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ARRA159
10-01-2010, 01:48 PM
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/6349/img20100930145340.jpg

trying to work on my effects, waht yall think?

NosE2
10-01-2010, 04:34 PM
wow. everything is terrible..fill, letters, etc... sorry bro. try some straight letters.. i dont see any effects..

MoganOne
10-01-2010, 05:14 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0928001516a.jpg

MoganOne
10-01-2010, 05:14 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0927000014_0001.jpg
Shitty pic but solid throw

MoganOne
10-01-2010, 05:15 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0929001807.jpg

ARRA159
10-01-2010, 06:14 PM
wow. everything is terrible..fill, letters, etc... sorry bro. try some straight letters.. i dont see any effects..

lmao. thanks for the crits

murph3pt
10-01-2010, 09:37 PM
Help.http://i53.tinypic.com/vzggfq.jpg

Invert
10-01-2010, 10:31 PM
lmao. thanks for the crits

Just work on your letters first before you try adding anything else in.

Saker2000
10-02-2010, 02:58 PM
Just commin up with a Throwie messing around with some shit stilll needs a lot of work... I am happy with where my M is going... http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001737.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001842.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0919001917.jpg

first one is pimp i like the M its got flow. the second and third arent that bad but
its still getting flowy. word.
meow

Masocre
10-02-2010, 05:25 PM
My first ever throw up

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/MasonKerr/IMG00226.jpg

ReadyToStrike
10-03-2010, 12:56 AM
http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/5258/image1sh.jpg

ohh shit i didnt know ewok posted in here

FuckTheFame
10-03-2010, 01:13 AM
that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
...noice

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1094.jpg
random throwie. the u is a fatty haha

Masocre
10-03-2010, 12:23 PM
that shits fucking dope
connect the dots is giving me a seizure
...noice

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1094.jpg
random throwie. the u is a fatty haha

That throwie would look official on a wall if the U had the same proportions as the other letters.

Get Rekt!
10-04-2010, 08:24 PM
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1004002019.jpg crits please..

Res-tooth Slims
10-05-2010, 04:56 PM
how wonderfully generic...the A needs work and the middle connection of the M too....apart from that its alright...add some special get rekt steez to it and make sure all the bottom parts of the throw are in proportion (aka the same size) aswell and it would be a banger

syeaoner
10-05-2010, 05:05 PM
skam were u from thunderbay? if so hit me up :P

Masocre
10-06-2010, 12:10 PM
My first ever throw up

http://i172.photobucket.com/albums/w9/MasonKerr/IMG00226.jpg

Feedback ~

MakeItTakeIt
10-06-2010, 03:43 PM
Practice on paper before you go smearing poop on walls.

MoganOne
10-06-2010, 07:03 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1006000032.jpg
trying a new e maybe

ReSeM
10-06-2010, 07:12 PM
it doesn't flow with the rest

FuckTheFame
10-07-2010, 02:23 AM
random bombs
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1007.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1006.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0973.jpg

smile =(
10-07-2010, 03:32 PM
well, heres a throwie i just did...
keepin it simples..
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/smile-2.png?t=1286479877
oh yes, crits please.

ReSeM
10-07-2010, 09:17 PM
http://i940.photobucket.com/albums/ad246/r33m0ner/CIMG0041.jpg
bored in spanish 1

Get Rekt!
10-07-2010, 09:24 PM
okay this one kinda sucks. the s and c arent amazing but i feel like i can usually do those decent. i need somebody to give me some advice on how to make the a look less like an r. and how to make the m not suck.

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1007001234.jpg

Sbal
10-07-2010, 11:08 PM
Your M is an N, but for the A, just bring the round part all the way up to the cut

Horus- Proportions
Moner- I liked your other M better, the e is too tall, and the hole in is should have an opening like in the O, but it's still dope.
Smile- That's pretty sick for Paint. Keep the dot above the i away from the L, and also, the L and E get really fat towards the end.
New stuff I'm messin with. Crit me please.
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/3968/dsc04467d.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6342/dsc04468n.jpg
http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1146/dsc04469e.jpg
http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/5471/dsc04471s.jpg
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7351/dsc04472x.jpg

MakeItTakeIt
10-08-2010, 05:04 AM
Smile, I don't like how the dot of the I is floating on the L. Also, try and make all your letters the same height and general proportions. Gettin there though, definitely keep at it.

Sbal, the second one down has the most potential, also its the only one with a halfway decent A. Definitely go simpler and clean it up though, I think it'd look way better. Just be careful not to make your letters bigger as you go unless it's on purpose and you can flow it.

RADAWG
10-09-2010, 10:19 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

H1P30N3R
10-10-2010, 12:28 AM
sbal - whats up been a long while nice progression...
ra-that top left one is nice and clean with good flow diggin it

MoganOne
10-13-2010, 01:28 AM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1012002345.jpg
What's good in the hood

hab112
10-13-2010, 06:42 PM
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9083/snapshot20101013.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20101013.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

hab112
10-13-2010, 06:43 PM
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9083/snapshot20101013.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20101013.jpg/)

x2050
10-13-2010, 11:51 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/24837295256_ORIG.jpg


First Throwie.
Feedback?

ReSeM
10-14-2010, 07:33 AM
go simpler

testing.
10-14-2010, 09:18 AM
Like that style, mogan. Really like the E

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/1012102219.jpg
Just a quick little thing

Sbal
10-14-2010, 09:43 AM
Give crits to get crits thats how it works.

