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dangeri
08-20-2010, 11:14 AM
Love the 'no' on that mate,

iamBoZ96
08-20-2010, 02:32 PM
"Note" i feel that i like how you can use your T its hard to work with that deadspace but it feels like the N and O over power the T and E and id give you my 2 cents but i need Rusto

Splaz out!

LeaksOne
08-20-2010, 02:34 PM
note you need a new N.

MakeItTakeIt
08-20-2010, 02:56 PM
Shiiiiit, that was the new N. I'm tryin out a bunch of new shit. I just woke up I'll post some revised shit in a bit. The T is definitely hard to flow sometimes but I'm workin on it. Ynot RIP helped me a lot with that. I totally agree with all yall thanks much for the crits.

Invert
08-20-2010, 08:53 PM
Invert. Study graffiti. There's plenty of pictures on this site, put them to use. Start simple, like really, really fucking simple and just keep writin it. You'll get the hang of it eventually. It's easier if you pick letters that you can flow easily and make a name from those instead of picking a name and trying to cater to it. Some basic pointers: Have your letters the same basic size and shape, and have them touching as much as possible but not so much that they're squished. Also, don't sketch your throws, ever. Flow solid lines till you get the hang of it. Graff is definitely not somethin you can just jump into and be dope. It takes practice. Keep at it.


I thought what I drew was as simple as it's going to get? How simple should I start then?

iamBoZ96
08-20-2010, 09:13 PM
keyboard

Invert
08-20-2010, 09:18 PM
keyboard

I hate asking, but what to do with the keyboard letters. I know to draw them but should I just work on being steady with it or practice bars or what?

sIeL.gAs
08-20-2010, 09:19 PM
http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm271/jbang212121/Picture0009.jpg
crits?

iamBoZ96
08-20-2010, 09:30 PM
Invert you practice your bars and striaghts with them you can basically devolop a new style.
Seil- i like your S and E but your I and L need work so does your handy

sIeL.gAs
08-20-2010, 09:33 PM
thanks for the crit, ill try to come up with something more similar to the S and E.

iamBoZ96
08-20-2010, 09:38 PM
IMO I's and L's are hard

MakeItTakeIt
08-21-2010, 12:48 AM
Word, the S and the E are sorta boxy and the I and the L are bubbly. Throw a few corners and some steez on em it should be lookin nice.

lost is gettin up
08-21-2010, 02:38 AM
havent posted in awhile new throwie concept any critzz?

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/th_DSCN1436.jpg (http://s417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/?action=view&current=DSCN1436.jpg)

LeaksOne
08-21-2010, 03:41 AM
No.

IllLogic
08-21-2010, 10:21 AM
http://i37.tinypic.com/2ihmtmd.jpg

Fury
08-21-2010, 12:07 PM
havent posted in awhile new throwie concept any critzz?

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/th_DSCN1436.jpg (http://s417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/?action=view&current=DSCN1436.jpg)

Block your shit on photobucket.

Jerk215
08-21-2010, 12:16 PM
Note- i think your most recent post has potential. the n isnt really working though. i really like the shape on the o.
IllLogic- looks pretty good. not feelin the M. it also looks like its all getting smaller, especially the 3d
siel- that throw needs a lot of work. the hand is better, maybe try an uppercase L to even the thing out
lost_is_getting_up - that throw is hurtin.

heres my shitty bullshit
http://i920.photobucket.com/albums/ad49/jerk215/photo-1-1.jpg

Gatsoi
08-21-2010, 08:36 PM
Your muncie throwie is wayyy better than mine.

-Sinn-
08-22-2010, 04:47 AM
Battle between Sinn and Phat2 the votes up to you
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/9618_161064336474_516386474_3271831_5302102_ndg.jp g
Phat2
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/wanja.jpg
Sinn

Phillip McDougall
08-22-2010, 01:39 PM
Sinn..

IllLogic
08-22-2010, 01:44 PM
phat

H1P30N3R
08-22-2010, 01:54 PM
sinn

elpendejo123
08-22-2010, 04:25 PM
seil- try not to have any negative space in between letters

illLogic- nice job at keeping it symmetrical o.0

iamboz96- dope letters keep it up :)

phat2 is better :P

Phillip McDougall
08-22-2010, 04:37 PM
You guys are kidding..

elpendejo123
08-22-2010, 04:45 PM
crits?

elpendejo123
08-22-2010, 04:46 PM
actually my bad i meant sinn is better

iamBoZ96
08-22-2010, 07:43 PM
i feel the style make it cleaner

MakeItTakeIt
08-22-2010, 07:52 PM
Maybe if phat wasn't lazy and did some 3d haha he still gmv

PermanentMarkers
08-23-2010, 02:54 AM
Phat ruined it with the J imo, and Sinns style is dope, but the n could definately be a K (although i still like the n quite alot), and the J could pass for an S anyday. The a is really clever

Cele - Uppercase Es look better usually, switch to uppercase. Also try doing your throws blockier (with straighter lines, aka bars, but round them). Dont bother with fills.. just do a bunch of outlines

Jerk - i kinda like it.. the K threw me off though. and i thought the r was a P.

Gatsoi
08-23-2010, 12:33 PM
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/12.jpg

MakeItTakeIt
08-23-2010, 02:57 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/29za5uv.jpg

New style, tryin to work out the kinks. Any suggestions? Or should I just start over?

PREA672
08-23-2010, 03:20 PM
throwies bore me

Get Rekt!
08-23-2010, 03:39 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/w7zasm.jpg

im feelin' that^

Get Rekt!
08-23-2010, 03:41 PM
http://i38.tinypic.com/29za5uv.jpg

New style, tryin to work out the kinks. Any suggestions? Or should I just start over?

i like it. maybe do something with the e. i like the style and the way its structured but theres just something about that big bubble i dont really like

MakeItTakeIt
08-23-2010, 04:55 PM
i like it. maybe do something with the e. i like the style and the way its structured but theres just something about that big bubble i dont really like

http://i33.tinypic.com/5yyzyo.jpg
Word, I feel ya. The t could be bigger in this one, whateva.

paniik
08-23-2010, 10:05 PM
http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad64/oVengance/snapshot-5.png

i need to work on my shadows..crits please

LeaksOne
08-23-2010, 10:18 PM
Your first s is realty awkward as is your n.

paniik
08-23-2010, 10:21 PM
can u give me a tip on how to improve them?

