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TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 06:29 PM
your other 2 didnt load properly... and for the first post on this page other than the lines in the H its actually pre good...

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 06:53 PM
They arent that great but for 6 days into my graffiti career im kinda proud of myself.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13362&uid=52566&d=1290041370
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13363&uid=52566&d=1290041394

Sbal
11-17-2010, 07:06 PM
Give crits to recieve crits

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 07:12 PM
I dont really think i should be criticizing anyone considering how new i am to this, but i did think the throwie battle submission one that you posted on here was very nice.

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 07:32 PM
im really not that great at graff... but im trying to throw out crits... so fuckin give'r...
by the way still cant see those pics :/

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 08:16 PM
FUCK. idk what to do then. Thats twice it hasnt gone through.........

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 08:16 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13362&uid=52566&d=1290041370

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 08:17 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/asset.php?fid=13363&uid=52566&d=1290041394

cg22stoner
11-17-2010, 08:18 PM
How bout now?

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 08:36 PM
still no bruh...

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 09:39 PM
ya still looking for some crits on those throws...

del4sel
11-17-2010, 10:28 PM
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_hlbRqNY6Eag/TOSq7_E8WSI/AAAAAAAAAHI/GAczYdZ7V3M/s1600/flight.jpg

Sbal
11-17-2010, 10:36 PM
13658
bump

Del im not really feeling many of the letters, especially the G and L. I could see the F and H looking good if they got fixed up though.

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 11:12 PM
Sbal- i dont really like it... try and simple it down so its like that second e...
on the bright side i like that mm food handy...

TastyMcNasty
11-17-2010, 11:26 PM
crits?

Sbal
11-18-2010, 08:50 AM
Thats a pretty dope S on the top one, but lean back on the left extension. The Balls on the A and R need to be smaller so that the R has more room to come out.

mind.or.matter
11-18-2010, 08:15 PM
Tasty - really dgging the style u got goin maybe try givin er a bit more space after the o

Sbal - got a good throw goin there just the r looks a bit sloopy at the end and maybe make the last two letters a bit smaller to match up with the rest of it

Task977
11-18-2010, 10:27 PM
Sbal - Make the last two letters smaller and fix up the r, pretty much exactly as mind said

Tasty - I like it but it looks a little bit cramped, that s on the top is dope

anyways heres something i sketched up, not too great but atleast i tried sketching something other than straight letters

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/8703/scan0002q.jpg (http://img641.imageshack.us/i/scan0002q.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

CHOWDER 36
11-19-2010, 12:38 AM
feedback's always welcome...

Phat 2
11-19-2010, 04:47 AM
jestr, I'm diggin the clean simplicity u got guan there. keep that shit up man. except for the R, try a different, fatter look for it and lose the kick in the right leg. post again :)

chowder, solid. respect for that throw man, keep gettin up. I have no crits at all. that shit's solid as a stone.

here's my 2 letter throw from monday:
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs987.snc4/76093_173765669317017_100000507545549_505220_99863 1_n.jpg

mex(hkb)
11-19-2010, 11:38 AM
dreas-..

EpS
11-19-2010, 11:52 AM
EpS

JustME
11-19-2010, 12:32 PM
im still trying to learn.

NouveauP
11-19-2010, 02:00 PM
Vandal- No to both. Don't even worry about piecing. But we'll talk about the throw. You might just need to study some throw ups around your area and build your style from some simpler throws that you see. Don't bite, but it wouldn't be bad to get some influence to learn some good solid ways to form letters. The internet is also handy for this. But remember, start simple.

Eps- there's just no flow to that. Your letters are everywhere. Work on consistency in letter size and keep the letters on a straight line.

That dreas character is pretty cool

Phat- I would have those little hook/ear things coming off of the sides and bottom. I think your throw would look a lot cleaner working with the circle and rounded rectangle forms that you have. Just my thoughts

Looks pretty good chowder.

Crits on mine? New name, might try it out.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/Picture007.jpg

Phat 2
11-19-2010, 05:04 PM
thanks for the crits man.
on yours: I reckon actual holes in the r and o would do it justice instead of just slits.
personally, I'm not a fan of the r and k's right legs' kick motion, if would look more solid with them going straight down with no gaps in between the legs. but that's just me, I've seen a lot of writers here who like that kick in the leg... some comment about the gap in the N, you could stand to lose it.
aside from that, I love the E

and Eps my boy! welcome to the forums biatch :>

HugzForThugz
11-19-2010, 11:12 PM
1372913731

new throw bottom.. ignore the 'm' dunno what happened there

First post back on this site :cool:

Del - I dont like how two of your letters are pointed on top but the others are round, and the letters in general just aren't working. Focus on making them in the same style.
sbal -Not feelin the 'er' at the end, 'r' looks awkward. I like the loopy thing you got goin on though, keep workin with it.
Tasty- What everyone else said about balance with the bubble on the letters. I'd keep the vertical line for the wholes though, looks good.
Jester- legs on the 'r' are to skinny relative to the head of it and the rest of the letters. Also, Bottom of the 's' seems to round and fat. I like it though, would prob look good painted.
chowder- Really diggin the 'w', shit looks good. Only thing i'd change is the leg on the 'r' in the bottom one, not strong enough.
phat-looks fine, bottom bubble on 'p' may be too big imo. But looks good
dreas- i think the 'd' should be more rounded at top instead of pointed, but thats me. The char is good.
eps- too much space between the e and the s on the bottom. Would look better if you had the leg of the 'p' in that negative space. I also think if your gonna put in quote bubbles, make em a bit smaller.
vandal- Sorry man not feelin it. Letters lack good structure, too round and toy bubble generic. it'll come keep practicing and looking at inspiration.
reckon- feelin it,i think the 'r' could have the little square extension bubble on it, like you did with the 'n', would flow and balance it a bit more. I'd also add something to the 'c', a bit too plain. i like the 'k'.

