Throwies

[NouveauP]

Good advice, Ibu.

And to go into structure a little bit more. Letters need to have balance. And the way you structure a letter is how you ensure balance. Balance and structure is an essential part of design, whether it's graffiti or not. The most common way I've heard to help build structure (and I've tried this, it does help) is to copy the letters right off of your keyboard. I'd recommend doing this with handstyles first. Then once you get comfortable with that, start doing block letters. And then slowly start to bend, morph, extend your bars.

[Numaga]

Neam- Your E and A aren't too bad. It's a decent start. That E kind of reminds me of SEEN's E (not calling it a bite, it's a simple e), so definitely keep working with that and make it your own. Your N and M are kinda nasty though. I'd just go a different direction with them altogether.

thanks, that's what i was looking for..

[IbuprofenTablets]

copy the letters right off of your keyboard.

Doing this, one may say "ppffft, I know how to do these already", the reality is, when one enters the graff game, they probably can't do keyboard letters. Practice practice practice.

^^^This was mostly for Straight letters/Pieces, but these rules can also relate to structure when looking at throws.

For example, try looking at some (good) throws, and try to notice how the letters within the throw correlate to their basic letter form.

Same thing goes with hands(tags).

Graff, and Art in general is all about structure.

[Numaga]

http://i390.photobucket.com/albums/oo348/Numaga/downsized_0817001440.jpg
trying new stuff
should i work on this? or change everything again

[NouveauP]

Doing this, one may say "ppffft, I know how to do these already", the reality is, when one enters the graff game, they probably can't do keyboard letters. Practice practice practice.

^^^This was mostly for Straight letters/Pieces, but these rules can also relate to structure when looking at throws.

For example, try looking at some (good) throws, and try to notice how the letters within the throw correlate to their basic letter form.

Same thing goes with hands(tags).

Graff, and Art in general is all about structure.

Exactly. Thanks for clarifying that for me. Want to exchange?

NEAM- you're going backwards, yeah. You need to start basic! You N is looking like it's block structure, but then the rest of your letters look like bubbles. And the case-switching is harder to pull off in my opinion. I'd really suggest looking through some of Ibu's throws for good basic structure. He's definitely more skilled in throws than me. Bates, Bio, Cope, and Seen also immediately come to mind for having solid, simple throws (in many cases, at least). So don't be afraid to emulate (even the old masters emulated), but don't BITE!

[T-Kanzz]

Dusk- your going in the right direction, keep it basic and practice, sometimes a mistake can turn into a fresh style

Neam- get basic, style will come easier to you if you know your letters,

[gumOnShoe]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo88-1.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

who is this alias impersonating ibu?

[FuckTheFame]

You want us to ignore the lines, the fill, and the hand?

That looks like some good quality wood, there.

this dude is such a fucking loser
why would someone say shit like that when its the TOY section
the guy he's talking about was asking for criticism
he wasnt asking PHILLIP MCDOUGALL to talk about bullshit
i hate kids with all this ego and yet NEVER post their OWN SHIT
hahaha sorry for the rant but bitches like that make me angry


neam - that looks dope. you should continue with how you feel. its not always best to just blindly follow what other people tell you. try to find the motion in you man

[Get Rekt!]

needs some work. but its a start.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0817001956.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

this dude is such a fucking loser
why would someone say shit like that when its the TOY section
the guy he's talking about was asking for criticism
he wasnt asking PHILLIP MCDOUGALL to talk about bullshit
i hate kids with all this ego and yet NEVER post their OWN SHIT
hahaha sorry for the rant but bitches like that make me angry


neam - that looks dope. you should continue with how you feel. its not always best to just blindly follow what other people tell you. try to find the motion in you man

Phil McD actually has one of his pieces in the Intermediate Thread, so you can judge wether or not his "bullshit" holds any real weight.

You might have to flip back a few pages, though.


Also, why do you care? You probably won't even meet the guy, so why even waste your time getting mad? That's probably why he always trolls on here, just to get paper sensitive people like you (no beef) mad. Sad thing is, it's working very well. All I see on here is people talk about Phil and how much of an asshole he is.

[Phillip McDougall]

BUT I'S JUST TRAWWWWWLIN'

sometimes. A lot of you are faggots

[NouveauP]

Love you, Crust.

[FuckTheFame]

shouting for attention from a bunch of toys
but really just too afraid to step up to the big leagues
for how much shit phil talks you'd think he'd be posting in the big boys forum
but nahhh

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0777.jpg
edit: i get down on those boards everynow and then too neam
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0847.jpg
dusk - try throwing some 3d on there
same with you get rekt and neam

[Phillip McDougall]

I don't even talk shit, you're just butthurt because your graffiti isn't as cool as you think it is

[FuckTheFame]

im fine with my graff
i dont need your approval
...or opinion for that matter
i get my ups in the streets
i try to use the internet as a way to get AWAY from REAL LIFE beefs
and what do i find but philip mcdougal trying to be e-famous

[Willis1989]

Sloth - I like the S, not too keen on the T

Crits on this pls, working on a few different words to find what I like.
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00280.jpg?t=1282137874

[T-Kanzz]

my niqqa im not trying to be ibu im throwing my 2cents in there,, im sorry i thought these kids were ASKING for crits, no hate, but calm down im just trying to help

[Phillip McDougall]

im fine with my graff
i dont need your approval
...or opinion for that matter
i get my ups in the streets
i try to use the internet as a way to get AWAY from REAL LIFE beefs
and what do i find but philip mcdougal trying to be e-famous

E-fame? Really? I don't even post painted shit. How do I worry about my E-fame? and even if I did, I'd be more worried about how much of a dick I look like when I tell toys like you my opinion on your graffiti. Either roll with it, take my opinion, and just let it go, which is something you should get used to in the REAL graffiti world, or you can bitch and moan about it like a 14-year-old on the internet.

Now, tell me, which of those are you acting like right now? OH YEAH.

