Throwies

[LeaksOne]

that throw is dope as shit.

Fuck yes!!!!

[stone01]

ha ok well this is my first throwie put up on bs but here it goes my names prude
the first one is iin pencil so you cant really see it
9694
the second one is ok not much practice put into it, though i like how i do my p sorta make it into a skull :D
9695

[CuCCui]

yeh sumthin like that...just have fun with it...if it's not fun then you are compulsively stressing for no good reason...

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/5470/cootr.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/i/cootr.jpg/)

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[stone01]

Cuccui that looks good but I would try to make the duplicate letters look more alike

[Get Rekt!]

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0922001814.jpg

[stone01]

looks pretty good imo everything matches up
c is a little off looking to me though maybe you could tweak that a bit


new name. new throw, check it :D
9700
crits?

[Gyse]

cuccui- I actually like that a lot. I think it's the C's that does it for me. Make the first U more like the 2nd, and make the I more simple. Or don't bother, if you write kerst.

Scam- get another name. Assuming you won't, that C is bad, make the hold smaller or just a line. Get your other letters on point, they need work too.
Oh and your tag is weak.

Cass- Thats an ugly A. Work on that. The cross bar of it isnt working for you.

[CuCCui]

Thanks gyse...i write a few different words depending on the mood i'm in..cuccui makes a good throw I think,terribl;e peice and terrible hand,but fun throw...the cool thing about the words i chose= i never been told to write something else

Cush I like it!!!!!!!!!!

Ibu I don't hate it,even though I should after last weekend,but don't

Stone I wanna have a pm chat with you

[drOping]

http://i56.tinypic.com/17wtjo.jpg

[stone01]

droping if you made the points all end at the same height it would look a lot better imo

alright made the "a" different i think it looks alot better like this
9711

[IbuprofenTablets]

Crop your pictures, brah.
No one wants to see your mom's toes in the corner of the pic.

[stone01]

brothers toes haha almost the same thing though he is a little girlish haha but I don't feel like croping all my pictures out it's not like someone is going to find me from my bros feet haha
Real feedback would be awesome though :D

[dangeri]

Bars seem to get thicker as u go to the right slek, nice shape if u even it up tho,

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1020.jpg

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1021.jpg
^^something new i've been trying lately
i just painted it last night
ill try and get a flick sometime

[MakeItTakeIt]

That purple one is aight. Idk what that thing on the left is, and there's a bit too much goin on for my taste. If you're tryin to do a small to big, do it gradually, but right now it looks like 2 separate throwups. Letter structure aint too shabby though imo. The bottom one is too sloppy to crit, do it bigger.

new shit.
http://i55.tinypic.com/292binl.jpg

[eshen]

^^ Thats pretty good. What is it? Paint pens?

[Flawless Victory]

HAHAHA, only douchebags live in Ann Arbor.

[eshen]

Ah, always nice to meet a fellow Ann Arborite!

[eshen]

I'm working on a new name.

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1036.jpg

[stone01]

esh. nice i like the s with the fat top, get out and put that up on a wall
FTF. im guessing thats sbu? i really cant tell too much what the first letter is but i think its a s? lol but yeah that looks good ive always like the bubble or what ever u put around ur shit though

[stone01]

9711
bump fir crits..?

[Flawless Victory]

Ah, always nice to meet a fellow Ann Arborite!
Nah buddy, I paint in Detroit, not A2.

[FuckTheFame]

@stone1 - its actually a you. i right youth

[eshen]

@FlawlessVictory: I'm just playing with you man. What do you write? I may have seen it.

[Flawless Victory]

I'll PM you.

[eshen]

On the "C" where the top and bottom come together on the right side. Take out that little curl on the top that indicates that it still goes on behind the bottom part. It works for some styles, but I think it looks a little bit out of place with the rest.

It's a really nit picky thing I know, and I might just be seeing things, but thats just my two cents for now.

[MakeItTakeIt]

^^ Thats pretty good. What is it? Paint pens?

uhhh yeah. lol

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1039.jpg
i've been messing around with a lot of different styles lately
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1042.jpg
here are some hands

[eshen]

The 3-D on the top is a shadow, but on the bottom it's an extrusion. Is that on purpose?