Maybe that was a bit too many 2 cents...

EpS
11-20-2010, 09:42 AM
:)

We Be DaZeD
11-20-2010, 10:46 AM
13734137421374113740137391373813737137361373513743

hey guys just wonderin if i could get some crits

Phat 2
11-20-2010, 03:48 PM
4th and 8th flicks' compositions are interesting, the rest needs work on letter structure, consistency and flow... the basics, practice the basics before attempting to complicate things

RustySpoon
11-20-2010, 05:06 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4090/5192725935_e03a907b86.jpg

TastyMcNasty
11-20-2010, 06:33 PM
havent been on in a few days... thanks for the crits hopefully these are an improvement...

MoganOne
11-20-2010, 07:51 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1120101933-1.jpg

LeaksOne
11-20-2010, 11:08 PM
i dont agree with that M

MoganOne
11-20-2010, 11:44 PM
word... just trying some new shit

HugzNotThugz
11-21-2010, 04:05 AM
1372913731



Bump for crits. Click Attachment

Phat 2
11-21-2010, 07:23 AM
I agree with it

H1P30N3R
11-21-2010, 11:08 AM
does-nice slaps
soar-not feelin your a try it lowercase
mone- think the m is good if you try something different with the left side of it
mesk- not feelin the m but you do have a good idea going with the letters coming to a point at the top.. the second 1 your e looks more like an a to me also.

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/thro.jpg

Phillip McDougall
11-21-2010, 11:20 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4090/5192725935_e03a907b86.jpg

You're not really about to write Does, are you?

AnonymousWaaa
11-21-2010, 12:32 PM
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/SSC_0008.jpg
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/SSC_0007.jpg

crits? advice? anything? lol

RustySpoon
11-21-2010, 01:51 PM
You're not really about to write Does, are you?

Was going to until I realized it was taken. :/

HugzNotThugz
11-21-2010, 07:42 PM
13851

Revised a bit messy, 's' is also a little thick. More crit?

does-not feelin the bottom bubble on the 'd' or the little rectangle you have on the upper right of the 's'. Also too scrunched feeling for me.
soar- I agree with whoever above, try a lower case 'a' for grins. Maybe try adding a visilble leg for the 'A'?
mone- I like, left leg of the 'm' doesnt flow though. Also something looks to me funky about the right leg of the 'n'. Likin the 'e'.
hipe- 'pe' looks nice, 'hi' not as much. Try finding another why to depict the horizontal bar in the 'h'. The 'i' is just too boring but I can see how it'd be hard to get that to flow well.
anonymous - try rounding the bottom point of the 'd'? Looks fine as is though, consider doing more letters? And just missed a shadow on left side of the second 'd'.

AnonymousWaaa
11-23-2010, 02:53 PM
http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff453/AnonymousPicturePoster/throw.jpg
i think its improved from the last style, crits and advice?

ChadWarden
11-23-2010, 03:17 PM
the d in you previous post was more original, and r is just too big and looks akward. make them the same size or closer to it.

the second throw in your above post is better.

H1P30N3R
11-23-2010, 10:12 PM
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0119.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0124.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0122.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0117.jpg

Flawless Victory
11-23-2010, 10:42 PM
DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.

HugzNotThugz
11-24-2010, 09:27 AM
Hipe i'm likin the letters a ton more, the 'i' in the painted throw is the best 'i' i've seen from you imo. Work on your 3d/drop shadow though and stay consistent with it, some of those have a combination and it looks weird, and some of the 3d is off in places.

AnonymousWaaa
11-24-2010, 12:49 PM
DR, those green ones are heaps better than the B&W one.

wow i must be style blind haha.. i asked a few friends aswell they all said them.. i really liked that black and white one haha ah well..

H1P30N3R
11-24-2010, 03:10 PM
yea i've been tryin to make my letters more legit focusing on that rather than my 3d

Llnknown
11-24-2010, 04:01 PM
obviously still need a shit ton of work but am i gettin off to the right foot at least? workin on writin it quick n smoothly.

ribcage
11-24-2010, 04:52 PM
^ lines are clean, but theres no style except for your s, just looks like blobs shaped into letters

13913

FuckTheFame
11-24-2010, 09:15 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4092/5205312961_577bd2c869.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5205312961/)

ribcage - nice structure

slip - first one is dope. wouldnt mind seeing the S tweaked a bit tho

ribcage
11-24-2010, 11:14 PM
^cant read it very, well throw or tag

MoganOne
11-25-2010, 11:57 AM
You like that "h" don't you ;)

H1P30N3R
11-25-2010, 01:48 PM
re up for crits ..
mogan im tryin to tweak your h into my own guess im bitin for now its ok im a toy lol


http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0119.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0124.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0122.jpg

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0117.jpg

ribcage
11-25-2010, 02:03 PM
^make the left most bar of your h straight and longer, and that will make it look like a good h instead of a shitty n

H1P30N3R
11-25-2010, 02:11 PM
true i see that thanks ribcage

NosE2
11-25-2010, 02:44 PM
That looks like a chill spot, you should try and take your time and do a clean, solid fill-in. Would make it look a lot nicer. Just a suggestion

ribcage
11-25-2010, 04:13 PM
true i see that thanks ribcage

o yup

HugzForThugz
11-25-2010, 04:26 PM
13851

Didn't get none, don't know what to do for an m...