I'm not a hater. I just don't like your graffiti. And I don't think you belong in the Intermediate Thread. So chill.

[LeaksOne]

waste thats really shaky. i dont really like it. but its a start.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60272.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60274.jpg

pick em apart!

[dangeri]

'not' on the bottom it reaalllly nice, not too keen on th y tho, may just be half a notch too tall, :)

[NouveauP]

I like the YNOT throw more, as well. However I don't like the pointies on the Y and the N. I think they should look more like the T. And the T is leaning awkwardly a little bit. And it may just be me, but in the middle of the N on the right side where the hump is (I hope that's a good description of where I mean), I'd lose the hump and just make a straight line (to be parallel to the line in the center of the throw.) Might just be me. Good work. I do like that L in the first throw, though.

[LeaksOne]

those pointies are habitual. as is the N hump. and i always fuck T's up. which it why i do not have one in my name. but thanks for the crits.

[T-Kanzz]

R.i.p. Eyt

[FuckTheFame]

waste - try putting some drop shadow on that. it makes it look complete man
leaks - the ynot is dope. it feels like the top one is lacking some motion

[LeaksOne]

yeah i did that on the fly. i write it hear and there. this was one of my first attempts at it. hence the shaky top part of the L.

[2FNK?]

Leaks- imo, your Y in the YNOT looks like an s. If I were you I'd differentiate it a little.

[MakeItTakeIt]

T's are hard to flow in general. They leave a lot of dead space just because of the shape of the letter. OT combo is especially tricky. I usually give the t a little bit of curve so it fits.

I like the flow of your y and n together though. That L looks kinda awkward and good at the same time. Fuck it, I like it. And lose the kink on the leg of the k and shape it like your other letters.

[iamBoZ96]

i dont know something new. crits?

[DEOS96]

http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7673.jpg
http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7676.jpg
http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7663.jpg
the black and white are kinda wack
crits ?

[paniik]

DEOS - I like the red one in the 2nd pic but the S is pretty complicated

[iamBoZ96]

DEOS i like the puprle ones

[Mr yarbles]

Deos they're all bad.

[paniik]

Deos they're all bad.

Give him some advice aswell instead of just putting him down.

[iamBoZ96]

anybody like mine?

[Mr yarbles]

Not particularly no.

[iamBoZ96]

advice?

[Mr yarbles]

Well being that you've had the same damn throw as your signature this whole damn time I think it's time to draw something new.

[LIGRAFF]

http://i36.tinypic.com/1688sah.jpg

[iamBoZ96]

Mr Yarbles i was talking about the throw i posted on the last page

[3Cr1k7]

some throwies i put together last night

the first one i know the i and k need to be fatter and the c needs to overlap.

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b467/austinr317/Image107.jpg

i think i could have done a better i and c on this one.

http://i1046.photobucket.com/albums/b467/austinr317/Image106.jpg

[iamBoZ96]

i like the first one the second one needs a lil work but thats my 2 cents

[Mr yarbles]

Eh you're a nice guy so I'll help you out.
Lose the arrows.
Make all your letters the same size some are fat some are small you can get away with a little bit of proportion slops but it's really legible in this
Your middle letters are still letters so repsect them.
Also don't use the bottom of your paper I know it's easier but it dosn't get you very far.
Your style is going to look shitty just give it time and it'll get good.

Also if you don't have a good handstyle start working on it
I didn't get throws until I got I got a handle on my handles.
Same goes for piecing.
Yarbles out.

[iamBoZ96]

thanks yarbles

[rewz]

http://i38.tinypic.com/w7zasm.jpg

[mefe]

^ dope

[iamBoZ96]

agreed ^^

[DTE_PRONTO]

http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7673.jpg
http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7676.jpg
http://i949.photobucket.com/albums/ad332/DEOS96/DSCF7663.jpg
the black and white are kinda wack
crits ?

Deos U gotta cool name....but anyway i like tha 1st one & tha last one wit tha i think teal color

[Invert]

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/7418/scan0007iy.jpg
Don't even pay attention to Slap, looking for suggestions on the cry and klick, second real attempt at this

[MakeItTakeIt]

Deos. You're getting ahead of yourself is all I can say. Interesting take on a one liner, although I don't think you're ready to take that on yet. I like your lowercase letters more, but try to make all your letters the same size for now no matter what you're writin. Also, your handstyles are illegible. Space out your letters and make them look more like letters. And for the last one, don't mix straight letters and script, that tag is really confusing. Start simpler. Not hatin, just my 2 cents but you can take it or leave it.

Invert. Study graffiti. There's plenty of pictures on this site, put them to use. Start simple, like really, really fucking simple and just keep writin it. You'll get the hang of it eventually. It's easier if you pick letters that you can flow easily and make a name from those instead of picking a name and trying to cater to it. Some basic pointers: Have your letters the same basic size and shape, and have them touching as much as possible but not so much that they're squished. Also, don't sketch your throws, ever. Flow solid lines till you get the hang of it. Graff is definitely not somethin you can just jump into and be dope. It takes practice. Keep at it.

Rewz. the kink in the a makes it look like an R kinda. Shits ill regardless.

[headzupfanzine]

Rewz. the kink in the a makes it look like an R kinda. Shits ill regardless.


good advice and I hear ya here for sure. shit IS ill.

[MakeItTakeIt]

http://i37.tinypic.com/230f35.jpg

Tryin out somethin new, just a quick doodle. Lemme know how lame it is.

[dangeri]

Love the 'no' on that mate,

[iamBoZ96]

"Note" i feel that i like how you can use your T its hard to work with that deadspace but it feels like the N and O over power the T and E and id give you my 2 cents but i need Rusto

Splaz out!

[LeaksOne]

note you need a new N.

[MakeItTakeIt]

Shiiiiit, that was the new N. I'm tryin out a bunch of new shit. I just woke up I'll post some revised shit in a bit. The T is definitely hard to flow sometimes but I'm workin on it. Ynot RIP helped me a lot with that. I totally agree with all yall thanks much for the crits.