[FuckTheFame]

i really dont know what i was thinking with the 3d

[eshen]

It's not a big deal, I still think it looks pretty nice. I like the top of you T.

[stone01]

damn looks good to me i can tell its a y now haha
that 3D looks dope to me though haha looks like u did it when u were super fuckin burnt or sumthin :D

[FuckTheFame]

its just an old drawing
its fun to check out all the different styles you've tried just from going through old shit

[ChadWarden]

so fuckin' alternative!

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo16-1.jpg

[One Evil]

redeyes thought you had a better style then that bro... what happen..

[Invert]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/429/scan0008l.jpg

Some stuff i did in one of my Geo classes today, had to bum markers off random people in class.

Any advice ? (I know they're bad)

[aekone]

Not exactly looking for crits. Just wanted to see what you guys think.
Sorry for the bad picture quality. It's all I got.
Chuke.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo2.jpg

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg

[ReSeM]

invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no distortion just regular bubble letters
aek- good shit you got there. honestly idk why you're in the toy threads
WB- good shit nice and simple throw and good lookin straight

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0027-2.jpg
never ask friends to outline your stuff while taking notes in drivers ed.

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0032-1.jpg
R backbone got too big gonna work it later

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0035-2.jpg
another slap ruined by terrible M's

[Invert]

invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no

http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8129/scan0012la.jpg

So just stick with these for a while?

[ReSeM]

yup then experiment
do some straights and get a hold of letter structure

[DTE_PRONTO]

cann i get some critz/anything that can be positively helpful no scrutiny

[eshen]

The 3-D on the top line of your z is facing the wrong way.
This next part is just my oppinion about what looks good. See the way that the lines pinch in the middle of the K and the Left part of the N? If they're on purpose, make it exaggerated so it's doesn't look likes it was a mistake.

[DTE_PRONTO]

The 3-D on the top line of your z is facing the wrong way.
This next part is just my oppinion about what looks good. See the way that the lines pinch in the middle of the K and the Left part of the N? If they're on purpose, make it exaggerated so it's doesn't look likes it was a mistake.

thankz and yeah i see i do that cause i think if i woulda made tha K look like tha other letterz but i thought it would jus look like a 1 combined letter but i c watt u sayin tho if u wanta c tha actual pic then go 2 my page n look in tha random album cause i woulda put tha actual size of tha pic but im not tryna take up a page then everybody tellin me ta make it smaller lol but anyway tho i see watt you're sayin thankz

[C-Lurk]

http://i55.tinypic.com/ilym1l.jpg
just been messin around, whatchu guys think?
i traced it from a sketch, btw.

[FuckTheFame]

props...for the cowboy bebop sig

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo134.jpg

[eshen]

Crits please.
-Thank you

[ReSeM]

invert- simple buddy no wavy letters, no spikes, no distortion just regular bubble letters
aek- good shit you got there. honestly idk why you're in the toy threads
WB- good shit nice and simple throw and good lookin straight

[img]
never ask friends to outline your stuff while taking notes in drivers ed.

[img]
R backbone got too big gonna work it later

[img]
another slap ruined by terrible M's
bump 4 crits

[LeaksOne]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo134.jpg

good shit!!

[ARRA159]

http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6349/img20100930145340.jpg

trying to work on my effects, waht yall think?

[NosE2]

wow. everything is terrible..fill, letters, etc... sorry bro. try some straight letters.. i dont see any effects..

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0928001516a.jpg

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0927000014_0001.jpg
Shitty pic but solid throw

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0929001807.jpg

[ARRA159]

wow. everything is terrible..fill, letters, etc... sorry bro. try some straight letters.. i dont see any effects..

lmao. thanks for the crits

[murph3pt]

Help.http://i53.tinypic.com/vzggfq.jpg

[Invert]

lmao. thanks for the crits

Just work on your letters first before you try adding anything else in.