IbuprofenTablets
11-27-2010, 09:11 AM
Some stupid old bullshit.
This was suppose to be for a battle, but I forgot to take a picture of it.
Meh.

http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo162.jpg

The drop shadow on this one is garbage.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo156.jpg

Phat 2
11-27-2010, 03:14 PM
how bout all of it is garbage :P

IbuprofenTablets
11-27-2010, 05:37 PM
Fair enough.
Coming from you though, I'm not even mad.
You still sketch your throws, and they still end up looking wack.

MoganOne
11-27-2010, 05:48 PM
Very true^

Stuck
11-27-2010, 05:56 PM
guys leave the arab alone..... he may blow up

LeaksOne
11-27-2010, 10:25 PM
^ lines are clean, but theres no style except for your s, just looks like blobs shaped into letters

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=13913&d=1290638966

only letter i like on this is the H

ribcage
11-28-2010, 01:31 AM
^ oh swear, whats wrong w/ the rest then

ribcage
11-28-2010, 07:11 PM
^yikes, 2nd one h is terrible, the other 1's got potential tho. on the secnd 1s s, if you keep the bottom circular swirl the same and then just brought the top part of the s straight down like u did the other it would prolly look good with a new h

LeaksOne
11-28-2010, 07:27 PM
^ oh swear, whats wrong w/ the rest then

left side of the R is way too big, the E is just ugly to me, the A is funny looking, and the C is just bland.

weedeater
11-28-2010, 07:36 PM
thanks rib, ill work on that.

medacog1
11-28-2010, 07:57 PM
http://i53.tinypic.com/333vgx1.jpg

HugzNotThugz
11-28-2010, 09:40 PM
RIB I like the style you got going, only thing I think that needs work is the C, it is too bland

ribcage
11-29-2010, 12:27 AM
left side of the R is way too big, the E is just ugly to me, the A is funny looking, and the C is just bland.

your definetly right bout the R's left bar and the c being bland, but its a goddamn c lol not sure how to put more flavor on it and make it fit that style when its in the middle...suggestion?

but the e&a I like, and will most likely not change

Shofs17
11-29-2010, 09:30 AM
Crits

MoganOne
11-29-2010, 04:57 PM
That B looks like a really wack heart... the S is really bad. Try to come up with a new one... It is really hard to Mess up an O. IMO. The I looks fine to me

Shofs17
11-29-2010, 10:45 PM
That B looks like a really wack heart... the S is really bad. Try to come up with a new one... It is really hard to Mess up an O. IMO. The I looks fine to me

so what would you suggest for practicing letter styles, if anything?

ribcage
11-29-2010, 11:27 PM
^question doesnt really make sense

JesterOner
11-30-2010, 11:58 AM
meda@ nice throw clean nice letters only thing is the n is a bit off
shofs@ staighten the letters up bit give them a curve, they look deformed bro

i know wack throw the s is fuckeeed but crits?

ribcage
11-30-2010, 03:32 PM
^ k looks like an h, circular part of the r looks a little small, and it looks weird cause your throw is all sharp edges except for that part of the r

H1P30N3R
11-30-2010, 07:01 PM
sh what ribcage said also letter structure is more important than colors right now remember that

http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0153.jpg

creatorkid2333
12-01-2010, 05:50 AM
i like the letter structure if it advanced more

H1P30N3R
12-01-2010, 03:19 PM
meda@ nice throw clean nice letters only thing is the n is a bit off
shofs@ staighten the letters up bit give them a curve, they look deformed bro

i know wack throw the s is fuckeeed but crits?

how bout this s
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/IMAG0155.jpg

NosE2
12-01-2010, 03:36 PM
How about No.

JesterOner
12-01-2010, 03:39 PM
cheers bro i changed it around came up with this... what d'ya think?

crits on your throw i would sayy the i and p are not in line with the bottom the whole top is slanting right but the 'e' is nice broo keep it up

JesterOner
12-01-2010, 04:08 PM
edit new throw, 1st leg on the r is to thin and the s is shit yet again.. i fuckin hate s'. wordddd

ribcage
12-01-2010, 06:11 PM
^ k looks like it could be a better r than the r does

JesterOner
12-01-2010, 08:30 PM
well atleast the k doesnt look like a h anymore ha

TastyMcNasty
12-01-2010, 08:33 PM
crits?

JesterOner
12-01-2010, 08:53 PM
the s is weak make the bottom fatter, you write sore? cos it looks like soer to me

TastyMcNasty
12-01-2010, 08:59 PM
actually i write soar one

ribcage
12-01-2010, 09:35 PM
^ that a looks almost exactly like the r

TastyMcNasty
12-01-2010, 09:40 PM
ya man i know...
i just hate lower case a's

ribcage
12-01-2010, 09:57 PM
^try to make an uppercase 1 thats not exactly like the r, it shouldnt be that difficult

yap-attack
12-02-2010, 04:13 PM
http://i946.photobucket.com/albums/ad308/slash440022/throwie.jpg

advice?