[Invert]

Invert. Study graffiti. There's plenty of pictures on this site, put them to use. Start simple, like really, really fucking simple and just keep writin it. You'll get the hang of it eventually. It's easier if you pick letters that you can flow easily and make a name from those instead of picking a name and trying to cater to it. Some basic pointers: Have your letters the same basic size and shape, and have them touching as much as possible but not so much that they're squished. Also, don't sketch your throws, ever. Flow solid lines till you get the hang of it. Graff is definitely not somethin you can just jump into and be dope. It takes practice. Keep at it.


I thought what I drew was as simple as it's going to get? How simple should I start then?

[iamBoZ96]

keyboard

[Invert]

keyboard

I hate asking, but what to do with the keyboard letters. I know to draw them but should I just work on being steady with it or practice bars or what?

[sIeL.gAs]

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm271/jbang212121/Picture0009.jpg
crits?

[iamBoZ96]

Invert you practice your bars and striaghts with them you can basically devolop a new style.
Seil- i like your S and E but your I and L need work so does your handy

[sIeL.gAs]

thanks for the crit, ill try to come up with something more similar to the S and E.

[iamBoZ96]

IMO I's and L's are hard

[MakeItTakeIt]

Word, the S and the E are sorta boxy and the I and the L are bubbly. Throw a few corners and some steez on em it should be lookin nice.

[lost is gettin up]

havent posted in awhile new throwie concept any critzz?

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/th_DSCN1436.jpg (http://s417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/?action=view&current=DSCN1436.jpg)

[LeaksOne]

No.

[IllLogic]

http://i37.tinypic.com/2ihmtmd.jpg

[Fury]

havent posted in awhile new throwie concept any critzz?

http://i417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/th_DSCN1436.jpg (http://s417.photobucket.com/albums/pp256/nvime/?action=view&current=DSCN1436.jpg)

Block your shit on photobucket.

[Jerk215]

Note- i think your most recent post has potential. the n isnt really working though. i really like the shape on the o.
IllLogic- looks pretty good. not feelin the M. it also looks like its all getting smaller, especially the 3d
siel- that throw needs a lot of work. the hand is better, maybe try an uppercase L to even the thing out
lost_is_getting_up - that throw is hurtin.

heres my shitty bullshit
http://i920.photobucket.com/albums/ad49/jerk215/photo-1-1.jpg

[Gatsoi]

Your muncie throwie is wayyy better than mine.

[-Sinn-]

Battle between Sinn and Phat2 the votes up to you
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/9618_161064336474_516386474_3271831_5302102_ndg.jp g
Phat2
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/wanja.jpg
Sinn

[Phillip McDougall]

Sinn..

[IllLogic]

phat

[H1P30N3R]

sinn

[elpendejo123]

seil- try not to have any negative space in between letters

illLogic- nice job at keeping it symmetrical o.0

iamboz96- dope letters keep it up :)

phat2 is better :P

[Phillip McDougall]

You guys are kidding..

[elpendejo123]

crits?

[elpendejo123]

actually my bad i meant sinn is better

[iamBoZ96]

i feel the style make it cleaner

[MakeItTakeIt]

Maybe if phat wasn't lazy and did some 3d haha he still gmv

[PermanentMarkers]

Phat ruined it with the J imo, and Sinns style is dope, but the n could definately be a K (although i still like the n quite alot), and the J could pass for an S anyday. The a is really clever

Cele - Uppercase Es look better usually, switch to uppercase. Also try doing your throws blockier (with straighter lines, aka bars, but round them). Dont bother with fills.. just do a bunch of outlines

Jerk - i kinda like it.. the K threw me off though. and i thought the r was a P.

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/12.jpg

[MakeItTakeIt]

http://i38.tinypic.com/29za5uv.jpg

New style, tryin to work out the kinks. Any suggestions? Or should I just start over?

[PREA672]

throwies bore me

[Get Rekt!]

http://i38.tinypic.com/w7zasm.jpg

im feelin' that^

[Get Rekt!]

http://i38.tinypic.com/29za5uv.jpg

New style, tryin to work out the kinks. Any suggestions? Or should I just start over?

i like it. maybe do something with the e. i like the style and the way its structured but theres just something about that big bubble i dont really like

[MakeItTakeIt]

i like it. maybe do something with the e. i like the style and the way its structured but theres just something about that big bubble i dont really like

http://i33.tinypic.com/5yyzyo.jpg
Word, I feel ya. The t could be bigger in this one, whateva.

[paniik]

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad64/oVengance/snapshot-5.png

i need to work on my shadows..crits please

[LeaksOne]

Your first s is realty awkward as is your n.

[paniik]

can u give me a tip on how to improve them?

[PermanentMarkers]

can u give me a tip on how to improve them?

Use straight lines for awhile, i tried bubbles and shit before structure too, then when i started with the bars i was like "woooaah i didnt know about this, its way easier now". It definately helps to just draw letters from your keyboard, like SONS, then you'll figure it out from there if you just keep drawing and looking on here. Look at stuff other people post, and the crits they get. The same crits go around and around. If at first you dont succeed try again.

As for your shadow, just pick a point on your letter, and decide where you want the drop shadow to be (aka, down and to the left). Now redraw that point you picked down and to the left. Now your line is made up of infinity points right? Do this with all infinity points and you will have a shadow (just redraw your letter down and to the left of the original letter, but obviously dont go over the original letter). Curves are difficult, but when it gets tricky just do the point thing. Down this much, left this much.

[Invert]

Note - That's lookin really good, Lovin the 'N'
Sons - I'm probably in no position to talk but try and make your letters more proportional.

http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/6647/scan0011k.jpg
Any crits? I know I shouldn't sketch my throws but other than that,

[Sbal]

Don't make the bottom bubble of your B come down so far and avoid crosses in your letters, they look lame.