[Saker2000]

Just commin up with a Throwie messing around with some shit stilll needs a lot of work... I am happy with where my M is going... http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001737.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001842.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001917.jpg

first one is pimp i like the M its got flow. the second and third arent that bad but
its still getting flowy. word.
meow

[Masocre]

My first ever throw up

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/MasonKerr/IMG00226.jpg

[ReadyToStrike]

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5258/image1sh.jpg

ohh shit i didnt know ewok posted in here

[FuckTheFame]

that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
...noice

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1094.jpg
random throwie. the u is a fatty haha

[Masocre]

that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
...noice

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1094.jpg
random throwie. the u is a fatty haha

That throwie would look official on a wall if the U had the same proportions as the other letters.

[Get Rekt!]

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1004002019.jpg crits please..

[Res-tooth Slims]

how wonderfully generic...the A needs work and the middle connection of the M too....apart from that its alright...add some special get rekt steez to it and make sure all the bottom parts of the throw are in proportion (aka the same size) aswell and it would be a banger

[syeaoner]

skam were u from thunderbay? if so hit me up :P

[Masocre]

My first ever throw up

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/MasonKerr/IMG00226.jpg

Feedback ~

[MakeItTakeIt]

Practice on paper before you go smearing poop on walls.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1006000032.jpg
trying a new e maybe

[ReSeM]

it doesn't flow with the rest

[FuckTheFame]

random bombs
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1007.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1006.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0973.jpg

[smile =(]

well, heres a throwie i just did...
keepin it simples..
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/smile-2.png?t=1286479877
oh yes, crits please.

[ReSeM]

http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0041.jpg
bored in spanish 1

[Get Rekt!]

okay this one kinda sucks. the s and c arent amazing but i feel like i can usually do those decent. i need somebody to give me some advice on how to make the a look less like an r. and how to make the m not suck.

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1007001234.jpg

[Sbal]

Your M is an N, but for the A, just bring the round part all the way up to the cut

Horus- Proportions
Moner- I liked your other M better, the e is too tall, and the hole in is should have an opening like in the O, but it's still dope.
Smile- That's pretty sick for Paint. Keep the dot above the i away from the L, and also, the L and E get really fat towards the end.
New stuff I'm messin with. Crit me please.
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/3968/dsc04467d.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6342/dsc04468n.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1146/dsc04469e.jpg
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5471/dsc04471s.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7351/dsc04472x.jpg

[MakeItTakeIt]

Smile, I don't like how the dot of the I is floating on the L. Also, try and make all your letters the same height and general proportions. Gettin there though, definitely keep at it.

Sbal, the second one down has the most potential, also its the only one with a halfway decent A. Definitely go simpler and clean it up though, I think it'd look way better. Just be careful not to make your letters bigger as you go unless it's on purpose and you can flow it.

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

sbal - whats up been a long while nice progression...
ra-that top left one is nice and clean with good flow diggin it

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1012002345.jpg
What's good in the hood

[hab112]

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9083/snapshot20101013.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20101013.jpg/)

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[hab112]

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9083/snapshot20101013.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20101013.jpg/)

[x2050]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/24837295256_ORIG.jpg


First Throwie.
Feedback?

[ReSeM]

go simpler

[testing.]

Like that style, mogan. Really like the E

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/1012102219.jpg
Just a quick little thing

[Sbal]

Give crits to get crits thats how it works.

[MoganOne]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/24837295256_ORIG.jpg


First Throwie.
Feedback?

Try working your color first and then outline it with black... watch some vids on how real trhows are done

[MoganOne]

also loose that tag and start simple... it looks like u drizzled chocolate syrup on your pad

[IllLogic]

sbal nice progression

[smile =(]

might start writing 'slow'
crits please.
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/slow.png?t=1287260321

[dubbed]

not bad. the W is like sagging though. i hate writing with L's its hard to give them style

[H1P30N3R]

hollow

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0050.jpg

[dubbed]

ehh sorry but i dont really like it hipe. your H is pretty original but keep working on it.
the rest of your letters arent terrible but they def need more flow

[H1P30N3R]

thanks i'm still working on different letter variations that's why its just hollow less paint wasted lol

[Gyse]

Looks like you filled it and all the paint got absorbed by the cement.

Anyway, like dubbed said, original H but it needs work. Just keep drawing it on paper making little changes until you get it. The other letters are pretty solid, they just need to be tweaked so they look better.

[Gyse]

Like that style, mogan. Really like the E

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/1012102219.jpg
Just a quick little thing

If you're from new york, keep doing what you're doing. Go paint that, and put 'the real' next to it.