MoganOne
10-14-2010, 10:05 AM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/24837295256_ORIG.jpg


First Throwie.
Feedback?

Try working your color first and then outline it with black... watch some vids on how real trhows are done

MoganOne
10-14-2010, 01:25 PM
also loose that tag and start simple... it looks like u drizzled chocolate syrup on your pad

IllLogic
10-14-2010, 03:02 PM
sbal nice progression

smile =(
10-16-2010, 04:20 PM
might start writing 'slow'
crits please.
http://i480.photobucket.com/albums/rr167/hatman29/slow.png?t=1287260321

dubbed
10-16-2010, 04:22 PM
not bad. the W is like sagging though. i hate writing with L's its hard to give them style

H1P30N3R
10-17-2010, 02:43 PM
hollow

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0050.jpg

dubbed
10-17-2010, 03:04 PM
ehh sorry but i dont really like it hipe. your H is pretty original but keep working on it.
the rest of your letters arent terrible but they def need more flow

H1P30N3R
10-17-2010, 03:06 PM
thanks i'm still working on different letter variations that's why its just hollow less paint wasted lol

Gyse
10-17-2010, 04:39 PM
Looks like you filled it and all the paint got absorbed by the cement.

Anyway, like dubbed said, original H but it needs work. Just keep drawing it on paper making little changes until you get it. The other letters are pretty solid, they just need to be tweaked so they look better.

Gyse
10-17-2010, 04:42 PM
Like that style, mogan. Really like the E

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/1012102219.jpg
Just a quick little thing

If you're from new york, keep doing what you're doing. Go paint that, and put 'the real' next to it.

dubbed
10-17-2010, 06:27 PM
^lol

H1P30N3R
10-17-2010, 10:48 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/DCFC0002-4.jpg

Gyse
10-17-2010, 11:03 PM
Try flipping the H, like this. It could be mistaken for a K like you have it. I liked that loop thing you were doing before, it needed work but it was original.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4544/hipe.png (http://img233.imageshack.us/i/hipe.png/)

H1P30N3R
10-17-2010, 11:08 PM
thanks see what your saying, I'll try that out. I like other h with some work it could get better

Flawless Victory
10-18-2010, 12:20 AM
Joey Moore is a crackhead.

LeaksOne
10-18-2010, 01:59 AM
damn joey and his addictions.

Sbal
10-18-2010, 12:11 PM
I like the cursive CRIP LIFE above it

x2050
10-18-2010, 02:20 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25026068153_ORIG.jpg

First simple throwie on the streets.
Crits *more than* welcome

Get Rekt!
10-18-2010, 03:04 PM
crits

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/1018001216.jpg

ReSeM
10-18-2010, 03:25 PM
everything looks fine except for the S
do more with it. Experiment a little.

Sbal
10-18-2010, 03:26 PM
FAke start it all over.

x2050
10-18-2010, 03:50 PM
Anyone care to elaborate on starting over? Kind of a broad direction..

ReSeM
10-18-2010, 04:26 PM
back to the drawing board kid new letters everything ie. start over
start over is a very succinct statement

HORSEthefan
10-18-2010, 06:20 PM
Whats up guys, havent posted in a while, thought id share my re-worked throwie..

but crits first...

Hipe, the H with the loop is dope, dont lose that. the rest of the letters are kinda plain though. id try working another loop in somewhere like the E, kinda balance it out y'know?

Fake... stick to paper for a while man, wasting paint and giving yourself a reputation for throwing down junk early is a bad decision. work on general letter form, make the K look more like a K and work on clean lines, ect.

Scam, the 3d is real clean, but i think both legs of the A needs to be more symmetrical, same with the M they look a little lopsided when compared to the S and the C.

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5726/picture0017b.jpg

http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/4537/picture0018m.jpg

Get Rekt!
10-18-2010, 06:26 PM
eh sorry man but im just not feeling that at all.

PREA672
10-18-2010, 07:03 PM
i am feeling it.. its better than anything you ever posted ^

Fury
10-18-2010, 07:06 PM
I don't like the S, but the rest is cool. Just make sure you don't cut off the bottoms, otherwise you'll just get used to it and never do them on walls.

Moon
10-18-2010, 08:25 PM
I don't... I just don't like it. Furthermore, how fast can you write that and make it look good at the same time?

Sbal
10-18-2010, 08:55 PM
Anyone care to elaborate on starting over? Kind of a broad direction..

look through the tot throwies thread from the beggining to get ideas.

IbuprofenTablets
10-18-2010, 09:33 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo147.jpg

MoganOne
10-18-2010, 09:49 PM
nice snore

H1P30N3R
10-18-2010, 10:52 PM
eros- only two things I dislike are the open bottom and the s narrowing down
snore- nice and steezy

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1888.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/102_1909.jpg

elpendejo123
10-20-2010, 06:51 PM
pretty good shit guys.
crits?comments?

elpendejo123
10-20-2010, 07:06 PM
double postin ftw

H1P30N3R
10-20-2010, 07:25 PM
lose the shines and stitches keep it simple

FuckTheFame
10-22-2010, 02:05 AM
a lil treat for you guys
anyone down in the buffalo area?
viruz should know about these dudes
GQ is legit


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5103726945_3e5776d39c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726945/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1401/5104319378_54bbb9e851.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319378/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1394/5103726879_9ab61a94a2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726879/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4111/5103726745_23a2761505.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726745/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1319/5104319070_e0c681833c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319070/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1060/5104318938_0f5f7d17de.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104318938/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1202/5103726435_1f60bdb3c9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726435/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1351/5104319208_aa7d80dec0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319208/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1182/5104319012_a558447411.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104319012/)

murph3pt
10-22-2010, 11:15 AM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

u draw this up in FOCUS? pay attention to mr.Bald-trek

LOGIK321
10-22-2010, 11:20 AM
Try flipping the H, like this. It could be mistaken for a K like you have it. I liked that loop thing you were doing before, it needed work but it was original.
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/4544/hipe.png (http://img233.imageshack.us/i/hipe.png/)

i agree with Gyse, flip it!