[paniik]

Use straight lines for awhile, i tried bubbles and shit before structure too, then when i started with the bars i was like "woooaah i didnt know about this, its way easier now". It definately helps to just draw letters from your keyboard, like SONS, then you'll figure it out from there if you just keep drawing and looking on here. Look at stuff other people post, and the crits they get. The same crits go around and around. If at first you dont succeed try again.

As for your shadow, just pick a point on your letter, and decide where you want the drop shadow to be (aka, down and to the left). Now redraw that point you picked down and to the left. Now your line is made up of infinity points right? Do this with all infinity points and you will have a shadow (just redraw your letter down and to the left of the original letter, but obviously dont go over the original letter). Curves are difficult, but when it gets tricky just do the point thing. Down this much, left this much.

Thank you VERY much (:

[H1P30N3R]

sons -just work on your letter first 3d isn't important until your letters are ready
blue- don't give your letters so much waviness scratch the b

cripto throwie battle

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1840.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad64/oVengance/snapshot-5.png

i need to work on my shadows..crits please

*****', I already told you once:

DON'T SKETCH YOUR THROWS. EVER. OK?

[Phat 2]

and get your bars up

[IbuprofenTablets]

Yeah, get your throwy bars up.

[LeaksOne]

Lol hey phat, there are no bars in throws

[super soac]

first post
first throw with my new name
crits would be nice
http://i37.tinypic.com/2gx3g2b.jpg

[DECO ONE]

Old Throw... thinking about going back to something like this... any crits?


http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2485/4078535721_5f9f00dca1.jpg

[suparjafar]

if thats old hopefully your handstyle has improved...
stay away from edges in your throw

soac the top of the s kinda doesnt work for what youre doing but i like the rest

old
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0345.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0341.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0332.jpg

nu
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0365.jpg

criticism would be nice

[DECO ONE]

only thing i would say is try to make the letters your own.. there pretty generic letters so try changing them slightly to make them more...your own is all i can say.. your sizing and proportions are pretty even. so youve got that down...

and yes my Tag deff changed.. haha.. theres a slightly more updated version i did tonight in the Toy Tagz section... Sakura on a blue box :D

[sanrtizer]

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/4701/throwi.jpg
poop

[soath]

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090005.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090009.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090006.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090008.jpg

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090007.jpg

have no idea what to do with an H.

[blunder]

not sure if this qualifies as a throw?, crits pls!!

[soath]

i think the L U combo looks like another letter, if you loose some of the connections and just overlap ur letters that might solve that for u. peace.

@ NASR i would widen out the first part of the N and shorten the lines in the N.

[Flawless Victory]

if thats old hopefully your handstyle has improved...
Both of those hands shit on yours.

[PermanentMarkers]

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/P8090006.jpg

I like this one the most, but use the H from number 3 or make it pointing up like all the other letters (you did a pretty good job anyways)

Maybe make the bubbly S bit a bit smaller, not sure about the oa overlap, you didnt do it on any other letters (kinda did on the t but it looks like an accident almost)

[Dalekk]

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/218/4/a/Be_by_jamahata.jpg
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/143/e/c/Throw_up_by_jamahata.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/156/c/4/Bald_by_jamahata.jpg

[smokeitup]

from tonight:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/FRIDAY27AUGUST2010004.jpg

[hecktor]

waste thats really shaky. i dont really like it. but its a start.

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60272.jpg

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60274.jpg

pick em apart!

R.I.P YNOT
http://trueelementz.com/2010/07/28/r-i-p-ynot-%E2%80%A2-msg/

[Flawless Victory]

no shit.

[DECO ONE]

Both of those hands shit on yours.

haha thanks.. yes there old... early 90's boston style lettering..

and ROES..... edges dont bother me.. i can paint this just fine.. and fast... but yeah... most people should avoid sharp edges for a throw up..

[usermane]

construcive criticism please . it was mad windy :s

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/a9e52877.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/80f2bcad.jpg

[usermane]

oh yeah. dont use blaster tips.

[Dalekk]

construcive criticism please . it was mad windy :s

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/a9e52877.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/80f2bcad.jpg

Work from a sketch. Also buy yourself a box of chalks and using them sketch out what you are going to paint. It may sound toyish but there's no point in pretending you're a pro when you're still a toy. With time you'll get better control over your cans.

[Phillip McDougall]

LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."

[oeost]

love? Really?

"what you write, fool?"
"love. No homo."

lol

[IllLogic]

He says it was mad windy.. that explains it

[ViniVidiVici]

Duuuuude.... I've had some bad throws before due to rushing and a whole lot of things, but I mean.... you can't even start blaming this on the wind....

constructive criticism eh? okay well I would say before you start trying throws out in public, you should first just find yourself a big ol' piece of wood and practice throws on that. I mean for real you need to do this... look at your first one.... the V is engulfing the fucking E like he's pacman, plus I think I've seen 3 year olds with parkinsons that can color in within the lines better than you...

But if you keep working on it, soon you'll get better and be able to have a good throw.

[RES4]

I think I've seen 3 year olds with parkinsons that can color in within the lines better than you...

lol

[usermane]

Work from a sketch. Also buy yourself a box of chalks and using them sketch out what you are going to paint. It may sound toyish but there's no point in pretending you're a pro when you're still a toy. With time you'll get better control over your cans.


like the huge sidewalk shit from the dollar store or llike the markal ones?

cool idea, thanks


heres today

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/graf/photo2.jpg

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj110/athingidone/graf/photo1.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

practice alot more ..... paper is cheaper than paint

[usermane]

practice alot more ..... paper is cheaper than paint

yes. i pay for my paint.



He says it was mad windy.. that explains it


lol



LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."


a round of applause for the fantastic contributions from these bright young gentlemen

im trying to make a positive message. ive had people in the street say thank you, and not one single person in 2 years has ever fucked with me for my writing.i never said i was uber sick, thats why this is in the toy forum. just trying do do a good thing.


and even if homo, i dont give a fuck. bang who you wanna bang. none of my business. that would just be weird.