[dubbed]

^lol

[H1P30N3R]

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-4.jpg

[Gyse]

Try flipping the H, like this. It could be mistaken for a K like you have it. I liked that loop thing you were doing before, it needed work but it was original.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4544/hipe.png (http://img233.imageshack.us/i/hipe.png/)

[H1P30N3R]

thanks see what your saying, I'll try that out. I like other h with some work it could get better

[Flawless Victory]

Joey Moore is a crackhead.

[LeaksOne]

damn joey and his addictions.

[Sbal]

I like the cursive CRIP LIFE above it

[x2050]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25026068153_ORIG.jpg

First simple throwie on the streets.
Crits *more than* welcome

[Get Rekt!]

crits

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1018001216.jpg

[ReSeM]

everything looks fine except for the S
do more with it. Experiment a little.

[Sbal]

FAke start it all over.

[x2050]

Anyone care to elaborate on starting over? Kind of a broad direction..

[ReSeM]

back to the drawing board kid new letters everything ie. start over
start over is a very succinct statement

[HORSEthefan]

Whats up guys, havent posted in a while, thought id share my re-worked throwie..

but crits first...

Hipe, the H with the loop is dope, dont lose that. the rest of the letters are kinda plain though. id try working another loop in somewhere like the E, kinda balance it out y'know?

Fake... stick to paper for a while man, wasting paint and giving yourself a reputation for throwing down junk early is a bad decision. work on general letter form, make the K look more like a K and work on clean lines, ect.

Scam, the 3d is real clean, but i think both legs of the A needs to be more symmetrical, same with the M they look a little lopsided when compared to the S and the C.

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5726/picture0017b.jpg

http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4537/picture0018m.jpg

[Get Rekt!]

eh sorry man but im just not feeling that at all.

[PREA672]

i am feeling it.. its better than anything you ever posted ^

[Fury]

I don't like the S, but the rest is cool. Just make sure you don't cut off the bottoms, otherwise you'll just get used to it and never do them on walls.

[Moon]

I don't... I just don't like it. Furthermore, how fast can you write that and make it look good at the same time?

[Sbal]

Anyone care to elaborate on starting over? Kind of a broad direction..

look through the tot throwies thread from the beggining to get ideas.

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo147.jpg

[MoganOne]

nice snore

[H1P30N3R]

eros- only two things I dislike are the open bottom and the s narrowing down
snore- nice and steezy

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1888.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1909.jpg

[elpendejo123]

pretty good shit guys.
crits?comments?

[elpendejo123]

double postin ftw

[H1P30N3R]

lose the shines and stitches keep it simple

[FuckTheFame]

a lil treat for you guys
anyone down in the buffalo area?
viruz should know about these dudes
GQ is legit


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5103726945_3e5776d39c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726945/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1401/5104319378_54bbb9e851.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319378/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1394/5103726879_9ab61a94a2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726879/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4111/5103726745_23a2761505.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726745/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1319/5104319070_e0c681833c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319070/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1060/5104318938_0f5f7d17de.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104318938/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1202/5103726435_1f60bdb3c9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726435/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1351/5104319208_aa7d80dec0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319208/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1182/5104319012_a558447411.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319012/)

[murph3pt]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

u draw this up in FOCUS? pay attention to mr.Bald-trek

[LOGIK321]

Try flipping the H, like this. It could be mistaken for a K like you have it. I liked that loop thing you were doing before, it needed work but it was original.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4544/hipe.png (http://img233.imageshack.us/i/hipe.png/)

i agree with Gyse, flip it!

[HORSEthefan]

Snore, youve got some skill for sure, but id like to see it all more even. i dunno if that fits your style but w/e.

Cele, im just not feelin it. too stubby and too much overlap.

Tron, keep doin what your doin. you dont need help from me lol.

Eh, nothing much new from me, i closed off the bottom and lost the little top spikes.


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1387/picture0019z.jpg

any crits?

