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Prickster
07-08-2010, 08:04 AM
ANY Advice???
http://i50.tinypic.com/2iw13l.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/23kc5sn.jpg

Cobra716
07-08-2010, 09:37 AM
figured i would put a couple up since i might need some coaching on my throwies.

Sbal
07-08-2010, 10:47 AM
Haha your gonna get so much hate for doing that! Don't write cap, it is taken, and you will be ridiculed for using it.
PS: Yeah stevo im from temecula, this place sucks dick. Did you ever write down here?

PREA672
07-08-2010, 11:12 AM
werd dont write cap...

guywithacamera
07-08-2010, 11:48 AM
yeah the name cap has a bad rep

Flawless Victory
07-08-2010, 12:51 PM
...a bad rep?
The ***** is a LEGEND.
Lrn2graffiti.

Nask, your throws are fine. Take a break and work on those hands though, man.

essen
07-08-2010, 11:53 PM
Dserv: I like the style, but i feel like the R could be less bumpy on the right side, and the V doesn't really fit with the other letters

my first time using paint lol:
http://i30.tinypic.com/37mtz.jpg

KidHesler
07-09-2010, 01:37 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g111/ourhome2004/tres.jpg

any advice?

Prickster
07-09-2010, 01:49 PM
^^^^keep tryin dude all the letters are 2 doofy

Loki X Sho
07-09-2010, 02:03 PM
Essen...sketch more. Develop more of a style. Things are looking pretty simple..Yes I know you're new, but plan. Throw a shadow in there, find a practice spot. Cardboard es no bueno.

Kid...you have the right idea going. Just work with it. The more you practice, the more you'll develop your letters. I see some potential for sure. Try not to put the slits in your letters...it makes it look too compact...you could easily give your bomb more depth if you fix that a bit.

prickster....keep it up. I dig that. The second page is looking more on point!

Royal....personally, I don't know how I feel about the arrows in the letters. The S and E are okay, but the D and R, I don't know man..as a whole it works alright, but I just dont know about those arrows. Maybe round off the right side of your V so its in sync with the rest of the throw.

Cobra....Cap is too simple and cliche..thats only my opinion...but I think that your stuff doesn't look too bad and you can definitely challenge yourself a bit more.

Abeone.....its on its way. Try making the D look a bit more D like, haha. I thought it was an O at first glance. I kind of just get a sloppy vibe, not to be offensive at all...but I think you should round the legs of the K and R off a lot more...bubble that up a bit more because I know exactly what you're going for. Almost there man...The S is looking alright. I like the top. Just try and keep everything flowing.

http://i28.tinypic.com/260v2fd.png
I'm aware that it overlaps...its because paper is just sloppy copy for wall.
Just a little somethin' somethin'..

nickstix
07-10-2010, 12:02 AM
I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/rekthrow-1.jpg

crits?

LeaksOne
07-10-2010, 01:18 AM
I'm feeling that K. The R could use some work though

RADAWG
07-10-2010, 02:58 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture14.png

LeaksOne
07-10-2010, 02:59 AM
your K doesnt look like a K.

IbuprofenTablets
07-10-2010, 04:23 AM
I know its sloppy but I was sketching it just quick to get the idea down...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/rekthrow-1.jpg

crits?

Hey, I like where that throw is going. Now the next time you do the throw, don't sketch your throw, just draw it.
Also, make the E round in a shape similar to the leg of the R, and K.

otter
07-10-2010, 05:17 AM
loki your e is lacking, the LOK part is dope especially the L

Loki X Sho
07-10-2010, 01:59 PM
thanks man...
yeah I used to do a different lowercase E...it flows a bit nicer with the round letter approach. I'll put up a pic when I'm around my books.
I just need change..I can't figure it out. I was thinking of a name change all around...
The few that ive always worked with are losing their luster, but I can't break the habit haha

Ted Logan
07-10-2010, 07:17 PM
earnz!

Flawless Victory
07-10-2010, 07:56 PM
you rang?

xXABEONEXx
07-10-2010, 10:06 PM
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3292/002jc.jpg

more on point?

ASHiS
07-10-2010, 11:40 PM
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8867/picture18h.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/picture18h.jpg/)

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please crit..

H1P30N3R
07-10-2010, 11:51 PM
kersd- the k is ok but lose the drips for now and where is the e? also work on your handy

ashis- the a looks lowecase trying to make it uppercase ..scratch it also not feeling the outside leg on the h and i

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-3.jpg

xXABEONEXx
07-11-2010, 02:45 AM
ive been workin on th handy, that was just really small.
and i didnt do e in the last one i posted, but i like e so ill include it from now on.

http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/6783/001qli.jpg

ASHiS
07-11-2010, 10:39 AM
looks cool man!

TheToy
07-11-2010, 11:36 AM
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/8867/picture18h.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/picture18h.jpg/)

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please crit..

Here's a decent 'ASH' combo for you to work with.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3650

ASHiS
07-11-2010, 12:34 PM
Thx man.. i like that A and the H.. im gonna tweak them to my style though!:p

xXABEONEXx
07-11-2010, 05:07 PM
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/8837/002kfl.jpg

improved further...

B.S. P0LICE
07-11-2010, 08:24 PM
ill do the name of the next person to reply

nickstix
07-11-2010, 08:28 PM
Kersd- The pound sign, equal sign, and dollar sign are kinda cheezy...and the drips on the end of the D seem kinda awkward.