TastyMcNasty
12-02-2010, 05:03 PM
yap- i like that y but not feeling the A or the P
this any better?

Shofs17
12-03-2010, 09:34 AM
Trying different throws. crits on this.

yap-attack
12-03-2010, 10:57 AM
shofs , that is so tight

MakeHate
12-03-2010, 11:06 AM
tell me what you think did it very quick...

ironcrack
12-03-2010, 11:13 AM
you dont have a single aeroe in that......

MakeHate
12-03-2010, 11:15 AM
?

ironcrack
12-03-2010, 11:27 AM
needs more aeroes. duh

Flawless Victory
12-03-2010, 11:33 AM
needs more eggrolls.

ironcrack
12-03-2010, 11:40 AM
eggrolls is what i meant to say. yur rite

SicK-
12-03-2010, 09:41 PM
Hate, that would be good if the shadow wasnt so fucked up

MoganOne
12-04-2010, 01:04 AM
Hate that looks good

Drone6
12-04-2010, 06:43 AM
So crits?

MoganOne
12-04-2010, 11:12 AM
Looks like it says eeik... Don't do that bump on the right side of the first E is does not need it... the squared edge on the i does not go with the rounded style. props for having the same letter sizing through out the toss. keep at it my dude

nerd+_+
12-04-2010, 04:31 PM
14233
worried that the D looks like an O... Gonna have to work on that and a a lot more.

weedeater
12-04-2010, 06:00 PM
yeah, looks like nero. and that N is way bigger than the other letters.

MoganOne
12-04-2010, 07:06 PM
nerd that is horrible... slow down man

nerd+_+
12-04-2010, 07:14 PM
Thanks Weedeater and MoganOne. I totally agree. I need to take a step back.

Drone6
12-04-2010, 07:28 PM
Thanks ya it says epic but i'll deff ditch the squared edge and make the p bigger, all while keeping the size the same .

BALE
12-04-2010, 09:25 PM
First one a one liner for a name im messing with "Debs' second one throwie for my name.

CHOWDER 36
12-04-2010, 09:38 PM
dude your first throw looks like it says "jels". the secong one, ur a doesnt look like anything, also dont forget to add the slitts on your letters with openings, like ur b's

Flawless Victory
12-04-2010, 09:47 PM
One liners are lame anyways, yo.

CHOWDER 36
12-04-2010, 10:33 PM
no, i disagree, if u can pull off a one liner throw...thats ill...mad props too you.

SicK-
12-04-2010, 11:00 PM
Crits on this please
I know shadows fucked up. it happens.
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/c7d5d91a.jpg

Norfsuthr
12-04-2010, 11:02 PM
Bale, if you go with debs you should make the D into a capital. It would just take some tweaking and it would look a lot better. The a in your bale is bad, those loops at the tops of your letters look bad.

I like your sketched shell nerd lol.

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4751/image59h.jpg (http://img43.imageshack.us/i/image59h.jpg/)

edit: We- the w looks good. make the bottom parts more equal and better circles, and make the lines come down into the w more. Also make the 2 extensions on the left and right bars of the W the same size. For the middle part of the e where you have that smile thing you should just do a straight line in, then a circle out.

BALE
12-04-2010, 11:11 PM
Bale, if you go with debs you should make the D into a capital. It would just take some tweaking and it would look a lot better. The a in your bale is bad, those loops at the tops of your letters look bad.

I like your sketched shell nerd lol.

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/4751/image59h.jpg (http://img43.imageshack.us/i/image59h.jpg/)

edit: We- the w looks good. make the bottom parts more equal and better circles, and make the lines come down into the w more. Also make the 2 extensions on the left and right bars of the W the same size. For the middle part of the e where you have that smile thing you should just do a straight line in, then a circle out.

Thanks. I feel whatcha sayin.

TastyMcNasty
12-04-2010, 11:30 PM
bale- i like them but the first one the D could pass as a J
sick- try and make the E more rounded like the W
crits?

thatswhatshesaid
12-05-2010, 11:14 AM
gnar up in this mof

sup dudes
Hate: Your shit is fly bro, fix the shadow and your looking good


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture008-3.jpg

MoganOne
12-05-2010, 04:33 PM
One liners are lame anyways, yo.

Why would you say dat? They are hard to get down and are fukin fresh

SicK-
12-05-2010, 06:18 PM
Uploading this for my boy gatsoi
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/02d06cec.jpg
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/63e1ec89.jpg

Gatsoi
12-05-2010, 06:33 PM
Yeah dat

MoganOne
12-05-2010, 07:41 PM
You are not doing him a favor... lol jp... the Character is alright the toss up is wiggidy wack...
Very shitty pics... cell phone?