[PREA672]

ES = eastside

[Sbal]

or a shoe company

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1387/picture0019z.jpg

any crits?
I took a crack at your 2-letter.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo150.jpg

I also took a crack at your whole throw.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo153.jpg

[dubbed]

is anyone here good at throwing M's. those shits are hard lol. im also having problems with K's and R's

[HORSEthefan]

ES = eastside

haha, im in a chill stoner city in canada. i dont need to worry about someone thinking i rep eastside. the E and the S just seemed to mirror each other a lot, so i made a quick two letter throw.

Thanks for tryin my throwie Ibuprofen, you've obvs been doing this a lot longer than me and i always like seeing my name written in different styles. im startin to dig the S underlining your other letters.

Anyone have any basic tips for 3d and drop shadows? ive tried and they just look... i dunno.. off. Is it just lots of practice and messing around?

[elpendejo123]

anyone down for an exchange?

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101638.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101643.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1023102138.jpg

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101649.jpg

[MoganOne]

or this "e"???
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101950-1.jpg

[elpendejo123]

the first E in green had the best flow out of any of them, in my opinion :P

[MoganOne]

So it Appears... lol word up I will work with that one

[FuckTheFame]

your n kind of looks like a k or an h
itd be nice to see a cap N with a slant like the rest of your letters
second green one is best in my opinion

[IbuprofenTablets]

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo152.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

Meh, I didn't have any markers near me at the time, so I just used a pencil.
I'm too lazy to edit the picture, or trace it with a marker. Sorry, I know how bad you want to diss my shit.

[LiViD]

Mone- the n does kinda look like a k but otherwise its lookin pretty ill, got any painted?

critz..?

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1654/img0231qg.jpg (http://img837.imageshack.us/i/img0231qg.jpg/)

[MoganOne]

Yeah I figured the second green one looks the best... the N actually looks more like a N... I do Have one painted I will PM it to you...

[x2050]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25425070154_ORIG.jpg
Took the advice and did a whole re-vamp. New name, etc.
Crits *more than* welcome

[MoganOne]

What does that even say bro???

[x2050]

Gaze - Lowercase g and e.

[Vøid]

12901

Crits pls, no offensive shit. :rolleyes:

[Vacant]

You still gotta work on that D I think... It looks ALOT better than when you first showed me...

[AnonymousWaaa]

1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/CSC_0005.jpg

[Gyse]

^^^^
http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/

If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.

[MoganOne]

1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/CSC_0005.jpg

They both look like pretty legit one liners to me... but the lowercase E is ringing a bell IMO

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo25-2.jpg

[AnonymousWaaa]

^^^^
http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/

If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.

I'll stil write it, im a UK writer, and the name means alot more to me than just a name :) and thanks for the crits, will keep working on it

[Zookyook]

stuck wtf do u write?! lol meyor here heri? nice throws either way....

mone i like that n from the last page, bring the split in the top to the left a bit and itll look less like a K i think...

some throwshit
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1081/5126391212_02b248a1df.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1326/5126392078_bcc01d87af.jpg

[Gyse]

heri- H needs work, the E in the left one is best, your capital Rs arent doing it, the lowercase one is good though. Your I is ok, needs work though.
nemor- bottom one looks a lot better. work on the M and put the R a little lower.

[GnarR]

some of my first sketches.. i cant really give crits because i have just started and i wouldnt be able to give any thoughtful insight. im pretty sure both of these names are taken, but im more focused on learning and developing some sort of a style. Im having a hard time with letters like "R,I,B,V,G, and K" when i try a think, bubble style which i currently like most, any ideas? thank you!

[Gyse]

you're off to a better start than most. You still suck, but you're not throwing arrows all over and shit. Basically keep doing this, and playing with different letter combos for a while. Go a little simpler on that M and lose the notch on the O.

[Vøid]

12962 crits?

[MoganOne]

Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple

[Vøid]

Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple

Which letter?

[H1P30N3R]

void-keep all your letters simple and have a similar style lose the shines and color just practice your letters by doing outlines .

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0052.jpg

[Zookyook]

hip hop is a culture not a genre of music....

void and hipe, the faster u do throws the cleaner theyll look.... it looks like u guys move the marker really slow and without much flow... ull get style once u practice that over and over.... and over

[Vøid]

Alright thanks. I'll post another when i think its better.