[Phillip McDougall]

I think it's a troll...

[Gatsoi]

You've been writing love for two years and that's all you got?

[usermane]

You've been writing love for two years and that's all you got?

i'm not in a hurry.

[Gatsoi]

Ha!

[ReSeM]

please stop those thank you's were probably sarcastic

[PermanentMarkers]

I think it's a troll...

You're a troll!

Love you should try straight lines, I hear they are the shit.

[ReSeM]

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0037-1.jpg

[ViniVidiVici]

haha okay this has got to be a joke. But an expensive joke if you keep wasting paint like that. If your actually serious, and this isn't a joke, then seriously get a big piece of wood and practice on that. I'm not joking it helps cuz you don't have to rush or worry about anything. but I still am getting the feeling that this is joke, oh and just outta curiosity, are you doing the outline first then filling it in? cuz it looks like you are, and that, that is a problem.

[Heklr]

LOVE? REALLY?

"What you write, fool?"
"Love. No homo."

There's already an artist who writes 'Love' with decent fame.

Even if this guy wanted to write 'Love', what's wrong with that?

It's a pretty strong message. Maybe his graffiti is more than just a name on a wall. Maybe the artist is trying to reach his or her local community and spread some love.

Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate. Hater of the year award goes to Phil...

[usermane]

are you doing the outline first then filling it in? cuz it looks like you are, and that, that is a problem.



i did like a big outline in the main color first then filled it in and added the black (dark green) after. i noticed some shitty parts that i hadnt filled in and touched it up which got on the black outline i guess :S ima try the chalk next time, hopefully it stands out under the paint?

why how do you mean?

[Heklr]

Dude, forget about the chalk. Seriously...

You don't need that.

[ViniVidiVici]

okay that explains it, yeah your at least have the layering down right. If you were doing and outline with say black first then doing your blue to fill it in, it would be extremely bad.

yeah try the chalk

[weakfingers]

Did you mean this love?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2422/3927559951_027afacef8_b.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

There's already an artist who writes 'Love' with decent fame.

Even if this guy wanted to write 'Love', what's wrong with that?

It's a pretty strong message. Maybe his graffiti is more than just a name on a wall. Maybe the artist is trying to reach his or her local community and spread some love.

Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate. Hater of the year award goes to Phil...

It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

[LeaksOne]

Lulz.

The mods and their "dont be a meanie" rule are guna nut over the last couple pages haha

[PermanentMarkers]

It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

This makes no sense.... it only proves your faggotry phillip

Seriously your dick, his throat..... and this time you didnt feel the need for no homo.

[775SakE]

sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

This makes no sense.... it only proves your faggotry phillip

Seriously your dick, his throat..... and this time you didnt feel the need for no homo.

Figurative language has no effect on you, does it?

[usermane]

please stop those thank you's were sarcastic

thats what i told yo momma

[PermanentMarkers]

Lol well if Usermane is a troll

Mission accomplished

(I know it was figurative phillip, i just thought it was totally uncalled for)

Sake, i cant really tell whats going on there, too much in the background and those colors in the background and the fill itself clash pretty horribly

[Mr yarbles]

sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

Well I guess that kills the worries that you wern't a good artist in Seattle

[Heklr]

It must be hard to think completely with my dick so deep in your throat, I'm sorry. Next time, I'll pull out before I blow my load.

The only response you have to my statement is a homosexual comment?

The homosexual comments from you are getting monotonous...
Sexual harassment.

[LeaksOne]

sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

where is the clock tower in seattle? maybe i never look up....or maybe there isnt one.

[usermane]

sketch i worked on while visiting seattle.
http://a.imageshack.us/img834/25/editedsake23.jpg

imo simpler is usually better.

[Dalekk]

yes. i pay for my paint.










a round of applause for the fantastic contributions from these bright young gentlemen

im trying to make a positive message. ive had people in the street say thank you, and not one single person in 2 years has ever fucked with me for my writing.i never said i was uber sick, thats why this is in the toy forum. just trying do do a good thing.


and even if homo, i dont give a fuck. bang who you wanna bang. none of my business. that would just be weird.

Two years? TWO YEARS?! What the fuck, man?! If you're really writing for two years then I have to tell you - you suck. For real. Shit, man, you can't even throw a straight line :eek:

[Loki X Sho]

I think it's a troll...

Ezzzzzactly what I was thinkin'.

Dude when you write for two yours you get better...and who writes love..really?
Even if you really have no artistic talent, you still improve in the way you do things.

[ReSeM]

thats what i told yo momma

how old are you? get out of here with the childish crap you need to use your blackbook A LOT before you go painting again if you're going to "grace your area with positive vibes" i suggest you come a little better than wack throws
also the chalk idea wasnt suppose to "pop" out its suppose to help with your structure
no one has messed with you cause they cant take you seriously if you don't like what you're hearing too bad cause im speaking the truth
save us the honor of looking at your waste of freight space and paint and blackbook

[usermane]

how old are you? get out of here with the childish crap you need to use your blackbook A LOT before you go painting again if you're going to "grace your area with positive vibes" i suggest you come a little better than wack throws
also the chalk idea wasnt suppose to "pop" out its suppose to help with your structure
no one has messed with you cause they cant take you seriously if you don't like what you're hearing too bad cause im speaking the truth
save us the honor of looking at your waste of freight space and paint and blackbook

shows what you know. 3/4 of my shit doesnt get taken down. people like it. i acutally touched up 3 week old peices yesterday and not even fucking cops gave me shit. I UNDERSTAND WHAT THE CHALK IS SUPPOSED TO DO.

i hit the freights cause its quiet and theres guaranteed to be a huge space for me to use. dont like it? do something.


you are so fucking cool on the internet. fuckin loser.