HORSEthefan
10-22-2010, 11:16 PM
Snore, youve got some skill for sure, but id like to see it all more even. i dunno if that fits your style but w/e.

Cele, im just not feelin it. too stubby and too much overlap.

Tron, keep doin what your doin. you dont need help from me lol.

Eh, nothing much new from me, i closed off the bottom and lost the little top spikes.


http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1387/picture0019z.jpg

any crits?

PREA672
10-23-2010, 12:32 AM
ES = eastside

Sbal
10-23-2010, 08:45 AM
or a shoe company

IbuprofenTablets
10-23-2010, 09:56 AM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1387/picture0019z.jpg

any crits?
I took a crack at your 2-letter.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo150.jpg

I also took a crack at your whole throw.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo153.jpg

dubbed
10-23-2010, 06:23 PM
is anyone here good at throwing M's. those shits are hard lol. im also having problems with K's and R's

HORSEthefan
10-23-2010, 10:25 PM
ES = eastside

haha, im in a chill stoner city in canada. i dont need to worry about someone thinking i rep eastside. the E and the S just seemed to mirror each other a lot, so i made a quick two letter throw.

Thanks for tryin my throwie Ibuprofen, you've obvs been doing this a lot longer than me and i always like seeing my name written in different styles. im startin to dig the S underlining your other letters.

Anyone have any basic tips for 3d and drop shadows? ive tried and they just look... i dunno.. off. Is it just lots of practice and messing around?

elpendejo123
10-24-2010, 12:18 PM
anyone down for an exchange?

MoganOne
10-24-2010, 06:10 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101638.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101643.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1023102138.jpg

MoganOne
10-24-2010, 06:12 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101649.jpg

MoganOne
10-25-2010, 12:16 AM
or this "e"???
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1024101950-1.jpg

elpendejo123
10-25-2010, 02:52 PM
the first E in green had the best flow out of any of them, in my opinion :P

MoganOne
10-25-2010, 03:14 PM
So it Appears... lol word up I will work with that one

FuckTheFame
10-25-2010, 04:34 PM
your n kind of looks like a k or an h
itd be nice to see a cap N with a slant like the rest of your letters
second green one is best in my opinion

IbuprofenTablets
10-25-2010, 08:09 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo152.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
10-25-2010, 08:16 PM
Meh, I didn't have any markers near me at the time, so I just used a pencil.
I'm too lazy to edit the picture, or trace it with a marker. Sorry, I know how bad you want to diss my shit.

LiViD
10-25-2010, 08:26 PM
Mone- the n does kinda look like a k but otherwise its lookin pretty ill, got any painted?

critz..?

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1654/img0231qg.jpg (http://img837.imageshack.us/i/img0231qg.jpg/)

MoganOne
10-25-2010, 10:03 PM
Yeah I figured the second green one looks the best... the N actually looks more like a N... I do Have one painted I will PM it to you...

x2050
10-26-2010, 10:27 PM
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25425070154_ORIG.jpg
Took the advice and did a whole re-vamp. New name, etc.
Crits *more than* welcome

MoganOne
10-26-2010, 10:29 PM
What does that even say bro???

x2050
10-26-2010, 10:35 PM
Gaze - Lowercase g and e.

Vid
10-27-2010, 01:58 AM
12901

Crits pls, no offensive shit. :rolleyes:

Vacant
10-27-2010, 02:18 AM
You still gotta work on that D I think... It looks ALOT better than when you first showed me...

AnonymousWaaa
10-28-2010, 02:48 PM
1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/CSC_0005.jpg

Gyse
10-28-2010, 04:16 PM
^^^^
http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/

If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.

MoganOne
10-28-2010, 04:37 PM
1 or 2? the capital E usually looks alot better, cocked that one up, and ignore those fya's lol

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/CSC_0005.jpg

They both look like pretty legit one liners to me... but the lowercase E is ringing a bell IMO

Stuck
10-29-2010, 08:44 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo25-2.jpg

AnonymousWaaa
10-29-2010, 08:51 AM
^^^^
http://www.flickr.com/photos/23657066@N07/2516971701/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/artfinder12-2/3795646168/

If you still want to write love, go with the top one, but work on the L.

I'll stil write it, im a UK writer, and the name means alot more to me than just a name :) and thanks for the crits, will keep working on it

Zookyook
10-29-2010, 12:35 PM
stuck wtf do u write?! lol meyor here heri? nice throws either way....

mone i like that n from the last page, bring the split in the top to the left a bit and itll look less like a K i think...

some throwshit
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1081/5126391212_02b248a1df.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1326/5126392078_bcc01d87af.jpg

Gyse
10-29-2010, 02:17 PM
heri- H needs work, the E in the left one is best, your capital Rs arent doing it, the lowercase one is good though. Your I is ok, needs work though.
nemor- bottom one looks a lot better. work on the M and put the R a little lower.