[GnarR]

H1P3, i like the style you're using but the "i" looks out of place, try to make it blend in with the other letters. it just kinda stands out. I like the two on the top

[x2050]

Done using the last of the finest dollar general paint...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25658866354_ORIG.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

stick to pen and paper .. the paint doesn't explain the wack letters.

[Vøid]

13005

Any better Zook? if not any crits?

[H1P30N3R]

toy throw battle
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0054.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0053.jpg

[Zookyook]

tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

[Vøid]

tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

Thanks Zook. Nice crits there. Any legends out there that have V in it?

[Zookyook]

revok, sever, savior, solve, vizie, thats all i got right now... check the artist list on the freights link on here... ill make it easy for u... (http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewArtistList/style/109//)

throwie for talkin out me arse...
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1201/5134450887_d683750fde_z.jpg

[GnarR]

Zook i really like the way you write your letters, that kinda the style im working towards, all smushed up and round. right now im just doing bars and really simple shit, how long did it take you to develop that style?

EDIT:
ive been doing this bullshit for 3 hours, what now!?
http://i52.tinypic.com/2lbictd.jpg

[ReSeM]

zook paint that shit

gnarr work on your bars they are all over the place

[dubbed]

zook thats a mean throw, fukn sick

[GnarR]

as in make them even? what specifically? which letters in general suck the most?

[EXI]

gnar your bars arent the same width etc, your O in record is bigger than your c, r, etc. the top of the I's are too small to fit your letters, do this. draw out the letter. example. you draw 4 bars for E, 3 for I 3 for A etc.

[Phat 2]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs475.ash2/74885_169279283098989_100000507545549_477293_52242 01_n.jpg

[GnarR]

thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

[EXI]

thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

sure. and post it in blackbook section instead of of this, this is strictly for throw ups :)

[NosE2]

yo phat im diggin those 2 letter throws, pretty fuckin clean, i just dont like that tumor thing on the main bar in your p where the sdf is. and i would post this shit in the characters thread but i will get burned so hard, i just started to try characters today for the first time out of 3 years of graff =////
http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8144/imgp3300.jpg
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4985/imgp3299.jpg

[MoganOne]

Your throwie is solid as fuck which i'm sure you already know...But... that rat is retarded hahahaha :D

[NosE2]

hahahah i knooo dude thanks though, im tryin to learn how to draw characters n shit

[LiViD]

critz..?

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1654/img0231qg.jpg (http://img837.imageshack.us/i/img0231qg.jpg/)

bumpin for tha critz...

[Zookyook]

zook paint that shit
i do lol, like 30 of em last weekend.... cant go back and flick em though, gotta get me a flash on my phone..... thanks for the props people

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs475.ash2/74885_169279283098989_100000507545549_477293_52242 01_n.jpg
these are baller, nice repetition phat

zewl the top sloppy ones are lookin slick

[Phat 2]

thanks boys, these are inspired by one of my favorite throwers, Korn.
any other crits besides zewl's.

gotta give crits to get em, so livid, u got something there, the idea's there you just need to fix it up a bit, just some modifications here and there and you basically got urself a decent throw.
I'm talkin bout the two lines that are going down from the top of both the s and a to their middles. don't make it touch their middles, let these 2 bits be part of the letters instead of having them look like they're just glued to em if u know what i mean.
make the line in the middle of the y run towards the middle of the 3 bars' intersection, and have the top right bar of the y be straight to match the s and a instead of it being wavy.
an uppercase e would look better too. or else just use a regular letter, no throw characters, coz it seems ure not good at em

keep gettin up man

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100344-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100402-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100406-1.jpg

[AnonymousWaaa]

Crits? advice?
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/DSC_0001-1.jpg

[LiViD]

thanks phat thats sum legit critz i understand you when ur talkin about the middle lines touching the bottem and ill work on that but the Y is actually a T and i know the wavy shit is whack but ill keep workin it

Mone- looks good man but mabey cut out that little end on the N unless ur usin the E that you used on the green fill throw
Love- dont try the 3d shit yet just get down to basics with ur throw and use a marker