New one I came up with, came out sloppy on the wall... and going with REKT now...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook1.jpg
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/wall3.jpg

Crits?

iamBoZ96
07-11-2010, 08:32 PM
can someone help me out with throwies i wanna do the skinny tall ones but B-O-Z are awkward letters

Ted Logan
07-11-2010, 10:41 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3364/4575955231_57583a2114_b.jpg

nickstix
07-11-2010, 10:54 PM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3364/4575955231_57583a2114_b.jpg

Ive seen that spot, pretty close to me...

does it say KERNS?

xXABEONEXx
07-12-2010, 04:43 AM
good point nickstix, ill get on that.

IllLogic
07-12-2010, 10:38 AM
can someone help me out with throwies i wanna do the skinny tall ones but B-O-Z are awkward letters



Do an exchange with someone and see how they write it

TheToy
07-12-2010, 10:22 PM
Something a little different I've been workin' on. This falls into my 'European' influenced style I'm pushing toward. If I can get all the loops the same width and height I think it will have some nice flow. The 'T' needs some work to fit in.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3669

H1P30N3R
07-12-2010, 10:34 PM
I like the potential that has rewt ... the t seems like it going to be hard to get the same flow as the other letters. really can't give crits on anything else because I know nothing of euro style.

TheToy
07-12-2010, 10:37 PM
Thanks, man. Any input is good input.

I'm thinking about swirling that loop of the T all the way around back into the inside of the T. It'll be tacky but that's kind of that Euro feel.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-12-2010, 11:01 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0222.jpg
been a while.
Rewt:the W, move the ball line lower and the arm lines lower ( if that makes any sense lol)
Kern: maybe make the e larger
Rekt: maybe make the top of the e larger.

PREA672
07-12-2010, 11:17 PM
posek your 3d is all muffed up.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-12-2010, 11:25 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0225.jpg

betteR?

PREA672
07-12-2010, 11:57 PM
yeah much better

ASHiS
07-13-2010, 12:51 AM
http://img685.imageshack.us/img685/7131/picture20k.jpg (http://img685.imageshack.us/i/picture20k.jpg/)

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Crits?

MakeItTakeIt
07-13-2010, 01:19 AM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2qa8dnm.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/rvgj93.jpg
http://i26.tinypic.com/s25u03.jpg

I've since fixed the letter size issue, these are old but all I got and I know the shading is shit too haha. Crits on style and execution would be appreciated though

ASHiS
07-13-2010, 02:42 PM
Your shit looks tight! Why can't i have that writing hand you have?

SiNe-VrL-516
07-13-2010, 08:00 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/zj6yj6.jpg

can i gett some crits please

H1P30N3R
07-13-2010, 09:50 PM
posek- your letters seem to get larger from beginning to end work on proportion
ashis- lose the fish hooks things on the h and the 3d is off doesn't need shadowing at the top of the h
note- top one has best potential the t needs work and lose the shines and add ons for now just work on structure.
sine- resize your image .. but the n looks kind of like a k the i looks like a c and don't extend the bottom bar of the e out like that ..so work on your i and n.

nickstix
07-13-2010, 09:58 PM
Sine- I thought your N was a K that sort of looked like an H. Maybe try not making the top right section so large.

Note-top one is the best, and your T's are hurting the worst. as far as the execution with the paint, make sure to cut back with fill colors if your outline drips

messin around with a capital E ...
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook1-1.jpg

H1P30N3R
07-13-2010, 10:01 PM
rekt- try bubbling out that e like your r and k... just an idea

MakeItTakeIt
07-13-2010, 10:10 PM
Wait.. whats trolling?

hes doin it right.

h1p, thanks, thats just what i was thinkin, the t is throwin me off just because of the style of the whole throwie. I'm thinkin name change cuz after i started writin this i realized how much i fucking hate t's and n's lol but i'll keep workin on this for now cuz all practice is good practice.

as for crits, h1p pretty much hit everyone's nail on the head right thurr

H1P30N3R
07-13-2010, 10:21 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-14.jpg

MakeItTakeIt
07-13-2010, 10:30 PM
try rounding the top of the p so it doesn't look quite so much like the e

plus it'll flow with the dot of the i and make the whole piece more symmetrical

im diggin it as a whole though that h is dope

MakeItTakeIt
07-13-2010, 10:42 PM
the outermost outline was done with a different can and a different cap, so the fill wasn't the problem there, just amateur can control mixed with shitty paint lol and yeah ive been tryin to fix that t for a while ill post a flik when i get somethin that works thanks for the help

H1P30N3R
07-13-2010, 10:48 PM
give me some advice b.s. police your more advanced than most of us here

B.S. P0LICE
07-13-2010, 10:51 PM
give me some advice b.s. police your more advanced than most of us here

sketch a throw dude

H1P30N3R
07-13-2010, 10:53 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-14.jpg

here

B.S. P0LICE
07-13-2010, 11:22 PM
that middle bar in the h is too skinny that thing that hangs of the side on the rightis too much. same in the i. your p goes in too much making it look like an e. your e should be more distinct e looking on the bottom to middle part. heres the bottomline your trying to hard with this whole edgy and smooth combo on your letters, i know what you want it to look like but your just no where close to actually make it look like what you want. dumb your style down, dont doo too much aggresive lines on the outside of the letters, remember its a toss that shit is bubble letters. i know i might sound slightly hypocritical here but its like starting with simps and bars. you dont get to aggressive edgy throws without starting with basic round ones first

B.S. P0LICE
07-13-2010, 11:41 PM
http://a.imageshack.us/img215/4434/screencapture24.png

smokeitup
07-14-2010, 12:14 AM
these are from when i first started writing:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image022.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image00445355.jpg

Sbal
07-14-2010, 11:29 AM
i like the smilies haha

del4sel
07-14-2010, 12:39 PM
who's smiling around here? raise your limp ass hand.