PermanentMarkers
08-23-2010, 11:59 PM
can u give me a tip on how to improve them?

Use straight lines for awhile, i tried bubbles and shit before structure too, then when i started with the bars i was like "woooaah i didnt know about this, its way easier now". It definately helps to just draw letters from your keyboard, like SONS, then you'll figure it out from there if you just keep drawing and looking on here. Look at stuff other people post, and the crits they get. The same crits go around and around. If at first you dont succeed try again.

As for your shadow, just pick a point on your letter, and decide where you want the drop shadow to be (aka, down and to the left). Now redraw that point you picked down and to the left. Now your line is made up of infinity points right? Do this with all infinity points and you will have a shadow (just redraw your letter down and to the left of the original letter, but obviously dont go over the original letter). Curves are difficult, but when it gets tricky just do the point thing. Down this much, left this much.

Invert
08-24-2010, 12:24 AM
Note - That's lookin really good, Lovin the 'N'
Sons - I'm probably in no position to talk but try and make your letters more proportional.

http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6647/scan0011k.jpg
Any crits? I know I shouldn't sketch my throws but other than that,

Sbal
08-24-2010, 08:40 AM
Don't make the bottom bubble of your B come down so far and avoid crosses in your letters, they look lame.

paniik
08-24-2010, 01:48 PM
Use straight lines for awhile, i tried bubbles and shit before structure too, then when i started with the bars i was like "woooaah i didnt know about this, its way easier now". It definately helps to just draw letters from your keyboard, like SONS, then you'll figure it out from there if you just keep drawing and looking on here. Look at stuff other people post, and the crits they get. The same crits go around and around. If at first you dont succeed try again.

As for your shadow, just pick a point on your letter, and decide where you want the drop shadow to be (aka, down and to the left). Now redraw that point you picked down and to the left. Now your line is made up of infinity points right? Do this with all infinity points and you will have a shadow (just redraw your letter down and to the left of the original letter, but obviously dont go over the original letter). Curves are difficult, but when it gets tricky just do the point thing. Down this much, left this much.

Thank you VERY much (:

H1P30N3R
08-24-2010, 11:04 PM
sons -just work on your letter first 3d isn't important until your letters are ready
blue- don't give your letters so much waviness scratch the b

cripto throwie battle

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1840.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
08-25-2010, 11:06 AM
http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad64/oVengance/snapshot-5.png

i need to work on my shadows..crits please

*****', I already told you once:

DON'T SKETCH YOUR THROWS. EVER. OK?

Phat 2
08-25-2010, 11:35 AM
and get your bars up

IbuprofenTablets
08-25-2010, 12:20 PM
Yeah, get your throwy bars up.

LeaksOne
08-25-2010, 12:35 PM
Lol hey phat, there are no bars in throws

super soac
08-25-2010, 01:24 PM
first post
first throw with my new name
crits would be nice
http://i37.tinypic.com/2gx3g2b.jpg

DECO ONE
08-26-2010, 02:06 AM
Old Throw... thinking about going back to something like this... any crits?


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2485/4078535721_5f9f00dca1.jpg

suparjafar
08-26-2010, 02:14 AM
if thats old hopefully your handstyle has improved...
stay away from edges in your throw

soac the top of the s kinda doesnt work for what youre doing but i like the rest

old
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0345.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

nu
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0365.jpg

criticism would be nice

DECO ONE
08-26-2010, 02:44 AM
only thing i would say is try to make the letters your own.. there pretty generic letters so try changing them slightly to make them more...your own is all i can say.. your sizing and proportions are pretty even. so youve got that down...

and yes my Tag deff changed.. haha.. theres a slightly more updated version i did tonight in the Toy Tagz section... Sakura on a blue box :D

sanrtizer
08-26-2010, 02:46 AM
http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4701/throwi.jpg
poop

soath
08-26-2010, 07:11 AM
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090005.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090009.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090006.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090008.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090007.jpg

have no idea what to do with an H.

blunder
08-26-2010, 08:35 PM
not sure if this qualifies as a throw?, crits pls!!

soath
08-26-2010, 10:08 PM
i think the L U combo looks like another letter, if you loose some of the connections and just overlap ur letters that might solve that for u. peace.

@ NASR i would widen out the first part of the N and shorten the lines in the N.

Flawless Victory
08-26-2010, 10:14 PM
if thats old hopefully your handstyle has improved...
Both of those hands shit on yours.

PermanentMarkers
08-27-2010, 12:29 AM
http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090006.jpg

I like this one the most, but use the H from number 3 or make it pointing up like all the other letters (you did a pretty good job anyways)

Maybe make the bubbly S bit a bit smaller, not sure about the oa overlap, you didnt do it on any other letters (kinda did on the t but it looks like an accident almost)

Dalekk
08-27-2010, 01:48 AM
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/218/4/a/Be_by_jamahata.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/143/e/c/Throw_up_by_jamahata.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/156/c/4/Bald_by_jamahata.jpg

smokeitup
08-27-2010, 09:08 AM
from tonight:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY27AUGUST2010004.jpg

hecktor
08-27-2010, 11:03 PM
waste thats really shaky. i dont really like it. but its a start.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60272.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60274.jpg

pick em apart!

R.I.P YNOT
http://trueelementz.com/2010/07/28/r-i-p-ynot-%E2%80%A2-msg/

Flawless Victory
08-27-2010, 11:38 PM
no shit.

DECO ONE
08-28-2010, 03:10 PM
Both of those hands shit on yours.

haha thanks.. yes there old... early 90's boston style lettering..

and ROES..... edges dont bother me.. i can paint this just fine.. and fast... but yeah... most people should avoid sharp edges for a throw up..

usermane
08-29-2010, 12:10 AM
construcive criticism please . it was mad windy :s

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/a9e52877.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/80f2bcad.jpg

usermane
08-29-2010, 12:11 AM
oh yeah. dont use blaster tips.

Dalekk
08-29-2010, 07:35 AM
construcive criticism please . it was mad windy :s

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/a9e52877.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/80f2bcad.jpg

Work from a sketch. Also buy yourself a box of chalks and using them sketch out what you are going to paint. It may sound toyish but there's no point in pretending you're a pro when you're still a toy. With time you'll get better control over your cans.

Phillip McDougall
08-29-2010, 01:07 PM
LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."

oeost
08-29-2010, 01:13 PM
love? Really?