[ReSeM]

its drop shadow LIVID and a fine one at that

also solid one liner LOVE. I think you could come a little harder on the L and E
don't worry about doing it in marker pen is fine as long as you get a nice feel of it and are really consistent which I can tell you are
the added drip bubbles are unnecessary
this is my opinion so don't take it serious but i think you would be better off writing LOV cause imo LOVE is unoriginal

[MoganOne]

Or change the V to something else... Like a K... LOKE lol :)

[Diamond]

http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m145/hourra/grf/dime.jpg
one of the first

[Sbal]

I kinda like it except that the E could be a little closer, and a straight line in the D might look better

[Phat 2]

that looks boring dime, try a little bit of creativity than just primitive bubble letters

[Diamond]

thanks guys!
gonna keep trying out some less boring boring letters, although I tried to play safe :P

[EXI]

i suck at throw ups i knokw..

[NosE2]

this is fun, i get to fuck with r's.
http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/6356/imgp3315.jpg

[EXI]

this is fun, i get to fuck with r's.
http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/6356/imgp3315.jpg

haha i wanna bite that e w l bad because i like that style but don't know what to write..

[H1P30N3R]

exi - dont sketch your throws jus let the pen flow
nose- that r i nasty and the rest of your regular letters are obviously solid

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0062.jpg

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6908.jpg the big red one crits? does anyone write SOIR?

[MoganOne]

i suck at throw ups i knokw..

Man that has got to be the stupidest looking "R" I have ever seen... LOL...
No but real talk. You should go check out the Throwups forum in the picture gallery... Try to find a really easy way to write right your letters and stick with it for awhile... It takes practice man but if you keep at it you will develop flow in no time

[EXI]

Man that has got to be the stupidest looking "R" I have ever seen... LOL...
No but real talk. You should go check out the Throwups forum in the picture gallery... Try to find a really easy way to write right your letters and stick with it for awhile... It takes practice man but if you keep at it you will develop flow in no time

yeah i know it is LOL.. and thanks man ill go over there right

[EXI]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289070543432.jpg

better than before lol

[MoganOne]

Were you trying to go for a Wu tang look with that "W"

[Task977]

if you saw this in the street would you cap it/cross it out?
edit: sorry for shitty image quality
http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/4606/scan0001gc.jpg (http://img836.imageshack.us/i/scan0001gc.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[EXI]

Were you trying to go for a Wu tang look with that "W"

not really, i just cant think of another W, all that came to my mind.. I LOVE Zewl's but that would be a hardcore bite.. help mogan :D

[air707]

i really like that soir throw, and i wouldn't cross you out jestr. stay up

anyway here's mine- sorry its so big

http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9686/img9349b.jpg

[MoganOne]

I will See what I can do For you bro...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101808-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101806-1.jpg

[MoganOne]

Here try this W without the Triangle... Actually you should try redoing this whole piece and claim it as yours
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101924-1.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

mogan -I like that second e and n better myself although they both are pretty solid. Just dig the square kick out thing or w/e you wanna call it

that e on the rewl is sick

[Phat 2]

first off, exi, the guy right here is called zewl and the best name you come up with writing is rewl ??? wtf lol
2nd:

if you saw this in the street would you cap it/cross it out?
my first question is: if YOU saw that on the street and if it wasnt yours, would YOU cap it ?
my second question is: if I did, would you get back at me n mess with my bombs? (if you wouldnt, then hell yeah I would cap u :P)

and soir, u should check some french heads, maybe there's someone with that name in a french speaking country that does. it means "evening" in french, u prolly know that though

[H1P30N3R]

A cleaned up version ... Am i in the ball park of having a good idea or scratch this totally?

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0064.jpg

[EXI]

this was talkd about in blackbook section. i was iffy about using this as my name for tgat reason. but the name meanz alot becauase my dad died june this year and rewl are his inittials.

[MoganOne]

A cleaned up version ... Am i in the ball park of having a good idea or scratch this totally?

