing:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image022.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image00445355.jpg

[Sbal]

i like the smilies haha

[del4sel]

who's smiling around here? raise your limp ass hand.

[Sbal]

wat.

[del4sel]

h

[Gyse]

Smokeitup, don't write sane.

[LeaksOne]

these are from when i first started writing:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image022.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image00445355.jpg

http://www.herfstsorbet.com/hyperspace/updates/prentjes/michael-j-fox.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

http://a.imageshack.us/img215/4434/screencapture24.png

thanks I get what your saying Im trying to jump ahead of my skill level. so for now I will just keep it super simple and make my moves more gradual rather than jumping ahead.

[gumOnShoe]

Go kill your parents.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo69-1.jpg

[PREA672]

why? just why?

[gumOnShoe]

why what?

[PREA672]

why kill my parents

[Sbal]

Because they don't love you.

http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2443/dsc04414.jpg
gum i cant read yours, the tag says snote but it looks like snune to me. I like the
S and the E.

[PREA672]

well that makes sense

[ChadWarden]

hug your parents.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo69-1.jpg

try having the knee of the r come more into the e. pretty dope over all.

[H1P30N3R]

I like the new approach sbal the a needs a little tweaking but overall pretty nice

[B.S. P0LICE]

oh man i hope your trolling

[IllLogic]

not bad sbal

[Mr yarbles]

***** why you writin snore?

[Fury]

Because he's tired.

[gumOnShoe]

***** why you writin snore?

Here we go again....
If what you said was implying that I'm somehow not allowed to "write" Snore, then, I GET IT.
You told me the same shit when I first came here.
I don't write Snore, just like I don't write Ikue, or Yerk, or whatever bullshit I post on here. 'K?

If I did though, Isn't that Snore from canada?
I'm American, so what's the problem?

[Sbal]

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/9325/dsc04415p.jpg
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8994/dsc04416n.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3789/dsc04418c.jpg

Why do they call them boobies? It should be Yaybies.

[gumOnShoe]

Looks like Sbac.
How's your shit pronounced, anyway?
S-Ball?
Idk, I can't pronounce it.

[kermet_1]

Looks like Sbac.
How's your shit pronounced, anyway?
S-Ball?
Idk, I can't pronounce it.
It's short for sweatyballs

[Sbal]

Hit it right on the head kermet. I guess you'd pronounce it like that or like sp, like from the word spell, and all. so SPALL, and i;m trying to make that L more like an L, but it's a new style for me.

[Mr yarbles]

Here we go again....
If what you said was implying that I'm somehow not allowed to "write" Snore, then, I GET IT.
You told me the same shit when I first came here.
I don't write Snore, just like I don't write Ikue, or Yerk, or whatever bullshit I post on here. 'K?

If I did though, Isn't that Snore from canada?
I'm American, so what's the problem?

Damn fool I'm not too smart so don't take my shit to heart.
I like to write silence and shit
Shoulda just put that it was a bs toss.

[gumOnShoe]

I didn't expect anyone to actually think it's what I write.
Maybe it's me just being too careful, but I'm never going to post what I really write on here.
Not trying to come off douchey with the shit I said before, either.

[iamBoZ96]

can someone help me with a BOZ throwie? B-O-Z is an awkward combo

[IbuprofenTablets]

No, quit being a fag, and do your own.

[iamBoZ96]

well god dam dont gotta snap juss looking for tips

[IbuprofenTablets]

Tips? If someone did you an entire throw up, it'd be more than just a tip.
Skill can't be bought, or given.

[iamBoZ96]

skill can be taught mentors

[Sbal]

we're not mentors it's the internet

[IbuprofenTablets]

skill can be taught mentors

So find one Irl.
I don't think any one on here is kind enough to spend time tutoring people, y'know?
You can't expect to really progress just by getting handouts, can you?

[B.S. P0LICE]

while were on the subject. heads need to stop clogging up my pm box asking for help with their throws. im not trying to be rude or anything but i dont even have time to do my throws nevermind yours.

[iamBoZ96]

yeah ur right

[IbuprofenTablets]

And you're acting like we don't have a thread that teaches you the basics.
READ IT.