"what you write, fool?"
"love. No homo."

lol

IllLogic
08-29-2010, 01:40 PM
He says it was mad windy.. that explains it

ViniVidiVici
08-29-2010, 03:18 PM
Duuuuude.... I've had some bad throws before due to rushing and a whole lot of things, but I mean.... you can't even start blaming this on the wind....

constructive criticism eh? okay well I would say before you start trying throws out in public, you should first just find yourself a big ol' piece of wood and practice throws on that. I mean for real you need to do this... look at your first one.... the V is engulfing the fucking E like he's pacman, plus I think I've seen 3 year olds with parkinsons that can color in within the lines better than you...

But if you keep working on it, soon you'll get better and be able to have a good throw.

RES4
08-29-2010, 03:51 PM
I think I've seen 3 year olds with parkinsons that can color in within the lines better than you...

lol

usermane
08-29-2010, 07:31 PM
Work from a sketch. Also buy yourself a box of chalks and using them sketch out what you are going to paint. It may sound toyish but there's no point in pretending you're a pro when you're still a toy. With time you'll get better control over your cans.


like the huge sidewalk shit from the dollar store or llike the markal ones?

cool idea, thanks


heres today

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/graf/photo2.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/graf/photo1.jpg

H1P30N3R
08-29-2010, 07:44 PM
practice alot more ..... paper is cheaper than paint

usermane
08-29-2010, 08:18 PM
practice alot more ..... paper is cheaper than paint

yes. i pay for my paint.



He says it was mad windy.. that explains it


lol



LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."


a round of applause for the fantastic contributions from these bright young gentlemen

im trying to make a positive message. ive had people in the street say thank you, and not one single person in 2 years has ever fucked with me for my writing.i never said i was uber sick, thats why this is in the toy forum. just trying do do a good thing.


and even if homo, i dont give a fuck. bang who you wanna bang. none of my business. that would just be weird.

Phillip McDougall
08-29-2010, 08:25 PM
I think it's a troll...

Gatsoi
08-29-2010, 08:50 PM
You've been writing love for two years and that's all you got?

usermane
08-29-2010, 08:53 PM
You've been writing love for two years and that's all you got?

i'm not in a hurry.

Gatsoi
08-29-2010, 08:54 PM
Ha!

ReSeM
08-29-2010, 09:04 PM
please stop those thank you's were probably sarcastic

PermanentMarkers
08-29-2010, 09:07 PM
I think it's a troll...

You're a troll!

Love you should try straight lines, I hear they are the shit.

ReSeM
08-29-2010, 09:12 PM
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0037-1.jpg

ViniVidiVici
08-29-2010, 09:20 PM
haha okay this has got to be a joke. But an expensive joke if you keep wasting paint like that. If your actually serious, and this isn't a joke, then seriously get a big piece of wood and practice on that. I'm not joking it helps cuz you don't have to rush or worry about anything. but I still am getting the feeling that this is joke, oh and just outta curiosity, are you doing the outline first then filling it in? cuz it looks like you are, and that, that is a problem.

Heklr
08-29-2010, 09:46 PM
LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."

There's already an artist who writes 'Love' with decent fame.

Even if this guy wanted to write 'Love', what's wrong with that?

It's a pretty strong message. Maybe his graffiti is more than just a name on a wall. Maybe the artist is trying to reach his or her local community and spread some love.

Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate. Hater of the year award goes to Phil...

usermane
08-29-2010, 09:58 PM
are you doing the outline first then filling it in? cuz it looks like you are, and that, that is a problem.



i did like a big outline in the main color first then filled it in and added the black (dark green) after. i noticed some shitty parts that i hadnt filled in and touched it up which got on the black outline i guess :S ima try the chalk next time, hopefully it stands out under the paint?

why how do you mean?

Heklr
08-29-2010, 10:03 PM
Dude, forget about the chalk. Seriously...

You don't need that.

ViniVidiVici
08-29-2010, 10:05 PM
okay that explains it, yeah your at least have the layering down right. If you were doing and outline with say black first then doing your blue to fill it in, it would be extremely bad.

yeah try the chalk

weakfingers
08-29-2010, 10:11 PM
Did you mean this love?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2422/3927559951_027afacef8_b.jpg

Phillip McDougall
08-29-2010, 10:30 PM
There's already an artist who writes 'Love' with decent fame.

Even if this guy wanted to write 'Love', what's wrong with that?

It's a pretty strong message. Maybe his graffiti is more than just a name on a wall. Maybe the artist is trying to reach his or her local community and spread some love.

Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate. Hater of the year award goes to Phil...

It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

LeaksOne
08-29-2010, 10:32 PM
Lulz.

The mods and their "dont be a meanie" rule are guna nut over the last couple pages haha

PermanentMarkers
08-29-2010, 10:43 PM
It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

This makes no sense.... it only proves your faggotry phillip

Seriously your dick, his throat..... and this time you didnt feel the need for no homo.

775SakE
08-29-2010, 10:47 PM
sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

Phillip McDougall
08-29-2010, 10:50 PM
This makes no sense.... it only proves your faggotry phillip

Seriously your dick, his throat..... and this time you didnt feel the need for no homo.

Figurative language has no effect on you, does it?

usermane
08-29-2010, 10:57 PM
please stop those thank you's were sarcastic

thats what i told yo momma

PermanentMarkers
08-29-2010, 11:12 PM
Lol well if Usermane is a troll

Mission accomplished

(I know it was figurative phillip, i just thought it was totally uncalled for)

Sake, i cant really tell whats going on there, too much in the background and those colors in the background and the fill itself clash pretty horribly

Mr yarbles
08-29-2010, 11:30 PM
sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

Well I guess that kills the worries that you wern't a good artist in Seattle

Heklr
08-29-2010, 11:51 PM
It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

The only response you have to my statement is a homosexual comment?

The homosexual comments from you are getting monotonous...
Sexual harassment.

LeaksOne
08-29-2010, 11:58 PM
sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

where is the clock tower in seattle? maybe i never look up....or maybe there isnt one.

usermane
08-30-2010, 12:30 AM
sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

imo simpler is usually better.

Dalekk
08-30-2010, 07:58 AM
yes. i pay for my paint.










a round of applause for the fantastic contributions from these bright young gentlemen

im trying to make a positive message. ive had people in the street say thank you, and not one single person in 2 years has ever fucked with me for my writing.i never said i was uber sick, thats why this is in the toy forum. just trying do do a good thing.


and even if homo, i dont give a fuck. bang who you wanna bang. none of my business. that would just be weird.