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0064.jpg
Dude I don't know about the H man... THe PE looks pretty legit

[Stigma02]

im gonna fatten up the s a bithttp://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6909.jpg crits? hipe get the H to look for like the P and E and it would be fire

[Village Idiot]

13295

[H1P30N3R]

thanks for the feedback mogan ill try somethin different with the h and i

[EXI]

13295

im sorry, but idk what it says :/.. it's way to messy to me, but if thats your style role with it..
crits please
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289078146817.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289078146606.jpg

[Village Idiot]

im sorry, but idk what it says :/.. it's way to messy to me, but if thats your style role with it..
crits please
[/IMG]
much prefer the drop shadow over the 3d. think with those sharp points it doesn't work so well. lose the line in the middle of the E. makes its almost look like an i. and if your going to use some rude materials like highlighters or something at least try and be as clean as possible. i have nothing against using materials like that, in fact i like doing shit like that, but really man if you are going to use that type of stuff be tight, otherwise it just looks like you really could care less.

[Phat 2]

village idiot, this looks interesting. caught my attention!
explain to us?

and rewl, sorry to hear mate. safe

[Village Idiot]

village idiot, this looks interesting. caught my attention!
explain to us?

and rewl, sorry to hear mate. safe

its a PM1.

[EXI]

phat, what you mean by safe? and village with the highlighters i really was just messing around lol

[MoganOne]

13295

this is pretty dope

[Phat 2]

as in, "it's all good" or like "no beef" yknow? I dunno, it's just a word heh

[Zookyook]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101924-1.jpg
everything anyone posted after this RE...... needs work lol

[H1P30N3R]

soir -all the extra add ons are not needed I see your trying to make the o and i flow together but the 2 letters look way to similar
rewt - it is coming together still needs tweaked and lines need to be cleaner

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0066.jpg

[Village Idiot]

everything anyone posted after this RE...... needs work lol

you got any actual suggestions?

[NosE2]

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7118/imgp3324.jpg

[Village Idiot]

NosE2 that is nice. not feeling some of the other stuff i've seen you post so far but this is real nice.

[EXI]

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7118/imgp3324.jpg
lol, just for shits and giggles
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289193504437.jpg

[NosE2]

lol, that w made me choke on my tallboy. haha. lose that arrowww thing. and thanks village, actually, whats weird is i WASNT feelin that throw. just tryin to develop more flow you know. rhyminnnn and on timeeee innn my workplace, get rid of this sadface.

[EXI]

haha its a W that Mone gave me, his is probably better than mine xD

[Village Idiot]

13295
no crit on this?

[Phat 2]

it flows nice, I love its feel, but its HIGHLY illegible... do somethig about that man
people wanna know what name to put in this following phrase's blank space:
"fuck damn, that ______ has some wicked wicked throws!"

feel me?

[Kick-OH]

New to the forum, I believe this is where this belong but just some shit I whipped up lately,

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at1104.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at11052.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff4.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff2.jpg

[NosE2]

I guess I gotta' be the bearer of bad news. Start over homie, completely. I see you put a lot of time into those drawings, some of the characters are pretty legit. Start doing straight letters.

And yo EXI, you said that Mone gave you that W? And so you should use it just because Mone drew it? No offense to mone, but I'm pretty sure that everyone on here would agree with me, that the W is horrible.

[EXI]

yeah i know just idk waht else to use haha oh well ill figure it out

[Flawless Victory]

The idea behind it is dope i think, but it doesn't look good with the other letters.

[Titmawz]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/I_use_Telecaster/IMG000012.jpg

First one, like the name. The color combination is cool as well. I gotta get down with some Ts.

[LeaksOne]

New to the forum, I believe this is where this belong but just some shit I whipped up lately,

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at1104.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at11052.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff4.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff2.jpg

All terrible, start over simple.

[Phillip McDougall]

Did this ***** really just write "YNOT LIVES?"

[Titmawz]

Yeah I did man, every piece that I will do is dedicated to the memory of JC... RIP.

[Phillip McDougall]

Were you a close friend of his?

[Titmawz]

Ive met him long time ago. And alotta respect for him as an artist.

[cg22stoner]

13389

[cg22stoner]

What you guys think? I need some criticism cause this is going right on the front of a perfect building.

[LeaksOne]

Pretty bad.

[-Empty-Can-]

pretty dope imo.


no. it sucks

[cg22stoner]

Ok. Thanks guys, ill start over.

[Phat 2]

dont do it kid

[cg22stoner]

Dont do what?

[cg22stoner]

Is it really that terrible? You guys act like its the worst thing youve ever seen.