Sbal
07-14-2010, 12:45 PM
wat.

del4sel
07-14-2010, 12:46 PM
h

Gyse
07-14-2010, 01:10 PM
Smokeitup, don't write sane.

LeaksOne
07-14-2010, 02:30 PM
these are from when i first started writing:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image022.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image00445355.jpg

http://www.herfstsorbet.com/hyperspace/updates/prentjes/michael-j-fox.jpg

H1P30N3R
07-14-2010, 05:04 PM
http://a.imageshack.us/img215/4434/screencapture24.png

thanks I get what your saying Im trying to jump ahead of my skill level. so for now I will just keep it super simple and make my moves more gradual rather than jumping ahead.

gumOnShoe
07-14-2010, 05:30 PM
Go kill your parents.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo69-1.jpg

PREA672
07-14-2010, 05:54 PM
why? just why?

gumOnShoe
07-14-2010, 06:23 PM
why what?

PREA672
07-14-2010, 06:24 PM
why kill my parents

Sbal
07-14-2010, 07:07 PM
Because they don't love you.

http://img804.imageshack.us/img804/2443/dsc04414.jpg
gum i cant read yours, the tag says snote but it looks like snune to me. I like the
S and the E.

PREA672
07-14-2010, 07:08 PM
well that makes sense

ChadWarden
07-14-2010, 08:14 PM
hug your parents.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo69-1.jpg

try having the knee of the r come more into the e. pretty dope over all.

H1P30N3R
07-14-2010, 09:55 PM
I like the new approach sbal the a needs a little tweaking but overall pretty nice

B.S. P0LICE
07-14-2010, 10:45 PM
oh man i hope your trolling

IllLogic
07-14-2010, 11:56 PM
not bad sbal

Mr yarbles
07-14-2010, 11:59 PM
***** why you writin snore?

Fury
07-15-2010, 12:56 AM
Because he's tired.

gumOnShoe
07-15-2010, 07:24 AM
***** why you writin snore?

Here we go again....
If what you said was implying that I'm somehow not allowed to "write" Snore, then, I GET IT.
You told me the same shit when I first came here.
I don't write Snore, just like I don't write Ikue, or Yerk, or whatever bullshit I post on here. 'K?

If I did though, Isn't that Snore from canada?
I'm American, so what's the problem?

Sbal
07-15-2010, 12:30 PM
http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/9325/dsc04415p.jpg
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8994/dsc04416n.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3789/dsc04418c.jpg

Why do they call them boobies? It should be Yaybies.

gumOnShoe
07-15-2010, 01:45 PM
Looks like Sbac.
How's your shit pronounced, anyway?
S-Ball?
Idk, I can't pronounce it.

kermet_1
07-15-2010, 01:49 PM
Looks like Sbac.
How's your shit pronounced, anyway?
S-Ball?
Idk, I can't pronounce it.
It's short for sweatyballs

Sbal
07-15-2010, 02:03 PM
Hit it right on the head kermet. I guess you'd pronounce it like that or like sp, like from the word spell, and all. so SPALL, and i;m trying to make that L more like an L, but it's a new style for me.

Mr yarbles
07-15-2010, 03:17 PM
Here we go again....
If what you said was implying that I'm somehow not allowed to "write" Snore, then, I GET IT.
You told me the same shit when I first came here.
I don't write Snore, just like I don't write Ikue, or Yerk, or whatever bullshit I post on here. 'K?

If I did though, Isn't that Snore from canada?
I'm American, so what's the problem?

Damn fool I'm not too smart so don't take my shit to heart.
I like to write silence and shit
Shoulda just put that it was a bs toss.

gumOnShoe
07-15-2010, 03:57 PM
I didn't expect anyone to actually think it's what I write.
Maybe it's me just being too careful, but I'm never going to post what I really write on here.
Not trying to come off douchey with the shit I said before, either.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 08:39 PM
can someone help me with a BOZ throwie? B-O-Z is an awkward combo

IbuprofenTablets
07-15-2010, 08:53 PM
No, quit being a fag, and do your own.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 08:58 PM
well god dam dont gotta snap juss looking for tips

IbuprofenTablets
07-15-2010, 09:07 PM
Tips? If someone did you an entire throw up, it'd be more than just a tip.
Skill can't be bought, or given.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 09:12 PM
skill can be taught mentors

Sbal
07-15-2010, 09:39 PM
we're not mentors it's the internet

IbuprofenTablets
07-15-2010, 09:45 PM
skill can be taught mentors

So find one Irl.
I don't think any one on here is kind enough to spend time tutoring people, y'know?
You can't expect to really progress just by getting handouts, can you?

B.S. P0LICE
07-15-2010, 09:48 PM
while were on the subject. heads need to stop clogging up my pm box asking for help with their throws. im not trying to be rude or anything but i dont even have time to do my throws nevermind yours.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 10:00 PM
yeah ur right

IbuprofenTablets
07-15-2010, 10:19 PM
And you're acting like we don't have a thread that teaches you the basics.
READ IT.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 10:25 PM
it said nuthin bout throwies

B.S. P0LICE
07-15-2010, 10:30 PM
kid wtf are you even talking about?