Two years? TWO YEARS?! What the fuck, man?! If you're really writing for two years then I have to tell you - you suck. For real. Shit, man, you can't even throw a straight line :eek:

Loki X Sho
08-30-2010, 08:27 AM
I think it's a troll...

Ezzzzzactly what I was thinkin'.

Dude when you write for two yours you get better...and who writes love..really?
Even if you really have no artistic talent, you still improve in the way you do things.

ReSeM
08-30-2010, 10:09 AM
thats what i told yo momma

how old are you? get out of here with the childish crap you need to use your blackbook A LOT before you go painting again if you're going to "grace your area with positive vibes" i suggest you come a little better than wack throws
also the chalk idea wasnt suppose to "pop" out its suppose to help with your structure
no one has messed with you cause they cant take you seriously if you don't like what you're hearing too bad cause im speaking the truth
save us the honor of looking at your waste of freight space and paint and blackbook

usermane
08-30-2010, 12:15 PM
how old are you? get out of here with the childish crap you need to use your blackbook A LOT before you go painting again if you're going to "grace your area with positive vibes" i suggest you come a little better than wack throws
also the chalk idea wasnt suppose to "pop" out its suppose to help with your structure
no one has messed with you cause they cant take you seriously if you don't like what you're hearing too bad cause im speaking the truth
save us the honor of looking at your waste of freight space and paint and blackbook

shows what you know. 3/4 of my shit doesnt get taken down. people like it. i acutally touched up 3 week old peices yesterday and not even fucking cops gave me shit. I UNDERSTAND WHAT THE CHALK IS SUPPOSED TO DO.

i hit the freights cause its quiet and theres guaranteed to be a huge space for me to use. dont like it? do something.


you are so fucking cool on the internet. fuckin loser.

Two years? TWO YEARS?! What the fuck, man?! If you're really writing for two years then I have to tell you - you suck. For real. Shit, man, you can't even throw a straight line :eek:



yeah, i been learning. lotta shit you gotta learn from tagging before you're ready to paint, and i feel ive learned everything i can from tagging. i learned to rack, make ink, where to paint and when (all important if youre gonna make any kind of impact). besides that i have had other things MORE IMPORTANT THAN GRAFF which means i gotta put the mop down for a few months at a time. i dont know if you're dyslexic but ive told ya its my first time picking up a can of paint. SPRAYPAINT USING= ONE MONTH so what if im not uber sick, suck my motherfuckin dick.


i never made any claims of having leet skills, i just came here for help and got a bunch of fags flaming me. so fuck you all, i guess ill find a forum where i can actually talk to people :(

fuck you guys are a joke.

LeaksOne
08-30-2010, 12:55 PM
You mad doggie? Go change your tampon and stop taking the internet so serious.

Flawless Victory
08-30-2010, 04:08 PM
yeah, i been learning. lotta shit you gotta learn from tagging before you're ready to paint, and i feel ive learned everything i can from tagging. i learned to rack, make ink, where to paint and when (all important if youre gonna make any kind of impact). besides that i have had other things MORE IMPORTANT THAN GRAFF which means i gotta put the mop down for a few months at a time. i dont know if you're dyslexic but ive told ya its my first time picking up a can of paint. SPRAYPAINT USING= ONE MONTH so what if im not uber sick, suck my motherfuckin dick.
...soooo you've been painting for a month, not 2 years.

Sbal
08-30-2010, 07:00 PM
who the fuck thanked you for putting your shitty pieces on a wall?

Willis1989
08-31-2010, 08:13 AM
This choosing of a name is doing my nut in, so ive tried throwies with a few, can I get crits on the names and the throwies please? Thanks guys.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00294.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00297.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00295.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00296.jpg?t=1283260362

ViniVidiVici
08-31-2010, 08:53 AM
I like the first one Wilis

wow username..... just wow.... wow...... This is a troll for sure haha, I would love to see his pieces hahaha if he can't even make a simple throw. Can't even keep the lines straight and no where near straight. it's like he is constantly painting in an earthquake... hey love can I see one of your 'pieces' that the cops just love so much.

dangeri
08-31-2010, 08:54 AM
I'd stay clear of puff tbh mate, especially in that pink :S

Loki X Sho
08-31-2010, 08:56 AM
lol i love toy forum

ReSeM
08-31-2010, 10:40 AM
shows what you know. 3/4 of my shit doesnt get taken down. people like it. i acutally touched up 3 week old peices yesterday and not even fucking cops gave me shit.
im really not believing you and i told you no one take you seriously so they leave it up for pity i want photo conformation of this anyways


i never made any claims of having leet skills, i just came here for help and got a bunch of fags flaming me
i was willing to help now im not too sure cause of your attitude
i gave you help by saying BLACKBOOK SOME MORE!!!!
everybody is flaming you cause you're not good at all and all toys know to BLACKBOOK until you are at least decent THEN go paint
seriously take this advice you have no structure, no style, your letters are all over the place heed my advice and SKETCH thats constructive criticism now calm your immature ass down

Willis1989
09-01-2010, 04:57 AM
Usermane, why do people like you come on the internet and act like a little bitch about everything, people say my pieces suck and I have the honesty to admit that they do but I practice and practice and I know ive gotten better from when I started even though I still suck, but people like you will never learn anything, like you I thought I was good at graff because I just thought it was about making letters big and detailed but its not, its about a lot more than that but you will never learn because you cant come to terms with the fact that your pieces suck, take my advice and listen to the guys on here and take their criticism and dont be a bitch about it because most of them are better than you or me will ever be.


A few more throwies, crits pls.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00298.jpg?t=1283334910

Invert
09-01-2010, 10:44 AM
Usermane, why do people like you come on the internet and act like a little bitch about everything, people say my pieces suck and I have the honesty to admit that they do but I practice and practice and I know ive gotten better from when I started even though I still suck, but people like you will never learn anything, like you I thought I was good at graff because I just thought it was about making letters big and detailed but its not, its about a lot more than that but you will never learn because you cant come to terms with the fact that your pieces suck, take my advice and listen to the guys on here and take their criticism and dont be a bitch about it because most of them are better than you or me will ever be.