SicK-
12-05-2010, 09:36 PM
Yeah it was from my phone

MoganOne
12-05-2010, 10:39 PM
dude you fucked your crib up lol

NosE2
12-06-2010, 01:25 AM
hahahahahaaa what the fuckkk

weedeater
12-06-2010, 09:19 AM
well, there goes that security deposit.

ian
12-06-2010, 02:40 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/7481/imag0248x.jpg

thinkin of maybe a new name, it says oct

SicK-
12-06-2010, 04:45 PM
Lol it's all good guys I'm painting those walls soon

thatswhatshesaid
12-06-2010, 05:01 PM
bleh new throw


http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture-14.jpg

workin on the handy

ribcage
12-07-2010, 03:51 AM
^yo scratch those exclamations unless you make them bigger and more connected/closer to your throw as if there almost letters. and im assuming it says gnar? r is weak and on the n the a and the r if you made thos leg circles not attached to the middle (where you put the teeth on the a&r) they would look better...

thatswhatshesaid
12-07-2010, 10:31 AM
^^^word

Gatsoi
12-07-2010, 12:33 PM
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/b.jpg
Crits?

ChadWarden
12-07-2010, 02:05 PM
edit

SicK-
12-07-2010, 04:20 PM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Haters_Gonna_Hate_10.jpg

SiNe-VrL-516
12-08-2010, 03:05 PM
http://i52.tinypic.com/25qzom8.jpg

Sbal
12-08-2010, 05:00 PM
youre always on the LI thread and they talk mad shit

theyllneverknow
12-08-2010, 06:18 PM
lol sine gets the most shit but isnt too bad

Phillip McDougall
12-08-2010, 06:33 PM
That handstyle is fucking hideous..

Task977
12-08-2010, 07:06 PM
im feeling the bottom one more...
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/931/scan0003w.jpg (http://img405.imageshack.us/i/scan0003w.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

SiNe-VrL-516
12-08-2010, 09:08 PM
any crits thenn???

Task977
12-08-2010, 10:19 PM
Sine I like all of it except the I, I's are a bitch though so i cant really say much

Serbr
12-09-2010, 12:35 AM
@task977 you write in adelaide man? ive seen some je pieces round the city
@chadwarden fresh charac

Fury
12-09-2010, 12:43 AM
Chad was just bumping that shit onto this page.

And by shit, I mean "holy shit, did you guys really just spray paint the inside of your fucking house?" kind of shit.

Serbr
12-09-2010, 01:11 AM
my bad @gatsoi that caraqc is fresh

SiNe-VrL-516
12-09-2010, 02:06 PM
Sine I like all of it except the I, I's are a bitch though so i cant really say much

yah ii cantt thinkk off an i to makee madd gay

thatswhatshesaid
12-09-2010, 02:32 PM
yo sine just did this real quick for you to give you an idea if you want.

the s kinds got fucked, bad markers, never racking dollar store shit again haha

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture008-10.jpg

Task977
12-09-2010, 08:44 PM
@task977 you write in adelaide man? ive seen some je pieces round the city
@chadwarden fresh charac

haha Nah man I write jestr, those are just two letters

BALE
12-10-2010, 04:50 PM
Lust throwie. Crits. lemme knows.

ProblematicInc
12-10-2010, 11:48 PM
http://i1188.photobucket.com/albums/z418/ProblematicInc/Throwies/Picture41.jpg
SAE throwie

YeSnOmAyBe
12-11-2010, 01:20 AM
couple throws done last night but i didnt have my camera

massacreman
12-11-2010, 08:50 AM
http://i56.tinypic.com/2dl6qoh.jpg
Any ideas to make my throw flow more?
Or improve it in any way?


Avat- lose the bulbs at the right of the letters
Sae- lose the weird bars sticking out and the arrow

H1P30N3R
12-11-2010, 08:50 AM
bale-looks good other than the oversized extension on your l
sae- start over trying to much start with simple bubble letters ..that looks like one big letter make each letter seperate
yes- I like the one on the top left give the e a hole and clean up the top of the s then its ready

MoganOne
12-11-2010, 04:55 PM
couple throws done last night but i didnt have my camera

The one simp in the top middle of the page looks legit. don't do the slits that you put on the middle of the e and s...

YeSnOmAyBe
12-11-2010, 05:29 PM
The one simp in the top middle of the page looks legit. don't do the slits that you put on the middle of the e and s...

yea i did it all in pen and went to far with the s and then went back to the e to make it flow and i fucked it up so i didnt even try to put it in the e..

@hipeoner- thats my fav one aswell thats the first time trying that one i did that style in the throwie battle thread \/\/\/\/ its ovbiously not perfected lol its on its way though

YeSnOmAyBe
12-11-2010, 05:32 PM
@mass sorry for got to add this on that first post. i like were your going with the bottom one, fixyour shading match your bars up and lose like half that leg on the R

Delyte
12-11-2010, 07:47 PM
14676

need some help with my throw up, particularly dont like the L...any suggestions where to start?? Im wanna work on the first 3 letters before I start doing the full word, besides DEL is a good short form that I'd use when doing a throw in a high traffic area or something

Gatsoi
12-11-2010, 08:46 PM
Delyte don't change a thing
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/newtnewt.jpg

ProblematicInc
12-12-2010, 02:44 PM
http://i1188.photobucket.com/albums/z418/ProblematicInc/Throwies/Picture42.jpg

massacreman
12-12-2010, 03:09 PM
its a bit better but fix the top of the e and dont make the s a circle
and...
give crits to get them

http://i56.tinypic.com/2dl6qoh.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
12-12-2010, 04:15 PM
Dude, you're shit's dope.
Go smash shit.
Oh, the top looks better IMO.
The bottom one's R leg looks wack.