IbuprofenTablets
07-15-2010, 10:45 PM
Who's to say that you can't apply what you read there to your throws?
C'mon son, quit making excuses.

iamBoZ96
07-15-2010, 10:49 PM
i read it it said thowies and all they said was LED throies

B.S. P0LICE
07-15-2010, 11:01 PM
boz i think you mistken what this thread is for. draw your throw, ppl will critt it, based on those critts fix your throw post it again ppl will critt it and so on till ur good enough to know what to do

sezer
07-16-2010, 12:20 AM
eh something new. its really garbage but i practice alot in my garage before i hit the streets

crits?

http://i32.tinypic.com/9iwmjd.jpg

smokeitup
07-16-2010, 12:47 AM
Smokeitup, don't write sane.

why not? taken?

LeaksOne
07-16-2010, 12:56 AM
^^^ you cant be serious

sezer, thats pretty decent only thing i would say is tweak the Y and change the R. look around for inspiration for the R. i actually had trouble with an R in my current name. as easy as it is i had a hard time making it flow. i got it down though. i would say look in the picture gallery in throws and bombs.

smokeitup
07-16-2010, 01:07 AM
wasnt my tag, it was a friends anyway.

sezer
07-16-2010, 01:09 AM
word cool , thanks alot leaksone

kermet_1
07-16-2010, 12:42 PM
Seyr, it looks good, but the R needs work.
I like the S, but not the little bubble thing that comes out on the leftside.
Keep practicing!

Sbal
07-16-2010, 01:22 PM
http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/8994/dsc04416n.jpg
http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/3789/dsc04418c.jpg
.

I'm gonna bump for crits.
Seyr-Looks good, just don't like the r, I think an uppercase would be easier to work with.

iamBoZ96
07-16-2010, 09:35 PM
Sbal good stuff mayne im feelin the top one juss do a clean fill and maybe sum lines in the letters on the bottem one but thats me 2cnts

Sbal
07-16-2010, 09:37 PM
The bottom one is supposed to say SL. I gotta work on my L's i guess.

iamBoZ96
07-16-2010, 11:10 PM
make the lip a lil longer

smokeitup
07-17-2010, 01:24 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image009-1.jpg

nickstix
07-17-2010, 11:15 AM
SBAL-first flik, you gotta work on the L. maybe try extending the lower section outward so its in more of an L shape. Second flik, dont bring the upper line in the middle of the S over so far to the left that its almost touching the side.

Smokeitup-The K dosent match your other letters, try rounding it out more rather than having it more detailed like that

Seyr-use a capital R, itll be easier to work with and look better with the rest of your throw


ill do the name of the next person to reply

so what ever happened to this idea? I posted right after this...

hpir
07-17-2010, 01:20 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture203.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture207.jpg
crits?

Sbal
07-17-2010, 02:07 PM
Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4976/dsc04420f.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
07-17-2010, 02:46 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture203.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture207.jpg
crits?

Here's a crit':
do something different.
you've been doing the same thing since last year.
I'm all for style, but C'mon.

iamBoZ96
07-17-2010, 10:34 PM
sbal i like the flow of the orange one but work on the L

smokeitup
07-18-2010, 01:21 AM
Dkode the lines in the e are weird.
Kane, I like your an, but the bottom of your K seems smushed in.
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4976/dsc04420f.jpg

its the logo for cityrail:

http://www.chw.edu.au/about/pr/events/tbp_2008/img/cityrail.jpg

the train service.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-18-2010, 01:46 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0254.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0255.jpg
just some ideas.

kane- ur k does not flow
sbal- ur middle throw is ur best, make your letters less chunkie and fix up your a,

Get Rekt!
07-18-2010, 11:00 AM
Neither one of these are amazing, the top is to fat in my opinion. and the bottom one i did in about 30 seconds.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0718001156.jpg

Zookyook
07-18-2010, 11:07 AM
everyone sayin kanes K is bad is WRONG! (in my opinion lol)... that K and A are dope, itd make a good 2 letter throw... but the N and E is what im not feelin...

H1P30N3R
07-18-2010, 01:48 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-15.jpg

iamBoZ96
07-18-2010, 03:15 PM
Hipe- try to keep the letters the same size

ASHiS
07-18-2010, 10:41 PM
http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/3568/cimg0010g.jpg (http://img375.imageshack.us/i/cimg0010g.jpg/)

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Crits plz... yes.. it is small!

smokeitup
07-18-2010, 10:59 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010005.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010003.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/MONDAY19JULY2010002.jpg

ASHiS
07-18-2010, 11:23 PM
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crit

MakeItTakeIt
07-19-2010, 01:16 PM
Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy

iamBoZ96
07-19-2010, 01:38 PM
smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT

Sbal
07-19-2010, 02:56 PM
Those hollows are steezy.

TheToy
07-19-2010, 03:14 PM
Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.

I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...


The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.

Phillip McDougall
07-19-2010, 03:17 PM
And the faces have unnecessarily long lashes that don't fit and flip at the end.

ASHiS
07-19-2010, 03:55 PM
Ashis- Make the body and dot of the i a little bigger and you'll be lookin pretty zazzy

What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?

B.S. P0LICE
07-19-2010, 03:57 PM
SBAL-first flik, you gotta work on the L. maybe try extending the lower section outward so its in more of an L shape. Second flik, dont bring the upper line in the middle of the S over so far to the left that its almost touching the side.