A few more throwies, crits pls.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00298.jpg?t=1283334910

Try and make all letters proportional to each other ya know? Your 'W' needs a bit of work, and try making the last bar of it not drop down farther than the rest, and make the first one bigger. Either that or try a new 'W'

The 'L' seems a little too fat too IMO, and the S needs a bit of work. Although, I do like your 'I' in the orange one,

I'm not that good myself, but that's my two cents, you can take it or leave it

TkR81
09-01-2010, 01:13 PM
http://i952.photobucket.com/albums/ae8/Hornets17_2010/Picture1.jpg
new throwie

Phillip McDougall
09-01-2010, 01:27 PM
lol.

ChadWarden
09-01-2010, 02:37 PM
what the hell do you kids google that you all come up with the exact same font to bite?

Fury
09-01-2010, 02:41 PM
Whole page needs to rework their shit and make it simple.

PREA672
09-01-2010, 03:47 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/001-9.jpg

H1P30N3R
09-01-2010, 04:01 PM
nice throw prea my favorite so far ... the bottom of your e could be re done to have the same flow going.

PREA672
09-01-2010, 04:04 PM
yeah thats what i was thinking to

SAINT1
09-01-2010, 04:13 PM
quick 2 letter, crits pleasee
http://i53.tinypic.com/161j3w6.jpg

ReSeM
09-01-2010, 08:40 PM
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0037-1.jpg

bump for crits

SAINT1 the S would be better if it didnt have the lumps at the top
smooth round top broski

H1P30N3R
09-01-2010, 08:54 PM
dumb down your style resm you aren't ready for that steez yet go simple bubble letters for now

LeaksOne
09-02-2010, 04:13 AM
^^^what are you talking about?

Resm- fix the R and the top of the S.

Willis1989
09-02-2010, 06:29 AM
A few more, cleaned it up a bit

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00300.jpg?t=1283426837

TKR - Looks to common
PREA - Me likes, probably my favorite in the battle so far
Saint - I like this too, I suck at T's, I like the tag too

Head Hurts
09-02-2010, 09:01 AM
my tossss.. NEVS
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/marspilot2/nevso.jpg

prea672 -
that hopeful throw is iight but you need to fix the H, how close and tight all the lines and connections are fucks with the flow of it.. try not doing those horizontal lines in the center and putting some space between the two vertical lines. you dont need that connection shit to make it a H.. if not then juss put space between the horizontal lines, if they still look like they belong there to you

you could also fuck wit the L but besides that its pretty tuff

H1P30N3R
09-02-2010, 03:32 PM
^^^what are you talking about?

Resm- fix the R and the top of the S.

his letters just seem forced to me.... maybe I just don't dig that style, like using circles at the bottom of the m and r sometimes looks good and other times looks horrible.

Cobra716
09-03-2010, 12:46 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/m7wf7m.jpg
gimme some crits on this one

down!
09-03-2010, 12:53 PM
O is too big, not feeling the S.

Phat 2
09-03-2010, 05:11 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs312.ash2/59269_153399138020337_100000507545549_389029_30340 46_n.jpg
crits pleez ?

PREA672
09-03-2010, 05:32 PM
did you tag mohamed up there?

Phat 2
09-03-2010, 05:49 PM
of course not and crits on the throw plz ?

Sbal
09-03-2010, 07:33 PM
its juicy

aekone
09-03-2010, 10:20 PM
Oris- Letters the same size. Keep 'em even.

Phat2- Ditch the gratuitous juicy drips. Fucks with the letter structure as well. Make it flow. Also make it more legible.
Eat. Two styles. WHich ones better?
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo12.jpg
For my homie Logic.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo20.jpg
Eatoe... Cuz I like to switch it up.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo19.jpg
Crits?



Huh... I've come a loooong way... Evidence is as follows:
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo22.jpg

LeaksOne
09-03-2010, 10:39 PM
Good shit. I like the bottom one in the 2 styes and That logic Is legit.

ReSeM
09-04-2010, 08:12 PM
quality steez aekone

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0031-4-1.jpg

SAINT1
09-04-2010, 08:30 PM
hey guys, another quick 2 letter, i fucked up the top of the T when i was outlining but didnt have time to redo it sorry. crits please
http://i51.tinypic.com/nn6xqt.jpg

dubbed
09-05-2010, 09:19 AM
resem- your first 3 letters look too similar and are hard to distinguish
saint- your s is nice but your t isnt, maybe make the base skinnier idk

BeforeCommonEra
09-06-2010, 01:18 PM
http://i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff436/BeforeCommonEra/DSC_0238.jpg First post here, your criticism is greatly appreciated

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
09-07-2010, 02:05 PM
That logic is fucking clean
Resem and phat2 pretty dope stuff!

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAwNTYtMjAxMDA4MjgtMTYyNC5qcGc.jpg
I love hitting up these folders all over my friends folders ull see my shit like this one ha

MASE P_2s
09-07-2010, 02:31 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs312.ash2/59269_153399138020337_100000507545549_389029_30340 46_n.jpg
crits pleez ?

not feeling the holes in the e and a,bottom of the e is to small,h is ok id fix it a lil n z needs works but big ups on the spot jus keep progressing

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
09-07-2010, 02:33 PM
Is says Phat2 yo^^

MASE P_2s
09-07-2010, 03:11 PM
>;1663641']Is says Phat2 yo^^

o damn my Phat but there you go needs work

Willis1989
09-08-2010, 08:41 AM
hanged my W a little, what you guys think?

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00302.jpg?t=1283953265

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00301.jpg?t=1283953265

PermanentMarkers
09-08-2010, 10:47 AM
Willis you arent doing your 3D right

For a drop shadow just redraw your entire letter, but either left, down and to the left (or right, whatever).