ProblematicInc
12-12-2010, 07:20 PM
[QUOTE=massacreman;1686585]its a bit better but fix the top of the e and dont make the s a circle
and...
give crits to get them

AWWWWW i liked the circle though.. I was tryn to do it like that.
I like your top one better than the bottom one

YeSnOmAyBe
12-12-2010, 07:30 PM
@mass dont double post ... thank you :)

@prob i like your a but your e is squashed under it and the s has little if no structure try to do the same style as the A in your other letters and keep your bars even and but take a little bit more time and slow down maybe throw some color on that bitch

NosE2
12-13-2010, 03:27 PM
Delyte don't change a thing
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/newtnewt.jpg

You do know there's a REWT on here, right? Obviously you got your name from the derivative of newton....I think you could come up with something better then that...

SicK-
12-13-2010, 03:37 PM
Yo im pretty sure REWT doesnt even post anymore

NosE2
12-13-2010, 03:39 PM
You're really stupid...do you think before you type?

Culture_Shock
12-13-2010, 03:54 PM
LOL Nose don't be a bitch, let rewt piss on his own trees.

NosE2
12-13-2010, 04:03 PM
Fair Enough.

SicK-
12-13-2010, 06:01 PM
How the fuck am i stupid. your telling him not to write NEWT because its close to REWT and newton.

NosE2
12-13-2010, 06:06 PM
Haha, you just proved my point. Stay in school homie. Don't smoke that reefer, either.

Cl4sh
12-13-2010, 06:08 PM
14737

thoughts?

Sbal
12-13-2010, 07:19 PM
redo the whole thing, including the tag. go simple

nerd+_+
12-13-2010, 10:23 PM
14743

Is this any good. I know I have made some complete shit in the past. But I think this is a good step forward. Any thoughts

ribcage
12-13-2010, 10:49 PM
^i aint seen anything you done before...but this isnt great...got chode lettering goin on

FuckMcNasty
12-13-2010, 11:06 PM
its a bit better but fix the top of the e and dont make the s a circle
and...
give crits to get them

http://i56.tinypic.com/2dl6qoh.jpg

go fuckng die

Flawless Victory
12-13-2010, 11:30 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2606/3875076605_db8a594c8a.jpg

Oker YKK
I'm just saying man.

MakeHate
12-13-2010, 11:51 PM
Crits plz?

Phillip McDougall
12-14-2010, 12:54 AM
Hate, good shit. I like your handstyle. I'd try and kill negative space, though, but that's what I'd do, I like longer throws

Gatsoi
12-14-2010, 09:43 AM
For real nose, why you so upset?

ribcage
12-14-2010, 06:12 PM
that throw is clean hate, only thing is the shadow is kinda off, like under the t and e

TastyMcNasty
12-14-2010, 06:53 PM
hate- nice throw mang
trying to get down my throws.. didnt feel like finishing the drop shadow... crtits'd be appreciated

ribcage
12-14-2010, 06:57 PM
^s-o is good, still not likin the a and r...they look the same...

TastyMcNasty
12-14-2010, 07:03 PM
^s-o is good, still not likin the a and r...they look the same...

damn... i thought i started to differienciate the A and the R... ill try and post more flicks later

ribcage
12-14-2010, 07:10 PM
if you make the left leg of the A overlap the right leg it will look more like an A

TastyMcNasty
12-14-2010, 07:55 PM
did these up quickly...

AcesFirst
12-14-2010, 08:34 PM
Nerd throwies nice, change the d.
Oker thats sick
Hate, looks pretty ill too. funky H

TastyMcNasty
12-14-2010, 08:46 PM
Oker thats sick
hope im not pointing out the obvious... but that oker bomb is not the oker who posted prior to that

ribcage
12-14-2010, 09:09 PM
o yup soar, i think that a looks better already. that r you be doin though where you start the right leg w/ them two straight lines it makes the r look weird, i think if you tried a more conventional throw r your shit would turn out clean

TastyMcNasty
12-14-2010, 10:15 PM
o yup soar, i think that a looks better already. that r you be doin though where you start the right leg w/ them two straight lines it makes the r look weird, i think if you tried a more conventional throw r your shit would turn out clean
aight thanks mang...

LeaksOne
12-15-2010, 01:25 AM
everything with the exception of hate on the last page SUCKS

PREA672
12-15-2010, 07:51 AM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_5826.jpg

Sbal
12-15-2010, 09:08 AM
ehhh it doesnt quite feel right prea, it's almost there. maybe the p is too fat and the right leg of R could come out, maybe more rounded E, make A look less like an R, exclamation seems off center

Get Rekt!
12-15-2010, 06:19 PM
crits please.

Cl4sh
12-15-2010, 11:06 PM
14822

Still toying around. Getting better?

TastyMcNasty
12-15-2010, 11:28 PM
leaks- thanks for the constructive crits
prea- not feeling the P everything else is pre decent
scam- work on your handy
clash- restart that but more simple, and have the letters closer to the same size...

Cl4sh
12-15-2010, 11:35 PM
leaks- thanks for the constructive crits
prea- not feeling the P everything else is pre decent
scam- work on your handy
clash- restart that but more simple, and have the letters closer to the same size...