GnarR
10-29-2010, 07:14 PM
some of my first sketches.. i cant really give crits because i have just started and i wouldnt be able to give any thoughtful insight. im pretty sure both of these names are taken, but im more focused on learning and developing some sort of a style. Im having a hard time with letters like "R,I,B,V,G, and K" when i try a think, bubble style which i currently like most, any ideas? thank you!

Gyse
10-29-2010, 08:35 PM
you're off to a better start than most. You still suck, but you're not throwing arrows all over and shit. Basically keep doing this, and playing with different letter combos for a while. Go a little simpler on that M and lose the notch on the O.

Vid
10-30-2010, 12:00 AM
12962 crits?

MoganOne
10-30-2010, 12:21 AM
Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple

Vid
10-30-2010, 05:22 AM
Yo Void.. I would Void that throw and try to start more simple

Which letter?

H1P30N3R
10-30-2010, 09:55 PM
void-keep all your letters simple and have a similar style lose the shines and color just practice your letters by doing outlines .

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0052.jpg

Zookyook
10-31-2010, 02:06 AM
hip hop is a culture not a genre of music....

void and hipe, the faster u do throws the cleaner theyll look.... it looks like u guys move the marker really slow and without much flow... ull get style once u practice that over and over.... and over

Vid
10-31-2010, 04:13 AM
Alright thanks. I'll post another when i think its better.

GnarR
10-31-2010, 07:31 AM
H1P3, i like the style you're using but the "i" looks out of place, try to make it blend in with the other letters. it just kinda stands out. I like the two on the top

x2050
10-31-2010, 12:47 PM
Done using the last of the finest dollar general paint...
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e192/x2050_2008/25658866354_ORIG.jpg

H1P30N3R
10-31-2010, 12:50 PM
stick to pen and paper .. the paint doesn't explain the wack letters.

Vid
10-31-2010, 09:02 PM
13005

Any better Zook? if not any crits?

H1P30N3R
10-31-2010, 10:08 PM
toy throw battle
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0054.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0053.jpg

Zookyook
10-31-2010, 11:31 PM
tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

Vid
10-31-2010, 11:49 PM
tone down that handstyle void, its got too much goin on, tags look better simple and clean... and just do what u did to that page to like, a whole notebook or 2 or 10 hah, its all about practice, to crit those id say make the I thinner than the O, and change the V a bit, like lose the bump on the top left, the one on the right will work, for now dont be ashamed to go bite some real writers, then when u can do somethin that looks good, change it around so its ur own style

Thanks Zook. Nice crits there. Any legends out there that have V in it?

Zookyook
11-01-2010, 12:09 AM
revok, sever, savior, solve, vizie, thats all i got right now... check the artist list on the freights link on here... ill make it easy for u... (http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewArtistList/style/109//)

throwie for talkin out me arse...
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1201/5134450887_d683750fde_z.jpg

GnarR
11-01-2010, 12:49 PM
Zook i really like the way you write your letters, that kinda the style im working towards, all smushed up and round. right now im just doing bars and really simple shit, how long did it take you to develop that style?

EDIT:
ive been doing this bullshit for 3 hours, what now!?
http://i52.tinypic.com/2lbictd.jpg

ReSeM
11-01-2010, 05:09 PM
zook paint that shit

gnarr work on your bars they are all over the place

dubbed
11-01-2010, 05:16 PM
zook thats a mean throw, fukn sick

GnarR
11-01-2010, 05:42 PM
as in make them even? what specifically? which letters in general suck the most?

EXI
11-01-2010, 05:47 PM
gnar your bars arent the same width etc, your O in record is bigger than your c, r, etc. the top of the I's are too small to fit your letters, do this. draw out the letter. example. you draw 4 bars for E, 3 for I 3 for A etc.

Phat 2
11-01-2010, 06:55 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs475.ash2/74885_169279283098989_100000507545549_477293_52242 01_n.jpg

GnarR
11-01-2010, 07:06 PM
thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

EXI
11-01-2010, 07:09 PM
thanks for the crits EXI, ill keep working on em and ill post my results

sure. and post it in blackbook section instead of of this, this is strictly for throw ups :)

NosE2
11-01-2010, 10:49 PM
yo phat im diggin those 2 letter throws, pretty fuckin clean, i just dont like that tumor thing on the main bar in your p where the sdf is. and i would post this shit in the characters thread but i will get burned so hard, i just started to try characters today for the first time out of 3 years of graff =////
http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/8144/imgp3300.jpg
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4985/imgp3299.jpg

MoganOne
11-02-2010, 12:30 AM
Your throwie is solid as fuck which i'm sure you already know...But... that rat is retarded hahahaha :D

NosE2
11-02-2010, 12:38 AM
hahahah i knooo dude thanks though, im tryin to learn how to draw characters n shit

LiViD
11-02-2010, 02:33 AM
critz..?

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/1654/img0231qg.jpg (http://img837.imageshack.us/i/img0231qg.jpg/)

bumpin for tha critz...