Pick each point and redraw it down and to the _____. Your dropshadow is really messed up. (This same thing goes to ORIS from the top of this page)

Honestly i dont like the W the I or the L

Start with straighter lines then once you get some alright looking straight throws start curving that shit up

del4sel
09-08-2010, 12:36 PM
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfJPJZ8uZI/AAAAAAAAAFA/MeWhtxs3Bsg/s1600/delthrow1.JPG

del4sel
09-08-2010, 01:39 PM
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfYYIiuMtI/AAAAAAAAAFQ/7ZbB58ab0Js/s1600/Delthrow2.JPG

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
09-08-2010, 01:44 PM
Wil I just don't really like the W everything is fine
And del4sel I like the style ur goin for but idk you just need to keep doing it till you get it perfected the S is badass tho

del4sel
09-08-2010, 02:18 PM
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfhce-ES0I/AAAAAAAAAFg/lA1G6gpsycs/s1600/Delthrow3.JPG

del4sel
09-08-2010, 02:22 PM
@ Smokers

Yo thanks bro I haven't tried a del4sel throw until today so this is the first three. Surely more to come now that I know how to efficiently upload so we'll see where it ends. I was pretty surprised at that S too I think that's the most original thing i've ever done. Props to yours as well man that shit is fire! Post some more of those throws!!! Peace.

del4sel
09-08-2010, 02:33 PM
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfky_6sJaI/AAAAAAAAAFw/fQ5OPVU27mk/s1600/dunce.JPG

For those that remember this battle... I liked this concept drawing and would like to work on improving it a bit because I think it has some potential.

hpir
09-08-2010, 08:40 PM
anybody wanna exchange?
i write rung

Get Rekt!
09-08-2010, 08:45 PM
ehh.. not feeling the m.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0908002138-1.jpg

Phillip McDougall
09-08-2010, 08:56 PM
Lose the stars.

FuckTheFame
09-09-2010, 12:47 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0956.jpg
random bomb
get rekt - phill is right. but its also cool to say please
del4sel - looks pretty good. try to gain some more flow. and that 4 is killing me. but still it looks like your putting in work. props for that

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
09-09-2010, 02:10 AM
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAwOTUtMjAxMDA5MDgtMjM1My5qcGc.jpg
Yo rung-Kind of sloppy I'm pretty tired if u want me to take another shot at it just let me know man. oh ya and on the 1st one I obviously fucked up the r so I had a better idea but idk what the hell went on with my hand and the G I was just freeballin' it and thot it would be "kewl" if I just made the top stretch a wee bit

••@del4sel, damn if those are you first attempts at it I applaud you man 'cause they got flow kind of but just aint clean. Like they're spaced perfectly you got the main idea of how the letter should be but u just need to fit it in nicely, like I don't like how the bottom of the S comes out over the 4 and the 4 look like Y's but pretty good I suck at #'s so I'm understand you on that man.
••@Scam-i would try and start with some like squarished beefed up keyboard letters for those letters like a JA style of throw simple and fresh!
••@Fuck the fame-first get ur letters all the same size man, then we'll see from there

FuckTheFame
09-09-2010, 07:40 AM
nice crit man
i never really notice that too much
liking that bottom throw
the top one seems rushed

LIGRAFF
09-09-2010, 09:57 PM
http://i52.tinypic.com/2zoyyqa.jpg
Crits?

FuckTheFame
09-09-2010, 10:01 PM
i like the n man
maybe try making the rest of the c and e flow better
and it would be cool if the u wasnt so hidden

whatunead
09-10-2010, 06:39 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/CIMG0032.jpgneed som,e critssss. the D in my throw doesnt sit well with me. also, i need some 3d/shadow help...im not sure what direction would make the most sense for my vanishing point.

Daipone
09-10-2010, 10:20 PM
hey here is some old throwie from (MJ'z) Mad Jokerz Crew

word is : BAD-C
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4347994633_ef54e7919e.jpg

EVIL
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2543/4250727354_66326edf25.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/4211522951_e21c92891e.jpg

got allot of mistake i know that's was old stuff but i like to share it for fun :)

IbuprofenTablets
09-10-2010, 10:21 PM
Lol.

PermanentMarkers
09-11-2010, 04:09 AM
Lol.

Fuck you

Edit: On second thought that seems kinda harsh.. but fuck you, that post was not helpful in any way at all, and no one even know what you are talking about.

this one was pointless too but at least it points out your fuckry.

Daipone - Keep it up man. Ignore the fuckers on this site.

ReSeM
09-11-2010, 07:26 AM
lmfao calm the fuck down speedy

IbuprofenTablets
09-11-2010, 10:09 AM
Fuck you

Edit: On second thought that seems kinda harsh.. but fuck you, that post was not helpful in any way at all, and no one even know what you are talking about.

This herb's just mad 'cause I've probably ragged on his wack ass shit. I don't even remember PermanentMarkers' stuff specifically, but if he's comin' at me like this, I must've dissed his shit.

@PermanentMarkers: Shut cho' mouth, you dumbass faggot. Continue to draw your dumb ass straights that make people laugh because of how bad they are.


Edit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v663/PermanentMarkers/IMG_3606.jpg



AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

MASE P_2s
09-11-2010, 12:26 PM
this herb's just mad 'cause i've probably ragged on his wack ass shit. I don't even remember permanentmarkers' stuff specifically, but if he's comin' at me like this, i must've dissed his shit.

@permanentmarkers: Shut cho' mouth, you dumbass faggot. Continue to draw your dumb ass straights that make people laugh because of how bad they are.


Edit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v663/permanentmarkers/img_3606.jpg



ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. lmfaoooooooooo roflllllllll

ReSeM
09-11-2010, 03:41 PM
is that burning smell from you cause ur ass just got roasted permy
lmfao

SiNe-VrL-516
09-11-2010, 03:47 PM
http://i930.photobucket.com/albums/ad141/sineoner/0910001231.jpg

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
09-11-2010, 05:56 PM
I think the N being straightened would make the whole thing come along perfectly man!
Or something just tweek the N around, other than that its good

FuckTheFame
09-12-2010, 01:11 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0957-1.jpg
i liked the background of the canvas
i need to rack some markers like none other
purple and silver were all i had left

sine - it'd be cool to see something crazy happen with the I

mekosbc
09-14-2010, 05:21 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
09-14-2010, 05:46 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo124-1.jpg

ChadWarden
09-14-2010, 05:50 PM
@meko

i think if the right part of both the m and k were brought closer to the middle of the letter, and didn't have as much "weight" to it, it would look better. what you're doing with the m is hot, but the rest of the letters seem bland. nice looking throw overall.