Two years? TWO YEARS?! What the fuck, man?! If you're really writing for two years then I have to tell you - you suck. For real. Shit, man, you can't even throw a straight line :eek:



yeah, i been learning. lotta shit you gotta learn from tagging before you're ready to paint, and i feel ive learned everything i can from tagging. i learned to rack, make ink, where to paint and when (all important if youre gonna make any kind of impact). besides that i have had other things MORE IMPORTANT THAN GRAFF which means i gotta put the mop down for a few months at a time. i dont know if you're dyslexic but ive told ya its my first time picking up a can of paint. SPRAYPAINT USING= ONE MONTH so what if im not uber sick, suck my motherfuckin dick.


i never made any claims of having leet skills, i just came here for help and got a bunch of fags flaming me. so fuck you all, i guess ill find a forum where i can actually talk to people :(

fuck you guys are a joke.

[LeaksOne]

You mad doggie? Go change your tampon and stop taking the internet so serious.

[Flawless Victory]

yeah, i been learning. lotta shit you gotta learn from tagging before you're ready to paint, and i feel ive learned everything i can from tagging. i learned to rack, make ink, where to paint and when (all important if youre gonna make any kind of impact). besides that i have had other things MORE IMPORTANT THAN GRAFF which means i gotta put the mop down for a few months at a time. i dont know if you're dyslexic but ive told ya its my first time picking up a can of paint. SPRAYPAINT USING= ONE MONTH so what if im not uber sick, suck my motherfuckin dick.
...soooo you've been painting for a month, not 2 years.

[Sbal]

who the fuck thanked you for putting your shitty pieces on a wall?

[Willis1989]

This choosing of a name is doing my nut in, so ive tried throwies with a few, can I get crits on the names and the throwies please? Thanks guys.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00294.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00297.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00295.jpg?t=1283260362

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00296.jpg?t=1283260362

[ViniVidiVici]

I like the first one Wilis

wow username..... just wow.... wow...... This is a troll for sure haha, I would love to see his pieces hahaha if he can't even make a simple throw. Can't even keep the lines straight and no where near straight. it's like he is constantly painting in an earthquake... hey love can I see one of your 'pieces' that the cops just love so much.

[dangeri]

I'd stay clear of puff tbh mate, especially in that pink :S

[Loki X Sho]

lol i love toy forum

[ReSeM]

shows what you know. 3/4 of my shit doesnt get taken down. people like it. i acutally touched up 3 week old peices yesterday and not even fucking cops gave me shit.
im really not believing you and i told you no one take you seriously so they leave it up for pity i want photo conformation of this anyways


i never made any claims of having leet skills, i just came here for help and got a bunch of fags flaming me
i was willing to help now im not too sure cause of your attitude
i gave you help by saying BLACKBOOK SOME MORE!!!!
everybody is flaming you cause you're not good at all and all toys know to BLACKBOOK until you are at least decent THEN go paint
seriously take this advice you have no structure, no style, your letters are all over the place heed my advice and SKETCH thats constructive criticism now calm your immature ass down

[Willis1989]

Usermane, why do people like you come on the internet and act like a little bitch about everything, people say my pieces suck and I have the honesty to admit that they do but I practice and practice and I know ive gotten better from when I started even though I still suck, but people like you will never learn anything, like you I thought I was good at graff because I just thought it was about making letters big and detailed but its not, its about a lot more than that but you will never learn because you cant come to terms with the fact that your pieces suck, take my advice and listen to the guys on here and take their criticism and dont be a bitch about it because most of them are better than you or me will ever be.


A few more throwies, crits pls.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00298.jpg?t=1283334910

[Invert]

Usermane, why do people like you come on the internet and act like a little bitch about everything, people say my pieces suck and I have the honesty to admit that they do but I practice and practice and I know ive gotten better from when I started even though I still suck, but people like you will never learn anything, like you I thought I was good at graff because I just thought it was about making letters big and detailed but its not, its about a lot more than that but you will never learn because you cant come to terms with the fact that your pieces suck, take my advice and listen to the guys on here and take their criticism and dont be a bitch about it because most of them are better than you or me will ever be.


A few more throwies, crits pls.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00298.jpg?t=1283334910

Try and make all letters proportional to each other ya know? Your 'W' needs a bit of work, and try making the last bar of it not drop down farther than the rest, and make the first one bigger. Either that or try a new 'W'

The 'L' seems a little too fat too IMO, and the S needs a bit of work. Although, I do like your 'I' in the orange one,

I'm not that good myself, but that's my two cents, you can take it or leave it

[TkR81]

http://i952.photobucket.com/albums/ae8/Hornets17_2010/Picture1.jpg
new throwie

[Phillip McDougall]

lol.

[ChadWarden]

what the hell do you kids google that you all come up with the exact same font to bite?

[Fury]

Whole page needs to rework their shit and make it simple.

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/001-9.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

nice throw prea my favorite so far ... the bottom of your e could be re done to have the same flow going.

[PREA672]

yeah thats what i was thinking to

[SAINT1]

quick 2 letter, crits pleasee
http://i53.tinypic.com/161j3w6.jpg

[ReSeM]

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0037-1.jpg

bump for crits

SAINT1 the S would be better if it didnt have the lumps at the top
smooth round top broski

[H1P30N3R]

dumb down your style resm you aren't ready for that steez yet go simple bubble letters for now

[LeaksOne]

^^^what are you talking about?

Resm- fix the R and the top of the S.

[Willis1989]

A few more, cleaned it up a bit

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00300.jpg?t=1283426837

TKR - Looks to common
PREA - Me likes, probably my favorite in the battle so far
Saint - I like this too, I suck at T's, I like the tag too

[Head Hurts]

my tossss.. NEVS
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k11/marspilot2/nevso.jpg

prea672 -
that hopeful throw is iight but you need to fix the H, how close and tight all the lines and connections are fucks with the flow of it.. try not doing those horizontal lines in the center and putting some space between the two vertical lines. you dont need that connection shit to make it a H.. if not then juss put space between the horizontal lines, if they still look like they belong there to you

you could also fuck wit the L but besides that its pretty tuff

[H1P30N3R]

^^^what are you talking about?