[iamBoZ96]

it said nuthin bout throwies

[B.S. P0LICE]

kid wtf are you even talking about?

[IbuprofenTablets]

Who's to say that you can't apply what you read there to your throws?
C'mon son, quit making excuses.

[iamBoZ96]

i read it it said thowies and all they said was LED throies

[B.S. P0LICE]

boz i think you mistken what this thread is for. draw your throw, ppl will critt it, based on those critts fix your throw post it again ppl will critt it and so on till ur good enough to know what to do

[sezer]

eh something new. its really garbage but i practice alot in my garage before i hit the streets

crits?

http://i32.tinypic.com/9iwmjd.jpg

[smokeitup]

Smokeitup, don't write sane.

why not? taken?

[LeaksOne]

^^^ you cant be serious

sezer, thats pretty decent only thing i would say is tweak the Y and change the R. look around for inspiration for the R. i actually had trouble with an R in my current name. as easy as it is i had a hard time making it flow. i got it down though. i would say look in the picture gallery in throws and bombs.

[smokeitup]

wasnt my tag, it was a friends anyway.

[sezer]

word cool , thanks alot leaksone

[kermet_1]

Seyr, it looks good, but the R needs work.
I like the S, but not the little bubble thing that comes out on the leftside.
Keep practicing!

[Sbal]

http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8994/dsc04416n.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3789/dsc04418c.jpg
.

I'm gonna bump for crits.
Seyr-Looks good, just don't like the r, I think an uppercase would be easier to work with.

[iamBoZ96]

Sbal good stuff mayne im feelin the top one juss do a clean fill and maybe sum lines in the letters on the bottem one but thats me 2cnts

[Sbal]

The bottom one is supposed to say SL. I gotta work on my L's i guess.

[iamBoZ96]

make the lip a lil longer

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image009-1.jpg

[nickstix]

SBAL-first flik, you gotta work on the L. maybe try extending the lower section outward so its in more of an L shape. Second flik, dont bring the upper line in the middle of the S over so far to the left that its almost touching the side.

Smokeitup-The K dosent match your other letters, try rounding it out more rather than having it more detailed like that

Seyr-use a capital R, itll be easier to work with and look better with the rest of your throw


ill do the name of the next person to reply

so what ever happened to this idea? I posted right after this...

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture203.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture207.jpg
crits?

[Sbal]

Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4976/dsc04420f.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture203.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture207.jpg
crits?

Here's a crit':
do something different.
you've been doing the same thing since last year.
I'm all for style, but C'mon.

[iamBoZ96]

sbal i like the flow of the orange one but work on the L

[smokeitup]

Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4976/dsc04420f.jpg

its the logo for cityrail:

http://www.chw.edu.au/about/pr/events/tbp_2008/img/cityrail.jpg

the train service.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0254.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0255.jpg
just some ideas.

kane- ur k does not flow
sbal- ur middle throw is ur best, make your letters less chunkie and fix up your a,

[Get Rekt!]

Neither one of these are amazing, the top is to fat in my opinion. and the bottom one i did in about 30 seconds.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0718001156.jpg

[Zookyook]

everyone sayin kanes K is bad is WRONG! (in my opinion lol)... that K and A are dope, itd make a good 2 letter throw... but the N and E is what im not feelin...

[H1P30N3R]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-15.jpg

[iamBoZ96]

Hipe- try to keep the letters the same size

[ASHiS]

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3568/cimg0010g.jpg (http://img375.imageshack.us/i/cimg0010g.jpg/)

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Crits plz... yes.. it is small!

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010005.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010003.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010002.jpg

[ASHiS]

http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/479/cimg10000.jpg (http://img841.imageshack.us/i/cimg10000.jpg/)

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crit

[MakeItTakeIt]

Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy

[iamBoZ96]

smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT

[Sbal]

Those hollows are steezy.

[TheToy]

Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.

I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...


The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.

[Phillip McDougall]

And the faces have unnecessarily long lashes that don't fit and flip at the end.

[ASHiS]

Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy

What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?