Zookyook
11-02-2010, 01:24 PM
zook paint that shit
i do lol, like 30 of em last weekend.... cant go back and flick em though, gotta get me a flash on my phone..... thanks for the props people

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs475.ash2/74885_169279283098989_100000507545549_477293_52242 01_n.jpg
these are baller, nice repetition phat

zewl the top sloppy ones are lookin slick

Phat 2
11-02-2010, 06:50 PM
thanks boys, these are inspired by one of my favorite throwers, Korn.
any other crits besides zewl's.

gotta give crits to get em, so livid, u got something there, the idea's there you just need to fix it up a bit, just some modifications here and there and you basically got urself a decent throw.
I'm talkin bout the two lines that are going down from the top of both the s and a to their middles. don't make it touch their middles, let these 2 bits be part of the letters instead of having them look like they're just glued to em if u know what i mean.
make the line in the middle of the y run towards the middle of the 3 bars' intersection, and have the top right bar of the y be straight to match the s and a instead of it being wavy.
an uppercase e would look better too. or else just use a regular letter, no throw characters, coz it seems ure not good at em

keep gettin up man

MoganOne
11-03-2010, 03:16 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100344-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100402-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1103100406-1.jpg

AnonymousWaaa
11-03-2010, 06:25 PM
Crits? advice?
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff496/JackWaaa/DSC_0001-1.jpg

LiViD
11-03-2010, 10:16 PM
thanks phat thats sum legit critz i understand you when ur talkin about the middle lines touching the bottem and ill work on that but the Y is actually a T and i know the wavy shit is whack but ill keep workin it

Mone- looks good man but mabey cut out that little end on the N unless ur usin the E that you used on the green fill throw
Love- dont try the 3d shit yet just get down to basics with ur throw and use a marker

ReSeM
11-04-2010, 04:24 PM
its drop shadow LIVID and a fine one at that

also solid one liner LOVE. I think you could come a little harder on the L and E
don't worry about doing it in marker pen is fine as long as you get a nice feel of it and are really consistent which I can tell you are
the added drip bubbles are unnecessary
this is my opinion so don't take it serious but i think you would be better off writing LOV cause imo LOVE is unoriginal

MoganOne
11-04-2010, 06:05 PM
Or change the V to something else... Like a K... LOKE lol :)

Diamond
11-04-2010, 11:06 PM
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m145/hourra/grf/dime.jpg
one of the first

Sbal
11-05-2010, 09:58 AM
I kinda like it except that the E could be a little closer, and a straight line in the D might look better

Phat 2
11-05-2010, 10:41 AM
that looks boring dime, try a little bit of creativity than just primitive bubble letters

Diamond
11-05-2010, 01:59 PM
thanks guys!
gonna keep trying out some less boring boring letters, although I tried to play safe :P

EXI
11-05-2010, 02:30 PM
i suck at throw ups i knokw..

NosE2
11-05-2010, 03:04 PM
this is fun, i get to fuck with r's.
http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/6356/imgp3315.jpg

EXI
11-05-2010, 04:23 PM
this is fun, i get to fuck with r's.
http://img573.imageshack.us/img573/6356/imgp3315.jpg

haha i wanna bite that e w l bad because i like that style but don't know what to write..

H1P30N3R
11-05-2010, 06:57 PM
exi - dont sketch your throws jus let the pen flow
nose- that r i nasty and the rest of your regular letters are obviously solid

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0062.jpg

Stigma02
11-06-2010, 01:38 AM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6908.jpg the big red one crits? does anyone write SOIR?

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 02:33 PM
i suck at throw ups i knokw..

Man that has got to be the stupidest looking "R" I have ever seen... LOL...
No but real talk. You should go check out the Throwups forum in the picture gallery... Try to find a really easy way to write right your letters and stick with it for awhile... It takes practice man but if you keep at it you will develop flow in no time

EXI
11-06-2010, 02:44 PM
Man that has got to be the stupidest looking "R" I have ever seen... LOL...
No but real talk. You should go check out the Throwups forum in the picture gallery... Try to find a really easy way to write right your letters and stick with it for awhile... It takes practice man but if you keep at it you will develop flow in no time

yeah i know it is LOL.. and thanks man ill go over there right

EXI
11-06-2010, 03:12 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289070543432.jpg

better than before lol

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 04:15 PM
Were you trying to go for a Wu tang look with that "W"

Task977
11-06-2010, 04:19 PM
if you saw this in the street would you cap it/cross it out?
edit: sorry for shitty image quality
http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/4606/scan0001gc.jpg (http://img836.imageshack.us/i/scan0001gc.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

EXI
11-06-2010, 04:20 PM
Were you trying to go for a Wu tang look with that "W"

not really, i just cant think of another W, all that came to my mind.. I LOVE Zewl's but that would be a hardcore bite.. help mogan :D

air707
11-06-2010, 04:52 PM
i really like that soir throw, and i wouldn't cross you out jestr. stay up

anyway here's mine- sorry its so big

http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/9686/img9349b.jpg

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 08:15 PM
I will See what I can do For you bro...
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101808-1.jpg
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101806-1.jpg

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 08:28 PM
Here try this W without the Triangle... Actually you should try redoing this whole piece and claim it as yours
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101924-1.jpg

H1P30N3R
11-06-2010, 08:31 PM
mogan -I like that second e and n better myself although they both are pretty solid. Just dig the square kick out thing or w/e you wanna call it

that e on the rewl is sick

Phat 2
11-06-2010, 08:33 PM
first off, exi, the guy right here is called zewl and the best name you come up with writing is rewl ??? wtf lol
2nd:

if you saw this in the street would you cap it/cross it out?
my first question is: if YOU saw that on the street and if it wasnt yours, would YOU cap it ?
my second question is: if I did, would you get back at me n mess with my bombs? (if you wouldnt, then hell yeah I would cap u :P)

and soir, u should check some french heads, maybe there's someone with that name in a french speaking country that does. it means "evening" in french, u prolly know that though

H1P30N3R
11-06-2010, 08:43 PM
A cleaned up version ... Am i in the ball park of having a good idea or scratch this totally?