Resm- fix the R and the top of the S.

his letters just seem forced to me.... maybe I just don't dig that style, like using circles at the bottom of the m and r sometimes looks good and other times looks horrible.

[Cobra716]

http://i56.tinypic.com/m7wf7m.jpg
gimme some crits on this one

[down!]

O is too big, not feeling the S.

[Phat 2]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs312.ash2/59269_153399138020337_100000507545549_389029_30340 46_n.jpg
crits pleez ?

[PREA672]

did you tag mohamed up there?

[Phat 2]

of course not and crits on the throw plz ?

[Sbal]

its juicy

[aekone]

Oris- Letters the same size. Keep 'em even.

Phat2- Ditch the gratuitous juicy drips. Fucks with the letter structure as well. Make it flow. Also make it more legible.
Eat. Two styles. WHich ones better?
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo12.jpg
For my homie Logic.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo20.jpg
Eatoe... Cuz I like to switch it up.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo19.jpg
Crits?



Huh... I've come a loooong way... Evidence is as follows:
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo22.jpg

[LeaksOne]

Good shit. I like the bottom one in the 2 styes and That logic Is legit.

[ReSeM]

quality steez aekone

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0031-4-1.jpg

[SAINT1]

hey guys, another quick 2 letter, i fucked up the top of the T when i was outlining but didnt have time to redo it sorry. crits please
http://i51.tinypic.com/nn6xqt.jpg

[dubbed]

resem- your first 3 letters look too similar and are hard to distinguish
saint- your s is nice but your t isnt, maybe make the base skinnier idk

[BeforeCommonEra]

http://i1235.photobucket.com/albums/ff436/BeforeCommonEra/DSC_0238.jpg First post here, your criticism is greatly appreciated

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

That logic is fucking clean
Resem and phat2 pretty dope stuff!

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAwNTYtMjAxMDA4MjgtMTYyNC5qcGc.jpg
I love hitting up these folders all over my friends folders ull see my shit like this one ha

[MASE P_2s]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs312.ash2/59269_153399138020337_100000507545549_389029_30340 46_n.jpg
crits pleez ?

not feeling the holes in the e and a,bottom of the e is to small,h is ok id fix it a lil n z needs works but big ups on the spot jus keep progressing

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Is says Phat2 yo^^

[MASE P_2s]

>;1663641']Is says Phat2 yo^^

o damn my Phat but there you go needs work

[Willis1989]

hanged my W a little, what you guys think?

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00302.jpg?t=1283953265

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00301.jpg?t=1283953265

[PermanentMarkers]

Willis you arent doing your 3D right

For a drop shadow just redraw your entire letter, but either left, down and to the left (or right, whatever).

Pick each point and redraw it down and to the _____. Your dropshadow is really messed up. (This same thing goes to ORIS from the top of this page)

Honestly i dont like the W the I or the L

Start with straighter lines then once you get some alright looking straight throws start curving that shit up

[del4sel]

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfJPJZ8uZI/AAAAAAAAAFA/MeWhtxs3Bsg/s1600/delthrow1.JPG

[del4sel]

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfYYIiuMtI/AAAAAAAAAFQ/7ZbB58ab0Js/s1600/Delthrow2.JPG

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Wil I just don't really like the W everything is fine
And del4sel I like the style ur goin for but idk you just need to keep doing it till you get it perfected the S is badass tho

[del4sel]

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfhce-ES0I/AAAAAAAAAFg/lA1G6gpsycs/s1600/Delthrow3.JPG

[del4sel]

@ Smokers

Yo thanks bro I haven't tried a del4sel throw until today so this is the first three. Surely more to come now that I know how to efficiently upload so we'll see where it ends. I was pretty surprised at that S too I think that's the most original thing i've ever done. Props to yours as well man that shit is fire! Post some more of those throws!!! Peace.

[del4sel]

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TIfky_6sJaI/AAAAAAAAAFw/fQ5OPVU27mk/s1600/dunce.JPG

For those that remember this battle... I liked this concept drawing and would like to work on improving it a bit because I think it has some potential.

[hpir]

anybody wanna exchange?
i write rung

[Get Rekt!]

ehh.. not feeling the m.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0908002138-1.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

Lose the stars.

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0956.jpg
random bomb
get rekt - phill is right. but its also cool to say please
del4sel - looks pretty good. try to gain some more flow. and that 4 is killing me. but still it looks like your putting in work. props for that

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAwOTUtMjAxMDA5MDgtMjM1My5qcGc.jpg
Yo rung-Kind of sloppy I'm pretty tired if u want me to take another shot at it just let me know man. oh ya and on the 1st one I obviously fucked up the r so I had a better idea but idk what the hell went on with my hand and the G I was just freeballin' it and thot it would be "kewl" if I just made the top stretch a wee bit

••@del4sel, damn if those are you first attempts at it I applaud you man 'cause they got flow kind of but just aint clean. Like they're spaced perfectly you got the main idea of how the letter should be but u just need to fit it in nicely, like I don't like how the bottom of the S comes out over the 4 and the 4 look like Y's but pretty good I suck at #'s so I'm understand you on that man.
••@Scam-i would try and start with some like squarished beefed up keyboard letters for those letters like a JA style of throw simple and fresh!
••@Fuck the fame-first get ur letters all the same size man, then we'll see from there

[FuckTheFame]

nice crit man
i never really notice that too much
liking that bottom throw
the top one seems rushed

[LIGRAFF]

http://i52.tinypic.com/2zoyyqa.jpg
Crits?