[B.S. P0LICE]

SBAL-first flik, you gotta work on the L. maybe try extending the lower section outward so its in more of an L shape. Second flik, dont bring the upper line in the middle of the S over so far to the left that its almost touching the side.

Smokeitup-The K dosent match your other letters, try rounding it out more rather than having it more detailed like that

Seyr-use a capital R, itll be easier to work with and look better with the rest of your throw



so what ever happened to this idea? I posted right after this...


whachu write

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-18_1422.jpg

[iamBoZ96]

switch up the u alil bit

[H1P30N3R]

the k also looks forced to me .

[LeaksOne]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-18_1422.jpg

http://teacherseducation.files.wordpress.com/2007/05/hobbes_yikes.gif

the U is weak and looks really weird. i can tell you went slow on the K because the bottom of it is real shaky and its also weak. and this is just personal preference but i hate that pointy shit.

[MakeItTakeIt]

What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?

I was talkin bout ASHiS, the body of the i. the whole letter just needs to be bigger. Also the h looks a bit off, how one side is bubbled and he other is straight on bottom half. Minor details but I think it'll really set it off

[MakeItTakeIt]

I guess the same could be said about ism though too

[MakeItTakeIt]

smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT

Nothin a name change wont fix unless you go around and brag. In which case, you deserve to get hated on.

[ASHiS]

Thx man! ill bubble the H more.. you think that'll look good on the streets though?

[smokeitup]

Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.

I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...


The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.

yeah ill admit they're not my best throwies, i was a bit too high when i went out painting that time and also i went by myself so i was lookin over my shoulder every 5 seconds to make sure no one was around. also i was tryin to do it as quick as possible so that didnt help either.

[PREA672]

Just practice smoke, once you have drawn it a thousand times it will flow naturally when your on the streets. and you'll learn to just be chill when you bomb.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

[sezer]

nice! diggin the P alot and aswell with the s

[LeaksOne]

the k is too big

[MakeItTakeIt]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

hawt

[Phillip McDougall]

nawt

[PREA672]

lawls

[IbuprofenTablets]

Bawls.

[ThatguywhodrinksTea]

nawt

what should i change.?

[LeaksOne]

the O, the S, and the size of the K

[PREA672]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/004-2.jpg

funsies

[Phillip McDougall]

What Leaks said. Not bad, either, Prea. Looks more like a simp than a throw, though.

[PREA672]

yeah kinda, its just a boxy throw. drew it as fast as a normal throw.

[TheToy]

I like the outline of that 'T' for a simple letter throw.

Reminds me of an old legend's 'T' in my area. Always loved it.

[-NAUZ-]

http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

your getting bigger towards the K, keep it same, make the center of the 'o' small liek the 'e' and center of 'p' and amke the 'e' more visable i'd say :P
but nice tho

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture211.jpg
...

[Fuzzy2]

hey im sorta new to this site. just posted these pics in non toy section and was told to post here. ahaha! crits?
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECPURP.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECgree.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/decconnectioncolor.png

[Sbal]

First one looks like DGC, i like the second pic though, but make the e bigger.

[-NAUZ-]

first one the 'e' looks like a 'g' make it face the right way, i like the genral idea try and styalise it more now, instead of following a genral theme

[Fuzzy2]

iight iight cool thanks for the crits. ill work on it.

[-NAUZ-]

hi guys, i need help on my throwies, i it's something that i dont know how simple or basic to go, well basically im confused and need help :P
heres some i did earleir, and like :P

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722_2.jpg
not sure bout the bottom of the 'Z', 'A', and 2nd half of 'N'
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722_1.jpg
not sure about the 'Z' puzzeling me alot :/ and too wavey?
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722.jpg
a done up repeate of the 1st one looks better i believe with out the followed through lines onto each letter

but yeh their my currnet throwies,
if anyone wants to exchange throwies, an do each others names, or if any one wants to give me ideas, advice, or try my name 'NAUZ' or 'nauz' in their throwie style please do

thanks in advance :P

[ASHiS]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1254/cimg0018j.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/i/cimg0018j.jpg/)

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[ILL STREET BLUES]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/score.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/blueangels.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/RIPEYT.jpg
i be exspressing to my full capabilities,
now im living in correctional facilities
cme?