Smokeitup-The K dosent match your other letters, try rounding it out more rather than having it more detailed like that

Seyr-use a capital R, itll be easier to work with and look better with the rest of your throw



so what ever happened to this idea? I posted right after this...


whachu write

kew1
07-19-2010, 04:33 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-18_1422.jpg

iamBoZ96
07-19-2010, 04:38 PM
switch up the u alil bit

H1P30N3R
07-19-2010, 05:43 PM
the k also looks forced to me .

LeaksOne
07-19-2010, 05:58 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-18_1422.jpg

http://teacherseducation.files.wordpress.com/2007/05/hobbes_yikes.gif

the U is weak and looks really weird. i can tell you went slow on the K because the bottom of it is real shaky and its also weak. and this is just personal preference but i hate that pointy shit.

MakeItTakeIt
07-19-2010, 10:13 PM
What do you mean the body? And which name ism or ASHiS?

I was talkin bout ASHiS, the body of the i. the whole letter just needs to be bigger. Also the h looks a bit off, how one side is bubbled and he other is straight on bottom half. Minor details but I think it'll really set it off

MakeItTakeIt
07-19-2010, 10:14 PM
I guess the same could be said about ism though too

MakeItTakeIt
07-19-2010, 10:20 PM
smokeitup. work on the style a lil bit before you go thrown it up everywhere believe me when your better youll regret ever doing thaT

Nothin a name change wont fix unless you go around and brag. In which case, you deserve to get hated on.

ASHiS
07-19-2010, 10:29 PM
Thx man! ill bubble the H more.. you think that'll look good on the streets though?

smokeitup
07-20-2010, 12:38 AM
Smoke, your letters fucking suck. Slow down and pay attention to what letters you're trying to create. Your 'D's still look like clowned up 'M's.

I'd be annoyed to have to look at them letters everyday in that city...


The only thing good about them is the 'E' with the face on the end of that hollow throw you did in black. On the white wall, not the brick. But it doesn't fit the flow. It looks like you just copied it from another throw and pasted it on the end.

yeah ill admit they're not my best throwies, i was a bit too high when i went out painting that time and also i went by myself so i was lookin over my shoulder every 5 seconds to make sure no one was around. also i was tryin to do it as quick as possible so that didnt help either.

PREA672
07-20-2010, 12:40 AM
Just practice smoke, once you have drawn it a thousand times it will flow naturally when your on the streets. and you'll learn to just be chill when you bomb.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-20-2010, 12:44 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

sezer
07-20-2010, 12:46 AM
nice! diggin the P alot and aswell with the s

LeaksOne
07-20-2010, 03:39 AM
the k is too big

MakeItTakeIt
07-20-2010, 01:26 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

hawt

Phillip McDougall
07-20-2010, 02:47 PM
nawt

PREA672
07-20-2010, 02:47 PM
lawls

IbuprofenTablets
07-20-2010, 04:40 PM
Bawls.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-20-2010, 05:11 PM
nawt

what should i change.?

LeaksOne
07-20-2010, 05:16 PM
the O, the S, and the size of the K

PREA672
07-20-2010, 06:29 PM
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/004-2.jpg

funsies

Phillip McDougall
07-20-2010, 07:16 PM
What Leaks said. Not bad, either, Prea. Looks more like a simp than a throw, though.

PREA672
07-20-2010, 07:55 PM
yeah kinda, its just a boxy throw. drew it as fast as a normal throw.

TheToy
07-20-2010, 09:11 PM
I like the outline of that 'T' for a simple letter throw.

Reminds me of an old legend's 'T' in my area. Always loved it.

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 01:24 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

your getting bigger towards the K, keep it same, make the center of the 'o' small liek the 'e' and center of 'p' and amke the 'e' more visable i'd say :P
but nice tho

hpir
07-21-2010, 04:19 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture211.jpg
...

Fuzzy2
07-21-2010, 04:46 PM
hey im sorta new to this site. just posted these pics in non toy section and was told to post here. ahaha! crits?
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECPURP.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECgree.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/decconnectioncolor.png

Sbal
07-21-2010, 04:56 PM
First one looks like DGC, i like the second pic though, but make the e bigger.

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 04:59 PM
first one the 'e' looks like a 'g' make it face the right way, i like the genral idea try and styalise it more now, instead of following a genral theme

Fuzzy2
07-21-2010, 06:22 PM
iight iight cool thanks for the crits. ill work on it.

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 07:41 PM
hi guys, i need help on my throwies, i it's something that i dont know how simple or basic to go, well basically im confused and need help :P
heres some i did earleir, and like :P

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722_2.jpg
not sure bout the bottom of the 'Z', 'A', and 2nd half of 'N'
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722_1.jpg
not sure about the 'Z' puzzeling me alot :/ and too wavey?
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100722.jpg
a done up repeate of the 1st one looks better i believe with out the followed through lines onto each letter

but yeh their my currnet throwies,
if anyone wants to exchange throwies, an do each others names, or if any one wants to give me ideas, advice, or try my name 'NAUZ' or 'nauz' in their throwie style please do

thanks in advance :P

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 08:38 PM
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ILL STREET BLUES
07-21-2010, 08:48 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/score.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/blueangels.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/RIPEYT.jpg
i be exspressing to my full capabilities,
now im living in correctional facilities
cme?

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 08:59 PM
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ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:02 PM
CAN'T POST ANYTHING... Has to be checked by a moderator?