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0064.jpg

EXI
11-06-2010, 08:48 PM
this was talkd about in blackbook section. i was iffy about using this as my name for tgat reason. but the name meanz alot becauase my dad died june this year and rewl are his inittials.

MoganOne
11-06-2010, 10:12 PM
A cleaned up version ... Am i in the ball park of having a good idea or scratch this totally?

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0064.jpg
Dude I don't know about the H man... THe PE looks pretty legit

Stigma02
11-06-2010, 10:55 PM
im gonna fatten up the s a bithttp://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6909.jpg crits? hipe get the H to look for like the P and E and it would be fire

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 03:05 PM
13295

H1P30N3R
11-07-2010, 03:10 PM
thanks for the feedback mogan ill try somethin different with the h and i

EXI
11-07-2010, 04:03 PM
13295

im sorry, but idk what it says :/.. it's way to messy to me, but if thats your style role with it..
crits please
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289078146817.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289078146606.jpg

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 04:32 PM
im sorry, but idk what it says :/.. it's way to messy to me, but if thats your style role with it..
crits please
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much prefer the drop shadow over the 3d. think with those sharp points it doesn't work so well. lose the line in the middle of the E. makes its almost look like an i. and if your going to use some rude materials like highlighters or something at least try and be as clean as possible. i have nothing against using materials like that, in fact i like doing shit like that, but really man if you are going to use that type of stuff be tight, otherwise it just looks like you really could care less.

Phat 2
11-07-2010, 04:49 PM
village idiot, this looks interesting. caught my attention!
explain to us?

and rewl, sorry to hear mate. safe

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 05:17 PM
village idiot, this looks interesting. caught my attention!
explain to us?

and rewl, sorry to hear mate. safe

its a PM1.

EXI
11-07-2010, 05:40 PM
phat, what you mean by safe? and village with the highlighters i really was just messing around lol

MoganOne
11-07-2010, 06:09 PM
13295

this is pretty dope

Phat 2
11-07-2010, 07:01 PM
as in, "it's all good" or like "no beef" yknow? I dunno, it's just a word heh

Zookyook
11-07-2010, 07:22 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Tags/1106101924-1.jpg
everything anyone posted after this RE...... needs work lol

H1P30N3R
11-07-2010, 08:49 PM
soir -all the extra add ons are not needed I see your trying to make the o and i flow together but the 2 letters look way to similar
rewt - it is coming together still needs tweaked and lines need to be cleaner

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0066.jpg

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 09:01 PM
everything anyone posted after this RE...... needs work lol

you got any actual suggestions?

NosE2
11-07-2010, 09:59 PM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7118/imgp3324.jpg

Village Idiot
11-07-2010, 11:10 PM
NosE2 that is nice. not feeling some of the other stuff i've seen you post so far but this is real nice.

EXI
11-08-2010, 12:26 AM
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7118/imgp3324.jpg
lol, just for shits and giggles
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/img1289193504437.jpg

NosE2
11-08-2010, 04:53 PM
lol, that w made me choke on my tallboy. haha. lose that arrowww thing. and thanks village, actually, whats weird is i WASNT feelin that throw. just tryin to develop more flow you know. rhyminnnn and on timeeee innn my workplace, get rid of this sadface.

EXI
11-08-2010, 09:42 PM
haha its a W that Mone gave me, his is probably better than mine xD

Village Idiot
11-08-2010, 11:15 PM
13295
no crit on this?

Phat 2
11-09-2010, 10:44 AM
it flows nice, I love its feel, but its HIGHLY illegible... do somethig about that man
people wanna know what name to put in this following phrase's blank space:
"fuck damn, that ______ has some wicked wicked throws!"

feel me?

Kick-OH
11-09-2010, 01:12 PM
New to the forum, I believe this is where this belong but just some shit I whipped up lately,

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at1104.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at11052.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff4.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff2.jpg

NosE2
11-09-2010, 04:52 PM
I guess I gotta' be the bearer of bad news. Start over homie, completely. I see you put a lot of time into those drawings, some of the characters are pretty legit. Start doing straight letters.

And yo EXI, you said that Mone gave you that W? And so you should use it just because Mone drew it? No offense to mone, but I'm pretty sure that everyone on here would agree with me, that the W is horrible.

EXI
11-09-2010, 09:55 PM
yeah i know just idk waht else to use haha oh well ill figure it out

Flawless Victory
11-09-2010, 11:19 PM
The idea behind it is dope i think, but it doesn't look good with the other letters.

Titmawz
11-10-2010, 11:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v11/I_use_Telecaster/IMG000012.jpg

First one, like the name. The color combination is cool as well. I gotta get down with some Ts.

LeaksOne
11-11-2010, 05:41 AM
New to the forum, I believe this is where this belong but just some shit I whipped up lately,

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at1104.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/Photoon2010-11-09at11052.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff4.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff.jpg

http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee137/Boblikeswaffles/graff2.jpg

All terrible, start over simple.

Phillip McDougall
11-11-2010, 09:30 AM
Did this ***** really just write "YNOT LIVES?"

Titmawz
11-11-2010, 10:11 AM
Yeah I did man, every piece that I will do is dedicated to the memory of JC... RIP.

Phillip McDougall
11-11-2010, 10:37 AM
Were you a close friend of his?

Titmawz
11-11-2010, 02:38 PM
Ive met him long time ago. And alotta respect for him as an artist.

cg22stoner
11-11-2010, 04:26 PM
13389

cg22stoner
11-11-2010, 04:27 PM
What you guys think? I need some criticism cause this is going right on the front of a perfect building.