What exactly do you mean by more simple?

YeSnOmAyBe
12-16-2010, 05:58 AM
rocket

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 09:59 AM
Scam and Clash- Slow down so your letters don't look lobsided or shaky but speed up the pen movements so the lines are consistent.

cell
12-16-2010, 11:48 AM
http://i51.tinypic.com/23w9mqt.jpg
crits? :o ignore the character :P

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 11:55 AM
I'm going to stick to straight letter simples and always use a fucked up R

Your T is floating away!

SicK-
12-16-2010, 12:02 PM
Rewt hop off your throne homie noone thinks your good other then your ass licking friend. You and Newt dont even have the same name, and there isnt any biting involved i dont see newt rocking horrible crooked ass straight letters do you? so back the fuck off

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:14 PM
Gramatical E-thug, go paint some straights REW T.

SicK-
12-16-2010, 12:21 PM
What kinda practice is doing the same shit over and over. Yeah you may get up more but who the fuck wants to see your ugly ass straights other than you?

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:25 PM
How much more experience could you need? Everything i've seen you paint has been exactly the same
And you've posted the same whack ass shit enough to get banned once. Oh wait, that was your friend.

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:29 PM
Same goes for you, tryna tell me I don't have the balls to paint in a pm. Partna'

Flawless Victory
12-16-2010, 12:30 PM
What kinda practice is doing the same shit over and over. Yeah you may get up more but who the fuck wants to see your ugly ass straights other than you?
I think the better question is who the fuck paints graffiti for someone other than themselves?
You should be painting what you want to see, not what you think everyone else wants to see.
Also, getting up > everything else.

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:34 PM
I think the better question is who wants to get up with the same bomb everytime.

SicK-
12-16-2010, 12:36 PM
Rewt how the fuck does that make sense? there ugly because i cant form a decent straight letter? neither can you homie.
And i do agree with you Flawless but your saying you wouldnt mind if some other write in your area is talking bad about your shit?

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:38 PM
You're comparing yourself to cope2?

Flawless Victory
12-16-2010, 12:40 PM
bro, look at the people that get up the most.
Ja
MQ
Nekst
Twist
Sacer
Skuf
Nox
Remio
Amaze
Pretty much any serious bomber uses the same throw. It's kind of common sense

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:45 PM
Yeah for throws, but show me the same straight everywhere.

This all started because Rewt got tired of his whack ass R

SicK-
12-16-2010, 12:46 PM
Rewt are you serious? the only reason your doing straights all the time is because your trying to follow the internet graffiti handbook that everyone seems to be obssesed about, your all screaming "Letter structure" But in the end who the fuck cares if your letters look like there supposed to be if you like them? Idfc if you do straights for 10 years do your thing but dont come in starting beef with one of my homies and then when your getting tore a new asshole act like your the good guy.

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:50 PM
What is a Rewt, bro? I'm not going to change my tag because some idiot over the internet has three letters of an animal is his name.

SicK-
12-16-2010, 12:52 PM
How am i losing? Your the kid thats getting mad over someone having three of the same letters in there name how fucking dumb is that?

And i wonder how long until this entire page is deleted. amirite?

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 12:56 PM
You suck

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 01:01 PM
Stop being so butt hurt, I'm sure Rewl didn't see Zewl and decide that he would just change the first letter. Newt is some I decided I wanted to write, stop flattering yourself by thinking I bit you.

SicK-
12-16-2010, 01:01 PM
Lol well it is coincidence, people cant change there names? ive changed mine atleast 3 time before i found the one i like. and who the fuck would take there time out of the day to try and troll you? honestly i thought you died for a while because i havent seen anything from you in a while but i guess your just still lurking.

Gatsoi
12-16-2010, 01:06 PM
I'm Already working on spacing out my T from the rest of my piece.

ian
12-16-2010, 01:31 PM
can anyone help me out with a throwie K? i wanna get a decent throwie for "soak" and i think i can handle the first 3 letters, but i cant seem to figure out a good k

Flawless Victory
12-16-2010, 01:52 PM
Yeah for throws, but show me the same straight everywhere.
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/56/116343485_1ee6869e45.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1429/1252529547_3c606f86ef.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2121/2545224826_211ea38bd6.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/145/375693052_c55e10a707.jpg


Also, there are mad dudes in detroit that get up using straights.
Legibility, son.

Cl4sh
12-16-2010, 02:12 PM
Dear Guys,
This is the internet. Winning an argument over the internet is not an accomplishment, and it's not like you can fight it out. So please, shut the fuck up. You filled up almost 2 pages
<3,
Clash

Flawless Victory
12-16-2010, 02:20 PM
Dear clash,

It's been 20 minutes since anyone has posted anything pertaining to the previous disagreement. Also, by saying anything related to it, you're just part of the problem. You made the disagreement one post closer to a full two pages.


Just sayin',
FV.

Cl4sh
12-16-2010, 02:28 PM
Dear clash,

It's been 20 minutes since anyone has posted anything pertaining to the previous disagreement. Also, by saying anything related to it, you're just part of the problem. You made the disagreement one post closer to a full two pages.


Just sayin',
FV.