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:03 PM
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crits

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 09:05 PM
ashi that's tight, need to join the 'I' to the rest to amke a good flow and make it a wee bit bigger, and mabey an idea would be to make the 2nd part of the 'H' flow with the bottom of the others, and then flow with the I could be good

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:07 PM
I was actually changing my name to Aski haha! but that looks good
?Ima use this name if its cool!

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 09:12 PM
ah yeh sorry a quick initial view, but it is a 'K' i am sorry

and use what ever name you feel comfortable with

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:23 PM
Ha yea dude! i didn't like the double s so i changed it to ASKi.

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 09:36 PM
having the i at the end of your name seems like it could be hard to work with .. well atleast for me it would be.

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:40 PM
What do you mean like hmm should i add a letter to it... what letter?

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 09:41 PM
nauz - don't make so many squiggly lines in your letters. make them simple do some research to get ideas.And personally i like the lowercase a better than the capital one just less squiggles

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 09:43 PM
I would get an opinion on that i from a more experienced writer because i could be wrong before you try changing it. aske, askr, askm .. but yea get some other opinions 1st

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 09:50 PM
i think the 'i' flows and fits, he jsut has to put it in the right place,
and thanks for the tips 'h1p' :)
mind trying a throwie in your handstyle?

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:57 PM
hmmmm ASKIO

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 09:57 PM
handstyles and throws are 2 different things lol

here http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 09:59 PM
quick try at your throw ashis

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0001-17.jpg

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 10:02 PM
I like it!

H1P30N3R
07-21-2010, 10:07 PM
trust me its nothing special im super toy too man

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 10:16 PM
Haha! i think im gonna write ASKIO

hpir
07-22-2010, 12:23 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture212.jpg

Jerk215
07-22-2010, 07:00 PM
wat up. first post

http://i32.tinypic.com/2070pc4.jpg
i suck

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 07:02 PM
The only thing that isn't horrid on that throw is the J, man.
Tooootally start over.

ASHiS
07-22-2010, 07:04 PM
It's.. ok.. I don't personally like it.. Make it a lil more legible.. Like with the E.

aekone
07-23-2010, 12:31 AM
Hpir- Umm I couldn't tell what the hell that said. kake kane or kare? I dunno. ANyway work on the shadow cuz it's fucked and definitely work on legibility.

Jerk- Umm.. I mean if you developed from that style I think something badass could come of it. But right now it kinda blows. Unless you really have them down I would suggest staying away from the lower case r. Just my suggestion tho. Also don't say you suck. We've all been there. Hell I'm still kinda there. :D

Uhoh!
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo7.jpg
Please ignore the tag. I was just fuckin around. Badly.

H1P30N3R
07-24-2010, 12:45 PM
uhoh- looks ok other than the green making the outline not stand out ..and what is that little swirl on your o for
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC00022-1.jpg

PegCityBoy
07-24-2010, 03:53 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4073/4822574625_d7e5548b17.jpg

A and M are balls, tweaked em already

B.S. P0LICE
07-24-2010, 05:14 PM
wat up. first post

http://i32.tinypic.com/2070pc4.jpg
i suck

i actually kind of like that for some reason.

dubbed
07-24-2010, 05:19 PM
spam your S and M really need work even in the handstyle, keep those letters the same size

MakeItTakeIt
07-24-2010, 07:22 PM
I actually kinda like that m a lot minus the top left part of it.

I'd be interested to see how you tweaked it.

ASHiS
07-24-2010, 10:18 PM
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LeaksOne
07-24-2010, 10:31 PM
That look heavily influenced by graffiti Creator or king wiggles himself

ASHiS
07-24-2010, 10:35 PM
That look heavily influenced by graffiti Creator or king wiggles himself

nah man! thats all from my brain... I don't go to that site anyways. I just went there and the only thing i can see that looks like the Mr. wiggles design or whatever is the i.. which i can fix! And ima fix that o too!

LeaksOne
07-24-2010, 10:51 PM
While your at it fix the A and tweak the k

elpendejo123
07-25-2010, 11:35 AM
lemme no what u think- try to stick to constructive criticism please.

otter
07-25-2010, 11:54 AM
GIVE crits to GET crits.

elpendejo123
07-25-2010, 12:04 PM
give tips, advice, criticism, w.e

otter
07-25-2010, 12:09 PM
dude you have to crit other peoples work before they are going to crit yours.

core: tweak the r and the e

H1P30N3R
07-25-2010, 01:11 PM
core- the c is off small at the top super big at the bottom

Sbal
07-25-2010, 02:10 PM
I can pretty much guarantee that you are not the second core

Numaga
07-25-2010, 07:03 PM
core - the C is too big, tweak the R
PegCity- I'm also interested in seeing how you tweaked it XD

http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0725001954.jpg


crits? S got cut off :/
I know the top of the U isn't very good

Havoc97
07-26-2010, 04:09 PM
CuCCui get the fuck out of here emo

anyways heres a sketch i did about a week ago. please post crits on what you think
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/7269/throwuphavoc.jpg (http://img714.imageshack.us/i/throwuphavoc.jpg/)

CuCCui
07-27-2010, 01:16 AM
havoc I see where you are going ,but you seem to lose focus in your exicution...dont put a big circle above your "I" it makes it look girlie...for the throw use a "crack fill" for the shadow,make your letters uniform in size and wieght and for christ's sake put some individual style into it...if you dont want me to cuss and stuff respect me with the same courtesy...
NUMAGA,that's a good start,but watch the edges try and make them crisp and clean,also watch you fill coloring experiment with "crack fills" the help prolong the life of your markers..search the tutorial thread I posted a tute on coloring back in the day when I was MUSASHI its basic but will help with your presentations.