LeaksOne
11-11-2010, 04:41 PM
Pretty bad.

-Empty-Can-
11-11-2010, 04:55 PM
pretty dope imo.


no. it sucks

cg22stoner
11-11-2010, 05:09 PM
Ok. Thanks guys, ill start over.

Phat 2
11-11-2010, 05:10 PM
dont do it kid

cg22stoner
11-11-2010, 05:12 PM
Dont do what?

cg22stoner
11-11-2010, 05:24 PM
Is it really that terrible? You guys act like its the worst thing youve ever seen.

Shofs17
11-11-2010, 05:53 PM
13391

Ehgg, what do you all think?.. Feedbackfeedback

Titmawz
11-11-2010, 07:48 PM
that green one is nice man !

ChadWarden
11-11-2010, 08:46 PM
he's lying.

MoganOne
11-11-2010, 10:09 PM
he's lying.

lol

Diesel
11-11-2010, 10:42 PM
sick shit:)

LeaksOne
11-12-2010, 04:25 AM
he's lying.

If there was a like button, I'd like this.

AnonymousWaaa
11-12-2010, 06:37 AM
13391

Ehgg, what do you all think?.. Feedbackfeedback

1st one is bad
2nd one isnt even really a throw..
work on making the letters balanced and stylish on the 1st one, scrap the 2nd

Kick-OH
11-12-2010, 10:41 AM
I guess I gotta' be the bearer of bad news. Start over homie, completely. I see you put a lot of time into those drawings, some of the characters are pretty legit. Start doing straight letters.



All terrible, start over simple.

Alright so, what so just start doin keyboard letters, or what can I do to improve?

Zookyook
11-12-2010, 04:46 PM
what you guys think? I need some criticism cause this is going right on the front of a perfect building.
noooo!!!!!

is it really that terrible? You guys act like its the worst thing youve ever seen.
yessssss!!!!

cg22stoner
11-13-2010, 02:48 PM
Come on man. Maybe not front building material but i have deffinatly seen way worse.

Sbal
11-13-2010, 09:53 PM
13389

its still really bad though. What do you think is good about it? Give yourself some crits real quick.

Zookyook
11-14-2010, 06:07 AM
Come on man. Maybe not front building material but i have deffinatly seen way worse.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=13389
heres my crits... right off the bat, does it say AIO!?... next learn to 3d, that shit comin off the left of the A is a mess, n it goes in a different direction on the O (assuming thats an O) ... also u dont underline throwups, at least not with just a plain wiggly line, if u wanna underline it make a big bubbly throwup lookin underline, but dont even try that shit right now, what u needs ta do is just practice, burn through a shitload of paper trying to get a decent throwup with those letters, speed is key man.... if u cant do it fast dont bother, some spots look like u sketched over the shit like 10 times...

also with ur handstyle, do that same shit i said bout the paper and the practice and the speed...

also learn to post images not links to images, shits annoying, right click the picture u wanna post, click 'copy image location' and then come here and click the icon to the right of the lil envelope and paste it there....

cg22stoner
11-14-2010, 09:29 AM
Thank you. Can people do that next time instead of just saying that it sucks. Actually give constructive criticism. And i will work on everything you said cause i am very passionate about graffiti and i want to be the best i can be. Thank you

IbuprofenTablets
11-14-2010, 09:55 AM
Hahahahahaha.
And I thought this forum was boring.

Thanks for the Lols, Cg22.


KickOH's shit was also definitely hilarious.
The Little corroded pokemon looking character KickOH drew made me spit out some of my orange juice on my monitor.

ReSeM
11-14-2010, 11:22 AM
im guessing you refer to the other 25% as yourself... shame

cg22stoner
11-14-2010, 01:09 PM
Oh.

flask1995
11-14-2010, 05:17 PM
http://i.imgur.com/SbXcE.jpg

crits please? thanks you

cg22stoner
11-14-2010, 05:52 PM
its still really bad though. What do you think is good about it? Give yourself some crits real quick. Personally i thought my letter formation was pretty good since i just started doing graffiti about 4 days ago. Im a super toy lol.

MoganOne
11-14-2010, 07:39 PM
If you're a super toy never assume your letter formation is pretty good

cg22stoner
11-14-2010, 07:44 PM
Just because im a toy dosent mean i cant give myself credit for doing something well when i just started 4 days ago. I have seen people post shit on here saying they have been in graffiti for like 2 months and i could burn them in a fucking mili second. Just because im a toy dosent mean im a piece of shit and cant credit myself. Dont confuse this with big headed-ness either. i know im not that great.

Sbal
11-14-2010, 08:49 PM
lets get Springer in here

del4sel
11-14-2010, 09:04 PM
Just because im a toy dosent mean i cant give myself credit for doing something well when i just started 4 days ago. I have seen people post shit on here saying they have been in graffiti for like 2 months and i could burn them in a fucking mili second. Just because im a toy dosent mean im a piece of shit and cant credit myself. Dont confuse this with big headed-ness either. i know im not that great.


dude, seriously, you've only been writing for 4 days? your shit is so fire i thought for sure you've been writing for at least a week...

cg22stoner
11-14-2010, 09:17 PM
dude, seriously, you've only been writing for 4 days? your shit is so fire i thought for sure you've been writing for at least a week...

Are you being sarcastic? The only reason i ask is because people seem to be prone to putting others down on this forum...