[FuckTheFame]

i like the n man
maybe try making the rest of the c and e flow better
and it would be cool if the u wasnt so hidden

[whatunead]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v222/jimmy_the_explorer/CIMG0032.jpgneed som,e critssss. the D in my throw doesnt sit well with me. also, i need some 3d/shadow help...im not sure what direction would make the most sense for my vanishing point.

[Daipone]

hey here is some old throwie from (MJ'z) Mad Jokerz Crew

word is : BAD-C
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4017/4347994633_ef54e7919e.jpg

EVIL
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2543/4250727354_66326edf25.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2536/4211522951_e21c92891e.jpg

got allot of mistake i know that's was old stuff but i like to share it for fun :)

[IbuprofenTablets]

Lol.

[PermanentMarkers]

Lol.

Fuck you

Edit: On second thought that seems kinda harsh.. but fuck you, that post was not helpful in any way at all, and no one even know what you are talking about.

this one was pointless too but at least it points out your fuckry.

Daipone - Keep it up man. Ignore the fuckers on this site.

[ReSeM]

lmfao calm the fuck down speedy

[IbuprofenTablets]

Fuck you

Edit: On second thought that seems kinda harsh.. but fuck you, that post was not helpful in any way at all, and no one even know what you are talking about.

This herb's just mad 'cause I've probably ragged on his wack ass shit. I don't even remember PermanentMarkers' stuff specifically, but if he's comin' at me like this, I must've dissed his shit.

@PermanentMarkers: Shut cho' mouth, you dumbass faggot. Continue to draw your dumb ass straights that make people laugh because of how bad they are.


Edit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v663/PermanentMarkers/IMG_3606.jpg



AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

[MASE P_2s]

this herb's just mad 'cause i've probably ragged on his wack ass shit. I don't even remember permanentmarkers' stuff specifically, but if he's comin' at me like this, i must've dissed his shit.

@permanentmarkers: Shut cho' mouth, you dumbass faggot. Continue to draw your dumb ass straights that make people laugh because of how bad they are.


Edit:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v663/permanentmarkers/img_3606.jpg



ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. lmfaoooooooooo roflllllllll

[ReSeM]

is that burning smell from you cause ur ass just got roasted permy
lmfao

[SiNe-VrL-516]

http://i930.photobucket.com/albums/ad141/sineoner/0910001231.jpg

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

I think the N being straightened would make the whole thing come along perfectly man!
Or something just tweek the N around, other than that its good

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0957-1.jpg
i liked the background of the canvas
i need to rack some markers like none other
purple and silver were all i had left

sine - it'd be cool to see something crazy happen with the I

[mekosbc]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo124-1.jpg

[ChadWarden]

@meko

i think if the right part of both the m and k were brought closer to the middle of the letter, and didn't have as much "weight" to it, it would look better. what you're doing with the m is hot, but the rest of the letters seem bland. nice looking throw overall.

[ReSeM]

http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg

gorillaz?

[mekosbc]

naw lol i wanted to draw a robotic pisst off chinese chick

[drOping]

I'd say pretty good Meko

http://i56.tinypic.com/eiul5.jpg

[EXI]

Here's my first throwup ever and with my new name
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/27.jpg

[FuckTheFame]

niiice. try to make all your letters the same size. and the period at the end could be a little bigger and connected to the e. nicely done sope

[EXI]

niiice. try to make all your letters the same size. and the period at the end could be a little bigger and connected to the e. nicely done sope

^^^ First ever "nicely done" haha thanks Fame, what letters are off even though? I wanna fix this up because I love this throwup

[FuckTheFame]

heres what i kind of think you were going for
i would have done a better one but i didnt really want to do all the work for you

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0994.jpg

[shore 616]

i put this up on another forum, a quick rough guide on how you start on your throws,

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC01530.jpg

Rough being the main factor here,

[drOping]

FRSH- um just take a little more time...clean it up a bit and straighten stuff out
http://i51.tinypic.com/23i80oy.jpg

[LeaksOne]

ive never understood your tag.....

[shore 616]

FRSH- um just take a little more time...clean it up a bit and straighten stuff out


thats not my throw captain observation, read what it says above it,

[ReSeM]

well i suggest taking that down because thats just bad
if every toy got their throw idea from that there are going to be some shitty toys out there
plus it doesn't even look like a throw it looks like a fat straight with the exception of the H
if you decide to help someone put some more time and effort into it or toys will get the wrong idea

[shore 616]

^hahahaha,

[EXI]

heres what i kind of think you were going for
i would have done a better one but i didnt really want to do all the work for you

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0994.jpg

ohh okay, so ust letters be the same heighth etc.

[elpendejo123]

sope i like ur letters, try to keep it symmetrical.

crits, comments: this is my first draft of these styles.

[elpendejo123]

touched it up a little

[Sbal]

Not really feeling it, round out the bottoms that you made straight

[del4sel]

I like that cele shit...I like to do my letters uniform shape like that too. It looks fine with straight line on bottom but if you curve all of the letters on the bottom is is even fresherrr

[elpendejo123]

u guys mean curve inside? or like round it out

[fyskl]

i agree with del4sel...using that uniform shape really make it look like its from the same font set/family..id say try n kinda build from those n see what else you come up with like by rounding it out more, stretching it taller, etc...

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo141.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

that throw is dope as shit.

[cushcota94]

Throwup...

[MoganOne]

Just commin up with a Throwie messing around with some shit stilll needs a lot of work... I am happy with where my M is going... http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001737.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001842.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001917.jpg

[Gyse]

^build off the first one. Make the rest of the letters as big as the M, and try to keep it simple like the M.

oh yeah, that name is kind of taken though. Write it if you want, but I wouldn't paint freights with that name.

[MoganOne]

I see what you are saying... The thing is I want to try to make the M in the second and third one look fresh... Does anybody have some input on how I should do the middle arch on the "M" in the second and third pics?? After I perfect this throw on paper I am going to toss that shit everywhere I can lol

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002010.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002021.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919002031.jpg
Crits yo