Havoc97
07-27-2010, 02:36 AM
havoc I see where you are going ,but you seem to lose focus in your exicution...dont put a big circle above your "I" it makes it look girlie...for the throw use a "crack fill" for the shadow,make your letters uniform in size and wieght and for christ's sake put some individual style into it...if you dont want me to cuss and stuff respect me with the same courtesy...
NUMAGA,that's a good start,but watch the edges try and make them crisp and clean,also watch you fill coloring experiment with "crack fills" the help prolong the life of your markers..search the tutorial thread I posted a tute on coloring back in the day when I was MUSASHI its basic but will help with your presentations.

any tips on making an individual style? every time I've tried it looks like garbage. I'm not asking for you to do it for me I just want some tips

ASHiS
07-27-2010, 12:14 PM
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8882/picture24fp.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/i/picture24fp.jpg/)
I had to high light with a Sharpie so i couldn't make good clean lines.. My black prisma color is dried out so i gotta rack some more prismas soon! Please crit on the style not the fact that some of the lines are bumpy.

Sbal
07-27-2010, 01:15 PM
the fuck is up with the k

ASHiS
07-27-2010, 01:22 PM
the fuck is up with the k
Yea i know! i think im going to put the top closer together and delete the little line to the left.

Numaga
07-27-2010, 03:09 PM
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0725001954.jpg
More crits?

Ashis - tweak the K and S
not feelin that bump on the left of the A

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-27-2010, 03:43 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0286.jpg
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0287.jpg

umos- take out the penis in the middle of your m and make your u smaller as well as the little mountain on your s.

ASHiS
07-27-2010, 04:44 PM
Your shit is terrible
So wait... you say my shit is terrible but i don't see you saying how i should fix it! this forum sucks i hate feeling like im not meeting standards of other ppl! i like it! so im sticking with it! ill get better gradually over time, it takes practice.. so im not getting on anymore.. Ill buy from bombing science but i'm not posting my art just to hear.. "that shit looks terrible".. Fuck that! For me art is independent, If you like the art that you do then it's fine..

CuCCui
07-27-2010, 06:38 PM
any tips on making an individual style? every time I've tried it looks like garbage. I'm not asking for you to do it for me I just want some tips...heres what you do,take your drawings throw them out the window and replace them with a car,consider what you want to do with that car,consider why you even need a car,upon consideration you may find a bicycle will suffice your needs,for what you do you might need a truck,a motorcycle,or even just a cool pair of sneakers...you have to consider this as well.how much time are you willing to commit to its application,how many colors you want to use....the main thing to consider in "DEVELOPING STYLE" is this function dictates form...Look at race cars for example,they all have to abide by a predetermined set of rules,how they interpret these rules can be shown in aesthetics,performance,and ultimately success or failure... ill do one for you,your word my style I'll post it up in a second.

CuCCui
07-27-2010, 07:47 PM
I did this on notebook paper so you have an idea of its size...took ten minutes to develope about 30 seconds to draw the final image you see.the vowels overlap the consonants as they are without extensions.two colors...what a throw is is a piece thrown up real quickly,mostly used for bombing and its utility...how to develope style...the best advice is enter as many battles as you can manage the time for...your work will crown itself in time...look in the old battle threads,my old shit is MUSASHI.I only won one battle out of all the ones I entered but I didnt let that discourage me I was on fire in my mind...and alot of people liked my stuff but there were alot of writers that could burn me upside and down the other...did I care no!!!! I did what I did and I'm glad I did cuz I was getting up...

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NouveauP
07-27-2010, 08:17 PM
Thatguy- I'm kinda likin those. Good simple style. The E and N need a little work.
Numaga- GO SIMPLER. Work on clean lines and form before trying to get crazy. Take it slow.
Ashis- same advice
Havoc- Clean it up. It has potential.

My funk.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/battle023.jpg

Flawless Victory
07-27-2010, 08:25 PM
Your hands GREATLY outweigh your throws man, that needs a lot of work. pretty much every letter.

that little bouncy ball on the back of the A ruins it.
The E doesn't need a lower lip, or a jawline, just one line.
same with the P, no need to fold it in.

the holes are really cheesy looking too, just a line of a dot or a hole that follows the shape of the letter would be fine.

H1P30N3R
07-27-2010, 10:04 PM
lol^... guywhodrinkstea is that begen ? Anyway the second e on the second throw resembles an f too much fix that and your letters do the same as mine start one size and with each letter get larger so idk i'm working on that too. Are you left handed by any chance?

ASHiS
07-27-2010, 11:58 PM
Sorry for my shit earlier! Just pisses me off when i feel like im not making progress.
is this better..http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/5148/picture25.jpg (http://img811.imageshack.us/i/picture25.jpg/)

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viseversa101
07-28-2010, 02:12 AM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Vise%20stuff%20oldnew/imagejpeg_22.jpg

LeaksOne
07-28-2010, 02:31 AM
i understand whats its suppose to be but your bunny doesnt really look like a V it just looks like a character, the I looks like a C....i shouldnt have to explain that one, and the E looks like a t/+. Define your letters

viseversa101
07-28-2010, 04:00 AM
thatd be an ugly ass t the v is more towards a bunny cuz it expresses itself for that given time n i like it i mean cmon it has a face as a base n 2 ears for the v...the i being a c is only cuz of the lighting....that line goes all the way thru....the the heart beat in the t is to break it out to be an e....so yea...

air707
07-28-2010, 04:35 AM
i thought the E was a P and i was diggin it

NouveauP
07-28-2010, 08:41 AM
Some older throws I've painted.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4039/4546114649_6b203e1ac5.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2575/4172908796_444c43e264.jpg
My last post is a more cartoony style I wanted to work on, but I guess I'll scrap it.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-28-2010, 08:53 AM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0289.jpg

NouveauP
07-28-2010, 11:02 AM
The overlaps at the bottom of the E and G don't look like they need to be there, but you still need to have that middle bar visible for the G. And your N doesn't look quite right. Not a bad start though.