MoganOne
11-14-2010, 11:55 PM
Lol

TBGork4to1
11-15-2010, 12:06 AM
Ohhh

del4sel
11-15-2010, 02:57 PM
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TOGQNLUBjiI/AAAAAAAAAG4/ym9aAwfadUQ/s1600/del1.jpg

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TOGQGPlFImI/AAAAAAAAAGw/3mPSVG8AACg/s1600/del2.jpg

cg22stoner
11-15-2010, 05:15 PM
hahahaha

Gyse
11-15-2010, 05:36 PM
This getting ridiculous. cg22 kid, your letters suck, they have terrible structure, and you're trying too hard. Just do simple letters and please don't touch paint for at least a year. Your tags are also awful, but that's another thread.

Del- The top yellow & blue looks best. The E in the one below it is better though, and the D's suck. The L in the bottom hollow is ok too. And I gues D number 2 and 4 are the best. Work with them. No comment on the reverse layering thing.

Rewt- your passive aggressive insults are pointless. If you're such a better writer than anyone here, don't sweat us fake ass toys.

del4sel
11-15-2010, 05:49 PM
Thanks Gyse

cg22stoner
11-15-2010, 06:14 PM
A year? Thats a little harsh dont you think? 2 or 3 months maybe.

Gyse
11-15-2010, 06:34 PM
A year? Thats a little harsh dont you think? 2 or 3 months maybe.

not really. It takes everyone about a year or 2 to get decent enough to paint. Most people start before they're actually good and just regret it later. Your call.

cg22stoner
11-15-2010, 07:10 PM
Well, so far i have only painted like twice. My paint control is decent i guess. But i also see where you say you will regret it because as you get better you will be like wow that shit sucked. So, i guess i will bring home cardboard and practice painting on it for can control, but also draw a hell of a lot and get good letter structure. Thanks guys. Out of all this bullshit two or three people actually helped. BTW, im kinda having trouble with getting paint because i am under 18. Im down with racking it, but not ALL the time ya know. Any tips?

NosE2
11-15-2010, 07:54 PM
I agree with Rewt. This one kid I met a few months ago, I'd never painted with him, but he showed me some of his sketches, and they were legit. Not even toy lookin'. Now I mean don't get me wrong, I can hardly draw a piece. BUT....I paint a LOT more than I draw. When me and that kid went out for the first time together, who do you think painted better? The dude couldn't even paint a straight letter. But that's alright...you have to work both of them evenly to get the best results. Yo gotta' get the best of both worlds man. My 0.02 $. Stay up


EDIT: CG22, If you have a Meijer near you, or a store like that, go to the self-checkout, it doesn't ring you up for a ID. At least at mine. Im Over 18 though, so it doesn't matter for me. Good luck

cg22stoner
11-15-2010, 09:24 PM
I went to a walmart and used the self check out and the shit asked for authorization from a manager. By the time he should up i had dipped lol. I was like even the fucking machines are like ID'ing you haha.

cg22stoner
11-15-2010, 09:26 PM
and thanks for your $0.02 I completely understand what you mean.

NosE2
11-15-2010, 10:17 PM
yo yeah they id you in the self checkout at walmart but not at meijer

del4sel
11-16-2010, 01:54 PM
your issue is fucking rediculous

ghostwriter
11-16-2010, 02:17 PM
Dec and SEL are so generik

cg22stoner
11-16-2010, 05:46 PM
What about this? I know it dosent flow well but how about the letters? Is it better than my last one? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13298&uid=52566&d=1289947088

H1P30N3R
11-16-2010, 05:47 PM
to start make your letters all similar width and height ... dont worry about coloring that doesnt make your letters better just takes away from time u could be practicing letter structure. so scratch what u have and start super simple like keyboard letters or basic bubble letters to get a feel for what your doing.

H1P30N3R
11-16-2010, 06:09 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0093.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0094.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0095.jpg

and a cope doodle on a piece of a map when he was at the local graff shop a few weeks back
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0085.jpg

cg22stoner
11-16-2010, 06:23 PM
I actually just re-drew it. Now it has more flow. I might work on it more and post it up later. Thanks for your advice. Im actually drawing keyboard letters now.

MoganOne
11-16-2010, 10:17 PM
Yo Hipe dude just go copy someone elses H because your H is really hurting... The rest on the first pic does not look bad...

H1P30N3R
11-16-2010, 10:38 PM
yea i need to get somethin going is h considered more difficult or is it just me lol

Sbal
11-16-2010, 11:50 PM
Ditch those weird parallel lines in the middle of your H

MoganOne
11-17-2010, 01:43 PM
It depends on Capital or lowercase.. I can do a pretty dope lowercase one by memory...
The Parallel lines make it look bad man. especially when you just throw them on there lol
Like I said go check out other H's in throwies thread steal that shit change it up a lil and call it yours lol

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 05:39 PM
I improved my blue one and what do you guys think about the pink one? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13355&uid=52566&d=1290033432 http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13354&uid=52566&d=1290033406

dj3hac
11-17-2010, 05:48 PM
yeah, lose the lines. 1st is best.

NosE2
11-17-2010, 05:51 PM
I was gonna' say the same thing about your H hipe...just need to switch it up. And ^^ those pictures didnt show up
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/4563/bbbjg.jpg

Sbal
11-17-2010, 05:59 PM
Thats a steezy 2 letter Zewl
13637

throwie battle entry

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 07:03 PM
tryin to work on my throw... crits?

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 07:06 PM
any crits on mine???