ReSeM
09-14-2010, 07:09 PM
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg

gorillaz?

mekosbc
09-14-2010, 07:41 PM
naw lol i wanted to draw a robotic pisst off chinese chick

drOping
09-14-2010, 11:06 PM
I'd say pretty good Meko

http://i56.tinypic.com/eiul5.jpg

EXI
09-15-2010, 05:29 PM
Here's my first throwup ever and with my new name
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/27.jpg

FuckTheFame
09-15-2010, 05:40 PM
niiice. try to make all your letters the same size. and the period at the end could be a little bigger and connected to the e. nicely done sope

EXI
09-15-2010, 09:07 PM
niiice. try to make all your letters the same size. and the period at the end could be a little bigger and connected to the e. nicely done sope

^^^ First ever "nicely done" haha thanks Fame, what letters are off even though? I wanna fix this up because I love this throwup

FuckTheFame
09-16-2010, 12:23 AM
heres what i kind of think you were going for
i would have done a better one but i didnt really want to do all the work for you

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0994.jpg

shore 616
09-16-2010, 03:17 AM
i put this up on another forum, a quick rough guide on how you start on your throws,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC01530.jpg

Rough being the main factor here,

drOping
09-16-2010, 07:01 PM
FRSH- um just take a little more time...clean it up a bit and straighten stuff out
http://i51.tinypic.com/23i80oy.jpg

LeaksOne
09-16-2010, 08:57 PM
ive never understood your tag.....

shore 616
09-17-2010, 02:17 AM
FRSH- um just take a little more time...clean it up a bit and straighten stuff out


thats not my throw captain observation, read what it says above it,

ReSeM
09-17-2010, 05:38 AM
well i suggest taking that down because thats just bad
if every toy got their throw idea from that there are going to be some shitty toys out there
plus it doesn't even look like a throw it looks like a fat straight with the exception of the H
if you decide to help someone put some more time and effort into it or toys will get the wrong idea

shore 616
09-17-2010, 09:10 AM
^hahahaha,

EXI
09-17-2010, 11:16 AM
heres what i kind of think you were going for
i would have done a better one but i didnt really want to do all the work for you

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0994.jpg

ohh okay, so ust letters be the same heighth etc.

elpendejo123
09-17-2010, 07:21 PM
sope i like ur letters, try to keep it symmetrical.

crits, comments: this is my first draft of these styles.

elpendejo123
09-17-2010, 07:36 PM
touched it up a little

Sbal
09-17-2010, 08:10 PM
Not really feeling it, round out the bottoms that you made straight

del4sel
09-18-2010, 08:25 AM
I like that cele shit...I like to do my letters uniform shape like that too. It looks fine with straight line on bottom but if you curve all of the letters on the bottom is is even fresherrr

elpendejo123
09-18-2010, 09:25 AM
u guys mean curve inside? or like round it out

fyskl
09-18-2010, 03:35 PM
i agree with del4sel...using that uniform shape really make it look like its from the same font set/family..id say try n kinda build from those n see what else you come up with like by rounding it out more, stretching it taller, etc...

IbuprofenTablets
09-19-2010, 02:15 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo141.jpg

Flawless Victory
09-19-2010, 02:23 PM
that throw is dope as shit.

cushcota94
09-19-2010, 04:46 PM
Throwup...

MoganOne
09-19-2010, 07:31 PM
Just commin up with a Throwie messing around with some shit stilll needs a lot of work... I am happy with where my M is going... http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001737.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001842.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001917.jpg

Gyse
09-19-2010, 07:46 PM
^build off the first one. Make the rest of the letters as big as the M, and try to keep it simple like the M.

oh yeah, that name is kind of taken though. Write it if you want, but I wouldn't paint freights with that name.

MoganOne
09-19-2010, 08:27 PM
I see what you are saying... The thing is I want to try to make the M in the second and third one look fresh... Does anybody have some input on how I should do the middle arch on the "M" in the second and third pics?? After I perfect this throw on paper I am going to toss that shit everywhere I can lol

MoganOne
09-19-2010, 08:37 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002010.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002021.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002031.jpg
Crits yo

LeaksOne
09-20-2010, 12:28 AM
that throw is dope as shit.

Fuck yes!!!!

stone01
09-21-2010, 07:52 PM
ha ok well this is my first throwie put up on bs but here it goes my names prude
the first one is iin pencil so you cant really see it
9694
the second one is ok not much practice put into it, though i like how i do my p sorta make it into a skull :D
9695

CuCCui
09-21-2010, 10:26 PM
yeh sumthin like that...just have fun with it...if it's not fun then you are compulsively stressing for no good reason...

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/5470/cootr.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/i/cootr.jpg/)

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stone01
09-22-2010, 06:15 AM
Cuccui that looks good but I would try to make the duplicate letters look more alike

Get Rekt!
09-22-2010, 05:26 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0922001814.jpg

stone01
09-22-2010, 07:12 PM
looks pretty good imo everything matches up
c is a little off looking to me though maybe you could tweak that a bit


new name. new throw, check it :D
9700
crits?

Gyse
09-22-2010, 07:37 PM
cuccui- I actually like that a lot. I think it's the C's that does it for me. Make the first U more like the 2nd, and make the I more simple. Or don't bother, if you write kerst.

Scam- get another name. Assuming you won't, that C is bad, make the hold smaller or just a line. Get your other letters on point, they need work too.
Oh and your tag is weak.

Cass- Thats an ugly A. Work on that. The cross bar of it isnt working for you.

CuCCui
09-22-2010, 07:58 PM
Thanks gyse...i write a few different words depending on the mood i'm in..cuccui makes a good throw I think,terribl;e peice and terrible hand,but fun throw...the cool thing about the words i chose= i never been told to write something else

Cush I like it!!!!!!!!!!

Ibu I don't hate it,even though I should after last weekend,but don't

Stone I wanna have a pm chat with you

drOping
09-23-2010, 12:56 AM
http://i56.tinypic.com/17wtjo.jpg

stone01
09-24-2010, 03:20 PM
droping if you made the points all end at the same height it would look a lot better imo

alright made the "a" different i think it looks alot better like this
9711

IbuprofenTablets
09-25-2010, 06:46 AM
Crop your pictures, brah.
No one wants to see your mom's toes in the corner of the pic.

stone01
09-25-2010, 08:35 AM
brothers toes haha almost the same thing though he is a little girlish haha but I don't feel like croping all my pictures out it's not like someone is going to find me from my bros feet haha
Real feedback would be awesome though :D

dangeri
09-25-2010, 08:49 AM
Bars seem to get thicker as u go to the right slek, nice shape if u even it up tho,

FuckTheFame
09-25-2010, 05:20 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1020.jpg

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1021.jpg
^^something new i've been trying lately
i just painted it last night
ill try and get a flick sometime

MakeItTakeIt
09-26-2010, 12:12 AM
That purple one is aight. Idk what that thing on the left is, and there's a bit too much goin on for my taste. If you're tryin to do a small to big, do it gradually, but right now it looks like 2 separate throwups. Letter structure aint too shabby though imo. The bottom one is too sloppy to crit, do it bigger.

new shit.
http://i55.tinypic.com/292binl.jpg

eshen
09-26-2010, 09:25 AM
^^ Thats pretty good. What is it? Paint pens?