Dear Flawless Victory,
My apologies sir, just felt like saying that
<3 Again,
Clash

NosE2
12-16-2010, 02:57 PM
Dear Clash,
Fuck off, Newjack. Oh yeah, and can you try to come up with something better to write than, "Clash". Sounds like something a 14 year old kid would write.

Old
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/83/imgp3453.jpg

Sbal
12-16-2010, 02:58 PM
lol

ProblematicInc
12-16-2010, 02:59 PM
http://i1188.photobucket.com/albums/z418/ProblematicInc/Throwies/Picture43.jpg
Did somethin a lil different here.. Idk if i like it though.

cell
12-16-2010, 04:32 PM
http://i51.tinypic.com/23w9mqt.jpg
crits? :o ignore the character :P

not sure they gonna delete the 2 pages of bullshit so im reviving this,crits? i need 'em bad :) dont want to stay toy forever

TastyMcNasty
12-16-2010, 05:46 PM
haha where are thae mods at?
zewl- clean as hell keep it up
sae- dont do that curvy thing with the lettters.. and work on your S big time...
some shit from the last 2 days... crits'd be appreciated

Culture_Shock
12-16-2010, 07:10 PM
Also, there are mad dudes in detroit that get up using straights.
Legibility, son.

Word to the detroit straights. Kwest was running I75 from Madison almost to Hamtramck with straights and blocks last time I was down there.

Phillip McDougall
12-17-2010, 09:05 AM
As if the mods honestly care about the "Tot Throwies" thread.
http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l9qnxmGMPH1qzzud0.png

Shofs17
12-17-2010, 09:17 AM
Likes/Dislike
Crits

Gatsoi
12-17-2010, 12:07 PM
Zewl-I really like that style exept the Z turns me off
Sae-Change your whole style
Sunk-That's really just unattractive
Soar-Mess around with your S everything else looks pretty good
Shofs-Not feelin the boxes on top of your letters, those first to S's are hella whack
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/n.jpg

ribcage
12-17-2010, 01:42 PM
^yo i think if you made the right bar of your n 1 line instead of 2 but kept that similar shape it would look like a better n

Shofs17
12-17-2010, 02:21 PM
Zewl-I really like that style exept the Z turns me off
Sae-Change your whole style
Sunk-That's really just unattractive
Soar-Mess around with your S everything else looks pretty good
Shofs-Not feelin the boxes on top of your letters, those first to S's are hella whack


Gatsoi, would you suggest that i round off the top instead of boxing it, or what?

FlippingChickens
12-17-2010, 03:02 PM
dear clash,
fuck off, newjack. Oh yeah, and can you try to come up with something better to write than, "clash". Sounds like something a 14 year old kid would write.


lol!!!

and i agree with the crits gatsoi gave

SicK-
12-17-2010, 07:04 PM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/REWT.jpg
^Yo look i found REWT

NouveauP
12-17-2010, 07:56 PM
Thankfully he used Ironlak or that would've looked like shit.

I like Newt's W.

http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0097.jpg

SicK-
12-17-2010, 08:03 PM
Ahhh newt bit my W so thanks for the compliment

YeSnOmAyBe
12-17-2010, 08:33 PM
phill i love that caracter hahahha!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cl4sh
12-17-2010, 09:28 PM
Dear Clash,
Fuck off, Newjack. Oh yeah, and can you try to come up with something better to write than, "Clash". Sounds like something a 14 year old kid would write.

Heeyyy bro, chill. No need for hate man. What does it matter what I write man, I like it.

Gatsoi
12-17-2010, 09:34 PM
LMFAOOOOO I found this on facebookhttp://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/k.jpg

Phillip McDougall
12-18-2010, 01:15 PM
Lloooooooollllllll

SicK-
12-18-2010, 03:08 PM
That kid goes hard with his scooter

ReSeM
12-18-2010, 06:03 PM
Lmfaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

MoganOne
12-18-2010, 07:10 PM
haha

SicK-
12-19-2010, 05:51 AM
Nah dawg, I just thought that was you

Lol and what is there to bite other then your crooked ass straights?

Phillip McDougall
12-19-2010, 10:05 AM
Stop hating on Rewt. He puts in work.
His straights are good. He's progressing naturally, the way most of you motherfuckers need to. His throws need work, and his handstyles need work, but at least he's got straight bombing down. You can't hate on simple style. Watch.

http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ld7cnwNZmJ1qcy1g5o1_500.jpg
http://fuckyeahlegitgraffiti.tumblr.com/photo/1280/1697693229/1/tumblr_lcixfzL7fd1qcy1g5
http://fuckyeahlegitgraffiti.tumblr.com/photo/1280/1475395426/1/tumblr_lbc6szG4Os1qcy1g5
http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_ldljvpy4jU1qb50kgo1_500.jpg

Rewt will eventually work his way up to this. The reason his ego seems so high is because he's sick of defending himself for doing what he likes to do. Let's just let him do himself and worry about our own goddamn graffiti. Especially those of you who can't even pull off a decent straight.

weedeater
12-19-2010, 01:12 PM
^^^^ word

this is the TOY forum, check your egos at the door or go post with the big boys

old flick for talking

http://i56.tinypic.com/m9pnib.jpg

NouveauP
12-19-2010, 02:29 PM
That SL throw looks alright. I would make the bottom of your S less curvy and moreso match the style and look of your L.

Bump for crits
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0097.jpg