Numaga
07-28-2010, 01:30 PM
http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0728001427.jpg

going simple lol

tea - looks good, i don't like that little thing on the top of the N though

HORSEthefan
07-28-2010, 01:35 PM
Hey guys, im fairly new to graffiti and this forum.

just looking for some crits, dont hesitate to be harsh

messin around with spikes, and one liners...

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/7572/picture0002n.jpg


http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5286/picture0001m.jpg

ChadWarden
07-28-2010, 01:47 PM
try knitting instead. i feel as if that will go better for you.

elpendejo123
07-28-2010, 07:00 PM
eros do u get up in providence, north providence?

rewz
07-28-2010, 09:27 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/30vg714.jpg
its ok im stil getting used to it

LeaksOne
07-28-2010, 09:48 PM
your R kinda looks like a P at a glance, your N is kinda big, and your K looks like an X. i like your steez though.

rewz
07-28-2010, 09:53 PM
yea i noticed the n to im working on it I dont like my Rs im trying to find one that is going to work

LeaksOne
07-28-2010, 09:56 PM
picture gallery>throw ups-bombs>tons of inspiration!!

down!
07-28-2010, 10:14 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/zwjdow.jpg

ASHiS
07-28-2010, 10:32 PM
http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/6013/picture28f.jpg (http://img832.imageshack.us/i/picture28f.jpg/)

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ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-28-2010, 11:00 PM
Rank- beisdes the p and r thing..which was said before make sure you preportion your letters it gets bigger at the end
ashis- simplier
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0296.jpg
tweeked a little.

ASHiS
07-28-2010, 11:04 PM
What do i need to do to make it simpler?

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-28-2010, 11:07 PM
start from scratch take a while to figure out your basic throw up letters, when you feel its alright then post a pick, but graffiti takes time.

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07-29-2010, 03:12 AM
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NouveauP
07-30-2010, 01:18 PM
Begin- I like the IN combination. Maybe bring in the top of the I in a little bit.
TAK- work on structure. Back to the basics.
Rank-the R is a little strange, but besides that, it's solid.


An altered form of my old throw.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/battle039.jpg

appleseed
07-30-2010, 07:52 PM
http://i26.tinypic.com/mie784.jpg

TrandomnesstwO
07-30-2010, 09:07 PM
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/3711/003qhn.jpg
Its a little fucked,yes.

MakeItTakeIt
07-31-2010, 09:02 PM
Tak, make the main bar of the a the same width as the other letters. I would shorten the top right bar of the k for a bit of steez too but thats just me.

Begin, the b and e don't look like they fit, it might be cuz they're a bit smaller and the bars don't look as wide as the rest, try and tweak those. I'm feelin the g i n combo though.

Rese? you got your proportions right, try and clean it up and know exactly what shape you want your lines to be. Shorten the top bars of the s so its not so smooshed and dont stab the top of your e out so much, try an make all your letters more uniform with each other.

Ock, Make the o bigger and put more of a lip on the bottom of the top right bar of the k. The c is lookin hella clean minus that botch at the top lol good shit.

appleseed
08-01-2010, 01:17 AM
Ock, Make the o bigger and put more of a lip on the bottom of the top right bar of the k. The c is lookin hella clean minus that botch at the top lol good shit.

Thanks man. I'm goin out soon so I'll put your advice to use.

LeaksOne
08-01-2010, 01:20 AM
how about a straight picture...

TrandomnesstwO
08-01-2010, 05:37 AM
Rese? you got your proportions right, try and clean it up and know exactly what shape you want your lines to be. Shorten the top bars of the s so its not so smooshed and dont stab the top of your e out so much, try an make all your letters more uniform with each other.

Ive been writing for three years and it all comes down to this. It says Rasp, thanks for the crits.

MakeItTakeIt
08-01-2010, 01:03 PM
My bad dude, I see the a now, it just doesn't really look like an a.. Not hatin, just obvservin.

Task977
08-01-2010, 06:44 PM
Jaep - I like that, simple but good
Bekone - I dont even have any advise, keep it up

anyways here is something i drew in about 10 mins. Crits are appreciated
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/7074/scan0001qhd.jpg (http://img193.imageshack.us/i/scan0001qhd.jpg/)

PREA672
08-01-2010, 06:49 PM
your T looks like a 7 extend the bar

Fury
08-01-2010, 06:50 PM
The only thing close to decent is the S. Go look at a shitload of throws and get a general idea. That doesn't look like a T, that doesn't look like an A, and I have no idea why a lot of people do their K's like that.

bekone1
08-01-2010, 07:58 PM
Damn dude... that's pretty fuckin' clean.
I don't have any advice to give you haha,
good job man, keep it up.

thanks man i think my 3D needs work and my style a little bit i just dont know what to do with im im in a rut with my pieces there all kiinda the same