Flawless Victory
09-26-2010, 11:01 AM
HAHAHA, only douchebags live in Ann Arbor.

eshen
09-26-2010, 09:10 PM
Ah, always nice to meet a fellow Ann Arborite!

eshen
09-26-2010, 10:22 PM
I'm working on a new name.

FuckTheFame
09-27-2010, 07:39 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1036.jpg

stone01
09-27-2010, 08:18 PM
esh. nice i like the s with the fat top, get out and put that up on a wall
FTF. im guessing thats sbu? i really cant tell too much what the first letter is but i think its a s? lol but yeah that looks good ive always like the bubble or what ever u put around ur shit though

stone01
09-27-2010, 08:19 PM
9711
bump fir crits..?

Flawless Victory
09-27-2010, 09:44 PM
Ah, always nice to meet a fellow Ann Arborite!
Nah buddy, I paint in Detroit, not A2.

FuckTheFame
09-27-2010, 09:53 PM
@stone1 - its actually a you. i right youth

eshen
09-27-2010, 10:17 PM
@FlawlessVictory: I'm just playing with you man. What do you write? I may have seen it.

Flawless Victory
09-27-2010, 10:50 PM
I'll PM you.

eshen
09-27-2010, 11:01 PM
On the "C" where the top and bottom come together on the right side. Take out that little curl on the top that indicates that it still goes on behind the bottom part. It works for some styles, but I think it looks a little bit out of place with the rest.

It's a really nit picky thing I know, and I might just be seeing things, but thats just my two cents for now.

MakeItTakeIt
09-28-2010, 12:34 AM
^^ Thats pretty good. What is it? Paint pens?

uhhh yeah. lol

FuckTheFame
09-28-2010, 12:42 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1039.jpg
i've been messing around with a lot of different styles lately
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1042.jpg
here are some hands

eshen
09-28-2010, 01:39 PM
The 3-D on the top is a shadow, but on the bottom it's an extrusion. Is that on purpose?

FuckTheFame
09-28-2010, 02:50 PM
i really dont know what i was thinking with the 3d

eshen
09-28-2010, 03:21 PM
It's not a big deal, I still think it looks pretty nice. I like the top of you T.

stone01
09-28-2010, 08:44 PM
damn looks good to me i can tell its a y now haha
that 3D looks dope to me though haha looks like u did it when u were super fuckin burnt or sumthin :D

FuckTheFame
09-29-2010, 07:19 AM
its just an old drawing
its fun to check out all the different styles you've tried just from going through old shit

ChadWarden
09-29-2010, 01:54 PM
so fuckin' alternative!

RedEyes
09-29-2010, 02:25 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo16-1.jpg

One Evil
09-29-2010, 05:11 PM
redeyes thought you had a better style then that bro... what happen..

Invert
09-29-2010, 06:11 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/429/scan0008l.jpg

Some stuff i did in one of my Geo classes today, had to bum markers off random people in class.

Any advice ? (I know they're bad)

aekone
09-29-2010, 07:03 PM
Not exactly looking for crits. Just wanted to see what you guys think.
Sorry for the bad picture quality. It's all I got.
Chuke.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo2.jpg

woonybomber
09-29-2010, 07:13 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg

ReSeM
09-29-2010, 07:19 PM
invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no distortion just regular bubble letters
aek- good shit you got there. honestly idk why you're in the toy threads
WB- good shit nice and simple throw and good lookin straight

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0027-2.jpg
never ask friends to outline your stuff while taking notes in drivers ed.

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0032-1.jpg
R backbone got too big gonna work it later

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0035-2.jpg
another slap ruined by terrible M's

Invert
09-29-2010, 07:42 PM
invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8129/scan0012la.jpg

So just stick with these for a while?

ReSeM
09-29-2010, 07:51 PM
yup then experiment
do some straights and get a hold of letter structure

DTE_PRONTO
09-29-2010, 08:42 PM
cann i get some critz/anything that can be positively helpful no scrutiny

eshen
09-29-2010, 09:43 PM
The 3-D on the top line of your z is facing the wrong way.
This next part is just my oppinion about what looks good. See the way that the lines pinch in the middle of the K and the Left part of the N? If they're on purpose, make it exaggerated so it's doesn't look likes it was a mistake.

DTE_PRONTO
09-29-2010, 09:59 PM
The 3-D on the top line of your z is facing the wrong way.
This next part is just my oppinion about what looks good. See the way that the lines pinch in the middle of the K and the Left part of the N? If they're on purpose, make it exaggerated so it's doesn't look likes it was a mistake.

thankz and yeah i see i do that cause i think if i woulda made tha K look like tha other letterz but i thought it would jus look like a 1 combined letter but i c watt u sayin tho if u wanta c tha actual pic then go 2 my page n look in tha random album cause i woulda put tha actual size of tha pic but im not tryna take up a page then everybody tellin me ta make it smaller lol but anyway tho i see watt you're sayin thankz

C-Lurk
09-30-2010, 06:45 PM
http://i55.tinypic.com/ilym1l.jpg
just been messin around, whatchu guys think?
i traced it from a sketch, btw.

FuckTheFame
09-30-2010, 07:45 PM
props...for the cowboy bebop sig

IbuprofenTablets
09-30-2010, 08:43 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo134.jpg

eshen
09-30-2010, 10:15 PM
Crits please.
-Thank you

ReSeM
10-01-2010, 01:14 AM
invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no distortion just regular bubble letters
aek- good shit you got there. honestly idk why you're in the toy threads
WB- good shit nice and simple throw and good lookin straight

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never ask friends to outline your stuff while taking notes in drivers ed.

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R backbone got too big gonna work it later

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another slap ruined by terrible M's
bump 4 crits

LeaksOne
10-01-2010, 02:06 AM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo134.jpg

good shit!!