[ASHiS]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1254/cimg0018j.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/i/cimg0018j.jpg/)

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[ASHiS]

CAN'T POST ANYTHING... Has to be checked by a moderator?

[ASHiS]

http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/1254/cimg0018j.jpg (http://img23.imageshack.us/i/cimg0018j.jpg/)

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crits

[-NAUZ-]

ashi that's tight, need to join the 'I' to the rest to amke a good flow and make it a wee bit bigger, and mabey an idea would be to make the 2nd part of the 'H' flow with the bottom of the others, and then flow with the I could be good

[ASHiS]

I was actually changing my name to Aski haha! but that looks good
?Ima use this name if its cool!

[-NAUZ-]

ah yeh sorry a quick initial view, but it is a 'K' i am sorry

and use what ever name you feel comfortable with

[ASHiS]

Ha yea dude! i didn't like the double s so i changed it to ASKi.

[H1P30N3R]

having the i at the end of your name seems like it could be hard to work with .. well atleast for me it would be.

[ASHiS]

What do you mean like hmm should i add a letter to it... what letter?

[H1P30N3R]

nauz - don't make so many squiggly lines in your letters. make them simple do some research to get ideas.And personally i like the lowercase a better than the capital one just less squiggles

[H1P30N3R]

I would get an opinion on that i from a more experienced writer because i could be wrong before you try changing it. aske, askr, askm .. but yea get some other opinions 1st

[-NAUZ-]

i think the 'i' flows and fits, he jsut has to put it in the right place,
and thanks for the tips 'h1p' :)
mind trying a throwie in your handstyle?

[ASHiS]

hmmmm ASKIO

[H1P30N3R]

handstyles and throws are 2 different things lol

here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

[H1P30N3R]

quick try at your throw ashis

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-17.jpg

[ASHiS]

I like it!

[H1P30N3R]

trust me its nothing special im super toy too man

[ASHiS]

Haha! i think im gonna write ASKIO

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture212.jpg

[Jerk215]

wat up. first post

http://i32.tinypic.com/2070pc4.jpg
i suck

[Flawless Victory]

The only thing that isn't horrid on that throw is the J, man.
Tooootally start over.

[ASHiS]

It's.. ok.. I don't personally like it.. Make it a lil more legible.. Like with the E.

[aekone]

Hpir- Umm I couldn't tell what the hell that said. kake kane or kare? I dunno. ANyway work on the shadow cuz it's fucked and definitely work on legibility.

Jerk- Umm.. I mean if you developed from that style I think something badass could come of it. But right now it kinda blows. Unless you really have them down I would suggest staying away from the lower case r. Just my suggestion tho. Also don't say you suck. We've all been there. Hell I'm still kinda there. :D

Uhoh!
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo7.jpg
Please ignore the tag. I was just fuckin around. Badly.

[H1P30N3R]

uhoh- looks ok other than the green making the outline not stand out ..and what is that little swirl on your o for
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC00022-1.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4073/4822574625_d7e5548b17.jpg

A and M are balls, tweaked em already

[B.S. P0LICE]

wat up. first post

http://i32.tinypic.com/2070pc4.jpg
i suck

i actually kind of like that for some reason.

[dubbed]

spam your S and M really need work even in the handstyle, keep those letters the same size

[MakeItTakeIt]

I actually kinda like that m a lot minus the top left part of it.

I'd be interested to see how you tweaked it.

[ASHiS]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/7483/cimg0022y.jpg (http://img84.imageshack.us/i/cimg0022y.jpg/)

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[LeaksOne]

That look heavily influenced by graffiti Creator or king wiggles himself

[ASHiS]

That look heavily influenced by graffiti Creator or king wiggles himself

nah man! thats all from my brain... I don't go to that site anyways. I just went there and the only thing i can see that looks like the Mr. wiggles design or whatever is the i.. which i can fix! And ima fix that o too!

[LeaksOne]

While your at it fix the A and tweak the k

[elpendejo123]

lemme no what u think- try to stick to constructive criticism please.

[otter]

GIVE crits to GET crits.

[elpendejo123]

give tips, advice, criticism, w.e